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Street - Sakura Fubuki [OsuMania]

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Airon 9th
27 posts
Joined January 2017
Topic Starter
Airon 9th
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年1月27日 at 12:04:30

Artist: Street
Title: Sakura Fubuki
Source: BMS
Tags: BEST MUSIC SELECTION -CHUNITHM VARIETY SOUNDTACK- BOFU 2015 大血戰 - THE BMS OF FIGHTERS ULTIMATE- drumstep Zyon Dynamix ExNeko Choboco
BPM: 175
Filesize: 4516kb
Play Time: 01:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. Choboco's Hard - 4Key (3.11 stars, 655 notes)
  2. Easy - 4Key (1.56 stars, 213 notes)
  3. ExNeko's ExTra - 4Key (4.28 stars, 1257 notes)
  4. Insane - 4Key (4.02 stars, 833 notes)
  5. Normal - 4Key (2.19 stars, 436 notes)
Download: Street - Sakura Fubuki
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first map! :)
plz enjoy :D
Last edited by Airon 9th , edited 16 times in total.
eyes
601 posts
Joined January 2016
eyes


Setup: add kiai time and tags:
"BEST MUSIC SELECTION -CHUNITHM VARIETY SOUNDTRACK- BOFU 2015 大血戦 -THE BMS OF FIGHTERS ULTIMATE- drumstep Zyon Dynamix Exneko Choboco".

HP OD for Hard, Normal and Easy are too low in mania terms. Use something near to:
Hard HP 7,5 OD 7
Normal HP 7 OD 7
Easy HP 6 OD 6

1-9 / S+1-8 columns

ExNeko's ExTra

00:05:666 - and 00:07:723 - seem to be similar, but first one is triple and second is double. I find this chording kinda weird because it doesn't look consistent.
00:11:152 - this sound is more impressive than that chords but it's only double
00:13:209 - 00:13:723 - these two also are similar, but different chording
I guess you get it

00:16:638 (16638|1,16723|1,16981|1,17066|1,17323|0,17409|0,17666|3,17752|3) - jacks don't really represent anything and are annoying. 00:18:009 (18009|3,18009|1,18009|2,18181|2,18181|0,18352|1,18352|0,18352|3,18523|3,18523|2,18695|0,18695|1,18695|2) - these notes are also bass sounds but they are not represented by jacks, so it is bad

00:19:381 - this pattern is kinda too boring, it's not emphasizing the sound's fading and snares 00:20:409 (20409|0,20409|1,20495|0,20495|1,20581|3,20581|2,20666|3,20666|2) - look similar to bass doubles. Try something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9982230

00:20:838 (20838|3) - it's wrong snapped. Real snap is 2 notes on 00:20:809 - and 00:20:866

00:27:266 (27266|2,27352|0) - and 00:27:438 (27438|2,27523|0) - are completely different sounds, you might want to delete first two LNs. Also this is similar to 00:27:952 (27952|0,27952|3,28123|2,28209|1) - so you should make them similar patterns

00:28:466 (28466|0,28466|1,28552|3,28552|2) - and 00:28:638 (28638|1,28638|0,28723|2,28723|3,28809|1,28809|0,28895|3,28895|2) - are completely different sounds too, but you make them by the same way (yeah 00:28:638 - are LNs but anyway it doesn't make sense when playing)
would be nice if you make them different patterns so you represent the sounds more properly

01:17:409 - I guess you have to add a note here

01:19:038 (79038|0) - should be LN till 01:19:209

01:19:209 - very boring pattern, try something like this please http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9982269

01:20:923 (80923|2) - I guess it splits at 01:21:009

01:28:552 - 01:28:723 - missed notes

01:36:009 - 4 3 [12] will be more appropriate for PR

01:52:638 - triple

Airon 9th
27 posts
Joined January 2017
Topic Starter
Airon 9th

eyes wrote:



Setup: add kiai time and tags:
"BEST MUSIC SELECTION -CHUNITHM VARIETY SOUNDTRACK- BOFU 2015 大血戦 -THE BMS OF FIGHTERS ULTIMATE- drumstep Zyon Dynamix Exneko Choboco".

HP OD for Hard, Normal and Easy are too low in mania terms. Use something near to:
Hard HP 7,5 OD 7
Normal HP 7 OD 7
Easy HP 6 OD 6

1-9 / S+1-8 columns

ExNeko's ExTra

00:05:666 - and 00:07:723 - seem to be similar, but first one is triple and second is double. I find this chording kinda weird because it doesn't look consistent.
00:11:152 - this sound is more impressive than that chords but it's only double
00:13:209 - 00:13:723 - these two also are similar, but different chording
I guess you get it

00:16:638 (16638|1,16723|1,16981|1,17066|1,17323|0,17409|0,17666|3,17752|3) - jacks don't really represent anything and are annoying. 00:18:009 (18009|3,18009|1,18009|2,18181|2,18181|0,18352|1,18352|0,18352|3,18523|3,18523|2,18695|0,18695|1,18695|2) - these notes are also bass sounds but they are not represented by jacks, so it is bad

00:19:381 - this pattern is kinda too boring, it's not emphasizing the sound's fading and snares 00:20:409 (20409|0,20409|1,20495|0,20495|1,20581|3,20581|2,20666|3,20666|2) - look similar to bass doubles. Try something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9982230

00:20:838 (20838|3) - it's wrong snapped. Real snap is 2 notes on 00:20:809 - and 00:20:866

00:27:266 (27266|2,27352|0) - and 00:27:438 (27438|2,27523|0) - are completely different sounds, you might want to delete first two LNs. Also this is similar to 00:27:952 (27952|0,27952|3,28123|2,28209|1) - so you should make them similar patterns

00:28:466 (28466|0,28466|1,28552|3,28552|2) - and 00:28:638 (28638|1,28638|0,28723|2,28723|3,28809|1,28809|0,28895|3,28895|2) - are completely different sounds too, but you make them by the same way (yeah 00:28:638 - are LNs but anyway it doesn't make sense when playing)
would be nice if you make them different patterns so you represent the sounds more properly

01:17:409 - I guess you have to add a note here

01:19:038 (79038|0) - should be LN till 01:19:209

01:19:209 - very boring pattern, try something like this please http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9982269

01:20:923 (80923|2) - I guess it splits at 01:21:009

01:28:552 - 01:28:723 - missed notes

01:36:009 - 4 3 [12] will be more appropriate for PR

01:52:638 - triple


thanks a lot! :)
ExNeko
626 posts
Joined December 2015
ExNeko

eyes wrote:

ExNeko's ExTra

00:05:666 - and 00:07:723 - seem to be similar, but first one is triple and second is double. I find this chording kinda weird because it doesn't look consistent.
00:11:152 - this sound is more impressive than that chords but it's only double
00:13:209 - 00:13:723 - these two also are similar, but different chording
I guess you get it

00:16:638 (16638|1,16723|1,16981|1,17066|1,17323|0,17409|0,17666|3,17752|3) - jacks don't really represent anything and are annoying. 00:18:009 (18009|3,18009|1,18009|2,18181|2,18181|0,18352|1,18352|0,18352|3,18523|3,18523|2,18695|0,18695|1,18695|2) - these notes are also bass sounds but they are not represented by jacks, so it is bad

00:19:381 - this pattern is kinda too boring, it's not emphasizing the sound's fading and snares 00:20:409 (20409|0,20409|1,20495|0,20495|1,20581|3,20581|2,20666|3,20666|2) - look similar to bass doubles. Try something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9982230 Keep

00:20:838 (20838|3) - it's wrong snapped. Real snap is 2 notes on 00:20:809 - and 00:20:866

00:27:266 (27266|2,27352|0) - and 00:27:438 (27438|2,27523|0) - are completely different sounds, you might want to delete first two LNs. Also this is similar to 00:27:952 (27952|0,27952|3,28123|2,28209|1) - so you should make them similar patterns

00:28:466 (28466|0,28466|1,28552|3,28552|2) - and 00:28:638 (28638|1,28638|0,28723|2,28723|3,28809|1,28809|0,28895|3,28895|2) - are completely different sounds too, but you make them by the same way (yeah 00:28:638 - are LNs but anyway it doesn't make sense when playing)
would be nice if you make them different patterns so you represent the sounds more properly

01:17:409 - I guess you have to add a note here

01:19:038 (79038|0) - should be LN till 01:19:209

01:19:209 - very boring pattern, try something like this please http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9982269

01:20:923 (80923|2) - I guess it splits at 01:21:009

01:28:552 - 01:28:723 - missed notes

01:36:009 - 4 3 [12] will be more appropriate for PR

01:52:638 - triple

Norep=fixed

thx4mod :)

btw: kiai time isn't a necessary condition for ranked maps
Mentholzzz
449 posts
Joined October 2015
Mentholzzz
Halo, mod from RRM queue.
Extra
00:13:381 - Add double here for a loud snare.
00:15:095 - Should be triple here for the main sound.
00:31:466 (31466|2) - Delete the note here and add LN at 00:31:381 -
00:42:438 (42438|2) - ^
01:10:295 - Naybe change to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10006824 for pr.
01:14:323 - Missing a note here for the guitar sound.
01:17:495 - Naybe change to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10006847 for pr.
01:19:209 (79209|2,79209|3,79295|1,79295|0,79381|2,79466|0,79552|2,79638|0) - I think it should be changed here, you use double here for the sound you use double before but single for the sound you use triple before, I suggest to change that to soething like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10006859
01:20:923 - The LN should start here for the guitar sound.
01:23:752 - Missing a note for guitar here.
01:36:352 - The 1/4 stream should start here.
01:42:095 - Missing a note here ?
01:44:238 (104238|0,104409|0) - Why stack this ? maybe move the Ln to col 2
01:45:609 (105609|3,105781|3) - ^
01:49:723 (109723|2,109895|2) - ^
01:47:323 - The 1/4 stream should start here.

Insane
00:00:181 - Shouldn't it be double similar to other notes ?
00:11:752 (11752|1,13123|2,14495|2,15866|2,16038|2) - I'd suggest to either delete those notes or adding notes in other blue line for the whole part of this. The snare sound are all in this part.
00:16:809 - 00:17:152 - 00:17:495 - and 00:17:838 - Those shouldn't be double imo. The sound there isn't strong compared to the one in the white line. Also, it make this part a bit harder than 00:18:009 - which sounds more intense.
00:26:323 - Missing a note here.
00:26:666 (26666|2,26838|2) - Ghost Note ?
00:42:523 (42523|2,42523|1,42609|0,42609|3) - I think these here should be single similar to notes before them.
00:45:266 (45266|0,45352|1) - This part here is actually in 1/6
00:52:295 (52295|1,52295|0,53495|0,53495|1) - They have the different sound but why in the same column ? I'd suggest to change the second one to [23]
01:07:295 - Missing a sound here ?
01:09:266 (69266|0,69352|1) - Ghost Note
01:10:295 - The stream should start here, so add a note at 01:10:381 -
01:16:209 (76209|0,76381|2) - Ghost Note ?
01:16:209 (76209|0,76381|2,78952|3,79123|3) - ^
01:22:466 (82466|2,82638|0,82638|3,82809|2,82809|1,82981|3,82981|0,83152|2,83152|1) - Why you spilt the LN ? They all represent the one single sound, I'd suggest to change to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10108152
01:25:123 (85123|1,85209|1) - Why the jack here ? Maybe swap 01:25:209 (85209|1,85381|3) -

Also btw, some of your pattern are really stack-based I'm not sure if its your intentional or not but it make the map a bit hard. I'd suggest to move some to minimum the stack as possible
Airon 9th
27 posts
Joined January 2017
Topic Starter
Airon 9th
Insane
00:00:181 - Shouldn't it be double similar to other notes ?
00:11:752 (11752|1,13123|2,14495|2,15866|2,16038|2) - I'd suggest to either delete those notes or adding notes in other blue line for the whole part of this. The snare sound are all in this part.x
00:16:809 - 00:17:152 - 00:17:495 - and 00:17:838 - Those shouldn't be double imo. The sound there isn't strong compared to the one in the white line. Also, it make this part a bit harder than 00:18:009 - which sounds more intense.
00:26:323 - Missing a note here.
00:26:666 (26666|2,26838|2) - Ghost Note ?
00:42:523 (42523|2,42523|1,42609|0,42609|3) - I think these here should be single similar to notes before them.
00:45:266 (45266|0,45352|1) - This part here is actually in 1/6
00:52:295 (52295|1,52295|0,53495|0,53495|1) - They have the different sound but why in the same column ? I'd suggest to change the second one to [23]???
01:07:295 - Missing a sound here ?
01:09:266 (69266|0,69352|1) - Ghost Notex
01:10:295 - The stream should start here, so add a note at 01:10:381 -
01:16:209 (76209|0,76381|2) - Ghost Note ?x
01:16:209 (76209|0,76381|2,78952|3,79123|3) - ^one of them is but another one isn't
01:22:466 (82466|2,82638|0,82638|3,82809|2,82809|1,82981|3,82981|0,83152|2,83152|1) - Why you spilt the LN ? They all represent the one single sound, I'd suggest to change to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10108152
01:25:123 (85123|1,85209|1) - Why the jack here ? Maybe swap 01:25:209 (85209|1,85381|3) -

Also btw, some of your pattern are really stack-based I'm not sure if its your intentional or not but it make the map a bit hard. I'd suggest to move some to minimum the stack as possible
[/quote]

thx 4 mod :D
norep=fixed
Last edited by Airon 9th , edited 6 times in total.
ExNeko
626 posts
Joined December 2015
ExNeko

Mentholzzz wrote:

Extra
00:13:381 - Add double here for a loud snare.
00:15:095 - Should be triple here for the main sound.
00:31:466 (31466|2) - Delete the note here and add LN at 00:31:381 - Keep
00:42:438 (42438|2) - ^^
01:10:295 - Naybe change to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10006824 for pr.x
01:14:323 - Missing a note here for the guitar sound.
01:17:495 - Naybe change to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10006847 for pr.x
01:19:209 (79209|2,79209|3,79295|1,79295|0,79381|2,79466|0,79552|2,79638|0) - I think it should be changed here, you use double here for the sound you use double before but single for the sound you use triple before, I suggest to change that to soething like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10006859
01:20:923 - The LN should start here for the guitar sound.
01:23:752 - Missing a note for guitar here.
01:36:352 - The 1/4 stream should start here.
01:42:095 - Missing a note here ?
01:44:238 (104238|0,104409|0) - Why stack this ? maybe move the Ln to col 2
01:45:609 (105609|3,105781|3) - ^
01:49:723 (109723|2,109895|2) - ^
01:47:323 - The 1/4 stream should start here.
norep=fix

thx for mod!
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