Aqours - Seinaru Hino Inori · forum

newton-

Beatmap Nominator

Joined February 2015

newton- 2017-11-15T03:21:37+00:00

July - San wrote:
newton's Normal

00:04:752 - that place, I feel that place really empty, What happens if you put a circle or slider there, to make it look better? if i place an object there the section would feel as intense as the others even though it's much lower intensity, it feels empty because the song is empty in a sense

"Check Distance Snap" Please, Fix the errors most of those are glitches caused by me stacking circles under sliderends, idk why that happens lol. tried to adjust stuff anyway

01:26:570 (3) - I think that slider, it's unnecessary, You could eliminate it and leave a small space there to make it look better,
or even put a circle here 01:26:960 - replaced with 2 circles, one circle wasnt enough since the sound on the latter timestamp was p loud

01:29:297 (3) - I think as you stack the circles like that, it might be confusing for a normal player, but I'm not sure shoudnt be, i establish this concept earlier on

01:53:064 (1) - This spinner also ends very late, ends here 01:58:129 - fixed by cloudchaser earlier on

thanks!

update

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Seinaru Hi no Inori
TitleUnicode:聖なる日の祈り
Artist:Aqours
ArtistUnicode:Aqours
Creator:Cloudchaser
Version:newton's Normal
Source:ラブライブ！スクールアイドルフェスティバル
Tags:Lovelive Love live school idol festival SIF Nitrous newton- my angel kanan xmas christmas
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BeatmapSetID:683241

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nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-11-15T19:26:59+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Hi

[Kanan's Easy]
Hi MAK hello
00:11:765 (3) - This is very "misleading" for an easy diff. It is better if unstack. It should be okay because the slider is already fully faded out and it should be not very misleading

Good luck!

thanks 4 mod!

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2017-11-15T23:18:06+00:00

New MP3!! Re-DL

Sakurauchi Riko

1,632 posts

Joined January 2015

Sakurauchi Riko 2017-11-16T19:57:45+00:00

????????

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2017-11-16T20:29:31+00:00

Sakurauchi Riko wrote:
????????

Ehm?

XinCrin

2,846 posts

Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2017-11-17T14:07:31+00:00

Mi primer mod después de 3 años (?

General

En sí los colores del SliderBorder y el SliderTrackOverride lucen bien y corresponden a la temática navideña, pero no combina muy bien con el skin por default, satura mucho, aparte con el combo verde y rojo y hace todo confuso, te sugeriría usar el skin navideño, el clásico ese que Gero usa en sus mapas. You know what I mean.
Te sugeriría usar un mejor hitsounds para el Finish, el actual es apenas perceptible y no enfatiza en nada las partes más brillantes.

Holy Night

Tienes muchos objetos unsnappeados, ya sabes como solucionarlo (Timing > Resnap All Notes), y por si las dudas revisa el AiMod.
00:00:953 (1) Lo primero que noté al comenzar a ver esta dificultad fue esta nota, se siente tan vacía al primer click. Si revisas las siguientes notas que llevan el mismo sonido del piano, les agregaste un clap que si es perceptible, pero en esta nota pusiste un Finish que realmente ni se llega a sentir. Te sugeriría agregar un Clap aquí tambien.
00:10:303 (1) La canción es lenta y relajada, la forma de este slider como que da un movimiento brusco al jugador. Porque simplemente no haces una onda fluida?.
Ejemplo
00:13:421 (2,3) Esto no fluye para nada bien de verdad, la curvatura de (2) es demasiada estrecha y da un movimiento brusco con respecto a la siguiente nota. La idea es que la curvatura de (2) sea más abierta para dar una mejor respuesta con la siguiente nota. Podría intentar algo como esto:
Ejemplo
00:14:979 (1) No entiendo muy bien cual es la idea de hacer este slider tan enrollado, da mala fluidez y no enfatiza para nada la fluidez de la canción. Recomendaría que intentes haces un slider más fluido
00:21:992 (5) Siguiendo tus patrones de combo, aquí hace falta un NC
00:32:901 (1) Es realmente necesario este NC?. No siento que enfatize un cambio notable.
00:42:641 (1) Lo mismo de arriba
01:23:940 (3,1) Honestamente veo y veo esto y me incomoda, no juega para nada bien, es muy confuso al menos para mi.
01:35:044 (2,4) Así onda nazi, que opinas de apilar correctamente estas dos notas
01:36:797 (1) Solo un pequeño detalle, intenta poner este slider un poco más arriba. Practicamente un poco mas y se sale del área de juego
01:50:044 (1) Me gustaría escuchar un whistle en la cola del slider, siento que ese piano debería ser enfatizado con algún hitsound.

En general siento mucha inconsistencia de combo, a veces los pones cada 2 beats, a veces cada uno y uno que otro NC totalmente innecesario.

Nitrous' Advanced

00:08:746 (5) The curvature at the middle of this slider may be too closed in my opinion. What about moving the last slider point (at arrow) to x: 152 y:272
00:27:447 (1,2) I'm not really sure if this pattern is really appropiate for this kind of difficulty. I would try something easier to read
Example
00:30:564 (1) Is this combo really necessary. I don't see any reasonable use here.
00:36:018 (4) |Nazi| Move the second slider point to x:208 y:132 for a better slider shape
00:39:914 (1,2) Because of this stack the tail of (2) is barely visible. I would try something more open
00:58:616 (3) I would like to add a Whistle here. What do you think?
01:11:083 (1) What about adding some hitsound at slider tail?. It feels so empty
01:39:135 (1) The current new combo is totally unnecesary. It would better if you remove it
01:50:823 (6) What about adding a Whistle here?. To emphasize the piano sound I say

newton's Normal

00:00:953 (1) I would like to remove the Clap at the tail of this slider (where the repeat arrow is placed). It feels and sounds really bad by using the clap hitsounds at the entire slider
00:23:551 (3) In my opinion, the drum hitsounds here don't fit at all. I would follow the current soft sampleset. Try it, it sounds really better
00:39:915 (1) This NC is totally unnecesary, I don't see any reason or any change to emphasize. Try deleting it
01:20:434 (1) I'm pretty sure you are missing a Clap here. Or is there any reason to do not use it here?
01:40:304 (1,1) Same advice about new combos

Kanan's Easy

00:02:512 (3) This 1/2 slider is totally unnecesary, I think you are trying to follow the bells sound, but if you hear properly the bells are 1/1 and not 1/2.
Try it, It sounds much better.
00:12:642 (1) I would remove this new combo, is not really necessary
00:18:096 (1,2) The new combo should be placed at (2) and not in (1), the rhythm happens at 00:18:486.
00:36:018 (1) Same suggestion about the unnecesary new combo
01:09:915 (3) I would suggest you to move this slider some grids up because is not very noticeable after 01:07:577 (2) , So beginner players may be a little confused.
01:18:096 (1,2) This is not working, (2) is being stacked in some way by (1) body.
Wrong
I would try something easier to read, Try this, It looks and works much better
Example
01:39:135 (3) What about adding a Whistle here?. To emphasize the piano sound, I say
01:43:031 (3) Same suggestion as 00:02:512 (3)

Cabra floja para mapear, solo hizo una diff *hides*¨
The entire mapset looks fine, I would work at hitsounds and new combos. Good luck !

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-11-17T16:53:19+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Mi primer mod después de 3 años (?

General

En sí los colores del SliderBorder y el SliderTrackOverride lucen bien y corresponden a la temática navideña, pero no combina muy bien con el skin por default, satura mucho, aparte con el combo verde y rojo y hace todo confuso, te sugeriría usar el skin navideño, el clásico ese que Gero usa en sus mapas. You know what I mean.
Te sugeriría usar un mejor hitsounds para el Finish, el actual es apenas perceptible y no enfatiza en nada las partes más brillantes.

Kanan's Easy

00:02:512 (3) This 1/2 slider is totally unnecesary, I think you are trying to follow the bells sound, but if you hear properly the bells are 1/1 and not 1/2.
Try it, It sounds much better. fixed
00:12:642 (1) I would remove this new combo, is not really necessary would destroy nc consistency If I don't nc that
00:18:096 (1,2) The new combo should be placed at (2) and not in (1), the rhythm happens at 00:18:486. fixed
00:36:018 (1) Same suggestion about the unnecesary new combo same as 00:12:642 (1) -
01:09:915 (3) I would suggest you to move this slider some grids up because is not very noticeable after 01:07:577 (2) , So beginner players may be a little confused. idk I will think about it
01:18:096 (1,2) This is not working, (2) is being stacked in some way by (1) body. fixed
Wrong
I would try something easier to read, Try this, It looks and works much better
Example
01:39:135 (3) What about adding a Whistle here?. To emphasize the piano sound, I say fixed
01:43:031 (3) Same suggestion as 00:02:512 (3)fixed
Cabra floja para mapear, solo hizo una diff *hides*¨
The entire mapset looks fine, I would work at hitsounds and new combos. Good luck !

Thanks for Mod!

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Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2017-11-17T16:58:39+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Mi primer mod después de 3 años (?

General

En sí los colores del SliderBorder y el SliderTrackOverride lucen bien y corresponden a la temática navideña, pero no combina muy bien con el skin por default, satura mucho, aparte con el combo verde y rojo y hace todo confuso, te sugeriría usar el skin navideño, el clásico ese que Gero usa en sus mapas. You know what I mean. Prefiero hacer mi propio skin antes de usar ese feo del 2011 xDD
Te sugeriría usar un mejor hitsounds para el Finish, el actual es apenas perceptible y no enfatiza en nada las partes más brillantes. yea boi
Holy Night

Tienes muchos objetos unsnappeados, ya sabes como solucionarlo (Timing > Resnap All Notes), y por si las dudas revisa el AiMod. Whoops!
00:00:953 (1) Lo primero que noté al comenzar a ver esta dificultad fue esta nota, se siente tan vacía al primer click. Si revisas las siguientes notas que llevan el mismo sonido del piano, les agregaste un clap que si es perceptible, pero en esta nota pusiste un Finish que realmente ni se llega a sentir. Te sugeriría agregar un Clap aquí tambien.
00:10:303 (1) La canción es lenta y relajada, la forma de este slider como que da un movimiento brusco al jugador. Porque simplemente no haces una onda fluida?.
Ejemplo
00:13:421 (2,3) Esto no fluye para nada bien de verdad, la curvatura de (2) es demasiada estrecha y da un movimiento brusco con respecto a la siguiente nota. La idea es que la curvatura de (2) sea más abierta para dar una mejor respuesta con la siguiente nota. Podría intentar algo como esto:
Ejemplo
00:14:979 (1) No entiendo muy bien cual es la idea de hacer este slider tan enrollado, da mala fluidez y no enfatiza para nada la fluidez de la canción. Recomendaría que intentes haces un slider más fluido Me aburre tener que utilizar siempre los mismos sliders, me gusta variar aunque sea un poco.
00:21:992 (5) Siguiendo tus patrones de combo, aquí hace falta un NC
00:32:901 (1) Es realmente necesario este NC?. No siento que enfatize un cambio notable. Realmente no suelo poner NCs para este tipo de downbeat pero es mayoritariamente porque es mucho más fácil de leer cuando hay un overlap en el mismo snap
00:42:641 (1) Lo mismo de arriba ^
01:23:940 (3,1) Honestamente veo y veo esto y me incomoda, no juega para nada bien, es muy confuso al menos para mi.
01:35:044 (2,4) Así onda nazi, que opinas de apilar correctamente estas dos notas
01:36:797 (1) Solo un pequeño detalle, intenta poner este slider un poco más arriba. Practicamente un poco mas y se sale del área de juego
01:50:044 (1) Me gustaría escuchar un whistle en la cola del slider, siento que ese piano debería ser enfatizado con algún hitsound. no tengo hitsounds de pianos así me complicó mucho
En general siento mucha inconsistencia de combo, a veces los pones cada 2 beats, a veces cada uno y uno que otro NC totalmente innecesario.No concuerdo contigo respecto a los NCs porque estos si siguen un patrón. En el beatmap en general usé NCs que siguen a las vocales que son al rededor de 5 a 8, mientras que en los pianos para enfatizarlos, que a su vez, sea legible utilicé NCs como lo fue 00:23:161 (4,1,2) - o en el mismo caso de 00:31:343 (1,1,1) -

Cabra floja para mapear, solo hizo una diff *hides*¨Más o menos pero en general es porque me pidieron hacer gds :3
The entire mapset looks fine, I would work at hitsounds and new combos. Good luck !

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Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Nitrous 2017-11-23T22:42:28+00:00

Applied all from previous mod

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TitleUnicode:聖なる日の祈り
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Version:Nitrous' Advanced
Source:ラブライブ！スクールアイドルフェスティバル
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Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2017-11-23T23:22:49+00:00

Updated. Waiting newton

mancuso_JM_

osu! Alumni

4,615 posts

Joined October 2010

mancuso_JM_ 2017-11-25T03:51:48+00:00

I'll wait until everything is updated.

Call me later!

newton-

Beatmap Nominator

670 posts

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newton- 2017-11-26T03:42:43+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Mi primer mod después de 3 años (?

newton's Normal

00:00:953 (1) I would like to remove the Clap at the tail of this slider (where the repeat arrow is placed). It feels and sounds really bad by using the clap hitsounds at the entire slider ok
00:23:551 (3) In my opinion, the drum hitsounds here don't fit at all. I would follow the current soft sampleset. Try it, it sounds really better whoops that was an accident lol, changed back
00:39:915 (1) This NC is totally unnecesary, I don't see any reason or any change to emphasize. Try deleting it nice catch
01:20:434 (1) I'm pretty sure you are missing a Clap here. Or is there any reason to do not use it here? seems fine idk
01:40:304 (1,1) Same advice about new combos removed an nc
Cabra floja para mapear, solo hizo una diff *hides*¨
The entire mapset looks fine, I would work at hitsounds and new combos. Good luck !

thanks!

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Cloudchaser

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Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2017-11-26T04:01:08+00:00

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July - San

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July - San 2017-12-01T22:47:36+00:00

Holaa nube!

(Tiempo sin moddear

)

bueno volvi a revisar tu mapa, y encontre algunas cosas que
antes no habia "visto"
Solo quiero sentirme util de una vez :v

oc iniciemos

Kanan's Easy

00:03:291 (1,2) - Ctrl + g , It looks better than before, do not you think?

00:14:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - That combo is too long to be easy, it should not go over 2 or 3, could you cut it?

00:25:889 (3) - Maybe, you could change this slider for this 00:26:668 (4) - (It's looks better

)

01:01:733 (3) - NC?

01:39:135 (3,4) - mm, this could change it, I do not see it very much to the beat

Maybe this..https://puu.sh/yxuv0/4bed9bd3df.png or this https://puu.sh/yxuwA/6a70f2cdb4.png

The rest of the diff it's good

newton's Normal

00:02:512 - Do not you think it's a bit empty? you should add something to follow the music

01:40:304 (3) - NC?

01:43:031 - Do not you think it's a bit empty?

The rest of the diff it's good

Nitrous' Advanced

01:27:447 (3) - NC?

wow ;-;

The rest of the diff it's good

Holy Night

00:39:525 (4) - Nuevo combo aqui

01:39:525 (1) - Creo que el nuevo combo quedaria mejor aqui 01:39:135 (3) -

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y bueno ya eta

Como me has dicho antes, mientras tenga buenas intencion, y bueno, SI, tengo buenas intenciones

(Solo quiero ser util xd)
tal vez no fue mucho, pero andaba ausente en el modding y queria volver

Bueno ya sin mas que hablar, suerte!

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Nitrous 2017-12-01T23:03:42+00:00

No changes. First time trying to map unconventionally, turned out good.

mancuso_JM_

osu! Alumni

4,615 posts

Joined October 2010

mancuso_JM_ 2017-12-03T19:06:41+00:00

Modding from Christmas Queue and as per your request too

[Kanan's Easy]

00:14:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Comparing that with your comboing, this combo becomes longer than you did in the rest of the map. I recommend you to add a new combo in the middle, doing that you'll keep a consistency with the rest of the map.
00:17:317 (5,6) - I personally think you're not following the music properly, especially with that 1/2 slider, if you want to use it you need to cover the red tick in 00:17:902 - and not the current one that you decided to cover because there isn't a high pitch there.
I'm going to give two different solutions here to cover the music properly, you can use this rhythm if you want to follow the piano (in 1/2) or you can use this other if you only want to follow vocals, you decide, but I highly recommend you to don't leave this in its current state.
00:25:109 (2,4) - That kind of overlaps are generally difficult in Easy difficulties, because new players don't expect that during the gameplay, we generally try to do things as clean as we can here. Changing the curve in two will make this pattern easier to read, as I did here. Maybe you can have other idea that it can works too.
00:29:005 (3,4) - The 1/1 usage is kinda excessive in this part of the song and I have to say that it's not the best thing because you could use some variety that can works here too. So, I think you can use something like this here, it'll provide a better emphasize to this pattern and the previous one as well.
00:38:746 (2,3) - Once again, the usage of 1/2 is not correct here. You should switch these objects to cover vocals/piano perfectly.
00:48:876 (1,3,5) - A bit nitpicky here but those curves are so tiny and a full stright sliders would look bad. Would look much better if you increase that curve in (1,3) and you make (5) curved as well.
01:08:746 (1,2) - Be careful with that 1/2 sliders, I saw you had some troubles to follow the music properly. In this case you have to switch these objects as I told in 00:38:746 - because the highest pitch in this section is in 01:09:330 -
01:11:083 (1,2) - ~ 01:25:109 (1,2,3) - I just want to clear some doubts here. Why did you mapped them different? Probably you wanted some variety here but those sections are the same and you mapped pretty different.
01:11:863 - 01:24:330 - 01:25:889 - 01:26:278 - For different reasons, but listening always to the music, I recommend you soft whistles in all these timing points.
01:18:096 (1) - Yeah.. this slider looks much better curved, especially if you look at the previous slider and the next notes pattern. (don't kill me for that kind of little suggestions xD).
01:47:707 (3) - Try curving this a bit too.

- You should take care of those 1/2 sliders that are not following the music really well. Btw, the map looks a bit plain sometimes, that's why I asked you to use some curves here and there.

[newton's Normal]

01:11:863 - 01:24:330 - 01:25:889 - 01:26:278 - For different reasons, but listening always to the music, I recommend you soft whistles in all these timing points.
01:24:720 (4) - I'd remove this note, basically because you're using two notes before this one where the music has a higher pitch than here, and this note is not helping you to emphasize the new chorus section.
01:45:369 - 01:45:759 - I personally think you can add some objects here as you did at the beginning of the map (in 00:04:460 -) . The music change here and if you have some objects will help you to represent that better.

- Nice difficulty in general, I didn't have major problems with it c:

[Nitrous' Advanced]

- I don't have anything to say about this difficulty, really well done. Just make sure to add those whistles that I mention in Easy/Normal, I think they are pretty important and some of them applies here as well.

[Holy Night]

00:04:460 (4) - ¿Hay alguna posibilidad de que este slider no toque el score/porcentaje? Personalmente no me gusta como se ve al momento de jugar el mapa.
00:11:083 (2) - Creo que no hay un sonido tan claro en 00:11:278 - como para tener un objeto. En mi opinión con una simple nota en 00:11:083 - estarías cubriendo todo lo que la música representa.
00:12:642 (1,2,3) - Personalmente no estoy de acuerdo con el ritmo utilizado acá, no está siguiendo las voces al 100% en mi opinion. Yo utilizaría un ritmo similar al que usaste en el patrón anterior, puedo entender que quieras algo de variedad, pero no lo conseguiste del todo bien asi que prefiero que sigas la consistencia. De todos modos, tengo que decir que lo que menos me gusta es la terminación de (3) en tu patrón ya que no sigue la sección larga de la voz.
00:36:798 (2) - No me mates por ser "nazi" pero una pequeña curva juega bien en este patron *runs*
00:37:966 (4) - Hmm.. ¿En qué te basaste para agregar este slider? Aparece una sección larga de la voz, el piano ya terminó hace un rato, no hay nada que soporte la utilización de este slider. Así que para seguir mejor la sección de la voz y del piano lo mejor sería llevar el final del slider (3) hasta 00:37:966 - y con eso estaría pronto.
00:42:642 (1) - No le veo demasiado sentido a este combo con unicamente un objeto, no tanto musicalmente sino por la utilizacion de tus patrones en cuanto al "combo'ing". Deberías remover el New Combo aquí.
00:48:486 (2) - Nuevamente la utilización de este 1/2 slider no es necesaria, no hay nada constante en 00:48:681 - principalmente como para tener un sonido. Te recomiendo agregar una repetición en (1), hacerlo 1/1 más largo o agregar una nota en 00:48:486 - . Te doy esas tres opciones y tu decides cual te gusta más jeje.
01:01:733 (1,2,3,4) - Otro error con respecto al ritmo, principalmente el uso de (2) no es del todo correcto ya que no hay un sonido tan fuerte como para tener un objeto (como he dicho anteriormente) y el hecho de clickear esa nota durante el juego se hace extraño. Otra vez mi recomendación es parecida a las que he dado anteriormente pero con alguna variante extra, puedes agregar una repetición en (1) o puedes extender (1) en 1/1.
01:13:031 (3,4) - ¿Por qué no mejor usas un slider? El sonido más fuerte se encuentra en el anterior slider (2), pero no aquí. Creo que usar un slider en vez de las notas es una opción acá. Si quieres usar notas, te recomiendo que las uses en lugar del slider (2).
01:21:213 (3) - Deberías hacer este slider curvo. Te da una mejor transición entre el slider previo y el anterior y además el patrón se ve mejor (aunque si, es algo "nazi" pero tenía que decirlo xD).
01:26:863 (x) - Yo agregaría una nota acá, suena muy bien. Además veo una opción para aumentar un poco el spacing entre las notas.
01:36:798 (1) - Va en contra mio no mencionar esto. Si vas a hacer un slider así que sea simetrico por favor! D:. Te dejo foto y código para que lo puedas arreglar
Screenshot + Code
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01:49:265 (2,3,4) - Que stack mas raro :/. Creo que juega mejor algo más o menos así en este patrón, deberías intentarlo.

- En general todo rankeable, pero algunos ritmos deberían ser corregidos antes de llevar este mapa al ranked. Intenté mencionar todos para que quede todo pronto luego de este mod.
Me olvidé mencionar que deberías ver los Whistles que mencioné en Easy/Normal, posiblemente apliquen en esta dificultad también.

[]

|Algunas cosas a reflexionar|

Cloudchaser wrote:
Skin by me and some parts stolen from Mancuso's set

Nunca me pediste nada D:. Voy a nukear este map D:. Okno, yo también te quiero :3

XinCrin wrote:
Cabra floja para mapear, solo hizo una diff *hides*¨

El ChinoCrin tiene razón, que no se repita :c

[]

Bueno, me distendí un poco al final del mod jeje. Tendría que haber terminado esto hace 4 días pero anduve con pereza xD.
Ahora arregla el mod y no seas vaga, Normal/Advanced están listas en mi opinión mientras que Easy/Holy Night están casi prontas solo faltan esos arreglos que estuve mencionando.
¡Buena Suerte!

Last edited by mancuso_JM_ 2017-12-03T19:08:21+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Nao Tomori

osu! Alumni

3,106 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-12-10T22:55:52+00:00

respond to mods and poke me, consider this a placeholder

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2017-12-11T17:03:07+00:00

All added except for:

@July - Chan:

00:39:525 (4) - Nuevo combo aqui

No considero importante poner un NC acá además que rompería con mis patrones actuales.

@Mancuso_JM_: ur ugly boi

Thanks guys, i wub u all.
Now waiting for newton and Kanan to reply

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-12-11T18:10:54+00:00

July - San wrote:
Holaa nube!
(Tiempo sin moddear )

bueno volvi a revisar tu mapa, y encontre algunas cosas que
antes no habia "visto"
Solo quiero sentirme util de una vez :v

oc iniciemos

Kanan's Easy

00:03:291 (1,2) - Ctrl + g , It looks better than before, do not you think? not really because the piano there going up (current clickable and red point) but the Big white tick has a quieter sound because the piano goes down

00:14:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - That combo is too long to be easy, it should not go over 2 or 3, could you cut it? on purpose because if I would nc 5 it wouldn't make sense musically-wise

00:25:889 (3) - Maybe, you could change this slider for this 00:26:668 (4) - (It's looks better ) it's basically the same in the music and rhythm so

01:01:733 (3) - NC? would break the nc consistency

01:39:135 (3,4) - mm, this could change it, I do not see it very much to the beat on purpose for the vocal

Maybe this..https://puu.sh/yxuv0/4bed9bd3df.png or this https://puu.sh/yxuwA/6a70f2cdb4.png

The rest of the diff it's good

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y bueno ya eta
Como me has dicho antes, mientras tenga buenas intencion, y bueno, SI, tengo buenas intenciones
(Solo quiero ser util xd)
tal vez no fue mucho, pero andaba ausente en el modding y queria volver

Bueno ya sin mas que hablar, suerte!

Thanks 4 mod

mancuso_JM_ wrote:
Modding from Christmas Queue and as per your request too

[Kanan's Easy]

00:14:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Comparing that with your comboing, this combo becomes longer than you did in the rest of the map. I recommend you to add a new combo in the middle, doing that you'll keep a consistency with the rest of the map. explained in the reply above
00:17:317 (5,6) - I personally think you're not following the music properly, especially with that 1/2 slider, if you want to use it you need to cover the red tick in 00:17:902 - and not the current one that you decided to cover because there isn't a high pitch there.
I'm going to give two different solutions here to cover the music properly, you can use this rhythm if you want to follow the piano (in 1/2) or you can use this other if you only want to follow vocals, you decide, but I highly recommend you to don't leave this in its current state.
00:25:109 (2,4) - That kind of overlaps are generally difficult in Easy difficulties, because new players don't expect that during the gameplay, we generally try to do things as clean as we can here. Changing the curve in two will make this pattern easier to read, as I did here. Maybe you can have other idea that it can works too. I changed the 1/2 reverse here so it isn't a overlap anymore
00:29:005 (3,4) - The 1/1 usage is kinda excessive in this part of the song and I have to say that it's not the best thing because you could use some variety that can works here too. So, I think you can use something like this here, it'll provide a better emphasize to this pattern and the previous one as well. 00:29:005 (1) - changed this one to a 2/1 slider
00:38:746 (2,3) - Once again, the usage of 1/2 is not correct here. You should switch these objects to cover vocals/piano perfectly. fixed
00:48:876 (1,3,5) - A bit nitpicky here but those curves are so tiny and a full straight sliders would look bad. Would look much better if you increase that curve in (1,3) and you make (5) curved as well. deleted curve at 1 and added a curve at 3
01:08:746 (1,2) - Be careful with that 1/2 sliders, I saw you had some troubles to follow the music properly. In this case you have to switch these objects as I told in 00:38:746 - because the highest pitch in this section is in 01:09:330 - I think about this because yes it is true but I wanna follow the instrumentals here rather than the vocal
01:11:083 (1,2) - ~ 01:25:109 (1,2,3) - I just want to clear some doubts here. Why did you mapped them different? Probably you wanted some variety here but those sections are the same and you mapped pretty different. those are 2 2/1s now
01:11:863 - 01:24:330 - 01:25:889 - 01:26:278 - For different reasons, but listening always to the music, I recommend you soft whistles in all these timing points. @cloudchaser
01:18:096 (1) - Yeah.. this slider looks much better curved, especially if you look at the previous slider and the next notes pattern. (don't kill me for that kind of little suggestions xD). ok ex de
01:47:707 (3) - Try curving this a bit too. sure
- You should take care of those 1/2 sliders that are not following the music really well. Btw, the map looks a bit plain sometimes, that's why I asked you to use some curves here and there.

[]

|Algunas cosas a reflexionar|

Cloudchaser wrote:
Skin by me and some parts stolen from Mancuso's set
Nunca me pediste nada D:. Voy a nukear este map D:. Okno, yo también te quiero :3

XinCrin wrote:
Cabra floja para mapear, solo hizo una diff *hides*¨
El ChinoCrin tiene razón, que no se repita :c

[]

Bueno, me distendí un poco al final del mod jeje. Tendría que haber terminado esto hace 4 días pero anduve con pereza xD.
Ahora arregla el mod y no seas vaga, Normal/Advanced están listas en mi opinión mientras que Easy/Holy Night están casi prontas solo faltan esos arreglos que estuve mencionando.
¡Buena Suerte!

Thanks 4 Mod
Edit: I ended up nc'ing the whole map :thonk:
Edit2: I fixed the soft Whistles for chaser

uwwwwwwwwwwwwwww u

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Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Nitrous 2017-12-12T00:45:45+00:00

I'll leave it Cloudchaser to fix the hitsounds. Thanks for the complement!

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2017-12-12T00:47:28+00:00

Nitrous wrote:
I'll leave it Cloudchaser to fix the hitsounds. Thanks for the complement!

lf you can fix it for me I would appreciate it, I am very busy atm

newton-

Beatmap Nominator

670 posts

Joined February 2015

newton- 2017-12-12T11:25:27+00:00

July - San wrote:
Holaa nube!
(Tiempo sin moddear )

bueno volvi a revisar tu mapa, y encontre algunas cosas que
antes no habia "visto"
Solo quiero sentirme util de una vez :v

oc iniciemos

newton's Normal

00:02:512 - Do not you think it's a bit empty? you should add something to follow the music on purpose, it's like that to make intensity seem lower

01:40:304 (3) - NC? nced 01:39:135 (1) - instead

01:43:031 - Do not you think it's a bit empty? same reason as above

The rest of the diff it's good

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y bueno ya eta
Como me has dicho antes, mientras tenga buenas intencion, y bueno, SI, tengo buenas intenciones
(Solo quiero ser util xd)
tal vez no fue mucho, pero andaba ausente en el modding y queria volver

Bueno ya sin mas que hablar, suerte!

mancuso_JM_ wrote:
Modding from Christmas Queue and as per your request too

[newton's Normal]

01:11:863 - 01:24:330 - 01:25:889 - 01:26:278 - For different reasons, but listening always to the music, I recommend you soft whistles in all these timing points. done
01:24:720 (4) - I'd remove this note, basically because you're using two notes before this one where the music has a higher pitch than here, and this note is not helping you to emphasize the new chorus section. imo the piano thing on this note deserves to be clicked

01:45:369 - 01:45:759 - I personally think you can add some objects here as you did at the beginning of the map (in 00:04:460 -) . The music change here and if you have some objects will help you to represent that better. redid this part a bit
- Nice difficulty in general, I didn't have major problems with it c:

thx for modding!

update

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Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2017-12-12T15:33:21+00:00

I've added the whistles for Nitrous!
Ready :3

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Nitrous 2017-12-13T23:21:21+00:00

Sorry for not fixing it xd
Completely slipped off my mind...

Nao Tomori

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-12-14T02:39:46+00:00

hoyl night

00:00:953 (1,2,3) - tbh this rhythm already seems a bit awkward. you have a clear division in the song at 00:01:538 - from 00:01:343 - but it is grouped together cuz of your extended slider. to me 1/1 slider > circle > slider works a lot better

00:05:629 (1,2,3) - u do it here which is nice

00:13:811 (3) - this should be a circle imo. you sort of follow the held vocal with a 1/1 slider but since that vocal is continuing until the next big white tick ending it early just seems off somehow.

00:20:629 (2) - tbh this overmap does seem a bit out of place. in other ones it is not that weird since it maintains rhythm intensity or something, but here it comes out of nowhere and clearly is not snapped to a sound in the song. i guess you should just move it to the white tick or remove it. 00:22:577 (2) - this one works better for the reason above.

00:39:915 (5,6) - 1/1 sslider > circle > 1/1 slider at 00:40:694 - seems nicer rhythm to follow the vocal

00:48:876 (2,3) - this looks pretty awful cuz of autostacking ,can you adjust it?

01:20:337 - add a circle for buildup? strings are doing that

01:24:330 (1) - tbh it could be a cool effect to skip this since the instrumental stops and instead start again at 01:24:720 - with a 1/2 slider

nitrous
00:02:512 (3,1) - brO

00:10:304 (1) - this isnt Symmetrica lWTF

00:18:096 (4,5) - think 1/1 slider works better here. or 2 circles. the added density seems out of place on an advanced diff.

00:22:577 (5) - delete for same reason

00:26:668 (5,6) - make this 1/1 slider nd delete circle for same reason

basically this calm part is a bit too dense in my opinion. the amount of sliders actually makes it pretty difficulty for a newer player so try to cut back on that and use more circles here and there with simpler rhythm

01:01:733 (3) - symmetrical Plz Holy

01:04:849 (1,2) - move nc to 2 for musical phrasing purposes

01:41:473 (1,2,3,4) - this is like way denser than everything in the kiai and supposed to be a much calmer part. nerf the rhythm

yes i know kiai has much higher sv blah blah blah but clicking density is still really important in creating proper contrast

newton
make your ncs every 4 measures plz, 2 object combo is kinda dumb xd

i mean in 00:34:849 (2,1) - this part cuz it doesnt work too well before then

also stuff like 00:50:044 (1,3) - the nc should definitely be on 3 because the vocals come in there and so on

01:14:590 (3) - i think you should make it circles. you already have a ridiculous amount of sliders, add in some cirrcles to make it more interesting for players. 01:07:577 (3) - as well, this kind of thing. just try and add more circles cuz all sliders is meh

01:24:330 (3) - delete to follow instruments would be cool

01:46:148 (1,2,3) - its a bit misleading cuz 3 is closer too 1 than 2 is, try to space it a bit like this: http://puu.sh/yG09d/23b40f62f2.jpg that way it is not as confusing

01:55:499 - end spinner here like other 2 diffs

kanan
00:03:291 (1,2) - ctrl g on this fits the song structure a bit better, skipping that white tick is pretty meh and this way you cover entire piano part with one slider then another click n the next song section

i dont think using 1.0 ds is that good for large time gaps, since the player will not see the next note on screen they won't be moving, so it ends up being a more difficult jump. try to use like .75 so it isnt mistaken but still more lenient. like at 00:14:979 (2) - 00:38:356 (1) -
01:09:915 (1,2,1) - ?? whys this look so ugly
01:27:447 (1,2) - ?_?

01:39:915 - might as well make it actually noticeable if you do this, make the angle sharper..

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2017-12-14T03:19:50+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
hoyl night

00:00:953 (1,2,3) - tbh this rhythm already seems a bit awkward. you have a clear division in the song at 00:01:538 - from 00:01:343 - but it is grouped together cuz of your extended slider. to me 1/1 slider > circle > slider works a lot better

00:05:629 (1,2,3) - u do it here which is nice

00:13:811 (3) - this should be a circle imo. you sort of follow the held vocal with a 1/1 slider but since that vocal is continuing until the next big white tick ending it early just seems off somehow.
00:20:629 (2) - tbh this overmap does seem a bit out of place. in other ones it is not that weird since it maintains rhythm intensity or something, but here it comes out of nowhere and clearly is not snapped to a sound in the song. i guess you should just move it to the white tick or remove it. 00:22:577 (2) - this one works better for the reason above.

00:39:915 (5,6) - 1/1 sslider > circle > 1/1 slider at 00:40:694 - seems nicer rhythm to follow the vocal Would you explain me this part?
I didn't get it at all.

00:48:876 (2,3) - this looks pretty awful cuz of autostacking ,can you adjust it?

01:20:337 - add a circle for buildup? strings are doing that I don't consider this point really important for the current pattern, in fact, I think it's much better the actual one >< Anyway, I need a bit more of explaination in this part.

01:24:330 (1) - tbh it could be a cool effect to skip this since the instrumental stops and instead start again at 01:24:720 - with a 1/2 slider i tested it but the 1/2 slider would be overmapping that part, so heck no :C

No replied = added

much lov

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-12-14T05:37:13+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
kanan
00:03:291 (1,2) - ctrl g on this fits the song structure a bit better, skipping that white tick is pretty meh and this way you cover entire piano part with one slider then another click n the next song section fixed

i dont think using 1.0 ds is that good for large time gaps, since the player will not see the next note on screen they won't be moving, so it ends up being a more difficult jump. try to use like .75 so it isnt mistaken but still more lenient. like at 00:14:979 (2) - 00:38:356 (1) - I'll keep that in Mind because this is following the vocals perfectly and the piano there isn't that noticeable here
01:09:915 (1,2,1) - ?? whys this look so ugly because ds fixed
01:27:447 (1,2) - ?_? ^

01:39:915 - might as well make it actually noticeable if you do this, make the angle sharper..sure

thanks 4 mod naitoshi

teach me how 2 circlejerk

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Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Nitrous 2017-12-14T07:21:41+00:00

thanks not nao. Applied all mods and nerfed non-kiai parts.

meri kurisumasu

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tried to be gimmicky with 2012 mapping style (more like awkward slider shapes and stuff)

newton-

Beatmap Nominator

670 posts

Joined February 2015

newton- 2017-12-14T11:05:56+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
newton
make your ncs every 4 measures plz, 2 object combo is kinda dumb xd sure

i mean in 00:34:849 (2,1) - this part cuz it doesnt work too well before then

also stuff like 00:50:044 (1,3) - the nc should definitely be on 3 because the vocals come in there and so on idk, i prefer having ncs indicate measure structure strictly rather than the start of vocal phrases, since lots of the vocal phrases in the song don't line up with the start of most measures

01:14:590 (3) - i think you should make it circles. you already have a ridiculous amount of sliders, add in some cirrcles to make it more interesting for players. 01:07:577 (3) - as well, this kind of thing. just try and add more circles cuz all sliders is meh did for 01:19:265 (5) - and 01:33:291 (5) - ,
not for anything else since i don't want sr to shoot up

01:24:330 (3) - delete to follow instruments would be cool i'd prefer to emphasize the vocal here

01:46:148 (1,2,3) - its a bit misleading cuz 3 is closer too 1 than 2 is, try to space it a bit like this: http://puu.sh/yG09d/23b40f62f2.jpg that way it is not as confusing done

01:55:499 - end spinner here like other 2 diffs done

thx!

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TitleUnicode:聖なる日の祈り
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@cloudchaser pls reapply hitsounds

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2017-12-15T17:43:58+00:00

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HappyRocket88

4,322 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2017-12-15T20:06:16+00:00

General
Having the same volume for the kiai feels bothersome since the intensity is quite different from the other parts, I think it would be better if you could increase it a bit in order to highlight better this section. Having it +10% would hurt no one

Kanan's Easy

00:07:966 (1,3) - No problem with these boys but would it be possible to unstack them? so we'll have no issue with the hit bursts covering the circle once players have passed through 00:07:966 (1) - just as well as you've done it here 00:31:343 (1,3) -
From here 00:10:304 - to 00:19:265 - the new combo usage becomes inconsistent. Not a big issue but I think it would be relevant to have them similar to all sections compared with how 00:33:681 - was arranged. Hence, I think adding NC here would fit 00:14:979 (2) - ; then removing it over this one 00:16:148 (1) - and finally adding it here 00:17:317 (3) -
00:43:811 - Perhaps you were mapping vocals-wise oriented, but I'm afraid this spot feels rather awkward as is. The reason I say that is because instruments turn more intense compared with how low the previous section 00:20:434 - was. Therefore, adding a circle here would suit the pattern better by highlighting the melody along with vocals. Consider applying the same according to your judgement to the following parts 00:58:616 - 01:04:850 -
00:53:551 (2,3) - Based on the theme followed, the momentum the lyrics create here suggests a long tune followed with the music but having two circles do not really show the progression vocals offer here. That's why I think it would fit better if they could be replaced with a 2/1 slider in order to accentuate better the music.
01:03:291 (2) - Missing hitsound on reverse
01:05:239 (1,2) - Rhytmically talking, current pattern doesn't highlight pretty well the rhythm due that the intesity of the segment reside over this vocal
01:05:629 - and it's being emphasized with a low offbeat (slidertail) I highly suggest to make that spot stronger withan upbeat (circle, sliderhead) so the rhythm along with the flow would feel more natural according to vocals wise. How about doing ctrl + g over these 01:05:239 (1,2) - ? That way the vocal will be represented nicely and the rhythm-execution would accentuate better.
01:07:577 (1,1) - I'm doubting this could become risky over lower difficulties since the overlapping may bee too evident that coul confuse players while they're playing it. I thik it would be better if you could move 01:07:577 (1) - around so the whole overlap can be avoided. How about this? https://up.ppy.sh/files/ddddd-0.png
01:27:447 (1,2) - DS problem
01:35:629 (2) - Here it occurs the opposite, the long slider is skipping a very strong vocal accentuation here 01:36:018 - by making a 2/1 slider. I think it would be better if you could replace it with a 1/1 slider and a circle to represent that sound better.
01:39:135 (3) - NC
01:48:486 (1) - Since this is the long end-slider I think you could add a red node here 01:49:265 - to emphasize that music change as you've done before at 01:48:876 - how about this https://up.ppy.sh/files/ghhh.png?

That's it! Besto luckerino!

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-12-16T19:14:24+00:00

HappyRocket88 wrote:
General
Having the same volume for the kiai feels bothersome since the intensity is quite different from the other parts, I think it would be better if you could increase it a bit in order to highlight better this section. Having it +10% would hurt no one

Kanan's Easy
00:07:966 (1,3) - No problem with these boys but would it be possible to unstack them? so we'll have no issue with the hit bursts covering the circle once players have passed through 00:07:966 (1) - just as well as you've done it here 00:31:343 (1,3) - No problem with these boys
From here 00:10:304 - to 00:19:265 - the new combo usage becomes inconsistent. Not a big issue but I think it would be relevant to have them similar to all sections compared with how 00:33:681 - was arranged. Hence, I think adding NC here would fit 00:14:979 (2) - ; then removing it over this one 00:16:148 (1) - and finally adding it here 00:17:317 (3) - fixed
00:43:811 - Perhaps you were mapping vocals-wise oriented, but I'm afraid this spot feels rather awkward as is. The reason I say that is because instruments turn more intense compared with how low the previous section 00:20:434 - was. Therefore, adding a circle here would suit the pattern better by highlighting the melody along with vocals. Consider applying the same according to your judgement to the following parts 00:58:616 - 01:04:850 - those are supposed to follow the vocals here/should give more emphasis on the vocal
00:53:551 (2,3) - Based on the theme followed, the momentum the lyrics create here suggests a long tune followed with the music but having two circles do not really show the progression vocals offer here. That's why I think it would fit better if they could be replaced with a 2/1 slider in order to accentuate better the music. did 1/1 instead
01:03:291 (2) - Missing hitsound on reverse idk which one I should add here so I added a whistle
01:05:239 (1,2) - Rhytmically talking, current pattern doesn't highlight pretty well the rhythm due that the intesity of the segment reside over this vocal
01:05:629 - and it's being emphasized with a low offbeat (slidertail) I highly suggest to make that spot stronger withan upbeat (circle, sliderhead) so the rhythm along with the flow would feel more natural according to vocals wise. How about doing ctrl + g over these 01:05:239 (1,2) - ? That way the vocal will be represented nicely and the rhythm-execution would accentuate better. If I ctrl+g this then the vocals are very awkward on the reverse as you said I prioritize the vocal rather then the instrument
01:07:577 (1,1) - I'm doubting this could become risky over lower difficulties since the overlapping may bee too evident that coul confuse players while they're playing it. I thik it would be better if you could move 01:07:577 (1) - around so the whole overlap can be avoided. How about this? https://up.ppy.sh/files/ddddd-0.png 1. wtf which overlap there stacked here obv 2. I ranked a gd's with patterns like this and it isn't a problem at all because they fully fade out
01:27:447 (1,2) - DS problem fixed
01:35:629 (2) - Here it occurs the opposite, the long slider is skipping a very strong vocal accentuation here 01:36:018 - by making a 2/1 slider. I think it would be better if you could replace it with a 1/1 slider and a circle to represent that sound better. fixed
01:39:135 (3) - NC fixed
01:48:486 (1) - Since this is the long end-slider I think you could add a red node here 01:49:265 - to emphasize that music change as you've done before at 01:48:876 - how about this https://up.ppy.sh/files/ghhh.png? sure
That's it! Besto luckerino!

thanks 4 mod

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Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2017-12-16T19:54:18+00:00

updated!!

Nao Tomori

osu! Alumni

3,106 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-12-18T21:04:56+00:00

cloudchaser
- you didnt apply my first point

- 00:13:811 (3) - nor this one

- 01:24:330 (1) - removing this basically highlights the louder piano much more, and shows that the song structure has ab reak and repeats kiai after this. you ignore that by just having constant 1/1 gaps which does not reflect the fact that the instruments climaxed and stop entirely well.

nitrous
- this doesnt look like a 2012 map but ok

newton
- 01:24:330 (7,8) - this doesnt emphasize anything, it lowers how much emphasis there is anywhere because it is just more of the same 1/1 spam. like if everything is "emphasized" then nothing is. yes i hear there are vocals there but the entire instrumental line stops, it makes no sense to ignore it and map the same way as the rest without acknowledging that it stopped.

kanan
- half your ncs

- 01:05:239 (1,2) - hr88 is right, ctrl g this, it works way better with the vocals..

- 01:10:694 (2,1) - 01:08:746 (2,3,1) - this can be confusing, make the path more clear like this: http://puu.sh/yJfvb/6b8c649f09.jpg or omething to that effect.

- 00:53:551 (2,3) - 2/1 works a lot better here too

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2017-12-19T04:17:30+00:00

Ok! I agree with your explaination. Thankies

newton-

Beatmap Nominator

670 posts

Joined February 2015

newton- 2017-12-19T11:18:39+00:00

@naotoshi: deleted (7,8)

update

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nextplay

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nextplay 2017-12-19T15:05:06+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
kanan
- half your ncs lol why? Their perfectly fine

- 01:05:239 (1,2) - hr88 is right, ctrl g this, it works way better with the vocals.. ok fixed

- 01:10:694 (2,1) - 01:08:746 (2,3,1) - this can be confusing, make the path more clear like this: http://puu.sh/yJfvb/6b8c649f09.jpg or something to that effect.changed the structure

- 00:53:551 (2,3) - 2/1 works a lot better here too I did a 1/1 to represent the vocals better than a 2/1 would do. if I would make this a 2/1 it would ignore the actual vocal start here 00:54:330 (3) - the "ni" is better represented with the 1/1 instead of a 2/1

thx 4 recheck

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Cloudchaser

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Cloudchaser 2017-12-19T19:49:55+00:00

updated

Nao Tomori

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Nao Tomori 2017-12-19T19:51:30+00:00

half ncs cuz atm there is like 2 and 3 combo nc everywhere, it is easier to read 5-6 combo than 2-3, easy diff should be easy to read, etc etc

Cloudchaser

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Cloudchaser 2017-12-19T19:55:25+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
half ncs cuz atm there is like 2 and 3 combo nc everywhere, it is easier to read 5-6 combo than 2-3, easy diff should be easy to read, etc etc

I agree, it would also emphasize stanza way better. Just saying, Kanan :9

Cloudchaser

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Cloudchaser 2017-12-21T14:44:25+00:00

Kanan allowed me to edit the diff. Updated.

Nao Tomori

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Nao Tomori 2017-12-22T01:39:15+00:00

blub

Cloudchaser

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Cloudchaser 2017-12-22T01:45:41+00:00

thanks qt

HappyRocket88

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HappyRocket88 2017-12-23T22:12:19+00:00

00:03:389 (4) - This slider lands on the wrong tick. It should be on 00:03:291 - over the easy diff

Cloudchaser

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Cloudchaser 2017-12-24T03:07:17+00:00

HappyRocket88 wrote:
00:03:389 (4) - This slider lands on the wrong tick. It should be on 00:03:291 - over the easy diff

It was my mistake fixing NCs :C

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Xinnoh

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Xinnoh 2017-12-25T16:04:50+00:00

00:14:979 (1) - some diffs have the finish here, some don't. imo should not, only use it on important parts.
considering how frequent the finish hitsound is used, should make it shorter else it gets really intrusive on gameplay.

easy
00:53:551 (2) - missing hitsound
seems like finish is really over-used in the opening section, just copy top diff hitsounds xd

holy night
01:23:941 (3) - there is no sound on the repeat arrow, should be unmapped
01:17:317 (3,2) - really different sounds, use different slider shapes

Cloudchaser

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Cloudchaser 2017-12-25T16:12:26+00:00

Hitsounds fixed by me. Everything added by my part. :3

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Xinnoh 2017-12-25T16:15:07+00:00

bach

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Cloudchaser 2017-12-25T16:18:47+00:00

It's Christmas Miracle! or my Christmas present?

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2017-12-30T04:18:01+00:00

im back from cuba so i decided to look at this

holy night
what an unbelieveably creative diffname
00:18:096 (3,4) - you could probably make do with a little less spacing here, kinda looks like a 1/1. but doesn't really matter
00:31:343 (1) - would prefer if u were consistent with this one 00:07:966 (1,2,3) -
01:23:941 - it would be kinda cool to lower the SV here
for all diffs
00:19:265 (5) - 00:23:551 (1,2) - 00:46:928 (1,2) - idk if it was intentional, but i really don't think the drum whistles sound good here, i don't see u using them anywhere else and they stand out too much lol
if they were intentional, at least put them here for consistency i guess 00:42:642 (5) -

nitrous
uhh??? this diff has 4/4 time signature while the other diffs have 3/4? have to pop for this

newton
00:07:966 (5,6) - im against stacking 1/2s like this under slider ends. i think it makes it kind of unreadable for a normal diff.
its fine for sliders like 00:16:538 (4,5) - but for circles it becomes kinda hard to see, please fix these, i don't think it will be hard

SPOILER

kynan
this diff ends at a different time for no apparent reason
00:07:966 (4,6) - i would unstack this, the circle kind of gets hidden by the slider end
01:27:447 (3,4) - what happened here?

get sinnoh to rebubble and i can qual once unrankable stuff is fixed

Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 2017-12-31T19:43:40+00:00

Hi, sorry for being late, there are some things that I think are worth mentioning.

Red = Not allowed/potentionaly causing DQ
Bold = Mostly important, partially subjective, address this properly
Regular = Subjective opinion, try it out but don't obey my opinion if yours is essentially different

[General]

I think it's worth including some tags related to this song. For example the album it is in. ジングルベルがとまらない (romanised: Jingle Bell ga Tomaranai) More importantly, Aqours is quite a lot of artists, so it would be nice if you could find this song by searching for either of them, the chance that you are going to like this exists. So you can just add these and their romanisations: 伊波杏樹, 逢田梨香子, 諏訪ななか, 小宮有紗, 斉藤朱夏, 小林愛香, 高槻かなこ, 鈴木愛奈, 降幡愛, Anju Inami, Rikako Aida, Nanaka Suwa, Arisa Komiya, Shuka Saito, Kanako Takatsuki, Aina Suzuki, Ai Furihata.
The skin might have several problems (not all are unrankable, but I think all are worth addressing)
approachcircle.png's recommended size is 126x126 px (and it's gameplay element, so it can't be anything else). I believe there is an error in the Skin Set List, because the original approach circle is 128x128 px, this will need to be confirmed, but you cannot make it 256x256 px regardless. Trying the map with and without this approach circle, this effect seems to affect the readability a bit, I definitely noticed more blending with this than with default approach circle, so the effect on it's own may not be very appropriate.

Although the reversearrow.png doesn't have a recommended size, I don't think that it should be essentially different from the default one. It definitely can be a bit smaller or larger, but I believe you shouldn't make it so big that it exceeds the hitcircle. Just for comparison, this doesn't seem okay: http://prntscr.com/hulch9 http://prntscr.com/hulcmxYou should include sliderb, sliderfollowcircle and sliderscorepoint as you are using colours for the slider body and slider border, that could collide with these elements from player's skin. Default is always enough if you don't want to create new elements.I'm not quite sure if you know what "Samples match playback rate" means. (If you do and the usage is intended, then I guess that's fine) It is generally suitable for osu!mania, if you remove parts of the song and make them into keysounds. (e.g. https://osu.ppy.sh/b/257529) That is so that if double time/half time is used, the hitsounds are slowed/sped up as well, otherwise it would be off. That's in no way the case of your map, I think it makes the hitsounds only annoying here (for half time, by being too deep, for double time, by being too high). Because we mostly don't consider game modes when judging issues, I don't think this should be a problem, but if you didn't know what it does (the "fully hitsounded" description is quite vague), decide whether you want to use it regardless of the potential problems. (also only one diff has it, so it may be a mistake)Below are the suggestions after editThe hitsounds are 60% volume almost the whole map. I'm a fan of loud hitsounds, but I think the intro is way too strong for this song. I think it should be about 40% before 00:51:213 - .[Holy Night]

00:46:148 (3,4) - Due to the low spacing and stack, the space between this stack and the previous note looks a bit inconsistent. You might want ot adjust this to look a bit better, but it's up to you.
01:26:278 - A hitsound is apparently missing. You had it at 01:12:252 - as well and it's the same part.

[Nitrous' Advanced]

01:26:278 - The hitsound is supposed to be here (as it was at 01:12:252 - ), not 01:25:889 - .
01:27:057 - I don't think this should have a hitsound. The previous part didn't have it and it sounds like it's not fitting here.
00:01:733 - The hitsound probably shouldn't be here. Doesn't fit the hitsounding style nor music.

[newton's Normal]

00:01:343 - and 00:01:733 - shouldn't have a hitsound.
00:31:343 - The hitsound is completely missing, check out the highest difficulty.
00:46:927 (6) - I don't think the drum sampleset is intentional and doesn't even sound well.
01:12:252 - Hitsound is missing.
01:26:278 - Same as above.

[Kanan's Easy]

00:01:733 - The hitsound doesn't sound it like it should be here.

Last edited by Wafu 2018-01-02T21:57:10+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2017-12-31T23:09:06+00:00

thanks for checking the skin :d

i honestly dont know jack about the skinning stuff lol

u there cloudchaser? kinda wana get this going lol

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2018-01-01T19:45:14+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
thanks for checking the skin :d

i honestly dont know jack about the skinning stuff lol

u there cloudchaser? kinda wana get this going lol

Now I am home. I had to hospitalize my cat in the vet clinic so I couldn't check this.

Btw, I'm removing skin due I realized it is ugly :<

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2018-01-01T21:12:06+00:00

Added everything from Kibbleru except the SV change. I am not into SV changes in hard diffs at least >< .

In other hands, @Wafu, I don't get your last point about hitsounding. Would you kindly explain me a bit simplier? I'm dumb when it's about hitsounding

btw waiting newton and kanan for further answer. (Nitrous' issue was fixed by me)

Nao Tomori

osu! Alumni

3,106 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2018-01-02T01:32:57+00:00

he just means to turn off samples match playback rate
also im back now sry

newton-

Beatmap Nominator

670 posts

Joined February 2015

newton- 2018-01-02T04:49:12+00:00

that slider thing was harder than i thought it would be to fix lol

d

osu file format v14

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Title:Seinaru Hi no Inori
TitleUnicode:聖なる日の祈り
Artist:Aqours
ArtistUnicode:Aqours
Creator:Cloudchaser
Version:newton's Normal
Source:ラブライブ！スクールアイドルフェスティバル
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PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

PatZar 2018-01-02T13:37:16+00:00

im looking for heart icon

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2018-01-02T17:27:22+00:00

I applied your mod for Kanan. Everything's updated!!

--> applied Kibb mod
--> applied Wafu mod

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2018-01-02T21:26:14+00:00

ill rebub if nao is the one to nominate here,

sinnoh on probation so he cant qualify x.x

wait im a retard easy wasnt fixed yet lmao

wait it was im actually so dumb.

WHAT AM I DOING

sorry i just woke up :S

Nao Tomori

osu! Alumni

3,106 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2018-01-02T21:29:51+00:00

kibb what the fuck are you doing

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2018-01-02T22:00:20+00:00

Don't worry LOL Wafu just edited his mod post

such a clownfiesta

Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 2018-01-02T22:06:16+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
ill rebub if nao is the one to nominate here,

sinnoh on probation so he cant qualify x.x

wait im a retard easy wasnt fixed yet lmao

wait it was im actually so dumb.

WHAT AM I DOING

sorry i just woke up :S

I also edited my older post: p/6429837 and added a couple of suggestions regarding hitsounds, one of which was kinda major, mostly consistency stuff and some missing or overused hitsounds though.

Regarding the skin, I don't understand why it was removed (it's a pity), there were like 2 things needed to change + add the missing elements from the default skin, I would help with that if needed.

You shouldn't be using the SliderBorder colour/SliderTrack colour without a skin, it's part of circle/slider skin set. That's why it will be easier to put the skin back and fix those couple of things, as I already said, I can help you if that's needed.

I think you misunderstood the "Samples match playback rate" thing. I would recommend to disable it instead, it doesn't really work for your hitsounds (it destroys them on double/half time), it is for designed mostly for osu!mania, it will make things only worse on osu!.

If anything is unclear or you need help, feel free to call me.

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2018-01-02T23:14:16+00:00

Fixed Hitsounds in all the diffs and added my reworked skin. Take a look before anything

redl map
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Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 2018-01-03T01:02:47+00:00

The skin issues and hitsound issues seem to be resolved. Probably ready.

Cloudchaser