thanks 4 modHappyRocket88 wrote:
General
Having the same volume for the kiai feels bothersome since the intensity is quite different from the other parts, I think it would be better if you could increase it a bit in order to highlight better this section. Having it +10% would hurt no one
Kanan's EasyThat's it! Besto luckerino!
- 00:07:966 (1,3) - No problem with these boys but would it be possible to unstack them? so we'll have no issue with the hit bursts covering the circle once players have passed through 00:07:966 (1) - just as well as you've done it here 00:31:343 (1,3) - No problem with these boys
- From here 00:10:304 - to 00:19:265 - the new combo usage becomes inconsistent. Not a big issue but I think it would be relevant to have them similar to all sections compared with how 00:33:681 - was arranged. Hence, I think adding NC here would fit 00:14:979 (2) - ; then removing it over this one 00:16:148 (1) - and finally adding it here 00:17:317 (3) - fixed
- 00:43:811 - Perhaps you were mapping vocals-wise oriented, but I'm afraid this spot feels rather awkward as is. The reason I say that is because instruments turn more intense compared with how low the previous section 00:20:434 - was. Therefore, adding a circle here would suit the pattern better by highlighting the melody along with vocals. Consider applying the same according to your judgement to the following parts 00:58:616 - 01:04:850 - those are supposed to follow the vocals here/should give more emphasis on the vocal
- 00:53:551 (2,3) - Based on the theme followed, the momentum the lyrics create here suggests a long tune followed with the music but having two circles do not really show the progression vocals offer here. That's why I think it would fit better if they could be replaced with a 2/1 slider in order to accentuate better the music. did 1/1 instead
- 01:03:291 (2) - Missing hitsound on reverse idk which one I should add here so I added a whistle
- 01:05:239 (1,2) - Rhytmically talking, current pattern doesn't highlight pretty well the rhythm due that the intesity of the segment reside over this vocal
- 01:05:629 - and it's being emphasized with a low offbeat (slidertail) I highly suggest to make that spot stronger withan upbeat (circle, sliderhead) so the rhythm along with the flow would feel more natural according to vocals wise. How about doing ctrl + g over these 01:05:239 (1,2) - ? That way the vocal will be represented nicely and the rhythm-execution would accentuate better. If I ctrl+g this then the vocals are very awkward on the reverse as you said I prioritize the vocal rather then the instrument
- 01:07:577 (1,1) - I'm doubting this could become risky over lower difficulties since the overlapping may bee too evident that coul confuse players while they're playing it. I thik it would be better if you could move 01:07:577 (1) - around so the whole overlap can be avoided. How about this? https://up.ppy.sh/files/ddddd-0.png 1. wtf which overlap there stacked here obv 2. I ranked a gd's with patterns like this and it isn't a problem at all because they fully fade out
- 01:27:447 (1,2) - DS problem fixed
- 01:35:629 (2) - Here it occurs the opposite, the long slider is skipping a very strong vocal accentuation here 01:36:018 - by making a 2/1 slider. I think it would be better if you could replace it with a 1/1 slider and a circle to represent that sound better. fixed
- 01:39:135 (3) - NC fixed
- 01:48:486 (1) - Since this is the long end-slider I think you could add a red node here 01:49:265 - to emphasize that music change as you've done before at 01:48:876 - how about this https://up.ppy.sh/files/ghhh.png? sure
g8zrgfi8ehgfiurfuhrfiuewhaeiusasdiusdhdskjdfjhdzewbejuifewjwfbdfwaqsuads
osu file format v14
[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 71083
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0
[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1
[Metadata]
Title:Seinaru Hi no Inori
TitleUnicode:聖なる日の祈り
Artist:Aqours
ArtistUnicode:Aqours
Creator:Cloudchaser
Version:Kanan's Easy
Source:ラブライブ!スクールアイドルフェスティバル
Tags:Lovelive Love live school idol festival SIF Nitrous newton- my angel kanan xmas christmas
BeatmapID:1451844
BeatmapSetID:683241
[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"piggy.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
[TimingPoints]
954,389.61038961039,3,2,1,60,1,0
2512,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
3096,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
6992,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
7772,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
23356,-100,3,2,1,40,0,0
24135,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
25889,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
26473,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
30369,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
31148,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
46733,-100,3,2,1,40,0,0
47512,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
56083,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
56863,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
60759,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
61538,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
65434,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
66213,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
71083,-100,3,2,1,60,0,1
74785,-100,3,2,2,60,0,1
75564,-100,3,2,1,60,0,1
79460,-100,3,2,2,60,0,1
80239,-100,3,2,1,60,0,1
84720,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
85109,-100,3,2,1,60,0,1
88811,-100,3,2,2,60,0,1
89590,-100,3,2,1,60,0,1
93486,-100,3,2,2,60,0,1
94265,-100,3,2,1,60,0,1
98161,-100,3,2,2,60,0,1
98941,-100,3,2,1,60,0,1
101473,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
102837,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
103616,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
107512,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
108291,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0
110824,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
115109,-100,3,2,1,5,0,0
[Colours]
Combo1 : 228,228,228
Combo2 : 0,206,0
Combo3 : 255,40,40
SliderTrackOverride : 206,16,16
SliderBorder : 47,130,32
[HitObjects]
124,32,953,6,0,P|200:9|277:23,1,160,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,32,2122,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,59,2512,2,0,L|432:150,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,219,3291,6,0,P|349:206|272:225,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,239,4460,2,0,L|112:238,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
37,263,5239,1,2,0:0:0:0:
42,183,5629,6,0,P|29:114|41:21,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,13,6798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,72,7187,2,0,L|263:72,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,91,7966,6,0,L|419:88,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,132,8746,2,0,L|475:181,2,40,8|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,88,9525,1,10,0:0:0:0:
402,247,10304,6,0,P|404:302|253:288,1,240,12|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,141,12642,6,0,P|88:86|239:100,1,240,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,294,14979,5,12,0:0:0:0:
386,236,15369,2,0,P|381:180|390:140,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,100,16148,1,10,0:0:0:0:
393,35,16538,2,0,P|358:39|305:33,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,19,17317,6,0,P|185:13|137:22,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,61,18096,2,0,L|85:158,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,253,19265,1,2,3:0:0:0:
182,173,19655,6,0,P|234:166|274:172,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,225,20824,1,10,0:0:0:0:
448,154,21213,2,0,P|438:100|439:70,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,50,21992,6,0,P|316:55|270:48,1,80,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,38,22772,2,0,L|203:121,1,80,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,195,23551,2,0,L|224:248,2,40,2|2|2,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
144,181,24330,6,0,P|102:177|41:182,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,250,25109,2,0,P|35:308|31:340,1,80,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,349,25889,2,0,L|203:349,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,333,26668,6,0,P|271:293|265:254,1,80,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,193,27447,2,0,P|210:146|220:93,1,80,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,39,28226,2,0,P|287:46|332:38,1,80
403,27,29005,6,0,P|451:19|469:113,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,169,30174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,247,30564,2,0,L|442:339,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,343,31343,6,0,P|308:340|262:344,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,355,32122,2,0,L|147:355,2,40,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,280,32902,1,12,0:0:0:0:
295,132,33681,6,0,P|183:164|100:86,1,240,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,320,36018,6,0,P|156:288|239:366,1,240,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,222,38356,5,10,0:0:0:0:
378,163,38746,2,0,L|281:162,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,125,39525,2,0,L|226:29,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
153,11,40304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
110,77,40694,6,0,P|50:73|25:78,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,156,41473,1,2,0:0:0:0:
54,228,41863,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,124,42642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
246,86,43031,6,0,P|295:82|337:86,1,80,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,244,44200,2,0,P|280:249|242:246,1,80,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,190,44979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,128,45369,6,0,P|310:108|397:131,1,160,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,175,46538,1,10,0:0:0:0:
489,102,46928,2,0,L|490:56,2,40,2|2|2,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
455,175,47707,6,0,P|449:226|454:275,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,312,48486,1,2,0:0:0:0:
327,269,48876,2,0,P|271:266|243:268,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,297,49655,1,2,0:0:0:0:
182,217,50044,6,0,L|178:133,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,56,50824,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,79,51213,2,0,P|289:86|346:80,2,80,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,56,52382,6,0,P|121:49|67:61,2,80,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,79,53551,2,0,L|250:173,1,80
186,207,54330,1,2,0:0:0:0:
123,256,54720,6,0,L|124:347,2,80,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,207,55889,1,10,0:0:0:0:
244,260,56278,2,0,P|288:266|344:261,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,223,57057,6,0,P|374:169|379:97,2,120,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,348,59005,1,2,0:0:0:0:
213,327,59395,2,0,L|125:326,2,80,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,276,60564,5,10,0:0:0:0:
239,204,60954,2,0,P|239:157|230:115,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,53,61733,2,0,P|348:85|428:52,1,160,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,117,62902,5,10,0:0:0:0:
436,189,63291,2,0,P|456:245|455:304,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,79,65239,6,0,L|223:78,1,80,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,93,66018,1,2,0:0:0:0:
90,134,66408,2,0,P|95:195|87:225,2,80,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,93,67577,6,0,L|243:93,2,80,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,134,68746,2,0,L|90:185,2,40,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,53,69525,1,2,0:0:0:0:
159,93,69915,6,0,L|255:93,1,80,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,70694,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,156,71083,6,0,P|320:237|300:317,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,336,72252,2,0,P|172:330|132:337,2,80,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,308,73421,6,0,P|352:317|416:303,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,296,74200,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,219,74590,2,0,L|480:132,2,80,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,296,75759,6,0,L|346:294,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,272,76538,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,268,76928,2,0,P|142:248|45:277,1,160,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,194,78096,6,0,P|23:159|28:97,2,80,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,190,79265,1,10,0:0:0:0:
159,129,79655,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,147,80044,1,2,0:0:0:0:
306,112,80434,6,0,P|348:107|397:115,2,80,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,145,81603,2,0,L|234:238,1,80,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,298,82382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,271,82772,6,0,P|392:263|435:271,2,80,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,298,83941,2,0,L|180:299,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
27,317,85109,6,2,P|50:248|32:158,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,117,86278,2,0,P|178:99|262:117,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,142,87447,6,0,P|378:148|428:144,2,80,12|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,204,88616,1,10,0:0:0:0:
330,267,89005,1,2,0:0:0:0:
286,334,89395,1,2,0:0:0:0:
215,296,89785,6,0,P|165:289|128:294,2,80,12|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,333,90954,2,0,P|367:346|458:333,1,160,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,263,92122,6,0,L|474:173,2,80,12|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,330,93291,1,10,0:0:0:0:
354,306,93681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
278,331,94070,1,2,0:0:0:0:
205,297,94460,6,0,P|154:301|108:294,2,80,12|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,229,95629,2,0,P|248:177|241:140,1,80,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,69,96408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,38,96798,6,0,P|353:34|393:37,2,80,12|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,75,97966,2,0,P|194:82|152:76,2,80,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,121,99135,5,2,0:0:0:0:
346,190,99525,2,0,B|359:268|359:268|339:356,2,160,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,180,101473,6,0,P|186:198|103:176,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,131,102642,1,10,0:0:0:0:
115,89,103031,2,0,L|114:-9,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,15,103811,6,0,P|244:8|291:13,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,69,104590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
375,131,104979,2,0,P|374:189|373:225,1,80,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,287,105759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
322,321,106148,6,0,P|246:303|161:321,1,160,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,348,107317,1,10,0:0:0:0:
39,287,107707,2,0,L|39:193,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,133,108486,6,0,B|145:165|145:165|225:153|225:153|290:98,1,240,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,44,110044,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,110824,12,0,115109,0:0:0:0: