[R] wrote:

yo

[Oni]
00:01:742 - delete? no reasonable sound here It does, you may pay more attention to the background instrument
00:19:226 - change kat No change because the flow will be bad
00:23:828 (113,114) - invert, to make consistent sound with 00:23:275 - 00:24:012 Deleted
00:27:509 - change kat, to emphasize note forward Pitch doesn't fit
00:29:901 - or 00:30:085 - change kat, there has different pitch 00:30:085 changed
00:56:680 - add note ? No sound, no change

[Inner Oni]
00:00:545 - you may add note here I don't like triplets at beginning, and there is no sound either, no change, sorry
00:30:269 - delete, trumpet sound stop here so u can give a break here, or move 00:30:453 - Idk, I will keep it from now, waiting for further mod

thats all from me
good luck

Cocoaaa wrote:

yo ,M4M

Kantan

01:07:079 it's nice if add d in here Want to leave a 4/1 space, no change
01:22:907 add k same

Blushing's Futsuu

00:30:637 d k d k k d ? Remapped by myself
00:40:944 d ddk is nice k ddk

Oni

00:58:797 kkd k Pitch doesn't fit, no change

ily4's Inner Oni

fine for me

good luck

jack1817 wrote:

Hi David XD
From my Queue,

[Kantan]
⏩00:37:263 (43,44,45,46) - k ddd? It sounds better. The original pattern is better
⏩00:47:754 (59) - I think moving to 00:47:570 - is easier for players to pick up. Yup, fixed
⏩00:56:036 - You can add one note here, since the other half part of the kiai has 1/1 triples, why not this half. Ok

[Blushing's Futsuu]
⏩00:14:073 (36) - Change to k? The song isn’t that flat here. But it will break the flow xD
⏩01:06:343 (46) - k? since it is la do re, 3 semitones - 2 semitones. Better to use a k than d here. Make sense, fixed
⏩01:08:920 (53,54,55,56,57) - k kd dk? It sounds better. 01:09:472 As the pitch is rising up, 01:10:208 pitch is setting down
⏩01:12:231 (62,63,64) - Kinda flat here. I don't understand this

[Oni]
⏩00:06:527 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - This pattern is quite complex for a 3* oni, try dkdddkd, or something like 00:35:791 (173,174,175,176,177,178,179) - . Remapped by mself
⏩00:19:226 (97,98,99,100) - Ctrl+g? I think it will sound better. Yea, fixed
⏩00:42:416 (204,205) - change (205) to k. Same pitch. But it's k already xD
⏩00:43:153 (206) - d, to feature the high pitch of (207) Flow will break, no change
⏩01:13:521 (375) - Cancel this, because the previous section with similar sound doesn’t have this filler. Fixed

That’s all! Thanks for requesting
Good luck with the mapset Thank you

davidminh0111 wrote:

Since Blushing doesn't care about his GD anymore, his Futsuu is deleted, replaced by my Futsuu

1. Formal OD spread
   Kantan / Futsuu / Muzukashii / Oni / Inner Oni = 3 / 5 / 4 / 5 / 5

1. Suggestion OD spread
   Kantan / Futsuu / Muzukashii / Oni / Inner Oni = 3 / 4 / 5 / 5 / 6

Tyistiana wrote:

RIP blushing ;;w;;

From my queue,
Sorry for a big late, I've to handle with my final examination and the class representative work which it's force me to can't modding any map.

[ Overall]
OD spread looks weird for me, or maybe not?

1. Formal OD spread
   Kantan / Futsuu / Muzukashii / Oni / Inner Oni = 3 / 5 / 4 / 5 / 5

We'll notice that Muzukashii difficulty have a lower OD than Futsuu. Which the difference of the note amount between these is difficulties is kinda big.

1. Suggestion OD spread
   Kantan / Futsuu / Muzukashii / Oni / Inner Oni = 3 / 4 / 5 / 5 / 6

[ Kantan]
00:47:570 moves to 00:47:386 - For the consistency of 00:44:441 (55) - 00:45:177 (56) - 00:45:913 (57) - 00:46:650 (58) No, it won't follow the vocal
01:01:558 moves to 01:01:374 - A dominate sound stands here. Both of vocal and pitch :3 Nice, fixed
01:14:809 - In Futsuu , you've use this point as a spinner before , so this one maybe should too. Or manage on Futsuu instead. Removed that spinner in Futsuu

[ Futsuu]
00:29:901 - Don't sure that much that should we add note here or not? Seems too blank here. I think the current arrangement is better because if we put the note in front of the Big note, it will be too complex for Futsuu Players
01:13:153 - How about we add a note here , consider by the vocal. 01:11:864 Note identical

[ Oni]
00:47:478 moves to 00:47:662 - Only my opinion here. My opinion is better xD
00:48:122 - If consider this point by vocal , should be k Fixed

[ ily4's Inner Oni]
00:42:048 - A little piano pitch stands here , add a note here would make this point become not too blank! :3 OK!! xD
00:46:834 - Delete , for the consistency of 00:45:361 - 00:46:097 I think this opinion is good but lets wait for further mod
01:16:189 / 01:16:282 - Delete , a pitch silence here Deleted both

Great map!
Good luck!

Astolfo wrote:

q

general:
i think a spinner at the end of each dif would be good. the song carries out until the time is over (ily4's has this already) But I like to end with a note, no change

oni:

00:04:686 (25) - move this over to the right 1/2, and change to d, it feels awkward where it is now There's a vocal background instrument,
no change
00:33:950 (166) - d But it will break the flow
00:36:251 (177) - delete, little overmap Not really
00:58:797 (295,296,297) - kkd ? Pitch doesn't fix, no change

also this whole end kiai seems kind of random to me. not a clear structure, but im not sure how to fix Remapped some part

inner oni is good, no change. very nice map

hope this helps

ASPIRIN wrote:

hello there

ily4's Inner Oni

Mapping

00:47:662 (254) - Remove this note Ok, fixed because for variety and note identification

00:52:079 (281) - I think will be better if you will replace note from here to 00:52:263 00:52:355 Has a strong percussion, no change since if I move this note to the place you tell me, it would be weird

01:12:048 - lost sound Music end in 01:11:864

Oni

Mapping

00:30:085 (144) - remove this note or add finisher at 00:30:269 But the percussion end here and it has strong meoldy

00:30:821 (146,147,148) - Change to kdd
00:31:558 (151,152,153) - Change to dkk Both of this for music identification. The vocal is the same and I think i will keep it

00:47:386 (228) - Change to d 00:47:018 variety

01:20:055 (404) - Remove note here and add note 01:20:423 here Fixed

01:21:711 (415) - Change to d 01:21:803 to k and changed to d

Cool map! Good luck in ranking!

[R] wrote:

[Muzukashii]
00:06:159 - change kat ? high pitch here, similiar with 00:03:214 -
Current one is good, making the same as 00:06:711 (28,29) - doesn't look nice
00:06:711 - change don ? pitch diferent with 00:06:895 -
Yeah but is not that different so it emphasizes 00:07:079 (30) - better
00:29:717 - d k ddd change k d k , the triplet feels sudden so maybe u can remove it
D: there's not any triple
00:35:239 - imo triplet more reasonable in 00:34:870 -
Same ^
00:46:650 - change don, to mirror the pattern before
I pref changing 00:46:466 (186) - instead
00:47:938 - change don ?
Already don D:
01:02:386 (64,65) - delete, following vocal
It already follows vocal nice
01:20:239 - add note ? you fill the piano sound like 01:25:392 -
Added before
I'm pretty sure you have modded other version D: but thank you anyways:3

Cocoaaa wrote:

xfrac's Muzukashii

00:02:846 k k d it's very nice
Done
00:35:607 change to k and delete 00:35:791
It's already k and deleting that will make it feel so empty

Tyistiana wrote:

[ xfrac's Muzukashii]
00:35:423 (144,145) - Ctrl+G , considered by the vocal.
Pref this, done
00:37:263 (152,153) - Ctrl+G , considered by the piano pitch. Since 00:37:631 (153) piano pitch is similar to 00:36:895 (151) pitch
Done

Astolfo wrote:

q

muzu:

00:35:791 (146) - k for snare
Seems too louder imo D:
00:38:551 (157) - d, lower vocal
Done
00:44:441 - ^
It fills better according to high pitch on 00:44:441 (177) -

ASPIRIN wrote:

xfrac's Muzukashii

Mapping

00:02:662 - i think this is important sound
I'm following piano here so isn't neccesary imo
00:04:318 - ^ (in this pattern i think)
A break for the beginning seems good :p
00:04:870 (18) - move it at 00:05:055
Done
00:46:374 - add k here
Don't like triplets for that section
00:52:079 (13) - move from here to 00:51:711
01:02:386 (60) - move from here to 01:02:202
I'm using these triplets to emphasize next vocal single note usage, also for section changes :p

Ringer wrote:

hi, NM as requested

Kantan

00:02:662 - Don ? the other don after feels weird Added
00:03:398 (3) - move it to 00:03:398 - ? sounds less weird even if it's red tick so may be confusing for beginners Fixed but you need to get the right timing xD!
00:42:416 (52) - kat sounds better for me because the voice sounds more like 00:43:889 (54) - Fixed

Futsuu

00:14:809 (38) - change to kat and change 00:15:177 (40) - to don ? it sounds better to emphasize the voice imo I'm following background instrument
From 00:30:637 to 00:36:527 - Wouldn't it be better to map some of the white ticks ? sounds empty at moment even for a Futsuu, if we compare with the rest of the song I will consider it
00:45:729 - don to be coherent with before ? Didn't think is a good idea, while testplay, better
00:46:466 - Same ^
00:54:564 - Don because it sounds empty ? (sounds empty if you compare to the rest of the rythm) Securing a break

Oni

00:04:502 (24) - K instead of k because you can and it emphasize the map better imo ?Ok
00:24:748 (116) - ^ ? Not really a stron vocal
00:45:453 (216,217) - swap these two ? 00:45:453 for variation
00:47:110 (227,228) - swap these two ? ^ vice versa


ily4's Inner Oni

00:42:416 (225) - K ? For the beginning of new lyrics k only
00:56:864 - d ? it sounds better to emphasize the lyrics Not really. The triplet isn't fit here
01:03:030 (352,372) - big don for the same goal ? but it sounds weird so not sure about it No. Because vocal isn't strong enough

no more to say, clean map; gl for ranking :p

rew0825 wrote:

Hello from my modding queue!

General

1. Please check Aimod of xfrac's Muzukashii and fix them. Unicode problem. Will fix by xfrac

ily4's Inner Oni

1. 00:01:005 (5) - Change to k? I think a sound on this is similar like 00:01:097 (6) - Maybe you should use 50% playback rate to listen more carefully
2. 00:42:048 (224,225) - Ctrl+g? The sound on (224) is louder (225) 00:42:785 Changed to k
3. 01:01:374 (340) - Add finish? The sound I think it's loud. Added for all other diff
4. 01:17:754 (442) - Remove finish? The sound is lower than the notes at before. Ok
5. 01:21:251 (464) - Add finish? For the pattern? Not really strong enough

Oni

1. 00:02:294 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - I suggest to change to this? It's follow the melody better i think. Good point, fixed
2. 00:06:527 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - I suggest to change this to ddkdkdk. Look it follow the sound better? I think the current pattern is better
3. 00:21:251 (103) - Change to k? 00:20:331 (100,101,102,103,104) - will opposite with 00:21:803 (105,106,107,108,109) - Fixed
4. 00:25:760 (122) - Remove this note? I unheard a melody on this. 00:25:668 added a note
5. 00:35:791 (172,173,174) - How about change to kkd? I think it follow a melody better. Ok
6. 01:01:374 (309) - Add finish? The sound look too loud Same as Inner Oni.

That is all from me. Hope it can help you. Good luck

Ringer wrote:

xfrac's Muzukashii

00:01:005 (4,5) - don don kat instead of that pattern ? :c
I made other change
00:04:686 (17) - this note disturbs me, it goes on no sound at all ?
Deleted
00:11:864 (51) - k instead of K ? the finish is too much imo
Consistency with 00:10:392 (44,47) -
00:24:380 (99) - D instead of d to fit with before ?
Fixed
00:35:975 - A note here would be better nah ?
There's no sound ><
00:45:177 (180,184,187,4) - Finish ? it sounds better for me, I have a little doubt about 4 tho
Is not neccesary I noticed D:
01:20:515 (141,144,147) - Finish ?
This is clearly lower than the first pattern where I used big notes cause piano:3

rew0825 wrote:

General

1. Please check Aimod of xfrac's Muzukashii and fix them.

[notice] xfrac's Muzukashii

1. 00:04:318 - I think you can add note here.
   Added
2. 00:11:496 (49) - Change to d? I think it shouldn't different 00:10:760 (46,47,48) - part.
   00:11:496 (49) - this is clearly different than 00:10:024 (43,46) -
3. 00:32:294 (132,133,134) - Change to d k d? For opposite with 00:31:558 (129,130,131) -.
   00:31:558 (129,132) - these pitches are so similar so holding
4. 00:33:031 (135,136,137,138) - Change to k d k d? For opposite with 00:30:637 (125,126,127,128) -.
   Changed to k d d k instead
5. 00:52:355 (15,23) - Add a finish? For consistency with Oni and Inner oni.
   I will hold voice follow as smooth as I can
6. 01:17:754 (128) - Remove finish? I think the sound is not loud.
   Done

Thank you both for the mod

Franklin_DeJavu wrote:

Hi~
From FDJv's Modding Queue

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
General : I will fixed some note for prepair the logo diff. Your Kantan have N logo and Futsuu have H logo.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[Kantan]
00:03:214 (4) - change this to k and move it to 00:03:030 - and then add d at 00:03:398 - Ok
00:07:815 (10) - move this to 00:06:711 - 00:05:975 Added a note
00:09:656 (11) - move to 00:10:024 - Sure
00:15:177 (19) - move to 00:14:809 - and then add d at 00:15:177 - I think it's fine imo
00:16:650 - add d Yea
00:18:122 (24) - move to 00:17:754 - and then add d at 00:18:122 - Same as above

00:25:484 (33) - delete. No need For consistency./color]
00:26:588 - add Sure
00:28:429 - add note here. Maybe k Yea, add k
00:29:533 - ^ dkd

00:31:374 (43) - delete Wait, why?
00:32:846 (44) - ^ ^
00:37:263 (48) - delete ^

00:38:367 (49) - change to d For contrast in 00:41:312
00:40:208 (52) - delete If I delete, I feel empty, no change
00:40:944 (52) - change to k Same as 00:38:367 but vice versa
00:43:153 (56) - delete Same
00:44:441 (57) - move to 00:44:257 - and then add k at 00:44:625 - Moved the note but add d

00:45:177 (59) - move to 00:45:361 - . You may to not follow the vocal sound here
00:47:570 (62) - move to 00:47:386 - to follow the vocal sound and follow previous not Remapped

00:53:091 - add d Ok
00:54:932 (6) - delete. No need It need, there are sounds
00:57:877 (11) - ^ ^
00:59:165 (12) - move to 00:58:981 - . You may not follow the vocal sound here. And then add k at 00:59:349 - Ok

01:04:870 (21) - change to k Pitch doesn't fit, no change
01:07:999 (25) - move to 01:07:815 - and then add d at 01:08:183 - Ok
01:10:944 (30) - change to d and move to 01:10:760 - . Then add d at 01:11:128 - Ok

01:19:778 (4) - move to 01:19:594 - and then add d at 01:19:963 - Sure



[Futsuu]
00:10:760 (27) - delete. No need note this
00:11:496 (28) - ^ But I need them, the diff is getting harder
00:13:337 (32,33) - Ctrl + G, and then delete 00:13:521 (33) - They are fine imo
00:14:073 (34) - delete Yup

00:29:717 - add d It feels a bit weird to me, no change
00:29:993 (1) - remove beat here. Its heard strange. Just put d at 00:29:901 - Ok
00:44:993 (100) - delete, then change 00:45:177 (100) - to k oK

00:51:251 (2) - Finisher D here ? Ya
01:03:030 (35) - delete, then change 01:03:398 (35) - to Finisher K Deleted but didn't add Finisher
01:07:079 (47) - delete Deleted

01:19:226 (5) - change to d. Too many k Ok
01:19:594 (6,7) - Ctrl + G Sure

[Oni]
00:06:619 (35) - delete Ok
00:06:803 (36,37) - Ctrl + G Ok
00:23:643 (111,112,113,114) - no use Finisher here? You do it at Futsuu Shoot! I forgot
01:13:245 (372) - change to d Pitch is clearly high

01:16:742 (388) - change to d But I'm following vocal :3
01:17:570 (391,392) - Ctrl + G No, pitch doesn't fit



No Inner Oni, sorry. I don't know Inner Oni pattern xD
I hope my mod will help
I hope this map get ranked too <3 Good luck with that~!

Protonori wrote:

From my modding queue~
Remember that these are suggestions. Feel free to ignore them.

[Kantan]
00:54:932 (7) - Use k, like you did at 00:51:987 (2)? The pitch is still higher than the previous note. Nah, it's still low imo
00:58:613 (13,14,15) - d k d? Ending the pattern with d will make the note at 01:00:085 stand out. 00:59:349 background instrument is high here
01:01:926 - Add d? Retained to secure a break in here
01:04:870 (23) - Switch to kdk or dkd? The use of ddd seems odd, since you don't use mono patterns anywhere else in kiai. I would like to make this pattern simple as the pitch is low.
01:05:975 (25) - k, to reflect the vocals? Ok
01:10:392 (31) - Use d? You used k k d at 01:07:447 but the vocals are different here. Yeah
01:24:932 (12) - Switch to k (to reflect the higher pitch)? Pitch is acutally setting down :3

[Futsuu]
00:05:607 (13,14,15) - k k d? It reflects the pattern at 00:03:214 (7,8,9). You did something similar in Kantan. kdk instead
00:04:502 (10) - Add finisher? You used one at 00:07:447 and it sounds the same to me. (You also used these finishers in your Oni.) !!!!
00:50:515 - and 00:50:699 - Add d? I think it's a good transition to Muzu. 00:50:515 only


Fun set. Good luck with ranking this! Thank you

Karee Pan wrote:

Hey M4M, sorry I'm so late orz

[Kantan]

00:03:030 (4) - Don't think we need this note in the intro part But there is vocal?
00:37:263 (53) - I like that were doing something a bit different here, I would just go all the way with the monotone theme with k_k_kkk d_d_ddd k_k_kkd 00:44:257 changed to k

[Futsuu]

00:17:018 - 00:28:797 - - You could skip these breaks to keep the sets a bit more balanced, atm we have 00:24:748 - very intense followed by 00:27:693 - very slow, and its almost an identical part of the song. Remapped
00:46:466 (43) - Could be deleted for consistency Ok
00:53:275 (10,11) - Maybe just ctrl-g these to match the previous set kdk instead
00:58:613 (24) - Would go with d to emphasize the next stronger note more Agree, fixed
01:02:294 (36,37) - Could add finishers here Ok
01:13:153 - You could add d and make 01:13:337 (67) - to keep the doubles going For consistency in 01:11:864, no change

[Oni]

00:01:374 (8) - Could consider axing this note to be consistent with the breaks in the intro part. It's fine imo
00:15:729 (81,82) - Maybe ctrl-g for the vocal pitch 00:15:913 pitch is high right here
00:27:509 (132) - if you applied the one above^ k here too. Then 00:28:061 (134) - to d like earlier set dkd

00:30:637

(145,149,150,154,155,159,160,164,165) - Sorry for big nerf suggestion, but you could make this a bit more dynamic by following the guitar pitch in the 1/2 doubles. Just a thought, but something like :

00:33:582 changed this to k only, I followed vocal so it's okay

01:02:662 (315) - K sounds better to me ? Ok
01:04:870 (324,329) - I like the double k's you have all over Kiai, you could consider keeping them going by switching these. I will consider this
01:09:288 (351,352,353) - Then we could go kkd here as well, its more exciting. Nah, I'm following vocal :3


[ily4's Inner Oni]
01:13:521 (420) - I think we can delete this so the intensity build happens later at 01:14:809 Fixed for consistency at 01:12:048
Very clean diff


Good luck with the set!

Skylish wrote:

Sorry for being super late.

[Kantan]

! Fix your volume setting to 80% just like other difficulties'. Take ref. from your Oni.
Fixed
! SV changes are discouraged in any cases in easier difficulties (Kantan - Futsuu).
Removed SV, changed SV to 1.00x
> 00:03:030 (4,5) - you can remove these two notes and put a compromised note fitting the prominent melody well at 00:03:214 - . The mapping channel would be clearer.
Applied
> 00:18:122 - change it to k for a better flow? Players will remember the d d k at 00:14:441 - . They may expect the 3rd beat would be a constant kat.
But the pitch doesn't fit
> 00:19:594 - weird empty space here when the vocal part is definitely supportive for a note (don). Add it back.
Added
> 00:21:067 - you may shift it 1/2 backwards to fit the vocal exactly.
Moved
> 00:26:588 - not sure if a kat fits your taste here, make sure you leave some similarities for 00:26:220 - / 00:29:165 - , they should be alike, just minor variations are fine.
Ok, changed to k
> 00:45:361 - / 00:46:097 - / ... these 4 isolated notes could be on their exact representative timings. The snappings are accepted in Kantan. In addition, how about changing 00:45:361 - to don for the integrity of the 2/1 section here?
It's already k LOL
> 00:58:981 - / 00:59:349 - same as 00:03:030 (4,5) - , fix it by yourself.
Fixed
> 01:01:374 - remove the Finisher since the fz (sudden loud) is at 01:02:294 - .
But this note is a strong melody
> 01:05:239 - k is more commonly expected.
Changed to k
> 01:10:760 - / 01:11:128 - same case of 00:58:981 - / 00:59:349 -
Changed
! From 01:11:864 - to 01:17:754 - , please increase the density to make the thread looks more balanced with Futsuu. You can switch the differences and notice that the 4/1 gap in Kantan is too large comparing with the same section of Futsuu.

> 01:12:416 - d could be put to increase the density a bit.

> 01:13:889 - / 01:15:361 - same here, this time is a kat due to previous note. (a double repeating colours are easy to catch)
Remapped ^^
> 01:19:594 (4,5) - okay it's the same issue... You know what to do
Yea
> 01:24:012 - shift it to the start of that instrumental 1/2 doublets at 01:23:828 - . Make it be more natural and consistent with others.
Ok
[Futsuu]

> Fix vol. issue, take ref. from your Oni.
Fixed
> 00:16:466 - / 00:17:938 - weird emptinesses. n nnn is foreseen. Add some notes on these timings please.
00:17:938 added a note
> 00:20:699 - adding a kat to fit the drum kick seems more natural, it depends...
Added
> 00:22:907 - unnecessary note which does not isolate the upcoming Finishers. Remove it.
Deleted
> 00:27:693 - should be rhythmically similar to 00:24:748 -
Same
> 00:30:637 - this bar is just exactly the same with Kantan. Why? The density spread with in Futsuu is a bit upset here. Let's try this a bit: 00:30:637 (2) -

The pattern fits the current channel which is on the background melody.
Changed
> 00:34:502 - similar case to 00:19:410 -
Added
> 00:40:576 - / 00:40:944 - ctrl+G them (k d) is more natural, and a nice mirror pattern can be formed at 00:36:527 -
Great, fixed
> 00:54:564 - / 00:54:748 - add k k to slightly increase the density a bit.
Ok
> 00:56:404 - remove it for better clearance of mapping channel (vocal) and leave sufficient breaks for players to take a breathe.
Removed
> 01:01:374 - same in Kantan
Same as Kantan
> 01:03:030 - There's no way you miss this note.
AA! Added
> 01:05:975 - / 01:06:343 - swap them for a smoother flow
Ok
> 01:07:079 - / 01:07:263 - similar to 00:54:564 - / 00:54:748 - , this time d d?
Sure
> 01:15:361 - a note-worthy place same as Kantan, consider putting a note once again
Remapped
> 01:16:097 - remove the Finisher, it's not that loud.
Ok
> 01:21:619 - same as 01:15:361 -

[Oni]

> 00:09:104 - k ddk kkd would be smoother than your current patterns and they fit the instrumental layer more with new triplets starting position.
But I'm actually following vocal, so the 5plet fits me
> 00:27:324 - change it to k to distinguish better in between those vocals d d onwards
Changed
> 00:36:251 - / 00:36:343 - imo you can remove them due to the last melody note falling at 00:36:159 - actually. Ending there would be better and clearer. Meanwhile, 00:36:527 - could be changed to K because of strong cymbal crash at the background, just an advice here for K.
Ok
> 01:06:619 - unnecessary triplet, remove this note to keep the channel clean.
Removed
> 01:21:895 - remove it because of the stacato note at 01:21:987 - , better isolate the k, and keep the consistency of nnn n with 01:20:699 -
Agree, fixed
> 01:25:668 - 1.2x would be calmer for the soft ending.

[ily4's Inner Oni]

! 你有堆上手mod未check! EDIT: As informed by ily4, his Inner Oni was handled by David now. David, please reply the left Inner Oni mods first. You may find the mod below may not accompany with your latest version.

! Fix vol. issue. OD could be 6 for a linear OD spread.
Fixed
> 00:04:686 - remove it to isolate clear high pitch cymbal crash at 00:04:502 -
Removed
> 00:10:760 - also kat for 3 repeatitive uses of k d K?
Yep, for identical
> 00:30:269 - same as 00:04:686 - , pretty similar rationale
Removed since there's no sound.
> 00:37:815 - / 00:40:760 - / 00:43:705 - extra ornaments for simple vocal channel, remove them
Removed but 00:43:705 didn't removed, background instrument is there
> 00:47:662 - a don could be added to finish the whole progression phrase until the upcoming K
But there is no sound
> 00:48:490 - aren't these 1/1 spammings too blend?
Remapped
> 00:51:251 (273) - try this:
Remapped a bit
This 00:51:435 - triplet is too excessive in terms of density flow. Patterns of 00:51:803 - / 00:53:275 - should be consistent.
Remapped
> 00:57:969 - a kat could be filled in to create a little 5-plet, maintain the high density momentum
Sure
> 01:02:478 - umm weird void don, better take it away
Removed
> 01:13:153 - kdk is smoother
Yea
> 01:15:913 - this Finisher sounds very imbalanced with the previous vocal flows. 01:15:545 - how about replacing the phrase ' ddd K d' with 'ddkdk D '? That'd be a better representation of the musical layers and appropriate distribution of Finishers.
ddkdk K
> 01:19:778 - kat as well? same clap clap sound with 01:19:594 -
Pitch is actually setting down at this timing
> 01:25:852 - remove the spinner and end on 01:25:668 - for overall consistent ending time.
I will ask ily4 for this
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As ily4 has not cleared the previous accumulated mods, I will re-mod his Inner Oni while the others are ready.

EDIT: Call me back when everything is ready. Yea

Skylish wrote:

Sorry for being super late
[xfrac's Muzukashii]

! Fix vol. as well stated in mods for David.

> 00:18:490 - k k d seems have a smoother flow, and matching the sinking piano chord at 00:18:858 -
that's true, fixed
> 00:29:901 - d k _ would be better to present the musical layer there. Removal of 00:30:269 - to show the outstanding strong instrumental layer at 00:30:085 - . Swapping of colours to match 'k= cymbal crash / high pitch note'
talking about emphasis it's true, fixed aswell
> 00:36:159 - this triplet looks a bit weird since it is quite separated from the previous vocal clmiax at 00:35:607 - . Let's try: 00:35:055 (142) - The position of triplet (00:35:791 - ) indicates the slightly higher pitch comparing with 00:36:159 - .
current pattern is nice; emphasis on 00:36:527 (150) - as kat as ddd k usage is currently great for the section change
> 00:47:018 - why not kkk here? It would look great for being similar to ddd at 00:45:545 -
cause I want to hear vocals as smooth as possible
> 00:53:275 - change to kat for a better division for ddd instrumental triplet upcoming.
fixed
> 01:05:239 - change to kkk for variation or follow the change at 00:53:275 -
01:05:054 (73) - kat
> 01:10:208 - it's time for a kat according to the mapping style at 00:26:036 -
done

Skylish wrote:

Re-check, no KDS.

[Kantan]

I missed some points in last mod:

> 00:09:104 - a k can be put here to reduce the huge gap a bit, and fit the consistency of using 3/2 gap at 00:02:662 (3,4) - 00:09:288 Added k

> 00:12:416 - making only the head+tail mapped for repeatitive elements can give a finished sensation to player. Shift 00:12:232 - to 00:12:416 - . Moved

> 00:45:361 (68,69,70,71) - I mean, highlighting these 4 notes and shifting them 1/2 backward to fit where they exactly are is fine. It feels more natural.
Shifted only 3 notes, last note is fit on white tick
> 01:16:466 (1) - try leaving a 1/1 gap at least for the gap between the tail of spinner and the next note. In gameplay, the spinner effect is still okay, don't get confused with the Editor. Changed the spinner

> 01:21:987 - d could be added on this strong music note
But there is d already XD!
[Futsuu]

> 01:08:551 - change to k for a more natrual flow
Ok
[Oni]

> 00:27:509 - you can still keep this as d, k works well too. Your choice.
Changed back to d
> 01:25:668 - I did not see you reply on this point.
Changed to 1.20x
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Please make sure xfrac's coding is correct lol. Call me back once again later. Yea

Skylish wrote:

Re-check, no KDS.

[ily4's Inner Oni]

> 00:18:490 - change to k to enhance the flow cont.ed by the d at 00:18:122 - . Nice comparison could be seen at 00:15:177 (87,88) - , same for 00:18:122 (99,100) - .

> 00:49:594 - change to k then for the continue feeling of d d k k ( imitating the kat at 00:48:858 - )
你話咩就咩啦,all changed!

Please make sure xfrac's coding is correct lol. Call me back once again later.

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Skylish wrote:

[xfrac's Muzukashii]

! Fix vol. issue please.

! Your coding of .txt is probably always set wrong. Use 'Unicode' while you save, not 'ANSI'.

I fixed both bae

! 00:29:901 - did you really fix on this point? I still see the same original version when I first modded.
pretty sure I did D: fixed now
> 00:42:048 - the representative of this 1/2 triplet is different from 00:39:104 - . In order to clarify it, I prefer a more simple pattern for the non-vocal part because your main mapping channel is vocal. Delete 00:42:232 - if possible, hence.
okayy fixed aswell, also 00:42:049 (167) - d and 00:43:520 (171) - changed to kat

Please make sure xfrac's coding is correct lol. Call me back once again later.

Skylish wrote:

The mapset involved changes in Kiai unification without a proper consensus between the gd mappers and owner. A re-check is needed.

Re-bubbled~! as requested

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Ranking Criteria wrote:

You should insert at least 1 rest moment that is 3/1 or longer after 16/1 to 20/1 of continuous mapping. Less frequent rest moments or shorter ones may put too much strain on beginners.

Volta wrote:

Hello, I have concern about lack of rest moment in Kantan. At 00:23:275 ~ 00:49:778 - and 00:51:251 ~ 01:21:987 - there is no 3/1 or longer break and in fact very demanding for newcomer.

Ranking Criteria wrote:

You should insert at least 1 rest moment that is 3/1 or longer after 16/1 to 20/1 of continuous mapping. Less frequent rest moments or shorter ones may put too much strain on beginners. There is 1 3/1 break at 00:04:502 but yeah, I understand it's lack do let's wait for QAT call or mod

The first session i mentioned consists of 40 notes consecutively mapped without break. At minimum you should remove the note at 00:35:791 - , but usually i'd go further than that since the session is relatively calm. For the second session, the minimum requirement would be removing the note at 01:02:294 - to separate the kiai into 2 parts.

I also spotted same issue with Futsuu. At 00:57:877 ~ 01:24:932 - there is no 2/1 or longer rest moment . At least the note at 01:09:472 - could be removed or moved to 01:10:024 - to create the necessary rest time and consistency with break at 00:57:509 -

Overall i think the lower diffs can be polished more before it can go into ranked section.

1. 00:03:214 (4) - You could substitute this to reduce the previous notes, 00:01:190 (1,2,3) - with these three notes is enough for this diff, it also makes sense for this section, I say it for the space as 00:03:766 - this something emptied when the song follows something main so it would be essential if you add in note in así 00:03:950 - so 00: 03: 950 - to accompany the next finish and so a bit of break, you would not have a spread problem since it is a first diff.
2. 00:13:705 - it would be good if this note were a kat, it has more priority for the voice and the distance is acceptable with 2/1 imo
3. 00:17:754 (25) - It could be kat also to continue playing the voice even to simplify the gift as it is something traveled, also reference as 00:14:441 (19,20,21) -
4. 00:47:570 - idk I think it would make more sense with the voice first in 00:45:177 (67,68,69) - instead of changing to another as it is confusing and almost certain to fail so it would be better to follow the voice 1/2 to the end (likewise in futsuu).
5. 00:53:459 - I would follow notes 1/1, it feels weird when it is cut since you follow the lead voice, you could move this note 00:53:828 (4) - there would be no problem for the kiai imo.
6. 01:22:907 - add note? It feels very empty in this section it is better to complement this note 01:23:459 (8) - you would improve the spread between diff imo.
7. 01:24:380 (11) - change to kat for balance since I feel that gift is something traveled that part imo.

1. 00:04:502 (17) - seria mas fun si hicieras un finish en esta nota para enfatizar la trompeta se siente mejor como la mayoría de diff, tiene un buen espacio adelante tambien.

Etsu wrote:

hi, since this is dq would like to point out some things if you agree (no kudo).

[Kantan]

1. 00:03:214 (4) - You could substitute this to reduce the previous notes, 00:01:190 (1,2,3) - with these three notes is enough for this diff, it also makes sense for this section, I say it for the space as 00:03:766 - this something emptied when the song follows something main so it would be essential if you add in note in así 00:03:950 - so 00: 03: 950 - to accompany the next finish and so a bit of break, you would not have a spread problem since it is a first diff. Remapped a bit
2. 00:13:705 - it would be good if this note were a kat, it has more priority for the voice and the distance is acceptable with 2/1 imo But it's a descending voice, so no change
3. 00:17:754 (25) - It could be kat also to continue playing the voice even to simplify the gift as it is something traveled, also reference as 00:14:441 (19,20,21) - Removed the note
4. 00:47:570 - idk I think it would make more sense with the voice first in 00:45:177 (67,68,69) - instead of changing to another as it is confusing and almost certain to fail so it would be better to follow the voice 1/2 to the end (likewise in futsuu). It just a bit confusing, so it's fine :>
5. 00:53:459 - I would follow notes 1/1, it feels weird when it is cut since you follow the lead voice, you could move this note 00:53:828 (4) - there would be no problem for the kiai imo. A bit remapped
6. 01:22:907 - add note? It feels very empty in this section it is better to complement this note 01:23:459 (8) - you would improve the spread between diff imo.
7. 01:24:380 (11) - change to kat for balance since I feel that gift is something traveled that part imo. For 4/1 space, no change

Etsu wrote:

[xfrac's Muzukashii]

1. 00:04:502 (17) - seria mas fun si hicieras un finish en esta nota para enfatizar la trompeta se siente mejor como la mayoría de diff, tiene un buen espacio adelante tambien.
   Done

1. Remove -TV Size- from title as no source stated that explicitly.
   Reference: 1 2
2. Kiai is unsnapped in ily4's Inner Oni

1. 00:44:441 - consider to remove, since you're switching to off-beat rhythm here it would be nicer to give more preparation time for newbie
2. 00:47:570 - move to 00:47:386 - to follow the offbeat rhythm
3. 00:59:165 - consider to remove too since 01:00:085 (13,14,15,16) - this rhythm is difficult to catch for newbie
4. 01:06:711 - you may add note there, above point is a better break spot than here.

1. 00:30:637 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this pattern are way over the top for a futsuu. It's too sudden, can't reflect the calm atmoshpere at this session, and hurt the spread too much. Rearrange please. Maybe try these:
   
   1. 00:30:085 - remove finisher
   2. 00:29:901 - and 00:30:269 - add d
   3. 00:30:821 - , 00:31:005 - ,00:31:189 - remove
   4. 00:31:558 - move to 00:31:374 -
   5. 00:32:294 - move to 00:32:110 -
   6. 00:32:846 - add k
2. 00:44:257 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - these pattern also should be nerfed considering the spread between kantan and muzu. Try:
   
   1. 00:44:993 - ,00:46:466 - remove
   2. 00:47:570 - move to 00:47:386 -
3. 01:15:729 - it's fine to add note here. Actually please add something to closer the gap with muzu.

1. Consider to create at least one 2/1 break. Best spot i could find is at 00:22:171 - . Try:
   
   1. 00:22:171 (89,90) - remove
   2. 00:22:723 - move to 00:22:539 -
   3. 00:22:907 - add note
2. 00:09:840 - move to 00:09:472 - ? it would fits the melody better imo
3. 00:49:963 - consider to remove for 2/1 break before kiai
4. 01:14:625 - could be removed as well for a break at the end of kiai. Also it can emphasize the finisher at 01:14:809 - better imo

Volta wrote:

Hello, here's a follow-up mod as promised.

[General]

1. Remove -TV Size- from title as no source stated that explicitly.
   Reference: 1 2 Reference from this ranked map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/130104
2. Kiai is unsnapped in ily4's Inner Oni Fixed

[Kantan]

1. 00:44:441 - consider to remove, since you're switching to off-beat rhythm here it would be nicer to give more preparation time for newbie Agree, fixed
2. 00:47:570 - move to 00:47:386 - to follow the offbeat rhythm It's right to keep following the offbeat rhythm but I feel weird about that,
   
3. 00:59:165 - consider to remove too since 01:00:085 (13,14,15,16) - this rhythm is difficult to catch for newbie Removed
4. 01:06:711 - you may add note there, above point is a better break spot than here. Added a k

[Futsuu]

1. 00:30:637 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this pattern are way over the top for a futsuu. It's too sudden, can't reflect the calm atmoshpere at this session, and hurt the spread too much. Rearrange please. Maybe try these:
   
   1. 00:30:085 - remove finisher But it's a strong melody
   2. 00:29:901 - and 00:30:269 - add d According to my changes above, it will be hard for players if I put 2 notes beside the Finisher note
   3. 00:30:821 - , 00:31:005 - ,00:31:189 - remove Yup, removed
   4. 00:31:558 - move to 00:31:374 -
   5. 00:32:294 - move to 00:32:110 -
   6. 00:32:846 - add k Others applied
2. 00:44:257 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - these pattern also should be nerfed considering the spread between kantan and muzu. Try:
   
   1. 00:44:993 - ,00:46:466 - remove
   2. 00:47:570 - move to 00:47:386 - All applied, except 00:47:754 moved to 00:47:386 I feel a bit weird if I remove 00:47:570
3. 01:15:729 - it's fine to add note here. Actually please add something to closer the gap with muzu. Added some

That should cover most of my concern. Good luck for requalification~

Volta wrote:

Hello, here's a follow-up mod as promised.

[xfrac's Muzukashii]

1. Consider to create at least one 2/1 break. Best spot i could find is at 00:22:171 - . Try:
   
   1. 00:22:171 (89,90) - remove
   2. 00:22:723 - move to 00:22:539 -
   3. 00:22:907 - add note
   I made some changes here according to your suggest
2. 00:09:840 - move to 00:09:472 - ? it would fits the melody better imo
   I pref removing the note considering it's the beginning
3. 00:49:963 - consider to remove for 2/1 break before kiai
   looks good
4. 01:14:625 - could be removed as well for a break at the end of kiai. Also it can emphasize the finisher at 01:14:809 - better imo
   yes thats true, done

That should cover most of my concern. Good luck for requalification~

xfraczynho wrote:

David: Don't forget to remove 'TV Size' tag

Skylish wrote:

Re-checklish

[General]

! The most ridiculous thing is that I made a correct metadata check already, but I did not check the mapset's thoroughly. Time to slap myself.

why I was confused at that time

Blame the stupid extra info. input by the Chinese uploaders and ME

! Concept of rest should not be taken too serious considering different mapping channels being followed. It is just a reference guideline to judge the overall spread across all difficulties.

> Vol. in Kantan and Futsuu is too loud, consider the settings in your own Oni. Fixed

> 00:36:527 - Finishers for all difficulties? There's a weak cymbal crash. Nah, melody isn't strong enough

[Kantan]

> 00:07:815 - yes I know that this is mapped for the melody, but please be noticed that 00:04:502 - / 00:07:447 - are similar things, they should be similar (being mapped). At the same time, you form a melody phrase with 3 1/1 notes only at 00:01:190 - , same should be expected from 00:05:607 - . In short, shift 00:07:815 - to 00:07:447 - and change it to k Changed

> 00:36:527 - missed Finisher? Same as in General

> 00:47:570 - shift it 1/4 to match the BG melody and follow the consistency of those 3 notes at 00:45:177 - Ok

> 00:55:668 - this kdd sounds weird enough since the later part at 01:07:447 - shows that you followed the vocal channel. Considering consistency, 00:55:668 - should be k d (d matches the vocal at 00:56:220 - ) instead of kdd . Fixed

> 00:59:165 - unnatural miss here, add a k back please. Ok

> 01:21:987 - Finisher missing too? same as 00:04:502 - I should add this one, yea, added.

> 01:24:012 - starting notes at the mid-gate of a music melody is weird, a 'head-tail' pattern would be clearer to display the music imo. Shift 01:24:012 - to 01:23:828 - hence. Better, fixed

[Futsuu]

> 00:04:502 - / 01:21:987 - consistent Finisher across your own difficulties is required at least Added

> 00:09:656 - gap is required here, similar to the mod at 00:33:950 - later Removed

> 00:15:729 - you can add a d here to balance the pattern at 00:27:509 - yea

> 00:26:588 - kdk can be put, similar to 00:14:809 - Oh shoot! forgot, added

! 00:30:637 - I have a different point of view from Volta. I would not call this part as a calm section since the crossing over of vocal and instrumental layers are so significant that a distinctively high or low (not suitable) density spread should be performed. Although I admit that my previous suggestion was a bit overmapped for a clean Futsuu.

The current patterns seem too random, they are neither following two channels mentioned above. Applied your way

Let's try a nerf section like this: 00:30:637 (2) -


It follows a instrumental layer, 00:30:085 - is a good point for channel change.

00:33:950 - is removed for emptying a space for rest. 7 1/1 is too boring imo. Applied your way

> 00:36:527 - Finisher missing? Same as Kantan

> 00:37:999 - / 00:40:944 - imo nnn n is smoother than n nnn I prefer my way because I hear n nnn it better than nnn n

> 00:45:177 - change it to k, similar at 00:45:913 - (the lyrics) Ok

> 00:56:036 (16,17) - ctrl+G (k d) for a correct pitch flow Yea

> 01:02:662 - remove it for a rest and break Removed

> 01:05:975 - change it to k to imply the up-rising flow and intensity But it will be too repetitive kkk :<
jk changed

> 01:06:343 - remove it for a common break, same as 00:54:564 - Ok

> 01:15:913 - shift it to 01:15:729 - , to match the vocal part and reduce a sudden nN pattern that's really hard for Futsuu level players. Yea

> 01:19:226 - d has a better flow changed

> 01:20:331 - shift it 1/4 backward to fit the vocal starting at 01:20:147 - , based on the theory of 'head-tail' again. Shifted

[Oni]

> 00:03:030 (17,18) - ctrl+G sounds smoother Ctrl + G(ed)

> 00:06:803 - remove this note to avoid any stream in the introduction part since it is a bit overwhelmed. Removed

> 00:27:324 - change to kat for the consistent drum kick Changed to k

> 00:41:680 - k d k k d ? The current version is completely reversed against the pitch flow But pitch won't fix, no change

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That should be it combining with Volta's suggestion. Call me back.

Skylish wrote:

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[xfrac's Muzukashii]

> 00:21:987 (88,89) - imo they can be simply removed since they are awkward there, and removal of notes can show a proper common break across the lower difficulties.
that's true, anyways i added 00:22:171 - dd on here cause i feel it so empty and drum is hearable here so
> 00:35:055 (138) - let's try:



Simplify the whole section screen-shot above, 00:35:055 - d for a better flow; 00:35:239 - unnecessary linkage of notes blur the vocal layer; 00:36:159 - unnatural monochrome triplet; and 00:36:527 - K for the weak cymbal crash.
Yes I agree with that, but i pref 00:35:975 - having this blank since it's such a calm section, it should be better now i think
> 00:49:963 - if you follow the melody, it is where you should also put a note (kat preferred)
lol true, idk why i didn't have it, anyways i changed 00:49:594 (1,2,3) - to ddk, should be okay
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That should be it combining with Volta's suggestion. Call me back.

Volta wrote:

Spread has improved and lower diffs got sufficient break now.

Re-qualified~
and happy birthday.

Surono wrote:

bad-tom.mp4

gz, gj.