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Fujijo Seitokai Shikkou-bu - Best FriendS [Taiko]

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Karee Pan
185 posts
Joined December 2015
Karee Pan
Hey M4M, sorry I'm so late orz

[Kantan]

00:03:030 (4) - Don't think we need this note in the intro part
00:37:263 (53) - I like that were doing something a bit different here, I would just go all the way with the monotone theme with k_k_kkk d_d_ddd k_k_kkd

[Futsuu]

00:17:018 - 00:28:797 - - You could skip these breaks to keep the sets a bit more balanced, atm we have 00:24:748 - very intense followed by 00:27:693 - very slow, and its almost an identical part of the song.
00:46:466 (43) - Could be deleted for consistency
00:53:275 (10,11) - Maybe just ctrl-g these to match the previous set
00:58:613 (24) - Would go with d to emphasize the next stronger note more
01:02:294 (36,37) - Could add finishers here
01:13:153 - You could add d and make 01:13:337 (67) - to keep the doubles going

[xfrac'sMuzukashii]
00:54:748 - 01:06:527 - You could consider notes here
00:55:668 (30) - Switching to d would serve both the melody and very distinguishing 'Hashire' coming at 31
01:07:447 (84) - ^
00:58:245 - dkddkd for the vocals are going down in pitch ?


[Oni]

00:01:374 (8) - Could consider axing this note to be consistent with the breaks in the intro part.
00:15:729 (81,82) - Maybe ctrl-g for the vocal pitch
00:27:509 (132) - if you applied the one above^ k here too. Then 00:28:061 (134) - to d like earlier set
00:30:637
(145,149,150,154,155,159,160,164,165) - Sorry for big nerf suggestion, but you could make this a bit more dynamic by following the guitar pitch in the 1/2 doubles. Just a thought, but something like :
01:02:662 (315) - K sounds better to me ?
01:04:870 (324,329) - I like the double k's you have all over Kiai, you could consider keeping them going by switching these.
01:09:288 (351,352,353) - Then we could go kkd here as well, its more exciting.


[ily4's Inner Oni]
01:13:521 (420) - I think we can delete this so the intensity build happens later at 01:14:809
Very clean diff


Good luck with the set!
davidminh0111
Beatmap Nominator
1,358 posts
Joined January 2017
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Karee Pan wrote:

Hey M4M, sorry I'm so late orz

[Kantan]

00:03:030 (4) - Don't think we need this note in the intro part But there is vocal?
00:37:263 (53) - I like that were doing something a bit different here, I would just go all the way with the monotone theme with k_k_kkk d_d_ddd k_k_kkd 00:44:257 changed to k

[Futsuu]

00:17:018 - 00:28:797 - - You could skip these breaks to keep the sets a bit more balanced, atm we have 00:24:748 - very intense followed by 00:27:693 - very slow, and its almost an identical part of the song. Remapped
00:46:466 (43) - Could be deleted for consistency Ok
00:53:275 (10,11) - Maybe just ctrl-g these to match the previous set kdk instead
00:58:613 (24) - Would go with d to emphasize the next stronger note more Agree, fixed
01:02:294 (36,37) - Could add finishers here Ok
01:13:153 - You could add d and make 01:13:337 (67) - to keep the doubles going For consistency in 01:11:864, no change

[Oni]

00:01:374 (8) - Could consider axing this note to be consistent with the breaks in the intro part. It's fine imo
00:15:729 (81,82) - Maybe ctrl-g for the vocal pitch 00:15:913 pitch is high right here
00:27:509 (132) - if you applied the one above^ k here too. Then 00:28:061 (134) - to d like earlier set dkd
00:30:637
(145,149,150,154,155,159,160,164,165) - Sorry for big nerf suggestion, but you could make this a bit more dynamic by following the guitar pitch in the 1/2 doubles. Just a thought, but something like :

00:33:582 changed this to k only, I followed vocal so it's okay
01:02:662 (315) - K sounds better to me ? Ok
01:04:870 (324,329) - I like the double k's you have all over Kiai, you could consider keeping them going by switching these. I will consider this
01:09:288 (351,352,353) - Then we could go kkd here as well, its more exciting. Nah, I'm following vocal :3


[ily4's Inner Oni]
01:13:521 (420) - I think we can delete this so the intensity build happens later at 01:14:809 Fixed for consistency at 01:12:048
Very clean diff


Good luck with the set!
Thank you for modding, will mod your map soon
Skylish
1,069 posts
Joined June 2013
Skylish
Sorry for being super late.

[Kantan]

! Fix your volume setting to 80% just like other difficulties'. Take ref. from your Oni.

! SV changes are discouraged in any cases in easier difficulties (Kantan - Futsuu).

> 00:03:030 (4,5) - you can remove these two notes and put a compromised note fitting the prominent melody well at 00:03:214 - . The mapping channel would be clearer.

> 00:18:122 - change it to k for a better flow? Players will remember the d d k at 00:14:441 - . They may expect the 3rd beat would be a constant kat.

> 00:19:594 - weird empty space here when the vocal part is definitely supportive for a note (don). Add it back.

> 00:21:067 - you may shift it 1/2 backwards to fit the vocal exactly.

> 00:26:588 - not sure if a kat fits your taste here, make sure you leave some similarities for 00:26:220 - / 00:29:165 - , they should be alike, just minor variations are fine.

> 00:45:361 - / 00:46:097 - / ... these 4 isolated notes could be on their exact representative timings. The snappings are accepted in Kantan. In addition, how about changing 00:45:361 - to don for the integrity of the 2/1 section here?

> 00:58:981 - / 00:59:349 - same as 00:03:030 (4,5) - , fix it by yourself.

> 01:01:374 - remove the Finisher since the fz (sudden loud) is at 01:02:294 - .

> 01:05:239 - k is more commonly expected.

> 01:10:760 - / 01:11:128 - same case of 00:58:981 - / 00:59:349 -

! From 01:11:864 - to 01:17:754 - , please increase the density to make the thread looks more balanced with Futsuu. You can switch the differences and notice that the 4/1 gap in Kantan is too large comparing with the same section of Futsuu.

> 01:12:416 - d could be put to increase the density a bit.

> 01:13:889 - / 01:15:361 - same here, this time is a kat due to previous note. (a double repeating colours are easy to catch)

> 01:19:594 (4,5) - okay it's the same issue... You know what to do :P

> 01:24:012 - shift it to the start of that instrumental 1/2 doublets at 01:23:828 - . Make it be more natural and consistent with others.

[Futsuu]

> Fix vol. issue, take ref. from your Oni.

> 00:16:466 - / 00:17:938 - weird emptinesses. n nnn is foreseen. Add some notes on these timings please.

> 00:20:699 - adding a kat to fit the drum kick seems more natural, it depends...

> 00:22:907 - unnecessary note which does not isolate the upcoming Finishers. Remove it.

> 00:27:693 - should be rhythmically similar to 00:24:748 -

> 00:30:637 - this bar is just exactly the same with Kantan. Why? The density spread with in Futsuu is a bit upset here. Let's try this a bit: 00:30:637 (2) -

The pattern fits the current channel which is on the background melody.

> 00:34:502 - similar case to 00:19:410 -

> 00:40:576 - / 00:40:944 - ctrl+G them (k d) is more natural, and a nice mirror pattern can be formed at 00:36:527 -

> 00:54:564 - / 00:54:748 - add k k to slightly increase the density a bit.

> 00:56:404 - remove it for better clearance of mapping channel (vocal) and leave sufficient breaks for players to take a breathe.

> 01:01:374 - same in Kantan

> 01:03:030 - There's no way you miss this note.

> 01:05:975 - / 01:06:343 - swap them for a smoother flow

> 01:07:079 - / 01:07:263 - similar to 00:54:564 - / 00:54:748 - , this time d d?

> 01:15:361 - a note-worthy place same as Kantan, consider putting a note once again

> 01:16:097 - remove the Finisher, it's not that loud.

> 01:21:619 - same as 01:15:361 -

[Oni]

> 00:09:104 - k ddk kkd would be smoother than your current patterns and they fit the instrumental layer more with new triplets starting position.

> 00:27:324 - change it to k to distinguish better in between those vocals d d onwards

> 00:36:251 - / 00:36:343 - imo you can remove them due to the last melody note falling at 00:36:159 - actually. Ending there would be better and clearer. Meanwhile, 00:36:527 - could be changed to K because of strong cymbal crash at the background, just an advice here for K.

> 01:06:619 - unnecessary triplet, remove this note to keep the channel clean.

> 01:21:895 - remove it because of the stacato note at 01:21:987 - , better isolate the k, and keep the consistency of nnn n with 01:20:699 -

> 01:25:668 - 1.2x would be calmer for the soft ending.

[xfrac's Muzukashii]

! Fix vol. as well stated in mods for David.

> 00:18:490 - k k d seems have a smoother flow, and matching the sinking piano chord at 00:18:858 -

> 00:29:901 - d k _ would be better to present the musical layer there. Removal of 00:30:269 - to show the outstanding strong instrumental layer at 00:30:085 - . Swapping of colours to match 'k= cymbal crash / high pitch note'

> 00:36:159 - this triplet looks a bit weird since it is quite separated from the previous vocal clmiax at 00:35:607 - . Let's try: 00:35:055 (142) - The position of triplet (00:35:791 - ) indicates the slightly higher pitch comparing with 00:36:159 - .

> 00:47:018 - why not kkk here? It would look great for being similar to ddd at 00:45:545 -

> 00:53:275 - change to kat for a better division for ddd instrumental triplet upcoming.

> 01:05:239 - change to kkk for variation or follow the change at 00:53:275 -

> 01:10:208 - it's time for a kat according to the mapping style at 00:26:036 -

[ily4's Inner Oni]

! 你有堆上手mod未check! EDIT: As informed by ily4, his Inner Oni was handled by David now. David, please reply the left Inner Oni mods first. You may find the mod below may not accompany with your latest version.

! Fix vol. issue. OD could be 6 for a linear OD spread.

> 00:04:686 - remove it to isolate clear high pitch cymbal crash at 00:04:502 -

> 00:10:760 - also kat for 3 repeatitive uses of k d K?

> 00:30:269 - same as 00:04:686 - , pretty similar rationale

> 00:37:815 - / 00:40:760 - / 00:43:705 - extra ornaments for simple vocal channel, remove them

> 00:47:662 - a don could be added to finish the whole progression phrase until the upcoming K

> 00:48:490 - aren't these 1/1 spammings too blend?

> 00:51:251 (273) - try this:

This 00:51:435 - triplet is too excessive in terms of density flow. Patterns of 00:51:803 - / 00:53:275 - should be consistent.

> 00:57:969 - a kat could be filled in to create a little 5-plet, maintain the high density momentum

> 01:02:478 - umm weird void don, better take it away

> 01:13:153 - kdk is smoother

> 01:15:913 - this Finisher sounds very imbalanced with the previous vocal flows. 01:15:545 - how about replacing the phrase ' ddd K d' with 'ddkdk D '? That'd be a better representation of the musical layers and appropriate distribution of Finishers.

> 01:19:778 - kat as well? same clap clap sound with 01:19:594 -

> 01:25:852 - remove the spinner and end on 01:25:668 - for overall consistent ending time.

[]

As ily4 has not cleared the previous accumulated mods, I will re-mod his Inner Oni while the others are ready.

EDIT: Call me back when everything is ready.
davidminh0111
Beatmap Nominator
1,358 posts
Joined January 2017
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Skylish wrote:

Sorry for being super late.

[Kantan]

! Fix your volume setting to 80% just like other difficulties'. Take ref. from your Oni.
Fixed
! SV changes are discouraged in any cases in easier difficulties (Kantan - Futsuu).
Removed SV, changed SV to 1.00x
> 00:03:030 (4,5) - you can remove these two notes and put a compromised note fitting the prominent melody well at 00:03:214 - . The mapping channel would be clearer.
Applied
> 00:18:122 - change it to k for a better flow? Players will remember the d d k at 00:14:441 - . They may expect the 3rd beat would be a constant kat.
But the pitch doesn't fit
> 00:19:594 - weird empty space here when the vocal part is definitely supportive for a note (don). Add it back.
Added
> 00:21:067 - you may shift it 1/2 backwards to fit the vocal exactly.
Moved
> 00:26:588 - not sure if a kat fits your taste here, make sure you leave some similarities for 00:26:220 - / 00:29:165 - , they should be alike, just minor variations are fine.
Ok, changed to k
> 00:45:361 - / 00:46:097 - / ... these 4 isolated notes could be on their exact representative timings. The snappings are accepted in Kantan. In addition, how about changing 00:45:361 - to don for the integrity of the 2/1 section here?
It's already k LOL
> 00:58:981 - / 00:59:349 - same as 00:03:030 (4,5) - , fix it by yourself.
Fixed
> 01:01:374 - remove the Finisher since the fz (sudden loud) is at 01:02:294 - .
But this note is a strong melody
> 01:05:239 - k is more commonly expected.
Changed to k
> 01:10:760 - / 01:11:128 - same case of 00:58:981 - / 00:59:349 -
Changed
! From 01:11:864 - to 01:17:754 - , please increase the density to make the thread looks more balanced with Futsuu. You can switch the differences and notice that the 4/1 gap in Kantan is too large comparing with the same section of Futsuu.

> 01:12:416 - d could be put to increase the density a bit.

> 01:13:889 - / 01:15:361 - same here, this time is a kat due to previous note. (a double repeating colours are easy to catch)
Remapped ^^
> 01:19:594 (4,5) - okay it's the same issue... You know what to do :P
Yea
> 01:24:012 - shift it to the start of that instrumental 1/2 doublets at 01:23:828 - . Make it be more natural and consistent with others.
Ok
[Futsuu]

> Fix vol. issue, take ref. from your Oni.
Fixed
> 00:16:466 - / 00:17:938 - weird emptinesses. n nnn is foreseen. Add some notes on these timings please.
00:17:938 added a note
> 00:20:699 - adding a kat to fit the drum kick seems more natural, it depends...
Added
> 00:22:907 - unnecessary note which does not isolate the upcoming Finishers. Remove it.
Deleted
> 00:27:693 - should be rhythmically similar to 00:24:748 -
Same
> 00:30:637 - this bar is just exactly the same with Kantan. Why? The density spread with in Futsuu is a bit upset here. Let's try this a bit: 00:30:637 (2) -

The pattern fits the current channel which is on the background melody.
Changed
> 00:34:502 - similar case to 00:19:410 -
Added
> 00:40:576 - / 00:40:944 - ctrl+G them (k d) is more natural, and a nice mirror pattern can be formed at 00:36:527 -
Great, fixed
> 00:54:564 - / 00:54:748 - add k k to slightly increase the density a bit.
Ok
> 00:56:404 - remove it for better clearance of mapping channel (vocal) and leave sufficient breaks for players to take a breathe.
Removed
> 01:01:374 - same in Kantan
Same as Kantan
> 01:03:030 - There's no way you miss this note.
AA! Added
> 01:05:975 - / 01:06:343 - swap them for a smoother flow
Ok
> 01:07:079 - / 01:07:263 - similar to 00:54:564 - / 00:54:748 - , this time d d?
Sure
> 01:15:361 - a note-worthy place same as Kantan, consider putting a note once again
Remapped
> 01:16:097 - remove the Finisher, it's not that loud.
Ok
> 01:21:619 - same as 01:15:361 -

[Oni]

> 00:09:104 - k ddk kkd would be smoother than your current patterns and they fit the instrumental layer more with new triplets starting position.
But I'm actually following vocal, so the 5plet fits me
> 00:27:324 - change it to k to distinguish better in between those vocals d d onwards
Changed
> 00:36:251 - / 00:36:343 - imo you can remove them due to the last melody note falling at 00:36:159 - actually. Ending there would be better and clearer. Meanwhile, 00:36:527 - could be changed to K because of strong cymbal crash at the background, just an advice here for K.
Ok
> 01:06:619 - unnecessary triplet, remove this note to keep the channel clean.
Removed
> 01:21:895 - remove it because of the stacato note at 01:21:987 - , better isolate the k, and keep the consistency of nnn n with 01:20:699 -
Agree, fixed
> 01:25:668 - 1.2x would be calmer for the soft ending.

[ily4's Inner Oni]

! 你有堆上手mod未check! EDIT: As informed by ily4, his Inner Oni was handled by David now. David, please reply the left Inner Oni mods first. You may find the mod below may not accompany with your latest version.

! Fix vol. issue. OD could be 6 for a linear OD spread.
Fixed
> 00:04:686 - remove it to isolate clear high pitch cymbal crash at 00:04:502 -
Removed
> 00:10:760 - also kat for 3 repeatitive uses of k d K?
Yep, for identical
> 00:30:269 - same as 00:04:686 - , pretty similar rationale
Removed since there's no sound.
> 00:37:815 - / 00:40:760 - / 00:43:705 - extra ornaments for simple vocal channel, remove them
Removed but 00:43:705 didn't removed, background instrument is there
> 00:47:662 - a don could be added to finish the whole progression phrase until the upcoming K
But there is no sound
> 00:48:490 - aren't these 1/1 spammings too blend?
Remapped
> 00:51:251 (273) - try this:
Remapped a bit
This 00:51:435 - triplet is too excessive in terms of density flow. Patterns of 00:51:803 - / 00:53:275 - should be consistent.
Remapped
> 00:57:969 - a kat could be filled in to create a little 5-plet, maintain the high density momentum
Sure
> 01:02:478 - umm weird void don, better take it away
Removed
> 01:13:153 - kdk is smoother
Yea
> 01:15:913 - this Finisher sounds very imbalanced with the previous vocal flows. 01:15:545 - how about replacing the phrase ' ddd K d' with 'ddkdk D '? That'd be a better representation of the musical layers and appropriate distribution of Finishers.
ddkdk K
> 01:19:778 - kat as well? same clap clap sound with 01:19:594 -
Pitch is actually setting down at this timing
> 01:25:852 - remove the spinner and end on 01:25:668 - for overall consistent ending time.
I will ask ily4 for this
[]

As ily4 has not cleared the previous accumulated mods, I will re-mod his Inner Oni while the others are ready.

EDIT: Call me back when everything is ready. Yea
Thank you for modding, I will call you when everything is ready!
Aisha
840 posts
Joined December 2012
Aisha

Skylish wrote:

Sorry for being super late
[xfrac's Muzukashii]

! Fix vol. as well stated in mods for David.

> 00:18:490 - k k d seems have a smoother flow, and matching the sinking piano chord at 00:18:858 -
that's true, fixed
> 00:29:901 - d k _ would be better to present the musical layer there. Removal of 00:30:269 - to show the outstanding strong instrumental layer at 00:30:085 - . Swapping of colours to match 'k= cymbal crash / high pitch note'
talking about emphasis it's true, fixed aswell
> 00:36:159 - this triplet looks a bit weird since it is quite separated from the previous vocal clmiax at 00:35:607 - . Let's try: 00:35:055 (142) - The position of triplet (00:35:791 - ) indicates the slightly higher pitch comparing with 00:36:159 - .
current pattern is nice; emphasis on 00:36:527 (150) - as kat as ddd k usage is currently great for the section change
> 00:47:018 - why not kkk here? It would look great for being similar to ddd at 00:45:545 -
cause I want to hear vocals as smooth as possible
> 00:53:275 - change to kat for a better division for ddd instrumental triplet upcoming.
fixed
> 01:05:239 - change to kkk for variation or follow the change at 00:53:275 -
01:05:054 (73) - kat
> 01:10:208 - it's time for a kat according to the mapping style at 00:26:036 -
done
thank you bae <3
kk
http://puu.sh/y8sSC/d606d4bdb5.osu
iloveyou4ever
825 posts
Joined September 2014
iloveyou4ever
self-mod and inform to the modders :3

[ily4's Inner Oni]
00:05:147 - remove this since I think 7-plets is a bit too much for the opening and there's no clear sfx here.
00:22:355 (116,117) - ctrl+G to highlight outstanding piano sound on 00:22:355 (116) -
00:47:662 (250) - add a note here since I think it'd be good for build-up purpose for the next finisher
00:53:367 (285) - change to d to give variation
00:57:969 (315) - remove k since I think 5-plets doesn't suit the vocal here
00:58:889 (322) - and add d here
@david,I think we need not change the last part of our diffs(about the finisher),yeah it maybe a bit inconsistent,but we're mapping different things here.

@Skylish,please tell me if you have any other concerns of my diff,I'd apply it myself if there's any.
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And thanks all of you for modding it :) especially david for applying every mods for me!


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davidminh0111
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Skylish
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Skylish
Re-check, no KDS.

[ily4's Inner Oni]

> 00:18:490 - change to k to enhance the flow cont.ed by the d at 00:18:122 - . Nice comparison could be seen at 00:15:177 (87,88) - , same for 00:18:122 (99,100) - .

> 00:49:594 - change to k then for the continue feeling of d d k k ( imitating the kat at 00:48:858 - )

[xfrac's Muzukashii]

! Fix vol. issue please.

! Your coding of .txt is probably always set wrong. Use 'Unicode' while you save, not 'ANSI'.

! 00:29:901 - did you really fix on this point? I still see the same original version when I first modded.

> 00:42:048 - the representative of this 1/2 triplet is different from 00:39:104 - . In order to clarify it, I prefer a more simple pattern for the non-vocal part because your main mapping channel is vocal. Delete 00:42:232 - if possible, hence.

[Kantan]

I missed some points in last mod:

> 00:09:104 - a k can be put here to reduce the huge gap a bit, and fit the consistency of using 3/2 gap at 00:02:662 (3,4) -

> 00:12:416 - making only the head+tail mapped for repeatitive elements can give a finished sensation to player. Shift 00:12:232 - to 00:12:416 - .

> 00:45:361 (68,69,70,71) - I mean, highlighting these 4 notes and shifting them 1/2 backward to fit where they exactly are is fine. It feels more natural.

> 01:16:466 (1) - try leaving a 1/1 gap at least for the gap between the tail of spinner and the next note. In gameplay, the spinner effect is still okay, don't get confused with the Editor.

> 01:21:987 - d could be added on this strong music note

[Futsuu]

> 01:08:551 - change to k for a more natrual flow

[Oni]

> 00:27:509 - you can still keep this as d, k works well too. Your choice.

> 01:25:668 - I did not see you reply on this point.

[]

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davidminh0111
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davidminh0111

Skylish wrote:

Re-check, no KDS.

[Kantan]

I missed some points in last mod:

> 00:09:104 - a k can be put here to reduce the huge gap a bit, and fit the consistency of using 3/2 gap at 00:02:662 (3,4) - 00:09:288 Added k

> 00:12:416 - making only the head+tail mapped for repeatitive elements can give a finished sensation to player. Shift 00:12:232 - to 00:12:416 - . Moved

> 00:45:361 (68,69,70,71) - I mean, highlighting these 4 notes and shifting them 1/2 backward to fit where they exactly are is fine. It feels more natural.
Shifted only 3 notes, last note is fit on white tick
> 01:16:466 (1) - try leaving a 1/1 gap at least for the gap between the tail of spinner and the next note. In gameplay, the spinner effect is still okay, don't get confused with the Editor. Changed the spinner

> 01:21:987 - d could be added on this strong music note
But there is d already XD!
[Futsuu]

> 01:08:551 - change to k for a more natrual flow
Ok
[Oni]

> 00:27:509 - you can still keep this as d, k works well too. Your choice.
Changed back to d
> 01:25:668 - I did not see you reply on this point.
Changed to 1.20x
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Thanks again
iloveyou4ever
825 posts
Joined September 2014
iloveyou4ever

Skylish wrote:

Re-check, no KDS.

[ily4's Inner Oni]

> 00:18:490 - change to k to enhance the flow cont.ed by the d at 00:18:122 - . Nice comparison could be seen at 00:15:177 (87,88) - , same for 00:18:122 (99,100) - .

> 00:49:594 - change to k then for the continue feeling of d d k k ( imitating the kat at 00:48:858 - )
你話咩就咩啦,all changed!

Please make sure xfrac's coding is correct lol. Call me back once again later.
Thanks for recheck :)

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Aisha
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Aisha

Skylish wrote:

[xfrac's Muzukashii]

! Fix vol. issue please.

! Your coding of .txt is probably always set wrong. Use 'Unicode' while you save, not 'ANSI'.

I fixed both bae

! 00:29:901 - did you really fix on this point? I still see the same original version when I first modded.
pretty sure I did D: fixed now
> 00:42:048 - the representative of this 1/2 triplet is different from 00:39:104 - . In order to clarify it, I prefer a more simple pattern for the non-vocal part because your main mapping channel is vocal. Delete 00:42:232 - if possible, hence.
okayy fixed aswell, also 00:42:049 (167) - d and 00:43:520 (171) - changed to kat

Please make sure xfrac's coding is correct lol. Call me back once again later.
It should be correct now, if isn't david can you please fix it? Idk why this happened :/
muzu
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davidminh0111
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Updated~
Skylish
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Metadata check: p/6234563

The spread between Futsuu and Muzukashii was greatly improved.

Bubbled~!
Poii
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hype!
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My 1st bubble. Thank you Skylish
Asaiga
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kjnh thac.
Skylish
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The mapset involved changes in Kiai unification without a proper consensus between the gd mappers and owner. A re-check is needed.

Re-bubbled~! as requested
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Skylish wrote:

The mapset involved changes in Kiai unification without a proper consensus between the gd mappers and owner. A re-check is needed.

Re-bubbled~! as requested
Thanks,
and sorry for the changes, ily4.
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nice~~~
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cool
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(╯°□°）╯︵


We had a talk in which we decided to remove the last spinner and change 01:25:668 (481) - for a D on the Inner Oni has they were not consistent with the other difficulties. (Plus, I don't see any issues now with the spread as Skylish pointed out to the mapper!)
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Gabe wrote:

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Poii wrote:

Gabe wrote:

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Greatt! Gratz deivid ~
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Gabe wrote:

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gratz \o/
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Congratz for your first ranked map! \o/
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nice first rank :DDD
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Thank you very much everyone \o/
Volta
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Hello, I have concern about lack of rest moment in Kantan. At 00:23:275 ~ 00:49:778 - and 00:51:251 ~ 01:21:987 - there is no 3/1 or longer break and in fact very demanding for newcomer.

Ranking Criteria wrote:

You should insert at least 1 rest moment that is 3/1 or longer after 16/1 to 20/1 of continuous mapping. Less frequent rest moments or shorter ones may put too much strain on beginners.
The first session i mentioned consists of 40 notes consecutively mapped without break. At minimum you should remove the note at 00:35:791 - , but usually i'd go further than that since the session is relatively calm. For the second session, the minimum requirement would be removing the note at 01:02:294 - to separate the kiai into 2 parts.

I also spotted same issue with Futsuu. At 00:57:877 ~ 01:24:932 - there is no 2/1 or longer rest moment . At least the note at 01:09:472 - could be removed or moved to 01:10:024 - to create the necessary rest time and consistency with break at 00:57:509 -

Overall i think the lower diffs can be polished more before it can go into ranked section.
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Volta wrote:

Hello, I have concern about lack of rest moment in Kantan. At 00:23:275 ~ 00:49:778 - and 00:51:251 ~ 01:21:987 - there is no 3/1 or longer break and in fact very demanding for newcomer.

Ranking Criteria wrote:

You should insert at least 1 rest moment that is 3/1 or longer after 16/1 to 20/1 of continuous mapping. Less frequent rest moments or shorter ones may put too much strain on beginners. There is 1 3/1 break at 00:04:502 but yeah, I understand it's lack do let's wait for QAT call or mod
The first session i mentioned consists of 40 notes consecutively mapped without break. At minimum you should remove the note at 00:35:791 - , but usually i'd go further than that since the session is relatively calm. For the second session, the minimum requirement would be removing the note at 01:02:294 - to separate the kiai into 2 parts.

I also spotted same issue with Futsuu. At 00:57:877 ~ 01:24:932 - there is no 2/1 or longer rest moment . At least the note at 01:09:472 - could be removed or moved to 01:10:024 - to create the necessary rest time and consistency with break at 00:57:509 -

Overall i think the lower diffs can be polished more before it can go into ranked section.
Let's call QAT about this ;)
Raiden
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In addition to the raised concerns, I'd also like to point out that the Muzukashii has legit zero 2/1 breaks and has a total of six 3/2 breaks. The jump from Futsuu to Muzukashii is huge in this regard; the amount of 1/4 used in Muzu doesn't correspond to the amount of 1/2 used in Futsuu.

Taking this down so you may address the spread concerns raised. Good luck!
davidminh0111
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Added some 3/1 spaces in Kantan, added 2/1 spaces in Futsuu, removed unescessary notes and apply Volta's mod
Thanks
Maybe need mod from Nardo (QAT) :>
Etsu
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hi, since this is dq would like to point out some things if you agree (no kudo).

[Kantan]
  1. 00:03:214 (4) - You could substitute this to reduce the previous notes, 00:01:190 (1,2,3) - with these three notes is enough for this diff, it also makes sense for this section, I say it for the space as 00:03:766 - this something emptied when the song follows something main so it would be essential if you add in note in así 00:03:950 - so 00: 03: 950 - to accompany the next finish and so a bit of break, you would not have a spread problem since it is a first diff.
  2. 00:13:705 - it would be good if this note were a kat, it has more priority for the voice and the distance is acceptable with 2/1 imo
  3. 00:17:754 (25) - It could be kat also to continue playing the voice even to simplify the gift as it is something traveled, also reference as 00:14:441 (19,20,21) -
  4. 00:47:570 - idk I think it would make more sense with the voice first in 00:45:177 (67,68,69) - instead of changing to another as it is confusing and almost certain to fail so it would be better to follow the voice 1/2 to the end (likewise in futsuu).
  5. 00:53:459 - I would follow notes 1/1, it feels weird when it is cut since you follow the lead voice, you could move this note 00:53:828 (4) - there would be no problem for the kiai imo.
  6. 01:22:907 - add note? It feels very empty in this section it is better to complement this note 01:23:459 (8) - you would improve the spread between diff imo.
  7. 01:24:380 (11) - change to kat for balance since I feel that gift is something traveled that part imo.
[xfrac's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:04:502 (17) - seria mas fun si hicieras un finish en esta nota para enfatizar la trompeta se siente mejor como la mayoría de diff, tiene un buen espacio adelante tambien.
davidminh0111
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Etsu wrote:

hi, since this is dq would like to point out some things if you agree (no kudo).

[Kantan]
  1. 00:03:214 (4) - You could substitute this to reduce the previous notes, 00:01:190 (1,2,3) - with these three notes is enough for this diff, it also makes sense for this section, I say it for the space as 00:03:766 - this something emptied when the song follows something main so it would be essential if you add in note in así 00:03:950 - so 00: 03: 950 - to accompany the next finish and so a bit of break, you would not have a spread problem since it is a first diff. Remapped a bit
  2. 00:13:705 - it would be good if this note were a kat, it has more priority for the voice and the distance is acceptable with 2/1 imo But it's a descending voice, so no change
  3. 00:17:754 (25) - It could be kat also to continue playing the voice even to simplify the gift as it is something traveled, also reference as 00:14:441 (19,20,21) - Removed the note
  4. 00:47:570 - idk I think it would make more sense with the voice first in 00:45:177 (67,68,69) - instead of changing to another as it is confusing and almost certain to fail so it would be better to follow the voice 1/2 to the end (likewise in futsuu). It just a bit confusing, so it's fine :>
  5. 00:53:459 - I would follow notes 1/1, it feels weird when it is cut since you follow the lead voice, you could move this note 00:53:828 (4) - there would be no problem for the kiai imo. A bit remapped
  6. 01:22:907 - add note? It feels very empty in this section it is better to complement this note 01:23:459 (8) - you would improve the spread between diff imo.
  7. 01:24:380 (11) - change to kat for balance since I feel that gift is something traveled that part imo. For 4/1 space, no change
Thank you for modding, you deserved it
Aisha
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Aisha

Etsu wrote:

[xfrac's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:04:502 (17) - seria mas fun si hicieras un finish en esta nota para enfatizar la trompeta se siente mejor como la mayoría de diff, tiene un buen espacio adelante tambien.
    Done
Removed some triplets, it should be fine now

zz
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davidminh0111
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Updated~
Volta
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Hello, here's a follow-up mod as promised.

[General]
  1. Remove -TV Size- from title as no source stated that explicitly.
    Reference: 1 2
  2. Kiai is unsnapped in ily4's Inner Oni
[Kantan]
  1. 00:44:441 - consider to remove, since you're switching to off-beat rhythm here it would be nicer to give more preparation time for newbie
  2. 00:47:570 - move to 00:47:386 - to follow the offbeat rhythm
  3. 00:59:165 - consider to remove too since 01:00:085 (13,14,15,16) - this rhythm is difficult to catch for newbie
  4. 01:06:711 - you may add note there, above point is a better break spot than here.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:30:637 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this pattern are way over the top for a futsuu. It's too sudden, can't reflect the calm atmoshpere at this session, and hurt the spread too much. Rearrange please. Maybe try these:
    1. 00:30:085 - remove finisher
    2. 00:29:901 - and 00:30:269 - add d
    3. 00:30:821 - , 00:31:005 - ,00:31:189 - remove
    4. 00:31:558 - move to 00:31:374 -
    5. 00:32:294 - move to 00:32:110 -
    6. 00:32:846 - add k
  2. 00:44:257 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - these pattern also should be nerfed considering the spread between kantan and muzu. Try:
    1. 00:44:993 - ,00:46:466 - remove
    2. 00:47:570 - move to 00:47:386 -
  3. 01:15:729 - it's fine to add note here. Actually please add something to closer the gap with muzu.
[xfrac's Muzukashii]
  1. Consider to create at least one 2/1 break. Best spot i could find is at 00:22:171 - . Try:
    1. 00:22:171 (89,90) - remove
    2. 00:22:723 - move to 00:22:539 -
    3. 00:22:907 - add note
  2. 00:09:840 - move to 00:09:472 - ? it would fits the melody better imo
  3. 00:49:963 - consider to remove for 2/1 break before kiai
  4. 01:14:625 - could be removed as well for a break at the end of kiai. Also it can emphasize the finisher at 01:14:809 - better imo
That should cover most of my concern. Good luck for requalification~
davidminh0111
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Volta wrote:

Hello, here's a follow-up mod as promised.

[General]
  1. Remove -TV Size- from title as no source stated that explicitly.
    Reference: 1 2 Reference from this ranked map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/130104
  2. Kiai is unsnapped in ily4's Inner Oni Fixed
[Kantan]
  1. 00:44:441 - consider to remove, since you're switching to off-beat rhythm here it would be nicer to give more preparation time for newbie Agree, fixed
  2. 00:47:570 - move to 00:47:386 - to follow the offbeat rhythm It's right to keep following the offbeat rhythm but I feel weird about that,
  3. 00:59:165 - consider to remove too since 01:00:085 (13,14,15,16) - this rhythm is difficult to catch for newbie Removed
  4. 01:06:711 - you may add note there, above point is a better break spot than here. Added a k
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:30:637 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this pattern are way over the top for a futsuu. It's too sudden, can't reflect the calm atmoshpere at this session, and hurt the spread too much. Rearrange please. Maybe try these:
    1. 00:30:085 - remove finisher But it's a strong melody
    2. 00:29:901 - and 00:30:269 - add d According to my changes above, it will be hard for players if I put 2 notes beside the Finisher note
    3. 00:30:821 - , 00:31:005 - ,00:31:189 - remove Yup, removed
    4. 00:31:558 - move to 00:31:374 -
    5. 00:32:294 - move to 00:32:110 -
    6. 00:32:846 - add k Others applied
  2. 00:44:257 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - these pattern also should be nerfed considering the spread between kantan and muzu. Try:
    1. 00:44:993 - ,00:46:466 - remove
    2. 00:47:570 - move to 00:47:386 - All applied, except 00:47:754 moved to 00:47:386 I feel a bit weird if I remove 00:47:570
  3. 01:15:729 - it's fine to add note here. Actually please add something to closer the gap with muzu. Added some
That should cover most of my concern. Good luck for requalification~
Thank you for modding
I was waiting for you for soo long, now it happened!
Aisha
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Aisha

Volta wrote:

Hello, here's a follow-up mod as promised.

[xfrac's Muzukashii]
  1. Consider to create at least one 2/1 break. Best spot i could find is at 00:22:171 - . Try:
    1. 00:22:171 (89,90) - remove
    2. 00:22:723 - move to 00:22:539 -
    3. 00:22:907 - add note
    I made some changes here according to your suggest
  2. 00:09:840 - move to 00:09:472 - ? it would fits the melody better imo
    I pref removing the note considering it's the beginning
  3. 00:49:963 - consider to remove for 2/1 break before kiai
    looks good
  4. 01:14:625 - could be removed as well for a break at the end of kiai. Also it can emphasize the finisher at 01:14:809 - better imo
    yes thats true, done
That should cover most of my concern. Good luck for requalification~
muz
http://puu.sh/yPIVD/47518abf71.osu

David: Don't forget to remove 'TV Size' tag
davidminh0111
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xfraczynho wrote:

David: Don't forget to remove 'TV Size' tag
I know but the song it's in the TV size so I add in tags, and Volta told me to remove TV size from the song title

Updated~
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Re-checklish

[General]

! The most ridiculous thing is that I made a correct metadata check already, but I did not check the mapset's thoroughly. Time to slap myself.
why I was confused at that time

Blame the stupid extra info. input by the Chinese uploaders and ME

! Concept of rest should not be taken too serious considering different mapping channels being followed. It is just a reference guideline to judge the overall spread across all difficulties.

> Vol. in Kantan and Futsuu is too loud, consider the settings in your own Oni.

> 00:36:527 - Finishers for all difficulties? There's a weak cymbal crash.

[Kantan]

> 00:07:815 - yes I know that this is mapped for the melody, but please be noticed that 00:04:502 - / 00:07:447 - are similar things, they should be similar (being mapped). At the same time, you form a melody phrase with 3 1/1 notes only at 00:01:190 - , same should be expected from 00:05:607 - . In short, shift 00:07:815 - to 00:07:447 - and change it to k

> 00:36:527 - missed Finisher?

> 00:47:570 - shift it 1/4 to match the BG melody and follow the consistency of those 3 notes at 00:45:177 -

> 00:55:668 - this kdd sounds weird enough since the later part at 01:07:447 - shows that you followed the vocal channel. Considering consistency, 00:55:668 - should be k d (d matches the vocal at 00:56:220 - ) instead of kdd .

> 00:59:165 - unnatural miss here, add a k back please.

> 01:21:987 - Finisher missing too? same as 00:04:502 -

> 01:24:012 - starting notes at the mid-gate of a music melody is weird, a 'head-tail' pattern would be clearer to display the music imo. Shift 01:24:012 - to 01:23:828 - hence.

[Futsuu]

> 00:04:502 - / 01:21:987 - consistent Finisher across your own difficulties is required at least

> 00:09:656 - gap is required here, similar to the mod at 00:33:950 - later

> 00:15:729 - you can add a d here to balance the pattern at 00:27:509 -

> 00:26:588 - kdk can be put, similar to 00:14:809 -

! 00:30:637 - I have a different point of view from Volta. I would not call this part as a calm section since the crossing over of vocal and instrumental layers are so significant that a distinctively high or low (not suitable) density spread should be performed. Although I admit that my previous suggestion was a bit overmapped for a clean Futsuu.

The current patterns seem too random, they are neither following two channels mentioned above.

Let's try a nerf section like this: 00:30:637 (2) -


It follows a instrumental layer, 00:30:085 - is a good point for channel change.

00:33:950 - is removed for emptying a space for rest. 7 1/1 is too boring imo.

> 00:36:527 - Finisher missing?

> 00:37:999 - / 00:40:944 - imo nnn n is smoother than n nnn

> 00:45:177 - change it to k, similar at 00:45:913 - (the lyrics)

> 00:56:036 (16,17) - ctrl+G (k d) for a correct pitch flow

> 01:02:662 - remove it for a rest and break

> 01:05:975 - change it to k to imply the up-rising flow and intensity

> 01:06:343 - remove it for a common break, same as 00:54:564 -

> 01:15:913 - shift it to 01:15:729 - , to match the vocal part and reduce a sudden nN pattern that's really hard for Futsuu level players.

> 01:19:226 - d has a better flow

> 01:20:331 - shift it 1/4 backward to fit the vocal starting at 01:20:147 - , based on the theory of 'head-tail' again.

[Oni]

> 00:03:030 (17,18) - ctrl+G sounds smoother

> 00:06:803 - remove this note to avoid any stream in the introduction part since it is a bit overwhelmed.

> 00:27:324 - change to kat for the consistent drum kick

> 00:41:680 - k d k k d ? The current version is completely reversed against the pitch flow

[xfrac's Muzukashii]

> 00:21:987 (88,89) - imo they can be simply removed since they are awkward there, and removal of notes can show a proper common break across the lower difficulties.

> 00:35:055 (138) - let's try:



Simplify the whole section screen-shot above, 00:35:055 - d for a better flow; 00:35:239 - unnecessary linkage of notes blur the vocal layer; 00:36:159 - unnatural monochrome triplet; and 00:36:527 - K for the weak cymbal crash.

> 00:49:963 - if you follow the melody, it is where you should also put a note (kat preferred)

[]

That should be it combining with Volta's suggestion. Call me back.
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Skylish wrote:

Re-checklish

[General]

! The most ridiculous thing is that I made a correct metadata check already, but I did not check the mapset's thoroughly. Time to slap myself.
why I was confused at that time

Blame the stupid extra info. input by the Chinese uploaders and ME

! Concept of rest should not be taken too serious considering different mapping channels being followed. It is just a reference guideline to judge the overall spread across all difficulties.

> Vol. in Kantan and Futsuu is too loud, consider the settings in your own Oni. Fixed

> 00:36:527 - Finishers for all difficulties? There's a weak cymbal crash. Nah, melody isn't strong enough

[Kantan]

> 00:07:815 - yes I know that this is mapped for the melody, but please be noticed that 00:04:502 - / 00:07:447 - are similar things, they should be similar (being mapped). At the same time, you form a melody phrase with 3 1/1 notes only at 00:01:190 - , same should be expected from 00:05:607 - . In short, shift 00:07:815 - to 00:07:447 - and change it to k Changed

> 00:36:527 - missed Finisher? Same as in General

> 00:47:570 - shift it 1/4 to match the BG melody and follow the consistency of those 3 notes at 00:45:177 - Ok

> 00:55:668 - this kdd sounds weird enough since the later part at 01:07:447 - shows that you followed the vocal channel. Considering consistency, 00:55:668 - should be k d (d matches the vocal at 00:56:220 - ) instead of kdd . Fixed

> 00:59:165 - unnatural miss here, add a k back please. Ok

> 01:21:987 - Finisher missing too? same as 00:04:502 - I should add this one, yea, added.

> 01:24:012 - starting notes at the mid-gate of a music melody is weird, a 'head-tail' pattern would be clearer to display the music imo. Shift 01:24:012 - to 01:23:828 - hence. Better, fixed

[Futsuu]

> 00:04:502 - / 01:21:987 - consistent Finisher across your own difficulties is required at least Added

> 00:09:656 - gap is required here, similar to the mod at 00:33:950 - later Removed

> 00:15:729 - you can add a d here to balance the pattern at 00:27:509 - yea

> 00:26:588 - kdk can be put, similar to 00:14:809 - Oh shoot! forgot, added

! 00:30:637 - I have a different point of view from Volta. I would not call this part as a calm section since the crossing over of vocal and instrumental layers are so significant that a distinctively high or low (not suitable) density spread should be performed. Although I admit that my previous suggestion was a bit overmapped for a clean Futsuu.

The current patterns seem too random, they are neither following two channels mentioned above. Applied your way

Let's try a nerf section like this: 00:30:637 (2) -


It follows a instrumental layer, 00:30:085 - is a good point for channel change.

00:33:950 - is removed for emptying a space for rest. 7 1/1 is too boring imo. Applied your way

> 00:36:527 - Finisher missing? Same as Kantan

> 00:37:999 - / 00:40:944 - imo nnn n is smoother than n nnn I prefer my way because I hear n nnn it better than nnn n

> 00:45:177 - change it to k, similar at 00:45:913 - (the lyrics) Ok

> 00:56:036 (16,17) - ctrl+G (k d) for a correct pitch flow Yea

> 01:02:662 - remove it for a rest and break Removed

> 01:05:975 - change it to k to imply the up-rising flow and intensity But it will be too repetitive kkk :<
jk changed

> 01:06:343 - remove it for a common break, same as 00:54:564 - Ok

> 01:15:913 - shift it to 01:15:729 - , to match the vocal part and reduce a sudden nN pattern that's really hard for Futsuu level players. Yea

> 01:19:226 - d has a better flow changed

> 01:20:331 - shift it 1/4 backward to fit the vocal starting at 01:20:147 - , based on the theory of 'head-tail' again. Shifted

[Oni]

> 00:03:030 (17,18) - ctrl+G sounds smoother Ctrl + G(ed)

> 00:06:803 - remove this note to avoid any stream in the introduction part since it is a bit overwhelmed. Removed

> 00:27:324 - change to kat for the consistent drum kick Changed to k

> 00:41:680 - k d k k d ? The current version is completely reversed against the pitch flow But pitch won't fix, no change

[]

That should be it combining with Volta's suggestion. Call me back.
Thank you for modding (again)
Aisha
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Skylish wrote:

Re-checklish

[xfrac's Muzukashii]

> 00:21:987 (88,89) - imo they can be simply removed since they are awkward there, and removal of notes can show a proper common break across the lower difficulties.
that's true, anyways i added 00:22:171 - dd on here cause i feel it so empty and drum is hearable here so
> 00:35:055 (138) - let's try:



Simplify the whole section screen-shot above, 00:35:055 - d for a better flow; 00:35:239 - unnecessary linkage of notes blur the vocal layer; 00:36:159 - unnatural monochrome triplet; and 00:36:527 - K for the weak cymbal crash.
Yes I agree with that, but i pref 00:35:975 - having this blank since it's such a calm section, it should be better now i think
> 00:49:963 - if you follow the melody, it is where you should also put a note (kat preferred)
lol true, idk why i didn't have it, anyways i changed 00:49:594 (1,2,3) - to ddk, should be okay
[]

That should be it combining with Volta's suggestion. Call me back.
upd
http://puu.sh/ySQA9/e38e7f1f66.osu
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Updated~
Skylish
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Small recheck on previous mod
19:30 davidminh0111: Hey Skylish, I've finished applying your mods at Best FriendS map :>
19:30 Skylish: np it
19:30 Skylish: I will check it now
19:30 *davidminh0111 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1337921 Fujijo Seitokai Shikkou-bu - Best FriendS]
19:32 *Skylish is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1337672 Fujijo Seitokai Shikkou-bu - Best FriendS [xfrac's Muzukashii]]
19:32 Skylish: the title is messed up in Muzukashii
19:32 Skylish: please help xfrac fix it directly
19:33 davidminh0111: Fixed
19:34 Skylish: In Futsuu, 00:33:950 -
19:34 Skylish: are you going to remove it according to my mod? It is too long for 7 x 1/1
19:35 Skylish: 00:45:177 - where's the kat?
19:35 davidminh0111: Oops, forgot, removed
19:36 davidminh0111: Added
19:38 Skylish: update the beatmap please :D
19:40 davidminh0111: Ok
19:40 davidminh0111: Done
19:40 Skylish: I will bubble it later, I have dinner now, see you :D
19:41 davidminh0111: Ok
19:41 davidminh0111: See ya too
19:41 davidminh0111: Have dinner too :D

Re-Bubbled~!

@xfrac: MAKE SURE you are not messed up with the notepad again :D , I found that you accidentally added two `` in the Title in your difficulty :(
Volta
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Spread has improved and lower diffs got sufficient break now.

Re-qualified~
and happy birthday.
davidminh0111
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Volta wrote:

Spread has improved and lower diffs got sufficient break now.

Re-qualified~
and happy birthday.
Thank you very much Volta :>
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hope it ranked
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bad-tom.mp4

gz, gj. 8-)
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