MrWeebl - Narwhals‬ · forum‬

byd

Nomination Assessment Team

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Topic Starter

byd 2017-09-01T20:59:29+00:00

Venix wrote:
From queue.

Red means this point is about unrankable thing.

[General]
Kiais are inconsistent, what are you think about adding kiai from Ohwow's diff to entire of spread?
ill think about it

[Metadata]
Artist: MrWeebl
Title: Narwhals
Resources:
Official youtube video:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ykwqXuMPsoc
Official site: http://weebls-stuff.com/toons/narwhals- ... o-mrweebl/
yes that is correct

[Easy]
00:03:268 - This section feels less different in comparsion to others. 6 x 1/1 slider in a row plays boring. Honestly, I prefer changing 00:04:858 (3,4) - these two 1/1 sliders into one (2/1) with circle on last white tick. It would make this part less boring. And of course you'll keep consistency with 00:00:090 (1,2,3,4) - this composition. 00:06:447 (1,2,3,4) -, as it is already mapped with the same rhythm as 00:00:090 (1,2,3,4) - is the same part of the song, changed it to something else though.
00:16:381 (4) - I think this repeat isn't work good here because you've strong downbeat on it and it should be clickable I think. It seems like you was focused on this rythm on entire of this part (for example 00:14:394 (1) - 00:15:189 (2) - 00:17:573 (1) - ) so you should follow this rythm here too. I prefer put circle instead of slider head and place 1/1 slider 00:16:778 - here. I think it's good option because you're keeping rythm consistency. Also, what are you think about placing like on image below? changed to similar pattern
AR1 for better visualisation
00:19:162 (1) - Reverse arrow on this slider is invisible, which is unrankable. You should unstack 00:17:573 (1,1) - tails of these slider to get rankable composition. I think you'll keep fine aesthetics if you place it like this. changed
Also, 00:19:162 (1,3) - this overlap looks a bit weird in comparsion to fact that every other compositions on this diff are stakes and it breaks aesthetics a bit but if you'll apply fix from previous point this issue will disappear. changed
[Collab Advanced]
00:28:699 (1,2) - I think you should place here 1/2 repeat slider instead like you did 00:22:341 (1) - here on the same rythm just to keep good consistency. You can use circle + 1/2 slider instead of repeat 00:22:341 (1) - here but honestly I think first option is much better for rythm. changed
I don't have time to mod insane rn, poke me in game if you want it
Propably will end this mod tomorrow.

thanks for mod!!

Lusumi

227 posts

Joined December 2015

Lusumi 2017-09-01T21:17:05+00:00

Venix wrote:
From queue.

Red means this point is about unrankable thing.

[General]
Kiais are inconsistent, what are you think about adding kiai from Ohwow's diff to entire of spread?
[Metadata]
Artist: MrWeebl
Title: Narwhals
Resources:
Official youtube video:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ykwqXuMPsoc
Official site: http://weebls-stuff.com/toons/narwhals- ... o-mrweebl/
[Easy]
00:03:268 - This section feels less different in comparsion to others. 6 x 1/1 slider in a row plays boring. Honestly, I prefer changing 00:04:858 (3,4) - these two 1/1 sliders into one (2/1) with circle on last white tick. It would make this part less boring. And of course you'll keep consistency with 00:00:090 (1,2,3,4) - this composition.
00:16:381 (4) - I think this repeat isn't work good here because you've strong downbeat on it and it should be clickable I think. It seems like you was focused on this rythm on entire of this part (for example 00:14:394 (1) - 00:15:189 (2) - 00:17:573 (1) - ) so you should follow this rythm here too. I prefer put circle instead of slider head and place 1/1 slider 00:16:778 - here. I think it's good option because you're keeping rythm consistency. Also, what are you think about placing like on image below?
AR1 for better visualisation
00:19:162 (1) - Reverse arrow on this slider is invisible, which is unrankable. You should unstack 00:17:573 (1,1) - tails of these slider to get rankable composition. I think you'll keep fine aesthetics if you place it like this.
Also, 00:19:162 (1,3) - this overlap looks a bit weird in comparsion to fact that every other compositions on this diff are stakes and it breaks aesthetics a bit but if you'll apply fix from previous point this issue will disappear.
[Normal]
00:08:037 (3,4,5) - 00:09:626 (1,2,3) - 00:11:216 (4,5,6) - 00:12:805 (1,2,3) - 00:14:394 (4,5,6) - What are you think about making them a bit different in rythm? These compositions are all the same in rythm aspect and it's getting boring on this section. I think it will be better if you delete 00:13:401 (2) - this circle to emphasise rythm on 00:12:805 (1,2,3) - this one, which is rhythmically a bit other in comparsion to rest of composition I highlighted because on this circle sound is not that strong like on others.
Also, what are you think about changing 00:11:216 (4,5,6) - this one into 1/1 repeat + circle like you did 00:04:858 (4) - here on very similar rythm just to keep consistency?
[Collab Advanced]
00:00:090 (1,2) - 00:06:447 (1,2) - Since these rythm are the same why have you used different spacing? You should make these spacings consistent by increasing spacing on first one from 1.0 to 1.2 or vice versa. Honestly, I prefer option when you're spicing up spacing on first one because it works better for rythm fitting. Difference is so small it doesn't really matter and if i would change it it would look ugly and messy
00:12:606 - This clap seems to be unnecessary here just because you haven't clap sound in song here. changed
00:12:805 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/2 sliders spam plays and seems boring. What are you think about making it like 00:14:394 (1,2,3,4,5) - here. Rythm in music is the same but these two circles making gameplay more different and less boring. If you do this you'll get a nice consistency with composition highlighted by me above. but music on that part is a bit different theres that uh idk sound in the background and its more calm so i wanted to simplify the part there
00:18:368 (4,5) - Why have you used 1.3 distance snap here? It seems to be too much in comparsion to entire of map when you have used 1.2 and it's unreasonable because you haven't here strong downbeat or something similar. not noticable at all but changed it
00:19:957 (1,2,3,4,1) - Don't you think this kick slider stream is a bit too much for advanced diff. Stream on hard is easier so I prefer nerf it to get it comfortable for players. Mby try 2x 1/4 slider with repeat instead of these 4 1/4 ones? they play like singletaps with only difference that slider ignore acc and repeat slider can be hard to read and are cancer on things like that
00:28:699 (1,2) - I think you should place here 1/2 repeat slider instead like you did 00:22:341 (1) - here on the same rythm just to keep good consistency. You can use circle + 1/2 slider instead of repeat 00:22:341 (1) - here but honestly I think first option is much better for rythm.
[HC's Hard]
Overall some of spacing changes look random because some of rythms you was focused on are ignored. For example 00:02:275 (2,3) - vs 00:03:666 (2,3) - // 00:03:666 (2,3) - vs 00:05:255 (2,3) - . Rythm is almost the same but you haven't increased spacing on first ones when you've did it on second ones which doesn't make sense at all I think. You should emphasise every rythm like this. If you are focusing on 00:00:884 - 00:01:679 - 00:04:063 - 00:07:242 - etc. this rythm and you're using for it spacing changes you should add spacing changes 00:02:474 - 00:05:652 - on these ones too because spacing consistency need it.
00:26:315 (5,1) - I think this overlap brakes aesthetics a bit and just looks bad. I prefer just move 00:26:315 (5) - this slider a bit to right to make blanked with 00:27:110 (1) - this one, like it looks you wanted to.
I don't have time to mod insane rn, poke me in game if you want it
Propably will end this mod tomorrow.

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Ohwow

1,202 posts

Joined July 2013

Ohwow 2017-09-02T01:23:04+00:00

Venix wrote:
[Normal]
00:08:037 (3,4,5) - 00:09:626 (1,2,3) - 00:11:216 (4,5,6) - 00:12:805 (1,2,3) - 00:14:394 (4,5,6) - What are you think about making them a bit different in rythm? These compositions are all the same in rythm aspect and it's getting boring on this section. Song doesn't change much, so I don't think I have to change up stuff. I think it will be better if you delete 00:13:401 (2) - this circle to emphasise rythm on 00:12:805 (1,2,3) - this one, which is rhythmically a bit other in comparsion to rest of composition I highlighted because on this circle sound is not that strong like on others. k
Also, what are you think about changing 00:11:216 (4,5,6) - this one into 1/1 repeat + circle like you did 00:04:858 (4) - here on very similar rythm just to keep consistency? did something different instead, don't want to make it the same just the song kinda differs a bit.

Thanks!

Also, I want to point out that kiais of GDs don't have to be consistent. Different people have different perspective of the song.

Fixed

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Vespirit

350 posts

Joined December 2014

Vespirit 2017-09-02T02:13:20+00:00

Venix wrote:
From queue.

Red means this point is about unrankable thing.

[HC's Hard]
Overall some of spacing changes look random because some of rythms you was focused on are ignored. For example 00:02:275 (2,3) - vs 00:03:666 (2,3) - // 00:03:666 (2,3) - vs 00:05:255 (2,3) - . Rythm is almost the same but you haven't increased spacing on first ones when you've did it on second ones which doesn't make sense at all I think. You should emphasise every rythm like this. If you are focusing on 00:00:884 - 00:01:679 - 00:04:063 - 00:07:242 - etc. this rythm and you're using for it spacing changes you should add spacing changes 00:02:474 - 00:05:652 - on these ones too because spacing consistency need it.
00:26:315 (5,1) - I think this overlap brakes aesthetics a bit and just looks bad. I prefer just move 00:26:315 (5) - this slider a bit to right to make blanked with 00:27:110 (1) - this one, like it looks you wanted to.

fixed all, thanks a lot!

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- titan

238 posts

Joined July 2016

- titan 2017-09-03T02:43:33+00:00

hi, nm from my queue

how do i mod at 0% volume

Easy
00:05:255 (4) - seems kinda weird to put this slider on this beat, when the sound feels less important than the sound a beat before or after it.
00:08:037 (3,4,1) - perfect triangle?
00:12:805 (1) - move the first white anchor down a few pixels, blanket looks kinda bad
00:15:984 (3,4) - this doesn't blaankettttt
00:16:977 (4) - ^ this is placed in the same spot so ya
00:19:162 (1) - move the red anchor to the right like 2 pixels the imperfect blanket make me angerry
00:26:315 (4) - i don't like this slider and idk how to explain why. a normal wave slider or something would look better imo

ohwow's NARmal xddddd
why are you actually everywhere wtf
00:11:215 (4,6) - idk if it can be called blanketing for sliders with just a red anchor but like center the circle between both segments of it like this bc it looks nice

00:23:335 (7,2) - naZi blanket hAh

Advanced
00:10:023 (2,4) - imperfect blanket
00:21:348 (2,3) - ^
00:22:142 (1,2) - ^
00:28:500 (4,1) - this blanket is pretty off :/
ugh why was this diff a blanket mod

good luck!

byd

Nomination Assessment Team

665 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

byd 2017-09-03T09:27:19+00:00

- titan wrote:
hi, nm from my queue

how do i mod at 0% volume
Easy
00:05:255 (4) - seems kinda weird to put this slider on this beat, when the sound feels less important than the sound a beat before or after it. changed
00:08:037 (3,4,1) - perfect triangle? ye sure
00:12:805 (1) - move the first white anchor down a few pixels, blanket looks kinda bad ye sure
00:15:984 (3,4) - this doesn't blaankettttt sigh
00:16:977 (4) - ^ this is placed in the same spot so ya i think you mean 5 but its fixed
00:19:162 (1) - move the red anchor to the right like 2 pixels the imperfect blanket make me angerry nop
00:26:315 (4) - i don't like this slider and idk how to explain why. a normal wave slider or something would look better imo THIS IS MY SIGNATURE MOVE!

Advanced
00:10:023 (2,4) - imperfect blanket its good
00:21:348 (2,3) - ^ ye ye
00:22:142 (1,2) - ^ ye ye
00:28:500 (4,1) - this blanket is pretty off :/ zzz
ugh why was this diff a blanket mod
good luck!

ty for 200iq blanket mod

Trust

1,251 posts

Joined March 2012

Trust 2017-09-04T03:22:55+00:00

[General]

The soft-hitfinishes used on 00:14:394 and 00:20:752 do not cover any unique sound in the track. Consider removing these additive hitsounds

[Easy]

00:12:805 (1) - Move to 401|9 to perfectly blanket with the tail of (5)
SPOILER
00:21:149 (2) - NC for new phrase and music change?

[Insane]

AR8.5 feels better in case you were wondering
00:32:673 (1,2) - You're skipping over all the 1/4 in the outro. (HC's Hard has more 1/4 clicks here). Consider using this rhythm to make the outro more interesting since exaggerated 1/2 jumps are rather generic
SPOILER

Not much to say, other diffs look fine. Well I mean the song is only 30 seconds long lol.
Gl

byd

Nomination Assessment Team

665 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

byd 2017-09-04T12:48:57+00:00

Trust wrote:
[General]

The soft-hitfinishes used on 00:14:394 and 00:20:752 do not cover any unique sound in the track. Consider removing these additive hitsounds removed them in all diffs
[Easy]

00:12:805 (1) - Move to 401|9 to perfectly blanket with the tail of (5) did
SPOILER
00:21:149 (2) - NC for new phrase and music change? changed
[Insane]

AR8.5 feels better in case you were wondering i wanna try to keep it ar 9 so i can play it (lul)
00:32:673 (1,2) - You're skipping over all the 1/4 in the outro. (HC's Hard has more 1/4 clicks here). Consider using this rhythm to make the outro more interesting since exaggerated 1/2 jumps are rather generic changed the rhythm to something similar
SPOILER

Not much to say, other diffs look fine. Well I mean the song is only 30 seconds long lol.
Gl

thanks for mod!!

Ohwow

1,202 posts

Joined July 2013

Ohwow 2017-09-04T21:09:31+00:00

@ -titan, fixed

aaaa

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FinW

33 posts

Joined July 2015

FinW 2017-09-11T22:44:29+00:00

I'm new to modding so please forgive me if I don't make any sense.

Monodon monoceros

The only map that I had problems with was the last difficulty cause the NCs at some portion didn't line up with the correct beats of the map, like how they do in areas like 00:00:090 (1,2,3,4,5) and 00:11:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7). If theres a reason why there are new combos in the areas I listed below, I don't know. xd

00:10:421 (1) - Remove nc
00:18:368 (4) - ^
00:25:918 (3) - ^
00:26:315 (1) - ^
00:32:275 (3) - ^
00:32:673 (1) - ^

byd

Nomination Assessment Team

665 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

byd 2017-09-12T13:31:44+00:00

FinL wrote:
I'm new to modding so please forgive me if I don't make any sense. dont make nc/blanket mods and ur good : ok_hand :

Monodon monoceros
The only map that I had problems with was the last difficulty cause the NCs at some portion didn't line up with the correct beats of the map, like how they do in areas like 00:00:090 (1,2,3,4,5) and 00:11:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7). If theres a reason why there are new combos in the areas I listed below, I don't know. xd

00:10:421 (1) - Remove nc sure
00:18:368 (4) - ^ sure
00:25:918 (3) - ^ for pattern readability
00:26:315 (1) - ^ ^
00:32:275 (3) - ^ 1,2,1,2,1,2
00:32:673 (1) - ^ 1,2,1,2,1,2

ty

Kotori-Chan

496 posts

Joined February 2014

Kotori-Chan 2017-09-12T22:05:54+00:00

Just dont let em touch your balls~ I actually hate this song lul´

*gets amazing horse flashbacks*
Nice hitsounds ~
BUT !!!!!
No video ? i'm disappointed

byd

Nomination Assessment Team

665 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

byd 2017-09-13T08:55:47+00:00

Kotori-Chan wrote:
Just dont let em touch your balls~ I actually hate this song lul´ samE duDE

No video ? i'm disappointed ill try to get a good video for u

awesomemacD

172 posts

Joined January 2015

awesomemacD 2017-09-16T11:21:49+00:00

HC's Hard:
00:11:613 (2,3,4) - why triple? i don't think it should be there
00:14:792 (2) - replace this with a ctrl+h+j of 00:14:394 (1) - , it looks better
00:15:388 (4,5,6) - this also shouldn't be a triple
00:33:070 (2,3,4) - ^
that's all

Vespirit

350 posts

Joined December 2014

Vespirit 2017-09-16T18:26:44+00:00

awesomemacD wrote:
HC's Hard:
00:11:613 (2,3,4) - why triple? i don't think it should be there why, its to the vocals
00:14:792 (2) - replace this with a ctrl+h+j of 00:14:394 (1) - , it looks better looks fine imo, its a ctrl+j
00:15:388 (4,5,6) - this also shouldn't be a triple disagree, i think it fits because of the way he says "kickass facial" sounds very cluttered
00:33:070 (2,3,4) - ^ edited this ending, including changing this to a reverse
that's all

update

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Phos-

773 posts

Joined December 2012

Phos- 2017-09-17T17:50:18+00:00

Hey, from my queue!

[Easy]

00:23:931 (1,2) - The blanket here could be improved a bit. I noticed that it was a bit off while test-playing, and it becomes even more evident inside of the editor.

[Ohwow's Normal]

00:12:805 (1,2) - Structure wise, I think it would be better if you made these symmetrical. Either give (2) a red anchor point, or give (1) a smooth curve.
00:19:758 - I would add a circle here, since the sound in the music isn't that weak enough to justify having it skipped.

[Advanced]

00:08:831 (4,1) - Maybe you could curve (1) a bit to form a blanket over the end of (4)? Personally it'll look nicer that way.

[HC's Hard]

00:15:388 (4,5,6) - I found this triplet here to be really unnecessary; nothing in the music justifies the presence of (5). Compare it to the triplet at 00:11:613 (2,3,4) - and you'll see that it is perfectly justified since there are three syllables in the vocals. Here though, the triplet kinda just seems shoehorned in, and it's not that intuitive to play.
00:17:375 (5,3) - Maybe you could stack these two notes? Probably not too big of a difference gameplay wise, but I think it'll make the overall structure/aesthetic neater.

[Monodon Monoceros]

Make the map ar8.5. This is more fitting because of the comparatively low bpm and note density. It will also make the map appeal to a wider audience, since people can DT it without having to know ar10.3.
00:08:831 (5,6) - It would flow better if you moved (6) to a place x:206 y:257 since (5) will perfectly lead into the head of (6). It'll also make the gameplay consistent with every other extended slider pair, because they don't suffer from this problem.

That's all I have to say. I'm honestly quite surprised by the quality of this mapset, as each difficulty seemed very well polished. I'd say this is ready. Good luck ~

byd

Nomination Assessment Team

665 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

byd 2017-09-17T18:32:21+00:00

-Faded- wrote:
Hey, from my queue!

[Easy]
00:23:931 (1,2) - The blanket here could be improved a bit. I noticed that it was a bit off while test-playing, and it becomes even more evident inside of the editor. o thats actually pretty bad, fixed
[Advanced]
00:08:831 (4,1) - Maybe you could curve (1) a bit to form a blanket over the end of (4)? Personally it'll look nicer that way. i curved it slightly and curved 4 more
[Monodon Monoceros]
Make the map ar8.5. This is more fitting because of the comparatively low bpm and note density. It will also make the map appeal to a wider audience, since people can DT it without having to know ar10.3. i dont like ar 8.5, changed to 8.7 though
00:08:831 (5,6) - It would flow better if you moved (6) to a place x:206 y:257 since (5) will perfectly lead into the head of (6). It'll also make the gameplay consistent with every other extended slider pair, because they don't suffer from this problem. did something similar to follow the structure of the map
That's all I have to say. I'm honestly quite surprised by the quality of this mapset, as each difficulty seemed very well polished. I'd say this is ready. Good luck ~

ty for mod

Vespirit

350 posts

Joined December 2014

Vespirit 2017-09-17T21:36:07+00:00

-Faded- wrote:
Hey, from my queue!

[HC's Hard]
00:15:388 (4,5,6) - I found this triplet here to be really unnecessary; nothing in the music justifies the presence of (5). Compare it to the triplet at 00:11:613 (2,3,4) - and you'll see that it is perfectly justified since there are three syllables in the vocals. Here though, the triplet kinda just seems shoehorned in, and it's not that intuitive to play.changing since this has been suggested a couple times
00:17:375 (5,3) - Maybe you could stack these two notes? Probably not too big of a difference gameplay wise, but I think it'll make the overall structure/aesthetic neater. didnt stack them for spacing reasons, but did attempt to make it look a lot neater
That's all I have to say. I'm honestly quite surprised by the quality of this mapset, as each difficulty seemed very well polished. I'd say this is ready. Good luck ~

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Ohwow

1,202 posts

Joined July 2013

Ohwow 2017-09-17T22:12:55+00:00

@-Faded- ~fixed~

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Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-09-20T14:23:36+00:00

m4m

[top diff]

00:07:242 (3) - the way you shape slider here make the flow here a bit pretty weird compare with 00:00:884 (3) - , i think ctrl+j 3 would make flow a bit more consistent with that
00:09:825 (2,3) - 00:10:620 (6,7) - why the snare here are low spacing when on the previous rhythm you put more spacing on snare so i think maybe make them spacing higher would make thing a bit more consistent
00:31:679 (5,1,2,1,2,1) - i feel like overall spacing here this are a bit too much than the others similiar part here 00:25:322 (4,1,2,1,2,1) - a lot when it doesn't feel much different in intensity much imo so i would think that decrease spacing would make overall spacing a bit more better in consistency

[hc]

00:17:176 (4,5,2,3) - try to make them looks stack for better aesthetic ?
00:23:931 (1,2) - 1.4x spacing for better spacing consistent ?
00:29:692 (4,1,2) - same as above

[advance]

00:10:023 (2,3) - 1.2x spacing to make spacing stay consistent , try move 3 to around x148 y8

[ohwow]

is that kiai length intentionally? i find it pretty weird that it last till the end of the song lol
00:03:269 (1,2) - 0.9x spacing ? to make spacing a bit more consistent
00:09:626 (1,2) - 00:21:547 (3,4) - 00:27:904 (2,3) - same[
/list]

[easy]
1. fine as it is imo

it's an ok map
good luck

byd

Nomination Assessment Team

665 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

byd 2017-09-20T15:45:48+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
m4m

[top diff]
00:07:242 (3) - the way you shape slider here make the flow here a bit pretty weird compare with 00:00:884 (3) - , i think ctrl+j 3 would make flow a bit more consistent with that imo the flow is fine
00:09:825 (2,3) - 00:10:620 (6,7) - why the snare here are low spacing when on the previous rhythm you put more spacing on snare so i think maybe make them spacing higher would make thing a bit more consistent changed
00:31:679 (5,1,2,1,2,1) - i feel like overall spacing here this are a bit too much than the others similiar part here 00:25:322 (4,1,2,1,2,1) - a lot when it doesn't feel much different in intensity much imo so i would think that decrease spacing would make overall spacing a bit more better in consistency changed it a bit
[advance]
00:10:023 (2,3) - 1.2x spacing to make spacing stay consistent , try move 3 to around x148 y8 oops, fixed
[easy]
fine as it is imo
it's an ok map
good luck

ty for mod!

Vespirit

350 posts

Joined December 2014

Vespirit 2017-09-20T23:18:24+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
m4m

[hc]
00:17:176 (4,5,2,3) - try to make them looks stack for better aesthetic ?
00:23:931 (1,2) - 1.4x spacing for better spacing consistent ?
00:29:692 (4,1,2) - same as above
it's an ok map
good luck

fixed all, ty

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Ohwow

1,202 posts

Joined July 2013

Ohwow 2017-09-21T18:12:14+00:00

@CelsiusLK
-Kiai intentional
-Turn on stacking?

no changes

Voli

813 posts

Joined April 2013

Voli 2017-09-21T22:51:07+00:00

"they beat a polar bear in a fight"

from #modreqs! isn't that suprising?
i picked this up from modreqs, seemed like a nice small set so here we go

HC's Hard

00:18:765 (4,5,1) - I think this rhythm could be improved a lot by making 00:18:765 (4,5) - a slider and making 00:19:163 (1) - 4 notes. I think the 8-bit sounds are perfect for a square-like pattern or the like. The long repeater is rather dull.
00:24:328 (3) - Placement is rather visually unappealing/random imo. Try to stack it on 00:23:335 (4) - 's end or move it apart completely? Same for 00:30:686 (3,4) -

Monodon monoceros

00:01:282 (2,3) - I don't really like that this is a jump instead of a pattern like 00:00:090 (1,2) - , I mean they're the same vocal but here you suddenly have to make a jarring movement with the cursor? Besides, if you had a slider instead of the jump, the contrast with 00:01:679 (1,2,3,4) - would be a lot better.
The same goes for 00:07:639 (2,3) - and the like.
00:09:626 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Pattern seems unnaturally spaced out compared to the rest of your map. Consider nerfing it a bit?
00:16:381 (2,3) - space these out a little less so you can separate this pattern 00:16:779 (1,2,3,4) - better? It doesn't really make sense to have the biggest jump on 00:16:580 (3) -
00:25:520 (1,2,1,2) - Could be executed slightly more accurate imo by making the jumps escalate from a tinier spacing (in accordance to the pitch)

Lower diffs look nice and clean, good job. Call me back once you're done with this.

byd

Nomination Assessment Team

665 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

byd 2017-09-22T12:36:09+00:00

Voli wrote:
"they beat a polar bear in a fight" time for a new spirit animal? :^)

from #modreqs! isn't that suprising? it is!
i picked this up from modreqs, seemed like a nice small set so here we go

Monodon monoceros
00:01:282 (2,3) - I don't really like that this is a jump instead of a pattern like 00:00:090 (1,2) - , I mean they're the same vocal but here you suddenly have to make a jarring movement with the cursor? Besides, if you had a slider instead of the jump, the contrast with 00:01:679 (1,2,3,4) - would be a lot better. i cant find a slider that fits, i'd have to remap and thats difficult
The same goes for 00:07:639 (2,3) - and the like. same here
00:09:626 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Pattern seems unnaturally spaced out compared to the rest of your map. Consider nerfing it a bit? i will when i find out what to do with them
00:16:381 (2,3) - space these out a little less so you can separate this pattern 00:16:779 (1,2,3,4) - better? It doesn't really make sense to have the biggest jump on 00:16:580 (3) - oops, that was an accident, it was in a line with 00:16:977 (2,1) - before, fixed
00:25:520 (1,2,1,2) - Could be executed slightly more accurate imo by making the jumps escalate from a tinier spacing (in accordance to the pitch) changed
Lower diffs look nice and clean, good job. ty Call me back once you're done with this.

ty for mod

Vespirit

350 posts

Joined December 2014

Vespirit 2017-09-22T22:20:33+00:00

Voli wrote:
"they beat a polar bear in a fight"

from #modreqs! isn't that suprising?
i picked this up from modreqs, seemed like a nice small set so here we go

HC's Hard
00:18:765 (4,5,1) - I think this rhythm could be improved a lot by making 00:18:765 (4,5) - a slider and making 00:19:163 (1) - 4 notes. I think the 8-bit sounds are perfect for a square-like pattern or the like. The long repeater is rather dull. hopefully this looks good xd
00:24:328 (3) - Placement is rather visually unappealing/random imo. Try to stack it on 00:23:335 (4) - 's end or move it apart completely? Same for 00:30:686 (3,4) - fixed both, ending was altered a bit to incorporate it
Lower diffs look nice and clean, good job. Call me back once you're done with this.

update

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Voli

813 posts

Joined April 2013

Voli 2017-09-23T00:49:30+00:00

seems good

byd

Nomination Assessment Team

665 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

byd 2017-09-23T08:24:34+00:00

Thank you!

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,061 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2017-09-25T21:05:27+00:00

General

drum-hitnormal, but without the 2ms delay. Not that it changes much, but a bit more accurate feedback always helps.

Easy

00:12:805 (1,1) - try to replce the second (1) slider with a single circle for 00:14:791 - as that's where the word "they" and a strong sound are. As for 00:14:394 - I'd just finish the previous slider there, sort of like 00:19:162 (1) - Just give it a try

Neat.

Ohwow's Normal

00:04:858 (4,5) - I'd really prefer two 1/1 sliders to better represent the vocals. It'd look like this.
00:22:143 (4) - doesn't really sound like something that needs a circle, especially when compared with 00:22:739 - which is much stronger yet doesn't have a circle.
Note: 00:28:500 (3) - same here. Removing these circles would be a good idea, I'd say.

Looks cool.

Advanced

Approach Rate 6 would be more than enough, it's a pretty slow paced difficulty with consistent spacing that doesn't require anything really fast.
00:21:149 - this beat was clickable in both Easy and Normal, and it has some important vocals. let's try something like this?
Note: 00:24:328 - 00:27:507 - 00:30:686 - same here.
00:22:937 (2,3) - I would probably Ctrl+G these as well to match the vocals as they seem to be the leading part here.
Note: 00:29:295 (2,3) - and here.

I don't know, I'd really want to have these two rhythm things changed to match the vocals.

HC's Hard

00:11:017 (4,1) - I'd give the (1) a slight jump just to keep consistent patterning and for the sake of emphasis to the lyrics.
00:17:573 (1) - any way for this to have a bigger jump? Feels weak when compared with 00:16:779 (3) -
00:19:957 (1) - I'd probably just stuck with (2), since the synth solo isn't the main part of the difficulty and the 1/4 part is hard enough on its own, placing a massive jump before it is an overkill.
Note: 00:26:315 (5,6) - then you'd probalby need to tone down this one for consistency

A bit of an overkill with the spacings before the 1/4s, the rest is quite cool.

Monodon monoceros
Had to google the difficulty name to get the idea, pretty cool and sort of educational. I give you a credit for that.

Could use slider tick rate 2, so that the synth beats on red ticks do not feel weird in those 3/4 sliders like 00:00:288 - 00:01:083 - and so on.
00:30:289 (1,2,3) - shouldn't (3) be spaced further to match the stronger pitch of the drum and the vocals? Stronger beat = stronger jump or so,

From 00:14:394 -till 00:19:162 - that part actually sounds kind of like the part 00:12:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here. So, I expected lower spacing or maybe slower sliders, or something to tone down the tempo of the gameplay and represent the lack of the background instrument or the fact that it is fenerally weaker.

Can't quite agree with that one part of the hardest difficulty, apart from that everything seems okay to me.

Ohwow

1,202 posts

Joined July 2013

Ohwow 2017-09-25T21:37:09+00:00

Bakari wrote:
Ohwow's Normal
00:04:858 (4,5) - I'd really prefer two 1/1 sliders to better represent the vocals. It'd look like this. I really don't want to make a chain full of 1/1 sliders, so I used a different rhythm here so it doesn't get dull with 1/1 sliders. The vocals get a bit weaker there so a repeat slider should fit imo.
00:22:143 (4) - doesn't really sound like something that needs a circle, especially when compared with 00:22:739 - which is much stronger yet doesn't have a circle. k
Note: 00:28:500 (3) - same here. Removing these circles would be a good idea, I'd say. k

Looks cool. No, you are cool.

Let's go

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byd

Nomination Assessment Team

665 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

byd 2017-09-25T21:57:38+00:00

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/641784

Bakari wrote:
General
drum-hitnormal, but without the 2ms delay. Not that it changes much, but a bit more accurate feedback always helps. spasiba
Easy
00:12:805 (1,1) - try to replce the second (1) slider with a single circle for 00:14:791 - as that's where the word "they" and a strong sound are. As for 00:14:394 - I'd just finish the previous slider there, sort of like 00:19:162 (1) - Just give it a try changed

Neat.
Advanced
Approach Rate 6 would be more than enough, it's a pretty slow paced difficulty with consistent spacing that doesn't require anything really fast. changed to 6.5 to fit spread better than 6
00:21:149 - this beat was clickable in both Easy and Normal, and it has some important vocals. let's try something like this? changed
Note: 00:24:328 - 00:27:507 - 00:30:686 - same here. ^
00:22:937 (2,3) - I would probably Ctrl+G these as well to match the vocals as they seem to be the leading part here. changed
Note: 00:29:295 (2,3) - and here. ^

I don't know, I'd really want to have these two rhythm things changed to match the vocals. changed
Monodon monoceros
Had to google the difficulty name to get the idea, pretty cool and sort of educational. I give you a credit for that. woo
Could use slider tick rate 2, so that the synth beats on red ticks do not feel weird in those 3/4 sliders like 00:00:288 - 00:01:083 - and so on. sure
00:30:289 (1,2,3) - shouldn't (3) be spaced further to match the stronger pitch of the drum and the vocals? Stronger beat = stronger jump or so, oops i totally screwed this one up

From 00:14:394 -till 00:19:162 - that part actually sounds kind of like the part 00:12:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here. So, I expected lower spacing or maybe slower sliders, or something to tone down the tempo of the gameplay and represent the lack of the background instrument or the fact that it is fenerally weaker. i disagree. 00:12:805 - to 00:14:394 - is noticably quieter (is that a word?) than after 00:14:394 -, and i dont think that the following part is that different from the rest of the song, instruments are the same imo.
Can't quite agree with that one part of the hardest difficulty, apart from that everything seems okay to me. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

ty for mod

Vespirit

350 posts

Joined December 2014

Vespirit 2017-09-26T02:00:39+00:00

Bakari wrote:
HC's Hard
00:11:017 (4,1) - I'd give the (1) a slight jump just to keep consistent patterning and for the sake of emphasis to the lyrics. okay
00:17:573 (1) - any way for this to have a bigger jump? Feels weak when compared with 00:16:779 (3) - theres always a way
00:19:957 (1) - I'd probably just stuck with (2), since the synth solo isn't the main part of the difficulty and the 1/4 part is hard enough on its own, placing a massive jump before it is an overkill. i nerfed the jump a little, but couldnt find a way to get it to a smaller distance without breaking structure, so i decided to also nerf the spacing between 1/4s. hopefully that fixes it well enough
Note: 00:26:315 (5,6) - then you'd probalby need to tone down this one for consistency made same changes as the other one above

A bit of an overkill with the spacings before the 1/4s, the rest is quite cool. thanks

xd

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235,245,10222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,190,10421,2,0,L|149:115,2,75,2|0|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,295,11017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,258,11216,6,0,P|315:246|352:246,1,75,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,282,11613,1,8,0:0:0:0:
451,282,11712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
451,282,11812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
471,144,12010,2,0,L|396:137,1,75,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,131,12408,1,8,0:0:0:0:
291,43,12606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,213,12805,6,0,P|298:220|261:217,1,75,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,131,13202,2,0,P|254:122|291:126,1,75,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,203,13599,2,0,P|146:176|132:142,1,75,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,293,13997,2,0,P|170:328|145:355,1,75,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,234,14394,6,0,P|291:232|327:242,1,75,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,293,14792,2,0,P|151:302|113:301,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,227,15189,1,2,3:0:0:0:
77,129,15388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,94,15586,1,8,0:0:0:0:
263,147,15785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
250,299,15984,6,0,P|313:262|386:270,1,150,2|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,309,16580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,139,16779,2,0,L|469:213,1,75,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,375,17176,1,8,0:0:0:0:
486,309,17375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,293,17573,6,0,L|249:299,1,75,2|0,3:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
322,383,17970,2,0,L|397:377,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,309,18368,2,0,P|491:273|482:237,1,75,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,193,18765,2,0,P|332:230|341:266,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,111,19162,5,2,3:0:0:0:
338,193,19361,1,2,3:0:0:0:
420,175,19560,1,2,3:0:0:0:
402,93,19758,1,2,3:0:0:0:
238,130,19957,6,0,L|227:87,3,28.1250010728836,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
217,137,20355,1,0,3:0:0:0:
198,146,20454,1,0,3:0:0:0:
177,154,20553,1,0,3:0:0:0:
158,163,20652,1,0,3:0:0:0:
139,172,20752,6,0,L|143:246,1,75,0|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,294,21149,2,0,P|260:281|223:283,1,75,10|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,373,21547,2,0,P|387:314|373:242,1,150,2|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,243,22142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
497,350,22341,5,2,3:0:0:0:
497,350,22540,2,0,L|492:275,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,160,22937,2,0,P|435:126|464:103,1,75,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
388,248,23335,2,0,P|334:198|335:125,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,33,23931,5,0,3:0:0:0:
464,102,24129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,125,24328,2,0,P|305:103|287:70,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,169,24725,2,0,P|352:212|281:195,1,150,2|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,195,25321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,351,25520,5,2,3:0:0:0:
263,300,25719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,351,25918,1,10,0:0:0:0:
77,300,26116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,189,26315,2,0,P|183:225|182:263,1,75,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
6,248,26712,1,10,0:0:0:0:
27,244,26812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,241,26911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,238,27010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,235,27109,6,0,L|85:141,1,75,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,252,27507,2,0,P|257:226|267:190,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,306,27904,2,0,P|209:346|281:334,1,150,2|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,334,28500,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,178,28699,5,2,3:0:0:0:
237,178,28898,2,0,L|230:252,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,141,29295,2,0,P|307:109|275:90,1,75,2|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
383,223,29692,2,0,P|423:163|411:91,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,9,30289,5,0,3:0:0:0:
275,90,30487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,89,30686,2,0,P|434:61|445:25,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,174,31083,2,0,P|409:203|478:177,1,150,2|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,89,31679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,154,31878,6,0,L|246:229,1,75,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,305,32275,2,0,L|337:229,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,202,32573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,174,32672,1,2,3:0:0:0:
246,228,32871,1,2,0:0:0:0:
425,277,33070,2,0,L|463:281,2,37.5,8|0|0,0:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:

Mr Business

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Mr Business 2017-09-26T03:28:07+00:00

From my Queue

Monodon Monoceros

•00:25:520 (1,2,1,2) - Flip these around on their X axis.

HC's Hard

• 00:06:248 - Players of this level would probably expect another half beat here.
• This is also pretty streamy for a low 3 star map, short repeating sliders are much safer, with doubles stacked on them beforehand if you want to retain difficulty

Sorry for the short mod, nothing blantantly wrong with the map. Good luck!

byd

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byd 2017-09-26T10:55:21+00:00

YelloJello wrote:
From my Queue

Monodon Monoceros

•00:25:520 (1,2,1,2) - Flip these around on their X axis. i think its fine

Sorry for the short mod, nothing blantantly wrong with the map. Good luck! ty for trying atleast xd

Vespirit

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Vespirit 2017-09-26T23:26:31+00:00

YelloJello wrote:
From my Queue

HC's Hard

• 00:06:248 - Players of this level would probably expect another half beat here. i think its better without in order to emphasis the following vocals
• This is also pretty streamy for a low 3 star map, short repeating sliders are much safer, with doubles stacked on them beforehand if you want to retain difficulty imo these fit the song much better, plus the song isnt that fast relatively so i think they are pretty manageable

Sorry for the short mod, nothing blantantly wrong with the map. Good luck!

Ty anyways

riffy

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riffy 2017-09-27T19:52:17+00:00

Qualified!

N0thingSpecial

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N0thingSpecial 2017-09-27T19:53:55+00:00

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

byd

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byd 2017-09-27T19:58:41+00:00

delete this mapper

Blan_C

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Blan_C 2017-09-27T20:06:56+00:00

bite you death wrote:
delete this mapper

+1

N0thingSpecial

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N0thingSpecial 2017-09-27T20:19:59+00:00

Delete osu

vipto

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vipto 2017-09-27T20:21:13+00:00

glad this is a thing, too bad the map looks all the same throughout and is basically a lower bpm copy of most maps we see today to a different song...

byd

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byd 2017-09-27T20:38:28+00:00

vipto wrote:
glad this is a thing, too bad the map looks all the same throughout and is basically a lower bpm copy of most maps we see today to a different song...

but this one is different

this one is 33 seconds

Trust

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Trust 2017-09-27T21:01:36+00:00

nevertheless grats

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2017-09-27T21:07:11+00:00

The ending cut

Ohwow

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Ohwow 2017-09-27T21:32:09+00:00

byd

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byd 2017-09-27T21:35:00+00:00

Trust wrote:
nevertheless grats

ty

Pachiru wrote:
The ending cut

had a better audio file, was corrupted, the end

Nowaie

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Nowaie 2017-09-27T21:58:53+00:00

Grats on ranking... this

xd

Myxo

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Myxo 2017-09-27T22:51:58+00:00

i didn't even know this song had a verse

Xinnoh

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Xinnoh 2017-09-27T23:14:20+00:00

oh no

byd

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byd 2017-09-27T23:22:30+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
oh no

oh yes

Aurele

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Aurele 2017-09-28T00:33:49+00:00

hi there!

I believe the offset if quite late. +13 would be better in this case.

Nice map overall. Good luck!

N0thingSpecial

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N0thingSpecial 2017-09-28T06:05:44+00:00

byd

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byd 2017-09-28T07:14:56+00:00

N0thingSpecial wrote:
<insert DQ mod>

please create more circle

Raiden

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Raiden 2017-09-28T07:39:57+00:00

confirming what Gabe said but the offset is early. Offset 100 (+10) works just fine to me

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byd 2017-09-28T07:45:05+00:00

Raiden wrote:
confirming what Gabe said but the offset is early. Offset 100 (+10) works just fine to me

edit: yeah ill change it, i'd like to change mp3, add video and fix a stack in top diff too so dq pls

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2017-09-28T11:13:32+00:00

as requested to fix offset and other stuff

byd

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byd 2017-09-28T11:30:47+00:00

video incoming

ZekeyHache

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ZekeyHache 2017-09-28T18:35:55+00:00

it's happening!!!!

NyarkoO

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NyarkoO 2017-09-28T18:36:20+00:00

ezek wrote:
it's happening!!!!

PogChamp man

byd

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byd 2017-09-28T18:37:03+00:00

ezek wrote:
it's happening!!!!

inb4 bad offset

Voli

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Voli 2017-09-28T20:12:36+00:00

ok, up again!

ok

2017-09-28 20:21 Voli: alright uhm
2017-09-28 20:21 Voli: did you talk to raidn etc
2017-09-28 20:21 Voli: i forgot
2017-09-28 20:21 bite you death: yea
2017-09-28 20:21 bite you death: raiden said timing was fine
2017-09-28 20:21 bite you death: i also checked video with ezek
2017-09-28 20:22 bite you death: he sent me version without audio
2017-09-28 20:22 bite you death: so it should be good
2017-09-28 20:22 bite you death: ill check with gave
2017-09-28 20:22 bite you death: gabe
2017-09-28 20:22 bite you death: if hes onlnie
2017-09-28 20:22 Voli: aha nice nice
2017-09-28 20:22 bite you death: he is not
2017-09-28 20:22 Voli: timing seems good to me noiw
2017-09-28 20:23 Voli: tbh
2017-09-28 20:23 bite you death: ye
2017-09-28 20:23 bite you death: same
2017-09-28 20:23 bite you death: maybe like 2 or 3 ms off
2017-09-28 20:23 bite you death: but its at 0
2017-09-28 20:23 bite you death: i cant lower it
2017-09-28 20:23 bite you death: cause it starts instantly
2017-09-28 20:26 Voli: set a preview point pls
2017-09-28 20:26 bite you death: i didnt?
2017-09-28 20:26 bite you death: its at the start
2017-09-28 20:26 Voli: yea haha you didnt
2017-09-28 20:26 bite you death: what diff
2017-09-28 20:26 Voli: wait hmm
2017-09-28 20:26 Voli: its saying invalid preview point
2017-09-28 20:26 Voli: for some reason
2017-09-28 20:27 bite you death: aybe cause its before the timing point
2017-09-28 20:27 bite you death: cause osu
2017-09-28 20:27 Voli: yea
2017-09-28 20:27 bite you death: what diff is it
2017-09-28 20:27 bite you death: or just the set?
2017-09-28 20:27 Voli: all
2017-09-28 20:27 bite you death: hmm
2017-09-28 20:27 bite you death: ill just change it
2017-09-28 20:27 Voli: hm
2017-09-28 20:27 bite you death: tempted to set it at 00:09:536 -
2017-09-28 20:28 bite you death: 00:21:009 -
2017-09-28 20:28 bite you death: is probably the best time
2017-09-28 20:28 bite you death: to put it
2017-09-28 20:28 Voli: yeah that might be good
2017-09-28 20:28 Voli: i'd do that
2017-09-28 20:28 bite you death: i can set it on 1/8 right
2017-09-28 20:28 bite you death: as long as its snapped
2017-09-28 20:28 Voli: yep
2017-09-28 20:28 bite you death: kk
2017-09-28 20:29 bite you death: update time
2017-09-28 20:29 bite you death: updated
2017-09-28 20:30 Voli: you put it everywhere ya?
2017-09-28 20:30 bite you death: each diff, check for urself
2017-09-28 20:30 bite you death: lemme check hsing
2017-09-28 20:30 bite you death: just incase
2017-09-28 20:30 Voli: also
2017-09-28 20:31 bite you death: ?
2017-09-28 20:31 Voli: tickrate on top diff 2 intentionally?
2017-09-28 20:31 bite you death: yeah, bakari told me to
2017-09-28 20:31 Voli: alright
2017-09-28 20:31 bite you death: ill check hs real quick
2017-09-28 20:32 Voli: 00:32:980 (1) -
2017-09-28 20:32 00:32:980 (4) - *
2017-09-28 20:32 Voli: nc on this note to be consistent?
2017-09-28 20:32 Voli: you use nc on every vocal there
2017-09-28 20:32 bite you death: hm
2017-09-28 20:33 bite you death: last note
2017-09-28 20:33 bite you death: well
2017-09-28 20:33 bite you death: last few notes
2017-09-28 20:33 bite you death: nc in the middle of that stream would look weird
2017-09-28 20:34 Voli: actually
2017-09-28 20:34 Voli: https://voli.s-ul.eu/J7wKpzDv.png
2017-09-28 20:34 Voli: maybe you'd like something like this?
2017-09-28 20:34 bite you death: hmm
2017-09-28 20:34 Voli: as the first two notes are notably less intense
2017-09-28 20:35 Voli: i'm just looking for a way to make it follow the same structure as the vocal pattern before
2017-09-28 20:35 bite you death: i could try that
2017-09-28 20:35 bite you death: exporting incase its badf
2017-09-28 20:36 bite you death: hm
2017-09-28 20:37 bite you death: i think its fine as it is
2017-09-28 20:38 bite you death: cause it wouldnt fit with that stream
2017-09-28 20:38 bite you death: im gonna give 00:26:622 (2) - a little curve tho
2017-09-28 20:40 bite you death: update and take a look
2017-09-28 20:40 Voli: didnt it before?
2017-09-28 20:40 Voli: i dont retmember?
2017-09-28 20:40 bite you death: no
2017-09-28 20:41 bite you death: it was straight
2017-09-28 20:41 Voli: remember*
2017-09-28 20:41 bite you death: just flat
2017-09-28 20:41 Voli: ah
2017-09-28 20:41 Voli: yea then this is better
2017-09-28 20:41 bite you death: is this curve good enough?
2017-09-28 20:41 Voli: yea sure
2017-09-28 20:41 bite you death: kk
2017-09-28 20:42 bite you death: wait
2017-09-28 20:42 bite you death: i found a hitsound inconsistencyt
2017-09-28 20:42 Voli: xD
2017-09-28 20:42 bite you death: or idk
2017-09-28 20:42 bite you death: but top 2 diffs have whistles on ending
2017-09-28 20:43 bite you death: others dont
2017-09-28 20:43 Voli: thats not something i actively look for tbh
2017-09-28 20:43 Voli: but
2017-09-28 20:43 Voli: if you wanna change it go ahead
2017-09-28 20:43 bite you death: hm
2017-09-28 20:43 Voli: 00:19:073 (1,2) -
2017-09-28 20:44 Voli: do i have a dejavu
2017-09-28 20:44 Voli: or did we change this before
2017-09-28 20:44 Voli: or
2017-09-28 20:44 Voli: ohh maybe it was on another diff
2017-09-28 20:44 bite you death: i didnt change that at all
2017-09-28 20:44 bite you death: it's been there since day 1
2017-09-28 20:44 bite you death: xd
2017-09-28 20:44 Voli: ah nvm
2017-09-28 20:44 Voli: yeah it was on hc's diff
2017-09-28 20:44 bite you death: yea prob
2017-09-28 20:45 Voli: wwell
2017-09-28 20:45 Voli: for me its good to go
2017-09-28 20:45 Voli: tell me when ready
2017-09-28 20:45 Voli: brb tho gotta check someones gd for me
2017-09-28 20:46 bite you death: kk
2017-09-28 20:46 bite you death: ill just change the video offset
2017-09-28 20:46 bite you death: nvm i wont
2017-09-28 20:46 bite you death: lyrics are just off-sync
2017-09-28 20:46 bite you death: some are tooearly some too late
2017-09-28 20:49 bite you death: ok i made hs consistent
2017-09-28 20:49 bite you death: just making sure there'
2017-09-28 20:50 bite you death: s no more dqs

riffy

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riffy 2017-09-29T20:13:10+00:00

just don't let them touch your balls, round 2

Qualified!

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