Spagett wrote:

EASY

SPOILER

00:08:369 (2) - Should be a repeat slider. Fixed.
00:10:647 (1,2,1) - Should be just one whole slider, make it simple, though. Fixed.
00:19:761 (1,2,3,4,5) - Should have sliders and circles in the same order, that can throw beginners off 00:13:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fixed.
00:49:571 (4) - Should have circle where white tick in slider is (00:49:761), and a new slider should start where 4 ends to where 1 begins. Fixed.
01:11:406 (1,2,3,4) - Should be all sliders, like 01:05:331 (1,2,3,4) - is. Fixed.
01:17:482 (5) - is mapped to lyrics, so when you map 01:20:521 (3,4) - , it should be the same. We're talking about beginners, don't want to throw them off
^^ Fixed.
1:24:888 A spinner should go here, and replace the slider inside of it. Fixed.

NORMAL

SPOILER

00:09:318 (3) - end this on blue tick Fixed.
00:09:698 (4) - end this on blue tick Fixed.
00:10:268 (1) - start on blue tick No, blue tick (start) in normal :/
00:12:926 (1) - have this slider repeat starting on the first red tick inside(00:13:116) to the closest red tick (00:13:496) Fixed.
00:52:230 (5,6) - have a slider replace five, and have the slider go to where 6 begins, then have a circle for the slider end of 6 to replace that. Fixed.

I'm stopping here. The mapping is fine, you're good on that, it's just the flow of it that needs improvement. If you notice a similar point in the song that you've already mapped, don't be afraid to copy and paste it, as long as you make slider shapes different and move circle around accordingly, it'll flow significantly better. Great Mapping.
(P.S.) I would've called "Expert" "FOUR DIMENSIONS", but that's just a personal preference.

Chewy-san wrote:

From my queue

Expert

00:14:445 (3,4) - imo this would flow better http://prntscr.com/ag8lio Fixed.
00:15:774 (2,3) - imo this would flow better http://prntscr.com/ag8miz Fixed.
00:18:622 (5) - this looks okay, but this looks better http://prntscr.com/ag8muv Fixed.
00:18:622 (5,6) - imo this would flow better http://prntscr.com/ag8n5s Fixed.
00:21:850 (2,3,4) - imo this would flow better http://prntscr.com/ag8nd5 Fixed.
00:25:647 (3,4,1) - move this over right http://prntscr.com/ag8o2v Fixed.
00:30:394 (1,2) - imo this would flow better http://prntscr.com/ag8ohf Fixed.
00:32:293 (2,3,4) - move this down http://prntscr.com/ag8oqj Fixed.
00:33:432 (1) - this would be better if it was 1/1 Nop, I think it follows better the rhythm.
00:34:572 (4) - move it closer to 00:34:192 (3) - http://prntscr.com/ag8p1j Nop.
00:35:711 (3) - this would be better if it was 1/1 Nop.
00:39:508 (1) - ctrl+g Nop.
00:41:027 (1) - this would be better if it was 1/1 Nop.
00:41:787 (4) - this would be better if it was 1/1 Fixed.
00:42:546 (1) - ^ Nop.
00:44:065 (1) - ^^ Nop.
00:44:635 (2,3,4) - imo this would flow better http://prntscr.com/ag8pv4 Fixed.
00:47:483 (2) - this would be better if it was 1/1 Fixed.
00:47:863 (3) - make a 1/2 circle Fixed.
00:54:318 (5) - ctrl+g Fixed.
01:03:432 (4) - ctrl+g Fixed.
01:26:597 (1) - move this up a little Fixed.

END OF MOD

KDS PLZ Obvious~

• [Expert]
  test play

1. plz change to ar9 since it's only 158 BPM, this bpm is not fit with ar9.4
2. 00:09:318 (4) - NC
3. 00:38:369 (2,4) - not good blanket
4. 00:47:483 (2,3) - i would change this to 2 1/2 slider since it seems like you are mapping with the vocal
5. 00:52:420 (3,4,5) - a little bit overmapping imo, triplet just doesnt fit the music at all and the music doesnt sound like there should be a triplet either
6. 01:23:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - here should be a nice stream not triplet lol

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

From my queue

• [Expert]
  test play

1. plz change to ar9 since it's only 158 BPM, this bpm is not fit with ar9.4
2. 00:09:318 (4) - NC
3. 00:38:369 (2,4) - not good blanket
4. 00:47:483 (2,3) - i would change this to 2 1/2 slider since it seems like you are mapping with the vocal
5. 00:52:420 (3,4,5) - a little bit overmapping imo, triplet just doesnt fit the music at all and the music doesnt sound like there should be a triplet either
6. 01:23:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - here should be a nice stream not triplet lol

GL~

WhozChaos wrote:

[Easy]
00:49:572 - instead of a short slider keep extending the slider before ending it at 00:49:761 (4) - or you can bounce like this Fixed.
01:11:406 (1) - End not snapped Fixed.
[Normal]
00:08:559 (2) - I don't hear anything here? Fixed.
add a 1/2 slider here 00:08:749 (2) - Fixed.
00:12:166 (5) - I may be deaf but I don't hear anything here as well remove note deaf xD
[Hard]
Couldn't Find Anything Nice! Thanks~

1. No deben de haber elementos en el folder que no están siendo usados: esto es para reducir el peso del folder a la hora que los jugadores descarguen tu mapa. Por lo tanto procura eliminar soft-hitclap13.wav y World.png respectivamente.
2. Todas las lineas verdes deben estar debidabemente snapeadas a la línea de tiempo esto es para evitar posibles errores en el futuro con el efecto de hitsound que hayas utilizado. De esta manera, mueve 00:11:032 - para aquí 00:11:027 - para arreglar esto.
   Nota: Debes de aplicar esto en todas las dificultades.
3. No sé si soy yo pero el mp3 está cortado en una parte muy rara creando un punto incómodo una vez terminan de clickear el último objeto. Sería bueno que recortaras el mp3 en esa parte para reducir su volumen porque honestamente me dejó esperando por más. XD

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hola, desde #modreqs :3/ Vengo a hacer un comentario pequeño de las cosas que deberías evitar antes de que llamer a un BN.

[General]

1. No deben de haber elementos en el folder que no están siendo usados: esto es para reducir el peso del folder a la hora que los jugadores descarguen tu mapa. Por lo tanto procura eliminar soft-hitclap13.wav y World.png respectivamente. Si, esto era de antes de remapear todas las dificultades, usaba 13 y la otra bg era de expert, pero decidí dejarlo igual, gracias por recordármelo.
2. Todas las lineas verdes deben estar debidabemente snapeadas a la línea de tiempo esto es para evitar posibles errores en el futuro con el efecto de hitsound que hayas utilizado. De esta manera, mueve 00:11:032 - para aquí 00:11:027 - para arreglar esto.
   Nota: Debes de aplicar esto en todas las dificultades. Cambié el offset muchas veces, creo que esto era normal que pase creo :'c
3. No sé si soy yo pero el mp3 está cortado en una parte muy rara creando un punto incómodo una vez terminan de clickear el último objeto. Sería bueno que recortaras el mp3 en esa parte para reducir su volumen porque honestamente me dejó esperando por más. XD Creo que podría cambiar de short size a tv size, es lo mismo pero termina en 01:25:647 -

Good luck!

Atmino wrote:

There's a big issue with the offset on the expert diff, I thought it was me, but not. Great map btw

Siiilver wrote:

Atmino wrote:

There's a big issue with the offset on the expert diff, I thought it was me, but not. Great map btw

Lol, I will check, Thanks~

Atmino wrote:

My bad, I think I was drunk , everything is ok ^^

Deadmadeon wrote:

I really want that this song gets ranked so i gave you a star

Siiilver wrote:

Deadmadeon wrote:

I really want that this song gets ranked so i gave you a star

Oh, Thanks <3
Trataré de insistir mas en #modreqs por BN xD

Deadmadeon wrote:

haz un foro de M4M :S a mi me sirvio harto :3

CyberX wrote:

Here we go my mod
note that everythings here is just my opinons
what a coincidence, me and Kuro actually doing the same project to https://osu.ppy.sh/b/883063
you can mod if you want

Insane

OD too much for this diff, i prefer lower it
the AR tho, please 9 better
00:12:486 (1) - why NC? I think it's okay 00:11:346 (5,9,13) - NC should be here instead of there Fixed.
00:23:498 (5,9,13) - NC Fixed.
00:34:892 (4,5) - it feels weird to be clickable
00:35:651 (2) - triplet Fixed.
00:38:689 (2,3) - flow not good, and better the blanket Fixed.
00:47:138 (6,7,8) - no sound I think it's okay
00:59:954 (5,9,13) - NC Fixed.
01:01:094 (1,2) - you decided to follow vocal here, and then you suddenly follow drum here 01:01:854 (3,4,5,6,7) - feel weird Not follow vocal.
01:03:373 (3,4,5) - make the spaceing consistent Fixed.
01:06:411 (3) - end at blue tick Fixed.
01:26:157 - still a sound here, dont ignore Fixed.

Expert

00:10:967 (1) - same suggestion NC with the Insane diff Fixed.
00:13:911 (7) - unnecessary beat I think it's okay
00:17:043 (1,2,3) - this feels pushy, try ctrl + g at (2) and reposition (3) to somewhere arround x:164 y:240 Fixed.
00:22:265 - missing note Fixed.
00:23:119 (1,2,3) - stream better than kickslider I think it's okay
00:41:727 (2,3,4) - make the spaceing consistent Fixed.
01:02:328 (6) - unnecessary beat I think it's okay

overall your map need more improvement at designing the pattern.

Thanks in advance for choosing my ModQ
Come again next time
Good Luck with your map

Acnos wrote:

Por que todavia no aprueban este beatmap, estoy esperando que lo aprueben hace meses

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Hi ~

[General]
01:14:765 - end of kiai time must be here Nah, I think it's fine.

[Easy]
00:07:929 - finish Fixed.
00:08:309 (1) - clap? I don't see it necessary.
00:08:689 (2) - ^ ^
00:10:208 (3) - ^ ^
00:21:600 (4) - ^ No, but I put in 00:21:221 (3) and 00:22:740 (5) Thanks~
00:38:309 (1) - finish Fixed.

[Normal]
00:07:929 (1) - finish Fixed.
00:08:689 (2) - clap Same as Easy
00:09:069 (2) - ^ ^
00:10:588 (1) - ^ ^
00:15:524 (1) - remove finish Okay
00:21:600 (1) - ^ ^
00:29:575 (2) - clap ;w;
00:38:309 (1) - finish Fixed.
01:26:537 (3) - ^ ~

[Hard]
00:07:929 (1) - finish Fixed.
00:59:575 (1) - ^ ^
01:01:094 (1) - ^ ^
01:01:379 (1) - ^ ^
01:20:841 (1) - ^ ^
01:23:879 (1) - ^ ^
01:26:537 (3) - ^ ^

[Insane]
00:23:119 (1) - finish Fixed.
00:27:676 (1) - remove finish ^
00:38:309 (1) - finish ^
00:59:575 (1) - ^ ^
01:01:094 (1) - ^ ^
01:01:379 (1) - ^ ^
01:17:803 (1) - ^ Nah.
01:20:841 (1) - ^ Fixed.
01:23:879 (1) - ^ ^

GL ~
and if you dont mind please mod my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/445845 Thanks ~

Shad0w1and wrote:

will post my diff here and might give a mod later Okay~

BG

http://puu.sh/pqOKM/aa5aae2450.png

Video

http://puu.sh/pqQMN/8f26355f61.flv

Added, really thanks :3
uhm

xD

• 
  00:11:537 (5,6,1) - 后面连打变距的话这里DS大点怎么样
  00:13:246 (1) - 感觉三连更爽
  00:19:702 (3,4,5) - 这个......无法形容
  00:51:790 (6,7,1) - 有点几把
  01:19:702 (3,4,5,6) - 体感不怎么适合短滑条
  01:26:347 (1) - 拉到大白线？（

Agatsu wrote:

hi
nm from my q

• [Insane]

1. 00:22:645 - add note
2. 00:26:442 - ^
3. 00:28:626 - make clickable Okay.
4. 00:29:480 - add note
5. 00:34:797 - ^
6. 00:35:556 - ^
7. 00:46:569 - ^
8. 00:47:708 - ^

sorry for short shit mod

Chalwa wrote:

Hello!!! M4M4M4M4M from my queue

Colours legend

black - normal suggest
pink - unrankable
[/color]

General

1. I think in Artist you may put スクリーンモード. Source: click!
2. Make a video offset in Shad0w1and diff like in other diffs Okay -w-

Easy

RHYTHM:

1. All is fine

LOOK AND FLOW:

1. 00:20:841 (2) - You can make a little right curve here for better flow from 00:20:081 (1). Also it will look better with curved 00:21:980 (4) slider Fixed.
2. 00:29:955 (2,3) - Make here something like this for better look? Fixed.
3. 00:48:943 (3) - Make it curved and put a slidernode to 242/270 for make this slider to natural movement? Something very similar.
4. 01:08:689 (1) - Here my suggetsion is Ctrl + J this and move to 176/102. Like in Snickers... Better? Better! I will consider it~

Normal

RHYTHM:

1. 00:17:613 - Put a note here, cause you put it a combo before and two combos after, so it's better consistency if you put note here Different sounds.
2. Rest is good

LOOK AND FLOW:

1. 00:23:879 (3) - Here you can delete a slider node for better look in this combo, cause it's only one a little curved slider. Fixed.
2. 01:24:638 (3) - Make this two sliders both same? It looks nicer then. two?

Hard

RHYTHM:

1. 00:46:186 - You can add note here, cause you put it at 00:40:113 (2) and this parts of song hears simmiliar Vocal.
2. 01:19:229 - Same like above. You can put a note here, cause you put it before in simmiliar part of song Vocal.

LOOK AND FLOW:

1. 00:16:664 (4) - I think you can Ctrl + H this slider, cause you didn't make flow like this before in this part Fixed.
2. 01:01:094 (1,2) - Make this two parallel? Put end of second slider at 24/276 and move this slider a little down Something very similar.

Insane

RHYTHM:

1. 00:12:107 (4) - I think you can make a little stream here, cause it's Insane diff and I personally like streams (NAZI ) I don't want to put too many streams, because there is the last difficulty.
2. 00:42:012 - I think you can put a note here for makes it a little less confusing Okay~
3. 00:43:531 - Same like above ^
4. 01:20:651 (5) - Imo better consistency will be if you make here 1/4 slider. Thats hears better! maybe...

LOOK AND FLOW:

1. 01:04:132 (1) - Make this slider straight, cause you have many straight sliders in this part and not many little curved sliders Fixed.
2. 01:25:398 (1) - I think you can Ctrl + H this slider. From 01:16:284 (1) you have always something like circular flow. This slider is once when I can make a something like cursor-dance. Fixed.

END!
It's very well map. I hope to see it ranked. Also I'll mod Shad0w1and's diff in another post, cause now i'm a little busy irl. Okay~
GOOD LUCK!!!

Pentori wrote:

[Shad0w1and]
Shad0w1and's Shadowland -> no, think of something else It is surely acceptable. additionally the word Shadowland = Phantom world according to the dictionary. Would like to keep unless you have other concerns about it.

00:09:638 (2,3,4,5) - the music presents something else here since there r duplets. why not do sth like http://puu.sh/ssBeQ/c66ed6f39f.jpg I prefer current.
00:12:866 (2) - what is this following? ok
00:12:486 (1,2) - u should also silence ur slider ends I do not like to silence slider ends at most time. slienced sliderends always seem confusing to me.
00:26:157 (1) - u could place this better to fit with the groove of 00:25:778 (1)
00:57:297 (3,4,5) - restack this
01:02:613 (1,2) - visually equal spacing pls, probably just move this down a bit
01:07:455 - why clap? there is no beat to represent here
01:14:385 - remove the whistle here ^ I can hear drums, they are weak but surely exist.
01:24:164 (1) - i dont think u need nc. nc'ing this implies that it starts on a white tick This will help a lot on reading because it hint for the track change from vocal to drum.

call me back!

Azrael_- wrote:

Hazu- wrote:

If you want, but the only thing I can do is add it to the description since the map is about to be ranked.
Sorry >_<

Ok no matter, put it as an external map

Thanks!!!

1. 01:00:335 (2) - This slider can be blanket-d I guess
2. 01:05:651 (1) - https://puu.sh/sPYbV/ed2122face.png Why not trying something like that?
3. 01:17:043 (3) - Think you can blanket this slider

1. 00:37:550 - Why not adding a note here? o/
2. 01:20:841 (1,2) - https://puu.sh/sPYmV/8c292cdc5c.png Probably?

1. 00:21:600 (1) - https://puu.sh/sPYre/6756a62ea8.png Moving a bit the red anchor?

Pachiru wrote:

[Easy]

1. 01:00:335 (2) - This slider can be blanket-d I guess Ok
2. 01:05:651 (1) - https://puu.sh/sPYbV/ed2122face.png Why not trying something like that? I want to have the red anchor in the "clap"
3. 01:17:043 (3) - Think you can blanket this slider Okay.

[Normal]

1. 00:37:550 - Why not adding a note here? o/ No follow vocals.
2. 01:20:841 (1,2) - https://puu.sh/sPYmV/8c292cdc5c.png Probably? I like how it is now.

[Hard]

1. 00:21:600 (1) - https://puu.sh/sPYre/6756a62ea8.png Moving a bit the red anchor? I don't like that shape very much xd

Hope it will help you at least a little :c
The map and the song are very nice, so go for rank!

• 00:19:702 (3,4,5) - yes its questionable
  00:51:790 (6,7,1) - its feel really bad if completely covered
  00:55:683 (4) - i would prefer remove, rhythm will more nature
  01:05:936 (3) - i think you placed wrong clap hitsound at the slider head
  01:04:132 (1) - 01:08:689 (1) - 01:10:208 (1) - 01:14:765 (1) - 01:17:803 (1) - 01:20:841 (1) - i dont get the idea of hitsounding, clap placed on 3/4 end is sounds too weird
  01:14:765 - to 01:19:132 - 豐富一下節奏 有的1/2部份確實感覺有點空
  01:24:164 (1) - imo it dont need to nc, it will easy to misread the stream

Sonnyc wrote:

Shadowland.
00:14:575 (3) - Since the major instrument you are following starts at 00:14:670, I recommend you removing this object for better emphasis.
00:19:702 (3,4,5) - Not really a bad gimmick, but since the usage wasn't so consistent, just using as a regular triple would be better in structures.
00:38:594 (2,3) - Similar opinion with above. The concept itself isn't really bad, but if you see other similar parts of the song which are 00:40:113 (2,3) - 00:41:632 (2,3) - 00:44:670 (2,3), you were mostly using a 1/4 stack. Being consistent to that will help your structures. partially agree, but some beats are missing at first section. I changed a bit but still it is different from the second section.
00:51:790 (6,7,1) - Nearly 100% of the slider path is hidden with the circles. This hardly indicates (1) to be a slider intuitively, which I do not consider rankable.
00:56:062 (8,9,1) - Not as severe as above, but still this is way better if avoidable. This also doesn't properly indicate the sliderpath. this one is ok
Popping over some unrankble gimmicks on shadowland's diff in my eyes.
If all issues are cleared, feel free to call me back. The mapset is fine enough.

saying that your option makes more sense after my examples will mean you just don't care

MrSergio wrote:

Shad0w1and's Colors (when someone says "this were your true colors, huh?" it means like "this was your true self, right?". It's also linked to the title of the anime: "Myriads of Colors")
^ I really like this name, but it looks a lot like the Rizia's mapset (ending), so I prefer another one.

Shad0w1and's World (it has less impact but it is still relevant to anime and diff)
^ This was the name of my previous "Extra" lol

Shad0w1and's Insane/Extra/Another (classic and maybe boring, but it makes much more sense the current one in any case)
^ I prefer a different diff name.

Shad0w1and's Souzou (from japanese, it means "imagination" and considering the anime and what it revolves around, it still fits)
^ I don't like it very much.


This is what I could think in around 10 minutes of reasoning.
Imo all these options are way more fitting than "shadowland" (you're giving me a dictionary entry while I'm actually considering the anime and the title of things related to it to make some sense. Which is more related in your opinion? saying that your option makes more sense after my examples will mean you just don't care at this point btw, since it's clear which options make more sense now)

Monstrata wrote:

Nothing wrong with Shadowland's Shadowland haha. We have Blue Dragon's Blue Dragon anyways lol.

Sonnyc wrote:

Monstrata wrote:

Nothing wrong with Shadowland's Shadowland haha. We have Blue Dragon's Blue Dragon anyways lol.

The thing is, the title of the song was a blue dragon overthere while this isn't the one with 109% relationship. A different case.

Irohas wrote:

gratz for your second, hazu!!

Sotarks wrote:

naked!

Sotarks wrote:

naked!

alacat wrote:

Hey, Did you check the official soundtrack ?



As you can see track 32, you should add "(TV Ver.)" on the title.

Please fix the title/unicode title : Naked Dive (TV Ver.)

poke me after change it for re-qualify.

Link
http://tsutaya.tsite.jp/item/music/PTA0000P8CH4
http://www.billboard-japan.com/goods/detail/515406

alacat wrote:

ok, Back