I mostly agree with what Bakari and Sonnyc said, too. Will mention some points that bother me the most:
The map has a lot of gimmicks that are used only once or twice, like 00:19:702 (3,4,5) - , or the overlapping patterns like 00:51:790 (6,7,1) - , that feel a bit forced in. You can make the gimmicks feel less random by using them more often to represent something specific in the music.
I also agree with Bakari about the use of spaced streams. They seem to be used to complement the patterns more than the intensity of the music, which is fine to a certain extent, but here it's weird that the kiai has significantly easier patterns than the sections before.
01:04:892 (3) - This slider should have only one repeat, to represent the music better. It would also be more intuitive to read.
01:05:651 (1,2,3,4) - This played pretty unintuitively because I expected a 1/4 gap between 01:05:936 (3,4) - . Reversing 01:05:936 (3) - and reducing the spacing to (4) would help here.
01:23:879 (1,1) - This jump puts strong emphasis on the blue tick note, while the stronger beat would be 01:24:259 (2) - . Don't get me wrong, I understand the concept of having 1/4-jumps after sliders to keep the player in constant movement, however it mainly works for triplets like 01:22:740 (3,4,5) - and many others in this map. For streams it is rather unintuitive because it's not clear if the stream will start on the blue or white tick.
The map has a lot of gimmicks that are used only once or twice, like 00:19:702 (3,4,5) - , or the overlapping patterns like 00:51:790 (6,7,1) - , that feel a bit forced in. You can make the gimmicks feel less random by using them more often to represent something specific in the music.
I also agree with Bakari about the use of spaced streams. They seem to be used to complement the patterns more than the intensity of the music, which is fine to a certain extent, but here it's weird that the kiai has significantly easier patterns than the sections before.
01:04:892 (3) - This slider should have only one repeat, to represent the music better. It would also be more intuitive to read.
01:05:651 (1,2,3,4) - This played pretty unintuitively because I expected a 1/4 gap between 01:05:936 (3,4) - . Reversing 01:05:936 (3) - and reducing the spacing to (4) would help here.
01:23:879 (1,1) - This jump puts strong emphasis on the blue tick note, while the stronger beat would be 01:24:259 (2) - . Don't get me wrong, I understand the concept of having 1/4-jumps after sliders to keep the player in constant movement, however it mainly works for triplets like 01:22:740 (3,4,5) - and many others in this map. For streams it is rather unintuitive because it's not clear if the stream will start on the blue or white tick.
partially agree, but some beats are missing at first section. I changed a bit but still it is different from the second section.