This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, April 04, 2017 at 5:18:37 AM

Artist: Aoba Ringo
Title: Innocence
Source: 幻創のイデア～Oratorio Phantasm Historia～
Tags: TyrantsEye2014 Gensou no Idea 3rdeye まもも mamomo visual novel hentai game eroge opening short ver misaka 10032 KantanDez
BPM: 187
Filesize: 19766kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:

1. Extra (5.27 stars, 483 notes)
2. Hard (2.9 stars, 295 notes)
3. Insane (4.31 stars, 404 notes)
4. KantanDez's Easy (1.63 stars, 139 notes)
5. Normal (2.07 stars, 169 notes)
6. Tyrant's Light Insane (3.94 stars, 368 notes)

Download: Aoba Ringo - Innocence
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Hi ~ from #Modreq
I like this song :3

minimod
Normal

• pretty good diff XD

1. 00:36:000 (3) - DS
   
   
2. 01:28:941 (4,1) - Blanket
   
   
3. 01:34:716 (1) - change NC 01:33:754 (4) ( Japanese Vocal say 'hu' :3 )

Hard

1. 00:17:390 (1) - delete finish ?
2. 00:30:224 (1) - ^
3. 00:32:791 (1) - ^
   
4. 00:45:786 (1) - remove NC :3
   
5. 01:13:460 (3) - overrap ? delete object is better imo :3

Insane

1. 01:54:128 (2,3,4,5,6) - Change pattern
   its my idea :3
   

fight ~ XD

A s h e m u wrote:

Hi ~ from #Modreq
I like this song :3

minimod
Normal

• pretty good diff XD ty xD

1. 00:36:000 (3) - DS fixed
   
   
2. 01:28:941 (4,1) - Blanket fixed??
   
   
3. 01:34:716 (1) - change NC 01:33:754 (4) ( Japanese Vocal say 'hu' :3 ) fixed

Hard

1. 00:17:390 (1) - delete finish ? fixed
2. 00:30:224 (1) - ^ fixed
3. 00:32:791 (1) - ^ fixed
   
4. 00:45:786 (1) - remove NC :3
   
5. 01:13:460 (3) - overrap ? delete object is better imo :3 fixed

Insane

1. 01:54:128 (2,3,4,5,6) - Change pattern
   its my idea :3
   fixed

fight ~ XD

thanks for mod!

Hellooo, #modreqs




Ok thats it for me, i really liked the extra difficulty, keep it up! hopew i could help you with my mod in any way
Good Luck and happy mapping!:)

Phyloukz wrote:

Hellooo, #modreqs

extra

00:12:898 (3,4) - at first i played this i thought it is 1/4 snapped because the 1/2 DS before was way higher. i'd increase the DS to like 1.5-1.6 fixed
00:33:353 - on that circle isnt a sound in the music fixed
00:33:513 - here is a sound fixed
00:44:342 (1,3) - the sliderhead of each one has the same intensity of sound and vocal, so they are pretty similar. but both have different DS. 00:44:663 (2,3) - has only 1.19 and 00:44:182 (7,1) - has 2.3 DS. i think you should make both somehwat similar no changes here
00:45:305 (5,2) - here you use similar DS and its the same thing as above ^same
01:15:144 (1,2,3,4) - this circular flow built up by 2 sliders is really awkward for the player, most likely it ends up sliderbreaking on 01:15:465 (2) - fixed
01:16:107 (5,1) - i think here it is ok because ysou have a sharp pleasant angle to 01:16:748 (2) -
01:30:385 (7,1) - this is also a flow thing: 01:28:781 (6,7,1,2,3) - this long part is flowing circular clockwise but 01:30:385 (7,1) - is anticlockwise and has a sharp angle which both doesnt fit to the part before. this sudden movement change feels really awkward to play and the player isnt expecting such a change in flow i hope this fixes it cause it looks fine to me but if not ill change it bakc
01:38:246 (1) - maybe make this slider "balanced" or "symmetric" i tihnk you know what i mean (sliderart). like 01:53:647 (1) - ??? :v
01:53:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - perosnally dislike this overlap... looks pretty random because you dont use such at any other spot no changes here
01:55:572 (5,6) - maybe make them vertical instead of horizontal because the kicksliders before are already horizontal, that way you have a neat way to make them more seperated (because obviously they are different) fixed

normal

00:34:075 (1,2) - the palyer expects this to be 1/1 snapped because before you stacked all circle + slider 1/1 combinations but the slider is on the next red tick. so this would cause sldierbreaking in worst case but it is confusing for a new player in any way (especially because its your lowest diff, so for ultra newbies). and then you use it for 1/1 again at 00:38:888 (3,1) - so yeah... fixed
00:36:642 (1,2) - the reverse arrow shouldnt be overlapped with anything in every case in low difficulty fixed
00:46:909 (1,2) - this is even unrankable because the reverse arrow is fully covered fixed
00:53:005 (1,1) - you should have at least 2 beats space between spinnerend and next object, currently you have just 1 beat space fixed
00:57:497 (4,1) - bad flow, as you see the slider tends rather to the reverse arrow than to the sldierhead which shouldnt be the case because newbies follow the most pleasant movements fixed
01:04:716 (3,1) - you should decide whether you use stackings for 1/1 beats or 1/2 beats, id recommend you to make it for 1/1 beats and make 1.0 DS here at 1/2 beats. fixed
01:21:240 (2) - not quite sure if this is out of playfield area because the head and tail are in the playfield area but the sldierpath clearly isnt. AiMod didnt say anything so i think its fine

Ok thats it for me, i really liked the extra difficulty, keep it up! hopew i could help you with my mod in any way
Good Luck and happy mapping!:)

Thanks for mod!

Insane


00:18:032 (4) - i think this slider should face the oposite direction ( ctrl + H ) cuz its more comfortable

00:57:818 (4) - you shhould place this circle x:264 y:132 becouse same as perveus. More comfortable

00:59:743 (1) - this slider dosent go with the flow and i think it should repeat as previus sliders > 00:59:422 (6,1)

01:23:807 (3) - ( ctrl + H & crtl + J ) and then put it back to its original location. Becouse it dosent match very well and this change is better than original tbh.

01:43:379 (1,2) - the same issue!

00:40:813 (1,2,3) - here could be 3 2/4 sliders insted of 1 4/4 slider and 1 circle. Becouse it sounds better and its pretty confiusing with that circle.

01:01:989 (5) - but that circle at x:400 y:204 cuz again it is more comfortable.


- pls dont kill me.

kappaToast wrote:

Insane


00:18:032 (4) - i think this slider should face the oposite direction ( ctrl + H ) cuz its more comfortable i dont think so :/

00:57:818 (4) - you shhould place this circle x:264 y:132 becouse same as perveus. More comfortable fixed flow

00:59:743 (1) - this slider dosent go with the flow and i think it should repeat as previus sliders > 00:59:422 (6,1) fixed

01:23:807 (3) - ( ctrl + H & crtl + J ) and then put it back to its original location. Becouse it dosent match very well and this change is better than original tbh. i think ctrl + G itself fixes it

01:43:379 (1,2) - the same issue! same as above. i ctrl g 01:43:861 (2,3) -

00:40:813 (1,2,3) - here could be 3 2/4 sliders insted of 1 4/4 slider and 1 circle. Becouse it sounds better and its pretty confiusing with that circle. it sounds fine as it is

01:01:989 (5) - but that circle at x:400 y:204 cuz again it is more comfortable. got changed when i fixed the 00:59:743 (1) - flow


- pls dont kill me.

thanks for mod!

Yo o/
From #modreqs
This is my first mod, so don't expect anything professional



Sorry for the clumsy mod, good luck with the map

NM from my queue


[Normal]

Not sure but I feel like AR 5 and OD 5 are a bit high for the lowest diff. Maybe use 4 instead?

Your NCs are bit uneven here. I think you should just go for NC every 2 down beats most of the time like here 00:18:674 (1,2,3,4) - as NC every 2 sliders isn't really good imo.
00:54:609 (1) - Your rhythm is really inconsistent here. Instead of changing the clickable ticks with single circles (like this 00:55:893 (1,2) - ) maybe use
repeats + circle or just 2 circles to increase varierty instead of this. Changing the clickable tick for no reason is just confusing.

[Hard]

01:12:577 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This part is really intense. You should probably use more 1/2 rhythm here and less 1/1 to make it also feel more intense when playing.
01:33:112 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same here
01:45:946 (1,3) - You haven't really used overlaps like this anywhere else in the map so you should avoid it here too
01:54:930 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure about this. Might be a bit too hard to read for a hard

[Insane]

OD 8 is a bit high imo for a 4,4* Insane

00:17:390 (1,2) - 00:22:524 (1,2) - 00:27:658 (1,2) - I don't really like the 3/4s here as it skips the drum tick in the red tick and the sound isn't that strong anyway so I'd say your better of with 1/2 slider instead
00:37:123 (2,3) - Maybe slider first and then circle if you're following vocals?
00:41:134 (2) - circle and 1/2 slider instead? 1/1 doesn't really follow anything
00:44:342 - 00:54:609 I really like this part even more than the first part of the verse as this part has the vocals captured really well.
01:52:363 (1,2,3,4) - This part is really intense. It feels kinda lacking tho as 01:51:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - has a pretty much the same spacing.

I find the Insane a lot better than your Extra. It's more fun to play imo and it has better emphasis on specific notes rather than just 1/2 all the time.

[Extra]

Just my personal opinion but I think this part 00:34:075 - 00:54:609 Could benefit from calmer mapping and there are interesting rhythms on the vocals too so it would be better imo to map those instead of the constant 1/2 with triples sometimes and saves jumps to parts where it gets more intense like here 00:43:379 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 00:50:759 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - here.

00:53:005 (1,2,3,4,5) - The melody here is really intense you should map to it instead of vocals
01:54:930 (1,2,3,4) - Also I'm not really fan of this as it imo doesn't follow the rhythm too well

Won't go more in detail but I think you could use less 1/2 rhythms here even though it's an extra (I found the kiai part very nice tho )

All your diffs look really great wow. Wish I could make something like this.

rockrick wrote:

Yo o/
From #modreqs
This is my first mod, so don't expect anything professional

General

1. Check 'Widescreen Support' in Design Tab of Song Setup fixed
2. The offset seems a bit weird for me, try setting in to 12.227 and see if it's better moved -15 (Same as the ranked version)

Insane

1. 00:27:658 (1,2,3,4) This feels a bit too close fixed
2. 00:32:791 (1,2,3) - Rather than stacking 1 and 2, i'd make a jump that's not in a straight line with the three notes (1,2,3). The stack doesn't emphasize well this part
3. 00:56:855 (5,1) - 00:57:377 (2,3) - 00:57:978 (5,6) - In this part the music is a bit less calm, so I think the stacks don't emphasize enough here either. There are some more stack after this too. Putting some jumps or sliders (i'd prefer jump) in their place would do the trick. You can check each one individually and see if the stacks do fit or not :p fixed
4. 01:09:981 (1,2) - This movement is rather uncomfortable imo, I see that your map has a flow most of the time, but here it is kinda weird because the slider goes a bit too far away from the second note i ctrlg that by accident but yea good catch though
5. 01:54:930 (1,2,3,4,5) You could make this stream curved, it would look cooler imo no 'cause then it will be difference from the 2 previous slider which just sounds the same

Extra

1. 00:54:609 - Starting from here you could check the stacks like in the Insane diff no changes here. I think its fine compared to insane
2. 01:22:845 (1,2,3,4,1) - This flows really weirdly i dont think it is
3. 01:45:786 (11,12,1) - Maybe this curve at the end of the stream is a bit too intense. I'd make it a little more straight, because the slider already goes almost the opposite direction of the stream. It should try to follow the flow of the stream

Noice map

Sorry for the clumsy mod, good luck with the map

thanks for mod!

Metaku wrote:

NM from my queue


[Normal]

Not sure but I feel like AR 5 and OD 5 are a bit high for the lowest diff. Maybe use 4 instead? kept AR5 changed to OD4

Your NCs are bit uneven here. I think you should just go for NC every 2 down beats most of the time like here 00:18:674 (1,2,3,4) - as NC every 2 sliders isn't really good imo. all fixed
00:54:609 (1) - Your rhythm is really inconsistent here. Instead of changing the clickable ticks with single circles (like this 00:55:893 (1,2) - ) maybe use
repeats + circle or just 2 circles to increase varierty instead of this. Changing the clickable tick for no reason is just confusing.

[Hard]

01:12:577 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This part is really intense. You should probably use more 1/2 rhythm here and less 1/1 to make it also feel more intense when playing. fixed
01:33:112 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same here fixed
01:45:946 (1,3) - You haven't really used overlaps like this anywhere else in the map so you should avoid it here too fixed
01:54:930 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure about this. Might be a bit too hard to read for a hard i think its fine. better than hidden under the sliders i think

[Insane]

OD 8 is a bit high imo for a 4,4* Insane its not high its the average od every insane has tbh

00:17:390 (1,2) - 00:22:524 (1,2) - 00:27:658 (1,2) - I don't really like the 3/4s here as it skips the drum tick in the red tick and the sound isn't that strong anyway so I'd say your better of with 1/2 slider instead fixed
00:37:123 (2,3) - Maybe slider first and then circle if you're following vocals? fixed
00:41:134 (2) - circle and 1/2 slider instead? 1/1 doesn't really follow anything you can clearly hear it. Its the same as what im following with 00:42:081 (5,1) -
00:44:342 - 00:54:609 I really like this part even more than the first part of the verse as this part has the vocals captured really well. Thanks :d idk how i actually making these patterns tbh. may hand just keeps moving on its own when im mapping lol
01:52:363 (1,2,3,4) - This part is really intense. It feels kinda lacking tho as 01:51:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - has a pretty much the same spacing. made it like that is feels more insane'ish and the music is quite repetitive there and its kinda have some big spacings anyway

I find the Insane a lot better than your Extra. It's more fun to play imo and it has better emphasis on specific notes rather than just 1/2 all the time.

[Extra]

Just my personal opinion but I think this part 00:34:075 - 00:54:609 Could benefit from calmer mapping and there are interesting rhythms on the vocals too so it would be better imo to map those instead of the constant 1/2 with triples sometimes and saves jumps to parts where it gets more intense like here 00:43:379 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 00:50:759 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - here. no.. :s

00:53:005 (1,2,3,4,5) - The melody here is really intense you should map to it instead of vocals fixed
01:54:930 (1,2,3,4) - Also I'm not really fan of this as it imo doesn't follow the rhythm too well it kinda is its just too quiet but it is

Won't go more in detail but I think you could use less 1/2 rhythms here even though it's an extra (I found the kiai part very nice tho )

All your diffs look really great wow. Wish I could make something like this.

Thanks for mod!!

[Normal diff]

1. First of all, in Normal diff, try to avoid patterns using a beats that is not strong, because new players can't already hear such beats like small drums like you did here: 00:16:092 (1,2) - so since you're mapping from the begining with the "bip-bip" sound, why not doing a pattern like this, to follow the beats that you're mapping since the begining, the rhythm of this part would be: "slider-circle-slider" you see?
   Here is a screenshot to show you how to do this~ Link
   If you do this changes, don't forget to do it on those patterns: 00:21:225 (1,2) -
2. 00:37:589 (2) - Why not moving this slider a bit far from the slider (but still keep the distance snap), like this, to avoid the brutal jump for beginner in my opinion ! Like this: Link~
3. 00:44:327 (1) - Move this slider elsewhere to avoid the sliderend outside the grid. Don't forget to move the "1" note to keep the stacking !
4. 00:45:290 (2,1) - Ouch, I don't really like that overlap, why not moving this note 00:46:573 (3) - on this coordonates: x=40 / y= 184 and then move the slider 00:46:894 (1) - so this slider can to a perfect stack with this slider: 00:45:290 (2) - (there is too much word 'slider' inside my sentance, sorry! ;w; )
   Here is the link: Link
5. That's all for me. To be honest, the diff is really nice, but there is something that bother me a bit. The use of reverse slider. Sometimes it kind of break the rhythm of the map, so you should try to rework a bit some reverse sliders, because sometimes downbeats are clickable, and sometimes not. It's up to you boi, hope you will understand what i'm meaning ! pwp

Good luck for rank~

Pachiru wrote:

[Normal diff]

1. First of all, in Normal diff, try to avoid patterns using a beats that is not strong, because new players can't already hear such beats like small drums like you did here: 00:16:092 (1,2) - so since you're mapping from the begining with the "bip-bip" sound, why not doing a pattern like this, to follow the beats that you're mapping since the begining, the rhythm of this part would be: "slider-circle-slider" you see?
   Here is a screenshot to show you how to do this~ Link
   If you do this changes, don't forget to do it on those patterns: 00:21:225 (1,2) -
2. 00:37:589 (2) - Why not moving this slider a bit far from the slider (but still keep the distance snap), like this, to avoid the brutal jump for beginner in my opinion ! Like this: Link~
3. 00:44:327 (1) - Move this slider elsewhere to avoid the sliderend outside the grid. Don't forget to move the "1" note to keep the stacking !
4. 00:45:290 (2,1) - Ouch, I don't really like that overlap, why not moving this note 00:46:573 (3) - on this coordonates: x=40 / y= 184 and then move the slider 00:46:894 (1) - so this slider can to a perfect stack with this slider: 00:45:290 (2) - (there is too much word 'slider' inside my sentance, sorry! ;w; )
   Here is the link: Link
5. That's all for me. To be honest, the diff is really nice, but there is something that bother me a bit. The use of reverse slider. Sometimes it kind of break the rhythm of the map, so you should try to rework a bit some reverse sliders, because sometimes downbeats are clickable, and sometimes not. It's up to you boi, hope you will understand what i'm meaning ! pwp

Good luck for rank~

All applied
Thanks for mod!

Q

[Insane]
00:15:450 (3,1) - overlap doesn't match with music imo.
00:20:584 (3,4) - flow looks not good,
00:23:070 - add a beat since you added beat at other parts.
01:02:455 (2,3) - stack looks awkward,
01:18:659 (3) - thoucing HP bar in test mode
01:30:209 (7) - ^

[Extra]
00:49:701 (2) - Unnecessary beat
00:58:766 (2,3,6) - triangle
01:07:750 (3,4,5) - this DS looks weird, you made jump at 01:06:466 (3,4,5) - .
01:18:177 (2,3,4) - stack error

GL

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Insane]
00:15:450 (3,1) - overlap doesn't match with music imo. the music is the same at 00:15:129 (2,3) - but longer. same thing with what im doing here 00:19:300 (3,4,1) -
00:20:584 (3,4) - flow looks not good, fixed hopefully
00:23:070 - add a beat since you added beat at other parts. other not all because of the next 5stack which i think will make it harder to put more before it
01:02:455 (2,3) - stack looks awkward, fixed
01:18:659 (3) - thoucing HP bar in test mode fixed
01:30:209 (7) - ^ fixed

[Extra]
00:49:701 (2) - Unnecessary beat fixed
00:58:766 (2,3,6) - triangle ???
01:07:750 (3,4,5) - this DS looks weird, you made jump at 01:06:466 (3,4,5) - . the first part has high pitch(?) voice whereas the second part only have repeating song and the long voice.
01:18:177 (2,3,4) - stack error fixed

GL

Thanks for mod!

Hi, coming from my queue

[General]

1. Preview point in Extra is inconsistent with the rest of the diffs
2. soft-hitclapxd.wav is unused
3. Uhh shouldn't the title be Innocence?
4. I'm like 99% sure you should delete "～Oratorio Phantasm Historia～" from tags since it's already in the source, to avoid the redundance because it's not necessary

[Extra]

1. I don't really feel like you need Ar9.3 for this, it's rather simplistic and well structured. I think 9 is enough
2. 00:18:017 (3) - Kinda personal here but i don't really like how this directly points towards the stream, because of slider leniency you can snap on 00:18:338 (4) - really fast and it kinda creates a stop which i feel isn't what you were going for. I think you could go for something like this to make it smoother going from 3 to 4 using the parallel effect and also make them more independent from the previous red anchored sliders
3. 00:23:792 (1) - I'd turn this into a 1/1 slider here for emphasis on the violin and finish. I think it would be better to have it contrast with the previous pattern that works as a transition, breaking the really heavy 1/2 usage would work really nice here
4. 00:44:327 (1,2) - ^ This one just to make the rhythm a little less dense considering the really calm atmosphere
5. 00:59:407 (6,7) - I feel like these two deserve to be different for the vocals and transition, try putting 7 at around x:480 y:345 to spread it out more while not breaking your visual spacing pattern?
6. 01:15:129 (1) - 1/1 slider here for the same reason as before? 01:15:450 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - the 1/2 slider spam here is kinda redundant
7. 01:16:092 (4,4) - Stack is slightly off here
8. 01:20:263 (1,3,1) - ^
9. 01:33:739 (3,4,5) - ^ ppy fix ur editor zzz
10. 01:34:862 (4) - Instead of overlapping with the streaming coming next, i think it looks way cleaner if you stack it on top of 01:35:664 (1) - 's sliderend for the double blanket
11. 01:53:632 (1) - Personal here, i don't really like how this kind of slider looks when they have a diagonal effect if that makes sense, try making it look more vertical?
12. 01:55:557 (5) - NC here for the change of rhythm+emphasis?
    
    This is sooo clean i love it

[Insane]

1. 00:35:343 (5,6) - These are a bit close visually from previous and next object compared to 00:34:541 (2,3,4) - , choose one pattern and repeat it here for the structure
2. 00:54:274 (6,7) - Same comment as Extra about these. Hmm i kinda struggle coming up with something for this one though. Something like this? Works ok i think
3. 00:59:407 (6) - I'd turn this into 2 circles for vocals and it would transition better with the downbeat imo
4. 01:00:209 (2,3) - Stack
5. 01:51:065 (1) - The shape itself is kinda unpolished and it's noticeable because you have a pattern here, ctrl g it twice and balance it properly
   
   Not much to say here, idk i didn't like it as much as extra because the low spacing created a bit too many overlaps but yeah it's still really clean regardless

The set looks good, i hope it helped

Have some stars and good luck

LeeSinOrAfk wrote:

Hi, coming from my queue

[General]

1. Preview point in Extra is inconsistent with the rest of the diffs
2. soft-hitclapxd.wav is unused
3. Uhh shouldn't the title be Innocence?
4. I'm like 99% sure you should delete "～Oratorio Phantasm Historia～" from tags since it's already in the source, to avoid the redundance because it's not necessary
   All fixed!

[Extra]

1. I don't really feel like you need Ar9.3 for this, it's rather simplistic and well structured. I think 9 is enough ok
2. 00:18:017 (3) - Kinda personal here but i don't really like how this directly points towards the stream, because of slider leniency you can snap on 00:18:338 (4) - really fast and it kinda creates a stop which i feel isn't what you were going for. I think you could go for something like this to make it smoother going from 3 to 4 using the parallel effect and also make them more independent from the previous red anchored sliders took me awhile to find a good flow that will remove that stop but all fixed now. (i hope)
3. 00:23:792 (1) - I'd turn this into a 1/1 slider here for emphasis on the violin and finish. I think it would be better to have it contrast with the previous pattern that works as a transition, breaking the really heavy 1/2 usage would work really nice here fixed
4. 00:44:327 (1,2) - ^ This one just to make the rhythm a little less dense considering the really calm atmosphere fixed
5. 00:59:407 (6,7) - I feel like these two deserve to be different for the vocals and transition, try putting 7 at around x:480 y:345 to spread it out more while not breaking your visual spacing pattern? fixed
6. 01:15:129 (1) - 1/1 slider here for the same reason as before? 01:15:450 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - the 1/2 slider spam here is kinda rebundant fixed
7. 01:16:092 (4,4) - Stack is slightly off here fixed (position changed because of the mod above)
8. 01:20:263 (1,3,1) - ^ fixed
9. 01:33:739 (3,4,5) - ^ ppy fix ur editor zzz fixed
10. 01:34:862 (4) - Instead of overlapping with the streaming coming next, i think it looks way cleaner if you stack it on top of 01:35:664 (1) - 's sliderend for the double blanket fixed
11. 01:53:632 (1) - Personal here, i don't really like how this kind of slider looks when they have a diagonal effect if that makes sense, try making it look more vertical? no changes here because 01:52:990 (5,7) - arent perfectly horizontal and i tried to pair the vertical slider to those to make it look nice if that makes sense
12. 01:55:557 (5) - NC here for the change of rhythm+emphasis? fixed
    
    This is sooo clean i love it

[Insane]

1. 00:35:343 (5,6) - These are a bit close visually from previous and next object compared to 00:34:541 (2,3,4) - , choose one pattern and repeat it here for the structure fixed
2. 00:54:274 (6,7) - Same comment as Extra about these. Hmm i kinda struggle coming up with something for this one though. Something like this? Works ok i think fixed (placed (7) on next slider's head)
3. 00:59:407 (6) - I'd turn this into 2 circles for vocals and it would transition better with the downbeat imo fixed
4. 01:00:209 (2,3) - Stack fixed
5. 01:51:065 (1) - The shape itself is kinda unpolished and it's noticeable because you have a pattern here, ctrl g it twice and balance it properly dunno what changes by ctrl+g'ing twice except from making it unstacked to the other note. And im also bad at sliders so thats the best i could do
   
   Not much to say here, idk i didn't like it as much as extra because the low spacing created a bit too many overlaps but yeah it's still really clean regardless
   most player actually liked insane more becuase of the flow lol and because Extra is just 1/2 spam which i agree

The set looks good, i hope it helped

Have some stars and good luck

Thanks for mod! and star!

From my q~

[Normal]

1. 00:59:086 (5,1) - Move like this?
   
   
   That way you can blanket and still keep the pattern you had before.
2. 01:32:455 (4) - Move down a bit so the slider end matches up with the end of 01:31:172 (2) - .
3. 01:48:979 (2) - crtl + j this and adjust 01:49:461 (3) - to make it go more down towards 01:49:782 (4) - instead of up towards the corner.

[Hard]

1. 00:33:739 (4) - Maybe bring this out from under the slider end and put it after.
2. 00:38:070 (5) - ^
3. 01:55:557 (3,4) - I like this pattern but they kind of get hidden by the sliders you have there. Might want to think about moving them to a place where they are a bit more visible.

Couldn't really find much else, sorry for the short mod so I'll send a star your way as well.

Good luck with ranking~

Noya wrote:

From my q~

[Normal]

1. 00:59:086 (5,1) - Move like this?
   
   
   That way you can blanket and still keep the pattern you had before.
2. 01:32:455 (4) - Move down a bit so the slider end matches up with the end of 01:31:172 (2) - .
3. 01:48:979 (2) - crtl + j this and adjust 01:49:461 (3) - to make it go more down towards 01:49:782 (4) - instead of up towards the corner.
   
   All fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:33:739 (4) - Maybe bring this out from under the slider end and put it after. kinda fixed
2. 00:38:070 (5) - ^ fixed
3. 01:55:557 (3,4) - I like this pattern but they kind of get hidden by the sliders you have there. Might want to think about moving them to a place where they are a bit more visible. ok ewe

Couldn't really find much else, sorry for the short mod so I'll send a star your way as well.

Good luck with ranking~

Thanks for mod! and star \:D/

ye hey

Title: イノセンス https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%82%A4 ... 3%E3%82%B9
Uncheck widescreen support for all difficutlies
Light Insane and Insane should have higher stack leniency
Easy difficulty needed

Light Insane:
00:20:905 (9) - blanket with 1 :^)
01:07:108 (5) - whistle sound on sliderslide, prob mistake
00:37:589 (2) - blanket :^)
01:00:370 (3,4) - i'd like these sliders to be the same shape thanks
01:07:108 (5) - Another one. ye whistle sound on sliderslide
01:32:776 (3) - ctrl-g ?

Insane:
00:32:937 (2,3,4) - 180 degres is bad idea for objects with large spacing
00:38:070 (2,4) - blanket fix
00:38:873 (5) - ^
00:40:798 (1) - ^
01:05:343 (2) - entirely breaks the flow from previous slider
01:29:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dank pattern, needs change

Extra:
00:33:418 (4,5,6) - triple coming in from the corner here feels awkward, rethink the flow
00:36:466 (6,7,1) - that distance change is too big when the song stays pretty much the same intensity
00:36:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern feels extremely unsatisfying to play
00:44:167 (7) - don't sacrifice flow for patterns, this does not need to stack with 2 and you know it
00:50:905 (2) - another stack that is not needed and disturbs flow
00:52:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - needs more distance to really emphasize the high pitched vocal here
00:59:728 (1) - personally i would make this slider 4 bars to emphasize vocal here more, since vocal has the melody
01:02:937 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - patterns break flow and stack too much, too confusing and sloppy, also put more distance in these cuz vocal
01:11:921 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - Flow feels awkward
01:24:755 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - i can hear only a faint faint drum roll for this, meaning the distance on this stream is too big
01:26:359 (5) - breaks flow for pattern
01:33:979 (4,5) - proper stack
01:44:648 (1,2,3,4) - make this a jump pattern or lower the ds for the preceding stream
Conclusion: a lot of the patterns you used sacrificed flow for making patterns, and that's ok to some degree, but going past that line just makes maps feel awkward and sluggish to play.

Not Tomori wrote:

ye hey

Title: イノセンス https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%82%A4 ... 3%E3%82%B9
Uncheck widescreen support for all difficutlies
Light Insane and Insane should have higher stack leniency
Easy difficulty needed

All applied

Insane:
00:32:937 (2,3,4) - 180 degres is bad idea for objects with large spacing fixed
00:38:070 (2,4) - blanket fix fixed
00:38:873 (5) - ^ fixed
00:40:798 (1) - ^ fixed
01:05:343 (2) - entirely breaks the flow from previous slider fixed
01:29:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dank pattern, needs change fixed dankness

Extra:
00:33:418 (4,5,6) - triple coming in from the corner here feels awkward, rethink the flow I think ill keep it. It looks cool and doesnt feel awkward imo. it feels alright
00:36:466 (6,7,1) - that distance change is too big when the song stays pretty much the same intensity fixed
00:36:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern feels extremely unsatisfying to play fixed
00:44:167 (7) - don't sacrifice flow for patterns, this does not need to stack with 2 and you know it it has pattern while keeping the flow. I dont think theres a problem with flow here
00:50:905 (2) - another stack that is not needed and disturbs flow ^same as above
00:52:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - needs more distance to really emphasize the high pitched vocal here fixed i hope
00:59:728 (1) - personally i would make this slider 4 bars to emphasize vocal here more, since vocal has the melody fixed
01:02:937 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - patterns break flow and stack too much, too confusing and sloppy, also put more distance in these cuz vocal fixed flow. kept positions
01:11:921 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - Flow feels awkward fixed
01:24:755 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - i can hear only a faint faint drum roll for this, meaning the distance on this stream is too big i'll keep it to make it the same as other streams
01:26:359 (5) - breaks flow for pattern fixed
01:33:979 (4,5) - proper stack fixed
01:44:648 (1,2,3,4) - make this a jump pattern or lower the ds for the preceding stream fixed
Conclusion: a lot of the patterns you used sacrificed flow for making patterns, and that's ok to some degree, but going past that line just makes maps feel awkward and sluggish to play.

Thanks for mod!

Not Tomori wrote:

ye hey


Light Insane:
00:20:905 (9) - blanket with 1 :^)
01:07:108 (5) - whistle sound on sliderslide, prob mistake
00:37:589 (2) - blanket :^)
01:00:370 (3,4) - i'd like these sliders to be the same shape thanks
01:07:108 (5) - Another one. ye whistle sound on sliderslide
01:32:776 (3) - ctrl-g ?
all applied

thank you

[Normal]
01:22:509 (4,1) - if you would like to be a blanket, we can better it

a little problem about stack... of course we can stack the circle but there is no doubt that you should stack them with a clear rule

[Light Insane]
00:55:236 (1) - 00:56:199 (1) - revoke the NC and NC this place 00:55:878 (3) -
01:32:776 (3) - ctrl+G would get a better flow imo
01:45:931 (1,2,3,4) - compare with 01:25:397 (1,2,3,4) - why you changed the ryhthm here? i guess we should have a reason
01:52:990 (3,1) - blanket


[Insane]
00:28:124 (3) - how about move to (299,190)?
00:51:707 (4,1) - blanket

01:32:135 (2,3,4,5,6) - if you want to make a pentagon, we can check it again

nothing speical in hard and extra
gl~

kanor wrote:

[Light Insane]
00:55:236 (1) - 00:56:199 (1) - revoke the NC and NC this place 00:55:878 (3) - fixed
01:32:776 (3) - ctrl+G would get a better flow imo okay
01:45:931 (1,2,3,4) - compare with 01:25:397 (1,2,3,4) - why you changed the ryhthm here? i guess we should have a reason dunno lol. but i changed it
01:52:990 (3,1) - blanket fixed

thanks for mod

kanor wrote:

[Normal]
01:22:509 (4,1) - if you would like to be a blanket, we can better it fixed

a little problem about stack... of course we can stack the circle but there is no doubt that you should stack them with a clear rule

Okorin wrote:

1. If stacks are used, Stack Leniency must be set high enough for 1/1 objects to stack. Directly overlapping objects cause reading problems for new players.
2. Stacks are acceptable, but avoid switching between 1/1 and 1/2 stacks repeatedly. This may cause reading issues for new players, since two different rhythms are visually the same.

so i guess i should be fine. i only used stacks on 1/1 anyway


[Insane]
00:28:124 (3) - how about move to (299,190)? fixed
00:51:707 (4,1) - blanket fixed

01:32:135 (2,3,4,5,6) - if you want to make a pentagon, we can check it again it is pentagon though? i even used the polygon convertion :s

nothing speical in hard and extra
gl~

Thanks!

[general]

edit: also add まもも mamomo to tags (this is the song composer) source: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e3IAZSnGiXQ

[Normal]

would have put AR4 because it looks a bit fast to me :<

00:46:894 (1) - Is it just me or is it not stacked correctly ?
00:51:386 (3,4) - why not making the spacing between the end of 3 in the linearity of the slider, it's not that aligned right now and i think it looks cooler.
i guess if you do this change then, restack this 00:53:953 (6) -
01:23:792 (2) - isn't this shape a bit awkward considering all of the sliders you've made beforehand and afterwards ?

[Hard]

00:22:509 (1) - honestly think that this NC is unecessary because the melodic sentence isn't finished up this point
00:37:268 (3,4,5) - the sudden jump is kinda awkward i guess :c
01:17:054 (3,4) - yet again, would look better aligned :p
01:24:274 (1) - if you're NCing according to the singer's voice then i think this shouldn't be a NC
01:50:263 (3) - yeah, stacked with the previous slider but the spacing on the 1,2,3,4 triangle looks bad afterwards
01:55:717 (4) - why not stacking it in the sliderend of previous (4) ? looks smoother as a movement

[misaka]

00:37:589 (2,3) - weird overlap to me xD but i guess it's definetly acceptable lol
00:53:311 (6) - the clap sounds better at the end of the slider actually
01:13:525 (4,5) - Whistle those 2 maybe ?
01:20:263 (1,2,3,4) - weird spacing there imo :p
01:40:397 - add a note here maybe ?

[insane]

00:54:514 - i would have put a note here because it makes the transition with the slow part which plays good, but it's kinda overmapping
01:22:509 (4,5,1) - so the overlap makes the pattern pretty surprising because you would want to do it 1/2 at first but then u realize it's 1/4 but it's too late !
01:39:193 (3) - this slider is touching the HP bar

[extra]

00:41:439 (6,7,1) - would prefer having these notes like this: http://puu.sh/tSt83/5fca5ca470.jpg
00:45:129 (3,4,1,2) - you should align them, that looks way better ! :p
00:50:423 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - i honestly don't see why you're making jumps there because the music keeps the same intensity as before there


this is actually a pretty good map !!

good luck dude

Musty wrote:

[general]

edit: also add まもも mamomo to tags (this is the song composer) source: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e3IAZSnGiXQ applied!

[Normal]

would have put AR4 because it looks a bit fast to me :< applied

00:46:894 (1) - Is it just me or is it not stacked correctly ? good catch. fixed
00:51:386 (3,4) - why not making the spacing between the end of 3 in the linearity of the slider, it's not that aligned right now and i think it looks cooler.
i guess if you do this change then, restack this 00:53:953 (6) - i think it looks find
01:23:792 (2) - isn't this shape a bit awkward considering all of the sliders you've made beforehand and afterwards ? changed to simple curved slider

[Hard]

00:22:509 (1) - honestly think that this NC is unecessary because the melodic sentence isn't finished up this point fixed
00:37:268 (3,4,5) - the sudden jump is kinda awkward i guess :c removed jump :v
01:17:054 (3,4) - yet again, would look better aligned :p same as above
01:24:274 (1) - if you're NCing according to the singer's voice then i think this shouldn't be a NC fixed
01:50:263 (3) - yeah, stacked with the previous slider but the spacing on the 1,2,3,4 triangle looks bad afterwards fixed (2) position
01:55:717 (4) - why not stacking it in the sliderend of previous (4) ? looks smoother as a movement i think its too high and kinda wanna keep it the same as 01:54:915 (1,3) - pattern

[insane]

00:54:514 - i would have put a note here because it makes the transition with the slow part which plays good, but it's kinda overmapping yea but no sound there and as what you said its overmapped
01:22:509 (4,5,1) - so the overlap makes the pattern pretty surprising because you would want to do it 1/2 at first but then u realize it's 1/4 but it's too late ! but its too close to the next note so i think its not the surprising :s
01:39:193 (3) - this slider is touching the HP bar fixed

[extra]

00:41:439 (6,7,1) - would prefer having these notes like this: http://puu.sh/tSt83/5fca5ca470.jpg but the thing is thats the only stack that would look different. kinda wanna make everything the same
00:45:129 (3,4,1,2) - you should align them, that looks way better ! :p applied
00:50:423 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - i honestly don't see why you're making jumps there because the music keeps the same intensity as before there removed jump and replaced with slider


this is actually a pretty good map !!

good luck dude

Thanks for mod!

[general]
bg might be nsfw cant defeat oppai

[ex]
00:14:327 (4) - moving this up would make the back and forth pattern a lot smoother
00:15:450 (4,5,6) - ctrl+g rhythm to be consistent with the previous set
00:41:680 (7,1) - too close, compare this with 00:41:119 (4,5) -
01:02:937 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - not sure why circle spam here
01:22:830 (1,2,3,4,1) - doesnt flow well
01:28:445 (4) - triple or make this into a kick slider?
01:33:578 (2) - ^
01:41:600 (4) - doesnt make sense to have a jump on this note
01:54:594 (7,1,2,3,4,1) - spacing is pretty ambiguous here ehh

[ins]
00:21:225 (1) - bad flow, try curving the other way
00:30:209 (1,2) - looks kinda like a 1/2 judging by the past couple patterns, i'd suggest overlapping for extended sliders in this section
00:31:974 (2) - triple?
00:33:258 (3,4) - rhythm is
00:45:290 (3) - bad flow, also sudden jump here doesnt really fit
00:54:113 (5,6,7) - flow :S
01:21:867 (2,3) - 01:22:509 (4,5,1) - spacing inconsistency
01:24:755 (3) - nc would be a good idea// either here or 01:25:076 (6) - here (or both)
01:30:530 (1) - overlap isnt great
01:40:316 (4) - stack is off
01:40:156 (3) - further would be better for the next 1/4 pattern
01:46:894 (4) - lol that anchor isnt doing much i'd suggest changing it up to either a straight slider or something else

[hd]
00:44:327 (1,2,3,1) - pattern isnt really pretty
00:50:423 (3) - shorten to 1/1
01:11:279 (1) - ehh might as well stack it lol
01:18:659 (3) - opening the curve up more (at least so head and tail arent overlapping) would help players at this level read the slider a lot
01:22:348 (3) - wrong emphasis :S the 1/2 before the 1/1s can also be extended sliders, ur call on that one
01:26:680 (1) - removve finish (some others dont really fit too)
01:34:220 (4) - random jump

[nm]
probably need an easy since this diff is pretty hard

00:27:001 (2) - try to avoid this overlap
00:31:493 (1,2,3) - nothing too significant for this to be different rhythm from the rest
00:39:193 (1,2) - more symmetry pls
00:55:236 (2) - overlapssss
01:18:659 (3,4,5) - dont switch back and forth between vocal/drums. especially when the vocals are continuous lol
01:27:963 (1) - be consistent with ^
01:29:568 (1) - remove nc
01:39:193 (3) - same rhythm as earlier

glhf

Musty wrote:

[general]


[misaka]

00:37:589 (2,3) - weird overlap to me xD but i guess it's definetly acceptable lol lol
00:53:311 (6) - the clap sounds better at the end of the slider actually okay
01:13:525 (4,5) - Whistle those 2 maybe ? okay
01:20:263 (1,2,3,4) - weird spacing there imo :p changed something here
01:40:397 - add a note here maybe ? okay

thanks for mod

hola
from my q


that's all
i love this song, Good Luck

Extra could use +~0.3 ar

hp and/or od might be a bit too much for Extra and Insane

00:13:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - this beginning plays a bit cramped and really forced with those straight sliders

00:23:311 (5) - this note feels really awkward because it felt like you were following the piano, would be better as a sliderend.

00:31:814 (2,3,5) - one of these notes could blanket with that stream

00:36:546 (7) - these overmaps don't makes sense, i don't think its appropriate to force triples in a calm part, please don't be that guy xd

00:52:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this jump is a bit too overdone, try this rhythm, it makes it clear that you are followign the piano

00:52:990 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - bit tricky here, also bit overdone, nc to indicate chimes, i think its necessary to also hitsound the chimes with soft-hitwhistles or something smilair, also could you make it less spaced? otherwise the next part doesn't feel special anymore


00:58:766 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - those red ticks are barely audible compared to the white ticks, should get some sliders in there



Isn't there a higher quality background? this one is bad
Just don't really try to overdo jumps in the non-kiai part, thats all i have to say

Hello,

[General]
1st combo color too dark imo


[Normal]
I think using ds < sv it's kind not really recomended for lower diff. Newbies are oriented for aiming more than to follow flow. it's mb fine for normal, but only if You have easy. Your current easiest diff too hard now. Just my opinion.
00:16:573 (2) - 00:21:707 (2) - don't really understand why 1/2 here... You did't place it here 00:21:707 (2) - 00:21:707 (2) - , so make sense didn't there too. i am asking because it's hardest place in your map (only here 2 1/2 taps in a row) , in the begining...
00:18:659 (1) - fix stack
00:32:776 (1) - any reason for Nc?
00:53:953 (6,2) - avoid this overlap if possible, it's really noticable
01:14:487 (4,3) - stack it please
01:18:659 (3,4) - and unstack here, because switch from 1/2 rythm to 1/1 a bit hard readable.

[Hard]
00:13:204 (3,1) - i suggest to stack 2 and 3, and then space 1st. it's much more readable, and fits music more imo.
00:38:231 - skip this beat not best idea. You could replace 5 to 1/2 slider.
00:40:958 - You are following vocal in this section and 00:40:798 - 00:40:958 - vocal point equally strong. http://puu.sh/tTCjC.jpg mb? Current skipped red tick is good too, just suggestion.
00:42:723 (3) - it's kind off rhytm, sounds more like http://puu.sh/tTDER.jpg or http://puu.sh/tTDJt.jpg or http://puu.sh/tTDOI.jpg for your current consistency
00:41:119 (2,1) - blanket it better
01:21:225 (3,1,2) - 01:26:680 (1,2,3) - any reason to freeze flow in kiai? i suggest to make these more similar with 01:41:600 (2,3,1,2) - 01:46:413 (2,3,4,1,2) - more consistency.
01:34:220 (4,1) - blanket these
01:42:723 (3,1) - mb stack? looks a bit agly
01:55:557 (3,4) - ds isn't a big problem here, but following your flow I expected ctrl-g

[light insane]
yo O/
hmm, not really fan of your 2 stack leniency here. Because some objects like 00:34:701 (2) - 01:06:947 (4) - 01:23:792 (4) - really hard to read, especially for players who aiming to play this diff.
00:40:156 (3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/tTGCW.jpg fits better
01:05:504 (3,4) - make these similar
01:15:049 (7,1) - on 1 line pls(move a bit down 1st)
01:18:338 (4,5) - ctrl-g rhytm
01:23:792 (4) - it's unpredictable, as ds as place. Hyped moment, i think should have more ds. And readability... idk, mb You could increase your SL?
http://puu.sh/tTH4S.jpg anyway, this also works well
01:27:001 (2,3) - blanket
01:26:520 (1,5) - stack
01:52:348 (1) - red dot a bit off line
rest cool

[Insane]
00:14:808 (1,4) - don't want to stack these?
00:18:659 (1) - correct end wave a bit, for blanket 00:19:140 (2) -
00:33:258 (3,4) - crl-g rhytm
01:51:065 (1) - symmetry pls

[]
That's it.
Goodluck.

joker- wrote:

hola
from my q

Normal

1. 00:22:509 (4,5) - almost touching default HP bar. it's safety to move downward them i dont think so? but still lowered down alittle
2. 00:25:076 (3,4,1,2) - i suggest those placement below. i think better to use blanket and tack on slider head in term of aesthetic applied
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:32:776 (1) - remove NC? your NC pattern is 2 measure on Normal oops i forgot the remove that one lol. fixed
4. 01:02:937 (2,5) - missing stack fixed

Hard

1. 01:07:108 (4,1) - i prefer to follow vocal on this part. why dont you try to rhythm pattern? applied
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:55:557 (3,4) - too much distance on hard diff, should reduce distance more lowered the distance alittle bit now.

that's all
i love this song, Good Luck

Thanks for mod!

joker- wrote:

Misaka's Light Insane

1. 00:12:402 - and 00:12:562 - take sounds with circle or slider? nah
2. 00:17:215 (1) - i dont know what sound you are following... i suggest rhythm pattern below. 00:27:482 (5) - same it follows the flute (dunno wat is that sound called lol)
   
   SPOILER

   

anyway, tnx for checking

Mitkoff wrote:

[light insane]
yo O/
hmm, not really fan of your 2 stack leniency here. Because some objects like 00:34:701 (2) - 01:06:947 (4) - 01:23:792 (4) - really hard to read, especially for players who aiming to play this diff.
00:40:156 (3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/tTGCW.jpg fits better
01:05:504 (3,4) - make these similar
01:15:049 (7,1) - on 1 line pls(move a bit down 1st)
01:18:338 (4,5) - ctrl-g rhytm
01:23:792 (4) - it's unpredictable, as ds as place. Hyped moment, i think should have more ds. And readability... idk, mb You could increase your SL?
http://puu.sh/tTH4S.jpg anyway, this also works well
01:27:001 (2,3) - blanket
01:26:520 (1,5) - stack
01:52:348 (1) - red dot a bit off line
rest cool

all applied

[]
That's it.
Goodluck.

thank you

zev wrote:

Extra could use +~0.3 ar used to be 9.3 but they said its too high so maybe 9.2 ewe

hp and/or od might be a bit too much for Extra and Insane od is fine for both. lowered Extra's hp by 1

00:13:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - this beginning plays a bit cramped and really forced with those straight sliders changed the sliders and adjust the pattern alittle

00:23:311 (5) - this note feels really awkward because it felt like you were following the piano, would be better as a sliderend. applied

00:31:814 (2,3,5) - one of these notes could blanket with that stream fixed

00:36:546 (7) - these overmaps don't makes sense, i don't think its appropriate to force triples in a calm part, please don't be that guy xd

00:52:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this jump is a bit too overdone, try this rhythm, it makes it clear that you are followign the piano applied

SPOILER

00:52:990 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - bit tricky here, also bit overdone, nc to indicate chimes, i think its necessary to also hitsound the chimes with soft-hitwhistles or something smilair, also could you make it less spaced? otherwise the next part doesn't feel special anymore not sure what to NC but did it anyway and applied hitsound but ill keep the spaced the same.

SPOILER

00:58:766 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - those red ticks are barely audible compared to the white ticks, should get some sliders in there fixed



Isn't there a higher quality background? this one is bad unfortunately there isnt. I got this from the cg gallery itself and its the max reso since its an old game
Just don't really try to overdo jumps in the non-kiai part, thats all i have to say

Thanks for mod!

Mitkoff wrote:

Hello,

[General]
1st combo color too dark imo thats racist. jk its fine. some people even use black as their combo color anyways


[Normal]
I think using ds < sv it's kind not really recomended for lower diff. Newbies are oriented for aiming more than to follow flow. it's mb fine for normal, but only if You have easy. Your current easiest diff too hard now. Just my opinion.
00:16:573 (2) - 00:21:707 (2) - don't really understand why 1/2 here... You did't place it here 00:21:707 (2) - 00:21:707 (2) - , so make sense didn't there too. i am asking because it's hardest place in your map (only here 2 1/2 taps in a row) , in the begining... yea i guess .. removed
00:18:659 (1) - fix stack fixed
00:32:776 (1) - any reason for Nc? i just forgot to removed NC when making everything 2 measures. pls dont hurt me xd
00:53:953 (6,2) - avoid this overlap if possible, it's really noticable fixed
01:14:487 (4,3) - stack it please applied
01:18:659 (3,4) - and unstack here, because switch from 1/2 rythm to 1/1 a bit hard readable. ok

[Hard]
00:13:204 (3,1) - i suggest to stack 2 and 3, and then space 1st. it's much more readable, and fits music more imo.
00:38:231 - skip this beat not best idea. You could replace 5 to 1/2 slider. did 1/1 instead to make it the same as the previous ones
00:40:958 - You are following vocal in this section and 00:40:798 - 00:40:958 - vocal point equally strong. http://puu.sh/tTCjC.jpg mb? Current skipped red tick is good too, just suggestion. ill keep it then
00:42:723 (3) - it's kind off rhytm, sounds more like http://puu.sh/tTDER.jpg or http://puu.sh/tTDJt.jpg or http://puu.sh/tTDOI.jpg for your current consistency fixed rhythm by applying your 3rd suggestion but 1/1 sliders instead of 1/2 reverse slider
00:41:119 (2,1) - blanket it better fixed
01:21:225 (3,1,2) - 01:26:680 (1,2,3) - any reason to freeze flow in kiai? i suggest to make these more similar with 01:41:600 (2,3,1,2) - 01:46:413 (2,3,4,1,2) - more consistency. kinda wanna make it alittle bit hard'ish since it kinda works? but fixed and applied suggestion for consistency.
01:34:220 (4,1) - blanket these i think its ok
01:42:723 (3,1) - mb stack? looks a bit agly fixed
01:55:557 (3,4) - ds isn't a big problem here, but following your flow I expected ctrl-g

[Insane]
00:14:808 (1,4) - don't want to stack these? moved 00:14:808 (1,2) - to stacked instead
00:18:659 (1) - correct end wave a bit, for blanket 00:19:140 (2) - fixed maybe. Im really bad at sliders
00:33:258 (3,4) - crl-g rhytm no thanks
01:51:065 (1) - symmetry pls I'd kill a man for a good slider tbh. fixed to the best i could possibly do.

[]
That's it.
Goodluck.

Thanks for mod!

hi, from my queue.


[Extra]

00:31:493 (1) - blanket this slider better
00:31:974 (3,4) - could add one more circle to make a stacked triple out of this (fits better according to music percussion)
00:57:001 (6,1) - i would swap them

01:10:316 (2,3) - yeah this part - as the piano stands out here you should really tweak rhythmics smth like

01:11:279 - next similar to previous

01:16:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - also incorrect; as the vocal is leading you should follow it by mapping rhythm, try using

01:24:755 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this stream spacing is kind of overkill considering it is a calm song and never had hard parts before; i would make ds smaller
01:31:493 (5,1) - fix blanket
01:35:022 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - on the other hand this part is fine because you can clearly hear some sounds that have impact <3
01:45:290 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - too big ds ^ mantioned previously (but not that important tbh)
01:48:979 (3,4) - and one more circle between them
01:54:113 (2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped; leave 01:54:113 (2,3,4) - and remove 01:54:354 (5,6) - replace them with single jump
01:54:915 - same rhythmic issues here - here is what i suggest:




[Insane]
why do you use stack leniency '2' while extra has '7'? i had an idea when i first was looking at extra to suggest you make there low SL.
00:37:910 (1,2,4) - could be better blanket - fix slider's shape
00:54:434 (7,1,2,3) - i would more somewhere down right because then it feels better while playing https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7269995
01:04:862 (1) - fix slider - slider's tail has way to curved angle that causes unpleasant blanket with 01:05:343 (2) -
01:34:862 (3,4,5) - rotating by 49 i think would help


that's all, good luck!

_Kise wrote:

hi, from my queue.


[Extra]

00:31:493 (1) - blanket this slider better fixed
00:31:974 (3,4) - could add one more circle to make a stacked triple out of this (fits better according to music percussion)
00:57:001 (6,1) - i would swap them applied

01:10:316 (2,3) - yeah this part - as the piano stands out here you should really tweak rhythmics smth like applied

01:11:279 - next similar to previous applied

01:16:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - also incorrect; as the vocal is leading you should follow it by mapping rhythm, try using applied

01:24:755 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this stream spacing is kind of overkill considering it is a calm song and never had hard parts before; i would make ds smaller I guess that really has to get changed . 1x to 0.8x
01:31:493 (5,1) - fix blanket fixed
01:35:022 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - on the other hand this part is fine because you can clearly hear some sounds that have impact <3
01:45:290 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - too big ds ^ mantioned previously (but not that important tbh) no changes then :d
01:48:979 (3,4) - and one more circle between them applied
01:54:113 (2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped; leave 01:54:113 (2,3,4) - and remove 01:54:354 (5,6) - replace them with single jump
01:54:915 - same rhythmic issues here - here is what i suggest: applied




[Insane]
why do you use stack leniency '2' while extra has '7'? i had an idea when i first was looking at extra to suggest you make there low SL. ill make it the same as insane then. i used 2 on insane cause i used alot of stack overlaps
00:37:910 (1,2,4) - could be better blanket - fix slider's shape fixed
00:54:434 (7,1,2,3) - i would more somewhere down right because then it feels better while playing https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7269995 moved 00:54:113 (5,6) - instead and it kinda worked. moving those sliders will ruin everything.
01:04:862 (1) - fix slider - slider's tail has way to curved angle that causes unpleasant blanket with 01:05:343 (2) - fixed
01:34:862 (3,4,5) - rotating by 49 i think would help i based my blankets on previous notes so i dont think this will work nicely


that's all, good luck!

Thanks for mod!

Gaia wrote:

[general]
bg might be nsfw cant defeat oppai the ranked one has it uwu

[ex]
00:14:327 (4) - moving this up would make the back and forth pattern a lot smoother
00:15:450 (4,5,6) - ctrl+g rhythm to be consistent with the previous set
00:41:680 (7,1) - too close, compare this with 00:41:119 (4,5) - im confued on what you mean. you mean 00:41:439 (6,7,1) - ? i think its fine since the inbetween note where the rest doesnt
01:02:937 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - not sure why circle spam here theres not much going on here and i dont hear anything that indicates a slider until 01:03:739 (2) - which is just +3 notes which i dont think is that bad
01:22:830 (1,2,3,4,1) - doesnt flow well really confused about this this one. maybe ctrl+g 01:23:792 (1) - works?
01:28:445 (4) - triple or make this into a kick slider?triple it is then
01:33:578 (2) - ^ same
01:41:600 (4) - doesnt make sense to have a jump on this note its in the vocal like it pause then it continues
01:54:594 (7,1,2,3,4,1) - spacing is pretty ambiguous here ehh

[ins]
00:21:225 (1) - bad flow, try curving the other way fck someone noticed it ewe . changed slider
00:30:209 (1,2) - looks kinda like a 1/2 judging by the past couple patterns, i'd suggest overlapping for extended sliders in this section fixed
00:31:974 (2) - triple? fixed
00:33:258 (3,4) - rhythm is fixed
00:45:290 (3) - bad flow, also sudden jump here doesnt really fit fixed flow
00:54:113 (5,6,7) - flow :S its fine i think
01:21:867 (2,3) - 01:22:509 (4,5,1) - spacing inconsistency
01:24:755 (3) - nc would be a good idea// either here or 01:25:076 (6) - here (or both) nc both
01:30:530 (1) - overlap isnt great fixed
01:40:316 (4) - stack is off fixed
01:40:156 (3) - further would be better for the next 1/4 pattern fixed
01:46:894 (4) - lol that anchor isnt doing much i'd suggest changing it up to either a straight slider or something else

[hd]
00:44:327 (1,2,3,1) - pattern isnt really pretty rude
00:50:423 (3) - shorten to 1/1 fixed
01:11:279 (1) - ehh might as well stack it lol ok uwu
01:18:659 (3) - opening the curve up more (at least so head and tail arent overlapping) would help players at this level read the slider a lot fixed
01:22:348 (3) - wrong emphasis :S the 1/2 before the 1/1s can also be extended sliders, ur call on that one applied
01:26:680 (1) - removve finish (some others dont really fit too) fixed. not really familiar with hitsounds yet thats why ewe
01:34:220 (4) - random jump fixed i hope

[nm]
probably need an easy since this diff is pretty hard

00:27:001 (2) - try to avoid this overlap
00:31:493 (1,2,3) - nothing too significant for this to be different rhythm from the rest
00:39:193 (1,2) - more symmetry pls ùwú
00:55:236 (2) - overlapssss fixed
01:18:659 (3,4,5) - dont switch back and forth between vocal/drums. especially when the vocals are continuous lol
01:27:963 (1) - be consistent with ^ fixed
01:29:568 (1) - remove nc fixed
01:39:193 (3) - same rhythm as earlier fixed

glhf

Thanks for mod! i thought i was gonna die

Hi! M4M.

[Extra]
00:04:554 (3) - Blanket would be better if this was moved 5 pixels to the left.
00:26:199 (5) - Space this a little less maybe, move it closer to 00:26:038 (4) - and 00:26:359 (1) - . A bit nitpicky but the spacing seems slightly too high here imo.
01:05:504 (3,4) - Why move against implied flow here? Imo, something like this would work better (just a little draft, doesn't have to be that way).
01:12:402 (6,7,1) - Is there even a sound that supports this triple?
01:19:461 (3) - Move like 2 pixels to the left for better blanket.
01:34:060 (5) - Doesn't stack, I think you intended to stack this with 01:33:739 (3,4) - tho.
01:40:798 (1) - This slider feels incredibly... "cramming"? I wouldn't make it as tight.
01:41:279 (2,3,4) - I would make spacing more even here. From 3 to 4 it's more than doubled despite the sounds that they all are on having the same intensity.

[Insane]
00:15:450 (3) - Decrease spacing maybe
01:00:370 (3) - Doesn't stack with 01:00:209 (2) - .
01:15:129 (1,2,3,4) - Would add some spacing. It's the beginning of Kiai Time and there is barely any.
01:22:509 (4,5) - The spacing here is a bit too high imo. Would consider lowering it.
01:40:477 (5,6) - ^
01:43:364 (1) - Would ctrl - j this and reposition to where it originally was.
01:54:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can increase spacing here, this is pretty much the songs climax and your spacing should represent that imo.

[Misaka's Light Insane]
Considering the object density of this diff, I would definitely increase AR to 8.5-8.7
00:15:610 (2) - Blanket could be improved.
00:26:038 (8) - Doesn't stack with 00:25:397 (6) - .
00:35:985 (6) - Should stack with 00:36:306 (7,1) - .

[Hard]
00:30:851 (3) - Stack with 00:30:209 (1) -
01:17:054 (3,4) - This jump is a bit extreme imo. Would lower spacing at least a little bit there.
01:40:798 (1) - Stack with 01:40:156 (3) - .
01:49:140 (3) - Stack with 01:48:498 (1) - .

[Normal]
01:05:824 (3) - Blanket.
01:11:921 (4) - Stack with 01:10:958 (2) - .
01:55:236 (4,5) - Would have some spacing here as this is the climax of the song.

That's all I found. Pretty good mapset! Good luck with it, I definitely liked it.

Pronounta wrote:

Hi! M4M.

[Extra]
00:04:554 (3) - Blanket would be better if this was moved 5 pixels to the left. what
00:26:199 (5) - Space this a little less maybe, move it closer to 00:26:038 (4) - and 00:26:359 (1) - . A bit nitpicky but the spacing seems slightly too high here imo. reduced jump a little
01:05:504 (3,4) - Why move against implied flow here? Imo, something like this would work better (just a little draft, doesn't have to be that way). no because then 01:05:504 (3) - flow will be on opposite direction if i pointed it to the right. Its fine as it is
01:12:402 (6,7,1) - Is there even a sound that supports this triple? no uwu
01:19:461 (3) - Move like 2 pixels to the left for better blanket. fixed
01:34:060 (5) - Doesn't stack, I think you intended to stack this with 01:33:739 (3,4) - tho. i am stacking it at 01:33:097 (1) - which is fine
01:40:798 (1) - This slider feels incredibly... "cramming"? I wouldn't make it as tight. its fine.
01:41:279 (2,3,4) - I would make spacing more even here. From 3 to 4 it's more than doubled despite the sounds that they all are on having the same intensity. fixed 3 and 4 distance

[Insane]
00:15:450 (3) - Decrease spacing maybe foxed
01:00:370 (3) - Doesn't stack with 01:00:209 (2) - . foxed
01:15:129 (1,2,3,4) - Would add some spacing. It's the beginning of Kiai Time and there is barely any. foxed
01:22:509 (4,5) - The spacing here is a bit too high imo. Would consider lowering it. its perfectly fine tbh
01:40:477 (5,6) - ^ same
01:43:364 (1) - Would ctrl - j this and reposition to where it originally was. umm no. maybe mistype for something? cause it looks really weird
01:54:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can increase spacing here, this is pretty much the songs climax and your spacing should represent that imo. its actually alittle overmapped so kinda wanna make it not as overmapped

[Hard]
00:30:851 (3) - Stack with 00:30:209 (1) - fixed
01:17:054 (3,4) - This jump is a bit extreme imo. Would lower spacing at least a little bit there. fixed distance
01:40:798 (1) - Stack with 01:40:156 (3) - . fixed
01:49:140 (3) - Stack with 01:48:498 (1) - . fixed

[Normal]
01:05:824 (3) - Blanket.
01:11:921 (4) - Stack with 01:10:958 (2) - . fixed
01:55:236 (4,5) - Would have some spacing here as this is the climax of the song. fixed

That's all I found. Pretty good mapset! Good luck with it, I definitely liked it.

Thanks for mod!

Pronounta wrote:

Hi! M4M.

[Misaka's Light Insane]
Considering the object density of this diff, I would definitely increase AR to 8.5-8.7
00:15:610 (2) - Blanket could be improved.
00:26:038 (8) - Doesn't stack with 00:25:397 (6) - .
00:35:985 (6) - Should stack with 00:36:306 (7,1) - .
all fixed!

thank you!

from mod que

Extra

00:19:621 (5) - curve?
00:22:028 (6) - move farther from 7
00:56:199 (3) - put 3 where 1 was maybe? then flip, it would look better.
01:19:942 (6) - replacing with two circles would be better.
01:23:792 (1) - a little too curved haha
01:45:290 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5) - flows really well, great job on this.

Insane

00:34:541 (2,3) - cut the doubles a bit
00:38:873 (5) - make this one circle
00:39:193 (1) - have a triplet on here.
01:24:915 (3) - make this a circle maybe?
01:33:097 (1) - curve

Misaka's Light Insane

00:20:744 (8,9) - double doesn't fit part of the song
00:38:712 (4) - move down
01:19:621 (3,4) - TOO MANY DOUBLES HOLY

Hard

00:12:402 (1,2,3) - awkward timing for a hard diff
00:42:723 (3,1) - awkward

good diff and map

Pickkle wrote:

from mod que

Extra

00:19:621 (5) - curve? applied along with the next slider
00:22:028 (6) - move farther from 7 stacked to 7 instead
00:56:199 (3) - put 3 where 1 was maybe? then flip, it would look better. stacked 3 to 1. no changes on the slider
01:19:942 (6) - replacing with two circles would be better. 01:19:942 (6) - sliderend sound is too weak to be clickable so ill keep it as a slider
01:23:792 (1) - a little too curved haha fixed i hope. fck sliders uwu
01:45:290 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5) - flows really well, great job on this. Thank you :d

Insane

00:34:541 (2,3) - cut the doubles a bit fixed
00:38:873 (5) - make this one circle i think its fine.
00:39:193 (1) - have a triplet on here. i cant hear any sound that indicates triplet :s
01:24:915 (3) - make this a circle maybe? nope
01:33:097 (1) - curve curving it will make an awkward flow i think so im keeping it. plus its a nice pair to the previous slider

Hard

00:12:402 (1,2,3) - awkward timing for a hard diff removed (1) slider and made 2nd slider a reverse slider. also add a circle after it
00:42:723 (3,1) - awkward changed to slider

good diff and map

Thanks for mod!

Hi !
I cannot sayy "rrr" xd

• Nolmal :
  01:36:306 (2,4) - Tly to pelfect blanket to 01:38:070 (1) -
  
  
  Hald :
  00:22:509 (4) - wanna NC ? to keep the NCs evely one measule. You even did it at 00:32:776 (1) -
  
  01:17:054 (3) - x169y271
  
  01:55:557 (3,4) - Ctrl+G them is also good flow. Just saying...
  (Ooopsie, I said "r" x'D )
  
  Minaka's Misaka's Laigh Insein :
  00:36:627 (1,2) - To cleate a bettel leflection, equlize the y and x axis please <3
  
  Might wanna less/simplify some tliples, since its light insane lul, just my opinion xd

O-Moei wrote:

Hi !
I cannot sayy "rrr" xd

[list]Nolmal :
01:36:306 (2,4) - Tly to pelfect blanket to 01:38:070 (1) - uwu fixed


Hald :
00:22:509 (4) - wanna NC ? to keep the NCs evely one measule. You even did it at 00:32:776 (1) - fixed

01:17:054 (3) - x169y271 applied

01:55:557 (3,4) - Ctrl+G them is also good flow. Just saying... nah :V
(Ooopsie, I said "r" x'D )

thanks for mod!

Hi

[Extra]
01:56:199 -map this moment

[Insane]
00:18:338 (5,6,7,8) - Maybe try this? http://prntscr.com/e6zxto
00:23:471 (5,6,7,8) - ^ something like this here?
01:14:808 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:35:343 (6,7,8,9) - ^
01:29:407 (2,3,4) - increase jumps

Little mod. Actually good map. Good Luck.

m4m

extra
stack leniency 2? well, i think it doesnt fit your mapping at all. imo its better to have the circle stacked normally
btw you probably have a stacking abuse problem, since you use was too much stacks
00:14:167 (3,4,5) - just a suggestion, https://puu.sh/tX2Aj/1a9383a59f.png
00:15:290 (3) - maybe x=80 y=358, and this 00:15:931 (6) - x=32 y=143
cant understand why ppl love blankets so much /w\
00:17:054 (6) - id recommend you to move it on x=359 y=291
00:17:696 (2) - and this will go smth like https://puu.sh/tX2TF/3ecb48be6e.png
00:27:322 (7) - what about https://puu.sh/tX2ZQ/be8a41570d.png ?
00:30:530 (2) - maybe x=330 y=350 and ctrl+g this 00:30:851 (3) - ? hehe
00:32:054 - please map this because it feels too empty right now
00:35:985 (4,2,3) - stack went wrong
00:37:429 (4,5) - https://puu.sh/tX3aH/fd12cbb7c1.png
00:41:439 (6,7) - why spacing in such calm part is so huge lol
00:53:471 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - these jumps are kinda unsupported i must say
00:54:434 (2,1) - and btw, dont stack these because 00:54:594 (1) - this beat needs much more emphasis
01:11:760 (3) - pls stack it normally with 01:10:477 (3) -
01:16:092 (4,2,3) - well, i see what u wanted to do here, but imo it doesnt work zz.. what about https://puu.sh/tX3q2/7ded3360ab.png ?
01:18:177 (2,3,4,5) - just personal feelings, https://puu.sh/tX3t5/7c5f0657ae.png
01:20:263 (1,2,3) - can you pls stop stacking everything? xd
01:22:669 (7,1) - same as 00:54:434 (2,1) -, sont stack please
01:24:274 (2) - x=168 y=217
01:32:616 (5,6) - this stack felt out of place since this section is kinda jumpy
01:39:835 (3) - not sure why u suddenly decided to ignore vocals, but in my opinion it didnt work x(
btw, i felt like those streams dont really fit the song, since the 1/4s (01:35:022 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - these, for exmpl) arent that strong to be spaced like that
01:43:926 - map it pls, feels empty
01:56:199 - well, i think that a circle + spinner or just circle will work well
imo u need to get rid of 75% your stacks and try to stick to someone's style so it will look better visually.

insane
again overused stacking orz ><
00:17:696 (2,3) - dude, cmon ;; id reccoment you to do smth like this https://puu.sh/tX51P/5197252ed6.png , but as you wish
00:21:225 (1) - i feel like it needs more spacing
00:22:830 (2,3,4) - at least try smth like https://puu.sh/tX571/af4552eae0.png
00:25:557 (2,3,4) - wtf is the spacing between those objects
00:26:840 (2,3,4,5) - same lol, https://puu.sh/tX5aG/7353334777.png ?
00:29:407 (2,3,4) - https://puu.sh/tX5d2/0a61aa1773.png
00:37:108 (2,3,4,1) - feels like this spacing is tiny in comparsion with the others in this part
00:39:193 (1,2,3) - !!
00:45:771 (4) - nc?
00:54:434 (7,1) - same thing as in the extra, (1) needs more emphasis so dont stack pls
00:59:568 (7,1) - same ^
01:19:140 (4) - nc? and i feel like this 01:19:300 (5) - slider will look betterthis way https://puu.sh/tX5uz/e8d22a1c3b.png
01:31:814 (1) - same thing about the emphasis
01:44:808 (4) - nc and btw, this 01:44:327 (3,4) - needs more spacing imo
01:56:199 - map this please x0
liked this more than extra tbh xd

lower diffs look fine imo.. and i cant really mod them kmpls
too many my own opinions, so feel free to ignore them..
good luck owo

Komore wrote:

m4m

extra
stack leniency 2? well, i think it doesnt fit your mapping at all. imo its better to have the circle stacked normally
btw you probably have a stacking abuse problem, since you use was too much stacks the reason for low sl is because of stacks anyway so no changes here
00:14:167 (3,4,5) - just a suggestion, https://puu.sh/tX2Aj/1a9383a59f.png not really the kind of flow i use :s
00:15:290 (3) - maybe x=80 y=358, and this 00:15:931 (6) - x=32 y=143 nah
cant understand why ppl love blankets so much /w\ DUDE BLANKETS ARE LIFE!!!1!
00:17:054 (6) - id recommend you to move it on x=359 y=291 no thanks
00:17:696 (2) - and this will go smth like https://puu.sh/tX2TF/3ecb48be6e.png
00:27:322 (7) - what about https://puu.sh/tX2ZQ/be8a41570d.png ? would ruin next pattern/flow and it works too anyway so no changes here.
00:30:530 (2) - maybe x=330 y=350 and ctrl+g this 00:30:851 (3) - ? hehe ruined flow
00:32:054 - please map this because it feels too empty right now added triples
00:35:985 (4,2,3) - stack went wrong its blanket perfectly on previous slider so its fine
00:37:429 (4,5) - https://puu.sh/tX3aH/fd12cbb7c1.png no thanks
00:41:439 (6,7) - why spacing in such calm part is so huge lol its not that huge? but fixed anyway
00:53:471 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - these jumps are kinda unsupported i must say it kinda is actually
00:54:434 (2,1) - and btw, dont stack these because 00:54:594 (1) - this beat needs much more emphasis fixed
01:11:760 (3) - pls stack it normally with 01:10:477 (3) - its not big of a deal and plus its a really curve slider so i dont think its possible
01:16:092 (4,2,3) - well, i see what u wanted to do here, but imo it doesnt work zz.. what about https://puu.sh/tX3q2/7ded3360ab.png ? i dont get what you mean but changed pattern
01:18:177 (2,3,4,5) - just personal feelings, https://puu.sh/tX3t5/7c5f0657ae.png not stacked, no ty uwu
01:20:263 (1,2,3) - can you pls stop stacking everything? xd èwé
01:22:669 (7,1) - same as 00:54:434 (2,1) -, sont stack please foxed
01:24:274 (2) - x=168 y=217 kinda wanna make here less jumpy for the upcoming streams so no
01:32:616 (5,6) - this stack felt out of place since this section is kinda jumpy its fine
01:39:835 (3) - not sure why u suddenly decided to ignore vocals, but in my opinion it didnt work x( its not like i part this whole section vocals only anyway so no changes here
btw, i felt like those streams dont really fit the song, since the 1/4s (01:35:022 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - these, for exmpl) arent that strong to be spaced like that you're like the opposite of what everyone said about that stream and i kinda agree with them so im keeping it
01:43:926 - map it pls, feels empty no thanks. the big spacing kinda worked it out
01:56:199 - well, i think that a circle + spinner or just circle will work well no reason to. Maybe if this a full ver i will
imo u need to get rid of 75% your stacks and try to stick to someone's style so it will look better visually. kinda rude. Why would i rather stick so someone else's style? And plus it looks better visually too ang kinda clean imo

insane
again overused stacking orz ><
00:17:696 (2,3) - dude, cmon ;; id reccoment you to do smth like this https://puu.sh/tX51P/5197252ed6.png , but as you wish nty
00:21:225 (1) - i feel like it needs more spacing fixed
00:22:830 (2,3,4) - at least try smth like https://puu.sh/tX571/af4552eae0.png nope and please use a minimalistic skin when modding. kinda hard to see
00:25:557 (2,3,4) - wtf is the spacing between those objects wtf is wrong with you its fine
00:26:840 (2,3,4,5) - same lol, https://puu.sh/tX5aG/7353334777.png ? this has 1.0x ds while the one above has 1.25 so im fixing this
00:29:407 (2,3,4) - https://puu.sh/tX5d2/0a61aa1773.png cant see whats happening on your picture
00:37:108 (2,3,4,1) - feels like this spacing is tiny in comparsion with the others in this part its all 1.0x
00:39:193 (1,2,3) - !! please clarify.
00:45:771 (4) - nc? fixed
00:54:434 (7,1) - same thing as in the extra, (1) needs more emphasis so dont stack pls fixed
00:59:568 (7,1) - same ^ fixed
01:19:140 (4) - nc? and i feel like this 01:19:300 (5) - slider will look betterthis way https://puu.sh/tX5uz/e8d22a1c3b.png fixed and applied
01:31:814 (1) - same thing about the emphasis fixed
01:44:808 (4) - nc and btw, this 01:44:327 (3,4) - needs more spacing imo applied nc. no changes on pattern
01:56:199 - map this please x0 nope :s
liked this more than extra tbh xd Insane - 4(including me ewe) | Extra - 1

lower diffs look fine imo.. and i cant really mod them kmpls
too many my own opinions, so feel free to ignore them..
good luck owo

Thanks for mod!

xDololow wrote:

Hi

[Extra]
01:56:199 -map this moment not that important. kinda wanna end to where the song climaxed

[Insane]
00:18:338 (5,6,7,8) - Maybe try this? http://prntscr.com/e6zxto its insane so i really wanna keep the 1/4 simple
00:23:471 (5,6,7,8) - ^ something like this here? ^
01:14:808 (4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
01:35:343 (6,7,8,9) - ^ ^
01:29:407 (2,3,4) - increase jumps i think its fine. no indication of jumps bigger than that

Little mod. Actually good map. Good Luck.

thanks for mod!

Ayyy


Sorry for somewhat half-assed mod, have a good weekend

Warpyc wrote:

Ayyy

• 
  General:
  
  Risky Background
  
  I've got to say I'm not a big fan of the combo colors at all, dark colors mixed with light ones are usually a bad idea in the first place but not only that but the bright yellow is extremely out of place, light blue would fit much better. You obviously don't have to go with this but I do recommend changing it, here's my suggestion applied
  Colors

  Combo1 : 243,46,51
  Combo2 : 198,0,198
  Combo3 : 2,171,253
  Combo4 : 255,91,160
  
  (copy paste into .osu files)

• 
  Extra
  The whole first part has some stacks that feels quite random, at least I couldn't really find any particular consistency in them, same with the slider and notes, It's good to vary mapping when you have a repetitive rhythm for a long while but you should make sure you don't just put sliders here and there and three. For example, at some points you have up to 5 sliders in a row, sometimes 4 and sometimes 3 etc while the rhythm remains the same.
  
  00:49:461 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This whole part feels very messy since you tried to put so many notes in the same small area of the map, I used to run into this problem quite a lot myself actually. The problem is usually that you try to connect every note too much and keep flow so you end up with these spirals that just doesn't look very good tried with something else. hope it fixes it
  
  00:50:905 - Slider should start here not 00:51:065 (3) - to focus vocal fixed
  
  00:53:953 (1) - you suddenly change flow direction here in the middle of a jump section, ctrl + g this 00:54:113 (2,1) - and move 00:54:434 (2) - to X-109 Y-48 that should make a smooth flow and transition nicely into the next slider, also you should really change the NC in this pattern it's a mess the only NC's should be 00:53:471 (1) - and 00:53:953 (1) - nowhere else I like this. applied! but kinda worry because of the huge jump at 00:54:434 (4,1) - so i stacked 00:54:434 (4) - at 00:53:632 (3) - to reduced the jump even just a little but still huge and i hope this is fine
  
  Why not stack 00:56:038 (2) - on 00:56:199 (3) - makes way more sense if you listen to the vocals fixed
  
  01:08:712 (1,2,3,4) - Feels very out of place, I don't see why you suddenly have this evenly spaced even though 01:09:033 (3) - clearly is a stronger beat changed pattern
  
  01:27:963 (1,2) - I know you want to blanket this but suddenly making the spacing so short, especially after a pretty big jump is a bad idea (also it's a strong beat which you clearly emphasize here 01:29:407 (2,3) - ) fixed distance
  
  01:35:022 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Not sure if I would map this as a stream, music certainly doesn't sound like it but if you do keep it why is 01:34:621 (2,3) - the same spacing as the stream if feels pretty awkward, shouldn't it be 0,8 DS like the rest of your drum streams fixed
  
  01:55:717 (2) - make this a 1/2 slider to finish off? i think its kinda awkward so im keeping it
  
  also something I'm a big fan of in this diff is that you have very smooth circular flow throughout the map even if it did go a bit overboard at some points

Sorry for somewhat half-assed mod, have a good weekend

Thanks for mod! and you too

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