NM from my queue
[Normal]
Not sure but I feel like AR 5 and OD 5 are a bit high for the lowest diff. Maybe use 4 instead?
Your NCs are bit uneven here. I think you should just go for NC every 2 down beats most of the time like here 00:18:674 (1,2,3,4) - as NC every 2 sliders isn't really good imo.
00:54:609 (1) - Your rhythm is really inconsistent here. Instead of changing the clickable ticks with single circles (like this 00:55:893 (1,2) - ) maybe use
repeats + circle or just 2 circles to increase varierty instead of this. Changing the clickable tick for no reason is just confusing.
[Hard]
01:12:577 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This part is really intense. You should probably use more 1/2 rhythm here and less 1/1 to make it also feel more intense when playing.
01:33:112 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same here
01:45:946 (1,3) - You haven't really used overlaps like this anywhere else in the map so you should avoid it here too
01:54:930 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure about this. Might be a bit too hard to read for a hard
[Insane]
OD 8 is a bit high imo for a 4,4* Insane
00:17:390 (1,2) - 00:22:524 (1,2) - 00:27:658 (1,2) - I don't really like the 3/4s here as it skips the drum tick in the red tick and the sound isn't that strong anyway so I'd say your better of with 1/2 slider instead
00:37:123 (2,3) - Maybe slider first and then circle if you're following vocals?
00:41:134 (2) - circle and 1/2 slider instead? 1/1 doesn't really follow anything
00:44:342 - 00:54:609 I really like this part even more than the first part of the verse as this part has the vocals captured really well.
01:52:363 (1,2,3,4) - This part is really intense. It feels kinda lacking tho as 01:51:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - has a pretty much the same spacing.
I find the Insane a lot better than your Extra. It's more fun to play imo and it has better emphasis on specific notes rather than just 1/2 all the time.
[Extra]
Just my personal opinion but I think this part 00:34:075 - 00:54:609 Could benefit from calmer mapping and there are interesting rhythms on the vocals too so it would be better imo to map those instead of the constant 1/2 with triples sometimes and saves jumps to parts where it gets more intense like here 00:43:379 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 00:50:759 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - here.
00:53:005 (1,2,3,4,5) - The melody here is really intense you should map to it instead of vocals
01:54:930 (1,2,3,4) - Also I'm not really fan of this as it imo doesn't follow the rhythm too well
Won't go more in detail but I think you could use less 1/2 rhythms here even though it's an extra (I found the kiai part very nice tho )
All your diffs look really great wow. Wish I could make something like this.
[Normal]
Not sure but I feel like AR 5 and OD 5 are a bit high for the lowest diff. Maybe use 4 instead?
Your NCs are bit uneven here. I think you should just go for NC every 2 down beats most of the time like here 00:18:674 (1,2,3,4) - as NC every 2 sliders isn't really good imo.
00:54:609 (1) - Your rhythm is really inconsistent here. Instead of changing the clickable ticks with single circles (like this 00:55:893 (1,2) - ) maybe use
repeats + circle or just 2 circles to increase varierty instead of this. Changing the clickable tick for no reason is just confusing.
[Hard]
01:12:577 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This part is really intense. You should probably use more 1/2 rhythm here and less 1/1 to make it also feel more intense when playing.
01:33:112 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same here
01:45:946 (1,3) - You haven't really used overlaps like this anywhere else in the map so you should avoid it here too
01:54:930 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure about this. Might be a bit too hard to read for a hard
[Insane]
OD 8 is a bit high imo for a 4,4* Insane
00:17:390 (1,2) - 00:22:524 (1,2) - 00:27:658 (1,2) - I don't really like the 3/4s here as it skips the drum tick in the red tick and the sound isn't that strong anyway so I'd say your better of with 1/2 slider instead
00:37:123 (2,3) - Maybe slider first and then circle if you're following vocals?
00:41:134 (2) - circle and 1/2 slider instead? 1/1 doesn't really follow anything
00:44:342 - 00:54:609 I really like this part even more than the first part of the verse as this part has the vocals captured really well.
01:52:363 (1,2,3,4) - This part is really intense. It feels kinda lacking tho as 01:51:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - has a pretty much the same spacing.
I find the Insane a lot better than your Extra. It's more fun to play imo and it has better emphasis on specific notes rather than just 1/2 all the time.
[Extra]
Just my personal opinion but I think this part 00:34:075 - 00:54:609 Could benefit from calmer mapping and there are interesting rhythms on the vocals too so it would be better imo to map those instead of the constant 1/2 with triples sometimes and saves jumps to parts where it gets more intense like here 00:43:379 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 00:50:759 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - here.
00:53:005 (1,2,3,4,5) - The melody here is really intense you should map to it instead of vocals
01:54:930 (1,2,3,4) - Also I'm not really fan of this as it imo doesn't follow the rhythm too well
Won't go more in detail but I think you could use less 1/2 rhythms here even though it's an extra (I found the kiai part very nice tho )
All your diffs look really great wow. Wish I could make something like this.