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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年3月16日 at 12:48:21

Artist: Mikoi Sasaki
Title: Bokura no Seiza
Source: 星恋＊ティンクル
Tags: eroge opening Akitoshi Corinn Yohanes yaldo_27 Nanashima Asami Left
BPM: 200
Filesize: 22045kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:

Advanced (2.44 stars, 188 notes)
Akitoshi's Normal (1.85 stars, 129 notes)
Asami's Insane (4.92 stars, 296 notes)
Hard (3.31 stars, 244 notes)
Left's Sparkle (5.66 stars, 317 notes)
Yohanes' Insane (4.38 stars, 303 notes)

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[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56475
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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[Metadata]
Title:Bokura no Seiza
TitleUnicode:ぼくらの星座
Artist:Sasaki Mirai
ArtistUnicode:佐々木未来
Creator:joker-
Version:Left's Sparkle
Source:星恋＊ティンクル
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.8
ApproachRate:9.5
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Doyak

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Doyak 2016-12-01T08:16:47+00:00

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2016-11-30 22:06 Left: 도약님
2016-11-30 22:07 Left: 맵 아주 짤막하게 봐주실수 있나여
2016-11-30 22:07 Left: 엑라 찍는데 괜찮은지 모르겠음
2016-11-30 22:08 Doyak: 네
2016-11-30 22:09 Left: http://puu.sh/szqcQ/53e831ca7e.osz
2016-11-30 22:13 Doyak: 00:09:105 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 이게 계속 어색하게 느껴지는데
2016-11-30 22:13 Doyak: 00:09:105 (1) - 에는 확실한 소리가 있어서 1,2 패턴이 어울리지만
2016-11-30 22:14 Doyak: 00:09:555 (1) - 이나 00:10:005 (1) - 는 사라지는 소리에 불과해서
2016-11-30 22:14 Doyak: 똑같이 클릭을 유도하는 게 과연 좋은 선택인가 의문이네요
2016-11-30 22:14 Left: 흠..
2016-11-30 22:14 Doyak: 각 소리들이 00:09:405 - 00:09:855 - 에서 사라지지도 않는데 슬라이더가 딱 끊겨버려서 아쉬운 점도 있고
2016-11-30 22:15 Left: 이부분은 다른 표현법을 고민해보겠습니다
2016-11-30 22:15 Doyak: 00:10:605 (1,2) - 이렇게 가까이 있는 게 리딩에 문제를 일으키지 않을지 모르겠네요
2016-11-30 22:15 Left: 리딩은 음..
2016-11-30 22:16 Left: 엑라니까..
2016-11-30 22:17 Doyak: 00:13:755 (1) - 아무리 이 소리가 강하다고 해도 음악이 바뀌는 곳은 00:13:905 (2) - 여기인데 콤보를 이렇게 끊은 것이 과연 적절할까요
2016-11-30 22:18 Left: 고쳤습니당
2016-11-30 22:19 Doyak: 00:16:305 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 소리의 강도가 1들과 나머지들에 차이가 큰데, 디스턴스적으로 거의 구분이 없어서 좀 아쉬웠어요
2016-11-30 22:19 Doyak: 그리고 00:16:905 (2) - 에는 그 드럼소리마저 거의 안 들리네요
2016-11-30 22:21 Left: 좀더 변화를 줬습니닷
2016-11-30 22:21 Doyak: 00:38:505 (1) - 00:40:905 (3,4) - 같은 소리인데 표현이 다르네요
2016-11-30 22:23 Left: 높은 보컬 좀더 어렵게 할라고 해본것이지만
2016-11-30 22:23 Left: 수정 고려해볼게요
2016-11-30 22:23 Doyak: 00:49:455 (1) - 00:49:905 (3) - 00:51:930 (1) - 패턴에 맞추어서 뉴콤을 짠 것은 좋은데, 음악과 너무 동떨어진 느낌이 들어요
2016-11-30 22:23 Doyak: 처음부터 패턴이 음악이 끊어지는 곳에 맞추어 만들어졌더라면 이렇게 하지 않아도 됐을텐데 하는 아쉬움이 남네요
2016-11-30 22:23 Doyak: 그리고 00:51:930 (1) - 스냅 잘못됐습니다
2016-11-30 22:24 Left: 엑..
2016-11-30 22:24 Doyak: 00:53:205 (1,2) - 왜 여기가 넓직한 1/4 슬라들인지 여쭤봐도 될까요?
2016-11-30 22:26 Left: 뒷노트 강조랑 약간 끄는 베이스?
2016-11-30 22:27 Doyak: 그런데 2번 노트를 제외하고
2016-11-30 22:27 Doyak: 00:52:305 - 00:52:755 - 00:53:205 - 00:53:505 - 는 전부
2016-11-30 22:27 Doyak: 강한 음들이 있는데
2016-11-30 22:27 Doyak: 이것들과 똑같은 정도의 강조를
2016-11-30 22:27 Doyak: 매우 약한 소리에 하는 것이
2016-11-30 22:27 Doyak: 과연 진짜 강한 소리들을 강조하는 데에
2016-11-30 22:27 Doyak: 도움이 될까요?
2016-11-30 22:28 Doyak: 저는 오히려 00:53:205 - 00:53:355 - 00:53:505 - 00:53:655 - 00:53:805 - 가 모두 똑같은 클릭에 ,비슷한 움직임을 요구하고 있어서
2016-11-30 22:28 Doyak: 어느 쪽이 더 강한 소리이고 어느 쪽이 약한 소리인지 맵상으로는 구분이 가지 않네요
2016-11-30 22:29 Doyak: 흐름이 변화하는 곳이 뭐랄까, 노래가 변화하는 곳에 있지 않고 한 발 앞서서 시작해버린 느낌
2016-11-30 22:30 Left: 음..
2016-11-30 22:30 Left: 뭔가 의도한 움직임이 있는데
2016-11-30 22:30 Left: 설명을 잘 못하겠네요
2016-11-30 22:30 Left: 아마 제가 잘못 사용한걸지도 모르겠네요
2016-11-30 22:30 Left: 검토해보겟슴다
2016-11-30 22:31 Doyak: 00:53:205 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 아마 그다지 동의하진 않으시겠지만, 이렇게 갑작스럽게 움직임에 큰 변화를 줘야 할 정도로 노래가 많이 변화했나 좀 의문이네요
2016-11-30 22:32 Doyak: 00:47:505 - 에 비해서 리듬 패턴이 조금 바뀌었을 뿐, 분위기상으로는 크게 차이를 못 느끼겠거든요
2016-11-30 22:32 Left: 음..
2016-11-30 22:32 Doyak: 물론 약간 텐션이 증가하는 감이 없지는 않은데, 앞에서는 슬라들로 주로 리듬을 짜서
2016-11-30 22:33 Doyak: 실질적으로 플레이어에게 주어지는 부담감이 거의 없었는데
2016-11-30 22:33 Doyak: 여기서의 껑충 뛰는 연속 삼각점프는 조금 과다한 감이 있네요
2016-11-30 22:34 Left: 정도는 고민해봐야겠지만, 앞과의 차이는 분명히 의도한 바이므로..
2016-11-30 22:34 Left: 그리고 개인적으로 00:54:705 (1,2,3) - 와 극단적인 차이도 약간 중요해서
2016-11-30 22:35 Doyak: 3~4배 차이면 굉장히 크기는 하죠
2016-11-30 22:37 Doyak: 01:09:705 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) - 여기도 패턴이 걸쳐진 게 좀 애매하네요
2016-11-30 22:38 Doyak: 01:09:705 (1,2,1,2) - 에서의 패턴을 굳이 01:10:305 (1,2) - 여기까지 확장해야 하는 의미를 잘 모르겠어요
2016-11-30 22:38 Left: 그렇네요
2016-11-30 22:39 Left: 아 님이 캎에 올리신
2016-11-30 22:39 Left: 리맵vs부분수정이 떠올라버렸슴니다..
2016-11-30 22:39 Doyak: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2016-11-30 22:39 Doyak: 사실 그건 그 드립을 치고 싶었던 것 뿐...
2016-11-30 22:40 Left: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2016-11-30 22:40 Left: 컴공 미워
2016-11-30 22:40 Doyak: 01:13:005 (3,4) - 음 이건 왜 1/4이죠
2016-11-30 22:40 Doyak: 특별히 다른 부분들과 음악적으로 다른 것도 안 보이고
2016-11-30 22:41 Doyak: 슬라 끝에 뭔가 특별한 게 있을 거라고 기대하게 만드는데 말이죠
2016-11-30 22:41 Left: 서클로 바꿨습니다
2016-11-30 22:42 Doyak: 그것도 그렇지만 저는
2016-11-30 22:42 Doyak: 01:11:805 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 여기에 왜 서클이 이렇게 많이 몰려야 하는지도 잘 모르겠어요
2016-11-30 22:42 Doyak: 아주 평범한 드럼 패턴 + 피아노들인데
2016-11-30 22:42 Doyak: 강조를 해줄 소리가 있는 곳들보다도 더 많이 클릭시켜야 하는 이유가?
2016-11-30 22:43 Left: (설명할 수 없는 이유가 있어 그냥 고치기로 합니다)
2016-11-30 22:43 Doyak: ㄷㄷ
2016-11-30 22:44 Left: 앞쪽 노트는 좀더 자연스럽게 변속을 이을려고 했는데
2016-11-30 22:44 Left: 사실 그 뒤는 pp죠
2016-11-30 22:44 Left: ㅋㅋㅋ
2016-11-30 22:45 Doyak: 이젠 뭐 누가 pp를 노려 찍든 별로 신경 안 쓰지만
2016-11-30 22:45 Doyak: (어차피 다들 하고 있으니)
2016-11-30 22:45 Doyak: 일단 이 정도? 면 된 것 같네요
2016-11-30 22:46 Left: 헉 이것은
2016-11-30 22:46 Left: 쿠도스 안받으면 억울한 각..
2016-11-30 22:46 Doyak: 지금 포스트 쓰는 건 좀 그런가
2016-11-30 22:46 Left: 상관없을듯
2016-11-30 22:47 Doyak: 아직 업로드도 안 된 맵을 ㄷㄷ
2016-11-30 22:47 Doyak: 업로드 되면 그 때 올릴게요
2016-11-30 22:47 Left: 넵
2016-11-30 22:47 Left: 모딩 감사합니다!
2016-11-30 22:47 Left: 숏슬 좀더 고민해봐야될듯

kayu77

33 posts

Joined August 2014

kayu77 2016-12-07T12:21:03+00:00

音取りもがんばってぇ！

irc

2016-12-07 20:42 joker-: お
2016-12-07 20:42 joker-: modしてくれる？？うぇ
2016-12-07 20:42 joker-: ｗ
2016-12-07 20:43 kayu77: ぇｗ
2016-12-07 20:43 kayu77: やり方教えてくだしゃいｗｗ
2016-12-07 20:43 joker-: ｗｗｗ
2016-12-07 20:43 kayu77: いちお　ちょっと気になったとこが
2016-12-07 20:43 joker-: うん
2016-12-07 20:43 joker-: どこ？
2016-12-07 20:44 kayu77: あの～
2016-12-07 20:44 kayu77: ちょっとお恥ずかしいんですけど
2016-12-07 20:44 kayu77: 時間指定どうやってやるんです...？
2016-12-07 20:44 joker-: オブジェクトクリックしてコントロールCでここに張り付ける
2016-12-07 20:44 kayu77: あいい！
2016-12-07 20:45 kayu77: 01:18:555 (6) -
2016-12-07 20:45 kayu77: ここの３連を
2016-12-07 20:45 joker-: うん
2016-12-07 20:46 kayu77: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6748122
2016-12-07 20:46 joker-: あぁ
2016-12-07 20:46 kayu77: こんな感じにちょっと曲げるとやりやすい？　かもしれないですー
2016-12-07 20:46 joker-: いいね～
2016-12-07 20:46 joker-: 直した
2016-12-07 20:46 kayu77: 後は
2016-12-07 20:47 kayu77: 01:25:905 (1) -
2016-12-07 20:47 kayu77: ここと
2016-12-07 20:47 kayu77: 01:27:105 (1) -
2016-12-07 20:47 joker-: いやこれは故意だね
2016-12-07 20:47 kayu77: ほむほむ
2016-12-07 20:47 joker-: 01:25:905 (1) - 01:30:705 (1) -
2016-12-07 20:47 joker-: これが対応してる
2016-12-07 20:47 joker-: それぼれの場所からは同じ音取りになってると思う
2016-12-07 20:48 kayu77: あー　んと
2016-12-07 20:48 joker-: うん
2016-12-07 20:48 kayu77: 01:27:105 (1) - 01:31:905 (1) -
2016-12-07 20:48 joker-: うん
2016-12-07 20:48 kayu77: ピアノの音量下がってるから
2016-12-07 20:49 kayu77: 最初のほうは　1/1スライダーでいいいかなー　って思っただけだけど
2016-12-07 20:49 kayu77: 故意ならいっかなｗ
2016-12-07 20:49 joker-: Exだしあんまり1/1スライダー使いたくないってのがあるかなぁ
2016-12-07 20:49 joker-: bpm200のsv1.8だし
2016-12-07 20:50 joker-: じゃまｗ
2016-12-07 20:50 kayu77: まぁたしかにｗ
2016-12-07 20:51 joker-: ほかにある？
2016-12-07 20:51 kayu77: これちょっと自分のあれになっちゃうけど
2016-12-07 20:51 kayu77: 00:54:555 (7) -
2016-12-07 20:51 kayu77: ここのやつを
2016-12-07 20:52 kayu77: あれ..　アップできない；
2016-12-07 20:52 kayu77: ちょいとお待ちを～
2016-12-07 20:52 joker-: 　ういー
2016-12-07 20:52 kayu77: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6748150
2016-12-07 20:52 kayu77: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6748154
2016-12-07 20:53 kayu77: 自分ならこんな感じに音とっちゃうかな
2016-12-07 20:54 joker-: ん？
2016-12-07 20:54 joker-: ここ３連の音ある？
2016-12-07 20:54 kayu77: ピアノの　たららんって音ない？
2016-12-07 20:56 joker-: うーんたしかに白線置いたほうがあってる気がするなぁうん変えた

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2016-12-25T15:58:37+00:00

暇だったんで軽く見てみることにしましたー
ほぼ最初の投稿なので、modというよりもdateなどをメインにチェックします

General

Audio Lead in ＋ 500 or 1000

add tags

BGの規格の変更と、名前をBGとかに変更

Advanceの緑線を消してください。たぶん同じだよね？
https://gyazo.com/5bd439e7a0460fdca627a066a5339c45

Left's Sparkle 緑線を消してください
https://gyazo.com/650cff3b28b94b1a513948a4995bd956

Yohanes' Insane 緑線を消してください
https://gyazo.com/8c0e647c1cedf56bebc7e11c83ea84af
https://gyazo.com/cacdaf03e6cb793251de619c76b8fec7

Akitoshi's Normal　のスライダーの感度がすごく微妙なので、0.9でよくない？って思います

　Extra　

00:04:605 (2) - 　尾の音が高く大きく感じるので、尾の音はとってあげたほうが良いですね
スライダーの尾は、osuのedit上では音がなりますが、実際のプレイする際には音として叩かないからです。
00:19:305 (3) - 　^^
00:21:705 (3) - 　^^
00:24:105 (3) - ^^
こういうところです

00:47:205 (5,1) - 　きちんとblanket組みましょう
https://gyazo.com/17a50f1029e810324d4d9b65b8cfff66
00:48:705 (1) - 　^^

00:57:105 (1,4) - このような微妙な重なりは少しきになります

00:59:205 (7) - 　歌詞で、はっきりと音がでているのでここはnoteですかね
00:58:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 　こっちのほうnoteはあまりおすすめできません。
逆だと思います
01:07:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 　^^

01:23:055 (2) - 尾の音を5％とかにして、音を小さくしましょう

01:33:555 (2,3) - 　この２つをスライダーに
01:31:155 (2,1,3,3) - 　こいつらがスライダーだからです。

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以上です

Beomsan

Beatmap Nominator

1,890 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 2016-12-26T20:07:00+00:00

tAkeマイfiveスターズ

Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2016-12-26T23:17:31+00:00

Beomsan wrote:
tAkeマイfiveスターズ

고마워！！！ありがとう！！！

@-Yuzurihaさん
Pendに移すときにまとめて直しておきます～

__Ag

611 posts

Joined July 2011

__Ag 2017-01-04T00:46:06+00:00

おっすぅぅぅぅ！ただいま、またやりそうか？おいらも一緒にやりたいが、間に会えるかと思ってるんや、ところで日本から食べ物をいっぱい連れて行って帰って、食べへんか？

Meg

1,619 posts

Joined August 2012

Meg 2017-01-04T02:54:07+00:00

たべよか～！

Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-01-04T03:16:07+00:00

よっしゃ！この譜面はもうゲスト埋まってるからほかの譜面でやらへん？
食べ物もってきてくれたら一緒に食べよか～！

Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-01-14T05:40:11+00:00

All Update!

@Corinn, -lolist-, Yohanes, Left
Plz re-download this map cuz of added tags, video and bg

[ -Scarlet- ]

526 posts

Joined March 2013

[ -Scarlet- ] 2017-01-14T11:41:55+00:00

Hey there, m4m from your queue

[Left's Sparkle]

First run testplay

Quite unsure why HP5.5 though? Just use HP6 instead @@

00:04:605 - I think this part needs to be clickable, a circle in short. It would be nice along with the piano. Maybe remove 00:04:305 (1) - slider and convert to 1/1 circles instead?
00:10:005 (1) - Erm, please increase the distance for this. The suddenly sudden fast pace from 00:09:255 (2) - makes this 00:10:005 (1) - feels like is 1/4 apart
00:17:655 (2,3) - This jump is definitely uncomfortable. The section consist of rather large jumps, but followed by a rather small 1/4 slider jump, ended with huge jump to the 00:17:805 (3) - . Missed multiple times here
01:11:355 (1) - Could stack the slider end better xd
01:26:805 (2) - Please a least move this slider a little downwards or something, it is really difficult to read this slider especially in the first try. But later sliders works surprisingly because the players are already aware of these perfectly stacked sliders. Maybe move this one a bit as an indication that there will be upcoming similar stacked slider?

Pretty solid map again

[Extra]

First run testplay

00:18:705 (1) - Maybe NC here then follow up by NC here 00:19:005 (2) - . Same thing applies to the later section
00:32:805 (3,4) - Would prefer using 1/2 slider here instead. I think it fits the piano well like what you did at 00:33:705 (3,4) - , but the circles doesn't really follow anything well unlike the obvious vocal at 00:35:205 (4,5) - which works great
01:06:555 (10,1) - Really huge jump here, and it really flows very badly toward the 01:06:705 (1) - . Consider reducing the distance

Rest of the map looks fine as it is

[-lolist's Insane]

First run testplay

Really nothing to say for this one, everything plays well! Nicely done~

[Yohanes's Insane]

First run testplay

00:17:205 (4) - Small stuff, maybe try this instead? http://puu.sh/tlWMV/c540b64764.jpg I think it would fit the song really well
00:21:105 (1) - 00:28:305 (1) - I don't think there's a need for NC for this one though. Remove it and NC 00:21:405 (2) - instead
01:04:155 (1) - Maybe add clap on the slider-end here, feels random to have claps starting at blue tick here 01:04:530 (2) -

Other than that, everything else plays really nicely

That's all from me~ Good luck!

lit120

3,272 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2017-01-14T13:36:47+00:00

from ur q

[left]

those missing hitsounds...
00:07:155 (2,2) - nice one, but looks like u have to fix the stacks instead, since u put it on the middle for the slider end
00:13:755 (3) - missing clap
00:16:155 (4) - ^
00:42:105 (2) - 00:44:505 (3) - why not whistle like u did on 00:38:505 (1,2,3) -
00:54:555 (4,1) - fix the blanket
01:06:255 (1,2,3) - where's the hitsound .-.
01:11:205 (3) - missing clap
01:21:705 (2,2,2) - ^

[extra]

01:05:805 (3) - clap
01:11:205 (6) - ^

[-lolist-]

00:46:905 (1,1,1,1) - what's the NC for?

that's it

DeletedUser_7370134

DeletedUser_7370134 2017-01-14T23:10:59+00:00

[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:
Hey there, m4m from your queue

[-lolist's Insane]

First run testplay

Really nothing to say for this one, everything plays well! Nicely done~ thanks!

lit120 wrote:
[-lolist-]
00:46:905 (1,1,1,1) - what's the NC for? for visual preference
that's it

thx guys!

fixed some minor things

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56475
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 9105,16305,18705,37905,47505,56655,76305,85905,95355,100305
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Bokura no Seiza
TitleUnicode:ぼくらの星座
Artist:Sasaki Mirai
ArtistUnicode:佐々木未来
Creator:joker-
Version:-lolist-'s Insane
Source:星恋＊ティンクル
Tags:eroge opening Akitoshi Corinn Yohanes -lolist- Left
BeatmapID:1180704
BeatmapSetID:539139

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.1
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9.2
SliderMultiplier:1.75
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
Video,-80,"video.avi"
//Break Periods
2,55355,56085
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo2 : 173,255,95
Combo3 : 17,254,176
Combo4 : 255,88,100

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Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-01-17T04:34:18+00:00

lit120 wrote:
from ur q

[extra]
01:05:805 (3) - clap
01:11:205 (6) - ^
both fixed~

that's it

[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:
Hey there, m4m from your queue

[Extra]

First run testplay thanks for playing
00:18:705 (1) - Maybe NC here then follow up by NC here 00:19:005 (2) - . Same thing applies to the later section No, I'm following present NC pattern in consistent
00:32:805 (3,4) - Would prefer using 1/2 slider here instead. I think it fits the piano well like what you did at 00:33:705 (3,4) - , but the circles doesn't really follow anything well unlike the obvious vocal at 00:35:205 (4,5) - which works great right, fixed
01:06:555 (10,1) - Really huge jump here, and it really flows very badly toward the 01:06:705 (1) - . Consider reducing the distance i think flow is not bad... but i reduce the distance

Rest of the map looks fine as it is

That's all from me~ Good luck!

thank you guys!

Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-01-17T05:41:58+00:00

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Yohanes

1,285 posts

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2017-01-18T07:30:54+00:00

[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:
[Yohanes's Insane]

First run testplay
00:17:205 (4) - Small stuff, maybe try this instead? http://puu.sh/tlWMV/c540b64764.jpg I think it would fit the song really well I don't really like to leave the 1/1 rhythm empty while there're strong music in the background. So I will leave it as it is for now
00:21:105 (1) - 00:28:305 (1) - I don't think there's a need for NC for this one though. Remove it and NC 00:21:405 (2) - instead I NC'd them based on the downbeats, the strong sound is there so I think it's best to put the NC there.
01:04:155 (1) - Maybe add clap on the slider-end here, feels random to have claps starting at blue tick here 01:04:530 (2) - That will sound too crowded for my preference. I put the hitsound based on the background instrument, since there're no drum on the slider-end, putting a clap there seems redundant

Other than that, everything else plays really nicely

That's all from me~ Good luck!

Thank you Scarlet! but sorry no change from my end ._.

anyway, I changed some things on my diff

update

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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Title:Bokura no Seiza
TitleUnicode:ぼくらの星座
Artist:Sasaki Mirai
ArtistUnicode:佐々木未来
Creator:joker-
Version:Yohanes' Insane
Source:星恋＊ティンクル
Tags:eroge opening Akitoshi Corinn Yohanes -lolist- Left
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Syph

Beatmap Nominator

848 posts

Joined August 2014

Syph 2017-01-21T07:57:47+00:00

hi

[Extra]

00:09:105 - place a note here?
00:37:605 (2) - 3/4 seems weird here
00:38:505 (3) - was this intentional? i think it should be 1/1
01:25:155 (2,3,4) - space this a bit less please, it's too much, vocals are pretty calm

[Left's Sparkle]

where's combo colors

00:13:755 (3) - could do a whistle or clap here, sounds a bit weird without
00:15:255 (2) - this was a bit weird to play for me, i know it ruins your stack with 00:15:855 (3) - if you move it but could you try moving it to something like 108|168? feels better
00:27:705 (2,1) - could blanket here
00:38:805 - i don't like this being on a reverse, the sound in the music is so strong here so consider making it clickable like here.. 00:41:205 (4) -
00:43:305 (1) - ^
00:48:105 (1) - finish? there's a cymbal crash owo
01:00:555 (5,1) - could blanket this toooo
01:03:405 (2) - should space this more from 1 since strong sound on this ;;
01:16:305 (1) - finish? idk

gl~

DeletedUser_7370134

DeletedUser_7370134 2017-01-21T08:13:27+00:00

thanks Meg for irc mod

2017-01-21 11:07 Meg: ぱっと聞いて01:06:255 (2,3,4,5) -
2017-01-21 11:07 Meg: 01:06:405 - 01:06:555 - 01:06:630 - にだけclapじゃないかなあ
2017-01-21 11:08 Nanashima Asami: ここめっちゃわかんなくて適当につけてた
2017-01-21 11:08 Meg: 01:06:255 (2,3) - のclapは浮きまくってる
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: つけても(2)にwhistleくらいかな
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: あとは
2017-01-21 11:09 Nanashima Asami: あね
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: 01:08:655 (3,4) - ここの３つの音はサークルで拾ったほうがきれいにボーカルフォローできてbetterかな
2017-01-21 11:10 Nanashima Asami: かえたｗ
2017-01-21 11:10 Meg: サビはとりあえずそんなもんだな～

http://puu.sh/tu4nn/b322729fc8.zip

Meg

1,619 posts

Joined August 2012

Meg 2017-01-21T09:54:50+00:00

Nanashima Asami wrote:

thanks Meg for irc mod

2017-01-21 11:07 Meg: ぱっと聞いて01:06:255 (2,3,4,5) -
2017-01-21 11:07 Meg: 01:06:405 - 01:06:555 - 01:06:630 - にだけclapじゃないかなあ
2017-01-21 11:08 Nanashima Asami: ここめっちゃわかんなくて適当につけてた
2017-01-21 11:08 Meg: 01:06:255 (2,3) - のclapは浮きまくってる
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: つけても(2)にwhistleくらいかな
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: あとは
2017-01-21 11:09 Nanashima Asami: あね
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: 01:08:655 (3,4) - ここの３つの音はサークルで拾ったほうがきれいにボーカルフォローできてbetterかな
2017-01-21 11:10 Nanashima Asami: かえたｗ
2017-01-21 11:10 Meg: サビはとりあえずそんなもんだな～

http://puu.sh/tu4nn/b322729fc8.zip

これmodじゃなくね？今度ちゃんとmodします

Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-01-21T09:55:42+00:00

Meg wrote:

Nanashima Asami wrote:

thanks Meg for irc mod

2017-01-21 11:07 Meg: ぱっと聞いて01:06:255 (2,3,4,5) -
2017-01-21 11:07 Meg: 01:06:405 - 01:06:555 - 01:06:630 - にだけclapじゃないかなあ
2017-01-21 11:08 Nanashima Asami: ここめっちゃわかんなくて適当につけてた
2017-01-21 11:08 Meg: 01:06:255 (2,3) - のclapは浮きまくってる
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: つけても(2)にwhistleくらいかな
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: あとは
2017-01-21 11:09 Nanashima Asami: あね
2017-01-21 11:09 Meg: 01:08:655 (3,4) - ここの３つの音はサークルで拾ったほうがきれいにボーカルフォローできてbetterかな
2017-01-21 11:10 Nanashima Asami: かえたｗ
2017-01-21 11:10 Meg: サビはとりあえずそんなもんだな～

http://puu.sh/tu4nn/b322729fc8.zip

これmodじゃなくね？modしました

yes kdsで

sahuang

2,294 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2017-01-21T12:58:43+00:00

Placehold~~

warning

[nm]

01:23:055 (4) - why not use a 1/1 slider? Fits the song better. Besides it's lowest diff so i think 2 circles may be a bit difficult.

[adv]

should be Advanced lol

[hd]

00:23:505 (1,2) - down a bit for better flow
can use more ds variation next time, no need to stick to ds lol

[yo]

00:27:705 (5) - wtf is this slider shape...
00:29:955 (2,3) - why red tick at the end
01:29:055 (4,5) - why suddenly so big ds lol should be consistent with 01:28:305 (1,2,3) - imo
More like a light insane

[as]

00:37:605 (2) - i suggest that you use 2 circles cuz 00:37:605 - 00:37:755 - beat is pretty clear. The slider is not following music/vocal..
00:46:905 (1,1,1,1) - wew as the piano goes i think if you decrease ds it will be really nice

[ex]

00:54:705 (1) - move left a bit?can stack 00:53:655 (2,1) -
00:56:655 (1,2,3) - try same ds
00:57:105 (1,4) - this overlap is pretty messy
01:29:955 (4,1) - make them consistent
A bit messy somehow

[l]

00:17:505 (1,2,3) - these ds too big...1/4 sliders lol
00:27:105 (1,2,1) - why
01:03:105 (1,2,3) - so small ds in kiai
Don't be lasse

Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-01-21T13:57:24+00:00

I used 1/2 instead since I want to map the strong cymbals on 01:23:055 -
thank you Azusa uwu

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 56475
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Bokura no Seiza
TitleUnicode:ぼくらの星座
Artist:Sasaki Mirai
ArtistUnicode:佐々木未来
Creator:joker-
Version:Akitoshi's Normal
Source:星恋＊ティンクル
Tags:eroge opening Akitoshi Corinn Yohanes -lolist- Nanashima Asami Left
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3.5
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Yohanes

1,285 posts

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2017-01-21T14:17:14+00:00

My Angel Azusa wrote:
[yo]
00:27:705 (5) - wtf is this slider shape... lol I kinda like it, no change for now. not sure tho
00:29:955 (2,3) - why red tick at the end Red tick at the end act as a 4th tick on the slider. I'm doing it so that it have old slider algorithm (I did this in a lot of my other maps too)
01:29:055 (4,5) - why suddenly so big ds lol should be consistent with 01:28:305 (1,2,3) - imo that one... I think is not mainly because of the clap makes it deserved a higher spacing, and it's not suddenly btw. It's basically the same with 01:26:655 (4,5) -, 01:27:855 (4,5) -, etc
More like a light insane It is

Thanks ~~sahuang~~ Azusa! but sorry no change ._.

Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-01-21T14:40:28+00:00

Syph wrote:
hi

[Extra]

00:09:105 - place a note here? hmm... it's very calm sound i think, so i dont need to take it
00:37:605 (2) - 3/4 seems weird here i think it's no problem but if other point out it, i'll fix
00:38:505 (3) - was this intentional? i think it should be 1/1 perfectly missing thx!
01:25:155 (2,3,4) - space this a bit less please, it's too much, vocals are pretty calm okay reduce distance

gl~ thanks~

My Angel Azusa wrote:
Placehold~~

[adv]
should be Advanced lol

[hd]
00:23:505 (1,2) - down a bit for better flow
can use more ds variation next time, no need to stick to ds lol okay I'll try to next time!

[ex]
00:54:705 (1) - move left a bit?can stack 00:53:655 (2,1) -
00:56:655 (1,2,3) - try same ds
00:57:105 (1,4) - this overlap is pretty messy
01:29:955 (4,1) - make them consistent
A bit messy somehow hmm... i'll do my best
All fixed~ thx Azusa!

Left

2,162 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-01-21T14:47:50+00:00

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[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:
Hey there, m4m from your queue

[Left's Sparkle]

First run testplay

Quite unsure why HP5.5 though? Just use HP6 instead @@ hard map so low hp
00:04:605 - I think this part needs to be clickable, a circle in short. It would be nice along with the piano. Maybe remove 00:04:305 (1) - slider and convert to 1/1 circles instead? rip i don't wanna put so many clickables here
00:10:005 (1) - Erm, please increase the distance for this. The suddenly sudden fast pace from 00:09:255 (2) - makes this 00:10:005 (1) - feels like is 1/4 apart show increasing tension
00:17:655 (2,3) - This jump is definitely uncomfortable. The section consist of rather large jumps, but followed by a rather small 1/4 slider jump, ended with huge jump to the 00:17:805 (3) - . Missed multiple times here yeah
01:11:355 (1) - Could stack the slider end better xdrip me
01:26:805 (2) - Please a least move this slider a little downwards or something, it is really difficult to read this slider especially in the first try. But later sliders works surprisingly because the players are already aware of these perfectly stacked sliders. Maybe move this one a bit as an indication that there will be upcoming similar stacked slider? was considering this one so fixed

Pretty solid map again

That's all from me~ Good luck!

thx for mod!

lit120 wrote:
from ur q

[left]
those missing hitsounds...
00:07:155 (2,2) - nice one, but looks like u have to fix the stacks instead, since u put it on the middle for the slider endk
00:13:755 (3) - missing clap
00:16:155 (4) - ^
00:42:105 (2) - 00:44:505 (3) - why not whistle like u did on 00:38:505 (1,2,3) -
00:54:555 (4,1) - fix the blanket lazy me will fix
01:06:255 (1,2,3) - where's the hitsound .-.
01:11:205 (3) - missing clap
01:21:705 (2,2,2) - ^
hs all fix ez

that's it

thx for mod~

Syph wrote:
hi

[Left's Sparkle]

where's combo colors I ate

00:13:755 (3) - could do a whistle or clap here, sounds a bit weird without
00:15:255 (2) - this was a bit weird to play for me, i know it ruins your stack with 00:15:855 (3) - if you move it but could you try moving it to something like 108|168? feels better
00:27:705 (2,1) - could blanket here sahu also said so i'll fix
00:38:805 - i don't like this being on a reverse, the sound in the music is so strong here so consider making it clickable like here.. 00:41:205 (4) - showed that sound like this
00:43:305 (1) - ^
00:48:105 (1) - finish? there's a cymbal crash owo messy i think
01:00:555 (5,1) - could blanket this toooo i don't like blanket here man
01:03:405 (2) - should space this more from 1 since strong sound on this ;; fixed
01:16:305 (1) - finish? idk yeah

gl~

thxformod~

My Angel Azusa wrote:
Placehold~~

[l]
00:17:505 (1,2,3) - these ds too big...1/4 sliders lol fixed as i can
00:27:105 (1,2,1) - why loli
01:03:105 (1,2,3) - so small ds in kiai changed to another one
Don't be lasse sorry I'm too lasse

thx for mod~

DeletedUser_7370134

DeletedUser_7370134 2017-01-21T23:05:16+00:00

My Angel Azusa wrote:
[as]
00:37:605 (2) - i suggest that you use 2 circles cuz 00:37:605 - 00:37:755 - beat is pretty clear. The slider is not following music/vocal.. i want to follow that guitar sound,so i keep that 3/4.
00:46:905 (1,1,1,1) - wew as the piano goes i think if you decrease ds it will be really nice nice,fixed

thanks for the mod azusa!

cooooooooooode

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Toyosaki Aki

337 posts

Joined February 2014

Toyosaki Aki 2017-01-24T16:12:28+00:00

modします

Akitoshi's Normal

00:34:305 - add whistle?
01:03:405 - ここの音拾いたい・・・拾いたくない？
01:21:105 (1,2) - どっちも白線まで伸ばしていいんじゃないかなあ
うますぎ

Advanced

00:37:905 - から00:47:355 - まで同じ曲調のパートって考えたら00:39:555 (5,6) - 00:41:955 (5,6) - 00:44:355 (5,6) - 00:46:755 (5,6) - は音一緒だしスタックさせるか離すか統一してみてはどうかなっておもいました
00:40:005 (7) - 00:42:405 (7) - 00:44:805 (7) - 00:47:205 (7) - whistle消すか付けるかで揃えたほうが聞いた感じ良さそう
00:53:955 (5) - ここから1/1にして00:54:705 - を叩きたい
00:58:755 (5,6,7) - 「ひとみの～」に合わせるならこっちの音取りのほうが合ってると思いまつ
SPOILER
01:11:205 - add clap
01:03:855 (7) - この後の間が謎だからこれ(↓)とかどう？
SPOILER
01:04:605 (1) - add finish
01:17:955 (6,7,1) - ここピアンノ目立ってるし01:17:955 - から1/1スライダーにするのを試してみてほしい
SPOILER

Hard

00:14:805 (4,1) - 多分この3/4と1/2のスライダーに角度がないせい(?)で少し叩きにくさを感じた
曲調は若干違うけど鳴ってるドラムは殆ど同じだから00:11:505 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - と同じ音取りで
SPOILER
みたいにするとbetterかと
それか00:37:605 (5,1) - みたいに3/4の後を余裕のある1/1スライダーにすれば読みやすい音取りになると思う
00:54:405 (4,5,1) - Ctrl+J 試してみてほしい 3/4からの角度がつく分多分こっちのほうが叩きやすいです
SPOILER
00:57:555 (2,3,4) - と01:07:155 (2,3,4) - は同じ音取りだしconsistencyって意味で00:58:755 (2,3,4,5) - と01:08:355 (2,3,4) - も揃えたらどうかな
01:34:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - しょーもないことかもしれんけど01:34:305 (1,4) - で後ろで鳴ってるシンセ(?)の音が変わってるから単発とスライダー入れ替えてみては　それに01:35:355 (6) - はシンバルなってるしclickableにしたくない？
SPOILER

Yohanes' Insane

00:04:305 - here is loud piano sound, and you placed clickable object at the other parts. So 00:04:305 - would be better to make the same way as (00:01:905 (2) - 00:03:105 (1) - 00:06:705 (1) - etc.).
01:09:855 (4) - maybe add whistle
01:18:705 (7) - ^ (since piano sounds here)
01:13:455 (4) - add clap is better imo
01:14:955 (5) - remove whistle
01:17:355 - ^

Asami's Tragic Love

00:09:255 (2) - ここ00:09:555 - まで伸ばしたほうが良くない？
00:14:655 (4,5) - 耳ガイジだから何をfollowしてるかいまいち分からんけどdrum取ってるとしたら若干DS広すぎる感じする xd
00:58:305 (1,2) - サビの序盤気持ちstack多いしここに関してはunstackのほうがパターン的には合ってるような
good stuff すぎる

Extra

00:04:605 (2) - この後の間が気になる木
かといってずっと同じパターンを繰り返すのは単調に感じるかもしれないしピアノ鳴ってるところをスライダーの頭にして
SPOILER

みたいなスタックにしてみるとかどうかな～
00:15:855 (4,1) - ここ曲調が変わってるのは明らかだけど配置は繋がっててちょっと違和感感じた　直すとなったら00:16:305 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - をremapしなきゃいけないからお任せします！
00:37:605 (2,1) - スライダーとはいえちょっと遠くない？
00:41:205 - ここvocalデカいしclickableにしたいから00:40:905 (3,4) - を1/2スライダー2個にするの試してみてくださし
00:41:955 (2) - のリバースもいまいちどこをfollowしてるのか分かりづらいから00:41:505 (1,2,3,4) - の音取りも↓のほうが自然だと思う
SPOILER
00:44:355 (2) - ここもピアノfollowしてるのは分かるけどピアノの音は「てて↑てて↓てて↑てて↓」みたいな(伝われ)2音ずつの分け方しかできないと思うし、リバース使うのは3音で区切りが作れるところに置くべきだと個人的には思う
00:49:905 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Ctrl+Shift+dで正六角形整えたらどうでしょ

Left's Sparkle

00:57:555 (2,3) - 00:59:955 (2,3) - 01:07:155 (2,1) - I felt they're cramped to play

とりあえずこれだけ・・・あとで続き書きます xd
数か所マゲさんからの指摘も入ってたり
以上です～GL！

Last edited by Toyosaki Aki 2017-01-25T18:54:02+00:00, edited 16 times in total.

Affirmation

2,548 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-01-25T03:02:57+00:00

Q

[adv]
00:17:805 (4) - DS error
00:24:105 (3,4) - looks hard for flow.
00:39:555 (5,6) - unstack for cinsistency, you didn't stack at other parts
00:44:355 (5,6) - ^

[Hard]
00:17:205 (3) - almost touching HP bar
00:59:955 (2,3) - avoid overlap since you didn't make overlap well

GL

DeletedUser_7370134

DeletedUser_7370134 2017-01-26T02:17:50+00:00

Toyosaki Aki wrote:
modします

Asami's Tragic Love
00:09:255 (2) - ここ00:09:555 - まで伸ばしたほうが良くない？ここだけメロディ（ピアノ？）が00:09:405 -　で終わってるのよね～次の二個は伸びてるけど　だからこうしてる
00:14:655 (4,5) - 耳ガイジだから何をfollowしてるかいまいち分からんけどdrum取ってるとしたら若干DS広すぎる感じする xd　ちょいせまくした　わからないぐらい微妙だけど
00:58:305 (1,2) - サビの序盤気持ちstack多いしここに関してはunstackのほうがパターン的には合ってるような　スタックさせることで00:58:605 (3) - の頭のスネアを強調させたかいのよね　ボーカル伸びててドラム聞こえやすいし
good stuff すぎる　それはないです

以上です～GL！

thanks for the mod!
...oh its my 100th post lol

code

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Eir_DELETED 2017-01-26T04:48:41+00:00

Toyosaki Aki wrote:
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00:37:905 - から00:47:355 - まで同じ曲調のパートって考えたら00:39:555 (5,6) - 00:41:955 (5,6) - 00:44:355 (5,6) - 00:46:755 (5,6) - は音一緒だしスタックさせるか離すか統一してみてはどうかなっておもいました　マジで？俺の耳が悪いから間違ってるかもしれんけど、00:39:555 (5,6) - と 00:44:355 (5,6) -が同じ音で、 00:41:955 (5,6) -と 00:46:755 (5,6) -がそれぞれ対応してるように聞こえたから同じように対応させてるんだけど、へんかな…ほかの人に言われたら変えるわ
00:40:005 (7) - 00:42:405 (7) - 00:44:805 (7) - 00:47:205 (7) - whistle消すか付けるかで揃えたほうが聞いた感じ良さそう　これも理由は上と同じなんだが。。。うーんたしかに。。。うーん
00:53:955 (5) - ここから1/1にして00:54:705 - を叩きたい　百里ある
00:58:755 (5,6,7) - 「ひとみの～」に合わせるならこっちの音取りのほうが合ってると思いまつ　ボーカルに合わせる必要ないかなーって、個人的な好みで申し訳ない
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01:11:205 - add clap
01:03:855 (7) - この後の間が謎だからこれ(↓)とかどう？　なんだここ！？これはひどいですね…これはひどい…直しました
SPOILER
01:04:605 (1) - add finish　え？シンバルなってる？なってないと思うので、keep
01:17:955 (6,7,1) - ここピアンノ目立ってるし01:17:955 - から1/1スライダーにするのを試してみてほしい Advという難易度のこと考えて、大きいピアンノの音ではないからやりやすさ優先して単純にしてます。そこにスライダーtickあるから　ゆ　る　し　て
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Hard
00:14:805 (4,1) - 多分この3/4と1/2のスライダーに角度がないせい(?)で少し叩きにくさを感じた　ここだけ1/4なのは確かに変だね、変えた。けど音取りは同じにしてないです
曲調は若干違うけど鳴ってるドラムは殆ど同じだから00:11:505 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - と同じ音取りで
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みたいにするとbetterかと
それか00:37:605 (5,1) - みたいに3/4の後を余裕のある1/1スライダーにすれば読みやすい音取りになると思う
00:54:405 (4,5,1) - Ctrl+J 試してみてほしい 3/4からの角度がつく分多分こっちのほうが叩きやすいです　たぶんそん時の俺はoverlapを避けたいがためにそうしなかったけど、やっぱ1/4は変だし音取りかえたそれで１の頭にスタックするように変えた
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00:57:555 (2,3,4) - と01:07:155 (2,3,4) - は同じ音取りだしconsistencyって意味で00:58:755 (2,3,4,5) - と01:08:355 (2,3,4) - も揃えたらどうかな　んー４つ全部そろえるのは単調すぎてへんかなーって思うから、それぞれ対応するパートはそろえた
01:34:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - しょーもないことかもしれんけど01:34:305 (1,4) - で後ろで鳴ってるシンセ(?)の音が変わってるから単発とスライダー入れ替えてみては　それに01:35:355 (6) - はシンバルなってるしclickableにしたくない？　しょーもなくない、ここ適当すぎるね、変えた
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Extra
00:04:605 (2) - この後の間が気になる木　ここのパートはほんとにシンプルにしたいってのがあってブレイク多めに入れてます。
かといってずっと同じパターンを繰り返すのは単調に感じるかもしれないしピアノ鳴ってるところをスライダーの頭にして
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みたいなスタックにしてみるとかどうかな～
00:15:855 (4,1) - ここ曲調が変わってるのは明らかだけど配置は繋がっててちょっと違和感感じた　直すとなったら00:16:305 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - をremapしなきゃいけないからお任せします！　配置がつながっているとは…？remapめんどくさ～いので保留！
00:37:605 (2,1) - スライダーとはいえちょっと遠くない？　ここいい配置が思い浮かばないんだよね～、とりあえず変えた
00:41:205 - ここvocalデカいしclickableにしたいから00:40:905 (3,4) - を1/2スライダー2個にするの試してみてくださし　前のパートと対応させて音取り同じにしてるからほりゅー
00:41:955 (2) - のリバースもいまいちどこをfollowしてるのか分かりづらいから00:41:505 (1,2,3,4) - の音取りも↓のほうが自然だと思う　上と理由は同じ～だけどたしかにそれはわかる
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00:44:355 (2) - ここもピアノfollowしてるのは分かるけどピアノの音は「てて↑てて↓てて↑てて↓」みたいな(伝われ)2音ずつの分け方しかできないと思うし、リバース使うのは3音で区切りが作れるところに置くべきだと個人的には思う　むむ…そういうものなのか…うーん時間あるとき前向きに検討してこの辺りremapするかも
00:49:905 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Ctrl+Shift+dで正六角形整えたらどうでしょ　音取りおかしいしかえたのだ～

数か所マゲさんからの指摘も入ってたり[/strike]
以上です～GL！

全体的にExが汚すぎてremapしたいけど時間ないし消そうかどうか迷うところ、次のmod or BNからあまりにも問題あるようなら消すつもりです。
今後のmappingの参考になった！ありがとう！

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[adv]
00:17:805 (4) - DS error okay
00:24:105 (3,4) - looks hard for flow. i improved it
00:39:555 (5,6) - unstack for cinsistency, you didn't stack at other parts Hmm... it's corresponding with 00:44:355 (5,6) - in my thought
00:44:355 (5,6) - ^

[Hard]
00:17:205 (3) - almost touching HP bar it's no problem imo
00:59:955 (2,3) - avoid overlap since you didn't make overlap well i see, applied

GL

thanks :3

Yohanes

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Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2017-01-29T05:49:41+00:00

Toyosaki Aki wrote:
Yohanes' Insane
00:04:305 - here is loud piano sound, and you placed clickable object at the other parts. So 00:04:305 - would be better to make the same way as (00:01:905 (2) - 00:03:105 (1) - 00:06:705 (1) - etc.). I don't really like to split this 1/1 slider into 1/2 and a circle. But I think current pattern is fine
01:09:855 (4) - maybe add whistle
01:18:705 (7) - ^ (since piano sounds here)
01:13:455 (4) - add clap is better imo I don't think so. It feels redundant and ended up covering up the music imo ._.
01:14:955 (5) - remove whistle changed to drum clap
01:17:355 - ^ ^

以上です～GL！

Thank you Toyosaki! others are fixed
sorry for the late reply
@joker- can you add my previous username "yaldo_27" to the tags? thank you!

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KSHR

osu! Alumni

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2017-02-01T22:44:07+00:00

Throwing in my suggestions on Akitoshi's Normal as the mapper told me lower difficulties might some mods. Advanced and Hard basically look okay to me, so let me skip them. No kds plz.

[Akitoshi’s Normal]

00:06:705 (1,1,2) - ものすごく気になったんだけどこれってスタックミス？
00:17:805 (3) - このスライダーの終わりのhitnormalの音が悪目立ちしてるように聴こえるから、00:18:705 - に置いてある40%のタイミング線を00:18:405 - に置いてそこから音量下げた方が綺麗だと思う
00:18:705 (1) - 少し細かい内容
赤いway pointを3つ使ってカクカクさせてるけど、ボーカルの強い音がある00:19:005 - 00:19:305 - の2箇所だけに赤いway point使う方がボーカルにも穏やかな曲調にも合うんじゃないかなあ
00:25:905 (1) - スクショみたいに曲げる方が前後の配置の繋ぎが良くなると思います！
主観的な感覚だから少し説明が難しいけど、イメージとしては00:25:905 (1,2) - で(1)でのカーソルの動きとは逆の方向に(2)を置いて、00:27:105 - にあるボーカルの強音を強調する配置にしてる感じ（？） https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7207146
00:31:905 (2) - これも同じ理由でスクショみたいに曲げた方が良くなると思う https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7207169
00:54:855 (1,1) - このスピナーと配置の間隔短くない？BPM200でお世辞にも速くないって言えないBPM、それもマップセットの一番簡単な難易度だからおそらくしっかりチェックするタイプのBNさんには突かれると思う（一度BNかQATにこの辺りのこと確認しておいた方がベターかなと）
00:57:105 (1) - ここからのkiai tme、1/1スライダーと1/2返しスライダーの繰り返しになってる（1/1と1/2返しはclick holdingの時間が同じ）から音取り的な意味でもう少し工夫があったほうがプレイして面白い難易度になると思う
例えば00:57:705 (2,3) - だと下の画像みたいにドラムだけじゃなくてボーカルもしっかり取れる音取りができたりとか！他もそういった工夫ができるはずだからよければ試してみて！

Also I'm kinda worried about silenced slider ends in Left's difficulty. Well this may be just because I'm an old user on this game though. Get some opinions from BNs or experienced modders beforehand so that you can smoothly push the map forward. GL

DeletedUser_7370134

DeletedUser_7370134 2017-02-02T11:24:48+00:00

@Toyosaki 00:09:255 (2) - やっぱ伸ばすわ

thx for mod

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Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-02-03T04:35:55+00:00

Toyosaki Aki wrote:
Akitoshi's Normal
00:34:305 - add whistle? あ
01:03:405 - ここの音拾いたい・・・拾いたくない？難易度が一番下だからそんなに1/2作りたくなかったの許して
01:21:105 (1,2) - どっちも白線まで伸ばしていいんじゃないかなあそーだね, fixed
うますぎ(うまく)ないです

KSHR wrote:
Throwing in my suggestions on Akitoshi's Normal as the mapper told me lower difficulties might some mods. Advanced and Hard basically look okay to me, so let me skip them. No kds plz. oMG England

[Akitoshi’s Normal]
00:06:705 (1,1,2) - ものすごく気になったんだけどこれってスタックミス？00:09:105 (1) - が00:06:705 (1) - とちゃんと重ねるようにしてまし
00:17:805 (3) - このスライダーの終わりのhitnormalの音が悪目立ちしてるように聴こえるから、00:18:705 - に置いてある40%のタイミング線を00:18:405 - に置いてそこから音量下げた方が綺麗だと思う added green line
00:18:705 (1) - 少し細かい内容
赤いway pointを3つ使ってカクカクさせてるけど、ボーカルの強い音がある00:19:005 - 00:19:305 - の2箇所だけに赤いway point使う方がボーカルにも穏やかな曲調にも合うんじゃないかなあどこの「こ」に合わせてます、あと細かい男はもてませんよ
00:25:905 (1) - スクショみたいに曲げる方が前後の配置の繋ぎが良くなると思います！
主観的な感覚だから少し説明が難しいけど、イメージとしては00:25:905 (1,2) - で(1)でのカーソルの動きとは逆の方向に(2)を置いて、00:27:105 - にあるボーカルの強音を強調する配置にしてる感じ（？） https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7207146 fixed
00:31:905 (2) - これも同じ理由でスクショみたいに曲げた方が良くなると思う https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7207169 fixed
00:54:855 (1,1) - このスピナーと配置の間隔短くない？BPM200でお世辞にも速くないって言えないBPM、それもマップセットの一番簡単な難易度だからおそらくしっかりチェックするタイプのBNさんには突かれると思う（一度BNかQATにこの辺りのこと確認しておいた方がベターかなと）このまえMonstrataにspinnerについて聞きました。それで答えがこれなので今ここに置いてあるスピナーもセーフ（だといいなあ）
00:57:105 (1) - ここからのkiai tme、1/1スライダーと1/2返しスライダーの繰り返しになってる（1/1と1/2返しはclick holdingの時間が同じ）から音取り的な意味でもう少し工夫があったほうがプレイして面白い難易度になると思う
例えば00:57:705 (2,3) - だと下の画像みたいにドラムだけじゃなくてボーカルもしっかり取れる音取りができたりとか！他もそういった工夫ができるはずだからよければ試してみて！最初はそういう風に置いてました...その置き方だと一番下の難易度にしてSDが危なかったのでreverseで抑えてしまいました。

みなしゃんありがとうごじゃいましゅた

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7,253,76305,6,0,L|13:148,1,89,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,97,76905,2,0,L|68:45,2,44.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,158,77505,2,0,B|183:174|183:174|274:164,1,133.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,157,78105,2,0,P|343:189|358:239,1,89,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
349,316,78705,5,2,0:0:0:0:
349,316,81105,6,0,P|260:332|159:310,1,178,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,227,82005,2,0,P|262:210|363:232,1,178,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,197,82905,2,0,P|436:167|436:149,1,44.5,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,34,83505,6,0,P|332:19|273:22,1,89,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,79,84105,2,0,P|180:94|121:91,1,89,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
91,88,84555,2,0,L|99:231,1,133.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,265,85155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,297,85455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,278,85755,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,278,85905,6,0,B|366:283|366:283|419:266,2,133.5,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,201,87105,2,0,P|225:142|274:73,2,133.5,2|0|8,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,278,88305,6,0,P|204:287|153:248,2,133.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,218,89505,2,0,L|444:220,1,89,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,197,89955,2,0,P|497:138|463:62,1,133.5,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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407,132,93105,6,0,P|380:180|406:262,2,133.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
477,76,94305,2,0,P|443:52|391:45,1,89,8|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,63,94755,1,4,0:0:0:0:
359,63,94905,2,0,L|258:59,1,89,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
225,59,95355,5,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,95505,12,0,100305,0:0:0:0:

sahuang

2,294 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2017-02-09T14:26:24+00:00

Left

2,162 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-02-09T14:29:20+00:00

in case log

oraoraora

22:43 *My Angel Azusa is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1145319 Sasaki Mirai - Bokura no Seiza]
22:43 My Angel Azusa: hp6?
22:43 Left: super hard so 5.5
22:44 Left: but extra is hp6
22:44 Left: so considering
22:44 My Angel Azusa: 2 other diffs are 6
22:46 My Angel Azusa: can try 6.5
22:46 Left: that's too hard lol
22:46 Left: then can 6
22:47 My Angel Azusa: lol
22:47 My Angel Azusa: ok
22:47 My Angel Azusa: i will let him change in irc
22:47 Left: okok
22:47 Left: thx
22:59 My Angel Azusa: 00:17:505 (1,2,3) - too big ds..
23:00 Left: ok
23:00 Left: will fix it
23:00 My Angel Azusa: ok
23:00 My Angel Azusa: can post on forum/give osu file to joker now i guess, cuz he has fixed all others
23:00 Left: okok
23:01 Left: fix in 5min
23:01 My Angel Azusa: xd
23:06 Left: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7275952
23:06 Left: ok?
23:07 My Angel Azusa: buce
23:07 Left: ij
23:07 My Angel Azusa: ij?
23:07 Left: okok
23:19 My Angel Azusa: btw

Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-02-09T14:33:03+00:00

thanks Azusa~

log

2017-02-09 22:48 My Angel Azusa: 00:45:705 (3,4) - dont overlap
2017-02-09 22:48 My Angel Azusa: 01:28:305 (1,2) - ds
2017-02-09 22:49 joker-: applied
2017-02-09 22:50 My Angel Azusa: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1142462 Sasaki Mirai - Bokura no Seiza [Hard]]
2017-02-09 22:50 My Angel Azusa: 00:15:855 (5,1) - blanket
2017-02-09 22:50 joker-: ok
2017-02-09 22:51 My Angel Azusa: 00:20:355 (5,1,2,3) - no same ds?
2017-02-09 22:51 joker-: oh, i see
2017-02-09 22:52 My Angel Azusa: 01:05:505 (1,2,3) -
2017-02-09 22:52 My Angel Azusa: hard flow
2017-02-09 22:53 My Angel Azusa: http://puu.sh/tVnJ0/9f9cbddb10.jpg
2017-02-09 22:53 My Angel Azusa: try this
2017-02-09 22:53 joker-: kk
2017-02-09 22:58 My Angel Azusa: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1208754 Sasaki Mirai - Bokura no Seiza [Extra]]
2017-02-09 22:58 My Angel Azusa: 00:57:105 (1,1) - stack?
2017-02-09 22:58 My Angel Azusa: oh nvm
2017-02-09 22:58 My Angel Azusa: its fine
2017-02-09 22:59 joker-: okk
2017-02-09 23:00 My Angel Azusa: top diff i just talked with left, so ask him for fixed version
2017-02-09 23:00 My Angel Azusa: remember to disable all widescreen support
2017-02-09 23:01 My Angel Azusa: and poke me when done

Doyak

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Doyak 2017-02-09T16:03:58+00:00

Sorry for this, but I think it's not quite ready to be ranked yet.

[General]
* Now that I check the whole mapset, the spread is a bit unstable, mainly because the first half of the map is mapped so differently between each difficulties. Especially from 00:18:705 - to 00:52:305 - of Left's diff (which is like 1/3 of the entire song) is even less intense than Yohanes' Insane. Even though it really doesn't determine the minimum required skills of a difficulty, still I doubt if this is working as a proper 'spread'.
* Integrating the end of the map into 01:40:155 - like Yohanes' diff makes more sense imo. There's a good sound to actually make an event. And other instruments start to disappear step by step starting on that beat as well.

[Akitoshi's Normal]
* 01:21:105 (1,2) - This felt a bit weird, because considering how the drums are, it's like this: http://puu.sh/tViz8/37583327cc.jpg So keeping the focus on all the 1's is better, to keep track on the most important sounds.

Fine diff, except that the kiai has too many of 00:57:105 (1,2) - this rhythm while the song has much more than that.

[Advanced]
* 00:17:805 (4,1,2) - This didn't feel to be a good pattern usage, simply because they create a big group while they have no relation to each other music-wise. Besides, when distance snap is used, having another note between them makes it harder to read. So I strongly suggest to avoid this and separate them.
* 00:47:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try to find a better rhythm for this. Does this part really require this repeating rhythm? http://puu.sh/tVjcC/ffb16b3fad.jpg or other rhythms can work too.

For rhythm-wise, it's not too bad, but some 1/2 filler beats make it hard to recognize what you're trying to follow, like 00:57:555 - 00:58:755 - 01:00:555 - 01:02:055 - 01:02:655 - and so on. I know they still hold some sounds, but as you cannot use too many beats on easier diffs, you sometimes to need to ignore some minor beats, and focus more on the stronger ones (that is, what you actually want to follow) to express the music through the map.

More importantly, I don't see much of patterns here; I can only see so many trains. Like, can you explain what kind of logic is behind 01:01:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this train of notes? Not only there, but you should really try to put more things in your map, other than just flow. (looks like my first few ranked maps)

[Hard]
* 00:10:605 (4,5,6) - This is really weird one because the 1/4 sounds have already started on 00:11:055 - and you just passed through it with the slider, and then suddenly used 1/4 patterns in the middle of them. I see you did that because the sound becomes larger on the end, but it's just so weird to play only a part of the 1/4s while I can actually hear all of them.
* 00:15:705 (4,5,1,2) - These spacing inconsistencies really makes the pattern unpolished.
* 00:20:355 (5,1) - 00:22:755 (5,1) - You don't want to adjust these bad-looking overlaps?
* 00:48:105 (3,4) - Use 1.5x for consistency
* 01:15:555 (2,3) - The head of 3 has very little to no sounds, while 2 has a cymbal sound. This kind of filler beat also weakens the emphasis on strong sounds, so you should use something like this instead: http://puu.sh/tVsAc/5c208e738b.jpg http://puu.sh/tVsBc/e1474faf28.jpg http://puu.sh/tVsEc/e5f334c3ba.jpg

Others are generally same with Advanced. I can see when there's a vocal, you follow it well. But everything else is almost just filler beats, like, how would you represent the vocals nicely while you actually have more notes on non-vocal beats? Taking an example from 00:58:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - , I don't see what this is trying to follow. Mainly because of 00:58:755 (2,3) - these filler notes, while you try to emphasize 00:59:055 - 00:59:205 - 00:59:355 - these vocals pretty much. So you could have tried something like http://puu.sh/tVlN2/2ec64cc1c1.jpg instead.

Also again, I don't see much of a structure on the patterns, like what kind of thing the notes create as a pattern, why they are there, and so on. It's always good for you to be able to explain your own map to others. The more you can explain, the better.

[Yohanes' Insane]
* 00:16:155 (1,2) - Swap NC, because 2 is a new start.
* 00:22:605 (4,5,6) - This sounds a little bad because there is a clear beat on 00:22:905 - while not on 00:23:055 - . You can do something like 00:20:355 (5) - instead.
* 00:29:505 - From here, the NC should be like http://puu.sh/tVmgn/5b56f417f1.jpg , or is there a reason to not do this?
* 00:55:905 - I would remove the break here since it's not really music being stopped, and rather makes players lose their guard because it's too short.
* 01:15:105 (6,1) - Swap NC?

Something I feel sad about you diff is the usage of 1/2 sliders on the kiai. 00:57:105 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - During this part, the rhythm is mainly constructed with 1/2 sliders while some of them being two circles instead. But I think you could do more than this. For example, you can hear 01:00:855 - 01:01:455 - has some additional clear drums that most other red ticks do not have.

Also 01:05:505 (1,2,3) - didn't feel really good to represent all the 1/4 drums on the background, as this is a proper Insane diff. I think you should at least do something with them, to show that this part is different from the rest of the kiai that fits well to the 1/2 sliders.

Other than diff, it's also fine.

[Asami's Insane]
* 00:16:305 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I think there should be more concrete emphasis on 00:16:305 - 00:16:755 - 00:17:205 - 00:17:805 - than other sounds. Actually except for these, the drums are not even that strong. I think Left represented this alright. Also add NC on 00:17:205 (4) - because there's a loud sound like other NCs.
* 00:19:005 - From here your NC usage is kinda unstable. 00:19:905 - 00:22:305 - NCs are used there but suddenly not on 00:24:705 - 00:27:105 - 00:29:505 -
* 00:37:305 (1) - This NC looks spammy since I don't see/hear anything special there?

Pretty nice diff, I'm impressed.

[Extra]
* 00:15:105 (1,2,3,4) - The same problem your other diffs have appears here too. Say, what are these notes trying to represent? Let's assume it's the vocals. Then 00:15:555 - 00:16:005 - these sounds are important which you shouldn't ignore or put in on a mere sliderend. Then how about assuming they're representing the drums? Then 00:15:255 - is exceedingly important, and it's not something you can just put on a sliderend like this. Thus, these notes have no focus.
Scenario 1(following the melodies): http://puu.sh/tVu9o/72506e0e80.jpg
Scenario 2(following the drums): http://puu.sh/tVvzD/d3ed13196a.jpg (just like Left did)
* 00:16:305 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - As I wrote on Asami's Insane, there should be more concrete emphasis on 00:16:305 - 00:16:755 - 00:17:205 - 00:17:805 - than other sounds. The slider + circle rhythm is good, but I can't see any difference between circles and slider heads because they all have same spacing and the flow is just randomly turning around. Try to make these stronger sounds actually have some clear difference than other ones. There are numerous ways to emphasize certain sounds.
* 00:19:905 (1,2,3,4) - and so on: What I feel not good about this is, that the vocals here are much prominent than the constant background 1/2 sounds, but these patterns require even more action on the 00:20:505 (3,4) - this small sounds than 00:19:905 (1,2) - these vocals. In other words, I can't feel what you're focusing on, and I think you should clarify more by differentiating them more obviously.
* 00:33:105 (1,2,3) - Though you might think these little ds difference doesn't affect much, it actually contributes the structure of this part. 00:31:905 (1,2) - 1.95x, 00:32:355 (2,3) - 1.92x, 00:33:105 (1,2) - 2.08x, 00:33:555 (2,3) - 1.97x. See what's going on?
* 00:58:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I can only say these jumps are just there because it feels too empty. Are you actually emphasizing some sort of sounds? None of the instruments are strong on every 1/2s, so I don't see a reason for here to be an entire jump 'section'.
* 01:05:730 - Ignoring this beat is weird, because it's mostly a repeat of 01:04:155 (1,2,3) - these 1/4s.
* 01:07:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again a random jump section. Do you know that 01:08:955 - this sliderend has a vocal sound, which you generally followed for the entire map?
* 01:21:105 (1,2) - Why only these are stacked? Others are all spaced out.

Not only the rhythm is the problem, but also the jumps really don't make any patterns and just 'goes' somewhere comfortable to hit. Look how randomly placed these jumps are: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7276599

So in my opinion, you really should rework your diffs and make them more logical, both on the rhythms and the placements.

[Left's Sparkle]
* 01:34:305 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 외형상으로는 좋은 패턴인데, 드럼이 여기서 4개씩 나누어졌다고 볼 수 있을지는 모르겠네요. 01:34:755 - 에 심벌 소리와 함께 01:34:305 - 에서의 높은 드럼 소리가 반복되는 것을 들을 수 있고, 01:35:205 - 여기에서 그 드럼이 한 번 더 나옵니다. 그렇다면 인센들처럼 3-3-2로 나누는 것이 더욱 논리적일 거 같네요.

Vetoing the bubble until I see some improvement on joker-'s diffs.

Hope you can improve this map a lot!

Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-02-09T18:06:31+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Sorry for this, but I think it's not quite ready to be ranked yet.

[General]
* Now that I check the whole mapset, the spread is a bit unstable, mainly because the first half of the map is mapped so differently between each difficulties. Especially from 00:18:705 - to 00:52:305 - of Left's diff (which is like 1/3 of the entire song) is even less intense than Yohanes' Insane. Even though it really doesn't determine the minimum required skills of a difficulty, still I doubt if this is working as a proper 'spread'.
* Integrating the end of the map into 01:40:155 - like Yohanes' diff makes more sense imo. There's a good sound to actually make an event. And other instruments start to disappear step by step starting on that beat as well.　 I see, i didnt listen music carefully. like you said, i think it's better to match with Yohanes' diff. applied

[Advanced]
* 00:17:805 (4,1,2) - This didn't feel to be a good pattern usage, simply because they create a big group while they have no relation to each other music-wise. Besides, when distance snap is used, having another note between them makes it harder to read. So I strongly suggest to avoid this and separate them. i get it. this placement cause missreading for player. i changed to separate them in my own way.
* 00:47:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try to find a better rhythm for this. Does this part really require this repeating rhythm? http://puu.sh/tVjcC/ffb16b3fad.jpg or other rhythms can work too. that's right. i am looking again it. im surprised my own rhythm and placement xD and 00:50:355 (2) - removed cuz of consisntent with one then improved placement on this part

For rhythm-wise, it's not too bad, but some 1/2 filler beats make it hard to recognize what you're trying to follow, like 00:57:555 - 00:58:755 - 01:00:555 - 01:02:055 - 01:02:655 - and so on. I know they still hold some sounds, but as you cannot use too many beats on easier diffs, you sometimes to need to ignore some minor beats, and focus more on the stronger ones (that is, what you actually want to follow) to express the music through the map.　 yeah, exactly i didnt understand what sound should ignore or not on lower diff. probably i thought i have to take all sound even lower's one at that time. so thanks to you, i come along with rechecking rhythm pattern all section about Adv and Hard diffs! thanks :3

More importantly, I don't see much of patterns here; I can only see so many trains. Like, can you explain what kind of logic is behind 01:01:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this train of notes? Not only there, but you should really try to put more things in your map, other than just flow. (looks like my first few ranked maps) oops, i thought the pattern is weird by myself xD but i dont know how do i improve ones, however i try to find to be better rhythm patterns!

[Hard]
* 00:10:605 (4,5,6) - This is really weird one because the 1/4 sounds have already started on 00:11:055 - and you just passed through it with the slider, and then suddenly used 1/4 patterns in the middle of them. I see you did that because the sound becomes larger on the end, but it's just so weird to play only a part of the 1/4s while I can actually hear all of them. oh right, i felt this rhythm pattern is strange somehow, maybe i wanted to express different rhythm pattern with Adv one. i unified it with Adv diff
* 00:15:705 (4,5,1,2) - These spacing inconsistencies really makes the pattern unpolished. yes, i dont know the reason why, these distances is not consistent... i reformed to be same distance and rhythm pattern what is following melodies on this part
* 00:20:355 (5,1) - 00:22:755 (5,1) - You don't want to adjust these bad-looking overlaps? ok
* 00:48:105 (3,4) - Use 1.5x for consistency yeah
* 01:15:555 (2,3) - The head of 3 has very little to no sounds, while 2 has a cymbal sound. This kind of filler beat also weakens the emphasis on strong sounds, so you should use something like this instead: http://puu.sh/tVsAc/5c208e738b.jpg http://puu.sh/tVsBc/e1474faf28.jpg http://puu.sh/tVsEc/e5f334c3ba.jpg applied on first image

Others are generally same with Advanced. I can see when there's a vocal, you follow it well. But everything else is almost just filler beats, like, how would you represent the vocals nicely while you actually have more notes on non-vocal beats? Taking an example from 00:58:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - , I don't see what this is trying to follow. Mainly because of 00:58:755 (2,3) - these filler notes, while you try to emphasize 00:59:055 - 00:59:205 - 00:59:355 - these vocals pretty much. So you could have tried something like http://puu.sh/tVlN2/2ec64cc1c1.jpg instead.

Also again, I don't see much of a structure on the patterns, like what kind of thing the notes create as a pattern, why they are there, and so on. It's always good for you to be able to explain your own map to others. The more you can explain, the better.
I remapped to be based following vocals like Adv diff and rechecked placement more better thanks

[Extra]
* 00:15:105 (1,2,3,4) - The same problem your other diffs have appears here too. Say, what are these notes trying to represent? Let's assume it's the vocals. Then 00:15:555 - 00:16:005 - these sounds are important which you shouldn't ignore or put in on a mere sliderend. Then how about assuming they're representing the drums? Then 00:15:255 - is exceedingly important, and it's not something you can just put on a sliderend like this. Thus, these notes have no focus.
Scenario 1(following the melodies): http://puu.sh/tVu9o/72506e0e80.jpg
Scenario 2(following the drums): http://puu.sh/tVvzD/d3ed13196a.jpg (just like Left did)
* 00:16:305 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - As I wrote on Asami's Insane, there should be more concrete emphasis on 00:16:305 - 00:16:755 - 00:17:205 - 00:17:805 - than other sounds. The slider + circle rhythm is good, but I can't see any difference between circles and slider heads because they all have same spacing and the flow is just randomly turning around. Try to make these stronger sounds actually have some clear difference than other ones. There are numerous ways to emphasize certain sounds.
* 00:19:905 (1,2,3,4) - and so on: What I feel not good about this is, that the vocals here are much prominent than the constant background 1/2 sounds, but these patterns require even more action on the 00:20:505 (3,4) - this small sounds than 00:19:905 (1,2) - these vocals. In other words, I can't feel what you're focusing on, and I think you should clarify more by differentiating them more obviously.
* 00:33:105 (1,2,3) - Though you might think these little ds difference doesn't affect much, it actually contributes the structure of this part. 00:31:905 (1,2) - 1.95x, 00:32:355 (2,3) - 1.92x, 00:33:105 (1,2) - 2.08x, 00:33:555 (2,3) - 1.97x. See what's going on?
* 00:58:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I can only say these jumps are just there because it feels too empty. Are you actually emphasizing some sort of sounds? None of the instruments are strong on every 1/2s, so I don't see a reason for here to be an entire jump 'section'.
* 01:05:730 - Ignoring this beat is weird, because it's mostly a repeat of 01:04:155 (1,2,3) - these 1/4s.
* 01:07:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again a random jump section. Do you know that 01:08:955 - this sliderend has a vocal sound, which you generally followed for the entire map?
* 01:21:105 (1,2) - Why only these are stacked? Others are all spaced out.

Not only the rhythm is the problem, but also the jumps really don't make any patterns and just 'goes' somewhere comfortable to hit. Look how randomly placed these jumps are: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7276599

So in my opinion, you really should rework your diffs and make them more logical, both on the rhythms and the placements.

Vetoing the bubble until I see some improvement on joker-'s diffs.

Hope you can improve this map a lot!

Let me jump to the conclusion. I determined to delete my Extra diff.
I've never snapped temporary for your suggestions. i give a full account with reasons
First, If my Extra diff haves many issues, I determined to delete it before looking for mods. Anyway, i didn't plan to make Ex diff except Adv and Hard ones.
But it's late to gather guest difficulties, then i made it to killing time.
Secondly, the extra don't satisfy me at all. And i don't have any motivations to remap it to be better tbh.

Your opinions is absolutely useful for me and i'll utilize to map extra next time! I appreciate your considering!

~~WIP replying~~
edit1: done remap Advanced
edit2: done replying mod and all updated

Last edited by Eir_DELETED 2017-02-11T05:40:21+00:00, edited 5 times in total.

thzz

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thzz 2017-02-09T19:06:18+00:00

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Left

2,162 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-02-10T07:08:36+00:00

fixed last one to 3-3-2, became Tenko pattern

모딩감사합니다~

sparkle

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ArtistUnicode:佐々木未来
Creator:joker-
Version:Left's Sparkle
Source:星恋＊ティンクル
Tags:eroge opening Akitoshi Corinn Yohanes yaldo_27 -lolist- Nanashima Asami Left
BeatmapID:1145319
BeatmapSetID:539139

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:9.3
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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DeletedUser_7370134

DeletedUser_7370134 2017-02-10T08:17:34+00:00

Doyak wrote:
[Asami's Insane]
* 00:16:305 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I think there should be more concrete emphasis on 00:16:305 - 00:16:755 - 00:17:205 - 00:17:805 - than other sounds. Actually except for these, the drums are not even that strong. I think Left represented this alright. Also add NC on 00:17:205 (4) - because there's a loud sound like other NCs.
reworked these jumps for the better drum-enphasize,and I don't like NCing frequently so much,except for my visual preference(01:34:305 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - is an example of that),so i NCed only 00:17:505 - .
* 00:19:005 - From here your NC usage is kinda unstable. 00:19:905 - 00:22:305 - NCs are used there but suddenly not on 00:24:705 - 00:27:105 - 00:29:505 - added NC on those
* 00:37:305 (1) - This NC looks spammy since I don't see/hear anything special there?removed,just by mistake

Pretty nice diff, I'm impressed.thanks

and ended the last epinner on 01:40:155 - .

thanks for the mod Doyak!

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TitleUnicode:ぼくらの星座
Artist:Sasaki Mirai
ArtistUnicode:佐々木未来
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Source:星恋＊ティンクル
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Yohanes

1,285 posts

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2017-02-10T11:42:34+00:00

Doyak wrote:
[Yohanes' Insane]
* 00:16:155 (1,2) - Swap NC, because 2 is a new start.
* 00:22:605 (4,5,6) - This sounds a little bad because there is a clear beat on 00:22:905 - while not on 00:23:055 - . You can do something like 00:20:355 (5) - instead.
* 00:29:505 - From here, the NC should be like http://puu.sh/tVmgn/5b56f417f1.jpg , or is there a reason to not do this? Changed it into something more consistent that also works well
* 00:55:905 - I would remove the break here since it's not really music being stopped, and rather makes players lose their guard because it's too short.
* 01:15:105 (6,1) - Swap NC? No, because 01:15:555 - is much stronger in sound (cymbal and stuff) while 01:15:105 - are essentially still the same with the previous one

Something I feel sad about you diff is the usage of 1/2 sliders on the kiai. 00:57:105 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - During this part, the rhythm is mainly constructed with 1/2 sliders while some of them being two circles instead. But I think you could do more than this. For example, you can hear 01:00:855 - 01:01:455 - has some additional clear drums that most other red ticks do not have. I just don't want to make it too difficult considering that this is actually a light insane (because i also changed 01:05:505 - into something more difficult). I know that those inconsistency could hurt this diff, but imo as long I still follow the vocal as the base on my diff, that still works fine

Also 01:05:505 (1,2,3) - didn't feel really good to represent all the 1/4 drums on the background, as this is a proper Insane diff. I think you should at least do something with them, to show that this part is different from the rest of the kiai that fits well to the 1/2 sliders.

Others are fixed
Thank you Doyak!

Also, I don't think the difference in the slow part is that big of a deal. Because there are multiple layers of sound that could be mapped. And I think using one that works with what mappers are following in each difficulty is better rather than changing it just to make it slightly more intense. Besides, there are other mapset (I know, I know, comparing one map to another isn't always good, but there's especially similar map in this case) that have more difficult pattern on insane compared to extra. For example, handsome's Monster map. On the calm part, Bearizm mapped his Insane much more intense compared to any other (harder) difficulty. I know its not an apple to apple comparison but I hope this could get my point across

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Title:Bokura no Seiza
TitleUnicode:ぼくらの星座
Artist:Sasaki Mirai
ArtistUnicode:佐々木未来
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Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-02-11T06:59:53+00:00

Doyak wrote:
[Akitoshi's Normal]
* 01:21:105 (1,2) - This felt a bit weird, because considering how the drums are, it's like this: http://puu.sh/tViz8/37583327cc.jpg So keeping the focus on all the 1's is better, to keep track on the most important sounds. tried to pick those drums. but my rhythm is now like http://puu.sh/tY2Fq/3cb8a48a07.jpg cuz all 1/2 slider/circles aren't nice as consistency as the diff itself imo

thanks!

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TitleUnicode:ぼくらの星座
Artist:Sasaki Mirai
ArtistUnicode:佐々木未来
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Eir_DELETED

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Eir_DELETED 2017-02-11T07:09:53+00:00

All updated!

Doyak

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Doyak 2017-02-11T07:16:48+00:00

Give me a kudosu then I recheck :3

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Eir_DELETED 2017-02-11T07:17:38+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Give me a kudosu then I recheck :3

sry>< i forgot it...

Doyak

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Doyak 2017-02-11T16:27:08+00:00

I see a great improvement on your diffs, good job!

Though I'm still not quite fond of nominating this myself, so I'll just cancel the veto here, so that you can ask Azusa to rebubble. Getting a few more mods would be good as well.

Also here are some extra mod.

@Akitoshi: Oh I should have shown you what I wanted. The way you changed look a bit hard to be the lowest diff... so I just wanted http://puu.sh/tYyxv/d4e1f70454.jpg this kind of thing, because I think those beats are the most important ones, instead of 01:21:705 - 01:22:605 -

@Advanced: 00:40:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - looks too long for no reason. Why don't you make 00:41:355 - 00:42:555 - empty like other similar parts, so that you can give a bit of rest to the players on a calm part?
01:04:155 (7) - This should be NC'd, like you did on Hard.

@Hard: 00:15:255 - I really hope there is a note here. Since 00:12:855 (1,2,3) - was quite focused on the drums, ignoring some important drums on a same part doesn't feel consistent.

Good luck~

Akitoshi

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Akitoshi 2017-02-11T17:36:49+00:00

@Doyak lol sry, I think it's alright now. Thank you!

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Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-02-11T21:51:05+00:00

thanks Doyak! All applied :3

Lami

1,756 posts

Joined June 2011

Lami 2017-02-13T18:52:14+00:00

Asami's insane ≒ fyy's insane

DeletedUser_7370134

DeletedUser_7370134 2017-02-14T00:54:26+00:00

Lami wrote:
Asami's insane ≒ fyy's insane

fyy>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>asami

Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-02-15T14:22:50+00:00

Deleted "-lolist-" from tags in order to his own request

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DeletedUser_7370134

DeletedUser_7370134 2017-02-17T08:10:19+00:00

thx joker!

.

fuk u joker

thzz

579 posts

Joined May 2012

thzz 2017-02-28T14:24:23+00:00

via in-game

[Advanced]

01:17:505 (3,4) - 難易度が急に下がるのに少々違和感。このくらいの音取りでどうですか？
image
01:21:105 (1) - このsliderのhitsoundだけ他のslider(2,3,4)と異なっているのが気になる。
01:24:555 - clapも足しちゃいましょう、曲がそうなってるしサビのラストなのでokです
01:25:155 (5,1) - この2つのslider、パートの境目（サビとアウトロの境界線）を跨いでいるので、別の形にしてあげた方が好き。01:26:355 (2) - に合わせてみては？
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[Hard]

00:24:705 (4) - Advとの差別化の意味もこめて、こういう音取りはどうでしょう。00:25:605 - をclickableにしたいっていう気持ちもあります。
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01:00:105 (3,1) - ここのflowがsliderの向きに対して反対方向なのが気になる。sliderのrepeatを外して、1/1slider + circle + circle にしてこんな感じとか。リズムが分解出来るのでflowの違和感が却って好都合になります。
image
01:17:205 - add finish?
01:19:005 (2) - 3点ともwhistleつけて良いんじゃないかな、01:19:905 (1,2,3) - での急な出現はちょっと違和感。
01:21:105 (1) - Advと同じ
01:22:005 (3,5) - NCのパターンが半分になっているので、この2箇所のどちらかにadd NCかなぁ、自分なら(3)につけます。

軽くですがこんなところで。
good luck!

Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-03-05T03:25:55+00:00

thzz wrote:
via in-game

[Advanced]
01:17:505 (3,4) - 難易度が急に下がるのに少々違和感。このくらいの音取りでどうですか？ Advというdiffのことも考えて、01:17:805 - の音がスライダーエンドでも拾ってあげるべき音ではないと思ったのでkeepでお願いします
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01:21:105 (1) - このsliderのhitsoundだけ他のslider(2,3,4)と異なっているのが気になる。ここの音がほかのところと違うように聞こえるんですが僕だけなんですかね…？直しました
01:24:555 - clapも足しちゃいましょう、曲がそうなってるしサビのラストなのでokです　そうですね入れました！
01:25:155 (5,1) - この2つのslider、パートの境目（サビとアウトロの境界線）を跨いでいるので、別の形にしてあげた方が好き。01:26:355 (2) - に合わせてみては？　とてもいいですね、その通りに変えました！
image
[Hard]
00:24:705 (4) - Advとの差別化の意味もこめて、こういう音取りはどうでしょう。00:25:605 - をclickableにしたいっていう気持ちもあります。　無理にスローパートでAdvと差別化を図る必要はないかなぁ…と個人的に思うのでkeepでお願いします><
image
01:00:105 (3,1) - ここのflowがsliderの向きに対して反対方向なのが気になる。sliderのrepeatを外して、1/1slider + circle + circle にしてこんな感じとか。リズムが分解出来るのでflowの違和感が却って好都合になります。ここすごく悩みました、リピートにしてたのはボーカルが少し伸びてるのと、このようにしたらちょっとやりにくい+ 1/2 spamになるっていうのでそうしてたんですが、とりあえずその通りに直してみました。また変更するかもしれません。
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01:17:205 - add finish?　入れました
01:19:005 (2) - 3点ともwhistleつけて良いんじゃないかな、01:19:905 (1,2,3) - での急な出現はちょっと違和感。入れました
01:21:105 (1) - Advと同じ入れました
01:22:005 (3,5) - NCのパターンが半分になっているので、この2箇所のどちらかにadd NCかなぁ、自分なら(3)につけます。ここだけペースがゆるかやかになってるパートなので、2 mesureでつけてます。ほかの誰かに言われたら直します
軽くですがこんなところで。
good luck!

modの返信が大幅に遅れてしまって申し訳ございませんでした
いきなりのmod req受けてくれてありがとうございました！

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2017-03-12T10:36:47+00:00

from discord

[Advanced]

00:00:705 - ここの赤線の上の緑線は不要なので削除しましょう
00:05:505 (3) - スライダーの終点にwhistleを追加？00:08:355 (4) - ここの終点でピアノ以外の音にもつけてるみたいなので
00:17:805 (4) - 少し形が目立つので00:10:605 (4) - ここと同じようなスライダーを使用してみてはどうでしょう？
00:18:705 (1) - 上の提案に合わせてここの角度も調節してみると綺麗になります。
SPOILER
00:32:355 (4) - 終点にwhistleあるとよりピアノに合うと思います。
00:33:105 (1) - ^ 折り返し
00:36:555 - 前のパート00:34:905 (4,5,1) - で歌詞をフォローしていたので00:36:555 - ここに音が無いと違和感がありました。
00:48:705 (4) - 始点にfinishを追加？00:47:505 (1) - ここの始点と同じような音があったので
01:15:105 (4) - 終点にwhistleを追加？01:15:555 (5) - ここ終点と同じような音が聞こえました。
01:18:105 (4) - スライダーの終点に音が何も無いのでさびしいです。clapまたはdrumの音を使ってみてはいかがでしょう？
01:18:780 - Break入れるとHPドレイン減らなくて済みますがあまり長い時間ではないのでお任せします。
01:27:555 (5) - ,01:28:305 (1) - ,01:32:355 (5) - drumのみではなくdrum-whistleのほうがより音楽に合っていると思います。

[Hard]

00:12:855 (1) - ここからnew comboが一章節ごとに追加されていますがこれより前のパターンと同じようにした方がいいと思います。後半の00:49:905 (1,2,3) - このあたりも数字が短くなってしまっています。もし修正する場合は他の部分も参考にしてみてください。
00:34:305 (3) - 00:33:105 (1,2,3) - ３つまとめて見るとあまり見た目が良くないので(3)をもう少し上に移動してみてはいかがでしょう？
00:36:405 (2) - 始点にwhistleを追加？
01:35:355 (6) - 00:54:705 (1) - ここと同じようにnew comboを追加？
Advancedの難易度で指摘したhitsoundに関しては省略しました。この難易度も確認してみてください～

Previewpointがsnapされて無いみたいなので修正するといいと思います。頑張ってください～！

Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-03-12T10:39:30+00:00

alacatさんmodありがとうございます>< 全部直しました！
すいません、今日中にはmodが書けないかもしれません…明日までには絶対にmodします！

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2017-03-13T15:07:29+00:00

Akitoshi
00:09:105 (1,2) - new rc mentioned to aviod overlaps in the lowest diff, i recommend you to remove 00:09:105 (1) -
00:13:305 (4,5) - 00:15:705 (4,5) - 01:10:305 (3,4,5) - 01:25:755 (6,1) - 01:34:305 (2,3,4) - also separate these kinds of stakck patterns

Yohane
00:54:780 - why not use spin here but at 00:36:780 (1) - ? imo 00:54:780 - fits more with spin

Asami
00:43:005 (2,4) - the overlap looks quite uncomfortable among the patterns...

nazi things.

Yohanes

1,285 posts

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2017-03-13T15:47:16+00:00

spinner added, thank you Yuki!
Also cleaned up some minor stuff

update

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:ぼくらの星座
Artist:Sasaki Mirai
ArtistUnicode:佐々木未来
Creator:joker-
Version:Yohanes' Insane
Source:星恋＊ティンクル
Tags:eroge opening Akitoshi Corinn Yohanes yaldo_27 -lolist- Nanashima Asami Left
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OverallDifficulty:7
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