mimimemeMIMI - Harebare Fanfare [Osu|OsuMania]‬ · forum‬

Zer0-

Joined April 2014

Zer0- 2016-09-01T23:06:29+00:00

Naxess wrote:
Zer0-'s Sugar

This is the only map in the set that does not have a video, consider adding one to this difficulty as well for consistency.
(The map doesn't seem to have a video at the moment, but all other difficulties have it set up in their .osu files)
You could always just copy paste the whole "Events" part from one of the other difficulties.

NCs
01:22:998 (4) - It seems like NC is missing here.
^ 01:17:462 (5) -
01:01:034 (5) - This could also be NCed with the justification of transition, and potentially pattern readability.

01:07:462 (7,1) - Consider swapping NC for these notes, (7) is clearly stronger and also a downbeat. This is currently not consistent with what is mapped previously 00:51:034 (3) - 00:53:891 (3) - 00:56:748 (3) - either.

01:27:104 (7) - I believe this could also use an NC due to the stream being relatively long. Having the player fail here due to missing some notes in this pattern, and not gaining as much HP as they were draining, would surely not leave a good impression.
01:23:355 (5) - This slider is awfully curved, and it looks as if it'd reflect some unique sound, but it doesn't. In my opinion it'd be better if this slider would be consistent with how these sounds are mapped in the vicinity, for example by making it a flipped copy of (6).

01:27:552 (1) - This spinner is spinning to no audible sound after 01:28:534 - . I know making the spinner shorter would make it hard to pass, so if there are no other solutions, it's still possible to simply remove.
At the very least, end it at 01:28:534 - like -Amane- did in their difficulty.

Hitsounds are currently missing, otherwise it looks pretty solid.

Good luck!

Thanks Naxess <33333333333

I accepted all the suggestions and adjusted 00:53:891 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - this jump pattern to be better

map

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50230
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 86569
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Harebare Fanfare
TitleUnicode:晴レ晴レファンファーレ
Artist:MimimemeMIMI
ArtistUnicode:MimimemeMIMI
Creator:Shiguma
Version:Zer0's Sugar
Source:甘々と稲妻
Tags:Zer0- Monarch Cheesecake squirrelpascals muu-chan -Amane- amaama to inazuma Sweetness and Lightning op tv size
BeatmapID:1039376
BeatmapSetID:487520

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:8.7
ApproachRate:9.3
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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0,0,"qt.jpg",0,0
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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395,261,69784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,155,69962,2,0,P|142:207|160:257,1,103.999995239258,0|0,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
421,270,70319,6,0,P|378:232|329:226,1,103.999995239258,0|0,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
137,262,70677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
21,35,70855,2,0,L|37:143,1,103.999995239258
172,176,71212,2,0,L|156:284,1,103.999995239258
189,41,71569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
45,186,71748,6,0,L|29:83,1,103.999995239258
194,192,72105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,55,72284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,289,72462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,83,72641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,308,72819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,65,72998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,143,73177,6,0,P|163:175|213:197,1,80
352,172,73534,2,0,P|386:191|414:220,1,80
278,296,73891,2,0,B|303:223|250:192|278:109,1,160
184,268,74427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,268,74516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,268,74605,6,0,L|155:353,1,80
360,360,74962,2,0,L|389:275,1,80
455,195,75319,2,0,P|495:260|481:346,1,160
334,195,75855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,195,76034,6,0,P|322:150|332:98,1,80
233,206,76391,2,0,P|245:251|235:303,1,80
406,147,76748,2,0,P|451:135|503:145,1,80
161,254,77105,2,0,P|116:266|64:256,1,80
256,46,77462,6,0,B|176:192|342:191|255:367,1,320
382,148,78534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,254,78712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,254,78802,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,254,78891,6,0,P|131:216|115:160,1,100
406,147,79248,2,0,P|436:185|452:241,1,100
262,350,79605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,175,79784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,234,79962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,330,80141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,152,80319,5,0,0:0:0:0:
350,334,80498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,127,80677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,311,80855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,70,81034,2,0,P|211:58|153:70,1,100
380,132,81391,2,0,P|435:144|493:132,1,100
281,164,81748,6,0,P|234:239|142:197,1,200
209,168,82284,2,0,L|245:275,1,100
410,37,82641,2,0,L|374:144,1,100
354,322,82998,6,0,L|322:227,1,100
213,145,83355,2,0,P|251:106|309:94,1,100
437,35,83712,2,0,P|451:87|432:144,1,100
354,322,84069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,125,84248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
398,243,84427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,286,84605,6,0,P|158:273|123:246,1,100
215,106,84962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,342,85141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,195,85319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,99,85498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
203,306,85677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,84,85855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,155,86034,6,0,P|424:211|388:249,1,100
178,318,86391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
17,180,86569,5,0,0:0:0:0:
64,194,86658,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,200,86747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,196,86836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,182,86926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,162,87015,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,146,87104,5,0,0:0:0:0:
354,142,87193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
403,153,87283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
449,173,87372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,199,87461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87552,12,0,88534,0:0:0:0:

-Amane-

7 posts

Joined July 2013

-Amane- 2016-09-01T23:44:30+00:00

Naxess wrote:
-Amane-'s Extra

00:12:819 (8,1) - (8) ends on the same tick as (1) starts. This is unrankable.
Ranking Criteria - General wrote:
No two hitobjects on the same tick (osu!mania game mode is an exception). This includes hit circles, starts and ends of sliders, and starts and ends of spinners. Although this may be possible to accomplish while playing, it defeats the purpose of following the rhythm of the song.

00:02:641 - Having a pause of more than 1 beat, where the beat heard is constantly, is a bit weird in my opinion. Consider giving 00:02:462 (9) - a repeat, for example, in order to cover 00:02:819 - .
^ 00:05:319 (9) - This could also be extended, which will improve the flow a bit by providing a distance spacing more equal to the time distance to 00:06:034 (1) - .

00:12:819 (8) - Consider NCing this, it's quite far from the combo it currently is a part of, and it also follows a different instrument.

00:17:641 (2) - I know you're trying to blanket these 00:17:105 (5,6) - with it, but the resulting shape of the slider doesn't really look good, in my opinion.
You could try placing the red anchor between the two white anchors, in order to get rid of the bump in the middle.

00:31:569 (5,2,4) - Shouldn't these claps be on 00:31:391 - 00:32:105 - 00:32:819 - instead?

00:45:677 - Can be covered by giving 00:45:319 (4) - a repeat.
00:47:105 - Can be covered by making 00:46:926 (4) - a 1/2 slider.

01:14:962 (2,3,4) - This is bad polarity. From (3), it skips the following white ticks and goes to the next red tick instead, and this might be confusing, as 01:14:962 (2,3) - are spaced more than 01:15:319 (3,4) - .
In order to solve this, move (4) to 01:15:677 - .
I accepted all, thank you very much for your mod!

Monarch

213 posts

Joined July 2014

Monarch 2016-09-02T01:53:08+00:00

Naxess wrote:
From nowhere

Monarch's Insane

00:01:302 - This note does not exist in the music. By placing one here, you are not reflecting the song; you are adding to it. This is known as overmapping. and I would suggest you refrain from doing this. As such my suggestion will be to remove the note and stack (4) on the slider. following the vocal, but removed

00:10:052 - There's some tails that could use silencing, in my opinion. This drum sound is for example not in the song and seems very out of place, since this isn't heard elsewhere in the map. silenced

00:38:712 - Let's just take a look at this part. You seem to be aware that there is a sound here, as your slider has a red anchor where it is heard. However, I don't think this slider actually needs to be extended this far. It could work very well by simply being a 1/2 slider stacked on the following slider head, in my opinion, because that way the player will quickly decelerate their cursor to transition into the lower slider velocity due to the stack. The extended slider lets me easily display the change in speed of the song, and is used both becuase the sound from the red tick is quiet and because the main sound, the vocal, goes over the red tick

^ 00:45:677 - 00:47:105 - same could be done here. I really don't see why these, in particular, are extended. They doesn't really need any additional emphasis, and skipping over a beat just to have the slider be longer isn't something that should be done often. I could argue that it is not done often at all - the problem with using circles in this section is that it would ignore the hard, stretched sound of the cymbal that goes across the white tick as well as greatly increasing the note density in what is essentially only mean to be a buildup

01:10:855 (2) - I'm just curious about this. Care to explain why this is a 1/4 slider instead of a circle? This slider is a 1/4 slider because the two notes in question, 01:10:855 (2,3) - are intended to be 1 whole 1/2 slider, however, with the hard sound of 3 the only way to keep this slider while still emphasising the note that 3 lands on is by using a kickslider I decided it did not fit the dificulty of the song and removed it
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Cheesecake

729 posts

Joined December 2013

Cheesecake 2016-09-02T12:21:07+00:00

Naxess wrote:
Collab Hard

Cheesecake
00:13:177 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Considering that you're following the melody with these notes, I would've emphasized the syncopation at 00:14:427 - with a 1/2 slider instead of mapping 00:14:605 - as a clickable even though it doesn't have said melody on it, unlike 00:14:784 - , where it currently ends. Same applies to 00:15:141 - . A correctly emphasized rhythm can be achieved like this, for example. This has been mentioned before, basically I don't want to use that irregular clicking rhythm on a hard diff :v

Thanks (no change)

Muu-chan

1,643 posts

Joined August 2014

Muu-chan 2016-09-03T03:01:47+00:00

Dellvangel wrote:
Mod as requested by Muu-chan. thanks del <3

1|2|3|4
[Muu's NM]
00:15:141 - jadi gini aja https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5980594 biar kick di 00:15:319 - lebih mudah diikutin karena part2 sebelumnya jarak antara LN sama kick nya ada jeda 1 col (00:14:427 (14427|0,14605|2,14784|1,14962|3) - ) dan gara2 LN nya lebih panjang 1/4 beat sebaiknya ikutin jeda 1 col itu juga biar ga terlalu 'tricky' patternnya. Kalo di apply mulai dari 00:16:391 - di re-arrange dikit biar balance lagi. perfect =w=b
01:11:927 - add note, ada sound yg sama dengan 01:12:641 (72641|1,72998|1) - kalo yang 2 diatasnya itu aku ngikutin kicknya walaupun ada hihat juga =w= mangkannya yg bawah ngga kukasih note ;-;
01:12:284 - ^
[Muu's HD]
00:42:284 (42284|0) - ke col 2 aja, biar mirror sama 00:39:248 (39248|0,39427|2,39605|0) - , terus 00:42:819 (42819|1) - ke col 1. sure~ tapi yang 00:42:819 -kupindah kolom 1
01:14:605 - kenapa ga 2 note? malah disini ada sound bell sama crash, sedangkan 01:13:891 - yg cuma ada sound crash doang aja 2 note.
01:16:034 - ^ iya yang suara bell nya ku skip ;-;
01:25:319 - add note, cukup keras untuk 2 note, ada suara crash dan lonceng.
01:26:748 - ^ my bad ;-; both added~
good luck!

Thanks dell <3

Here's update, shiguma.. sorry for a little bit late

anyway if you made change in the metadata, make sure changes mine too xD hehe thanks so much <3
http://puu.sh/qYglf/0eb0b988b3.rar

Last edited by Muu-chan 2016-09-03T07:40:19+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-NanoRIPE-

2,084 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2016-09-03T07:35:47+00:00

sorry for late aaaaaa

[General]

please use distance snap in Easy and Normal diff because its important thing
i think the kiai time should be here 00:50:319 because the word "kiss kiss kiss" and the music showing the particular part imo
Storyboarded hitsounds:
normal-hitclap.wav : Muu's NM
normal-hitclap.wav : .osb

Avoid using storyboarded hitsounds. If a player misses the hitobject that the storyboarded hitsound lands on, then the hitsound will be played (which doesn't make much sense when this is a rhythm game utilizing audio feedback). Also, storyboarded hitsounds at places where there are no objects can confuse the player into thinking there was some unseen hitobject, which doesn't make sense either.

[Hard]
00:06:391 (2) - straight slider? same as slider (1)
00:17:462 (1,2) - incosistent spacing
00:38:891 (4,5,6,4,5,6) - the placement looks same
00:48:355 (3,4,5) - maybe make a triangle here?
00:51:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - can you make the pattern more attractive? like 00:53:891 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3)
00:51:748 (1,2,3,4) - too close ~ and not consistent with 00:53:891 (3,4,5)
01:03:177 (1,3) - bad overlap imo
01:10:141 - circle here? i hear something here

maybe i should ended here because my pc is lag now ~
sorry for short mod
and GL!

Cheesecake

729 posts

Joined December 2013

Cheesecake 2016-09-09T00:24:19+00:00

zz shiguma i was waiting for you to reply so i could

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
[Hard]
00:06:391 (2) - straight slider? same as slider (1) I'd like to keep the curve!
00:17:462 (1,2) - incosistent spacing Since there's no supporting vocals here I decided to give it more space to follow the snare in the drums

Thanks!

Shiguma

476 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Shiguma 2016-09-09T03:52:35+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
sorry for late aaaaaa

[General]
please use distance snap in Easy and Normal diff because its important thing yep, i was in the middle of fixing it so notes were all over the place lol
i think the kiai time should be here 00:50:319 because the word "kiss kiss kiss" and the music showing the particular part imo I think this was a mistake, so I fixed it
Storyboarded hitsounds:
normal-hitclap.wav : Muu's NM
normal-hitclap.wav : .osb

Avoid using storyboarded hitsounds. If a player misses the hitobject that the storyboarded hitsound lands on, then the hitsound will be played (which doesn't make much sense when this is a rhythm game utilizing audio feedback). Also, storyboarded hitsounds at places where there are no objects can confuse the player into thinking there was some unseen hitobject, which doesn't make sense either. For Muu-chan, but I believe he put it on the NM diff because it sounded weird without it.
[Hard]
00:38:891 (4,5,6,4,5,6) - the placement looks same I'm not entirely sure what you mean, but if you're talking about 4, 5, and 6 being similar, I think it is fine because the music is basically the same.
00:48:355 (3,4,5) - maybe make a triangle here? Did something
00:51:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - can you make the pattern more attractive? like 00:53:891 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) No, because I don't think the pattern is ugly
00:51:748 (1,2,3,4) - too close ~ and not consistent with 00:53:891 (3,4,5) Although the distance spacing is smaller, the combo is harder to pull off because of the flower pattern. 00:53:891 (3,4,5) - isn't consistent with it but I was going for two different things in the first place.

maybe i should ended here because my pc is lag now ~
sorry for short mod
and GL!

Thanks for mod!
Sorry Cheesecake (and of course, -NanoRIPE-), I forgot to respond to this mod because I've been doing a lot of changes with the help of Spork Lover lol

Trost

188 posts

Joined November 2014

Trost 2016-09-13T23:49:46+00:00

Rank when?

Shiguma

476 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Shiguma 2016-09-14T01:06:40+00:00

Epiclol wrote:
Rank when?

Soon™

(No point in getting more mods until I fix my diffs)

Drum-Hitnormal

1,778 posts

Joined March 2011

Drum-Hitnormal 2016-09-20T02:12:11+00:00

I really like this anime and this song.
I am doing a hitsound difficulty for you right now, because what you have right now for mania is not that good IMO.

~~Will come back once I am done.~~

Edit:
Here is the hitsound difficulty, and I copied it to your actual difficulty and renamed them with (HS) appended in name.
Please try it with 100% hitsound volume and 100% music volume
DL : http://puu.sh/rhlKL/7353128c4e.zip

All hitsound from LordRaika's library.
Copied using this program: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5392330
I think if you convert it to std map and then use a STD hitsound copy program you can also apply it to your STD difficulties.

Hope you rank it soon, thanks for mapping it

auhueu

50 posts

Joined April 2013

auhueu 2016-09-24T01:21:58+00:00

kiss kiss ♥　新しい未来へと♥

enjoy いちにのさんでうたえ！

kiss kiss ♥ atarashii miraiheto ♥

enjou ichi ni no san de utae ♥

Ibrahim

1,204 posts

Joined July 2013

Ibrahim 2016-09-25T12:50:35+00:00

hi request mod as Muu-chan request

Normal

00:10:855 (10855|2) - how about this LN end in here 00:11:391 - same like this too 00:08:891 (8891|2,9784|1,10319|3) -
00:35:319 (35319|1) - i think this LN is here 00:35:505 -
solid diff =w=b

Hard

00:51:212 (51212|1,51391|1,51391|0,51569|0) - this jack in the same hand, how about to move this note 00:51:569 (51569|0) - to col 4 (col 1 2 3 4) and this 00:51:748 (51748|3) - move to 1, so making same with this 00:51:034 (51034|0,51034|3,51212|2,51212|1) -
00:52:998 - how about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6177357
good

good luck!

Muu-chan

1,643 posts

Joined August 2014

Muu-chan 2016-09-25T14:00:47+00:00

Ibrahim wrote:
hi request mod as Muu-chan request

Normal
00:10:855 (10855|2) - how about this LN end in here 00:11:391 - same like this too 00:08:891 (8891|2,9784|1,10319|3) - would consider this later :"
00:35:319 (35319|1) - i think this LN is here 00:35:505 - i don't think so =w=b
solid diff =w=b

Hard
00:51:212 (51212|1,51391|1,51391|0,51569|0) - this jack in the same hand, how about to move this note 00:51:569 (51569|0) - to col 4 (col 1 2 3 4) and this 00:51:748 (51748|3) - move to 1, so making same with this 00:51:034 (51034|0,51034|3,51212|2,51212|1) - nice =w=b
00:52:998 - how about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6177357 would keep this one due to 00:52:105 - this hole
good

good luck!

GWS BAIM

Update here, Shiguma

http://puu.sh/rnp54/5c0677a8d0.rar
i wuv da new bg ;-; tsugumi chii

-Amane-

7 posts

Joined July 2013

-Amane- 2016-09-25T19:15:55+00:00

~Chat regarding the Easy difficulty~

19:29 -Amane-: ayy
19:29 -Amane-: How's it going

19:29 -Amane-: i saw you updated

and checked trough the map
19:30 -Amane-: saw a coupld of things that bothered me personally and could be improved
19:30 -Amane-: Already did shit so i'll be sending times plus screens so you can see what i did
19:30 Shiguma: alright, tell me
19:31 -Amane-: I guess timeline only will be enough
19:31 -Amane-: 00:08:891 -
19:31 -Amane-: http://puu.sh/rnttp/5c8f16618d.jpg
19:31 -Amane-: 00:08:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/rntuM/f0372dc3ff.jpg
19:32 Shiguma: what about it xd
19:32 -Amane-: 00:21:391 - http://puu.sh/rntvY/aec13ec081.jpg
19:32 -Amane-: compare it to yours
19:32 Shiguma: oh
19:32 -Amane-: 00:38:891 - http://puu.sh/rntxV/efcfc8310e.jpg
19:32 -Amane-: 00:42:462 - http://puu.sh/rntyM/a6b3c01da2.jpg
19:32 Shiguma: no sound on 00:10:498 - though
19:33 Shiguma: oh
19:33 -Amane-: 01:21:391 - http://puu.sh/rntA9/fec0bdc97a.jpg
19:33 Shiguma: vocals
19:33 -Amane-: 01:24:069 - http://puu.sh/rntAG/6b022f3aaa.jpg
19:33 -Amane-: ok that's all
19:34 Shiguma: basically u want me to map to the vocals and not the background sounds right
19:34 -Amane-: yee i think it's better to follow the vocals there and get that consistent 1/1 spacing
19:34 -Amane-: not reallyy
19:34 -Amane-: on a few parts yee
19:34 -Amane-: because it plays better and flollows the music better imo
19:35 -Amane-: 00:13:891 - no vocals here
19:35 -Amane-: see what i did above
19:35 -Amane-: you have a single not there and that gives it a weird 3/4 click rhythem to 3
19:36 -Amane-: 00:15:141 (4,5) - same here, the way i did it above covers more of the instuments and is overall more consistent imo
19:36 Shiguma: yea
19:36 Shiguma: ill fix them thanks
19:36 -Amane-: see what you can improve
19:36 -Amane-: if you'd change it the way i did it you don't even have to replace stuff
19:37 -Amane-: it all fits pretty well inbetween
19:38 -Amane-: the only part you may have to change if you go with what i had on this part is this: 00:09:784 -
19:38 -Amane-: there is no space to put another note inbetween with the right spacing
19:39 -Amane-: 01:23:355 - and here it would overlap http://puu.sh/rntWx/d7bc0a4008.jpg
19:39 -Amane-: i hope this is not too much information at once haha
19:39 Shiguma: thanks
19:39 Shiguma: good advice
19:39 -Amane-: i hope it helps though

19:39 Shiguma: i will just scroll up xd
19:40 -Amane-: makes the diff overall more consistent
19:40 -Amane-: placement looks good btw!
19:40 -Amane-: well done on that

19:40 Shiguma: ye it does

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-09-28T05:57:24+00:00

I mod this for Shiguma's effort of ranking this map, no kudos because I've already modded this set once
[Amane's]

• 00:01:748 (6,7,8,9) - somehow the flow from 8-9 is very awkward. Would suggest sth like this?
Also make 00:02:819 - clickable because it's a strong beat
• 00:00:320 (1,2) - here it makes much more sense because of the stack, but then you confuse players at 00:03:177 (1,2) - with a 1/2 spacing for 1/1 objects. Why don't you just stack them?
• 00:04:605 (6,7,8,9) - 100% same issue as I mentioned before.
• 00:10:498 (5,6,7) - For those strong beats, making them further is a good choice, not a bunch of overlapped sliders. Also there're drums that should be clickable 00:11:391 - , so I think change the pattern into this and place them again reasonably
• 00:39:605 - no clickable sound here, so my suggestion would be changing 00:39:427 (2,3) - into a simple 1/2 slider
• 00:42:284 - should come up with any idea to change 00:42:105 (2,3) - because of the strong beat there at slider end
• 00:43:177 (1) - ugly slider shape, combine with a 1/2 spacing afterward, I think you should remap.
• 00:56:748 (5,6,7) - do this, because (5) is not really a strong beat for you to make an anti-flow and a huge spacing here. Then relocate (6) to improve the flow
• 01:15:855 (5,1) - the stack really makes the pattern goes backward as the emphasis they should have. Move the slider or circle somewhere else would be a good decision.
• 01:27:105 (6) - The NC should be here instead of 01:26:926 (1) -

Poke me ingame if you have any further question on anything related to the diff.
Good luck

Yami Cries

_Stan

Global Moderator

783 posts

Joined June 2012

_Stan 2016-09-28T08:20:21+00:00

Hey from my modq

[Muu's NM]

00:10:319 (10319|0) - if you wanna keep this, then you should add a note at 00:09:427 - and 00:11:391 - cuz both of these are 1 note + 1 NL (the drum sounds)
00:14:962 (14962|3,15319|0) - why there have 2 notes here but 00:13:891 - not

[Muu's HD]
really good can not find problems

great map and sorry short mod cuz I can't find more, give you a star~ Good Luck

-Amane-

7 posts

Joined July 2013

-Amane- 2016-09-28T17:52:12+00:00

Yamicchi wrote:
I mod this for Shiguma's effort of ranking this map, no kudos because I've already modded this set once That's so nice!
[Amane's]

• 00:01:748 (6,7,8,9) - somehow the flow from 8-9 is very awkward. Would suggest sth like this?
Also make 00:02:819 - clickable because it's a strong beat
• 00:00:320 (1,2) - here it makes much more sense because of the stack, but then you confuse players at 00:03:177 (1,2) - with a 1/2 spacing for 1/1 objects. Why don't you just stack them?
• 00:04:605 (6,7,8,9) - 100% same issue as I mentioned before.
• 00:10:498 (5,6,7) - For those strong beats, making them further is a good choice, not a bunch of overlapped sliders. Also there're drums that should be clickable 00:11:391 - , so I think change the pattern into this and place them again reasonably

I remapped the whole Into. Applied some of your suggestions from above!

• 00:39:605 - no clickable sound here, so my suggestion would be changing 00:39:427 (2,3) - into a simple 1/2 slider Okay
• 00:42:284 - should come up with any idea to change 00:42:105 (2,3) - because of the strong beat there at slider end I figured something out
• 00:43:177 (1) - ugly slider shape, combine with a 1/2 spacing afterward, I think you should remap. That slider sure was ugly, replaced it and fixed the spacing
• 00:56:748 (5,6,7) - do this, because (5) is not really a strong beat for you to make an anti-flow and a huge spacing here. Then relocate (6) to improve the flow Good suggestion
• 01:15:855 (5,1) - the stack really makes the pattern goes backward as the emphasis they should have. Move the slider or circle somewhere else would be a good decision. I changed it
• 01:27:105 (6) - The NC should be here instead of 01:26:926 (1) - Alright
Poke me ingame if you have any further question on anything related to the diff.
Good luck Thank you very much for your mod!

Also. Thanks to Spork Lover for helping me out any giving me some inspiration and ideas to improve my map. I changed a few other things overall in the map.

I cry too ;(
Yami Cries

Updated and improved map can be found here

http://puu.sh/rqTlD/21889b696d.rar

Muu-chan

1,643 posts

Joined August 2014

Muu-chan 2016-10-03T11:04:56+00:00

_Stan wrote:
Hey from my modq

[Muu's NM]
00:10:319 (10319|0) - if you wanna keep this, then you should add a note at 00:09:427 - and 00:11:391 - cuz both of these are 1 note + 1 NL (the drum sounds) that additional note is for cymbal :>
00:14:962 (14962|3,15319|0) - why there have 2 notes here but 00:13:891 - not I put them single btw, also in this section i focused on 1 single note for any kick/snare/guitar sound since it is easiest diff xD
[Muu's HD]
really good can not find problems

great map and sorry short mod cuz I can't find more, give you a star~ Good Luck

thank you so much :3

_RamiWins_

127 posts

Joined April 2016

_RamiWins_ 2016-10-03T16:47:36+00:00

no kds

...Because of your mod.
I have looked threw your(mania) maps multiple times nowand I dont know what
I am supposed to do ... there isnt much to mod in 1-2* maps.
Dont take this personal but as long as the timing is correct you really dont need to ask
for mods on low star maps!?
Dont know what to say exept for sorry, I´ve tried.

Muu-chan

1,643 posts

Joined August 2014

Muu-chan 2016-10-04T07:45:26+00:00

_RamiWins_ wrote:
no kds

...Because of your mod.
I have looked threw your(mania) maps multiple times nowand I dont know what
I am supposed to do ... there isnt much to mod in 1-2* maps.
Dont take this personal but as long as the timing is correct you really dont need to ask
for mods on low star maps!?
Dont know what to say exept for sorry, I´ve tried.

yeah i think so, looking something to mod in low stars map is kinda hard xD since it is pretty simple haha

squirrelpascals

1,002 posts

Joined March 2015

squirrelpascals 2016-10-05T05:14:29+00:00

Need to reply to old mods

Naxess, Nano

Fubukicat

970 posts

Joined February 2012

Fubukicat 2016-10-08T13:50:32+00:00

hi menia mod

Muu's HD

00:09:784 (9784|2) - how about ending this LN here : 00:10:141 (10141|1,10141|0) - intendly , to emphasis the chords effect

00:38:355 (38355|2,38534|3,38534|2,38712|3,38891|2,38891|3) - that's a lot of note focused on the right hand , well it's not really the best choice either , but what about moving this : 00:38:355 (38355|2) - to 1 ?
^for this one , you did that here 00:09:248 (9248|0,9427|0) - < jacking with the LN wich is abit tricky but doable

00:18:712 (18712|2) - add a note here (drum tom soundy)
00:24:427 (24427|1) - ^ same

00:40:141 (40141|2) - add a note to 3 or 1 (i'd put 1 but it's abit lolzy) This place sounds really nice for a sound, there is a vocal , a drum tom and it would be catchy

01:25:141 (85141|2) - hnnnnnnng the vocal seems so loud that i'd suggest to put a note , but well you aren't following vocal so feel free xd

Good lacku donkatsupyon~

tatemae

855 posts

Joined November 2014

tatemae 2016-10-10T14:17:32+00:00

m4m https://osu.ppy.sh/s/516685
[Sharkie's Dessert]
00:11:391 (4) - just the circle finishes a part better
00:45:677 (5) -Too big imo. I don't see a need for such a large jump here, especially compared to the distance you use on other jumps. This jump actually makes it really hard for flow
00:47:462 (1) - cntrl+g for flow and try this http://puu.sh/rE6Xb/d32f635457.png for 00:47:819 (2) -
01:08:355 (4,5) - its confusing for play imo, breaks flow, add more distance pls
01:26:748 (5,6,7,8) - just my opinion, okay this is not big jumps, the map is balanced but these jumps aren't really aesthetic
[Zer0's Extreme]
00:02:641 (6) - ctnrl+h for circular flow
00:07:462 (1,3,4,6,1) -The pattern desigining is a bit messy here, to many overlaps not aesthetic
00:24:962 (2,1) - You SERIOUSLY need to changed this slider. I know you kinda didnt try to repeat yourself, but this looks pretyt shitty imo :/... make good waveslider
00:29:962 (7) - cntrl+g for flow
00:33:177 (1) - can you make better waveslider?
00:52:641 (6) - this is good waveslider
01:09:247 (3,5,6,7,1,2,4) - The slight overlap looks a bit meh. Either change up the angles a little bit or change the slider shape
01:13:891 (3) - waveee
01:17:462 (1) - slow down slider for vocal
[-Amane-'s Extra]
00:05:677 (6) - x 174 y 249 for flow(sharpe angle)
00:17:641 (2) - shape too ugly, try make wavesliderD:?
00:26:034 (1,3) - stack bad for read
01:26:034 (2) - PLS HAVE THIS CLICKABE !!!! Its such a shame to let this go to waste under a slider
01:26:569 (1,2,3,4,5) - Unnecessary NC
[Yamicchi's Insane]
00:04:605 (1) - cntrl+g for circular flow
01:09:962 (7,8) - omg, why stack? Its weird for play imo
[Monarch's Insane]
00:54:427 (6,1) - I suggest to make an 30*-60* angle here for better flow
01:11:569 (6,1) - Spacing could be more even here too. I feel that here more than a distance is necessary

-Amane-

7 posts

Joined July 2013

-Amane- 2016-10-10T16:33:16+00:00

SherryCherry wrote:
[-Amane-'s Extra]
00:05:677 (6) - x 174 y 249 for flow(sharpe angle)
00:17:641 (2) - shape too ugly, try make wavesliderD:?
00:26:034 (1,3) - stack bad for read
01:26:034 (2) - PLS HAVE THIS CLICKABE !!!! Its such a shame to let this go to waste under a slider
01:26:569 (1,2,3,4,5) - Unnecessary NC

Thanks for the mod! I changed a couple things.

http://puu.sh/rEfvI/09cbf553da.rar

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-10-11T12:54:24+00:00

SherryCherry wrote:
[Yamicchi's Insane]
00:04:605 (1) - cntrl+g for circular flow nah, it will break the flow of (2) then
01:09:962 (7,8) - omg, why stack? Its weird for play imo well okay I decided to delete (8), gonna get some complaint about the spacing but I think it's better this way, thanks for pointing it out

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Zer0-

177 posts

Joined April 2014

Zer0- 2016-10-11T15:22:00+00:00

SherryCherry wrote:
[Zer0's Extreme]
00:02:641 (6) - ctnrl+h for circular flow what
00:07:462 (1,3,4,6,1) -The pattern desigining is a bit messy here, to many overlaps not aesthetic changed slightly
00:24:962 (2,1) - You SERIOUSLY need to changed this slider. I know you kinda didnt try to repeat yourself, but this looks pretyt shitty imo :/... make good waveslider ok changed a bit
00:29:962 (7) - cntrl+g for flow did this
00:33:177 (1) - can you make better waveslider? slightly changed
00:52:641 (6) - this is good waveslider thank
01:09:247 (3,5,6,7,1,2,4) - The slight overlap looks a bit meh. Either change up the angles a little bit or change the slider shape think it plays and looks fine as is tbh
01:13:891 (3) - waveee fixxx
01:17:462 (1) - slow down slider for vocal did this too

updated osu

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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:晴レ晴レファンファーレ
Artist:mimimemeMIMI
ArtistUnicode:みみめめMIMI
Creator:Shiguma
Version:Zer0's Extreme
Source:甘々と稲妻
Tags:Zer0- Monarch Cheesecake squirrelpascals muu-chan -Amane- Yamicchi amaama to inazuma Sweetness and Lightning op tv size hare
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Muu-chan

1,643 posts

Joined August 2014

Muu-chan 2016-10-13T00:43:58+00:00

Eternalie wrote:
hi menia mod

Muu's HD
00:09:784 (9784|2) - how about ending this LN here : 00:10:141 (10141|1,10141|0) - intendly , to emphasis the chords effect nice, edited some :9

00:38:355 (38355|2,38534|3,38534|2,38712|3,38891|2,38891|3) - that's a lot of note focused on the right hand , well it's not really the best choice either , but what about moving this : 00:38:355 (38355|2) - to 1 ?
^for this one , you did that here 00:09:248 (9248|0,9427|0) - < jacking with the LN wich is abit tricky but doable i did something different :9

00:18:712 (18712|2) - add a note here (drum tom soundy)
00:24:427 (24427|1) - ^ same both keep :<

00:40:141 (40141|2) - add a note to 3 or 1 (i'd put 1 but it's abit lolzy) This place sounds really nice for a sound, there is a vocal , a drum tom and it would be catchy added some LN :9

01:25:141 (85141|2) - hnnnnnnng the vocal seems so loud that i'd suggest to put a note , but well you aren't following vocal so feel free xd yeaa keep it xD

Good lacku donkatsupyon~

Thanks so much

UPDATE ~ http://puu.sh/rH3iW/5c57e449b0.rar

Monarch

213 posts

Joined July 2014

Monarch 2016-10-16T19:51:32+00:00

SherryCherry wrote:
[Monarch's Insane]
00:54:427 (6,1) - I suggest to make an 30*-60* angle here for better flow very common to do with where the slider end is where my circle (6) is currently, I'd argue to flows perferclt fine as it is as a back and forward jump
01:11:569 (6,1) - Spacing could be more even here too. I feel that here more than a distance is necessary emphasis in this point is dictated by the direction change, not the spacing. The direction is changed and then the rest of the section is emphasised by larger spacing in the rest of the part

Haganenno

247 posts

Joined July 2014

Haganenno 2016-10-21T17:36:01+00:00

[General]
The song you chose is a mess. I want to hit everything early because the lyrics are earlier than the percussion beats.

[Yamicchi's Another]
Overall, I find 70% hitsounds to be too loud for the song in most sections of the map
00:01:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - I see sliders as something at expresses the vocals in this. The 3-tick slider kind of expresses silence and I don't think that's right. I recommend doing three sliders and two strong jumps here 00:02:819 - this way, different kinds of circles represent different layers of the song which is pretty nice.
00:01:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - how the combo should look from my viewpoint http://puu.sh/rQIro/bcad102ad5.png
00:04:605 (1,2,3,4,5) - same. I can add that this is a nice change because the vocal accent is much stronger on white ticks than they are on red, that is why using two hitcircles to express two very different attack sounds is bad.
00:08:177 (3,4,5) - this is perfectly fine though, because the vocal beats are pretty equal to each other and the vocal line is unique here.
00:10:230 - I think this is overmapped, but if you will decide to stick with this, silence the sliderend with a lower-volumed inherited timing point
00:12:819 (1) - you're mapping to a sound that begins earlier, it is difficult to follow the music here, I understand. Maybe place a silent kickslider on 00:12:641 - or a hitcircle on 00:12:730 - ?
00:16:034 (1) - new section begins here. I suggest breaking the circular flow here, as continuing it doesn't really feel good
00:41:034 (3,4) - make this more special flow-wise. Break the flow and place it where the player doesn't expect it. The map is very lineair and not really interesting. This is one of those parts where you can actually make it more interesting.
00:43:891 (2,3) - same. Overall, just do something special for 00:40:319 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:43:177 (4,1,2,3,4) -
00:43:177 (4) - 00:40:319 (1) - new combo inconsistency
00:51:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as 00:01:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - I guess the other clones of this song pattern is justified for pp jumps
00:50:319 (1) - new section, break the flow, make it go to the other side or smthn
00:50:319 (1,2) - 00:53:177 (1,2) - are much stronger than you are mapping it (I won't repeat it anymore, the same pattern repeats over and over). Make them stand as unique. Maybe make them anti-flow or something? They are unique. Mapping them as unique can make the map great again, as the map is pretty boring right now.
01:06:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - remember what I said about deez?
01:12:462 (1) - break circular flow here, this is too boring
01:28:177 - spinner should end here

[-Amane-'s Extra]
00:39:427 (2) - - there is no beat on 00:39:605 - so make this slider land on 00:39:784 - so it would be mapped to something (the lyrics)
00:41:034 (2) - make something more fun
00:41:748 (1) - if you do not choose to make something fun with the last one, then the last one is unique. Unique sound pattern = unique pattern in the game. That means that you have to change the slider here into something else. Besides, vocal strong beats are on 00:41:748 - 00:42:105 - so the correct rhythm is this http://puu.sh/rQJO3/ac1385e766.png
00:45:319 (4) - just for clarity, I think this is totally fine
00:44:427 (3,4) - it is actually heavy overmapping, there are no sound here, but it plays well so idk
00:48:712 (4,5,1) - same
00:50:318 (1,2,3,4) - you don't separate the KISS, you just have a star pattern. Make two vertical jump pairs and an awkward aim to the slider afterwards because the spacing is increased, but it just doesn't feel like KISS KISS is happening.
00:50:318 (1,2,1,2,3) - this is how I imagine this part (notice how (1) is a blanket?) http://puu.sh/rQKSj/873ccc8481.png
00:50:677 (1) - NC here for more emphasis on the strong kisses.
Just gonna let you know that most of the tripples you have placed in your map are overmapped and should probably be deleted if this goes for rank
00:56:034 (1,2,3,4) - Whatever I said above applies to all parts like this. Less flow! Also, NC on 00:56:391 (3) -
00:56:034 (1) - essentially what I want you to do on these parts is something what Bearizm did on "If You Can't Hang" on 02:40:412 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
01:15:855 (5) - blanket this, move it to x:356 y:56
01:28:177 - spinner should end here

[Zero's Extreme]
Why the fuck is this called EXTREME? It is 5,25* cmon now
00:02:641 (6) - no need to clap-hitsound this, you were clapping white ticks and all of a sudden you clap a red tick.
00:18:087 - I guess you can make this a tripple
01:02:462 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - this is like 1,5x times the spacing of what you had before and after. I can understand that you want to increase the spacing, but this pattern is the hardest pattern in your map both spacing wise and flow/aiming wise, yet NOTHING IN THE SONG DEMANDS THAT. Reduce the spacing or/and (I'd prefer "and" tbh) make aim more vertical-oriented or horizontal-oriented, this is both hard to aim and the spacing is far too high.
01:13:891 (3) - this curve could be more curvy so 01:13:534 (2,4) - these would blanket properly.
01:17:462 (1) - silence the end of the slider cuz you end it on nothing or prolong it until 01:18:355 -

[Sharkie's Dessert]
It took me way too long to mod all the other diffs and I disagree with the entire concept of your map so I will not get into it because I'd get triggered too easily.
I will just give you my observations:
1. Many parts of the map play weird on your hand: Examples - 00:00:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
2. So many triples. I have no idea where you found em. While modding other diffs, I would inspect every triple and all of them were mapped to non-existant or barely audible sounds. And that was like one or three triples a map. This has two triples in every stanza. Besides, triples on white ticks are generally pretty bad.
Examples: 00:19:605 (3,4,5) - 00:20:319 (1,2,3) - 00:18:266 (3,4) - and so on

Good luck lads!

-Amane-

7 posts

Joined July 2013

-Amane- 2016-10-22T19:43:25+00:00

Haganenno wrote:
[-Amane-'s Extra]
00:39:427 (2) - - there is no beat on 00:39:605 - so make this slider land on 00:39:784 - so it would be mapped to something (the lyrics)
00:41:034 (2) - make something more fun
00:41:748 (1) - if you do not choose to make something fun with the last one, then the last one is unique. Unique sound pattern = unique pattern in the game. That means that you have to change the slider here into something else. Besides, vocal strong beats are on 00:41:748 - 00:42:105 - so the correct rhythm is this http://puu.sh/rQJO3/ac1385e766.png
00:45:319 (4) - just for clarity, I think this is totally fine
00:44:427 (3,4) - it is actually heavy overmapping, there are no sound here, but it plays well so idk
00:48:712 (4,5,1) - same
00:50:318 (1,2,3,4) - you don't separate the KISS, you just have a star pattern. Make two vertical jump pairs and an awkward aim to the slider afterwards because the spacing is increased, but it just doesn't feel like KISS KISS is happening.
00:50:318 (1,2,1,2,3) - this is how I imagine this part (notice how (1) is a blanket?) http://puu.sh/rQKSj/873ccc8481.png
00:50:677 (1) - NC here for more emphasis on the strong kisses.
Just gonna let you know that most of the tripples you have placed in your map are overmapped and should probably be deleted if this goes for rank
00:56:034 (1,2,3,4) - Whatever I said above applies to all parts like this. Less flow! Also, NC on 00:56:391 (3) -
00:56:034 (1) - essentially what I want you to do on these parts is something what Bearizm did on "If You Can't Hang" on 02:40:412 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
01:15:855 (5) - blanket this, move it to x:356 y:56
01:28:177 - spinner should end here

We don't really see eye to eye. So no changes. Still, I thank you very much for your spent time and effort to mod my Diff.

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-10-23T05:06:04+00:00

Haganenno wrote:
[Yamicchi's Another]
Overall, I find 70% hitsounds to be too loud for the song in most sections of the map gonna hitsound it when I have time duhh I'm lazy
00:01:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - I see sliders as something at expresses the vocals in this. The 3-tick slider kind of expresses silence and I don't think that's right. I recommend doing three sliders and two strong jumps here 00:02:819 - this way, different kinds of circles represent different layers of the song which is pretty nice. I believe you can hear the voice at 00:02:819 (5) - last until the next note on white tick. And since I made 2 circles there is because I wanna emphasize that 2 notes. Those have higher pitch than the other 4 so why is a slider better?
00:01:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - how the combo should look from my viewpoint http://puu.sh/rQIro/bcad102ad5.png -
00:04:605 (1,2,3,4,5) - same. I can add that this is a nice change because the vocal accent is much stronger on white ticks than they are on red, that is why using two hitcircles to express two very different attack sounds is bad. -
00:08:177 (3,4,5) - this is perfectly fine though, because the vocal beats are pretty equal to each other and the vocal line is unique here. -
00:10:230 - I think this is overmapped, but if you will decide to stick with this, silence the sliderend with a lower-volumed inherited timing point big drum leads to a hitfinish. Not really overmap it's just a bit harder than usual
00:12:819 (1) - you're mapping to a sound that begins earlier, it is difficult to follow the music here, I understand. Maybe place a silent kickslider on 00:12:641 - or a hitcircle on 00:12:730 - ? extended the slider
00:16:034 (1) - new section begins here. I suggest breaking the circular flow here, as continuing it doesn't really feel good not really a problem
00:41:034 (3,4) - make this more special flow-wise. Break the flow and place it where the player doesn't expect it. The map is very lineair and not really interesting. This is one of those parts where you can actually make it more interesting. Everyone has every different taste of patterns. This is what I like
00:43:891 (2,3) - same. Overall, just do something special for 00:40:319 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:43:177 (4,1,2,3,4) -
00:43:177 (4) - 00:40:319 (1) - new combo inconsistency fixed
00:51:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as 00:01:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - I guess the other clones of this song pattern is justified for pp jumps no, just get pp from the other diff except mine
00:50:319 (1) - new section, break the flow, make it go to the other side or smthn up and to the right. What do you expect more?
00:50:319 (1,2) - 00:53:177 (1,2) - are much stronger than you are mapping it (I won't repeat it anymore, the same pattern repeats over and over). Make them stand as unique. Maybe make them anti-flow or something? They are unique. Mapping them as unique can make the map great again, as the map is pretty boring right now. -
01:06:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - remember what I said about deez? -
01:12:462 (1) - break circular flow here, this is too boring -
01:28:177 - spinner should end here the sound completely ends here 01:28:534 -

Mod a map is to make the map better follow the mapper's mapping style, not making a map yours. Throughout the mod I can only see you're telling me your opinion on the pattern. It's the mapper's style which made osu this great. Why do you think there are 6 mapset of Honey Come? Because it's THEIR style, and modders can and should not change it. If it has nothing against the RC then it's fine if the mapper satisfied with it. If they don't, they'll change their map. I'm sorry to say this, I'm not very happy today. Forgive for this rude conversation. Thank you for the mod

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_Meep_

1,725 posts

Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 2016-10-23T19:51:23+00:00

m 4 the m

ez
00:08:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Because they're the same DS as all the previous notes before it,the players may mistake them and click too fast. Distance them pls
*This goes for all the other notes in the map^

Normal
00:07:462 (1) - Remove NC to keep consistency
00:23:177 (1) - remove NC?
00:26:034 (1,1) - If u can stack these?
*At this part^ I recommend turning down on the number of NCs for the whole 20-30 seconds to allow the player to read more easily.

Collab Hard
00:07:462 (1,3) - Stack these like how you do here 00:05:141 (2,4) - ?
00:47:462 (1) - Move the direction so it wouldn't overlap 00:48:534 (1) - ?
01:12:105 - I doubt you're mapping to vocals,so add note

Monarch's insane
00:11:391 (5) - Put sliderend to normal sampleset for a full mute(works for default skin and my own skin,at least,not sure about others)
00:52:641 (6) - Feels weird,considering this is the only slider that has a repeat on it for the whole kiai

Yamicchi's Another
01:15:855 (7) - I doubt theres a sound here,remove it
00:55:498 (6) - Same as monarch,why is this the ONLY reverse slider in the kiai lol

-Amane-'s Extra
Flawless in my eyes,nice job

Cant find anything wrong in Sharkie's and Zero's,nice job too

m4m done,now do mine >;o
jk take ur time

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-10-24T05:07:32+00:00

_Meep_ wrote:
Yamicchi's Another
01:15:855 (7) - I doubt theres a sound here,remove it huhh?
00:55:498 (6) - Same as monarch,why is this the ONLY reverse slider in the kiai lol fixed lol

thank you~ :3 hitsound updated too

osu file format v14

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Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6391
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:晴レ晴レファンファーレ
Artist:mimimemeMIMI
ArtistUnicode:みみめめMIMI
Creator:Shiguma
Version:Yamicchi's Another
Source:甘々と稲妻
Tags:Sharkie Zer0- Monarch Cheesecake squirrelpascals muu-chan -Amane- Yamicchi amaama to inazuma Sweetness and Lightning op tv size
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Shiguma

476 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Shiguma 2016-10-24T05:09:49+00:00

_Meep_ wrote:
m 4 the m
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00:08:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Because they're the same DS as all the previous notes before it,the players may mistake them and click too fast. Distance them pls
*This goes for all the other notes in the map^ It's all 0.9x it's okay

Normal
00:07:462 (1) - Remove NC to keep consistency ye
00:23:177 (1) - remove NC? ok
00:26:034 (1,1) - If u can stack these? yup
*At this part^ I recommend turning down on the number of NCs for the whole 20-30 seconds to allow the player to read more easily. :ok_hand: done

Collab Hard
00:47:462 (1) - Move the direction so it wouldn't overlap 00:48:534 (1) - ? yeah whoops

Thanks for mod

Vindikas

5 posts

Joined March 2015

Vindikas 2016-10-28T21:10:46+00:00

Waiting for this map... not submitted... *cry*

Shiguma

476 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Shiguma 2016-10-28T22:04:42+00:00

Vindikas wrote:
Waiting for this map... not submitted... *cry*

It's submitted, else you wouldn't be seeing it.

You mean ranked, and hopefully we can do it with enough mods

Sotarks

Mapping Architect

3,553 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-10-29T15:24:50+00:00

Hi,

[Sharkie's Fromage]

00:03:177 (1) - really uneven overlap dude, it's not enjoyable to play, you can consider make it clear enough so poeple can actually see it imo
00:11:391 (4) - you can replace that slider by the a single circle tbh, there's no sound to follow after it
00:15:677 (5) - i want more emphasis on that note since it's a clap, and lesst spacing on 00:15:855 (6) - that one, you can try something like this.
00:16:034 (1) - just my taste but you don't prefer regular slider like this, imo it looks better than the curve right in the middle of it.
00:17:819 (2) - try that curve instead, looks cleaner.
00:19:605 (3,4,5,1,2,3,5,6,7) - i really don't like those overmapped 1/4, like I hear no sound on the 1/4 snare tbh.. .... ok nvm you did that everywhere, as you wish it's just not recommanded..
00:24:069 (2) - less spacing that sound doesn't need such emphasis
00:24:248 (3) - can you move that one up to avoid the overlap with 00:23:177 (1) - that slider ?
00:38:712 (7) - why such spacing on this, I understand 00:38:534 (6) - that spacing here since you want to emphasis clap + voice but the next one feels weaker man.
00:39:427 (2) - space it more, poeple will think it's a 3/4 how you use spacing here.
00:49:962 (5) - nc to follow the snare, and 00:49:962 (5,6,7,8) - drum sample set could be an alternative here.
00:52:998 (8) - same as above like, this note doesn't need such spacing man;
00:55:855 (8) - see here you space it less, you have 0 consitency in your note placement, but still yeah that spacing "could" be fine, i'd rather consider a 1/2 slider tho.
00:56:748 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - idk where to start xd, 00:56:927 (4) - first wtf is this, like why is that spacing so low compared to other jump and the angle you use to got to that 00:57:105 (5,6) - double is harsh af, and also why a double, since u didn't use any double in all your map, it's so confusing and random. well idk, i'd consider a remap of this jump tbh feels really out of place and not enjoyable gameplay-wise.
00:58:891 (1) - same as above for the slider curve thingy
01:01:034 (4,5) - that jumps hasn't got the same angle as 01:00:677 (2,3) - wich makes the flow poor in that case, i'd consider to ctrl c, the first one and paste it in that case you can keep the same kind of anglish flow.
00:51:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and 01:02:998 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - what's worng in the comboing? this section is litterally the same and comboing is different, same as spacing, why do oyou emphasis more the 2nd one ?
01:04:427 (3) - Oh see that's a good spacing now for this section! compared to 01:07:284 (8) - and now we're back again to over-emphasis xD
01:08:534 (5) - why you kill intensity of this clap with such low spacing ?
01:11:034 (3) - i'd rather avoid this overlap
01:12:284 (3,4) - sharp and unconfortable angle to play after such an overlap like 01:12:284 (3) - this, consider moving 01:12:462 (4) - somewhere else.
01:22:819 (3) - same for your previous clap, why you kill spacing here ?
01:23:712 (2) - EMPHASIS KILLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
01:26:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - o v e r d o n e, rather nerf this, even if it's because "omg it's tv size so i'll put pp jump at the end".... The only spacing is good is for 01:26:034 (1,5) - those notes and 5 should've need a NC tho.
01:27:462 (1) - and the kill emphasis again.
woaaah really unconsistent diff here, with notes and spacing all other the place without actual meaning of the song, it's like you mapped this just for the SR, wich is not a good thing to do Sharkie, try to avoid that in the future, and if you can fix, try to think at every note what spacing that note requiere, instead of putting it randomly just to fit your jump patern, your map can give pp with the actual music following actually that map is pp, but unconfortable to play because it doesn't fit the song at all, it's litterally a jump training, also please reduce the AR man..

[Zer0's Expert]

00:10:855 (5) - nc that for the readability of your paterning
00:26:033 (1) - that shape is really ugly, wanna try smth like this
00:28:177 (4,5) - 1/2 slider pls, 00:28:355 (5) - that has no reason to be mapped, since you are following the voice. and you did it 00:31:034 (5) - here.
00:52:641 (6) - try make a better shape that's ore symmetrical like this
00:59:427 (3,4) - e:mphasis killer, space more 4 pls.
01:02:462 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - why suddently big big spacing in here ? previously was exactly same voice peech and here u over emphasis it, no reason..
01:26:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - try to reduce the spacing of this stream pls

[-Amane-'s Extra]

00:24:605 (1,2,3,4) - check your hitsounding, missing claps and whistle here dude.
00:26:748 (3) - kinda weird overlap
00:50:318 (1,2,3,4) - make those 2 1/2 sliders pls too hard to jump after a stream especially when there's no sound on the 1/2 to emphasis such. just do like you did in your next 00:53:177 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - patern here.
00:55:766 (7,9) - do you hear 1/4? I don't...
01:01:748 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 sliders again bro pls

[Yamicchi's Another]

Maybe you can rename it to insane, 'cause Another doesn't fit the song imo xd
AR to 9,1 please, to fit the spread gap !
01:09:962 (7,1) - you don't wanna stack them mate like you did previously on your paterns, it really fits instead of spacing it imo.
01:15:677 (6) - that note is out of place, i can suggest you to delete it and space more 01:15:855 (7,1) - tbh.
01:22:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - kinda overdone jump imo, i wanted rytthmn with the finish emphasis with 1/2 sliders instead, that section doesn't ask for such a harsh jump imo.
really nice diff, i enjoyed a lot. !! :v

[Monarch's Insane]

00:08:177 (3) - not really a good rythmn choice here since you skip clap/vocal, and you have nothing to put slider like that that's a beat holding tho, rather change.
00:34:605 (1) - clap on the end?
01:27:462 (1,2) - heh what are you even following here ? xd

gl

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-10-29T15:57:11+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
[Yamicchi's Another]
Maybe you can rename it to insane, 'cause Another doesn't fit the song imo xd Shiguma asked me to name it Another :v
AR to 9,1 please, to fit the spread gap ! Nah I think it's good for now
01:09:962 (7,1) - you don't wanna stack them mate like you did previously on your paterns, it really fits instead of spacing it imo. uhh, what do you mean? If you want me to stack it I think it's not really necessary as the spacing is big enough to be considered as 1/1
01:15:677 (6) - that note is out of place, i can suggest you to delete it and space more 01:15:855 (7,1) - tbh. will consider changing it if someone else mention about it, because to me it seems fine
01:22:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - kinda overdone jump imo, i wanted rytthmn with the finish emphasis with 1/2 sliders instead, that section doesn't ask for such a harsh jump imo. compare to those jump before and after this, this is not really a harsh jump pattern as it does not required much moves. Will keep it for now
really nice diff, i enjoyed a lot. !! :v

Thanks for the mod, not fix anything this time :3~

Zer0-

177 posts

Joined April 2014

Zer0- 2016-10-29T16:10:57+00:00

Haganenno wrote:
[Zero's Extreme]
Why the fuck is this called EXTREME? It is 5,25* cmon now not extreme anymore :^)
00:02:641 (6) - no need to clap-hitsound this, you were clapping white ticks and all of a sudden you clap a red tick. following the vocals
00:18:087 - I guess you can make this a tripple don't think the song supports a triple here imo
01:02:462 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - this is like 1,5x times the spacing of what you had before and after. I can understand that you want to increase the spacing, but this pattern is the hardest pattern in your map both spacing wise and flow/aiming wise, yet NOTHING IN THE SONG DEMANDS THAT. Reduce the spacing or/and (I'd prefer "and" tbh) make aim more vertical-oriented or horizontal-oriented, this is both hard to aim and the spacing is far too high. ok reduced spacing for this part
01:13:891 (3) - this curve could be more curvy so 01:13:534 (2,4) - these would blanket properly. tried to curve more!
01:17:462 (1) - silence the end of the slider cuz you end it on nothing or prolong it until 01:18:355 - Silenced!
Good luck lads! Thanks!

Sotarks wrote:
Hi,

[Zer0's Expert]
00:10:855 (5) - nc that for the readability of your paterning fixed!
00:26:033 (1) - that shape is really ugly, wanna try smth like this fixed!
00:28:177 (4,5) - 1/2 slider pls, 00:28:355 (5) - that has no reason to be mapped, since you are following the voice. and you did it 00:31:034 (5) - here. made it a slider!
00:52:641 (6) - try make a better shape that's ore symmetrical like this fixed!
00:59:427 (3,4) - e:mphasis killer, space more 4 pls. spaced!
01:02:462 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - why suddently big big spacing in here ? previously was exactly same voice peech and here u over emphasis it, no reason.. fixed in the precious mod
01:26:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - try to reduce the spacing of this stream pls did this
note to self, never make wave sliders again
gl Thanks!

hi babe

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Monarch

213 posts

Joined July 2014

Monarch 2016-10-29T17:04:23+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
[Monarch's Insane]
00:08:177 (3) - not really a good rythmn choice here since you skip clap/vocal, and you have nothing to put slider like that that's a beat holding tho, rather change. just following a more prominent beat, i don;'t think this would be an issue when playing
00:34:605 (1) - clap on the end? yes
01:27:462 (1,2) - heh what are you even following here ? xd piano trill

gl

-Amane-

7 posts

Joined July 2013

-Amane- 2016-10-29T18:21:06+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
[-Amane-'s Extra]
00:24:605 (1,2,3,4) - check your hitsounding, missing claps and whistle here dude. Fixed
00:26:748 (3) - kinda weird overlap Changed
00:50:318 (1,2,3,4) - make those 2 1/2 sliders pls too hard to jump after a stream especially when there's no sound on the 1/2 to emphasis such. just do like you did in your next 00:53:177 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - patern here. Nerfed
00:55:766 (7,9) - do you hear 1/4? I don't... Changed
01:01:748 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 sliders again bro pls Yesss

Thanks for the mod!

heyronii

109 posts

Joined January 2015

heyronii 2016-10-30T00:01:40+00:00

[Sharkie's Dessert]

00:11:391 (4) - Could end on white tick.
00:12:819 - Piano sound that's mapped on other difficulties not mapped here?
00:14:427 (1,2,3) - Sliderends have more dominant sound than the start of the slider.
00:27:105 (6,7) - No change in intensity but a huge jump here?
01:22:819 (3) - Next and previous sliderends have more dominant sound than this circle. Well, if you are mapping the vocals, then consider this: http://puu.sh/s01xs/bbbf482bbf.jpg.

[Zero's Extra]

00:02:462 (5,6) - Consider stacking, or giving more space.
00:05:677 - Following vocals but, missing a bass kick here.
00:10:319 (2,3) - Spacing here is the same as 00:10:141 (1,2) -. Shouldn't be.
00:10:855 (1,2,3) - Again, here between 1-2 and 2-3 shouldn't be same.
00:42:641 (5) - For 1,2,3,4 it's all mapped to vocal. But this one? Has no sound. Consider deleting this and ending 4 on red tick.
01:03:891 (5,6) - Spacing. Stack these please if you want them close to each other.

[Yamicchi's Insane]

00:18:087 (5) - No sound here. Put this between 1,2 or 6,7.

[Monarch's Insane]

00:08:177 (3) - Missing lots of sounds here.
00:13:534 (2) - Sliderend dominant note.
00:47:462 (1) - 's end has dominant sound. 00:47:998 (2) - has little to no sound.
01:14:427 (3,4) - Random. If you are mapping vocals here put them before this 01:16:034 (1) - .

[Amane's Insane]
Generally, there are too many triples on this diff. Feels like overmapped. Most of them have no sound.

Overmapped:
00:18:712 (6,7,1) - , 00:30:141 (6,7,1) - , 00:38:712 (6,7,1) -, 00:44:427 (3,4,1) - ,00:48:712 (4,5,1) -, 01:04:427 (6,7,1) -, 01:10:141 (6,7,1) -
Not overmapped:
00:21:569 (6,7,1) -, 00:24:427 (6,7,1) -, 00:30:141 (6,7,1) - ,00:32:998 (4,5,1) - ,00:35:855 (6,7,1) - ,00:47:284 (5,6,1) - ,00:26:927 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - ,01:14:427 (5,6,1) - ,01:18:712 (3,4,1) - ,01:24:427 (6,7,1) -
Also overmapped but can be fixed like this:
00:58:712 (6,7,1) - You can put this triple at the end of 1. The 'j' sound kind of vibrates.

00:10:498 (2,3) - 2 is mapped to vocal. All others in this combo is mapped to kick.
00:47:462 (1,2,3) - Try to give more space than before as the song gets more intense.
01:07:105 (6,7,8,9) - Fix 7, 76-208 looks better?

-Amane-

7 posts

Joined July 2013

-Amane- 2016-10-30T00:55:43+00:00

heyronii wrote:
[Amane's Insane]
Generally, there are too many triples on this diff. Feels like overmapped. Most of them have no sound.

Overmapped:
00:18:712 (6,7,1) - , 00:30:141 (6,7,1) - , 00:38:712 (6,7,1) -, 00:44:427 (3,4,1) - ,00:48:712 (4,5,1) -, 01:04:427 (6,7,1) -, 01:10:141 (6,7,1) -
Not overmapped:
00:21:569 (6,7,1) -, 00:24:427 (6,7,1) -, 00:30:141 (6,7,1) - ,00:32:998 (4,5,1) - ,00:35:855 (6,7,1) - ,00:47:284 (5,6,1) - ,00:26:927 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - ,01:14:427 (5,6,1) - ,01:18:712 (3,4,1) - ,01:24:427 (6,7,1) -
Also overmapped but can be fixed like this:
00:58:712 (6,7,1) - You can put this triple at the end of 1. The 'j' sound kind of vibrates.
Tripples are used to emphasize sounds all the time, so this it okay.
00:10:498 (2,3) - 2 is mapped to vocal. All others in this combo is mapped to kick. No change.
00:47:462 (1,2,3) - Try to give more space than before as the song gets more intense. No change.
01:07:105 (6,7,8,9) - Fix 7, 76-208 looks better? Fixed it a lil.

Thank you for the mod!

Shiguma

476 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Shiguma 2016-10-31T00:46:41+00:00

Sadly, I am removing 3 diffs from this set because:

1) The spread became all messed up because of the modding process, there were like 3 diffs that were around the same star rating
2) Comparing the diffs to each other, they were of varying quality
3) There were too many gd's for the set to handle (my fault)

I screwed up. Sorry -Amane-, Zer0-, and Sharkie. I shouldn't have bit off more than I can chew. It feels pretty shit and I would 100% understand if no one ever wants to GD for me.

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-10-31T07:10:12+00:00

Fixed the thing from heyronii's mod and some other stuff

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50230
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6391
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:Harebare Fanfare
TitleUnicode:晴レ晴レファンファーレ
Artist:mimimemeMIMI
ArtistUnicode:みみめめMIMI
Creator:Shiguma
Version:Yamicchi's Dessert
Source:甘々と稲妻
Tags:Monarch Cheesecake squirrelpascals muu-chan Yamicchi amaama to inazuma Sweetness and Lightning opening tv size タカオユキ Takao Yuki
BeatmapID:1096531
BeatmapSetID:487520

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.5
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"qt.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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12730,-111.111111111111,4,2,2,70,0,0
13177,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
16034,-125,4,2,2,70,0,0
47462,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
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78891,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
87462,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
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288,144,71391,2,0,L|408:152,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,336,71748,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,144,71927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,296,72105,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,272,72284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,64,72462,5,8,0:0:0:0:
336,256,72641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,168,72819,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,80,72998,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,360,73177,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,272,73534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,184,73891,2,0,P|184:208|112:176,1,135.000005149842,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,186,74427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,96,74605,2,0,P|48:128|32:208,2,135.000005149842,0|0|0,3:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,75677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,75855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,76034,6,0,B|240:88|240:88|328:80,1,135.000005149842,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,76748,2,0,B|336:152|336:152|248:160,1,135.000005149842,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,236,77462,6,0,P|160:276|159:155,1,337.500012874604
126,216,78534,1,0,1:0:0:0:
60,92,78712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,92,78802,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,92,78891,6,0,P|120:76|160:80,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,28,79248,2,0,P|291:87|268:120,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,216,79605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,77,79784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,79962,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,120,80141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,332,80319,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,80498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,360,80677,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,336,80855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,240,81034,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,248,81212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,236,81391,5,8,0:0:0:0:
152,244,81569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,232,81748,6,0,P|432:280|424:328,2,90,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,156,82284,2,0,P|200:160|152:152,1,90
56,16,82641,2,0,P|85:59|102:104,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,312,82998,5,0,0:0:0:0:
162,154,83177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,336,83355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,160,83534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,312,83712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,160,83891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,236,84069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,220,84248,2,0,P|296:160|264:92,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,80,84605,6,0,L|128:88,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,236,84962,2,0,L|144:244,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,80,85319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,100,85498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,144,85677,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,120,85855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,320,86034,5,12,0:0:0:0:
320,212,86212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,140,86391,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,372,86569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,80,86748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,272,86927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,320,87105,2,0,L|428:316,6,22.5
496,308,87462,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87552,12,0,88534,0:0:0:0:

Sotarks

Mapping Architect

3,553 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-11-01T13:10:58+00:00

Sadly I modded the most last diff and you remove it ! D:

Shiguma

476 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Shiguma 2016-11-01T15:41:59+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
Sadly I modded the most last diff and you remove it ! D:

Sorry, a lot of things including your mod led me to this decision

Muu-chan

1,643 posts

Joined August 2014

Muu-chan 2016-11-01T17:31:51+00:00

Shiguma wrote:
Sadly, I am removing 3 diffs from this set because:

1) The spread became all messed up because of the modding process, there were like 3 diffs that were around the same star rating
2) Comparing the diffs to each other, they were of varying quality
3) There were too many gd's for the set to handle (my fault)

I screwed up. Sorry -Amane-, Zer0-, and Sharkie. I shouldn't have bit off more than I can chew. It feels pretty shit and I would 100% understand if no one ever wants to GD for me.

Re-DLed and here some update for HD diff :3 http://puu.sh/s31uJ/dc61f2c491.rar

thanks shiguma

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,157 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2016-11-11T16:48:50+00:00

look guys its the second coming of hitler

16:46 *Miryle pokes
16:46 *Miryle is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1111428 HTT - Tenshi ni Fureta yo!]
16:46 Miryle: this is it right?
16:46 Miryle: oh wait
16:46 Miryle: sadfkasdf
16:46 Miryle: WRONG MAP
16:47 *Miryle is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1039373 mimimemeMIMI - Harebare Fanfare]
16:47 Shiguma: nooo
16:47 Shiguma: lololol
16:47 Shiguma: yeee
16:47 Miryle: im bad
16:47 Shiguma: xd
16:47 Miryle: okey i'll only do your diffs
16:47 Miryle: and parts of your collab
16:48 Miryle: and uh
16:48 *Miryle is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1090925 mimimemeMIMI - Harebare Fanfare [Easy]]
16:49 Miryle: tell me when read ;3
16:49 Miryle: ready*
16:49 Shiguma: aight
16:49 Shiguma: rdy
16:49 Miryle: 00:15:498 (5,1) - this blanket looks wrong
16:49 Miryle: it might be correct but just double check
16:50 Miryle: 00:42:819 (3,4) - these two aren't symmetrical
16:50 Miryle: if you rotated 4 a bit more it'd look better
16:50 Shiguma: rotated which way
16:50 Shiguma: clockwise?
16:50 Miryle: anti
16:51 Miryle: try 15
16:51 Shiguma: oh u want me to do that
16:51 Miryle: yesh
16:52 Miryle: 00:47:462 (1,2) - this blanket is definitely off, (2)'s end is too close
16:52 Shiguma: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6541742
16:52 Shiguma: yes?
16:52 Miryle: ayy
16:52 Miryle: yesh
16:52 Miryle: 00:53:891 (3,4) - same w/ blanket above slider end is too close
16:52 Shiguma: fixed 2 i think
16:53 Shiguma: ok
16:53 Miryle: 01:02:819 (3,4,1) - lord have mercy
16:54 Miryle: it was all really nice and avoiding overlaps and stuff
16:54 Miryle: and then bam overlaps
16:55 Shiguma: ahhhhhh
16:55 Shiguma: i have to move a bunch of stuff now
16:55 Miryle: ikkk
16:55 Miryle: but overlappsss ;-;
16:55 Shiguma: ur the worst :^)
16:55 Miryle: </3
16:56 Miryle: 01:16:034 (1,2) - also these blankets are off slightly, not a huge deal but just gonna point it out
16:56 Miryle: other than that solid diff :3
16:57 Miryle: poke me when ready for normal
16:57 Shiguma: yeah this might take a couple of minutes
16:57 Shiguma: cuz i have to MOVE EVERYTHING
16:57 Miryle: IM SORRY
16:57 Shiguma: xd
16:57 Shiguma: is k
16:58 Shiguma: ill only torture u a little as u die :^)
16:58 Miryle: asdasd
16:58 Miryle: you can be mean when you mod my map
16:58 Miryle: i'll be submissive :^)
16:58 Shiguma: we'll see when we get to ur map lel
16:59 Miryle: roast me hard
17:00 Shiguma: depends on how good ur map is lel
17:00 Miryle: it has like
17:00 Miryle: 1 mod
17:00 Miryle: so probably still has issues ._.
17:00 Shiguma: sounds good
17:10 Shiguma: ok
17:10 Shiguma: done
17:10 Miryle: wew
17:10 Shiguma: xd
17:10 Miryle: okay let's start with normal lol
17:10 Shiguma: yee
17:10 Miryle: 00:02:462 (5,6) - don't you wanna make these straight?
17:11 Miryle: i can understand why not tho
17:11 Shiguma: nope
17:11 Shiguma: is like that thru the map
17:11 Miryle: kk
17:11 Miryle: 00:14:427 (3,4) - rip blankettos
17:11 Miryle: sliiiightly off ;3
17:12 Shiguma: whaaat
17:12 Miryle: the slider end of 3
17:12 Miryle: looks too close
17:12 Miryle: 00:22:819 (4,5) - literally pixels but move the slider end away from 4 slightly
17:13 Miryle: "is like that thru the map"
17:13 Miryle: > 00:28:177 (2,3) -
17:13 Shiguma: got me there
17:13 Miryle: 00:31:748 (5,6) - nazi blanket
17:13 Shiguma: 00:22:819 (4,5) -
17:13 Miryle: 5 end is too close
17:13 Shiguma: im confused as to what u mean about this
17:13 Miryle: the end is too close
17:14 Miryle: https://puu.sh/seKim/4cd1fd23a3.png
17:14 Shiguma: cancer
17:14 Miryle: same
17:14 Shiguma: fixed lul
17:14 Miryle: 00:43:891 (5,1) - could blanket
17:15 Miryle: not necessary tho
17:15 Miryle: 00:44:605 (1,3) - would have to move this
17:15 Miryle: so meh
17:15 Miryle: 00:46:748 (4,5) - same with "thru the map"
17:15 Miryle: 00:52:462 (6,7) - same
17:16 Miryle: 00:59:248 (2,3) - saaaame
17:16 Shiguma: yo guys its the second coming of hitler :^)
17:16 Miryle: 01:03:891 (6,7) - asasdaasdasd
17:16 Miryle: 01:08:712 (4,5) - straighten maybe
17:16 Miryle: 01:09:605 (6,7) - same as "thru" asdasdasdasd
17:16 Miryle: 01:12:462 (2,3) - not noticeable enough, move 3 more
17:17 Miryle: 01:13:177 (1,2) - nazi blanket, 1's end is too close :3
17:17 Miryle: 01:13:891 (2,3) - same tbh, but may be just me idk
17:17 Miryle: 01:15:319 (4,1) - but this (4)'s end is definitely too close
17:18 Miryle: 01:16:748 (3,1) - AASDSADASDASD blanket ;-;
17:18 Miryle: 01:21:034 (6,7) - saame
17:18 Shiguma: so many things lol
17:18 Miryle: 01:25:319 (3,4) - shiguma are you lying to me
17:18 Miryle: i just dumped everything
17:18 Miryle: LOL
17:18 Miryle: that's it for this diff
17:18 Miryle: poke me when you wanna go for hard
17:18 Shiguma: "that's it"
17:18 Shiguma: -.-
17:19 Shiguma: give me a few years :^)
17:19 Miryle: i'm german
17:19 Miryle: quality matters
17:19 Miryle: JK
17:19 Shiguma: lel
17:19 Miryle: i'm not better tbh you could probably pick out blanket errors in my map too LOL
17:26 Shiguma: when there are comments on blankets
17:26 Shiguma: that's when u know its time to call the bn
17:26 Shiguma: xd
17:26 Miryle: lmao
17:26 Miryle: yesh
17:33 Shiguma: phew
17:33 Shiguma: done
17:33 Miryle: wew
17:33 Miryle: tell me which parts are yours in the collab
17:33 Shiguma: you see the bookmarks
17:33 Shiguma: im the middle
17:33 Miryle: yeah
17:33 Shiguma: 00:33:177 (1) -
17:33 Shiguma: starts here
17:33 Shiguma: 01:01:569 (4) -
17:33 Shiguma: ends here
17:33 Miryle: gotcha
17:34 Shiguma: very intense collab yo
17:34 Miryle: 00:33:712 (2,4) - pls blanket these
17:34 Shiguma: 3 way Hard collab
17:34 Shiguma: :3
17:35 Miryle: 00:45:498 (3,4) - i feel like this ds would break players
17:35 Miryle: idk it's up to you
17:35 Miryle: cuz 00:46:927 (3,4) - is way more noticeable
17:35 Miryle: I think cuz 00:46:034 (1) - gives the illusion thati it's closer than it actually is lol
17:37 Miryle: 00:48:891 (1,2,3,4) - can you make this symmetrical?
17:37 Miryle: honestly the flow here feels weird too ._.
17:38 Miryle: i suggest making them all slider outwards
17:38 Miryle: gives emphasis on the bell thingy?
17:39 Miryle: otherwise nothing to say
17:39 Shiguma: `00:49:248 (2,4) -
17:39 Shiguma: ctrl + g would make it okay?
17:40 Shiguma: for each one
17:40 Miryle: yeah
17:40 Miryle: but also make it a better X shape
17:40 Miryle: looks kinda off atm
17:43 Shiguma: okay
17:43 Shiguma: updated the map
17:43 Miryle: asdasdas
17:43 Shiguma: inb4 worse now
17:45 Miryle: https://puu.sh/seLJh/17e7f2c59d.png -> https://puu.sh/seLPs/923bec4b32.png
17:46 Miryle: looks better imo
17:46 Shiguma: ehhh'
17:46 Shiguma: i dont wanna do that
17:46 Miryle: np
17:47 Miryle: will savelog nao is k?
17:47 Shiguma: yeah, thanks

17:47 Miryle: yay

Valentrixe

463 posts

Joined June 2013

Valentrixe 2016-11-23T11:40:45+00:00

hai muu [2]

[Muu's NM]

00:14:427 (14427|0,14784|1,15141|2) - these LNs should be 1/1 long i think, especially 00:15:141 (15141|2) - , should be end at white line or red line.

00:32:998 (32998|3) - why sudden 1/2 LN? you didn't use 1/2 LN in 00:28:712 - , and in 00:31:569

00:38:712 (38712|3) - ghost note?

[Muu's HD]

00:08:534 (8534|0) - for guitar? the strumm end at 00:08:891

00:32:998 (32998|3) - same as i mentioned in normal

00:38:712 (38712|3,38712|1) - why double here? i don't see any particular reason to use double in here

00:49:069 (49069|2,49427|1) - what're these LNs stand for?

00:53:177 (53177|2,53177|0,53177|3) - this one doesn't have cymbal, change to double?, same apply to 01:04:605 (64605|1,64605|0,64605|3)

00:58:712 (58712|0,58712|2) - pretty low kick compared to other kicks like 00:58:355 (58355|0,58355|3)

01:12:819 (72819|1) - why single while 01:12:105 (72105|1,72105|0) - double?

it's pretty good already
good luck muu!

Muu-chan

1,643 posts

Joined August 2014

Muu-chan 2016-11-28T09:34:53+00:00

Valentrixe wrote:
hai muu [2]

[Muu's NM]
00:14:427 (14427|0,14784|1,15141|2) - these LNs should be 1/1 long i think, especially 00:15:141 (15141|2) - , should be end at white line or red line.

00:32:998 (32998|3) - why sudden 1/2 LN? you didn't use 1/2 LN in 00:28:712 - , and in 00:31:569

00:38:712 (38712|3) - ghost note?
nothing to change in this diff :3

[Muu's HD]

00:08:534 (8534|0) - for guitar? the strumm end at 00:08:891

00:32:998 (32998|3) - same as i mentioned in normal

00:38:712 (38712|3,38712|1) - why double here? i don't see any particular reason to use double in here single-d

00:49:069 (49069|2,49427|1) - what're these LNs stand for? hi hat :>

00:53:177 (53177|2,53177|0,53177|3) - this one doesn't have cymbal, change to double?, same apply to 01:04:605 (64605|1,64605|0,64605|3) nice ><b

00:58:712 (58712|0,58712|2) - pretty low kick compared to other kicks like 00:58:355 (58355|0,58355|3)

01:12:819 (72819|1) - why single while 01:12:105 (72105|1,72105|0) - double? fixed :9

it's pretty good already
good luck muu!

here is update xD http://puu.sh/sx42z/498356c8d3.rar
thanks <3

PyroBear

144 posts

Joined October 2015

PyroBear 2016-12-28T04:00:41+00:00

From the mapping discord
[Insane]

00:08:177 (3) - too simplified.
Do it like this
00:45:855 (5,5) - Not sure why're they there.
00:52:641 (6) - Why is it a repeat slider?
00:54:427 (6,1) - Ugly imo

Logic Agent

483 posts

Joined April 2015

Logic Agent 2016-12-28T04:24:27+00:00

we talked about your diffs on discord a bit

Shiguma

476 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Shiguma 2016-12-28T16:55:23+00:00

Discussion with LA

Logic Agent - Yesterday at 11:03 PM
shiguma idk how i feel about this rhythm in the easy
https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/K3C90no.png

at the beginning
1/2 stuff shouldn't really be used as a core gameplay mechanic in easys imo
Halfslashed - Yesterday at 11:03 PM
actually meep this is a pretty cute song tbh
i might make a map of this
Cryptic - Yesterday at 11:04 PM
@_Meep_ don't edit it ya wimp, keep it there like a real man
Shiguma - Yesterday at 11:04 PM
they click like 1/1
Logic Agent - Yesterday at 11:04 PM
i also don't think circle spam in an easy should be a thing
i know spamming 1/1 sliders is boring bu
t
it's an easy
be boring
_Meep_ - Yesterday at 11:04 PM
R u happy now
Halfslashed - Yesterday at 11:04 PM
LA, that part better be intense
_Meep_ - Yesterday at 11:04 PM
Lul
Halfslashed - Yesterday at 11:05 PM
otherwise it has good polarity
Shiguma - Yesterday at 11:05 PM
i need testplays
to confirm what u claim logic
Halfslashed - Yesterday at 11:05 PM
but you don't want to use that object density
Logic Agent - Yesterday at 11:05 PM
throw one more buzzword at me and i'll punch you in the nose
Shiguma - Yesterday at 11:05 PM
but idk any noobs
Cryptic - Yesterday at 11:05 PM
implying I actually upload maps @_Meep_
_Meep_ - Yesterday at 11:05 PM
Xd
Halfslashed - Yesterday at 11:05 PM
it's a fucking useful word dammit
lol
i can't really help it
Logic Agent - Yesterday at 11:05 PM
but for real shiguma
there's a fuck ton of 1/2 stuff
that im not down with
Halfslashed - Yesterday at 11:05 PM
LA if it's in an intense part it's fine
Logic Agent - Yesterday at 11:06 PM
it's the whole map
Halfslashed - Yesterday at 11:06 PM
oh
_Meep_ - Yesterday at 11:06 PM
Should i map a full set by myself for the first time of my life
Halfslashed - Yesterday at 11:06 PM
even better, actually
_Meep_ - Yesterday at 11:06 PM
:/
Shiguma - Yesterday at 11:06 PM
i cant agree until i know how it plays for a noob
Logic Agent - Yesterday at 11:06 PM
also there's some fucky blankets but im not that kind of guy
_Meep_ - Yesterday at 11:07 PM
'Fucky blankets' :thinkz:
xLolicore- - Yesterday at 11:07 PM
@Shiguma what shoud last diff name be
Shiguma - Yesterday at 11:07 PM
well tell me the blankets
xLolicore- - Yesterday at 11:07 PM
witch?
Shiguma - Yesterday at 11:07 PM
ill fix those
xLolicore- - Yesterday at 11:07 PM
xdddd
Shiguma - Yesterday at 11:07 PM
also
:weary:
cmon
that diff name
xLolicore- - Yesterday at 11:07 PM
yea i have no ideas rn
Shiguma - Yesterday at 11:07 PM
"big booty"
Logic Agent - Yesterday at 11:07 PM
also
00:21:748 (1,2,3) -
here you broke flow on the third slider in this combo
however you don't do it like.. most of the time
i like when you did this
makes it look way better
than just doing a three slider curve
over and over
but thats just my opinion
Shiguma - Yesterday at 11:08 PM
3 slider curve meaning
Logic Agent - Yesterday at 11:08 PM
00:27:462 (1,2,3) -
00:18:891 (1,2,3) -

Thanks fam

Muu-chan

1,643 posts

Joined August 2014

Muu-chan 2016-12-29T06:48:57+00:00

finally bring back from the grave ;-; btw is my diff updated, shiguma?

Shiguma

476 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Shiguma 2016-12-29T09:57:31+00:00

Muu-chan wrote:
finally bring back from the grave ;-; btw is my diff updated, shiguma?

The HD diff, right? If i haven't yet i will in a few hours

Muu-chan

1,643 posts

Joined August 2014

Muu-chan 2016-12-30T04:08:51+00:00

Shiguma wrote:
The HD diff, right? If i haven't yet i will in a few hours

yes

thanks so much shiguma

XiMerx

384 posts

Joined March 2014

XiMerx 2017-01-03T08:11:55+00:00

hello. i will be staying away from my computer so i'll just post this mod in advanced.

M4M from Discord
You should probably add another hitsound that supports this drum at 00:51:212 and 00:51:569 for example
Video is non existent in both Insanes

Yamicchi:
00:00:320 (1,2) - spacing is too low compared to other pairs of slider like 00:03:177 (1,2) - 00:06:034 (1,2) -
00:00:320 (1,1) - imo it's kinda weird to have almost similar slider shape for different vocal rhythm
00:02:105 (2,5) - would be much more visually appealing if (2) were to somehow blanket with (5)
00:04:605 (1,2,3,4) - really questionable flow here; back-and-forth at a weird angle makes movements awkward
00:08:534 (5,1) - if you have been using the same overlap spacing (like 00:06:927 (4,6) - ) it is better to make it consistent for (5,1)
00:23:177 (1,2,3) - 00:34:605 (1,2,3) - pretty sure that the vocal rhythm is similar to 00:20:319 (1,2,3) - and it is better to have the active clicks for the vocal
00:24:248 (4) - while you're at it, this is also similar to 00:22:819 (5,6) - i personally would change the slider to 2 active notes
00:22:284 (2,3) - i assume that you stacked this because you wanna support the drums? then you should probably add your own hitsounds here (it wouldn't hurt) (nevermind; stated above already)
00:24:605 (1) - spacing is quite underwhelming tbh because other sliders that are on the large white tick are spaced more
00:26:748 (3,1) - blanket fix if you want to (because apparently blanket mods are despised) http://puu.sh/t3gEH/aad4872306.jpg
00:29:248 (3,4) - 00:30:319 (1,2) - basically the same but (4) does not support any vocals like (2) does. i would use a different slider shape for (4)
00:39:427 (2) - if you want, you can move the whole slider 2 pixels to the left (ctrl+leftarrow) to make it reflectionally symmetrical with 00:38:534 (5) - (you can see that the slider line actually goes through the middle)
00:45:677 (5,6) - (6) has a vocal so stacking is probably not a good idea
01:01:034 (3,4) - i was thinking that this part of the song is an intense moment, so i think spacing (4) further out can support the intensity
00:58:534 (7,1) - same thing, it would be better if it used consistent spacing. spacing that these overlaps used 00:56:927 (4,6,2,4) -
01:03:355 (2,4,5) - it might sound very small and totally unnoticeable but these 3 circles are not of same distance
01:14:605 (5) - if you wanna space this out probably for visuals and emphasis, why not do the same for 01:15:677 (6,7,1) -
01:22:284 (2,3) - :thinking: jumps would probably emphasis the vocals better here. the intense drumming have yet to start and 01:22:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - jumps are unnecessarily here

also, ctrl+a tells me that you didnt use the top portion that much ;w; diff is not bad

Monarch:
i think this difficulty can be polished up by polishing visuals and spacing. because of the rather frequently used 1/1 sliders and 1.90 Slider Velocity, you can be very creative with patterns that deal with 1/2 sliders and circles. just by looking at this http://puu.sh/t3F97/e35efa9c39.jpg i dont think any of these note placements are rather intentiona/justified
00:01:212 (4,5) - tbh i don't know why you would stack. other similar vocal rhythms did not show any signs of stacking
00:05:498 (5) - since this is equidistant to the slider end and 00:04:962 (2) - , you should probably do the same for 00:05:319 (4) -
00:08:177 (3) - i don't know how to feel about the slider. i guess it depends on your music perception? at this point the player might focus more on moving with the sliderball, and not think about the slider shape that complements with the guitar, so it might be better to separate the slider instead of combining
00:14:248 (4,2) - small fix; (4) is off centered in the slider (2)
00:18:355 (3,4,1) - something i mentioned earlier; if you look at the slider heads and the circle, you see that the spacing is rather ambiguous here so the placement might seem unjustified to modders like me
00:23:177 (1) - the red anchor point should be at x:295|y:157 (literally the coordinate of 00:22:819 (4) - )
00:30:319 (1) - spacing is underwhelming as it is on a large white tick
00:50:319 (1,5) - overlap looks bad
01:16:748 (2) - imo you can better body-blanket by blanketing more on the left side of the slider
01:22:641 (4) - i would personally change this to 2 circles to support the vocals (and the spacing to the slider is really very far)
01:28:177 - maybe end the map by placing a note here, i mean there is still a sound here

Collab:
00:14:605 (1,2) - i think this pair of slider should start here 00:14:427 to support the guitar or something, similar to 00:13:177 (1,2) -
00:29:605 (3,4,5,6) - this is as intense as 00:15:319 (3,4,5,6) - which should not happen tbh
00:31:748 (1,2,3) - is this linear flow? then the DS should be linear... nothing to emphasise tbh
00:33:177 - so the next mapper comes in, but with a much higher DS? yeah different mapper but the DS change occured (1.3x -> 1.6x) when intensity of the song did not really increase or anything
00:34:605 (5) - NC should be here instead
00:36:034 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - this feels empty compared to 00:33:712 (2,3,4,5) - at first i think you tried to follow vocals? then you changed your mind and followed the drums next. idk what you wanna do :thinking:
00:52:819 (1) - why the NC here?
00:55:319 (3) - maybe use the same slider shape as the previous slider, like you did here 00:58:177 (3) -
01:12:284 (2) - spacing feels underwhelming here or you can add a note here 01:12:105 to keep the groove goin (the latter sounds better because you should not really miss a white tick)
01:25:677 - same for this, i would place a note here. if not i kill myself

trying to make sense of DS changes, but idk lol

Normal:
01:13:177 (1,2,3) - i thought you're trying to do like a 120deg rotate pattern thingy, but apparently no?
01:16:034 (1,2,3,4) - i would follow similar hitsound pattern as 01:14:605 (3,4) -

ok i might have some nazi comments here and there but i hope this mod holds up to your standard (?)
i have mapped 0 seconds of normal and easy so there you have it! good luck!

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Etsu 2017-04-12T04:30:27+00:00

can make diff easy mania? i like this song :`

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