Suzuko-P wrote:

From pm requested
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00:37:183 - เปลี่ยนเป็นLN ช่อง2ถึง 00:37:558 ดีกว่านะ เพราะเสียงเบสมันขึ้นพอดี เป็นโน้ตเดียวๆมันก็แปลกๆ fixed
00:59:120 (59120|0,59120|1,59308|2,59308|3,60245|3,60245|2,60433|1,60433|0) - เปลี่ยนเป็นโน้ตเดี่ยวเถอะ มันมีแต่เสียงกลองทอมเฉยๆอ่ะ fixed
01:00:058 ถึง 01:01:558 - มีเสียงfilterอยู่(เสียงลม)น่าจะทำLNซัก1ช่อง nope
01:03:808 (63808|0,64183|1) - เปลี่ยนเป็นLN จะได้เข้ากับเสียงเบสด้วย nope
01:06:808 (66808|2,67183|1) -^ nope
01:09:808 (69808|0,70183|2) - ^ nope
01:15:808 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6175952nope
01:18:433 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6175957 fixed

ปล.เพลงทำง่วงมาก zzz lol

Draftnell wrote:

here ~

[Easy]
00:31:183 - try this >>> http://puu.sh/rnjgz/c6914a074e.jpg fixed
01:03:245 (63245|3) - i didn't hear a drum in here...so delete ( if i was right lol ) you're wrong xD

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in here 00:49:370 - just my opinion...this part i hear guitar 1/8 and it is a pity that not in the content, so if you agree my sugesti...just follow >> http://puu.sh/rnjKi/3e8376b7eb.jpg but if you didn't agree, just skip this lol :v fixed
01:01:370 (61370|2) - follow drum ? but it's nothing :v so delete :p i was not follow drum sound

GL ~

Verniy_Chan wrote:

owo owo

IRC

16:20 - [ L e a h ] -: hi verniy 0/
16:21 *- [ L e a h ] - is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.)]
16:21 - [ L e a h ] -: mod pls
16:22 Verniy_Chan: ok, i'll do IRC mod
16:24 - [ L e a h ] -: okay
16:29 *Verniy_Chan is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.)]
16:29 - [ L e a h ] -: pls wait for a minute
16:29 *Verniy_Chan is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [Easy]]
16:31 Verniy_Chan: before mod your diff, please turn off widescreen support
16:31 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:31 Verniy_Chan: there's no SB in your map
16:31 Verniy_Chan: each diff
16:32 Verniy_Chan: are you ready?
16:32 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:32 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
16:32 - [ L e a h ] -: yes~~~~~~~
16:32 Verniy_Chan: wait.. i'll check your meta
16:33 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:34 Verniy_Chan: seem fine
16:36 Verniy_Chan: 00:47:683 (47683|3,47683|2) - there's a lot pattern like this
16:37 Verniy_Chan: 00:46:933 (46933|1) - move |1|
16:37 Verniy_Chan: 00:47:308 (47308|0) - move to 3
16:37 Verniy_Chan: 00:47:683 (47683|2) - move to 1
16:38 Verniy_Chan: to creative your pattern
16:38 - [ L e a h ] -: owo
16:38 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
16:39 Verniy_Chan: 00:56:495 (56495|1,56683|2) - Ctrl+G
16:39 Verniy_Chan: the reason same as above, don't forget check HS
16:40 Verniy_Chan: 01:01:558 (61558|0) - overlap HS
16:40 Verniy_Chan: move F to 01:01:558 (61558|3) - 
16:40 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
16:41 Verniy_Chan: 01:02:683 (62683|2) - same ^
16:41 - [ L e a h ] -: 01:05:683 (65683|0,65683|1) - this too?
16:41 Verniy_Chan: 01:05:683 (65683|0) - ^
16:41 Verniy_Chan: yes
16:41 Verniy_Chan: let me explain
16:42 Verniy_Chan: is okay to put HS like this if there only 1 note
16:42 Verniy_Chan: if 2, just move 1 HS to other note
16:42 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:43 Verniy_Chan: 01:07:558 (67558|1) - here too
16:43 Verniy_Chan: 01:08:683 (68683|1) - 
16:43 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed all
16:43 Verniy_Chan: owo
16:43 - [ L e a h ] -: :3
16:44 - [ L e a h ] -: next?
16:45 Verniy_Chan: wait.. i will deep check to kiai section
16:47 Verniy_Chan: really hard to find any problem, lel
16:48 - [ L e a h ] -: -w-
16:48 Verniy_Chan: it already great
16:48 Verniy_Chan: owo
16:48 - [ L e a h ] -: OwO
16:48 Verniy_Chan: next diff
16:48 *Verniy_Chan is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [Normal]]
16:49 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:54 Verniy_Chan: 00:52:933 - missing note in here
16:54 Verniy_Chan: lel.. too long  to found it
16:54 Verniy_Chan: 00:54:433 - here too
16:55 Verniy_Chan: since you already mapped it on easy diff
16:57 - [ L e a h ] -: owo
16:57 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
16:57 Verniy_Chan: 01:00:808 (60808|0,60808|3,60995|1,60995|2,61183|3,61183|0) - there's no need to use W each note, just 1 note enough
16:57 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
16:58 Verniy_Chan: 01:01:183 - i don't think it fit as 2 note
16:58 Verniy_Chan: the pitch is really low than 01:00:808 (60808|3,60808|0,60995|2,60995|1) - 
16:58 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:58 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
16:58 Verniy_Chan: fixed?
16:59 Verniy_Chan: i mean, remove 1 note
16:59 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed = removed
16:59 Verniy_Chan: just 1 note remove..
17:00 Verniy_Chan: there still bass sound
17:00 - [ L e a h ] -: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6183888
17:00 Verniy_Chan: 01:03:620 (63620|1) - ghost note
17:00 - [ L e a h ] -: like this?
17:01 Verniy_Chan: nice
17:01 Verniy_Chan: i don't hear anything
17:01 - [ L e a h ] -: deleted
17:02 Verniy_Chan: 01:06:433 (66433|2,66808|2,67183|2) - avoid this anchor
17:02 Verniy_Chan: 01:07:183 (67183|1,67183|2) - move to left 1x
17:02 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
17:02 Verniy_Chan: or 01:06:808 (66808|2,67183|1) - move to left
17:03 - [ L e a h ] -: 01:07:183 (67183|1) - this too?
17:04 Verniy_Chan: i mean there's 3 note in 1 row
17:04 Verniy_Chan: decrease 2 note in 1 row
17:04 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
17:05 - [ L e a h ] -: this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6183903
17:05 Verniy_Chan: good
17:06 Verniy_Chan: 01:09:058 (69058|0) - ghost note + inconsistent with 01:03:058 - 
17:06 Verniy_Chan: 01:13:183 (73183|2) - add W
17:07 Verniy_Chan: 01:13:933 - you can add note in here
17:07 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
17:08 Verniy_Chan: 01:19:558 (79558|3) - overlap HS
17:08 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
17:11 Verniy_Chan: done
17:12 Verniy_Chan: so far this map already good
17:12 - [ L e a h ] -: owo
17:12 - [ L e a h ] -: thx :D
17:12 Verniy_Chan: you're welcome
17:12 Verniy_Chan: good luck for rank >w<)b

solid map
good luck for rank >w<)b

ajeemaniz wrote:

why so fast lol

concerns

00:17:683 (17683|2) - should be stopped at 00:18:808 -
00:09:901 (9901|1,9995|2,10089|3,10183|0,10276|1,10370|3,10464|2) - 01:12:901 (72901|2,72995|0,73089|1,73183|2,73276|3,73370|0,73464|1) - and long 1/4 chain in Normal diff (1/8 80 bpm = 1/4 160bpm), in this case i feel its kinda 'hard' for 'Normal' tier level..
01:25:370 (85370|3,85417|2,85464|1,85511|0) - holy flying furball 1/16 for normal...

as this map is quiet clean (and short, modded well, etc etc), i wish you got the point of an appropriate difficulty spread, where a Normal should satisfy a 'Normal'-tier player level.. 1/8 might be fine, but 1/16 is too fast for your normal diff.. spikey

QAT can make an exception, though! if the map goes ranked that means i could map long 1/4 and 1/8 streams in the other Normal diffs i map where the bpm are deemed as slow (70-110 bpm)

good luck! and im sry i didn't mod it when it was pending, i had many jobs @_@

SanadaYukimura wrote:

Would like offer some pattern which I think is better also can avoid the long 1/4 stair
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00:09:808 - If you notice, 00:10:183 - 00:10:370 - the piano which appear here are lot more noticeable than the 1/4. By what I mean, delete 00:10:276 - and 00:10:464 - so you can focus on the piano
01:25:370 - tbh I dont think this 1/16 can be a serious problem (single 4321 stair is easy) but the double LN thats after can be very hard to play, what I mean is the jack here 01:25:417 (85417|2,85558|2) - . Just delete the LN thats on the 3 col is good enough I think.

Good luck

Edit:
Some addition on this part 01:12:808 - . From here 01:12:808 - to 01:13:183 - . Its hard to tell what the snap are, its more like there isn't a discernible snap for this part.
And 01:13:183 - 01:13:370 - Its evry easy to hear the snare drum here. My suggestion img. To keep 01:12:808 - this part empty so the player can be ready for the next [14] [23] [14] which I think i can be a challenge for a Normal diff

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

a little help from me

aaa

2016-10-08 14:59 - [ L e a h ] -: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/508929
2016-10-08 14:59 - [ L e a h ] -: aww
2016-10-08 14:59 - [ L e a h ] -: DQ already
2016-10-08 14:59 - [ L e a h ] -: T T
2016-10-08 14:59 [ A v a l o n ]: did it's qualified ?
2016-10-08 14:59 [ A v a l o n ]: oh dqed
2016-10-08 14:59 [ A v a l o n ]: see ?
2016-10-08 14:59 [ A v a l o n ]: that's too fast
2016-10-08 15:00 [ A v a l o n ]: you need to consider many things before qualify it again
2016-10-08 15:00 [ A v a l o n ]: wait a little
2016-10-08 15:02 - [ L e a h ] -: o_o
2016-10-08 15:02 [ A v a l o n ]: what is the main dq problem ?
2016-10-08 15:03 - [ L e a h ] -: pattern
2016-10-08 15:03 - [ L e a h ] -: 1/8 and 1/16 pattern
2016-10-08 15:03 [ A v a l o n ]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [Normal]]
2016-10-08 15:03 [ A v a l o n ]: where ?
2016-10-08 15:04 - [ L e a h ] -: now i deleted
2016-10-08 15:04 [ A v a l o n ]: oh i see
2016-10-08 15:05 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:55:933 - 00:56:308 - 00:56:683 - etc
2016-10-08 15:06 [ A v a l o n ]: you can add a single note for drum impact
2016-10-08 15:06 [ A v a l o n ]: to make it more different with easy diff
2016-10-08 15:06 - [ L e a h ] -: thats not too hard?
2016-10-08 15:07 [ A v a l o n ]: try it first
2016-10-08 15:07 [ A v a l o n ]: and look at SR
2016-10-08 15:07 [ A v a l o n ]: wait
2016-10-08 15:07 [ A v a l o n ]: i'll try it
2016-10-08 15:08 [ A v a l o n ]: 2 stars now
2016-10-08 15:08 [ A v a l o n ]: safe
2016-10-08 15:08 [ A v a l o n ]: also
2016-10-08 15:08 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
2016-10-08 15:08 [ A v a l o n ]: i still doubt with this part 01:25:370 - 
2016-10-08 15:09 [ A v a l o n ]: it can be acceptable for N icon diff or not
2016-10-08 15:09 [ A v a l o n ]: better to change them with LN (imo)
2016-10-08 15:09 - [ L e a h ] -: uh...no
2016-10-08 15:09 - [ L e a h ] -: i dont think i can place 1/16
2016-10-08 15:10 [ A v a l o n ]: can't
2016-10-08 15:10 [ A v a l o n ]: Normal is still Normal diff
2016-10-08 15:10 [ A v a l o n ]: people in this level can't hit well 1/16 for sure
2016-10-08 15:10 - [ L e a h ] -: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6271963
2016-10-08 15:10 - [ L e a h ] -: this?
2016-10-08 15:11 [ A v a l o n ]: yea maybe better
2016-10-08 15:11 [ A v a l o n ]: don't forget add a note here 01:25:558 - 
2016-10-08 15:12 [ A v a l o n ]: for closing impact
2016-10-08 15:12 - [ L e a h ] -: okay added
2016-10-08 15:12 [ A v a l o n ]: update it
2016-10-08 15:12 [ A v a l o n ]: i can rebubble now
2016-10-08 15:13 - [ L e a h ] -: updated

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

really fine for now . . . re-bubbled
pls consider more before you decide to speedrank

Draftnell wrote:

At least check....its really safe for get ranked !!

Gratss leahh ^^