DM DOKURO - COMMON CORE · forum

CookieBite

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Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-03-25T02:32:48+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年6月29日 at 18:02:04

Artist: DM DOKURO
Title: COMMON CORE
Source: UNDERTALE
Tags: The Underground Radio toby fox hotland soul mettaton remix another medium estellia-
BPM: 190
Filesize: 4066kb
Play Time: 02:03
Difficulties Available:

CORE (2.8 stars, 212 notes)
estellia-'s BEGINNER (1.59 stars, 120 notes)
STANDARD (2.02 stars, 160 notes)

Download: DM DOKURO - COMMON CORE
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------

*UNDERTALE SPOILER WARNING*
RECOMMEND BUY AND PLAY UNDERTALE FIRST

ALSO PLEASE CHECK OUT DM DOKURO'S YOUTUBE CHANNEL!

SONG BY toby fox, REMIXED BY DM DOKURO.

#sliderart

BEGINNER BY estellia-

STANDARD BY ME

CORE BY ME

THANK YOU

estellia-
DeRandom Otaku
Deppyforce
Nelka714
PlasticMemor
- Yoshimaro -
Chocox
Hokichi
Pentori
Electoz
Left
Len
6th
[Nemesis]
-NanoRIPE-
Chibi Maruko
Chalwa
propasy
Hobbes2
100bit
TNTLover2000

H13'S EXPERT | estellia-'s ExTrA | INTERNAL'S EXPERT

Last edited by CookieBite 2016-07-08T07:23:00+00:00, edited 84 times in total.

allein

Beatmap Nominator

826 posts

Joined March 2015

allein 2016-03-26T07:50:47+00:00

first

CookieBite

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Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-03-26T07:53:40+00:00

InternalLight wrote:
first

second

lcfc

813 posts

Joined October 2015

lcfc 2016-03-27T13:22:56+00:00

third
100th post woop~
if you want a gd hit me up anytime and what gd you want me to make
hue

Kaitjuh

860 posts

Joined December 2012

Kaitjuh 2016-03-29T14:17:00+00:00

Cool, another DOKURO map :>
Since this is a remix of Another Medium how about a Hotland BG?
Up to you if you wanna use it tho xD

CookieBite

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CookieBite 2016-03-30T10:04:54+00:00

Kaitjuh wrote:
Cool, another DOKURO map :>
Since this is a remix of Another Medium how about a Hotland BG?
Up to you if you wanna use it tho xD

wow cool background
but it's a remix about the CORE section
not using yours, sorry ;(

lcfc

813 posts

Joined October 2015

lcfc 2016-03-30T16:46:26+00:00

Mapping a gd for your map might take some time ;( hope that's ok, but I will finish it in around a week.

Testo

603 posts

Joined November 2014

Testo 2016-04-01T15:45:40+00:00

^same

CookieBite

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CookieBite 2016-04-02T08:03:10+00:00

*NOTE FOR PEOPLE WHO ARE MAKING GD*
PLEASE, DO NOT ADD MORE CUSTOM HITSOUND ON THIS MAP.
ONLY I CAN DO THAT

EDIT : ONLY HIT-NORMALCLAP HITSOUND IS AVAILABLE
NO MORE CUSTOM HITSOUND

Faustas156

232 posts

Joined April 2015

Faustas156 2016-04-10T16:16:08+00:00

Can i do Easy :3 ?
(btw i'm not doing harder diffs easy maps are easier to map)

CookieBite

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CookieBite 2016-04-11T08:46:13+00:00

Faustas156 wrote:
Can i do Easy :3 ?
(btw i'm not doing harder diffs easy maps are easier to map)

I'm sorry, but somebody take the easy difficulty.
(I didn't list here because I'm not sure he will map or not)

lcfc

813 posts

Joined October 2015

lcfc 2016-04-14T13:14:22+00:00

It's here.
The long awaited GD.
Sorry it took that long xd~ hit me up online if you want me to fix any parts you dislike

gee dee

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: DM DOKURO - UNDERTALE- The Underground Radio - 12 COMMON CORE.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 22700
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11347,42925,93441
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:COMMON CORE
TitleUnicode:COMMON CORE
Artist:DM DOKURO
ArtistUnicode:DM DOKURO
Creator:CookieBite
Version:H13's EXPERT
Source:UNDERTALE
Tags:The Underground Radio toby fox hotland soul mettaton remix another medium
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2016-05-03T13:49:53+00:00

finished easy damn that took way too long

so sorry for the delay!

nohs

osu file format v14

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Title:COMMON CORE
TitleUnicode:COMMON CORE
Artist:DM DOKURO
ArtistUnicode:DM DOKURO
Creator:CookieBite
Version:ESTELLIA-'S BEGINNER
Source:UNDERTALE
Tags:The Underground Radio toby fox hotland soul mettaton remix another medium
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DeRandom Otaku

2,142 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2016-05-04T12:57:05+00:00

Hi~ from my queue

As I said : "i m not so good at modding stuff easier than insane ~ but if i like the song ~ i will try to mod easier diffs aswell ~ if not - i will just point out main flaws with those diffs if there are any"

Therefor this mod will be a shorty ~

General :

Widescreen support is not turned off in estellia-'s BEGINNER and CORE diffs~

CORE :

Increase AR to 7
01:02:966 (5,1) - nazi blanket

yep thats it ~

Good luck!~

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-05-04T13:09:44+00:00

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
Hi~ from my queue

As I said : "i m not so good at modding stuff easier than insane ~ but if i like the song ~ i will try to mod easier diffs aswell ~ if not - i will just point out main flaws with those diffs if there are any"

Therefor this mod will be a shorty ~

General :
Widescreen support is not turned off in estellia-'s BEGINNER and CORE diffs~ fixed
CORE :
Increase AR to 7 fixed
01:02:966 (5,1) - nazi blanket fixed
yep thats it ~

Good luck!~

oh thanks for short modding!

allein

Beatmap Nominator

826 posts

Joined March 2015

allein 2016-05-05T18:23:13+00:00

nic
2nd page hype pogchamp

Deppyforce

1,981 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-05-06T15:16:32+00:00

hi lazy mod from queue

[estellia]
00:32:492 (1) -try http://puu.sh/oIp6i/c58410a8e3.jpg instead to make downbeat clickable, cuz its downbeat
00:37:386 - consider use this rhythm http://puu.sh/oIpbh/07f46fa2ba.jpg to avoid 3/2 in easy diff cuz it can confuse beginners , same for all gaps like this

[Normal]
cs too small for normal diff imo, consider use cs 3.3 - 3.7
00:02:965 (4) - pls split to http://puu.sh/oIplq/ace4340a63.jpg instead, should be fine if u use some more 1/2 in the map cuz this has easy diff , same for all other 3/2 sliders
00:30:913 (2,3) - fix blanket its off
00:46:703 (3) - change to circle + 1/2 to map ze instrument thing

[Core]
00:15:123 (3,4,1,2) - motion here feels a bit awkward, try rotate the octagon a bit cw
00:32:807 (1,2) - fix blanket xd
01:02:019 (2,3,4,5) - since this is hard diff, u can use some 1/4 rhythm here to make it more interesting
01:43:229 (1) - since this is 3* this kind of thing can be spilt to circles instead

good luck

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-05-06T23:45:37+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
hi lazy mod from queue hi

[Normal]
cs too small for normal diff imo, consider use cs 3.3 - 3.7 ok fixed to 3.5
00:02:965 (4) - pls split to http://puu.sh/oIplq/ace4340a63.jpg instead, should be fine if u use some more 1/2 in the map cuz this has easy diff , same for all other 3/2 sliders i don't think normal players can do that pattern
00:30:913 (2,3) - fix blanket its off fixed
00:46:703 (3) - change to circle + 1/2 to map ze instrument thing fixed

[Core]
00:15:123 (3,4,1,2) - motion here feels a bit awkward, try rotate the octagon a bit cw i don't think it's weird lol
00:32:807 (1,2) - fix blanket xd fixed xd
01:02:019 (2,3,4,5) - since this is hard diff, u can use some 1/4 rhythm here to make it more interesting yea fixed
01:43:229 (1) - since this is 3* this kind of thing can be spilt to circles instead hmm, no fixed cause no single-tapping skills need to be here

good luck

thanks for modding!

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2016-05-07T08:06:57+00:00

no change, cuz i see no point and there have been repeats in the diff itself

Nelka714

412 posts

Joined October 2014

Nelka714 2016-05-08T14:18:48+00:00

mod4mod from your queue

SPOILER

[General]
so much UNDERTALE but next to none Cave Story i cri

I see that there are 2 timing points, and one of them is at 00:42:914 , but I didn't see the needs of it (no BPM change and no metronome change). Maybe you can explain it, or delete it instead?

[CORE]

00:05:965 (1,2,3) - Would be better if you NC on slider 3 (which is downbeat) then un-NC circle 1 (which is not downbeat).
00:36:597 (4) - I think the rhythm would be better if like this: http://puu.sh/oKolb/56fae4bc9a.jpg
01:10:071 (3,1) - The blanket looks imperfect, for me. Try to improve it.
01:20:177 (3,4) - Make slider 3 curves like this? http://puu.sh/oKoPs/f52a9963df.jpg I know that you're trying to keep the 0,7x DS, but the curve on slider 4 gives a potential to blanket slider 3.
01:41:019 (1) - If this was my diff, I would use this pattern to vary normal diff that has spinner: http://puu.sh/oKpB8/f7f9622473.jpg but it just my preference, though.
01:48:598 (1,2) - Needs a bit more blanket improvement, except if slider 2 was actually to looks like 01:50:492 (3).

[STANDARD]

00:01:229 (1,2) - CTRL+J slider 1?
00:05:965 (1,2) - un-NC slider 1, then NC slider 2. Refer my reason on CORE diff.
00:52:703 (1,2) - Same as above.
01:10:071 (3,1) - Needs a bit more blanket improvement. and teach me how to sliderart pls

[estellia-'s BEGINNER]

00:05:965 (1,2) - un-NC slider 1, then NC circle 2. Refer my reason on CORE diff.
00:32:492 (1,2) - Same reason as above.
00:42:281 (1) - un-NC?
00:51:756 (3) - I'm not sure if 1/3 beat slider is okay for easy diff. Just my preference, though.
00:52:703 (1,2) - NC suggestion...I think you can guess which one and why.
00:56:808 (3) - 2/1 beat feels better, in my opinion. http://puu.sh/oKwJM/6931cb1d9a.jpg
01:38:335 (1) - The spinner is 1/2 beat too early. Forward it 1/2 a beat, then shorten it 1/2 a beat.

i hope this helps

PlasticMemor

204 posts

Joined June 2015

PlasticMemor 2016-05-08T20:10:13+00:00

hey from modding queue

[CORE]

00:05:965 (1,2) - this should be 1 slider
00:08:807 (1) - this shouldn't be off the grid
00:24:281 (4) - this should be going up not down
00:26:492 (4) - this should be shortened to 5 ticks and a circle added
00:27:281 (5) - move this to the left 1 tick
00:36:597 (4) - this should be 5 ticks and a circle added on the next red tick like this
00:39:439 (5,6) - these should be claps
00:42:597 (6,7,8) - instead of triples do what you previously did with 00:42:281 (5)
00:43:387 (3) - shorten this to 3 ticks and add 1 circle on where the slider end used to be
00:44:335 (6) - ^
00:45:914 (2) - ^
00:46:861 (5) - ^
00:51:756 (1,2) - shorten these to 5 ticks and add a circle where the slider end used to be
00:53:492 (3) - shorten this to 3 ticks and add 1 circle on where the slider end used to be
00:54:440 (6) - ^
00:56:019 (2) - ^
00:56:966 (4) - ^
01:02:966 (5) - you don't need this circle, delete it
01:12:598 (3) - shouldn't be off map

that's my mod, gl with your beatmap!

Yoshimaro

539 posts

Joined January 2014

Yoshimaro 2016-05-08T20:25:22+00:00

M4M
before i begin, this song is FUJKGCVING FIYREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Bestellia's welcome to top 50

00:07:544 (4,1) - blanket
00:15:123 (2,1) - close enough C:
00:47:966 (1) - ooh that was nice
00:51:756 (3) - is that actually 1/3? sound better on 1/4 but idk i've also listened to this song way less than you so ill trust your judgement (just pointing it out
00:56:177 (2,3) - maybe angle slightly better to comfort slider end? (was this a blanket?)
01:03:124 (1,2) - close enough C:
01:47:966 (2,1) - omggg yesssssssssssssss

probably best easy diff i've ever looked at

sTAndrARD

00:22:702 (1,3) - close enough C:
00:34:071 (3,4) - close enough C:
00:36:597 (3,4) - close enough C:
00:41:650 (3) - this goes pretty low, no?
01:18:282 (1,2) - niceeeeeeeeeeee
01:55:861 (4,1) - close enough C:

no mod for CORE because I couldn't find any issues (other than you had 1 tripple in the entire map, the rest were repeat sliders (possibru inconsistency? idk just listing it here))

also would it be okay if i took this maps template and made like... a 7* challenge map and give credits? GL btw i saw nothing wrong with any of these aside from slightly off blankets (is that even worth kds lol). best lower level difficulty maps i've looked at (although i dont look at many, these were pretty

)

o sry i forgot... enjoy meme C:

Complimentary meme that comes with all of my mods

Click the...

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2016-05-09T02:15:58+00:00

Nelka714 wrote:
[estellia-'s BEGINNER]
00:05:965 (1,2) - un-NC slider 1, then NC circle 2. Refer my reason on CORE diff.
00:32:492 (1,2) - Same reason as above.
00:42:281 (1) - un-NC?
00:51:756 (3) - I'm not sure if 1/3 beat slider is okay for easy diff. Just my preference, though. Its not exactly preference to me, I just hear it on 1/3 and I prefer it being mapped that way. This might change if BN/QATs mention it
00:52:703 (1,2) - NC suggestion...I think you can guess which one and why.
00:56:808 (3) - 2/1 beat feels better, in my opinion. http://puu.sh/oKwJM/6931cb1d9a.jpg All previous bars have similar rhythm to this, no change
01:38:335 (1) - The spinner is 1/2 beat too early. Forward it 1/2 a beat, then shorten it 1/2 a beat. There is no sound to the beginning of a spinner, there is no point changing this imo
No changes on NCing, because the sliders all cut into the next bar and I feel like its better this way

- Yoshimaro - wrote:
[Bestellia's welcome to top 50]

00:07:544 (4,1) - blanket
00:15:123 (2,1) - close enough C:
00:47:966 (1) - ooh that was nice Thank you
00:51:756 (3) - is that actually 1/3? sound better on 1/4 but idk i've also listened to this song way less than you so ill trust your judgement (just pointing it out Pretty sure this is a 1/3, but I'll wait for more opinions
00:56:177 (2,3) - maybe angle slightly better to comfort slider end? (was this a blanket?) Not a blanket, and not quite sure what you mean (sorry)
01:03:124 (1,2) - close enough C:
01:47:966 (2,1) - omggg yesssssssssssssss

probably best easy diff i've ever looked at Thanks for the well wishes and the compliment

All blankets fixed

diff

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: DM DOKURO - UNDERTALE- The Underground Radio - 12 COMMON CORE.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 22700
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11347,42925,93441
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:COMMON CORE
TitleUnicode:COMMON CORE
Artist:DM DOKURO
ArtistUnicode:DM DOKURO
Creator:CookieBite
Version:estellia-'s BEGINNER
Source:UNDERTALE
Tags:The Underground Radio toby fox hotland soul mettaton remix another medium estellia-
BeatmapID:968418
BeatmapSetID:433843

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:2.7
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2016-05-09T10:08:10+00:00

Hi , came from Del's Queue

estellia-'s BEGINNER

00:15:123 (2,2) - Small one but not stacked properly.
00:42:281 (1) - Remove NC , nothing significant to set a new combo here.
00:51:756 (3) - Just stick to 1/4 snapping here. It's easy after all and there's a consistent 1/4 beat to follow.

STANDARD

00:41:650 (3) - I feel that curving this more would look more appealing. Right now it is nothing better than a linear slider.

CORE

Overall my impression of this map is the spacing you use is arbitrary.
01:03:124 (1) - From here it feels really weird to read it as compared to 00:42:914 (1) . I know it's insane style map but this kind of spacing usage makes it really awkward to play imo.
01:02:887 (5,7) - Two beats here which is really significant and feels really weird to not map to it.
01:41:019 (1) - Why spinner? Breaks the momentum imo.
01:43:229 (1) - This is snapped wrongly. It should be snapped to 1/6.
Your rhythm style in this diff feels like a normal difficulty to me...

Overall

Nothing much I would say. Rhythm wise and pattern could be further improved , that's all.

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2016-05-09T12:00:17+00:00

Chocox wrote:
estellia-'s BEGINNER
00:15:123 (2,2) - Small one but not stacked properly. impossible to stack properly
00:42:281 (1) - Remove NC , nothing significant to set a new combo here. intensity of the drums
00:51:756 (3) - Just stick to 1/4 snapping here. It's easy after all and there's a consistent 1/4 beat to follow. am following strongest track, not derailing for now

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-05-09T13:11:42+00:00

Nelka714 wrote:
mod4mod from your queue

[General]
so much UNDERTALE but next to none Cave Story i cri
I see that there are 2 timing points, and one of them is at 00:42:914 , but I didn't see the needs of it (no BPM change and no metronome change). Maybe you can explain it, or delete it instead? kk fixed
[CORE]
00:05:965 (1,2,3) - Would be better if you NC on slider 3 (which is downbeat) then un-NC circle 1 (which is not downbeat). weird, no fix
00:36:597 (4) - I think the rhythm would be better if like this: http://puu.sh/oKolb/56fae4bc9a.jpg fixed
01:10:071 (3,1) - The blanket looks imperfect, for me. Try to improve it. fixed
01:20:177 (3,4) - Make slider 3 curves like this? http://puu.sh/oKoPs/f52a9963df.jpg I know that you're trying to keep the 0,7x DS, but the curve on slider 4 gives a potential to blanket slider 3. cool, fixed
01:41:019 (1) - If this was my diff, I would use this pattern to vary normal diff that has spinner: http://puu.sh/oKpB8/f7f9622473.jpg but it just my preference, though. no fix cause spinning is fun lol
01:48:598 (1,2) - Needs a bit more blanket improvement, except if slider 2 was actually to looks like 01:50:492 (3). fixed
[STANDARD]
00:01:229 (1,2) - CTRL+J slider 1? fixed
00:05:965 (1,2) - un-NC slider 1, then NC slider 2. Refer my reason on CORE diff. same as before no fix
00:52:703 (1,2) - Same as above. ^
01:10:071 (3,1) - Needs a bit more blanket improvement. fixedand teach me how to sliderart pls
i hope this helps

how to slider art
1. magic
2. magic
3. magic

thanks for modding!

PlasticMemor wrote:
hey from modding queue

[CORE]
00:05:965 (1,2) - this should be 1 slider players can handle this
00:08:807 (1) - this shouldn't be off the grid fixed
00:24:281 (4) - this should be going up not down try to make 00:24:281 (4,5) - become an angle together, no fix
00:26:492 (4) - this should be shortened to 5 ticks and a circle added fixed in another way
00:27:281 (5) - move this to the left 1 tick why? no beat here, no fix
00:36:597 (4) - this should be 5 ticks and a circle added on the next red tick like this i did it already
00:39:439 (5,6) - these should be claps fixed
00:42:597 (6,7,8) - instead of triples do what you previously did with 00:42:281 (5) fixed
00:43:387 (3) - shorten this to 3 ticks and add 1 circle on where the slider end used to be I want to follow the main beat
00:44:335 (6) - ^ ^
00:45:914 (2) - ^ ^
00:46:861 (5) - ^ ^
00:51:756 (1,2) - shorten these to 5 ticks and add a circle where the slider end used to be ^
00:53:492 (3) - shorten this to 3 ticks and add 1 circle on where the slider end used to be ^
00:54:440 (6) - ^ ^
00:56:019 (2) - ^ ^
00:56:966 (4) - ^ ^
01:02:966 (5) - you don't need this circle, delete it beat is in here
01:12:598 (3) - shouldn't be off map I tested it, nothing here.

that's my mod, gl with your beatmap!

thanks for modding!

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-05-09T13:28:29+00:00

- Yoshimaro - wrote:
M4M
before i begin, this song is FUJKGCVING FIYREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE OMG BRARARAAAURHAPOIRUORUAUYO*$&^()$*@^$^$&*

sTAndrARD
00:22:702 (1,3) - close enough C:
00:34:071 (3,4) - close enough C: doesn't matter lol
00:36:597 (3,4) - close enough C: ^
00:41:650 (3) - this goes pretty low, no? wow you've notice it lol ~~sanic~~
01:18:282 (1,2) - niceeeeeeeeeeee oh thanks
01:55:861 (4,1) - close enough C: doesn't matter lol

no mod for CORE because I couldn't find any issues (other than you had 1 tripple in the entire map, the rest were repeat sliders (possibru inconsistency? idk just listing it here))

also would it be okay if i took this maps template and made like... a 7* challenge map and give credits? GL btw i saw nothing wrong with any of these aside from slightly off blankets (is that even worth kds lol). best lower level difficulty maps i've looked at (although i dont look at many, these were pretty ) ok sure i wanna see how can this become a 7* map lol

o sry i forgot... enjoy meme C:
Complimentary meme that comes with all of my mods
Click the...

thanks for modding

Chocox wrote:
Hi , came from Del's Queue Hi

STANDARD
00:41:650 (3) - I feel that curving this more would look more appealing. Right now it is nothing better than a linear slider. changed

CORE
Overall my impression of this map is the spacing you use is arbitrary.
01:03:124 (1) - From here it feels really weird to read it as compared to 00:42:914 (1) . I know it's insane style map but this kind of spacing usage makes it really awkward to play imo. hmm sorry lol

01:02:887 (5,7) - Two beats here which is really significant and feels really weird to not map to it. ?
01:41:019 (1) - Why spinner? Breaks the momentum imo. spin spin spin is fun lol
01:43:229 (1) - This is snapped wrongly. It should be snapped to 1/6. fixed
Your rhythm style in this diff feels like a normal difficulty to me...

Overall
Nothing much I would say. Rhythm wise and pattern could be further improved , that's all.

thanks for modding

Last edited by CookieBite 2016-05-09T13:34:35+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-05-09T13:34:16+00:00

wow gg that's a lot of work lol

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

[Crz]Makii 2016-05-10T05:48:54+00:00

NM from my queue
[CORE]

hp5 is better,4 7 6 6 is so rare in beatmaps ;w;
01:02:650 (4) - should continue curving until 01:03:045 - ,listen carefully.
well,I'm not good at modding hard diff with ds,so maybe it isn't helpful ;w;

NO KDS if it isn't helpful xD

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-05-10T06:46:58+00:00

[Crz]Sword wrote:
NM from my queue
[CORE]
hp5 is better,4 7 6 6 is so rare in beatmaps ;w; no fix cause this is fine
01:02:650 (4) - should continue curving until 01:03:045 - ,listen carefully. weird, hard to hear the beat. no fix
well,I'm not good at modding hard diff with ds,so maybe it isn't helpful ;w; kk not helpful lol
NO KDS if it isn't helpful xD

kk no kds sry
thanks for ~~modding~~ looking! lol

Hokichi

831 posts

Joined June 2015

Hokichi 2016-05-12T02:15:37+00:00

Okay. M4M from your queue. Let's begin.

[estellia-'s Beginner]
00:05:966 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5133750
00:32:493 (1) - Same
01:00:598 (1) - Move to (328,196) to avoid flow break.

[CORE]
00:30:281 (1,2) - Flow break.
00:37:388 (6,1) - Same

There we go, I've tried my best tho. Goood luck.
(Don't ask why I don't mod STANDARD. It's nice already. Love it

)

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-05-12T06:01:07+00:00

heeyaa. nm from my queue

[estellia-'s BEGINNER]
change to hp 2 for better spread. (2, 4, 6)
00:07:545 (4,1) - hitsound sampleset changes randomly
00:51:756 (3) - not snapped

[STANDARD]
did you change offset without snapping notes xd

fix dat
00:42:914 (1,2) - here i assume you're following the techno but then this 00:44:177 (3,4) - follows the beat. this kinda gives off the impression that beats are missed so you should stick to one or the other when you choose a rhythm
01:14:492 (2,3) - ctrl g rhythm the 01:14:808 - should be clickable as it belongs to a different tune
01:43:230 - beginner used this beat yet standard doesn't. should add note here thats muted
01:51:124 (1,2) - fix blanket

[CORE]
resnap all notes pls
01:38:492 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - consider placing 01:40:071 (3,4) - in the same spot as where 01:39:124 (4,5) - are in the measure. this helps with consistency and since note density suddenly rises it makes it more straight forward for the player to play the same rhythm

cool map, really neat and polished with some cute slider art c:
gl with rank, hope this helped

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-05-12T11:21:27+00:00

Hokichi wrote:
Okay. M4M from your queue. Let's begin. Hi

[CORE]
00:30:281 (1,2) - Flow break. fixed
00:37:388 (6,1) - Same why here I break the flow?

There we go, I've tried my best tho. Goood luck.
(Don't ask why I don't mod STANDARD. It's nice already. Love it ) thank you

thanks for modding

Pentori wrote:
heeyaa. nm from my queue

[STANDARD]
did you change offset without snapping notes xd oh lol havn't notice that, fixed (really lol)

fix dat
00:42:914 (1,2) - here i assume you're following the techno but then this 00:44:177 (3,4) - follows the beat. this kinda gives off the impression that beats are missed so you should stick to one or the other when you choose a rhythm ok fixed
01:14:492 (2,3) - ctrl g rhythm the 01:14:808 - should be clickable as it belongs to a different tune idk it's feel weird
01:43:230 - beginner used this beat yet standard doesn't. should add note here thats muted fixed
01:51:124 (1,2) - fix blanket fixed

[CORE]
resnap all notes pls fixed
01:38:492 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - consider placing 01:40:071 (3,4) - in the same spot as where 01:39:124 (4,5) - are in the measure. this helps with consistency and since note density suddenly rises it makes it more straight forward for the player to play the same rhythm fixed

cool map, really neat and polished with some cute slider art c:
gl with rank, hope this helped

thanks for modding

Last edited by CookieBite 2016-05-12T12:54:38+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2016-05-12T12:22:09+00:00

didn't change the "not snapped" note because its snapped to 1/3, and i only hear the music happening on 1/3, rest changed
didn't change anything from Hokichi's mod, because 1st 2 are too hard for Easy diff and 3rd is not DS'd properly

diff

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: DM DOKURO - UNDERTALE- The Underground Radio - 12 COMMON CORE.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 22700
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11347,42925,93441
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:COMMON CORE
TitleUnicode:COMMON CORE
Artist:DM DOKURO
ArtistUnicode:DM DOKURO
Creator:CookieBite
Version:estellia-'s BEGINNER
Source:UNDERTALE
Tags:The Underground Radio toby fox hotland soul mettaton remix another medium estellia-
BeatmapID:968418
BeatmapSetID:433843

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.7
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"COREENTRANCE.png",0,0
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Adventure

424 posts

Joined February 2015

Adventure 2016-05-16T06:44:59+00:00

hello i from NM queue

honestly I like the song, but could make that more difficult, I take the example 00:13:072 (4) - This seems unreasonable, you try to set it again 00:15:124 (3) -
This is also the same like before. This might just

Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,895 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-05-24T16:07:36+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue~

[estellia-'s BEGINNER]

00:42:282 (1) - Any reason for putting an NC here?
01:23:335 - Missing Finish.

[STANDARD]

Resnap your stuff pls.
00:55:229 (6,1) - 00:57:756 (5,1) - Recheck your DS pls.
00:05:018 (3,1) - Could have used the same rhythm from 00:02:492 (3,4) and then add a circle on 00:06:124 so you won't miss the beat on 00:05:335 .
00:10:071 (3,4) - Similar to above but doesn't need to add a circle on 00:11:177 .
00:50:492 (3) - NC cuz you did so on every 2 downbeats.
00:52:703 (1,2) - Swap NC because the same reason as above.
01:14:808 - Should be clickable because it's the same sound as 01:15:124 (3,4) . Or you could try making a 1/1 repeat slider starting from 01:14:808 as well. Same applies to 01:54:914 (2,3,4) .
You shouldn't do stack with different spacings in this diff, you did 1/1 stacks on 00:45:124 (4,1) - 01:43:230 (1,1) and then a 1/2 stack on 01:01:861 (1,2) which can be confusing for players, if you're doing a stack then do it with only 1 beat spacing only throughout the song considering that this is supposed to be a Normal.

[CORE]

00:05:966 (1,2,3) - Prefer 0.7 DS here so they will become more noticable for players that these are 1/2 not 1/1 circles.
00:37:072 (5,6) - Spacing too big which is kinda uncomfortable in gameplay imo, just use 0.9 DS here like what you did on 00:26:966 (5,6) - 00:31:545 (3,4) .
00:41:966 (4,6) - Stacking this makes this really hard to play, at least either unstack this or make 00:42:282 (5,6) triplets. The problem I'm having right now is I don't know how long I have to hold on 00:42:282 (5) as it's really hard to see an approach circle on 00:42:598 (6) .
00:56:808 - Should be clickable imo, also because it's a downbeat.
01:22:072 (1) - Missing Finish.
01:40:703 (5,6) - Right now that 1.35 DS is somehow noticable in gameplay so maybe adjust this a bit for 1.4 DS.
01:58:703 (4) - NC

This mapset is really neat, good luck~

Left

2,162 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2016-05-25T03:28:49+00:00

M4M from your queue.

[estellia-]
00:07:545 (4,1) - Blanket
00:10:072 (3) - same rhythm with 00:05:019 (3) - , why slider is different?
01:38:335 (1) - I think spinner should start in 01:38:493 (1) - because strong rhythms for spinner starts in there. ( and no sound before )

[STANDARD]
your standard diff is still unsnapped X(
01:10:703 (1,2) - blanket
01:43:230 (1,1) - no stack would be better to read.. It's a diff for noob

[CORE]
00:16:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it's highest diff.. you can make more harder pattern using sliders. It would be really boring.
00:30:282 (1,2) - blanket
00:51:756 (1) - you missed one sound..
01:05:651 (1) - 01:03:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - you followed different sound in these two part with almost same sound..It feels a bit strange so you need some consistence...It's hardest diff so prior would be more suitable.
01:20:808 (4) - NC
01:38:019 (5,1,2) - 1/1 < 1/2 in distance??? It would be not comfortable to read.
01:46:072 (1) - ^
01:58:703 (4) - NC

Good luck!

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-05-25T13:29:58+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue~

[STANDARD]

Resnap your stuff pls. kk fixed lol
00:55:229 (6,1) - 00:57:756 (5,1) - Recheck your DS pls. fixed
00:05:018 (3,1) - Could have used the same rhythm from 00:02:492 (3,4) and then add a circle on 00:06:124 so you won't miss the beat on 00:05:335 . fixed
00:10:071 (3,4) - Similar to above but doesn't need to add a circle on 00:11:177 . fixed
00:50:492 (3) - NC cuz you did so on every 2 downbeats. fixed
00:52:703 (1,2) - Swap NC because the same reason as above. fixed
01:14:808 - Should be clickable because it's the same sound as 01:15:124 (3,4) . Or you could try making a 1/1 repeat slider starting from 01:14:808 as well. Same applies to 01:54:914 (2,3,4) . hmm for the newbies , no fix
You shouldn't do stack with different spacings in this diff, you did 1/1 stacks on 00:45:124 (4,1) - 01:43:230 (1,1) and then a 1/2 stack on 01:01:861 (1,2) which can be confusing for players, if you're doing a stack then do it with only 1 beat spacing only throughout the song considering that this is supposed to be a Normal. fixed
[CORE]

00:05:966 (1,2,3) - Prefer 0.7 DS here so they will become more noticable for players that these are 1/2 not 1/1 circles. fixed
00:37:072 (5,6) - Spacing too big which is kinda uncomfortable in gameplay imo, just use 0.9 DS here like what you did on 00:26:966 (5,6) - 00:31:545 (3,4) . fixed
00:41:966 (4,6) - Stacking this makes this really hard to play, at least either unstack this or make 00:42:282 (5,6) triplets. The problem I'm having right now is I don't know how long I have to hold on 00:42:282 (5) as it's really hard to see an approach circle on 00:42:598 (6) . fixed
00:56:808 - Should be clickable imo, also because it's a downbeat. fixed
01:22:072 (1) - Missing Finish. fixed
01:40:703 (5,6) - Right now that 1.35 DS is somehow noticable in gameplay so maybe adjust this a bit for 1.4 DS. fixed
01:58:703 (4) - NC fixed
This mapset is really neat, good luck~

thanks for modding and the star!

Len

Beatmap Nominator

2,817 posts

Joined June 2012

Len 2016-05-25T16:14:25+00:00

from q

Beginner:

is really FOR BEGINNERS? i think u should change the diff name to normal :3[/b]

Standard:

00:04:387 (2) - move to 325 308 for distance
00:06:124 (5) - WAT

CORE:

01:37:861 -should be emphasized here i think

nice job but long sliders make borin in core and standard

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2016-05-25T20:04:22+00:00

Hello, M4M.

[Beginner]
SV looks a bit high for beginners.
00:47:966 (1) - This is a bit sudden and has no reason to be there imo. You weren't following that instrument before (plus, it's not really noticeable tbh)
00:51:756 (3,4) - Pretty certain this is really confusing for "beginners".

[Standard]
00:06:124 (5,1) - stack (same sound)
00:43:387 (2,3) - This is not clear enough, what are you mapping ? 00:44:335 - this should be clickable according to 00:43:387 (2) - imo. Try placing a circle and a slider.
01:04:703 - Having this clickable would have been better. 01:04:230 (3) - Convert it to 2 circles.
01:14:808 - Same, 01:15:124 (3,4) - are clickable so for consistency you need to make this one clickable too.

[Core]
00:03:756 (1) - This is even easier than Beginner diff in term of density
00:11:019 (5) - Because of the very low spacing I think that this is not predictable enough, move it further from previous object.
00:16:072 (4,1) - ^
00:13:387 - No reason to ignore this in hardest difficulty I think.
00:42:282 (5) - It looks like if it was at 00:42:440 -, very hard to read. I missed there.
00:43:861 (4,5) - CTRL+G rhythm.
01:14:808 - Please make it clickable
01:38:493 (1) - Difficulty spike from here to end of spinner. Spacing is suddenly increasing by 2, it's really unpredictable and even harder than kiai times.

Good luck!

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-05-26T13:00:55+00:00

Left wrote:
M4M from your queue.

[STANDARD]
your standard diff is still unsnapped X( fixed already
01:10:703 (1,2) - blanket remapped here, can't fix
01:43:230 (1,1) - no stack would be better to read.. It's a diff for noob fixed

[CORE]
00:16:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it's highest diff.. you can make more harder pattern using sliders. It would be really boring. changed
00:30:282 (1,2) - blanket fixed
00:51:756 (1) - you missed one sound.. wat sound i dun get it
01:05:651 (1) - 01:03:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - you followed different sound in these two part with almost same sound..It feels a bit strange so you need some consistence...It's hardest diff so prior would be more suitable. I'm following the main line
01:20:808 (4) - NC kk fixed
01:38:019 (5,1,2) - 1/1 < 1/2 in distance??? It would be not comfortable to read. fixed
01:46:072 (1) - ^ ? no problem here
01:58:703 (4) - NC this is already NC wat

Good luck!

thanks for modding!

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-05-26T13:03:19+00:00

Len wrote:
from q

Standard:
00:04:387 (2) - move to 325 308 for distance fixed
00:06:124 (5) - WAT WAT

CORE:
01:37:861 -should be emphasized here i think hmm no

nice job but long sliders make borin in core and standard #sliderart

thanks for modding!

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-05-26T13:16:03+00:00

6th wrote:
Hello, M4M.

[Standard]
00:06:124 (5,1) - stack (same sound) fixed in other way
00:43:387 (2,3) - This is not clear enough, what are you mapping ? 00:44:335 - this should be clickable according to 00:43:387 (2) - imo. Try placing a circle and a slider. fixed in other way
01:04:703 - Having this clickable would have been better. 01:04:230 (3) - Convert it to 2 circles. no cuz it's fine
01:14:808 - Same, 01:15:124 (3,4) - are clickable so for consistency you need to make this one clickable too. ^

[Core]
00:03:756 (1) - This is even easier than Beginner diff in term of density changed
00:11:019 (5) - Because of the very low spacing I think that this is not predictable enough, move it further from previous object. fixed
00:16:072 (4,1) - ^ fixed
00:13:387 - No reason to ignore this in hardest difficulty I think. fixed
00:42:282 (5) - It looks like if it was at 00:42:440 -, very hard to read. I missed there.
00:43:861 (4,5) - CTRL+G rhythm. fixed
01:14:808 - Please make it clickable fixed
01:38:493 (1) - Difficulty spike from here to end of spinner. Spacing is suddenly increasing by 2, it's really unpredictable and even harder than kiai times. fixed

Good luck!

thanks for modding

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2016-05-28T07:56:05+00:00

Electoz wrote:
[estellia-'s BEGINNER]

00:42:282 (1) - Any reason for putting an NC here? was for drum emphasis, i could remove though, since so many complained about this
01:23:335 - Missing Finish. added
Left wrote:
[estellia-]
00:07:545 (4,1) - Blanket
00:10:072 (3) - same rhythm with 00:05:019 (3) - , why slider is different? nice catch
01:38:335 (1) - I think spinner should start in 01:38:493 (1) - because strong rhythms for spinner starts in there. ( and no sound before ) start of spinners have no sound, doesn't matter
Len wrote:
Beginner:
is really FOR BEGINNERS? i think u should change the diff name to normal :3[/b]
lol no thanks

6th wrote:
[Beginner]
SV looks a bit high for beginners. too late to change it now!!!
00:47:966 (1) - This is a bit sudden and has no reason to be there imo. You weren't following that instrument before (plus, it's not really noticeable tbh) doesn't matter, its easier to play, and its more obvious to me. besides, the instrument i was following before was even softer
00:51:756 (3,4) - Pretty certain this is really confusing for "beginners". thanks for giving me a good suggestion on how to change it..

ok

diff

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TitleUnicode:COMMON CORE
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ArtistUnicode:DM DOKURO
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Source:UNDERTALE
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emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2016-05-28T07:59:56+00:00

Electoz wrote:
[estellia-'s BEGINNER]

00:42:282 (1) - Any reason for putting an NC here? was for drum emphasis, i could remove though, since so many complained about this
01:23:335 - Missing Finish. added

Left wrote:
[estellia-]
00:07:545 (4,1) - Blanket tried my best ..
00:10:072 (3) - same rhythm with 00:05:019 (3) - , why slider is different? nice catch
01:38:335 (1) - I think spinner should start in 01:38:493 (1) - because strong rhythms for spinner starts in there. ( and no sound before ) start of spinners have no sound, doesn't matter

Len wrote:
Beginner:
is really FOR BEGINNERS? i think u should change the diff name to normal :3[/b]
lol no thanks

6th wrote:
[Beginner]
SV looks a bit high for beginners. too late to change it now!!!
00:47:966 (1) - This is a bit sudden and has no reason to be there imo. You weren't following that instrument before (plus, it's not really noticeable tbh) doesn't matter, its easier to play, and its more obvious to me. besides, the instrument i was following before was even softer
00:51:756 (3,4) - Pretty certain this is really confusing for "beginners". thanks for giving me a good suggestion on how to change it..

ok

diff

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339,272,55545,6,0,L|328:378,1,100
247,332,56177,2,0,L|236:232,1,100
201,149,56808,2,0,B|117:138|127:182|34:156,2,150
259,80,58072,6,0,P|321:80|374:57,1,100
438,31,58703,2,0,L|455:145,1,100
419,214,59335,2,0,P|458:295|391:357,2,150
331,231,60598,6,0,L|206:234,1,100
156,283,61230,2,0,P|100:312|42:308,1,100
13,238,61861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,150,62177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
49,62,62493,2,0,L|31:4,2,50
118,120,63124,6,0,B|152:81|203:87|239:101|266:135|272:160|272:191|272:191|320:194|320:194|356:246|427:238|447:212,1,400
393,142,64703,2,0,L|383:41,2,100
439,219,65651,6,0,B|473:274|428:343|428:343|346:315|346:315|299:365|210:379|151:307,1,400
66,195,67545,2,0,L|52:95,1,100
130,50,68177,6,0,B|200:47|200:47|251:68|251:68|320:64|320:64|266:68|226:120|264:204|326:190|355:170,1,400
508,243,70072,2,0,P|508:300|489:353,1,100
405,342,70703,6,0,B|307:330|307:330|216:348|216:348|122:334|122:334|180:312|180:312|274:325,1,400
388,229,72598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,187,73230,6,0,B|166:204|126:176|126:176|83:196|83:196|14:146|46:71|87:45|154:40|189:100|181:138,1,400
265,84,74808,2,0,L|394:75,2,100
298,168,75756,6,0,B|305:218|278:247|278:247|264:328|351:367|419:335|432:261|432:261|358:243,1,400
196,296,77651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
22,345,78282,6,0,B|61:281|46:227|46:227|91:247|153:231|177:165|140:86|92:78|24:109,1,400
217,47,80177,2,0,L|316:40,1,100
256,192,80651,12,4,83335,0:0:0:0:
129,76,93440,6,0,L|138:191,1,100
97,256,94072,2,0,P|84:329|89:364,1,100
177,346,94703,2,0,B|261:335|248:386|367:346,2,150
199,259,95966,6,0,L|206:154,1,100
177,74,96598,2,0,P|235:59|289:65,1,100
345,117,97230,2,0,P|416:122|464:31,1,150
394,8,98019,2,0,L|339:1,1,50
256,192,98335,12,0,102282,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103230,5,0,0:0:0:0:
190,130,103545,6,0,P|151:104|183:246,1,400
264,284,105124,2,0,P|276:336|281:403,2,100
250,195,106072,6,0,B|302:191|334:229|334:229|423:269|488:211|488:211|402:217|356:119,1,400
195,109,107966,2,0,L|95:121,1,100
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209,211,110493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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459,27,115230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
508,102,115545,2,0,P|487:178|485:223,1,100
446,280,116177,6,0,B|405:218|318:223|280:299|313:354|313:354|237:279|132:317,1,400
15,210,118072,2,0,P|77:223|127:218,1,100
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185,66,120598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,121230,12,0,123756,0:0:0:0:

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[Nemesis]

[Nemesis] 2016-05-28T11:05:08+00:00

Hello. Doing a M4M here~

BEGINNER

00:38:493 (2,3) - it doesn't look too good for me, I wouldn't cover those two since there isn't any other cover like this in the ENTIRE diff.
00:51:756 (3) - ?????? looks totally out of place fix please ;_;
01:08:177 (1) - this is kinda hard to read for the new players
01:10:703 (1) - ^, trust me.
01:58:703 (1) - ^ ^, really trust me

STANDARD

00:23:651 (2,3) - slight blanket fix please
00:25:230 (1) - move to x=424
00:25:861 (2) - move to y=356
00:33:440 (2) - move to y=184 (looks WAY better, trust me)
00:36:598 (3,4) - blanketzzzzz
00:39:598 (4,1) - ^
00:47:019 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:43:230 (1) - I'd personally remove that, but you can leave it if you want~~

CORE

00:30:282 (1,2) - you need to fix the blanket a little
01:08:177 (1) - I don't really like this slider, kinda awkward to play
01:18:282 (1) - for me you should add one more red point, looks too soft compared to the rest of the sliders

The whole map is really good :3 keep it up!

-NanoRIPE-

2,059 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2016-05-28T12:18:50+00:00

Hi ~ M4M from your modding queue

[Beginner]
00:09:440 (2,3) - blanket
00:36:598 (3) - Ctrl + J
00:51:756 (3) - unsnapped slider
01:34:072 (2,3) - blanket?

[STANDART]
00:05:966 (4) - clap
00:11:335 (1) - finish

[Core]
None
Nice diff ~

GL ~

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-05-28T13:22:21+00:00

[Nemesis] wrote:
Hello. Doing a M4M here~
STANDARD
00:23:651 (2,3) - slight blanket fix please fixed
00:25:230 (1) - move to x=424 WAT IT'S ALREADY 424 lol
00:25:861 (2) - move to y=356 WAT IS GOING ON IT'S ALREADY 356 wat
00:33:440 (2) - move to y=184 (looks WAY better, trust me) fixed
00:36:598 (3,4) - blanketzzzzz fixed
00:39:598 (4,1) - ^ ^
00:47:019 (4,5) - ^ ^ remapped this part so ignore
01:43:230 (1) - I'd personally remove that, but you can leave it if you want~~ no
CORE
00:30:282 (1,2) - you need to fix the blanket a little fixed
01:08:177 (1) - I don't really like this slider, kinda awkward to play fixed
01:18:282 (1) - for me you should add one more red point, looks too soft compared to the rest of the sliders
The whole map is really good :3 keep it up!

thanks for modding!

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
Hi ~ M4M from your modding queue

[STANDART]
00:05:966 (4) - clap fixed
00:11:335 (1) - finish fixed

[Core]
None
Nice diff ~

GL ~

thanks for modding!

Zyl

520 posts

Joined October 2013

Zyl 2016-05-30T02:49:13+00:00

From my queue

[estellia-'s BEGINNER]

estellia-'s BEGINNER diff

Nothing to say!

[STANDARD]

STANDARD diff

01:01:861 (1,2,3,4,1) - hard for beginners

that's all!

[CORE]

CORE diff

00:43:861 (4,5) - sudden change

that's all!

Good job! really good map!

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-05-30T11:28:12+00:00

Trent83 wrote:
From my queue

[STANDARD]

STANDARD diff
01:01:861 (1,2,3,4,1) - hard for beginners there is a beginner difficulty so this doesn't matter

that's all!

[CORE]

CORE diff
00:43:861 (4,5) - sudden change hmm, i think it's fine

that's all!

Good job! really good map!

thanks for modding and looking!

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Chibi Maruko 2016-06-03T06:12:02+00:00

Hi. M4M from my queue

STANDARD

00:06:124 (5) - Add clap cause sound bass
01:02:019 (2,3,4) - Add clap
Everything looks ok

CORE

00:05:966 (1,2) - Please make spacing because this is hard, not normal
00:13:072 (2,3) - ^
00:15:124 (3) - Stop slider at 00:15:440 -
01:01:572 - Add note cause stream here
01:04:072 (2,3) - Stack will be nice
01:43:545 (2) - Add NC cause start kiai

Ok, gl with your map
/me runs away

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-06-03T06:22:23+00:00

Chibi Maruko wrote:
Hi. M4M from my queue

STANDARD
00:06:124 (5) - Add clap cause sound bass fixed
01:02:019 (2,3,4) - Add clap fixed
Everything looks ok

CORE
00:05:966 (1,2) - Please make spacing because this is hard, not normal fixed
00:13:072 (2,3) - ^ fixed
00:15:124 (3) - Stop slider at 00:15:440 - fixed
01:01:572 - Add note cause stream here i don't think so
01:04:072 (2,3) - Stack will be nice ^
01:43:545 (2) - Add NC cause start kiai fixed

Ok, gl with your map
/me runs away

thanks for modding!

Chalwa

1,105 posts

Joined August 2014

Chalwa 2016-06-03T07:30:32+00:00

HELLO! M4M FROM MY QUEUE!

BEGINNER

00:09:440 (2,3) - Blanket this?
00:36:598 (3) - In my opinion Ctrl + J looks better
00:47:966 (1) - (It's not mod) Nice slider! (Key?)
00:59:335 (3,1) - Blanket
01:08:177 (1) - I think beginners can't read this slider (01:08:808 This moment)
01:35:966 (1,2) - Blanket

STANDARD

NOTHING O.o (LOVE THIS DIFF <3)

CORE

01:13:861 (2) - Move it a bit to right
01:17:651 (3) - Move it to x:288 y:245

Sorry for short mod, but it's very good map and I'll give you star

GOOD LUCK!

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-06-03T07:59:35+00:00

Chalwa wrote:
HELLO! M4M FROM MY QUEUE!

STANDARD
NOTHING O.o (LOVE THIS DIFF <3) oh thank you >3

CORE
01:13:861 (2) - Move it a bit to right fixed
01:17:651 (3) - Move it to x:288 y:245 fixed

Sorry for short mod, but it's very good map and I'll give you star omg thank you >3
GOOD LUCK!

thanks for modding and the star!

propasy

73 posts

Joined December 2013

propasy 2016-06-03T11:44:17+00:00

Not alot of problems in this map

Standard

00:15:124 (3,4) - I don’t see the point of the circle being so far away from the slider
01:03:756 (2,3) – its strange how you instantly change the use of rythmn from one instrument to the other then back. Feels out of place. (in other words, you incorporated the high pitched sound into your map for only two circles and then back into the main instruments. I suggest you continue using this instrument for longer or simply not introduce it)

CORE

00:05:966 (1,2,3) – I don’t think the small triangle jump works well with the song. Perhaps just a normal stream jump.
00:43:861 (4,5,6) – the spacing of circle 5 seems out of place from the other two similar jumps of this section (i.e. 00:42:914 (1,2,3) – and 00:46:387 (3,4,5) -) try and make it seem more similar.
00:47:966 (1) – this would be a good spot to lower the slider velocity to better fit with the music.

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-06-03T12:08:09+00:00

propasy wrote:
Not alot of problems in this map

Standard
00:15:124 (3,4) - I don’t see the point of the circle being so far away from the slider so what do you want to do here? it like 1 and a half beat here so it make sense
01:03:756 (2,3) – its strange how you instantly change the use of rythmn from one instrument to the other then back. Feels out of place. (in other words, you incorporated the high pitched sound into your map for only two circles and then back into the main instruments. I suggest you continue using this instrument for longer or simply not introduce it) for now, it's late to remap all this and it makes the map special, right?

CORE
00:05:966 (1,2,3) – I don’t think the small triangle jump works well with the song. Perhaps just a normal stream jump. fixed
00:43:861 (4,5,6) – the spacing of circle 5 seems out of place from the other two similar jumps of this section (i.e. 00:42:914 (1,2,3) – and 00:46:387 (3,4,5) -) try and make it seem more similar. fixed
00:47:966 (1) – this would be a good spot to lower the slider velocity to better fit with the music. hmm fine here

thanks for modding!

Morgar

37 posts

Joined December 2013

Morgar 2016-06-03T14:56:57+00:00

I find few to no problems with this map (looking at hard).

Although I noticed something(s) so this is a short mod I guess.

Some parts are way more difficult then others, personally I can't fc this map but I'm not enthusiastic enough to play it again because it has those "lame" parts for me. For someone that can barely make the start of the sing, is the middle part way too hard.
What I'm saying is you should level it IMO by easing into the rapid stuff.

These are the harder parts:
00:41:966 - 00:42:756 (4,5,6) These rapid return sliders fit to the music perfectly but I have not seen them before in the map. The first time you use them and they are very quickly following each other. I suggest putting a hit circle at 00:41:493 so that you easy the player into the new quicker speed

01:01:861 - 01:02:966 (1,2,3,4,5) Feels the same as the first harder part. No suggestions for this one though.

This all could be a fiction of my imagination but I really hope you find this useful. If you do kudosu's are always welcome, if you don't, ignore this.

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-06-04T01:26:33+00:00

Morgar wrote:
I find few to no problems with this map (looking at hard).

Although I noticed something(s) so this is a short mod I guess.

Some parts are way more difficult then others, personally I can't fc this map but I'm not enthusiastic enough to play it again because it has those "lame" parts for me. For someone that can barely make the start of the sing, is the middle part way too hard.
What I'm saying is you should level it IMO by easing into the rapid stuff.

These are the harder parts:
00:41:966 - 00:42:756 (4,5,6) These rapid return sliders fit to the music perfectly but I have not seen them before in the map. The first time you use them and they are very quickly following each other. I suggest putting a hit circle at 00:41:493 so that you easy the player into the new quicker speed adding a circle doesn't help this situation, no fix

01:01:861 - 01:02:966 (1,2,3,4,5) Feels the same as the first harder part. No suggestions for this one though. still,I can't really think of how can I fix them, no fix

This all could be a fiction of my imagination but I really hope you find this useful. If you do kudosu's are always welcome, if you don't, ignore this.

thanks for looking

propasy

73 posts

Joined December 2013

propasy 2016-06-04T02:14:41+00:00

CookieBite wrote:
propasy wrote:
00:15:124 (3,4) - I don’t see the point of the circle being so far away from the slider so what do you want to do here? it like 1 and a half beat here so it make sense

I would say something similar to this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5308528

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-06-04T02:34:50+00:00

propasy wrote:
00:15:124 (3,4) - I don’t see the point of the circle being so far away from the slider so what do you want to do here? it like 1 and a half beat here so it make sense

I would say something similar to this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5308528

hmm,no because if I do that, newbie players will confuse about it.

Otau Oto

10 posts

Joined March 2016

Otau Oto 2016-06-04T02:36:54+00:00

So good. I played it once and beat it. Try and make it more difficult. Make streams

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-06-04T07:27:12+00:00

Otau Oto wrote:
So good. I played it once and beat it. Try and make it more difficult. Make streams

No place I can make streams, sorry.

AngeLNarancia

AngeLNarancia 2016-06-06T04:49:24+00:00

Good Map!

Otau Oto

10 posts

Joined March 2016

Otau Oto 2016-06-10T00:56:54+00:00

No place I can make streams, sorry.[/quote]

Then make more difficult maps. Maybe make leik 3 more modes to it and it might get to ranked

Izzywing

osu! Alumni

2,251 posts

Joined March 2016

Izzywing 2016-06-10T18:48:59+00:00

Edited post

so I had a mod here but I went back and noticed everything I put was wrong lol

Gave 2 stars instead, gl

Sorry for not being able to mod. You can post on my queue anytime for another map if you'd like, even if its closed ~

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

CookieBite 2016-06-11T01:56:11+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
Edited post

so I had a mod here but I went back and noticed everything I put was wrong lol

Gave 2 stars instead, gl

Sorry for not being able to mod. You can post on my queue anytime for another map if you'd like, even if its closed ~

ik you've mod my map,i had notice it on my phone.

btw, thanks for those 2 stars >3

Otau Oto wrote:
CookieBite wrote:
No place I can make streams, sorry.
Then make more difficult maps. Maybe make leik 3 more modes to it and it might get to ranked

i don't have any experience of making other 3 mode, sorry

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2016-06-13T23:43:01+00:00

checked all mods

no fix for any blanket suggestions, none were intended at all
no fix for any slider changes in terms of aesthetic, theres no reason to
no fix for any "unreadable" sliders, this is pending, I'll leave it to the BNs/QATs, cuz its perfectly fine to me and not unreadable in any sense
no fix for that "unsnapped" slider, its meant to be a 1/3 beat, but I have no idea how to change it as of now cuz no one is giving me good suggestions

[ Drop ]

558 posts

Joined February 2013

[ Drop ] 2016-06-18T17:56:08+00:00

don't you think that's too easy for 190 .-.

CookieBite

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CookieBite 2016-06-19T03:43:49+00:00

choikapo wrote:
don't you think that's too easy for 190 .-.

xD i don't care

Google wrote:
190
網路上的定義
190是189與191之間的自然數。

nic answer

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