Kanawo - Kohaku no Yume [CatchTheBeat|Taiko] · forum

Professor Gila

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-03-06T02:50:51+00:00

Dyl-Byl wrote:
Hi! From My Queue.

[General]
Nothing.

[Gila's Salad]
00:04:031 (3,4) - ctrl+g these | ye
00:11:197 (3) - NC | i prefer do it at 00:12:531 (1) -
00:16:864 (8) - ^ | i prefer do it at 00:15:864 (1) -
00:17:197 (1) - No NC here. | nope ._.
00:26:531 (7) - NC | ye
00:32:864 (4) - ^ | ye
00:36:031 (5,6) - Space these out further. | a bit
00:56:531 (5) - NC | ye
01:12:030 (6,7) - Ctrl+g | nope ._.

Good luck on the map.

^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v

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TitleUnicode:虚白ノ夢
Artist:Kanawo
ArtistUnicode:カナヲ
Creator:Surono
Version:Prof. Gila's Salad
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Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-03-07T00:44:11+00:00

Dybyl, Thanks for mod mah frenns!! Ur face so cute XD
Updated

wheres Momot Brahters... FryingPan!?!? hey!!!

-Sh1n1-

3,404 posts

Joined September 2012

-Sh1n1- 2016-03-08T00:24:33+00:00

PatZar wrote:
-sh1n1- pro ctb modder , long time no see you

Thanks Geno :3 that's true, I'll find you on fb

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-03-08T03:33:02+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
PatZar wrote:
-sh1n1- pro ctb modder , long time no see you
Thanks Geno :3 that's true, I'll find you on fb

wat de sir shini, patjar is baka :U ex-bn nub awfjcsnfgvaecjbns
gero, geno, gezo. patrik is beutiful grill

Cowboy

472 posts

Joined November 2011

Cowboy 2016-03-08T21:45:56+00:00

CtB Mod As request from my queue!

[General]

Seems fine to me, maybe you need more Combo Colours
Keep Combo
CtB Ranking Criteria wrote:
Make sure your combos aren't too long (15+)!

[Cup]

00:09:031 (2) - If you want you can put a note here
01:14:197 (5) - Maybe you can add a note here, and 01:14:364 (6) - here, Organize them , lest cause one dash
01:22:697 (3) - Add a note
It's all for now, really Good Cup

[Prof. Gila's Salad]

00:04:864 (1) - Maybe Ctrl+G, and move a bit to the right 00:05:531 (2) - this note
00:07:531 (1) - x: 300
00:08:531 (2) - Add a note here, x: 288
00:19:197 (1) - Maybe a bit to the right to make a "dash" but not so complicated
00:40:864 (2) - Ctrl+G, It is very complicated for the next note
00:42:197 (4,5,6) - (4) x: 232 (5) x: 144 (6) x: 224
00:50:864 (8,1) - You can make a dash , because the sound here is strong
00:53:531 (8,1) - ^, but not so strong, here the sound is different
01:14:364 (4) - Add a note o:
01:14:697 - Maybe you can made a 1/4 repeat slider, could end 01:15:197 - here
01:16:864 - Add a note here , and 01:17:531 - here
01:18:364 - Maybe you can add a note here, and replace 01:18:531 (4) - this slider, make a 1/4 slider, maybe end 01:18:864 - here
01:20:864 (9,1) - You could follow the same pattern ^
01:23:531 - Add a note here, 01:23:197 (5) - move a bit to the left
01:23:864 (6) - The slider maybe ends 01:24:197 - here
01:24:864 (7,) - Add a note,01:25:197 (8) - here, 01:25:531 (9) - and here, maybe 01:26:197 (11) - here

[Momot's Platter]

00:35:531 (4,5) - Maybe a hdash?
01:07:031 (4,1) - ^
01:10:197 (5,6) - ^
01:12:864 (2,3) - ^
01:20:864 (5,6) - ^
01:23:197 (5,1) - Remove hdas, the hdash could go 01:22:864 (4,5) - here
01:38:364 (9,1) - Maybe hdash?

[Volt's Rain]

Maybe AR=OD: 9

00:28:031 (5) - Maybe add two notes here and 00:28:197 - here, there could use a hdash
00:32:364 (4,5) - Maybe a hdash
00:34:864 (1,2) - ^
00:40:197 (1,2) - ^
00:38:697 (5,6) - ^
01:13:197 (6,1) - ^
01:22:864 (4,5) - ^
01:25:531 (4,5) - ^
01:26:197 (6,7) - ^
01:34:239 (2,3) - ^

Findings:
The map has the potential to be a bit difficult if the Rain and Platter, at Salad too, so come on, guys know they can , good luck , that's all from me , greetings.

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-03-08T22:10:46+00:00

Jusenkyo wrote:
CtB Mod As request from my queue!

[General]

Seems fine to me, maybe you need more Combo Colours I will Consindering this with de ppl GDs
Keep Combo
CtB Ranking Criteria wrote:
Make sure your combos aren't too long (15+)!
on Checking...
[Cup]

00:09:031 (2) - If you want you can put a note here for now I keep not put a note on here, I like low diff with simple note. so its identic like for "easy" diff XD
01:14:197 (5) - Maybe you can add a note here, and 01:14:364 (6) - here, Organize them , lest cause one dash Same answer like above
01:22:697 (3) - Add a note ^
It's all for now, really Good Cup Thanks!!
Findings:
The map has the potential to be a bit difficult if the Rain and Platter, at Salad too, so come on, guys know they can , good luck , that's all from me , greetings.

thanks for confirmation in-game!! ~~I was sleepy (from 0:30 AM ~ 4:56 AM, 10 minutes ago you chat me lol)~~ gblg baper gw

@momota: 01:31:197 - new combo disini, cecede mentok 15
ih orang2 mana :U dasar para mapper menggila

Momota

270 posts

Joined February 2014

Momota 2016-03-09T02:22:31+00:00

Jusenkyo wrote:
CtB Mod As request from my queue!

[General]

[Momot's Platter]

00:35:531 (4,5) - Maybe a hdash? hmm maybe not, because if it is added the hdash in diff platter too much, sometimes it makes the pattern hdash so easy sometimes, but SR becomes high
01:07:031 (4,1) - ^ if I add a dash here, then the next pattern will follow it, and it makes a diff platter become more difficult, according to me this has been a difficult jump
01:10:197 (5,6) - ^ ^
01:12:864 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:20:864 (5,6) - ^ ^
01:23:197 (5,1) - Remove hdas, the hdash could go 01:22:864 (4,5) - remove hdash, and add on (4,5)
01:38:364 (9,1) - Maybe hdash?
no, follow the previous pattern like 00:19:197 - but less spacing, because the BPM changes here

Findings:
The map has the potential to be a bit difficult if the Rain and Platter, at Salad too, so come on, guys know they can , good luck , that's all from me , greetings.

thanks for mod Jusenkyo

Momot's Platter

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Title:Kohaku no Yume
TitleUnicode:虚白ノ夢
Artist:Kanawo
ArtistUnicode:カナヲ
Creator:Surono
Version:Momot's Platter
Source:虚白ノ夢
Tags:teriyaki tomato blank dream usui mishiro momota professor gila volta
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Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-03-09T06:09:18+00:00

Jusenkyo wrote:
CtB Ranking Criteria wrote:
Make sure your combos aren't too long (15+)!

ini sebenarnya cuma guideline. disaranin buat ikutin yang di bilang

Jusenkyo wrote:
[Prof. Gila's Salad]

00:04:864 (1) - Maybe Ctrl+G, and move a bit to the right 00:05:531 (2) - this note | i prefer no
00:07:531 (1) - x: 300 | no ._.
00:08:531 (2) - Add a note here, x: 288 | no ._.
00:19:197 (1) - Maybe a bit to the right to make a "dash" but not so complicated | i don't like making it further
00:40:864 (2) - Ctrl+G, It is very complicated for the next note | ye
00:42:197 (4,5,6) - (4) x: 232 (5) x: 144 (6) x: 224 | (4) let them be, (5) x:352, (6) x:176
00:50:864 (8,1) - You can make a dash , because the sound here is strong | no i don't prefer that ._.
00:53:531 (8,1) - ^, but not so strong, here the sound is different | ^
01:14:364 (4) - Add a note o: | i better to follow the drum sound instead of piano for that part
01:14:697 - Maybe you can made a 1/4 repeat slider, could end 01:15:197 - here | no ._.
01:16:864 - Add a note here , and 01:17:531 - here | ye
01:18:364 - Maybe you can add a note here, and replace 01:18:531 (4) - this slider, make a 1/4 slider, maybe end 01:18:864 - here | ye
01:20:864 (9,1) - You could follow the same pattern ^ | ye, and modified them a bit
01:23:531 - Add a note here, 01:23:197 (5) - move a bit to the left | to the right a bit instead
01:23:864 (6) - The slider maybe ends 01:24:197 - here | nope ._.
01:24:864 (7,) - Add a note,01:25:197 (8) - here, 01:25:531 (9) - and here, maybe 01:26:197 (11) - here | only at 01:25:531 and 01:26:197

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Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-03-09T07:59:21+00:00

w8, . [2]

itu kriteria. TULISANnya :U bkan guideGARIS
ew plater jadi ngeh ngenantangsigug.com, yarapopolah diff dengan julukan "nanggung"
mana si panci terbang cecete.

SalivaCow, Dont forget to explain ur reason.. cuz his mod has reasonable :U dont "let them be", "._." or "nope" this, tank

Volta

1,622 posts

Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-03-09T22:54:55+00:00

Equim wrote:
I always love iyashikei songs ;_;

[Volta's Rain]
Generally, you should really nerf the anti-flows.
00:09:197 (3) - This is just a suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4637589 hmm will consider this again
00:15:697 - a bit wide, x32 fixed
00:18:531 (5) - Whereas the HDash at 00:19:197 - , if you put a HDash here, the following one will lose its stress. I suggest to move it to x32. i think it's fine
00:25:364 (4) - x407.fixed
00:28:031 (5) - x92. ^
00:30:698 (4) - x32.
00:31:781 - a bit wide. ok
00:32:531 (5) - x272 due to the drum hit. no, i think too far
00:33:197 (2,3,4) - This is weird. 00:33:197 (2) - x184. It doesn't need to be hard. to emphasis the drum
00:35:781 - wide. 00:35:864 (4,5,6) - x153.
00:43:364 - too wide, especially it's an anti-flow here. Well, I suggest to disable the HDash here and ctrl+G 00:43:197 - and move 00:43:197 (9) - to x168.
00:44:531 (2) - due to t/385492, I suggest to move all such HDashes ends to x32 or x480.
00:45:531 - As for the flow here, I suggest to move it to x184, though it breaks the HDash instead (blame low bpm).
00:48:531 (9) - x32.
01:33:031 - wide. i think i fixed all

Sorry I'm not so specialized in low bpm

Jusenkyo wrote:
CtB Mod As request from my queue!

[Volt's Rain]

Maybe AR=OD: 9 the fruit drops is too fast for this BPM

00:28:031 (5) - Maybe add two notes here and 00:28:197 - here, there could use a hdash the music is relatively calm here and i don't think it needs such emphasis
00:32:364 (4,5) - Maybe a hdash managed to make HDash here. others will disrupt the flow imo
00:34:864 (1,2) - ^
00:40:197 (1,2) - ^
00:38:697 (5,6) - ^
01:13:197 (6,1) - ^
01:22:864 (4,5) - ^
01:25:531 (4,5) - ^
01:26:197 (6,7) - ^
01:34:239 (2,3) - ^

ty both mods

rain

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TitleUnicode:虚白ノ夢
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ArtistUnicode:カナヲ
Creator:Surono
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Surono

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Topic Starter

Surono 2016-03-10T11:24:30+00:00

ok, wait professor edan's respone to mod

Updated! except Salad diff

Professor Gila

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Professor Gila 2016-03-10T14:05:07+00:00

Surono wrote:
w8, . [2]

itu kriteria. TULISANnya :U bkan guideGARIS

liat disini, bagian Guideline nya :U

Surono

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Surono 2016-03-10T16:06:16+00:00

why you seriously take my word, man? (:

EDIT:

))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

gblm tiba2 muncul trus ngasih tau, enakan juga new post cecete :U

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Professor Gila

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Professor Gila 2016-03-10T16:16:09+00:00

sur, liat post yang sebelumnya :U

kan itu post sempat di reserve buat reply mod :U

Surono

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Surono 2016-03-10T16:33:22+00:00

Updated

Ascendance

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Ascendance 2016-03-15T23:14:29+00:00

General

Tags

Looks good!

Metadata

Can you provide your metadata source (particularly the Japanese)? I can't seem to find it.

Spread/Other

AR on CTB diffs seems a bit weird. (5.5/6.5/8/8.7). There's quite a gap between 6.5 and 8. I'd suggest 5/6.2/7.4/8.6 ?

Hitsounds

Looks good!

Muzukashii

General

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Cup

General

As said above, I think it's best that you change your AR to 5.
00:05:864 (4) - I think ctrl+h'ing this makes the note play much better out of 3 and is a lot less awkward going into 00:07:531 (5) - .
00:18:865 (2,1) - This note to spinner distance is really close to being unrankable. It may be hard for players to appropriately react to these distances, so, I talked with Kurokami, a CTB QAT about it, and we decided that the distance should be 1/1 or the spinner should be deleted entirely. Here's that.
00:31:531 (4,5) - 5 has a clap on it, so I think you can give it a bit more distance than what you currently have!
00:42:197 (1,2,3,4) - After 00:40:531 (5) - you tend to keep a lot of notes on the right side of the grid. Making this flow to the left and then return to the right at 00:43:864 (5) - would be much better.
01:36:489 (2,1) - Same as before!

Salad

General

As said above, I'd suggest changing the AR.
00:09:197 (4) - I think you can give a bit more distance to this note, maybe forcing a dash? It leads well into the next segment and has some emphasis on it, so I think it's acceptable.
00:11:197 (3) - The note on the tail of this slider really deserves to be its own circle, perhaps with a dash. In fact, all of the notes with claps on them deserve a bit extra distance than what is normal here, so I think you can adjust them as you see it necessary! (For all of the sliders with endings with claps)
00:20:531 (3) - Ctrl+H'ing this would make the pattern less boring and create a much needed dash for emphasis!
00:22:197 (2,3) - I'd suggest making these completely horizontal, rather than having them tilted. They look much better and play nicer
00:24:864 (4,5,6) - I think this can play a bit better if you did something perhaps like this. It gives the proper emphasis to the (6) note as well as a better directional flow to the previous 2.
00:27:197 (3,1) - You shouldn't make the catcher stay still! I changed the pattern to look like this
00:29:864 (1,2) - same
00:35:531 - In this section, I think you should really give distance to the claps. This is a salad, so you should use the dash more often, since I can probably S this without using dash once ;w;
00:52:864 (6,7) - dash D:
01:00:197 (3) - this one even has a cymbal crash on it ;;
01:00:864 (4,5) - add some distance, these are really cloooose
This diff needs more dash >w<

Platter

General

as suggested, blah blah, AR change
00:12:197 (5) - and 00:14:864 (5) - could really use a bit more distance, I think dashing back to them would really help the flow of the map.
00:15:531 (6,7) - This feels a bit cramped, with the slider tail and the note being that close.
00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Okay, this might be a bit too challenging. I'd suggest to form groups of 4. For example 00:19:197 (1,2,3,4) - Curve this, with a dash to 00:19:864 (5,6,7,8) - , and a hdash to 00:20:531 (9) - . Visual here
00:24:864 (4) - In my opinion, moving this to x272 plays much better and feels less restricted.
Weird change but, move 01:08:031 (4) - 1 grid to the right lmao. Surprisingly, it makes it a bit easier to catch rather than tapdash.
01:21:197 (6,7) - I think these notes are a bit cramped together. I moved 01:21:364 (7) - to x:240.
01:32:197 (5) - Same issue as earlier. turning this into a dash makes this feel less restricted
wow this diff was actually surprisingly good.

Rain

General

00:26:864 (2,3,4,5) - All of these going in a right facing direction is pretty boring and lackluster. I suggest switching up some directions so that way the flow isn't so choppy.
00:29:531 (1,2,3,4) - same as above!
holy this diff is so good

~~I'll finish this soon, I'm really tired with all the Taiko World Cup things~~

Last edited by Ascendance 2016-03-17T01:17:32+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Surono

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Surono 2016-03-16T03:25:38+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
General

Tags
Looks good!
Metadata
Can you provide your metadata source (particularly the Japanese)? I can't seem to find it. http://teritoma.blog.fc2.com/blog-entry-53.html
Spread/Other
AR on CTB diffs seems a bit weird. (5.5/6.5/8/8.7). There's quite a gap between 6.5 and 8. I'd suggest 5/6.2/7.4/8.6 ? yea
Hitsounds
Looks good!

Muzukashii

General

The following notes are unsnapped - please fix them :
01:29:199 -
01:30:199 -
01:31:199 -
01:31:866 -
01:32:199 -
01:32:866 -
01:33:199 - wuppss Tacos

Cup

General

As said above, I think it's best that you change your AR to 5. yeach
00:05:864 (4) - I think ctrl+h'ing this makes the note play much better out of 3 and is a lot less awkward going into 00:07:531 (5) - . asdf, distance rip. fixed
00:18:865 (2,1) - This note to spinner distance is really close to being unrankable. It may be hard for players to appropriately react to these distances, so, I talked with Kurokami, a CTB QAT about it ( woahh Kurokami O_O dem best ctb persun I know ), and we decided that the distance should be 1/1 or the spinner should be deleted entirely. Here's that. ok
00:31:531 (4,5) - 5 has a clap on it, so I think you can give it a bit more distance than what you currently have! ,.
00:42:197 (1,2,3,4) - After 00:40:531 (5) - you tend to keep a lot of notes on the right side of the grid. Making this flow to the left and then return to the right at 00:43:864 (5) - would be much better. oke
01:36:489 (2,1) - Same as before! fixed, delete red tick and previous

I'll finish this soon, I'm really tired with all the Taiko World Cup things

thanks mod for Cup! and tacos check!1!! and TWC., ,.

Volta

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Volta 2016-03-18T06:08:00+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
Rain

General

00:26:864 (2,3,4,5) - All of these going in a right facing direction is pretty boring and lackluster. I suggest switching up some directions so that way the flow isn't so choppy. i think a consistency is better here
00:29:531 (1,2,3,4) - same as above! ^
holy this diff is so good omg thanks

~~I'll finish this soon, I'm really tired with all the Taiko World Cup things~~

thanks for mod~

changed AR and fixed some distance

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btw,
i agreed that the salad need more dash...

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-03-18T07:38:42+00:00

Volta wrote:
btw,
i agreed that the salad need more dash...

oke waiting Momota and lidahapi

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-03-18T14:56:56+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
Salad

General

As said above, I'd suggest changing the AR. | AR 6.5 should be enough
00:09:197 (4) - I think you can give a bit more distance to this note, maybe forcing a dash? It leads well into the next segment and has some emphasis on it, so I think it's acceptable. | yeah
00:11:197 (3) - The note on the tail of this slider really deserves to be its own circle, perhaps with a dash. In fact, all of the notes with claps on them deserve a bit extra distance than what is normal here, so I think you can adjust them as you see it necessary! (For all of the sliders with endings with claps) | i'd like to keep it, since changing end of the slider to its own circle and make the distance to dash could make them rougher to play a bit
00:20:531 (3) - Ctrl+H'ing this would make the pattern less boring and create a much needed dash for emphasis! | nope i don't like to make dash here so far
00:22:197 (2,3) - I'd suggest making these completely horizontal, rather than having them tilted. They look much better and play nicer | i know but no, i don't prefer that ._.
00:24:864 (4,5,6) - I think this can play a bit better if you did something perhaps like this. It gives the proper emphasis to the (6) note as well as a better directional flow to the previous 2. | never, i never want to make them too far
00:27:197 (3,1) - You shouldn't make the catcher stay still! I changed the pattern to look like this | where's the 00:27:197 (3) 's position?
00:29:864 (1,2) - same | no
00:35:531 - In this section, I think you should really give distance to the claps. This is a salad, so you should use the dash more often, since I can probably S this without using dash once ;w; | somehow, i shouldn't spam more dashes ._.
00:52:864 (6,7) - dash D: | no ):
01:00:197 (3) - this one even has a cymbal crash on it ;; | no
01:00:864 (4,5) - add some distance, these are really cloooose | a bit
This diff needs more dash >w< | i actually don't want to spam some more dashes ;w;

On a side note, i map to prioritize comfort play instead of rough play

(kebut kebut an pakai brain power): LET THE BASS KICK, O-oooooooooo AAAAE-A-A-I-A-U-
JO-oooooooooooo AAE-O-A-A-U-U-A-
NGE-eee-ee-eeeng AAAAE-A-E-I-E-A-
JO-ooo-oo-oo-oo EEEEO-A-AAA-AAAA

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Momota

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Joined February 2014

Momota 2016-03-18T18:20:30+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
Platter

General

as suggested, blah blah, AR change - keep ar 8 for now
00:12:197 (5) - and 00:14:864 (5) - could really use a bit more distance, I think dashing back to them would really help the flow of the map. - changed, and remap
00:15:531 (6,7) - This feels a bit cramped, with the slider tail and the note being that close. - fix
00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Okay, this might be a bit too challenging. I'd suggest to form groups of 4. For example 00:19:197 (1,2,3,4) - Curve this, with a dash to 00:19:864 (5,6,7,8) - , and a hdash to 00:20:531 (9) - . Visual here yess, changing patterns
00:24:864 (4) - In my opinion, moving this to x272 plays much better and feels less restricted. - moved
Weird change but, move 01:08:031 (4) - 1 grid to the right lmao. Surprisingly, it makes it a bit easier to catch rather than tapdash. - umm no, i will try to keep the pattern
01:21:197 (6,7) - I think these notes are a bit cramped together. I moved 01:21:364 (7) - to x:240. - same
01:32:197 (5) - Same issue as earlier. turning this into a dash makes this feel less restricted - changed
wow this diff was actually surprisingly good. - These words make me happy \(>w<)/

~~I'll finish this soon, I'm really tired with all the Taiko World Cup things~~

thenks 4 mod ascendance dance dance

love

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Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-03-18T18:28:45+00:00

Ooo, nice memes, not responding brain. and wanna by1 ayodance with meh?!?!?!!!?/1..,
oke, lidahapi nothing.. to think, and momota dem ur diff is so yeah but why u still ask me for help in-game D: I am tacos playur

Updated, dem nice cetebes... and they are is spooky user/mapper I know

StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

StickyPicky 2016-03-25T16:04:00+00:00

Hello ~ #modrequestqueue

Cup

change slider tick rate at 2
00:08:864 (1,2) - it is better if you use a slider here with a reverse arrow on 00:09:031 at x: 160 ..

refer

00:10:197 (3,4) - same ^ but at x: 352

Salad

00:10:197 (1,2) - what you want here is a jump, but this is doable without pressing the dash, you might wanna increase the distance of (2) to add a jump here, move it at x: 64
00:28:697 (4,5) - , 00:30:697 (3,4) - this doesn't need a jump. please reduce the distance.
00:59:531 (2,3) - add a jump to emphasize the hitsound finish.
01:12:197 (7,1) - increase the distance, by moving (7) at x: 448, then move (1) at x: 192, move the tail of the slider on the white tick 01:13:197 - , then add a note on 01:13:531 - at x: 312

refer

Platter

00:08:864 (1,2,3) - I think it is better if this is on the left side of the map, flow is better. just Ctrl-H it.
00:43:197 (5,1) - I expect more distance in this one because of the hitsound finish.. if possible please add a hdash here. or just move (5) at x: 32
01:27:697 (2,3,4) - this one is a bit hard, imo. please reduce the distance (3,4) by moving (4) at x: 176

nice platter.

Rain

00:31:531 (1,2) - why there's no hdash here? .-. add hdash here like what you did at 00:10:364 (5,6) - , and this one 00:32:364 (4,5) - doesn't need a hdash, beat here is not as strong as the (1,2).
01:36:114 (5,1) - i don't know why you added a hdash here, 01:34:239 (2,3) - this one needs a hdash, kindly remove the hdash at (5,1)

thats all for now, nice mapping style.

goodluck!

Momota

270 posts

Joined February 2014

Momota 2016-03-25T18:11:45+00:00

newtoniorock8 wrote:
Hello ~ #modrequestqueue

Platter

00:08:864 (1,2,3) - I think it is better if this is on the left side of the map, flow is better. just Ctrl-H it. I'm confused now o.o, if I ctrl + h flow look good, but in the next pattern looks weird: 3 maybe keep for now ;w;
00:43:197 (5,1) - I expect more distance in this one because of the hitsound finish.. if possible please add a hdash here. or just move (5) at x: 32 yeszzz, move 5 to x32, this look very nice now owo
01:27:697 (2,3,4) - this one is a bit hard, imo. please reduce the distance (3,4) by moving (4) at x: 176 reduced the distance, this is platter lol

nice platter. \(>w<)/

goodluck!

thanks 4 mod ~~netwoniorock8~~ newtoniorock8 xD

Lovez

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Volta

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Volta 2016-03-25T21:56:29+00:00

newtoniorock8 wrote:
Hello ~ #modrequestqueue

Rain

00:31:531 (1,2) - why there's no hdash here? .-. add hdash here like what you did at 00:10:364 (5,6) - , and this one 00:32:364 (4,5) - doesn't need a hdash, beat here is not as strong as the (1,2). //fixed
01:36:114 (5,1) - i don't know why you added a hdash here, 01:34:239 (2,3) - this one needs a hdash, kindly remove the hdash at (5,1) //fixed

thats all for now, nice mapping style. //c:

goodluck!

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Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-03-26T04:19:12+00:00

newtoniorock8 wrote:
Salad

00:10:197 (1,2) - what you want here is a jump, but this is doable without pressing the dash, you might wanna increase the distance of (2) to add a jump here, move it at x: 64 | no, i don't wanna make them further
00:28:697 (4,5) - , 00:30:697 (3,4) - this doesn't need a jump. please reduce the distance. | nom let them be
00:59:531 (2,3) - add a jump to emphasize the hitsound finish. | that distance should be enough
01:12:197 (7,1) - increase the distance, by moving (7) at x: 448, then move (1) at x: 192, move the tail of the slider on the white tick 01:13:197 - , then add a note on 01:13:531 - at x: 312 | they're fine actually
refer

sorry if i declined all of your mods

Prophecy

1,794 posts

Joined December 2013

Prophecy 2016-03-26T10:47:05+00:00

dam sur sir, where's my mod.

NO MOD = NO MOD for you

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-03-26T11:49:44+00:00

@newtoniorock8: I think is fine, I want this diff looks identic "easir", so that's why I don't make to like reverse slider or put a notes. and this calm part, so that's not problem to me.. and changed slider tick rate, thanks!

cecede kirain melangkah mau di renkeng.. eww, let them beeehhh lagih :C ampas nih orang2. diff gw mainsetrim ga ferlu fujih. salad tayi, dan well gw cinta dgn platur dan rain <3 buru ranked ge be el ka. mapper sialan semua. menggilas!1!! #Baper #KomunitiedCecede #fixtitiktanpakoma #bang.sad

@Prophecy: eyyy lol xd Okey, I just need wait sir whos nomination for takos. they think is tacos dem?!?! dem low bpm lolol. thx come here.

~~BANSAD~~ Update

sampah, mau nyalin oso file malah left click rendet. manjer malah ngeklik2. lfy suck. thx internet

EDIT:
wat de!!! hey sir newyimyem :U wheres ur list reqs for this map?!?!?! dont say u forget mah map.. I need poke u.. dem how busy man get into BN... ;_;

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Professor Gila

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Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-03-26T15:04:11+00:00

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autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,591 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2016-03-27T07:25:15+00:00

Hello! You requested this a long time ago... Anyways Happy Easter

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

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General]

Difficulty Spread

I think the AR of the difficulties can be increasing more gradually. Consider either AR 6, 7, 8, 9 - OR - AR 6.8, 7.4, 8, 8.6 (Seems much better)
For CS, it is minor but definitely would make a difference if Salad and Platter can get their CS changed to fit a gradual spread too.

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Cup]

Gameplay

00:05:197 (2,3) - Distance here should be enlarged a grid more to be consistent with 00:02:531 (3,4) - , while 1 grid seem to be not differing much, however the grid size is big so it would affect a lot. Keep in mind about that when altering distances. It is also recommended to change the pattern here if you don't want to see patterns not in a straight line like O O O.
00:10:197 (3,4) - Distance here should be enlarged as well to emphasize the strong drum beat at (4). I suggest increasing it to have at least the distance of 00:02:531 (3,4) - while keeping it dash-less.
00:16:197 (3,4) - Increase the distance here? Seems like it is not making any different for 00:15:531 (1,2,3,4) - where (4) begins a new stanza notified by the sound. In addition 00:15:531 (1,2) - should have the distance increased too to emphasize the drum beat. Try moving 00:15:531 (1) - to x:288.
00:34:197 (2,3) - Distance, for emphasize, refer to the distance of 00:31:531 (4,5) - .
00:36:864 (5,6) - ^
00:39:531 (2,3) - ^, in fact you can do it the same as 00:16:197 (3,4) - .
00:42:197 (1,2) - ^. Try changing 00:42:531 (2,3) - to a 1/2 slider? So it will be much easier and less strange when the distances are not even for (1,2,3).
01:09:531 (2,3) - Distance increase? (3) begins a new stanza, I think you can increase the distance by 1 grid.
01:11:531 (4,5) - Consistent with 01:08:864 (5,1) - so you either increase the distance of the former one or reduce the latter one.
01:12:531 (2,3,4) - Distance of (2,3) should be larger than (3,4) because (3) is sounding much stronger notified by the cymbal while (4) is less prominent it sounds. What about moving (3) a grid to the right?
01:14:864 (1,2) - Same as 01:09:531 (2,3) - .
01:16:864 (3,4) - , 01:22:197 (1,2) - Same as 01:11:531 (4,5) - .
01:17:530 (5,1) - , 01:20:197 (4,5) - , 01:22:863 (3,4) - Same as 01:09:531 (2,3) - .
01:32:865 (1,2,3,4) - Make some difference like 00:16:197 (3,4) - .

The difficulty is solid in my opinion, soft and fitting well as a Cup, bear in mind about the consistency though. Keep up the good work!

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Prof. Gila's Salad]

Gameplay

Insufficient dash usages. It is only required 1 dash to FC the Salad, which is definitely not enough. Please increase some of the prominent moves to make it harder, or to ensure players will dash at some points.
00:03:697 (2,3) - Distance here is a bit big, what about keeping it same as 00:01:031 (3,4) - ?
00:08:864 (2,3,4) - It is strange because the distance here seems to require dashing in order to FC but it is actually FC'able without dashing. If you encounter any parts you don't need to press your dash key, reduce the distance. Right now it is an ambiguous distance where players may suddenly dash or not.
00:10:197 (1,2,3) - I guess you tried to add dash on (1,2) but it also didn't go well like above-mentioned. Either trying to add dash on (1,2) for sure - OR - add dash at (2,3). Both works well.
00:18:531 (3,4,1) - Distance of (4,1) should be larger and adding a sure-dash because there is a clear cymbal sound at (1). In addition the patterns at 00:11:197 - 00:19:197 - is way too similar and it is just basically left-right movements. Try changing one or two of the patterns to create diversity here.
00:19:197 (1,2,3) - Keep the same distances among them, it is so strange to see the distance of (1,2) being abruptly larger while that of (2,3) is very small.
00:28:697 (4,5) - Reduce the distance here, dash doesn't work well here so it is better to reduce the distance here for clear jumping.
00:29:531 (6,1) - ^
00:30:197 (2,3,4) - This plays uncomfortably, likely players will hold their right keys in order to FC, or they catch (3) without moving fully and dash at (3,4). Such distance are ambiguous to dash usage, so it is better to reduce their distance and keep the distance ensured for dash. In this case I think you can reduce their distances.
00:31:531 (5,1) - Increase the distance for accommodating a dash here.
00:35:531 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent distances with 00:32:864 (1,2,3) - so what about keeping them the same?
00:38:197 (1,2,3) - ^, distances like this are ambiguous for dash usage too.
00:40:864 (2,3) - ^, keep the same distance between the two notes mentioned.
00:42:531 (5,6,1) - What about reducing the distance of (5,6) and ensure there will be a dash at (6,1)?
00:48:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Is it necessary to have such large distances? The sounds here are much softer than before (as there are numerous drum beats before, but here there are softer ones). Please reduce their distances. It is also uncomfortable that distances like 00:48:531 (1,2,3) - can be very timed. In fact you may add dash at 00:52:864 (6,7) - if you really want to have one at this point.
00:53:864 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^, please reduce their distances. You may add dash at 00:58:864 (4,1) - if you want - OR - at 00:59:531 (2,3) - .
01:03:531 (2,3,4) - Quite strange, what about reducing the distance at (2,3)? And increase the one at (3,4)? Right now the distances don't look uniform.
01:06:864 (1,2,3,1,2) - First of all, add dash at 01:07:031 (2,3) - because it is the begin of the chorus, which is prominent. Secondly, 01:07:197 (3,1,2) - the distances here can be reduced, the movements here are very rough and even 01:07:531 (1,2) - the dash can be applied or you can FC without dashing (if you are timed).
01:08:864 (1,2,3,4) - ^, you can keep (1,2,3) same distance while a dash at (3,4).
01:10:197 (1,2,3,4) - This is somewhat consistent with 01:07:531 (1,2) - so please do the same as what you did before.
01:13:864 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 01:06:864 (1,2,3,1,2) - so you add dash at (5,6).
01:15:531 (1,2) - Same as 01:06:864 (1,2,3,1,2) - .
01:16:864 (3,4,5,1) - Same...
01:18:197 (2,3,4) - Distances are so uneven, please use sliders with same distances in between the slider head and tail.
01:19:531 (5,6,7,8) - a
01:20:864 (1,2,3) - Hey...
01:22:864 (6,1) - What about having a dash here? (1) is clearly indicated with a cymbal, notifying that it is a prominent beat. You may move 01:23:197 (1,2,3) - to the right if you want to keep the pattern, or any other means of solving it.
01:25:531 (4,5,6,1,2) - This part sounds really strong, because of the two cymbals at 01:25:864 - and 01:26:864 - so I advise you to add dash at 01:25:531 (4,5) - and also 01:26:531 (1,2) - (ensure it is only FC'able with dashes).
01:29:531 (2,3,4,5) - Why is the distance at (2,3,4) is suddenly enlarged? I don't see (3) and (4) prominent so please reduce them. Also it is coming to the end meaning it is a soft part, hence distances can be smaller. In fact, why is 01:30:865 (1) - with the NC?
01:33:531 (6,1) - I suggest making some distances here, it feels motionless at this point.
01:35:364 (3,4) - ^

In my opinion the Salad still need a bit of work before pushing onward.

[

Momot's Platter]

Gameplay

00:03:531 (5,6) - Distance here can be smaller like what you did at 00:00:864 (2,3) - . If you notice clearly, you should move (6) 2 grid more to the left.
00:04:864 (1,2) - Is that really necessary to add dash in middle? I don't think (2) is prominent and I think you did that because of symmetry? Try reducing their distance, maybe keeping the distance like 00:03:531 (5,6) - ?
00:11:197 (1,2,3,4,5) - aaa Too many dashes at this point in my opinion. Reduce their distances please, especially 00:11:864 (4,5,6) - because (5,6) is already a dash so (4,5) can be reduced.
00:13:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:16:530 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:19:697 (4,5) - The dash here is not comfortable, it feels a bit forced so reducing the distance here would do well.
00:27:531 (4,5,6) - Please make it dash-free like what you did at 00:24:864 (4,5) - and 00:22:197 (2,3) - , they are consistent!
00:30:197 (4,5) - ^
00:34:197 (7,8,1) - See if you can reduce the distance at (8,1), as it will be too hard requiring players to hold dash for 2 circles. You may do it like 00:36:864 (7,8,1) - .
00:39:531 (1,2,3) - ^
00:43:197 - 00:45:197 - Why is this part mapped with left-right massive jumping? This is sounding softer and it should be with smaller degree of jumping. Occasional dashes would be fine but they should be applied based on the rhythm. Please rework here.
00:48:031 (6,7) - Do it like 00:42:864 (4,5) - by adding a dash.
00:48:531 - 00:50:197 - Same as 00:43:197 - 00:45:197 - .
00:51:864 (10,1,2,3,4) - A bit hard to manage the dash and the afterward movements because (1,2,3,4) forms a big slope while there is a dash at (10,1). This would create numerous unexpected dashes, for example, player A will dash at (10,1) then move to the left, and dash at (3,4). Player B will dash at (10,1) and move to the left, dashing at (2,3). Please ensure the players will dash over the same place, this would fit to the rhythm more clearly.
00:52:864 (5,6,7) - Try increasing the distance of (5,6) while lowering the one at (6,7), to make it similar as 00:40:864 (4,5,6) - .
00:56:531 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this part can be dash-free, in order to create a build-up for 00:58:197 (7,8) - .
00:59:697 (3,4,5) - The HDash is fine, what I am going to point out is (4,5), because the part here requires players to hold dash, which is not so advisable for such soft Platters. What about lowering the distance of (4,5)? You may have to rework on 01:00:864 (5,6,7,8) - to make it easier as well.
01:01:864 (1,2,3,4) - Unnecessary jumping, please reduce their distances.
01:03:864 (8,9) - Reduce the distance here, the dash is forced.
01:06:531 (1,2,3,4,1) - Reduce the distances between (1,2) and (3,4), they create dashes in between. Secondly, remove the HDash at (2,3), it feels unnecessary because (3) is not a prominent beat either. Lastly, add HDash at (4,1), you probably missed it out really.
01:09:197 (2,3,4,5) - Double dashes. Please remove one of them, probably 01:09:197 (2,3) - and 01:09:864 (4,5) - .
01:14:531 (7,1,2,3,4) - This is hard because they form a big slope. Try reducing the distances between them so players won't dash without following to the rhythm. Add one at 01:15:030 (3,4) - if you really need it.
01:20:531 (4,5) - Remove the dash?
01:22:864 (4,5,1) - This is so hard because the distances among them are really big. Reduce the distance of (4,5) while keeping a dash, and remove dash at (5,1).
01:25:197 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - aaa Unnecessary jumping. Please don't use left-right jumping patterns on medium difficulties like Platter, it is just an introduction of HDashes and a bit advanced techniques about dashing, but not for massive left-right jumping. They require precision.
01:33:531 (4,1,2) - Reduce their distances please, keep the dash at (4,1) but remove the one at (1,2).
01:38:176 (8,9) - The jump here is uncomfortable, add a HDash here?

The Platter also need some work.

[

Volt's Rain]

Gameplay

00:05:531 (2,3) - A rough HDash right here because (2) is a straight-pointed slider, which form a big slope. Players may not be able to react quickly after catching the HDash. I suggest inclining (1) a bit to make it easier.
00:10:197 (4,5,6) - It is fine but (4,5) kind of requiring dash, so I suggest reducing the distance of (4,5) while keeping HDash at (5,6).
00:13:531 (1,2) - HDash here can be removed in my opinion. I guess you are adding HDashes when there are drum beats behind. So (2) is not prominent beat and it shouldn't be emphasized, normal dashes are okay though.
00:18:531 (5,1) - Please remove the HDash between them, and also see if you can reduce the distance to dash-free as well, for a good build-up before the stream.
00:32:864 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit hard because it consists of numerous consecutive jumping, most likely players will hold their dashes at this point. I think holding dashes impede rhythm so I suggest removing the dashes and keep one instead, for example 00:32:864 (1,2) - (more recommended as to keep consistency with 00:35:531 (3,4) - ) - OR - 00:33:364 (3,4) - .
00:38:531 (4,5,6) - Reduce the distances here as to keep consistency with something like the above-mentioned.
00:39:864 (8,1,2) - What about reducing the distance at (8,1) while keeping a dash at (1,2)?
00:41:197 (4,5,6) - Same as 00:38:531 (4,5,6) - .
00:51:864 (2,3,4) - Weird movement, please change to easier patterns like double sliders, or 4 circles or anything else, this kind of wiggling movements are confusing.
00:52:864 (1,2) - Difficult because the HDash here are large and mostly people will overshoot and miss. Even if they can catch (2), they will miss subsequently because (2) is very big in extent of movements.
00:54:197 (1,2) - Incline (1) a bit because (1) also consist a big movement.
00:54:531 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - What is the reason of enlarging the distance at this point? This part is very soft! Please rework.
00:56:864 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:54:197 (1,2) - .
00:59:531 (1,2) - ^
01:06:531 (1,2,3) - Wiggling movement, I suggest changing this to another sort of patterns.
01:07:531 (2,3,4) - Any reason to add HDash on (2,3)? What about removing it and add a mild dash at (2,3) instead? (3) don't sound really prominent comparing to (4) so it is better not to have double HDashes.
01:09:531 (4,5) - Like 00:54:197 (1,2) - .
01:09:864 (5,6) - The distance here is very big. It can cause fail if players miss the jump here, letting them fail by missing the later parts requiring HDashes. You may reverse 01:10:197 (6,7,8) - through the y axis using the Ctrl+H.
01:12:531 (4,5,6) - Better not to have a dash including 2 notes together, it will cause timed movements. I suggest reducing the distance between (4,5) while keeping a dash at (5,6) so people will just dash at (5,6) but not at (4,5) and wishing to catch (6) with the same dash.
01:13:864 (2,3,4) - ^
01:14:697 (1,2,3,4) - Please lower their distances while keeping HDashes. It is not necessary to have such large distances, a smaller distance can still accommodate HDashes. Doing so can make it less harsh when players miss a HDash.
01:18:197 (6,7,8) - Same as 01:07:531 (2,3,4) - .
01:20:364 (3,4,5,6) - Like 01:14:697 (1,2,3,4) - .
01:23:197 (5,6,7,8) - Please rework here, it consists of numerous consecutive dashes, which can be really hard to manage.
01:25:197 (2,3,4) - Reduce the distances among the circles, it suddenly require dash at (3,4) which impedes the rhythm in my opinion.
01:26:197 (6,7) - The jump here is a bit large, what about inclining (6)?
01:34:239 (2,3) - Are you adding HDash here like 01:28:865 (2,3) - ? They are consistent.
01:36:114 (5,1) - Oh well, this dash is way too hard because it is close to having a HDash in middle. Please reduce their distance while keeping the HDash at 01:36:864 (2,3) - .

The Rain is fine but some tweaks are still needed to be applied.

Good luck!

AFB

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-03-27T07:32:18+00:00

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[ Prof. Gila's Salad]

Gameplay
Insufficient dash usages. It is only required 1 dash to FC the Salad, which is definitely not enough. Please increase some of the prominent moves to make it harder, or to ensure players will dash at some points.
00:03:697 (2,3) - Distance here is a bit big, what about keeping it same as 00:01:031 (3,4) - ? | since the difference isn't very far, i prefer to let them be
00:08:864 (2,3,4) - It is strange because the distance here seems to require dashing in order to FC but it is actually FC'able without dashing. If you encounter any parts you don't need to press your dash key, reduce the distance. Right now it is an ambiguous distance where players may suddenly dash or not. | i honestly don't like make most patterns so far. Only 00:09:031 (3,4) requires dash
00:10:197 (1,2,3) - I guess you tried to add dash on (1,2) but it also didn't go well like above-mentioned. Either trying to add dash on (1,2) for sure - OR - add dash at (2,3). Both works well. | great idea! i changed the,
00:18:531 (3,4,1) - Distance of (4,1) should be larger and adding a sure-dash because there is a clear cymbal sound at (1). In addition the patterns at 00:11:197 - 00:19:197 - is way too similar and it is just basically left-right movements. Try changing one or two of the patterns to create diversity here. | i prefer 00:18:531 (3,4) requires dash
00:19:197 (1,2,3) - Keep the same distances among them, it is so strange to see the distance of (1,2) being abruptly larger while that of (2,3) is very small. | !ye
00:28:697 (4,5) - Reduce the distance here, dash doesn't work well here so it is better to reduce the distance here for clear jumping. | !ye
00:29:531 (6,1) - ^ | ^
00:30:197 (2,3,4) - This plays uncomfortably, likely players will hold their right keys in order to FC, or they catch (3) without moving fully and dash at (3,4). Such distance are ambiguous to dash usage, so it is better to reduce their distance and keep the distance ensured for dash. In this case I think you can reduce their distances. | only 00:30:197 (2,3) i reduced them
00:31:531 (5,1) - Increase the distance for accommodating a dash here. | a bit
00:35:531 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent distances with 00:32:864 (1,2,3) - so what about keeping them the same? | if i keep them the same, the distance might make them further
00:38:197 (1,2,3) - ^, distances like this are ambiguous for dash usage too. | again, i don't like make most distance so far
00:40:864 (2,3) - ^, keep the same distance between the two notes mentioned. | it might be rough to make them further
00:42:531 (5,6,1) - What about reducing the distance of (5,6) and ensure there will be a dash at (6,1)? | !ye
00:48:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Is it necessary to have such large distances? The sounds here are much softer than before (as there are numerous drum beats before, but here there are softer ones). Please reduce their distances. It is also uncomfortable that distances like 00:48:531 (1,2,3) - can be very timed. In fact you may add dash at 00:52:864 (6,7) - if you really want to have one at this point. | !ye
00:53:864 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^, please reduce their distances. You may add dash at 00:58:864 (4,1) - if you want - OR - at 00:59:531 (2,3) - . | i made them some dash
01:03:531 (2,3,4) - Quite strange, what about reducing the distance at (2,3)? And increase the one at (3,4)? Right now the distances don't look uniform. | i guess
01:06:864 (1,2,3,1,2) - First of all, add dash at 01:07:031 (2,3) - because it is the begin of the chorus, which is prominent. Secondly, 01:07:197 (3,1,2) - the distances here can be reduced, the movements here are very rough and even 01:07:531 (1,2) - the dash can be applied or you can FC without dashing (if you are timed). | !ye
01:08:864 (1,2,3,4) - ^, you can keep (1,2,3) same distance while a dash at (3,4). | i better reduce the distance
01:10:197 (1,2,3,4) - This is somewhat consistent with 01:07:531 (1,2) - so please do the same as what you did before. | they're sliders, the distance should be different
01:13:864 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 01:06:864 (1,2,3,1,2) - so you add dash at (5,6). | just reduce their distance
01:15:531 (1,2) - Same as 01:06:864 (1,2,3,1,2) - . | why do i have to make them further?
01:16:864 (3,4,5,1) - Same... | the distance should be fine for any reasons
01:18:197 (2,3,4) - Distances are so uneven, please use sliders with same distances in between the slider head and tail. | why is it so uneven when the pattern should give you comfort to play
01:19:531 (5,6,7,8) - a | ngeng
01:20:864 (1,2,3) - Hey... | ngeng
01:22:864 (6,1) - What about having a dash here? (1) is clearly indicated with a cymbal, notifying that it is a prominent beat. You may move 01:23:197 (1,2,3) - to the right if you want to keep the pattern, or any other means of solving it. | !ye
01:25:531 (4,5,6,1,2) - This part sounds really strong, because of the two cymbals at 01:25:864 - and 01:26:864 - so I advise you to add dash at 01:25:531 (4,5) - and also 01:26:531 (1,2) - (ensure it is only FC'able with dashes). | modified a bit
01:29:531 (2,3,4,5) - Why is the distance at (2,3,4) is suddenly enlarged? I don't see (3) and (4) prominent so please reduce them. Also it is coming to the end meaning it is a soft part, hence distances can be smaller. In fact, why is 01:30:865 (1) - with the NC? | 01:29:531 (2,3,4) - i make them closer, 01:30:865 (1) - i accidentally NC'd it
01:33:531 (6,1) - I suggest making some distances here, it feels motionless at this point. | at that point, i aim it for comfort since the beat getting slow
01:35:364 (3,4) - ^ | ^

In my opinion the Salad still need a bit of work before pushing onward.

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Prophecy

1,794 posts

Joined December 2013

Prophecy 2016-03-27T08:22:26+00:00

AFB pro :>

Volta

1,622 posts

Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-03-27T10:04:19+00:00

holy mother of mod. wait, gonna do the tweaks.

edit: will reply properly tomorrow or day after. something comes up.
btw, saladnya masih kayak tai. gw coba mod deh ntar.

edit v1.05: Prof.gila, what kind of response is 'nope', 'ngeng' , 'let them be', etc. pls give an explanation why do you think it is better than the suggestion. something like 'i just don't want to do it' is not a proper reason and will not make the quality any better.

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Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-03-27T11:01:08+00:00

wtf Lidahapi please to be kind xd hahaha sorry for that behavior of thats guy, afb.. But I think he just trying to be friendly? wtf u lidahapi xd

Will check mod soon for my cup!

EDIT:

nice gerakan pak panci.. ya mungkin dia masih berlagak friendly.. tapi ya,.. mas lidahapi plis kadang2 orang bkal jengkel juga kalau situ gitu trus.. please kalau dia serius ya bales serius.. boleh2 aja spam gitu kalau dia emang udah beri penjelasan dan males ngomong lagi, otherswiser kata2 joke buat ngehibur. boleh aja bales "ye" "nah" or ":p" this dem emotes.. yah sadarlah mas kawkawk
deep care salad, mohon kerjasama pak panci!!.. I hope this not have problem on future, maslah hanya untuk IRL brah ( dan knp dimap2 gw di banyakan setara Normal diff itu kurang bagus.. weteef baper ) buat dia sadar dan bertaubat :V ( jgn lupa pake Indo karena sesama bangsa, ntar jgn jgn responnya sama kek gitu :U )

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,591 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2016-03-27T12:22:08+00:00

Please reply with concrete reasons, as a respect to the one modding the mapset. Modders usually spend a lot of time and so it is much deserved to have elaboration on why you disagree to fix or something else.

It is also a better choice as to clarify the reasons why you do so, making the ranking progress easy

Momota

270 posts

Joined February 2014

Momota 2016-03-27T12:57:07+00:00

pls volta :UuUuUuU
pdhl gw udah nahan biar ga komen di ntu diff.komatitik.

will replying afb mod ntar subuh, subuh is best for relaxed my mood

powered by google trasnleted

edit, forget to lol
edit[two] dam sir sur i forget how to english, add 'replying' things :V

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Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-03-27T13:01:27+00:00

You mean wanna "mod" or "replying a mod"? nice powerd by gagel translate.. plis blame salad mapper ( please how to make him normally on replying a mod? or he's have disruption on his self?, wtf I just nothing... )

alienflybot wrote:
Hello! You requested this a long time ago... Anyways Happy Easter happy eggeastternn, dem meme xd

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ General]

Difficulty Spread
I think the AR of the difficulties can be increasing more gradually. Consider either AR 6, 7, 8, 9 - OR - AR 6.8, 7.4, 8, 8.6 (Seems much better) maybe 6-7-8-9 would good for overall since slow bpm xd oke ya pada?
For CS, it is minor but definitely would make a difference if Salad and Platter can get their CS changed to fit a gradual spread too.

[ Cup]

Gameplay
00:05:197 (2,3) - Distance here should be enlarged a grid more to be consistent with 00:02:531 (3,4) - , while 1 grid seem to be not differing much, however the grid size is big so it would affect a lot. Keep in mind about that when altering distances. It is also recommended to change the pattern here if you don't want to see patterns not in a straight line like O O O. sure
00:10:197 (3,4) - Distance here should be enlarged as well to emphasize the strong drum beat at (4). I suggest increasing it to have at least the distance of 00:02:531 (3,4) - while keeping it dash-less. yes, did on there
00:16:197 (3,4) - Increase the distance here? Seems like it is not making any different for 00:15:531 (1,2,3,4) - where (4) begins a new stanza notified by the sound. In addition 00:15:531 (1,2) - should have the distance increased too to emphasize the drum beat. Try moving 00:15:531 (1) - to x:288. yes this fit with flow
00:34:197 (2,3) - Distance, for emphasize, refer to the distance of 00:31:531 (4,5) - .
00:36:864 (5,6) - ^ applied and above
00:39:531 (2,3) - ^, in fact you can do it the same as 00:16:197 (3,4) - . yes
00:42:197 (1,2) - ^. Try changing 00:42:531 (2,3) - to a 1/2 slider? So it will be much easier and less strange when the distances are not even for (1,2,3). yeah, nice on flow!
01:09:531 (2,3) - Distance increase? (3) begins a new stanza, I think you can increase the distance by 1 grid. yep, move to right for (2)
01:11:531 (4,5) - Consistent with 01:08:864 (5,1) - so you either increase the distance of the former one or reduce the latter one. yep!
01:12:531 (2,3,4) - Distance of (2,3) should be larger than (3,4) because (3) is sounding much stronger notified by the cymbal while (4) is less prominent it sounds. What about moving (3) a grid to the right? yes, that is more to works on slider emphasize
01:14:864 (1,2) - Same as 01:09:531 (2,3) - . move (5) to center
01:16:864 (3,4) - , 01:22:197 (1,2) - Same as 01:11:531 (4,5) - .
01:17:530 (5,1) - , 01:20:197 (4,5) - , 01:22:863 (3,4) - Same as 01:09:531 (2,3) - . applied all for consistency
01:32:865 (1,2,3,4) - Make some difference like 00:16:197 (3,4) - . yes make it consistent for reverse pattern

The difficulty is solid in my opinion, soft and fitting well as a Cup, bear in mind about the consistency though. Keep up the good work! Thank you very much, AFB!

Good luck!

AFB

thanks for helpful suggestion!

waiting others CtB GDs, also for lidahapi

tolong buat beri penjelasan di reply modnya AFB kenapa kamu tolak dan begitu saja seenaknya menjawab seperti itu
( edit plox your post, man... )

aku sebagai mapper juga perlu memberikan explain untuk mod yg di reject (direject, direject, direjecet ajahh~~ :V) agar si modder paham dan merasa ga seperti, " ihh ni orang ngeselin gaje amat", " ya ampun kok kata2 cuma digituin :C", " mending gw pensi osh aja kalau mapper reply kek gitu " ya contohnya semacam ini.

meanwhile

jika sebagai modder... please ngetik dengan alasan itu capek tau.. apa lagi di reply mapper malah seenaknya kek kamu, atau juga ga bisa serius. please kondisikan waktu buat serius dan buat ga serius.. karna ying&yang itu keseimbangan kehidupan (: heheh ngejoke lah biar situ ga bete liat kata2 gw

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-03-27T16:09:10+00:00

ahahahahahahh

i easily get stressed to see those :c

Volta

1,622 posts

Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-03-28T11:25:47+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
Hello! You requested this a long time ago... Anyways Happy Easter

█ Not changed --- █ Fixed

[ Volt's Rain]

Gameplay
00:05:531 (2,3) - A rough HDash right here because (2) is a straight-pointed slider, which form a big slope. Players may not be able to react quickly after catching the HDash. I suggest inclining (1) a bit to make it easier. %do you mean to incline (3) ? lowered the slider's end so it is easier to catch. made it so less skilled player would likely to missed the droplets, a bit challenging to FC it
00:10:197 (4,5,6) - It is fine but (4,5) kind of requiring dash, so I suggest reducing the distance of (4,5) while keeping HDash at (5,6). %reduced the distance so it's more clear that (4,5) doesn't require dash
00:13:531 (1,2) - HDash here can be removed in my opinion. I guess you are adding HDashes when there are drum beats behind. So (2) is not prominent beat and it shouldn't be emphasized, normal dashes are okay though. %the HDash fits the stressed piano sound here so i'd like to keep it
00:18:531 (5,1) - Please remove the HDash between them, and also see if you can reduce the distance to dash-free as well, for a good build-up before the stream. %removed hyper, but made it still need dash because of drum thing
00:32:864 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit hard because it consists of numerous consecutive jumping, most likely players will hold their dashes at this point. I think holding dashes impede rhythm so I suggest removing the dashes and keep one instead, for example 00:32:864 (1,2) - (more recommended as to keep consistency with 00:35:531 (3,4) - ) - OR - 00:33:364 (3,4) - . %good point. moved 00:33:197 (2) - to x:428 so player will most likely only dash here to catch the drum beat. i bet after foreseeing slider at 00:33:531 (4) - they will stop dashing
00:38:531 (4,5,6) - Reduce the distances here as to keep consistency with something like the above-mentioned. %yes
00:39:864 (8,1,2) - What about reducing the distance at (8,1) while keeping a dash at (1,2)? %fixed
00:41:197 (4,5,6) - Same as 00:38:531 (4,5,6) - . %ye
00:51:864 (2,3,4) - Weird movement, please change to easier patterns like double sliders, or 4 circles or anything else, this kind of wiggling movements are confusing. %still unclear how i should put 4 circles or double sliders. revised the pattern anyway.
00:52:864 (1,2) - Difficult because the HDash here are large and mostly people will overshoot and miss. Even if they can catch (2), they will miss subsequently because (2) is very big in extent of movements. %ye, revised so have mirrored pattern of 00:46:531 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
00:54:197 (1,2) - Incline (1) a bit because (1) also consist a big movement.%fixed every incline suggestion
00:54:531 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - What is the reason of enlarging the distance at this point? This part is very soft! Please rework. %because the drumplay is different than previous section. but reduced some distance in this..
00:56:864 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:54:197 (1,2) - .
00:59:531 (1,2) - ^
01:06:531 (1,2,3) - Wiggling movement, I suggest changing this to another sort of patterns. %i can't think other pattern right now, and wiggling movement fits with the piano sound here imo.
01:07:531 (2,3,4) - Any reason to add HDash on (2,3)? What about removing it and add a mild dash at (2,3) instead? (3) don't sound really prominent comparing to (4) so it is better not to have double HDashes. %ok, reduced distance
01:09:531 (4,5) - Like 00:54:197 (1,2) - .
01:09:864 (5,6) - The distance here is very big. It can cause fail if players miss the jump here, letting them fail by missing the later parts requiring HDashes. You may reverse 01:10:197 (6,7,8) - through the y axis using the Ctrl+H. %i want to make the kiai the hardest part. if they fail here, that means they're not ready to jump.
01:12:531 (4,5,6) - Better not to have a dash including 2 notes together, it will cause timed movements. I suggest reducing the distance between (4,5) while keeping a dash at (5,6) so people will just dash at (5,6) but not at (4,5) and wishing to catch (6) with the same dash. %good point. reduced distance
01:13:864 (2,3,4) - ^
01:14:697 (1,2,3,4) - Please lower their distances while keeping HDashes. It is not necessary to have such large distances, a smaller distance can still accommodate HDashes. Doing so can make it less harsh when players miss a HDash. %ooo right. i still don't know a minimum distance to create hdash..
01:18:197 (6,7,8) - Same as 01:07:531 (2,3,4) - .%fixed
01:20:364 (3,4,5,6) - Like 01:14:697 (1,2,3,4) - . ^
01:23:197 (5,6,7,8) - Please rework here, it consists of numerous consecutive dashes, which can be really hard to manage. %reworked
01:25:197 (2,3,4) - Reduce the distances among the circles, it suddenly require dash at (3,4) which impedes the rhythm in my opinion. %agreed
01:26:197 (6,7) - The jump here is a bit large, what about inclining (6)?
01:34:239 (2,3) - Are you adding HDash here like 01:28:865 (2,3) - ? They are consistent. %the bpm is changing (slower) and the song is about to end so i give exception here
01:36:114 (5,1) - Oh well, this dash is way too hard because it is close to having a HDash in middle. Please reduce their distance while keeping the HDash at 01:36:864 (2,3) - . %ok

The Rain is fine but some tweaks are still needed to be applied.

Good luck!

AFB

thanks!

i'm hungry..

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Last edited by Volta 2016-03-28T11:28:01+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-03-28T11:27:54+00:00

also i confused how to respond if i reject them

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-03-28T12:37:06+00:00

Professor Gila wrote:
also i confused how to respond if i reject them

so you mapping that diff with feels confuse? and dont know how that mapped? I will delete it. by e
if you've apologize to him, I still doubt with your diff and your response at modder.. Please..
EDIT: p/4994039 Ok

Checking HS on Lidah & Volta diff, fixed Preview time, and wait Momota reply.

Momota

270 posts

Joined February 2014

Momota 2016-03-28T20:52:45+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
Hello! You requested this a long time ago... Anyways Happy Easter

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Gameplay
00:03:531 (5,6) - Distance here can be smaller like what you did at 00:00:864 (2,3) - . If you notice clearly, you should move (6) 2 grid more to the left. moved
00:04:864 (1,2) - Is that really necessary to add dash in middle? I don't think (2) is prominent and I think you did that because of symmetry? Try reducing their distance, maybe keeping the distance like 00:03:531 (5,6) - ? rework the note
00:11:197 (1,2,3,4,5) - aaa Too many dashes at this point in my opinion. Reduce their distances please, especially 00:11:864 (4,5,6) - because (5,6) is already a dash so (4,5) can be reduced.reduced the dash
00:13:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:16:530 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:19:697 (4,5) - The dash here is not comfortable, it feels a bit forced so reducing the distance here would do well. rework the note
00:27:531 (4,5,6) - Please make it dash-free like what you did at 00:24:864 (4,5) - and 00:22:197 (2,3) - , they are consistent! fixed 4,5 add dash on 5,6
00:30:197 (4,5) - ^ fixed
00:34:197 (7,8,1) - See if you can reduce the distance at (8,1), as it will be too hard requiring players to hold dash for 2 circles. You may do it like 00:36:864 (7,8,1) - . make it same like 00:36:864 (7,8,1)
00:39:531 (1,2,3) - ^ not changed,maybe because there is a slider on the pattern
00:43:197 - 00:45:197 - Why is this part mapped with left-right massive jumping? This is sounding softer and it should be with smaller degree of jumping. Occasional dashes would be fine but they should be applied based on the rhythm. Please rework here. remap, change to slider
00:48:031 (6,7) - Do it like 00:42:864 (4,5) - by adding a dash. added but less spacing
00:48:531 - 00:50:197 - Same as 00:43:197 - 00:45:197 - .remap and change to slider
00:51:864 (10,1,2,3,4) - A bit hard to manage the dash and the afterward movements because (1,2,3,4) forms a big slope while there is a dash at (10,1). This would create numerous unexpected dashes, for example, player A will dash at (10,1) then move to the left, and dash at (3,4). Player B will dash at (10,1) and move to the left, dashing at (2,3). Please ensure the players will dash over the same place, this would fit to the rhythm more clearly. im sorry when i click 0:51:864 (10,1,2,3,4) - not point to note ;w; maybe i make mistake on combo when i change note to slider
00:52:864 (5,6,7) - Try increasing the distance of (5,6) while lowering the one at (6,7), to make it similar as 00:40:864 (4,5,6) - .fixed
00:56:531 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this part can be dash-free, in order to create a build-up for 00:58:197 (7,8) - . not changed because i will try that pattern
00:59:697 (3,4,5) - The HDash is fine, what I am going to point out is (4,5), because the part here requires players to hold dash, which is not so advisable for such soft Platters. What about lowering the distance of (4,5)? You may have to rework on 01:00:864 (5,6,7,8) - to make it easier as well. reduce the spacing 01:00:864 (5,6,7,8) -
01:01:864 (1,2,3,4) - Unnecessary jumping, please reduce their distances. reduced
01:03:864 (8,9) - Reduce the distance here, the dash is forced. reduced
01:06:531 (1,2,3,4,1) - Reduce the distances between (1,2) and (3,4), they create dashes in between. Secondly, remove the HDash at (2,3), it feels unnecessary because (3) is not a prominent beat either. Lastly, add HDash at (4,1), you probably missed it out really.remap on here
01:09:197 (2,3,4,5) - Double dashes. Please remove one of them, probably 01:09:197 (2,3) - and 01:09:864 (4,5) - . reduced the dash, and keep dash on 3,4
01:14:531 (7,1,2,3,4) - This is hard because they form a big slope. Try reducing the distances between them so players won't dash without following to the rhythm. Add one at 01:15:030 (3,4) - if you really need it.remap 7,1,2,3,4 and i need the dash, because finish hitsound on there ^^
01:20:531 (4,5) - Remove the dash? keep the dash, no too hard maybe, and for continue the pattern after finish
01:22:864 (4,5,1) - This is so hard because the distances among them are really big. Reduce the distance of (4,5) while keeping a dash, and remove dash at (5,1). remap on here, make it less dash spacing
01:25:197 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - aaa Unnecessary jumping. Please don't use left-right jumping patterns on medium difficulties like Platter, it is just an introduction of HDashes and a bit advanced techniques about dashing, but not for massive left-right jumping. They require precision. remap on here
01:33:531 (4,1,2) - Reduce their distances please, keep the dash at (4,1) but remove the one at (1,2). reduced
01:38:176 (8,9) - The jump here is uncomfortable, add a HDash here? make it like i remap on 00:19:197 - but change the distance dash and not add dash on 8,9

The Platter also need some work.

Good luck!

AFB

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Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-03-28T21:25:29+00:00

~~<- omg my avatars looking at dat face!1!!~~ Edit: not again, dem bruce almgihttyy!1!!

Momota wrote:

level up

kawkawkawk de power of 4000wat/liter.. I get it from Kunglao-Sensei bcus his power has "Lightningsssss"
too many "s" because feels cool and BRRRRrrr~~~

Checked hitsound and fixed combo as Momota reqs, also Ive changed AR of all CtB diffs
Update

Last edited by Surono 2016-03-29T18:32:21+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-03-28T22:15:47+00:00

ah shiet pake gambar begituan segala :u

( ._.)~ alienflybot

(poke alienflybot to give bubble)

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-03-28T22:26:37+00:00

omg!11!!! wat de coeg!1!! napa gw PFin si rain :U wtf I nub ctb but yeah dem.

dem luv it shiitt ctb 3< ~~~~~

Professor Gila wrote:
ah shiet pake gambar begituan segala :u

( ._.)~ alienflybot

(poke alienflybot to give bubble)

not Icon for mode which have checked for first? or it can insta buble and qualify? but I just know if first is Icon'd>Bubble>Qualify
okey waiting for re-check, maybe

Prophecy

1,794 posts

Joined December 2013

Prophecy 2016-04-02T13:14:46+00:00

hi S , P's Modding Queue v2
Mod No. : 23/0.5k
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[K]
00:19:531 (20) - del , I don't know why you adding this, it's basically no usage.
01:07:197 (1,2) - heavy sound, you can change to D D or D d or d D , as you want.
01:12:531 (6) - same as above D or k because 01:15:197 (10) - you use k at heavy sound
01:17:864 (1,2) - same as 01:07:197 (1,2)
01:20:530 (3,4) - higher pitch so k k? try to follow before

01:36:864 (19,20,21) - wtf, you overkill Kantan player. 01:37:239 (20) - delete.

Nice job!, Mr.S

[F]
01:06:531 - the sound start here, it's stick to 01:07:197 (1) - , maybe add d d and become ddk or something else?
01:08:197 (3) - seems better if it's D
01:10:531 (6,7) - same as Kantan, check again.
01:13:530 (11) - D
01:14:197 (12) - you ruin the pattern x xxx , please delete it

Well done! Mr.S

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GL~ Like this lazy short name xP
- Mr.P

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-04-02T18:31:58+00:00

Prophecy wrote:
hi S , P's Modding Queue v2 ver 2?!?!??!?!?!?
Mod No. : 23/0.5k ET,.
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and I saw you modding like, dem modder fekeh with re-SUN, guudd. gudgudgitgud gudgit
[K] ok, ty ty ty for low diff mod!! I need thiz!!
00:19:531 (20) - del , I don't know why you adding this, it's basically no usage. dem, bcus Futsuu has 5plet 1/2, so on here is 3plet 1/2. and I think is fine since slow bpm imo
01:07:197 (1,2) - heavy sound, you can change to D D or D d or d D , as you want.
01:12:531 (6) - same as above D or k because 01:15:197 (10) - you use k at heavy sound
01:17:864 (1,2) - same as 01:07:197 (1,2)
01:20:530 (3,4) - higher pitch so k k? try to follow before for overall, I not looking for finisher on this song. I likely to make it same ( finisher just on strong sounds ) it makes inconsistent on others diff
01:36:864 (19,20,21) - wtf, you overkill Kantan player. 01:37:239 (20) - delete. a

Nice job!, Mr.S !!11!11!

[F]
01:06:531 - the sound start here, it's stick to 01:07:197 (1) - , maybe add d d and become ddk or something else? 01:06:864 - added kat for better spread with Muzu
01:08:197 (3) - seems better if it's D
01:10:531 (6,7) - same as Kantan, check again.
01:13:530 (11) - D same comment on kantan mod
01:14:197 (12) - you ruin the pattern x xxx , please delete it hmm kantan is ddk 1/2 ( and changed to dd k bcus futsuu just xxxx pattern ), so I think is already ruin the diff as kantan, but I say again this fine since bpm and for more changelling newuser. both of this low diff

Well done! Mr.S thanks Mr." "

[]
GL~ Like this lazy short name xP please, its not real, change ur username now
- Mr.P

ty ty

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2016-04-07T01:55:31+00:00

Hi Surono! Sorry about the delay!

[Kantan]

00:09:197 (9) - This note sounds rather weird. I presume that your intention is to add at least something before the next part (00:10:197 - ) commences. But the thing is, your previous rhythms have always followed the bass, so to me adding a note on another sound would sounds weird for this case. If I were you, I would remove the note to keep consistency.

[Futsuu]

00:24:864 (41) - It could only be me, but this note feels out of place for me, as it doesn't go with the rhythm in this part. You usually go for two notes 00:21:864 (36,37) - in this calm section. I don't know about you, but I would remove this note.
00:59:864 - A don fits better when it's followed by a finisher but with the opposite color. This ensure that players won't have any uncomfortable plays, since you need to tap the same key twice if it's kat + big kat.
01:23:864 (11) - 01:26:531 (15) - The same suggestion above applies to these two notes.

[Muzukashii]

I don't think I can find anything wrong with this difficulty. Good job!

[Oni]

01:03:197 (214) - Maybe a don? The piano is less high than the piano on 01:02:864 (212,213) -.
00:50:530 (165) - 00:50:530 (165) - Same suggestion as above. It would break the constant and boring pattern here.

Not very much stuff there is to say in Oni. I think the notes are perfectly following everything in the music. Like Muzukashii, good job!

Call me back when you updated everything!

Volta

1,622 posts

Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-04-07T04:12:53+00:00

ah nice the taikos is just a click away. but ctb still need to polish more..

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-04-07T05:40:21+00:00

sheela wrote:
Hi Surono! Sorry about the delay! omg!! sheela was here, but my sp not 108 `L_`

[Kantan]
00:09:197 (9) - This note sounds rather weird. I presume that your intention is to add at least something before the next part (00:10:197 - ) commences. But the thing is, your previous rhythms have always followed the bass, so to me adding a note on another sound would sounds weird for this case. If I were you, I would remove the note to keep consistency. yeah I just forced to follow that instrument. yep I followd the bass. so moved 00:10:531 - here cus kick drum is akward emphasize lol
[Futsuu]
00:24:864 (41) - It could only be me, but this note feels out of place for me, as it doesn't go with the rhythm in this part. You usually go for two notes 00:21:864 (36,37) - in this calm section. I don't know about you, but I would remove this note. ups forgot remove it, fixed
00:59:864 - A don fits better when it's followed by a finisher but with the opposite color. This ensure that players won't have any uncomfortable plays, since you need to tap the same key twice if it's kat + big kat.
01:23:864 (11) - 01:26:531 (15) - The same suggestion above applies to these two notes. and it seems for playable.. dem my think.. okay acceptd all!
[Muzukashii]
I don't think I can find anything wrong with this difficulty. Good job! ty Shela!
[Oni]
01:03:197 (214) - Maybe a don? The piano is less high than the piano on 01:02:864 (212,213) -. it sounds like, ddk for piano pitch.. thats why I placed kkk for emphasize the all piano. so I think is better contrast at this part
00:50:530 (165) - 00:50:530 (165) - Same suggestion as above. It would break the constant and boring pattern here. lol timestamp is rip at one, 00:45:197 - changed don and 00:50:530 (165,166) - kat don for both this. this applied on Muzu diff too!
Not very much stuff there is to say in Oni. I think the notes are perfectly following everything in the music. Like Muzukashii, good job!

Call me back when you updated everything!

thanks Shela!

Volta wrote:
ah nice the taikos is just a click away. but ctb still need to polish more..

Lol I realise tacos was circle too :U
okey, maybe I'll find couple more mods for CtB!

so, wait... I need review my tako diffs
okey done, Updated

-rage

425 posts

Joined August 2013

-rage 2016-04-08T16:38:54+00:00

From my queue

[Cup]

00:16:197 (3) - move to x:288 so it stacks with the (1), and it would look nicer that way since the distance would look equal.
00:40:197 (4) - move to x:224 so it stacks with the (2), and also it feels really close to (4)
00:49:197 (1,2,3,4) - you could maybe space these out a little more since it gives the player way enough time to reach these notes.
01:20:197 (4) - move to x:32, feels a little too far from the rest of the notes.
01:33:531 (3) - move to x:224 (refer to my first point).

[Salad]

00:03:197 (3,1) - i would avoid stacking notes like that, try to have a little bit of movement going on there.
00:09:197 (4) - move this a little closer to (2,3), it feels really far (but still try to keep a dash there.
00:10:197 (1,2) - maybe move those closer to 00:08:864 (2,3,4) - just so you don't have to reach so far to get it. and also the (2) could be a little closer to the (1)
00:27:197 (3,1) - avoid stacking.
00:29:864 (1,2) - ^
00:30:864 (4,5) - ^
00:38:197 (1,2,3) - all these 3 notes could be moved a little closer to eachother. they feel really far apart.
00:39:864 (5,6,1) - these 3 notes could be spaced out a little bit, they feel really close.
01:23:864 (3) - you could map something different rather than a long slider, there's a lot going on in the music in this part, so you could map something interesting there.
01:36:114 (4) - avoid stacking.

[Platter]

00:46:197 (5) - could be moved a little further away from the previous slider, just so the jumps feel consistant there.
00:51:531 (5) - ^
01:06:531 (1,2,3,4,1) - these notes could be moved a little closer together, they feel really difficult to hit just for a platter.

Overall the platter feels a tiny bit over-done? A lot of distances between the notes feel really far (more towards the end), so maybe do a little re-check on the distances and don't make them so huge.

That's all from me, good luck with this set

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-04-08T20:52:06+00:00

klonoa wrote:
From my queue

[Cup]
00:16:197 (3) - move to x:288 so it stacks with the (1), and it would look nicer that way since the distance would look equal. this has mentioned by afb for emphasize the flow, I think I fine with this and looks interesting to play.. I will keep for now untill others modder mention this too
00:40:197 (4) - move to x:224 so it stacks with the (2), and also it feels really close to (4) ^
00:49:197 (1,2,3,4) - you could maybe space these out a little more since it gives the player way enough time to reach these notes. I like to keep this for now, distance emphasize already 00:50:530 (3,4) - at here and with previously
01:20:197 (4) - move to x:32, feels a little too far from the rest of the notes. I think is fine, since the instrument have strong sound
01:33:531 (3) - move to x:224 (refer to my first point). same like first point
That's all from me, good luck with this set

thank you!

EDIT, man:

waiting reply from lidahapi on salad diff.

Last edited by Surono 2016-04-08T21:07:58+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Momota

270 posts

Joined February 2014

Momota 2016-04-08T20:53:48+00:00

klonoa wrote:
From my queue

[Platter]
00:46:197 (5) - could be moved a little further away from the previous slider, just so the jumps feel consistant there. fixed
00:51:531 (5) - ^ fixed
01:06:531 (1,2,3,4,1) - these notes could be moved a little closer together, they feel really difficult to hit just for a platter.
fixed
Overall the platter feels a tiny bit over-done? A lot of distances between the notes feel really far (more towards the end), so maybe do a little re-check on the distances and don't make them so huge. yes, i think so, reduce some distance

That's all from me, good luck with this set

thanks 4 mod klonoa!

take it boyzz

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Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-04-09T10:17:36+00:00

klonoa wrote:
From my queue

[Salad]
00:03:197 (3,1) - i would avoid stacking notes like that, try to have a little bit of movement going on there. | so what's wrong if i reduce the movement like that part?
00:09:197 (4) - move this a little closer to (2,3), it feels really far (but still try to keep a dash there. | a bit
00:10:197 (1,2) - maybe move those closer to 00:08:864 (2,3,4) - just so you don't have to reach so far to get it. and also the (2) could be a little closer to the (1) | mmmmmm hmmmmmm
00:27:197 (3,1) - avoid stacking. | .________.
00:29:864 (1,2) - ^ | ^
00:30:864 (4,5) - ^ | ^
00:38:197 (1,2,3) - all these 3 notes could be moved a little closer to eachother. they feel really far apart. | a bit i guess
00:39:864 (5,6,1) - these 3 notes could be spaced out a little bit, they feel really close. | mmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmm
01:23:864 (3) - you could map something different rather than a long slider, there's a lot going on in the music in this part, so you could map something interesting there. | (message truncated)
01:36:114 (4) - avoid stacking. | that doesn't look like stacking at all ._.

Thanks

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Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-04-09T11:40:16+00:00

ini apaan AR/OD 6.5, bukannya 7? dan juga masih ada hitsound yg kurang sama yg ga perlu. duh, fixed

okey, this time to summon that ctb man. ssheela wher ar u xd my maps not 108888888888 aaaaa

Updated

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2016-04-09T18:33:00+00:00

Sorry, Surono! I've been very slow with stuffs lately. But anyways, I've rechecked the map and everything looks good! So I decided to approve the Taiko difficulties in this mapset!

Taiko'd!

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-04-09T20:19:46+00:00

╭( `ㅂ`)و
ehh.. just realise this tako'd, bcuz my conectson is dem? ( dem not seeing 1st page lol )
Thank you very much Shela!

╭( ･ㅂ･)و
okey, let's go.

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-04-10T05:49:09+00:00

oi sur itu udah dikasih ikon taiko, kalau mapnya di update, tar itu ikon hilang gak?

edit: sekalian dah cari ikon buah buat ctb :U

Nishizumi

1,092 posts

Joined March 2013

Nishizumi 2016-04-10T06:31:58+00:00

Professor Gila wrote:
edit: sekalian dah cari ikon buah buat ctb :U

kalo duaduanya diikon, mode apaan yang ngebubble coeg

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-04-10T06:51:29+00:00

wat de fak lidahapi... :/

Volta

1,622 posts

Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-04-10T11:25:26+00:00

oke, karna udah dapet ikon drum, gw coba mod ctbnya.

[Cangkir]

00:04:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - geser kiri dikit, biar jarak ke (1) gak terlalu deket.
00:07:531 (5) - in juga bisa digeser agak ke kiri. biar keliatan bahwa kita harus gerak buat nangkep buahnya
00:15:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - geser kiri masih muat
00:42:531 (2,3) - geser kiri bang. biar drum di (2) lebih kerasa. bandingin sama jarak yang lain, seperti 00:34:197 (2,3) -
00:52:531 (1) - bikin agak horisontal biar lebih banyak gerak? pitchnya lebih tinggi dari 00:47:197 (5) -
01:25:864 (4,5,1,2) - biar (4) lebih jauh karena ada drum, geser kiri.
01:32:865 (1,2,3,4) - geser kanan dikit
rasanya cup nya aman.

[Salad]

ctb is not a rhytm game. you take this quote too literally broh.
00:08:864 (2,3,4) - jarak (3) ke (4) jauh banget. gak ada alasan buat nge-jump disini. mendingan bikin jarak masing-masing sama. terus ketiganya bisa digeser ke kiri sekitar x:40. biar konsisten antara jarak 00:07:531 (1,2) - dan 00:06:864 (5,1) -
00:10:197 (1,2) - ini susah. meskipun keliatannya stack, tapi salad player cenderung gerak ke kiri dulu di slider (1) sehingga kemungkinan besar bakal miss note di (2) karena kaget. mungkin situ udah pro jadi gak ngerasain susahnya. lebih baik (1) di ctrl+g dan pindah ke x:240 biar dashnya searah.
00:18:531 (3,4,1) - kenapa jarak (3) ke (4) lebih besar? lebih baik (4) pindah ke x:272 biar suara cymbal di (1) lebih ditekankan.
00:30:697 (3,4) - kenapa ini jauh sendiri? bandingin sama 00:22:697 (3) - , 00:25:364 (5,6) - 00:28:031 (2,3) - etc. konsisten pls.
00:32:864 (1,2,3) - bandingkan dengan 00:38:197 (1,3) - ..... gw prefer jarak yang kedua. bikin konsisten.
00:42:531 (5) - sesungguhnya ini bisa digeser ke kanan. kasih lebih banyak gerakan buat nekenin drumnya.
00:53:197 (7,8,1) - lebih pas kalo jarak (7) dan (8) lebih deket dibanding (8) ke (1). pindah (8) ke x:192
01:00:864 (4) - horisontal. drum.
...
...
01:12:531 (1) - pindah ke sekitar x:72 biar cymbalnya lebih kerasa. terus bisa dibikin slopenya sekitar 45 derajat (dimiringin)
01:35:364 (3,4) - masa gak perlu gerak disini. bikin lebih jauh. (4) ke sekitar x:288
mau liat responnya dulu. masih banyak sbenernya.

[Piring]

00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm rasanya agak sedikit tricky buat platter. coba pattern ini?
01:01:864 (1) - rasanya ini bisa dibikin lebih jauh sekitar x:96
01:04:531 (1) - same as above. sekitar x:32 karna suaranya agak stressed.
01:12:031 (10) - ctrl+g dan geser kanan dikit. agak susah diambil karena pasti orang suka keterusan buat dash ngambil yang (9). terus kenapa combonya bisa sampe 10.. 01:11:531 (8) - NC here
01:17:864 (1,2,3,4) - geser (2,3,4) ke kiri, agar jarak (1) dan (2) konsisten dengan 01:07:197 (1,2) - dan 01:09:864 (4,5) -
01:25:864 (5,6,7) - omg double dashnya susah banget. geser (5) ke kanan dong. skitar x:352 lebih baik.
nice platter actually.

[Hujan Panci]

kenapa AR nya jadi 9. oh, spread. oke, tp kalo nanti ada bn yang bilang suruh nurunin, turutin aja. karna gw rasa kecepetan.

selfmod, ganti pattern sblm kiai

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mau kadal dong ._.

Last edited by Volta 2016-04-11T12:08:33+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-04-10T11:37:16+00:00

ya acu cacingan... lagi ctrl c diff rain, malah suruh login. ilang dah post gw... ya Rabb..

Last edited by Surono 2016-04-11T14:16:03+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Volta

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Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-04-11T12:01:03+00:00

edited

Momota

270 posts

Joined February 2014

Momota 2016-04-11T23:32:49+00:00

Volta wrote:
oke, karna udah dapet ikon drum, gw coba mod ctbnya.

[Piring]
00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm rasanya agak sedikit tricky buat platter. coba pattern ini? applied, sempet kebingungan naruh pattern disini gimana, udah mencoba 696969kali tetep tidak oke
01:01:864 (1) - rasanya ini bisa dibikin lebih jauh sekitar x:96 applied
01:04:531 (1) - same as above. sekitar x:32 karna suaranya agak stressed. applied
01:12:031 (10) - ctrl+g dan geser kanan dikit. agak susah diambil karena pasti orang suka keterusan buat dash ngambil yang (9). terus kenapa combonya bisa sampe 10.. 01:11:531 (8) - NC here pass mantab pattern jadi bagus, add new combro
01:17:864 (1,2,3,4) - geser (2,3,4) ke kiri, agar jarak (1) dan (2) konsisten dengan 01:07:197 (1,2) - dan 01:09:864 (4,5) - fixed
01:25:864 (5,6,7) - omg double dashnya susah banget. geser (5) ke kanan dong. skitar x:352 lebih baik.applied, tapi gak geser ke x352, agar menghindarkan pattern yg sama spt note sebelumnya, jadi kurang ngehhh
nice platter actually.
mau kadal dong ._.

thanks 4 mod volta

rnkd plz

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Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-04-12T14:19:58+00:00

ah si panci ngemod juga

Volta wrote:
[Salad]
ctb is not a rhytm game. you take this quote too literally broh. | lho
00:08:864 (2,3,4) - jarak (3) ke (4) jauh banget. gak ada alasan buat nge-jump disini. mendingan bikin jarak masing-masing sama. terus ketiganya bisa digeser ke kiri sekitar x:40. biar konsisten antara jarak 00:07:531 (1,2) - dan 00:06:864 (5,1) - | lho
00:10:197 (1,2) - ini susah. meskipun keliatannya stack, tapi salad player cenderung gerak ke kiri dulu di slider (1) sehingga kemungkinan besar bakal miss note di (2) karena kaget. mungkin situ udah pro jadi gak ngerasain susahnya. lebih baik (1) di ctrl+g dan pindah ke x:240 biar dashnya searah. | atau 00:10:531 (2) - dideketin dikit dah
00:18:531 (3,4,1) - kenapa jarak (3) ke (4) lebih besar? lebih baik (4) pindah ke x:272 biar suara cymbal di (1) lebih ditekankan. | x:304
00:30:697 (3,4) - kenapa ini jauh sendiri? bandingin sama 00:22:697 (3) - , 00:25:364 (5,6) - 00:28:031 (2,3) - etc. konsisten pls. | ._.
00:32:864 (1,2,3) - bandingkan dengan 00:38:197 (1,3) - ..... gw prefer jarak yang kedua. bikin konsisten. | namun aku lebih milih untuk tetap
00:42:531 (5) - sesungguhnya ini bisa digeser ke kanan. kasih lebih banyak gerakan buat nekenin drumnya. | (6): x:168
00:53:197 (7,8,1) - lebih pas kalo jarak (7) dan (8) lebih deket dibanding (8) ke (1). pindah (8) ke x:192 | x:160
01:00:864 (4) - horisontal. drum. | hampir
...
...
01:12:531 (1) - pindah ke sekitar x:72 biar cymbalnya lebih kerasa. terus bisa dibikin slopenya sekitar 45 derajat (dimiringin) | apa ctrl + h belum cukup?
01:35:364 (3,4) - masa gak perlu gerak disini. bikin lebih jauh. (4) ke sekitar x:288 | cukup, jangan dibikin jauh
mau liat responnya dulu. masih banyak sbenernya.

lanjut ._.

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Volta

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Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-04-13T10:38:53+00:00

kasih kodenya dulu aja biar diupdate ._.

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-04-13T10:41:09+00:00

udah ._.

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-04-13T12:45:25+00:00

Volta wrote:
kasih kodenya dulu aja biar diupdate ._.

Professor Gila wrote:
udah ._.

oke, bentar.. `L_`

edit:
Updated Lidah & Momo diff
sebisa mungkin buat check combo & hitsound, terutama buat lidahapi.

irc modding,. Gan
janjian waktulah, simpel to do

ursa

1,302 posts

Joined April 2010

ursa 2016-04-15T11:34:55+00:00

Random Mod , moga2 bisa bermanfaat

Volt's Rain
Comment : Seluruh partnya udah bagus & gak ada major issue dari segi pattern klo menurut gwa , cman gwa
notice beberapa part aja yang perlu di atur dikit dari posisi distance biar flow jumpnya seimbang.

00:18:531 (5) - Slider ini bisa di geser dikit ke kiri (x=320) biar nanti tenakan dash di pattern selanjutnya bisa lebih optimal
00:25:364 (4) - slider ini bisa di ubah ke short jump sih ,mengingat nada pianonya lumayan naik di sini
00:28:031 (5) - ^ same
01:07:531 (2) - slidernya bisa di geser ke kiri (x=240) biar tekanan Hdash di sini gak terlalu tinggi
01:13:531 (1,2,3) - posisi jumpnya pas mulai dari 01:13:031 (5) - rada kerasa minimum jumpnya. rekomendasi gwa , coba pake posisi seperti ini > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934664 biar jarak jumpnya lumayan

Momot's Platter
Comment : Overall beat udah bagus, cman gwa liat pattern awal rada kurang distancenya (pas gwa testrun di edit bagian awal rada gampang di catch tampa pake dash)

00:30:697 (5) - slidernya mungkin bisa di geser ke (x=256) biar bisa nambah jump di
01:01:864 (1,2,3) - beat ini 01:02:197 (2) - bisa di geser ke kanan biar ada jarak dikit
01:36:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - karena ini di bagian akhir, mending di naikin dikit jaraknya , biar gak di bilang serupa ama pattern sebelumnya ([00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - )[/list]

Prof Gila's Salad
Comment : Overall pattern rada kurang balance gitu & perlu di improve/nerf dikit, bagian yang gwa mention di bawah ini mungkin bisa membantu banget buat ngebalance patternya

00:08:864 (2,3,4) - posisi 00:09:197 (4) - buat dash jump di awal2 sih rada gak fit . mendingan pake dash jump di bagian kiai aja
00:26:531 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - pattern ini kayaknya masih bisa di improve > (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934827 variasi versi gw )
00:29:531 (6,1,2,3,4) - ini juga, soalnya patternya rada numpuk ke kiri https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934832
00:32:864 (1,2,3) - posisi ini sih punya potensi buat dash jump, > rekomendasi gw https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934837
00:35:531 (3,4,5) - ^ same
00:42:197 (4,5,6) - sebisa mungkin hindari posisi stacking antar beat dari 00:41:364 (3) - , biar patternya gak terasa bosan
01:02:864 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same
01:08:864 (1,2,3,4) - beat ini bisa di improve jadi jump. rekomendasi gw > osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934866
01:11:864 (5,6,7,1) - *beat ini juga > (sebisa mungkin hindari stacking sama posisi )

Cup
Comment: Overall udah bagus Cupnya , btw sorry gwa gak bisa nemu issue ataupun distance problem. tapi gwa rasa udah pas patternya

Overall Cuman itu dari segi pattern , goodluck

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-04-15T13:13:37+00:00

ursa wrote:
Prof Gila's Salad
Comment : Overall pattern rada kurang balance gitu & perlu di improve/nerf dikit, bagian yang gwa mention di bawah ini mungkin bisa membantu banget buat ngebalance patternya
00:08:864 (2,3,4) - posisi 00:09:197 (4) - buat dash jump di awal2 sih rada gak fit . mendingan pake dash jump di bagian kiai aja | yea yea
00:26:531 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - pattern ini kayaknya masih bisa di improve > (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934827 variasi versi gw ) | mungkin kalau aku coba bikin sedikit beda ._.
00:29:531 (6,1,2,3,4) - ini juga, soalnya patternya rada numpuk ke kiri https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934832 | mungkin kalau aku coba bikin sedikit beda ._.
00:32:864 (1,2,3) - posisi ini sih punya potensi buat dash jump, > rekomendasi gw https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934837 | oke
00:35:531 (3,4,5) - ^ same | walau sebenarnya itu udah dibuat untuk ngejump, apa boleh buat ._.
00:42:197 (4,5,6) - sebisa mungkin hindari posisi stacking antar beat dari 00:41:364 (3) - , biar patternya gak terasa bosan | oke ._.
01:02:864 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same | ^ same
01:08:864 (1,2,3,4) - beat ini bisa di improve jadi jump. rekomendasi gw > osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934866 | oke (bukan ke rekomendasinya) ._.
01:11:864 (5,6,7,1) - *beat ini juga > (sebisa mungkin hindari stacking sama posisi ) | oke ._.

horeeeeee ursa mulai ngemod

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Momota

270 posts

Joined February 2014

Momota 2016-04-16T05:00:49+00:00

ursa wrote:
Random Mod , moga2 bisa bermanfaat

Momot's Platter
Comment : Overall beat udah bagus, cman gwa liat pattern awal rada kurang distancenya (pas gwa testrun di edit bagian awal rada gampang di catch tampa pake dash)
00:30:697 (5) - slidernya mungkin bisa di geser ke (x=256) biar bisa nambah jump di applied dan slider nomor 4 juga ikut digeser supaya pattern nya sama saat nada ini
01:01:864 (1,2,3) - beat ini 01:02:197 (2) - bisa di geser ke kanan biar ada jarak dikit applied, 1 digeser ke kiri menghindari pattern yang berulang
01:36:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - karena ini di bagian akhir, mending di naikin dikit jaraknya , biar gak di bilang serupa ama pattern sebelumnya ([00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - )[/list]
applied

Overall Cuman itu dari segi pattern , goodluck

thanks 4 mod ursa!

tik tok

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Surono

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Topic Starter

Surono 2016-04-16T06:37:40+00:00

Wat de truk inet ccd

Sorry double post

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Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-04-16T06:39:20+00:00

Wwoaa Ursa., dem cetebes desu des (>L_< )

Waiting Volta, jangan lupa mod lanjutan buat lidahapi klau ada yg kurang lagi dari sugesti pak ursa

Volta

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Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-04-18T12:25:00+00:00

ursa wrote:
Random Mod , moga2 bisa bermanfaat
Volt's Rain
Comment : Seluruh partnya udah bagus & gak ada major issue dari segi pattern klo menurut gwa , cman gwa
notice beberapa part aja yang perlu di atur dikit dari posisi distance biar flow jumpnya seimbang.
00:18:531 (5) - Slider ini bisa di geser dikit ke kiri (x=320) biar nanti tenakan dash di pattern selanjutnya bisa lebih optimal fixed
00:25:364 (4) - slider ini bisa di ubah ke short jump sih ,mengingat nada pianonya lumayan naik di sini hmm. pengen konsisten ajah
00:28:031 (5) - ^ same ^
01:07:531 (2) - slidernya bisa di geser ke kiri (x=240) biar tekanan Hdash di sini gak terlalu tinggi fixed
01:13:531 (1,2,3) - posisi jumpnya pas mulai dari 01:13:031 (5) - rada kerasa minimum jumpnya. rekomendasi gwa , coba pake posisi seperti ini > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4934664 biar jarak jumpnya lumayan ok

Overall Cuman itu dari segi pattern , goodluck

thx ursa!

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Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-04-18T16:22:07+00:00

cecete bru nngols.

Updated

k, now

ples BN wer ar u.. I was breathink IRL

Annadine

490 posts

Joined July 2015

Annadine 2016-04-23T15:53:16+00:00

Om sur ada bintang jatuh dari gue 🌠🌠🌠

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-04-24T13:16:05+00:00

ya ampun diralat bintangnya wekekekek. beri satu ada bintang 3
wah kurang fokus ibaratnya *ada 1 bintang diliat 3, beli AQU-

edit:
BN ples come here ;U

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,591 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2016-05-02T10:01:14+00:00

Recheck as requested.

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[

General]

AIMod

There are audio preview time conflicts. Please check carefully.

[

Cup]

It looks great! Keep it up!

[

Prof. Gila's Salad]

Gameplay

00:10:197 (1,2) - In my opinion the distance here can be enlarged to accommodate a dash. The one currently is still catchable without dashing, so it is better for you to add a dash here to urge players to dash.
00:32:864 (1,2,3) - The pattern is fine, what I wish to point is, the dash should be at 00:32:864 (1,2) - instead of 00:33:197 (2,3) - since (2) is the prominent note here, matching the rhythm with a strong clap, so as to emphasize (2) a dash should be placed to it instead of (3).
00:35:531 (3,4,5) - Same case as above.
00:38:197 (1,2,3) - This time, please reduce the distance of (2,3) with the same reason as above-listed. It is highly recommended to do so because the dash is going to cover both (2) and (3) so it will be very timed for a Salad.
00:40:864 (2,3) - You may add dash between them if you did the same like 00:32:864 (1,2,3) -
00:42:864 (6,1) - Honestly I think there should be a dash in between the notes as (1) is with Finish and so it is indicated to be a strong note. (1) also begins the new stanza so it is better to do so.
00:53:864 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This part can be easier in my opinion, players are not supposed to dash that much in Salad, but right here the dash density is very high (players will dash every 2 notes) so I think it will be much better if you reduce the dash density to dash per 4 notes, i.e You add dash at 00:56:197 (4,1) - and 00:58:864 (4,1) - for a better rhythm.
00:59:531 (2,3) - Maybe you want to add a dash here to emphasize the Finish at (3)?
01:07:531 (1,2) - The distance here can be smaller, it is very easy to miss too after catching 01:06:864 (1,2,3,1) - because there was a dash at 01:07:031 (2,3) - and people usually don't see this massive jump coming.
01:09:531 (3,4) - I think you can add a dash here.
01:10:197 (1,2,3,4) - This is changed to become a lot harder than the previous one at 01:07:531 (1,2) - because players may dash between (1,2) and (3,4). What about shortening their distances?
01:14:864 (5,6) - Add a dash if you did at 01:09:531 (3,4) - .
01:20:197 (7,8) - ^
01:32:198 (2,3) - I suggest adding a dash here, it just played out nice in my opinion.

[

Momot's Platter]

Gameplay

00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is fine but the distances at (4,5) and (8,9) can be smaller, it is easy to miss if players are not having their dashes on time, in fact Platter is still not a difficulty ready for such timed jumps, so be more lenient wouldn't be punished. You can increase the curvature of the stream if you reduced the suggested distances to compensate for the difficulty.
00:32:531 (3,4) - Reduce the distance between them as what you did at 00:35:197 (3,4) - and 00:37:863 (3,4) - . The one now can be difficult because consecutive dashes are required.
00:40:531 (3,4) - ^. You may move 00:40:864 (4,5,6) - whole thing to the left.
00:52:864 (5,6,7) - This will be difficult because most of the players may dash at (6,7) too. This will result in consecutive dashes, which can be hard for them. Also the dash at (5,6) will force players to the left edge so it will be hard to catch the later-on fruits. In order to fix this, move (7) closer to the left would help.
01:06:531 (1,2,3,4) - Reduce their distances in overall, the one now is timed as both (1,2), (3,4) and (2,3) are full of dashes, this means players will usually hold dash to catch all the fruits here. You can try this if you wish to: * screenshot
01:07:031 (4,1) - Add a HDash between them won't hurt, I think. It is also suitable to do so because it begins the Kiai Time (which is the climax of the song).
01:14:197 (6,7,1,2,3) - This is very strange when during gameplay, mainly due to the uneven distances of 01:14:531 (7,1) - and 01:14:697 (1,2,3) - . I would suggest remapping this pattern.
01:36:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as 00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - .

[

Volt's Rain]

Seems good!

I see improvements on this mapset, keep up the great work.
The difficulties need some minor tweaks at this point, however please check the New Combos in all difficulties, I have found various problems about them. I will recheck later if possible.

Good luck!

AFB

Volta

1,622 posts

Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-05-02T16:55:18+00:00

yay!

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-02T22:16:33+00:00

yay! [2]

finally this time, okey I will checking the NC, Preview Conflict Issue and Update

edit:
fixed Momota and lidahapi preview time, I checkd the NC and I think is fine since not over 10+ combo? lol

lidah api sama momota di check lagi combonya kepanjangan ga? di update dulu jgn lupa :U

Updated

Momota

270 posts

Joined February 2014

Momota 2016-05-03T05:35:15+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
Recheck as requested.

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[ General]

AIMod
There are audio preview time conflicts. Please check carefully.

[ Momot's Platter]

Gameplay
00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is fine but the distances at (4,5) and (8,9) can be smaller, it is easy to miss if players are not having their dashes on time, in fact Platter is still not a difficulty ready for such timed jumps, so be more lenient wouldn't be punished. You can increase the curvature of the stream if you reduced the suggested distances to compensate for the difficulty.fixed jump between 4,5 and 8,9
00:32:531 (3,4) - Reduce the distance between them as what you did at 00:35:197 (3,4) - and 00:37:863 (3,4) - . The one now can be difficult because consecutive dashes are required. fixed for consecutive
00:40:531 (3,4) - ^. You may move 00:40:864 (4,5,6) - whole thing to the left. fixed, i'll try pattern like 00:35:531 -
00:52:864 (5,6,7) - This will be difficult because most of the players may dash at (6,7) too. This will result in consecutive dashes, which can be hard for them. Also the dash at (5,6) will force players to the left edge so it will be hard to catch the later-on fruits. In order to fix this, move (7) closer to the left would help. applied, ctrl+g 7 make pattern like before
01:06:531 (1,2,3,4) - Reduce their distances in overall, the one now is timed as both (1,2), (3,4) and (2,3) are full of dashes, this means players will usually hold dash to catch all the fruits here. You can try this if you wish to: * screenshot applied
01:07:031 (4,1) - Add a HDash between them won't hurt, I think. It is also suitable to do so because it begins the Kiai Time (which is the climax of the song). i'll try add dash, i think this platter need more h-dash
01:14:197 (6,7,1,2,3) - This is very strange when during gameplay, mainly due to the uneven distances of 01:14:531 (7,1) - and 01:14:697 (1,2,3) - . I would suggest remapping this pattern. remapped
01:36:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as 00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - .applied

I see improvements on this mapset, keep up the great work.
The difficulties need some minor tweaks at this point, however please check the New Combos in all difficulties, I have found various problems about them. I will recheck later if possible.

Good luck!

AFB

thanks 4 mod afb

dem my mouse click broken, it must be pressed hard

rengked

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Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-05-03T09:37:01+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
[ Prof. Gila's Salad]

Gameplay
00:10:197 (1,2) - In my opinion the distance here can be enlarged to accommodate a dash. The one currently is still catchable without dashing, so it is better for you to add a dash here to urge players to dash. | by dragging 00:10:197 (1) should be enough
00:32:864 (1,2,3) - The pattern is fine, what I wish to point is, the dash should be at 00:32:864 (1,2) - instead of 00:33:197 (2,3) - since (2) is the prominent note here, matching the rhythm with a strong clap, so as to emphasize (2) a dash should be placed to it instead of (3). | perhaps i prefer let them be, just to make a sound feedback afterwards instead of beforehand
00:35:531 (3,4,5) - Same case as above. | ^
00:38:197 (1,2,3) - This time, please reduce the distance of (2,3) with the same reason as above-listed. It is highly recommended to do so because the dash is going to cover both (2) and (3) so it will be very timed for a Salad. | perhaps? so !ye
00:40:864 (2,3) - You may add dash between them if you did the same like 00:32:864 (1,2,3) -
00:42:864 (6,1) - Honestly I think there should be a dash in between the notes as (1) is with Finish and so it is indicated to be a strong note. (1) also begins the new stanza so it is better to do so. | Remember, i only make patterns dash with sound feedback afterwards instead of beforehand, especially clap sounds meh i haven't tell anyone this in advance
00:53:864 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This part can be easier in my opinion, players are not supposed to dash that much in Salad, but right here the dash density is very high (players will dash every 2 notes) so I think it will be much better if you reduce the dash density to dash per 4 notes, i.e You add dash at 00:56:197 (4,1) - and 00:58:864 (4,1) - for a better rhythm. | alright ._.
00:59:531 (2,3) - Maybe you want to add a dash here to emphasize the Finish at (3)? | alright ._.
01:07:531 (1,2) - The distance here can be smaller, it is very easy to miss too after catching 01:06:864 (1,2,3,1) - because there was a dash at 01:07:031 (2,3) - and people usually don't see this massive jump coming. | a bit perhaps?
01:09:531 (3,4) - I think you can add a dash here. | dunno, i don't think if i have to
01:10:197 (1,2,3,4) - This is changed to become a lot harder than the previous one at 01:07:531 (1,2) - because players may dash between (1,2) and (3,4). What about shortening their distances? | mmmmm hmmmm ._.
01:14:864 (5,6) - Add a dash if you did at 01:09:531 (3,4) - . | nope
01:20:197 (7,8) - ^ | nope
01:32:198 (2,3) - I suggest adding a dash here, it just played out nice in my opinion.

well, that's all ._.

apa bener ini abis ini dapat ikon buah?

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96,288,13864,6,0,L|32:160,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,136,14864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,15197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,15531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,15864,5,8,0:0:0:0:
80,64,16197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,64,16531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,16864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,64,17197,6,8,L|416:192,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,296,18197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,288,18531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,272,18864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,224,19197,6,0,L|392:160,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,224,19864,2,0,L|224:144,1,70
64,168,20531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,88,21864,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,22197,2,0,L|232:160,1,35
96,96,22697,2,0,L|64:128,1,35
281,64,24197,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,24364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,64,24531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,240,24864,2,0,L|72:288,1,35
216,288,25364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,296,25531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,288,26531,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,328,26864,2,0,L|320:296,1,35
400,288,27197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,240,27531,6,0,L|440:288,1,35
432,152,28031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,128,28197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,32,28697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,28864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,29531,2,0,L|199:120,1,35
304,136,29864,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,96,30197,2,0,L|384:160,1,35
464,160,30697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,120,30864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,31531,2,0,L|240:160,1,35
416,192,31864,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,288,32197,2,0,L|320:320,1,35
240,328,32531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,32864,6,0,L|176:256,1,35
232,200,33197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,144,33364,2,0,L|368:112,1,35
192,128,34197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,34531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,34864,6,0,L|288:96,1,35
368,56,35197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,112,35531,2,0,L|464:168,1,35
408,216,35864,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,136,36031,2,0,L|216:168,1,35
88,152,36864,2,0,L|120:224,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,37531,2,0,L|320:288,1,35
400,296,37864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,232,38197,6,0,L|348:184,1,35
304,160,38531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
113,192,38697,2,0,L|79:160,1,35
72,112,39531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,39864,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,136,40197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,104,40531,5,0,0:0:0:0:
398,62,40864,2,0,L|416:32,2,35,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,64,41364,2,0,L|240:120,1,35
344,192,42197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,144,42531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,112,42864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,64,43197,6,0,L|96:224,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,44531,2,0,L|312:48,1,140
112,64,45864,6,0,L|48:224,1,140
192,232,47197,2,0,L|352:232,1,140
144,72,48531,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,72,48864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,72,49197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,49531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,72,49864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,160,50197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,50531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,152,50864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,64,51197,5,0,0:0:0:0:
216,64,51531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,64,51864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,136,52197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,52531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,52864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,128,53197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,104,53531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,320,53864,6,0,L|88:176,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,184,54864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,320,55197,2,0,L|376:200,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,144,56197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,56531,6,0,L|40:264,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,312,57531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,57864,2,0,L|328:200,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,160,58864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,59197,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,59531,2,0,L|368:160,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,160,60197,1,4,0:0:0:0:
96,96,60864,2,0,L|24:120,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,61864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,56,62864,6,0,L|304:104,2,35
328,112,63531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,120,63697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,112,64031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64531,12,4,65864,0:0:0:0:
376,320,66864,5,8,0:0:0:0:
287,320,67031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,304,67197,1,4,0:0:0:0:
112,192,67531,6,0,L|160:160,1,35
328,176,68031,2,0,L|368:128,1,35,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,96,68864,5,0,0:0:0:0:
424,192,69197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,96,69531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,200,69864,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,160,70197,5,0,0:0:0:0:
112,88,70364,1,4,0:0:0:0:
272,160,70697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,70864,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,320,71864,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,280,72030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,304,72197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,320,72531,6,0,L|64:112,1,210,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,104,73864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,74531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,192,75197,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,168,75531,6,0,L|208:120,1,35,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,168,76031,2,0,L|416:120,1,35,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,184,76864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,104,77197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,120,77531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,96,77864,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,64,78197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,64,78364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,143,78697,2,0,L|464:168,1,35,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,79531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,79864,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,64,80197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,80531,1,4,0:0:0:0:
400,120,80864,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,120,81031,1,4,0:0:0:0:
216,199,81364,2,0,L|191:223,1,35,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,168,82531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,152,82697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,144,82864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,72,83197,5,4,0:0:0:0:
248,64,83531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,83864,2,8,L|144:128,1,70,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,296,84864,2,0,L|216:224,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,296,85531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,272,85864,1,12,0:0:0:0:
456,152,86197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,56,86531,5,12,0:0:0:0:
160,56,86864,1,12,0:0:0:0:
96,32,88531,6,0,L|160:192,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,89531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,136,89865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,90198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,224,90531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,248,90865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,288,91198,6,0,L|480:160,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,136,92198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,92531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,92865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,93198,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,64,93531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,88,93864,6,0,L|408:168,1,70
304,152,94614,2,0,L|272:64,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,96,95364,2,0,L|152:176,1,70
176,248,96114,2,0,L|224:320,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96864,12,2,101364,0:0:0:0:

Surono

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Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-03T10:01:08+00:00

Nishizumi wrote:
kalo duaduanya diikon, mode apaan yang ngebubble coeg

Updated

Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-05-03T12:27:00+00:00

ah mana lupa lagi buat nitip map ksatria batang hitamnya

Ansane

36 posts

Joined June 2014

Ansane 2016-05-06T09:01:13+00:00

mod

Futsuu
00:25:031 (41) - add d
01:18:531 (2) - change to k

Muzukashii
01:24:865 (203) - change to d
01:25:865 (206) - change to d
01:26:197 (207) - add d

Oni
00:09:197 (24) - change to d
00:19:697 (59) - change to k
01:37:426 (55) - ^same

thanks

Surono

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Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-06T09:55:03+00:00

Ansane wrote:
mod
Futsuu
00:25:031 (41) - add d
01:18:531 (2) - change to k
sip buat point yg ditunjuk, ada yg gw atur atur

Muzukashii
01:24:865 (203) - change to d nope, nada tinggi ini
01:25:865 (206) - change to d ^
01:26:197 (207) - add d rip.....

Oni
00:09:197 (24) - change to d masih dalam satu suara yg similar, jadi ga begitu ngeh buat di teken pake don
00:19:697 (59) - change to k 00:19:531 - udah ada penekanan disini, kalau disitu sih ga perlu bagi gw
01:37:426 (55) - ^same same above with reason

thanks

ur welcome

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,591 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2016-05-06T15:01:09+00:00

Recheck time!

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[

General]

Nice!

[

Cup]

New Combos
* Basically the difficulty has no issues for the distances and such, but new combos because most of them are not applied to emphasize the sudden pauses of the song.

00:03:197 (5,1,2,3) - In my opinion this part should be in same combo, just like what you did for 00:00:531 (1,2,3,4) - .
00:05:864 (4,5) - ^
00:11:197 (5,1,2,3) - In same combo please. Firstly, 00:10:531 (4) - is with a prominent drum sound and it indicates the stanza change at this point, hence it means the next note is going to start a new combo. And secondly, 00:13:864 (4) - is sounding the same as 00:11:197 (5) - in the rhythm so this show that it is going to be another combo start.
00:13:864 (4,5,1,2,3) - ^
00:16:531 (4,5,1) - ^, it is also not suggested to leave a note with only single combo like 00:18:531 (1) - , it is redundant.
00:24:531 (3) - Why not add NC to this like 00:21:864 (1) - , the rhythm is the same so the beat here should be the same.
00:27:197 (5) - ^, and remove NC at 00:28:864 (1,2) - .
00:29:864 (3) - Add NC with the same reason above.
00:35:197 (4) - Add NC, consistent with 00:32:531 (1) - .
00:40:531 (5) - ^
00:42:197 (1,2,3) - Remove NC at (1). Add NC at 00:43:197 (3) - instead.
00:43:864 (4,1,2,3) - These 4 circles should be in same combo, considering the rhythm beats in the audio.
00:46:864 (4) - So you can apply NC to this note as it leaves a pause between 00:45:864 (3,4) - .
00:52:197 (5,1) - You may do the same as above for consistency, or vice versa, i.e add NC at 00:47:197 (5) - . Both will work while I will go for the former one, since 1 combo is not really matter.
00:54:531 (2) - NC like 00:49:197 (1) - .
01:07:197 (4) - Add NC? This begins a new stanza and it is a fairly prominent sound. In fact 01:07:197 (4,5,1,2) - should be in same combo.
01:09:864 (3,4,5,1) - In same combo.
01:12:531 (2,3,4,5,1) - ^. Remember to add NC at 01:15:197 (2) - .
01:20:531 (5,1,2,3) - In same combo.
01:25:864 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^, as the first note is sounding strong and it gives a strong rhythmic feeling.
01:28:531 (5,1,2,3) - Same combo.
01:31:198 (4,5,1,2,3) - ^
01:33:864 (4,5,1) - ^, also leaving 1 single combo thing so better avoid it.

[

Prof. Gila's Salad]

New Combos

00:06:364 (4) - Add NC here instead of 00:07:531 (1) - and 00:10:197 (1) - .
00:11:197 (3) - Add NC here as 00:10:531 (2) - is a prominent drum beat and it is better to be emphasized with a new combo.
00:15:197 (3,4,1,2) - These 4 circles should be in same combo, considering that the rhythm here is similar and you NC every 2 white tick like 00:11:197 00:12:531 (1,2,3,4) - .
00:18:197 (2) - Add NC here instead of 00:17:197 (1) - .
00:37:531 (7) - This should begin another combo and remove the one at 00:38:197 (1) - to fit the rhythm.

Gameplay
00:10:197 (1,2) - The jump here is a bit big, I would suggest moving (2) to x:392.

[

Momot's Platter]

New Combos

00:40:531 (3) - Add NC here instead of 00:39:531 (1) - to follow the rhythm like how you group combo as 00:34:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - together with (7,8).
00:42:197 (1) - You may remove NC of this with the same reason above.
01:09:864 (4) - Add NC here like what you did at 01:12:531 (1) - .
01:16:864 (8,9,1,2) - Same as above, so NC at (2) and remove the one at (1).
01:20:531 (4) - ^, add NC.
01:28:864 (5) - Better start a new combo here as it is already coming to the closing, and it is different from the Kiai Time as I hear.

[

Volt's Rain]

New Combos

00:19:197 (2) - Add NC here instead of 00:18:864 (1) - to match at the beat if you hear closely, this is the place where 1/2 stream stuff can be noticed.
01:09:864 (5) - Add NC, to fit the Finish sounds. They fit well in my opinion.
01:12:531 (4) - ^
01:15:197 (2) - Add NC here instead of 01:14:697 (1) - .
01:17:864 (5) - Add NC.
01:20:531 (4) - ^
01:23:197 (5) - ^
01:36:864 (2) - Add NC instead of 01:36:489 (1) - , similar to 00:19:197 (2) - 's case.

Basically large improvements can be seen, it only needs some fine-tuning and it is ready to go.
Call me again after fixing.

Good luck!

AFB

Surono

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Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-06T16:03:42+00:00

............ all diff fixed by me esspesially Gameplay salad fixed.
my pipol is dem spooky evil.. I cry, poke u afb!! thx for confuse me, I nub about combo cuz i am tacos xd

Updated

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Volta

1,622 posts

Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-05-06T16:04:06+00:00

blah.
me tacos too

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Professor Gila

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Professor Gila 2016-05-06T16:04:36+00:00

edit: i just didn't notice for that ._.

Surono

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Surono 2016-05-06T16:06:04+00:00

hei faker, u dont need reply.

edit:
nice

bener2 bakal dapet ikon buah, trus itu NUKLERRRRRRRR (:

EIDT:
dah ah bobok, bauk badan gw. mau mandi trus jajan kek botjah h3eh3eh3eh. my life a bit bruken hehe~

Momota

270 posts

Joined February 2014

Momota 2016-05-06T16:24:23+00:00

chicken upright

thanks afb for fixed new combos
i think so , new combo platter less fit, but I am confused about where laying new combo, thanks afb

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autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

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autofanboy 2016-05-07T03:21:12+00:00

: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5026971/

--

Bubbled!

The CtB difficulties are much improved and I think it deserves a bubble.
Good luck!

Surono

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Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-07T04:37:49+00:00

╭( )و

thank you very much, afb ;^)

MBomb

MBomb 2016-05-07T12:48:10+00:00

First mod since I got my laptop back, let's do this.

[Kantan]

00:05:864 (6,7) - This sounds better as kd instead, because of the really high pitch on 6, followed by the lower pitch on 7.
00:19:531 (20) - Personally I'd prefer this removed because I don't really like the idea of 1/2 in a kantan, but you've mentioned before that you want to leave this in, just bringing it up anyway just in case.
00:32:197 (32) - Same as above.
00:39:864 (41) - Having this as a d wouldn't be too bad, and it could help to emphasise the next note.
01:07:197 (1) - Maybe make this a D instead, I think it could sound nice considering how strong this note is compared to previous section.
01:37:239 (20) - Remove this note if you removed the 1/2s previously.

[Futsuu]

00:05:864 (9) - Same as previously, this sounds a lot better as a k in my opinion. (On all other diffs, as well).

ok sorry my taiko modding is pretty bad

[General]

BPM is pretty low, so maybe a better AR/OD spread would be AR5.5,6.5,7.5,8.5

[Cup]

00:02:197 (2,3,4,1) - I'd prefer the distance to 2 to be a bit bigger. You can do this whilst still keeping the same feel you have now for the rest of the pattern by moving 2 to x:256, and then 3 to x:160 and 4 to x:320.
00:05:864 (1) - This note is quite strong, I feel you could increase the movement distance to it slightly. Try x:224.
00:13:864 (1,2) - 1 is definitely stronger than 4 was, so a higher distance to it makes more sense. Try x:384 on this section.
00:32:531 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This section is pretty repetitive movement wise, which makes it quite boring, even for a cup player. Try moving 00:35:197 (1) - to x:160, 00:37:197 (3) - to x:384, 00:37:864 (1) - to x:192, and then 00:39:531 (2,3) - to x:96. Keeps a similar feel to the map, whilst making it not feel so repetitive.
00:51:197 (4) - I feel this one can be emphasised more for the stronger pitch here, try x:224.
01:09:864 (1) - x:352, this note is definitely could use more emphasis, for the finish and strong sounds here.
01:15:197 (1) - This one could work nicely on x:256, for the same reasons as above.

[Salad]

00:15:197 (1,2,3,4) - A bit more distance to the 1 here would be nice for some more emphasis on the strong high pitch note, try something like 1 on x:384, 2 on x:280, and 3 on x:176. This also makes the distance more of a curve, especially to 4 which is slightly weaker than 2 and 3, so I think it's a nice effect

00:19:197 (1) - Could be nice to have a dash to this for the strong finish sound here as well as the piano's sudden change in pitch. Ctrl+H and moving it to x:64 is nice.
00:33:364 (3) - Really not sure about strong movements to this note, the note isn't really strong enough to imply having a dash here in my opinion. Something like Ctrl+g and then moving to x:312 feels better.
00:36:031 (5) - Same as above, something like x:304.
00:38:697 (5) - Again, this sound really isn't strong enough for a dash, I'd suggest something like x:200.
00:40:531 (1,2) - A dash to 1 could work nicely for the strong piano note here, as well as better emphasis on the change of pitch. I'd try moving 1 to x:32, and then Ctrl+H 2 and move it to x:184.
00:50:531 (7) - This one feels a bit far out and difficult to catch how it is now, I'd reduce distance a tiny bit, maybe do x:216.
00:56:531 (1) - Dash doesn't really fit here, you didn't have it in the previous section like this so I'm not sure why you have one here. Just try x:256.
01:00:197 (3) - Maybe move this to x:96? I feel it deserves a dash as the sound is quite strong, and it compliments the finish nicely.
01:01:864 (5) - Feels a bit too weak of a distance to this right now, try something like x:208 to keep movement going.
01:03:697 (3,4) - This section feels a bit odd to me as it is now, I'd try moving 3 a bit closer in, like x:408, and then increasing distance to 4, like x:152, to make the dashing movement more obvious to a salad player.
01:04:531 (1) - I think it'd be better to map this out instead of having a spinner, this isn't a spinner in any other difficulty.
01:09:531 (3) - 4 is definitely stronger than 3 here, so I think it'd be nice to have the dash to 4 instead, by moving this note to x:320, and then 4 to x:88.
01:18:364 (3) - This one feels a bit too far out, making the play uncomfortable. Try x:352, instead.
01:20:531 (8) - Again, a dash to this would be nice to more strongly emphasise this note. Try x:464, I feel it flows nicely and works well.
01:21:031 (2) - Distancing to this is slightly uncomfortable, would feel better to move it to x:304.
01:23:197 (1,2,3) - More distance to 1 would be nice, and then also a dash to 3 would be very fitting for the strong sound on it, as well as the strong pitch. Try 1 at x:408, 2 at x:280, and 3 at x:16.
01:26:864 (2) - Add slightly more distance to make dash more obvious, try x:136.
01:32:531 (3,4,5) - Again, I feel as though a dash to this would be nice for the sudden pitch change, maybe try 3 on x:56, 4 on x:184, and 5 on x:312.
01:36:114 (4) - I understand reducing movement here, but I think it's better to still have a tiny bit, even if it's not much. Try moving this to x:240.

[Platter]

00:07:531 (5) - Maybe distance to this is a tad bit strong considering that this note is quite weak, and whilst the timeline difference helps a little, the movement is still quite strong. Try x:128.
00:15:197 - I think this piano note is really too strong to avoid, and would even recommend adding a dash to a circle added here, to better emphasise the strong pitch on it.
00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel you should at least have a dash to this, the pitch change is very strong and probably should be emphasised better. Try moving this whole section to x:432.
00:58:531 (8) - Antiflow movement to this feels quite strong right now, I'm not really a fan of how strong it is, try reducing it slightly to like x:288.
01:04:031 (9) - Stronger distance, maybe x:288, would be nice to make a dash here more prominent, as this note is quite strong. After doing this, Ctrl+G on 01:04:531 (1,2) - could also play nicer.
01:13:197 (3) - Distance to this right now is too hard of a dash for an average platter player, try reducing it to something more comfortable like x:320.
01:14:531 (7) - Again, this one's a bit strong too, especially for antiflow movement. Try reducing to x:400.
01:23:197 (5) - Distance to this is far too strong for a platter player, most would have a lot of difficulty hitting this. Try x:448 instead, a lot better to play.
01:24:197 (2) - This note is quite strong, a nice antiflow dash could work nicely with it. Try x:48.
01:25:864 (5,6,7) - Hmm, I feel as though the movements here could be made a little more clean, and a HDash to 7 for that strong finish sound would work well. Try 5 on x:400, 6 on x:96, and 7 on x:496.
01:32:531 (1,2,3,4) - Dash to 1 could be nice for the strong change in piano pitch here. Try ctrl+Hing this section and moving it to x:64.

[Rain]

00:05:864 (3,4) - I feel like this HDash is a bit too strong right now, as the antiflow afterwards can be a bit hard to hit. I'd move this section to x:128, to reduce the HDash's strength but still keep it.
00:13:864 (2,3) - A HDash to this feels a bit weird, because the note isn't a clap like your other HDashes, and the note isn't really strong compared to others around it so I think best thing to do is Ctrl+H this and move it to x:320, makes nice movement and gets rid of this HDash. After this, move 4 to x:112 and 5 to x:288 to get the HDash to 4 back.
00:14:864 (5) - I'm not really sure about this being a repeat slider, I'd prefer it to be a circle followed by a 1/2 slider, because the note on the current repeat is quite a strong piano note which a dash would work nicely to.
00:47:197 (5) - Movement to this is a tiny bit too strong in my opinion, making the flow to this quite awkward. I'd reduce distances so that this note is on x:304, that feels a lot better in my opinion.
00:52:530 (5) - Same as above, x:200 would work better.
01:03:197 (3) - Normal, non-dashing movement to this would fit better with the music in my opinion, try x:412 instead.
01:05:531 (3) - ^, x:472, and then move 01:05:864 (4) - to x:80 to keep the HDash.
01:23:864 (3,4) - Moving this a bit more to the left, say x:408 for example, would feel a bit more comfortable movement, and make the antiflow movement to hyper feel better to play in my opinion.
01:25:197 (2,3,4,5) - HDash to 5 would work nicely. A good way to do this without ruining current flow is to move 2 to x:192, 3 to x:300, 4 to x:408, and 5 to x:16.
01:26:531 (7,8) - Hmm, dash to 7 being so strong and then followed by strong antiflow movement plays a bit too difficult for a rain in my opinion. Try moving 7 to x:88, and then, to keep the HDash, move 8 to x:480.
01:31:198 (2,3) - Again, 2 doesn't really feel strong enough to a HDash for me, seeing as you're mainly using claps for HDashes in this section, and this note isn't too strong for the piano either. Try 2 to x:316, and then Ctrl+g 3 and move it to x:492.
01:34:614 (3) - I think you meant for this to be a HDash, to follow similar HDash patterns earlier. Move this to x:364 to add one.

Really nice rain diff overall, honestly, I love this.

Alright, finished. Call me back.

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Moeruattack

763 posts

Joined June 2014

Moeruattack 2016-05-07T13:38:40+00:00

Good luck, I think its getting better flow than before back then

Kookiesu for u

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-07T14:00:05+00:00

oh God, its dream.... wehh how,

btw. terima kasih kk Muru for cookieEZ >L_<

edit:
fuq men forget to edit

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Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Surono 2016-05-07T15:35:59+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
First mod since I got my laptop back, let's do this. Man.. thx for come here, for tacos too? xd

[Kantan]

00:05:864 (6,7) - This sounds better as kd instead, because of the really high pitch on 6, followed by the lower pitch on 7. since this for newguys. I keep this. I think this fine cuz sound contrasting well
00:19:531 (20) - Personally I'd prefer this removed because I don't really like the idea of 1/2 in a kantan, but you've mentioned before that you want to leave this in, just bringing it up anyway just in case. hmm? but its slow bpm so well, why not to make 1/2? lol
00:32:197 (32) - Same as above. ^
00:39:864 (41) - Having this as a d wouldn't be too bad, and it could help to emphasise the next note. Good cath! the beat :^)
01:07:197 (1) - Maybe make this a D instead, I think it could sound nice considering how strong this note is compared to previous section. I keep this sound cymbal, but on last with stronk istrument is Finsiher. if me applied this to be finisher, I should make it consist to similar sound with finisher lol
01:37:239 (20) - Remove this note if you removed the 1/2s previously. ^

[Futsuu]

00:05:864 (9) - Same as previously, this sounds a lot better as a k in my opinion. (On all other diffs, as well). ahh no.. I likes monotone pattern B) cuz is simpel lel

ok sorry my taiko modding is pretty bad nope, this good. with nice explain as taco playerz B^)

[General]

BPM is pretty low, so maybe a better AR/OD spread would be AR5.5,6.5,7.5,8.5 O Right, Rain fast dem with 9 `L_`

[Cup]

00:02:197 (2,3,4,1) - I'd prefer the distance to 2 to be a bit bigger. You can do this whilst still keeping the same feel you have now for the rest of the pattern by moving 2 to x:256, and then 3 to x:160 and 4 to x:320. loooll this suggestion before is from afb, but if you think is better as neat patterns cuz sound not stronk like 00:05:531 - this oke I agree to back my own :^)
00:05:864 (1) - This note is quite strong, I feel you could increase the movement distance to it slightly. Try x:224. yes right
00:13:864 (1,2) - 1 is definitely stronger than 4 was, so a higher distance to it makes more sense. Try x:384 on this section. true de flow
00:32:531 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This section is pretty repetitive movement wise, which makes it quite boring, even for a cup player. Try moving 00:35:197 (1) - to x:160, 00:37:197 (3) - to x:384, 00:37:864 (1) - to x:192, and then 00:39:531 (2,3) - to x:96. Keeps a similar feel to the map, whilst making it not feel so repetitive. wow.. now it looks good...
00:51:197 (4) - I feel this one can be emphasised more for the stronger pitch here, try x:224. yes move bit there
01:09:864 (1) - x:352, this note is definitely could use more emphasis, for the finish and strong sounds here. yes.. strong :v
01:15:197 (1) - This one could work nicely on x:256, for the same reasons as above. :V

[Salad]

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Momota

270 posts

Joined February 2014

Momota 2016-05-08T19:32:48+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
First mod since I got my laptop back, let's do this.

[Platter]

00:07:531 (5) - Maybe distance to this is a tad bit strong considering that this note is quite weak, and whilst the timeline difference helps a little, the movement is still quite strong. Try x:128. moved, i think so, the jump too much distance
00:15:197 - I think this piano note is really too strong to avoid, and would even recommend adding a dash to a circle added here, to better emphasise the strong pitch on it. yess, like this section 01:32:531 - i follow piano note, fixed and make pattern like 01:32:531 (1,2,3,4) -
00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel you should at least have a dash to this, the pitch change is very strong and probably should be emphasised better. Try moving this whole section to x:432. applied, finish hitsound on 1 for jump
00:58:531 (8) - Antiflow movement to this feels quite strong right now, I'm not really a fan of how strong it is, try reducing it slightly to like x:288.applied
01:04:031 (9) - Stronger distance, maybe x:288, would be nice to make a dash here more prominent, as this note is quite strong. After doing this, Ctrl+G on 01:04:531 (1,2) - could also play nicer. yes fixed all, dash 8,9 9,1 look good now
01:13:197 (3) - Distance to this right now is too hard of a dash for an average platter player, try reducing it to something more comfortable like x:320. applied, I guess this is an easy dash lol: V and right, i want this diff playable for average player
01:14:531 (7) - Again, this one's a bit strong too, especially for antiflow movement. Try reducing to x:400. yess, reduced
01:23:197 (5) - Distance to this is far too strong for a platter player, most would have a lot of difficulty hitting this. Try x:448 instead, a lot better to play. okee reduced
01:24:197 (2) - This note is quite strong, a nice antiflow dash could work nicely with it. Try x:48. okk applied
01:25:864 (5,6,7) - Hmm, I feel as though the movements here could be made a little more clean, and a HDash to 7 for that strong finish sound would work well. Try 5 on x:400, 6 on x:96, and 7 on x:496. yesss nicee h dash on 6,7 then hdash on next pattern in 2,3
01:32:531 (1,2,3,4) - Dash to 1 could be nice for the strong change in piano pitch here. Try ctrl+Hing this section and moving it to x:64. its ok with distance to 1 ? ok ill try it bcaus slow part on next pattren, i think its okye but i can't add distance this on 00:15:197 - maybi too hard

[Rain]

TBC

how i english

ok thanks 4 mod magic bom

dem i serch the not gut mod, there is nothing

this is diff

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Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2016-05-09T08:41:42+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
[Salad]

00:15:197 (1,2,3,4) - A bit more distance to the 1 here would be nice for some more emphasis on the strong high pitch note, try something like 1 on x:384, 2 on x:280, and 3 on x:176. This also makes the distance more of a curve, especially to 4 which is slightly weaker than 2 and 3, so I think it's a nice effect | Curve patterns you said?
00:19:197 (1) - Could be nice to have a dash to this for the strong finish sound here as well as the piano's sudden change in pitch. Ctrl+H and moving it to x:64 is nice. | you said this to do dash just before the finish sound is heard, so i better let it be (i don't wanna change it
00:33:364 (3) - Really not sure about strong movements to this note, the note isn't really strong enough to imply having a dash here in my opinion. Something like Ctrl+g and then moving to x:312 feels better. | did you hear what sound 00:33:197 (2) - is? it's a clap sound, the same case as above, but clap sound so let it be
00:36:031 (5) - Same as above, something like x:304. | same case as above ._.
00:38:697 (5) - Again, this sound really isn't strong enough for a dash, I'd suggest something like x:200. | again, same case as above ._.
00:40:531 (1,2) - A dash to 1 could work nicely for the strong piano note here, as well as better emphasis on the change of pitch. I'd try moving 1 to x:32, and then Ctrl+H 2 and move it to x:184. | mmm hmmmmmm but modified 2 a bit
00:50:531 (7) - This one feels a bit far out and difficult to catch how it is now, I'd reduce distance a tiny bit, maybe do x:216. | :>
00:56:531 (1) - Dash doesn't really fit here, you didn't have it in the previous section like this so I'm not sure why you have one here. Just try x:256. | x:200 should be enough
01:00:197 (3) - Maybe move this to x:96? I feel it deserves a dash as the sound is quite strong, and it compliments the finish nicely. | nope ._.
01:01:864 (5) - Feels a bit too weak of a distance to this right now, try something like x:208 to keep movement going. | x:184
01:03:697 (3,4) - This section feels a bit odd to me as it is now, I'd try moving 3 a bit closer in, like x:408, and then increasing distance to 4, like x:152, to make the dashing movement more obvious to a salad player. | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5113217
01:04:531 (1) - I think it'd be better to map this out instead of having a spinner, this isn't a spinner in any other difficulty. | why is it so wrong to have a spinner here >:c
01:09:531 (3) - 4 is definitely stronger than 3 here, so I think it'd be nice to have the dash to 4 instead, by moving this note to x:320, and then 4 to x:88. | nonononononnononononononno
01:18:364 (3) - This one feels a bit too far out, making the play uncomfortable. Try x:352, instead. | nonononononnononononononno

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
01:20:531 (8) - Again, a dash to this would be nice to more strongly emphasise this note. Try x:464, I feel it flows nicely and works well.
01:21:031 (2) - Distancing to this is slightly uncomfortable, would feel better to move it to x:304.
01:23:197 (1,2,3) - More distance to 1 would be nice, and then also a dash to 3 would be very fitting for the strong sound on it, as well as the strong pitch. Try 1 at x:408, 2 at x:280, and 3 at x:16.
01:26:864 (2) - Add slightly more distance to make dash more obvious, try x:136.
01:32:531 (3,4,5) - Again, I feel as though a dash to this would be nice for the sudden pitch change, maybe try 3 on x:56, 4 on x:184, and 5 on x:312.
01:36:114 (4) - I understand reducing movement here, but I think it's better to still have a tiny bit, even if it's not much. Try moving this to x:240.

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