kwan is mapping (ง •̀_•́)ง

good luck kwan senpai =3=/

Kwan, I LoVE U (=´▽｀)ゞso I slap u by using StAR(s)
do U LoVE mE? (Kiss (●´艸｀)ヾ

Kalafina<3

Finished and moved to pending.

kwan is mapping

骏喵>w<
[Normal]
00:51:143 (5,6,7,1) - 请关爱强迫症，放成正方形

[Hard]
00:38:532 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个并不是一条直线，可以放个滑条然后使用convert slider to stream功能
00:52:290 (1) - 要么和前面间距保持一致，要么回归正常间距，主要是不好看

[Insane]
00:00:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 前奏还是间距小一点好吧？
00:36:239 (4) - 为什么不ctrl+j 呢
00:59:551 (5,6) - 也许可以ctrl+g
01:07:576 (1,2,3,4) - 可以2和4调换一下变成交叉型的

才疏学浅，不会摸图，见笑了

PM mod request.

General

1. offset=309， 01:16:748 - 这里附近可以听听得比较明显，offset稍晚

Easy

1. 00:07:960 - 漏了finish音效，和下面一些一样。不确定是不是有意为之，但听着不太舒服，毕竟没有Insane的音效那么密。
2. 00:14:839 - 漏了finish
3. 00:20:953 - 漏了

Normal

1. 00:07:960 - 漏了finish音效
2. 00:20:953 - finish

Hard

1. 00:18:660 (1) - 试试 ctrl + G 然后稍微上弯？ http://puu.sh/nqNqO/ab701ddd5e.jpg
2. 01:21:334 (1) - 不确定完全叠起来的话在这个难度能不能被读出来，建议左下偏移几个像素
3. 01:23:818 (4,5,6) - Hard 就可以稍微跳一下啦？

Insane

1. 00:37:004 (1,2,3) - 00:49:233 (1,2,3) - 这个赞！
2. 00:55:729 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 节拍切得比较快的话对于这个难度来说放circle不好打啊，建议折返滑条。只是不好打而已

希望我可以帮到你
好图！

骏喵肯定不缺BN，大概是没我啥事了

[Insane]

1. 00:03:756 (2) - 听来听去感觉还是在00:04:138 -结束的= =
2. 00:22:291 (3) - 觉得首尾的节奏用circle就行，00:22:291 -跳一下 00:22:673 -stack什么的，比较利落的感觉 比如：http://puu.sh/nrf7b/abe72980b8.jpg
3. 01:07:576 (1) - x283|y232
4. 01:08:341 (5) - ^上面那条如果动了，这条这个跟上面的一起
5. 01:15:220 (1) - 这样可能好看点，打起来也比较顺http://puu.sh/nrdRs/21022bffea.jpg

[Hard]

1. 01:21:334 (1) - 还是错开一点吧…… hard的ar本来就比较低……这种完全重叠的比较容易让人忽然不知道在打什么

[Normal]

1. 00:04:138 (2) - 中间加个描点，假装是00:03:374 (1) - ctrl h ctrl j 减去往返弄的
2. 00:58:405 (4,5,6,7) - 微妙的不直= =
3. kiai在01:24:200 结束，，所以01:23:818 (5) - 这里的ds也保持0.85吧

[Easy]

1. Fine

骗完睡觉。
你啥时候能出产长图啊

[Easy]

fine

[Normal]

00:58:787 (5,6) - 换个滑条?

[Hard]

00:18:469 (5) - 这个音比较轻不适合跳,叠后面1上?

00:38:915 (2,3,4) - 是否需要逐个NC 提醒DS?

00:51:144 (2) - ^

01:21:907 (2,3) - 试试这样,我觉得01:22:098 Finish不好

[Insane]

00:09:871 (2,3) - ctrl+g 比如像00:59:551 (5,6,1) -

00:38:532 (4,5,6,7) - 逐个NC? ant-jump

00:50:761 (4,5,6,7) - ^

没什么能扯的

IamKwaN wrote:

免slap金牌

三c⌒っﾟДﾟ)っ (逃

hi~骏妈妈:D
[Insane]
ar8.5有点高了，建议还是ar8吧。如果介意00:55:729 (1,2,3) - 这个东西还是建议稍微低一点
00:03:756 (2) - 建议别都跟，推荐延迟到00:04:329 - 结束
00:09:488 (1,2) - 感觉这里不是很顺，前面可以再稍微调一下？节奏类似的00:11:972 (4,5,6,1) - 这个就感觉挺好
00:17:132 (1,2) - 骏妈妈试试这样？https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4643180
00:30:603 (6) - 加个slapsclap试试
00:42:545 (1,2) - 试试ctrl g 这里flow打起来不太舒服
00:55:729 (1,2,3) - 太邪恶了D:

hd和nm都太nb了

[Easy]
00:55:729 (1) - 感觉跟的不太好，提早半拍如何？

sb ppy把我草稿弄没了

Not mentioned = fixed.
謝謝各位的摸 >u<!
媽媽前媽媽后的 滾。

yin gai neng pao
[General]
[Easy]
[Normal]
[Hard]
[Insane]

就只有 hard 那個沒 fix, 因為感覺 1/4 對不上音, 謝謝 mod!

Updated.

hi

[easy]

Hitsound:


[Normal]

Gameplay:


[Hard]

Gameplay:


[Insane]

Gameplay:

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all look good, only important
Any question or you don't understand my english, ask me in-game I will try my best to explain
Call me when all done

hi kwan from my queue.
this song is cool.

general
cool

insane
00:03:748 (2) - is this incorrectly snapped? imo this should be snapped to the white tick.
00:04:512 (4) - the arrow of the reserve slider is hidden - atleast with the standard skin this is hard to read as a reserve.
00:06:805 (2,5) - are those intentional drum additions? i understood the downbeat slider, but i don't do it here - also why didn't you use claps there instead?
00:09:098 (5) - i suppose you don't add claps here on those ticks because of the vocal? I would still say that you can add claps anyway, because it's not really noticeable anyway.
00:20:754 (4) - you could make a nicer "wave" with this type of anchors. I usually don't care about aestethics, but y.... uhh. here u go.
00:23:811 (3) - since its so similar shouldn't this be the same rhyhtm as 00:22:283 (3) - if you follow vocal.
00:42:919 (3,1) - suggestion here: [URL=http://puu.sh/ntDOD/9935cd2002.jpg[/URL] - According to what you have mapped earlier by the means of 00:42:155 (5,6,1,2,3) - this one where you go in a circular motion, the hand movement would suggest to jump to the left and not to the right. It'd make the flow a bit better. In the example i have posted i just flipped the slider and didn't look at the aesthetics ofc
01:02:982 (1) - this flows better with ctrl+g

cool diff nice.

hard
00:03:748 (2) - ok looks like its supposed to be snapped this way. But it feels wrong to me tbh :/. I feel you are missing the white tick here.

yea i find nothing very solid.

normal
00:28:588 (2,3) - fix this blanket

yay i pointed out a blanket ok

easy
00:09:862 (1) - do that wave slider i puushed in insane it lookssssss cooooool
00:55:721 (1) - as far as i remember single ncs rarely work in lower diffs. I'd prolly leave out that nc and just continue in the kiai with new combo, but who cares right.
01:04:511 (3,4) - i think you should atleast try to blanket these two (i usually don't point those things out, but im a retard so i do)
01:21:326 (1) - considering the direction the note of 01:20:944 (4) - has it would indicates that the slider is ctrl+h, but thats just a minor thinggggggggggy

y this map actually didn't need my mod, but i did it anyways ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

GL kwan :3

Stuff that isn't mentioned is fixed.
Thank you so much for both of you! <3

check everthing, all look good

bubble

Good luck!

Already check by previous request, so let it go. And mapset fine. Qualified

Thank you both of you ~~~

osu! needs more Kalafina

Congrats, Kwan *slapped* I mean, KwaN

You're so faster DXxx
Gratzz, nyan~ <3 :3

这片子的结局真是……
哈哈哈

恭喜均码

Oh my! You ranked it faster that I could arrive to mod it.

Congratulations!

Tsukuyomi wrote:

这片子的结局真是……

哈哈哈

好看，bybf

君飛圖啦

This anime is awesome!

gratz kwan :^)

Congrats kwan....

What?! rank? lol
gratz(?)

yee new senpai map! can wait to login and try it tomorrow

smallboat wrote:

Already check by previous request, so let it go. And mapset fine. Qualified

...really?
From what i see, i think your video offset is wrong...
-1482ms should do the trick here.

Anyway, i like the beatmap. It is clean.
Good luck with ranking, i suppose?

yap you're right xD

Fixed the video offset, checking if there is something else that I want to change.

Not yet updated.

Hard:
00:10:054 (3) - Fixed the spacing.
00:11:582 (3,4) - Fixed the blanket.
00:18:652 (1) - Changed the pattern.

Updated.