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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年4月6日 at 23:56:12

Artist: Sakakibara Yui
Title: Dokidoki kokoro flavor
Source: ネコぱら vol.2 姉妹ネコのシュクレ
Tags: NEKO WORKs nekopara vol.2 さより 雪仁 水城新人 KIZAWA Studio Sayori Yuki Jin Mizuki Shinjin Nekopara Soreiyu Kaiten Shimashita eroge VN galgame visual novel opening Kencho Lavender [Teichan]
BPM: 125
Filesize: 21615kb
Play Time: 01:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.34 stars, 108 notes)
  2. Kencho's Normal (1.86 stars, 162 notes)
  3. Lavender's Hard (2.86 stars, 274 notes)
  4. Neko (3.58 stars, 306 notes)
Download: Sakakibara Yui - Dokidoki kokoro flavor
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#15 The OP of Nekopara vol.2 <ドキドキ☆ココロ☆フレーバー> by 榊原ゆい
→My Nekopara vol.1 OP <タイヨウパラダイス> by nao←
Hard by Lavender
Normal by Kencho

mp3&video helped by Shad0w1and, thanks <3
lit120
can i make GD insane? XD

HYPE HYPE HYPE TODAY IS THE DAY!!!!!!!
BeatofIke
Nekopara <3
Akiyama Mizuki
coconut best grill
Lavender
你帮我下音效吧,同学电脑没有hitsound copier
osu file format v14

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[Metadata]
Title:Dokidoki kokoro flavor
TitleUnicode:ドキドキ☆ココロ☆フレーバー
Artist:Sakakibara Yui
ArtistUnicode:榊原ゆい
Creator:Minakami Yuki
Version:Lavender's Hard
Source:ネコぱら vol.2 姉妹ネコのシュクレ
Tags:NEKO WORKs nekopara vol.2 さより 雪仁 水城新人 KIZAWA Studio Sayori Yuki Jin Mizuki Shinjin Nekopara Soreiyu Kaiten Shimashita eroge VN galgame visual novel opening
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[Difficulty]
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Pata-Mon
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[General]
  1. E、N、H的宽屏支持开着,但是主难度没开
  2. 歌曲介绍里面

    Minakami Yuki wrote:

    Hard by Kencho
    Normal by Lavender
    似乎是写反了
  3. 结尾转盘处音效音量有点大
[Easy]
  1. 00:48:624 (1,2,3,4) - 整个难度其他地方都没有半拍间隔,所以我还是觉得换成折返滑条比较好
  2. 01:40:464 (3) - 似乎弧度略大了一点点
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:624 (1,2,3,4) - 为什么这里用了1.7的ds,后面都是1.3
  2. 00:07:104 (2) - 向上移一下
  3. 00:30:144 - 这里空着感觉并不舒服,可以把2改折返
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:544 (1,2,3,4) - 给滑条尾消声吧,现在好吵
  2. 00:07:944 (6) - 结束于00:08:184 - ,然后漏掉了00:08:064 - 处更明显的声音,我觉得并不合适,之后前奏部分还有尾声部分有很多类似的地方,同样
  3. 00:41:664 (2,3) - 3不是重音,这里ds变大这么多不合适
  4. 00:46:704 (1,2,3,4) - 一个是同前面,最好滑条尾消音,另外00:46:704 (1,3) - 一半的地方都有明显的鼓声,这两个滑条建议用半拍长度
  5. 00:49:704 (4,5) - ds不舒服,要么叠要么放远
  6. 00:51:624 (4,5) - ^
  7. 00:58:224 (1,3) - 也是建议换成半拍长度。如果不换的话结尾消音
  8. 00:59:664 (4) - 这个感觉用滑条更好
  9. 还有很多3/4长度的滑条,我觉得很多都可以考虑一下或者结尾消音
  10. 01:24:624 (6,7) - 相比于后面几个,这俩更适合叠。01:25:104 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个或许可以跳一下
  11. 01:33:744 (4,5) - 不是很重的音,感觉按照ds,然后顺着一个方向摆更好
[Neko]
  1. 00:09:744 (5) - 00:11:664 (5) - 00:15:504 (6) - 换成半拍或者1/4的单次折返感觉更好。不换的话结尾消声
  2. 01:06:864 (3) - 01:09:744 (1) - 换成半拍滑条
GL~
KaedekaShizuru
全世界的黄油玩家都在艹猫
[General]
到底是谁的hard谁的normal啊
别忘了加GDer的tag

[Neko]
我想DT 能不能AR7.5啊
相对于hard我觉得insane的节奏可以再复杂一点啊 比如前奏和尾段的电音 insane还是别放掉吧(不过一下多了好多二连
00:57:744 (6) - 在00:57:984 结束然后在00:58:104 补circle如何
01:01:584 (6) - ↑
01:05:424 (6) - ↑
01:06:864 (3) - 鼓在01:07:104 啊
01:08:304 (2) - 在01:08:544 结束然后在01:08:664 补circle

[Hard]
00:39:024 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 挤一坨了 把00:39:984 (1,2,3) 整体移到让00:39:984 (1) 跟00:40:944 (1) 头重叠
00:51:624 (4,5) - 距离感觉太近了 00:51:984 (5) 向上提然后00:51:984 (5,6,1) 距离平均一下


[Normal]
01:35:424 (2) - 再向左一点吧 感觉不咋好看

美丽
Topic Starter
Koiyuki
pata-mon

Pata-Mon wrote:

M4M
我的图已pm

[General]
  1. E、N、H的宽屏支持开着,但是主难度没开
  2. 歌曲介绍里面

    Minakami Yuki wrote:

    Hard by Kencho
    Normal by Lavender
    似乎是写反了 上面的都改了
  3. 结尾转盘处音效音量有点大 这个我觉得还行
[Easy]
  1. 00:48:624 (1,2,3,4) - 整个难度其他地方都没有半拍间隔,所以我还是觉得换成折返滑条比较好 这里跟vocal,没必要改
  2. 01:40:464 (3) - 似乎弧度略大了一点点 恩,改了
[Neko]
  1. 00:09:744 (5) - 00:11:664 (5) - 00:15:504 (6) - 换成半拍或者1/4的单次折返感觉更好。不换的话结尾消声
  2. 01:06:864 (3) - 01:09:744 (1) - 换成半拍滑条 都不改,这图就是1/4鼓点多,不过我会稍微改一点
GL~

kksr

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

全世界的黄油玩家都在艹猫
[General]
到底是谁的hard谁的normal啊
别忘了加GDer的tag added

[Neko]
我想DT 能不能AR7.5啊 什么你不能dt ar8?
相对于hard我觉得insane的节奏可以再复杂一点啊 比如前奏和尾段的电音 insane还是别放掉吧(不过一下多了好多二连 我要送分www
00:57:744 (6) - 在00:57:984 结束然后在00:58:104 补circle如何 keyi
01:01:584 (6) - ↑ 这梗不改
01:05:424 (6) - ↑ keyi
01:06:864 (3) - 鼓在01:07:104 啊 fixed
01:08:304 (2) - 在01:08:544 结束然后在01:08:664 补circle nope

美丽
Kagetsu
request


[Easy]
  1. 00:04:944 (2) - snap to white tick? i know you're intended to follow voice but this could confuse a newbie player
  2. 00:37:104 (1,3) - supernazi... blanket between thos 2 isn't perfect
  3. 00:39:984 (4,1) - this might be confusing, because 4 isn't aiming to 1... not a big deal tho
  4. 00:57:264 - i would prefer this beat were clibkable... it isn't a big problem because it's an easy so idk lol
  5. 01:07:824 (1,3) - this might confuse a newbie player because 01:07:824 (1) - isn't completely gone when 01:09:744 (3) - appears


[Kencho's Normal]
  1. 00:20:784 - add clap maybe? i believe there's a snare sound in here
  2. 00:21:264 - same
  3. 00:35:664 (2) - snap to red tick maybe, for symmetry and because it's less confusing
  4. 01:29:904 (2) - super nazi... seems too close to 01:28:944 (1) - and too far to 01:30:864 (1) -
  5. nothing much to say, cool diff


[Lavender's Hard]
  1. increasing the slider tick rate might help players to recognize 3/4 sliders
  2. 00:07:944 (6) - this slider end doesn't really convince me... there's no sound in that place, so wouldn't be better to do something like this? ... it's also consistent with you did in 00:09:744 (5) -
  3. 00:11:784 (5) - same as above, i don't like how you ignore 00:11:904 - :((
  4. 00:15:624 (6) - ^
  5. 00:20:784 (1,3) - add clap maybe?
  6. 00:28:704 - clicking is unnecesary here, strong sound is really on 00:28:824 - (currently on slider tail, which is a weird thing to hear tbh)
  7. 00:31:104 - are you sure you don't want to map this beat? it's way more important than 00:31:224 -, because voice


[Neko]
  1. 00:11:424 (4) - this might be confusing to read, also it will be a pain in score v2 xD
  2. 00:20:784 (1,3) - add clap maybe?
  3. 01:13:344 - kinda weird that you're ignoring this beat.. try something like this maybe?
  4. 01:19:824 -
  5. 01:26:424 (7) - this is probably the hardest jump in the map... problem about this is this beat isn't that strong as previous so idk... it's perfectly playable tho, so up to you
  6. 01:31:824 (3,4) - same as previous... i guess you like this style tho xd

so yeah... i'm just pointing nazi stuff because your map is already perfect lol
good luck <3
FreeSongs
Hihi, as requested

[Neko]
00:55:104 - feel like the beat here is pretty strong. I would suggest to use a 1/4 slider at 00:54:984 -
00:02:544 (1,2) - this distance is a bit too large here. (I would move them closer to the screen centre)
01:01:944 - i think you should map this out like what you did here 00:57:744 (6,7,1) -
01:17:304 - ^
01:13:464 - ^
01:09:744 (1,2) - the music here is kinda hype imo. I would replace these sliders with jumps instead. (like this:)

[Lavender's Hard]
01:09:024 (4,5) - the jump from 4 to 5 is too small imo. Consider to change to the normal ds you used before.
01:20:304 (3,4) - ^
00:26:064 (2,3) - I would prefer you map these like what you did here 00:22:704 (3,4,5) -, so that you can map the beat (00:26:544 -) out.
00:58:224 (1,2,3,4) - feel like you 3/4 sliders are not very suitable here even it sort of expresses the vocal. I would suggest you to map out this part like what you did here 01:13:584 (1,2,3,4) - (and you could also add some 1/4 rhythm to enrich them.)
01:42:384 (1) - (nazi) how about moving this to the centre? feel like its more natural before the spinner.

[Kencho's Normal]
00:19:824 (1) - The sudden music change here could be expressed by some rhythm change. I would use a 1/2 reverse slider and a circle right after this. like this:
01:40:464 (1) - ^

[Easy]
looks fine!

The mapset is very polished already. Can't find much things to say. (star~
Hope this helps.

Good luck!
mcdmt
M4M
[General]

  • 看起来并没有什么不好的地方
[Easy]

  • 00:04:464 (1) - 00:21:264 (4) - 加个finish或者clap吧
    00:04:944 (2) - 00:35:664 (4) - 01:26:064 (4) - 这三个滑条有点奇怪,导致某些萌新不知♂所措
    00:27:504 (3,4) - 01:03:024 (4,5) - 01:10:704 (4,5) -
    01:18:384 (4,5) - 加个whistle或者clap比较好
    感觉这个diff很适合我
[Kencho's Normal]

  • 00:22:704 (3) - →
    01:28:704 (4) - 距离有点远了,这样比较好

    00:20:784 (2,3,4) - 加个clap
    00:35:664 (2) -
[Lavender's Hard]

  • 00:52:464 (1) - 01:42:384 (1) - 这个可以不加new combo,加finish或者clap-.-
    00:07:944 (6) - →
    00:55:824 (1) - →
[Neko]

  • 00:11:184 (3,4) - 这两个叠在一块了,读图读不好会断的
    01:31:824 (3,4) - ↑
    00:40:464 (3) - 左右翻转一下-.-
    01:26:184 (6,7) - 跳的太大,歌曲上也没多大变化-.-
图做的不错=w=
Lavender
Pata-Mon

Pata-Mon wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:02:544 (1,2,3,4) - 给滑条尾消声吧,现在好吵听了听很轻啊
  2. 00:07:944 (6) - 结束于00:08:184 - ,然后漏掉了00:08:064 - 处更明显的声音,我觉得并不合适,之后前奏部分还有尾声部分有很多类似的地方,同样这里我都是跟的bass
  3. 00:41:664 (2,3) - 3不是重音,这里ds变大这么多不合适安啦,hard变ds没事的
  4. 00:46:704 (1,2,3,4) - 一个是同前面,最好滑条尾消音,另外00:46:704 (1,3) - 一半的地方都有明显的鼓声,这两个滑条建议用半拍长度全跟人声
  5. 00:49:704 (4,5) - ds不舒服,要么叠要么放远
  6. 00:51:624 (4,5) - ^改了
  7. 00:58:224 (1,3) - 也是建议换成半拍长度。如果不换的话结尾消音并不吵呀
  8. 00:59:664 (4) - 这个感觉用滑条更好原来也是想用的,但是排版不好看
  9. 还有很多3/4长度的滑条,我觉得很多都可以考虑一下或者结尾消音除非换了一个很重的hitnormal,不然不用管
  10. 01:24:624 (6,7) - 相比于后面几个,这俩更适合叠。01:25:104 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个或许可以跳一下改了(我感觉我要爆星)
  11. 01:33:744 (4,5) - 不是很重的音,感觉按照ds,然后顺着一个方向摆更好打的时候就相当于两个单点啊
KaedekaShizuru

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[Hard]00:39:024 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 挤一坨了 把00:39:984 (1,2,3) 整体移到让00:39:984 (1) 跟00:40:944 (1) 头重叠这里切音乐啊,你看老M的diff里也是这样00:51:624 (4,5) - 距离感觉太近了 00:51:984 (5) 向上提然后00:51:984 (5,6,1) 距离平均一下改了
Kagetsu

Kagetsu wrote:

[Lavender's Hard]
  1. increasing the slider tick rate might help players to recognize 3/4 sliders but hitsounding is a more serious thing
  2. 00:07:944 (6) - this slider end doesn't really convince me... there's no sound in that place, so wouldn't be better to do something like this? ... it's also consistent with you did in 00:09:744 (5) - Hi, can you guys hear bass Orzzzzzzzz
  3. 00:11:784 (5) - same as above, i don't like how you ignore 00:11:904 - :((
  4. 00:15:624 (6) - ^
  5. 00:20:784 (1,3) - add clap maybe? ok
  6. 00:28:704 - clicking is unnecesary here, strong sound is really on 00:28:824 - (currently on slider tail, which is a weird thing to hear tbh)Sorry but I can hear it clearly
  7. 00:31:104 - are you sure you don't want to map this beat? it's way more important than 00:31:224 -, because voiceYeah I'm sure. In my map, drums>other Instruments>vocal
[/notice]
FreeSongs

FreeSongs wrote:

[Lavender's Hard]01:09:024 (4,5) - the jump from 4 to 5 is too small imo. Consider to change to the normal ds you used before.I just changed 3 to slider, so 4&5 are vanished owo01:20:304 (3,4) - ^ considering the star rating, I nerfed the jump00:26:064 (2,3) - I would prefer you map these like what you did here 00:22:704 (3,4,5) -, so that you can map the beat (00:26:544 -) out. Listen to the bass please, here is different from others00:58:224 (1,2,3,4) - feel like you 3/4 sliders are not very suitable here even it sort of expresses the vocal. I would suggest you to map out this part like what you did here 01:13:584 (1,2,3,4) - (and you could also add some 1/4 rhythm to enrich them.)They are OK, and I don't feel like to make my my map full of 1/2, that's too boring01:42:384 (1) - (nazi) how about moving this to the centre? feel like its more natural before the spinner.Nope
DMTfarc

DMTfarc wrote:

[Lavender's Hard]
  • 00:52:464 (1) - 01:42:384 (1) - 这个可以不加new combo,加finish或者clap-.- 这里NC是有意义的00:07:944 (6) - → 前面说过了跟bass00:55:824 (1) - → 这里因为hard转盘后有一段时间不能加note
Thank you for modding!
Kencho
Pata-Mon

Pata-Mon wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:00:624 (1,2,3,4) - 为什么这里用了1.7的ds,后面都是1.3 因為這裡SV是0.75x,因此DS增加了,為了配合1.0xSV的實際距離
  2. 00:07:104 (2) - 向上移一下
  3. 00:30:144 - 这里空着感觉并不舒服,可以把2改折返 不了,因為前面同樣部分也是這樣的

KaedekaShizuru

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[Normal]
01:35:424 (2) - 再向左一点吧 感觉不咋好看

Kagetsu

Kagetsu wrote:


[Kencho's Normal]
  1. 00:20:784 - add clap maybe? i believe there's a snare sound in here
  2. 00:21:264 - same
  3. 00:35:664 (2) - snap to red tick maybe, for symmetry and because it's less confusing No, I want keep it.
  4. 01:29:904 (2) - super nazi... seems too close to 01:28:944 (1) - and too far to 01:30:864 (1) -
  5. nothing much to say, cool diff

FreeSongs

FreeSongs wrote:

[Kencho's Normal]
00:19:824 (1) - The sudden music change here could be expressed by some rhythm change. I would use a 1/2 reverse slider and a circle right after this. like this:[box=] keep
01:40:464 (1) - ^ ^

DMTfarc

DMTfarc wrote:

[Kencho's Normal]

  • 00:22:704 (3) - → 雙折返很坑的
    01:28:704 (4) - 距离有点远了,这样比较好 我覺得原本的比較好=.=

    00:20:784 (2,3,4) - 加个clap
    00:35:664 (2) - keep

No Reply=Fixed

Thanks for mod

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Topic Starter
Koiyuki
Kagetsu

Kagetsu wrote:

request


[Easy]
  1. 00:04:944 (2) - snap to white tick? i know you're intended to follow voice but this could confuse a newbie player it wont because it's just a slider end
  2. 00:37:104 (1,3) - supernazi... blanket between thos 2 isn't perfect aaaaa lazy to fix
  3. 00:39:984 (4,1) - this might be confusing, because 4 isn't aiming to 1... not a big deal tho why it will be confusing?
  4. 00:57:264 - i would prefer this beat were clibkable... it isn't a big problem because it's an easy so idk lol .-.
  5. 01:07:824 (1,3) - this might confuse a newbie player because 01:07:824 (1) - isn't completely gone when 01:09:744 (3) - appears slider head and the body are most appeared, imo it's fine


[Neko]
  1. 00:11:424 (4) - this might be confusing to read, also it will be a pain in score v2 xD in fact it's easy playing
  2. 00:20:784 (1,3) - add clap maybe? hmm not needed imo
  3. 01:13:344 - kinda weird that you're ignoring this beat.. try something like this maybe? changed
  4. 01:19:824 - keep
  5. 01:26:424 (7) - this is probably the hardest jump in the map... problem about this is this beat isn't that strong as previous so idk... it's perfectly playable tho, so up to you so i keep xD
  6. 01:31:824 (3,4) - same as previous... i guess you like this style tho xd

so yeah... i'm just pointing nazi stuff because your map is already perfect lol
good luck <3

Freesongs

FreeSongs wrote:

Hihi, as requested

[Neko]
00:55:104 - feel like the beat here is pretty strong. I would suggest to use a 1/4 slider at 00:54:984 - maybe you are right but it feels quite bad when playing with 1/4 slider... i'd like to keep
00:02:544 (1,2) - this distance is a bit too large here. (I would move them closer to the screen centre) in insane 1/1 gap is fine here
01:01:944 - i think you should map this out like what you did here 00:57:744 (6,7,1) - no i wanna keep this 3/4
01:17:304 - ^ ^
01:13:464 - ^ ok
01:09:744 (1,2) - the music here is kinda hype imo. I would replace these sliders with jumps instead. (like this:) nice

Good luck!

DMTfarc

DMTfarc wrote:

M4M
[General]

  • 看起来并没有什么不好的地方
[Easy]

  • 00:04:464 (1) - 00:21:264 (4) - 加个finish或者clap吧
    00:04:944 (2) - 00:35:664 (4) - 01:26:064 (4) - 这三个滑条有点奇怪,导致某些萌新不知♂所措 并不会
    00:27:504 (3,4) - 01:03:024 (4,5) - 01:10:704 (4,5) -
    01:18:384 (4,5) - 加个whistle或者clap比较好
    感觉这个diff很适合我

    音效all fixed
[Neko]

  • 00:11:184 (3,4) - 这两个叠在一块了,读图读不好会断的
    01:31:824 (3,4) - ↑ 故意的,insane这还读不出来?
    00:40:464 (3) - 左右翻转一下-.- nope
    01:26:184 (6,7) - 跳的太大,歌曲上也没多大变化-.- nope我自己dt轻松接
图做的不错=w=

thanks for modding
smallboat
[General]
  1. AIbat開起來怎麼錯誤? (看到Easy的編碼擠在一起,應該是這原因?)
[Easy]
  1. 沒啥
[Kencho's Normal]
  1. Nothing to say也沒啥
[Lavender's Hard] 跟N的SV速度比較差了0.50之遠?
  1. Nothing to say too.
[Neko]
  1. 00:36:384 (6) - 忘了NC?

EDIT : Confirm all diff mapset, really looks so nice, so I don't say any nazi problem at my modding here.
Topic Starter
Koiyuki
nc added, thanks <3
smallboat
Bubbled
BeatofIke
We did some minor fixes. Everything checks out.
Map Qualified~
Topic Starter
Koiyuki
thanks a lot <3
Lavender
老司机带我飞
看着自己的汽车残骸哭出了声
Kencho
悶聲飛圖
Underforest
nice mapset, grats
FreeSongs
恭喜! :)
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