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Wingmann

Joined November 2014

Wingmann 2015-10-29T03:10:42+00:00

Hi!

Easy:
01:09:707 (3) - This slider looks neat if rotated -15 degrees and blanketed around this slider: 01:08:343 (2)
Normal:
00:31:014 (6) - Replace whistle with finish?
00:34:593 (4) - ^
00:41:582 (6) - Move to x246 y172 so that it isn't overlapped by the circle before (just my opinion)
01:23:514 (3) - Blanket this with 01:22:661 (2) ?
Hard:
00:57:264 (4) - Move right 1 grid square? improves the blanket
All I could find!
Nice map, good luck with ranking!

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-10-29T03:43:15+00:00

Wingmann wrote:
Hi!

Easy:
01:09:707 (3) - This slider looks neat if rotated -15 degrees and blanketed around this slider: 01:08:343 (2) I was wondering how to do a blanket here, thanks.
Normal:
00:31:014 (6) - Replace whistle with finish? nah, it doesn't look fit.
00:34:593 (4) - ^ same as above.
00:41:582 (6) - Move to x246 y172 so that it isn't overlapped by the circle before (just my opinion) It could have been moved, but it won't fit the ds.
01:23:514 (3) - Blanket this with 01:22:661 (2) ? same as above.
Hard:
00:57:264 (4) - Move right 1 grid square? improves the blanket fixed
All I could find!
Nice map, good luck with ranking!

Thanks!

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2015-10-29T17:02:13+00:00

Hey, I made some changes to my diff, I might do some more later on as I think some parts need remapping but I might wait to see what the modders think of it first.

Anyways heres my update http://puu.sh/l26Eb/d71f5befe3.osu

RVMathew

985 posts

Joined December 2013

RVMathew 2015-10-30T09:43:42+00:00

Hi Electoz,

Earlier in the week I mentioned my interest in making a GD. The pattern is finished although the hitsounds are incomplete.

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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Artist:Hana
ArtistUnicode:Hana
Creator:Electoz
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Source:Idol Mahou Shoujo Chiruchiru ☆ Michiru
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287,44,85008,2,0,P|331:43|406:20,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,13,85349,6,0,P|497:63|484:135,1,95.9999970703126
453,190,85690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
453,190,85860,2,0,P|456:270|358:286,1,191.999994140625
331,197,86371,1,8,0:0:0:0:
331,197,86542,6,0,P|254:144|182:204,1,191.999994140625
258,257,87053,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,282,87224,2,0,L|277:251,1,95.9999970703126
350,282,87565,2,0,L|238:251,1,95.9999970703126,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,352,87905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,352,88076,6,0,L|350:377,1,95.9999970703126
444,356,88417,1,8,0:0:0:0:
482,268,88587,2,0,P|496:201|416:97,1,191.999994140625
430,103,89099,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,67,89269,6,0,P|273:42|128:61,1,191.999994140625
53,120,89780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
178,120,89951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,49,90121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,166,90292,2,0,P|137:219|139:284,1,95.9999970703126,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,236,90633,2,0,P|52:283|69:328,1,95.9999970703126
257,367,91144,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,333,91315,2,0,P|394:266|343:177,1,191.999994140625
257,138,91826,1,8,0:0:0:0:
386,52,92167,6,0,P|304:49|257:140,1,191.999994140625,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,137,92678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,329,93019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,252,93360,6,0,P|351:276|257:335,1,191.999994140625
259,332,93871,2,0,P|179:278|87:255,1,191.999994140625,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,217,94383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
33,127,94553,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,36,94724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,55,94894,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,95235,2,0,L|256:60,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,156,95746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,329,96258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96343,12,0,98985,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99155,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99326,2,0,P|182:221|89:211,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,82,100349,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,123,100519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,82,100690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,123,100860,2,0,B|516:199|428:284,1,160
408,336,101371,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,322,101542,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101627,12,0,102905,0:0:0:0:

Hope you like it. GDer's feel free to try it

Edit: Below is the difficulty with fixed timing points. You may notice that there are random bookmarks but that is for helping me with my hitsounding.
puu.sh/l3isR/1b571ff469.zip

Also: http://puu.sh/l3ihx/a85c172358.jpg Could not help but notice that

Factorial

691 posts

Joined August 2013

Factorial 2015-11-03T02:38:34+00:00

From my modding queue, as you requested:

Ordinary Modding

General:

Video contains NSFW stuff, you must have a notice on the beatmap description.

Easy:

Try rotating sliders here, like 00:48:570 (3) to have more variation.
I recommend that you play some Easy/Normal maps to get an idea.
01:13:627 (2,1) - Blanket

Normal:

00:29:991 (4,5) - Combine these into a repeating slider
00:35:275 (1,2) - ^
00:40:730 (5,6) - Not distance snapped here
00:51:298 (2) - Too many unwanted sliderpoints here, you could simplify this curve to make it more neat, like this:
SPOILER
01:29:139 (3) - ^
00:46:525 (6) - ^
01:11:411 (1) - When placing a spinner, make sure that there's enough recovery time. On Normal, it should be 2 beats. You could shorten this or replace with notes instead.
01:22:661 (2,3) - Blanket

DominikWW's Advanced:

Sliders here overlaps each other, looking just like a very long one. It would be better if you increase the slider velocity into 0.85x and distance snapping into 1.3x and circle size to 3.5 to cope with the difficuly spread.

That's all, can't mod Hard and Insane. GL on mapping

Doormat

2,049 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2015-11-04T01:27:16+00:00

Hello, from my NM queue-

Not really a fan of the Grisaia series (the artstyle looks a little weird to me) but this is a pretty catchy song~

Difficulties looked at: Easy, Normal, DominikWW’s Advanced, Hard, Mathew’s Hard+, Nathan’s Insane

- bolded difficulties are the ones that I modded

Easy

00:02:662 (1) – I don’t think having the slider end on the downbeat is a good idea; the downbeat (big white tick) has a really strong beat, and I think it would be better if you did something similar to what you did in Normal here
00:10:801 (1) – Shorten this spinner so that it starts at 00:11:266 and ends on 00:14:480
00:28:116 (1,2,3) – Your rhythm here feels incredibly awkward. Maybe try a rhythm like this? I think it fits the song more nicely
SPOILER
00:32:377 (1) – Extend this slider so that it ends on 00:33:230 and not 00:33:059
00:39:707 (2,3) – Please don’t end these sliders on downbeats =w=;;
00:58:457 (1) – I think you should move this to 00:58:116 and make it into a 4/1 repeat slider. Also, there’s an unnecessary middle pivot in this slider; delete it.
SPOILER
01:01:866 (3) – Don’t end this on the red tick; it feels off. End it on the white tick at 01:03:230
01:22:661 (4,5,1) – This felt a little awkward to play; the rhythm feels really off here. Maybe you can try a rhythm like this?
SPOILER
01:30:502 (3) – I’d divide this up into a circle and 3/2 slider; the downbeat is really strong and I think it’d be a wasted opportunity if it was in the middle of a slider
SPOILER
01:31:866 (5) – Same thing as above; split this slider into a circle and a 3/2 slider

Normal

00:05:220 (3) – I think you should move this to 00:04:987 and make it a 1/2 repeat slider. It fits the rhythm nicely
SPOILER
00:10:801 (1) – Same spinner problem here that you had in Easy; have it start at 00:11:266 and ends on 00:14:480
00:38:684 (1,2) – Reverse the order of these so that the circle is before the slider. Also, place the new combo at 00:39:025
SPOILER
for context, the (1) in the image is placed at 00:39:025
00:58:798 (2) – Fix this blanket
01:11:411 (1) – I’m not sure if there’s enough recovery time between the end of the spinner to 01:13:627 (1).
01:15:332 (3) – Shorten this into a 1/1 slider (it should end on the red tick at 01:15:673
01:32:207 (4) – Fix this blanket

DominikWW’s Advanced

00:02:662 (1) – Don’t end this slider on the downbeat; do something similar to what the other mappers did in Normal or Hard
00:28:798 (2) – Fix this blanket please-
00:32:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) – This combo is really long and looks out of place with the rest of the song
00:45:161 (5) – I feel like this slider is a little bit too long. Maybe shorten it into a 1/1 slider? (have it end on the white tick at 00:45:502)
01:19:934 (3) – This repeat slider doesn’t really make sense in my opinion, as the beat on 01:20:445 is much stronger than the one on 01:20:616. Maybe try something like this?
SPOILER
01:30:843 (3) – ^
01:23:855 (5) – Why is this ending on a blue tick? It feels like it ends too early. Have the slider end on 01:24:366 instead

Hard

00:08:708 (5) – This slider feels really long and out of place with what you did before it. Maybe try something like this?
SPOILER
for context the (5) in the image is at 00:08:708
00:10:801 (1) – Same spinner problem you have on almost all the other difficulties.
00:35:275 (1,2) – I’d reverse the order here, so that the circle comes before the slider
01:07:320 (1,2,3) – I’d use the same slider shape here
01:11:411 (1) – This spinner feels like it starts too early and ends too late in my opinion; maybe have it start on 01:11:752 and end on 01:13:116?
01:25:559 (4) – Blanket fix please-
01:27:775 (2) – I think this slider is a little too long; make it a 1/2 slider instead
01:29:309 (6) – Why is this ending on a blue tick? It feels like it ends too early. Have the slider end on 01:29:991 instead

Mathew’s Hard+

00:03:359 (1) – I wouldn’t make a slider tail end on this downbeat here, as I think it should be clickable.
00:11:266 (1) – Normally, I would think that the recovery time between the spinner and 00:14:480 (1) is fine. However, because of the sudden tempo change from 129 BPM to 176 BPM, I think that it affects the recovery time and makes it much harder to adjust to the new BPM. I’d shorten this spinner to maybe 00:14:057 to help accommodate the sudden tempo change
01:20:445 (2,3) – I think having a 1/1 slider at 01:20:445 would fit the rhythm better than having a circle and 1/2 slider
01:21:809 (2,3) – Reverse the order here so that the slider is on 01:21:809 and the circle is on 01:22:320
01:33:059 (3,1,2) – These aren’t properly stacked; move the (3) and (2) to x260, y332 to fix that

Nathan’s Insane

00:11:266 (1) – Normally, I would think that the recovery time between the spinner and 00:14:650 (1) is fine. However, because of the sudden tempo change from 129 BPM to 176 BPM, I think that it affects the recovery time and makes it much harder to adjust to the new BPM. I’d shorten this spinner to maybe 00:14:057 to help accommodate the sudden tempo change
00:14:480 – Add a circle here if you go with the above suggestion
00:23:855 (4,1) – I’d reverse the order here so that the slider is on 00:23:855 and the circle is on 00:24:536. If you take this suggestion, move the new combo to 00:23:855
00:28:627 – I’m pretty sure you missed a pretty strong beat here. Add a circle perhaps?
00:29:820 – ^
00:53:343 (5,1) – This pattern here feels a little off to me, especially since you missed a strong beat at 00:53:855. Maybe try something like this?
SPOILER
you’re going to have to delete the circle at 00:54:195 in order to make this work
[img] https://i.gyazo.com/ca549ed5780dd5342c8 ... f50df2.png
00:58:798 (5) – ^
00:54:707 (4) – Something similar to the above; try out this pattern instead of a 1/1 repeat slider, as the repeat slider feels off in my opinion
SPOILER
01:00:161 (4) – ^; you’re going to have to delete 01:01:014 (6) to make this work
01:17:036 (6,1) – Reverse the pattern here so that the slider is before the circle (slider on 01:17:036, circle on 01:17:548). If you take this suggestion, move the new combo to the slider
01:27:945 (4,1) – ^

--
Hope this helps you out

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-11-04T05:21:06+00:00

For the posts modded for this map, thank you very much.
I'm quite busy this week and haven't got any much mood to mapping so I will reply the post later in the week.

RVMathew

985 posts

Joined December 2013

RVMathew 2015-11-04T20:51:35+00:00

Doormat wrote:
Hello, from my NM queue-

Not really a fan of the Grisaia series (the artstyle looks a little weird to me) but this is a pretty catchy song~

Mathew’s Hard+
00:03:359 (1) – I wouldn’t make a slider tail end on this downbeat here, as I think it should be clickable. Changed it
00:11:266 (1) – Normally, I would think that the recovery time between the spinner and 00:14:480 (1) is fine. However, because of the sudden tempo change from 129 BPM to 176 BPM, I think that it affects the recovery time and makes it much harder to adjust to the new BPM. I’d shorten this spinner to maybe 00:14:057 to help accommodate the sudden tempo change Changed to that time. my time was better imo but it if I kept it the way it was it would be frustrating to players.
01:20:445 (2,3) – I think having a 1/1 slider at 01:20:445 would fit the rhythm better than having a circle and 1/2 slider Fixed
01:21:809 (2,3) – Reverse the order here so that the slider is on 01:21:809 and the circle is on 01:22:320 Fixed
01:33:059 (3,1,2) – These aren’t properly stacked; move the (3) and (2) to x260, y332 to fix that Changed to a different position because it works well.
Thanks for the mod. Also made several changes thanks to Mecheman

--
Hope this helps you out

@ Electoz. http://puu.sh/l3ihx/a85c172358.jpg I managed to find the same background with much higher resolution and without the fps written on it.

New image: http://puu.sh/l9rbX/40505253bf.jpg
You will have to size it down to 1366*768 though.

I will upload the updated version sooner or later.

Thanks for the mod.

Last edited by RVMathew 2015-11-07T01:48:40+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-11-07T01:16:31+00:00

Neil Leo wrote:
From my modding queue, as you requested:
Ordinary Modding
General:
Video contains NSFW stuff, you must have a notice on the beatmap description.
The game itself didn't contain any kind of that thing. So I will leave it at this.
Easy:
Try rotating sliders here, like 00:48:570 (3) to have more variation. fixed
I recommend that you play some Easy/Normal maps to get an idea. Duly noted.
01:13:627 (2,1) - Blanket
That's the best blanked I can do, sry.
Normal:
00:29:991 (4,5) - Combine these into a repeating slider fixed
00:35:275 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:40:730 (5,6) - Not distance snapped here I found nothing here.
00:51:298 (2) - Too many unwanted sliderpoints here, you could simplify this curve to make it more neat, like this: fixed
SPOILER
01:29:139 (3) - ^ fixed
00:46:525 (6) - ^ fixed
01:11:411 (1) - When placing a spinner, make sure that there's enough recovery time. On Normal, it should be 2 beats. You could shorten this or replace with notes instead. I think this is already enough.
01:22:661 (2,3) - Blanket
fixed
That's all, can't mod Hard and Insane. GL on mapping

Thanks

RVMathew

985 posts

Joined December 2013

RVMathew 2015-11-07T01:47:49+00:00

Here is the updated difficulty.

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Idol Mahou Shoujo Chiruchiru  Michiru intro video.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 73627
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9

[Metadata]
Title:MAJICK
TitleUnicode:MAJICK
Artist:Hana
ArtistUnicode:Hana
Creator:Electoz
Version:Mathew's Hard+
Source:Idol Mahou Shoujo Chiruchiru ☆ Michiru
Tags:Magical Girl Chiruchiru Michiru Grisaia Frontwing Nathan DominikWW Mathew
BeatmapID:815739
BeatmapSetID:365163

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.JPG",0,0
Video,0,"michiru_op.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
3825,465.116279069767,4,2,2,30,1,0
3825,-125,4,2,2,30,0,0
14480,340.909090909091,4,1,2,65,1,0
27945,-125,4,1,2,65,0,0
28116,-125,4,2,2,65,0,0
39025,-100,4,1,2,65,0,0
74480,-83.3333333333333,4,1,2,90,0,1
95786,-166.666666666667,4,1,2,90,0,1
96298,-100,4,1,2,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 68,140,227
Combo2 : 255,102,179
Combo3 : 255,192,0
Combo4 : 242,24,57

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316,203,3359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,30,3824,5,0,0:0:0:0:
255,72,4057,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,40,4290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
127,69,4522,2,2,P|57:167|56:179,1,128,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,231,5220,1,8,0:0:0:0:
135,285,5452,6,2,P|214:288|329:329,1,192,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,341,6383,2,0,L|451:286,1,64
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470,111,7313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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73,155,9173,6,0,P|61:251|259:313,1,320
369,275,10801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,11266,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,11383,12,0,14057,0:0:0:0:
255,192,14480,5,4,0:0:0:0:
255,192,14650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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33,87,36127,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-11-07T04:07:40+00:00

Doormat wrote:
Hello, from my NM queue-

Not really a fan of the Grisaia series (the artstyle looks a little weird to me) but this is a pretty catchy song~

Difficulties looked at: Easy, Normal, DominikWW’s Advanced, Hard, Mathew’s Hard+, Nathan’s Insane
- bolded difficulties are the ones that I modded
Easy
00:02:662 (1) – I don’t think having the slider end on the downbeat is a good idea; the downbeat (big white tick) has a really strong beat, and I think it would be better if you did something similar to what you did in Normal here fixed

00:10:801 (1) – Shorten this spinner so that it starts at 00:11:266 and ends on 00:14:480 fixed
00:28:116 (1,2,3) – Your rhythm here feels incredibly awkward. Maybe try a rhythm like this? I think it fits the song more nicely fixed
SPOILER
00:32:377 (1) – Extend this slider so that it ends on 00:33:230 and not 00:33:059 fixed
00:39:707 (2,3) – Please don’t end these sliders on downbeats =w=;; fixed, sry.
00:58:457 (1) – I think you should move this to 00:58:116 and make it into a 4/1 repeat slider. Also, there’s an unnecessary middle pivot in this slider; delete it. fixed
SPOILER
01:01:866 (3) – Don’t end this on the red tick; it feels off. End it on the white tick at 01:03:230 fixed
01:22:661 (4,5,1) – This felt a little awkward to play; the rhythm feels really off here. Maybe you can try a rhythm like this? fixed I changed the last hitcircle into a slider because it feels a bit off.
SPOILER
01:30:502 (3) – I’d divide this up into a circle and 3/2 slider; the downbeat is really strong and I think it’d be a wasted opportunity if it was in the middle of a slider fixed
SPOILER
01:31:866 (5) – Same thing as above; split this slider into a circle and a 3/2 slider
fixed

Normal
00:05:220 (3) – I think you should move this to 00:04:987 and make it a 1/2 repeat slider. It fits the rhythm nicely fixed, but not as you suggested.
SPOILER
00:10:801 (1) – Same spinner problem here that you had in Easy; have it start at 00:11:266 and ends on 00:14:480 fixed
00:38:684 (1,2) – Reverse the order of these so that the circle is before the slider. Also, place the new combo at 00:39:025 fixed
SPOILER
for context, the (1) in the image is placed at 00:39:025
00:58:798 (2) – Fix this blanket I see nothing wrong here, or did I miss something?
01:11:411 (1) – I’m not sure if there’s enough recovery time between the end of the spinner to 01:13:627 (1). I think it's fine here,and I put the next slider in the middle of the screen to ensure that beginner players are able to play this.
01:15:332 (3) – Shorten this into a 1/1 slider (it should end on the red tick at 01:15:673 It sounds a bit off, so I will not change it, for now.
01:32:207 (4) – Fix this blanket
fixed

Hard
00:08:708 (5) – This slider feels really long and out of place with what you did before it. Maybe try something like this? fixed
SPOILER
for context the (5) in the image is at 00:08:708
00:10:801 (1) – Same spinner problem you have on almost all the other difficulties. fixed
00:35:275 (1,2) – I’d reverse the order here, so that the circle comes before the slider fixed
01:07:320 (1,2,3) – I’d use the same slider shape here fixed
01:11:411 (1) – This spinner feels like it starts too early and ends too late in my opinion; maybe have it start on 01:11:752 and end on 01:13:116? fixed
01:25:559 (4) – Blanket fix please- fixed
01:27:775 (2) – I think this slider is a little too long; make it a 1/2 slider instead It's a bit sudden, so I will keep it as it is
01:29:309 (6) – Why is this ending on a blue tick? It feels like it ends too early. Have the slider end on 01:29:991 instead fixed

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Hope this helps you out

Thanks for your effort for modding every diffs.

@ Mathew : bg's changed now, thanks.

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2015-11-07T17:24:41+00:00

Here is my updated diff

http://puu.sh/lcQB7/7845264732.osu

I havent used the new background so if you can could you change it for me

DominikWW

55 posts

Joined September 2015

DominikWW 2015-11-09T19:57:11+00:00

Neil Leo wrote:
DominikWW's Advanced:
Sliders here overlaps each other, looking just like a very long one. It would be better if you increase the slider velocity into 0.85x and distance snapping into 1.3x and circle size to 3.5 to cope with the difficuly spread.
I will think about it.

Doormat wrote:
DominikWW’s Advanced
00:02:662 (1) – Don’t end this slider on the downbeat; do something similar to what the other mappers did in Normal or Hard ok changed
00:28:798 (2) – Fix this blanket please- fixed
00:32:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) – This combo is really long and looks out of place with the rest of the song changed
00:45:161 (5) – I feel like this slider is a little bit too long. Maybe shorten it into a 1/1 slider? (have it end on the white tick at 00:45:502) changed
01:19:934 (3) – This repeat slider doesn’t really make sense in my opinion, as the beat on 01:20:445 is much stronger than the one on 01:20:616. Maybe try something like this? ok changed
SPOILER
01:30:843 (3) – ^
01:23:855 (5) – Why is this ending on a blue tick? It feels like it ends too early. Have the slider end on 01:24:366 instead huch? I have no idea xD Fixed.

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Slayed_old_1

Slayed_old_1 2015-11-13T15:51:47+00:00

sup.
#from_my_queue

overall

1. change BG size to 1366x768 and rename it to bg.jpg

2. probably u should find a better video, can this is too low

advanced

increase spacing. now its too little for an advanced

1. 00:30:673 (5) - this overlapping doesnt look ok, probably u should replave this slider somewhere else

2. 00:41:752 (2) - strong beat is here, so u should put NC here and put away it from 00:41:411 (1) -

3. 00:44:139 (2,3,4) - really bad place, its very hard to read. use my 1st advice and remap it with another spacing

4. 00:46:014 (6) - strong beat here, NC

5. 00:51:809 (5) - this slider ends on a big white tick (that should be clickable), also this speed change doesnt look nice for an advanced. try to do smth with this slider

6. 01:12:093 (3) - another slider that ends on a big white tick

7. 01:18:400 (4) - stack the end of this slider with this note 01:19:764 (2)

hard

its a very strange hard lol. its smth like advanced or what

1. the green tick from here 00:03:824 - should be placed here 00:04:057, so there will be normal spacing between these 2 notes 00:03:359 (2,3) -

2. 00:05:685 - missing a note on a big white tick is a bad idea. my suggestion to you is to put a circle here 00:05:452 - and stack a 1/1 slider here: 00:05:685

3. 00:09:173 (7) - same as ^. also its a very bad slider. try smth like this: bump

4. 00:26:752 (1) - break should end here, because its a big white tick, aslo it will be better for rhytm. this is my suggestion how to map this part:

5. 00:27:945 (6) - this note is useless, it doesnt match anything here, i can suggest u to put it away

6. 00:31:355 (2) - you are missing 2 many nores here. its very bad for hard. try to map every white/red tick in this period of time: 00:31:355 - 00:32:207, also do this note 00:32:207 - clickable (not the end/middle of the slider)

7. 00:32:718 (1,4) - probably these 2 blankets should be similar to each other. 00:34:252 (6) - probably, this too

8. 00:38:684 (1) - stack this note with the end of this slider 00:39:707 (5)

9. 00:44:480 (1) - stack the end of this slider with the end of this 00:43:457 (2) - slider

10. 00:52:832 (1,4) - correct the overlapping here, it doesnt fit your map

11. 00:54:195 (6,8) - same as 8

12. 01:08:002 (2,3) - same as 10

13. 01:14:820 (4,6) - again overlapping

14. 01:17:548 (5,8) - stack these notes

15. 01:25:389 (3,4,5,6,7) - 2 much overlapping here. i can suggest you to remap this part because it really dosnt look ok

16. 01:28:457 (3,4,5,6) - ^

17. 01:35:445 (5) - end this slider here 01:36:127 - because vocal is going up to this point

DominikWW

55 posts

Joined September 2015

DominikWW 2015-11-13T19:11:49+00:00

ohyeahitsjustme wrote:
sup.
#from_my_queue

advanced
increase spacing. now its too little for an advanced I was too lazy the last time. But You're the second one who mentioned that so I will change it ^^

1. 00:30:673 (5) - this overlapping doesnt look ok, probably u should replave this slider somewhere else

2. 00:41:752 (2) - strong beat is here, so u should put NC here and put away it from 00:41:411 (1) - fixed

3. 00:44:139 (2,3,4) - really bad place, its very hard to read. use my 1st advice and remap it with another spacing

4. 00:46:014 (6) - strong beat here, NC changed

5. 00:51:809 (5) - this slider ends on a big white tick (that should be clickable), also this speed change doesnt look nice for an advanced. try to do smth with this slider First I didn't want to change it because I like this one. But I think you're right the speed change doesn't fit very well to advance

6. 01:12:093 (3) - another slider that ends on a big white tick changed

7. 01:18:400 (4) - stack the end of this slider with this note 01:19:764 (2)

Thanks for the mod =)

Update:

Advance

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Electoz

1,886 posts

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Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-11-14T04:34:39+00:00

ohyeahitsjustme wrote:
sup.
#from_my_queue

overall

1. change BG size to 1366x768 and rename it to bg.jpg

2. probably u should find a better video, can this is too low this is the best I can find, sorry. (it's 480p already and if I were put sth like 720p or more in then it will be like 30mb+)

hard

its a very strange hard lol. its smth like advanced or what

1. the green tick from here 00:03:824 - should be placed here 00:04:057, so there will be normal spacing between these 2 notes 00:03:359 (2,3) - replaced the green tick

2. 00:05:685 - missing a note on a big white tick is a bad idea. my suggestion to you is to put a circle here 00:05:452 - and stack a 1/1 slider here: 00:05:685 changed the circle you suggested and the previous one to a slider, since having 3 hitcircle continuously looks weird imo.

3. 00:09:173 (7) - same as ^. also its a very bad slider. try smth like this: bump fixed

4. 00:26:752 (1) - break should end here, because its a big white tick, aslo it will be better for rhytm. this is my suggestion how to map this part:

not sure here, because it seems weird to end the break before the vocals

5. 00:27:945 (6) - this note is useless, it doesnt match anything here, i can suggest u to put it away it does match the lyrics but I think removing this sounds better, fixed.

6. 00:31:355 (2) - you are missing 2 many nores here. its very bad for hard. try to map every white/red tick in this period of time: 00:31:355 - 00:32:207, also do this note 00:32:207 - clickable (not the end/middle of the slider) remapped

7. 00:32:718 (1,4) - probably these 2 blankets should be similar to each other. 00:34:252 (6) - probably, this too fixed

8. 00:38:684 (1) - stack this note with the end of this slider 00:39:707 (5) fixed

9. 00:44:480 (1) - stack the end of this slider with the end of this 00:43:457 (2) - slider fixed

10. 00:52:832 (1,4) - correct the overlapping here, it doesnt fit your map fixed

11. 00:54:195 (6,8) - same as 8 fixed

12. 01:08:002 (2,3) - same as 10 fixed

13. 01:14:820 (4,6) - again overlapping fixed

14. 01:17:548 (5,8) - stack these notes fixed

15. 01:25:389 (3,4,5,6,7) - 2 much overlapping here. i can suggest you to remap this part because it really dosnt look ok fixed

16. 01:28:457 (3,4,5,6) - ^ fixed

17. 01:35:445 (5) - end this slider here 01:36:127 - because vocal is going up to this point[/color] I put a reverse to the slider instead

Thanks for the mod.

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Prismetical 2015-11-14T19:46:03+00:00

Heya! :3

Easy

01:17:548 (3) - circle, if you say you don't wanna make it harder then look here what you did 01:22:661 (4,5,1) - :3

Normal

00:10:801 (1) - slider? (voice)

Advanced

00:06:615 (5) - make it straight, looks ugly
01:16:355 (6) - don't reverse at all, if you do a not reversing slider and fill the rest it will be much more fun then 4 reverses
01:27:264 (6) - ^
00:54:195 (3) - ^

Hard

00:04:987 (5,6,7) - plays better

00:10:801 (1) - slider? (voice) (same as in Normal)
00:58:457 (2) - shape?

Cool map!
Good luck on getting ranked!

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-11-15T07:46:50+00:00

Prismetical wrote:
Heya! :3

Easy
01:17:548 (3) - circle, if you say you don't wanna make it harder then look here what you did 01:22:661 (4,5,1) - :3 fixed

Normal
00:10:801 (1) - slider? (voice) I think this is fine.

Hard
00:04:987 (5,6,7) - plays better It doesn't feel fit the rythm to leave that white tick empty
00:10:801 (1) - slider? (voice) (same as in Normal) I think this is fine.
00:58:457 (2) - shape? changed position instead

Cool map!
Good luck on getting ranked!

Thanks

Sidetail

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Joined October 2012

Sidetail 2015-11-18T05:02:26+00:00

Don't kds this until you try this and find this helpful

Easy

00:07:545 (2) - At the end of the slider, there is a melody tone. As this slider doesn't seem to follow the vocals, try cutting this slider to half and put another slider at (00:08:476) so that it goes with melody.
00:09:406 (3) - Make this a longer slider. http://puu.sh/lpAUe/1dce17517b.jpg
Put another slider (1/2) at 00:10:801 (4) - and move spinner one tick back (and shorten the spinner one tick at the end) Should look like this: http://puu.sh/lpAXX/6250b4652e.jpg
01:07:661 (1) - Something feels empty here. I tried: http://puu.sh/lpBXq/d7a2638301.jpg
01:13:116 (2) - Just circle is okay for Easy diff.
01:22:661 (3) - Change to circle and add slider after http://puu.sh/lpC9G/46bc0c7f76.jpg

Pointing out some 1/2 spams to improve rhythms
00:29:480 (2) - Change second slider to http://puu.sh/lpBw9/81e159c1dc.jpg
00:40:389 (2) - Change second slider to ^http://puu.sh/lpBG3/7e3c430e9f.jpg
00:59:480 (2) - Change second slider to ^
00:48:570 (2) - Change this slider to circles. (Being more consistent as before as you are building up emphasis)
01:03:570 (1,2,3) - Remove all of these and do this: http://puu.sh/lpBgE/6c87f456f1.jpg
00:49:934 (3,1) - Change to: http://puu.sh/lpBqN/b53fa36689.jpg
01:32:207 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/lpCh6/7456511f59.jpg

Don't be afraid to use red ticks in Easy/Normal. If it works nicely with songs, it will make things better.

Just leaving only Easy as I ran out my time to mod for today... If you agree with the rhythm fixes, will further help you with Easy / Normal, other than that I will skip and move on the higher diff if I have time. Sorry ~

Electoz

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Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-11-18T09:32:20+00:00

BetaStar wrote:
:D Don't kds this until you try this and find this helpful

Easy
00:07:545 (2) - At the end of the slider, there is a melody tone. As this slider doesn't seem to follow the vocals, try cutting this slider to half and put another slider at (00:08:476) so that it goes with melody. DS-Senpai makes it overlap and I don't want to make an overlap in Easy, also I want the downbeat to be clickable.
00:09:406 (3) - Make this a longer slider. http://puu.sh/lpAUe/1dce17517b.jpg fixed
Put another slider (1/2) at 00:10:801 (4) - and move spinner one tick back (and shorten the spinner one tick at the end) Should look like this: http://puu.sh/lpAXX/6250b4652e.jpg fixed
01:07:661 (1) - Something feels empty here. I tried: http://puu.sh/lpBXq/d7a2638301.jpg That reverse on the red tick doesn't fit anything imo.
01:13:116 (2) - Just circle is okay for Easy diff. fixed
01:22:661 (3) - Change to circle and add slider after http://puu.sh/lpC9G/46bc0c7f76.jpg I think it's fine, it'll sounds a bit weird for not following the vocals though.

Pointing out some 1/2 spams to improve rhythms
00:29:480 (2) - Change second slider to http://puu.sh/lpBw9/81e159c1dc.jpg
00:40:389 (2) - Change second slider to ^http://puu.sh/lpBG3/7e3c430e9f.jpg
00:59:480 (2) - Change second slider to ^
00:48:570 (2) - Change this slider to circles. (Being more consistent as before as you are building up emphasis)
01:03:570 (1,2,3) - Remove all of these and do this: http://puu.sh/lpBgE/6c87f456f1.jpg
00:49:934 (3,1) - Change to: http://puu.sh/lpBqN/b53fa36689.jpg
01:32:207 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/lpCh6/7456511f59.jpg Yeah, I have tried following the vocals but it doesn't look so good.

Don't be afraid to use red ticks in Easy/Normal. If it works nicely with songs, it will make things better.

Just leaving only Easy as I ran out my time to mod for today... If you agree with the rhythm fixes, will further help you with Easy / Normal, other than that I will skip and move on the higher diff if I have time. Sorry ~

As for the 1/2 spams

They look a bit rushed though, because I set sv so low so I want the player to act slowly with the beats too. Also as I said, the reverse sliders on the red tick mostly don't match anything in the song, so this map will be like [very~very~easy~] << sth like that.

Thanks for the mod and keep'em coming! MOD MOD MOD MOD MOD MOD MOD KUDASAIIIIIIIII

Seijiro

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Seijiro 2015-11-18T16:46:54+00:00

Yo, I'm here from your queue for a M4M :3

[General]

Uncheck letterboxing on all diffs since it ruins the video real size

[Nathan's Insane]

Tbh, I dunno why you use so many different shapes for the sliders before the spinner at the beginning, but oh well, who cares...

00:19:423 (3) - I'd rather increase the distance from the previous object, maybe with a Ctrl + G... The current spacings feels more like 1/2, not 1/1

00:24:707 (2,1) - I don't really like overlaps :/

00:21:809 (3,4) - I thought that you were going to place the movement 3 --> 4 downwards... On 4 there is such a strong beat, yet you waste it with a straight flow D:

00:28:116 - 00:52:661 - You wasted like half of your beats on breaks, wtf. It is also hard to understand what you're actually following:
00:29:991 (3) - vocals;
00:31:014 (1) - Start on piano, end on piano's reverberation (which is synthetically modified);
00:33:570 (1) - Start and end on piano high pitch notes, repeat on nothing;
00:35:275 (2) - Didn't get it tbh;
00:36:298 (1) - Vocals
And so on...
Maybe this is a bit harsh, but imo that's not the best choice to map this part (I'm referring also to the second half of the section, where you keep using the counter-beat as the strong beat)

01:12:775 (1,2,3) - This spacing is way too cramped here to even read it properly :/ Increase it please

01:13:627 - Missing note I guess. It's the same instrument used to map 01:13:116 (3,4) -

01:20:445 (2,1) - This spacing is too short compared to the rest of your map

01:21:809 (2,1) - Same ^

01:34:593 (5,1) - After seeing 01:34:252 (3,4,5) - , 01:34:593 (5,1) - looks like a 1/2 note. Increase the spacing or put another stacked circle under 5

Maybe add at least 0.5 to the OD... it's the hardest diff after all and you have only jumps

[Mathew's Hard+]

Explain the OD8 which is something that even on Insanes is hard to find. Be serious please, even if this is a Hard+ it's not an Insane, which means that 7 is the upper limit

The spacing on more quiet parts is awfully short: a lot of objects are almost touching each other

00:32:889 (3,4) - Intentional stack?

00:39:025 (1,2) - The order if these objects is the opposite one: first goes the slider and then goes the circle. The strong beat is at 00:39:025 - so you can't place the slider on a more weaker note like the current one

00:54:025 (1,2) - Same ^

00:57:264 (3,4) - I'd rather use a 1/1 slider as you did till now. Cleaner and more beautiful to play too

00:59:480 (1,2) - Again, as before, your objects' order is inverted

01:05:957 (4,1) - Same ^

01:13:968 (3,1) - Misleading spacing: it looks more like a 1/2

01:27:264 (3,4) - If you really want slider on red ticks, add a repeat on 3 and remove 4. It's less stressing to understand it while playing

01:30:332 (5,1) - ... If you were trying to follow vocals, you took the wrong tick once again. f you wanted to follow instruments, it doesn't change

01:33:059 (3,1) - Not so perfect stack

01:34:934 (1,2) - I'd rather put a 1/1 slider starting from 1 and using the remain beats for another slider

[Hard]

The general spacing on the quiet parts is too low imo

00:07:545 (4,5,6) - What about converting them into 2 1/1 sliders?

00:10:801 - Why did you skip this note... it feels way too empty

00:14:480 - Break on a Hard diff on a TV Size? Isn't this a bit too lazy? .-. It is also one of the most rhythmical parts in the song

00:30:843 (7,1) - The difference in spacing between before and after 7 creates a bad flow, because the note on 1 is way stronger, yet it is less emphasized this way. Try putting 7 under 6's tail and do a Ctrl + G on 1

00:43:116 (1,2,3) - Lower spacing for no apparent reason imo. You have x1.20 between these, while you used x1.50 before, so why...

01:07:320 (1,2,3) - This one isn't really a triangle, since the orientation of those 3 isn't 120° each. Take the first one as a clone, Duplicate it (select and Ctrl +D) and then rotate the dupe (Ctrl + Shift + R) by wither 120° or -120° based on where you intend to move it

All the other maps finish at 01:42:945 - , why yours doesn't lol

General suggestion: try to not follow so much the vocals all the time. It gets boring after a while...

[DominikWW's Advanced]

00:11:731 (1) - Maybe make this spinner start 1/2 earlier

00:15:161 - As I said for the previous diff: it is a bit lazy to not map one of the most interesting parts on this song and above all this is a TV Size: it's already short, do not shorten it any further

00:44:139 (2,3) - Why just only one gets stacked while the other is left alone on the field? Use the same concept to place circles in the same combo please: it helps reading the map for newbie players

00:54:195 (3) - Using an even number of repeats confuses players a lot, above all at this difficulty. Remove a repeat or even both

00:59:650 (3) - Same ^

01:01:866 (3) - I might be too finicky, but this shape isn't so clean and tidy... It can be polished more imo

01:06:127 (2) - Same ^

01:14:650 (1,2) - We talked about this earlier: either stack them both or either deploy them on the field

01:16:355 (6) - Remove at least on repeat please

01:19:423 (1,2) - You should first use a circle, and then use the slider. As it is now you give more emphasis on the red ticks, which have no strong beat so far

01:25:559 (1,2) - You already know

01:27:264 (6) - Same ^, since it's basically copy pasta

01:39:025 - Same as for the previous diff. It's a TV Size, so map it till the end please (01:42:945 - )

Generally speaking this is a Normal diff, not an Advanced. Just because there are few more notes here and there it doesn't change much lol

[Normal]

00:10:801 - Why skipping this note...

00:14:480 - Useless break on a TV Size imo

00:32:207 (1,1) - Why double NC here? Remove the second one please

00:58:798 (2,4) - Kinda uncool overlap

01:02:207 (3) - This whole object can be deleted, since it's mapped on anything relevant at all: you're not following vocals, nor instruments, so what are you following? Also, avoid using an even number of repeats on the lowest diffs of a mapset

01:11:411 (1,1) - It is a rule to give a good amount of time to rest to the player after a spinner. On Normal diffs the average is about 2 measures, while here you have only 1 and a half. Imo you should remove 01:13:627 (1) - completely (see t/241019&start=0 for more info)

01:33:059 (1,1,1) - Rainbow! No, remove 2 NCs, you don't need them

01:35:786 (3) - Too attached to the slider where there is no actual beat to be emphasized. Moved this note 1/2 later please

OD, HP and AR can be lowered by 1 all

[Easy]

00:11:499 (1) - This spinner starts clearly 1/2 earlier

00:14:480 - Map the break please

00:44:480 (1,1) - Again multiple NCs without reason...

01:25:389 (1,1) - Which is the right NC here? =3=

01:25:389 - From here on you use only 2/1 sliders... Boooooring. We're in the kiai time too, why such sloppy rhythm D: You usded a lot of 1/1 before when you actually didn't need them too D:

01:41:582 - I'd prefer to end the map here...

Alright, that's all from me
Good luck~

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2015-11-20T05:36:46+00:00

[quote="MrSergio"]Yo, I'm here from your queue for a M4M :3

[General]

Uncheck letterboxing on all diffs since it ruins the video real size will uncheck for my diff

[Nathan's Insane]

Tbh, I dunno why you use so many different shapes for the sliders before the spinner at the beginning, but oh well, who cares... Will resahpe them since theyre ugly anyways

00:19:423 (3) - I'd rather increase the distance from the previous object, maybe with a Ctrl + G... The current spacings feels more like 1/2, not 1/1 used ctrl +G since it plays so nicely

00:24:707 (2,1) - I don't really like overlaps :/ get used to them, lol jk. fixed

00:21:809 (3,4) - I thought that you were going to place the movement 3 --> 4 downwards... On 4 there is such a strong beat, yet you waste it with a straight flow D: I think its fine, Only other thing that would suit here is a set of jumps which I didnt want

00:28:116 - 00:52:661 - You wasted like half of your beats on breaks, wtf. It is also hard to understand what you're actually following:
00:29:991 (3) - vocals;
00:31:014 (1) - Start on piano, end on piano's reverberation (which is synthetically modified);
00:33:570 (1) - Start and end on piano high pitch notes, repeat on nothing;
00:35:275 (2) - Didn't get it tbh;
00:36:298 (1) - Vocals
And so on...
I didnt realize it was this bad until you pointed it out to me. Remapping this entire section
Maybe this is a bit harsh, but imo that's not the best choice to map this part (I'm referring also to the second half of the section, where you keep using the counter-beat as the strong beat)

01:12:775 (1,2,3) - This spacing is way too cramped here to even read it properly :/ Increase it please Spacing was fine imo howeve I've remapped this section with bigger spaces anyway

01:13:627 - Missing note I guess. It's the same instrument used to map 01:13:116 (3,4) - added

01:20:445 (2,1) - This spacing is too short compared to the rest of your map increased the spacing a bit

01:21:809 (2,1) - Same ^ ^

01:34:593 (5,1) - After seeing 01:34:252 (3,4,5) - , 01:34:593 (5,1) - looks like a 1/2 note. Increase the spacing or put another stacked circle under 5 altered the spacing

Maybe add at least 0.5 to the OD... it's the hardest diff after all and you have only jumps changed to OD 8

Thanks for the mod

Here's my update. My diff sucks a bit less now http://puu.sh/ls1WZ/2583ebb1a5.osz

I forgot to uncheck letter boxing. Could you do it for me

Last edited by _handholding 2015-11-20T18:45:23+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

DominikWW

55 posts

Joined September 2015

DominikWW 2015-11-20T18:23:18+00:00

Prismetical wrote:
Heya! :3

Advanced
00:06:615 (5) - make it straight, looks ugly
01:16:355 (6) - don't reverse at all, if you do a not reversing slider and fill the rest it will be much more fun then 4 reverses
01:27:264 (6) - ^
00:54:195 (3) - ^
I've changed this parts you've mentioned ^^

Thx =)

MrSergio wrote:
Yo, I'm here from your queue for a M4M :3

[General]
Uncheck letterboxing on all diffs since it ruins the video real size k. I do it in my diff.

[DominikWW's Advanced]
00:11:731 (1) - Maybe make this spinner start 1/2 earlier why not

00:15:161 - As I said for the previous diff: it is a bit lazy to not map one of the most interesting parts on this song and above all this is a TV Size: it's already short, do not shorten it any further agree. I've mapped

00:44:139 (2,3) - Why just only one gets stacked while the other is left alone on the field? Use the same concept to place circles in the same combo please: it helps reading the map for newbie players yeah makes sense. I've changed all this parts.

00:54:195 (3) - Using an even number of repeats confuses players a lot, above all at this difficulty. Remove a repeat or even both I've changed them

00:59:650 (3) - Same ^

01:01:866 (3) - I might be too finicky, but this shape isn't so clean and tidy... It can be polished more imo I've changed this part

01:06:127 (2) - Same ^

01:14:650 (1,2) - We talked about this earlier: either stack them both or either deploy them on the field

01:16:355 (6) - Remove at least on repeat please

01:19:423 (1,2) - You should first use a circle, and then use the slider. As it is now you give more emphasis on the red ticks, which have no strong beat so far

01:25:559 (1,2) - You already know

01:27:264 (6) - Same ^, since it's basically copy pasta

01:39:025 - Same as for the previous diff. It's a TV Size, so map it till the end please (01:42:945 - ) Mapped
Generally speaking this is a Normal diff, not an Advanced. Just because there are few more notes here and there it doesn't change much lol I've changed some parts/ added new parts. I think it is much diffrent now on the new Update. So I think it's fine now to call it "Advance".

Thanks for the mod. You've mentioned some important points.

New Update

Advance

osu file format v14

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BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
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100,328,69025,2,0,P|36:280|20:200,1,146.250005578995,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,156,69707,2,0,B|56:92|128:72,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,60,70389,2,0,L|272:60,1,48.750001859665,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,120,70900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,71070,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,236,71241,5,2,0:0:0:0:
364,236,71411,2,0,P|320:304|272:320,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,200,72093,2,0,B|180:240|176:312,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,376,72775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,336,72945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,284,73116,2,0,L|16:228,1,48.750001859665,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,112,73627,5,0,0:0:0:0:
104,32,73968,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,32,74139,2,0,L|208:32,1,97.50000371933,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,36,74650,5,2,0:0:0:0:
316,68,74820,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,48,74991,2,0,B|432:56|432:56|476:120,1,97.50000371933,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,148,75502,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,208,75673,2,0,P|436:272|368:324,1,146.250005578995,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,340,76355,2,0,L|236:364,1,48.750001859665,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,320,76695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,368,76866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,336,77036,2,2,P|76:312|64:252,1,97.50000371933
64,204,77548,5,8,0:0:0:0:
64,204,77718,2,0,P|68:144|108:104,1,97.50000371933,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,84,78230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,70,78400,2,2,P|294:114|254:174,1,195.00000743866,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,79423,5,2,0:0:0:0:
176,216,79593,2,0,L|248:240,1,48.750001859665,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,173,79934,2,0,P|324:180|352:228,1,97.50000371933,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,256,80445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,216,80957,5,8,0:0:0:0:
243,321,81298,2,2,P|336:292|371:233,1,146.250005578995,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,92,82320,5,8,0:0:0:0:
148,52,82661,2,0,L|56:92,1,97.50000371933,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,144,83173,2,0,L|128:196,1,97.50000371933,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,252,83684,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,312,83855,2,0,L|44:354,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,252,84536,2,0,L|224:208,1,97.50000371933,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,192,85048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,320,85389,6,0,L|356:352,1,48.750001859665,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,364,85730,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,340,85900,2,2,P|448:304|512:264,1,97.50000371933
512,208,86411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,152,86582,2,2,P|456:96|364:60,1,146.250005578995,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,56,87264,2,0,L|300:12,2,48.750001859665,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,100,87775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,88,87945,2,0,P|168:136|156:200,1,97.50000371933,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,228,88457,5,8,0:0:0:0:
176,288,88627,2,0,L|280:316,1,97.50000371933,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,344,89139,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,316,89309,2,2,P|480:272|508:176,1,195.00000743866,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,188,90332,6,0,L|400:124,1,48.750001859665,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,80,90673,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,56,90843,2,0,P|248:52|192:76,1,97.50000371933,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,88,91355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,240,91866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,188,92207,2,0,P|392:256|348:340,1,146.250005578995,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,240,93059,5,8,0:0:0:0:
328,128,93400,2,0,P|280:112|224:120,1,97.50000371933,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,148,93911,2,0,P|148:188|140:248,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,296,94423,6,8,L|176:344,1,48.750001859665
235,332,94764,1,2,0:0:0:0:
235,332,94934,2,0,L|267:240,1,97.50000371933,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,233,95445,2,0,L|366:341,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96298,12,0,99025,0:0:0:0:
256,320,99536,6,0,P|308:268|320:196,1,146.250005578995,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,188,100389,2,0,P|216:128|268:84,1,97.50000371933,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,76,100900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,198,101241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,260,101411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101582,12,4,102945,0:0:0:0:

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-11-21T00:17:10+00:00

Now I'm lazier that my GD's lol.
Will take a look at mods later, sry.

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2015-11-24T13:58:57+00:00

[General]

break tiem is a little long , 14s.....

[Easy]

00:11:499 (1) - the end is not on red line,snap it

[Normal]

00:32:377 (1) - remove nc

01:13:627 (1) - remove for spinner

01:33:570 (1,1,2) - 11 removeNC, 2NC

[DominikWW's Advanced]

00:10:801 (3) - change to note,then spinner start at 00:11:266

00:38:684 add note on 00:39:025 (1)

00:45:843 (1) - end at 00:46:355

[Hard]

1st:
before break time , all the notes and slider nearly overlap, use 1.6x will be more clear

2nd:
make sure your DS is the same(some little jump is allow),and do not overlap

00:32:207 (4,2) - stack

00:53:002 (2,3) - change to slider will be better to play

00:56:752 (3,1,2,5) - try stack ,make beautiful

01:11:752 (1) - try : end at 01:13:627 then delete 01:13:627 (1,2)

01:14:480 (1,2,3) - try

SPOILER

[Nathan's Insane]

00:11:266 (1) - end at 00:14:057 then 00:14:480 add note will be easy to play

00:28:627 add not on 00:28:798 (2) -

01:34:764 add note

01:41:752 (1) - end at 01:43:116

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2015-11-25T02:19:53+00:00

moonlightleaf wrote:
[Nathan's Insane]

00:11:266 (1) - end at 00:14:057 then 00:14:480 add note will be easy to play I lengthened the slider but I didnt add the note after the spinner

00:28:627 add not on 00:28:798 (2) - done

01:34:764 add note added

01:41:752 (1) - end at 01:43:116 doesnt match the music at all

Heres my update http://puu.sh/lxKsg/a2d644d49a.osz (I added 2 notes and the SR went up by 0.1. ppy pls)

RVMathew

985 posts

Joined December 2013

RVMathew 2015-11-25T07:27:23+00:00

MrSergio wrote:
Yo, I'm here from your queue for a M4M :3

[General]
Uncheck letterboxing on all diffs since it ruins the video real size Fixed

[Mathew's Hard+]
Explain the OD8 which is something that even on Insanes is hard to find. Be serious please, even if this is a Hard+ it's not an Insane, which means that 7 is the upper limit.

For now I will not change the overall difficulty because in my opinion with OD7 it feels a bit too lenient. You bring an interesting point though because you believe that the difficulty name is a major factor in deciding the overall difficulty. I can understand that when it comes to difficulties such as easy and normal, but from hard and up the name should not be a major factor in deciding the overall difficulty. Moreover I am pretty sure there is no rule on the upper limit of the overall difficulty setting.

The spacing on more quiet parts is awfully short: a lot of objects are almost touching each other This is due to distance snap combined with slow slider velocity.

00:32:889 (3,4) - Intentional stack? Not intentional. I was fixing that actually.

00:39:025 (1,2) - The order if these objects is the opposite one: first goes the slider and then goes the circle. The strong beat is at 00:39:025 - so you can't place the slider on a more weaker note like the current one Got it. Fixed

00:54:025 (1,2) - Same ^ Got it. Fixed

00:57:264 (3,4) - I'd rather use a 1/1 slider as you did till now. Cleaner and more beautiful to play too Got it. Fixed

00:59:480 (1,2) - Again, as before, your objects' order is inverted Got it. Fixed

01:05:957 (4,1) - Same ^ Got it. Fixed

01:13:968 (3,1) - Misleading spacing: it looks more like a 1/2 Fixed

01:27:264 (3,4) - If you really want slider on red ticks, add a repeat on 3 and remove 4. It's less stressing to understand it while playing. To me I like the pattern in terms of visuals and rhythm. I tried your idea but then it felt weird when trying to fill in the missing space. I tried another idea which was to remove 01:28:116 (1) since that would make my above rhythm less painful to play according to you, but then it would affect the sliders after that in terms of looks.

01:30:332 (5,1) - ... If you were trying to follow vocals, you took the wrong tick once again. f you wanted to follow instruments, it doesn't change I decided to fix this by changing the rhythm into 3 notes.

01:33:059 (3,1) - Not so perfect stack Improved it. Note stacking is a pain.

01:34:934 (1,2) - I'd rather put a 1/1 slider starting from 1 and using the remain beats for another slider Fixed

Alright, that's all from me
Good luck~

Thank you for the mod.

Updated difficulty: http://puu.sh/lxYHq/7fdc83ed2c.osu

Paloch VeGa

121 posts

Joined August 2013

Paloch VeGa 2015-11-25T15:54:25+00:00

ม็อดครับ จาก Modq (M4M)

[General]

Hard+ มี object เยอะกว่า Insane พอสมควรเลยครับ
offset ที่สองช้าไปครับ ลองฟังที่ 25% speed ดูครับ เลื่อนเข้าไปอีกไม่น่าเกิน 10ms.
play time ของแต่ละดิฟต่างกันหลายดิฟมากครับ start กับ ending ต่างกันในหลายดิฟถึงแม้จะเป็น GD ควรปรับครับ คิดว่ามีผลต่อการ rank
ไม่น่าจะมีอะไรอีกนะครับ SP 17 แล้ว

[Easy]
- เพลงค่อนข้างเร็ว AR เพิ่มอีกนิดหน่อยน่าจะอ่านง่ายกว่าครับ
- ช่องว่างบางจุดที่เป็น 2/1 ซ้ำกันไปหน่อยครับ โดยเฉพาะช่วง kiai

00:04:755 - เสียงนี้น่าจะใช้ปลาย slider จะรู้สึกลงตัวกว่าครับ แล้วใส่ circle เพิ่มที่ 00:05:220
00:14:522 - spinner เสียงไม่ตรง ชัดมากครับ ดิฟอื่นไม่เป็น
00:30:843 (3,4,1) - pattern ไม่เหมาะกับเพลงเท่าไหรนะครับ ลองใช้เสียงที่ 00:31:184 เป็นจุดหลักเเทนดู
01:07:661 (1) - blanket
01:24:025 (1) - circle อยู่ในจังหวะของเพลงที่เบามากครับ เกือบจะเป็น overmapping อยู่แล้ว น่าจะให้ลงที่ 01:23:885 ดีกว่านะครับ
อีกหลายๆจุดของ 2/1 slider ที่รวมอยู่ในข้างบนน่าจะใช้ 1.5/1 slider ทำให้เหมาะกว่าครับ ใช้ repeat slider ด้วยก็ได้ครับ จะได้มีสีสันขึ้นมาหน่อย

[Normal]
- เห็นมีใช้ช่องว่าง 1/2 อยู่ในบางจุด คิดว่าในดิฟ Normal ไม่ควรใช้เยอะ บางจุดน่าใช้แต่ไม่มีโน๊ตวาง เช่น 00:29:991 , 00:35:445 , 00:42:945 เป็นต้นครับ

00:30:843 (1,2) - ไม่เเนะนำ directly stack ครับ งงมาก
00:32:207 (1) - คิดว่าโน๊ตนี้ไม่จำเป็นสำหรับ Normal ครับ
00:38;002 (1) - ท้าย slider เป็น overmapping ครับ
01:02:207 (5) - overmapped
ในช่วง kiai มีหลายจุดที่เล่นไม่ตามเสียงเพลงเลยครับ คิดว่า Normal ไม่ควรตามเสียงกลองนะครับ เหมือนเคยมีคนทักผมมาว่าแบบนี้แรงค์ไม่ได้ครับ
01:33:570 (1) - overmapped
ระวังเรื่อง overmapping ในดิฟนี้หน่อยนะครับ น่าจะหมดแล้วครับ

[DominikWW's Advanced]
- nice and quite smooth play, some fixes needed for a better map reading, here are my suggestions. Nice map btw

00:04:755 (2) - I don't agree with this slider end, because it will force you to skip mapping a strong vocal on 00:04:987
00:06:150 - end the slider here, and add a circle to replace the old end (I prefer to click on that sound better)
00:33:095 (2) - imo maybe a repeat 1/2 slider?
00:42:945 - are you sure of skipping these drum hits, the second one is also on a vocal as well
00:44;139 (2,3) - 1/2 slider would be more preferrable
00:46:355 - why not map this note as you've done in the pattern before?
00:52:320 - end the slider here and add something to replace the old end
01:12:093 (3) - fix this blanket a bit, the one with (3) wrapping around (2)'s end
01:14:650 (1,2) - here as well, a 1/2 slider would be better
01:25:559 (1,2) - ^ same ^

[Hard]
- แมพดีครับ blanket สวยดีในหลายจุด น่าจะเป้นดิฟที่คิดว่าดีที่สุดใน mapset ที่ม็อดมานะครับ

00:33:230 (2,3) - สลับที่กัน?
00:41:752 (9) - ต่อหางเป็น 1/2 slider เลยครับ
01:27:264 - เสียงร้องหนักอยู่นะครับ

[Mathew's Hard+]
- I know that you like to stack the notes, but it's kinda strange : some stacks are not worth it as it deteriorate the map flow
- here are some that I can pick up through the song
- clap inconsistancy, it's inaudible for most of them
- I think the volume for many specific beats are NEEDED be set to enhance the audibility of the song (also for other diffs as well, but not much as this)
- a middle diff with different ending time? but I agree that the real end should be here.

00:14:057 - reduce the slider volume further down
00:20:275 (2,3) - imo, I don't like this
00:38:855 (5,1) - not a good place to stack these
00:49:764 (3,1,2) - this flow is way out, remove the stacks here, make it a polygon or something else
00:53:885 (6,1) - imo, don't like this either
00:57:519 (3) - this kind of pattern hasn't been used when it can before, so I suggest ending the slider as a normal 1/2 one
01:03:230 (6,7) - you know what I want to say here (imo)
01:10:900 (2,3,4) - just want to say that I'm okay with this one

[Nathan's Insane]
- I liked the hits of this diff the most, but I think that as the hardest diff, some clickings are somehow missing
- some possible patterns are just ignored by using a long slider or a simple flow - it's somehow feels boring

00:48:570 (5,6,7,1,2) - this is one I've said up there, the drums are on every 1/2's while the pattern is only 1/1. It feels strange to see these in an Insane difficulty
01:06:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - increase the spacings of the slider patterns to give a feeling of going faster.
01:13:627 - I don't think skipping such a strong sound is a good idea here
01:24:025 (1) - remove this circle, it's not nessecary for an overmapping
01:25:218 (6) - here as well, but you can keep it if you like
01:34:764 - add something here, the flow is detached if you skip this vocal

คิดว่ายังต้องแก้พอสมควรเลยครับ สู้ๆครับ จะรอตอน ranked นะครับ

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-11-25T16:49:19+00:00

MrSergio wrote:
Yo, I'm here from your queue for a M4M :3

[General]
Uncheck letterboxing on all diffs since it ruins the video real size will do

[Hard]
The general spacing on the quiet parts is too low imo

00:07:545 (4,5,6) - What about converting them into 2 1/1 sliders? Nah

00:10:801 - Why did you skip this note... it feels way too empty I want the slider to be the last object before a spinner

00:14:480 - Break on a Hard diff on a TV Size? Isn't this a bit too lazy? .-. It is also one of the most rhythmical parts in the song

00:30:843 (7,1) - The difference in spacing between before and after 7 creates a bad flow, because the note on 1 is way stronger, yet it is less emphasized this way. Try putting 7 under 6's tail and do a Ctrl + G on 1 fixed

00:43:116 (1,2,3) - Lower spacing for no apparent reason imo. You have x1.20 between these, while you used x1.50 before, so why... because I don't want player to misread those three since there was a 1/1 spacing before

01:07:320 (1,2,3) - This one isn't really a triangle, since the orientation of those 3 isn't 120° each. Take the first one as a clone, Duplicate it (select and Ctrl +D) and then rotate the dupe (Ctrl + Shift + R) by wither 120° or -120° based on where you intend to move it fixed

All the other maps finish at 01:42:945 - , why yours doesn't lol
General suggestion: try to not follow so much the vocals all the time. It gets boring after a while...

[Normal]
00:10:801 - Why skipping this note... fixed

00:14:480 - Useless break on a TV Size imo fixed

00:32:207 (1,1) - Why double NC here? Remove the second one please fixed

00:58:798 (2,4) - Kinda uncool overlap fixed

01:02:207 (3) - This whole object can be deleted, since it's mapped on anything relevant at all: you're not following vocals, nor instruments, so what are you following? Also, avoid using an even number of repeats on the lowest diffs of a mapset fixed

01:11:411 (1,1) - It is a rule to give a good amount of time to rest to the player after a spinner. On Normal diffs the average is about 2 measures, while here you have only 1 and a half. Imo you should remove 01:13:627 (1) - completely (see t/241019&start=0 for more info) fixed

01:33:059 (1,1,1) - Rainbow! No, remove 2 NCs, you don't need them fixed

01:35:786 (3) - Too attached to the slider where there is no actual beat to be emphasized. Moved this note 1/2 later please fixed
OD, HP and AR can be lowered by 1 all it's fine

[Easy]
00:11:499 (1) - This spinner starts clearly 1/2 earlier Someone told me it's 1/2 later, now 1/2 earlier, fixed.

00:14:480 - Map the break please yeah yeah, mapped

00:44:480 (1,1) - Again multiple NCs without reason... fixed

01:25:389 (1,1) - Which is the right NC here? =3=

01:25:389 - From here on you use only 2/1 sliders... Boooooring. We're in the kiai time too, why such sloppy rhythm D: You usded a lot of 1/1 before when you actually didn't need them too D: because it is easy, I mean..diff

01:41:582 - I'd prefer to end the map here... It's hard to map since the spacing after the spinner is pretty long, and I don't want to remove the spinner and map sth instead because there will be more density than some of the diffs.

Alright, that's all from me
Good luck~

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-11-25T17:00:51+00:00

Paloch VeGa wrote:
ม็อดครับ จาก Modq (M4M)

[General]
Hard+ มี object เยอะกว่า Insane พอสมควรเลยครับ

Translation : Hard+ has more objects than Insane.

@Paloch VeGa : ขอบคุณมากครับ เดี๋ยวขอไปนอนก่อน ไม่ไหวละ เดี๋ยวมาตอบม็อดทีหลัง

To all GD's :

Paloch VeGa modded my map just before I update all of your GD's so some issues that he pointed out might be the same of the ones you have fixed, sorry for a late update on GDs.

Also I haven't map those breaks in Hard yet, I'll update later. Gotta go sleep~

RVMathew

985 posts

Joined December 2013

RVMathew 2015-11-25T17:34:48+00:00

[quote="Paloch VeGa"]ม็อดครับ จาก Modq (M4M)

[Mathew's Hard+]
- I know that you like to stack the notes, but it's kinda strange : some stacks are not worth it as it deteriorate the map flow
- here are some that I can pick up through the song
- clap inconsistancy, it's inaudible for most of them
- I think the volume for many specific beats are NEEDED be set to enhance the audibility of the song (also for other diffs as well, but not much as this)
I think what I need to do is do a overhaul of the hitsound pattern, and increase the volume of the hitsounds that I use by at least 2-3 dB for it to be more audible. When you say the clap is inconsistent, I think you are talking about hit-whistles. Nevertheless I will do a overhaul.

- a middle diff with different ending time? but I agree that the real end should be here. Got it.

00:14:057 - reduce the slider volume further down Will fix that.
00:20:275 (2,3) - imo, I don't like this Changed so 3 is on the other side. It looks more like a T-pattern enhancing readability.
00:38:855 (5,1) - not a good place to stack these Fixed in an earlier mod where the objects were swapped.
00:49:764 (3,1,2) - this flow is way out, remove the stacks here, make it a polygon or something else Changed
00:53:885 (6,1) - imo, don't like this either Triangle shaped
00:57:519 (3) - this kind of pattern hasn't been used when it can before, so I suggest ending the slider as a normal 1/2 one Fixed in an earlier mod, so it a 1/1 slider if I am correct (white tick-white tick)
01:03:230 (6,7) - you know what I want to say here (imo) Fixed
01:10:900 (2,3,4) - just want to say that I'm okay with this one Yay

I will give the updated map once I finish the mod.

RVMathew

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RVMathew 2015-11-25T17:46:20+00:00

For Nathan's Insane.

00:15:161 (4) and 00:16:525 (5) - I am pretty sure that the rhythm does not work, because although the slider ends sound right, you can hear a distinct sound at 00:15:502 and 00:16:866 for the respective sliders.

I would fix this by making the sliders end at 00:15:502 and 00:16:866 respectively, and then add a note at 00:15:673 and then at 00:17:036. It should sound a lot better.

@ Electoz, the modder Paloch VeGa mentioned this: offset ที่สองช้าไปครับ ลองฟังที่ 25% speed ดูครับ เลื่อนเข้าไปอีกไม่น่าเกิน 10ms. Is this related to the song offset being off by 10ms or the video?

_handholding

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_handholding 2015-11-25T22:47:20+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Paloch VeGa wrote:
ม็อดครับ จาก Modq (M4M)

[General]
Hard+ มี object เยอะกว่า Insane พอสมควรเลยครับ
Translation : Hard+ has more objects than Insane.

Not my fault Hard + is overmapped lelelelelelelelel

I'll try to increase the note density in some places. ~~1/8 yolo streams inc~~

Electoz

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Electoz 2015-11-26T00:16:28+00:00

RVMathew wrote:
@ Electoz, the modder Paloch VeGa mentioned this: offset ที่สองช้าไปครับ ลองฟังที่ 25% speed ดูครับ เลื่อนเข้าไปอีกไม่น่าเกิน 10ms. Is this related to the song offset being off by 10ms or the video?

Yeah~, he said the second offset is a bit early, needs to be adjusted by less than 10 ms when listening to the song with 25% speed, I'll take a look at that later.

_handholding

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_handholding 2015-11-26T03:12:35+00:00

RVMathew wrote:
For Nathan's Insane.

00:15:161 (4) and 00:16:525 (5) - I am pretty sure that the rhythm does not work, because although the slider ends sound right, you can hear a distinct sound at 00:15:502 and 00:16:866 for the respective sliders.

I would fix this by making the sliders end at 00:15:502 and 00:16:866 respectively, and then add a note at 00:15:673 and then at 00:17:036. It should sound a lot better.

lol no

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RVMathew 2015-11-26T05:25:49+00:00

Updated difficulty: http://puu.sh/lz68n/0a5355b0df.osu

Electoz

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Electoz 2015-11-26T05:50:31+00:00

moonlightleaf wrote:
[General]

break tiem is a little long , 14s..... fixed

[Easy]

00:11:499 (1) - the end is not on red line,snap it what do you mean by the end?

[Normal]

00:32:377 (1) - remove nc fixed

01:13:627 (1) - remove for spinner fixed

01:33:570 (1,1,2) - 11 removeNC, 2NC fixed

[Hard]

1st:
before break time , all the notes and slider nearly overlap, use 1.6x will be more clear duly noted

2nd:
make sure your DS is the same(some little jump is allow),and do not overlap duly noted

00:32:207 (4,2) - stack oh come on it's just a grid away, fixed

00:53:002 (2,3) - change to slider will be better to play I think it's fine

00:56:752 (3,1,2,5) - try stack ,make beautiful fixed

01:11:752 (1) - try : end at 01:13:627 then delete 01:13:627 (1,2)

01:14:480 (1,2,3) - try nope, I remapped it instead
SPOILER

ty for mod.

Electoz

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Electoz 2015-11-26T06:25:27+00:00

Paloch VeGa wrote:
ม็อดครับ จาก Modq (M4M)

[General]
Hard+ มี object เยอะกว่า Insane พอสมควรเลยครับ
offset ที่สองช้าไปครับ ลองฟังที่ 25% speed ดูครับ เลื่อนเข้าไปอีกไม่น่าเกิน 10ms. ไม่นะ รู้สึกเฉยๆ รอคนอื่นบอกก่อนอาจจะปรับทีหลัง
play time ของแต่ละดิฟต่างกันหลายดิฟมากครับ start กับ ending ต่างกันในหลายดิฟถึงแม้จะเป็น GD ควรปรับครับ คิดว่ามีผลต่อการ rank จ้ะ โดนมาหลายม็อดละ ปรับละ
ไม่น่าจะมีอะไรอีกนะครับ SP 17 แล้ว แต่รีแมพไปหลายรอบเหมือนกันนะ รู้สึกว่าต้องมีม็อดอีก
[Easy]
- เพลงค่อนข้างเร็ว AR เพิ่มอีกนิดหน่อยน่าจะอ่านง่ายกว่าครับ AR+1
- ช่องว่างบางจุดที่เป็น 2/1 ซ้ำกันไปหน่อยครับ โดยเฉพาะช่วง kiai คือตั้งใจทำให้มันซ้ำอยู่แล้ว เพราะแม่งเป็นดิฟที่โคตรจะง่ายเลยอยากให้พวกคนเล่นมือใหม่อ่านจังหวะออก
00:04:755 - เสียงนี้น่าจะใช้ปลาย slider จะรู้สึกลงตัวกว่าครับ แล้วใส่ circle เพิ่มที่ 00:05:220 แก้ละ
00:14:522 - spinner เสียงไม่ตรง ชัดมากครับ ดิฟอื่นไม่เป็น ลืมแก้ ty
00:30:843 (3,4,1) - pattern ไม่เหมาะกับเพลงเท่าไหรนะครับ ลองใช้เสียงที่ 00:31:184 เป็นจุดหลักเเทนดู เน้นอยากให้คลิกที่ downbeat มากกว่า แล้วเสียงที่ว่ามันไปลงตรงขีดแดงที่ตรงนี้ด้วย เลยไม่รู้จะทำไง 00:31:695
01:07:661 (1) - blanket อันนี้ไม่เก็ท ถ้าจะหมายถึงให้ blanket กับ 01:09:025 (2) ละก็คงไม่ทำ เพราะว่าอันนี้จงใจอยู่แล้ว
01:24:025 (1) - circle อยู่ในจังหวะของเพลงที่เบามากครับ เกือบจะเป็น overmapping อยู่แล้ว น่าจะให้ลงที่ 01:23:885 ดีกว่านะครับ ไม่อยากลงขีดแดงกับ Easy น่ะนะ
อีกหลายๆจุดของ 2/1 slider ที่รวมอยู่ในข้างบนน่าจะใช้ 1.5/1 slider ทำให้เหมาะกว่าครับ ใช้ repeat slider ด้วยก็ได้ครับ จะได้มีสีสันขึ้นมาหน่อยููเหมือนข้อข้างบน
[Normal]
- เห็นมีใช้ช่องว่าง 1/2 อยู่ในบางจุด คิดว่าในดิฟ Normal ไม่ควรใช้เยอะ บางจุดน่าใช้แต่ไม่มีโน๊ตวาง เช่น 00:29:991 , 00:35:445 , 00:42:945 เป็นต้นครับ เฉยๆนะ รอคนอื่นบ่นก่อนเดี๋ยวค่อยแก้
00:30:843 (1,2) - ไม่เเนะนำ directly stack ครับ งงมาก แก้ละ เหลื่อมออกมาหน่อยนึง
00:32:207 (1) - คิดว่าโน๊ตนี้ไม่จำเป็นสำหรับ Normal ครับ เค
00:38;002 (1) - ท้าย slider เป็น overmapping ครับ กะจะตามจังหวะเพลงนะ แต่ก็เอาออกละ
01:02:207 (5) - overmapped ไม่นิ?
ในช่วง kiai มีหลายจุดที่เล่นไม่ตามเสียงเพลงเลยครับ คิดว่า Normal ไม่ควรตามเสียงกลองนะครับ เหมือนเคยมีคนทักผมมาว่าแบบนี้แรงค์ไม่ได้ครับ ไม่เคยได้ยินแฮะ รอฟังจากม็อดอื่นค่อยว่ากัน ขี้เกียจ remap (remap มาสามสี่รอบละ เริ่มขี้เกียจ)
01:33:570 (1) - overmapped คือตรงนี้พยายามนั่งแก้นานมากเลยอะ คือไม่รู้จะทำไง คือยังไงก็ต้องเปลี่ยนช่วงทำนองจากขีดแดงเป็นขาวให้ได้ในช่วงนั้นอะ ก็เลยได้ออกมาเป็นแบบนี้ ไม่รู้จะทำไงเหมือนกัน
ระวังเรื่อง overmapping ในดิฟนี้หน่อยนะครับ น่าจะหมดแล้วครับ
[Hard]
- แมพดีครับ blanket สวยดีในหลายจุด น่าจะเป้นดิฟที่คิดว่าดีที่สุดใน mapset ที่ม็อดมานะครับ
00:33:230 (2,3) - สลับที่กัน? มั้ง เดี๋ยวลองแก้ดูก็ได้ น่าจะเวิคอยู่
00:41:752 (9) - ต่อหางเป็น 1/2 slider เลยครับ ไม่แน่ใจแฮะ ช่วงนั้นมีแต่ 1/1 slider ไอเราก็กลัวคนเล่นจะงง เอาเป็นว่าเดี๋ยวแก้ไปก่อนละกัน
01:27:264 - เสียงร้องหนักอยู่นะครับ แก้ละ

คิดว่ายังต้องแก้พอสมควรเลยครับ สู้ๆครับ จะรอตอน ranked นะครับ

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Electoz

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Electoz 2015-11-26T06:33:21+00:00

To all GDs :
~~- I unchecked "Widescreen Support" and "Letterbox during breaks" because we don't even have breaks, if your diff's still checked one of these, please uncheck them.~~ read a few posts below
- Offset remains unchanged.

Last edited by Electoz 2015-11-26T07:49:40+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

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RVMathew 2015-11-26T06:42:58+00:00

http://puu.sh/lz9ym/0dbcd27063.osu

Upped HP drain by 1 and fixed source since it went all weird on me.

@Electoz for tags remove Mathew and put RVMathew instead. Do we also need audio lead in?

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