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Electoz

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Electoz 2015-10-13T03:49:15+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 25 เมษายน 2559 at 19:15:40

Artist: Hana
Title: MAJICK
Source: アイドル魔法少女ちるちる☆みちる
Tags: Idol Magical Girl Chiruchiru Michiru Visual Novel Grisaia Frontwing Kisses RVMathew BetaStar Gaia Mamayu usa うさ fuyuyu-
BPM: 129
Filesize: 13049kb
Play Time: 01:42
Difficulties Available:

Gaia's Angel Michiru (5.06 stars, 356 notes)
Hard (3.05 stars, 243 notes)
Kisses' Insane (4.14 stars, 313 notes)
Mamayu's Easy (1.53 stars, 116 notes)
Mamayu's Insane (4.46 stars, 343 notes)
Mathew's Hard (3.36 stars, 289 notes)
Normal (1.92 stars, 161 notes)

Download: Hana - MAJICK
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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PLEASE PLAY WITH STORYBOARD
Note for anyone who might concern :
I have put a lot of my effort in this mapset, if you're thinking that making only 2 diffs yourself and let the gds handle the rest isn't require any effort, you're wrong. I have started this map from 0 in my mapping skills, as you can see in the first mod, I didn't even know how to use DS at that point, I remapped this many times with everything I got, so please. I really want to rank this, you can see how I grew up between these pages in this thread.

Mamayu's Easy : Mamayu
Normal : Me
Hard : Me
Mathew's Hard : RVMathew
Mamayu's Insane : Mamayu
Kisses' Insane : Kisses
Gaia's angel michiru : Gaia
Storyboard : BetaStar

Last edited by Electoz 2016-04-26T18:27:16+00:00, edited 165 times in total.

lemountain

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lemountain 2015-10-17T06:10:41+00:00

Hi from Queue!

Normal
Not sure about this, but end 00:06:849 (5) - to 00:07:311 - ?
Your choice though.

Electoz

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Electoz 2015-10-17T09:53:20+00:00

LittlePigRMX wrote:
Hi from Queue!

Normal
Not sure about this, but end 00:06:849 (5) - to 00:07:311 - ? feels a bit blunt, I might change if others mention this
Your choice though.

Anyway, thanks.

Yahuri

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Yahuri 2015-10-17T11:21:01+00:00

From my queue~
eheheh michiru best

General
-The BPM you're using is in halftime. Double it.
-Some empty space in the end of the music file, perhaps you could chop some off.
-Change combo colors (especially the green), i would recommend matching the shades in the background.
-Some tips for mapping technique: try to do as few unintentional overlaps as possible. If anything looks unintentional, it's grounds to keep your map from getting ranked ex.(01:00:317 (4,5,6,7) normal). Adding in more blankets can also boost the visual appeal immensely. Try to make the notes fit like puzzle pieces for better flow.
-The style you're using to create the curve sliders is kinda...outdated? Generally, most people use only one anchor for a curve slider, and you use two. Curve sliders with only one anchor are much more symmetrical. If you'd like to change your existing curve sliders, remove them then remap them (simply deleting an anchor on the slider does not make the slider have a perfect curve, it's somewhat distorted)

Easy
-Distance spacing absolutely must stay the same in Easy difficulties. It keeps changing all over the place, you must fix it.
-Its usually easier for beginners to follow the instruments (mostly white ticks) instead of the lyrics. You map both, and the flow just doesn't feel right.
00:03:619 - nothing happens here, but 1/4 beat later something does.
00:29:976 (3) - feels awk that you start on a lyric and end on an instrument
00:32:363 (1,2) - this overlap doesn't look good
00:39:692 (2,3) - try a blanket, use the approach circles for guidance
00:43:272 (1) - starting on a blue tick is bound to throw beginners off. try mapping the drum on the white ticks?
00:53:158 (3) - timing of the slider feels weird, same goes for the next slider.
01:03:556 (3,4) - try a blanket
01:06:283 - miss a crash cymbal here
-Try to apply what I've mentioned above to the rest of the map.

Normal
-Distance spacing must also stay the same in Normal difficulties. Fix it.
00:06:849 (5) - I would end the slider on "wa" (i think i mentioned for easy too)
00:30:317 (5) - i would suggest mapping the lyrics then adding on a circle for the instrument you're mapping at the end.
01:15:317 (3) - end this slider 1/4 beat earlier to match the lyrics.
-Apply anything I've said above to this map.
I think Normal has better flow than Easy in terms of mapping rhythm.

Hope this helps, good luck!

Electoz

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Electoz 2015-10-17T14:22:29+00:00

Yahuri wrote:
From my queue~
eheheh michiru best

General
-The BPM you're using is in halftime. Double it. Doubled, since sv are kinda too fast so I halved them.
-Some empty space in the end of the music file, perhaps you could chop some off. I will do that later
-Change combo colors (especially the green), i would recommend matching the shades in the background. Oops
-Some tips for mapping technique: try to do as few unintentional overlaps as possible. If anything looks unintentional, it's grounds to keep your map from getting ranked ex.(01:00:317 (4,5,6,7) normal). Adding in more blankets can also boost the visual appeal immensely. Try to make the notes fit like puzzle pieces for better flow. So overlaps should be intentional? I will keep that in mind
-The style you're using to create the curve sliders is kinda...outdated? Generally, most people use only one anchor for a curve slider, and you use two. Curve sliders with only one anchor are much more symmetrical. If you'd like to change your existing curve sliders, remove them then remap them (simply deleting an anchor on the slider does not make the slider have a perfect curve, it's somewhat distorted) fixed

Easy
-Distance spacing absolutely must stay the same in Easy difficulties. It keeps changing all over the place, you must fix it. I will remap this. (with distance snap ofc)
-Its usually easier for beginners to follow the instruments (mostly white ticks) instead of the lyrics. You map both, and the flow just doesn't feel right. I will try to make those on white ticks as much as possible, I left some of them on the red ticks because I don't know how to do with them.
00:03:619 - nothing happens here, but 1/4 beat later something does. feels like 1/2 beat to me, but fixed anyway.
00:29:976 (3) - feels awk that you start on a lyric and end on an instrument fixed
00:32:363 (1,2) - this overlap doesn't look good fixed
00:39:692 (2,3) - try a blanket, use the approach circles for guidance fixed
00:43:272 (1) - starting on a blue tick is bound to throw beginners off. try mapping the drum on the white ticks? moved to the white tick and added a hitsound
00:53:158 (3) - timing of the slider feels weird, same goes for the next slider. changed into a reverse slider
01:03:556 (3,4) - try a blanket fixed
01:06:283 - miss a crash cymbal here changed into a reverse slider and added a hitsound
-Try to apply what I've mentioned above to the rest of the map.

Normal
-Distance spacing must also stay the same in Normal difficulties. Fix it.
00:06:849 (5) - I would end the slider on "wa" (i think i mentioned for easy too) fixed
00:30:317 (5) - i would suggest mapping the lyrics then adding on a circle for the instrument you're mapping at the end. fixed
01:15:317 (3) - end this slider 1/4 beat earlier to match the lyrics. not quite sure, will change if others mention about this
-Apply anything I've said above to this map.
I think Normal has better flow than Easy in terms of mapping rhythm.

Hope this helps, good luck!

Big thanks here, but normal becomes a lot easier when using ds.

PumpkinIcedTea

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PumpkinIcedTea 2015-10-18T12:57:39+00:00

Uhhm Hi ! I saw your beatmap on the forums and thought I'd might try out modding for others

This is my first time so I might not be able to spot all the mistakes so yeah

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Generally , try not to end/start your notes on blue ticks. One example is as follows

00:40:715 (5) - Try extending this part to end at 00:41:226 instead of 00:41:141 , it sounds better to me

01:13:271 - Ending the spinner here and then having a note so soon after might seem a bit too hard for Normal difficulties , players might not be able to readjust quickly enough. Maybe you can try reducing the slider length such that it ends at 1:13:101 instead, or replace the spinner with a slider.

Yeeahh thats all I can find sorry...Its my first time modding so I'm just starting small ! Thanks

Electoz

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Electoz 2015-10-18T13:09:14+00:00

Ars Novaa wrote:
Uhhm Hi ! I saw your beatmap on the forums and thought I'd might try out modding for others This is my first time so I might not be able to spot all the mistakes so yeah

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Generally , try not to end/start your notes on blue ticks. One example is as follows

00:40:715 (5) - Try extending this part to end at 00:41:226 instead of 00:41:141 , it sounds better to me fixed

01:13:271 - Ending the spinner here and then having a note so soon after might seem a bit too hard for Normal difficulties , players might not be able to readjust quickly enough. Maybe you can try reducing the slider length such that it ends at 1:13:101 instead, or replace the spinner with a slider. I think 1/2 beat spacing is fine for normal, but I will keep this in mind

Yeeahh thats all I can find sorry...Its my first time modding so I'm just starting small ! Thanks

Don't worry, I am grateful to whoever mods my map.

Alliiiiiiiance

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Alliiiiiiiance 2015-10-18T16:45:44+00:00

Hey here is my mod! Sorry in advance for my english mistakes

General
• I think that there is a big problem with the timing at the start of your map, for me it would be : 125,800 BPM and Offset 1906 or 3753
• I didn't see a lot of blanket combos though I would've put a lot of them regarding to the song!
• Not enough symmetry for my taste :'c
• The combos in your diffs felt a bit cramped

Easy
Design & stuff
• 00:02:696 (1,2,3) Perhaps with a better placing you coud make a perfect "triangle" with them?
• 00:28:783 (2,3) Space them a bit maybe
• 00:48:555 (3,1,2,3) ^
• 01:03:555 (3,4) You should blanket it correctly
• 01:17:703 (2) Uncommon shape but it's ok

Sliders
• 00:32:192 (1) The reverse time isn't on a white tick so it sounds weird
• 00:58:271 (3) Seemed not in the rhythm

Circles
• 01:13:612 (2) You could put this one nearer to the precedent slider to help the reading of the rhythm
• 01:23:840 (2) ^

Hitsounds
• I think that you really should add more! It's too calm

Normal
Design & stuff
• 00:28:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) I think that the correct rhythm should be this, it's more audible

SPOILER

• 00:58:442 (1,2) Y no blanket ;A;

Sliders
• 00:35:260 (1) The rhythm of the lyrics is very rich so I think that it's a pity to just put a slider
• 00:37:476 (4) This one seemed odd idk why sorry
• 00:43:271 (1) I think that you shouldn't start this combo in a red tick
• 01:13:612 (1,2,3) It feels hasty and it collides with the velocity of 2 and 3 so you should fix it

Circles
• 00:54:180 (3) I think that you should stack this one to the head of the following slider and put it here because now it's barely readable and it feels clumsy

SPOILER

• 01:01:169 (5,6,7) Those three should be more spaced for more readability
• 01:03:896 According to the rhythm, I would've add a circle here

SPOILER

Hitsounds
• Same as easy

GL and hope it'll help!

Electoz

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Electoz 2015-10-18T21:03:50+00:00

Alliiiiiiiance wrote:
Hey here is my mod! Sorry in advance for my english mistakes

General
• I think that there is a big problem with the timing at the start of your map, for me it would be : 125,800 BPM and Offset 1906 or 3753 nah, I checked the offset with Audacity, bpm feels quite right to me
• I didn't see a lot of blanket combos though I would've put a lot of them regarding to the song! okay
• Not enough symmetry for my taste :'c I'll see what I can do
• The combos in your diffs felt a bit cramped Perhaps should I increase the tick rate?

Easy
Design & stuff
• 00:02:696 (1,2,3) Perhaps with a better placing you coud make a perfect "triangle" with them?
• 00:28:783 (2,3) Space them a bit maybe not sure though, It's kinda bad to overlap on easy diff but otherwise it won't fit the ds
• 00:48:555 (3,1,2,3) ^ fixed
• 01:03:555 (3,4) You should blanket it correctly fixed
• 01:17:703 (2) Uncommon shape but it's ok Yeah it's ok

Sliders
• 00:32:192 (1) The reverse time isn't on a white tick so it sounds weird fixed
• 00:58:271 (3) Seemed not in the rhythm fixed

Circles
• 01:13:612 (2) You could put this one nearer to the precedent slider to help the reading of the rhythm I want to avoid overlaps as much as possible for easy diff
• 01:23:840 (2) ^ nah, it's fine here

Hitsounds
• I think that you really should add more! It's too calm I intended to be calm and relaxing, but if others mention this I will change

Normal
Design & stuff
• 00:28:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) I think that the correct rhythm should be this, it's more audible
SPOILER
• 00:58:442 (1,2) Y no blanket ;A; sorry, fixed

Sliders
• 00:35:260 (1) The rhythm of the lyrics is very rich so I think that it's a pity to just put a slider yeah it's a pity, but I intended to follow the lyrics
• 00:37:476 (4) This one seemed odd idk why sorry fixed
• 00:43:271 (1) I think that you shouldn't start this combo in a red tick fixed
• 01:13:612 (1,2,3) It feels hasty and it collides with the velocity of 2 and 3 so you should fix it fixed

Circles
• 00:54:180 (3) I think that you should stack this one to the head of the following slider and put it here because now it's barely readable and it feels clumsy I think it's readable
SPOILER

• 01:01:169 (5,6,7) Those three should be more spaced for more readability changed into a reverse slider
• 01:03:896 According to the rhythm, I would've add a circle here It will become very hard to read since there are 3 hitcircles with inconsistent beat spacing
SPOILER

Hitsounds
• Same as easy

GL and hope it'll help!

Probably I will remap this so I could add more blankets, thanks.

Alliiiiiiiance

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Alliiiiiiiance 2015-10-19T11:23:27+00:00

I understand that you can reject my mods but I think that you really should do something about this -> 125,800 BPM (I looked again and it's 126,400 in fact) and Offset 1906 or 3753 because the first downbeat of your song is definitely on Offset 3573

Furthermore, if you go to the Timing pannel you can hear that the ticking does not coincide with the rhythm of the song, and while the beginning of a song is very important to introduce it I think that it can be a big problem

Electoz

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Electoz 2015-10-19T12:02:58+00:00

Alliiiiiiiance wrote:
I understand that you can reject my mods but I think that you really should do something about this -> 125,800 BPM (I looked again and it's 126,400 in fact) and Offset 1906 or 3753 because the first downbeat of your song is definitely on Offset 3573

Furthermore, if you go to the Timing pannel you can hear that the ticking does not coincide with the rhythm of the song, and while the beginning of a song is very important to introduce it I think that it can be a big problem

Just having a full check here, it's seem you're right, sorry.

Vovan

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Vovan 2015-10-20T21:35:15+00:00

Easy
00:28:803 (2,3) - I don't like these sliders. Delete the two sliders and make 1 big slider (with 1 reverse)

SPOILER

00:48:575 (3) - Slider begin here and finish here : 00:48:575 (3)

Normal
00:04:991 (3) - Make a more little slider but with a reverse
00:06:890 (5) - Same here
00:59:655 (3) - Delete the next slider and make 2 reverses on the current slider

Hard
The spacing is too big, that's not an Insane diff.
01:02:382 (2) - Make a biggest slider with less reverses

SPOILER

Electoz

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Electoz 2015-10-20T22:21:58+00:00

Dono027 wrote:
Easy
00:28:803 (2,3) - I don't like these sliders. Delete the two sliders and make 1 big slider (with 1 reverse) feels weird to me
SPOILER
00:48:575 (3) - Slider begin here and finish here : 00:48:575 (3) ?

Normal
00:04:991 (3) - Make a more little slider but with a reverse I don't want to put 1/2 slider in normal
00:06:890 (5) - Same here same here
00:59:655 (3) - Delete the next slider and make 2 reverses on the current slider nah, this looks fine

Hard
The spacing is too big, that's not an Insane diff. fixed
01:02:382 (2) - Make a biggest slider with less reverses fixed
SPOILER

Thanks.

-rage

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-rage 2015-10-20T23:13:56+00:00

HI from my modding queue

Easy

AR3 feels more recommended for me, rather than AR4, just because it's an easy diff.
00:02:618 (1,2,3,4) - these sliders feel better on these tics instead, i found that it was a little easier to read (and sliders are recommended to be on white tics) Example
00:29:825 (3) - i feel like this slider should start on the next white tic instead, and then end it on the red tic where the song goes BLING.
Example
00:40:905 (3) - this note isn't peroperly snapped accorind to distance snap? Weird, considering 00:28:803 (2,3) - has almost the same note placement, but no fancy blanket on it. (i'd kinda prefer there would be a blanket there, but idk how strict the DS has to be).
00:50:280 (1) - all the sliders in this part make it a little difficult for an easy difficulty, maybe consider changing that slider to a circle instead? (on the white tic at 00:50:621 - )
00:58:462 (3) - according to DS, this note is too far from the previous note.
01:13:803 - the circle feels better if it's on this tic instead, but if you don't change it, i understand.
01:14:485 (3) - NC?
01:17:724 (2) - another note on a red tic, should be on white tic since this is an easy diff.
01:23:860 (2,3) - strange shift to red tic ? should'nt be like that in my opinion.

I'm only modding this diff now, sorry. If you choose to change nothing, i understand (i'm just noob at modding). Nice song though! Hope it goes ranked one day!

Electoz

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Electoz 2015-10-21T04:36:18+00:00

klonoa wrote:
HI from my modding queue

Easy
AR3 feels more recommended for me, rather than AR4, just because it's an easy diff. fixed
00:02:618 (1,2,3,4) - these sliders feel better on these tics instead, i found that it was a little easier to read (and sliders are recommended to be on white tics) Example sry, I don't get this, because I don't know where are your ''these tics'' supposed to be, tried several change here but it just feel weird to change.
00:29:825 (3) - i feel like this slider should start on the next white tic instead, and then end it on the red tic where the song goes BLING.looks consistent, but doesn't fit the lyrics(at least to me)
Example
00:40:905 (3) - this note isn't peroperly snapped accorind to distance snap? Weird, considering 00:28:803 (2,3) - has almost the same note placement, but no fancy blanket on it. (i'd kinda prefer there would be a blanket there, but idk how strict the DS has to be). yeah, ds made me a harsh life here, and nothing was unsnapped though.
00:50:280 (1) - all the sliders in this part make it a little difficult for an easy difficulty, maybe consider changing that slider to a circle instead? (on the white tic at 00:50:621 - ) doesn't look fit though
00:58:462 (3) - according to DS, this note is too far from the previous note. at least in my pc, it's not. And it gets MAD when I move it closer

01:13:803 - the circle feels better if it's on this tic instead, but if you don't change it, i understand. I don't think that tick is matching the instruments.
01:14:485 (3) - NC? fixed
01:17:724 (2) - another note on a red tic, should be on white tic since this is an easy diff. I really want to fix this though, but ds gets mad when I fixed this and made my map a diaster when I follow my way with it.
01:23:860 (2,3) - strange shift to red tic ? should'nt be like that in my opinion.
I put it on red ticks for consistency in that area

I'm only modding this diff now, sorry. If you choose to change nothing, i understand (i'm just noob at modding). Nice song though! Hope it goes ranked one day!

Can't be helped that I can't change much. ds is harsh nowadays. and some notes feel really wierd to be on a white tick(even they have to in easier difficulties), some of your mods will be duly noted and I will try to do something if others mention something you pointed out as well.
Anyway, thank you.

Xelasto

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Xelasto 2015-10-24T05:27:14+00:00

Incoming mod from The Gentleman Modding Queue!

Easy

00:06:415 (3) - Turn into two notes since the end of the slider is a strong piano note.
00:08:314 (4) - Move this forward onto the blue tick
00:33:575 (2) - Raise this above 1 more.
00:39:712 (2) - Curve more
00:42:695 - Empty pause. It's boring.
00:44:485 (2) - Balance out this shape better
00:47:894 - Add a note
00:53:007 (3) - NC (new combo)
00:55:735 (1) - No NC
00:58:462 (3) - NC
01:01:189 (1) - No NC
01:03:576 (3) - NC
01:07:667 (6) - NC
01:16:530 (1) - No NC
01:19:939 (3) - NC
01:22:325 (1) - Do this instead
01:24:542 (3) - NC
01:33:405 (5) - NC

Overall, work on the New combos. Also some of the timing of your sliders is off. Good job though

Normal

00:35:280 (1,2) - Blanket
00:42:098 - Don't leave silences like this. Fix ALL of them
00:48:916 (3) - Change the shape. Looks odd.
00:58:803 (2) - Curve more to blanket 1 better
01:34:769 (3) - Move this forward onto the white ticks
01:32:212 (4) - Fix blanket
01:34:769 (3) - Improve shape

Good job. However, the notes feel altogether too close and bunched up, so turn DS up HIGHER and make sure none of them touch and have equal spacing.

Hard

00:07:958 (4) - Make the shape better. Looks odd.
00:28:121 (2) - Curve less
00:28:803 (4) - Fix blanket
00:31:360 (2,3) - This doesn't fit the music very well. Change it.
00:38:178 (7) - Space this out from 6
00:38:860 (2,6) - Try and stack these.
00:39:030 (3,4,5) - Clean this and make it symmetrical
00:41:928 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too confusing for Hard mode. Remap this
00:44:485 (6) - NC
00:45:166 (7,8) - Make these blankets better
00:47:553 (1,2,3,4) - Use DS
00:51:303 (5) - Fix this blanket
00:54:200 (6,8) - Blanket these
00:55:735 (1,2) - Make these blanket each other better
00:59:655 (4,5,6,7) - This big thing of notes is no bueno. (good)
01:07:325 (1,2,3) - Do something else. This doesn't flow well.
01:17:553 (5,7,8) - Please don't overlap these.
01:21:303 (4) - Fix this blanket
01:22:325 (1,2,3,4) - Use distance spacing
01:25:905 (5) - Curve more
01:26:416 (6,2,5,6) - Don't overlap
01:35:450 (5) - Blanket better

Nice job! Just a few weird spacing things and bad blankets. I like this mode!

Good job so far! Just make sure to ask some other people for timing help with the notes, and fix those blankets and slider shapes! Good luck on your map!

Electoz

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Electoz 2015-10-24T09:14:52+00:00

Xelasto wrote:
Incoming mod from The Gentleman Modding Queue!

Easy
00:06:415 (3) - Turn into two notes since the end of the slider is a strong piano note. fixed
00:08:314 (4) - Move this forward onto the blue tick fixed
00:33:575 (2) - Raise this above 1 more. fixed
00:39:712 (2) - Curve more fixed
00:42:695 - Empty pause. It's boring. fixed
00:44:485 (2) - Balance out this shape better I think it's fine as it is
00:47:894 - Add a note fixed
00:53:007 (3) - NC (new combo) fixed
00:55:735 (1) - No NC fixed
00:58:462 (3) - NC fixed
01:01:189 (1) - No NC fixed
01:03:576 (3) - NC fixed
01:07:667 (6) - NC fixed
01:16:530 (1) - No NC fixed
01:19:939 (3) - NC fixed
01:22:325 (1) - Do this instead fixed
01:24:542 (3) - NC fixed
01:33:405 (5) - NC fixed

Overall, work on the New combos. Also some of the timing of your sliders is off. Good job though If you can point these out specifically will be much appreciated.

Normal
00:35:280 (1,2) - Blanket Not quite sure, I will leave it as it is for now, will change if someone mention this.
00:42:098 - Don't leave silences like this. Fix ALL of them fixed
00:48:916 (3) - Change the shape. Looks odd. fixed
00:58:803 (2) - Curve more to blanket 1 better fixed
01:34:769 (3) - Move this forward onto the white ticks fixed
01:32:212 (4) - Fix blanket fixed
01:34:769 (3) - Improve shape fixed

Good job. However, the notes feel altogether too close and bunched up, so turn DS up HIGHER and make sure none of them touch and have equal spacing.

Hard
00:07:958 (4) - Make the shape better. Looks odd. changed into a hit circle and a slider
00:28:121 (2) - Curve less fixed
00:28:803 (4) - Fix blanket fixed
00:31:360 (2,3) - This doesn't fit the music very well. Change it. I fixed this, but not quite sure that this is right. My ideas just dried up.
00:38:178 (7) - Space this out from 6 fixed
00:38:860 (2,6) - Try and stack these. didn't see that coming, nice one here.
00:39:030 (3,4,5) - Clean this and make it symmetrical fixed
00:41:928 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too confusing for Hard mode. Remap this fixed
00:44:485 (6) - NC fixed
00:45:166 (7,8) - Make these blankets better fixed
00:47:553 (1,2,3,4) - Use DS fixed
00:51:303 (5) - Fix this blanket fixed
00:54:200 (6,8) - Blanket these fixed
00:55:735 (1,2) - Make these blanket each other better fixed
00:59:655 (4,5,6,7) - This big thing of notes is no bueno. (good) fixed
01:07:325 (1,2,3) - Do something else. This doesn't flow well. I don't understand how it should be flowed, but fixed anyway
01:17:553 (5,7,8) - Please don't overlap these. fixed
01:21:303 (4) - Fix this blanket fixed
01:22:325 (1,2,3,4) - Use distance spacing fixed
01:25:905 (5) - Curve more fixed
01:26:416 (6,2,5,6) - Don't overlap fixed
01:35:450 (5) - Blanket better fixed

Nice job! Just a few weird spacing things and bad blankets. I like this mode!

Good job so far! Just make sure to ask some other people for timing help with the notes, and fix those blankets and slider shapes! Good luck on your map!

Pretty good mod here, thanks.

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2015-10-25T00:58:02+00:00

hi from my modding queue

I think you should change the timing of the first section to this

I can mod the second part for the song for all your diffs or all of it if you change the timing. Just pm me what you want me to do

Electoz

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Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-10-25T06:42:45+00:00

Hi Im Nathan wrote:
hi from my modding queue

I think you should change the timing of the first section to this fixed

I can mod the second part for the song for all your diffs or all of it if you change the timing. Just pm me what you want me to do

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2015-10-25T13:18:26+00:00

hi from my modding queue

[easy]
00:04:748 (2,3,4,5) - I think it would be better to keep all these notes on white ticks. It would be a better player for beginners

00:29:780 (3) - start the this slider at 00:30:121.
00:33:530 (2) - spacing error, increase DS
00:38:985 (1) - need to fix DS
00:40:860 (3) - ^
I dont wanna sound repetitive so I wont mention any more
00:50:576 (1) - I think the flow in rhythm isnt fluid as it should be.

suggestion

00:56:030 (3) - continuation of the suggestion above. the first slider in the image 00:56:030 (3)

01:17:849 (3) - how about changing (3) and adding a note?

like this

01:14:440 (1) - add finish
01:19:894 (1) - ^
01:25:349 (2) - ^

[Normal]
from 00:03:825 to 00:10:748 - I think you should just use white ticks in this section.. Like when I'm playing it doesnt feel like im playing along with the song rather im playing to the cricles and sliders
00:30:974 (6) - delete clap and use whistle
00:34:553 (4) - ^
00:32:337 (1) - delete clap
00:36:940 (4) - ^
00:40:690 (5) - This would be better imo, plus you can add the hitsounds that werent there becuase of the gap

00:47:167 (7) -add finish
00:49:894 (4) - ^
01:09:667 (6) - I looks prettier if you placed it under the slider imo

like this

01:11:371 (1) - shorten to 01:13:076
01:22:621 (2) - 1/1 sliders would play nice here imo. up to you

01:14:440 (2) - add finish
01:19:894 - ^
01:25:349 (2) - ^
01:30:803 (2) - ^
01:34:212 - add slider

[Hard]
00:28:076 to 00:36:087 - replace all claps with whistles in this section
00:49:894 - add finish
00:53:815 (5) - make into a slider and end at 00:53:985
00:58:076 - how about making a slider here so you can add a finish hitsound? up to you

slider (1) starts at 00:58:076

01:14:440 - add finish
01:23:133 (3) - make into a slider and from 01:23:133 to 01:23:303?
01:25:349 (3) - add finish
01:30:803 (3) - ^
01:33:871 (2) - turn into a slider

like this

You have quite a few DS issues in your normal and easy diffs. try and go over each note and see which ones need adjusting

Well thats all from me, if theres anything i didnt make clear just msg me in game. I hope this mod was helpful. GL

Electoz

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Electoz 2015-10-25T16:59:26+00:00

Hi Im Nathan wrote:
hi from my modding queue

[easy]
00:04:748 (2,3,4,5) - I think it would be better to keep all these notes on white ticks. It would be a better player for beginners fixed.
00:29:780 (3) - start the this slider at 00:30:121. I think it doesn't look fit.
00:33:530 (2) - spacing error, increase DS
00:38:985 (1) - need to fix DS
00:40:860 (3) - ^
I dont wanna sound repetitive so I wont mention any more
00:50:576 (1) - I think the flow in rhythm isnt fluid as it should be. remapped because these beats overlapped so much.
suggestion
00:56:030 (3) - continuation of the suggestion above. the first slider in the image 00:56:030 (3) fixed.
01:17:849 (3) - how about changing (3) and adding a note? fixed.
like this
01:14:440 (1) - add finish fixed.
01:19:894 (1) - ^ add a whistle instead, since I think a finish is a little bit overwhelming.
01:25:349 (2) - ^ same as above.

[Normal]
from 00:03:825 to 00:10:748 - I think you should just use white ticks in this section.. Like when I'm playing it doesnt feel like im playing along with the song rather im playing to the cricles and sliders fixed.
00:30:974 (6) - delete clap and use whistle fixed.
00:34:553 (4) - ^ fixed.
00:32:337 (1) - delete clap fixed.
00:36:940 (4) - ^ I think I want to emphasize this one.
00:40:690 (5) - This would be better imo, plus you can add the hitsounds that werent there becuase of the gap I will remain it like this.
00:47:167 (7) -add finish add a whistle instead
00:49:894 (4) - ^ since there is already a whistle here, I changed nothing.
01:09:667 (6) - I looks prettier if you placed it under the slider imo fixed.
like this
01:11:371 (1) - shorten to 01:13:076 fixed.
01:22:621 (2) - 1/1 sliders would play nice here imo. up to you I think I will remain as is it, for now.
01:14:440 (2) - add finish removed clap and added finish
01:19:894 - ^ fixed.
01:25:349 (2) - ^ add a whistle instead
01:30:803 (2) - ^ add a whistle instead
01:34:212 - add slider nice one here, ty.

[Hard]
00:28:076 to 00:36:087 - replace all claps with whistles in this section fixed.
00:49:894 - add finish I think I will remain as it is.
00:53:815 (5) - make into a slider and end at 00:53:985 fixed.
00:58:076 - how about making a slider here so you can add a finish hitsound? up to you good idea, but it feels a little bit weird since the start and the end of the slider aren't in the same stanza. I will keep this one in mind.
slider (1) starts at 00:58:076
01:14:440 - add finish fixed.
01:23:133 (3) - make into a slider and from 01:23:133 to 01:23:303? Not bad, but I want to stick with the vocal here.
01:25:349 (3) - add finish fixed.
01:30:803 (3) - ^ changed from a whistle into a finish.
01:33:871 (2) - turn into a slider fixed.
like this

You have quite a few DS issues in your normal and easy diffs. try and go over each note and see which ones need adjusting

Well thats all from me, if theres anything i didnt make clear just msg me in game. I hope this mod was helpful. GL

From DS issues you pointed out earlier, I did checked the AiMod and 100% sure that the distance snap was perfect. I don't know why you found errors there.
Anyway, for easy and normal diffs, I increased the DS by 0.1 and replaced all notes to ensure that this will never happen again.

Also, your mods are very delicate, I appreciate them. Thanks.

DominikWW

55 posts

Joined September 2015

DominikWW 2015-10-25T21:19:10+00:00

Please change Offset at 00:14:440 into 00:14:480
and change the BPM at the point 00:03:825 from 130,00 into 129,00 (don't forget to adjust all notes).

Last edited by DominikWW 2015-10-26T23:47:48+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Electoz

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Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-10-26T02:56:40+00:00

DominikWW wrote:
Please change Offset at 00:14:440 into 00:14:480
and change the BPM at the point 00:03:825 into 129,00 (don't forget to adjust all notes).

I just updated the timing mod from previous mod just now. (changed bpm to 130 and offset to 3,825 ,similar from what you mentioned.)
Because BSS server was down, so I only replied the previous mod but didn't get the chance to update my beatmap.
Please check this new one and see if you are fine with this.

-Lemons

219 posts

Joined July 2012

-Lemons 2015-10-26T04:52:32+00:00

IRC Mod about concepts of mapping and whatnot

23:20 -Lemons: I'm not gonna write a post on your map just because I don't wanna spam it but I can't really mod it as it's mapped pretty poorly and it would be stupid of me to just spend the whole mod being like CHANGE LITERALLY EVERY NOTE. 
23:21 Electoz: alright
23:21 Electoz: go on
23:21 -Lemons: It might be a timing issue but notes feel pretty off to me but that's not really a big issue in the gran scheme of things
23:21 -Lemons: The biggest issue is you use really really spiratic note placements
23:22 -Lemons: You tend to ignore the strong downbeats that the song gives to you because they're hidden behind slider ends so it just feels really weird when you play it
23:22 -Lemons: 00:28:758 (2) -  like here 
23:22 -Lemons: (on easy)
23:23 -Lemons: There really should be a click of some sorts on pretty much every downbeat for this song
23:23 -Lemons: as it tends to be a really strong sound that happens during it
23:24 Electoz: I'm poor at English, so if I get this right some notes feel like clickable but it didn't happen to be a click in the song?
23:24 Electoz: Do I understand this correctly?
23:24 -Lemons: Oh sorry I'll explain better
23:25 -Lemons: basically for the way you used your notes
23:25 -Lemons: A lot of the time you "ignore" a really strong sound in the music
23:25 -Lemons: like a cymbol crash or just something loud and easily hearable
23:26 -Lemons: and the way you 'ignore' it is by not having your player click when it happens
23:30 Electoz: so, for the case you mentioned earler, should I change the slider end on this one and change to hitcircle or sth like that?
23:30 Electoz: sth that's clickable
23:30 -Lemons: 00:28:076 (1) -  for here use this rhythm http://puu.sh/kXU9K/4b3e84e283.jpg
23:32 Electoz: I get it now, fixed.
23:32 Electoz: so
23:32 Electoz: things like that happen in normal as well?
23:32 -Lemons: Yes the same in normal
23:32 -Lemons: I didn't really look at hard but I assume it has the same troubles
23:47 Electoz: thanks for your quick mod though, I will take a look at my map and see what I can do.
23:48 -Lemons: Yeah sorry I couldn't be of more assistance good luck man
23:48 Electoz: do you need kudosu?
23:48 -Lemons: I mean if you feel like giving me them I can post the log for you but I don't mind
23:48 -Lemons: I didn't really do very much imo but it's up to you
23:49 Electoz: yeah, just post it
23:49 Electoz: I don't mind
23:49 Electoz: also
23:49 Electoz: when others see your post in my thread
23:50 Electoz: I can ask them what they think about your mod
23:50 Electoz: so it's good for me
23:50 -Lemons: Yeah sure I'll post it for you

DominikWW

55 posts

Joined September 2015

DominikWW 2015-10-27T19:11:03+00:00

Here is the GD you've asked for:
Filename: Hana - MAJICK (Electoz) [Advance by DominikWW]

Advance

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 73587
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9

[Metadata]
Title:MAJICK
TitleUnicode:MAJICK
Artist:Hana
ArtistUnicode:Hana
Creator:Electoz
Version:Advance by DominikWW
Source:Idol Mahou Shoujo Chiruchiru ☆ Michiru
Tags:Magical Girl Chiruchiru Michiru Grisaia Frontwing
BeatmapID:0
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
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Just create a new diff and copy/paste it in the new file.
I hope you like it =)

Wingmann

49 posts

Joined November 2014

Wingmann 2015-10-29T03:10:42+00:00

Hi!

Easy:
01:09:707 (3) - This slider looks neat if rotated -15 degrees and blanketed around this slider: 01:08:343 (2)
Normal:
00:31:014 (6) - Replace whistle with finish?
00:34:593 (4) - ^
00:41:582 (6) - Move to x246 y172 so that it isn't overlapped by the circle before (just my opinion)
01:23:514 (3) - Blanket this with 01:22:661 (2) ?
Hard:
00:57:264 (4) - Move right 1 grid square? improves the blanket
All I could find!
Nice map, good luck with ranking!

Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,895 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-10-29T03:43:15+00:00

Wingmann wrote:
Hi!

Easy:
01:09:707 (3) - This slider looks neat if rotated -15 degrees and blanketed around this slider: 01:08:343 (2) I was wondering how to do a blanket here, thanks.
Normal:
00:31:014 (6) - Replace whistle with finish? nah, it doesn't look fit.
00:34:593 (4) - ^ same as above.
00:41:582 (6) - Move to x246 y172 so that it isn't overlapped by the circle before (just my opinion) It could have been moved, but it won't fit the ds.
01:23:514 (3) - Blanket this with 01:22:661 (2) ? same as above.
Hard:
00:57:264 (4) - Move right 1 grid square? improves the blanket fixed
All I could find!
Nice map, good luck with ranking!

Thanks!

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2015-10-29T17:02:13+00:00

Hey, I made some changes to my diff, I might do some more later on as I think some parts need remapping but I might wait to see what the modders think of it first.

Anyways heres my update http://puu.sh/l26Eb/d71f5befe3.osu

RVMathew

991 posts

Joined December 2013

RVMathew 2015-10-30T09:43:42+00:00

Hi Electoz,

Earlier in the week I mentioned my interest in making a GD. The pattern is finished although the hitsounds are incomplete.

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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ArtistUnicode:Hana
Creator:Electoz
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457,130,70349,6,0,P|481:58|422:12,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,47,70860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,23,71030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,47,71201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,23,71371,6,0,P|196:46|112:50,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
25,181,72053,1,8,0:0:0:0:
25,181,72224,2,0,P|104:185|181:208,1,160
204,223,72649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,241,72735,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,309,72905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,309,72991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,309,73076,6,0,B|325:308|325:308|391:284,1,80
484,192,73587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,89,73928,2,0,B|325:76|325:76|284:75,1,80
192,75,74440,6,0,L|95:148,1,95.9999970703126
35,186,74780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
35,186,74951,2,0,B|77:197|77:197|126:251,1,95.9999970703126
172,311,75292,2,0,B|214:348|214:348|276:353,1,95.9999970703126,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,299,75633,6,0,P|334:213|249:163,1,191.999994140625
256,257,76144,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,311,76315,2,0,L|52:311,1,95.9999970703126
22,231,76655,2,0,L|127:230,1,95.9999970703126,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,148,76996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
169,148,77167,6,0,L|68:148,1,95.9999970703126
20,67,77508,1,8,0:0:0:0:
20,67,77678,2,0,P|137:60|205:32,1,191.999994140625
300,15,78190,1,8,0:0:0:0:
391,43,78360,6,0,L|500:103,1,95.9999970703126
484,185,78701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,185,78871,2,0,L|400:138,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,181,79212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,181,79383,2,0,L|398:228,2,95.9999970703126,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,103,79894,6,0,P|189:115|190:225,1,191.999994140625,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,174,80405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,174,80576,2,0,L|138:120,1,95.9999970703126
68,84,80917,1,8,0:0:0:0:
34,173,81258,2,0,P|10:255|116:333,1,191.999994140625
170,314,81769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,319,81940,2,0,P|335:320|464:336,1,191.999994140625
492,145,82621,6,0,L|382:179,1,95.9999970703126
337,246,82962,2,0,L|215:209,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
153,187,83303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,218,83474,2,0,L|167:274,1,95.9999970703126,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,336,83815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
3,166,84155,6,0,P|-1:106|27:58,1,95.9999970703126,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,28,84496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,28,84582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,28,84667,2,0,P|139:38|224:37,1,95.9999970703126
287,44,85008,2,0,P|331:43|406:20,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,13,85349,6,0,P|497:63|484:135,1,95.9999970703126
453,190,85690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
453,190,85860,2,0,P|456:270|358:286,1,191.999994140625
331,197,86371,1,8,0:0:0:0:
331,197,86542,6,0,P|254:144|182:204,1,191.999994140625
258,257,87053,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,282,87224,2,0,L|277:251,1,95.9999970703126
350,282,87565,2,0,L|238:251,1,95.9999970703126,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,352,87905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,352,88076,6,0,L|350:377,1,95.9999970703126
444,356,88417,1,8,0:0:0:0:
482,268,88587,2,0,P|496:201|416:97,1,191.999994140625
430,103,89099,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,67,89269,6,0,P|273:42|128:61,1,191.999994140625
53,120,89780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
178,120,89951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,49,90121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,166,90292,2,0,P|137:219|139:284,1,95.9999970703126,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,236,90633,2,0,P|52:283|69:328,1,95.9999970703126
257,367,91144,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,333,91315,2,0,P|394:266|343:177,1,191.999994140625
257,138,91826,1,8,0:0:0:0:
386,52,92167,6,0,P|304:49|257:140,1,191.999994140625,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,137,92678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,329,93019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,252,93360,6,0,P|351:276|257:335,1,191.999994140625
259,332,93871,2,0,P|179:278|87:255,1,191.999994140625,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,217,94383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
33,127,94553,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,36,94724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,55,94894,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,95235,2,0,L|256:60,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,156,95746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,329,96258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96343,12,0,98985,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99155,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99326,2,0,P|182:221|89:211,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,82,100349,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,123,100519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,82,100690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,123,100860,2,0,B|516:199|428:284,1,160
408,336,101371,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,322,101542,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101627,12,0,102905,0:0:0:0:

Hope you like it. GDer's feel free to try it

Edit: Below is the difficulty with fixed timing points. You may notice that there are random bookmarks but that is for helping me with my hitsounding.
puu.sh/l3isR/1b571ff469.zip

Also: http://puu.sh/l3ihx/a85c172358.jpg Could not help but notice that

Factorial

691 posts

Joined August 2013

Factorial 2015-11-03T02:38:34+00:00

From my modding queue, as you requested:

Ordinary Modding

General:

Video contains NSFW stuff, you must have a notice on the beatmap description.

Easy:

Try rotating sliders here, like 00:48:570 (3) to have more variation.
I recommend that you play some Easy/Normal maps to get an idea.
01:13:627 (2,1) - Blanket

Normal:

00:29:991 (4,5) - Combine these into a repeating slider
00:35:275 (1,2) - ^
00:40:730 (5,6) - Not distance snapped here
00:51:298 (2) - Too many unwanted sliderpoints here, you could simplify this curve to make it more neat, like this:
SPOILER
01:29:139 (3) - ^
00:46:525 (6) - ^
01:11:411 (1) - When placing a spinner, make sure that there's enough recovery time. On Normal, it should be 2 beats. You could shorten this or replace with notes instead.
01:22:661 (2,3) - Blanket

DominikWW's Advanced:

Sliders here overlaps each other, looking just like a very long one. It would be better if you increase the slider velocity into 0.85x and distance snapping into 1.3x and circle size to 3.5 to cope with the difficuly spread.

That's all, can't mod Hard and Insane. GL on mapping

Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2015-11-04T01:27:16+00:00

Hello, from my NM queue-

Not really a fan of the Grisaia series (the artstyle looks a little weird to me) but this is a pretty catchy song~

Difficulties looked at: Easy, Normal, DominikWW’s Advanced, Hard, Mathew’s Hard+, Nathan’s Insane

- bolded difficulties are the ones that I modded

Easy

00:02:662 (1) – I don’t think having the slider end on the downbeat is a good idea; the downbeat (big white tick) has a really strong beat, and I think it would be better if you did something similar to what you did in Normal here
00:10:801 (1) – Shorten this spinner so that it starts at 00:11:266 and ends on 00:14:480
00:28:116 (1,2,3) – Your rhythm here feels incredibly awkward. Maybe try a rhythm like this? I think it fits the song more nicely
SPOILER
00:32:377 (1) – Extend this slider so that it ends on 00:33:230 and not 00:33:059
00:39:707 (2,3) – Please don’t end these sliders on downbeats =w=;;
00:58:457 (1) – I think you should move this to 00:58:116 and make it into a 4/1 repeat slider. Also, there’s an unnecessary middle pivot in this slider; delete it.
SPOILER
01:01:866 (3) – Don’t end this on the red tick; it feels off. End it on the white tick at 01:03:230
01:22:661 (4,5,1) – This felt a little awkward to play; the rhythm feels really off here. Maybe you can try a rhythm like this?
SPOILER
01:30:502 (3) – I’d divide this up into a circle and 3/2 slider; the downbeat is really strong and I think it’d be a wasted opportunity if it was in the middle of a slider
SPOILER
01:31:866 (5) – Same thing as above; split this slider into a circle and a 3/2 slider

Normal

00:05:220 (3) – I think you should move this to 00:04:987 and make it a 1/2 repeat slider. It fits the rhythm nicely
SPOILER
00:10:801 (1) – Same spinner problem here that you had in Easy; have it start at 00:11:266 and ends on 00:14:480
00:38:684 (1,2) – Reverse the order of these so that the circle is before the slider. Also, place the new combo at 00:39:025
SPOILER
for context, the (1) in the image is placed at 00:39:025
00:58:798 (2) – Fix this blanket
01:11:411 (1) – I’m not sure if there’s enough recovery time between the end of the spinner to 01:13:627 (1).
01:15:332 (3) – Shorten this into a 1/1 slider (it should end on the red tick at 01:15:673
01:32:207 (4) – Fix this blanket

DominikWW’s Advanced

00:02:662 (1) – Don’t end this slider on the downbeat; do something similar to what the other mappers did in Normal or Hard
00:28:798 (2) – Fix this blanket please-
00:32:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) – This combo is really long and looks out of place with the rest of the song
00:45:161 (5) – I feel like this slider is a little bit too long. Maybe shorten it into a 1/1 slider? (have it end on the white tick at 00:45:502)
01:19:934 (3) – This repeat slider doesn’t really make sense in my opinion, as the beat on 01:20:445 is much stronger than the one on 01:20:616. Maybe try something like this?
SPOILER
01:30:843 (3) – ^
01:23:855 (5) – Why is this ending on a blue tick? It feels like it ends too early. Have the slider end on 01:24:366 instead

Hard

00:08:708 (5) – This slider feels really long and out of place with what you did before it. Maybe try something like this?
SPOILER
for context the (5) in the image is at 00:08:708
00:10:801 (1) – Same spinner problem you have on almost all the other difficulties.
00:35:275 (1,2) – I’d reverse the order here, so that the circle comes before the slider
01:07:320 (1,2,3) – I’d use the same slider shape here
01:11:411 (1) – This spinner feels like it starts too early and ends too late in my opinion; maybe have it start on 01:11:752 and end on 01:13:116?
01:25:559 (4) – Blanket fix please-
01:27:775 (2) – I think this slider is a little too long; make it a 1/2 slider instead
01:29:309 (6) – Why is this ending on a blue tick? It feels like it ends too early. Have the slider end on 01:29:991 instead

Mathew’s Hard+

00:03:359 (1) – I wouldn’t make a slider tail end on this downbeat here, as I think it should be clickable.
00:11:266 (1) – Normally, I would think that the recovery time between the spinner and 00:14:480 (1) is fine. However, because of the sudden tempo change from 129 BPM to 176 BPM, I think that it affects the recovery time and makes it much harder to adjust to the new BPM. I’d shorten this spinner to maybe 00:14:057 to help accommodate the sudden tempo change
01:20:445 (2,3) – I think having a 1/1 slider at 01:20:445 would fit the rhythm better than having a circle and 1/2 slider
01:21:809 (2,3) – Reverse the order here so that the slider is on 01:21:809 and the circle is on 01:22:320
01:33:059 (3,1,2) – These aren’t properly stacked; move the (3) and (2) to x260, y332 to fix that

Nathan’s Insane

00:11:266 (1) – Normally, I would think that the recovery time between the spinner and 00:14:650 (1) is fine. However, because of the sudden tempo change from 129 BPM to 176 BPM, I think that it affects the recovery time and makes it much harder to adjust to the new BPM. I’d shorten this spinner to maybe 00:14:057 to help accommodate the sudden tempo change
00:14:480 – Add a circle here if you go with the above suggestion
00:23:855 (4,1) – I’d reverse the order here so that the slider is on 00:23:855 and the circle is on 00:24:536. If you take this suggestion, move the new combo to 00:23:855
00:28:627 – I’m pretty sure you missed a pretty strong beat here. Add a circle perhaps?
00:29:820 – ^
00:53:343 (5,1) – This pattern here feels a little off to me, especially since you missed a strong beat at 00:53:855. Maybe try something like this?
SPOILER
you’re going to have to delete the circle at 00:54:195 in order to make this work
[img] https://i.gyazo.com/ca549ed5780dd5342c8 ... f50df2.png
00:58:798 (5) – ^
00:54:707 (4) – Something similar to the above; try out this pattern instead of a 1/1 repeat slider, as the repeat slider feels off in my opinion
SPOILER
01:00:161 (4) – ^; you’re going to have to delete 01:01:014 (6) to make this work
01:17:036 (6,1) – Reverse the pattern here so that the slider is before the circle (slider on 01:17:036, circle on 01:17:548). If you take this suggestion, move the new combo to the slider
01:27:945 (4,1) – ^

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Hope this helps you out

Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,895 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-11-04T05:21:06+00:00

For the posts modded for this map, thank you very much.
I'm quite busy this week and haven't got any much mood to mapping so I will reply the post later in the week.

RVMathew

991 posts

Joined December 2013

RVMathew 2015-11-04T20:51:35+00:00

Doormat wrote:
Hello, from my NM queue-

Not really a fan of the Grisaia series (the artstyle looks a little weird to me) but this is a pretty catchy song~

Mathew’s Hard+
00:03:359 (1) – I wouldn’t make a slider tail end on this downbeat here, as I think it should be clickable. Changed it
00:11:266 (1) – Normally, I would think that the recovery time between the spinner and 00:14:480 (1) is fine. However, because of the sudden tempo change from 129 BPM to 176 BPM, I think that it affects the recovery time and makes it much harder to adjust to the new BPM. I’d shorten this spinner to maybe 00:14:057 to help accommodate the sudden tempo change Changed to that time. my time was better imo but it if I kept it the way it was it would be frustrating to players.
01:20:445 (2,3) – I think having a 1/1 slider at 01:20:445 would fit the rhythm better than having a circle and 1/2 slider Fixed
01:21:809 (2,3) – Reverse the order here so that the slider is on 01:21:809 and the circle is on 01:22:320 Fixed
01:33:059 (3,1,2) – These aren’t properly stacked; move the (3) and (2) to x260, y332 to fix that Changed to a different position because it works well.
Thanks for the mod. Also made several changes thanks to Mecheman

--
Hope this helps you out

@ Electoz. http://puu.sh/l3ihx/a85c172358.jpg I managed to find the same background with much higher resolution and without the fps written on it.

New image: http://puu.sh/l9rbX/40505253bf.jpg
You will have to size it down to 1366*768 though.

I will upload the updated version sooner or later.

Thanks for the mod.

Last edited by RVMathew 2015-11-07T01:48:40+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,895 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-11-07T01:16:31+00:00

Neil Leo wrote:
From my modding queue, as you requested:
Ordinary Modding
General:
Video contains NSFW stuff, you must have a notice on the beatmap description.
The game itself didn't contain any kind of that thing. So I will leave it at this.
Easy:
Try rotating sliders here, like 00:48:570 (3) to have more variation. fixed
I recommend that you play some Easy/Normal maps to get an idea. Duly noted.
01:13:627 (2,1) - Blanket
That's the best blanked I can do, sry.
Normal:
00:29:991 (4,5) - Combine these into a repeating slider fixed
00:35:275 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:40:730 (5,6) - Not distance snapped here I found nothing here.
00:51:298 (2) - Too many unwanted sliderpoints here, you could simplify this curve to make it more neat, like this: fixed
SPOILER
01:29:139 (3) - ^ fixed
00:46:525 (6) - ^ fixed
01:11:411 (1) - When placing a spinner, make sure that there's enough recovery time. On Normal, it should be 2 beats. You could shorten this or replace with notes instead. I think this is already enough.
01:22:661 (2,3) - Blanket
fixed
That's all, can't mod Hard and Insane. GL on mapping

Thanks

RVMathew

991 posts

Joined December 2013

RVMathew 2015-11-07T01:47:49+00:00

Here is the updated difficulty.

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Idol Mahou Shoujo Chiruchiru  Michiru intro video.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 73627
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9

[Metadata]
Title:MAJICK
TitleUnicode:MAJICK
Artist:Hana
ArtistUnicode:Hana
Creator:Electoz
Version:Mathew's Hard+
Source:Idol Mahou Shoujo Chiruchiru ☆ Michiru
Tags:Magical Girl Chiruchiru Michiru Grisaia Frontwing Nathan DominikWW Mathew
BeatmapID:815739
BeatmapSetID:365163

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.JPG",0,0
Video,0,"michiru_op.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
3825,465.116279069767,4,2,2,30,1,0
3825,-125,4,2,2,30,0,0
14480,340.909090909091,4,1,2,65,1,0
27945,-125,4,1,2,65,0,0
28116,-125,4,2,2,65,0,0
39025,-100,4,1,2,65,0,0
74480,-83.3333333333333,4,1,2,90,0,1
95786,-166.666666666667,4,1,2,90,0,1
96298,-100,4,1,2,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 68,140,227
Combo2 : 255,102,179
Combo3 : 255,192,0
Combo4 : 242,24,57

[HitObjects]
196,205,2662,6,0,P|256:248|316:203,1,160
316,203,3359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,30,3824,5,0,0:0:0:0:
255,72,4057,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,40,4290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
127,69,4522,2,2,P|57:167|56:179,1,128,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,231,5220,1,8,0:0:0:0:
135,285,5452,6,2,P|214:288|329:329,1,192,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,341,6383,2,0,L|451:286,1,64
480,244,6848,2,0,L|489:166,1,64,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
470,111,7313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,32,8011,5,8,0:0:0:0:
273,32,8243,2,0,P|255:91|196:125,1,128
130,114,8941,1,8,0:0:0:0:
73,155,9173,6,0,P|61:251|259:313,1,320
369,275,10801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,11266,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,11383,12,0,14057,0:0:0:0:
255,192,14480,5,4,0:0:0:0:
255,192,14650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,106,14820,1,10,0:0:0:0:
391,88,14991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,122,15161,2,2,P|491:181|459:282,1,160,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,346,15673,6,2,P|318:356|243:329,1,160
147,335,16184,2,0,L|67:347,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,263,16525,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,180,16695,2,0,L|147:192,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,168,17036,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,92,17207,5,0,0:0:0:0:
391,121,17377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,188,17548,2,0,P|349:239|391:266,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,292,17889,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,348,18059,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,308,18230,2,0,P|248:309|211:325,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,360,18570,6,0,P|36:344|20:272,1,160,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,284,19082,1,2,0:0:0:0:
13,91,19423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,895 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-11-07T04:07:40+00:00

Doormat wrote:
Hello, from my NM queue-

Not really a fan of the Grisaia series (the artstyle looks a little weird to me) but this is a pretty catchy song~

Difficulties looked at: Easy, Normal, DominikWW’s Advanced, Hard, Mathew’s Hard+, Nathan’s Insane
- bolded difficulties are the ones that I modded
Easy
00:02:662 (1) – I don’t think having the slider end on the downbeat is a good idea; the downbeat (big white tick) has a really strong beat, and I think it would be better if you did something similar to what you did in Normal here fixed

00:10:801 (1) – Shorten this spinner so that it starts at 00:11:266 and ends on 00:14:480 fixed
00:28:116 (1,2,3) – Your rhythm here feels incredibly awkward. Maybe try a rhythm like this? I think it fits the song more nicely fixed
SPOILER
00:32:377 (1) – Extend this slider so that it ends on 00:33:230 and not 00:33:059 fixed
00:39:707 (2,3) – Please don’t end these sliders on downbeats =w=;; fixed, sry.
00:58:457 (1) – I think you should move this to 00:58:116 and make it into a 4/1 repeat slider. Also, there’s an unnecessary middle pivot in this slider; delete it. fixed
SPOILER
01:01:866 (3) – Don’t end this on the red tick; it feels off. End it on the white tick at 01:03:230 fixed
01:22:661 (4,5,1) – This felt a little awkward to play; the rhythm feels really off here. Maybe you can try a rhythm like this? fixed I changed the last hitcircle into a slider because it feels a bit off.
SPOILER
01:30:502 (3) – I’d divide this up into a circle and 3/2 slider; the downbeat is really strong and I think it’d be a wasted opportunity if it was in the middle of a slider fixed
SPOILER
01:31:866 (5) – Same thing as above; split this slider into a circle and a 3/2 slider
fixed

Normal
00:05:220 (3) – I think you should move this to 00:04:987 and make it a 1/2 repeat slider. It fits the rhythm nicely fixed, but not as you suggested.
SPOILER
00:10:801 (1) – Same spinner problem here that you had in Easy; have it start at 00:11:266 and ends on 00:14:480 fixed
00:38:684 (1,2) – Reverse the order of these so that the circle is before the slider. Also, place the new combo at 00:39:025 fixed
SPOILER
for context, the (1) in the image is placed at 00:39:025
00:58:798 (2) – Fix this blanket I see nothing wrong here, or did I miss something?
01:11:411 (1) – I’m not sure if there’s enough recovery time between the end of the spinner to 01:13:627 (1). I think it's fine here,and I put the next slider in the middle of the screen to ensure that beginner players are able to play this.
01:15:332 (3) – Shorten this into a 1/1 slider (it should end on the red tick at 01:15:673 It sounds a bit off, so I will not change it, for now.
01:32:207 (4) – Fix this blanket
fixed

Hard
00:08:708 (5) – This slider feels really long and out of place with what you did before it. Maybe try something like this? fixed
SPOILER
for context the (5) in the image is at 00:08:708
00:10:801 (1) – Same spinner problem you have on almost all the other difficulties. fixed
00:35:275 (1,2) – I’d reverse the order here, so that the circle comes before the slider fixed
01:07:320 (1,2,3) – I’d use the same slider shape here fixed
01:11:411 (1) – This spinner feels like it starts too early and ends too late in my opinion; maybe have it start on 01:11:752 and end on 01:13:116? fixed
01:25:559 (4) – Blanket fix please- fixed
01:27:775 (2) – I think this slider is a little too long; make it a 1/2 slider instead It's a bit sudden, so I will keep it as it is
01:29:309 (6) – Why is this ending on a blue tick? It feels like it ends too early. Have the slider end on 01:29:991 instead fixed

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Hope this helps you out

Thanks for your effort for modding every diffs.

@ Mathew : bg's changed now, thanks.

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2015-11-07T17:24:41+00:00

Here is my updated diff

http://puu.sh/lcQB7/7845264732.osu

I havent used the new background so if you can could you change it for me

DominikWW

55 posts

Joined September 2015

DominikWW 2015-11-09T19:57:11+00:00

Neil Leo wrote:
DominikWW's Advanced:
Sliders here overlaps each other, looking just like a very long one. It would be better if you increase the slider velocity into 0.85x and distance snapping into 1.3x and circle size to 3.5 to cope with the difficuly spread.
I will think about it.

Doormat wrote:
DominikWW’s Advanced
00:02:662 (1) – Don’t end this slider on the downbeat; do something similar to what the other mappers did in Normal or Hard ok changed
00:28:798 (2) – Fix this blanket please- fixed
00:32:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) – This combo is really long and looks out of place with the rest of the song changed
00:45:161 (5) – I feel like this slider is a little bit too long. Maybe shorten it into a 1/1 slider? (have it end on the white tick at 00:45:502) changed
01:19:934 (3) – This repeat slider doesn’t really make sense in my opinion, as the beat on 01:20:445 is much stronger than the one on 01:20:616. Maybe try something like this? ok changed
SPOILER
01:30:843 (3) – ^
01:23:855 (5) – Why is this ending on a blue tick? It feels like it ends too early. Have the slider end on 01:24:366 instead huch? I have no idea xD Fixed.

Advance

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Slayed_old_1

Slayed_old_1 2015-11-13T15:51:47+00:00

sup.
#from_my_queue

overall

1. change BG size to 1366x768 and rename it to bg.jpg

2. probably u should find a better video, can this is too low

advanced

increase spacing. now its too little for an advanced

1. 00:30:673 (5) - this overlapping doesnt look ok, probably u should replave this slider somewhere else

2. 00:41:752 (2) - strong beat is here, so u should put NC here and put away it from 00:41:411 (1) -

3. 00:44:139 (2,3,4) - really bad place, its very hard to read. use my 1st advice and remap it with another spacing

4. 00:46:014 (6) - strong beat here, NC

5. 00:51:809 (5) - this slider ends on a big white tick (that should be clickable), also this speed change doesnt look nice for an advanced. try to do smth with this slider

6. 01:12:093 (3) - another slider that ends on a big white tick

7. 01:18:400 (4) - stack the end of this slider with this note 01:19:764 (2)

hard

its a very strange hard lol. its smth like advanced or what

1. the green tick from here 00:03:824 - should be placed here 00:04:057, so there will be normal spacing between these 2 notes 00:03:359 (2,3) -

2. 00:05:685 - missing a note on a big white tick is a bad idea. my suggestion to you is to put a circle here 00:05:452 - and stack a 1/1 slider here: 00:05:685

3. 00:09:173 (7) - same as ^. also its a very bad slider. try smth like this: bump

4. 00:26:752 (1) - break should end here, because its a big white tick, aslo it will be better for rhytm. this is my suggestion how to map this part:

5. 00:27:945 (6) - this note is useless, it doesnt match anything here, i can suggest u to put it away

6. 00:31:355 (2) - you are missing 2 many nores here. its very bad for hard. try to map every white/red tick in this period of time: 00:31:355 - 00:32:207, also do this note 00:32:207 - clickable (not the end/middle of the slider)

7. 00:32:718 (1,4) - probably these 2 blankets should be similar to each other. 00:34:252 (6) - probably, this too

8. 00:38:684 (1) - stack this note with the end of this slider 00:39:707 (5)

9. 00:44:480 (1) - stack the end of this slider with the end of this 00:43:457 (2) - slider

10. 00:52:832 (1,4) - correct the overlapping here, it doesnt fit your map

11. 00:54:195 (6,8) - same as 8

12. 01:08:002 (2,3) - same as 10

13. 01:14:820 (4,6) - again overlapping

14. 01:17:548 (5,8) - stack these notes

15. 01:25:389 (3,4,5,6,7) - 2 much overlapping here. i can suggest you to remap this part because it really dosnt look ok

16. 01:28:457 (3,4,5,6) - ^

17. 01:35:445 (5) - end this slider here 01:36:127 - because vocal is going up to this point

DominikWW

55 posts

Joined September 2015

DominikWW 2015-11-13T19:11:49+00:00

ohyeahitsjustme wrote:
sup.
#from_my_queue

advanced
increase spacing. now its too little for an advanced I was too lazy the last time. But You're the second one who mentioned that so I will change it ^^

1. 00:30:673 (5) - this overlapping doesnt look ok, probably u should replave this slider somewhere else

2. 00:41:752 (2) - strong beat is here, so u should put NC here and put away it from 00:41:411 (1) - fixed

3. 00:44:139 (2,3,4) - really bad place, its very hard to read. use my 1st advice and remap it with another spacing

4. 00:46:014 (6) - strong beat here, NC changed

5. 00:51:809 (5) - this slider ends on a big white tick (that should be clickable), also this speed change doesnt look nice for an advanced. try to do smth with this slider First I didn't want to change it because I like this one. But I think you're right the speed change doesn't fit very well to advance

6. 01:12:093 (3) - another slider that ends on a big white tick changed

7. 01:18:400 (4) - stack the end of this slider with this note 01:19:764 (2)

Thanks for the mod =)

Update:

Advance

osu file format v14

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Artist:Hana
ArtistUnicode:Hana
Creator:Electoz
Version:DominikWW's Advanced
Source:Idol Mahou Shoujo Chiruchiru ☆ Michiru
Tags:Magical Girl Chiruchiru Michiru Grisaia Frontwing Nathan DominikWW Mathew
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Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,895 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-11-14T04:34:39+00:00

ohyeahitsjustme wrote:
sup.
#from_my_queue

overall

1. change BG size to 1366x768 and rename it to bg.jpg

2. probably u should find a better video, can this is too low this is the best I can find, sorry. (it's 480p already and if I were put sth like 720p or more in then it will be like 30mb+)

hard

its a very strange hard lol. its smth like advanced or what

1. the green tick from here 00:03:824 - should be placed here 00:04:057, so there will be normal spacing between these 2 notes 00:03:359 (2,3) - replaced the green tick

2. 00:05:685 - missing a note on a big white tick is a bad idea. my suggestion to you is to put a circle here 00:05:452 - and stack a 1/1 slider here: 00:05:685 changed the circle you suggested and the previous one to a slider, since having 3 hitcircle continuously looks weird imo.

3. 00:09:173 (7) - same as ^. also its a very bad slider. try smth like this: bump fixed

4. 00:26:752 (1) - break should end here, because its a big white tick, aslo it will be better for rhytm. this is my suggestion how to map this part:

not sure here, because it seems weird to end the break before the vocals

5. 00:27:945 (6) - this note is useless, it doesnt match anything here, i can suggest u to put it away it does match the lyrics but I think removing this sounds better, fixed.

6. 00:31:355 (2) - you are missing 2 many nores here. its very bad for hard. try to map every white/red tick in this period of time: 00:31:355 - 00:32:207, also do this note 00:32:207 - clickable (not the end/middle of the slider) remapped

7. 00:32:718 (1,4) - probably these 2 blankets should be similar to each other. 00:34:252 (6) - probably, this too fixed

8. 00:38:684 (1) - stack this note with the end of this slider 00:39:707 (5) fixed

9. 00:44:480 (1) - stack the end of this slider with the end of this 00:43:457 (2) - slider fixed

10. 00:52:832 (1,4) - correct the overlapping here, it doesnt fit your map fixed

11. 00:54:195 (6,8) - same as 8 fixed

12. 01:08:002 (2,3) - same as 10 fixed

13. 01:14:820 (4,6) - again overlapping fixed

14. 01:17:548 (5,8) - stack these notes fixed

15. 01:25:389 (3,4,5,6,7) - 2 much overlapping here. i can suggest you to remap this part because it really dosnt look ok fixed

16. 01:28:457 (3,4,5,6) - ^ fixed

17. 01:35:445 (5) - end this slider here 01:36:127 - because vocal is going up to this point[/color] I put a reverse to the slider instead

Thanks for the mod.

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Prismetical 2015-11-14T19:46:03+00:00

Heya! :3

Easy

01:17:548 (3) - circle, if you say you don't wanna make it harder then look here what you did 01:22:661 (4,5,1) - :3

Normal

00:10:801 (1) - slider? (voice)

Advanced

00:06:615 (5) - make it straight, looks ugly
01:16:355 (6) - don't reverse at all, if you do a not reversing slider and fill the rest it will be much more fun then 4 reverses
01:27:264 (6) - ^
00:54:195 (3) - ^

Hard

00:04:987 (5,6,7) - plays better

00:10:801 (1) - slider? (voice) (same as in Normal)
00:58:457 (2) - shape?

Cool map!
Good luck on getting ranked!

Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,895 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-11-15T07:46:50+00:00

Prismetical wrote:
Heya! :3

Easy
01:17:548 (3) - circle, if you say you don't wanna make it harder then look here what you did 01:22:661 (4,5,1) - :3 fixed

Normal
00:10:801 (1) - slider? (voice) I think this is fine.

Hard
00:04:987 (5,6,7) - plays better It doesn't feel fit the rythm to leave that white tick empty
00:10:801 (1) - slider? (voice) (same as in Normal) I think this is fine.
00:58:457 (2) - shape? changed position instead

Cool map!
Good luck on getting ranked!

Thanks

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Sidetail 2015-11-18T05:02:26+00:00

Don't kds this until you try this and find this helpful

Easy

00:07:545 (2) - At the end of the slider, there is a melody tone. As this slider doesn't seem to follow the vocals, try cutting this slider to half and put another slider at (00:08:476) so that it goes with melody.
00:09:406 (3) - Make this a longer slider. http://puu.sh/lpAUe/1dce17517b.jpg
Put another slider (1/2) at 00:10:801 (4) - and move spinner one tick back (and shorten the spinner one tick at the end) Should look like this: http://puu.sh/lpAXX/6250b4652e.jpg
01:07:661 (1) - Something feels empty here. I tried: http://puu.sh/lpBXq/d7a2638301.jpg
01:13:116 (2) - Just circle is okay for Easy diff.
01:22:661 (3) - Change to circle and add slider after http://puu.sh/lpC9G/46bc0c7f76.jpg

Pointing out some 1/2 spams to improve rhythms
00:29:480 (2) - Change second slider to http://puu.sh/lpBw9/81e159c1dc.jpg
00:40:389 (2) - Change second slider to ^http://puu.sh/lpBG3/7e3c430e9f.jpg
00:59:480 (2) - Change second slider to ^
00:48:570 (2) - Change this slider to circles. (Being more consistent as before as you are building up emphasis)
01:03:570 (1,2,3) - Remove all of these and do this: http://puu.sh/lpBgE/6c87f456f1.jpg
00:49:934 (3,1) - Change to: http://puu.sh/lpBqN/b53fa36689.jpg
01:32:207 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/lpCh6/7456511f59.jpg

Don't be afraid to use red ticks in Easy/Normal. If it works nicely with songs, it will make things better.

Just leaving only Easy as I ran out my time to mod for today... If you agree with the rhythm fixes, will further help you with Easy / Normal, other than that I will skip and move on the higher diff if I have time. Sorry ~

Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,895 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-11-18T09:32:20+00:00

BetaStar wrote:
:D Don't kds this until you try this and find this helpful

Easy
00:07:545 (2) - At the end of the slider, there is a melody tone. As this slider doesn't seem to follow the vocals, try cutting this slider to half and put another slider at (00:08:476) so that it goes with melody. DS-Senpai makes it overlap and I don't want to make an overlap in Easy, also I want the downbeat to be clickable.
00:09:406 (3) - Make this a longer slider. http://puu.sh/lpAUe/1dce17517b.jpg fixed
Put another slider (1/2) at 00:10:801 (4) - and move spinner one tick back (and shorten the spinner one tick at the end) Should look like this: http://puu.sh/lpAXX/6250b4652e.jpg fixed
01:07:661 (1) - Something feels empty here. I tried: http://puu.sh/lpBXq/d7a2638301.jpg That reverse on the red tick doesn't fit anything imo.
01:13:116 (2) - Just circle is okay for Easy diff. fixed
01:22:661 (3) - Change to circle and add slider after http://puu.sh/lpC9G/46bc0c7f76.jpg I think it's fine, it'll sounds a bit weird for not following the vocals though.

Pointing out some 1/2 spams to improve rhythms
00:29:480 (2) - Change second slider to http://puu.sh/lpBw9/81e159c1dc.jpg
00:40:389 (2) - Change second slider to ^http://puu.sh/lpBG3/7e3c430e9f.jpg
00:59:480 (2) - Change second slider to ^
00:48:570 (2) - Change this slider to circles. (Being more consistent as before as you are building up emphasis)
01:03:570 (1,2,3) - Remove all of these and do this: http://puu.sh/lpBgE/6c87f456f1.jpg
00:49:934 (3,1) - Change to: http://puu.sh/lpBqN/b53fa36689.jpg
01:32:207 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/lpCh6/7456511f59.jpg Yeah, I have tried following the vocals but it doesn't look so good.

Don't be afraid to use red ticks in Easy/Normal. If it works nicely with songs, it will make things better.

Just leaving only Easy as I ran out my time to mod for today... If you agree with the rhythm fixes, will further help you with Easy / Normal, other than that I will skip and move on the higher diff if I have time. Sorry ~

As for the 1/2 spams

They look a bit rushed though, because I set sv so low so I want the player to act slowly with the beats too. Also as I said, the reverse sliders on the red tick mostly don't match anything in the song, so this map will be like [very~very~easy~] << sth like that.

Thanks for the mod and keep'em coming! MOD MOD MOD MOD MOD MOD MOD KUDASAIIIIIIIII

Seijiro

osu! Alumni

3,438 posts

Joined April 2013

Seijiro 2015-11-18T16:46:54+00:00

Yo, I'm here from your queue for a M4M :3

[General]

Uncheck letterboxing on all diffs since it ruins the video real size

[Nathan's Insane]

Tbh, I dunno why you use so many different shapes for the sliders before the spinner at the beginning, but oh well, who cares...

00:19:423 (3) - I'd rather increase the distance from the previous object, maybe with a Ctrl + G... The current spacings feels more like 1/2, not 1/1

00:24:707 (2,1) - I don't really like overlaps :/

00:21:809 (3,4) - I thought that you were going to place the movement 3 --> 4 downwards... On 4 there is such a strong beat, yet you waste it with a straight flow D:

00:28:116 - 00:52:661 - You wasted like half of your beats on breaks, wtf. It is also hard to understand what you're actually following:
00:29:991 (3) - vocals;
00:31:014 (1) - Start on piano, end on piano's reverberation (which is synthetically modified);
00:33:570 (1) - Start and end on piano high pitch notes, repeat on nothing;
00:35:275 (2) - Didn't get it tbh;
00:36:298 (1) - Vocals
And so on...
Maybe this is a bit harsh, but imo that's not the best choice to map this part (I'm referring also to the second half of the section, where you keep using the counter-beat as the strong beat)

01:12:775 (1,2,3) - This spacing is way too cramped here to even read it properly :/ Increase it please

01:13:627 - Missing note I guess. It's the same instrument used to map 01:13:116 (3,4) -

01:20:445 (2,1) - This spacing is too short compared to the rest of your map

01:21:809 (2,1) - Same ^

01:34:593 (5,1) - After seeing 01:34:252 (3,4,5) - , 01:34:593 (5,1) - looks like a 1/2 note. Increase the spacing or put another stacked circle under 5

Maybe add at least 0.5 to the OD... it's the hardest diff after all and you have only jumps

[Mathew's Hard+]

Explain the OD8 which is something that even on Insanes is hard to find. Be serious please, even if this is a Hard+ it's not an Insane, which means that 7 is the upper limit

The spacing on more quiet parts is awfully short: a lot of objects are almost touching each other

00:32:889 (3,4) - Intentional stack?

00:39:025 (1,2) - The order if these objects is the opposite one: first goes the slider and then goes the circle. The strong beat is at 00:39:025 - so you can't place the slider on a more weaker note like the current one

00:54:025 (1,2) - Same ^

00:57:264 (3,4) - I'd rather use a 1/1 slider as you did till now. Cleaner and more beautiful to play too

00:59:480 (1,2) - Again, as before, your objects' order is inverted

01:05:957 (4,1) - Same ^

01:13:968 (3,1) - Misleading spacing: it looks more like a 1/2

01:27:264 (3,4) - If you really want slider on red ticks, add a repeat on 3 and remove 4. It's less stressing to understand it while playing

01:30:332 (5,1) - ... If you were trying to follow vocals, you took the wrong tick once again. f you wanted to follow instruments, it doesn't change

01:33:059 (3,1) - Not so perfect stack

01:34:934 (1,2) - I'd rather put a 1/1 slider starting from 1 and using the remain beats for another slider

[Hard]

The general spacing on the quiet parts is too low imo

00:07:545 (4,5,6) - What about converting them into 2 1/1 sliders?

00:10:801 - Why did you skip this note... it feels way too empty

00:14:480 - Break on a Hard diff on a TV Size? Isn't this a bit too lazy? .-. It is also one of the most rhythmical parts in the song

00:30:843 (7,1) - The difference in spacing between before and after 7 creates a bad flow, because the note on 1 is way stronger, yet it is less emphasized this way. Try putting 7 under 6's tail and do a Ctrl + G on 1

00:43:116 (1,2,3) - Lower spacing for no apparent reason imo. You have x1.20 between these, while you used x1.50 before, so why...

01:07:320 (1,2,3) - This one isn't really a triangle, since the orientation of those 3 isn't 120° each. Take the first one as a clone, Duplicate it (select and Ctrl +D) and then rotate the dupe (Ctrl + Shift + R) by wither 120° or -120° based on where you intend to move it

All the other maps finish at 01:42:945 - , why yours doesn't lol

General suggestion: try to not follow so much the vocals all the time. It gets boring after a while...

[DominikWW's Advanced]

00:11:731 (1) - Maybe make this spinner start 1/2 earlier

00:15:161 - As I said for the previous diff: it is a bit lazy to not map one of the most interesting parts on this song and above all this is a TV Size: it's already short, do not shorten it any further

00:44:139 (2,3) - Why just only one gets stacked while the other is left alone on the field? Use the same concept to place circles in the same combo please: it helps reading the map for newbie players

00:54:195 (3) - Using an even number of repeats confuses players a lot, above all at this difficulty. Remove a repeat or even both

00:59:650 (3) - Same ^

01:01:866 (3) - I might be too finicky, but this shape isn't so clean and tidy... It can be polished more imo

01:06:127 (2) - Same ^

01:14:650 (1,2) - We talked about this earlier: either stack them both or either deploy them on the field

01:16:355 (6) - Remove at least on repeat please

01:19:423 (1,2) - You should first use a circle, and then use the slider. As it is now you give more emphasis on the red ticks, which have no strong beat so far

01:25:559 (1,2) - You already know

01:27:264 (6) - Same ^, since it's basically copy pasta

01:39:025 - Same as for the previous diff. It's a TV Size, so map it till the end please (01:42:945 - )

Generally speaking this is a Normal diff, not an Advanced. Just because there are few more notes here and there it doesn't change much lol

[Normal]

00:10:801 - Why skipping this note...

00:14:480 - Useless break on a TV Size imo

00:32:207 (1,1) - Why double NC here? Remove the second one please

00:58:798 (2,4) - Kinda uncool overlap

01:02:207 (3) - This whole object can be deleted, since it's mapped on anything relevant at all: you're not following vocals, nor instruments, so what are you following? Also, avoid using an even number of repeats on the lowest diffs of a mapset

01:11:411 (1,1) - It is a rule to give a good amount of time to rest to the player after a spinner. On Normal diffs the average is about 2 measures, while here you have only 1 and a half. Imo you should remove 01:13:627 (1) - completely (see t/241019&start=0 for more info)

01:33:059 (1,1,1) - Rainbow! No, remove 2 NCs, you don't need them

01:35:786 (3) - Too attached to the slider where there is no actual beat to be emphasized. Moved this note 1/2 later please

OD, HP and AR can be lowered by 1 all

[Easy]

00:11:499 (1) - This spinner starts clearly 1/2 earlier

00:14:480 - Map the break please

00:44:480 (1,1) - Again multiple NCs without reason...

01:25:389 (1,1) - Which is the right NC here? =3=

01:25:389 - From here on you use only 2/1 sliders... Boooooring. We're in the kiai time too, why such sloppy rhythm D: You usded a lot of 1/1 before when you actually didn't need them too D:

01:41:582 - I'd prefer to end the map here...

Alright, that's all from me
Good luck~

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2015-11-20T05:36:46+00:00

[quote="MrSergio"]Yo, I'm here from your queue for a M4M :3

[General]

Uncheck letterboxing on all diffs since it ruins the video real size will uncheck for my diff

[Nathan's Insane]

Tbh, I dunno why you use so many different shapes for the sliders before the spinner at the beginning, but oh well, who cares... Will resahpe them since theyre ugly anyways

00:19:423 (3) - I'd rather increase the distance from the previous object, maybe with a Ctrl + G... The current spacings feels more like 1/2, not 1/1 used ctrl +G since it plays so nicely

00:24:707 (2,1) - I don't really like overlaps :/ get used to them, lol jk. fixed

00:21:809 (3,4) - I thought that you were going to place the movement 3 --> 4 downwards... On 4 there is such a strong beat, yet you waste it with a straight flow D: I think its fine, Only other thing that would suit here is a set of jumps which I didnt want

00:28:116 - 00:52:661 - You wasted like half of your beats on breaks, wtf. It is also hard to understand what you're actually following:
00:29:991 (3) - vocals;
00:31:014 (1) - Start on piano, end on piano's reverberation (which is synthetically modified);
00:33:570 (1) - Start and end on piano high pitch notes, repeat on nothing;
00:35:275 (2) - Didn't get it tbh;
00:36:298 (1) - Vocals
And so on...
I didnt realize it was this bad until you pointed it out to me. Remapping this entire section
Maybe this is a bit harsh, but imo that's not the best choice to map this part (I'm referring also to the second half of the section, where you keep using the counter-beat as the strong beat)

01:12:775 (1,2,3) - This spacing is way too cramped here to even read it properly :/ Increase it please Spacing was fine imo howeve I've remapped this section with bigger spaces anyway

01:13:627 - Missing note I guess. It's the same instrument used to map 01:13:116 (3,4) - added

01:20:445 (2,1) - This spacing is too short compared to the rest of your map increased the spacing a bit

01:21:809 (2,1) - Same ^ ^

01:34:593 (5,1) - After seeing 01:34:252 (3,4,5) - , 01:34:593 (5,1) - looks like a 1/2 note. Increase the spacing or put another stacked circle under 5 altered the spacing

Maybe add at least 0.5 to the OD... it's the hardest diff after all and you have only jumps changed to OD 8

Thanks for the mod

Here's my update. My diff sucks a bit less now http://puu.sh/ls1WZ/2583ebb1a5.osz

I forgot to uncheck letter boxing. Could you do it for me

Last edited by _handholding 2015-11-20T18:45:23+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

DominikWW

55 posts

Joined September 2015

DominikWW 2015-11-20T18:23:18+00:00

Prismetical wrote:
Heya! :3

Advanced
00:06:615 (5) - make it straight, looks ugly
01:16:355 (6) - don't reverse at all, if you do a not reversing slider and fill the rest it will be much more fun then 4 reverses
01:27:264 (6) - ^
00:54:195 (3) - ^
I've changed this parts you've mentioned ^^

Thx =)

MrSergio wrote:
Yo, I'm here from your queue for a M4M :3

[General]
Uncheck letterboxing on all diffs since it ruins the video real size k. I do it in my diff.

[DominikWW's Advanced]
00:11:731 (1) - Maybe make this spinner start 1/2 earlier why not

00:15:161 - As I said for the previous diff: it is a bit lazy to not map one of the most interesting parts on this song and above all this is a TV Size: it's already short, do not shorten it any further agree. I've mapped

00:44:139 (2,3) - Why just only one gets stacked while the other is left alone on the field? Use the same concept to place circles in the same combo please: it helps reading the map for newbie players yeah makes sense. I've changed all this parts.

00:54:195 (3) - Using an even number of repeats confuses players a lot, above all at this difficulty. Remove a repeat or even both I've changed them

00:59:650 (3) - Same ^

01:01:866 (3) - I might be too finicky, but this shape isn't so clean and tidy... It can be polished more imo I've changed this part

01:06:127 (2) - Same ^

01:14:650 (1,2) - We talked about this earlier: either stack them both or either deploy them on the field

01:16:355 (6) - Remove at least on repeat please

01:19:423 (1,2) - You should first use a circle, and then use the slider. As it is now you give more emphasis on the red ticks, which have no strong beat so far

01:25:559 (1,2) - You already know

01:27:264 (6) - Same ^, since it's basically copy pasta

01:39:025 - Same as for the previous diff. It's a TV Size, so map it till the end please (01:42:945 - ) Mapped
Generally speaking this is a Normal diff, not an Advanced. Just because there are few more notes here and there it doesn't change much lol I've changed some parts/ added new parts. I think it is much diffrent now on the new Update. So I think it's fine now to call it "Advance".

Thanks for the mod. You've mentioned some important points.

New Update

Advance

osu file format v14

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Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

Electoz 2015-11-21T00:17:10+00:00

Now I'm lazier that my GD's lol.
Will take a look at mods later, sry.

moonlightleaf

2,157 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2015-11-24T13:58:57+00:00

[General]

break tiem is a little long , 14s.....

[Easy]

00:11:499 (1) - the end is not on red line,snap it

[Normal]

00:32:377 (1) - remove nc

01:13:627 (1) - remove for spinner

01:33:570 (1,1,2) - 11 removeNC, 2NC

[DominikWW's Advanced]

00:10:801 (3) - change to note,then spinner start at 00:11:266

00:38:684 add note on 00:39:025 (1)

00:45:843 (1) - end at 00:46:355

[Hard]

1st:
before break time , all the notes and slider nearly overlap, use 1.6x will be more clear

2nd:
make sure your DS is the same(some little jump is allow),and do not overlap

00:32:207 (4,2) - stack

00:53:002 (2,3) - change to slider will be better to play

00:56:752 (3,1,2,5) - try stack ,make beautiful

01:11:752 (1) - try : end at 01:13:627 then delete 01:13:627 (1,2)

01:14:480 (1,2,3) - try

SPOILER

[Nathan's Insane]

00:11:266 (1) - end at 00:14:057 then 00:14:480 add note will be easy to play

00:28:627 add not on 00:28:798 (2) -

01:34:764 add note

01:41:752 (1) - end at 01:43:116

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