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Rohit6

Joined August 2013

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Rohit6 2015-09-20T17:07:15+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 07 January 2017 at 16:15:34

Artist: Jun Kuroda & AAAA
Title: Cygnus
Tags: Drum&Bass dnb 夏エモ宮田守 Miyata Mamoru emo natsu Nerova Riuz GX ProfessionalBox Rizen
BPM: 183
Filesize: 3852kb
Play Time: 01:46
Difficulties Available:

ANOTHER effected by N/A (5.2 stars, 409 notes)
BEGINNER effected by N/A (1.51 stars, 111 notes)
BLACK ANOTHER (5.57 stars, 571 notes)
HYPER (3.27 stars, 260 notes)
INSANE effected by ProBox (4.87 stars, 406 notes)
LIGHT INSANE (4.16 stars, 359 notes)
NORMAL effected by Rizen (2.11 stars, 152 notes)

Download: Jun Kuroda & AAAA - Cygnus
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Rohit6 2017-01-07T10:46:13+00:00, edited 92 times in total.

Nerova Riuz GX

1,413 posts

Joined April 2012

Nerova Riuz GX 2015-09-21T13:50:14+00:00

lemme add a star

chat log

20:23 Rohit6: yo
20:23 Rohit6: did you like it?
20:23 Nerova Riuz GX: yo
20:23 Nerova Riuz GX: umm
20:23 Nerova Riuz GX: better than XENNA
20:23 Rohit6: kek
20:24 Rohit6: well this isnt loaded with doubles
20:24 Rohit6: like xenna
20:24 Rohit6: should i try to rank xenna or this?
20:29 Nerova Riuz GX: this one, maybe
20:30 Nerova Riuz GX: it is shorter and easier to fix those issues
20:30 Rohit6: hmm
20:30 Rohit6: the streams?
20:32 Nerova Riuz GX: fix some shape on streams
20:32 Nerova Riuz GX: and make some stops
20:33 Nerova Riuz GX: and also, some unrankable issues
20:33 Rohit6: like?
20:33 Rohit6: i can justify streams
20:33 Rohit6: if you hear closely
20:33 Rohit6: its 1-2-1-2
20:33 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:11:211 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - 
20:34 Nerova Riuz GX: make them a circle
20:35 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:23:342 (3,1) - make these two stack on the same place, it can get better effect
20:35 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:26:129 (4,1) - ^
20:35 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:28:752 (6,1) - ^
20:36 Nerova Riuz GX: or some more places like this
20:38 Rohit6: sorry i got dced
20:38 Nerova Riuz GX: D:
20:38 Rohit6: 00:11:211 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - this was the last thing i got
20:38 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:23:342 (3,1) - make these two stack on the same place, it can get better effect
20:38 Rohit6: rip
20:38 Nerova Riuz GX: the same on those places like that
20:38 Rohit6: okay done
20:38 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:39:571 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - make them a regular triangle
20:39 Rohit6: stacked 3 with 1's sliderhead
20:39 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:42:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - change their speed
20:39 Nerova Riuz GX: low speed first, then accel
20:40 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:49:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - use stream here
20:41 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:51:211 (1,2,3,4) - DS, and stack 3,4
20:41 Rohit6: but the00:39:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here
20:41 Rohit6: the 7th circle has individual pressure
20:42 Nerova Riuz GX: why not just move 6 and 8?
20:42 Nerova Riuz GX: then you can replace 7 as you wish
20:42 Nerova Riuz GX: or maybe, just replace 1~5
20:43 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:43:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - bad flow
20:44 Nerova Riuz GX: 01:22:686 (1,3) - don't stack them, make them blanket
20:45 Nerova Riuz GX: 01:25:309 (1,2) - believe me, all of those connections will be better in 1/2, not 1/4
20:45 Rohit6: 00:49:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why stream here?
20:46 Nerova Riuz GX: much more sounds are skipped, and they are clear
20:46 Nerova Riuz GX: also they are quite fast
20:47 Nerova Riuz GX: 01:43:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - re-shape this stram pls
20:47 Nerova Riuz GX: 01:51:538 (1,2,3) - stack them properly, it's too far now
20:48 Rohit6: you sure about that
20:48 Rohit6: i mean people might confuse it for 1/4
20:48 Nerova Riuz GX: no, im sure they will be better in stacked
20:49 Nerova Riuz GX: or only stack 3 under 2
20:49 Nerova Riuz GX: Also please use "Jun Kuroda & aaaa" as Romanized Artist
20:50 Rohit6: lol
20:50 Rohit6: i thought someone was kidding
20:50 Nerova Riuz GX: no
20:50 Nerova Riuz GX: it is a name of an artist
20:50 Rohit6: caps ?
20:50 Nerova Riuz GX: and he's a BMS artist
20:50 Nerova Riuz GX: just do that in undercase
20:51 Rohit6: i had those stacked actually
20:51 Rohit6: sergio told me to use ds there
20:51 Rohit6: 00:21:211 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - no problem with these types of streams right?
20:51 Nerova Riuz GX: umm
20:52 Nerova Riuz GX: it's okay
20:52 Nerova Riuz GX: but, i think you need to reset NCs on this map
20:52 Rohit6: what why
20:53 Nerova Riuz GX: first, you can NC them on the heads of streams
20:53 Nerova Riuz GX: second, lots of big numbers
20:53 Rohit6: also od8.8 overkill?
20:53 Nerova Riuz GX: 8~8.5 might be great
20:53 Rohit6: i already have 8 on insane
20:53 Nerova Riuz GX: OD can be the same
20:54 Nerova Riuz GX: no need to be higher
20:54 Nerova Riuz GX: and AR can shift in 9.3 or 9.4
20:55 Rohit6: also
20:55 Rohit6: whats the problem in the last stream?
20:55 Nerova Riuz GX: just reshape
20:55 Nerova Riuz GX: make them more like a circle
20:56 Nerova Riuz GX: i mean, that stream is good, but not beautiful
21:07 Rohit6: post this log
21:07 Rohit6: lemme kd you up
21:07 Nerova Riuz GX: wat
21:07 Nerova Riuz GX: u sure
21:08 Rohit6: mod insane as well doe
21:08 Rohit6: :^)
21:08 Nerova Riuz GX: remap
21:08 Rohit6: rood
21:08 Nerova Riuz GX: no, im not kidding this time
21:09 Rohit6: wait why
21:09 Nerova Riuz GX: unrankable issues
21:09 Nerova Riuz GX: and those doubles
21:09 Nerova Riuz GX: actually Expert is much more better than Insane, imo
21:10 Nerova Riuz GX: those doubles are all replaced by sliders in Insane
21:11 Nerova Riuz GX: but they just can't fit downbeats and really hard to play, seriously
21:11 Rohit6: lemme remap that in insane
21:11 Nerova Riuz GX: but wait
21:11 Nerova Riuz GX: you need 3~4 diffs
21:12 Nerova Riuz GX: you know that right
21:12 Rohit6: i know
21:12 Rohit6: im making those
21:12 Rohit6: in a couple of days
21:12 Nerova Riuz GX: umm okay
21:15 Rohit6: but
21:15 Rohit6: is the map >fun
21:15 Nerova Riuz GX: quality first
21:16 Nerova Riuz GX: if it has quality then it will be fun, ofc
21:30 Rohit6: post on the forum
21:31 Nerova Riuz GX: ok then
21:31 Rohit6: fixed the thing on insane
21:32 Nerova Riuz GX: still not fixed :(
21:32 Nerova Riuz GX: unrankable things
21:33 Rohit6: wait what
21:33 Nerova Riuz GX: blocked reverse arrows
21:33 Rohit6: where
21:33 Nerova Riuz GX: many of them
21:33 Rohit6: send link so i can fix them
21:34 Rohit6: 00:11:538 (8) - if youre talking about this
21:34 Rohit6: i dont think its unrankable
21:34 Nerova Riuz GX: no
21:35 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:17:604 (2) - this might probably one of them
21:35 Rohit6: how is it blocked...
21:35 Nerova Riuz GX: it is blocked by hitburst
21:36 Rohit6: i dont get it
21:36 Rohit6: elaborate please
21:36 Nerova Riuz GX: meh whatever
21:36 Nerova Riuz GX: lemme find more of them
21:36 Nerova Riuz GX: wit
21:36 Nerova Riuz GX: wait
21:36 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:44:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wtf is this
21:36 Rohit6: wait but what is hitburst
21:37 Nerova Riuz GX: hitburst is that picture when you hit the note
21:37 Nerova Riuz GX: like "300" "100" "50"
21:37 Rohit6: ohh
21:37 Rohit6: 00:44:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - fixing this
21:38 Rohit6: didnt notice it started on blue tick
21:38 Nerova Riuz GX: all of those short sliders are passive sliders
21:38 Nerova Riuz GX: fix them
21:38 Rohit6: ye
21:39 Nerova Riuz GX: this is an obvious one, unrankable
21:39 Nerova Riuz GX: 01:08:752 (3) - 
21:39 Nerova Riuz GX: 01:09:571 (5) - this might probably the same
21:39 Nerova Riuz GX: 01:15:637 (4) - this too
21:40 Nerova Riuz GX: 01:19:243 (2) - 
21:40 Rohit6: 01:15:637 (4) - whats wrong with this one
21:40 Nerova Riuz GX: blocked by 01:14:817 (1) - 
21:41 Rohit6: 01:14:817 (1,4) - this is just a regualr blanket man
21:41 Rohit6: i dont think so
21:41 Rohit6: that its unrankable
21:41 Nerova Riuz GX: watch that in original osu skin
21:41 Nerova Riuz GX: 4 appears before 1 disapper
21:41 Rohit6: alright
21:41 Nerova Riuz GX: 02:01:538 (3) - and this is the most obvious one
21:42 Rohit6: in auto?
21:42 Nerova Riuz GX: test mode will be faster
21:43 Rohit6: hmm okay
21:44 Rohit6: alright fixed almost all of that
21:45 Nerova Riuz GX: okay
21:47 Rohit6: anything else man?
21:47 Nerova Riuz GX: k no
21:48 Rohit6: ok then post
21:48 Rohit6: <3
21:48 Nerova Riuz GX: lemme make another insane
21:48 *Nerova Riuz GX runs

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2015-09-21T13:53:59+00:00

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

lemme add a star

chat log

20:23 Rohit6: yo
20:23 Rohit6: did you like it?
20:23 Nerova Riuz GX: yo
20:23 Nerova Riuz GX: umm
20:23 Nerova Riuz GX: better than XENNA
20:23 Rohit6: kek
20:24 Rohit6: well this isnt loaded with doubles
20:24 Rohit6: like xenna
20:24 Rohit6: should i try to rank xenna or this?
20:29 Nerova Riuz GX: this one, maybe
20:30 Nerova Riuz GX: it is shorter and easier to fix those issues
20:30 Rohit6: hmm
20:30 Rohit6: the streams?
20:32 Nerova Riuz GX: fix some shape on streams
20:32 Nerova Riuz GX: and make some stops
20:33 Nerova Riuz GX: and also, some unrankable issues
20:33 Rohit6: like?
20:33 Rohit6: i can justify streams
20:33 Rohit6: if you hear closely
20:33 Rohit6: its 1-2-1-2
20:33 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:11:211 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - 
20:34 Nerova Riuz GX: make them a circle
20:35 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:23:342 (3,1) - make these two stack on the same place, it can get better effect
20:35 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:26:129 (4,1) - ^
20:35 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:28:752 (6,1) - ^
20:36 Nerova Riuz GX: or some more places like this
20:38 Rohit6: sorry i got dced
20:38 Nerova Riuz GX: D:
20:38 Rohit6: 00:11:211 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - this was the last thing i got
20:38 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:23:342 (3,1) - make these two stack on the same place, it can get better effect
20:38 Rohit6: rip
20:38 Nerova Riuz GX: the same on those places like that
20:38 Rohit6: okay done
20:38 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:39:571 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - make them a regular triangle
20:39 Rohit6: stacked 3 with 1's sliderhead
20:39 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:42:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - change their speed
20:39 Nerova Riuz GX: low speed first, then accel
20:40 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:49:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - use stream here
20:41 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:51:211 (1,2,3,4) - DS, and stack 3,4
20:41 Rohit6: but the00:39:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here
20:41 Rohit6: the 7th circle has individual pressure
20:42 Nerova Riuz GX: why not just move 6 and 8?
20:42 Nerova Riuz GX: then you can replace 7 as you wish
20:42 Nerova Riuz GX: or maybe, just replace 1~5
20:43 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:43:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - bad flow
20:44 Nerova Riuz GX: 01:22:686 (1,3) - don't stack them, make them blanket
20:45 Nerova Riuz GX: 01:25:309 (1,2) - believe me, all of those connections will be better in 1/2, not 1/4
20:45 Rohit6: 00:49:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why stream here?
20:46 Nerova Riuz GX: much more sounds are skipped, and they are clear
20:46 Nerova Riuz GX: also they are quite fast
20:47 Nerova Riuz GX: 01:43:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - re-shape this stram pls
20:47 Nerova Riuz GX: 01:51:538 (1,2,3) - stack them properly, it's too far now
20:48 Rohit6: you sure about that
20:48 Rohit6: i mean people might confuse it for 1/4
20:48 Nerova Riuz GX: no, im sure they will be better in stacked
20:49 Nerova Riuz GX: or only stack 3 under 2
20:49 Nerova Riuz GX: Also please use "Jun Kuroda & aaaa" as Romanized Artist
20:50 Rohit6: lol
20:50 Rohit6: i thought someone was kidding
20:50 Nerova Riuz GX: no
20:50 Nerova Riuz GX: it is a name of an artist
20:50 Rohit6: caps ?
20:50 Nerova Riuz GX: and he's a BMS artist
20:50 Nerova Riuz GX: just do that in undercase
20:51 Rohit6: i had those stacked actually
20:51 Rohit6: sergio told me to use ds there
20:51 Rohit6: 00:21:211 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - no problem with these types of streams right?
20:51 Nerova Riuz GX: umm
20:52 Nerova Riuz GX: it's okay
20:52 Nerova Riuz GX: but, i think you need to reset NCs on this map
20:52 Rohit6: what why
20:53 Nerova Riuz GX: first, you can NC them on the heads of streams
20:53 Nerova Riuz GX: second, lots of big numbers
20:53 Rohit6: also od8.8 overkill?
20:53 Nerova Riuz GX: 8~8.5 might be great
20:53 Rohit6: i already have 8 on insane
20:53 Nerova Riuz GX: OD can be the same
20:54 Nerova Riuz GX: no need to be higher
20:54 Nerova Riuz GX: and AR can shift in 9.3 or 9.4
20:55 Rohit6: also
20:55 Rohit6: whats the problem in the last stream?
20:55 Nerova Riuz GX: just reshape
20:55 Nerova Riuz GX: make them more like a circle
20:56 Nerova Riuz GX: i mean, that stream is good, but not beautiful
21:07 Rohit6: post this log
21:07 Rohit6: lemme kd you up
21:07 Nerova Riuz GX: wat
21:07 Nerova Riuz GX: u sure
21:08 Rohit6: mod insane as well doe
21:08 Rohit6: :^)
21:08 Nerova Riuz GX: remap
21:08 Rohit6: rood
21:08 Nerova Riuz GX: no, im not kidding this time
21:09 Rohit6: wait why
21:09 Nerova Riuz GX: unrankable issues
21:09 Nerova Riuz GX: and those doubles
21:09 Nerova Riuz GX: actually Expert is much more better than Insane, imo
21:10 Nerova Riuz GX: those doubles are all replaced by sliders in Insane
21:11 Nerova Riuz GX: but they just can't fit downbeats and really hard to play, seriously
21:11 Rohit6: lemme remap that in insane
21:11 Nerova Riuz GX: but wait
21:11 Nerova Riuz GX: you need 3~4 diffs
21:12 Nerova Riuz GX: you know that right
21:12 Rohit6: i know
21:12 Rohit6: im making those
21:12 Rohit6: in a couple of days
21:12 Nerova Riuz GX: umm okay
21:15 Rohit6: but
21:15 Rohit6: is the map >fun
21:15 Nerova Riuz GX: quality first
21:16 Nerova Riuz GX: if it has quality then it will be fun, ofc
21:30 Rohit6: post on the forum
21:31 Nerova Riuz GX: ok then
21:31 Rohit6: fixed the thing on insane
21:32 Nerova Riuz GX: still not fixed :(
21:32 Nerova Riuz GX: unrankable things
21:33 Rohit6: wait what
21:33 Nerova Riuz GX: blocked reverse arrows
21:33 Rohit6: where
21:33 Nerova Riuz GX: many of them
21:33 Rohit6: send link so i can fix them
21:34 Rohit6: 00:11:538 (8) - if youre talking about this
21:34 Rohit6: i dont think its unrankable
21:34 Nerova Riuz GX: no
21:35 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:17:604 (2) - this might probably one of them
21:35 Rohit6: how is it blocked...
21:35 Nerova Riuz GX: it is blocked by hitburst
21:36 Rohit6: i dont get it
21:36 Rohit6: elaborate please
21:36 Nerova Riuz GX: meh whatever
21:36 Nerova Riuz GX: lemme find more of them
21:36 Nerova Riuz GX: wit
21:36 Nerova Riuz GX: wait
21:36 Nerova Riuz GX: 00:44:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wtf is this
21:36 Rohit6: wait but what is hitburst
21:37 Nerova Riuz GX: hitburst is that picture when you hit the note
21:37 Nerova Riuz GX: like "300" "100" "50"
21:37 Rohit6: ohh
21:37 Rohit6: 00:44:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - fixing this
21:38 Rohit6: didnt notice it started on blue tick
21:38 Nerova Riuz GX: all of those short sliders are passive sliders
21:38 Nerova Riuz GX: fix them
21:38 Rohit6: ye
21:39 Nerova Riuz GX: this is an obvious one, unrankable
21:39 Nerova Riuz GX: 01:08:752 (3) - 
21:39 Nerova Riuz GX: 01:09:571 (5) - this might probably the same
21:39 Nerova Riuz GX: 01:15:637 (4) - this too
21:40 Nerova Riuz GX: 01:19:243 (2) - 
21:40 Rohit6: 01:15:637 (4) - whats wrong with this one
21:40 Nerova Riuz GX: blocked by 01:14:817 (1) - 
21:41 Rohit6: 01:14:817 (1,4) - this is just a regualr blanket man
21:41 Rohit6: i dont think so
21:41 Rohit6: that its unrankable
21:41 Nerova Riuz GX: watch that in original osu skin
21:41 Nerova Riuz GX: 4 appears before 1 disapper
21:41 Rohit6: alright
21:41 Nerova Riuz GX: 02:01:538 (3) - and this is the most obvious one
21:42 Rohit6: in auto?
21:42 Nerova Riuz GX: test mode will be faster
21:43 Rohit6: hmm okay
21:44 Rohit6: alright fixed almost all of that
21:45 Nerova Riuz GX: okay
21:47 Rohit6: anything else man?
21:47 Nerova Riuz GX: k no
21:48 Rohit6: ok then post
21:48 Rohit6: <3
21:48 Nerova Riuz GX: lemme make another insane
21:48 *Nerova Riuz GX runs

Ayy, thanks for the star man <3

Seijiro

osu! Alumni

3,438 posts

Joined April 2013

Seijiro 2015-09-21T14:45:59+00:00

Yo~
I was summoned here to leave my IRC log from one month ago xD

IRC mod

17:22 Rohit6: #deadhelp again?
17:25 Antares-: rip halp
17:26 Rohit6: testplay?
17:34 -kevincela-: hm
17:34 MrSergio: Rohit6: Link it =3=
17:35 Rohit6: alright
17:35 Rohit6: [http://puu.sh/jMPRx/da720e85e2.osz here ya go]
17:35 Rohit6: cs5
17:35 Rohit6: expert diff (insane as well if you want)
17:35 MrSergio: cs5 mlmlmlml
17:37 *MrSergio is playing Jun Kuroda & - Cygnus [Expert]
17:39 Squigly: kevincela uwu
17:39 -kevincela-: uwu
17:39 Rohit6: phew
17:42 MrSergio: Hm...
17:42 Rohit6: what do you think?
17:42 MrSergio: Those 1/4 mini sliders where a bit strange
17:42 MrSergio: Mostly due to the small pacing after them
17:42 *MrSergio is editing Jun Kuroda & - Cygnus [Expert]
17:42 Rohit6: yeah
17:43 Rohit6: that was sr control
17:43 MrSergio: 00:03:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is the wrong one, actually it is the exact opposite of 00:01:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
17:43 Rohit6: insane and expert are kinda similar
17:43 MrSergio: They are
17:43 MrSergio: It just changes a bit the spacing and the CS (4 -> 5)
17:43 MrSergio: Anyway
17:43 MrSergio: For that circle-slider-circle-slider... pattern
17:44 Rohit6: what do you recommend?
17:44 MrSergio: You should increase the spacing from the circle instead of reducing it
17:44 Rohit6: is it a readability issue?
17:44 MrSergio: Yes
17:44 MrSergio: I read perfectly the first one while i missed totally the second one
17:44 MrSergio: Since you used the opposite spacing
17:44 Rohit6: ye
17:44 Rohit6: fixing the second one
17:45 MrSergio: 00:05:801 - I feel like you should put a slider here (1/2)
17:45 MrSergio: You can create a good introduction to the next stream that way
17:45 MrSergio: If you hear, there is a long note at 00:05:801 -
17:45 theramdans: sergy seems busy
17:46 MrSergio: Rammy, I was gonna mod your map once I finish my new extra
17:46 MrSergio: I just need a couple of hours I guess
17:46 theramdans: extra
17:46 theramdans: I dont even hue
17:46 MrSergio: :^)
17:46 MrSergio: You'll see
17:46 MrSergio: Actually, here
17:46 *MrSergio is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/766956 Ogura Yui - Honey*Come!!]
17:47 Rohit6: if youre wondering about the streams
17:47 MrSergio: Rohit6, you switch where you place circle and slider on 00:06:620 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
17:47 MrSergio: Which feels once again strange
17:47 MrSergio: Because you have no strong beat to support the slider start
17:48 BeatBreakerS: you need a Stronger beat like me
17:48 Rohit6: hold up
17:48 Rohit6: im still making earlier changes
17:49 MrSergio: Oh wait
17:49 Rohit6: alright
17:49 MrSergio: Delete my last suggestion
17:49 Rohit6: lets move forward
17:49 Rohit6: ...
17:49 MrSergio: But you should increase the spacing as before there
17:49 Rohit6: ill increase spacing
17:49 Rohit6: and change the direction of stream
17:49 MrSergio: 00:08:424 - Same as before, a slider would be much appreciated here
17:50 MrSergio: 00:10:719 (1,2) - While playing I thought there was a 1/2 pause
17:50 MrSergio: Yet they are jsut 1/4 apart
17:51 MrSergio: 00:14:079 (7) - You should start on red or white ticks to put this kind of sliders, because you usually have no strong beats on blue ticks (unless your map has blue polarity)
17:52 theramdans: rip blue ticks
17:52 Rohit6: wait
17:52 Rohit6: you said dont add a slider earlier right?
17:52 MrSergio: You can do like this: 00:14:079 - add a circle; 00:14:161 - Your current 1/4 slider; 00:14:325 - Another circle, far away from the slider
17:52 MrSergio: Don't add a sldier on blue ticks
17:53 MrSergio: Unless your map is "special" (it isn't)
17:53 theramdans: did he use extended sliders?
17:53 MrSergio: Nope
17:53 Rohit6: nah i added a 1/4 at the end
17:54 MrSergio: http://mrsergio.s-ul.eu/d1wMuBwd
17:54 MrSergio: 00:27:604 (1,2,3) - Spacing inconsistency between these and 00:27:604 (1,2,3) - these
17:55 Rohit6: fixed that
17:55 MrSergio: It is minor tho
17:55 MrSergio: Since most mappers usually use double spacings in the same combo but keeping patterns clean
17:55 MrSergio: And this is the case
17:56 MrSergio: 00:34:325 (3,4) - Dawh, please stack them xD
17:56 Rohit6: oops
17:56 MrSergio: It looks like a double while playing
17:56 *Hinsvar is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/679779 Reol - Asymmetry [captin's Extra]]
17:56 Hinsvar: ;_;
17:56 MrSergio: 00:41:866 (4,1) - The spacing between these is a little too short. You should stack them or move the stream's start a bit more far away
17:57 Rohit6: are the hitsounds too loud?
17:57 MrSergio: I check hitsounds after patterning xD
17:57 MrSergio: Humans can't focus on too many things at once, otherwise there is a high chance to miss important things
17:58 Rohit6: ill move it downwards
17:58 MrSergio: 00:43:014 (11) - NC here since you change DS?
17:58 hyouri: any way I can get lower than 25% playback
17:58 MrSergio: 00:43:588 (2) - I guess you know already
17:58 MrSergio: hyouri: You can't
17:58 Rohit6: i decreased spacing from 9
17:58 hyouri: it's so hard to hear sub notes in songs
17:58 hyouri: ;w;
17:59 MrSergio: Rohit6: I saw that, but it isn't consistent up until 11
17:59 Rohit6: 00:43:588 (2) - what change did you suggest here?
17:59 MrSergio: I considered it part of the previous DS
17:59 MrSergio: Well... let me try a couple of things
17:59 MrSergio: Oh, yeah, I know what
18:00 MrSergio: Like [http://mrsergio.s-ul.eu/2wspkXWx this]
18:00 Rohit6: but i want the slider ;-;
18:00 MrSergio: 2 circles stacked after the slider: this way you keep the little jump you wanted with the 1/4 sldier, but keep also playability
18:00 MrSergio: But there is no strong sound on its start xD
18:01 MrSergio: Alright, it is a stream
18:01 Rohit6: all right ill delet
18:01 MrSergio: But the spacing after it is really confusing
18:01 MrSergio: You should re-arrange the patterns after the sldier if you want to keep it
18:01 MrSergio: 00:44:817 (1,3) - 1 is fine, 3 is the usual slider starting on the blue tick
18:02 MrSergio: 00:45:965 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing inconsistency. After 3 there is a new DS, so put a NC on 3 or even better on 4
18:03 MrSergio: No ok, the NC goes on 3
18:03 Rohit6: ill stack 1 and 2
18:03 MrSergio: Hm... it works
18:03 Rohit6: no need for nc imo
18:03 MrSergio: Yep, you can avoid that
18:04 MrSergio: 00:48:588 (9) - I hear a long note here, so maybe a 1/2 slider?
18:04 MrSergio: The next pattern won't be ruined
18:04 MrSergio: 00:49:735 - Is it just me or is missing a note here?
18:05 MrSergio: 00:50:391 - I'd put a 1/2 slider here and another 00:50:719 - here
18:06 MrSergio: Or even just circles
18:06 MrSergio: Yeah, circles. All notes have the same intensity there
18:06 Rohit6: oh okay
18:06 Rohit6: i thought notes were harsh
18:06 Rohit6: since fast doubles +notes
18:07 MrSergio: 00:51:374 (3) - This note isn't in the music
18:07 Rohit6: oh youre right
18:07 Rohit6: its just a triple
18:07 Rohit6: double*
18:08 MrSergio: lol
18:08 MrSergio: 00:52:194 (6,7,1,2,3) - Well... this part is hitsounding's fault I guess, since you should use softer onews
18:09 MrSergio: That normal hit is really overwriting the song
18:09 MrSergio: 00:52:850 (2,3) - Also, I don't think the jump is necessary here (because of the soft part), therefore a repeat would feel better
18:10 *theramdans is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/679779 Reol - Asymmetry [captin's Extra]]
18:10 theramdans: dat 1/4 spam ;w;
18:10 Rohit6: ill replace by a soft sampleset from here 00:46:620 (3) -
18:10 MrSergio: 01:16:456 (1,2,3) - wow, before these sliders you have a great spacing, while these... are just too near
18:11 MrSergio: close*
18:11 MrSergio: Well, whatever xD
18:11 Rohit6: alright fine
18:11 Rohit6: ill increase the spacing a bit
18:11 MrSergio: 01:18:424 (7,8) - This one is the "ideal" usage of the 1/4 slider, at least on this map (since you do not use them differently)
18:12 MrSergio: 01:23:834 (6,1) - While this has the wrong spacing
18:12 MrSergio: Basically, because it is too close
18:13 Rohit6: hmm i guess its better just as cicrles
18:13 MrSergio: 01:30:227 (4,5) - Make them a bit longer (faster SV). They are a bit hard to read
18:13 MrSergio: Or maybe it was just me (probably)
18:14 Ongaku: weeeee
18:14 theramdans: sergy still modding

18:14 *Ongaku is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/769518 kamome sano - enhancer (Radio Edit) [O-kaeri]]
18:14 Ongaku: 50% finished
18:14 Rohit6: done
18:14 Ongaku: someone wanna test play :^)
18:14 Leader: I wanted to map this
18:14 MrSergio: 01:29:079 (2) - Actually, this one should end 1/4 earlier and there is a stream starting immidiately after it
18:14 Leader: kek
18:14 MrSergio: aybe that's why I wasn't able to read those 1/4 sliders
18:15 MrSergio: Maybe*
18:15 MrSergio: 01:39:571 - Strong beat which isn't emphasized
18:15 MrSergio: All the next part is a bit confusing due to that too
18:16 MrSergio: 01:44:817 (1,1) - Why starting NCs on red ticks? xD
18:16 MrSergio: No, ok, they look fine
18:16 MrSergio: 01:44:817 (1) - At least this one is fine
18:17 MrSergio: 01:44:325 (1) - I guess this is unnecessary
18:17 MrSergio: Because you use those crashes in the music to place NCs
18:18 MrSergio: 01:51:538 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Lol, at the beginning of the map you didn't place a NC on the 4th note
18:18 MrSergio: 01:57:604 (1,2,3,4) - And here you stacked the 3rd and 4th note
18:18 Rohit6: oops
18:18 MrSergio: lol, the last part looks like my suggestions xD
18:18 MrSergio: 01:57:112 (3) - But maybe add a NC here, since the spacing changes
18:18 hyouri: Need help
18:19 hyouri: I can't map
18:19 Rohit6: i made the end part in a rush
18:19 theramdans: why cant you map?
18:19 MrSergio: Alright, that's all for the Extra

Good luck :3

BarkingMadDog

472 posts

Joined October 2013

BarkingMadDog 2015-09-23T16:38:57+00:00

THE BASIC MODDING OF BMDDD??!?!

18:24 Rohit6: yo
18:24 Rohit6: you busy?
18:24 BarkingMadDog: nop
18:24 Rohit6: good with cs5?
18:24 BarkingMadDog: i guess ;p
18:25 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/788472 Jun Kuroda & aaaa - Cygnus]
18:25 Rohit6: first try no h8
18:25 Rohit6: expert diff
18:25 BarkingMadDog: ok
18:25 BarkingMadDog: im not warmed up tho
18:25 BarkingMadDog: and havent played a couple days ;p
18:25 Rohit6: its a bit streamy
18:25 BarkingMadDog: so i might play sht
18:25 Rohit6: not that hard
18:25 Rohit6: s'okay
18:25 Rohit6: theres only one huge stream
18:27 BarkingMadDog: MY
18:27 BarkingMadDog: LEFT HAND IS SO WEAK
18:27 Rohit6: rip
18:28 BarkingMadDog: think u should make this stack
18:28 BarkingMadDog: 00:03:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
18:28 BarkingMadDog: like these
18:28 BarkingMadDog: 00:01:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
18:28 Rohit6: lets see
18:28 BarkingMadDog: they might coimplain about constistency
18:28 Rohit6: oh right
18:29 BarkingMadDog: 00:46:278 -
18:29 BarkingMadDog: sounds like a triple here
18:30 BarkingMadDog: 01:05:622 (1,2,3) -
18:30 BarkingMadDog: these 3 sliders
18:30 Rohit6: yeah i heard that but i mapped to the other thing
18:30 BarkingMadDog: start on red tick
18:30 BarkingMadDog: oh
18:30 BarkingMadDog: ok ;p
18:30 BarkingMadDog: 01:05:458 -
18:30 BarkingMadDog: remove this note and move those sliders back one tick
18:31 BarkingMadDog: 01:10:868 (1,2,3) - same for thse
18:31 Rohit6: yeah that fits better
18:31 BarkingMadDog: 01:16:114 (6,1,2) -
18:31 BarkingMadDog: 01:17:097 (3) - not sure about the 3rd one
18:32 BarkingMadDog: 01:39:720 (1) -
18:33 BarkingMadDog: nc here 01:44:310 (1) -
18:33 BarkingMadDog: and here
18:33 BarkingMadDog: 01:44:802 (1) -
18:33 BarkingMadDog: then remove nc here
18:33 BarkingMadDog: 01:44:966 (3) -
18:33 BarkingMadDog: then lastly nc here
18:33 BarkingMadDog: 01:45:458 (9) -
18:33 BarkingMadDog: is what i would do
18:34 BarkingMadDog: and lastly
18:34 BarkingMadDog: i think the soft part in the end has a bit too big spacing
18:34 BarkingMadDog: nah
18:34 BarkingMadDog: jk
18:34 BarkingMadDog: scratch that
18:34 Rohit6: hmm yeah
18:34 Rohit6: ill tone it down a bit
18:34 BarkingMadDog: alright
18:34 BarkingMadDog: that was all i noticed in one run i guess ;o
18:36 Rohit6: did all except one
18:36 BarkingMadDog: aight thats cooool
18:36 BarkingMadDog: want me to submit this in thread
18:36 Rohit6: 01:16:441 (1,2,3) - this is mapped to the other thing
18:36 Rohit6: sure
18:36 Rohit6: if yo ucan take a look at the N/A diff
18:36 Rohit6: that would be great
18:37 Rohit6: its a gd from a friend
18:37 BarkingMadDog: HMM
18:37 BarkingMadDog: idk ;p
18:37 BarkingMadDog: dont really have the mood rn tho
18:37 BarkingMadDog: ask me in 2 hours
18:37 Rohit6: alright

Nerova Riuz GX

1,413 posts

Joined April 2012

Nerova Riuz GX 2015-09-25T15:04:12+00:00

http://puu.sh/knGPY/9cfc9609e1.rar

im pro at naming my diff
yo

Firmatorenio

120 posts

Joined September 2014

Firmatorenio 2015-09-27T08:19:53+00:00

Some weird irc testing convo about streamshapes and reading

13:53 Firmatorenio: eh cs5 is op with that kind of streamshapes
13:54 Rohit6: only one stream is oddly shaped afaik
13:54 Firmatorenio: 00:11:359 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - try to improve the curve
13:55 Rohit6: i had a sharper curve
13:55 Rohit6: but i changed it
13:56 Firmatorenio: 01:45:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this maybe too
13:56 Firmatorenio: i like the map though
13:56 Rohit6: thank <3
13:56 Rohit6: can you gimme some reasoning though
13:56 Rohit6: to change it i mean
13:57 Firmatorenio: don't listen to anyone asking to decrease cs
13:57 Firmatorenio: well
13:57 Rohit6: 01:44:802 (1) - i changed direction because of the bg sound here
13:58 Firmatorenio: the very beginning is pretty out of the way in the reading intensity
13:58 Firmatorenio: 00:01:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i mean, this is harder to read than the most of the map
13:58 Rohit6: okay
13:58 Firmatorenio: kinda inconsistent
13:59 Rohit6: ill move around the sliders a bit
14:01 Firmatorenio: 01:34:310 (2) - bad blanket
14:01 *Firmatorenio runs
14:01 Rohit6: ill make it a bit easier to read
14:02 Rohit6: 00:01:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - [http://puu.sh/kpKEv/d41f6839fe.jpg here]
14:03 Firmatorenio: why does the final spin end on a weird tick?

14:03 Firmatorenio: that looks cool
14:03 Rohit6: song is cut
14:03 Rohit6: shh
14:03 Firmatorenio: oh ok lol
14:05 Firmatorenio: Rohit: the star rating is really weird
14:05 Rohit6: wait how
14:06 Rohit6: cs5 and some streams
14:06 Firmatorenio: well
14:06 Rohit6: also i dont know how to sr control
14:06 Firmatorenio: i finished mapping a 175bpm deathstream map
14:06 Firmatorenio: cs4.8, clicksliderjumps all over the map
14:07 Firmatorenio: 5.38 stars

14:07 Rohit6: well sr works in weird ways
14:07 Firmatorenio: indeed

14:07 Rohit6: it only checks the peak difficulty
14:07 Rohit6: in the map
14:08 Firmatorenio: i think starting with here
14:08 Firmatorenio: 01:40:540 -
14:08 Firmatorenio: 01:46:278 (1) - and ending here
14:08 Firmatorenio: is all the starr rating :p
14:10 Rohit6: mod the rest as well firma
14:11 *Rohit6 runs
14:11 Rohit6: updated
14:11 Firmatorenio: uh i'm not a good modder, i suggest the style comes first
14:12 Rohit6: man its impossible to get mods
14:12 Firmatorenio: and only tell something if it's a minor improvement or it plays really weird

Arphimigon

1,686 posts

Joined December 2014

Arphimigon 2015-09-30T18:27:18+00:00

hi
[General]
00:10:950 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In the harder difficulties, the slider points away from the stream meaning the player has to stay put on this slider and making the 1/4 snap to the sliders feel much more pressured, I find this myself pretty unnecessary.
00:57:425 - Consider adding notes before the spinners here in harder diffs for effect.
Almost 20% of the outro isnt mapped, I'd seriously cut the mp3.
I mentioned a bunch of NCs kill me

[Scrubs effected by n/a]
I love this easy, its perfect.
00:22:343 (5) - NC for last note emphasis!
00:27:589 (1) - I would remove this since there is hardly much reason to add it and it is kind of long/arm straining for an easy.
00:42:015 (2,3,1) - These are really sharp angles for easiest diff, sure they are fine but just pointing out that they are generally pretty sharp for easiest diffs. You don't need to respond to this line.
01:10:868 (3,4,1) - This is really hard to play, mostly due to the note and last slider not really complimenting each other at all but instead being very anti-flowy. I feel as though making the slider more linear on both ends of it can make it be played more straight so making this part easier (changing the section is too many work)
Can you NC 01:27:917 (2) - and 01:33:163 (2) - ?
01:46:278 (5) - Oh and that.

Love the easy.

[Normal]
00:19:064 (5) - The sections of this aren't equal, also the start and end angles aren't equal either. You may want to check this over.
00:29:392 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit confusing spacing wise, if you play it fully then the angles are kind of tricky, and if you play it linearly then the spacing is too low. I would try making these play more straight than this.
00:32:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This feels like too many notes, I'd add some sliders in here. Preferably longer ones.
01:10:048 - Awkwardly missed sound
01:13:163 - And this, it feels more obvious than 01:13:327 -
01:15:130 - I would fill in this empty space, its weird without.
01:37:753 (6,1) - Blanket!

[Hyper]
00:01:360 (1,2,3,4,5) - These are all the same so there is no reason for that end two objects to be different. If you placed the sliders in a square to fix the pattern that could be better. I see you have all these later on the same, if you don't change then perhaps at least making the notes follow the slider so they feel less pressured.
00:27:589 (3) - This should be NCed not the next slider due to downbeat
00:31:359 - Why skipped noise?
00:38:081 (2) - My god I hate saying NC but NC
00:39:556 (1,2) - I'd slider-note these as it fits the music more, the later sliders after are fine.
00:42:179 (1) - Start the slider 1/2 before or add a sound there?
01:04:310 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is awkward, that slider doesnt really fit how the music is in sets of three.
01:11:687 (6,1,2,3) - Due to stacking this plays weird, put on stacking and see for yourself.
Later things are really just repetitions/not important

[Another]
00:16:278 (3) - Instead of stopping all tapping and movement here, how about a triple with a reverse at the end or two slider jumps?
00:29:556 (2,3,4,5) - These really don't feel like they are good in pairs, just having mini-jumps or so feels nicer for the music.
00:39:228 (2,1) - This spacing
00:43:327 (1,2) - I'd much prefer to tap both of those sounds on that 2 slider here
00:46:605 (2) - Pls NC to separate from the last stacked notes, due to followpoints that kinda ruins the feel here
01:03:327 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This sounds so much more intense than it is mapped, pls add spacing
01:23:819 (6,7,1) - IF you gonna add a triangle triplet, dont make it so spaced. These usually play bad with all the sudden 1/4 snaps unless the map has a lot of them in this sense and its a common theme.

[Another Another (n/a)]
00:02:671 (6,7) - Unnecesary jump compared to the last parts.
00:06:605 (1,2) - As with the next sliders, i would make this note come from the slider direction more
00:10:704 (1) - Remove NC?
00:21:605 (6,7,1) - Playing with blueticks and 1/4s then having a weird 1/2 stack is reallllllllllll hard to read. At least space that slider at the end so people don't hit it too early!
01:00:212 (1,2) - Can note 2 follow from the slider more since the slider is longer? (longer sliders generally are harder to do angles from)
01:14:310 (7,8) - Same as before, I really think there should be like a jump here
01:30:212 (5) - NC to help justify the change in spacing?
01:40:704 (5) - ^ (also this spacing is lower)

[Dark Another]
00:03:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - What's with the jagged point in this stream?
00:08:655 (1) - Remove nc here or on the slider before
00:10:704 (1,2,3) - Stream starting on blue tick + slider jump on blue tick make this misread almost every time. I'd remove the short slider and start the stream 00:11:032 - for simplicity
00:24:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is a relatively calm section, can you keep the spacing lower?
01:18:409 (7,8) - Kinda large spacing compared to the last parts if you consider 1/4 snap. I'd reduce a bit.
01:19:392 (4,5,6,7,1) - It makes sense here to go from high spacing to low considering the lowering pitch here.
01:46:278 (1,1) - Pretty close. If I hit one more note on that stream I might risk hitting that early!

*flies*

BOUYAAA

396 posts

Joined July 2010

BOUYAAA 2015-09-30T20:22:48+00:00

hi xd

I'd like a full response explaining why you deny stuff pls ty

some diffs end on different spots. Fix that.

Black another

I honestly dont thing the map is dense enough to justify AR9.4 idk
there is some pretty spaced stuff compared to what I'm used to see in CS5 diff

00:03:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I know what you're trying to do here but if the edge of the stream is on the last circle of the first 4 circles it puts emphasis on this one 00:03:573 (4) - which is a blue one so that's not what you want. The general shape of the stream isn't that great either imo
00:08:409 (1) - this should not end on the white tick because that's where your stream should start. Right now your stream starts on a blue tick which is not good. NC might be a mistake here
00:10:704 (1) - same xd
00:12:343 (3) - has its repeat on a strong tick while beginning and end are on weak red ticks. This is counter intuitive and should be avoided. We'll call them a passive slider for now. the ones in the beginning work because you can only hear the synth, but the ones where there are snares and stuff don't work as well. If you're wondering why I'd say that, here is the music theory that explains it a bit better than I do : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=30GBgmww1q4. this is also the explanation for the spacing stuff I'll point out later
00:14:966 (4) - same applies to that one. the end of this slider has a super loud snare sound which should be clickable while the beginning has nothing. 00:16:605 (7) - 00:17:589 (2) - here are a few other bad ones, try going through your diff and fix the ones that don't fit
00:21:441 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - this transition doesnt work very well because it breaks the player's intuitive movement. I don't think a pich change justifies suchh a break in what people usually call "flow". Separating woth streams should be fine but make sure the gap follow the player's cursor movement.
00:24:310 (3,4,5) - this is where I start to think your spacing is a bit random, it seems like it doesn't complement the music very well. Spacing should be used to create emphasis on strong beats and strong sounds. here you have higher spacing from 3 to 4 which is a red (and thus weak) tick than from 4 to 5 which is a white (and thus strong) tick.
00:27:261 (5,6,1) - same here
00:31:769 (1) - stream starting on blue tick again which is kidn fo meh because it starts on the red tick
00:32:507 (10,1,2) - this is a bit more minor but having jump patterns like this one with really obtuse angles wakes this harder than it should be since these will rely more on your speed than your aim.
00:32:835 (2,1) - when objects have a 1/1 gap between them like that it's usually better to either stack them or put higher spacing between them (stack is better though)
00:35:130 (2,3,1) - same spacing stuff as mentionned before. The jump to 1 is super small but has a clap hitsound on it. This is just awkward and doesn't make any sense. Things like that will make your map unintuitive and the wrong objects will be emphasised. there is a lot that is wrong with your spacing in your map and you should go throught it and fix it all unless you have a really good reason to keep it as is (other than aesthetics obviously)
00:48:819 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - this might be just me but the sudden apparition of these doubles makes the whole thing awkward
01:06:933 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing is a bit overdone here compared to the rest of the map imo
01:11:851 (4,5,1) - I got rekt by this but it's probably more because I expected higher spacing to 1
01:13:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I knw this one xd
01:15:786 (4,5,6) - another example of jumps with obtuse angles
01:42:179 (8,1) - nc should probably be inverted here to follow the crash cymbal
02:05:950 (1) - this is not snapped correctly

another w/e that title means

00:09:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same remark on spacing than in black another. You know how it works now so try to find these and fix them APPLY TO ALL OTHER DIFFS TOO
00:10:704 (1) - why nc
00:51:687 (2) - would be better if it was mover up a bit for "flow"
01:21:523 (2,3) - same ramark on passive sliders than in the black another APPLY TO ALL OTHER DIFFS TOO
01:30:129 (4,5) - spacing seems high for such a calm part idk
01:40:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this doesnt work at all. Sharp turn + spacing means this is very hard and unfitting

insane

00:09:228 (1,2,3,4,5) - obtuse angles blablabla
00:13:819 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is aesthetics but you know how this can be improved
00:34:966 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - 00:39:556 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - alot of these jump patterns play meh but this is mainly tied to spacing
00:49:802 (1) - you're missing the downbeat. please map it
00:50:048 (2,3,4) - baground sound are probably not audible enough for you to change instrument focus like that idk
01:26:441 (2) - ew what is this shape is this 2009 or something
01:31:687 (2) - ctrl g for better flow
02:05:950 (1) - not snapped correctly should end on blue tick

hyper

00:10:704 (4) - nc should be here if you want one. you probably had issues with ncing here but tthat's mainly because a repeat slider is covering the downbeat
00:48:573 (2,3,4,5) - you can probably find a better rythm for that
00:52:835 - feels empty
01:17:261 (5) - nc should be here since that where the change in the music happens
01:10:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - confusing since spacing is almost the same but snapping is different
01:15:950 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - same here
02:05:950 (1) - idk

normal

00:12:507 (2,3) - invert them because passive slider blablablablabal
00:16:441 (5,1,2) - confusing pattern 5 points towards 2 so the most intuitive cursor movement is towards the wrong object. Avoid that.
00:30:212 (4) - shape could really be improved by making the end circular
00:32:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - talking about confusing patterns, this should be spaced out more imo
01:13:491 (1) - big question is : would this go through qats
01:15:622 (2,3) - i'd avoid stacking in easier diffs since beginners can't see how many objects there will be this has another issue already mentionned

ez

00:42:015 (2,3,1) - confusing pattern 2 points to 1 so most intuitive thing is to click 1. this might actually cause misses
01:13:491 (2,3,1) - same here, most intuitive movement goes to the end of 1
I think I saw others but I'm too lazy to go through again tbh

k that's it
sry if I sounded mean or something, that's not my intention
most of the issues I pointed out in harder diffs apply to other diffs aswell so make sure you understand them and search for them. Especially spacing.
You can join me ingame if you have questions

Good luck with the map!

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2015-10-01T09:55:04+00:00

Arphimigon wrote:
hi
[General]
00:10:950 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In the harder difficulties, the slider points away from the stream meaning the player has to stay put on this slider and making the 1/4 snap to the sliders feel much more pressured, I find this myself pretty unnecessary.
00:57:425 - Consider adding notes before the spinners here in harder diffs for effect.
Almost 20% of the outro isnt mapped, I'd seriously cut the mp3.
I mentioned a bunch of NCs kill me

[Scrubs effected by n/a]
I love this easy, its perfect.
00:22:343 (5) - NC for last note emphasis!
00:27:589 (1) - I would remove this since there is hardly much reason to add it and it is kind of long/arm straining for an easy.
00:42:015 (2,3,1) - These are really sharp angles for easiest diff, sure they are fine but just pointing out that they are generally pretty sharp for easiest diffs. You don't need to respond to this line.
01:10:868 (3,4,1) - This is really hard to play, mostly due to the note and last slider not really complimenting each other at all but instead being very anti-flowy. I feel as though making the slider more linear on both ends of it can make it be played more straight so making this part easier (changing the section is too many work)
Can you NC 01:27:917 (2) - and 01:33:163 (2) - ?
01:46:278 (5) - Oh and that.

Love the easy.

[Normal]
00:19:064 (5) - The sections of this aren't equal, also the start and end angles aren't equal either. You may want to check this over.
00:29:392 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit confusing spacing wise, if you play it fully then the angles are kind of tricky, and if you play it linearly then the spacing is too low. I would try making these play more straight than this. Made this curved flow
00:32:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This feels like too many notes, I'd add some sliders in here. Preferably longer ones.
01:10:048 - Awkwardly missed sound
01:13:163 - And this, it feels more obvious than 01:13:327 -
01:15:130 - I would fill in this empty space, its weird without.
01:37:753 (6,1) - Blanket!

[Hyper]
00:01:360 (1,2,3,4,5) - These are all the same so there is no reason for that end two objects to be different. If you placed the sliders in a square to fix the pattern that could be better. I see you have all these later on the same, if you don't change then perhaps at least making the notes follow the slider so they feel less pressured.
00:27:589 (3) - This should be NCed not the next slider due to downbeat
00:31:359 - Why skipped noise?
00:38:081 (2) - My god I hate saying NC but NC
00:39:556 (1,2) - I'd slider-note these as it fits the music more, the later sliders after are fine.
00:42:179 (1) - Start the slider 1/2 before or add a sound there?
01:04:310 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is awkward, that slider doesnt really fit how the music is in sets of three.
01:11:687 (6,1,2,3) - Due to stacking this plays weird, put on stacking and see for yourself.
Later things are really just repetitions/not important

[Another]
00:16:278 (3) - Instead of stopping all tapping and movement here, how about a triple with a reverse at the end or two slider jumps?
00:29:556 (2,3,4,5) - These really don't feel like they are good in pairs, just having mini-jumps or so feels nicer for the music.
00:39:228 (2,1) - This spacing
00:43:327 (1,2) - I'd much prefer to tap both of those sounds on that 2 slider here
00:46:605 (2) - Pls NC to separate from the last stacked notes, due to followpoints that kinda ruins the feel here
01:03:327 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This sounds so much more intense than it is mapped, pls add spacing
01:23:819 (6,7,1) - IF you gonna add a triangle triplet, dont make it so spaced. These usually play bad with all the sudden 1/4 snaps unless the map has a lot of them in this sense and its a common theme. made it slightly angled so the last circle feels pressured

[Dark Another]
00:03:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - What's with the jagged point in this stream?
00:08:655 (1) - Remove nc here or on the slider before
00:10:704 (1,2,3) - Stream starting on blue tick + slider jump on blue tick make this misread almost every time. I'd remove the short slider and start the stream 00:11:032 - for simplicity
00:24:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is a relatively calm section, can you keep the spacing lower?
01:18:409 (7,8) - Kinda large spacing compared to the last parts if you consider 1/4 snap. I'd reduce a bit.
01:19:392 (4,5,6,7,1) - It makes sense here to go from high spacing to low considering the lowering pitch here.
01:46:278 (1,1) - Pretty close. If I hit one more note on that stream I might risk hitting that early!

*flies*

no reply = fixed

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2015-10-01T10:05:16+00:00

BOUYAAA wrote:
hi xd

I'd like a full response explaining why you deny stuff pls ty

some diffs end on different spots. Fix that.

Black another

I honestly dont thing the map is dense enough to justify AR9.4 idk i can lower to 9.2 but then it conflicts with the insane diff which feels slow at ar9
there is some pretty spaced stuff compared to what I'm used to see in CS5 diff

00:03:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I know what you're trying to do here but if the edge of the stream is on the last circle of the first 4 circles it puts emphasis on this one 00:03:573 (4) - which is a blue one so that's not what you want. The general shape of the stream isn't that great either imo made it a regular curve
00:08:409 (1) - this should not end on the white tick because that's where your stream should start. Right now your stream starts on a blue tick which is not good. NC might be a mistake here
00:10:704 (1) - same xd
00:12:343 (3) - has its repeat on a strong tick while beginning and end are on weak red ticks. This is counter intuitive and should be avoided. We'll call them a passive slider for now. the ones in the beginning work because you can only hear the synth, but the ones where there are snares and stuff don't work as well. If you're wondering why I'd say that, here is the music theory that explains it a bit better than I do : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=30GBgmww1q4. this is also the explanation for the spacing stuff I'll point out later helpful vid
00:14:966 (4) - same applies to that one. the end of this slider has a super loud snare sound which should be clickable while the beginning has nothing. 00:16:605 (7) - 00:17:589 (2) - here are a few other bad ones, try going through your diff and fix the ones that don't fit
00:21:441 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - this transition doesnt work very well because it breaks the player's intuitive movement. I don't think a pich change justifies suchh a break in what people usually call "flow". Separating woth streams should be fine but make sure the gap follow the player's cursor movement.
00:24:310 (3,4,5) - this is where I start to think your spacing is a bit random, it seems like it doesn't complement the music very well. Spacing should be used to create emphasis on strong beats and strong sounds. here you have higher spacing from 3 to 4 which is a red (and thus weak) tick than from 4 to 5 which is a white (and thus strong) tick.
00:27:261 (5,6,1) - same here
00:31:769 (1) - stream starting on blue tick again which is kidn fo meh because it starts on the red tick ended slider on blue and started stream on red
00:32:507 (10,1,2) - this is a bit more minor but having jump patterns like this one with really obtuse angles wakes this harder than it should be since these will rely more on your speed than your aim. changed the angles to make it more comfortable to hit
00:32:835 (2,1) - when objects have a 1/1 gap between them like that it's usually better to either stack them or put higher spacing between them (stack is better though)
00:35:130 (2,3,1) - same spacing stuff as mentionned before. The jump to 1 is super small but has a clap hitsound on it. This is just awkward and doesn't make any sense. Things like that will make your map unintuitive and the wrong objects will be emphasised. there is a lot that is wrong with your spacing in your map and you should go throught it and fix it all unless you have a really good reason to keep it as is (other than aesthetics obviously)
00:48:819 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - this might be just me but the sudden apparition of these doubles makes the whole thing awkward used sliders because everyone complained about the doubles
01:06:933 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing is a bit overdone here compared to the rest of the map imo adjusted the sapcing
01:11:851 (4,5,1) - I got rekt by this but it's probably more because I expected higher spacing to 1
01:13:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I knw this one xd :')
01:15:786 (4,5,6) - another example of jumps with obtuse angles
01:42:179 (8,1) - nc should probably be inverted here to follow the crash cymbal
02:05:950 (1) - this is not snapped correctly

another w/e that title means

00:09:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same remark on spacing than in black another. You know how it works now so try to find these and fix them APPLY TO ALL OTHER DIFFS TOO
00:10:704 (1) - why nc
00:51:687 (2) - would be better if it was mover up a bit for "flow"
01:21:523 (2,3) - same ramark on passive sliders than in the black another APPLY TO ALL OTHER DIFFS TOO
01:30:129 (4,5) - spacing seems high for such a calm part idk
01:40:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this doesnt work at all. Sharp turn + spacing means this is very hard and unfitting

insane

00:09:228 (1,2,3,4,5) - obtuse angles blablabla
00:13:819 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is aesthetics but you know how this can be improved
00:34:966 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - 00:39:556 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - alot of these jump patterns play meh but this is mainly tied to spacing increased the spacing for emphasis
00:49:802 (1) - you're missing the downbeat. please map it
00:50:048 (2,3,4) - baground sound are probably not audible enough for you to change instrument focus like that idk
01:26:441 (2) - ew what is this shape is this 2009 or something rood , but changed
01:31:687 (2) - ctrl g for better flow
02:05:950 (1) - not snapped correctly should end on blue tick

hyper

00:10:704 (4) - nc should be here if you want one. you probably had issues with ncing here but tthat's mainly because a repeat slider is covering the downbeat
00:48:573 (2,3,4,5) - you can probably find a better rythm for that
00:52:835 - feels empty
01:17:261 (5) - nc should be here since that where the change in the music happens
01:10:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - confusing since spacing is almost the same but snapping is different
01:15:950 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - same here
02:05:950 (1) - idk

normal

00:12:507 (2,3) - invert them because passive slider blablablablabal
00:16:441 (5,1,2) - confusing pattern 5 points towards 2 so the most intuitive cursor movement is towards the wrong object. Avoid that.
00:30:212 (4) - shape could really be improved by making the end circular
00:32:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - talking about confusing patterns, this should be spaced out more imo
01:13:491 (1) - big question is : would this go through qats
01:15:622 (2,3) - i'd avoid stacking in easier diffs since beginners can't see how many objects there will be this has another issue already mentionned

ez

00:42:015 (2,3,1) - confusing pattern 2 points to 1 so most intuitive thing is to click 1. this might actually cause misses
01:13:491 (2,3,1) - same here, most intuitive movement goes to the end of 1
I think I saw others but I'm too lazy to go through again tbh

k that's it
sry if I sounded mean or something, that's not my intention
most of the issues I pointed out in harder diffs apply to other diffs aswell so make sure you understand them and search for them. Especially spacing.
You can join me ingame if you have questions

Good luck with the map!

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2015-10-01T10:06:39+00:00

Rohit6 wrote:
BOUYAAA wrote:
hi xd

I'd like a full response explaining why you deny stuff pls ty

some diffs end on different spots. Fix that.

Black another

I honestly dont thing the map is dense enough to justify AR9.4 idk i can lower to 9.2 but then it conflicts with the insane diff which feels slow at ar9
there is some pretty spaced stuff compared to what I'm used to see in CS5 diff

00:03:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I know what you're trying to do here but if the edge of the stream is on the last circle of the first 4 circles it puts emphasis on this one 00:03:573 (4) - which is a blue one so that's not what you want. The general shape of the stream isn't that great either imo made it a regular curve
00:08:409 (1) - this should not end on the white tick because that's where your stream should start. Right now your stream starts on a blue tick which is not good. NC might be a mistake here
00:10:704 (1) - same xd
00:12:343 (3) - has its repeat on a strong tick while beginning and end are on weak red ticks. This is counter intuitive and should be avoided. We'll call them a passive slider for now. the ones in the beginning work because you can only hear the synth, but the ones where there are snares and stuff don't work as well. If you're wondering why I'd say that, here is the music theory that explains it a bit better than I do : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=30GBgmww1q4. this is also the explanation for the spacing stuff I'll point out later helpful vid
00:14:966 (4) - same applies to that one. the end of this slider has a super loud snare sound which should be clickable while the beginning has nothing. 00:16:605 (7) - 00:17:589 (2) - here are a few other bad ones, try going through your diff and fix the ones that don't fit
00:21:441 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - this transition doesnt work very well because it breaks the player's intuitive movement. I don't think a pich change justifies suchh a break in what people usually call "flow". Separating woth streams should be fine but make sure the gap follow the player's cursor movement.
00:24:310 (3,4,5) - this is where I start to think your spacing is a bit random, it seems like it doesn't complement the music very well. Spacing should be used to create emphasis on strong beats and strong sounds. here you have higher spacing from 3 to 4 which is a red (and thus weak) tick than from 4 to 5 which is a white (and thus strong) tick.
00:27:261 (5,6,1) - same here
00:31:769 (1) - stream starting on blue tick again which is kidn fo meh because it starts on the red tick ended slider on blue and started stream on red
00:32:507 (10,1,2) - this is a bit more minor but having jump patterns like this one with really obtuse angles wakes this harder than it should be since these will rely more on your speed than your aim. changed the angles to make it more comfortable to hit
00:32:835 (2,1) - when objects have a 1/1 gap between them like that it's usually better to either stack them or put higher spacing between them (stack is better though)
00:35:130 (2,3,1) - same spacing stuff as mentionned before. The jump to 1 is super small but has a clap hitsound on it. This is just awkward and doesn't make any sense. Things like that will make your map unintuitive and the wrong objects will be emphasised. there is a lot that is wrong with your spacing in your map and you should go throught it and fix it all unless you have a really good reason to keep it as is (other than aesthetics obviously)
00:48:819 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - this might be just me but the sudden apparition of these doubles makes the whole thing awkward used sliders because everyone complained about the doubles
01:06:933 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing is a bit overdone here compared to the rest of the map imo adjusted the sapcing
01:11:851 (4,5,1) - I got rekt by this but it's probably more because I expected higher spacing to 1
01:13:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I knw this one xd :')
01:15:786 (4,5,6) - another example of jumps with obtuse angles
01:42:179 (8,1) - nc should probably be inverted here to follow the crash cymbal
02:05:950 (1) - this is not snapped correctly

another w/e that title means

00:09:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same remark on spacing than in black another. You know how it works now so try to find these and fix them APPLY TO ALL OTHER DIFFS TOO
00:10:704 (1) - why nc
00:51:687 (2) - would be better if it was mover up a bit for "flow"
01:21:523 (2,3) - same ramark on passive sliders than in the black another APPLY TO ALL OTHER DIFFS TOO
01:30:129 (4,5) - spacing seems high for such a calm part idk
01:40:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this doesnt work at all. Sharp turn + spacing means this is very hard and unfitting

insane

00:09:228 (1,2,3,4,5) - obtuse angles blablabla
00:13:819 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is aesthetics but you know how this can be improved
00:34:966 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - 00:39:556 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - alot of these jump patterns play meh but this is mainly tied to spacing increased the spacing for emphasis
00:49:802 (1) - you're missing the downbeat. please map it
00:50:048 (2,3,4) - baground sound are probably not audible enough for you to change instrument focus like that idk
01:26:441 (2) - ew what is this shape is this 2009 or something rood , but changed
01:31:687 (2) - ctrl g for better flow
02:05:950 (1) - not snapped correctly should end on blue tick

hyper

00:10:704 (4) - nc should be here if you want one. you probably had issues with ncing here but tthat's mainly because a repeat slider is covering the downbeat
00:48:573 (2,3,4,5) - you can probably find a better rythm for that
00:52:835 - feels empty
01:17:261 (5) - nc should be here since that where the change in the music happens
01:10:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - confusing since spacing is almost the same but snapping is different
01:15:950 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - same here
02:05:950 (1) - idk

normal

00:12:507 (2,3) - invert them because passive slider blablablablabal
00:16:441 (5,1,2) - confusing pattern 5 points towards 2 so the most intuitive cursor movement is towards the wrong object. Avoid that.
00:30:212 (4) - shape could really be improved by making the end circular
00:32:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - talking about confusing patterns, this should be spaced out more imo
01:13:491 (1) - big question is : would this go through qats ;-;
01:15:622 (2,3) - i'd avoid stacking in easier diffs since beginners can't see how many objects there will be this has another issue already mentionned

ez

00:42:015 (2,3,1) - confusing pattern 2 points to 1 so most intuitive thing is to click 1. this might actually cause misses
01:13:491 (2,3,1) - same here, most intuitive movement goes to the end of 1
I think I saw others but I'm too lazy to go through again tbh

k that's it
sry if I sounded mean or something, that's not my intention
most of the issues I pointed out in harder diffs apply to other diffs aswell so make sure you understand them and search for them. Especially spacing.
You can join me ingame if you have questions

Good luck with the map!

comments with bold and no reply=fixed

Nerova Riuz GX

1,413 posts

Joined April 2012

Nerova Riuz GX 2015-10-01T12:24:47+00:00

Arphimigon wrote:
hi
[General]
00:10:950 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In the harder difficulties, the slider points away from the stream meaning the player has to stay put on this slider and making the 1/4 snap to the sliders feel much more pressured, I find this myself pretty unnecessary.
00:57:425 - Consider adding notes before the spinners here in harder diffs for effect.
Almost 20% of the outro isnt mapped, I'd seriously cut the mp3.
I mentioned a bunch of NCs kill me

[Scrubs effected by n/a]
I love this easy, its perfect.
00:22:343 (5) - NC for last note emphasis!
00:27:589 (1) - I would remove this since there is hardly much reason to add it and it is kind of long/arm straining for an easy.
00:42:015 (2,3,1) - These are really sharp angles for easiest diff, sure they are fine but just pointing out that they are generally pretty sharp for easiest diffs. You don't need to respond to this line.
01:10:868 (3,4,1) - This is really hard to play, mostly due to the note and last slider not really complimenting each other at all but instead being very anti-flowy. I feel as though making the slider more linear on both ends of it can make it be played more straight so making this part easier (changing the section is too many work) changed the angle, it might be better now
Can you NC 01:27:917 (2) - and 01:33:163 (2) - ?
01:46:278 (5) - Oh and that.
All of them are fixed. (maybe.)

Love the easy. thanks.

[Another Another (n/a)]
00:02:671 (6,7) - Unnecesary jump compared to the last parts. i don't think so, this jump is a trail about the stream with jumps after this note.
00:06:605 (1,2) - As with the next sliders, i would make this note come from the slider direction more slightly fixed
00:10:704 (1) - Remove NC? yep i failed on that sht
00:21:605 (6,7,1) - Playing with blueticks and 1/4s then having a weird 1/2 stack is reallllllllllll hard to read. At least space that slider at the end so people don't hit it too early! no i can be sure it's pretty good on gameplay. most ppl can hit that slider correctly at the first time, it can be seen clearly by watching the approach circle.
01:00:212 (1,2) - Can note 2 follow from the slider more since the slider is longer? (longer sliders generally are harder to do angles from) ok im trying
01:14:310 (7,8) - Same as before, I really think there should be like a jump here same
01:30:212 (5) - NC to help justify the change in spacing? ok i'll do that
01:40:704 (5) - ^ (also this spacing is lower) same, and also do sth on that spacing

*flies*

i'll give the file after finishing the next mod

Nerova Riuz GX

1,413 posts

Joined April 2012

Nerova Riuz GX 2015-10-01T12:51:25+00:00

BOUYAAA wrote:
hi xd

I'd like a full response explaining why you deny stuff pls ty im trying my best

some diffs end on different spots. Fix that. I don't think that is an issue actually. Ending on different spots is acceptable

another w/e that title means

00:09:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same remark on spacing than in black another. You know how it works now so try to find these and fix them APPLY TO ALL OTHER DIFFS TOO im sure those spacings here is pretty good, or just because i cant get what you're talking about
00:10:704 (1) - why nc because im retarded! fixed.
00:51:687 (2) - would be better if it was mover up a bit for "flow" ummm nope, it flows good like a wave.
01:21:523 (2,3) - same ramark on passive sliders than in the black another APPLY TO ALL OTHER DIFFS TOO idk but imo passive sliders work well here. no change
01:30:129 (4,5) - spacing seems high for such a calm part idk it separate two different way on expressing. I think it's fine.
01:40:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this doesnt work at all. Sharp turn + spacing means this is very hard and unfitting same above. also, it's a circle flow, it won't be too hard to unfit

ez

00:42:015 (2,3,1) - confusing pattern 2 points to 1 so most intuitive thing is to click 1. this might actually cause misses to me it's pretty fine to make a movement like this as an emphases
01:13:491 (2,3,1) - same here, most intuitive movement goes to the end of 1 Umm you mentioned me that here i should use another different parallel pattern, nice
I think I saw others but I'm too lazy to go through again tbh

k that's it
sry if I sounded mean or something, that's not my intention it's okay because i did that for many times ;w;
most of the issues I pointed out in harder diffs apply to other diffs aswell so make sure you understand them and search for them. Especially spacing.
You can join me ingame if you have questions

Good luck with the map!

New diffs here: http://puu.sh/kuEpB/c69ac3dabb.rar

why no one noticed that i forgot to add hitsounds on beginner diff lmao

riktoi

711 posts

Joined September 2014

riktoi 2015-10-03T15:11:58+00:00

mod from my mod queue (now with an actual link to the queue111!!)

[BLACKKKK ANOTHER]

00:25:040 - 00:22:343 - you could increase the sv here a bit to better fit the fast feeling the part has

00:45:294 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - make this less squarey pls like this one 00:49:884 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

01:08:573 (2,3,4,5) - change up the pattern, square no work here

I think this works a bit better (lol still a square)

01:10:376 (3,3) - these are intended to use the background melody as hitsound right

02:01:359 (3,4,5,6) - the square fits, good job

[ANOTHER EFFECTED BY.... N / A]

00:50:211 (5,6,7) - up the spacing for quick liftoff

00:57:425 (1) - make spinner end sound silent and move the end to the white tick on the left and add a hitcircle to 00:58:900 -

[...INSANE?]

00:35:458 (1,2,1,2) - I don't think this massive spacing is needed

00:39:556 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - do you hate fun

01:10:048 (1,2,3) - disrupts flow too much, use the same pattern as here 01:12:671 (2,3,4) -

01:27:917 (1,2) - is 2 supposed to be blanketed by 1?

01:33:163 (1) - the sliderstart stacks whistle, finish and clap on it(finish being the sliderslide). I don't think this is what you want(unless I'm missing something)

01:53:327 (1,2,3,4,5) - tilt this a bit so 01:53:327 (1,4) - overlap 01:54:146 (1) - equally

[HYpER]

00:21:196 (1) - I don't really like how this skips the drum, try a reverse slider or something
00:31:687 (6) - (and this misses the electronic sound)

00:56:441 - drag the break here

02:04:966 - you can just start the spinner here

[NoRMAL]

00:59:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - FAR TOO LOUD

[bEGGGINNER EFFECTED BY: N/A]

-nice

good luck with your map

Nerova Riuz GX

1,413 posts

Joined April 2012

Nerova Riuz GX 2015-10-04T10:20:59+00:00

riktoi wrote:

mod from my mod queue (now with an actual link to the queue111!!) nice banner ayy lmao

[ANOTHER EFFECTED BY.... N / A]

00:50:211 (5,6,7) - up the spacing for quick liftoff well i think raise spacing in only 3 notes here is not really necessary so im going to keep the current

00:57:425 (1) - make spinner end sound silent and move the end to the white tick on the left and add a hitcircle to 00:58:900 - umm that sounds not that good to me :/

[bEGGGINNER EFFECTED BY: N/A]

-nice thx

good luck with your map

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2015-10-04T10:21:17+00:00

riktoi wrote:

mod from my mod queue (now with an actual link to the queue111!!)

[BLACKKKK ANOTHER]

00:25:040 - 00:22:343 - you could increase the sv here a bit to better fit the fast feeling the part has If i increase the sv then it doesnt remain consistent with the rest of the slow parts so no chaneg :c

00:45:294 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - make this less squarey pls like this one 00:49:884 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ugh FINE

01:08:573 (2,3,4,5) - change up the pattern, square no work here
I think this works a bit better (lol still a square)
Changed it to make 3,4,5 more impactful

01:10:376 (3,3) - these are intended to use the background melody as hitsound right Yes

02:01:359 (3,4,5,6) - the square fits, good jobthank

[...INSANE?]

00:35:458 (1,2,1,2) - I don't think this massive spacing is needed Toned down the spacing

00:39:556 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - do you hate fun Yes

01:10:048 (1,2,3) - disrupts flow too much, use the same pattern as here 01:12:671 (2,3,4) Done

01:27:917 (1,2) - is 2 supposed to be blanketed by 1? >2015
>blanket modding

01:33:163 (1) - the sliderstart stacks whistle, finish and clap on it(finish being the sliderslide). I don't think this is what you want(unless I'm missing something) Removed Finnish :^)

01:53:327 (1,2,3,4,5) - tilt this a bit so 01:53:327 (1,4) - overlap 01:54:146 (1) - equally Okay , comrade

[HYpER]

00:21:196 (1) - I don't really like how this skips the drum, try a reverse slider or something I wanted to keep this diff a bit mroe lenient than the rest ,so I avoided the drum here
00:31:687 (6) - (and this misses the electronic sound)Same as above

00:56:441 - drag the break here Good thinking

02:04:966 - you can just start the spinner hereAdded a few beats before the spinner like 00:41:032 (1,2,1,2) here

[NoRMAL]

00:59:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - FAR TOO LOUDmade it 80% jeez

good luck with your mapthank

Thank for moddu

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2015-10-11T03:20:39+00:00

Well beatmapped for me! Just one thing

01:02:999 - Put this as preview point

Deppyforce

1,989 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2015-10-18T09:20:22+00:00

m4m :3

[Beginner n/a]

01:18:737 (3) - Should be straight to make it blanket better
01:27:917 (1) - Fix blanket lol
01:27:917 (1,1) - The curve near the sliders' start should be parallel

[Normal]

00:13:491 (5) - Reduce roundness this curves too much
00:15:622 - This beat here should be mapped with a circle
00:24:638 (2,3,4) - Fix ds
00:30:212 (4) - Fix curve
01:00:540 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe change pattern the flow here is kinda bad for new players
01:24:802 (4,1) - Since 4 is curving ''up'' so it'll be better if 1's head starts where the curve is pointing to
01:41:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think 7 notes is too much change 2 of them to a 1/2 slider

[Hyper]

00:06:605 (1,2,3,4) - These should have same ds since its same rhythm. change the pattern to make that because ik 4 gunna be out of grid
00:21:196 (1) - remove nc
00:49:556 (6) - ctrl+h makes flow better
00:57:425 (1) - fix curving O.o the S is weird right now
01:25:294 - I Think SV change at this part is too much for a hyper diff
01:48:081 - HS is too loud after this

[Insane]

00:01:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice pattern
00:09:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Its same rhythm so this should have same patterns (fix 00:10:704 (1) - )
00:24:146 (1,2,3,4) - Fix square
00:25:786 (1,2,3) - should be same with 00:25:130 (5,6,7)
00:26:769 (1,2,3,4) - Fix square
00:29:392 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Should have same ds
01:05:622 (1,2,3) - start on red ticks
01:18:409 (4,5) - Should be 2 circles
01:23:819 (6,7,1) - make a straight line or fix the curve, make it smoother pls
01:27:917 (1,2) - blanket
01:46:605 - after this part hs is too loud

[Another n/a]

00:53:819 (8) - Stack on 00:52:998 (4)
01:30:130 (4,1) - 4 -> 1 ds is too much imo

[Black Another]

00:01:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the ds from slider -> circle should be increasing like 3 -> 4 should hav more ds than 1 -> 2
01:13:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - Fix stream shape its weird

Sry i didnt point much in this. since ''extra'' is mapping that shows creativity of the mapper, so some mapper specific pattern should be fine

gl with ranking :3

ur better as a modder than mapper really
ham

RVMathew

991 posts

Joined December 2013

RVMathew 2015-10-18T17:49:00+00:00

Hi there. I just want to mention this.

According to https://soundcloud.com/jun_kuroda/jun-k ... nusfree-dl, the data should be: Jun Kuroda & ああああ - Cygnus

Nerova Riuz GX

1,413 posts

Joined April 2012

Nerova Riuz GX 2015-10-18T18:14:53+00:00

tfw you get lots of mod on many different maps but u can't reply them right away

RVMathew wrote:
Hi there. I just want to mention this.

According to https://soundcloud.com/jun_kuroda/jun-k ... nusfree-dl, the data should be: Jun Kuroda & ああああ - Cygnus

lmao what

RVMathew

991 posts

Joined December 2013

RVMathew 2015-10-18T18:54:11+00:00

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:
tfw you get lots of mod on many different maps but u can't reply them right away

RVMathew wrote:
Hi there. I just want to mention this.

According to https://soundcloud.com/jun_kuroda/jun-k ... nusfree-dl, the data should be: Jun Kuroda & ああああ - Cygnus
lmao what

Whoops disregard this. I was looking at the beatmap page and it did not have ああああ on it. My mistake. Have some stars as an apology.

Nerova Riuz GX

1,413 posts

Joined April 2012

Nerova Riuz GX 2015-10-19T11:42:48+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
m4m :3

[Beginner n/a]
01:18:737 (3) - Should be straight to make it blanket better lol but im not going to make it a blanket
01:27:917 (1) - Fix blanket lol k
01:27:917 (1,1) - The curve near the sliders' start should be parallel
idk but i think that's okay so i just keep it

[Another n/a]
00:53:819 (8) - Stack on 00:52:998 (4) nay, too far
01:30:130 (4,1) - 4 -> 1 ds is too much imo 2.7 is used for digital sounds only so that's okay

thx

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2015-10-19T12:47:02+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
m4m :3

[Normal]
00:13:491 (5) - Reduce roundness this curves too much
00:15:622 - This beat here should be mapped with a circle
00:24:638 (2,3,4) - Fix ds
00:30:212 (4) - Fix curve
01:00:540 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe change pattern the flow here is kinda bad for new players
01:24:802 (4,1) - Since 4 is curving ''up'' so it'll be better if 1's head starts where the curve is pointing to
01:41:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think 7 notes is too much change 2 of them to a 1/2 sliderIt's in 1/1 plus its one of the most intense sections of the map so I dont want to water it down by putting sliders there
[Hyper]
00:06:605 (1,2,3,4) - These should have same ds since its same rhythm. change the pattern to make that because ik 4 gunna be out of grid changed the pattern to be more like previous patterns
00:21:196 (1) - remove nc
00:49:556 (6) - ctrl+h makes flow better
00:57:425 (1) - fix curving O.o the S is weird right now Its perfectly symmetrical...
01:25:294 - I Think SV change at this part is too much for a hyper diff
01:48:081 - HS is too loud after this 50% isnt that high plus ive kept the sampleset soft so its not that loud
[Insane]
00:01:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice pattern thanks :3
00:09:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Its same rhythm so this should have same patterns (fix 00:10:704 (1) - )
00:24:146 (1,2,3,4) - Fix square
00:25:786 (1,2,3) - should be same with 00:25:130 (5,6,7)
00:26:769 (1,2,3,4) - Fix square
00:29:392 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Should have same ds
01:05:622 (1,2,3) - start on red ticks
01:18:409 (4,5) - Should be 2 circles I'm following the melody more than the actual beats here but ive kinked at the downbeat to emphasize
01:23:819 (6,7,1) - make a straight line or fix the curve, make it smoother pls
01:27:917 (1,2) - blanket
01:46:605 - after this part hs is too loud Same as above
[Black Another]
00:01:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the ds from slider -> circle should be increasing like 3 -> 4 should hav more ds than 1 -> 2 Well as of right now the ds IS increasing from circle to slider and slider to circle albiet the ds increase is kinda low
01:13:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - Fix stream shape its weird i want to keep it this way because i dont see anything wrong with it honestly since its just a curvy stream with one kink

Sry i didnt point much in this. since ''extra'' is mapping that shows creativity of the mapper, so some mapper specific pattern should be fine
gl with ranking :3 thanks

ur better as a modder than mapper really ;-; I made this a while ago when I wasnt so good at making maps
ham

Thanks for modding

Deppyforce

1,989 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2015-10-20T09:54:41+00:00

Where's me kd

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2015-10-20T17:02:44+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
Where's me kd

oops xd

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2015-10-24T12:59:31+00:00

SPOILER

2015-10-24 20:23 Rohit6: hey
2015-10-24 20:24 neonat: link
2015-10-24 20:24 neonat: pls
2015-10-24 20:24 Rohit6: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/787418 Jun Kuroda & aaaa - Cygnus]
2015-10-24 20:24 Rohit6: this is the map btw
2015-10-24 20:25 neonat: that artist name is sooooooo
2015-10-24 20:25 neonat: suspicious
2015-10-24 20:25 Rohit6: aaaa
2015-10-24 20:25 Rohit6: its some bms artist
2015-10-24 20:27 neonat: hmm
2015-10-24 20:27 neonat: i might take a look at just the 2 hardest
2015-10-24 20:28 neonat: and I'll just mention anything that first comes to me here
2015-10-24 20:28 neonat: so it'll be a once through look
2015-10-24 20:28 Rohit6: 2nd hardest is a gd
2015-10-24 20:28 neonat: 3rd then
2015-10-24 20:29 Rohit6: alright
2015-10-24 20:30 neonat: 00:09:720 (3) - deliberately not perfectly stacked?
2015-10-24 20:32 neonat: 00:16:605 (7,8) - tbh i dont see why this should be wider than 00:16:933 (9,1) -
2015-10-24 20:32 Rohit6: hmm youre right
2015-10-24 20:33 neonat: 00:24:146 (1,2,3) - stack it instead?
2015-10-24 20:33 neonat: 00:26:769 (1,2,3) - ^
2015-10-24 20:34 neonat: orrrr at least like 00:37:261 (1,2,3) -
2015-10-24 20:34 Rohit6: alright
2015-10-24 20:36 neonat: 00:48:163 (4,5,6,7,8) - em a little more consistency I feel
2015-10-24 20:36 neonat: seems more like a mess as it is rather than a proper pattern
2015-10-24 20:37 Rohit6: hmm
2015-10-24 20:37 Rohit6: mae it more like the other streams
2015-10-24 20:37 neonat: 00:53:163 (1) - 1000 on auto that's living dangerously esp with od close to 9
2015-10-24 20:38 Rohit6: but it fits there imo
2015-10-24 20:38 neonat: still living dangerously
2015-10-24 20:39 Rohit6: ;w;
2015-10-24 20:40 neonat: 01:07:753 (6,7,8) - ur grid size is making it hard to make a straight line
2015-10-24 20:40 Rohit6: hmm fixed it
2015-10-24 20:40 neonat: 01:03:327 (2,3) - this kinda jacks up the difficulty excessively, seems much of a spike even compared to what's coming after that in the faster paced section
2015-10-24 20:41 Rohit6: you mean the stream?
2015-10-24 20:41 neonat: 01:16:114 (6,1,2,3) - rip this part the music comes at the end of each slider
2015-10-24 20:41 neonat: the jump rather than any stream
2015-10-24 20:41 neonat: jump from the stacked 2 to 3
2015-10-24 20:42 neonat: after all, the melody in the song is on the red lines for 01:15:950 (5,6,1,2,3) -
2015-10-24 20:42 Rohit6: ah right
2015-10-24 20:43 neonat: 01:20:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - im assuming u missed out a NC
2015-10-24 20:44 Rohit6: yes on 6
2015-10-24 20:44 neonat: 01:39:720 (1,2) - weird emphasis
2015-10-24 20:44 neonat: i hear something starting at 01:40:212 -
2015-10-24 20:45 neonat: and 01:40:376 (3,4) - sounds like a triplet in the music?
2015-10-24 20:45 neonat: 01:49:720 (2,1) - blanket
2015-10-24 20:45 Rohit6: its a stream
2015-10-24 20:45 neonat: nuh uh
2015-10-24 20:46 neonat: tripletttt
2015-10-24 20:46 neonat: fite me
2015-10-24 20:46 Rohit6: 01:39:720 (1,2) - i couldnt figure out wtf was happening here
2015-10-24 20:47 neonat: on insane 00:03:573 (4,5) - this is excessive
2015-10-24 20:47 neonat: just remake the rhythm then
2015-10-24 20:48 Rohit6: 00:03:573 (4,5) - wat
2015-10-24 20:48 neonat: this is the rhythm i hear from the song at that part in insane http://i.imgur.com/usYP0s2.png
2015-10-24 20:48 neonat: 00:05:950 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2015-10-24 20:48 neonat: 00:08:573 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2015-10-24 20:49 Rohit6: ok will do
2015-10-24 20:50 neonat: 00:45:950 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - u went all NC by patterns here instead of something more consistent
2015-10-24 20:51 neonat: standalone ones i understand
2015-10-24 20:51 neonat: but the parts later on not sooo much
2015-10-24 20:52 Rohit6: mm
2015-10-24 20:52 neonat: 01:05:458 (6,1,2,3) - well if you're not gonna follow the melody of the song well I can't stop you lol
2015-10-24 20:52 Rohit6: ;w;
2015-10-24 20:52 neonat: 01:16:114 (5,1,2,3) - yeah
2015-10-24 20:53 neonat: did i forget to ask for finishes on 01:16:114 (5,1,2,3) - for the diffs? I think i did
2015-10-24 20:53 neonat: those cymbals, i think it's better to emphasize them with hitsounds
2015-10-24 20:54 neonat: 01:25:294 (1,1) - like hey, they got stuff on them, it's fine already, but finishes wouldn't be that bad either i guess
2015-10-24 20:54 Rohit6: softfinishes okay
2015-10-24 20:54 Rohit6: ?
2015-10-24 20:54 neonat: ok
2015-10-24 20:54 neonat: 01:36:769 (4) - aha yeh these kind of stuff always gets me
2015-10-24 20:54 neonat: can't stand strong beats on slider ends
2015-10-24 20:55 neonat: 01:39:392 (5) -
2015-10-24 20:55 Rohit6: making it 2 circles
2015-10-24 20:55 neonat: 02:03:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think self explanatory
2015-10-24 20:55 neonat: lol
2015-10-24 20:56 Rohit6: too intense?
2015-10-24 20:57 neonat: the pattern
2015-10-24 20:57 neonat: make it more even

Rizen

1,666 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2016-02-13T08:01:50+00:00

ok

osu file format v14

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ended up being 2.15 stars

diraimur

547 posts

Joined December 2013

diraimur 2016-02-20T12:11:48+00:00

nice map

black another
00:49:556 (8) - must be 2 notes
00:50:376 (5) - must be only 1 note and not a slider
01:02:179 (2) - 2 notes plz
01:04:228 (9) - take dis between 1 and 8 plox
01:10:048 (2) - must end at 01:10:212 -
01:11:359 (4) - must end at 01:11:523 -
01:12:671 (2) - must end at 01:12:835 -
01:14:064 (6) - just make stream imo
01:27:261 (1,2) - rr i feel like this should be soft
01:29:884 (1,2,3,4) - these must be 1/6
01:40:376 (3) - 1/6 repeat

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2016-02-20T12:36:37+00:00

diraimur wrote:
nice map

black another
00:49:556 (8) - must be 2 notes tru
00:50:376 (5) - must be only 1 note and not a slider tru
01:02:179 (2) - 2 notes plz i want some sort of kick into the next stream so no change
01:04:228 (9) - take dis between 1 and 8 plox that looks kinda ass so no change
01:10:048 (2) - must end at 01:10:212 - no sounds on either white or blue so i chose to extend it for less monotonous rhythm
01:11:359 (4) - must end at 01:11:523 - ^
01:12:671 (2) - must end at 01:12:835 - ^
01:14:064 (6) - just make stream imo no that will conflict with the last stream in kiai
01:27:261 (1,2) - rr i feel like this should be soft havent hitsounded fully but ok
01:29:884 (1,2,3,4) - these must be 1/6 tru
01:40:376 (3) - 1/6 repeat tru

ac8129464363

1,566 posts

Joined October 2013

ac8129464363 2016-05-27T04:13:45+00:00

wat r u on

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2016-05-27T09:21:50+00:00

deetz wrote:
wat r u on

butter roti

Exote

417 posts

Joined April 2013

Exote 2016-06-07T12:33:00+00:00

we did some stuff cuz he asked<3

Beginner
idk the hp is literally the same with Normal, at least 2?

Normal
00:17:917 (2,3) - wanna stack those? consistency, shouldn't be harder than the other stacks ( 00:39:064 (3,4) - is stacked so gogo) a
00:19:720 (1,2,1) - woho man this is REALLY mean, like, when you actually play they overlap 1:1. read issues inc, seriously consider readjustment, either the patterns of the rhythm ( 00:44:802 (4,5,1) - this a perfect example, both looks and plays good, so why not make something similar, the only difference will be that it's gonna be EASIER to read)

Insane
A shit ton of unused green lines, probably from the hs copy pasta.
00:08:573 (5,6) - if this was meant to be a blanket, make it better, if not leave it
00:44:474 (6,1) - variety is good, but this is kinda meh to play especially with the triple after it, why not just copy pasta 00:44:802 (2,3,4) with ctrl h
00:53:819 (1) - it is safe if you distance this by a bit more, you want that emphasis right, so go for it

Another
hp really hurts in some places like the final stream or if you miss something, usually a stream by mistake(even 6.5 would enough of a change)
00:21:605 (6,7,1) - even if you wanted to create something better looking/playing or more creative, this is still confusing af. recommend changing (01:14:064 (6,7,8) - 01:24:556 (6,7,8) same stuff here - I see it's mentioned more than one time? I'll still leave this here in case you reconsider.
00:43:327 (1,2,3) - this stack man, even a custom one would have been much better
00:45:130 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - that's nice, you follow what the melody offers, I mean the gradually increasing spacing, but you didn't do that to other places as well? (00:11:032 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 00:48:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
00:53:819 (8) - NC perhaps
01:01:687 (8) - same as above
01:19:064 (2,3,4) - I can't really tell if those are touching or not, and it just makes me go nuts. would be fine if you spaced them out a bit

proof

14:54 Exote: wth
14:54 Exote: get in cygnus
14:54 Exote: im getting in a min or so
14:57 Exote: actually
14:57 Exote: imma play the set again
14:57 Exote: i havent played 2 of ur diffs
14:57 Exote: only 1
14:57 Rohit6: koa
14:58 Exote: oh
14:58 Exote: nvm i know this
14:58 Rohit6: light insane
15:00 Exote: oh
15:00 Exote: honestly
15:00 Exote: this doesnt feel light at all
15:00 Exote: the cs
15:00 Exote: is a turn off ;/
15:00 Rohit6: (((lite)))
15:00 Exote: also, od is way too much
15:00 Rohit6: ;/
15:00 Exote: ill try black another
15:00 Exote: i wont prolly pass
15:00 Rohit6: 7.5 is fine tbh
15:01 Exote: cs5 boi
15:02 Rohit6: boi
15:03 Exote: oh come on
15:04 Exote: rip hands
15:04 Exote: anyway diff is awesome
15:04 Rohit6: (windows 95 closing sound)
15:07 Exote: lets say
15:07 Exote: i cleared it
15:07 Rohit6: hey you did it!
15:07 *Exote is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/888465 Jun Kuroda & aaaa - Cygnus [BLACK ANOTHER]]
15:08 Exote: let me see if i see sth
15:09 Exote: 00:21:687 (8) -
15:09 Exote: there u can possibly use a nc
15:09 Exote: since there are similar patterns to this, with used ncs
15:09 Rohit6: oka
15:09 Exote: it helps surviving tho
15:10 Rohit6: oh i have to hitsound this map too
15:10 Exote: isnt it already
15:10 Exote: anyway
15:10 Rohit6: no
15:10 Rohit6: only 26 seconds
15:10 Rohit6: are hitsounded
15:10 Exote: ah
15:10 Exote: soo
15:10 Exote: 00:48:081 (5,6) -
15:11 Exote: either of those can be NCed for same reasons
15:11 Exote: buut
15:11 Exote: NCing the kickslider is a better idea
15:11 Exote: since
15:11 Exote: it IS expected to be played right after the slider before it, plus its gonna indicate that theres a stream right after the kicislider
15:11 Rohit6: yeahj
15:13 Exote: the last streams
15:14 Exote: if there were ncs in every 4 or 5 circles, i mean it would be much easier to keep up
15:14 Exote: but
15:14 Exote: it'd kinda look ugly there
15:14 Exote: since you've already got something properly structured
15:15 Exote: 00:48:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
15:15 Exote: those
15:15 Rohit6: yeah ncing it would be bad
15:15 Rohit6: because its a constant mash
15:15 Exote: hm
15:15 Exote: yea
15:15 Exote: anyway those kicksliders
15:15 Exote: i think
15:15 Exote: have
15:15 Exote: the same spacing as 00:49:884 (1,2,3,4,5) -
15:15 Exote: i seriously got confused with the first ones
15:15 Exote: oh wait
15:15 Exote: wait wait
15:16 Exote: hmmm
15:16 Exote: they are the same tbh
15:16 Exote: bu
15:16 Exote: t
15:16 Exote: idk
15:16 Rohit6: same but no same
15:16 Exote: yea
15:16 Exote: i cant focus on these right
15:16 Exote: the
15:17 Exote: thing you are following
15:17 Exote: starts from the end of the star stream
15:17 Exote: its like, 4 equal sections, one of them being skipped
15:17 Rohit6: the ting ting thing
15:18 Exote: idk rly xd
15:18 Exote: thats not anything major
15:18 Exote: its just that i suck a bit at playing
15:18 Rohit6: same
15:18 Exote: imo, it is a bit confusing
15:19 Rohit6: itll be clear oncei itsoudns
15:19 Exote: lets houppp so
15:19 Exote: ok
15:19 Exote: THE LIGHT INSANE
15:19 Exote: the real "trouble"
15:19 Exote: ok
15:19 Exote: i find it
15:19 Exote: HARD
15:19 Exote: like
15:19 Rohit6: xd
15:19 Exote: legimetaly hard
15:19 Exote: it really feels harder than a light insane
15:19 Exote: feels like
15:19 Exote: 4,6-70
15:19 Rohit6: well its after the hard
15:19 Rohit6: :d
15:19 Exote: i mean
15:19 Exote: SR difference is fine
15:19 Exote: the
15:19 Exote: but*
15:19 Exote: it is harder than it looks like
15:20 Rohit6: i do that
15:20 Rohit6: a lot
15:20 Rohit6: xdd
15:20 Exote: whyyy
15:20 Exote: also
15:20 Exote: its just
15:20 Exote: um
15:20 Exote: low cs and ar dont go well
15:20 Exote: its liek putting an EASY mod while playing hyper
15:20 Rohit6: its
15:20 Exote: u're gonna get confused
15:20 Rohit6: only like 8.5
15:20 Exote: either try
15:20 Exote: cs 3,8/4 or ar up to 8.8
15:20 Exote: i mean
15:21 Exote: at least one of those should solve it
15:21 Exote: for my surprise i cant read it well
15:21 Rohit6: its not even that hard
15:21 Exote: i know
15:21 Exote: its not the best to read either
15:21 Rohit6: and i wont change cs sor
15:21 Exote: then ar?
15:21 Rohit6: maybe
15:21 Rohit6: if more people complain
15:21 Exote: 8.8 is gonna be just enough
15:21 Exote: keep that in mind
15:21 Rohit6: then it just becomes another insane
15:21 Rohit6: like the other 2
15:21 Exote: nah
15:22 Exote: the most confusing part was
15:22 Exote: 00:45:950 -
15:22 Exote: from here
15:22 Exote: i just mashed xd
15:22 Exote: hoping i'd get those without miss
15:23 Rohit6: 00:48:573 - this is confusing
15:23 Exote: oh
15:23 Exote: this too
15:23 Exote: yea
15:24 Exote: the spacing is woho
15:24 Exote: 01:24:310 (2,3,4,5) -
15:24 Exote: those patterns
15:24 Exote: uhm
15:24 Exote: they are kinda shit to play no matter where u use them
15:24 Exote: as for light insane
15:25 Exote: puush
15:25 Exote: slow af
15:25 Exote: http://puu.sh/pjYxy/dd0d3d95ed.jpg
15:25 Exote: how's that
15:25 Rohit6: i tried other thigns too
15:25 Rohit6: but theyre meh
15:26 Exote: the best i can suggest is the link i sent
15:26 Exote: leave if u think its unnecessary changing
15:26 Exote: 01:37:097 (1,2) - why are those touching

15:26 Exote: aint it agliiie
15:27 Exote: also
15:27 Exote: lots of green lines
15:27 Exote: but you're gonna fix i guess
15:27 Exote: later
15:27 Rohit6: yeah that works fine
15:27 Exote: i mean, unused green lights
15:27 Exote: lines*
15:27 Exote: lol
15:27 Rohit6: oh that
15:27 Rohit6: ill remove later
15:27 Exote: yep
15:27 Exote: sure

Nerova Riuz GX

1,413 posts

Joined April 2012

Nerova Riuz GX 2016-06-15T02:12:37+00:00

Exote wrote:
we did some stuff cuz he asked<3

Beginner
idk the hp is literally the same with Normal, at least 2? k

Another
hp really hurts in some places like the final stream or if you miss something, usually a stream by mistake(even 6.5 would enough of a change) LOL
00:21:605 (6,7,1) - even if you wanted to create something better looking/playing or more creative, this is still confusing af. recommend changing (01:14:064 (6,7,8) - 01:24:556 (6,7,8) same stuff here - I see it's mentioned more than one time? I'll still leave this here in case you reconsider. ahh no. NCs are enough for patterns like this and there are some testplays telling that this trick does work (but added some NCs cuz i forgot)
00:43:327 (1,2,3) - this stack man, even a custom one would have been much better fine, lemme change
00:45:130 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - that's nice, you follow what the melody offers, I mean the gradually increasing spacing, but you didn't do that to other places as well? (00:11:032 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 00:48:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
i wont do that on the first one cuz the pitch goes down, and not the second one as well cuz 7 circles are too short for me to do that
00:53:819 (8) - NC perhaps ahhh no
01:01:687 (8) - same as above cuz i want to keep the pattern in the same color
01:19:064 (2,3,4) - I can't really tell if those are touching or not, and it just makes me go nuts. would be fine if you spaced them out a bit LOL ok i know

http://puu.sh/pt7Vg/e1d3c1e2ad.rar

ProfessionalBox

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

771 posts

Joined September 2013

ProfessionalBox 2016-07-08T09:56:39+00:00

s

BLACK ANOTHER

00:10:704 (1) - This NC should be here 00:11:032 (4) - To be consistent with the rest of the NCs in the intro
00:24:802 (1,3) - Blanket on this could be prettier
00:53:163 (1) - This is practically a ninja spinner, I recommend you redo this because it plays like ass
01:07:261 (3,4) - This flows really bad, I suggest ctrl + g for these
01:18:409 (7,8) - You should lower the (8) a bit to line this up nicer
01:31:687 (2) - I'd make the curve on this larger since now it's ab it weird when there is a tiny curve and only in the head of the slider
01:40:376 (3) - NC for fun maybe?q
01:44:310 (9) - 01:45:622 (9) - I'd NC these to keep the combo numbers a bit lower
01:45:786 (11,12,13,14,15,16) - You need to improve this curve to properly blanket 01:46:278 (1) - in it

ANOTHER N/A

00:03:327 (1,1) - This overlap looks a bit messy
00:16:523 - Ignoring this is a bit meh in my opinion
00:22:015 (1) - I think you should put this somewhere around x:381 y:236
00:31:687 (1) - I'm not a huge fan of this spinner since it's so short and feels unnecessary
00:37:507 - 00:37:835 - Ignoring these sounds is a bit meh aswell
00:38:081 (4) - NC?
00:52:999 - There isn't a sound here so consider removing 00:52:999 (4) -
00:53:819 (8) - NC?
00:59:638 (3) - This feels really random
01:29:064 (2,1) - Messy looking overlap

Light Insane

CS3 really?
00:12:343 (2,4) - Stack properly
00:14:966 (2,3) - I'd stack these but your call
00:22:343 - 00:32:835 - You could make this section a break since it's a light insane and break time would be nice
00:53:163 - This empty space feels random even though I understand what you are trying to do here. I recommend you putting objects here
01:40:376 - Same here

Will continue a bit later

Nerova Riuz GX

1,413 posts

Joined April 2012

Nerova Riuz GX 2016-07-10T19:00:36+00:00

ProfessionalBox wrote:
ANOTHER N/A
00:03:327 (1,1) - This overlap looks a bit messy ewww
00:16:523 - Ignoring this is a bit meh in my opinion not really imo
00:22:015 (1) - I think you should put this somewhere around x:381 y:236 it got changed to full stacked now for some reason
00:31:687 (1) - I'm not a huge fan of this spinner since it's so short and feels unnecessary removed
00:37:507 - 00:37:835 - Ignoring these sounds is a bit meh aswell it's fine for the consistency's sake, and it makes things easier as well
00:38:081 (4) - NC? ok
00:52:999 - There isn't a sound here so consider removing 00:52:999 (4) - nah
00:53:819 (8) - NC? alright
00:59:638 (3) - This feels really random idk i made some changes on pattern
01:29:064 (2,1) - Messy looking overlap ewww

http://puu.sh/pX2ic/e5ebb176e4.rar

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2016-07-17T11:21:10+00:00

ProfessionalBox wrote:
s

BLACK ANOTHER
00:10:704 (1) - This NC should be here 00:11:032 (4) - To be consistent with the rest of the NCs in the intro sure
00:24:802 (1,3) - Blanket on this could be prettier ok
00:53:163 (1) - This is practically a ninja spinner, I recommend you redo this because it plays like ass plays well imo , will change later if i really have to
01:07:261 (3,4) - This flows really bad, I suggest ctrl + g for these it plays fine imo
01:18:409 (7,8) - You should lower the (8) a bit to line this up nicer sure
01:31:687 (2) - I'd make the curve on this larger since now it's ab it weird when there is a tiny curve and only in the head of the slider oko
01:40:376 (3) - NC for fun maybe?q no fun allowed
01:44:310 (9) - 01:45:622 (9) - I'd NC these to keep the combo numbers a bit lower fun allowed
01:45:786 (11,12,13,14,15,16) - You need to improve this curve to properly blanket 01:46:278 (1) - in it sur

Light Insane
CS3 really? d
00:12:343 (2,4) - Stack properly
00:14:966 (2,3) - I'd stack these but your call
00:22:343 - 00:32:835 - You could make this section a break since it's a light insane and break time would be nice ehh i dont like that
00:53:163 - This empty space feels random even though I understand what you are trying to do here. I recommend you putting objects here filled it
01:40:376 - Same here same to asphalt
i like my stacking method so ill pass

Will continue a bit later

Ongaku

607 posts

Joined January 2014

Ongaku 2016-07-17T15:14:54+00:00

Alright, the M4M. Lets go.

[General]

Hitsounds and everything looks good to go, spread looks nice. Good job. Now, onto the mod.

[BLACK ANOTHER]

- 00:11:851 (1) - I'd say make it into a 3/4, then add a circle note on 00:12:179 - to emphasis the white tick.

- 00:31:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Feels very messy. Try fixing the triangles a bit more, for aesthetics. Use rotation 120 or -120 for the triangles!
- 00:31:687 (1,2,3) - : https://gyazo.com/665b2f623dc6b679c9dc39832e5d8a94
- 00:32:179 (4,5,6) - : https://gyazo.com/9d9d0b567fe2e8e77daf08c54844ee5e

- 00:33:982 (1) - Kind of an unnecessary NC, don't you think?

- 00:38:900 (1) - Remove the NC here, no point in a 3-combo pattern when it'll just change 00:39:556 (1) - .

- 01:46:605 - Remove the rest of the Green Points from here on out, no point in increasing the file size.

[ANOTHER effected by N/A]

- 00:41:687 (3,4,5) - This overlap is triggering me. :C

- 00:57:425 - Add a note here instead of starting the spinner here, it'll bring out the song more.

[INSANE effected by ProBox]

- 00:01:851 (3,4,5,6,7) - This part of the song is the same as 00:04:474 (3) - , but it is different. Please change either one to keep consistency.

- 00:25:048 - Might want to remove these Green Points, they serve no purpose, up to 00:31:359 - .

- 01:46:605 - Remove the rest after this point.

[Conclusion]

Beautiful and great set. Well done to you and the GD'ers. There are some stray Green points, so I recommend you remove them. Good luck to this set.

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2016-07-20T17:35:50+00:00

Ongaku wrote:
Alright, the M4M. Lets go.

[General]

Hitsounds and everything looks good to go, spread looks nice. Good job. Now, onto the mod. finished the hitsounds now lo

[BLACK ANOTHER]

- 00:11:851 (1) - I'd say make it into a 3/4, then add a circle note on 00:12:179 - to emphasis the white tick. oka

- 00:31:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Feels very messy. Try fixing the triangles a bit more, for aesthetics. Use rotation 120 or -120 for the triangles! the song has that kind of a random feeling there that i wanted to capture so i wanna keep it tbh
- 00:31:687 (1,2,3) - : https://gyazo.com/665b2f623dc6b679c9dc39832e5d8a94
- 00:32:179 (4,5,6) - : https://gyazo.com/9d9d0b567fe2e8e77daf08c54844ee5e

- 00:33:982 (1) - Kind of an unnecessary NC, don't you think? y a

- 00:38:900 (1) - Remove the NC here, no point in a 3-combo pattern when it'll just change 00:39:556 (1) - . ok

- 01:46:605 - Remove the rest of the Green Points from here on out, no point in increasing the file size. oh no 4 more kilobytes!

[Conclusion]

Beautiful and great set. Well done to you and the GD'ers. There are some stray Green points, so I recommend you remove them. Good luck to this set.

ProfessionalBox

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

771 posts

Joined September 2013

ProfessionalBox 2016-08-30T18:19:02+00:00

I think I fixed all suggestions

.osu

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 62999
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.5
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
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TitleUnicode:Cygnus
Artist:Jun Kuroda & aaaa
ArtistUnicode:Jun Kuroda & ああああ
Creator:Rohit6
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Source:
Tags:Drum&Bass dnb 夏 エモ 宮田守 Miyata Mamoru emo natsu Nerova Riuz GX ProfessionalBox
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Nerova Riuz GX

1,413 posts

Joined April 2012

Nerova Riuz GX 2016-09-03T14:36:24+00:00

Ongaku wrote:
[ANOTHER effected by N/A]

- 00:41:687 (3,4,5) - This overlap is triggering me. :C kkk

- 00:57:425 - Add a note here instead of starting the spinner here, it'll bring out the song more. ahh no well i prefer doing this for the fx

Cryptic

551 posts

Joined December 2013

Cryptic 2016-09-06T17:18:38+00:00

aaaa I love aaaa

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2016-09-07T15:27:14+00:00

Cryptic wrote:
aaaa I love aaaa

aaaagreed

BOUYAAA

396 posts

Joined July 2010

BOUYAAA 2016-09-26T18:07:37+00:00

Cryptic wrote:
aaaa I love aaaa

pls icon

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2016-09-27T08:07:53+00:00

BOUYAAA wrote:
Cryptic wrote:
aaaa I love aaaa
pls icon

me too thanks

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-10-23T07:58:39+00:00

sorry for late

[beginner]

fine

[normal]

00:17:097 (1,2,3) - 00:19:720 (1) - why suddenly change the rhythm here and make them inconsistent with 00:14:474 (1,2) - , i think that make the player a bit surprise about the change and make give a bit of weird feeling there since the music stay consistent like that so i think make them a bit consistent would be better
00:35:458 (1,2,3) - i think emphasizing both the red tick and white tick sound like that there make the rhythm a bit confusing to play , i think this rhythm will make the transition feel better
SPOILER
00:44:802 (4) - rhythm sound weird to me tbh since you kinda focus on the red tick sound here 00:44:474 - so it would be better to map this 00:45:130 - instead of white tick cus that will make it sound more consistent imo

[hyper]

00:48:573 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - this is unfair for the player at this level tbh 1/2 rhythm pattern is enough now the current rhythm is like the rhythm for the insane diff level or smth
00:59:064 (1,2,3) - kinda hard to read imo , i think 1/1 slider + triplet would be better
01:06:769 (8) - looks off from the pattern here 01:05:458 (4,5,6,7) - , placing (8) on x348 y192 would improve the pattern there and create a jumps for 01:06:769 (8,1) - which make thing a lots more reasonable
01:17:261 (8) - i think place this at x379 y118 make thing play more better like this 01:17:261 (8,1) - should be jumps instead of 01:16:933 (7,8) - tbh
01:22:179 (7) - similiarto the two suggestion above

[light I]

01:08:081 (7) - uhh around x488 y160 for perfect triangle ?
01:23:982 (1) - i think 2 circles would fit for the beat here better an make good transition to the next rhythm
some pattern don't feel like fit for the light insane diff tho like 00:13:655 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:48:573 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 00:44:556 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:58:081 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -
those pattern are something i consider that i need high level of reading skill that i don't think will suit the diff that below insane like this
ok so overall the first part you did very well at keeping most of the pattern fit for the low insane and then from 00:43:327 - to the end of kiai it feel like a big spike in reading skill there and make it looks like something higher than low insane diff instead so i find that i very major problem here , you should try to simplify the pattern to make it fit for the low insane diff imo

[insane]

00:19:556 (5,1) - i think higher spacing for this would make the flow a bit better since (1) sound really emphasized here , try move (1) to around x347 y288 ?
00:50:868 (3,4,5,6,1) - can improve the curve here imo

[another]

00:02:671 (6,7) - why is this the only spacing that not low spacing like the others ? , feel weird and inconsistent
[01:40:949 (4,1,2) - really hard to navigate imo the angle here already make the flow looks awkward , mm i try to make the angle 01:41:032 (1,2) - go up instead of down and it work really well imo lol so maybe try to make the angle there go up instead to improve flow
[/list]

[black another]

00:40:048 (4,5,6,7) - stack kinda kill the movement here imo i think the music here not fit for stop movement imo so try to not stack them would be better
00:48:819 (2,4,6) - i think the slider don't really fit for the beat here at all the beat sound sudden but then after listening to it for awhile idk why it just still feel weird , i think this kind of rhythm is fit for the 2 circle combo more
SPOILER
01:24:474 (5,6,7,8) - didn't expect 01:24:720 (7,8) - to be stacked tbh lol and again i don't think the 1/4 slider can work really well here it feel really random tho tbh

mm most of the 1/4 sldiers here i find them play pretty random for me idk i might be suck at playing it so i don't have any idea lol

anyways good luck

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2016-10-29T16:47:35+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
sorry for late

[hyper]
00:48:573 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - this is unfair for the player at this level tbh 1/2 rhythm pattern is enough now the current rhythm is like the rhythm for the insane diff level or smth
00:59:064 (1,2,3) - kinda hard to read imo , i think 1/1 slider + triplet would be better
01:06:769 (8) - looks off from the pattern here 01:05:458 (4,5,6,7) - , placing (8) on x348 y192 would improve the pattern there and create a jumps for 01:06:769 (8,1) - which make thing a lots more reasonable
01:17:261 (8) - i think place this at x379 y118 make thing play more better like this 01:17:261 (8,1) - should be jumps instead of 01:16:933 (7,8) - tbh
01:22:179 (7) - similiarto the two suggestion above
[light I]
01:08:081 (7) - uhh around x488 y160 for perfect triangle ?
01:23:982 (1) - i think 2 circles would fit for the beat here better an make good transition to the next rhythm
some pattern don't feel like fit for the light insane diff tho like 00:13:655 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:48:573 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 00:44:556 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:58:081 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - well, this is meant to be a transitional diff to insane and another so i felt it should add atleast some challenge instead of monotonous jumps and repetitive sliders
those pattern are something i consider that i need high level of reading skill that i don't think will suit the diff that below insane like this i kinda disagree with this one , because the only things that are hard to read are the doubles , rest of the map is pretty standard
ok so overall the first part you did very well at keeping most of the pattern fit for the low insane and then from 00:43:327 - to the end of kiai it feel like a big spike in reading skill there and make it looks like something higher than low insane diff instead so i find that i very major problem here , you should try to simplify the pattern to make it fit for the low insane diff imo

[black another]
00:40:048 (4,5,6,7) - stack kinda kill the movement here imo i think the music here not fit for stop movement imo so try to not stack them would be better stacks feel better to play imo
00:48:819 (2,4,6) - i think the slider don't really fit for the beat here at all the beat sound sudden but then after listening to it for awhile idk why it just still feel weird , i think this kind of rhythm is fit for the 2 circle combo more
SPOILER
this plays well too i dont really see a problem with the rhythm either
01:24:474 (5,6,7,8) - didn't expect 01:24:720 (7,8) - to be stacked tbh lol and again i don't think the 1/4 slider can work really well here it feel really random tho tbh
same as abov

mm most of the 1/4 sldiers here i find them play pretty random for me idk i might be suck at playing it so i don't have any idea lol

anyways good luck

fixed all in hard

Cryptic

551 posts

Joined December 2013

Cryptic 2016-10-30T18:24:12+00:00

I'll mod once all responses are in, ping me then.

Rizen

1,666 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2016-10-31T15:54:09+00:00

applied all tanks!

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ProfessionalBox 2016-11-01T07:44:38+00:00

Fixed both suggestions!

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Nerova Riuz GX

1,413 posts

Joined April 2012

Nerova Riuz GX 2016-11-01T10:56:48+00:00

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Cryptic

551 posts

Joined December 2013

Cryptic 2016-11-28T22:15:27+00:00

Better late than late amiright or never.
I'll make a point about diffnaming later, but consider Insane and Insanother instead of Light Insane and Insane.

[Beginner]

00:43:982 (2) - Just adjust DS here slightly (snap it in to place basically).
A few things about the ending sliders that are super nitpicky. 01:30:540 (1,1) - Are different pitches so it'd be cool if that could be represented by different slider shapes. Personally, I'm not a huge fan of how these two 01:27:917 (1,1) - look close to each other, so changing 01:30:540 (1) - would be better in my opinion. That little part just seems really out of place compared to the neat blanketing and curves you've had through the rest of the map.
Really good beginner diff overall, I like it.

[Normal]

00:17:097 (1,2) - Really one of the most jarring patterns in the whole map. When you do this rhythm you normally have 1 and 2 flow into each other, but here they're pretty parallel. I'd try to normalize this part to make it easier for players to read and be more consistent overall.
Tag stuff? I'm getting a AI error.
I like your rhythm choices a lot here.

[Hyper]

Its weird to me how the DS's are pretty different 00:03:327 (5,1) - 00:05:950 (5,1) - 00:08:573 (5,1) - between those. Is there a way to normalize that? I'd highly recommend it as it'd make the beginning feel more congruent.
00:10:868 (1,2,3) - The double clap here sounds off, I'd either make the head of 3 a clap or take off the clap on 1,2. (To clarify, I think the hit-sounding here works better on your higher diffs.)
00:18:900 (2,3,1,2) - This is probably one of the more awkward flow patterns on this diff. The angle between 3 and 1 is a bit too obtuse based on the positioning of both of the 2's. Personally, I don't see a whole lot of options to change it while maintaining DS consistency. CTRL+Ging 00:20:048 (2) - solves basically the entire problem with this pattern but that leaves the next notes out to dry. I encourage you to look for a solution but its not a make-or-break issue so if you can't, move on.
00:48:900 (2) - You can really only hear the end of this, making it pretty awkward for a player.
00:50:212 (2) - Same here.

[Light Insane]

00:56:114 (7,8,1) - I really dislike this pattern, it feels unnatural. 8 feels way too high compared to the rest of that section and other parts of the map.
Technique wise, this diff doesn't really feel like a "Light" Insane, but rather just an Insane. SR wise, with CS 3 or 4, it would qualify for a Light Insane, but the amount of kicks and jumps and the reading required for some patterns make it feel a lot more like an Insane. Up to you if you want to change the naming, but I think its a little deceiving.

[Insane]

00:03:327 (1) - Why? To make the gap here feel less awkward and to fill in some space? Personally, it just sounds overmapped with that extra repeat.
00:03:982 (1,2) - Why this low spacing? This basically reads like a 1/4th based off 00:03:655 (2,3) - and the fact that 00:01:360 (1,2) - this was your previous pattern for this same sound.
00:15:786 - are you missing something here? Strong base beat plus a synth beat (which you appear to be mapping to).
01:02:917 (4) - Where'd this note come from?
01:04:228 (3) - Maybe make this a 1/8th kick? It'd be pretty nice and fit the feel of the melody.
01:42:343 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This is super stationary when the song has a lot of buildup and movement to it. I'd recommend doing something that doesn't leave the 1's stacked to create more movement and therefore help enforce the building intensity in the song a bit better.
Not a huge fan, but its solid enough.

[Another]

Whats with the changes in the intro? 1 and 4 are patterned differently than 2 and 3. Additionally, the spacing between the slider and the note, no matter if the note is close to the previous or the next slider, keeps changing. You go, 1.1 to 1.0, then 1.2, then 1.45. I'm not really sure what the concept here is and I'm not a huge fan of how random it seems. The rhythmic patterning itself works but the inconsistency in note placement is lackluster.
00:21:605 (6,7,1) - Thats so troll man, what the hell? I love it.
00:42:015 (1) - Silence the spinner end?
00:53:655 (7,1) - Maybe give the 1 more spacing since its such a strong note and has a huge HS attached to it? It seems pretty tame compared to some of the other jumps in this section.
01:03:327 (1,1,1,1) - Something about this pattern really rubs me the wrong way. I can't decided if its the overlap between the first two sliders, or how the second two sliders look incredibly similar but the third slider is still different from the first two, I really don't know. I personally think this plays better and looks better, though. (In all honesty this is just nitpicking.)
^
01:07:589 (4) - Why is such a strong synth part on a slider? (Also, the positioning of the 1/6th slider looks really bad, tidy that up.)
01:46:278 (1) - Maybe give this a slight stream jump, similar to your jumps before? After playing a stream this long the final note needs a bit more something to really make it stand out like it does in the music.

[Blanother]

00:31:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Theres a whole lot of movement going on here for a such a calm part of the song. I really dislike the interpretation here. I'd prefer a stream over this, hands down.
00:42:015 (1) - This isn't a particularly stand out note, so I'd nerf the spacing between this and the end of the triplet. It'll make the transition smoother and also help tone down the huge jumps right here so that the later jumps feel special.
00:42:999 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - please properly blanket with your streams.. ;w;
00:47:589 (2,3,4,5) - The current stacking of the 5 makes this pattern super awkward to read.
00:49:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nerf the spacing between the 1 and the rest of the pattern. That means that the spacing between 2,3 and 4,5 is fine but the spacing between 1 and the rest of the pattern is not.
This little double section that we basically just got through is really aim heavy for such a calm part of the map. Evaluate your patterns and rhythms and see what you can optimize, look at what may be overspaced, and compare it to the rest of the map.
01:29:064 (2,3) - Theres a lot of spacing here for something that should be relatively calm, nerf it. Also NC the 3.
01:30:540 (1,2) - Speaking of huge spacing, nerf this too, thanks.
01:46:278 (1) - I like the stream jump, but just make the jump in the direction of the current curve rather than in the middle of the blanket. The blanket jump like you have here just feels really harsh from the angle you're at and ends up putting an emphasis more on the curve than the jump.

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2016-11-28T23:14:46+00:00

Cryptic wrote:
Better late than late amiright or never.
I'll make a point about diffnaming later, but consider Insane and Insanother instead of Light Insane and Insane.

[Hyper]
Its weird to me how the DS's are pretty different 00:03:327 (5,1) - 00:05:950 (5,1) - 00:08:573 (5,1) - between those. Is there a way to normalize that? I'd highly recommend it as it'd make the beginning feel more congruent. made the first one 1.9 tfor consistency
00:10:868 (1,2,3) - The double clap here sounds off, I'd either make the head of 3 a clap or take off the clap on 1,2. (To clarify, I think the hit-sounding here works better on your higher diffs.) ok ay
00:18:900 (2,3,1,2) - This is probably one of the more awkward flow patterns on this diff. The angle between 3 and 1 is a bit too obtuse based on the positioning of both of the 2's. Personally, I don't see a whole lot of options to change it while maintaining DS consistency. CTRL+Ging 00:20:048 (2) - solves basically the entire problem with this pattern but that leaves the next notes out to dry. I encourage you to look for a solution but its not a make-or-break issue so if you can't, move on. did some thing here
00:48:900 (2) - You can really only hear the end of this, making it pretty awkward for a player. fixed sounds becaues i forgot to fix when i copied from black another zzz
00:50:212 (2) - Same here .
[Light Insane]
00:56:114 (7,8,1) - I really dislike this pattern, it feels unnatural. 8 feels way too high compared to the rest of that section and other parts of the map. reduced ds but kept direction change
Technique wise, this diff doesn't really feel like a "Light" Insane, but rather just an Insane. SR wise, with CS 3 or 4, it would qualify for a Light Insane, but the amount of kicks and jumps and the reading required for some patterns make it feel a lot more like an Insane. Up to you if you want to change the naming, but I think its a little deceiving. ;p
[Blanother]
00:31:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Theres a whole lot of movement going on here for a such a calm part of the song. I really dislike the interpretation here. I'd prefer a stream over this, hands down. made it a stream
00:42:015 (1) - This isn't a particularly stand out note, so I'd nerf the spacing between this and the end of the triplet. It'll make the transition smoother and also help tone down the huge jumps right here so that the later jumps feel special. aight good poin
00:42:999 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - please properly blanket with your streams.. ;w; asdasd
00:47:589 (2,3,4,5) - The current stacking of the 5 makes this pattern super awkward to read. spaced out 5
00:49:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nerf the spacing between the 1 and the rest of the pattern. That means that the spacing between 2,3 and 4,5 is fine but the spacing between 1 and the rest of the pattern is not. removed sliders and replaced them with circles to make it a bit less intense
This little double section that we basically just got through is really aim heavy for such a calm part of the map. Evaluate your patterns and rhythms and see what you can optimize, look at what may be overspaced, and compare it to the rest of the map.
01:29:064 (2,3) - Theres a lot of spacing here for something that should be relatively calm, nerf it. Also NC the 3. forgot to ctrl+g 2 oops
01:30:540 (1,2) - Speaking of huge spacing, nerf this too, thanks. this one is fine because it has a huge cymbal on it but i nerfed it a bit anyways
01:46:278 (1) - I like the stream jump, but just make the jump in the direction of the current curve rather than in the middle of the blanket. The blanket jump like you have here just feels really harsh from the angle you're at and ends up putting an emphasis more on the curve than the jump. removed the jump because it looked really ugly too lol

tanks!

BOUYAAA

396 posts

Joined July 2010

BOUYAAA 2016-11-30T12:24:49+00:00

Ok bubbled! gl!!!

ProfessionalBox

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

771 posts

Joined September 2013

ProfessionalBox 2016-12-03T17:08:58+00:00

Cryptic wrote:
[Insane]
00:03:327 (1) - Why? To make the gap here feel less awkward and to fill in some space? Personally, it just sounds overmapped with that extra repeat. Adjusted spacing
00:03:982 (1,2) - Why this low spacing? This basically reads like a 1/4th based off 00:03:655 (2,3) - and the fact that 00:01:360 (1,2) - this was your previous pattern for this same sound. imo it's fine since it's a calm part it doesn't need tons of spacing
00:15:786 - are you missing something here? Strong base beat plus a synth beat (which you appear to be mapping to). I'm following the piano lead here
01:02:917 (4) - Where'd this note come from? Intentional - imo it's more natural this way even if its "overmapped"
01:04:228 (3) - Maybe make this a 1/8th kick? It'd be pretty nice and fit the feel of the melody. That would be too confusing and a breakfest imo, I like the current one
01:42:343 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This is super stationary when the song has a lot of buildup and movement to it. I'd recommend doing something that doesn't leave the 1's stacked to create more movement and therefore help enforce the building intensity in the song a bit better. Added a bit more spacing
Not a huge fan, but its solid enough. lol ok. "Not a huge fan of your modding but I guess its solid enough" (I don't get the point of saying "you're not a fan" since you don't clarify what makes it bad so that I could consider changing stuff, unless of course you become a fan of the diff if I had applied all of your suggestions. Right now it just comes off as unnecessary badmouthing, which you should probably keep to yourself in the future since it doesn't add anything of value).

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Nerova Riuz GX

1,413 posts

Joined April 2012

Nerova Riuz GX 2016-12-06T03:19:05+00:00

~~i'll do that this evening~~

Cryptic wrote:
Better late than late amiright or never.
I'll make a point about diffnaming later, but consider Insane and Insanother instead of Light Insane and Insane.

[Beginner]
00:43:982 (2) - Just adjust DS here slightly (snap it in to place basically).
A few things about the ending sliders that are super nitpicky. 01:30:540 (1,1) - Are different pitches so it'd be cool if that could be represented by different slider shapes. Personally, I'm not a huge fan of how these two 01:27:917 (1,1) - look close to each other, so changing 01:30:540 (1) - would be better in my opinion. That little part just seems really out of place compared to the neat blanketing and curves you've had through the rest of the map.
Really good beginner diff overall, I like it.
fixed except those long sliders, I want them to be symmetrically made

[Another]
Whats with the changes in the intro? 1 and 4 are patterned differently than 2 and 3. Additionally, the spacing between the slider and the note, no matter if the note is close to the previous or the next slider, keeps changing. You go, 1.1 to 1.0, then 1.2, then 1.45. I'm not really sure what the concept here is and I'm not a huge fan of how random it seems. The rhythmic patterning itself works but the inconsistency in note placement is lackluster. should be better now
00:21:605 (6,7,1) - Thats so troll man, what the hell? I love it. LOLLL
00:42:015 (1) - Silence the spinner end? k
00:53:655 (7,1) - Maybe give the 1 more spacing since its such a strong note and has a huge HS attached to it? It seems pretty tame compared to some of the other jumps in this section. k
01:03:327 (1,1,1,1) - Something about this pattern really rubs me the wrong way. I can't decided if its the overlap between the first two sliders, or how the second two sliders look incredibly similar but the third slider is still different from the first two, I really don't know. I personally think this plays better and looks better, though. (In all honesty this is just nitpicking.) I removed the overlap. the third slider is made in curve because there's a laser sound.
^

01:07:589 (4) - Why is such a strong synth part on a slider? (Also, the positioning of the 1/6th slider looks really bad, tidy that up.) didn't feel anything wrong here tho...but i cleaned the hold.
01:46:278 (1) - Maybe give this a slight stream jump, similar to your jumps before? After playing a stream this long the final note needs a bit more something to really make it stand out like it does in the music. sure.

http://puu.sh/sG4Do/8ee92a5381.rar

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2016-12-08T09:20:24+00:00

http://puu.sh/sIg9h/5fb17b43a3.png

Fixed everything for Rizen's diff and fixed all the metadata and unused file issues : )

Ayyri

Ayyri 2016-12-10T17:48:11+00:00

00:57:671 - probox can you fix this unsnapped green line, please and thank you.

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2016-12-10T17:51:46+00:00

Ayyri wrote:
00:57:671 - probox can you fix this unsnapped green line, please and thank you.

fixered

Cryptic

551 posts

Joined December 2013

Cryptic 2016-12-10T17:55:28+00:00

IRC recheck

12:10 Cryptic: everyone has responded yes?
12:10 Rohit6: ye
12:10 Cryptic: okay
12:10 Cryptic: I'll do recheck and bubb if theres nothing else
12:11 Rohit6: :d
12:12 Cryptic: 00:16:278 (3,4,5,6,7) - 
12:12 Cryptic: yo
12:12 Cryptic: this stream on your top diff
12:13 Cryptic: doesn't follow the flower pattern you've been doin'
12:13 Cryptic: why is that?
12:13 Rohit6: flower is on piano
12:13 Cryptic: you typically go straight stream to flower, flower following the melody
12:13 Rohit6: this is not on piano
12:13 Cryptic: ooh
12:13 Cryptic: its melody + piano
12:13 Cryptic: gotchya
12:13 Rohit6: piano is 1/2 there
12:13 Rohit6: yea
12:13 Cryptic: super subtle difference
12:13 Cryptic: gotchya
12:14 Cryptic: ahh
12:14 Cryptic: the changes are nice
12:14 Rohit6: ye
12:15 Cryptic: 01:45:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - grody
12:15 Cryptic: straighted out your curve
12:15 Cryptic: make it prettier
12:15 Cryptic: also
12:15 Rohit6: aaaa
12:15 Rohit6: its good enough pls ;w;
12:16 Cryptic: a few more things you probably need to fix
12:16 Cryptic: 00:27:917 (2,3) - 00:34:310 (4,5) - 00:38:409 (2,3) - 00:40:048 (4,5,6,7) - 
12:16 Cryptic: theres currently no way to differentiate between those and actual doubles
12:17 Cryptic: personally, I find it rather intuitive via the melody so its not much of an issue
12:17 Cryptic: but, others may have a problem with it
12:17 Cryptic: so I suggest you change it but if you decide not too it won't hurt the nomination process IMO
12:18 Rohit6: i mean
12:18 Rohit6: they're repeated in the whole section
12:18 Rohit6: its a slow section overall so
12:19 Rohit6: it'll be easier to get it
12:19 Cryptic: alright
12:20 Cryptic: one other problem I noticed
12:20 Cryptic: also
12:20 Cryptic: its much easier for me to play now with those changes
12:20 Cryptic: which is what I was hoping would happen
12:20 Rohit6: :d
12:20 Cryptic: its easier to read, basically
12:20 Rohit6: ye
12:20 Cryptic: okay so
12:21 Cryptic: 00:31:359 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - 
12:21 Cryptic: this is kind of crappy
12:21 Cryptic: the stream fits, both the sliders fit
12:21 Cryptic: but the relation of one to the other doesn't
12:21 Cryptic: the double 3,4 looks more like a kick straight into the stream which it isn't
12:21 Rohit6: :/
12:21 Cryptic: I think the slider needs to be kept though
12:22 Rohit6: lemme brb in 10 mins
12:22 Cryptic: kk
12:22 Rohit6: gotta do some chore
12:22 Rohit6: sorry
12:22 Cryptic: its fine
12:31 Rohit6: back
12:31 Cryptic: wb
12:31 Cryptic: for that pattern
12:31 Rohit6: 00:31:359 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - what about this
12:31 Cryptic: I would just make the stream not be directly under the slider
12:31 Rohit6: aight
12:31 Cryptic: like, I would make there be a slight space
12:31 Cryptic: sned me screenshots before you apply changes
12:33 Rohit6: http://puu.sh/sKLV4/40bdf46cd7.jpg
12:33 Rohit6: like this
12:33 Cryptic: that may play awkward because if you pay attention to the angle
12:33 Cryptic: you're basically going more or less in a straight line from 2>34>1
12:33 Cryptic: I'd make it up liek
12:34 Rohit6: [http://puu.sh/sKM0I/0c779f46a2.jpg asd]
12:34 Cryptic: more like
12:34 Cryptic: https://puu.sh/sKM23/3dfcd79da6.png
12:34 Cryptic: that is what I'd do
12:34 Cryptic: but
12:35 Cryptic: what you did will work I think
12:35 Cryptic: it may look ugly tho
12:35 Rohit6: e
12:35 Rohit6: i like it tho
12:35 Cryptic: alright
12:35 Cryptic: then do that~
12:36 Rohit6: ~
12:36 Rohit6: anything else
12:36 Cryptic: uh
12:36 Rohit6: that needs a look
12:36 Cryptic: not that I remember
12:36 Cryptic: still checking stuff
12:37 Cryptic: yeah I think thats it, let me modassistant
12:38 Rohit6: i did that
12:38 Rohit6: and fixed all of it
12:38 Rohit6: i think
12:38 Cryptic: ye
12:38 Cryptic: but I need to do it too xD
12:38 Rohit6: updated
12:39 Cryptic: yeah
12:39 Cryptic: that'll work better
12:39 Cryptic: thanks for making that change
12:39 Cryptic: 01:32:671 (1) - oh yeah
12:39 Cryptic: this slider is ugly af
12:39 Rohit6: ~
12:39 Cryptic: why bb why
12:39 Rohit6: because
12:40 Rohit6: the sound there is distorted
12:40 Rohit6: lol
12:40 Cryptic: fine
12:40 Cryptic: 01:43:327 (1,2,1) - 
12:40 Cryptic: another BN may point out that pattern btw
12:40 Cryptic: its pretty brutal
12:40 Cryptic: I think it palys fine
12:40 Rohit6: if i keep it acute
12:40 Rohit6: then it doesnt get good emphasis
12:40 Rohit6: i tried it
12:40 Cryptic: yep
12:40 Cryptic: I like it
12:41 Cryptic: but some may not

TL;DR: Changed some spacing stuff on top diff, Rohit resnapped the unsnapped line on ProBox's diff.

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,818 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2016-12-30T06:36:33+00:00

is aaaa a legit artist

why are you using soft-hitclap10 it's silent you dont need silent additions aaaa
apparently it's not unused though, so when you delete it, check where you have random unfitting claps lol

black
01:39:556 (8) - make it more special compared to 7. sorta like how you did with 01:36:606 (6,7,8) - possibility

n/a
00:57:425 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:27:261 (1) - can u like use a less harsh sampleset. normal clashes so hard when song is calm

also applies to your ez diff
01:07:589 (4,5) - so misleading when comparing important sound vs whenyouclick. red and white ticks are what matter, not the 1/3 tick g
could also simplify it to 1/4 like probox
01:29:884 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - introducing 1/4 jumps at the end of a map

(( if you're gonna include them, show players early on that 1/4 jumps are gonna exist, rather than sticking in something unexpected at the end

pro
00:03:327 (1) - should like reduce by 1 reverse cuz 1/6 doesnt go on that long
^also compare comboing to all the later versions of this 00:05:950 (3) - 00:08:573 (4) -
00:57:425 (1) - 01:27:261 (1) - all that hitsoudn stuff from n/a diff applies here too

call me back!!!

Rizen

1,666 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2016-12-30T09:32:05+00:00

hype!

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rohit6 2016-12-30T09:53:29+00:00

https://soundcloud.com/jun_kuroda/jun-k ... nusfree-dl
i think aaaa is romanization of ああああ
need nerova to confirm it since he gave me the metadata

i mixed up the hitsound , wasnt supposed to be silence lol , fixed it too but it gives me this problem (soft-hitclap10.wav)

fixed black

waiting for nerova and prob ox

ProfessionalBox

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

771 posts

Joined September 2013

ProfessionalBox 2016-12-31T06:59:39+00:00

Fixed the repeats and after nerova changes the hitsounds I will apply them to my diff ~

Nerova Riuz GX

1,413 posts

Joined April 2012

Nerova Riuz GX 2016-12-31T07:31:26+00:00

pishifat wrote:
is aaaa a legit artist

Yes, it's legit - "aaaa" is a Romanized name from a Japanese artist called "ああああ".
Unfortunately, in August 5th, 2016, there was an official twitter post about his Romanized name: https://twitter.com/q07a_/status/761380889444048896
which said that using caps is the name he uses for overseas.

Also, there's a mania map ranked recently that can confirm this metadata: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/490208
IamKwaN has already explained this in Page 2, and that name in lowercase did cause a disqualification.

Consequently, YES IT NEEDS A METADATA CHANGE: Just simply replace "aaaa" with "AAAA".

pishifat wrote:
n/a
00:57:425 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:27:261 (1) - can u like use a less harsh sampleset. normal clashes so hard when song is calm also applies to your ez diff soft default
01:07:589 (4,5) - so misleading when comparing important sound vs whenyouclick. red and white ticks are what matter, not the 1/3 tick g
could also simplify it to 1/4 like probox was hesitating on that thingy but w/e. they are now 1/4.
01:29:884 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - introducing 1/4 jumps at the end of a map (( if you're gonna include them, show players early on that 1/4 jumps are gonna exist, rather than sticking in something unexpected at the end made a small stream jump on 00:45:130 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - . That's much better, right?