Kurokami wrote:

o/

[General]

I find the name spread a bit weird at Gale-Gust. How about something like Calm/Gentle Breeze/Storm/Hurricane instead? These indicates the spread better. I will consider changing the diff names
[Gale]

00:27:725 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This pattern is a little bit too much at this level. (3,4,5) are not even strong enough for a jump. fixed
00:35:305 (3,4,5) - The distance in this pattern is a little bit high. Please move (4) one grid right and (5) by 2 to make it a bit easier. ok
01:08:467 (1,2) - Quite high jump again. Try to experiment a smaller distance here with HDash. Its hard to make small hyper here q.q but I made it smaller a bit
01:18:416 (2) - Move tail to x:64. ok

HDash density seems a bit high to me here but after I took a look at Salad, maybe its not a big problem. o.o

[AleStorm]

00:09:249 (6,1) - The distance here seems bit high and sudden to me. Can you make it smaller a bit? ok
00:20:303 (2,3) - This is quite high, not impossible but high. Please move (3,4) a little to left. ok
00:31:041 (3,4) - I don't think this HDash is necessary here. I mean, I know what you are following with it but its a bit weird to play it. I think moving (4) back to (3) with a repeat would be better. And that HDash to (1) plays nicely imo. ok
00:37:516 (4,5) - Move these to right a little. ok
00:49:043 (5,1) - Make this HDash instead as its quite hard to catch it currently. ok
00:55:676 (2) - Move left a little. ok
00:58:518 (2,3) - Its really hard to catch (3) after that HDash. It requires immediate movement which can be a bit annoying. Move (3) just a bit left.
01:03:651 (5,6,7) - Ugh, no. After (5,6) its hard to recover and catch (7) as well. You need to memorize this part. Make the distance between (6,7) smaller a bit. ok
01:05:625 (3,4) - Too high distance. changed
01:06:888 (2,3) - Make it smaller a little. ok
01:08:467 (1,2) - I dunno but I want to finish both slider 1/3 earlier and jump there. o.o Dunno if I make it as you imagine
01:19:837 (1,2,3,4) - Eh, what you just followed here? o.o Those big Dashes are not fitting imo. added my style jumps instead WujekGrzyb ones
[]

Thats all for now. I don't really feel this is ready yet. o.o It would be nice if you can get a few (1-2) mod before poking me. o/

alienflybot wrote:

Mod Requested by BoberOfDarkness (through in-game PM)

[ Gale]

• 
  Difficulty

1. Decrease HP to 6 please. HP7 is too high for a Platter. Yea lol
   
   Gameplay
2. 00:04:037 (1,2) - HDash here doesn't fit the audio, as the beat here is not really strong. strong enough and it fits to vocals
3. 00:05:932 (1,2) - ^ lol, nope
4. 00:10:986 (6) - Better break down this slider into two circles and add a HDash between the two circles. ok
5. 00:11:617 (1,2) - Not a strong beat here so I recommend removing the HDash. no change sorry
6. 00:12:407 - If you removed the HDash above, add a circle here and add HDash between (2) and this circle. nope, because the slider follow vocals and hyper before fits other vocal line
7. 00:14:460 (5,6) - Add HDash to be consistent with previous patterns and there is strong beat here. ok
8. 00:15:407 (1,2) - Move (2) closer to (1) in order to remove HDash as this is not strong beat at all. lol, its strong enough
9. 00:28:356 (7,8,1) - This is not a good idea to have 2 consecutive HDashes. Move (8) closer to (7) in order to remove HDash between (7,8) but maintain a HDash between (8,1). not fun at all but meh
10. 00:35:463 (4,5) - Add HDash to emphasize the strong beat at (5). ok
11. 00:39:411 (4) - Same as 00:10:986 (6) ok
12. 00:41:306 (5) - ^ ok
13. 00:43:201 (4,1) - Remove HDash between (4,1) because lack of strong beat here. lol, nope
14. 00:45:727 (1,2) - ^ lol, nope
15. 00:58:992 (1,2) - Awkward here again as the beats are missed. For the solution you can try my timeline as I pointed in 00:13:512 (1,2,3,4) at Salad. just added missed note
16. 01:04:993 (2,3) - Maybe it is too hard to notice (3) after HDashing to catch (2). I recommend reducing distance here. yea, sure
17. 01:05:940 (5,6) - Add HDash to emphasize strong beat. yea, sure
18. 01:15:573 (6,1) - Too hard to notice like 01:04:993 (2,3) fixed
19. 01:17:942 (1,2,1) - Remove the HDashes between them but maintain HDash between 01:18:889 (1,2) nope
20. 01:25:996 (2,3) - Remove the HDash here. nope
21. 01:26:469 (6) - Add NC. ok
22. 01:26:469 (6,7) - ^, the HDash is really unnecessary. lol nope
23. 01:26:785 (8,9) - Add HDash here. ok
    
    Hitsounds
24. 00:26:146 (3) - Not fitting a Whistle here. It sounds way too weird, so remove it. ok

[ AleStorm]

• 
  Difficulty

1. Lower the HP to 7. kay
   
   AIMod
2. Object's end is not snapped! - 01:24:702 fixed
   
   Gameplay
3. 00:23:461 (3,4) - Oh this part is weird to hear as (4) doesn't suit the audio. Remap this part. done
4. 00:43:516 (5,6,1) - This part is not good. Lower the distance between (4,5,6) and remove HDash at (5,6) but maintain HDash between (6,1). ok
5. 00:52:518 (2,3) - Distance here is too big, reduce it. nope
6. 01:07:993 (5,1) - Add HDash between them, to emphasize the Finish sound at (1) and the stanza change (kiai start).ok

Good luck ranking the mapset!
-AFB

Razor Sharp wrote:

You asked me to mod rain/AleStorm so here we go!

AleStorm

00:12:565 (3,4) - Would reccomend to reduce the distance here a little. ok
00:13:512 (1,2,3) - Since you started using a hyper pattern here, i would suggest you follow it on (3) too. Or ctrl+g (3) maybe? I put hyper
00:14:460 (3,4) - If you dont ctrl+g (3), this is a sudden direction change as i find kinda weird at this point. So would suggest to move (4) more to the right to keep the quality and flow. fixed
00:16:355 (5) - Ctrl+g here would be nice I think its fine as it is now
00:18:250 (3,4) - ctrl+g and move to x480. Would give more of a challenge here, as this map is pretty straight forward. okay
00:19:908 (3,4,5,1) - Why not use 2 sliders here, or increase spacing on these? As this is way to easy imo. fixed
00:41:937 (1,2) - Maybe curve this? ok
00:43:358 (4,5,6) - Why not switch place on (5) and (6), and then move (6) ontop of (4)? fixed by myself imo
00:45:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try another pattern here, as this is pretty easy. I change the prev. one and I dont think that it is easy
00:52:123 (3,4,5,1) - Same as the other stream.. ok
01:15:099 (3,4,5) - Increase distance! This is walkable ;_; yes it is (: thats why I like this pattern
01:26:311 (3,4) - This distance is unrankable as it comes right after a hyper.. I didnt know, fixed

Good diff!

Hope this helped you! Good luck with rank!

1. Inconsistent green timing points. Please use the same volume level on all difficulties.
2. sliderslide is not audible in CtB. Remove soft-sliderslide from the folder.

Kurokami wrote:

Yo.

[General]

1. Inconsistent green timing points. Please use the same volume level on all difficulties. Sure
2. sliderslide is not audible in CtB. Remove soft-sliderslide from the folder. Sure

[Breeze]

00:06:406 (4) - Try to avoid using too edgy sliders on Cup. A newbie can easily lose some droplet. Ok
00:42:885 (1,2) - Honestly, I don't like this kind of patterns. Its really easy to miss the last repeat on the slider if you just started to play. Sorry I will keep it
01:18:573 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Can you make this a little bit less edgy? Ok

[Gust]

00:05:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern could be hard for this level. I make it only a bit harder
00:38:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is really hard on this level. To correct it, rotating the sliders is a good start. Sure
01:10:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Too high combo count, for first. And my second problem here is that the stream is too simple. Can you add a little curve back to left? Just to make it more interesting. Sure

Your 4plets are always going either right or left. This makes the whole difficulty kinda boring to play. Please, try to use other patterns as well to avoid this. Just for an example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3503306. Sure

[Gale]

00:35:305 (3,4,5) - This pattern could be too hard at this level because of the jump-counter movement-HDash. I suggest you to remove the dash between (3,4) with an interesting pattern and leave only the HDash. Sure
00:37:516 (5,6) - 6.11x jump shouldn't exist on this level. Please degrease it. Sure
00:40:674 (3,4,5,6) - I'm also wondering about this. Immediate movement after HDash shouldn't be on Platter. Can you change the direction of (4,5) to left instead? The flow would be much more better. Sure
01:04:677 (1) - HDash should be here instead of (2). Sure
01:07:520 (3,4,5,6) - Nope. I already pointed out a same pattern. Sure
01:10:362 (1,2,3,4,5) - Add more movement please. Also, cramping the notes at on side is really weird to play. I fixed it by changing the pattern before

[AleStorm]

00:12:091 (2,3,4,5) - Can you change this pattern a bit. The flow breaks here a lot. 00:44:306 (7) -
00:28:514 (4,1) - HDash should be added here as its hard to recognize this full dash. 00:44:306 (7) -
00:43:358 (4,5,6,1) - This kind of pattern shouldn't be used on this level. Please correct it. 00:44:306 (7) -
00:55:202 (1,2) - Again a nice flowbreaker. Please, place (2) in the left side instead. 00:44:306 (7) -
[]

Thats all.

1. Song Folder: BG image is 1357x768, whilst the nearest recommended resolution would be 1366x768 - if you could resize or find a new image, it would be preferable
2. Song Setup: No issues
3. Metadata: Remove WujekGrzyb from tags on all diffs, since his GD isn't included in the mapset anymore
4. Timing: Not sure 01:23:627 to 01:25:048 is 100% correct still, but I can't see a better way to do it currently :/
5. Hitsounds: You have Drum and Soft Custom samplsets selected, but no custom hitsounds... Also, there seems to be a lack of hitsound feedback throughout the Cup and Salad difficulties, with no emphasis placed on the strong snare and cymbal sounds throughout (exception being the last section of the song in the Cup, which has some finishes). You need to go through the easier diffs and bring the hitsound usage and consistency up to the standard of the Platter and Rain diffs - this topic might be of interest
6. AImod: No issues

JBHyperion wrote:

Little mod/check thing:

General Comments:

1. Song Folder: BG image is 1357x768, whilst the nearest recommended resolution would be 1366x768 - if you could resize or find a new image, it would be preferable done
2. Song Setup: No issues
3. Metadata: Remove WujekGrzyb from tags on all diffs, since his GD isn't included in the mapset anymore
4. Timing: Not sure 01:23:627 to 01:25:048 is 100% correct still, but I can't see a better way to do it currently :/ Will ask somebody to re:check
5. Hitsounds: You have Drum and Soft Custom samplsets selected, but no custom hitsounds... Also, there seems to be a lack of hitsound feedback throughout the Cup and Salad difficulties, with no emphasis placed on the strong snare and cymbal sounds throughout (exception being the last section of the song in the Cup, which has some finishes). You need to go through the easier diffs and bring the hitsound usage and consistency up to the standard of the Platter and Rain diffs - this topic might be of interest Oh wow its magic!
6. AImod: No issues

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Breeze

Where are the hitsounds? D:

1. 00:28:199 (3,4,5) - Since these are all prominent snare drums notes, I feel there should be more spacing here. 00:28:672 (1) has a strong cymbal sound (add a finish here) so you can afford to make a larger spacing between (5,1). I'd try (4) at x-116 and (5) at x-72 done
2. 00:41:306 (5,6) - Increase spacing here slightly for the strong snare sound on (6) - x-176? done
3. 00:43:358 (1) - The last repeat has a strong snare sound comparable to 00:43:516 (2,3) so I feel it would be better as its own circle with slightly increased spacing. Remove the last repeat and add a note at x-376, then move (3) to x-292 so it's equal distance from (2) and (4), since the jump 00:42:885 (1,2) is quite awkward due to high spacing combined with the direction change nope I wont change it, I want keep that unique challenging pattern, sorry
4. 01:05:625 (1,2) - Swap NC for a consistent pattern of one NC every 4 beats in this section, then remove NC from 01:07:520 (1) Done
5. 01:10:362 (1,2) - Same as 00:43:358 (1,2) Same as 00:43:358
6. 01:17:942 (1,2) - ^ ^
7. 01:20:784 (1) - Reason for this NC? I think you can remove itDone

Gust

Again, serious lack of hitsounds ;w;

1. 00:28:514 (7,1) - Increase spacing here please for the crash cymbal sound. You may need to move 00:28:988 (2,3) to the right to avoid an awkward return jump Done
2. 00:36:252 (1,2,3) - This feels quite awkward to play to me, the return jumps are quite large and coupled with the direction changes, annoying to catch, and (2) isn't really that prominent (compared to (1,3)) , so it makes no sense for there to be a jump here. A jump between (2,3) would be more appropriate, but either way I would reduce the spacing of (1,2) I reduced spacing between (2,3)
   00:40:042 (1,2,3) - ^ even more so here ): same^

Gale

Hitsounding is better here (i.e. there are some sounds), but there's still room for improvement

1. 00:43:201 (4,1) - I feel that ending the sliders on a strong snare sound and crash cymbal sound is a strange pattern choice, but I guess it's a matter of opinion. I'd consider splitting 00:43:516 (1) into a 1/6 slider and circle though, so you can NC on the downbeat rather than 1/3 before it, but it's up to you
2. 01:18:889 (1) - Based on your previous patterns, you can remove the NC here to be consistent with 00:13:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and 00:45:727 (1,2,3,4) -

AleStorm

Hitsounds! For the most part, you can work from this diff and copy hitsounds to the other diffs, then fine tune from there I copied from Gale since its fits to easier diffs

1. 00:22:040 (1) - Remove NC to be consistent with your other combos (4 beats each) Done
2. 00:21:092 (1) to 00:32:462 (1) - Some strange NC usage here, not quite sure what you're following - wouldn't it be better to just stick to a 4 beat NC pattern as you've done in the rest of the song? Done

Everything else looks okay (:

Fix the hitsounds and get some more mods to check them over. Once you've updated and checked, call me back when you're ready.

1. 00:47:149 (4) - This note's DS should be bigger in comparison to 00:45:727 (1,2,3) - these 3 notes because the pitch of e.guitar and vocal is higher than the other 3 notes.
2. Other than that, nothing to see here

1. 00:29:936 (6,7) - Vocal is clearly loud here, why not increase the DS here?
2. 00:45:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I assume these are for variety, but at least you should add a extra circle at 00:46:990 - or make two 1/3 sliders using 00:46:675 (5,6,7) - these 3 notes, since, again, like I said in Cup, the pitch of e.guitar and vocal is higher than other notes in this combo.
3. 01:18:889 (7) - You should NC here, like you did on 01:11:309 (1) - .
4. 01:26:469 (5) - The snares here were emphasized on Cup, but not on Salad. Taking in the account that this is a harder difficulty, I think the snares should be emphasized.

1. Nothing to see here - Difficulty looks nice

1. Again, nothing to see here Maybe is due to lack of my knowledge on higher diffs.

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hello~ Mod as requested in-game~
Just small suggestions from me, feel free to reject
And I assume you are adding those hitsounds for difficulties which doesn't have them.

[Breeze]

1. 00:47:149 (4) - This note's DS should be bigger in comparison to 00:45:727 (1,2,3) - these 3 notes because the pitch of e.guitar and vocal is higher than the other 3 notes. done
2. Other than that, nothing to see here

[Gust]

1. 00:29:936 (6,7) - Vocal is clearly loud here, why not increase the DS here?
2. 00:45:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I assume these are for variety, but at least you should add a extra circle at 00:46:990 - or make two 1/3 sliders using 00:46:675 (5,6,7) - these 3 notes, since, again, like I said in Cup, the pitch of e.guitar and vocal is higher than other notes in this combo. done
3. 01:18:889 (7) - You should NC here, like you did on 01:11:309 (1) - . done
4. 01:26:469 (5) - The snares here were emphasized on Cup, but not on Salad. Taking in the account that this is a harder difficulty, I think the snares should be emphasized. I dont want to make jump here or any hard pattern since I used 1/6

[Gale]

1. Nothing to see here - Difficulty looks nice Thanks!

[AleStorm]

1. Again, nothing to see here Maybe is due to lack of my knowledge on higher diffs. Or maybe it is ready ?

That is all from me. GL getting this ranked! Supporting with a star

Xinely wrote:

i remember you requested this to me..

• 
  Cup

1. 00:04:985 (1) - better to use 1/3 slider repeat for following the drums, also consistency with 00:08:775 (3) -
2. 00:04:037 (1) - i dont even understand why finish on slider's body instead of slider's head LOL lol
3. 00:06:248 (3,4) - make the spacing more consistent please, 00:06:406 (4) - i would say x:296 for this, move to x:304
4. 00:08:775 (3) - i hope you will reduce the spacing here, a bit hard to catch since we arent allowed to use dash
5. 00:11:144 (4) - yep the background music is strong so you can increase the spacing a bit for emphasize it nicely. imo x:256 would be great
6. 00:11:617 (1) - finish for cymbal
7. 00:08:775 (3,3) - claps on slider's bodies wont give any effect btw.. wait... what did you hitsounds here? well you better copy paste hitsounds from your highest diff to this diff lol
8. 00:18:250 (4) - instead of this slider's shape. imo C-shape would give smoother movement here
9. 00:19:197 (1) - this background music is drum so change finish with clap
10. 00:21:092 - and this background music is cymbal so add finish
11. 00:24:882 - and ^
12. 00:26:146 (2,3) - yep from (1) and (2) anti flow should not has far spacing.. so you should reduce 00:26:146 (2,3) - whatever you want
13. 00:28:672 (1) - finish on head
14. 00:29:936 - add note for consistency with 00:22:356 (2) - ?
15. 00:36:252 (1) - yep finish on head instead of body </3
16. 00:36:252 (1) - a low spacing for emphasizing cymbal is boring even a cup diff. i would say ctrl+g and x:0 (if you agree so 00:36:726 (2) - x:148)
17. 00:38:147 (1,2) - the movement is so sharp.. i mean that not really comfortable to play for me. i would say like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3546678
18. 00:40:042 (1,2) - if you agree with above so click them all and move to x:332
19. 00:42:885 (1) - not really sure but in easiest diff you should use simple rhythms too, 1/3 streams arent simple for me so better change this with 1/1 slider in my sight meh, trying keep it
20. 00:49:991 (2) - omg more movement please example x:128
21. 00:51:412 (1,1) - literally same as previous.. clap on spinner and finish on slider's head
22. 00:57:097 (1) - yep finish on head because cymbal
23. 01:10:362 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:42:885 (1) -
24. 01:15:099 (4) - a bit hard to catch here, should reduced the distance around 3 grid right imo
25. 01:16:047 (1) - finish because cymbal
26. 01:17:468 (4) - consistent spacing please, i mean x:288
27. 01:17:942 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - too many density might inviting DQ *looks at ZiroX's ende* meh, trying keep it
28. 01:19:837 (1,2) - yep give more movement please. 1/1 for them with 0,5x is too low. i prefer for 1,0x i guess
29. 01:20:784 (4,1,2,4) - yep try increase for low spacings.. just they dont feel nicely to play when you just need waiting they're falling down w/o move ryuuta
30. 01:25:996 (2) - and finish here because cymbal music

• 
  Salad

1. AR can increased to 7 imo for better spread nope I dont like maths only spread
2. all refering hitsounds in Cup are for other diffs too (i mean Salad until Rain. im lazy to write again lel)
3. 00:06:406 (2) - feel like edge catched w/o dash here. i dont know you want make this caught with dash or not. if you dont want dash so please reduce, if you want dash so please increase it so players will notice it requires dash clearly
4. 00:11:144 (6) - making this caught by dash would be great to emphasize the cymbal music.. hmm what i can found only x:208 so if you agree, you have to move the next slider to somewhere
5. 00:13:512 (1,2) - why not make these sliders into 2 of 1/3 repeat sliders you have same density for consistency with 00:05:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ?
6. 00:18:724 (6) - instead of left movement in row. usually better make the last note to right movement.. example x:360
7. 00:28:356 (6,7) - should be reduced imo, they caught with dashes and 3 objects dashes in row X_X
8. 00:31:041 (2) - more movement please. x:320
9. 01:09:414 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - just possible make the rhyhtms a bit simple for this please I prefer to keep it
10. 01:26:469 (5) - im not sure that increasing speed like this is safe for Salad

• 
  Platter

1. 00:12:881 (4) - ctrl+g feels better imo
2. 00:19:671 (2,3) - just if possible dont make HDash to catch 1/6 streams here.. a bit not really friendly for players who start play Platter diff (and similar parts too, im lazy to mention Q_Q)
3. 00:30:568 (2) - spacing can increased a bit example x:432 for better movement imo
4. 00:35:463 (4) - weird movement. better to ctrl+g or move (4) to x:480

• 
  Rain

1. 00:07:827 (1) - dont skip the vocal. 1/3 slider repeat works better really :C
2. 00:47:622 (1) - same as above
3. 01:23:627 - volume 100%? it's so noisy to be honest (imo 60% works better)

Nice Platter and Rain btw ~
good luck

Krfawy wrote:

Zakładam że jest wszyściusieńko dobrze.

1. 00:04:037 (1,2) - I don't dislike this, since it fits and is interesting, but I feel it's overused for this difficulty in places. For example, the first kiai and first half of the second kiai uses it nearly ever beat pair, but from 00:43:832 onwards it's nearly all 1/1 sliders. Consider replacing some of these 2/3 + 1/3 patterns with 1/1 sliders to create a more even difficulty spread
2. 00:42:885 (1) - 01:10:362 (1) - 01:17:942 (1) - Middle two repeats are weak compared to the head and tail, so this could be two circles or a 1/1 slider
3. 01:01:203 (2) - 01:04:993 (2) - 01:14:468 (2) - These notes doesn't seem all that necessary, since the vocal is quite weak here. Especially consider changing the last, since 01:17:942 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) is currently 10 1/3 beats in a row which is really long for a Cup

1. 00:08:300 (2,3) - This spacing is a little uncomfortable for this difficulty, consider reducing it slightly
2. 00:30:568 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:40:515 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:42:885 (1,2) - Hopefully you simplify this with my advice above, but if not, there's a sharp antiflow here that makes it very easy for a beginner to miss, since the last repeat on (1) requires a motion opposite to that of (2)
5. 00:47:149 (4,1) - I understand you want the spacing to gradually increase as you go with this pattern, but this spacing is borderline requiring dash - please reduce it
6. 00:57:097 (1,2) - This spacing is a little uncomfortable for this difficulty, consider reducing it slightly
7. 01:01:835 (4,5,6) - Watch out for more sharp antiflow patterns that can easily confuse a beginner - there's no reason for this pattern to have this kind of direction change or spacing - for example, 00:29:936 (3,4) has half the spacing of (5,6) here despite being the same vocal line
8. 01:10:362 (1,2) - Same as 00:42:885 (1,2)
9. 01:17:942 (1,2) - ^
10. 01:19:364 (4,1) - What the hell man, this is really hard to catch without dash, please reduce the spacing to be consistent with similar phrases such as 00:47:149 (4,1) - after you've reduced it of course

1. 00:06:406 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Walking dash after a direction change can be really tricky for newer players, so I suggest reducing the spacing on these and just have a dash to the prominent note at (7)
2. 00:10:986 (5,6,1) - Strong dash coupled with antiflow is too difficult here, reduce one of the spacings or remove the sharp direction change here please
3. 00:16:829 (6,1,2) - Spacing is awkward here, close to requiring dash on both - suggest reducing spacing on one and increasing spacing on the other to make the requirement for proper movement more clear (dash or no dash?)
4. 00:22:356 (5,6,1) - Strong dashes into direction changes again, please make this simpler
5. 00:34:674 (2,3) - I feel this would be better as circle and 2/3 slider, the 1/3 sliders aren't really following anything here since the drums are weak and the guitar and vocals are both held sounds
6. 00:47:622 (1,2) - Spacing very close to requiring dash, please reduce slightly
7. 01:07:834 (5,6,1) - Consider spacing there out a little more, (6,1) are both quite strong sound and they're lacking in emphasis here
8. 00:48:885 (5,6,1) - Same as 00:10:986 (5,6,1)
9. 01:14:152 (1,2) - Spacing very close to requiring dash, please reduce slightly

1. 00:28:356 (7,8,1) - Walking dash into a hdash is really mean for this difficulty, and also, the (8,1) hyper should be reduced please, there's no reason for it to be this strong considering the music at this point. (8) at x-156 and (1) at x-384 plays much better imo
2. 00:35:463 (4,5) - Another needlessly strong hyper - reduce please (although you're missing a finish hitsound here, so add one and keep this as a hyper, just a less strong one
3. 00:43:201 (4,5) - Tail on (4) is equally prominent relative to (5), so I would split these into a circle and 1/3 repeat slider or perhaps make 00:42:885 (3,4,5) into a 2/3 slider and 3 1/3 circles
4. 01:17:942 (1,2,3) - Strength of these hdashes when combined with the small slider angle makes it really easy to overshoot and miss here. Consider reducing the spacing and/or angling the sliders more away from each other to compensate

1. 00:27:725 (3,4,5,6) - Same suggestions as in the Platter, though you could make a spaced triplet at 00:28:199 instead of a flowing one to be more difficulty appropriate
2. 00:47:622 (1) - NC here please as this combo is way too long at present
3. 00:51:096 (6) - This slider's not mapping anything, consider removing it and possibly extending a new slider from 00:50:938
4. 00:41:306 (5) - Move this a little to the right please, it's a bit awkward to catch right now

- Anima - wrote:

Hello there!
I'm liking this song!!

Gust

This is a good CTB difficulty! But...
Some things are overlapped? I dunno, might be just me.
This slider doesn't look rankable to me:

I'm not sure, but you should fix it just in case.

This is my third mod only, so it might not be the best

koliron wrote:

Shame gives me, break my streak long mods with this map, I could not find much xD

General

1. Combocolours: maybe slightly darker the skyblue, it is difficult to see, much of the BG it has that color, and slightly lighter the red, tapes seem to have a lighter color fixed

Breeze

1. If 00:23:935 (2,3) - and 00:28:514 (5,1) - have those distances, why not in 00:26:777 (1,2) ? kai
2. 00:58:992 (1,2) - This distance seem kiai, reduce slightly nop
3. 01:05:625 (3) - a little boring, give some movement (It's the only fully vertically!) fixed
4. 01:23:627 (1) - It is likely that new players finish this spin to the right, because the last bananas are here, causing it to be very difficult to reach the next fruit (that disappointment make a miss at the end, no?), put 01:25:522 (1,2,3) - in x: 192 to ensure this I will keep it since the spin movement should go left at end 1:26 is not so long to play it again

Gust

1. If 00:22:356 (5,6) - and 00:26:146 (3,4) - have have same distances, why not 00:29:936 (6,7) - ? dunno, let make some brake between hard patterns
   
   really good Salad Gust!

Gale

1. 00:26:146 (3) - slightly more horizontal, gives a rare sense of movement I dont wanna make this harder
2. 00:40:042 (1,2,3) - Some repetitive, ctrl + g in (2) and reduce distances to no cause uncomfortable movements?
3. 01:20:784 (3,4,5,6) - I have doubts about this, I'm not sure this well my argument, but here's the voice in each lowest note, I think that is unnecessary HDash, if you want to put, I think rather go between (1) and (2) hyper is for white tick (strong drum hit)
4. You used a lot going in a straight line, example: 00:04:511 (2,3,4,5) - 00:09:722 (1,2,3,4) - 00:40:042 (1,2,3) - , try with this or other sorry I will keep mine

AleStrom

1. 00:22:987 (1) - This movement is very slight! do a little more horizontal (maybe it's justifiable because is not kiai, but being the greatest difficulty of the mapset, should have the greatest possible movement!)
2. 00:42:885 (3) - This time you not save! is Kiai, make it more horizontal, especially because it comes from a jump and tends to prevent movementfixed
3. 00:43:674 (6,1) - I understand that a dash is necessary at least, by how song goes here, but movement is a somewhat difficult because we come of 2 HDash, maybe 00:43:832 (1) - x: 368 fixed
4. 01:19:837 (1,2,3) - jumps with sliders without movement, make a little more horizontal, it would be much more comfortable (maybe more to less horizontal because the voices are going)sorry I like those

Really good map!!

good luck!!!

koliron wrote:

plz set preview point in 00:03:959

1. 00:04:985 (3) - Finish on the tail sounds random here, clap would be more fitting with the current rhythm imo
2. 00:08:300 (2,3) - This spacing feels really unexpected and would catch many Cup players off guard. Try moving 00:08:775 (3,4) to x-168, since this then makes the spacing between 00:09:249 (4,1) consistent with the previous measure at 00:06:406 (4,1)
3. 00:16:830 (1) - Reduce distance between these please, it's pretty uncomfortable to hit without dashing
4. 00:21:093 (1) - Tint bit more movement might be nice here to maintain the intensity, try rotating this clockwise a little (10-15 degrees)
5. 00:22:356 (2) - Whistle/clap to emphasize vocal, then drum sounds
6. 00:22:988 (1,3) - Why no clap on these for the drum sounds? The emphasis is totally lost here without them
7. 00:23:935 (2,3) - Same as 00:22:356 (2)
8. 00:26:146 (2,3) - ^
9. 00:28:199 (3,4,5) - I prefer clap/whistle/clap here to whistle/clap/whistle, the drums should be the main focus
10. 00:29:936 (3) - Same as 00:22:356 (2)
11. 00:30:568 (1) - Clap needs to be on tail rather than the head
12. 00:31:515 (2) - Missing clap on tail
13. 00:32:463 (1) - Replace finish on repeat with clap to maintain the drum rhythm
14. 00:38:147 (1,2,3) - Reduce distance between each of these please, spacing is rather uncomfortable
15. 00:40:042 (1,2) - Swap clap on tail to (2) to maintain previous hs rhythms
16. 00:42:885 (4,5,6) - Same hitsounds as you used at 00:28:199 (3,4,5) please
17. 00:43:832 (1) - Finish on head instead of clap to emphasize the midpoint of the kiai and the strong cymbal sound here
18. 00:53:307 (1) - ^ But for new verse section
19. 00:58:045 (2) - Swap head and tail hs to maintain the previous rhythms
20. 01:00:887 (1) - Finish instead of clap please
21. 01:10:362 (1) - Missing clap on tail
22. 01:10:362 (1,2) - Considering the curve and droplet formation on (1), the spacing to (2) is quite difficult. Please reduce the distance between these, or curve (1) less for a smoother flow
23. 01:14:626 (2,3) - Uncomfortable spacing, please reduce
24. 01:16:521 (3,1) - ^
25. 01:17:469 (4) - Should be clap instead of whistle
26. 01:17:941 (1) - Missing clap on tail
27. 01:19:363 (4) - Should be clap instead of whistle
28. 01:19:837 (1,3) - Whistle/clap
29. 01:20:784 (4) - ^
30. 01:26:469 (3) - Missing clap on head

1. Please follow the hitsound suggestions I outline in the previous diff, as there are a lot of missing claps here too, such as 00:05:301 (4) - 00:11:144 (6) - etc.
2. 00:18:566 (5,6) - Spacing is really awkward here, between dash and no-dash, coupled with a direction change. I'd reduce theis distance significantly
3. 00:22:987 (1,2) - Spacing is really underwhelming here, lack of movement kills the flow for me. Suggest increasing this distance slightly
4. 00:40:990 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing here makes this look ugly imo, a repeat slider or something like you did at 00:50:465 (3,4,5,6) would look much better
5. 01:00:887 (1,2) - Dash + antiflow will be very difficult for new players. Please reduce the distance here slightly
6. 01:09:889 (6) - Why map the slider end to a downbeat? You could shorten this to a 2/3 slider and place a circle on the downbeat to provide a small jump for emphasis
   01:13:204 (3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:40:990 (3,4,5,6)
7. 01:25:522 (1,2) - Current spacing is on the border of dash, please increase/decrease spacing here to make this more readable

1. Same hitsound problems again, refer back to what I said in the Cup diff
2. 00:18:566 (5,6) - Antiflowing hypers like this are really too hard for this difficulty, Ctrl+H 00:18:566 (5,6) and move to x-96 would be better
3. 00:43:358 (5,6,1) - Double hdash is far too much for Platter, and as well the emphasis is wrongly placed, with three identical drum sounds, the first and last with almost no spacing and the middle one with a hyperdash. Combining these into a repeat slider/3 circles with regular dash to and hdash from plays much better
4. 01:26:469 (1,2,3) - Strong hdash leading into a stationary pattern leads to high chance of missing here, so move 01:26:785 (3,4) to the right slightly for a smoother transition

1. Hitsounding is generally okay in this diff, though there are still some inconsistencies such as missing claps on 00:22:514 (5,2) - etc. in the verse sections, so go through the Cup suggestions again in this diff too please
2. 00:42:885 (3) - The angling on this slider encourages stacking rather than wiggling which kills the flow for me and has decent chance of missing. I'd rotate the tail about 20-30 degrees anticlockwise for a more readable movement, since a vertical stack would feel kinda boring to me
3. 01:15:415 (4) - Move this to x-224 for an even spacing between 01:15:099 (3,4,5) which feels more comfortable to play

alienflybot wrote:

[ General]

• 
  Difficulty Naming

1. It is recommended to mention WujekGrzyb and you in the difficulty AleStorm, since at first, people may not recognize the difficulty is made by Wujek, therefore maybe it is better with Wujek and your name mixed (make it sounds like collaborated) and change the naming to something like 'Name's AleStorm'. That would give a better understanding and recognize. Done
   
   Difficulty Spread
2. Is it really necessary to have an even distance of 1.1 increase of AR per difficulty, it doesn't really show much difference, therefore I suggest sticking to have 6/5.5 , 7/6.7 , 8 , 9 as the corresponding AR of the difficulties, respectively. I think that now will be better

[ Breeze]

• 
  Gameplay

1. 00:32:463 (1,2) - Shorten the distance, I would say moving (2) slightly to x:260 Done
2. 01:05:625 (3) - Actually it didn't go as expected, with the curved droplet path. Moreover I don't recommend having a inward-curved droplet path, therefore I suggest having *this. It is more tolerating to the beginners. Done
3. 01:13:204 (1,2,3,4) - Avoid having the ending note opposing to the next note which is 01:14:152 (1) - It can be difficult to catch by the beginners if they moved a bit more. It is suggested to have 01:13:678 (4) at x:352 Done
4. 01:17:942 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I deem that this is overworked as a Cup pattern, the stream is too long. I suggest removing 01:18:573 (2,3) - Then rotate 01:18:889 (1,2,3,4) for -30 degree and move it to x:384 Done
5. 01:26:469 (3) - Can be difficult to catch if the player over-moved, and thus miss the second fruit of the note, which is 01:26:627 and the rest. I suggest slanting the slider like *thisDone.

[ Gust]

• 
  Gameplay

1. 00:06:880 (4,5,6,7) - This part is tough for Salad players, since (4,5,6) is quite big in movement and they have to adjust the direction quickly at (6,7), which can easily miss (7). Try moving (5) to x:336 ; Or else, you can also try something like *this, which is much better in flow (preferred). Fixed
2. 00:13:986 (2,3,4,5,6) - That's really easy to miss both (3) and (5) because 00:13:986 (2,3) and 00:14:461 (3,4) are so big in movements. I suggest moving 00:14:461 (3,4) to x:240 and 00:14:776 (5,6) to x:288 I think that moving (3) solved problem
3. 00:16:355 (3,4,5,6) - Just the same as the above-mentioned. Fixed I think
4. 00:26:146 (3,4) - Shorten the distance here, it doesn't suit a dash as (4) is not that strong in beats, hence try moving (4) to x:240 Done
5. 00:31:515 (3,1,2) - This part is so dependent with dashes, as it requires holding at some point. I suggest moving (2) much closer to x:176 I think it works well as it is
6. 00:35:778 (6,1,2) - Better move (2) a lot more closer to (1), here is so dependent with dash that it requires holding here. Try to move (2) closer, say x:256 it say shorten a bit
7. 00:39:568 (7,1,2) - Dependent with dash again. Besides, 00:40:358 (2,3) is quite opposing to the flow, therefore you can try *this which shorten the mentioned distance and changed the flow. Fixed I think
8. 00:44:780 (2,3,4,5) - Please, (2,3) and (4,5) are so far in my opinion, the gaps between them are so large. Move (3) and (5) one grid closer to (2) and (4) correspondingly, say moving 00:44:938 (3) to x:464 and 00:45:253 (5) to x:272 Done
9. 00:45:727 (1) - Not so fitting with a 1/3 slider, replace this note with a circle at x:80 instead. Done
10. 00:55:202 (1,2,1) - Is it really necessary to have such large distance for dashing? I highly recommend to trim down the distances between them. Consider moving (2) to x:176 I don't feel that so high DS reducing is necessary
11. 01:15:573 (6,1,2) - Though (1,2) can be caught without dashing, it is still an edge case in my opinion. I suggest lowering the distance of (1,2), say moving (2) to x:256, will do. Done
12. 01:21:732 (1,2,3) - The flow here is so opposing in my opinion, why not just keep it easy? Try Ctrl+G'ing 01:22:679 (3,4,5,6) and move it to x:480 Done
13. 01:25:995 (2,3) - The distance here can be slightly smaller, try moving 01:26:312 (3,4,5,6) to x:160 moved a bit
    
    General Comments
14. The parts in Kiai Time are quite dash-demanding, that I don't really agree to have that many dashes used there. Please try to trim some of them down a bit. I reduce some

[ Gale]

• 
  Gameplay

1. Is this difficulty really Platter? At some point I find it similar to a Rain, because of a great amount of hyperdash usage. I highly suggest to remove most of them. Try to use hyperdash every 2 combo, for example you use at 00:07:038 (2,3) - then the next will be at 00:10:670 (5,6)

I delete some less important but not many.

[ AleStorm]

• 
  Gameplay

1. 00:07:827 (1,2,3) - (2) is so strange here, it doesn't fit the audio, so I suggest removing this note and reverse the slider 00:07:827 (1)
2. 00:22:987 (1,2) - (1) is so vertically-straight, that the hyperdash comes so surprisingly and suddenly. Therefore try *this.
3. 00:32:462 (1,2,3) - Easy to miss (3), as the hyperdash of (1,2) is a bit intense and force players to move right after hyperdashing. Try moving it like *this.
4. 00:36:726 (2,3) - It is so easy to miss (3) here as well, therefore move (3) to x:176 helps much in my opinion.
5. 00:38:147 (1,2,3) - The hyperdash pattern here doesn't fit well, it should be hyperdash every 3 beats, please rework on this part.
6. 00:42:885 (3,4,5,6) - I don't suggest having (4,5,6) like that as the double hyperdashes are quite forced, players can easily jump to the wall after the intense hyperdashes, it could be better if you did it like *this
7. 00:59:466 (2,3) - Difficult to catch (3) because (2) is so vertical that the dash is so surprising. You may consider *this.
8. 00:59:940 (3,4) - It is also hard to catch (4) and the rest here, due to the large distance. I suggest moving (4) to x:168
9. 01:05:151 (2,3) - ^, you may move 01:05:625 (3,4,5) to x:312

all fixed I think

Call me later for check of Platter, after the fix of the usage of hyperdashes.

JBHyperion wrote:

I've got this sitting in my to-do list, so if you still want a recheck please apply/respond to afb's mod and call me back.

Stefan wrote:

Yarr!

JBHyperion wrote:

I've got this sitting in my to-do list, so if you still want a recheck please apply/respond to afb's mod and call me back.

I am back (at last >.>)

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Breeze

1. 00:04:985 (3) - Finish on the tail sounds random here, clap would be more fitting with the current rhythm imo
2. 00:08:300 (2,3) - This spacing feels really unexpected and would catch many Cup players off guard. Try moving 00:08:775 (3,4) to x-168, since this then makes the spacing between 00:09:249 (4,1) consistent with the previous measure at 00:06:406 (4,1)
3. 00:16:830 (1) - Reduce distance between these please, it's pretty uncomfortable to hit without dashing
4. 00:21:093 (1) - Tint bit more movement might be nice here to maintain the intensity, try rotating this clockwise a little (10-15 degrees)
5. 00:22:356 (2) - Whistle/clap to emphasize vocal, then drum sounds
6. 00:22:988 (1,3) - Why no clap on these for the drum sounds? The emphasis is totally lost here without them
7. 00:23:935 (2,3) - Same as 00:22:356 (2)
8. 00:26:146 (2,3) - ^
9. 00:28:199 (3,4,5) - I prefer clap/whistle/clap here to whistle/clap/whistle, the drums should be the main focus
10. 00:29:936 (3) - Same as 00:22:356 (2)
11. 00:30:568 (1) - Clap needs to be on tail rather than the head
12. 00:31:515 (2) - Missing clap on tail
13. 00:32:463 (1) - Replace finish on repeat with clap to maintain the drum rhythm
14. 00:38:147 (1,2,3) - Reduce distance between each of these please, spacing is rather uncomfortable
15. 00:40:042 (1,2) - Swap clap on tail to (2) to maintain previous hs rhythms
16. 00:42:885 (4,5,6) - Same hitsounds as you used at 00:28:199 (3,4,5) please
17. 00:43:832 (1) - Finish on head instead of clap to emphasize the midpoint of the kiai and the strong cymbal sound here
18. 00:53:307 (1) - ^ But for new verse section
19. 00:58:045 (2) - Swap head and tail hs to maintain the previous rhythms
20. 01:00:887 (1) - Finish instead of clap please
21. 01:10:362 (1) - Missing clap on tail
22. 01:10:362 (1,2) - Considering the curve and droplet formation on (1), the spacing to (2) is quite difficult. Please reduce the distance between these, or curve (1) less for a smoother flow
23. 01:14:626 (2,3) - Uncomfortable spacing, please reduce
24. 01:16:521 (3,1) - ^
25. 01:17:469 (4) - Should be clap instead of whistle
26. 01:17:941 (1) - Missing clap on tail
27. 01:19:363 (4) - Should be clap instead of whistle
28. 01:19:837 (1,3) - Whistle/clap
29. 01:20:784 (4) - ^
30. 01:26:469 (3) - Missing clap on head

Gust

1. Please follow the hitsound suggestions I outline in the previous diff, as there are a lot of missing claps here too, such as 00:05:301 (4) - 00:11:144 (6) - etc.
2. 00:18:566 (5,6) - Spacing is really awkward here, between dash and no-dash, coupled with a direction change. I'd reduce theis distance significantly
3. 00:22:987 (1,2) - Spacing is really underwhelming here, lack of movement kills the flow for me. Suggest increasing this distance slightly
4. 00:40:990 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing here makes this look ugly imo, a repeat slider or something like you did at 00:50:465 (3,4,5,6) would look much better
5. 01:00:887 (1,2) - Dash + antiflow will be very difficult for new players. Please reduce the distance here slightly
6. 01:09:889 (6) - Why map the slider end to a downbeat? You could shorten this to a 2/3 slider and place a circle on the downbeat to provide a small jump for emphasis
   01:13:204 (3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:40:990 (3,4,5,6)
7. 01:25:522 (1,2) - Current spacing is on the border of dash, please increase/decrease spacing here to make this more readable

Gale

Totally agree with afb, there are way too many hdashes here for this to even be considered a Platter. Platter diffs should be an introduction to using hdash, but you've used 54 in this diff, most of which are tricky 1/3 jumps and use antiflow. This won't be ranked unless you seriously rework the diff and reduce the amount of hdash usage. Suggest keeping hdashes at the end of each measure in the kiai choruses, e.g 00:05:301 (5,6) and removing the others mid-measure, e.g 00:04:037 (1,2) - 00:05:932 (1,2) - etc. For example, you didn't use a hdash between 00:07:827 (1,2) and this section plays really nicely. Most hdashes in the non-kiai/verse sections are totally unnecessary, e.g 00:22:040 (3,4) - 00:25:356 (2,3) - as you're moving to and from calmer sounds

1. Same hitsound problems again, refer back to what I said in the Cup diff
2. 00:18:566 (5,6) - Antiflowing hypers like this are really too hard for this difficulty, Ctrl+H 00:18:566 (5,6) and move to x-96 would be better
3. 00:43:358 (5,6,1) - Double hdash is far too much for Platter, and as well the emphasis is wrongly placed, with three identical drum sounds, the first and last with almost no spacing and the middle one with a hyperdash. Combining these into a repeat slider/3 circles with regular dash to and hdash from plays much better
4. 01:26:469 (1,2,3) - Strong hdash leading into a stationary pattern leads to high chance of missing here, so move 01:26:785 (3,4) to the right slightly for a smoother transition

BoberOfGrzybness's Storm

If we're being picky, you don't need the last "s" in the diff name, since proper usage of the plural possessive is just an apostrophe (BoberOfGrzybness') but some people think this looks weird, so I won't be too picky

1. Hitsounding is generally okay in this diff, though there are still some inconsistencies such as missing claps on 00:22:514 (5,2) - etc. in the verse sections, so go through the Cup suggestions again in this diff too please
2. 00:42:885 (3) - The angling on this slider encourages stacking rather than wiggling which kills the flow for me and has decent chance of missing. I'd rotate the tail about 20-30 degrees anticlockwise for a more readable movement, since a vertical stack would feel kinda boring to me
3. 01:15:415 (4) - Move this to x-224 for an even spacing between 01:15:099 (3,4,5) which feels more comfortable to play

Why do my posts get longer every time I mod this cursed mapset? ;w;

koliron wrote:

Ok as requested

General

1. About the spread, the sr is a bit random, +0.70 +0.60 +1.00 aaaa, ingame i think the platter can be a bit more hard, if do this, like +0.10, even the sr spread would be much better (+0.70 +0.70 +0.90), also about the density of notes 218 294 345 424, this is +74 +51 +79, with some notes (like 10?) more in the platter would be fine, in summary i suggest improve this spread with some changes in the platter aaaaaa, oh and, AR 5.5 6.5 7.8 8.8? why not something like 5.5 6.6 7.7 8.8? or 5.2 6.4 7.6 8.8 I won't change sr, also I don't care about AR math spread, each AR fits to difficulty so whats wrong
2. Why not change the preview point to 00:35:936 - ? then you can hear more of this music when you want to choose a map :b k
3. About combocolours, maybe a darker blue? because is so white aaa like [110,215,220] used something darker
4. Is not necessary add "Assassin" in tags because is already part of "Assassin's", btw the backgroud is of assassin's creed: black flag 4 (im playing this these weeks lmao), so why not add "black" "flag" "4"? also in nooot necessary "Bod" because is part of "Bodom" I will keep both bod and assassin, added black flag 4
5. About hitsounds:
   00:35:778 - 01:07:993 (5) - Missing finish?
   00:28:672 - 00:04:037 - 00:36:252 - 01:08:467 - Two histounds here? is just so hard to appreciate, i suggest just be finish
   00:22:829 - No clap, just not fit ):
   00:32:462 - Missing finish
   00:32:936 - A clap is better than finish, for the drum
   01:00:887 - A finish is better
   01:00:650 - Better without whistle i think
   01:04:677 - Replace with finish?
   01:15:099 - to 01:15:889 - is just so weird, and fit bad, i suggest 01:15:099 - clap 01:15:573 - finish
   01:19:679 - Remove whistle, not fit with nothing ):
   01:23:627 - Finish here i guess
   01:25:522 - 01:25:996 - Replace these clap with finish? aaa
   01:26:469 - 01:26:627 - 01:26:785 - Clap works better with the drum
   do not forget hitsounds copier for the rest diffs

fixed all

Breeze

1. 00:05:932 (1,2,3,4) - Hum, the density of notes is a bit random, maybe be consistent with 00:38:147 (1,2,3) - removing (2)? k
2. Also maybe 00:06:248 (3) - a bit more to the left, seems better and is less confusing for new players fixed
3. 00:13:512 (1,2,3,4) - A bit less distance between these notes? can be a bit hard i think (btw this change can reduce al ot the sr, but equally feels more fixed than a normal cup lol, why not try to add a bit more distance between these "minibreaks"? like 00:14:461 (4,1) - 00:06:406 (4,1) - 00:11:144 (4,1) - 00:33:568 (2,1) - 00:43:832 (1,2) - ) fixed
4. 00:29:936 (3,4) - Maybe be consistent 00:26:146 (2,3) - about distance? fixed
5. 00:35:778 (2) - This note deserve more distance aaa, i think x192 works better k
6. 00:42:253 (2,3) - The distance is so short ): can be a bit more following the voice it fits well
7. 00:42:885 (4,5,6,1) - 01:10:362 (1,2,3,4) - 01:10:362 (1,2,3,4) - As i said above, a bit less distance? i think it's better for the new players some nerfs were done
8. 00:45:727 (1,2,3,4) - The density of notes in comparision with the other kiais is really low, please try to be a bit more consistent with this ): fixed
9. 01:02:150 (4,5) - And a biiit more distance maybe? no its nice
10. 01:03:730 (2,1) - This distance is so hard without dash aaa reduce please fixed
11. 01:25:522 (1,2,3) - Is after the spinner ooohh, the cup players can miss here try a bit less distance please no change here there between each note is 1/1 break lol

Gust

1. 00:07:196 (6,7) - Try with a bit less distance? the next note requires dash, the player can react badly and lose this note done
2. 00:07:827 (1,2) - Seems like a dash lol, please reduce a bit, same in 00:07:827 (1,2) - please check twice before posting, its walkable pattern, and you post same pattern twice
3. 00:09:722 (1,2) - No, a dash here not fit, please reduce disagree with that
4. 00:11:144 (6,1) - Dash here would be nice following the instruments normal movement fits even better
5. 00:13:039 (5,1) - ^ following the voice, mh i suggest ctrl+g in 00:13:512 (1) - then a bit to the right, feels a bit weird but is the best option i think ^
6. 00:14:461 (3,4,5,6) - Dash here no, (5) is not strong, same in 00:16:355 (3,4,5,6) - sorry no change
7. 00:22:987 (1,2) - Also reduce please ): the haed of is not strong aaa sorry no change
8. 00:23:303 (2,3) - A dash here maybe? following thee instrument and voice
9. 00:23:935 (3,1,2) - If you want to add a dash, works better to (1) for the finish Its fine too start dash there lol
10. 00:25:356 (2,3) - And other dahs here for the voice can fit i think I don't want put dash to anti-flow pattern
11. 00:27:725 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I usually not said this, but try with a pattern more symmetrical, like this Done I think
12. 00:55:202 (1,2) - Please remove the dash, is not necessary, much less with that distance long dash fits here so nope
13. 01:00:413 (6,1) - Dash to the wall? aaa move a bit (1) please fixed
14. 01:11:152 (6,1,2,3,4) - This dash is hard to understand aaa try with try with this fixed
15. 01:13:678 (6,1) - Ahhh reduce a bit, also reduce to 01:14:468 (2) - ): is harrrd a bit
16. 01:15:415 (5,6) - A dash here would be nice for the drum, then i prefer remove the dash in 01:15:573 (6,1) - aaa nooo
17. 01:19:363 (4,1) - Dash here would be nice aaa try with 01:19:363 (4) - x 384 I moved (1) instead
18. 01:22:995 (5,6) - Dash here can fit for the finish too

Gale

1. As i said in general, will be better with some more notes and sr, i will suggest about that here
2. 00:04:511 (2,3) - Daaaashshshshz? no dashes in middle of stream :c
3. 00:07:354 (3,1) - I suggest a bit less distance just to be more comfortable fixed
4. 00:10:038 (3,4,5) - Why not keep the constancy with dash here? to both can fit for the drum but it would be too hard
5. 00:17:302 (1,2) - Nooo, this hyper not fit, the head of (2) is just so low, please reduce a lot, same in 00:21:092 (1,2) - (2) is strong enough, and (1) is even more strong, fits nicely for hyper starts
6. 00:18:724 (6,1) - For the finish i thing a convencing dash would be nice? same in 00:24:409 (4,1) - 00:50:938 (7,1) - 00:52:833 (8,1) - 01:19:364 (4,1) - I did those breaks cause they works nicely and I want avoid regular dashing
7. 00:26:461 - Add a note for the voice? feels weird without here Done
8. 00:28:041 (5,6,7,8) - Ahhh! these notes have a potential to do a pattern like thiiis, and the same in 00:43:201 (4,5,6,7,1) - It would be too spaced and flowless (at least less flowed lol)
9. 00:40:990 (4,5) - An hyper here to be consistent weith the other kiais? okay
10. 00:49:517 (1,2) - Reduce a bit? is not so strong it is
11. 00:53:307 (1,2) - Nooooo, this hyper not fit, please redcue a lot disagree :c
12. 00:55:202 - Since here, lol you can add more notes come on, i know that you know it, like 00:56:939 - 00:58:360 - added
13. 00:58:992 (1,2,3) - The hyper is better to (3), mh try with (2) in x 312 well (3) is a bit stronger but I wanted to keep at least 1/3 more from adding another hyper
14. 00:59:466 (3,1) - But please, this hyper is not so good i think, reduce as a normal dash I think that is good
15. 01:00:887 (1,2) - Why not a dash? can fit perfect, and maybe remove the hyper to 01:02:150 (3) - , a normal dash is enough lets try
16. 01:07:993 (6,1) - Not hyper because 2 hyper in row, but a normal dash for the finish haaaaa! like 01:08:467 (1) - in x 264 also to remove the hyper to (2) that not fit ))): same in 01:11:783 (7,1,2) - Nope, those fits perfectly
17. 01:09:730 (5,6) - Hyper here would be nice for the voiceeececece ce e there is enough hypers and here there is no need to add another :/
18. 01:15:415 (5,6) -^ for the finish meh okay
19. 01:16:047 (1,2) - pleaaseee listen well these sliders, the strong note is in the taillll )): why it is only about strengths? you don't hear the vocal between notes that I follow?
20. 01:17:468 (6,1) - A bit more distance? aaa a bit
21. 01:20:784 (3,4,5) - Would be better if the distance to (4) is more than to (4) xd learn distances pls na jk i love u its fine like it is tbh, and I love you too

Storm

1. 00:06:722 (4,5) - Feels really weird without hyper here ): is the same as the others before The patterns is nice here, adding hyper would be a difficulty spike
2. 00:11:144 (4,1) - No distance? a bit at least for the flow pleaaase come on! There is no need to add distance here, and it flows well
3. 00:16:829 (6,1) - Hyper sure why not sure hi hola bonjour cześć cześć that was Wujeks failure
4. 00:18:408 (4,5) - As i said in the platter, this sliders not fit with hyper, the strong note is in the tail fixed
5. Talked with afb about 00:22:829 - and not fit, please remove this slider and add a circle in 00:22:672 - WujekGrzybs overmapps <3, fixed
6. A bit more ditance to 00:22:987 (1) - it's better i think fixed
7. 00:24:409 (5,1) - Maybe is one of the best times to add a hyper lol ohhhooo pleasu Yea
8. 00:26:461 (6,1) - Also here canfit i think Yup
9. 00:26:461 (6,1,2) - Unnecessary distance? where? where?
10. 00:29:620 (4,5) - I said where!? Reduced a bit
11. 00:31:989 (5,1) - Not hyper? follwoing the voice+instrument i guess feels better yea
12. 00:34:831 (2,3) - Now you can add a hyper for your appreciated 1/3 sliders! ok bad jk, for the voice k
13. 00:35:778 (5,1) - Not an hyper but normal dash? aaaa um?
14. 00:43:674 (6,1) - hum... but this ias better for a hyper, maybe reduce the previous for normal dash then you can add here? No it would destroy flow, I could ctrl + h slider but too hard for some :^)
15. 00:43:674 (6,1,2) - I said wheeerreeee!!1!? im bored today i know fixed yes
16. 00:46:043 (2,3) - Hyper following the drum? no cause too hard
17. 00:51:886 (2,3) - The sound is not enough strong, also in game just feels weird :s please reduce as a normal dash or even walk disagree, btw don't listen to JUST dash land
18. 00:56:308 (4,5) - I think this hyperdash has not argument, please follow the pattern with dash here chhhh fixed
19. 01:04:362 (5,1) - Daaaash or even an hyperdaaaash? voice+finish, that's enough i think fixed
20. 01:15:731 (5) - Talked with hyperion about this slider as you said, and he agree, please remove, that sound is not enough to add a note, much less the tail removeed but feels empty now :c
21. 01:22:206 (2,3) - w h e r e try with 01:22:679 (3,4,5,6) - x 160, it's a good option imo if you accept also a bit distance to 01:23:627 (1) - , yeah i modded my mod fixed slider
    
    + talked in game about some overmapped notes in this diff

Detalied suggestions, except some overmapped notes and the spread, the rest its good, specially nice flow ^^