BeoMu wrote:

Hello from my queue

I am a novice modding . Please note only

[Kantan]


* I think that the use of 1.0 rather than 1.2 speed. hmm no change,but thanks i find there are two types:1.0 and 1.2

* It seems to look a little harder than the difficulty. hmmmmm just SD broken for example in IIDX there is too much notes gap
in LV11 876 min 1810 max wow this Kantan is just many notes,no complex pattern,no killing zone so i think it is ok
(´ゝ౪◔｀)＜When the thing you think is ok, I always think it is not ok.


00:48:182 (1) - Note that seems to be fine , rather than short spin to Kantan

00:59:633 (1) - However, because this part seems decent vocals XD i can't catch what you say but if you say delete this note no thanks
both are good for sound and honestly long spinner is easier than short


There seems to be a perfect Other


[Futsuu]


* The Kantan speed is 1.2. Is Futsuu But why 1.0 ? idk what to say ask tasuke912 he is well-experienced taiko mapper he knows the reason

00:26:396 ~ 00:36:039 - This section seems boring the player .... simple song simple pattern and not boring for beginner


Like the rest.



[Muzukashii]


00:51:663 - d dkd kdk it would be more decent than that in ddd kkk

00:54:521 - k ddd kkk too simple there are some space i can put a bit complex pattern



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Sorry flimsy modding TT

1. 01:23:896 () - Useless inheriting point in all diffs.

1. 00:13:896 (50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - How about kkk ddkkd? Part isn't that intense.
2. 00:16:217 (66,68) - Both to 'k'? Improves flow a lot, because kdd d dkd is a single-tapper hitting the same key 4 times. Also fits the song nicely.
3. 00:16:932 (71,72,73) - d k? kkd doesn't fit too well.
4. 00:20:325 (97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104) - ddd kkddk? Maps to the piano nicely, and still fits the other sounds.
5. 00:21:396 () - 00:23:539 () - Should be the same density as 00:15:325 () - 00:18:182 () , (density, you can still make other patterns) as nothing really changes with the song (also because streams like these are more for Inner).
6. 00:41:217 (218,219) - delete these, so that all the verses in this part are the same length?
   (00:38:182 to 00:41:039, 00:41:396 to 00:43:896, 00:44:253 to 00:46:753)
7. 00:41:396 (218) - k? (now that you removed those notes) fits the song nicer.
8. 00:42:110 (223,224,225,226) - d kkk? Also fits the 'orchestra' sounds.
9. 00:50:503 (283,284,285,286,287) - Follow drums here? This part of the song is slow, so streams fit less.
10. 00:53:539 (296,297,298) - Change to just a big don at 00:53:717 ()?
11. 00:54:253 (300,301) - These notes don't fit because the song picks up at 00:54:432 ().
12. 00:54:967 (303,304) - ^ 00:54:967 (303) - Maybe keep this note though, and change 00:55:146 (305) - to d?
13. 00:55:682 () to 00:57:467 () - Make this part fit more to the music, currently it's pretty overmapped, and the song isn't 'intense' yet.
14. 01:04:075 (371,372) - Delete these for a tiny break? This is a lot of notes.
15. 01:04:967 (376,377) - kk? ddddd isn't mapped to much.
16. 01:09:700 (417,419,421) - Delete these so it's just d d d then the stream?
17. 01:15:057 (24,25,26) - Delete, for another little break? A lot of 5 note patterns here.
18. 01:20:503 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76) - How about something less crazy like
    
    (The last note is K)
19. 01:23:271 (82,86) - ctrl+g these? The stream gets higher pitched, so ddkdddkkddd fits nicer.
20. 01:26:575 (112) - Delete this for same break reasons.
21. 01:27:200 (118) - Remove this note? The stream was unecessary imo.
22. 01:33:360 (166,167,168,169,170,171) - simply d kkk?
23. 01:44:432 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - kkddkdk like in the beginning?

1. 00:16:932 (64,65,66,67,68,69) - k k d d k (ddd d d k)? I think it's nicer, and helps the part to not have a lot of dons.
2. 00:19:075 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - d d kkk d k d? Then 00:20:325 (84) - delete?
3. 00:24:075 (106) - delete, to lower density?
4. 00:37:646 (163) - Remove finish
5. 00:42:467 (190) - delete, density blah blah?
6. 00:43:539 (196,197,198) - k d? (note in middle dies)
7. 00:46:039 (210) - density also (it's not hard, just most of the song isn't that dense outside of kiai, so saving it for kiai just makes it less weird)
8. 01:01:217 (285) - ^
9. 01:05:146 (309) - k? bunch of dons here
10. 01:25:503 () - add a note here, to dense it like the beginning of kiai, then delete 01:26:575 (85) - so it's 2 ~equally~ long patterns?
11. 01:44:075 (49) - delete, so this ending part doesn't become the most dense part of the song haha.
    
    Follows rules for the most part, just some inconsistent density and structure is all!

1. 00:15:682 (3) - delete as a break, since the intro doesn't feel like it really has any actual breaks.
2. 00:21:396 (21) - ^, just because it's a long row of notes
3. 00:24:253 (29) - k?
4. 00:25:146 (32,33,34,35,36) - remove finish, it's just too complicated for futsuu players' fingers ;_; (Actually I don't recommend 1/2 big notes in Futsuu)
   
   Hm, a lot of parts are just a lot of simple notes. Futsuu is more like (d k d d k k d d k [tiny break]), making little patterns while following the music as best as possible, adding breaks, and keeping it within the spread. Right now it's a lot of 1/1, or d k ddk d k dkk etc. Try looking at futsuu for similar songs!

1. This is a lot better, all you really need is to make sure that if you see ~11-12 notes in a row (you can judge this yourself) with no LONG breaks (big white tick to the next one) then add one!
   
2. Also find simpler ways to map stuff like 01:21:039 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - which is too hard for kantan. The star rating is almost 2 ;_;
   
   Kantan is basically make a difficulty for monkey people. ヘ（。□°）ヘ

OzzyOzrock wrote:

YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NM, not BN mod, don't get your hopes up ;w; clearing queue out!
wow you are BN now good luck

[General]

1. 01:23:896 () - Useless inheriting point in all diffs.

forgot deleting this when i copy from my ranked mapset thanks

[Oni]

1. 00:13:896 (50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - How about kkk ddkkd? Part isn't that intense.
2. 00:16:217 (66,68) - Both to 'k'? Improves flow a lot, because kdd d dkd is a single-tapper hitting the same key 4 times. Also fits the song nicely.
3. 00:16:932 (71,72,73) - d k? kkd doesn't fit too well.
4. 00:20:325 (97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104) - ddd kkddk? Maps to the piano nicely, and still fits the other sounds.
5. 00:21:396 () - 00:23:539 () - Should be the same density as 00:15:325 () - 00:18:182 () , (density, you can still make other patterns) as nothing really changes with the song (also because streams like these are more for Inner).
6. 00:41:217 (218,219) - delete these, so that all the verses in this part are the same length?
   (00:38:182 to 00:41:039, 00:41:396 to 00:43:896, 00:44:253 to 00:46:753)
7. 00:41:396 (218) - k? (now that you removed those notes) fits the song nicer.
8. 00:42:110 (223,224,225,226) - d kkk? Also fits the 'orchestra' sounds.
9. 00:50:503 (283,284,285,286,287) - Follow drums here? This part of the song is slow, so streams fit less.
10. 00:53:539 (296,297,298) - Change to just a big don at 00:53:717 ()?
11. 00:54:253 (300,301) - These notes don't fit because the song picks up at 00:54:432 ().
12. 00:54:967 (303,304) - ^ 00:54:967 (303) - Maybe keep this note though, and change 00:55:146 (305) - to d?
13. 00:55:682 () to 00:57:467 () - Make this part fit more to the music, currently it's pretty overmapped, and the song isn't 'intense' yet.
14. 01:04:075 (371,372) - Delete these for a tiny break? This is a lot of notes.
15. 01:04:967 (376,377) - kk? ddddd isn't mapped to much.
16. 01:09:700 (417,419,421) - Delete these so it's just d d d then the stream?
17. 01:15:057 (24,25,26) - Delete, for another little break? A lot of 5 note patterns here.
18. 01:20:503 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76) - How about something less crazy like
    
    (The last note is K)
19. 01:23:271 (82,86) - ctrl+g these? The stream gets higher pitched, so ddkdddkkddd fits nicer.
20. 01:26:575 (112) - Delete this for same break reasons.
21. 01:27:200 (118) - Remove this note? The stream was unecessary imo.
22. 01:33:360 (166,167,168,169,170,171) - simply d kkk?
23. 01:44:432 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - kkddkdk like in the beginning?

Actually this is a tough choice. You tried to make other diffs more dense to try and create some spread, but really, it's the patterns + density that make Oni really tough. I tried to help out bu nerfing it, but maybe you need to change this into Inner Oni after all ;_; (GJ tho)
i decided to make another Oni(like lite Oni)and Muzukashii a bit easier,then there are 5diffs,this eroge has 5 heroins,come on BGs
[Muzukashii]

1. 00:16:932 (64,65,66,67,68,69) - k k d d k (ddd d d k)? I think it's nicer, and helps the part to not have a lot of dons.
2. 00:19:075 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - d d kkk d k d? Then 00:20:325 (84) - delete?
3. 00:24:075 (106) - delete, to lower density?
4. 00:37:646 (163) - Remove finish
5. 00:42:467 (190) - delete, density blah blah?
6. 00:43:539 (196,197,198) - k d? (note in middle dies)
7. 00:46:039 (210) - density also (it's not hard, just most of the song isn't that dense outside of kiai, so saving it for kiai just makes it less weird)
8. 01:01:217 (285) - ^
9. 01:05:146 (309) - k? bunch of dons here
10. 01:25:503 () - add a note here, to dense it like the beginning of kiai, then delete 01:26:575 (85) - so it's 2 ~equally~ long patterns?
11. 01:44:075 (49) - delete, so this ending part doesn't become the most dense part of the song haha.
    
    Follows rules for the most part, just some inconsistent density and structure is all!

[Futsuu]

1. 00:15:682 (3) - delete as a break, since the intro doesn't feel like it really has any actual breaks.
2. 00:21:396 (21) - ^, just because it's a long row of notes
3. 00:24:253 (29) - k?
4. 00:25:146 (32,33,34,35,36) - remove finish, it's just too complicated for futsuu players' fingers ;_; (Actually I don't recommend 1/2 big notes in Futsuu)
   
   Hm, a lot of parts are just a lot of simple notes. Futsuu is more like (d k d d k k d d k [tiny break]), making little patterns while following the music as best as possible, adding breaks, and keeping it within the spread. Right now it's a lot of 1/1, or d k ddk d k dkk etc. Try looking at futsuu for similar songs!
   i hate artist again this is fxxkin s1mple song i only put unique pattern on break and i saw all part again then i think i was drunk,what is this Futsuu?hahaha i should remap

[Kantan]

1. This is a lot better, all you really need is to make sure that if you see ~11-12 notes in a row (you can judge this yourself) with no LONG breaks (big white tick to the next one) then add one! hmm i can't delete any notes...this song is really consistent,no rest
   
2. Also find simpler ways to map stuff like 01:21:039 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - which is too hard for kantan. The star rating is almost 2 ;_;
   delete 20 but i can't delete 22~25 too(i hate artist not singer)
   Kantan is basically make a difficulty for monkey people. ヘ（。□°）ヘ

Sorry mod gets terrible at lower diffs, but I was taking too long here ;__; GL with set! (and ty for looking at riot of color)!

Coro wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestion unless in red.

[Kantan]
00:14:610 - add one more K here to match with the vocals? It makes it feel less empty~ d instead
00:56:575 (9) - consider deleting this to make a break~ keep for consistent rhythm(snare)

[Futsuu]
00:21:753 (17) - try moving this to 00:22:467 so the stream is a bit shorter ok
00:24:967 (25) - consider deleting this to make a break~ ahh keep
overall this feels more like a low muzukashii at some parts, particularly around the chorus. Maybe look it over and add more breaks?
even this i made much easier than used to rip

[Muzukashii]
seems fine

[Oni]
seems fine

[Cherry Blossom]
seems fine

so far so good, good luck for rank~

xtrem3x wrote:

Request via Simple Taiko Modding Queue (M4M)(?)

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General:

Cherry blossom is later ... is too late here ._.

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

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Kantan:

Is good .-.
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Futsuu:

01:02:825 - Delete (mini-breaks)
01:05:682 - Same [b]no thanks

01:20:682 - Move to 01:20:860- (have sound for a triple but is better this way) keep

01:52:378 - Delete (not nessesary) i think it's necessary because of s1mple pattern

01:52:467 - Spinner until 01:59:610- (long sound ends here) okok accepted for all diffs

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Muzukashii:

00:51:575 - this triple with d's please .... (triple with different color not allowed - very rare is allowed)
00:54:432 - this triple with k's (same reason)
from https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/152263 "kdk/dkd are acceptable as long as they're not coupled with triplets of other kinds."
so i think it's ok
01:07:467 - Delete (mini-breaks)
01:14:789 - Same
no thanks(i'm affected by https://osu.ppy.sh/b/187001&m=1 ,1/2 stream)

01:20:682 - Delete .. and ... no
01:20:950 - d (a triple here is better) yes

01:24:610 - Delete (mini-break) no thanks
01:26:975 - Same
01:27:467 - Same i found better rhythm so changed

01:32:914 - Move to 01:32:378- (triple is more notable here)
totally changed
01:52:378 - Delete (not nessesary)
ok
01:52:467 - Spinner until 01:59:610- (long sound ends here)

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Oni:

00:05:682 - Change to d (low sound)
ok
00:09:253 - in this sequence add note in empty place and change notes to this -> kkkkd
gap for Oni and Inner Oni,i shouldn't make same

00:14:342 - ctrl+g with 00:14:610- (following pitch in vocal sound)
no thanks
00:19:253 - Change to k (high sound)
00:19:253 (77,78) - for these sounds d better

00:20:057 - ctrl+g with next note (focusing consistence with BG sound)
for 00:19:610 (79,80) - instead
00:25:682 - Delete
keep imo(make different from muzu and there's sound)

00:26:753 - Change to d (no have emphasis for a finish, also is a new sequence here)
keep i will change if other says same thing
00:50:414 - Delete (no have sound for a triple and is "soft part")
00:53:271 - Same
keep,i won't move here from mania if i can't put notes on no sounds
00:54:700 - Same
00:54:789 - Same
they have
00:56:842 - Delete this or delete 00:57:378-
make different rhythm here
01:05:592 - Move to 01:05:950- (have more tone in this part for a triple)
add and make ddk kkd instead

01:09:164 - Delete (no have sound for a triple here)
same reason as 00:53:271

01:45:682 - Delete (same as 00:25:682- )
same

01:52:467 - Spinner until 01:59:610- (long sound ends here)
same(fixed)

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Cherry Blossom:

00:09:342 - ctrl+g with next note (if inner is better a bit variable without losing focus in BG sound)
no thanks for violin

00:14:610 - Change to k (high vocal sound)
i don't follow vocal here

00:20:057 - Move to 00:19:878- (have better consistence imo)no
00:20:414 - Move to 00:20:235- (same)yes(i make kdkkd)

00:20:860 - Change to d (variety)　00:20:771 (103) - instead

00:43:450 - Add note (have notable sound)
no thanks

00:43:896 - Change to k (high sound) dkd instead

00:48:717 - This -> This (more variety) s1mple better for me

01:05:325 - Change to k (high sound)
01:05:146 (389) - instead
01:12:914 - Delete (a bit emphasis for starts kiai)
ok and a bit changed
01:20:592 - Delete (not nessesary)
01:27:021 - Same
01:32:021 - Same
no thanks i need them

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All complete this time .-.

_S u w a k o_ wrote:

i heard from somewhere that taiko map cannot be able to have different difficulty name if the mapset is ordinary thing

i'm not sure tho. and i even think that cherry blossom is better for name ;-;

_S u w a k o_ wrote:

?

i dont know

1. is this file being used? If not, then delete
2. Consider readjusting HPOD on all difficulties: here more info

1. 00:18:182 (19,20,21) - Maybe make this measure whole k's to vary from previous part?
2. 00:23:896 (27,28,29) - Same as above, but the opposite (all d's)
3. 00:36:575 (39) - Can use a finisher I think, to emphasize the tone uprise
4. 00:38:182 (41) - Hm. This one however, I don't feel there is any emphasizable sound. Remove finisher?
5. 01:12:467 (1) - I think the vocal can use a finisher here
6. 01:18:182 (11) - 01:19:610 (14) - Hm, you used a finisher here. You could use it as well in 01:21:039 (17) - to cohere
7. 01:22:467 - 01:23:717 - This part looks a bit empty. Add a slider?
8. 01:23:896 (20) - Can use a finisher to emphasize the restart of the chorus I think
9. 01:31:039 (33) - The same way you used finisher in you can use 01:32:467 (35) - here, too
10. 01:38:182 (5,6,7) - Same suggestion as in 00:18:182 (19,20,21) -
11. 01:43:896 (12,13,14) - ^ but for 00:23:896 (27,28,29) -
12. 01:50:325 (2) - Shouldn't this be on 01:50:146 - ?
13. 01:50:682 - Add a note here?

1. 01:41:039 (14) - Wouldn't this flow better as a d?
2. 01:50:325 (2) - Same as in Kantan
3. 01:50:682 - ^

1. 00:06:039 (10) - Considering you follow vocals, wouldn't it be better if you removed this note?
2. 00:31:753 - 00:32:110 - Add notes here to completely follow vocals?
3. 01:28:003 - Add a note here? Think it flows better

1. 00:06:932 - Can add a note here to keep following vocals
2. 00:08:360 - ^
3. 00:10:503 - ^
4. 00:11:039 (32) - Move to 00:11:217 - ? I don't know whether you're following vocals or background rhythm.
5. I liked the kiai

1. 00:06:932 - You've been following vocals all along, I think it's better if you add a note here
2. 00:14:789 - 00:15:146 - ^
3. 00:32:110 - Leaving no note here has an important impact on the flow. Consider adding a note
4. Overall I've seen that you use 1/4 pretty often even if the song does not ask for it. I'd suggest you to reconsider some of them. The rhythm you use looks just fine, but the amount of 1/4s compared to what the song offers is a bit too much I think. I'll leave it up to you!

Raiden wrote:

Hey there! M4M as promised.

[ General]

1. is this file being used? If not, then delete
   yes i use for movie and BG(tasuke told me so idk why i need lol)
2. Consider readjusting HPOD on all difficulties: here more info kantan HP4 Inner Oni HP6

[ Kantan]

1. 00:18:182 (19,20,21) - Maybe make this measure whole k's to vary from previous part?
2. 00:23:896 (27,28,29) - Same as above, but the opposite (all d's)
   no thanks i refer Taiko no Tatsujin original ><
3. 00:36:575 (39) - Can use a finisher I think, to emphasize the tone uprise
4. 00:38:182 (41) - Hm. This one however, I don't feel there is any emphasizable sound. Remove finisher?
   ok
5. 01:12:467 (1) - I think the vocal can use a finisher here
   ok
6. 01:18:182 (11) - 01:19:610 (14) - Hm, you used a finisher here. You could use it as well in 01:21:039 (17) - to cohere
   ok
7. 01:22:467 - 01:23:717 - This part looks a bit empty. Add a slider?
   for long break BN once told me when i got 1st ranked
8. 01:23:896 (20) - Can use a finisher to emphasize the restart of the chorus I think
   ok
9. 01:31:039 (33) - The same way you used finisher in you can use 01:32:467 (35) - here, too
10. 01:38:182 (5,6,7) - Same suggestion as in 00:18:182 (19,20,21) -
11. 01:43:896 (12,13,14) - ^ but for 00:23:896 (27,28,29) -
    same
12. 01:50:325 (2) - Shouldn't this be on 01:50:146 - ?
    for bass
13. 01:50:682 - Add a note here? same

[ Futsuu]

1. 01:41:039 (14) - Wouldn't this flow better as a d?
2. 01:50:325 (2) - Same as in Kantan
3. 01:50:682 - ^ follow basssssss

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:06:039 (10) - Considering you follow vocals, wouldn't it be better if you removed this note? ok and to follow vocal completely repattern here
2. 00:31:753 - 00:32:110 - Add notes here to completely follow vocals? for long break(2/1)
3. 01:28:003 - Add a note here? Think it flows better k

[ Oni]

1. 00:06:932 - Can add a note here to keep following vocals keep i know there's a vocal but same pitch=one note in the front is enough
2. 00:08:360 - ^ same
3. 00:10:503 - ^ ok here
4. 00:11:039 (32) - Move to 00:11:217 - ? I don't know whether you're following vocals or background rhythm. ahh ok
5. I liked the kiai

[ Cherry Blossom]

1. 00:06:932 - You've been following vocals all along, I think it's better if you add a note here ok
2. 00:14:789 - 00:15:146 - ^ for accent
3. 00:32:110 - Leaving no note here has an important impact on the flow. Consider adding a note add k
4. Overall I've seen that you use 1/4 pretty often even if the song does not ask for it. I'd suggest you to reconsider some of them. The rhythm you use looks just fine, but the amount of 1/4s compared to what the song offers is a bit too much I think. I'll leave it up to you!
   that's why i added Oni diff(actually this is used to Oni,but because of diff spread issue i added Oni and this becomes Inner Oni) so i think i don't have to change overall,this is overmapped maybe but a bit,not unrankable i think

That's pretty much it!

Good luck on rank!

1. OD6? To differentiate from Oni and also avoid notelock on long patterns
2. 00:06:932 - Add a note to fully follow vocals?
3. 00:14:789 - 00:15:146 - same, you can add notes here
   
   At the following parts some 1/4 patterns seem to bit a bit... random? I'm not saying they are bad (they can even be good for improvised playstyle) but I'm gonna try to give suggestions to where you can add/delete/replace some patterns because I think it will have better flow/sounding.
   
   
   1. Move to 00:18:628 - ?
   2. 00:19:075 (81,82) - Remove these 2 and move 00:18:896 (80) - to 00:19:075 - ?
   3. 00:19:521 (85) - Remove?
   4. 00:20:057 (89) - Remove?
   5. 00:21:039 (93) - I think the downbeat should be a d rather, it fits into a deep hit imo
   6. 00:21:396 (94) - This has rather a higher pitch, change to k?
   7. 00:21:842 (98) - Remove?
   8. 00:22:378 (101,102) - Remove these 2? this would be the resulting
   9. 00:24:164 (111) - Remove?
   10. 00:24:700 (115,117) - I think these 2 are a bit unnecessary, remove?
   11. 00:32:110 - You can add a note here, there are enough 1/1 breaks
   12. 00:36:128 (157) - Remove? The buildup doesn't start until 00:36:217 - imo
   13. 00:38:450 (171) - Remove? I feel it's a bit unnecessary
   14. 00:38:896 (173,174) - Remove? I think rhythm flows better like this
   15. 00:39:878 (179,182,183) - Remove? Reason above ^
   16. 00:41:396 (186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206) - This buildup makes for good 1/4s! Well done!!
   17. 00:44:878 (212) - Remove? Feels a bit unnecessary
   18. 00:45:325 (215) - ^, to keep rhythm
   19. 00:45:950 (218) - Remove?
   20. 00:48:807 (236) - ^, I think power buildup starts at 00:48:896 - with vocals+background music
   21. 00:57:378 (277) - Change to d? To keep the downward flow of the tone
   22. 01:01:664 (303) - Remove? I feel a bit unnecessary
   23. 01:03:450 (316) - Same ^
   24. 01:08:003 (347) - Change to k? I think it helps keeping the rhyhtm
   25. 01:09:432 - You could add a note here, to maintain the momentum
   26. 01:19:878 - Can add a k here, sounds and flows good imo
   27. 01:38:450 (24) - Can be removed, feels unnecessary
   28. 01:38:896 (26) - Can be removed to cohere with the rhythm
   29. 01:39:521 (32) - ^
   30. 01:52:110 (100,101,102,103) - Change these last 4 notes to k? To variate a bit

Raiden wrote:

Hey! Recheck for Inner Oni as requested.

[ Inner Oni]

1. OD6? To differentiate from Oni and also avoid notelock on long patterns
   i just don't like OD 6 or more(so HP is different)
2. 00:06:932 - Add a note to fully follow vocals?
3. 00:14:789 - 00:15:146 - same, you can add notes here
   sry i don't put vocal overall sometimes ignore is better for me
   
   At the following parts some 1/4 patterns seem to bit a bit... random? I'm not saying they are bad (they can even be good for improvised playstyle) but I'm gonna try to give suggestions to where you can add/delete/replace some patterns because I think it will have better flow/sounding.
   hmm actually there are few same sounds,so most pattern is different=seems random map,only this song has this special logic lol
   
   
   1. Move to 00:18:628 - ?
   2. 00:19:075 (81,82) - Remove these 2 and move 00:18:896 (80) - to 00:19:075 - ?
      i don't like even number stream for this song sry
   3. 00:19:521 (85) - Remove? same rhythm as 00:18:003 (73,74,75,76,77,78) - these
   4. 00:20:057 (89) - Remove? change pattern:kkddd
   5. 00:21:039 (93) - I think the downbeat should be a d rather, it fits into a deep hit imo ddddk instead
   6. 00:21:396 (94) - This has rather a higher pitch, change to k? 00:21:575 (100) - this higher so i put d here
   7. 00:21:842 (98) - Remove? same reason as ^^^^
   8. 00:22:378 (101,102) - Remove these 2? this would be the resulting
      that's too easy for my Inner Oni,if i have to do so i should delete this and 4diff map instead
   9. 00:24:164 (111) - Remove? gooood for violin sound same as 00:23:717 (115,116,117) -
   10. 00:24:700 (115,117) - I think these 2 are a bit unnecessary, remove? ahh keep because of bass
   11. 00:32:110 - You can add a note here, there are enough 1/1 breaks ok
   12. 00:36:128 (157) - Remove? The buildup doesn't start until 00:36:217 - imo violin violin
   13. 00:38:450 (171) - Remove? I feel it's a bit unnecessary no thanks(maybe different feeling)
   14. 00:38:896 (173,174) - Remove? I think rhythm flows better like this
   15. 00:39:878 (179,182,183) - Remove? Reason above ^ same
   16. 00:41:396 (186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206) - This buildup makes for good 1/4s! Well done!! gg
   17. 00:44:878 (212) - Remove? Feels a bit unnecessary same
   18. 00:45:325 (215) - ^, to keep rhythm i don't think i should put break here
   19. 00:45:950 (218) - Remove? same
   20. 00:48:807 (236) - ^, I think power buildup starts at 00:48:896 - with vocals+background music for bass?1/2 bass=1/4 in Inner Oni for me
   21. 00:57:378 (277) - Change to d? To keep the downward flow of the tone k=snare
   22. 01:01:664 (303) - Remove? I feel a bit unnecessary move instead
   23. 01:03:450 (316) - Same ^ change pattern instead
   24. 01:08:003 (347) - Change to k? I think it helps keeping the rhyhtm ok
   25. 01:09:432 - You could add a note here, to maintain the momentum ok thanks i found better pattern
   26. 01:19:878 - Can add a k here, sounds and flows good imo good
   27. 01:38:450 (24) - Can be removed, feels unnecessary
   28. 01:38:896 (26) - Can be removed to cohere with the rhythm
   29. 01:39:521 (32) - ^
       same as previous same pattern
   30. 01:52:110 (100,101,102,103) - Change these last 4 notes to k? To variate a bit good

Tried to be a bit specific, but the rhythm needs some tweaks still. Never give up shione!

Good luck!!!