1. Peace (3.95 stars, 761 notes)

Shadw wrote:

yay you finally mapped this ^.^

alright so
(08/30/2015)
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Artist: 夢子 it's ゆめこ mb
Title: アヤノの幸福理論
i think this is right Thanks

also it should probably not be more than od 7.5 considering the pace of the song Yea

08/31/2015 mod
- try the soft hitsound sample set :3 i think it sounds better with the music. i have no experience with hitsounding so just see for yourself ;w; Yea
- 01:37:897 (1,2,3) - i think you can afford to make these jumps smaller, when i played this, it didn't really feel right I changed the combo color to bright red to hint at the later section. I also buffed the jump on the second verse
- 03:22:904 (2) - what do you think about ctrl+g'ing this and 03:23:253 (3) - I think it's too early in the build up for jumps.
- 03:27:264 (3,4) - ctrl+g this and ctrl+g 03:27:613 (5,7) - I think current jump pattern is better
- 04:08:949 (2) - maybe ctrl+g would work? I like the up/down motion xD

this is looking good, but i believe some people might get butthurt over the difference in difficulty between the first half of the map and the second half. I think the transition is quite fine, but i also think that you should watch for some jumps that might be too big like 03:33:718 (1,2) - , 03:39:299 (1,2) - , 03:42:090 (1,2) - , and the list goes on I think theyre fine since 1/1 spaced jumps are much easier to aim than 1/2 jumps

anyway there ya go :3 my mod

Yoges wrote:

Hi, Here for M4LM?
Map

[General]
Timing is slightly off. A more accurate offset is 1634. (Move everything +10 ms) Oh, cool. sure.

[Peace]
00:35:804 (2,3,4) - Nothing really wrong here It's just I'd do something like this For me it feels a lot nicer to play since the 3 flows into the 4 at a wider angle. Nah, i prefer the current pattern, i want a downward motion not upward.
02:43:485 (1) - Rotate this clockwise ever so slightly slightly (4~ degrees) so that the tangent created by the 6,5,1 flow better into the curve and then fix the DS between 02:43:485 (1,2,3) It already looks fine to me though x___x

Uhh... yeah. I tried, You were right when you said this would be hard to mod. My mod is quite short I'm sorry (Hence why I wrote "M4LM?").

KASUM1 wrote:

Hello~ for my monstrata ♥

Your bg should be 1366x768 [/color]

00:03:029 (3,1) - these 2 cross each other Yea.
00:10:354 (2,3) - try to move them around to avoid overlap Nothing wrong with this overlap. It's perfectly readable.
00:16:633 (2,2) - how about stack these? maybe It looks better It's a different pattern tho D:.
02:08:604 (4,1) - try to stack these with the slider trail Nahhh, I'd lose the triangle pattern if i stacked. Also no one will notice the stack in game play but ppl will notice the triangle.
02:29:193 (8,4) - ^ Nahhhh
03:09:658 (3,6) - stack with the slider head Different pattern tho...
03:20:472 (3,5) - overlap I think? It's intentional, nothing wrong with overlaps xPP idk why you think overlaps are bad xD.
03:21:867 (6,3) - stack with the slider trail Nah . thats a different pattern :__; also no one will notice it xP.
04:26:052 (3,4) - stack with the slider head I think it looks better Doesn't improve the pattern tho
04:55:703 (4,2) - stack with the slider trail to avoid overlap and looks better It looks better like this D: cuz slider 2 is half-overlapping the circle which is cool.
05:19:277 (2,3) - overlap or they are crossing each other Yea thats the point xPP

I hope my mod helps ♥

ProfessionalBox wrote:

Hello! M4M as we discussed

Peace

- Consider changing the combo color 5 since it's a bit too dark I'd say. Maybe go with more of a gray combo color? I think it would also demonstrate the sadness well if not even better. Also I'm curious to know why you have 2 combo colors that are the same ? Yaaaa Grey's nice too. And I think two red's are fine but i can doublecheck. I wanted to alternate between Red > Black > Red > Brown but i didn't want to have to use color hax every 2 measures (im lazy okay) so i used two red combo colors instead.
- The Background pic is too large at the moment ! RIP RINGATING QUEUE I CRI

00:07:215 (1,2) - I think this looks a bit weird, maybe try something like this I actually really like this kind of structure. It's straightforward to read imo and kind of fun to play lol. I'd prefer to keep it.

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00:16:633 (2,4) - I'd blanket that xD Same
00:43:488 (1,2,3) - I'm unsure of what instrument you're following here but since you follow the vocals afterwards maybe try changing the rhythm according to the vocals here? I wanted to follow the main melody here and keep it 1/1 rhythm for the first measure so players get accustomed to the rhythm/spacing. I follow that rhythm a lot later so I think having a simpler rhythm here is fine. The map is all about progressively getting more difficult so I think it fits xD.

This is what I'd do

01:04:418 (4) - Is this slider intended to be a bit off or did you just forget to make it smooth ? Oops fixed.
02:26:053 (7,2) - Not such a big deal but these could be stacked for naziness Yaaa that was the intention/
03:30:937 (1,2) - Maybe try this rhythm here? I prefer this rhythm. I don't use 3/8 sliders a lot, so i kind of wanted to use a different rhythm than the normal 1/4 rhythm.

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03:47:342 (6,7) - I think that claps on these would really emphasize this part nicely! Okay!
03:54:308 (4,3) - Again with the nazi stack lmao Fix~
03:58:494 (5,1) - This is a more noticable one and I'd definetly stack these properly. The (5) is off by a grid or two. Oh yea. fixed this, also removed the overlap onto 4 cuz that wasn't intended.
04:09:831 (5,1) - This is probably intentional but the flow here would be cool if you made the (1) like this Ah, yea i originally had that, but i wanted a more downward motion so the slider-end would end somewhere close to the bottom of the screen. That way i can use a Ctrl+J jump pattern.

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04:20:471 (3,4) - Consider adding whistles on the heads of these since they would emphasize the 3/4 rhythm nicely! (Also 4:20 blaze it) Nice
04:26:052 (3,4) - Same here Nice
04:29:540 - Maybe make the break begin 04:29:715 - Here instead. I think it would make the effect more "dramatic" since the vocals begin at 04:29:889 - again. Or you could move it to where the vocals begin, that works fine too I think lmao Moved it to where the vocals begin. Ahh this is really nice, thanks <3
05:22:875 (1) - Awesome <3

That's it for the mod, hope it helped! Also I didn't entirely focus on the hitsounding since it appeared smooth and simple thus only pointing out a few of those. But I think that what I pointed out were absolute necessities and therefore I noticed the lack of them while listening :p

CrystilonZ wrote:

M4M from your queue

[Peace]
Countdown ? Removed
00:04:424 (1,2) - blanket is quite off Fixed
00:08:261 (2) - I'd rather you moved the tail towards the right; kind of parallel-ish to that 00:07:215 (1) - It's fine as is. You can't make a straight slider parallel to a curved one anyways.
00:19:773 (3,4,5) - make them a triangle. maybe No, This is better.
00:28:139 (3) - move this one downwards to improve the flow I changed the slider instead.
00:34:418 (5) - around 368/348 to make a triangle Different pattern here.
00:40:349 (6) - 288/236 No...
00:49:069 (1) - 196/140No...
01:09:651 (3) - Move this one downwards would improve the flow I like this up/down movement.
01:22:907 (2) - curve this one slightly more Okay
02:30:588 (3,6) - overlap It's fine imo.
02:54:658 (1) - blanket off Fixed
02:56:053 (3) - curve that turn would perfectly blanket 02:55:356 (2) - I want a cornered blanket.
04:08:959 (2) - Ctrl G on this one would flow better, I guess I want the flowbreak here for emphasis.
03:23:611 (4) - spacing off - about 496/172 Nah, this is very straightforward, and I wanted a jump here anyways.
03:23:263 (3,1) - blanket them? Nah, different pattern.

Beautiful song, beautiful map
Have a star
Good luck

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  Peace

1. 00:11:750 (5) - whistle on the head works well, piano on this is very similar to the one you catch on 00:11:052 (4) -
2. 00:21:860 (2) - feels a bit odd to not have a whislte on this with how high pitched the sound landing on this is. would probably just make 00:21:163 (1) - a finish then add a whistle, this way you don't have two whistles in a row here which would sounds a little weird I think + the song emphasized properly
3. 00:33:721 (4) - shouldn't this be a whistle? or is this supposed to have no hitsound at all on it? cuz 00:36:511 (4) - has one too
4. 00:43:488 (1,2,3,4) - wouldn't using the same rythm for this and for 00:49:069 (1,2,3,4) - make a little more sense? I mean it might just be because I personally prefer following vocals more but eeeh your call probably doesn't matter too much
5. 01:03:721 (2) - would be cool if this had a whistle too I think, very audible piano + it works well with the start of the new track on 01:05:814 (1) - I THINK
6. 01:27:790 (7) - this has a really dull drum land on it, and I think it would be kinda cool if you could catch this somehow, like maybe just put a drum-clap or just the drum-sampleset on it. Personally I found that reducing the volume by 10% and then putting drum-asmpleset on it works well
7. 01:39:302 (1) - hmmm I kinda think that a finish here sounds a little more fitting than a whistle
8. 01:56:046 (1) - this on the other hand would sound better without the finish I think, the song doesn't really feel as 'explosive' as the hitsounds would suggest I think, whistle only works just fine
9. 02:03:023 (5) - works better as a finish I think
10. 02:05:814 (5) - ^ I guess the same goes for similar patterns in the first kiai (only two more of those I think) extra emphasize on the piano landing on these notes just feels..gud, having them stand out a little against the rest to make it less monotonous..your call!
11. 02:29:193 (8,3,6) - the only thing that I found was sorta ugly so far, the overlap between these two :c
12. 02:43:495 (1) - finish here feels more appropriate, does a better job of emphasizing the new track
13. 03:00:588 (2,3) - Blanket is noticeable OFF please fix ASAP
14. 03:03:030 (1) - missing hitsound on this? or was this supposed to not have anything on it
15. 03:09:309 (2) - shouldn't there be a greenline on this with 35% volume, just like you did for the previous one on 03:06:518 (2) - ? o and I kinda think that just using claps instead of the drum sampleset thing on these works well, song noticeably picked up in tempo so having the hitsounds a little less subtle works well I think
16. 03:41:052 (2) - drum clap on this goes along well with the dull drums landing on this I think
17. 03:54:308 (4) - personally think that something like 97/95 for this woulda been could cuz it lets you keep a little more of the momentum that was previously build up
18. 04:20:819 (4) - clap with drum adittions feels like it goes along better with the drum landing on this
19. 04:49:075 (1) - green line here is technically unneccessary, doesn't really do any harm though (I think?) so idk just um saying
20. 04:46:982 (2) - why the whistle on the tail here when the piano is landing on the tail?
    
    i tried
    
    Good Luck!

Peachtrees wrote:

• eyy
  
  Peace

1. 00:11:750 (5) - whistle on the head works well, piano on this is very similar to the one you catch on 00:11:052 (4) - Nice
2. 00:21:860 (2) - feels a bit odd to not have a whislte on this with how high pitched the sound landing on this is. would probably just make 00:21:163 (1) - a finish then add a whistle, this way you don't have two whistles in a row here which would sounds a little weird I think + the song emphasized properly Okay sure, added to similar sections.
3. 00:33:721 (4) - shouldn't this be a whistle? or is this supposed to have no hitsound at all on it? cuz 00:36:511 (4) - has one too Fixed
4. 00:43:488 (1,2,3,4) - wouldn't using the same rythm for this and for 00:49:069 (1,2,3,4) - make a little more sense? I mean it might just be because I personally prefer following vocals more but eeeh your call probably doesn't matter too much I wanted something easier here and just follow metronome rhythm before switching to vocals later.
5. 01:03:721 (2) - would be cool if this had a whistle too I think, very audible piano + it works well with the start of the new track on 01:05:814 (1) - I THINK I think it's too calm a section to have so many hitsounds. Just keeping it simple here lol.
6. 01:27:790 (7) - this has a really dull drum land on it, and I think it would be kinda cool if you could catch this somehow, like maybe just put a drum-clap or just the drum-sampleset on it. Personally I found that reducing the volume by 10% and then putting drum-asmpleset on it works well nice. Added drum-clap
7. 01:39:302 (1) - hmmm I kinda think that a finish here sounds a little more fitting than a whistle Yaa
8. 01:56:046 (1) - this on the other hand would sound better without the finish I think, the song doesn't really feel as 'explosive' as the hitsounds would suggest I think, whistle only works just fine Hmmm i prefer to keep it here just to continue this finish/whistle hitsounding pattern. it feels more consistent for me.
9. 02:03:023 (5) - works better as a finish I think I prefer just using whistles here for consistency. Too many finishes xPP
10. 02:05:814 (5) - ^ I guess the same goes for similar patterns in the first kiai (only two more of those I think) extra emphasize on the piano landing on these notes just feels..gud, having them stand out a little against the rest to make it less monotonous..your call!
11. 02:29:193 (8,3,6) - the only thing that I found was sorta ugly so far, the overlap between these two :c T___T it's a really fun pattern to play tho. ugh i want to keep, rip xPP.
12. 02:43:495 (1) - finish here feels more appropriate, does a better job of emphasizing the new trackOkay
13. 03:00:588 (2,3) - Blanket is noticeable OFF please fix ASAP FIXED!!!1
14. 03:03:030 (1) - missing hitsound on this? or was this supposed to not have anything on it Fixed
15. 03:09:309 (2) - shouldn't there be a greenline on this with 35% volume, just like you did for the previous one on 03:06:518 (2) - ? o and I kinda think that just using claps instead of the drum sampleset thing on these works well, song noticeably picked up in tempo so having the hitsounds a little less subtle works well I think It's a bit louder imo so i used 45% instead xD
16. 03:41:052 (2) - drum clap on this goes along well with the dull drums landing on this I think yaaa
17. 03:54:308 (4) - personally think that something like 97/95 for this woulda been could cuz it lets you keep a little more of the momentum that was previously build up Oh, that looks cool. Used another similar location
18. 04:20:819 (4) - clap with drum adittions feels like it goes along better with the drum landing on this Okay added
19. 04:49:075 (1) - green line here is technically unneccessary, doesn't really do any harm though (I think?) so idk just um saying Oh, it was intentional until i raised the volume of everything else by 10%. Forgot to lower this one back to 20% lol.
20. 04:46:982 (2) - why the whistle on the tail here when the piano is landing on the tail? This whole section i wanted to focus on the bass instead so I hitsounded bass instead of piano lol.
    
    i tried
    
    Good Luck!

1. The color grey, change to color darkr to better read with whole Video grey
2. Remove useless Red line 02:12:798 and some other, this thing the beat were off, for now look better
3. after remove some red line the Monstrata told me that he LOVE change MANUAL to fix ALL GREEN LINE, this took me wait more 30 mins GG