1. Hard (2,93 stars, 98 notes)
2. Normal (1,64 stars, 73 notes)

Hathz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~

[Hard]

1. Drain time is right on the limit of the ranking criteria (30 seconds, 45 seconds recommended). Why not also map from here 00:03:651 - to here 00:26:743 - ? Im lucky, the drain time is 30 seconds ! I think map in 00:03:651 at 00:26:743 would be boring
   
2. AR is a bit low, use 7.0 or higher otherwise reading this is a pain Sorry, i dont understand this :'(
3. 00:40:361 (2) - Maybe end this slider on the red tick here 00:40:953 - and put a circle where the slider's end is now (also i recommend not stacking these 00:40:361 (2,2) - ) its ok
4. 00:49:834 (2,2) - I'm not too keen on this stack here, even with increased approach rate it's a bit hard to read & play I think I little change this, i hope its ok !
   
   To address your problems:
5. 00:33:650 (2) - Yes this is fine in a Hard difficulty, but your star rating and overall difficulty is a bit low. If you make a Normal difficulty which is a lot easier and don't use any jumps and overlaps there, then this is fine. Ok. I change overall dificulty 6 > 7
6. 00:37:993 (1) - You may want to avoid overlaps like this if possible, for this difficulty rating.
7. 00:43:519 (3) - Fine
8. 00:45:887 (1) - Still perfectly readable.
9. 00:53:782 (1) - ^ Nice, thanks you !
   
   You're fine with the patterns listed above IF your normal is significantly easier and uses no jumps/overlaps (which it shouldn't anyway)

Good luck Yes, u too !

1. Please uncheck "Letterbox during breaks"
2. The BG size is incorrect. Please change the size to 1366X768.

Kyle Y wrote:

m4m

[General]
You need a diff below 2 stars, or it is 5 minutes or above. Otherwise it is unrankable, please read the ranking rules. I know
00:03:651 - You put a red line here, therefore I suggest you map from here. My map last 30 seconds its ok
Becasue 00:56:940 (1) - this spinner, I know you what to make to 30 sec drain time, but there is very low volume after 00:58:519 - , therefore, the spinner is not that suitable in this case. Its change
Tags del: Absolute One Touhou , becasue repeated the artist, title, or the source. I delete "touhou" but i dont delete "absolute one" beacause its a name of album
[Hard]
00:31:677 - mod from here
00:35:229 (2) - ds here ok
00:35:624 (4) - I think red dot can be remove, becasue its shape looks weird i arrange this
00:39:572 (1) - seldom do we use reverse 1/2 beat twice in mapping nowadays. just change to slider + circle yes its ok now
00:41:940 (5,2) - this overlap is not good look, please change it its change
00:43:519 (3) - same, just change to slider +circle ok
00:45:098 (5) - if you want to use blanket, then blanket better i dont want use blanket
00:46:676 (2) - over-curved slider not good look for me.
00:49:834 (2) - same
00:52:992 (3) - end at 00:53:584 - and add a circle at 00:53:683 -. becasue there is an ending sound 00:53:584 - , better not skip it.
00:56:940 (1) - spinner end at 00:58:519 - , noted that a diff MUST be length 30 sec at least. I have to decide not to put spinner

Aihuro wrote:

Hey! NM from my queue.
Well, here goes nothing.

1. Please uncheck "Letterbox during breaks" okay
2. The BG size is incorrect. Please change the size to 1366X768. its change !

Hard:

1. 00:36:808 (2,3,4,5,1) - This is very nazi. i love this expression x) Please try to avoid this overlap. It's also very hard to play since you stacked them on each other like that. Try something to 00:37:794 (5) - to X: 284 Y: 264. Then stack this note: 00:37:992 (1) - on this hitcircle: 00:37:597 (4) - Then move this slider: 00:38:387 (2) - to here X: 80 Y: 252. It looks better imo and also plays better.
2. 00:38:782 (3,1) - Stack this note: 00:39:572 (1) - properly on 00:38:782 (3) - tail.
3. 00:39:572 (1,2,3) - Mm. instead of repeating the slider, why not add two hitcircles here: 00:39:966 (2) - and also here: 00:40:163 (3) - . And you are probably wondering how you should place them, just try something like this. If you don't understand, don't hesitate to ask me in PM or in-game.
4. 00:43:519 (3) - Same here. I suggest you do something else, instead of repeating the slider over and over. Try something enjoyable. Add maybe note or another slider.
5. 00:48:255 (4) - Move this slider a bit to the right. It will look something more like this. It looks more polished.
6. 00:56:150 (3,4,5,6) - Why not place the hitcircles like this instead. Move this note: 00:56:150 (3) - to X: 176 Y: 212, then this note: 00:56:348 (4) - to X: 256 Y: 184, then this note: 00:56:545 (5) - to X: 316 Y: 244, then this note: 00:56:742 (6) - to X: 240 Y: 280. It is much more fun to play and also improves the flow.
7. Overall, this diff is very well made :3 oh i redden ! Good Job!
   I made everything that you have me say!

I suggest you add maybe a normal. Since the song lenght is very short.
Well, hoped my mod was useful. Good Luck with this map of yours!~ Thanks you realy good mod you too good luck !

scooderic wrote:

[General]
Tags not unified. Junko & Hecatia Lapislazuli should appear in both Normal and Hard diffs. ok

[Normal]
00:56:545 (5,6) - It's too hard to read this in a Normal diff.
00:52:598 (2) - Move to x345 y233 better.
its change
[Hard]
Reduce the volume of quiet part, it sounds noisy. And mute the silder slide sound. its ok
00:48:255 (4) - Should be a slider and a circle here due to the accent. yep i change this
00:56:545 (5,6) - One slider will be better I think. i prefer with one circle and slider

KASUM1 wrote:

Hello~! As requested from my queue

[General]


[Normal]
00:35:624 (3,4) - overlap

That's all I could find , good mapset

Sorry for the short mod , your map is perfect for me ty ! you deserve your kodusu