1. Easy (1,27 stars, 33 notes)
2. Free (2,75 stars, 85 notes)
3. Normal (1,83 stars, 59 notes)

#1 mapset

Big thanks to Zaphkael who helped me a lot

Easy by Me
Normal by Me
Free by Me

Wafu
Cherry Blossom
Cherry Blossom
Cerulean Veyron

Storyboard optimization & lossless mp3 by Wafu!

Modders!

by order
Hullahopp
klonoa
- Castaway -
UltraRik
-Hakurei-
CrystilonZ
Geronimaa
Dogu-
Charles445
OblivioN
DahplA
Wafu
Kyle Y
Snaggletooth
Nozhomi
Arcubin (metadata)
NISSAN001
Hard
G3m4sSt4ffLP
Kinshara
Zaphkael
sheela901
Cherry Blossom
- Milhofo -
NolanM
Lumael
Modem
Cerulean Veyron

klonoa wrote:

Bonjour. Salut !
Here's a very short mod.

In general, i'm sure that you know that the song has a very long beginning. well all this empty space is rather useless since we have the option to skip all of that. you can find the link here if you want to shorten the mp3 (or if you want, just leave it as it is, i'm just trying to read what the rules says haha). I know this, but if I cut the music, I need to retime everything, with the SB, I'll see with the BN if it's a big problem, 'cuz you know...

Easy
00:52:926 (2) - this slider should'nt overlap the previous one. I dunno why, but changed
01:08:246 (3) - i think this slider should just be 1 white tic long, and not 2. it follows better with the up-coming spinner. Changed

Normal
I feel like this difficulty should be CS:2.5 instead of 3.1. but that's just my opinion I can't change this because if I make it CS=2.5, the diff will be an Easy one.
00:59:735 (1,2) - this jump feels slightly awkward considering how the rest of the map flows. maybe try to rotate it or change it's position. No changes

Hard
00:45:267 (1) - move this slider down a bit (awkward jump). Done
00:49:522 (3,4) - i don't really like this overlap. it feels a bit weird. I've tried to change it, I don't know if it's correct, just tell me ^^
00:52:501 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:05:267 (8) - move this stream down a bit, the jump is just a little too far. Changed!

Overall: really nice song and beatmap! Thanks c:
Bonne chance avec ta chanson Merci

Updated! Thanks

UltraRik wrote:

Hello heres the mod ~

[Easy]
Your offset should be at the very first beat, meaning here it would go on 00:24:841 - Done
Tho I suggest you remove the spinner, since the intro is the same and nothing calls for a spinner in this specific moment,
deleting it and adding a circle at 00:28:139 - (really not sure about this since it's a blue tick) I have put a spinner because of the blue tick, so no changes.

00:52:926 (2) - I think you could easily avoid the overlap here, but it doesn't seem that big of a deal I don't find how :/ But I've tried to correct it
00:54:629 (3) - Try reshaping to fit the sudden vocals better, and to look even cleaner I think it already looks clean, I'll check if I need to change things about it

The mp3 you are using starts extremly quiet, imo it would be fine to trim the first 5-10 seconds, so that
your map doesn't start at half of the song. Yeah, I know, but the problem is to retime everything, for the beat, it's ok, but for the storyboard, it'll be a full mess

[Normal]
Same thing about trimming and the spinner at the start. Done for the offset

Your SV seems a bit much to me, maybe use 1.2? Explained below

It doesn't make much sence to have a big difference between SV and DS, because movement shouldn't vary so much. I didn't mean to do that ^.^'

I like your song setup in both Easy and Normal, but I'm a bit confused about the CS 3.1 here lol
Did you try to manipulate the star difficulty with it or something? If so, that's actually okay with me tbh The CS & the SV is for the star diff., I've sized up the beatmap ^^

[Hard]
-||- offset -||- spinner Done for the offset

00:50:586 (5) - Maybe just a bit much of a jump from the slider end Done
00:51:650 (8) - ^ Done
01:03:990 - Seening how short of a map this is I wouldn't ignore this beat I'm following the rythm of the song, no changes
01:07:394 - ^ ^

Well, overall I like how you mapped it, but it seems to me like you had generally low spacing, and then sudden difficulty spikes in
terms of distance. I would consider spacing out the diff in general some more and nerfing the jumps like ones I pointed out. I've just tried to get some lower jumps ^^

Overall this was a very very very good map. Wow... thanks!
Nice work work with combos (I'm a combo nazi xD), good hitsounding, I love how you keep the HP above OD in setup..
had to give some genuine effort for this one.

Hope this nitpicking helps, Good Luck! ^^

1. 00:52:075 (1,2) - some newbies might find this one confusing. make that tail (2) up
2. 00:54:629 (3) - DS

1. 00:42:714 (2) - remove whistle
2. 00:45:692 (2) - ^ (head)
3. 00:59:735 (2) - DS
4. 01:01:011 (4) - DS check
5. 01:01:863 (5) - DS
6. 01:03:139 (2) - remove whistle
7. 01:06:543 (2) - ^

1. 00:44:416 (7) - remove whistle
2. 00:47:394 (5) - ^ (tail)
3. 00:51:224 (8) - ^ (head)

-Hakurei- wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:52:075 (1,2) - some newbies might find this one confusing. make that tail (2) up Changed for anything else, I just can't put the tail up
2. 00:54:629 (3) - DS Done

[Normal]

1. 00:42:714 (2) - remove whistle Done
2. 00:45:692 (2) - ^ (head) Done
3. 00:59:735 (2) - DS Between 1 and 2?
4. 01:01:011 (4) - DS check Done
5. 01:01:863 (5) - DS Done
6. 01:03:139 (2) - remove whistle
7. 01:06:543 (2) - ^ Done

[Hard]

1. 00:44:416 (7) - remove whistle Done
2. 00:47:394 (5) - ^ (tail) Done
3. 00:51:224 (8) - ^ (head) Done

GL! Thanks! c:

CrystilonZ wrote:

requested from my queue

[General]
Reduce overall volume for, like, 15-20 Done
idk that 00:24:841 (1) - will upset players or not, that's a looooooooooooong wait for a short map No changes, explained before
You really should snap that preview point to a 1/4 bar Done
nice song ! Thanks!


[Easy]
00:47:820 (3,1,2) - hmm, here seems to be kind of sloppy, blanket 1 and 2 maybe? I like what I've done
00:54:629 (3) - idk what's you purpose here. I think your sliders are pretty clean, so this doesn't fit much in this map No changes
01:02:288 (1) - hp bar Done
01:03:139 (2) - improve this slider, it seems edgy Done
^ maybe blanketing 01:04:841 (3) - in the process

[Normal]
00:42:714 (2,3,4,5) - use some imagination here I kept what I've done
00:45:692 (2,3,4) - ^ and 00:47:182 (4) - fix that stack ^ & done
00:48:671 (1,2) - fix blanket Done
00:58:033 (4,1,2) - I understand that you want to do a pattern here, but jumps in normal are forbidden obligated in normal Done

[Hard]
00:46:969 (4) - blanket 3 and stack the tail with 00:45:905 (2) - I've kept what I've done
01:02:288 (1,2,3) - check the DS here, it's pretty random click here to check the flow

That's all from me XD
It looks fine, but I think it needs some more mods to get through the ranking process.
Good luck! Hope someone rank this Thanks!

Geronimaa wrote:

Had a little chat

IRC MOD

14:32 Geronimaa: heyy
14:33 Z e r s s: Hey!
14:33 Geronimaa: wanna do irc mod?
14:33 Z e r s s: Which map ?
14:34 *Geronimaa is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/717690 FELT - Freedom]
14:34 Z e r s s: Let's go :)
14:34 Geronimaa: ok, maybe increase OD?
14:35 Z e r s s: Which diffs. ? xD
14:35 Geronimaa: hard :D
14:36 Z e r s s: Okay, i've increased it a bit ^^
14:36 Geronimaa: maybe disable countdown?
14:36 Geronimaa: its kind of ugly for a calm map like this
14:37 Z e r s s: yup, you're right (my skin disabled the countdown xD)
14:37 Geronimaa: :D
14:37 Geronimaa: anyway
14:38 Geronimaa: isnt that volume ab it high?
14:38 Geronimaa: maybe 50% 60%?
14:39 Z e r s s: everybody wants me to decrease the volume xD
14:39 Z e r s s: done
14:39 Geronimaa: spacing here is kind of weird 00:50:586 (5,6,7,8) - 
14:40 Geronimaa: and maybe triangle? 00:50:798 (6,7,8) - 
14:40 Z e r s s: What can you recommand ? :)
14:40 Z e r s s: I'll try :)
14:40 Geronimaa: do this http://puu.sh/ipDNw/1cd06f1dc0.jpg
14:41 Z e r s s: The problem here is the 3 and the 8 :/
14:41 Geronimaa: make this stream actually straight 00:55:054 (8,9,10,11,1) - 
14:41 Geronimaa: then do this http://puu.sh/ipDQZ/3632250e2b.jpg
14:42 Geronimaa: better?
14:42 Geronimaa: with 8 sliderend stacked onto 3
14:42 Z e r s s: Is 6 stacked into 2 ? xD
14:42 Geronimaa: yes
14:43 Z e r s s: I've found something to do with :)
14:43 Geronimaa: this stream looks ragged imo 
14:43 Geronimaa: 01:01:863 (7,8,9,10,1) - 
14:43 Geronimaa: do 1,1x spacingt here 01:06:118 (2,3) - 
14:43 Geronimaa: and do a triangle here 01:06:543 (3,4,6) - 
14:44 *Geronimaa is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/717691 FELT - Freedom [Normal]]
14:44 Geronimaa: this blanket could be better 00:47:820 (5,1) - 
14:45 Geronimaa: and do simly cs 3.5
14:45 Geronimaa: also ar5
14:46 *Geronimaa is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/717689 FELT - Freedom [Easy]]
14:46 Geronimaa: this slider should be remade 00:54:629 (3) - 
14:46 Geronimaa: its kind of ugly tbh
14:47 Geronimaa: not sure if overlaps are ok on easy 00:58:033 (3,2) - 
14:47 Geronimaa: wel and thats it
14:47 Geronimaa: nice map
14:47 Z e r s s: I think it's ok, BN never told me about this
14:47 Z e r s s: thanks! :)
14:47 Z e r s s: nice mod too ^^
14:47 Geronimaa: thank
14:47 Geronimaa: s

Nice song and mapset, gl with ranking

Dogu- wrote:

Hey! Here's a little mod on the hard difficulty

00:44:416 (7,8) - The spacing between these two feels doesn't really flow I'll try to change this to something better, but during the "one-tick" break, the player have the time to change direction, but I'll try ^^
00:55:480 to 01:08:459 - This part doesn't differ too much from the rest and is the same difficulty, so the kiai time doesn't really fit I've put the kiai time because of two reasons: the voice & coz maps needs kiai time xD

That's it tbh, it's a good and short map! Thanks

OblivioN wrote:

M4M www
▇▇▇▇——dangerous
▇▇▇▇——warning
▇▇▇▇——normally suggestion

[General]

1. Drain time should be 80% of the whole length. 'kay, added a spinner xD

[Hard]

1. 00:50:586 (6) - how about move to 151|227 ？make 00:50:161 (4,5,6,7) - to be a square ? It's actually an pentagon with the 00:49:522 (3) -'s end
2. 00:52:075 (1,2) - not really beautiful ;w; try :http://puu.sh/ipR0Y/2e206edc5a.png meh jumps
3. 00:56:118 (2,3,4) - try this?: http://puu.sh/ipQff/244e261030.png I prefer what I've done

[Normal]

1. some anchors are outside :00:55:480 (1) - , 00:58:033 (4) - They're outside of the field but it's ok, it's if it's outside of an 4/3 screen during a testplay

[Easy]

1. Rules:All repeat arrows on sliders must be visible. :00:44:416 (3,2) - &01:04:841 (3,2) - The first object is disappearing while the repeat arrow is created, so this is visible
2. 00:56:331 (2) - anchor is outside Same as said above

after you fixed them， feel free to pm me to help you check the beatmap x)
good luck.

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding Team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General

1. Not a huge thing, but I'm just wondering why the background is 1365 x 768 and not 1366 x 768 'lil explication (feat. Paint) link
2. There's some slight delay at the start of the soft-hitclap.wav before the sound actually plays, which is some cases is unrankable. I've edited the sound in Audacity. I recommend you use this: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/911 ... itclap.wav Done
3. I don't know how well the difficulty spread will go here. It goes from 0.31 star rating from Easy to Normal, then 1.35 star rating onto Hard. You'll have to fix this on your own (unless you ask a BN if it's alright) I'll see this with BN, but I've checked my map with, like, 2 or 3 BN and no-one told me about that

Hard

1. 00:45:905 (2) - This slider is in an odd position, since it starts on a red tick. It gives a weird sound. I recommend changing to 2 circles here Done

Normal

1. 00:59:735 (2) - Fix blanket Done
2. 01:00:373 (3) - This shape almost overlaps itself. I recommend changing this, as it may be hard to read Done
3. 01:03:778 (3) - ^ Done

Easy

1. 00:51:224 (3) - Fix blanket slightly Done

Mostly general issues, nothing major in your maps. :D

FELT <3 <33

1. The background you are using is 16:9, but the original isn't, thus you are using stretched background (it's wider than it is supposed to be). I am not saying it is unrankable, but it does slightly decrease the appearance level of your beatmap. You should most likely use this cut of original version, which fits 16:9 perfectly and doesn't contain any noise which current does. If you agree with this, don't forget to replace blured version with this one. You already mentioned original way 1600x900, but original really was 1600x1200, someone just resized it without ratio and you got that version.
2. Storyboard is nice and simple, but you use too complicated things and increase the SB load, while it is not even needed. For optimization, I recommend you to do all these things. Firstly remove SB/black.png, that's because black color is easy to make without using pictures. Another problem is that all objects are rendered within whole time of the map, that sometimes increases SB load to 4x while there is nothing shown at all. I can recommend you to replace whole .osb file with this optimized code, I can guarantee you it is much more acceptable and technically is better. Decreased SB load from ~3.0x to ~1.33x, which is pretty cool difference considering it was just removing unnecessary things.
   
   .osb Code

   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
   Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"bg.jpg",0,0
   //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
   //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
   //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"bg.jpg",320,240
    S,0,41756,,0.625
    F,0,41756,69097,1
    F,0,69097,69203,1,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/blur.jpg",320,240
    S,0,21437,,0.625
    F,0,21437,28139,0,0.6
    F,0,28139,,0.6
    F,0,28139,28246,1
    F,0,28246,35054,1,0.2
    F,0,35054,41756,0.2,1
    F,0,41756,41863,1,0
    F,0,45160,45267,0,0.5
    F,0,45267,45373,0.5,0
    F,0,48565,48671,0,0.5
    F,0,48671,48777,0.5,0
    F,0,51969,52075,0,0.5
    F,0,52075,52182,0.5,0
    F,0,55373,55480,0,0.5
    F,0,55480,55586,0.5,0
    F,0,58777,58884,0,0.5
    F,0,58884,58990,0.5,0
    F,0,62182,62288,0,0.5
    F,0,62288,62394,0.5,0
    F,0,65586,65692,0,0.5
    F,0,65692,65799,0.5,0
    F,0,68990,69097,0,0.8
    F,0,69097,75905,0.8,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/credits.png",320,240
    S,0,31650,,0.5
    F,0,31650,33777,0,0.55
    M,0,31650,36756,534,345,409,348
    F,0,33777,34629,0.55,0.525
    F,0,34629,36703,0.525,0
    F,0,36703,36756,0
   //Storyboard Sound Samples

3. It would be nice if you always used mp3 of the highest quality possible - EAC of the album are available all over the internet, I took one and converted the mp3 to highest rankable quality. There is not much distortion, but cutting the song on 15kHz instead of the other frequencies which you hear is not necessary. You might use this one. Offset is the same, there is a minimal difference, but that's less than 1ms, so you cannot really change it.
4. You should remove Cold_Snap, because you already have both Cold and Snap in tags, so it won't help in searching at all, it's just duplicating stuff which is already there. On the other hand you should add 東方, Project, Touhou to tags as the whole album is just Touhou arrange - This one is original song, but still, it's related to it because rest of album is Touhou arange.
5. It would be more sensible if preview time was on 00:55:480 - , it sounds quite randomly placed when it's not on important beat.
6. 00:40:161 - Increasing volume to 30% on all difficulties would be nice here, because you might notice there is some kind of more strong sound than on the calm start of the spinner. End of spinner would be obviously 15% as start so the beat is not loud.
7. 00:36:756 - Just a design related thing, but you might want to move the pause here on all diffs by dragging it on timing line so it would fit to the beat and would be consistent within all difficulties.
8. 01:12:501 - Ending a spinner on this place on all difficulties would be more sensible, becasue the sound here is much more brighter than sound on 01:12:714 - . Also don't forget, you might adjust volume, I feel the spinner would deserve it.

1. You should most likely use AR 7 and HP 5.5 to improve the spread a little.
2. 00:48:246 (7,8,9,10) - I dislike one thing on all streams in your map. There is nothing like overmap, but they don't reflect the music correctly. You always map either piano or strong drums, but the piano is only on 00:48:246 (7,9) - while there actually is sound on 00:48:352 (8,10) - , but it is really soft kind of cymbal, that means you barely hear it in music. That doesn't require a removal, but the volume should be adjusted - You can use more complicated way, keeping first note the same, second 30%, 3rd 60%, fourth 30% and then normal part starts (the slider), so again 60%. Or simplier, you can just put 30% on 2nd note and 60% on next pattern (that would emphasize that whole this pattern is fading out). That means it would look like this screenshot. Problem here is you barely hear it in song and this sound in map is quite low in comparsion. If you agree, apply it on all streams, otherwise it would only cause inconsistency.
   1st option - 30% 60% 30% 60%

   
   2nd option - 30% 60%

   
3. 00:50:161 (4,5,6,7) - This idea is fine, but the way it is done isn't that cool. I think combination of nice and clear blanket with these overlaps doesn't look cool. It will always play better if it is easier to read by eyes it definitely looks and plays better with a bit larger spacing but on the other side better view which makes it easier to read as well as increasing its aesthetic.
   Screenshot

   
4. 00:52:501 (2) - Just my personal opinion, but I think the flow is a bit better when you use CTRL+G for this slider. Flow from 1 to 2 will be similar, but flow from 2 to 3 will fit the 3's shape more, thus the movement will be maybe more natural. It is also visible in-game that end of 2 is not on the end of 3, it's not that huge deal, but moving 3's end on 316;249, but yes, this is really a minority and can be ignored.
   Previous Flow

   
   Current flow

   
5. 01:08:458 (7) - You are following the same sound as all previous patterns, but changed flow to 0.9 there. Doesn't consistency fit better there, especially when it looks so crowded on one point?
   Screenshot

   

1. Use OD 4 for the same reason as settings on hard.
2. 00:46:543 (3,4) - Using this pattern on normal difficulty is not really cool. 75% of the slider is covered by another slider and it is visible quite later than newbie would notice in-game. Adjusting the angle would solve this problem easily. You might inspire by this screenshot, I adjusted the angle and 5's position a bit.
   Screenshot

   
3. Well... gap between Easy and Normal - Not really big, seems okay-ish, but the gap between Normal and Hard is really huge. You should add more circles. Try to increase objects count to 55 on Normal to make consistent difference between count of objects, that will obviously increase a difficulty to such a level, where it would fit exactly between these two difficulties. Also think about this - Hard is using streams, so you might use more notes, not only spamming sliders. Ideal places for replacement with circles might be for example 00:47:820 (5) -
   00:52:075 (1) -
   00:54:203 (4) - Or at least shortening it to fit to the beat.
   00:58:033 (4) - Especially because it ends on downbeat, which might be quite breaking the rhythm a bit. Also, it touches the scoreboard (mainly with default skin), objects cannot be covered by UI.
   01:02:288 (1) -
   
4. 01:05:267 (5) - This object touches the scoreboard way too much, move it somewhere farther from upper border.
   Screenshot

   

1. Settings are quite out of the spread. You should use someting like these vaules to fit the rest of the difficulties: OD, HP - 2.5, AR - 3, CS - Definitely 3.
2. 00:44:416 (3,1,2,3) - I recommend you to move all this object a bit more down and then adjusting the position of 00:48:671 (1) - so it doesn't overlap with body of 00:46:118 (2) - , it's only a little overlap, but I still mention it to make it smooth.
3. 00:52:075 (1) - Please, avoid a pattern where more than half of a slider is covered by another stuff. It doesn't play well, especially when it is supposed to be Easy.
4. 01:05:692 (1) - Same as above, just adjust the angle so it looks like this or someting similar.
5. You must also add more notes.

Wafu wrote:

Mod as requested

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

General

1. The background you are using is 16:9, but the original isn't, thus you are using stretched background (it's wider than it is supposed to be). I am not saying it is unrankable, but it does slightly decrease the appearance level of your beatmap. You should most likely use this cut of original version, which fits 16:9 perfectly and doesn't contain any noise which current does. If you agree with this, don't forget to replace blured version with this one. You already mentioned original way 1600x900, but original really was 1600x1200, someone just resized it without ratio and you got that version. Done!
2. Storyboard is nice and simple, but you use too complicated things and increase the SB load, while it is not even needed. For optimization, I recommend you to do all these things. Firstly remove SB/black.png, that's because black color is easy to make without using pictures. Another problem is that all objects are rendered within whole time of the map, that sometimes increases SB load to 4x while there is nothing shown at all. I can recommend you to replace whole .osb file with this optimized code, I can guarantee you it is much more acceptable and technically is better. Decreased SB load from ~3.0x to ~1.33x, which is pretty cool difference considering it was just removing unnecessary things. Done!
   
   .osb Code

   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
   Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"bg.jpg",0,0
   //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
   //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
   //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"bg.jpg",320,240
    S,0,41756,,0.625
    F,0,41756,69097,1
    F,0,69097,69203,1,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/blur.jpg",320,240
    S,0,21437,,0.625
    F,0,21437,28139,0,0.6
    F,0,28139,,0.6
    F,0,28139,28246,1
    F,0,28246,35054,1,0.2
    F,0,35054,41756,0.2,1
    F,0,41756,41863,1,0
    F,0,45160,45267,0,0.5
    F,0,45267,45373,0.5,0
    F,0,48565,48671,0,0.5
    F,0,48671,48777,0.5,0
    F,0,51969,52075,0,0.5
    F,0,52075,52182,0.5,0
    F,0,55373,55480,0,0.5
    F,0,55480,55586,0.5,0
    F,0,58777,58884,0,0.5
    F,0,58884,58990,0.5,0
    F,0,62182,62288,0,0.5
    F,0,62288,62394,0.5,0
    F,0,65586,65692,0,0.5
    F,0,65692,65799,0.5,0
    F,0,68990,69097,0,0.8
    F,0,69097,75905,0.8,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/credits.png",320,240
    S,0,31650,,0.5
    F,0,31650,33777,0,0.55
    M,0,31650,36756,534,345,409,348
    F,0,33777,34629,0.55,0.525
    F,0,34629,36703,0.525,0
    F,0,36703,36756,0
   //Storyboard Sound Samples

3. It would be nice if you always used mp3 of the highest quality possible - EAC of the album are available all over the internet, I took one and converted the mp3 to highest rankable quality. There is not much distortion, but cutting the song on 15kHz instead of the other frequencies which you hear is not necessary. You might use this one. Offset is the same, there is a minimal difference, but that's less than 1ms, so you cannot really change it. Done!
4. You should remove Cold_Snap, because you already have both Cold and Snap in tags, so it won't help in searching at all, it's just duplicating stuff which is already there. On the other hand you should add 東方, Project, Touhou to tags as the whole album is just Touhou arrange - This one is original song, but still, it's related to it because rest of album is Touhou arange. Done!
5. It would be more sensible if preview time was on 00:55:480 - , it sounds quite randomly placed when it's not on important beat. Done (before)
6. 00:40:161 - Increasing volume to 30% on all difficulties would be nice here, because you might notice there is some kind of more strong sound than on the calm start of the spinner. End of spinner would be obviously 15% as start so the beat is not loud. Everybody told me to decrease the volume, so no changes. & Done for the spinner
7. 00:36:756 - Just a design related thing, but you might want to move the pause here on all diffs by dragging it on timing line so it would fit to the beat and would be consistent within all difficulties. Done
8. 01:12:501 - Ending a spinner on this place on all difficulties would be more sensible, becasue the sound here is much more brighter than sound on 01:12:714 - . Also don't forget, you might adjust volume, I feel the spinner would deserve it. Done

Hard

1. You should most likely use AR 7 and HP 5.5 to improve the spread a little. Done
2. 00:48:246 (7,8,9,10) - I dislike one thing on all streams in your map. There is nothing like overmap, but they don't reflect the music correctly. You always map either piano or strong drums, but the piano is only on 00:48:246 (7,9) - while there actually is sound on 00:48:352 (8,10) - , but it is really soft kind of cymbal, that means you barely hear it in music. That doesn't require a removal, but the volume should be adjusted - You can use more complicated way, keeping first note the same, second 30%, 3rd 60%, fourth 30% and then normal part starts (the slider), so again 60%. Or simplier, you can just put 30% on 2nd note and 60% on next pattern (that would emphasize that whole this pattern is fading out). That means it would look like this screenshot. Problem here is you barely hear it in song and this sound in map is quite low in comparsion. If you agree, apply it on all streams, otherwise it would only cause inconsistency. 1st one done
   1st option - 30% 60% 30% 60%

   
   2nd option - 30% 60%

   
3. 00:50:161 (4,5,6,7) - This idea is fine, but the way it is done isn't that cool. I think combination of nice and clear blanket with these overlaps doesn't look cool. It will always play better if it is easier to read by eyes it definitely looks and plays better with a bit larger spacing but on the other side better view which makes it easier to read as well as increasing its aesthetic. Done
   Screenshot

   
4. 00:52:501 (2) - Just my personal opinion, but I think the flow is a bit better when you use CTRL+G for this slider. Flow from 1 to 2 will be similar, but flow from 2 to 3 will fit the 3's shape more, thus the movement will be maybe more natural. It is also visible in-game that end of 2 is not on the end of 3, it's not that huge deal, but moving 3's end on 316;249, but yes, this is really a minority and can be ignored. No changes because the real flow is actually this
   Previous Flow

   
   Current flow

   
5. 01:08:458 (7) - You are following the same sound as all previous patterns, but changed flow to 0.9 there. Doesn't consistency fit better there, especially when it looks so crowded on one point? Done!
   Screenshot

   

Normal

1. Use OD 4 for the same reason as settings on hard. Done
2. 00:46:543 (3,4) - Using this pattern on normal difficulty is not really cool. 75% of the slider is covered by another slider and it is visible quite later than newbie would notice in-game. Adjusting the angle would solve this problem easily. You might inspire by this screenshot, I adjusted the angle and 5's position a bit. Done
   Screenshot

   
3. Well... gap between Easy and Normal - Not really big, seems okay-ish, but the gap between Normal and Hard is really huge. You should add more circles. Try to increase objects count to 55 on Normal to make consistent difference between count of objects, that will obviously increase a difficulty to such a level, where it would fit exactly between these two difficulties. Also think about this - Hard is using streams, so you might use more notes, not only spamming sliders. Ideal places for replacement with circles might be for example 00:47:820 (5) -
   00:52:075 (1) -
   00:54:203 (4) - Or at least shortening it to fit to the beat.
   00:58:033 (4) - Especially because it ends on downbeat, which might be quite breaking the rhythm a bit. Also, it touches the scoreboard (mainly with default skin), objects cannot be covered by UI.
   01:02:288 (1) - Done
4. 01:05:267 (5) - This object touches the scoreboard way too much, move it somewhere farther from upper border.
   Screenshot

   
   Done

Easy

1. Settings are quite out of the spread. You should use someting like these vaules to fit the rest of the difficulties: OD, HP - 2.5, AR - 3, CS - Definitely 3. Done everything but CS
2. 00:44:416 (3,1,2,3) - I recommend you to move all this object a bit more down and then adjusting the position of 00:48:671 (1) - so it doesn't overlap with body of 00:46:118 (2) - , it's only a little overlap, but I still mention it to make it smooth. Done
3. 00:52:075 (1) - Please, avoid a pattern where more than half of a slider is covered by another stuff. It doesn't play well, especially when it is supposed to be Easy.
4. 01:05:692 (1) - Same as above, just adjust the angle so it looks like this or someting similar. Changed to circles lol
5. You must also add more notes. I'll keep this one

Conclusion: Rankable c:
Nice map, I think the form is cool, rhythms are okay and there are not critical problems. However, you should overally look at the ratio of objects between difficulties. I mean, Hard is using 45 circles, which is pretty balanced, then you check normal and you see similar count of sliders as hard (34 sliders on hard, 31 on normal), but only 7 circles at all while easy does have 5 circles and 21 sliders. That means all maps have almost static count of sliders, but there is huge difference between count of circles. Please, balance easy and normal so there might be approximately consistent difference of circles and sliders. I think Normal should have around 25 and easy about 10-15.

Call me back when you feel you balanced the spread, if you are not sure about anything, PM me in-game for help.

Kyle Y wrote:

# modding queue

quick modding here

[HD]

SPOILER

00:24:812 (1) - extent to 00:28:216 - Nope because of the music
00:28:429 - why not map it but a break? 1. 'cuz of the title & storyboard ; 2. 'cuz it's boring for the player to play this
00:43:536 (5) - nc nope
00:46:940 (5) - nc nope
00:53:748 - missing note, and nc here (according to bgm not beat) I prefer what I've done
00:57:152 - ^ ^
01:00:556 - same ^


nc please use 4 beat one nc, as too long combo... not suggested NC is made while the mapper wants, the reason why I'm not putting these too much is because of the HP. A mapper must think about HP while putting NC, and putting too much NC makes the diff. too easy to pass (NC gives a lot of HP) and putting too much NC ruin the gameplay because of the easiness of the map

[EZ]

SPOILER

00:24:811 (1) - to 00:28:216 - same as HD
00:28:641 - same as HD same xD
00:38:429 (1) - unrankable, 4 beat is needed for recovery in EZ, please check the ranking rules There's 7 beats and the rule is saying that the bot must do at least 1000.
00:51:194 (3) - blanket Done

[NM]

SPOILER

00:24:811 (1) - to 00:28:216 -
00:28:641 - same as HD
00:43:535 - missing, suggestion move 00:43:747 (5) - to here, 00:44:386 (6) - to 00:43:960 - and circle at 00:44:811 -
00:46:513 (3,4,5) - ^
00:48:216 - 1/2 beat slider
00:56:726 (2,3,4) - same
00:59:918 - why skip it...
01:08:641 (6,7,8) - reverse slider

I might change the NM, so I'm not modding it, if I keep it, I will use your mod ^^

Snaggletooth wrote:

From my Q

1. I recommend using a blank sliderslide for this one. At least imo it dosn't
   add anything to the song, it infact distracts at times a bit. http://puu.sh/iw2dY/d84156ffb5.wav I've made one ^^
2. Also consider completely silencing 01:09:173 (1) - on every difficulty. It dosn't really end on anything,
   which makes the soft-hit sound 'off'. Done

[Hard]

1. Rhythmical Issues:
   1. 00:43:536 (5) - You're missing quite a stong beat on 00:43:748 - through the un-hittable
      sliderend. That's unnecessary and takes away the playabillity a bit. It would
      feel much nicer if it was hit-able. You could also incorporate a small jump here if you wanted
      to. I can't find good ways to do it
      
      Timeline

      
   2. 00:46:514 (4,5) - ^ ^
      
      
      Timeline

      
   3. 00:48:217 (8,9,10,11,1) - Why would you use a stream here? It's more a genuine question
      than a suggestion to fix. There would be nothing in the music that suggests a stream here, also no
      kind of build-up, more a 1/2 rhythm with the piano. I personally dislike this very much. It sounds
      overmapped, and only mapped for difficulty, rather than to highlight anything important in the song.
      (also applies to all other streams.) I found this kind of streams pretty cool and we can find them in lots of beatmaps
2. Placement Issues:
   1. 00:51:940 (12,1) - Equalize the spacing here with 00:51:834 (11) - Done

It's a very nice mapset. Have a star. wow thx a lot <3<3

Nitrousdragon wrote:

[Hard]
00:51:621 (9,10,11,12)
00:58:429 (7,8,9,10)
01:01:834 (7,8,9,10)
01:05:238 (8,9,10,11) - This is seriously the only thing that's wrong because it spikes the difficulty of the map than where it should be. Put a 1/4 slider down (<,>) or put two 1/4 sliders down on these four parts.

The rest of Hard looks fine 2 me, glad you requested me to come take a look at it. Go for rank

Nozhomi wrote:

Hi there~ Oh bon ben j'ai commencé en anglais... XD woops xD

- Easy :

1. 00:49:492 (2,1) - Little overlap who can easily be avoided and makes the diff looks nicer. Here is my suggestion -> http://puu.sh/iw53F/1ece349234.jpg. Done c:
2. 01:02:258 (1) - Move it to 224:12 to adjust spacing (there is a difference more than 0.05x here). Done

- Normal :

1. 00:46:514 (4,5,6) - Why not make them all parallel ? Done!
2. 01:00:982 (6,7) - I think you break flow a little too much here. you expect an object following more like 01:02:258 (1) - just after, not 01:01:833 (7) - . Maybe try to make it smoother. I've tried to do something better ^^

- Hard :

1. 00:55:451 (1) - Maybe CTRL+H just to make this flow more soft and natural. Yup, you're right
2. About your streams on it, I can see why you use them, but I think you could use some reverse sliders instread of streams before kiai, and add some diversity with 1/4 sliders on the kiai. It's just a Hard after all.

I guess that's all. The map is quite clean, just check for these streams and should be ok imo.
Mukyu~

Z e r s s wrote:

Okay now, for the streams... just... what's the problem ? xD I've showed my map to like... 3 or 4 BN, and no one told me about this, that's not a real problem I think xD I'll check with these, but I don't think it's too bad

cold snap nagi☆ original comiket 87 c87

Arcubin wrote:

metadata check as requested

no kudos

Artist : FELT v
Title : Freedom v
Source : none (it's original so...)
Tags :
Cold Snap (album)
NAGI☆ (composer)
original track (defining it's an original track)
comiket 87 (the even when the album released)
c87 (abb for comiket 87)

summary :

cold snap nagi☆ original comiket 87 c87

also you maybe want to change the hardest diff to "Free"

i might can't find my freedom, but this freedom make me happy

NISSAN001 wrote:

Hi from #Modreqs

Map is pretty good i can't see any problems :D

Easy:
00:24:811 (1) - Can you extend this to white line? Nope because it sounds weird
01:06:513 (2) - Change this to that-https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3284686 Done!

Normal:
00:24:811 (1) - Again ↑ ^
01:05:237 (7,1) - Change this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3284699 Done

Free:
00:24:811 (1) - Again ↑ ^ ^
01:05:238 (8,9,10,11) - Maybe use this pattern?-https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3284715 Done!

Cool map Get this ranked! I hope ^.^

Kinshara wrote:

OMG Yes, Someone actually mapped thisss!! Good luck! <3

1. I think you should make the soft hitfinish a bit louder in audacity. it gets kinda lost and it shouldn't be more quiet than a soft whistle

1. 00:24:812 (1) - I think you should add a drum hitfinish here to support the music
2. 00:43:535 - add a hitsound to support that scratch?
3. 00:45:450 - I think you shold not ignore that sound with that big slider. this difficulty is the hardest of your set so maybe you should map this stuff out. just make the slider end before and add some circles
4. 00:49:493 (3) - if you blanket like this don't fully blanket and then suddenly change direction. This will always end up in looking sloppy. I suggest you make it like this to look better:
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:59:706 (3) - again for looks and also for nice play i would put this slider a bit down. maybe stack it with 00:58:642 (9) - ? it wouldn't looks so... uhm... unclean i guess. stuck together. tight. you know?

1. 00:24:811 (1) - again maybe add a drum finish here?
2. 00:41:833 (1,2,3) - how about you change this into a straight line for looks?
3. 00:54:599 (7) - to support the vocal here add a soft hitfinish on the sliderened

1. 00:24:811 (1) - same as normal and freed
2. 00:48:216 (4,1) - fix the blanket
3. hm okay diff

Hard wrote:

Hi. I think your map is kinda good but I guess you should pn some bn now.

Well let's do some nazi-modding and polishing, shall we? Okay :3

(m4m from your queue)

[General]

1. I think you should make the soft hitfinish a bit louder in audacity. it gets kinda lost and it shouldn't be more quiet than a soft whistle I can't because of saturation :/

[Freed]

1. 00:24:812 (1) - I think you should add a drum hitfinish here to support the music Done & for the other diffs
2. 00:43:535 - add a hitsound to support that scratch? No hitsounds goes correctly here :/
3. 00:45:450 - I think you shold not ignore that sound with that big slider. this difficulty is the hardest of your set so maybe you should map this stuff out. just make the slider end before and add some circles Done
4. 00:49:493 (3) - if you blanket like this don't fully blanket and then suddenly change direction. This will always end up in looking sloppy. I suggest you make it like this to look better:
   SPOILER

   
   Done
5. 00:59:706 (3) - again for looks and also for nice play i would put this slider a bit down. maybe stack it with 00:58:642 (9) - ? it wouldn't looks so... uhm... unclean i guess. stuck together. tight. you know? I've tried stuff but nothings works :/

[Normal]

1. 00:24:811 (1) - again maybe add a drum finish here?
2. 00:41:833 (1,2,3) - how about you change this into a straight line for looks? No
3. 00:54:599 (7) - to support the vocal here add a soft hitfinish on the sliderened hitsounds :/

[Easy]

1. 00:24:811 (1) - same as normal and freed
2. 00:48:216 (4,1) - fix the blanket Done
3. hm okay diff

good luck with ranking this. have a nice day~

I don't even need to write some "offending and stuff" text here, because you're one of our mapping team~
I don't even need the banner, but who cares. xD

General

Easy

Normal

Freed

G3m4sSt4ffLP wrote:

I don't even need to write some "offending and stuff" text here, because you're one of our mapping team~ :D
I don't even need the banner, but who cares. xD lol

General

● The hitsounds are really well done! Thanks
● Instead of that yellow-green colour I'd like a light-yellow colour~ Reason of this: link. The color on the middle is the main colour of the background

Easy

● 00:51:194 (4) - I used a extra circle to check that blanket. I improved it, I think. (First node: X208 Y84, Middle node: X168 Y116, Last node: X148 Y180) Done



● 00:58:003 (3) - Move to X231 Y241 for perfect stack. Done
● 00:58:854 (1) - Change Y80 to Y81 for perfect staaack~ Done
● 00:59:705 (2) - Y241 as 3. Done
● 01:05:662 (1) - X328 Y265 for perfect stack. (Use CTRL+G on the slider you want to stack with, so you can see the XY grid) Done
● 01:05:662 (1,2) - This looks weird, 'cuz the first slider is round and the second one straight~ I'll keep this because the (1) makes a blanket with the (3)

Normal

● 00:46:514 (4,5) - I really didn't excepted these to be snapped correclty, good job! c: Thanks
● 00:56:726 (2,4) - How about making these two symmetrical to the slider? Done
● That difficulty is perfect. Wow~ I'm pretty good at mapping Normal diffs. ^^ (btw, you are like the 3rd mod on this diff!)

Freed

● 00:41:834 (1,2) - I like symmetry more, but that's a matter of opinion. I was playing on unsymmetrical stuff here, so no changes
● 00:48:642 (1,2) - ^ ^
● 00:49:493 (3,4) - You could improve that blanket just a bit~ Done!
● 00:52:472 (2) - Move the last node one to the right, for better blanket. Done!
● 00:57:578 (6,7) - The slider pointing downwards makes the flow bad for me. :c I was playing with the (3) ^^

It's a solid neat map. Please get it ranked! :3
I hope so xD

inspectorscout wrote:

Overall I think this map is ready to get ranked, but since I feel like being autistic I will try to find some things that can even make it that little bit better. ♥
First: great song, nice little SB. Good work! :D

Easy: Spot on. I don't like the weird sliders, but they fit the song, so it's fine.
Normal: Exactly the same, nice diff.
Hard:
01:09:067 (1) - I dont see why you would start a new combo here. I know that it fits the song, but it's kinda ugly to have that last note in a different colour. Because of a new measure, but it's not consistent with the other diffs, so I've deleted this one
01:00:344 (4,5) - Kinda a brutal jump that slightly disturbs the serenity of the map. I know it would cost a lot of work, but maybe resize it just that little bit? Done
01:05:238 (8,9,10,11) - every stream in your map is a line, this one is a curve. Is there a reason to? if not, make it fit the rest of the song. Because of a jump, but I have tried to adjust it ^^

That was my small (and maybe a bit brutal) mod, but i really like to see this map get ranked. Good luck

inspectorscout wrote:

Since you took my advise, even though I just started modding, merci beaucoup! Have a star and get this stuff ranked!
Edit: i have enough, take 2 instead :p

sheela901 wrote:

Hello Z e r s s! I'll be modding in English since I write and type more in this language. Okay, no problem

SB

1. This is my personal preferences, but when the credits appears, I honestly dislike the transition. Maybe the fast movement is causing this to make me dislike this. I think a slower one would fit better because the music is calm and slow. From the start to the end having a distance of 20 on the x axis. Right now it starts on x:534, it would end on x:345. I have slowed A BIT the credits, actually, the credits goes on the same speed as the title text
2. The y axis of the credits is not straight. It's little off, but can be fine-tuned. Yup, I was correcting it
3. I guess you changed the offset, but you haven't changed for the SB. If you click on the tab Design -> Move all elements in time..., you can shift it by -30ms to have everything accurate. Wow, I don't remember that I have changed the offset, well, done anyway xD

General

1. Nitpicking I guess, but soft-sliderslide.wav kind of have a tiny tiny silence, but it could make issues to soundcards. Replace it with this: http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav Done
2. 00:29:067 to 00:38:216 - I'd map this section to rid of the break. Currently there's nothing unrankable; the amp uses 83% of the audio, so it's okay. But I think it's tiring to wait some seconds before the the objects popping out.
   This section is calm so rhythms like 1/1 and a little of 1/2 (depending on the difficulty) would go well. For Freed, starting from 00:35:024 you can some beats on the blue ticks, like 00:35:343 - 00:36:194 - and more. In my opinion, having 4 3/4 repeat sliders would go well.
3. 00:24:811 - If you're going to map the section I mentioned above, you can keep the green point because I think the calm part would need a low SV. But you're not going to, the point is useless because you only added spinners between 00:24:811 to 00:41:833 . And SV doesn't affect the spinner. Also you cannot have two timing and / or inherited points at the same time, unless for this reason. I won't map this part because of reasons

Easy

1. 00:52:896 (3) - How about you make a blanket pattern with the head of 00:54:599 (4) ? It's only for aesthetic. Yup, done!

Hard

1. Some of the streams have inconsistent distances with their predecessors.
   
   1. 00:47:365 (6,7) is 0.78x apart
   2. 00:51:195 (8,9) is a 1/2 rhythm and is 1.74x apart
   3. 00:54:600 (7,8) has a distance of 0.83x
   4. 00:57:578 (6,7) becomes 1.0x                                    Everything's corrected!
   5. 01:00:982 (6,7) is 1.41x
   6. 01:04:812 (7,8) is the same as one before.
   I recommend you use a same distance around 1.00x ~ 1.40x to avoid inconsistency and "confusion", as there's only one 1/2 rhythm with a following stream.
2. 00:46:514 (4) - Nazi. Move this more up, like x:115 y:189 to just have a distance of 1.0x between this and its previous circle. Done
3. 00:50:132 (4,5) - I think you should switch the places of these circles (Ctrl + G). The current flow goes all weird and "unnatural". I also suggest you to move 00:50:557 (6) to somewhere like x:52 y:117 if you switched the circles. In my opinion, the flow would be better. Actually, it's doing a star pattern, well, it doesn't feels really unnatural, because I've asked testplays and no-one told me about this pattern
4. 00:59:706 (3) - The overlap with 00:58:854 (1) -'s head is kind of ugly to me. Try stacking the slider to 00:58:642 (9) ? Don't forget to move 01:00:344 (4) if you stacked the slider. Actually, it's doing an overlap with (10) because of the flow, but I've tried to adjust the flow to stack with the (9) without doing a jump. (4) moved too.

I guess this should be it. If you have questions, don't hesitate asking them! Good luck with your map!

1. The spacing in Hard diff is messed up, there is a lot of clunky patterns. I don't get your logic and you must tidy up patterns on Hard diff.
2. Issues with timing points in all diffs : 00:24:812 - , they are at the same time but they don't have the same sampleset and volume, just fix it please.
   

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hello, I have to bubble pop your map for this/these following reason(s).

1. The spacing in Hard diff is messed up, there is a lot of clunky patterns. I don't get your logic and you must tidy up patterns on Hard diff.
2. Issues with timing points in all diffs : 00:24:812 - , they are at the same time but they don't have the same sampleset and volume, just fix it please. Done
   

Hard

1. 00:45:663 (2) - Even if it's a few pixels, the spacing difference is clearly noticeable and that's a little messy. it could be better if you clean up this pattern for a better impression. Done
2. 00:46:940 (5) - Same as ^, the flow is a little broken, there is twice the same motion between 00:46:514 (4,5) - and 00:46:940 (5,6) - but the spacing between the previous and next is different and that is confusing in term of visual. You mean that this is broken?
3. 00:51:621 (9,10,11) - This is really confusing, the distance between 00:51:195 (8,9) - and 00:51:834 (11,1) - is not the same, and this is also counter intuitive. If you want to emphasize the strongest note here 00:52:046 - the jump should be between 00:51:834 (11,1) - and not between 00:51:195 (8,9) - because there is nothing powerful between them. But i saw that there is almost the same spacing between the triple and the next combo. If you apply what i said, you should make it consistent everywhere. I'm agreeing with you, THIS is CONFUSING, but BNs doesn't wanted to keep what I have done, before, I had a 5-objects streams (4 circles and 1 slider), aaaaaand, the BN that have bubbled this doesn't wanted to have it, because the players can do ZXZ and not ZXZX (only ZXZX because you can wait a bit for the next Z and you can still have a 300), I was actually forced to delete the fourth note because of "beauty", except that the "beauty" was killed by flow, by real "beauty" (I mean, how the objects are placed, and how they look like), by rhythm (it wasn't fun anymore to play). Now that the BN isn't part of the rankability anymore (he said that if he was part of rankability, he doesn't want to bubble this because of these sliders), I have restore these streams, I'll talk with you if it's not the end of the world just for one circle.
4. 00:52:897 (3,4) - Between them, there should be the same distance as 00:52:472 (2,3) - because there is no reason to change the spacing. Corrected while checking the map xD
5. 01:09:067 (10) - Add NC here to respect each measures. I was asking if there's not too much of HP here, but here you go Added it in Easy too (for normal, it's a slider end)

Hard diff needs more improvements, other diffs are fine and ready.
Call me back after getting more mods for Hard diff.

Z e r s s wrote:

You mean that this is broken?

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Z e r s s wrote:

You mean that this is broken?

I mean, broken due to the spacing difference that makes the player hit the third slider too early.

Wafu wrote:

Actually Cherry Blossom is right in my opinion. But about the streams, you were not forced, but I cannot bubble something what's wrong in my opinion - doesn't have to be in other's opinion, but do I have to agree with everyone or can I have my opinion either? Choice was yours, opinion was mine, that's all about it :3

Cherry Blossom wrote:

To Wafu : If you don't believe that a map can be ranked because you have doubts, just don't take the risk to push it forward. When a BN is not confident with himself, the bubble pop will be unavoidable.

Hullahopp wrote:

short mod, idk, yolo

16:30 Hullahopp: Fek
16:30 Hullahopp: I mod it
16:30 *Hullahopp is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/717690 FELT - Freedom [Freed]]
16:30 Hullahopp: Just bubble this
16:30 Hullahopp: Otherwise you suck
16:31 Z e r s s: only buble?
16:31 Z e r s s: no rank?
16:31 Hullahopp: Both
16:31 Hullahopp: I don't care
16:31 Hullahopp: If you don't rank this, I kill you
16:31 Hullahopp: And tell everyone you failed
16:31 Hullahopp: Ok
16:31 Hullahopp: Now
16:31 *Hullahopp is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/717690 FELT - Freedom [Freed]]
16:31 Hullahopp: Freed
16:31 Z e r s s: only freed
16:32 Hullahopp: 00:37:577 - Idk what's the point of having this 2 seconds of nothingnes
16:32 Z e r s s: -> Wafu mod
16:34 Hullahopp: 00:45:663 (2,3) - 00:46:514 (4,5) - Distance is changing, I'm not sure if it's meant to be like that
16:34 Hullahopp: Wait one
16:34 Hullahopp: I see you used 2 kinda of distance in your map, that looks fine
16:34 Z e r s s: http://i.t.zz.mu/199114624 <- the flow at 4,5 must be like that
16:35 Hullahopp: 00:56:089 (2,3) - Jump? Nah
16:36 Hullahopp: At the end of the map, the distance changed
16:36 Z e r s s: ok, reduced
16:36 Hullahopp: 01:00:982 - After like this one, you used a bit higher (maybe with 0,1) DS for the map
16:37 Hullahopp: 01:07:791 (6,8) - Stack pls
16:37 Hullahopp: 00:44:812 (8,2) - Blanket pls
16:38 Z e r s s: 01:07:791 - Stack leniency plz
16:38 Hullahopp: Dang it
16:38 Z e r s s: and corrected
16:39 Hullahopp: 00:58:855 (1,2,3) - Changing distance, unless it meant to be like that
16:39 Hullahopp: 01:03:110 (3,6) - Stack pls
16:40 Z e r s s: 00:58:855 - All the modders don't like if I stack the (3) on (10), so I'm stacking on (9)
16:40 Z e r s s: 01:03:110 - done
16:40 Hullahopp: 01:07:791 (6,8) - This can be corrected by modifying the slider, you know
16:41 Z e r s s: which points? because everytime I change it, it's not overlapping correctly
16:42 Hullahopp: I managed to do it, lol
16:43 Hullahopp: It is possible
16:43 Z e r s s: "which points?"
16:43 Hullahopp: http://puu.sh/j65U8/022647ed67.jpg
16:43 Hullahopp: Amm, both second and third points?
16:43 Z e r s s: lol, I mean the coordonates of the points xD
16:43 Z e r s s: yeah
16:44 Hullahopp: 2nd point x356 y228
16:44 Hullahopp: Third x412 y320
16:45 Z e r s s: it's not working for me lol
16:45 Hullahopp: 00:52:046 (1,3) - Better overlap pls
16:45 Hullahopp: Idk, it did worked for me
16:45 Hullahopp: I'm just being an asshole here XD
16:46 Hullahopp: 00:52:897 (3,6) - Better stack again
16:46 Z e r s s: 00:52:046 - this overlap is actually good (I've remember that I've changed stuff without updating, maybe I've corrected it xD)
16:46 Hullahopp: oh ok
16:48 Hullahopp: Why not add a clap on this? 01:09:067 (1) - 
16:48 Z e r s s: because of the inherited point
16:48 Hullahopp: Oh well, it doesn't have a sound anyways..
16:49 Hullahopp: I also don't get the point of writing "Map & Storyboard by Z e r s s"
16:50 Hullahopp: i mean, you made the map, so it's kinda pointless..
16:50 Z e r s s: because of time, the first play, the player will read it, and won't be annoyed by the break
16:50 Z e r s s: (with the title text just before)
16:50 Hullahopp: That title text before, yeah, you can skip it
16:51 Hullahopp: But still, players with 100% dim will be still bored
16:51 Hullahopp: Meh, maybe it's just me
16:52 Hullahopp: 00:45:237 (1,2) - If this is the normal DS, than 00:43:961 (6,7) - has a bigger one
16:52 Hullahopp: But it's because of the grid
16:52 Hullahopp: Oh well
16:52 Hullahopp: Shift place it, maybe?
16:53 Z e r s s: Actually, I don't see any DS problem, in my version, they have the same DS
16:53 Hullahopp: Oh yeah, the DS was changed from 1,1 to 1,0 during development
16:53 Hullahopp: Oh ok
16:53 Hullahopp: Than you just forgot to update it .-.
16:53 Hullahopp: Well, I think that's all
16:53 Z e r s s: (I made this map without DS xD)
16:53 Hullahopp: THAT would explain
16:54 Hullahopp: HUGE mistake by you
16:54 Hullahopp: >:(
16:54 Hullahopp: Don't do that again!
16:54 Z e r s s: xD
16:54 Z e r s s: Yeah, I know now xD

Z e r s s wrote:

That's your third mod and that's the first time that you want to post it xD

1. 00:43:536 (5,6) - make them have the same shape, literally ctrl+c ctrl+v the first into the second (then reposition / rotate)
2. 00:46:514 (4,5,6) - spacing should be consistent, use 1.2x spacing between 00:46:940 (5,6) -
3. 00:52:472 (2,3) - this should be 1.1x spacing like 00:52:046 (1,2) - , then 00:52:897 (3,4) - should have the same spacing too, but here is not as important because the pattern changed
4. 00:54:174 (6) - move to around ~x:306 y:243, so that the pattern looks cleaner, and the slider should have the same "height" between 5 and 7
5. 00:55:451 (1,2,3) - spacing is not consistent here
6. 00:58:855 (1,2) - use 1.2x spacing here, that way you can make spacing consistent with 00:59:281 (2,3) - and keep the blanket
7. 00:59:706 (3) - imo an "S" shape would fit in this slider, because the current shape creates a bit of anti flow, this is purely a suggestion though
8. 01:02:259 (1,2,3) - spacing not consistent
9. 01:04:387 (6,7) - I think you should use 1.0x spacing here
10. 01:05:557 (11,1) - move both 1 or 2 "y" values up, the stream is not completely straight and is curving a bit on these notes
11. 01:05:663 (1,2,3) - I think spacing should be consistent here as well
12. 01:09:173 (1) - this is merely a suggestion but I think this would be a perfect opportunity for a long art slider instead of a spinner, then add the spinner later

- Milhofo - wrote:

Hi, here as a request by inspectorscout ^^ I'll only mod the freedom diff because the rest is ready and it's the diff needing mods according to the BN's c: 'scout will never leave my map xD I only want mods for Freed, so welp :p

[Freed]

1. 00:43:536 (5,6) - make them have the same shape, literally ctrl+c ctrl+v the first into the second (then reposition / rotate) Done
2. 00:46:514 (4,5,6) - spacing should be consistent, use 1.2x spacing between 00:46:940 (5,6) - it is
3. 00:52:472 (2,3) - this should be 1.1x spacing like 00:52:046 (1,2) - , then 00:52:897 (3,4) - should have the same spacing too, but here is not as important because the pattern changed you should play it like this
4. 00:54:174 (6) - move to around ~x:306 y:243, so that the pattern looks cleaner, and the slider should have the same "height" between 5 and 7 I first though that it'll looks ugly with (3), but it looks really cooler!
5. 00:55:451 (1,2,3) - spacing is not consistent here Done
6. 00:58:855 (1,2) - use 1.2x spacing here, that way you can make spacing consistent with 00:59:281 (2,3) - and keep the blanket it looks really weird :/
7. 00:59:706 (3) - imo an "S" shape would fit in this slider, because the current shape creates a bit of anti flow, this is purely a suggestion though You mean a sliderwave? done.
8. 01:02:259 (1,2,3) - spacing not consistent it is
9. 01:04:387 (6,7) - I think you should use 1.0x spacing here Done
10. 01:05:557 (11,1) - move both 1 or 2 "y" values up, the stream is not completely straight and is curving a bit on these notes I've checked everything, and it is
11. 01:05:663 (1,2,3) - I think spacing should be consistent here as well it is
12. 01:09:173 (1) - this is merely a suggestion but I think this would be a perfect opportunity for a long art slider instead of a spinner, then add the spinner later No, for the reason of Normal & Easy diff: I can't change slider velocity, and the slider will looks really ugly

I get the point of Cherry Blossom, some spacing inconsistencies here and there, barely noticeable, but they make a difference. They are the only things keeping the map from beeing ranked, so just go for it man, the map is really good ^^

NolanM wrote:

Mod as requested by inspectorscout :3

Freed
00:43:961 (6) - You may want to move this up a bit so the previous slider can merge with it to create a smooth path for the cursor. Of course, you will then need to shift up 00:44:812 (8) - , and move 00:44:387 (7) - correspondingly. Done, but without moving the (8) for two reasons: 1. It's making a neat overlap ; 2. The (1,2,3) part will be broken
00:48:217 (7,8,9,10) - I do not really understand the need for this stream. Sure, it may make gameplay more exciting, but keep in mind that there is nothing in the music itself that signifies itself that much for a stream such as this. Explained, like... 10 times?
00:49:493 (3) - The distance needed to go with the end of this slider to the next circle 00:50:131 (4) - has greatly increased. Perhaps you should consider fixing that, or you could keep it, as everything is so delicately placed for neatness. :3 I already know this, and I currently wanted to do it xD
00:51:621 (9,10,11,12) - Same thing, about referring to the streams.
00:52:471 (2) - There's nothing substantially wrong about this -- it's just the way it looks. It is awkwardly close to 00:52:046 (1) - . I think you should change this, unless you're completely fine with it from the phenomenal placement and blanketing. Okay, removed the overlap between (1) and (2)
00:53:536 (4,5) - These circles are placed slightly above the end of the previous slider, which does not give a nice and smooth path for the cursor. I would suggest lowering this a bit. Corrected
00:54:174 (6) - I do not know the purpose of this. It's not that neat, and instead it overlaps without stacking. I would recommend moving this slider in a totally different direction. The problem with this part is that, if I change the slider's direction, there will be a big jump and the flow will be broken. And for the overlap, it was asked on a mod. I've just removed a bit of "overlapping".
00:54:600 (7) - Also, this. I see you tried to place this circle on the previous slider head to maintain editor quality, but it just plays very weird and I don't think it should be used in this occasion. If you fix the previous suggestion, this will not be a problem. I don't know why it plays weird, I have no problem with playing it and I don't feel that really weird.
00:55:025 (8,9,10,11) - Above about streams.
00:56:089 (2) - This is slightly overlapping 00:56:301 (3) - . Try to fix this in a way where this won't happen. Maybe you could stretch out the DS by a pixel or so. It would not drastically affect gameplay, only the way it looks, so I think it wouldn't be breaking any rules. If you don't trust me, feel free to keep it the way it is. Everybody was killing me because the DS wasn't the same and that the map looks ugly because of that. So, I've made a little overlap, but, I've corrected it with moving the (3) sliders with the objects after, a bit in the bottom.
00:56:940 (4,5) - Refer to what I said earlier about the cursor not having a smooth path to move it. Shift this down a bit. Also, why aren't these circles perfectly stacked? Was it intentional? I think not, because you haven't done this previously before. You have kept it neat in the past. Actually, I really feel this one pretty good.
00:57:578 (6) - I do not particularly enjoy how this slider is directed toward offscreen and the next notes are behind the direction. This is just preference, though. I actually like this.
00:58:429 (7,8,9,10) - Stream.
00:59:706 (3) - Mildly adjust this slider to create the smooth path from the end of the slider for the cursor.. Right now, it is dragging down. Corrected
01:00:344 (4) - Awkward placement. These seem placed in a way where everything is slightly shifted, so when playing, it feels very weird. Done
01:01:834 (7,8,9,10) - Stream
01:03:748 (4,5) - Refer Actually, the same, I feel it pretty good, the flow is a bit broken to go with the (6), if I move this to the bottom, you'll see the same problem with the (6)
01:05:238 (8,9,10,11) - I wouldn't really point this out anymore. Since you do it quite often, I guess you wouldn't change it, and that's okay. You've got your own beat going.
01:08:429 (7) - Really neat, but I just don't like it how the slider is curved, and this circle is placed in a shifted-up position. If I curve the slider more, it'll be too much curved (in my opinion) :/

I hope you notice that I wrote a lot. When it comes to short songs, I must be super precise and picky. So, don't feel bad, and yes, I was very picky with my preference. Well done map, You will make it as long as you don't give up!
Good luck. A bubble pop is never the time to give up forever. Actually, if my map gets a bubble pop, he needs first a bubble, and it's proving that my map has an opportunity to be ranked :3

Squarey wrote:

No Kd

Shorten your mp3 since theres more that 25% of it unused before the map starts

Lumael wrote:

Hi! Comming from #modreqs

• Freed

  00:43:961 (6,8) - This was supposed to be a stack? Looking at the previews mods, this probably happened for DS consistency but it's kinda ugly this way, try maybe: http://puu.sh/jgq1o/6d3740289a.jpg Woooo great idea! I'll keeping this :3
  00:46:514 (4,5,6) - DS is broken here. Make patterns thinking on the gameplay, not on the asthetics Actually, the (6) is a bit low, but keep in mind that you should play it like this
  00:48:217 (7,8,9,10) - Not a kind of guy that likes overmapping but it should be fine since this wasn't the reason of the bubble pop Nothing to answer xD No changes
  00:52:897 (3) - .96x DS is a small mistake imo, try to fix it, may break the pattern though.. Yup, I've tried to put it between the slider before without overlapping and with 1x of distance with the next slider, if BN won't like this, I'll speed up the next slider A LITTLE BIT.
  00:54:174 (6) - Move to 306|250 for perfect stack Done because no-one likes this.

Hope I helped a bit c:

Modem wrote:

Hi~! A mod coming from the request of your good friend~! :3

General

The only thing that I could point out at the general side is, you should enable 'Display epilepsy warning' at the song setup since your storyboard has some blur parts I'll enable this, not because of the blurry parts, but because of the blur that appear and disappear very fast during the KIAI time, some epileptic might play with the storyboard without problems, but, we don't know if they will be touched. Done!
Other is....... Perfect owo*thumbs up* *thumbs up your thumbs up *
Btw, I think, it would be nice if you add the word 'Thanks for Playing' as the part of your storyboard at the end of the song. But, this is only my suggestion I added the "credits" during the big break to make that the player won't be too annoyed, welp, at the end, it's useless, and it's sooo 2007.

Easy

How about AR 2? To make it consistent with OD. This is an easy diff anyway owo No, everybody can read AR3, even the beginners, and AR2 is too low IMO
00:48:216 (4,1) This blanket is almost perfect owo. Just move this slider -> 00:48:641 (1) to x:332 y:4 (one grid to the left) for the better placement of this blanket With correcting this slider, I've seen that (1) was offscreen, so, I moved everything and corrected the next one too
00:54:173 (3,4) This blanket is almost perfect too. You need to make this slider -> 00:52:897 (3) a bit more curvy. Just move the end point of this slider's frame -> 00:52:897 (3) one grid upward Done as said before
00:58:429 (3,1) Here too. This blanket is almost perfect too. Just move the center point of this slider's frame -> 00:58:854 (1) one grid to the left, then don't forget to fix the indirect stack with the head of this slider -> 00:56:301 (2) afterwards No, there's an overlap right here
01:07:790 (2,3) The spacing between these sliders are kinda inconsistent compared with the spacing between these sliders -> 01:05:237 (4,1) . Please move this slider to x:224 y:100 (one grid to the left) for the save placement I don't see problems with these sliders (both 0.98x of distance), maybe the wrong ones were pointed :/ The time may be wrong, if you take the (2,3) on x:xx:xx time, but the (2) is before this time, he'll take the (2) and the (3) of the next combo :/
01:09:067 (1) How about add finish at this note? It would emphasize the main music even if it's just a little. I think it's better than leave it as a silent part :3 Feels weird, I'll check this with BNs

Normal

AR 4 No, to keep consistent with the other diffs.
01:09:067 (6) Just like before, add finish at the end of this slider. It would emphasize the main music even if it's just a little Same as Easy ^^
Ehm..... I found nothing more wrong at this diff wooo really? Actually, one person pointed one thing about this diff xD
Nice diffu~ :3 :3

Freed

AR 6 to make it consistent with OD No, for the same reason as Normal
00:48:216 (7,8,9,10) Ummm..... In my opinion, some parts like this are kinda.... Overmapped. I think, it would be better if you delete this note -> 00:48:322 (8) so that those part will only be a common triple click part and less overmapped. But, of course it's up to you. Since that wasn't the reason of the bubble pop, I think it's fine if you keep it :3 Triplets in this utilisation is... really ugly tbh
01:09:067 (1) Just like before, add finish at the end of this slider. It would emphasize the main music even if it's just a little Same as the other diffs ^.^

Anyway, in my opinion, kiai time isn't necessary for this map, since the song almost always have the same rhytm from the start, until the end of the song. Even though there's a singer's voice at 00:55:450, but the song's rhytm still doesn't change at all until the end. So, maybe you didn't need to add kiai time over there. But again, it's up to you :3

Well, that's all~!
Sorry if I couldn't help you at all ;_; It still helped me :3
Good Luck on Ranking this map~! \(> w <)/

Lumael wrote:

Have a c:

Gray Veyron wrote:

Done an IRC mod with the mapper :3/ fixed some stuffs and it's ready to go! Have this icon for now ~

IRC

2015-07-31 18:05 Gray Veyron: Can we start?
2015-07-31 18:05 Z e r s s: Yes!
2015-07-31 18:06 Gray Veyron: okayyy lol
2015-07-31 18:06 Gray Veyron: Let me check general stuffs first
2015-07-31 18:07 Gray Veyron: So, at first... Are you using the mp3 file known "FELT NAGI Freedom (1)" in the folder? Because I've checked all the diffs' .osu files, and nothing mentioned this.
2015-07-31 18:09 Z e r s s: Well, I'm using music.mp3 xD
2015-07-31 18:09 Z e r s s: I'll delete this file
2015-07-31 18:09 Gray Veyron: lol xD
2015-07-31 18:10 Gray Veyron: good SB tho ;p
2015-07-31 18:10 Z e r s s: Thanks :3
2015-07-31 18:12 Gray Veyron: Okay, imo, how I hear the custom hitsound "soft-hitfinish", doesn't seem to be audible to me :/
2015-07-31 18:12 Gray Veyron: Or is it just me?
2015-07-31 18:13 Z e r s s: Same for me, but if we increase the volume, it'll saturate :/
2015-07-31 18:13 Z e r s s: But, imo, the volume is still fine
2015-07-31 18:13 Z e r s s: I've increased it a bit
2015-07-31 18:14 Gray Veyron: Okay then
2015-07-31 18:14 Gray Veyron: I guess it's just me xD
2015-07-31 18:14 Gray Veyron: Everything else seems fine! GJ =w=)b
2015-07-31 18:14 Z e r s s: xD
2015-07-31 18:14 Z e r s s: :D
2015-07-31 18:14 Gray Veyron: Now, let's go to Easy~
2015-07-31 18:17 Gray Veyron: Ehh, As I see it... uhhh
2015-07-31 18:17 Gray Veyron: Perfect :DDD
2015-07-31 18:17 Z e r s s: xDD
2015-07-31 18:17 Gray Veyron: But there's one thing
2015-07-31 18:17 Gray Veyron: 01:09:067 (1,1) - I'm not sure, but some beginners might not be ready for the sudden spinner appearance like this one. Well, If that's your purposal... :/
2015-07-31 18:17 Gray Veyron: It makes me a little worried
2015-07-31 18:18 Z e r s s: Okay, I'll move the spinner :)
2015-07-31 18:18 Z e r s s: It'll start at 01:09:492 - is it good?
2015-07-31 18:18 Gray Veyron: Maybe, I guess...
2015-07-31 18:18 Gray Veyron: But hopefully would fit :D
2015-07-31 18:19 Z e r s s: :D
2015-07-31 18:19 Gray Veyron: lol it's so perfect
2015-07-31 18:19 Gray Veyron: okay, let's move to Normal
2015-07-31 18:19 Z e r s s: xD
2015-07-31 18:21 Gray Veyron: 00:53:322 (4,5,6) - I feel this one has a little bit of unbalanced spacing... idk, but try to check this.
2015-07-31 18:23 Z e r s s: Okay, corrected :)
2015-07-31 18:23 Gray Veyron: annnnd 01:05:237 (7) - I'd look neater if this slider is curved, ehh just my opinion ;p
2015-07-31 18:24 Z e r s s: Like this? http://i.t.zz.mu/21216240
2015-07-31 18:24 Gray Veyron: Hmmm, Ctrl+H
2015-07-31 18:24 Z e r s s: Looks fine! http://i.t.zz.mu/212162445
2015-07-31 18:25 Gray Veyron: Yep! :D
2015-07-31 18:25 Gray Veyron: great~
2015-07-31 18:26 Gray Veyron: Okay, ehehe...
2015-07-31 18:26 Gray Veyron: Very good! I almost liked the rhythms you made in this diff \:D/
2015-07-31 18:26 Z e r s s: :D
2015-07-31 18:26 Gray Veyron: everything is fine now,
2015-07-31 18:26 Gray Veyron: Now, to the last diff :3 Freed!
2015-07-31 18:27 Gray Veyron: Well, at first, I read it 'Feed' o.o
2015-07-31 18:27 Z e r s s: lol xD
2015-07-31 18:28 Gray Veyron: Why not... sth like... just "Free" or "Freedom"?
2015-07-31 18:28 Z e r s s: well, I'm gonna take Free, because freedom is the name of the song xD
2015-07-31 18:29 Gray Veyron: Ahh, okay xD lol
2015-07-31 18:30 Gray Veyron: Uhhh, I just saw some of your notes here are unsnapped by 1ms xD
2015-07-31 18:31 Gray Veyron: sth like on 00:41:834 (1,2,3) - or 00:48:217 (7,8,9,10) - or either 00:53:536 (4,5,6,7) -
2015-07-31 18:32 Z e r s s: Yeah, now let's move all of the notes :D
2015-07-31 18:32 Gray Veyron: Okay~~
2015-07-31 18:33 Gray Veyron: But maybe there's more further on, so take your time!
2015-07-31 18:34 Z e r s s: Okay, done :)
2015-07-31 18:37 Gray Veyron: okay then~
2015-07-31 18:37 Gray Veyron: 01:03:748 (4,5) - Try to use manual stacking here ;n; It looks cool with the previous one on 00:56:940 (4,5) - , for pattern consistency ;p
2015-07-31 18:38 Z e r s s: Manual stacking? you mean move the notes to make it looks like they're stacked?
2015-07-31 18:38 Gray Veyron: Yeah, sth like that
2015-07-31 18:39 Z e r s s: sth like that? http://i.t.zz.mu/212163954
2015-07-31 18:40 Gray Veyron: ehhh, move to left
2015-07-31 18:40 Gray Veyron: oh, watch the DS too
2015-07-31 18:41 Z e r s s: Actually, mine is good, maybe because I moved it xD
2015-07-31 18:41 Gray Veyron: Ahh, okay lol xD
2015-07-31 18:42 Z e r s s: Is it good? http://i.t.zz.mu/212164148
2015-07-31 18:42 Gray Veyron: Yep, exactly what I thought of it!
2015-07-31 18:42 Z e r s s: Perfect :D
2015-07-31 18:43 Gray Veyron: :D
2015-07-31 18:43 Gray Veyron: 01:06:514 (3,4) - Uhmm, what DS did you used here? It's kinda close to 1.1x in my point of view :|
2015-07-31 18:43 Gray Veyron: since you've used 1.0x previously
2015-07-31 18:44 Z e r s s: 1.0x I guess xD Corrected
2015-07-31 18:44 Gray Veyron: ahaha xD
2015-07-31 18:45 Gray Veyron: Well...
2015-07-31 18:45 Gray Veyron: Everything is fine for now \:D/
2015-07-31 18:45 Z e r s s: Okay then I'll update :D
2015-07-31 18:45 Gray Veyron: then, i'll recheck
2015-07-31 18:46 Z e r s s: Ow, this will reset the bubbled status :/ I'll ask the BN for the rebubble xD
2015-07-31 18:46 Gray Veyron: I'm a BN...
2015-07-31 18:46 Gray Veyron: I'm planning to qualify this
2015-07-31 18:46 Z e r s s: Oh, you will? :)
2015-07-31 18:46 Gray Veyron: Because I have qualify any maps since last month xD
2015-07-31 18:47 Gray Veyron: haven't*
2015-07-31 18:47 Z e r s s: Yes, but if I update my bubble will disappear, no?
2015-07-31 18:47 Gray Veyron: You'll self-pop it ofc
2015-07-31 18:47 Z e r s s: (sry xD it's my first bubbled map, I don't know anything xD)
2015-07-31 18:47 Gray Veyron: Ahh, It's okay :p
2015-07-31 18:47 Z e r s s: Done :3
2015-07-31 18:48 Gray Veyron: Okay, gonna get the update xD
2015-07-31 18:48 Z e r s s: x3
2015-07-31 18:48 Gray Veyron: and redownload because you changed the diff name xD
2015-07-31 18:48 Z e r s s: lol xD
2015-07-31 18:51 Gray Veyron: Now, time for rechecking~
2015-07-31 18:54 Gray Veyron: The preview point... Where is it snapped to?
2015-07-31 18:54 Gray Veyron: just asking o_o
2015-07-31 18:55 Z e r s s: it's snapped, go to 1/8 ;)
2015-07-31 18:55 Gray Veyron: OHH
2015-07-31 18:55 Gray Veyron: I was using 1/4 all the way XD
2015-07-31 18:55 Z e r s s: xD
2015-07-31 18:55 Gray Veyron: lol i'm clumsy
2015-07-31 18:55 Z e r s s: everyone asked me this xD
2015-07-31 18:56 Gray Veyron: It's okay for now~
2015-07-31 18:58 Z e r s s: Oh and
2015-07-31 18:58 Z e r s s: btw
2015-07-31 18:58 Z e r s s: you're a nice car :3
2015-07-31 18:58 Gray Veyron: Aww, Thank you! :D
2015-07-31 18:59 Gray Veyron: Okay uhh...
2015-07-31 18:59 Gray Veyron: On Free diff; 00:42:684 (3,4) - This looks away by 1.1x spacing, later you've used 1.0x o_o recorrect this?
2015-07-31 18:59 Z e r s s: You're welcome :3
2015-07-31 18:59 Z e r s s: Yup, you're right
2015-07-31 18:59 Z e r s s: Something else?
2015-07-31 19:00 Gray Veyron: Hmmm, let me find more
2015-07-31 19:00 Z e r s s: Okay, take your time :3
2015-07-31 19:00 Gray Veyron: 00:46:514 (4,5) - Kinda the same thing here, or is this on purpose?
2015-07-31 19:00 Z e r s s: On purpose ^^
2015-07-31 19:01 Gray Veyron: Ehh...
2015-07-31 19:01 Gray Veyron: Try to make those 1.4x jump as you did before, It looks great ;n;
2015-07-31 19:01 Z e r s s: Actually, the player should play like this x3 http://i.t.zz.mu/204162935
2015-07-31 19:01 Gray Veyron: Oh... Okay then :3
2015-07-31 19:03 Gray Veyron: 00:59:280 (2,3) - This spacing is on purpose too?
2015-07-31 19:03 Z e r s s: Yup
2015-07-31 19:03 Gray Veyron: I knew it xD lol
2015-07-31 19:03 Z e r s s: xD
2015-07-31 19:04 Gray Veyron: Well then...
2015-07-31 19:04 Gray Veyron: I guess everything in this map is ready for qualification! \:D/
2015-07-31 19:05 Z e r s s: Okay, re-update :3

Finally, It's been a month I haven't icon a heart on a single map. Right now, It's "HERE".

Edit: LOOOOOOOOOL This maximum slots ahahahah, I'll qualify it later~
Edit2: Okayy lmao done!

Ameth Rianno wrote:

Congratulations~ osu! needs more FELT!

Welp, why 東方Project is on the tags? this is clearly original song, not touhou arrangement.. If this circle known makes touhou arrangement, then why this original song considered as touhou song? :/ makes no sense http://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Cold_Snap

also y bn edited the rank post

DahplA wrote:

Yes C:

Modem wrote:

Congratulation for your first qualified map Z e r s s~! \(> w <)/