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LiSA - Rally Go Round -TV ver.-

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Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous
Habi

HabiHolic wrote:

[General]

None

[Easy]

00:00:425 (1) - head add finish? ok added
00:02:951 (4) - head delete clap add finish and NC ^
00:20:161 - maybe your missing add green line. S:C56 ^
00:25:688 (1) - head add finish added hitsound
00:55:372 (2) - patten like this? Sorry I like the straight ones :(
SPOILER

00:56:635 (3,1) - patten is change this? i think better one slider repeat. sure
SPOILER

00:59:793 (1,2) - Don't understand tail add finish. change clap please whoops changed
01:09:898 - whistle added

[Kibberous' Normal]

00:14:951 (5,6) - ah... (5) note delete after (6) slider add repeat? k
SPOILER

00:20:161 - maybe your missing add green line. S:C56 added
00:54:109 (5,6) - same 00:14:951 (5,6) -this. kkk changed
00:59:477 (5) - in normal diff only flowing vocal better. so this note delete. no this is fine , but i stacked them
01:02:161 (5) - Don't need this note. ^ same thing i just stacked it no delete

[Insane]

00:20:161 (1,2) - patten suggest i like mine better , with the double circles
SPOILER

00:30:267 (6) - the stream start part here. NC here. kk nc
01:16:846 (4) - same (^) ^
ty for the mod ! and gratz Guy :D !
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
ty Habi and Aerous ;)
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen

[ Zzz ] wrote:

[Rakuen's Insane]
  • Hello~ Rakuen
  1. 00:10:135 (4,5) - Flow suggestions This one's ok i guess
  2. 00:10:530 (2) - I think that sounds a little small. Change 60% Custom clap is quite loud tho, will consider it
  3. 00:51:819 (3) - Flow suggestions Haha, I reverse this on purpose

This seems a little difficult insane. Perhaps this insane need light.4.3? ( To. Aerous ) I think it's cool ^_^
Thanks for the mods!

tutuhaha wrote:

[Rakuen's Insane]
00:31:846 (4,5) - 这块我觉得没太大必要强调5这个音，还是合并slider 我改下
00:37:688 (3,4,5) - 3调整到45中间 觉得现在酱比较好跳
00:49:372 (4) - flow的赶脚感觉应该放到00:48:267 (1) - 的尾巴那里 那里跳太大，改其他地方了
00:55:056 (2) - ctrl+g
然后再把00:55:372 (3,4) - ctrl+g 感觉现在这flow比较好玩
00:57:109 (1,2,3) - 2调整到1和3尾巴之间 Ok
01:04:688 (1,2,3,4,1) - 莫名的想法...
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3054064
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3054070
只是单纯的觉得你1搞这么个流向不往下流太可惜了... 唔。。。可能过后改，先保持这样
01:13:372 (4) - 和前面绿4那块重叠呗 Ok
01:21:109 (1,2) - 和我前面说的理由一样，还是建议合并slider Ok
这是insane而不是另一个extra什么的吧orz！
设定感觉有点太高了 不会吧，就4.7星XD (starrr)
Thanks for the mods!

salinqi wrote:

[Rakuen's Insane]
感觉用od7~7.5比较好？因为最高的两个难度都是od8了;w; 换7了，没注意到orz
00:04:056 (4) - 钝角打着不是特别舒服，类似stack在00:04:530 (2) - 尾巴上可能打着舒服一些 前面部分稍后会改些
00:17:793 (5,1) - Ctrl+G 然后 00:18:109 (2,3) - 也Ctrl+G 因为个人感觉来回跳的梗从5开始放比较好 感觉这跳来跳去比较好玩
00:27:582 (4,5,6) - ……强迫症表示为什么不是等腰三角形QwQ
00:32:635 (7,8,9) - ^
00:37:688 (3,4,5) - ^
00:40:214 (3,4,5) - ^
00:56:635 (3,4,5) - ^ No QAQ，不喜欢3角跳
00:50:793 (1) - 跳太大了，Ctrl+G可能比较合适，最好再放近一点 其实还好，SV慢下来看起来会很大，玩起来挺ok的
00:57:109 (1) - Ctrl+G？Ok
01:06:582 (3,4) - blanket Ok
01:26:635 (3,4,5) - 有点远= = 调了
Thanks for the mods!

HabiHolic wrote:

[Rakuen's Insane]

00:55:056 (2) - Ctrl+g please. if your change better is flow imo Hmm I think no change for now

Nice diff >w< Thanks!
Thanks for the mods!

Diff update: http://puu.sh/hyubV/ebfbea024c.osu

http://puu.sh/hAiPS/ccdd21704e.osu (fixed some overlaps)
[ Eon Fox ]
302 posts
Joined September 2014
[ Eon Fox ]
Easy:

01:12:898 (1) - Move back a white tick, keed the end at the same place.
01:17:477 (1,2) - This seems like it should be one slider.

I would recommend sprucing up the colours, though. Generic isn't great.
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous

VeronicaTheFox wrote:

Easy:

01:12:898 (1) - Move back a white tick, keed the end at the same place.
01:17:477 (1,2) - This seems like it should be one slider.

I would recommend sprucing up the colours, though. Generic isn't great.

no changes here , first one one you suggested followed the vocal perfectly , same with the second one too.
for combo colors i didnt do it yet lol

remapped extra , looks a lot better now. I didn't like my old one :(
[-FlyingRUPig-]
13 posts
Joined April 2014
[-FlyingRUPig-]
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Last edited by [-FlyingRUPig-] , edited 1 time in total.
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely

  • Easy
  1. 00:02:161 - how could you stop map this loud crash strong music :< , i'd like remove 00:01:688 (2,3) - and make 3/4 slider repeat instead
  2. 00:15:109 - why skip cymbal music again :< , 00:14:003 (3) - change to http://puu.sh/hKu8k.jpg to map that time
  3. 00:25:530 - yep here too, the cymbal sounds at here while the next stanza is only a vocal, i'd say http://puu.sh/hKulX.jpg like this instead (starts from 00:25:214 - )
  4. 00:39:425 (2) - for the flow actually i still feel this could better a little bit, hmm example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3119239
  5. 00:49:530 (3) - inconsistency spacing 1,11x here
  6. 00:56:635 (3) - the repeat should be finish instead of clap, the music is cymbal
  7. 00:55:372 (2) - you may add finish on repeat to emphasize the vocal if you want, personally i feel quite empty w/o hitsound here
  8. 00:56:635 (3) - also forgot to NC here
  9. 00:57:898 (4) - actually i feel the flow feels better if you move this slider to 200,244
  10. 00:57:898 (4,5) - anyway the rhythm feels better if you swap the rhythm as you can hear 00:58:372 - has a loud music + vocal whenever 00:59:003 - hasnt

    loud music
  11. 01:14:951 (1) - stop the slider at 01:15:425 - and add circle at 01:15:740 - so you can hitsound the drums music too
  12. 01:21:109 - the cymbal starts on here :< so start the slider at this time please
  13. 01:28:688 - anyway i dont get why 20% here as the cymbal sounds louder than previous ones. i'd say at least 60%


  • Normal
  1. 00:02:161 (5) - imo clap only doesnt really fit in this time since the music has cymbal as well. how about drum finish clap?
  2. 00:08:161 (2) - you can add whistle on head since the hitsound sounds same with the background music here
  3. 00:14:951 (5) - finish on repeat coz the cymbal


  • Rakuen
  1. 00:15:267 (5) - it would be nicer if you make jump to next slider instead of this circle to emphasize the cymbal. move circle to 288,276?


  • Insane
  1. OD 7,5 to make a spread with Rakuen and Guy?

the diff itselves are good but im a little bit worry with the spread actually :<
Good Luck~
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous
FlyingRUPig

FlyingRUPig wrote:

As requested from my M4M queue

[box=Kibberous' Normal]01:08:319 (3,4,5,6,7) Seems too linear of a path. Why not have the single circles at an angle like you did with other slider/circle combos? This should be fine

01:14:951 (1,2) Minor flow break, place 2 a little higher ok

Seems to have too many straight sliders. Add variety and make it look nicer. It'll flow better too.
Areas that could benefit from non-linear sliders

00:15:425 (1,2) Could look better if 1 bent around 2 (rushed example: http://i.imgur.com/qu7grE2.png )
no im not gonna change it
00:40:688 (1,2,3) Would flow better
^
00:54:582 (1,2,3) It's like outlining a square, boring...
i like this square :(
01:00:425 (2,3) Would benefit with a blanket
already blanketed o-o

01:05:319 (2,3,4) Would flow much nicer with some bends.
no its fine

01:23:793 (1,2) Another possible blanket
already blanketed
01:26:319 (1,2,3)

Cool mapset :D Good luck with the ranking proccess!
Thanks for using my queue :)thanks for the mod ! remind me about m4m if i forget ;w;

Ely

Xinely wrote:


  • Easy
  1. 00:02:161 - how could you stop map this loud crash strong music :< , i'd like remove 00:01:688 (2,3) - and make 3/4 slider repeat instead ok changed like what you suggested !
  2. 00:15:109 - why skip cymbal music again :< , 00:14:003 (3) - change to http://puu.sh/hKu8k.jpg to map that time
    yup changed :D
  3. 00:25:530 - yep here too, the cymbal sounds at here while the next stanza is only a vocal, i'd say http://puu.sh/hKulX.jpg like this instead (starts from 00:25:214 - )
    same here :)
  4. 00:39:425 (2) - for the flow actually i still feel this could better a little bit, hmm example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3119239
    added in your example
  5. 00:49:530 (3) - inconsistency spacing 1,11x here k hope its fine now !
  6. 00:56:635 (3) - the repeat should be finish instead of clap, the music is cymbal added
  7. 00:55:372 (2) - you may add finish on repeat to emphasize the vocal if you want, personally i feel quite empty w/o hitsound here
    added whistle instead
  8. 00:56:635 (3) - also forgot to NC here NC !
  9. 00:57:898 (4) - actually i feel the flow feels better if you move this slider to 200,244
    ok , rearranged the next few ones too to fit in here
  10. 00:57:898 (4,5) - anyway the rhythm feels better if you swap the rhythm as you can hear 00:58:372 - has a loud music + vocal whenever 00:59:003 - hasnt switched

    loud music
  11. 01:14:951 (1) - stop the slider at 01:15:425 - and add circle at 01:15:740 - so you can hitsound the drums music too
    added in your suggestion with the slider and circle !
  12. 01:21:109 - the cymbal starts on here :< so start the slider at this time please
    ok <:
  13. 01:28:688 - anyway i dont get why 20% here as the cymbal sounds louder than previous ones. i'd say at least 60%
    changed to 50%


  • Normal
  1. 00:02:161 (5) - imo clap only doesnt really fit in this time since the music has cymbal as well. how about drum finish clap? added
  2. 00:08:161 (2) - you can add whistle on head since the hitsound sounds same with the background music here same here
  3. 00:14:951 (5) - finish on repeat coz the cymbal added


  • Rakuen
  1. 00:15:267 (5) - it would be nicer if you make jump to next slider instead of this circle to emphasize the cymbal. move circle to 288,276?


  • Insane
  1. OD 7,5 to make a spread with Rakuen and Guy? changed OD to 7.5

the diff itselves are good but im a little bit worry with the spread actually :<
Good Luck~
thanks for the mod ! the spread should be okay :(

EDIT : Talked with Pishi about remapped Extra
hentai
17:23 Aerous: i couldnt stand it and remapped it gg
17:23 pishifat: it
17:24 Aerous: this it 
17:24 *Aerous is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/695580 LiSA - Rally Go Round -TV ver.-]
17:24 Aerous: :DDDDD
17:24 pishifat: oh
17:24 pishifat: extra
17:24 pishifat: not insane
17:25 Aerous: yea lol
17:29 pishifat: its not as shit
17:29 pishifat: visually
17:29 Aerous: yay 
17:29 pishifat: placements of objects tho
17:29 pishifat: something i sitll dont get in many many places
17:30 Aerous: rip 
17:31 pishifat: idk who has told you this flows well 00:22:846 (6,1) -
17:31 pishifat: but in most cases it doesnt
17:32 Aerous: ;w;
17:32 Aerous: where should i put it 
17:33 pishifat: thats for you to worry about
17:33 pishifat: stuff like 00:25:530 (5,1) - plays good
17:33 pishifat: 00:26:161 (2,3) - not so much
17:34 Aerous: k noted
17:35 pishifat: i am impressed tho
17:35 pishifat: it doesnt look like a bad map
17:35 Aerous: :D
17:36 Aerous: thanks to you , dem testplays
17:36 pishifat: and your 1000 mods per map
17:36 pishifat: only 2 things i really want to mention
17:36 pishifat: 00:11:793 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
17:36 pishifat: lyrics dont really indicate back forth for whole thing
17:36 pishifat: just 1-4
17:37 Aerous: yea i was gonan change this 00:12:425 (5,6,7) - 
17:37 Aerous: but i forgot
17:37 Aerous: i was gonna update after next mod
17:37 pishifat: .
17:37 pishifat: and other thing was
17:37 pishifat: 00:02:793 (5,1,2) -
17:37 pishifat: if you want emphasis on 1
17:38 pishifat: don't make it such a nonsharp curve
17:38 pishifat: sharp -> more emphasis -> more mapgood
17:38 Aerous: kk ill change it after
17:38 *Aerous is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/695580 LiSA - Rally Go Round -TV ver.- [Extra]]
17:38 pishifat: you do that sutff like everywhere so
17:38 pishifat: ya
17:39 Aerous: btw wanna post for kd :3
17:39 pishifat: i already got kudosu
17:39 Aerous: ohh
17:39 Aerous: right
17:39 Aerous: i forgot
17:39 pishifat: if i posted every time you showed me your map id be loaded
17:39 Aerous: LMAO
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,486 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
[Extra]
  1. 00:02:161 (3) –00:02:951 (1,2) - The clap hitsound doesn’t fit music well imo
  2. 00:06:267 (5) –missing whistle, it’s kick drum. It’s examples please apply to all the set except gd
  3. 00:12:425 (1,2,3,1) –you’d better emphasize 00:12:898 (1) -not 00:12:582 (2,3) -, please keep ds of 00:12:740 (3,1) – larger
  4. 01:08:477 (1) –I’d cuver this in the other direction
  5. 01:11:003 (1) –ctrl+g flow better for me
  6. 01:15:740 (5,6) -^
  7. 01:17:319 (4) –this is overmapped, the slderend lands on no drum
  8. 01:21:425 (2,3,4) –I’d make the jumps smaller than 01:21:898 (1,2,3,4) –to fit the music better


[Rakuen’s Insane]
  1. 00:05:161 (7) –我建议加这个NC，这太突然了
  2. 00:06:029 (4) - 00:07:293 (4) - 00:08:556 (4) –等等这些类似的可以加soft clap而不是normal hitnormal来强调音乐
  3. 00:10:846 (2,3,4) –这个2,3看着挺正常，但是3到4有着莫名的不整洁。一来是4的形状，2来是突然的转变方向。要知道音乐这里并没有大的起伏变化。建议4复制2
  4. 00:16:214 (4) - http://puu.sh/hQBjm/d5a4a1f9f8.jpg
  5. 00:16:688 (6,1) –这里连着前面的5,6顺下来摆比较无聊。
  6. 00:30:109 (4,5) –保持弯曲程度一样或者别弯曲
  7. 00:51:425 (2,3,4) -1/4最好别跳这么大，这是Insane不是Extra
  8. 01:03:740 (2) –ctrl+g
GL
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
Sorry for being late ;w;

[ General]
  1. AudioLeadIn: Set to 2000? The start of the song is a little early.
  2. Custom new combo colors aren't used. I would like to recommend that you set it.

[ Easy]
  1. 00:00:425 (1) - Add a custom-clap (S:C56) at the start point? It will make a good sound.
  2. 00:01:688 (2) - Default-clap doesn't fit... Please try using a custom-clap (S:C56).
  3. 00:02:951 (1) - ^
  4. 00:16:846 (3) - fix the blanket.
    image
  5. 00:21:898 (3) - ^
    image
  6. 00:24:582 (2,3,1) - I know that you're taking a vocal at (2,3), but the two sliders doesn't fit the song. Also (1) - I feel a little strange it. Threfore I would recommend the following rhythm.
    image
  7. 00:26:793 (3) - It is taking a vocal, but I think we should follow the drum sound.
    image
  8. 00:53:477 (3,4,1) - You might want to make the following rhythm. like this 01:03:582 (3,4,1).
    image
  9. 01:17:477 (1) - Please try to shorten the slider.
    image

[ Kibberous' Normal]
  1. 00:00:425 (1) - Add a custom-clap (S:C56)! It will make a good sound~
  2. 00:00:582 (2) - ^ at the start point.
  3. 00:02:161 (5) - Default-clap doesn't fit... Please try using a custom-clap (S:C56).
  4. 00:02:951 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:14:319 (6,1) - In my opinion, you should avoid the stack in normal diff, . (However, except the 1/2 rhythm.) I think we should emphasize the visibility of objects for beginner players.

[ Kibboo's Hard]
  1. OD is a little high in hard diff. You are using AR8, so change to OD6 in order to adjust the balance. (OD7 is the same as Rakuen diff...) Also it would be good if you reduce the HP.
  2. I feel the volume is too big. 60%~70% would be appropriate setting.
  3. 00:00:425 (1) - I guess You had forgot to add the custom-clap at here.
  4. 00:00:582 (2) - ^
  5. 00:52:214(T) - duplicate green line.

[ Rakuen's Insane]
  1. Good map~!

[ Extra]
  1. 00:00:425 (1) - Add a custom-clap (S:C56) at the start and end points. It will make a good sound~
  2. 00:02:161 (3) - Default-clap doesn't fit... Please try using a custom-clap (S:C56).
  3. 00:02:951 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:01:846 (1) - Move to x:148 y:304. Make a good stack~
  5. 01:21:109 (1,2,3,4) - I think some flows are a little bad. Please try the following placement.
    image
  6. 01:23:635 (2,1) - Swap these new combos.
  7. 01:28:688 (1) - Remove a custom-whistle at the end point.

[ Guy's Extra]
  1. 00:00:425 (1) - 始点と終点にcustom-clap入れるといいかも！　00:02:951 (1,2)と同じように。
    他は特になかったです。

Good luck!
Nerova Riuz GX
1,413 posts
Joined April 2012
Nerova Riuz GX


Guy's Extra

  1. 00:00:898 (3,4) - I can't understand why you stack them. 2 reasons: first, you didn't do a stack on 00:03:425 (3,4) - . second, 00:01:530 (5,1) - is also a stacked set. It feels like only 00:01:530 (5,1) - needs a stack. Maybe you can put 00:00:898 (3) - on x=232, y=316
  2. 00:19:214 (1,1) - Stack them? it seems like a good stop. Also, you did a stack on 01:22:530 (1,1) - , so I suggest a stack here.
  3. 00:21:582 - Do a slider here? You did a slider on 00:11:477 - , and I think it has not a pretty good reason to make a stop here: http://puu.sh/hT22y/7e019b8d9c.jpg
  4. 00:50:793 (1) - Maybe ends on 00:51:267 - ? I know maybe it's a stupid idea but this is better imo
  5. 01:20:003 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Make them spin! http://puu.sh/hT2El/17377e9e11.jpg
    Another stupid idea


Extra

  1. 00:02:951 (1) - and 00:03:582 (4) - not a perfect blanket
  2. 00:15:109 (2) - 00:15:425 (2) - I hope they're a blanket
  3. 00:35:635 (1,2) - not a pretty good one imo. try this : http://puu.sh/hT3Y5/1a0a341874.jpg
  4. 00:44:477 (1,2,3) - Strange just came in visually. Also it appears with a pretty bad flow.
  5. 01:04:688 (1) - 01:05:319 (3) - blanket problem.
  6. 01:05:951 (1) - Seriously, its angle makes it quite strange on visual. Also it breaks a better flow. http://puu.sh/hT3Ld/c2ed39eadc.jpg

That's all I can do for you.
GL
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
thanks o/

http://puu.sh/hTNUz/0fece83158.zip
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,846 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
fix alot of hs and stuff

SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Rally Go Round.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52214
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.999999

[Metadata]
Title:Rally Go Round -TV ver.-
TitleUnicode:Rally Go Round -TV ver.-
Artist:LiSA
ArtistUnicode:LiSA
Creator:Aerous
Version:Kibboo's Hard
Source:ニセコイ:
Tags:Nisekoi Season 2 Opening Rakuen Guy Kibbleru Chitoge Onodera Tachibana Tsugumi
BeatmapID:677753
BeatmapSetID:302343

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,0,"nisekoiS2.avi"
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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280,256,63898,2,0,P|244:267|208:277,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,204,64214,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,128,64372,2,0,P|200:84|160:56,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,84,64688,6,0,B|328:69|328:69|371:81|417:71|417:71|437:90,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,242,65161,2,0,L|360:168,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,192,65477,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,192,65635,2,0,L|449:266,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,368,65951,6,0,P|384:344|312:325,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,292,66425,2,0,P|204:336|220:380,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,244,66740,2,0,P|324:200|308:156,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,136,67056,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,208,67214,6,0,P|116:212|52:144,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,88,67688,2,0,L|124:12,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,56,68003,2,0,P|253:49|291:44,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,96,68319,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,152,68477,6,0,B|328:220|292:220|310:300,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,352,68951,2,0,P|428:300|416:268,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,188,69267,2,0,P|421:150|427:113,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,56,69582,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,56,69740,6,0,B|240:76|240:76|208:64|200:28,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,116,70214,2,0,P|128:160|132:196,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,168,70530,2,0,P|287:159|317:152,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,232,70846,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,300,71003,6,0,P|260:304|192:224,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,168,71477,1,4,0:0:0:0:
176,100,71635,2,0,P|142:84|104:86,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
80,168,71951,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,168,72030,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,168,72109,2,0,P|87:186|90:204,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,240,72425,6,0,P|52:280|56:320,2,75,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,268,72898,2,0,P|250:259|324:248,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,168,73372,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,168,73530,6,0,P|328:128|228:160,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,96,74003,2,0,L|88:84,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,184,74319,2,0,P|56:217|58:254,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,258,74635,2,0,P|215:221|200:188,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,308,74951,6,0,B|232:288|232:288|256:296|272:320,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,320,75425,2,0,P|401:257|381:187,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,88,75898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,88,76056,6,0,P|297:132|224:125,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,72,76530,2,0,P|104:59|69:47,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,148,76846,2,0,L|84:192,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,216,77161,2,0,L|100:256,2,37.5,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,180,77477,6,0,B|260:176|300:200|300:200|324:176|323:148,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,192,77951,2,0,P|464:192|512:108,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,52,78425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,84,78582,6,0,B|276:100|276:68|199:82,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,152,79056,2,0,P|129:188|124:228,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,216,79372,2,0,P|212:248|184:280,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,340,79688,2,0,P|214:356|177:360,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,280,80003,5,4,0:0:0:0:
320,280,80161,2,0,P|358:283|391:299,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,232,80477,2,0,P|476:176|436:92,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,80,80951,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,172,81109,6,0,L|204:160,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
128,160,81582,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,244,81740,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,248,81898,5,8,0:0:0:0:
216,152,82056,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,152,82214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
127,264,82372,2,0,P|120:281|108:295,2,37.5,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,92,83793,5,4,0:0:0:0:
228,187,83951,2,0,P|224:221|221:255,1,67.4999979400635,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,312,84267,2,0,P|331:311|356:316,2,33.7499989700318,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,228,84582,2,0,P|343:226|392:240,1,67.4999979400635,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,152,84898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,80,85056,6,0,P|328:124|224:128,1,134.999995880127,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,68,85530,2,0,P|157:61|116:56,1,67.4999979400635,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,148,85846,2,0,P|100:185|108:224,1,67.4999979400635,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,216,86161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,216,86319,6,0,B|176:300|176:300|200:316|221:312,1,134.999995880127,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,268,86793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,268,86872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,268,86951,2,0,L|368:260,1,67.4999979400635,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,236,87267,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,147,87425,6,0,P|344:160|274:154,1,134.999995880127,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,88,87898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,160,88056,2,0,P|116:212|140:288,1,134.999995880127,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,284,88530,2,0,P|240:297|219:322,1,67.4999979400635,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous
Fycho

Fycho wrote:

[Extra]
  1. 00:02:161 (3) –00:02:951 (1,2) - The clap hitsound doesn’t fit music well imo fixed HS here
  2. 00:06:267 (5) –missing whistle, it’s kick drum. It’s examples please apply to all the set except gd added
  3. 00:12:425 (1,2,3,1) –you’d better emphasize 00:12:898 (1) -not 00:12:582 (2,3) -, please keep ds of 00:12:740 (3,1) – larger fixed here
  4. 01:08:477 (1) –I’d cuver this in the other direction curved
  5. 01:11:003 (1) –ctrl+g flow better for me yup CTRL + G :D !
  6. 01:15:740 (5,6) -^ ^
  7. 01:17:319 (4) –this is overmapped, the slderend lands on no drum removed this slider and replaced with a circle on the red tick
  8. 01:21:425 (2,3,4) –I’d make the jumps smaller than 01:21:898 (1,2,3,4) –to fit the music better ok !

GL
thanks Fycho !

I'll reply to the other 2 mods later !

Gamu

Gamu wrote:

Sorry for being late ;w;

[ General]
  1. AudioLeadIn: Set to 2000? The start of the song is a little early. added
  2. Custom new combo colors aren't used. I would like to recommend that you set it. added custom colors

[ Easy]
  1. 00:00:425 (1) - Add a custom-clap (S:C56) at the start point? It will make a good sound.
  2. 00:01:688 (2) - Default-clap doesn't fit... Please try using a custom-clap (S:C56).
  3. 00:02:951 (1) - ^
  4. 00:16:846 (3) - fix the blanket.
    [box=image]
00:21:898 (3) - ^
image
00:24:582 (2,3,1) - I know that you're taking a vocal at (2,3), but the two sliders doesn't fit the song. Also (1) - I feel a little strange it. Threfore I would recommend the following rhythm.
image
00:26:793 (3) - It is taking a vocal, but I think we should follow the drum sound.
image
00:53:477 (3,4,1) - You might want to make the following rhythm. like this 01:03:582 (3,4,1).
image
01:17:477 (1) - Please try to shorten the slider.
image
Fixed all here except for this one because i feel like the current one is better :(
[*]00:53:477 (3,4,1) - You might want to make the following rhythm. like this 01:03:582 (3,4,1).
image

[ Kibberous' Normal]
  1. 00:00:425 (1) - Add a custom-clap (S:C56)! It will make a good sound~
  2. 00:00:582 (2) - ^ at the start point.
  3. 00:02:161 (5) - Default-clap doesn't fit... Please try using a custom-clap (S:C56).
  4. 00:02:951 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:14:319 (6,1) - In my opinion, you should avoid the stack in normal diff, . (However, except the 1/2 rhythm.) I think we should emphasize the visibility of objects for beginner players.
Fixed everything here !

[ Extra]
  1. 00:00:425 (1) - Add a custom-clap (S:C56) at the start and end points. It will make a good sound~
  2. 00:02:161 (3) - Default-clap doesn't fit... Please try using a custom-clap (S:C56).
  3. 00:02:951 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:01:846 (1) - Move to x:148 y:304. Make a good stack~
  5. 01:21:109 (1,2,3,4) - I think some flows are a little bad. Please try the following placement.
    image
  6. 01:23:635 (2,1) - Swap these new combos.
  7. 01:28:688 (1) - Remove a custom-whistle at the end point.
Fixed here too :( Plus some of the points were mentioned by Fycho too !
Good luck![/box]

GX

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:



Extra

  1. 00:02:951 (1) - and 00:03:582 (4) - not a perfect blanket no one going to notice this
  2. 00:15:109 (2) - 00:15:425 (2) - I hope they're a blanket ^^
  3. 00:35:635 (1,2) - not a pretty good one imo. try this : http://puu.sh/hT3Y5/1a0a341874.jpg
    no thanks like the one i have right now
  4. 00:44:477 (1,2,3) - Strange just came in visually. Also it appears with a pretty bad flow.
    this is fine
  5. 01:04:688 (1) - 01:05:319 (3) - blanket problem. the blanket is fine
  6. 01:05:951 (1) - Seriously, its angle makes it quite strange on visual. Also it breaks a better flow.
    no thanks the one i have right now is better
    http://puu.sh/hT3Ld/c2ed39eadc.jpg

That's all I can do for you.
GL
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen

Xinely wrote:


  • Rakuen
  1. 00:15:267 (5) - it would be nicer if you make jump to next slider instead of this circle to emphasize the cymbal. move circle to 288,276? Circle close to next slider would be more comfy to play
Thanks for the mods!

Fycho wrote:

[Rakuen’s Insane]
  1. 00:05:161 (7) –我建议加这个NC，这太突然了 Ok
  2. 00:06:029 (4) - 00:07:293 (4) - 00:08:556 (4) –等等这些类似的可以加soft clap而不是normal hitnormal来强调音乐 觉得现在的还行，不需要加强
  3. 00:10:846 (2,3,4) –这个2,3看着挺正常，但是3到4有着莫名的不整洁。一来是4的形状，2来是突然的转变方向。要知道音乐这里并没有大的起伏变化。建议4复制2 看起来好像太多直线，决定放个弯的
  4. 00:16:214 (4) - http://puu.sh/hQBjm/d5a4a1f9f8.jpg Ok
  5. 00:16:688 (6,1) –这里连着前面的5,6顺下来摆比较无聊。感觉排列还不错好看
  6. 00:30:109 (4,5) –保持弯曲程度一样或者别弯曲 Ok
  7. 00:51:425 (2,3,4) -1/4最好别跳这么大，这是Insane不是Extra 玩起来还行
  8. 01:03:740 (2) –ctrl+g 这故意的 (gameplay)
Thanks for the mods!

Update: http://puu.sh/hY9gi/ec67d9952d.osu
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
hi

[Guy's Extra]
  1. 00:35:477 (7) - imo move it down will more fit for this jump, like x368 y344
  2. 00:50:793 (1) - stop at 00:51:582 - ? hear drum here
  3. 00:51:740 - ~ 00:52:135 - some pattern suggestion xd
    SPOILER
  4. 00:57:740 (3) - 1/2, feel kinda empty
  5. 01:11:477 (3) - missing clap?
  6. 01:17:398 (4) - i think this circle is unnecessary, also this stream kinda hard to read orz
  7. 01:26:477 (2) - remove finish
  8. <3
[Extra]
  1. 00:15:109 (2,1) - switch nc
  2. 00:19:214 (1) - feel bad flow between 00:19:056 (3,1) -
  3. 00:26:319 (3,4) - can make better flow
    SPOILER
  4. 00:54:267 (6) - slider direction should be upwards after this jump, it will more smooth between 00:54:109 (5) - ~ 00:54:267 (6) - ~ 00:54:582 (1) -
    SPOILER
  5. 01:02:003 (2,3,4,5) - feel overcrowd
  6. 01:16:846 (1) - change to a circle
[Rakuen's Insane]
  1. 00:10:135 (4,5) - stack在00:09:740 (3) - 的尾
  2. 00:29:951 - 這裡的normal smapleset感覺不太合適
  3. 00:50:319 - ^
  4. 00:30:109 (4) - 這個應該不是1/4
  5. 01:02:003 (8,9,1) - 打起上來有點太急了 會有點接不上
  6. 01:26:872 (4,5) - 也是
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

hi

[Guy's Extra]
  1. 00:35:477 (7) - imo move it down will more fit for this jump, like x368 y344 - good suggestion, but i want to keep this triangle 00:35:319 (6,7,1) -
  2. 00:50:793 (1) - stop at 00:51:582 - ? hear drum here - ok
  3. 00:51:740 - ~ 00:52:135 - some pattern suggestion xd - fixed in my way :3
    SPOILER
  4. 00:57:740 (3) - 1/2, feel kinda empty - keep it
  5. 01:11:477 (3) - missing clap? - okk
  6. 01:17:398 (4) - i think this circle is unnecessary, also this stream kinda hard to read orz - changed
  7. 01:26:477 (2) - remove finish - removed. and added whistle
  8. <3
thank you wkyik :3
http://puu.sh/i0RX0/c8ef36ec27.zip
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

hi

[Extra]
  1. 00:15:109 (2,1) - switch nc the nc here is fine !
  2. 00:19:214 (1) - feel bad flow between 00:19:056 (3,1) - mhm if one more mod tells me to change here , then I will for now I'll keep it !
  3. 00:26:319 (3,4) - can make better flow ok fixed
    SPOILER
  4. 00:54:267 (6) - slider direction should be upwards after this jump, it will more smooth between 00:54:109 (5) - ~ 00:54:267 (6) - ~ 00:54:582 (1) -
    SPOILER
    added!
  5. 01:02:003 (2,3,4,5) - feel overcrowd mhmm , yea I kinda think so but I'll try to think of something else later!
  6. 01:16:846 (1) - change to a circle this is fine as it is !
Thanks for the mod ! 8-)
Want 2 Buy Avon
264 posts
Joined February 2014
Want 2 Buy Avon

[Easy]
  1. 00:27:582 (1,2) - Blanket?
  2. 00:33:898 (2,3) - These don't flow very well
  3. 01:09:267 (3) - I'd make the downbeat a click event
  4. 01:21:898 (3) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:951 (2,3) - I'd make the 2 flow into the 3 more
  2. 01:25:056 (3,4) - I'd make these flow a little better too
[Hard]
  1. 00:21:898 (1,2) - Make parallel pls
  2. 00:38:635 (2,1) - This tiny overlap looks a little bit messy
  3. 00:44:477 (1,2) - I'd make these flow more
  4. 00:44:477 (1,3) - Blanket?
  5. 01:20:477 (3,1) - Fix blanketu
[Insane]
  1. 00:30:267 (5) - I'd either point this up more or move 00:30:425 (6,7,8,9,1) - down to make it flow a little better
  2. 00:48:267 (1,2) - Linear flow pls
  3. 00:49:530 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:20:161 (2,3) - These are a tiny bit away from being paralell
[Extra]
  1. 00:15:109 (2,4,1) - These aren't stacked properly
  2. 00:19:214 (1,1) - idk about this overlap very much, I'd say to blanket it instead
  3. 00:57:582 (2) - Move this to the right a bit so the 1 flows into it more
  4. 01:09:740 (1,2,3) - Why not parralell (remove red anchor)
[Guy's Extra]
Seems good to me =w=b
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous

Xellie wrote:


[Easy]
  1. 00:27:582 (1,2) - Blanket? this is fine
  2. 00:33:898 (2,3) - These don't flow very well should be okay
  3. 01:09:267 (3) - I'd make the downbeat a click event im not gonna change it
  4. 01:21:898 (3) - ^ repeat is fine
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:951 (2,3) - I'd make the 2 flow into the 3 more this is on purpose
  2. 01:25:056 (3,4) - I'd make these flow a little better too mhmm maybe later
[Extra]
  1. 00:15:109 (2,4,1) - These aren't stacked properly no one will notice ;w;
  2. 00:19:214 (1,1) - idk about this overlap very much, I'd say to blanket it instead if another mod says it ill change
  3. 00:57:582 (2) - Move this to the right a bit so the 1 flows into it more ok
  4. 01:09:740 (1,2,3) - Why not parralell (remove red anchor) no its fine
[Guy's Extra]
Seems good to me =w=b
thanks for the mod !
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little
From my queue.

[General]
  1. Mind adding both parts of each character's name in the tags?
  2. 01:29:477 - I think this is a more appropriate ending point, because the sound actually cuts out here.
[Easy]
  1. 00:00:425 (1,2) - Fix distance spacing.
  2. 00:01:688 (2,1) - The drop-off here is pretty awkward. Try to make something a little smoother.
  3. 00:13:372 (1,2,3) - This rhythm doesn't really fit the song well. The beat on 00:13:688 (2) deserves more emphasis, and the way you accented the beat on (3) with a slider head kind of dwarfs the stronger note on (2). Swapping the rhythm around would be more appropriate in my opinion: http://puu.sh/i5vkx/d1ca8c88a5.jpg
  4. 00:20:951 (1,2,3) - Flow here is rough. For the sake of beginner players, you ought to make it smoother. (1,2) form an inward curving motion, but (3) requires the player to pull to the outside, making it tough to play.
  5. 00:28:530 (2,3) - Some weird drop-off going on here too. Try to adjust to make it more round. More rally go round...
  6. 00:35:161 (3,1,2) - Flow needs some work here. It's incredibly awkward. After (3,1), it would feel much better to move in a round motion, toward the right.
  7. 00:44:003 (2,3,4) - Poor flow here as well. Avoid S-shaped movements, as they make it awkward to play.
Flow needs work.

[Kibberous' Normal]
  1. 00:35:161 (6) - Angle here is just a bit awkward.
  2. 01:05:319 (2,3,4) - The straightness of this makes it feel really rigid. Try giving more of a curve by moving (3) outward: http://puu.sh/i5xrw/5952625084.jpg
[Kibboo's Hard]
  1. 00:00:425 (1,2) - Fix yo stack
  2. 00:12:898 (1) - Nothing significant on the white tick here. It's more appropriate to extend this by 1/2 for the sustained vocal.
  3. 01:21:109 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Hard to play for and Hard diff. The square angles feel really sharp, and requires a lot of control to play, especially at such high speed and with overlap.
  4. Remove your unused inheriting sections.
[Rakuen's Insane]
  1. 00:05:477 - The normal-hitnormals and soft-hitclaps in this section are really overpowering the music. Please reduce hitsound volume.
  2. 00:19:214 (1) - Reversed is better in my opinion. Smoother movement from (7).
  3. 00:37:688 (3,4,5,1) - This kind of flow feels really awkward to play. (3,4,5) are kind of in a smooth line, but the variation in spacing is really big, and the curve of (1) is opposing the curve of the jump, making it really harsh.
  4. 00:44:161 (4) - I think the opposite direction is better here. The sharp angle combined with small distance spacing makes it too difficult.
[Extra]
  1. 00:02:793 (5,1,2) - Placement here doesn't play very well.. I'd recommend moving (2) over here: http://puu.sh/i5yta/57bbc84886.jpg
  2. 00:14:003 (5,1) - Jump's better. I'd recommend stacking (5) under the end of (4).
  3. 01:04:372 (6,7,1) - Swap (6,7) for nicer flow? http://puu.sh/i5yNY/25edda5370.jpg
  4. 01:08:003 (4) - Try reversing the direction?
  5. 01:09:109 (4,5) - Accent in song is better represented by a 1/2 slider. It will emphasize better, and create a rhythm pattern with (1,1).
Watch your jump patterns. Some of them don't feel good to play, like 00:47:477 (2,3,4,5,6) and some sharp direction changes like 00:23:951 (5,6,1)

[Guy's Extra]
  1. 00:30:267 (6,7,8) - I feel like distance ratio for (6,7) and (7,8) could make (7,8) feel unnaturally small. Maybe increase the distance spacing a bit between them.
  2. 01:03:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Just my opinion, but I think a jump pattern with round motion, rather than back and forth like this, would be more fitting with the feeling of the song.
Good luck.
Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
4,642 posts
Joined May 2013
Monstrata
Hey Aerous & friends.

[Guy's Extra]

  1. 00:00:425 (1,2) - Ctrl+G'ing this rhythm makes more sense imo, like you did with 00:02:951 (1,2) - . There's clearly a second drum hit on 00:00:582 - but not really an audible beat on 00:00:740 -
  2. 00:15:267 (1) - NC fits better on 00:15:425 (2) - .
  3. 00:33:425 (2,3) - Try Ctrl+G'ing this rhythm. Right now slider 2 ends on a strong beat. You should have it begin on the white tick instead of the red.
  4. 00:39:425 (1) - There's a strong beat on the slider-end that you aren't really mapping to. How about Reducing this slider to 3/4 and placing a new circle on the white tick? Stacking the circle under the tail would work nicely too.
    Something like this
  5. 00:43:530 (2,3) - Try Ctrl+G'ing here too. Again, slider 2 begins on a weak note (red tick too) but ends on a stronger one. The vocals also emphasize the white tick that you've currently mapped to a slider-end.
  6. 00:48:109 (6,1) - How about a larger jump here to match the pitch increase? Compare that with: 00:46:846 (6,1) -
  7. 00:58:372 (1,2,3) - This really doesn't fit the music for me ;c. All 3 sliders begin on weak drum beats.
    How about this rhythm instead?
  8. 01:03:267 (4) - Ctrl+G for better flow. A flow break would fit better from 4>1 rather than 3>4.
  9. 01:28:530 (4) - Try putting this circle on 402||150. It'll flow a bit better and still keep a nice linear pattern with the sliderends of 3 and 1.
[Extra]

  1. 00:00:425 (1,2) - Ctrl+G fits better here. Just like you did with 00:02:951 (1,2) - .
  2. 00:09:109 (1,3) - Ehh,. This pattern doesn't really work for me because of the overlap. It's not like 00:08:635 (4,1) - Where the slider-tail overlaps the head, making it perfectly readable. This time, its a head overlapping a head which makes it hard to read :P.
  3. 00:14:951 (1,2,1) - This should be a combo on its own, NC 00:15:425 (2) - Instead since that's when the next line in the song begins.
  4. 00:19:214 (1,1) - You basically overlap the entire approach circle with this pattern. Honestly i would think of another one, because the way you've set this up, it's going to be very difficult to hit the circle right when sightreading, because you basically have no visual cue. Approach Circle is overlapped and no spacing cue since its stacked.
  5. 00:41:161 (2,3,4) - Could improve the flow here tbh. 2>3 is going upward in a clockwise motion, but you switch the flow downward with 4>5 etc... However this motion isn't reflected in the song itself.
  6. 00:42:425 (3,4) - Try Ctrl+G'ing this rhythm. It fits the vocals a bit better imo.
  7. 00:52:530 (2,3) - This flow is really harsh here :P.
  8. 00:55:056 (2,3,4,5) - This plays weirdly. You're mapping to the background vocals, but you use both large spacing and less than ideal flow to map what *should* be a feint vocal in the back. Try something like this:
    Triangles idk~
  9. 01:01:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - Wow this is really sharp...
  10. 01:19:688 (4) - Two circles instead? This slider sounds different than the others too. You can map 01:19:846 - to something clickable.
[Rakuen's Insane]
  1. 00:09:740 (3,4) - Idk about this man. They're spaced like 1/2's since in the same combo, you use similar spacing for 00:09:109 (1,2) - .
  2. 00:17:951 (1,2,3) - This spacing is really sudden... You would expect a jump from 00:18:267 (3,4) - because its reflected in the vocals, but not 1>2>3 honestly :P. You'll notice that on 00:18:109 (2) - There isn't actually a drum hit here like there is on 1, 3 and 4.
  3. 00:37:688 (3,5) - Try Ctrl+G'ing this. Plays and flows better imo.
  4. 00:47:793 (4,5) - Ctrl+G this rhythm? a circle on 00:48:109 - would fit better imo. It would also lead into the next combo a bit better.
  5. 01:03:740 (2,3) - Ctrl+G this rhythm too, it would fit the drums better. There isnt any particular emphasis in the vocals here.
  6. 01:21:582 (2,3) - No circles? No Jumps here? ;o.
[Kibboo's Hard]

  1. 00:13:372 (2,3) - Ctrl+G'ing this rhythm makes more sense imo. You usually map to instruments, but there's nothing on 00:13:846 -
  2. 00:24:740 (3,4) - You could Ctrl"G this rhythm too if you want to map the guitar here.
  3. 01:28:530 (4) - Not going to finish like the other diffs? (Circle then another 1/1 slider). Right now you basically omit the last drum hit 01:28:688 - .
[Collab Normal]

  1. Hmm... Noticeable diff gap from Normal > Hard. I feel like more 1/2 rhythm could be incorporated in some parts, since Hard uses triplets, and has a relatively long series of single tap (7 circles in a row in kiai I think?)
  2. 00:04:530 (4,5,6) - This is a really weird rhythm choice lol. 6 doesn't really follow anything, since the strong beat is on the slider-end of 5...
    Try something more beginner friendly
  3. 00:24:425 (4) - Move this up 1/2 a beat (00:24:267 - ). Fits the vocals better. You can then map a circle onto 00:24:740 - .
  4. 00:52:214 (1,2,3,4) - This is too simple honestly :P. Try and incorporate more 1/2 usage here since this is the beginning of the Kiai Section.
  5. 00:57:740 (2) - Try reducing this to 1/1 instead and adding a circle at 00:58:214 - this makes for a more interesting rhythm.
  6. 01:02:319 (1,2,3,4) - Here too, there's suddenly no 1/2 rhythm at all. It just feels a bit irregular, because there's no musical cue like a pitch decrease or anything that suggests simpler rhythm.
[Easy]

  1. 00:16:214 (2,3) - Blanket pls/
  2. 00:41:477 (1,2) - Try this rhythn instead. It fits the vocals a bit better imo, since right now slider 2 doesn't really begin on anything strong.
    Rhythm
  3. 00:56:635 (1,2) - This really doesn't fit the music ;c Especially slider 2. It doesn't begin on anything strong which makes clicking it seem awkward.
  4. 01:16:846 (4,1) - Fix Blanket
  5. 01:19:372 (3,1) - You could blanket slider 4 for better flow.
  6. 01:20:003 (1,2) - DS is x0.8 here. Mistake?
Good luck ;o. When are you mapping Ebb and Flow/Crossing Field/Ignite??
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous
CS16

CloudSplash16 wrote:

From my queue.

[General]
  1. Mind adding both parts of each character's name in the tags? Added!
  2. 01:29:477 - I think this is a more appropriate ending point, because the sound actually cuts out here. I'll change this if Kibb Rakuen or Guy changes it
[Easy]
  1. 00:00:425 (1,2) - Fix distance spacing.
  2. 00:01:688 (2,1) - The drop-off here is pretty awkward. Try to make something a little smoother.
  3. 00:13:372 (1,2,3) - This rhythm doesn't really fit the song well. The beat on 00:13:688 (2) deserves more emphasis, and the way you accented the beat on (3) with a slider head kind of dwarfs the stronger note on (2). Swapping the rhythm around would be more appropriate in my opinion: http://puu.sh/i5vkx/d1ca8c88a5.jpg
  4. 00:20:951 (1,2,3) - Flow here is rough. For the sake of beginner players, you ought to make it smoother. (1,2) form an inward curving motion, but (3) requires the player to pull to the outside, making it tough to play.
  5. 00:28:530 (2,3) - Some weird drop-off going on here too. Try to adjust to make it more round. More rally go round...
  6. 00:35:161 (3,1,2) - Flow needs some work here. It's incredibly awkward. After (3,1), it would feel much better to move in a round motion, toward the right.
  7. 00:44:003 (2,3,4) - Poor flow here as well. Avoid S-shaped movements, as they make it awkward to play.
Flow needs work.

Fixed everything you told me in here ! I'll try to look at my flow more too

[Kibberous' Normal]
  1. 00:35:161 (6) - Angle here is just a bit awkward.
  2. 01:05:319 (2,3,4) - The straightness of this makes it feel really rigid. Try giving more of a curve by moving (3) outward: http://puu.sh/i5xrw/5952625084.jpg
Same here I fixed the awkward angle and the rigid part !

[Extra]
  1. 00:02:793 (5,1,2) - Placement here doesn't play very well.. I'd recommend moving (2) over here: http://puu.sh/i5yta/57bbc84886.jpg
    added
  2. 00:14:003 (5,1) - Jump's better. I'd recommend stacking (5) under the end of (4).
    stacked
  3. 01:04:372 (6,7,1) - Swap (6,7) for nicer flow? http://puu.sh/i5yNY/25edda5370.jpg
    mhm sure
  4. 01:08:003 (4) - Try reversing the direction?
    No , I like how it plays right now :(
  5. 01:09:109 (4,5) - Accent in song is better represented by a 1/2 slider. It will emphasize better, and create a rhythm pattern with (1,1).
Watch your jump patterns. Some of them don't feel good to play, like 00:47:477 (2,3,4,5,6) and some sharp direction changes like 00:23:951 (5,6,1)
Not gonna change here , but I might improve my jump patterns later on

Good luck.
Thanks for the mod :D !

Best Top Lane NA (Monstrata)

monstrata wrote:

Hey Aerous & friends.

[Extra]

  1. 00:00:425 (1,2) - Ctrl+G fits better here. Just like you did with 00:02:951 (1,2) - .
    I like how it plays out at the start though :(
  2. 00:09:109 (1,3) - Ehh,. This pattern doesn't really work for me because of the overlap. It's not like 00:08:635 (4,1) - Where the slider-tail overlaps the head, making it perfectly readable. This time, its a head overlapping a head which makes it hard to read :P.
    this pattern was on purpose thoughh :( rip
  3. 00:14:951 (1,2,1) - This should be a combo on its own, NC 00:15:425 (2) - Instead since that's when the next line in the song begins.
    the nc is fineeee !
  4. 00:19:214 (1,1) - You basically overlap the entire approach circle with this pattern. Honestly i would think of another one, because the way you've set this up, it's going to be very difficult to hit the circle right when sightreading, because you basically have no visual cue. Approach Circle is overlapped and no spacing cue since its stacked.
    okay i stacked it back where it was used to be ( under the slider's tail )
  5. 00:41:161 (2,3,4) - Could improve the flow here tbh. 2>3 is going upward in a clockwise motion, but you switch the flow downward with 4>5 etc... However this motion isn't reflected in the song itself.
    no change here , I like how it plays in game
  6. 00:42:425 (3,4) - Try Ctrl+G'ing this rhythm. It fits the vocals a bit better imo.
    noooo i like the triple single tap :((
  7. 00:52:530 (2,3) - This flow is really harsh here :P.
    maybe later for now no change
  8. 00:55:056 (2,3,4,5) - This plays weirdly. You're mapping to the background vocals, but you use both large spacing and less than ideal flow to map what *should* be a feint vocal in the back. Try something like this:
    [box=Triangles idk~]
if another mod mention thsi ill change it to yours01:01:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - Wow this is really sharp...
:DDDD I like it , yea if another mod mention thsi ill changeee01:19:688 (4) - Two circles instead? This slider sounds different than the others too. You can map 01:19:846 - to something clickable.
no the slider is fine here ![Collab Normal]

  1. Hmm... Noticeable diff gap from Normal > Hard. I feel like more 1/2 rhythm could be incorporated in some parts, since Hard uses triplets, and has a relatively long series of single tap (7 circles in a row in kiai I think?) I'll look into it
  2. 00:04:530 (4,5,6) - This is a really weird rhythm choice lol. 6 doesn't really follow anything, since the strong beat is on the slider-end of 5...
    Try something more beginner friendly
    its fine , its following the drum starts here too 00:04:846 -
  3. 00:24:425 (4) - Move this up 1/2 a beat (00:24:267 - ). Fits the vocals better. You can then map a circle onto 00:24:740 - .
    no , but if i want to add more density here ill do it
  4. 00:52:214 (1,2,3,4) - This is too simple honestly :P. Try and incorporate more 1/2 usage here since this is the beginning of the Kiai Section.
    yea i changed this to a slider instead of the two circles
  5. 00:57:740 (2) - Try reducing this to 1/1 instead and adding a circle at 00:58:214 - this makes for a more interesting rhythm.
    i like it how it plays tho :(
  6. 01:02:319 (1,2,3,4) - Here too, there's suddenly no 1/2 rhythm at all. It just feels a bit irregular, because there's no musical cue like a pitch decrease or anything that suggests simpler rhythm.
    well the next part gets harder so I would like to start off simpler
[Easy]

  1. 00:16:214 (2,3) - Blanket pls/ i tried dont hurt me
  2. 00:41:477 (1,2) - Try this rhythn instead. It fits the vocals a bit better imo, since right now slider 2 doesn't really begin on anything strong.
    Rhythm
    noooo i like mine :(
  3. 00:56:635 (1,2) - This really doesn't fit the music ;c Especially slider 2. It doesn't begin on anything strong which makes clicking it seem awkward.
    should be okay , if not ill change but now ill keep
  4. 01:16:846 (4,1) - Fix Blanket pls dont hurt me i tried
  5. 01:19:372 (3,1) - You could blanket slider 4 for better flow. RIP I TRIED
  6. 01:20:003 (1,2) - DS is x0.8 here. Mistake? Nice catch
Good luck ;o. When are you mapping Ebb and Flow/Crossing Field/Ignite??

Thanks for the mod ! Yea time to map more of those soon lol 8-) [/box]

+ updated kibb's hard

@Guy : Small Suggestion if mods didnt mention : 00:17:319 - switch to this ? http://puu.sh/i6Sg7/76ae96c0d7.jpg --> http://puu.sh/i6SgJ/65eea9f22e.jpg
Last edited by Aerous , edited 1 time in total.
shioty
31 posts
Joined January 2015
shioty
this beatmap is perfect@!!! :D :) :) :) :) :)
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Helloooo from my queue~
Some tiny sugestion from me,

[General]
  1. Unrankable issue, Kibb's Hard missing the video
  2. For the sake of consistency Kibb's hard and Extra can disable the widescreen support lol
  3. Idk if this problem will affect the playability of the video when playing, but there's a bit conflict when you see the following [Event] code when you open the diff on notepad, http://puu.sh/i9y51/49046ae33c.png and http://puu.sh/i9xUW/4546cd7a66.png maybe you should cross check and double check all the diffs regarding that one
[Easy]
  1. 00:00:425 (1) - Use S:C56 on red line might more fit than default clap sound, and I think this green line 00:00:582 - is useless, do you mind to delete that? because you can set the s:C56 on the red line instead, so in other word we don't need that green line
  2. 00:50:793 - I don't think that green line is necesary, unless you make the volume lower
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:425 (1) - Use S:C56 on red line might more fit than default clap sound, and I think this green line 00:00:582 - is useless, do you mind to delete that? because you can set the s:C56 on the red line instead, so in other word we don't need that green line
  2. 00:15:425 (1) - How about a bit adjustment on that? you may not want to keep it straight, but when it's possible to make it neater why not hihi. So, I'm just trying to add one more node before the end on x:140 y:232, then the last node on x:156 y:296? so at the end will be look like this http://puu.sh/i9vuZ/6a62516ec2.jpg
  3. 00:31:846 (3) - Add whistle on tail? a bit empty there following the drum sound being hitted next
  4. 00:50:793 - I don't think that green line is necesary, unless you make the volume lower
  5. 01:11:793 (4) - Almost touch the hp bar, maybe move the end node to x:48 y:20?
[Kibb's Hard]
  1. 00:00:425 - How about to set the sampleset into S:C56? so the clap sound will give more impact during the play
  2. 00:41:161 (2) - Check the nodes? it's so weird the placement of the middle node is overlapping the first one, it makes the slider goes wiggle
  3. 01:28:056 (3,4) - The movement from (3) to (4) kinda odd imo, while (4)'s flows backward contradictive with the rest of the other notes on outro. How about a bit flip ctrl+h on that then move to x:296 y:268? http://puu.sh/i9wcm/62c17fc80e.jpg or something else
[Rakuen's Insane]
  1. 00:09:740 (3,4,5) - For being a triplet on opening of the song, the spacing between (3) and (4) is kinda too far imo, not comfortable when played. Maybe you can stacking (4,5) under (3)? like you did on this one 00:18:740 (5,6,7) -
  2. 00:20:477 - Duplicate green line? I don't think it's in use imo
  3. 00:29:319 (1) - Add whistle on head? kinda too empty and to follow the next drum sequences
[Extra]
  1. 00:00:425 (1) - Use S:C56 on red line might more fit than default clap sound, and I think this green line 00:00:582 - is useless, do you mind to delete that? because you can set the s:C56 on the red line instead, so in other word we don't need that green line
  2. 00:40:688 - I don't think that green line is necesary, unless you make the volume lower
  3. 00:53:003 (4) - Missing whistle?
  4. 01:01:846 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - The stream shape kinda too sharp imo it's like you force the placement, furthermore the movement not really comfortable imo when moving from (1) to (2) and the rest
[]
Goodluck~
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous

Mako Sakata wrote:

Helloooo from my queue~
Some tiny sugestion from me,

[General]
  1. Unrankable issue, Kibb's Hard missing the video added
  2. For the sake of consistency Kibb's hard and Extra can disable the widescreen support lol ok
  3. Idk if this problem will affect the playability of the video when playing, but there's a bit conflict when you see the following [Event] code when you open the diff on notepad, http://puu.sh/i9y51/49046ae33c.png and http://puu.sh/i9xUW/4546cd7a66.png maybe you should cross check and double check all the diffs regarding that one should be okay lol , ill double check with someone later
[Easy]
  1. 00:00:425 (1) - Use S:C56 on red line might more fit than default clap sound, and I think this green line 00:00:582 - is useless, do you mind to delete that? because you can set the s:C56 on the red line instead, so in other word we don't need that green line
  2. 00:50:793 - I don't think that green line is necesary, unless you make the volume lower
    fixed all
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:425 (1) - Use S:C56 on red line might more fit than default clap sound, and I think this green line 00:00:582 - is useless, do you mind to delete that? because you can set the s:C56 on the red line instead, so in other word we don't need that green line added
  2. 00:15:425 (1) - How about a bit adjustment on that? you may not want to keep it straight, but when it's possible to make it neater why not hihi. So, I'm just trying to add one more node before the end on x:140 y:232, then the last node on x:156 y:296? so at the end will be look like this http://puu.sh/i9vuZ/6a62516ec2.jpg
    no its fine , i know what you mean though
  3. 00:31:846 (3) - Add whistle on tail? a bit empty there following the drum sound being hitted next
    added
  4. 00:50:793 - I don't think that green line is necesary, unless you make the volume lower
    ok
  5. 01:11:793 (4) - Almost touch the hp bar, maybe move the end node to x:48 y:20?
    fixed by myself

[Extra]
  1. 00:00:425 (1) - Use S:C56 on red line might more fit than default clap sound, and I think this green line 00:00:582 - is useless, do you mind to delete that? because you can set the s:C56 on the red line instead, so in other word we don't need that green line
    added
  2. 00:40:688 - I don't think that green line is necesary, unless you make the volume lower deleted
  3. 00:53:003 (4) - Missing whistle? no its not missing it
  4. 01:01:846 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - The stream shape kinda too sharp imo it's like you force the placement, furthermore the movement not really comfortable imo when moving from (1) to (2) and the rest ill keep it , i can fc this map easily but yea ill think of something soon
[]
Goodluck~
thanks for the mod !
ganad
277 posts
Joined March 2012
ganad
Not a great modder cuz I don't have much experience, but I'll give my best to help you :D Soz can only mod 3 stars and below so can only mod easy and normal any harder can't comprehend :?
Most of the things, I say will be suggestions so yeah

EASY
00:13:372 (1) maybe get this note to be a blanket with 00:13:688 (2) It will look better but you'll have to move some of the other notes around

00:20:161 (3) New combo? Idk

00:57:898 (2) Noticed the reverse part of this slider was inaudible and since this part 00:58:372 isn't heard in the song why not make it one long slider and end it at 00:58:846? So just remove the reverse I guess?

00:55:372 (2) Same here

00:53:793 (4) Same but it's the end of the slider so I suggest you probably remove slider and just make it a beat circle?

Noticed you've done this in other parts of the song and for some of them it's alright imo other people will probably find it cool , but i find it kinda weird

01:08:003 (2) In this part as well reverse part isn't needed but if you do decide to keep the reverse maybe a blanket would be nice

Another solution, you could possibly give them some sort of hitsound idk

KIBBEROUS' NORMAL
00:20:161 (5) New combo?

Can't really say much else about the diff soz :(

I'll repeat this again so you know I'm a noob modder. So please don't hesitate to tell me what i say is wrong, cause if you don't I won't learn and I will remain a noob modder >:( Thanks
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous
ganad

ganad wrote:

Not a great modder cuz I don't have much experience, but I'll give my best to help you :D Soz can only mod 3 stars and below so can only mod easy and normal any harder can't comprehend :?
Most of the things, I say will be suggestions so yeah

EASY
00:13:372 (1) maybe get this note to be a blanket with 00:13:688 (2) It will look better but you'll have to move some of the other notes around
sure
00:20:161 (3) New combo? Idk
the nc should be okay
00:57:898 (2) Noticed the reverse part of this slider was inaudible and since this part 00:58:372 isn't heard in the song why not make it one long slider and end it at 00:58:846? So just remove the reverse I guess? theres a drum

00:55:372 (2) Same here ^

00:53:793 (4) Same but it's the end of the slider so I suggest you probably remove slider and just make it a beat circle?
nope its fine with the slider here , following vocal

Noticed you've done this in other parts of the song and for some of them it's alright imo other people will probably find it cool , but i find it kinda weird

01:08:003 (2) In this part as well reverse part isn't needed but if you do decide to keep the reverse maybe a blanket would be nice
not gonna change this :(

Another solution, you could possibly give them some sort of hitsound idk

KIBBEROUS' NORMAL
00:20:161 (5) New combo? nc is fine

Can't really say much else about the diff soz :(

I'll repeat this again so you know I'm a noob modder. So please don't hesitate to tell me what i say is wrong, cause if you don't I won't learn and I will remain a noob modder >:( Thanks

ty for mod !
Osuology
528 posts
Joined February 2014
Osuology
from mod value exchange

[General]
Filesize exceeds 24 MB??
bg is larger than possible
kiai times are inconsistent across diffs.

[Kibboo's Hard]
00:41:161 (2) - This should have 2 slider points not 3.
00:48:740 (2,3,4,5) - Isn't this a little too hard for a hard?

[Rakuen's Insane]
00:17:951 (1,2,3) - Why jump?
00:32:951 (8) - Different DS in one pattern? Also, you appear to do that a lot.
00:51:425 (2,3,4) - The heck is this? can't read. Try putting them closer together.
01:25:846 (7,8,9) - These don't make sense imo, you never did that before.

[Extra]
01:22:371 (4,1) - I hear a triple here.

[Guy's Extra]
00:21:582 (4) - Why stop, use slider pls. You do this a few times also.
00:49:530 (1) - 5 points, no no no use two it barely makes a difference.
01:22:372 (7,1) - Again triple.
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous
Osuology
[quote="Osuology"]from mod value exchange

[General]
Filesize exceeds 24 MB??
bg is larger than possible no its the video lol
kiai times are inconsistent across diffs. kiai times doesnt matter

[Extra]
01:22:371 (4,1) - I hear a triple here. Not gonna change this since I'm not gonna follow the vocal here
/quote]
GiantZarz
183 posts
Joined January 2014
GiantZarz
From Mod Value Exchange
[Easy]

00:16:846 (3) - Do a 1/2 reverse maybe?

00:52:214 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try this
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[Insane]

00:09:740 (3,4,5) - Move them a little bit near

00:15:898 (2,3) - Ctrl + G better imo

00:25:530 (6,1) - Why not do hitfinish at (1)?

01:26:635 (3,4,5) - Move them a little bit near
Just these

Good luck! :)
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous

giantzarz wrote:

From Mod Value Exchange
[notice][Easy]

00:16:846 (3) - Do a 1/2 reverse maybe? no thanks i would have to relocate other sliders for the repeat to work

00:52:214 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try this
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no i dont like it because right now i have 00:54:582 - a finish here , dont want to skip it

Good luck! :)
thanks for the mod
Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Iceskulls
aight , no kds

[general]
  1. looks fine
[easy]
  1. 00:09:109 (2) - anchor point structure tho , you can try this , looks better imo
    SPOILER
  2. 00:49:530 (3) - the , try improve slider shape a bit (inb4 no difference )
    SPOILER
  3. 00:52:846 (2,3,4) - small inconsistent spacing
  4. 01:09:267 (3) - better end this slider at 01:09:740 - and then add finish, polarity break should be fine here 01:09:267 (3,1) -
[kibberous]
  1. 00:54:582 (1) -
  2. 00:56:319 (4,5) - mfw 0.77x spacing
  3. 01:28:688 (1) - you can improve slider shape a bit
    SPOILER
[kibb]
  1. 00:26:951 (1,2,3) - why don't you organize spacing like 00:22:688 (3,4,1) - or 00:24:425 (1,2,3) - , I think it fit the song here better
  2. 00:36:109 (2,3,4,5) - better make the spacing here similiar to 00:30:740 (1,2,3,4) - , high spacing with triplet on high bpm song seems to be a bit hard to catch for hard player
  3. 00:41:161 (2) - wtf lol
    SPOILER
    , I think you try to make it like this or something
    SPOILER
  4. 01:07:056 (4,1) - spacing here should be bigger than 01:06:740 (3,4) - a bit so it would make sense with music more , 01:07:214 - cymbal here sound really emphasized more than 01:07:056 -
  5. 01:08:003 (3,4,1) - similiar to what I said above (?) , I guess lol
  6. 01:18:425 (3,1) - yea this is same as 01:07:056 (4,1) -
  7. 01:29:319 - ,01:29:003 - better delete these unnecessary green timing points

    Edited : I just realize something about spacing here , well there are some instance that the spacing got increased or decreased while the music sound actually consistent or something imo that you might want to consider , for example (I guess ?) : 00:11:477 (4,1,2) - ,00:15:898 (1,2,3) - ,00:22:214 (2,3,4) - , 00:43:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - ,00:55:372 (3,4,5,1) - , etc well somehow a increase or decrease in spacing like this can be (subjective) dq reason in hard diff well I actually don't care about this but idk what qat thinking so
[rakuen]
  1. 00:17:951 (1,2,3) - rhythm here play a bit awkward imo , try this rhythm ?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:37:688 (3,4,5) - try place notes like this ? so it would make flow here 00:37:372 (2,3,4,5,1) - a bit better
  3. 00:51:425 (2) - nc for sv change ?
  4. 01:06:425 (2,3) - jumps here is a bit awkward imo , I think jumps is fit here 01:06:582 (3,4) - more , try move 01:06:582 (3) - to around x192 y188?
  5. 01:15:425 (3) - you can ctrl+j this so it would make this slider looks like this which might make the floe transition here 01:15:267 (2,3,4) - a bit better imo
    SPOILER
  6. 01:16:056 (1) - curve this slider the another way ? so it would make flow here 01:15:898 (4,1,2) - nice imo
    SPOILER
  7. 01:21:109 (1) - curve this slider the another way ? so it would make flow here 01:20:951 (4,1,2) - nice imo
    SPOILER
[extra]
  1. 00:07:688 (7) - curve this slider the another way ? so it would make flow transition here 00:07:530 (6,7,1) - a bit better imo
    SPOILER
  2. 00:09:109 (1) - similar to what I said above , try this , would make transition flow here 00:08:635 (4,5,1) - better
    SPOILER
  3. 00:15:109 (2,1) - flow play a bit awkward imo , move 00:15:267 (1) - to around x192 y248 would make the flow here 00:14:951 (1,2,1,2) - better
  4. 00:23:003 (1) - ctrl+g , for circular flow here 00:22:530 (4,5,6,1) - tho
  5. 00:29:951 (1,2,3) - flow here play pretty awkward imo the sudden spacing and flow here 00:29:951 (1,2) - would make the player stop awkwardly at (2) which make the flow from (2) to next stream pretty weird and awkward, I think it would be better if you use triplet here 00:29:951 (1,2) - instead
  6. 00:32:319 (2,3) - jumps play a bit awkward here spacing should be a bit lower here so it fit the music more imo , try move 00:32:477 (3) - to around x252 y244
  7. 00:53:477 (1,2,3,4,5) - ok this place is not really suit for back and forth thing imo after this part 00:53:793 (3,4,5) - flow kinda a bit rip now , rhythm is can be improved here tho , I would use this rhythm instead
    SPOILER
    and here is the pattern I would use
    SPOILER
  8. 00:57:109 (1) - ctrl+g this would make the flow here 00:57:109 (1,2,3,4) - nice imo
  9. 01:08:951 (3,4,5,6,7) - anothere place where I think back and forth is not fit , rhythm can be improved tho ,this would sound and play better
    SPOILER
    and this is pattern suggestion
    SPOILER
  10. 01:21:425 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - yea back and forth play pretty awkward here , try this ( and I have destroyed your star rating , rip pp)
    SPOILER
[guy]
  1. 00:56:951 (5,1) - I think spacing here should be bigger than 00:56:635 (4,5) - so it would make sense with music more like you did here 00:57:109 (1,2,3) - , 00:57:740 (3,4,1) -
  2. 01:19:372 (5,6) - try move this to around x344 y144 ? would make flow here 01:18:898 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice imo
  3. 01:25:372 (2,3) - I think spacing here should be bigger than 01:25:056 (1,2) - so it would make sense with music more , I find this 01:25:530 - sound more emphasized than 01:25:372 - so try move 01:25:372 (2) - to around x208 y28 ?
good luck (?) , have fun mapping :)
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous

CelsiusLK wrote:

aight , no kds

[general]
  1. looks fine
[easy]
  1. 00:09:109 (2) - anchor point structure tho , you can try this , looks better imo
    SPOILER
  2. 00:49:530 (3) - the , try improve slider shape a bit (inb4 no difference )
    SPOILER
  3. 00:52:846 (2,3,4) - small inconsistent spacing
  4. 01:09:267 (3) - better end this slider at 01:09:740 - and then add finish, polarity break should be fine here 01:09:267 (3,1) -
fixed all except the w shape slider , cuz no difference gg

[kibberous]
  1. 00:54:582 (1) -
  2. 00:56:319 (4,5) - mfw 0.77x spacing
  3. 01:28:688 (1) - you can improve slider shape a bit
    SPOILER
fixed all here

[extra]
  1. 00:07:688 (7) - curve this slider the another way ? so it would make flow transition here 00:07:530 (6,7,1) - a bit better imo
    SPOILER
    ok
  2. 00:09:109 (1) - similar to what I said above , try this , would make transition flow here 00:08:635 (4,5,1) - better
    SPOILER
    ok
  3. 00:15:109 (2,1) - flow play a bit awkward imo , move 00:15:267 (1) - to around x192 y248 would make the flow here 00:14:951 (1,2,1,2) - better
    this should be fine from all the testplay that i got lol :D
  4. 00:23:003 (1) - ctrl+g , for circular flow here 00:22:530 (4,5,6,1) - tho
    i like the small jump here , if i ctrl + g rip :(
  5. 00:29:951 (1,2,3) - flow here play pretty awkward imo the sudden spacing and flow here 00:29:951 (1,2) - would make the player stop awkwardly at (2) which make the flow from (2) to next stream pretty weird and awkward, I think it would be better if you use triplet here 00:29:951 (1,2) - instead
    they can suck it up ! jk but uhh from testplay too i dont see a problem :(
  6. 00:32:319 (2,3) - jumps play a bit awkward here spacing should be a bit lower here so it fit the music more imo , try move 00:32:477 (3) - to around x252 y244
    ok fixed the jump here
  7. 00:53:477 (1,2,3,4,5) - ok this place is not really suit for back and forth thing imo after this part 00:53:793 (3,4,5) - flow kinda a bit rip now , rhythm is can be improved here tho , I would use this rhythm instead
    SPOILER
    and here is the pattern I would use
    SPOILER
    fixed like what you told me to do
  8. 00:57:109 (1) - ctrl+g this would make the flow here 00:57:109 (1,2,3,4) - nice imo
    i like the jump from 6 to this slider for the finish :(
  9. 01:08:951 (3,4,5,6,7) - anothere place where I think back and forth is not fit , rhythm can be improved tho ,this would sound and play better
    SPOILER
    and this is pattern suggestion
    SPOILER
    i know what you mean but this plays really welll :( and fun too
  10. 01:21:425 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - yea back and forth play pretty awkward here , try this ( and I have destroyed your star rating , rip pp)
    SPOILER
    for the sake of pp i wont change this
good luck (?) , have fun mapping :)
thanks for the mod ill tell kibb , rakuen and guy so u can cum bubbl
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,846 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru

CelsiusLK wrote:

aight , no kds

[general]
  1. looks fine
[kibb]
  1. 00:26:951 (1,2,3) - why don't you organize spacing like 00:22:688 (3,4,1) - or 00:24:425 (1,2,3) - , I think it fit the song here better
  2. 00:36:109 (2,3,4,5) - better make the spacing here similiar to 00:30:740 (1,2,3,4) - , high spacing with triplet on high bpm song seems to be a bit hard to catch for hard player
  3. 00:41:161 (2) - wtf lol
    SPOILER
    , I think you try to make it like this or something
    SPOILER
  4. 01:07:056 (4,1) - spacing here should be bigger than 01:06:740 (3,4) - a bit so it would make sense with music more , 01:07:214 - cymbal here sound really emphasized more than 01:07:056 -
  5. 01:08:003 (3,4,1) - similiar to what I said above (?) , I guess lol
  6. 01:18:425 (3,1) - yea this is same as 01:07:056 (4,1) -
  7. 01:29:319 - ,01:29:003 - better delete these unnecessary green timing points

    Edited : I just realize something about spacing here , well there are some instance that the spacing got increased or decreased while the music sound actually consistent or something imo that you might want to consider , for example (I guess ?) : 00:11:477 (4,1,2) - ,00:15:898 (1,2,3) - ,00:22:214 (2,3,4) - , 00:43:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - ,00:55:372 (3,4,5,1) - , etc well somehow a increase or decrease in spacing like this can be (subjective) dq reason in hard diff well I actually don't care about this but idk what qat thinking so such small spacing changes like this is really not noticeable in gameplay, you should base this on how the map feels while playing rather than the in game values ;) but i want to keep this for just stylistic reasons i guess.

    everything else fixed

good luck (?) , have fun mapping :)

SPOILER
osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 52214
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TitleUnicode:Rally Go Round -TV ver.-
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Creator:Aerous
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Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy

CelsiusLK wrote:

[guy]
  1. 00:56:951 (5,1) - I think spacing here should be bigger than 00:56:635 (4,5) - so it would make sense with music more like you did here 00:57:109 (1,2,3) - , 00:57:740 (3,4,1) - I make the well flow 00:56:635 (4,5,1) - here, so I think that spacing is fine imo
  2. 01:19:372 (5,6) - try move this to around x344 y144 ? would make flow here 01:18:898 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice imo - I want to keep the triangle 01:19:056 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - , also currently flow isn't bad.
  3. 01:25:372 (2,3) - I think spacing here should be bigger than 01:25:056 (1,2) - so it would make sense with music more , I find this 01:25:530 - sound more emphasized than 01:25:372 - so try move 01:25:372 (2) - to around x208 y28 ? - a bit different, but fixed in my way.
good luck (?) , have fun mapping :)
thanks o/

http://puu.sh/ihOxG/c01045475a.zip
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Rakuen's Insane]
  1. 00:10:135 (4,5) - stack在00:09:740 (3) - 的尾 这还可以
  2. 00:29:951 - 這裡的normal smapleset感覺不太合適
  3. 00:50:319 - ^ 稍微改了些
  4. 00:30:109 (4) - 這個應該不是1/4 一点点听不出的XD
  5. 01:02:003 (8,9,1) - 打起上來有點太急了 會有點接不上 Change rhythm, 行得通
  6. 01:26:872 (4,5) - 也是 这都是故意放的，不能retry的insane会很闷的啊
Thanks for the mods!

Xellie wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:30:267 (5) - I'd either point this up more or move 00:30:425 (6,7,8,9,1) - down to make it flow a little better On DS
  2. 00:48:267 (1,2) - Linear flow pls
  3. 00:49:530 (1,2) - ^ As they as they look good to me
  4. 01:20:161 (2,3) - These are a tiny bit away from being paralell Intentional
Thanks for the mods!

CloudSplash16 wrote:

[Rakuen's Insane]
  1. 00:05:477 - The normal-hitnormals and soft-hitclaps in this section are really overpowering the music. Please reduce hitsound volume. Intentional, sounds better imo
  2. 00:19:214 (1) - Reversed is better in my opinion. Smoother movement from (7). Will think of this
  3. 00:37:688 (3,4,5,1) - This kind of flow feels really awkward to play. (3,4,5) are kind of in a smooth line, but the variation in spacing is really big, and the curve of (1) is opposing the curve of the jump, making it really harsh. No 1 says it has to be crosses XD , it's up to the players actually. Imagine those notes as a line
  4. 00:44:161 (4) - I think the opposite direction is better here. The sharp angle combined with small distance spacing makes it too difficult. Not really hard I guess, it's Insane after all
Thanks for the mods!

monstrata wrote:

[Rakuen's Insane]
  1. 00:09:740 (3,4) - Idk about this man. They're spaced like 1/2's since in the same combo, you use similar spacing for 00:09:109 (1,2) - . Okay to read
  2. 00:17:951 (1,2,3) - This spacing is really sudden... You would expect a jump from 00:18:267 (3,4) - because its reflected in the vocals, but not 1>2>3 honestly :P. You'll notice that on 00:18:109 (2) - There isn't actually a drum hit here like there is on 1, 3 and 4. So as the music...
  3. 00:37:688 (3,5) - Try Ctrl+G'ing this. Plays and flows better imo.
  4. 00:47:793 (4,5) - Ctrl+G this rhythm? a circle on 00:48:109 - would fit better imo. It would also lead into the next combo a bit better.
  5. 01:03:740 (2,3) - Ctrl+G this rhythm too, it would fit the drums better. There isnt any particular emphasis in the vocals here. No change for these 3, I feel better when playing :3
  6. 01:21:582 (2,3) - No circles? No Jumps here? ;o. Nah, I wanna put it but it would be like Extra already XD (they were circles iirc)
Thanks for the mods!

Mako Sakata wrote:

[Rakuen's Insane]
  1. 00:09:740 (3,4,5) - For being a triplet on opening of the song, the spacing between (3) and (4) is kinda too far imo, not comfortable when played. Maybe you can stacking (4,5) under (3)? like you did on this one 00:18:740 (5,6,7) - Intentional, ok to read I guess
  2. 00:20:477 - Duplicate green line? I don't think it's in use imo Ok
  3. 00:29:319 (1) - Add whistle on head? kinda too empty and to follow the next drum sequences Sounds fine, prefer to stick to drum
Thanks for the mods!

Osuology wrote:

[Rakuen's Insane]
00:17:951 (1,2,3) - Why jump? Rhythm change
00:32:951 (8) - Different DS in one pattern? Also, you appear to do that a lot. Dont wanna make my map rubbish, a mix of everything
00:51:425 (2,3,4) - The heck is this? can't read. Try putting them closer together. Insane, it is
01:25:846 (7,8,9) - These don't make sense imo, you never did that before. Tricky part, but will think of that
Thanks for the mods!

giantzarz wrote:

[Insane]

00:09:740 (3,4,5) - Move them a little bit near Trying to avoid stacks

00:15:898 (2,3) - Ctrl + G better imo It's fine now

00:25:530 (6,1) - Why not do hitfinish at (1)? Follow song (drum)

01:26:635 (3,4,5) - Move them a little bit near Trying to avoid stacks[/notice]
Thanks for the mods!

CelsiusLK wrote:

[rakuen]
  1. 00:17:951 (1,2,3) - rhythm here play a bit awkward imo , try this rhythm ? Tried that before, would be more awkward to play
    SPOILER
  2. 00:37:688 (3,4,5) - try place notes like this ? so it would make flow here 00:37:372 (2,3,4,5,1) - a bit better Like what? pics not attached
  3. 00:51:425 (2) - nc for sv change ? Prefer 1,2,3 tho, will change if it's absolutely needed for ranking
  4. 01:06:425 (2,3) - jumps here is a bit awkward imo , I think jumps is fit here 01:06:582 (3,4) - more , try move 01:06:582 (3) - to around x192 y188? Ultimate blanket
  5. 01:15:425 (3) - you can ctrl+j this so it would make this slider looks like this which might make the floe transition here 01:15:267 (2,3,4) - a bit better imo Intentional, flow works fine anyway
    SPOILER
  6. 01:16:056 (1) - curve this slider the another way ? so it would make flow here 01:15:898 (4,1,2) - nice imo It's good, both of them
    SPOILER
  7. 01:21:109 (1) - curve this slider the another way ? so it would make flow here 01:20:951 (4,1,2) - nice imo Fitting the jump
    SPOILER
Thanks for the mods!

Update: http://puu.sh/ik4BH/0a65be547a.osu
Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Iceskulls

CelsiusLK wrote:

[rakuen]
  1. 00:37:688 (3,4,5) - try place notes like this ? so it would make flow here 00:37:372 (2,3,4,5,1) - a bit better Like what? pics not attached :arrow: oop well I recheck again and think about it more and I think it play not that bad except I would make spacing here 00:37:846 (4,5,1) - consistent for slight better flow since the angle here is not really much increase spacing will just give player awkward feeling here 00:38:161 (1) - imo
  2. 00:51:425 (2) - nc for sv change ? Prefer 1,2,3 tho, will change if it's absolutely needed for ranking :arrow: the sv change on (2) is quite noticable so it would be better to nc it to make this more easier to read
  3. 01:06:425 (2,3) - jumps here is a bit awkward imo , I think jumps is fit here 01:06:582 (3,4) - more , try move 01:06:582 (3) - to around x192 y188? Ultimate blanket :arrow: well what I try to say is that the jumps 01:06:425 (2,3) - here feel kinda weird if you listen to the beat you can hear that the guitar beat is not relly that emphasized much so using jumps would feel a bit weird imo , in fact the snare here 01:06:740 - is actually sound a lots stronger than the guitar it better to use jumps to emphasis snare beat more than emphasis guitar , no offense but I think blanket is not a good reason to reply to this

CelsiusLK wrote:

[extra]
  1. 01:08:951 (3,4,5,6,7) - anothere place where I think back and forth is not fit , rhythm can be improved tho ,this would sound and play better
    SPOILER
    and this is pattern suggestion
    SPOILER
    i know what you mean but this plays really welll :( and fun too :arrow: you can spread the notes a bit like what you did here 01:21:425 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - lol ,
let me know what do you think about them
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous
Cel

CelsiusLK wrote:

CelsiusLK wrote:

[rakuen]
  1. 00:37:688 (3,4,5) - try place notes like this ? so it would make flow here 00:37:372 (2,3,4,5,1) - a bit better Like what? pics not attached :arrow: oop well I recheck again and think about it more and I think it play not that bad except I would make spacing here 00:37:846 (4,5,1) - consistent for slight better flow since the angle here is not really much increase spacing will just give player awkward feeling here 00:38:161 (1) - imo
  2. 00:51:425 (2) - nc for sv change ? Prefer 1,2,3 tho, will change if it's absolutely needed for ranking :arrow: the sv change on (2) is quite noticable so it would be better to nc it to make this more easier to read
  3. 01:06:425 (2,3) - jumps here is a bit awkward imo , I think jumps is fit here 01:06:582 (3,4) - more , try move 01:06:582 (3) - to around x192 y188? Ultimate blanket :arrow: well what I try to say is that the jumps 01:06:425 (2,3) - here feel kinda weird if you listen to the beat you can hear that the guitar beat is not relly that emphasized much so using jumps would feel a bit weird imo , in fact the snare here 01:06:740 - is actually sound a lots stronger than the guitar it better to use jumps to emphasis snare beat more than emphasis guitar , no offense but I think blanket is not a good reason to reply to this

CelsiusLK wrote:

[extra]
  1. 01:08:951 (3,4,5,6,7) - anothere place where I think back and forth is not fit , rhythm can be improved tho ,this would sound and play better
    SPOILER
    and this is pattern suggestion
    SPOILER
    i know what you mean but this plays really welll :( and fun too :arrow: you can spread the notes a bit like what you did here 01:21:425 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - lol ,
let me know what do you think about them

Talked about it in game for my diff , waiting for rakuen now
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen

CelsiusLK wrote:

CelsiusLK wrote:

[rakuen]
[list][*]00:37:688 (3,4,5) - try place notes like this ? so it would make flow here 00:37:372 (2,3,4,5,1) - a bit better Like what? pics not attached :arrow: oop well I recheck again and think about it more and I think it play not that bad except I would make spacing here 00:37:846 (4,5,1) - consistent for slight better flow since the angle here is not really much increase spacing will just give player awkward feeling here 00:38:161 (1) - imo
[*]00:51:425 (2) - nc for sv change ? Prefer 1,2,3 tho, will change if it's absolutely needed for ranking :arrow: the sv change on (2) is quite noticable so it would be better to nc it to make this more easier to read
[*]01:06:425 (2,3) - jumps here is a bit awkward imo , I think jumps is fit here 01:06:582 (3,4) - more , try move 01:06:582 (3) - to around x192 y188? Ultimate blanket :arrow: well what I try to say is that the jumps 01:06:425 (2,3) - here feel kinda weird if you listen to the beat you can hear that the guitar beat is not relly that emphasized much so using jumps would feel a bit weird imo , in fact the snare here 01:06:740 - is actually sound a lots stronger than the guitar it better to use jumps to emphasis snare beat more than emphasis guitar , no offense but I think blanket is not a good reason to reply to this
let me know what do you think about them
Fixed the first 2, the 3rd one is pretty fine imo

Update: http://puu.sh/inNcb/20196df081.osu
Bara-
11,978 posts
Joined April 2013
Bara-
From mod value exchange queue


[Easy]
00:02:951 (1) - Try to improve this slider, move the second red node to the slider tick for more emphasis
00:06:740 (3) - ^^ (with both nodes)
00:09:109 (2) - Slider looks a little smoother if you turn the first red node into a grey node and move to 232:240 (or something like that)
00:16:214 (2,3) - Try to improve the blanket, Ctrl G (2) to see if it's good
00:33:109 (1,2,3) - Feels a little boring, as it's all so linear and straight, make it a little more curvy
00:47:003 (2) - For better looks and feel, move the red node to the slider tick
01:01:056 (3) - Try to improve this slider, move the second red node to the slider tick for more emphasis
01:04:214 (4,1) - Improve blanket
01:13:530 (2,3) - Try to improve the blanket, Ctrl G (2) to see if it's good

[Kibberous' Normal]
Rename to Kibberous's (Kibberous is singular, not plural, singular words ALWAYS get 's, even if they already have an s (Jess's book is correct, Jess' book is incorrect) However, as it's a collab, I'm not entirely sure about this (if it's singular or plural)
Perhaps add a SB to show who made which part

00:06:109 (3) - This slider feels weird, Ctrl J it and move to the correct place for a much nicer looking slider constellation
00:48:267 (1) - For better looks and feel, move the red node to the slider tick
01:06:740 (5,1) - Make these sliders a little more curvy, it'll look better

So linear >.<

[Kibboo's Hard]
Again, consider adding a SB for collab names

00:11:793 (1,2,3) - Add some blankets
00:24:740 (3,4) - I really dislike this overlap, try to either blankt them, or stack them (start of (3) with end of (4)
00:29:003 (3) - Move to 264:132 for better looks (creates more even spacing)
00:32:635 (3,1) - Bad overlap, why not stack them, also, fix 00:32:635 (3,4)'s blanket
00:51:740 (2) - It feels weird not to have a NC here
00:57:109 (1,1) - Try to stack those, it feels better with hitbursts
01:01:688 (1) - Snapping error?

[Rakuen]
00:04:846 (1,2,3,4) - I miss the hitsounds here
00:08:951 (7,1) - Try to blanket these (if it messes up the other blanket (1,3), don't do it, that one feels more special
00:29:319 (1,2) - Try to blanket these
This diff is love

[Extra]
00:28:056 (1,2) - Try to blanket these
00:37:846 (4,1) - Improve blanket
00:44:477 (1,3) - The stack isn't good, imrpve the stack
00:46:688 (5,1) - ^^

[Guy's Extra]
01:28:688 (1) - Perhaps make the shape a little more special (idk, I couldn't find anything in this diff)

I'm in love with this map!
Have a star and the best of luck ranking this, you can do it!
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous

baraatje123 wrote:

From mod value exchange queue


[Easy]
00:02:951 (1) - Try to improve this slider, move the second red node to the slider tick for more emphasis not much difference
00:06:740 (3) - ^^ (with both nodes) ^
00:09:109 (2) - Slider looks a little smoother if you turn the first red node into a grey node and move to 232:240 (or something like that) yea i can agree i can make it more smoother but its fine
00:16:214 (2,3) - Try to improve the blanket, Ctrl G (2) to see if it's good k fixed
00:33:109 (1,2,3) - Feels a little boring, as it's all so linear and straight, make it a little more curvy fine
00:47:003 (2) - For better looks and feel, move the red node to the slider tick sure ??
01:01:056 (3) - Try to improve this slider, move the second red node to the slider tick for more emphasis no difference
01:04:214 (4,1) - Improve blanket k
01:13:530 (2,3) - Try to improve the blanket, Ctrl G (2) to see if it's good ^

[Kibberous' Normal]
Rename to Kibberous's (Kibberous is singular, not plural, singular words ALWAYS get 's, even if they already have an s (Jess's book is correct, Jess' book is incorrect) However, as it's a collab, I'm not entirely sure about this (if it's singular or plural)
Perhaps add a SB to show who made which part
I have written a lot of essays in english class , and i'm 100% sure its Kibberous' because it would look way too weird. Another example would be James's but the correct one is James'

00:06:109 (3) - This slider feels weird, Ctrl J it and move to the correct place for a much nicer looking slider constellation its on purpose
00:48:267 (1) - For better looks and feel, move the red node to the slider tick doesn't effect much
01:06:740 (5,1) - Make these sliders a little more curvy, it'll look better should be okay

So linear >.<

[Extra]
00:28:056 (1,2) - Try to blanket these no or else its too big of a jump
00:37:846 (4,1) - Improve blanket no one will notice that small imperfect blanket
00:44:477 (1,3) - The stack isn't good, imrpve the stack ok
00:46:688 (5,1) - ^^ ^


I'm in love with this map!
Have a star and the best of luck ranking this, you can do it!
ty for the mod
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen

baraatje123 wrote:

[Rakuen]
00:04:846 (1,2,3,4) - I miss the hitsounds here Added
00:08:951 (7,1) - Try to blanket these (if it messes up the other blanket (1,3), don't do it, that one feels more special This one's intentional
00:29:319 (1,2) - Try to blanket these It's alredy blanket with the shape of 00:29:319 (1) -
This diff is love
Thanks for the mods!

D: Aerous dont move my notes (00:32:951 (8) - )

Update: http://puu.sh/iqqjO/656aa61c65.osu
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,846 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru

baraatje123 wrote:

From mod value exchange queue

So linear >.<

[Kibboo's Hard]
Again, consider adding a SB for collab names not a collab lol

00:11:793 (1,2,3) - Add some blankets not a fan of them
00:24:740 (3,4) - I really dislike this overlap, try to either blankt them, or stack them (start of (3) with end of (4) I like these :(
00:29:003 (3) - Move to 264:132 for better looks (creates more even spacing) k
00:32:635 (3,1) - Bad overlap, why not stack them, also, fix 00:32:635 (3,4)'s blanket stacking looks bad to me
00:51:740 (2) - It feels weird not to have a NC here seems too spammy to me tbh
00:57:109 (1,1) - Try to stack those, it feels better with hitbursts not even noticeable, and a lot of ppl have rly feint hitbursts
01:01:688 (1) - Snapping error? oops k


I'm in love with this map!
Have a star and the best of luck ranking this, you can do it!

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80,168,72109,2,0,P|87:186|90:204,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,240,72425,6,0,P|52:280|56:320,2,75,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,268,72898,2,0,P|250:259|324:248,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,168,73372,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,168,73530,6,0,P|328:128|228:160,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,96,74003,2,0,L|88:84,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,184,74319,2,0,P|56:217|58:254,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,258,74635,2,0,P|213:221|200:188,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,308,74951,6,0,B|232:288|232:288|256:296|272:320,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,320,75425,2,0,P|401:257|381:187,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,88,75898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,88,76056,6,0,P|297:132|224:125,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,72,76530,2,0,P|104:59|69:47,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,148,76846,2,0,L|84:192,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,216,77161,2,0,L|100:256,2,37.5,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,180,77477,6,0,B|260:176|300:200|300:200|324:176|323:148,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,192,77951,2,0,P|464:192|512:108,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,44,78425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,84,78582,6,0,B|276:100|276:68|199:82,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,152,79056,2,0,P|129:188|124:228,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,216,79372,2,0,P|212:248|184:280,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,340,79688,2,0,P|214:356|177:360,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,280,80003,5,4,0:0:0:0:
320,280,80161,2,0,P|358:283|391:299,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,232,80477,2,0,P|476:176|436:92,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,80,80951,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,172,81109,6,0,L|204:160,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
128,160,81582,2,0,L|136:248,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,81898,5,8,0:0:0:0:
216,152,82056,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,152,82214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
127,264,82372,2,0,P|120:281|108:295,2,37.5,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,92,83793,5,4,0:0:0:0:
228,187,83951,2,0,P|224:221|221:255,1,67.4999979400635,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,312,84267,2,0,P|331:307|356:316,2,33.7499989700318,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,228,84582,2,0,P|343:226|392:240,1,67.4999979400635,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,152,84898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,80,85056,6,0,P|328:124|224:128,1,134.999995880127,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,68,85530,2,0,P|157:61|116:56,1,67.4999979400635,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,148,85846,2,0,P|100:185|108:224,1,67.4999979400635,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,216,86161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,216,86319,6,0,B|176:300|176:300|200:316|221:312,1,134.999995880127,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,268,86793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,268,86872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,268,86951,2,0,L|368:260,1,67.4999979400635,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,236,87267,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,147,87425,6,0,P|344:160|274:154,1,134.999995880127,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,88,87898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,160,88056,2,0,P|116:212|140:288,1,134.999995880127,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,284,88530,2,0,P|240:297|219:322,1,67.4999979400635,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Aerous
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Aerous
changed mp3 becuase of snapping error
Iceskulls
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Iceskulls
no kds

[general]
  1. resnap preview time too lol
[easy]
  1. 00:23:369 (4) - can you make this less edgy so it a bit easier for beginner to play , I guess lol like this
    SPOILER
[normal]
  • aerous wait wat , you didn't fix some small spacing error that I told you in irc
[kibb's hard]
  1. 00:28:579 (4,5) - hmm make spacing here like this 00:23:527 (3,4) - , I think low spacing like that here is a bit weird here imo
  2. 00:52:500 - , 00:52:264 - unused green timing point
[extra]
  1. 01:03:158 (1) - can you make the slider way a bit more visible ? by adjust stream here a bit 01:02:842 (2,3,4,5) -
  2. 01:09:632 (2,3) - place like this ? so it would make flow here a bit more reasonable to the music
    SPOILER
  3. 01:27:869 (4) - sound overmapped :C why don't you map this 1/4 01:27:711 - instead ? xD
guy's extra and rakuen's insane is fine now

ok , let me know afterward :)
Aerous
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Aerous

CelsiusLK wrote:

no kds

[general]
  1. resnap preview time too lol
[easy]
  1. 00:23:369 (4) - can you make this less edgy so it a bit easier for beginner to play , I guess lol like this
    SPOILER
    same
[normal]
  • aerous wait wat , you didn't fix some small spacing error that I told you in irc

    gg didnt save , and yea i refixed them
[kibb's hard]
  1. 00:28:579 (4,5) - hmm make spacing here like this 00:23:527 (3,4) - , I think low spacing like that here is a bit weird here imo
  2. 00:52:500 - , 00:52:264 - unused green timing point
    ok for all
[extra]
  1. 01:03:158 (1) - can you make the slider way a bit more visible ? by adjust stream here a bit 01:02:842 (2,3,4,5) -
    ok dad
  2. 01:09:632 (2,3) - place like this ? so it would make flow here a bit more reasonable to the music
    SPOILER
    sure
  3. 01:27:869 (4) - sound overmapped :C why don't you map this 1/4 01:27:711 - instead ? xD
    whhops changed :D !!
guy's extra and rakuen's insane is fine now

ok , let me know afterward :)
Iceskulls
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Iceskulls
k

hope dq curse gone now

next bn : please wait https://osu.ppy.sh/s/303023
Mikii
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Mikii
Feel free to qualify, The dq is real

t/319646&start=0
Aerous
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Aerous
talked to sukiNathan about the mapset , nerfed some parts from Kibbleru's hard. Waiting for Rakuen to nerf his jumps and 1/4 sliders. I think hes gonna post soon



PLUS I ADDED DIFFERENT COMBO COLORS , DONT FORGET WHEN YOU GIVE ME THE CODE REMEMBER TO USE THE NEW COMBO COLORS + VIDEO ( OR JUST UPDATE YOUR DIFF BEFORE YOU CHANGE ANYTHING )
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Nathan
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log
17:39 Aerous: yoo
17:39 Aerous: can you mod my rally
17:39 Aerous: the other set got dq
17:39 Aerous: its bubble atm.
17:39 sukiNathan: m4m
17:39 sukiNathan: !?!?!??
17:40 Aerous: ILL GIVE YOU DESUGAN'S TICKET
17:40 Aerous: FOR MOD
17:40 *Aerous is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/677753 LiSA - Rally Go Round -TV ver.-]
17:40 sukiNathan: no my map
17:40 sukiNathan: is vocaloid
17:40 sukiNathan: and he hatesssssss vocaloid
17:40 Aerous: PLUS M4M
17:40 Aerous: OK
17:40 Aerous: ILL MOD TMRW
17:40 Aerous: PLZ
17:40 Aerous: ITS BUBBLED RIGHT NOW
17:41 sukiNathan: ok
17:41 Aerous: <3
17:41 sukiNathan: u better mod it or i will kill u :D
17:41 Aerous: PM me your vocaloid
17:41 Aerous: so i can open it tmrw and dont forget
17:42 sukiNathan: wtf
17:42 sukiNathan: why is the intro like
17:42 sukiNathan: almost exactly the same as guy's
17:42 Aerous: o-o
17:42 sukiNathan: 00:01:264 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
17:43 sukiNathan: ok w/e 
17:43 Aerous: i was about to change it , after i saw Guy's
17:43 Aerous: LOL
17:44 sukiNathan: 00:06:000 (7,8) - this is pretty harsh imo
17:44 sukiNathan: 00:06:158 (8) - this isn't even mapped to percussion
17:44 Aerous: its fine , i double checked with Fycho
17:45 sukiNathan: 00:19:895 (3,1) - 
17:45 sukiNathan: this feels pretty tight
17:45 sukiNathan: if you look at the 1/4 sliders as circles
17:46 Aerous: i might delete the circle
17:46 Aerous: slider
17:46 Aerous: 00:20:053 (1) -
17:46 sukiNathan: actually
17:46 sukiNathan: there's a bunch of
17:46 sukiNathan: 1/4 missed too
17:46 sukiNathan: 00:19:737 - 
17:46 sukiNathan: could have a stream
17:47 Aerous: i dontlike playing streams but i can change it if it affects it a lot
17:47 Aerous: but no BN from the other mods mention about this
17:47 Aerous: so idk
17:47 sukiNathan: this is an extra
17:47 sukiNathan: wait
17:47 sukiNathan: im retarded LOL
17:47 sukiNathan: cause i replaced the
17:47 Aerous: LOL
17:47 sukiNathan: 1/4 sliders with circles
17:47 Aerous: LOL
17:47 sukiNathan: then forgot to change them back
17:47 sukiNathan: just to look at it
17:47 Aerous: ayylmao
17:47 sukiNathan: but
17:47 sukiNathan: http://puu.sh/iwDzI/1f5c176a2e.jpg
17:47 sukiNathan: ya that's kinda tight after a fast movement
17:47 sukiNathan: with 1/4 sliders
17:47 Aerous: O
17:48 Aerous: should be okaay , i had a lot of people testplay ;w;
17:48 Aerous: like i camped for testplays
17:48 sukiNathan: at least
17:48 sukiNathan: make the spacing even
17:48 sukiNathan: =w=
17:48 Aerous: ok fine
17:49 Aerous: fixed
17:49 Aerous: im gonan afk for like 20kmin , ill look at this chat when i cum bak
17:49 sukiNathan: kk
17:57 Aerous: yo btw
17:57 Aerous: desugan said my extra shouldnt be AR 9
17:57 Aerous: maybe higher or something
17:57 Aerous: but i was like Guy's already at 9.2 :(
17:57 sukiNathan: ya
17:57 Aerous: should i make it 9.2
17:57 sukiNathan: yeah
17:57 Aerous: osame
17:58 sukiNathan: it's based on density so
17:58 sukiNathan: well for the most part
17:58 sukiNathan: and they're both extras anyways
17:58 Aerous: k ill make ar 10
17:58 Aerous: i mean 9.2
17:59 sukiNathan: uh
17:59 sukiNathan: im not sure about hard to rakuen's insane
17:59 Aerous: yea
17:59 Aerous: desugan said that too
17:59 Aerous: :(
17:59 sukiNathan: the way insane uses
17:59 sukiNathan: 1/4 sliders
17:59 sukiNathan: this is pretty much an extra
17:59 Aerous: Why is Rakuen's Insane so much harder than Hard? Excessive use of 1/4 rhythms and spacing puts it significantly closer to the Extra in terms of difficulty
17:59 sukiNathan: but without the raw difficulty
18:00 sukiNathan: like
18:00 Aerous: you can say something like that on your mod
18:00 Aerous: ill say it too
18:00 sukiNathan: 01:02:369 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 
18:00 sukiNathan: this is wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy to harsh
18:00 Aerous: yea
18:00 Aerous: i was gonan tell you to comment about it
18:00 sukiNathan: ok not that wayyyyyyyyyy to harsh but pretty dam harsh
18:00 Aerous: lowering the DS or somehting
18:00 sukiNathan: tbh im too lazy to mod it so ill just look for unrankable stuff
18:01 sukiNathan: or suspicious
18:01 sukiNathan: stuff
18:01 sukiNathan: im gonna have to pop it though 
18:01 sukiNathan: if u want me to finish this
18:01 Aerous: w0w
18:01 Aerous: i just messaged Rakuen to nerf
18:02 sukiNathan: just the 1/4 sliders
18:02 sukiNathan: and spacing between some triples
18:03 Aerous: 01:26:685 (7,8,9) -
18:03 sukiNathan: wtf are these
18:03 sukiNathan: custom sampleset numbers LOL
18:03 Aerous: o-o
18:03 sukiNathan: the spacing of the 1/4 sliders themsleves
18:03 sukiNathan: in that pattern is fine
18:03 sukiNathan: but considering
18:03 sukiNathan: it's part of an entire jump section
18:03 sukiNathan: also
18:03 sukiNathan: right after a triplet
18:03 sukiNathan: and a jump
18:03 sukiNathan: into
18:03 sukiNathan: more jumps
18:04 Aerous: wait actually you dont have to qual if you want
18:04 Aerous: cuz i just remembered about what pishi told me
18:04 Aerous: like a few weeks ago that he might do it
18:05 sukiNathan: wot
18:05 sukiNathan: you still owe me a mod either way
18:05 Aerous: ik
18:05 Aerous: jk
18:05 Aerous: im not a fgt like VINXIS
18:05 sukiNathan: WAT
18:05 sukiNathan: ok ill just qualify this
18:05 sukiNathan: well im popping it first
18:05 sukiNathan: no wait
18:06 sukiNathan: so then celsius will qualify
18:06 Aerous: wait
18:06 Aerous: cel bubled it
18:06 sukiNathan: ya and im about to pop it
18:06 Aerous: wait so u pop and rebub , cel gonna qual
18:06 sukiNathan: OK YOU KNOW WHAT 
18:07 Aerous: desu ka
18:07 sukiNathan: actually the spread between hard and normal
18:07 sukiNathan: is a bit edgy too
18:07 sukiNathan: there are quite a lot of jumps for a hard
18:07 sukiNathan: density is fine tho
18:07 Aerous: its kibb
18:07 Aerous: he always does that in his hard diff
18:07 Aerous: LOOL
18:07 sukiNathan: god
18:07 sukiNathan: damn
18:08 sukiNathan: if u made this hard any more dense
18:08 sukiNathan: it could pretty much be a light insane
18:08 Aerous: pishi said that too , but hes like its kibb so its fine LMAO
18:08 sukiNathan: ya it probably is
18:08 sukiNathan: but
18:08 sukiNathan: hella borderline
18:09 sukiNathan: would kibb remove like
18:09 sukiNathan: just a few jumps
18:09 Aerous: k messagin him
18:09 sukiNathan: just non kiai parts
18:09 Aerous: k
18:10 Aerous: is Guy's diff okay
18:10 sukiNathan: its
18:10 sukiNathan: guy
18:10 sukiNathan: like
18:10 sukiNathan: its guy
18:10 sukiNathan: idc
18:10 sukiNathan: jk ill look at it but im sure its perfect
18:12 sukiNathan: what did kibb say
18:12 Aerous: Guy Sensei
18:13 Aerous: http://puu.sh/iwES7/0560ed33b1.jpg
18:13 Aerous: brb leag
18:17 Aerous: kibb updated
18:17 Aerous: i mean he posted
18:18 sukiNathan: wat where I don't see
18:18 Aerous: i heard my iupad ring
18:18 Aerous: thought it was him
18:19 sukiNathan: also I would prob make the hard hp 5 though
18:20 sukiNathan: also
18:20 sukiNathan: combo colors!?!??!?!
18:41 Aerous: ok yea
18:41 Aerous: ill change one of them
18:41 Aerous: i used my skin's color combo
18:41 Aerous: tho
18:41 Aerous: :(
18:42 *sukiNathan slaps
18:44 Aerous: D:
18:47 Aerous: oh
18:47 Aerous: kibb messaged me
18:47 sukiNathan: wut
18:47 sukiNathan: did he say
18:47 Aerous: for the update
18:47 Aerous: he nerfed some
18:47 Aerous: parts
18:47 Aerous: let me update
18:47 sukiNathan: kk ill check in a sec
18:48 Aerous: updating
18:49 Aerous: uupdated
18:49 sukiNathan: ok
18:50 sukiNathan: what about rakuen's insane though
18:50 sukiNathan: I won't pop nvm about that
18:50 sukiNathan: just nerf those 1/4 sliders and ill qualify
18:52 Aerous: k
18:52 sukiNathan: in
18:52 sukiNathan: rakuens diff
18:52 sukiNathan: just in case u thought I meant your diff
18:52 sukiNathan: lol
18:53 Aerous: can i just tell him to nerf 1/4 sliders and jumps?
18:53 Aerous: yea ik its Rakuen
18:53 Aerous: LOL
18:53 sukiNathan: yeah sure
18:53 sukiNathan: I think the jumps are fine tbh
18:53 sukiNathan: considering
18:53 sukiNathan: kibb's hard
18:53 Aerous: k
18:54 sukiNathan: wait lemme drop a few things on ur extra actually
18:54 Aerous: messaged him
18:54 sukiNathan: just update it later
18:54 Aerous: ok
18:55 sukiNathan: 00:22:421 (4,1,2,3) - 
18:55 sukiNathan: hm how to explain this
18:55 sukiNathan: the slider
18:55 sukiNathan: has enough leniency
18:55 sukiNathan: where the player kinda just does a circular motion throughout 00:22:421 (4,1,2) - 
18:55 sukiNathan: instead of just snapping
18:56 sukiNathan: especially when they're low spaced
18:56 sukiNathan: so going into 00:23:053 (3) - with that flow break is kinda awkward to play
18:56 sukiNathan: it forces the player to accelerate over snapping
18:57 sukiNathan: 00:30:790 (1,2) - I would just use a triplet here
18:57 sukiNathan: cause it doesn't emphasize the white tick very well
18:57 sukiNathan: since you're just tapping at a normal 1/2 rhythm
18:57 sukiNathan: with a 1/4 slider and a circle
18:57 sukiNathan: and the jump itself isn't very large
18:57 sukiNathan: but ending on that white tick with a triple emphasizes better imo
18:59 sukiNathan: 00:45:158 (7,1) - jump here should be bigger in comparison to the rest of the pattern
18:59 sukiNathan: you probably know why
19:00 Aerous: back
19:01 Aerous: o
19:01 sukiNathan: 01:27:948 (5,6,1) - this is harsh with such wide angles
19:01 sukiNathan: and the flow break
19:01 sukiNathan: the flow break makes sense but with those angles
19:01 sukiNathan: it's pretty much a 180 turn
19:01 sukiNathan: with fairly large jumps
19:02 Aerous: oh ya
19:02 Aerous: added the jump
19:03 Aerous: i just control + g this 01:28:264 (1) -
19:03 Aerous: and moved
19:03 Aerous: 01:28:106 (6) -
19:03 sukiNathan: ok
19:04 Aerous: wait so how would you map this 00:23:053 (3) -
19:05 sukiNathan: hm
19:05 sukiNathan: u could just
19:05 sukiNathan: ctrl g it
19:05 sukiNathan: and rotate it clockwise
19:07 Aerous: k http://puu.sh/iwHM5/f6435ab0e1.jpg
19:07 sukiNathan: kk
19:08 sukiNathan: tell me when u update 
19:10 Aerous: ill just update it now
19:10 sukiNathan: ok

Aerous wrote:

talked to sukiNathan about the mapset , nerfed some parts from Kibbleru's hard. Waiting for Rakuen to nerf his jumps and 1/4 sliders. I think hes gonna post soon
will wait for the nerf, the spacing of those 1/4 sliders are on the level of an extra, they really need a tone down
Rakuen
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Rakuen
I nerfed the last 3 (1/4) sliders, too trolling and I couldn't even pass that part myself haha

The others are kept, and 1/4 sliders are pretty common among Insanes, like:

ClariS - Colorful
Chihara Minori - Kyoukai no Kanata

So it should be no problem, if I'm not being hated that much.

My update: http://puu.sh/iwLEf/dae88b9a0e.osu
Aerous
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Topic Starter
Aerous
Double checked Rakuen's GD and spread stuff with Charles445 !

Log
22:29 Aerous: yo charles can i ask you for another opinion on a diff ;w;
22:36 Charles445: ok
22:37 *Aerous is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/678334 LiSA - Rally Go Round -TV ver.-]
22:37 Aerous: rakuen's
22:37 Aerous: :D
22:38 Charles445: kk
22:40 Aerous: xxdeathx pointed this out : Why is Rakuen's Insane so much harder than Hard? Excessive use of 1/4 rhythms and spacing puts it significantly closer to the Extra in terms of difficulty
22:40 Charles445: very good diff
22:41 Charles445: ??
22:42 Charles445: wooh that anti
22:42 Charles445: yeah um
22:42 Charles445: no the rakuen is easier by a lot
22:42 Charles445: mainly because it makes everything very smooth
22:42 Charles445: lol this ar
22:42 Aerous: ;w;
22:44 Charles445: it's just because the hard has no jumps at all
22:44 Charles445: star rating inflates jumps anyway
22:44 Charles445: nothing to worry about
22:44 Aerous: k
22:44 Aerous: uh can you post this so when QATs check this , they can read it ;w;
22:44 Aerous: im just scared from my previous experiences
22:44 Aerous: LOL
Nathan
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Nathan
rebubble
Aerous
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Aerous
Go go go
Iceskulls
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Iceskulls
qua?
Aerous
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Aerous
NO RIP PLEASE
Haruto
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Haruto
Yay Ranked :D
Grats!
Mikii
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Mikii
Congratz!
Meyrink
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Meyrink
Gratz o/
Iceskulls
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Iceskulls
Greetings.

here come the 6th day !??!?!! (?)
Aerous
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Aerous
?my first non DQ mapset?
Iceskulls
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Iceskulls
ay lmao we made it

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Rakuen
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Rakuen
safe! hehe xD

thx for trusting me! o3o!
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