Lally wrote:

hi M4Mo3o
[General]

1. SliderBorder and SliderTrackOverride should be used in the case of a skin i don't think that's a thing. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/206887 and https://osu.ppy.sh/s/274111 have them without actual skins and they're supercool :p
2. i would add a spinner in the end yea i dunno why there wasn't one already

[Extra]

1. +1000 audio lead-in yea did on insane/extra
2. HP 7 does anyone care about hp drain
3. 00:21:521 (1,2,4) - small estetic thing do a triangle pattern made it look less like a perfect triangle cuz those suck
4. 00:26:575 (4) - i would curve it a bit more to help more the flow for next circle kay makes no difference awesome
   nice diff ò-ò nice eyebrows

[Insane]

1. HP 6.5 cuz i dont
2. 01:46:956 (1) - try to keep it 1-2 grinds up umokay
3. 01:57:934 (4,5) - i would use sliders here aswell to simplyfy the rhythm would rather follow the song than make a baby rhythm :c

[Hard]

1. 01:04:238 (2) - ctrl+h would rather have it not smoothflow whatever it is
2. 01:25:271 (3) - i would curve it to improve the pattern 01:25:271 (3,4) - like blanket? nah
3. 01:59:673 (3,1) - try to avoid this kind of overlaps :C
4. 02:19:238 (4,5) - try to improve the random spacing here because it feels really strange by playing but jumps on emphasized beats aren't random ;-; made it better tho
   
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[Advanced]

1. AR 6,6 - 6,7 ; OD 5 ar sure, od is 5.5 tho
2. 02:14:347 (1,2) - you can improve this ugly overlap overlaps are feeling discriminated
   really nice diff

[Normal]

1. OD-1 doesnt really work since i didnt change od on advanced to 5 oh well
2. 01:47:608 (4) - keep it 2 grids up is almost offscreen kay

\o3o/

kakifly wrote:

hello.

General

-Writing on the Walls, 'on the' is not capitalized lol woops

SPOILER

http://underoath.merchline.com/collecti ... at-line-cd <- official merch site
-i dunno maybe 'Underoath' should be capitalized too like 'UNDEROATH' i browsed the site a bit and all their merch including website title is in caps this may be true but idk every other place says it's just Underoath so keeping that for now
-wanna start all your diffs at the same spot? why are only extra and insane the only ones that actually start at the red point o-o cuz can't map the intro without making it retarded on other diffs so o well
-you know the end is a nice place for a spinner and you don't have any in the mapset so.... i do

Extra

-could raise HP, its the same as hard and insane ya
-00:14:347 (1) - repeat is kind of blocked by hitburst of 00:13:532 (3) - kind of but not really. moved it up a bit but wouldnt be an issue as it was before anyway :p
-01:05:217 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:07:173 (2,3,4) - i was hoping for drum whistle on these circles but okay sounds good
-01:57:934 (6,7) - 1/3 are hard to click people will just probably interpret this as 1/4 idk try removing 01:57:934 (6) - , then add repeat to 01:57:717 (5) - people can suck it up cuz it fits too well ;-; i'll change on insane tho
-01:58:695 (1,2,3) - hmm this flow isnt very comfortable lol here is my suggestion, where flow is more circular http://puu.sh/gG6Ea/46d617f11a.jpg changed up 2->3, but i think 1->2 is pretty cool


Insane

-could raise hp, its the same as hardya
-00:51:521 (8,1) - god bless you for not stacking a circle after a stream lmao
-01:57:934 (4,5) - nooo not in insane even though i knew these were here i still misclicked when testplaying because im so used to 1/4 get good it's a slider now

Hard

-01:28:858 (2) - i don't like how this slider just covers all the drums it sounds so incompletely, you can map the drums with a simple pattern like this i guess http://puu.sh/gG8vd/3c70785a14.jpg polarity crap tho hurts on a hard :/ if drums weren't so stupid i would be able to follow them better cuz i do think they shoul dbe covered but ya
-why am i so bad at finding stuff

Advanced

-so your nc's in this diff are very inconsistent or you have a pattern idk some parts hav nc every measure and others nc every 2 measures 1 bar comboing in the dense sections and 2 bar in the less dense sections it's a thing i guess
-02:21:195 (3,5) - imo drum-finish on tail sound better ya
-could be a little harder but imo but cool dont tell anyone but this used to be the normal diff lul

Normal

-not sure why you change your nc pattern at 00:27:390 - but you coulddd keep it consistent with the rest of the diff http://puu.sh/gGa85/798ffe9045.jpg this one will make 2 bar
-00:37:744 - ^
-01:18:912 (3) - imo the red tick is more emphasized by the drum than the white, it'd be nice if you made this a 1/2 mk

Easy

-i have nothing to say thats how it should be

i'm not being lazy i swear i actually couldnt find much ;-; good map as always

Sellenite wrote:

hi!

[Extra]

1. 02:31:303 (1,2,3) - suggest change placement into the same pattern like 02:36:195 (4,1) - :
   02:31:303 (1) - ctrl+g because it deserve a jump,then 02:31:956 (2,3) - ctrl+g for the flow,then 02:32:282 (4) - ctrl+g and 02:32:608 (1) - ctrl+g to fit this pattern. gets rid fo the jump on 02:31:956 (2) - with superloud snare hit (and i like what ti is now :p) so gonna leave this as is

this just my favorite tho..hope you like that!:P

[Insane]

1. 01:08:803 (4) - how about ctrl+g of this?more fit the next flow about 01:09:130 (1,2,3,4) - i think spinny fancy

cool insane!!

[Hard]

1. 01:28:858 (2) - humm this..know you on purpose as use slider shape but i prefer you not let the drum all under the slider because it is 3/4 and have no sound on the slidertick.at least i feel strange when i test it 3/4 gap is super awkward for a hard tho ;-; undermapping is the only real way to do this without making it uncomfortable to play ;;-
   
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2. 01:58:043 aaaaah this rhythm should be map in hard imo,how about put a circle here?

[Advanced]

1. 01:55:923 (6) - although have sound here but compared with 01:56:086 (1,2) - is sound less when use circle to hit here.suggest delete 01:55:923 (6) or combine 01:55:923 (6,1) - into a slider yea fixed it with a different rhythm

[Normal & Easy]
nice! !!

good map
that's all i can find,hope it help you!

deetz wrote:

VINXIS wrote:

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[General]
I think HP 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 makes more sense than the decimal stuff you have now. when looking at spread yes but applying to actual difficulty of each... um difficulty it is less yes

[Easy]
00:32:608 (1) - could do this to achieve a similar "parallel" flow like you do everywhere http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2907569 cant see the difference but ok
01:15:325 (2,1) - is this time gap ok no idea but it's happening
01:20:869 (2) - pls point the slider the other way so momentum doesn't make the player want to move in the opposite direction from the next hitobject up
01:46:956 (2) - could make a more interesting slider for the voice h4rdc0re
02:03:912 (1) - could at least curve the end to the next slider a bit because this does not flow what is flow
02:24:782 (1) - something like this pls https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2907580 importance
02:56:086 (1) - consider making all of these reverse sliders. right now I think the gap in rhythm + spacing makes it hard to read. I dunno if it's actually allowed to overmap like this in an easy but it would make the map easier to read so at least consider it. song is too retarded to make it easy

[Normal]
00:50:869 (1) - I think a more interesting slider would fit here like at 00:45:651 (1) - idk how without breaking entire map ;-;
02:26:086 (2) - may wanna reduce the curve on the slider for a less extreme drop jdsf

[Advanced]
01:54:619 (3,4) - I think it would be more consistent to do the rhythm you did before here as its right after the guitar thingy again: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2907398 sdsd
02:59:999 (2) - repeat sliders are lame and the same sound is on the unmapped tick so you should do this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2907390 too much 1/2 slider spam

[Hard]
02:03:260 (2) - more visible made it less visible
02:57:880 (3) - single circle pls, i think it makes more sense and fits better with the sudden cutoff of the sound but it's the same as 02:57:553 (2) - being a not circle
02:59:184 (3) - ^
03:03:097 (3) - ^
03:04:401 (3) - ^

[Insane]
00:21:521 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think this jump is a bit too big compared to the rest of the song, making the spacing a bit smaller couldn't hurt it is
01:01:467 (2,3) - not really a fan of this type of pattern, you could do a fun custom stack for this kind of pattern like before at 00:33:586 (6,1) -custom stacks are super weird for 1/2 stuff that example was 1/4 explaining is impossible
02:57:880 (3) - same suggestion as hard for these sliders

[Extra]
01:35:869 (4,5) - idk how to put it, I just think this pattern needs more "breathing room" or something. something like this maybe? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2907524 too circulary would rather have suffocation
02:02:282 (5,1) - making the overlap more pronounced would be cooler very cooler
02:57:880 (3) - ya same thing as hard and insane
03:02:119 (4,5) - not really a fan of sort-of-stacks in places like this. the sound is higher pitched so you could do something like this for more fun https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2907497 i want to murder
very pishi
od9 pls 8.6 is the new 9

Near wrote:

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Easy

01:46:956 (2) - Shouldn't you add a circle here, then a slider ending on a red tick with repeat? Mentioning this because it's the only part you didn't use that rhythm on this section, and it seems that you like consistency. had that originally then got rid of it. sounded really weird with the vocal starting on downbeat then slider going through on the next tick. it is stupid reasoning but ya

01:57:064 (2) - Just a small thing but, would be a good idea to put some red points at some 1/3 parts of the slider to emphasize that part, since the 1/3 here is really strong. Example of what you can do. suuuuuuuuure

Normal

01:19:075 - As I can hear here, this beat is really strong, would be bad to ignore it even on a Normal. You can start the slider on the red tick and put a circle on the white tick, so you won't ignore this beat and 01:19:401 (4) - wich is more emphasizing than the previous white beat 01:19:238 - Example here if you didn't understand what the fuck I said. i ignored all your text and clicked on the picture good good

01:57:064 (2) - Same as Easy. yaaaaaa

Advanced

01:23:477 (1,2) - Probably a really nazi stuff but, wouldn't be better to stack (1) on (2)? Since you were doing with 01:22:825 (3,4) - and 01:22:173 (1,2) - . Just for consistency reasons. 01:19:564 (1) - Same here but not stacking. yea fixed all this bs

Hard

01:28:858 (2) - Eh, I saw on a mod that you already tried to map the beats here but you couldn't because they're stpd, but did you try to put repeats on the slider untill the end of the drums? I testplayed and asked another people to testplay and it's not confusing at all, and really better than ignore all those beats in my opinion. multiple repeats on a slider is something im not really comfortable with so id rather not force it im a bad person

02:56:901 (1) - You made this a bit offbeat by ignoring this 02:57:227 - beat. Would be better to map it like you did on 03:02:119 (4,5,6,1) - because of consistency and ignored beats. uhhhhhhhyes

Insane

00:09:130 (1) - Would be better to stack this on 00:09:293 (2) - instead of 00:08:803 (4) - because there's a new 'section' starting and the vocal is more emphasizing there, and stacking on (4) would lose the emphasis. yeaaaaaz

00:50:461 (4) - Not sure if there's a beat here, sounds a bit overmap and same happens here 01:00:896 (4) - . Not a big problem tho. Probably my ears are bad. vocals are making it pretty inaudible, but the sound is probably there. i legit dont know but consistency with 00:45:162 (3,4,5) - where there's no vocal covering it so

02:00:162 (1) - In my opinion, the vocal is stronger than the beat you followed, making the vocal a bit 'less strong' and would be better to map it with a circle instead of endind a slider on it. would be breaking consistency with the other 5 times i do this and pain idk i thought it was k

02:56:901 (1) - Same thing as Hard. I can't hear any emphasis on the other part, except for vocal :c and extra i dunno what i was hearing

Extra

01:28:858 (1,2,3,4) - This can be a bit confusing, since there's nothing warning before that there will be crazy blue/red/white/pink tick rhythms and people will click as 1/2 and maybe combobreak. What do you think about adding NC on each one of them? ultimate hp boost

01:57:934 (6) - Instead of this slider, what about 1/3 circles? It's an Extra after all, and it's clearly warning about 1/3 because of the sliders. Would be better to play too, at least for me. EVERYONE SAID TO MAKE IT A SLIDER NOW YOU SAY MAKE IT CIRCLES IT'S GONNA BE CIRCLES

pls dont ask me to mod unmoddable maps againnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn I love this map too ♥ <3

Rumia- wrote:

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from my queueueueue yayyyyyyyyyyyyy

Easy
02:00:651 (2) - i think move it a bit to the left would look more aestethic with the slider and as blank'd with the next slider idk i like it not as a blanket

SPOILER

02:57:390 (2) - how about same slider shape with 02:56:086 (1) - ? mmmk

Normal
00:47:934 (3,1) - blanket em like this would work not everything has to be a blanket lmao

SPOILER

02:16:956 (1,2) - blanket too

SPOILER

02:32:608 (1,2) - blanket here works too

Advance
02:32:608 (1) - i suggest to move it a little to the right like this not really supposed to break distance snap on an advanced tho :c

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Hard
02:29:999 (1,2) - blanket here is fine but not necessary at all lol

Insane
00:24:456 (5) - i think this overlap is kinda bad :/
01:13:043 (1) - maybe lower this one down a little so it look more natural flow , something like nice

SPOILER

01:22:173 (1) - blanket here feel nice imo not everything needs to be a blanket rumia ;-;

SPOILER

01:25:271 (3) - ooo ctrl+g this but it's not supposed to be smooth like 01:30:162 (2,3) - 02:56:249 (2,3) - 02:57:553 (2,3) - etc
01:59:673 (3) - i think overlap this one fully is nicer contradicts with like all my other not full stacks tho

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EasyPP Extra
the OD is kinda dragging the hp really much if you missed 1 object of the streams , consider nerf it a little around 8.2 ~ 8.4 mk
00:14:999 (3) - ctrl+g this plays nicer imo idk how to say it but i disagree D:
00:29:836 (8,9,1) - maybe reduce this ds a little would make a cool antijump antijump in jump section 2cruel
01:03:097 (6,7) - ctrl+g would be nice jump imo but bigger jump on stronger sound
01:20:217 (3,4) - blanket here is fine pls
01:34:238 (3,6) - ctrl+g would make a nicer jump increased spacing so same effect :p
02:39:619 (1) - probably nc here would be preferly but comboing consistencyz
03:02:119 (4,5) - i think both of these can move it a bit more to left if you want to make a nice antijump to play www mmmmmmmmk

pp map ! ! ! ! ppforever

toybot wrote:

really nice maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaap

sorry for late mod, from your queue

oh yeah mod this please: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/222532

[Easy]

1. 00:55:108 (2) - I think this slider can work like this oj
2. 01:17:282 (1) - This seemed really weird and out of place when compared this 01:04:890 (2,1) - . I mean, after seeing this, you would expect the circle to be here and not so far away from the previous one. So, suggest stack or closer maybe. idk what im doing
3. 02:56:086 (1,2) - Make the sliders' angles the same? my eyes must be bad or something i just copy pasted it now
4. 02:59:999 (2) - You should take clap off of slider's head. Lead-in doesn't really work well when starting on downbeat of 1 i dunno there's a snare hit in the song and i do the same thing on normal so

[Normal]

• 
  By the way, how you cover the extra sounds by the slider shape (ex: 01:29:999 (1) - ) is cool ey

1. 00:39:782 (6,7) - You should just make these into a slider really to mimic the next combo and have a little break from 1/2 beats i like circle spam dont judge
2. 01:18:912 (3,4) - No clap hitsounds on these? You can hear them in the music woops i changed those from a previous mod and didnt copy hitsounds agin lol
3. 02:09:130 (1) - I'd suggest that you move this more to the left of prev slider, but DS would get knocked up ;; yea no can do :/

[Advanced]

• 
  This could probably be made a bit more difficult compared to how the Hard diff is practically like Light Insane. Well, I say that, but this difficulty is pretty much perfect in every aspect for me. putting 1/2 everywhere i can already ;-; star rating is just low cuz spacing is low i cant do anything

1. 00:58:043 (3,4) - This felt weird since the voice really seems to keep holding on instead of having that double 1/2 tap. Just make this one slider on white ticks? drums shift from snare to bassy stuff there so i'd rather not skip over it :p
2. 00:58:695 (1) - Finish on head? oh

[Hard]

1. 00:22:499 (2,3) - Make the distance a little less? I don't know, this pattern feels a little awkward for me to play i got all jumps at 1.6x ds then normal spacing at 1.3x so i dunno what the issue is
2. 01:03:586 (5,6,1) - This works way better as a v-shape movement instead of linear, with a bit bigger of a jump then (3,4) http://puu.sh/h1hWG/19c4fe891a.jpg yer
3. 01:25:597 (4) - You should make this NC instead, it starts the background figures' sounds would rather just keep it how it is now to follow stanza stuff and i do it 500 other places
4. 01:43:695 (4) - Take off reverse and add a circle at 01:44:021 - stacked on the next slider? It feels more natural of a movement than the reverseyes
5. 01:48:423 (2,3) - I think going from (2) to (3) should be downwards, making the whole pattern like a triangle and similar to 01:42:880 (1,2,3,4) - -sssrf
6. 01:58:695 (1) - better blnket plzzz fdfd
7. 03:02:608 (1) - Finish to make it the same as 02:57:390 (1) - gfgfg

[Insane]

1. 00:52:173 (1) - The sudden stop feels like this should be stacked under 00:51:521 (8) - . You've prob already got this suggestion before, but I think it fits i have lol. it has something to do with flow that is probably really subjective but i like it
2. 01:02:445 (6) - This leads better into the curved stream imo as placed around 372|216 fddfd
3. 01:31:630 (2) - Place on (3)'s head instead? to cover that "alone" lyric better idk, this isn't as needed would rather keep it stacked cuz some intsrument emphasize red tickblahblahblah
4. 01:57:934 (4) - Clap on head, drums indicate this well
5. 02:00:977 (5) - I think you could extend to the blue tick, sounded bit empty extra doesnt even cover that so would be kinda weird

Sorry can't mod extra, it's too OP for me

Good luck!~