1. 7ka's Normal (1.76 stars, 134 notes)
2. Hard (3.22 stars, 320 notes)
3. Insane (4.08 stars, 427 notes)

Mappest

by -Nanaka-
by NeK0Nyqn
by NeK0Nyqn

snowsign7 wrote:

red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.
bold: should fix.

7ka's Normal

1. 01:27:771 (1) - finishのほうが合うと思いました　Fix
2. 01:32:803 (4,5) - sanmple normalが連続してるからちょっとうるさい？ 01:33:191 (5,5,5) - この３つを差別化して盛り上がりを演出してるのでKeepで！
3. 01:39:384 (5) - おんなじfinishの音が連続してるのもうるさい気がします ^

hardとInsaneはまた後日modさせていただきます～～

blueloniess wrote:

humm hope my suggestion helpful

normal

00:10:352 (1,2) - this blanket can make better ~~!! (￣▽￣)~*　Oh..Fix
01:16:158 (2,3) - I think you can make this into a blanket .　hm...Here there is no need
hummmm normal is good makes me feel pleasure (=￣ω￣=)　Thanks!

blueloniess wrote:

humm hope my suggestion helpful

insane

00:05:707 (5,1) - you can change this into a slow slider ....　nice idea
00:43:642 (3,1) - don't overlap these sliders....I think these makes your map feel stupid ......>w< Sorry. like these sliders. don't want to change
01:01:449 (4) - when you want to change the slider speed ,you'd better use a new combo
01:02:997 (1,1,1,1) - put big jumps here
01:42:481 (4,1) - this jump should get bigger but 01:43:642 (1,1) - this jump need to change ...just put a middle jump here Fix
01:17:803 (4) - why you change the sound ?here should be whistle ...
01:06:095 - kiai time should start at here :01:06:094 - Fix
01:26:029 (3) - same with the 2nd problem same as the second
that's all ┐( ¯¯ํ¯ )┌ (￣▽￣)~*

hard

00:18:481 (3,4,5,1) -

(。_。)these overlap give me shit when I first play it 〒▽〒 I suggest ....don't overlap the notes and sliders ...

omg ....you overlap so many notes and sliders !such as :00:30:094 (4,2) - 00:11:126 (1,3) - 00:11:126 (1,3) overlap modify. But like overlap these notes and sliders. So　fix only difficult to see part - TAT （┬＿┬）these makes me feel uncomfortable ....
〈（＿　＿）〉〈（＿　＿）〉sorry ...　〒▽〒　I can't find out more problem unless I recover from these influences which I think is a bad one ....

End

in a short ,all diffs are good yep ,I think good .just has a little problems .hummmm
(｡・`ω´･)ファイト!
I hope this map will ranked soon !

snowsign7 wrote:

こんにちわ！　この前の続きです～

Hard

1. 00:02:416 (6) - いきなり提案になっちゃうんですけどここSoft C:1にしてホイッスル入れてあげるといい感じになると思います！　その部分のみCS変更しました
2. 00:03:965 - ^
3. 00:07:449 (2) - finish追加してもいいと思います！
4. 00:07:642 (3) - ここの音は 00:08:029 - ここと一緒なのでホイッスルかclapで統一したほうがいいと思います！個人的にはホイッスルが好みかも...
5. 00:08:223 (5) - ^
6. 00:08:997 (1) - ^
7. 00:10:352 (1) - ^　
8. 00:11:513 (2) - ^
9. 00:12:094 (1) - ^
10. 00:13:061 (4) - ^
11. 00:13:642 (1) - ^
12. 00:14:416 (3) - ^
13. 00:15:191 (2) - ^
14. 00:16:932 (3) - ^
15. 00:17:707 (5) - ^
16. 00:19:255 (5) - ^
17. 00:15:578 (3) - ホイッスルつけ忘れ？
18. 00:16:158 (5) - ここfinishのほうが合うと思います！
19. 00:17:707 (5) - ^　音があるように聞こえなかったので入れませんでした
20. 00:24:287 (1) - ^
21. 00:25:061 (3) - ^
22. 00:32:029 (3) - ^
23. 00:39:771 (1) - ^
24. 00:40:545 (3) - ^
25. 00:41:320 (1) - ^
26. 00:44:416 (5) - ^
27. 00:45:965 (4) - ^
28. 00:53:707 (1) - ^
29. 00:56:803 (1) - ^
30. 01:06:094 (1) - ^
31. 01:09:191 (1) - ^
32. 01:17:707 (3) - ^
33. 01:18:481 (1) - ^
34. 01:21:191 (3) - ^
35. 01:23:126 (2) - ^
36. 01:24:674 (3) - ^
37. 01:26:223 (4) - ^
38. 01:26:610 (1) - ^少し騒がしく感じたので入れませんでした
39. 01:27:771 (1) - ^
40. 01:30:868 (1) - ^
41. 01:39:384 (3) - ^
42. 00:30:287 (1) - ここもfinishのほうが合うかも...?あんま自信ないです 　あまり好みではなかったので・・・
43. 00:30:674 (2) - ホイッスルの方があってると思います～
44. 00:33:578 (7) - ^
45. 00:17:513 - finish追加！
46. 00:33:384 - ^
47. 01:13:642 - ^
48. 01:15:191 (7) - ^
49. 01:19:836 (2) - ^
50. 00:47:126 - 逆にここはfinishいらない気がします！代わりにclap追加で！
51. 00:48:674 (5) - 多分ホイッスルいらない？
52. 00:54:868 (1) - finish外してclap追加！
53. 01:30:481 (3) - ^
55. 00:22:739 (1) - ちょっと流れが悪く感じたのでこっち側に曲げてみてはどうでしょうか！
    SPOILER

    
56. 00:27:191 (3,1) - ここスペーシング開きすぎてる気がします～
57. 00:27:578 (2,3) - ^
58. 00:31:061 - ここノート追加してもいいと思います！ここと次をつなげてスライダーにすると合うかも？　
    SPOILER

    
59. 00:31:255 (1) - NCいらないと思います！
60. 00:31:449 - ここもリバースだとちょっと叩きづらく感じたのでスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょう！　
    SPOILER

    
61. 00:33:965 (1,2) - 音取りに違和感を感じたので伸ばして一つにまとめたいです！
    SPOILER

    
62. 00:38:223 (6,1) - なんとなく下に流れるのが難しく感じました！ここらへんが個人的に好き!
    SPOILER

    
63. 00:38:610 (2,3,4,5) - ここらへんの流れが悪く感じたのでこんな感じで配置してみてはどうでしょうか！
    SPOILER

    
    SPOILER

    
64. 00:40:545 (3) - 上の提案を無視した場合はここもスルーしちゃってください！　さっきのと合わせてここのスライダーも曲げるといい感じになると思います！
    SPOILER

    
65. 00:50:223 (9,1) - ここはちょっと開き過ぎだと思います～
66. 01:25:642 (2) - ここの流れも悪く感じたのでちょっと曲げてみてはどうでしょう～　
    SPOILER

    
67. 01:26:610 (1) - ^
    SPOILER

    
68. 01:33:965 (1,2,3,4) - ここめっちゃ好きですお気に入り！！
69. 01:10:932 (6) - リバースだと少し浮いてる感じがします。スライダーでいいと思いました!
    SPOILER

    
70. 01:13:061 (4) - しっかり重ねてあげましょう!
71. 01:32:803 (2) - ちょっと細かくなっちゃいますけどここも重ねてあげましょー
72. 01:37:836 (4) - ^
73. 01:39:578 (4) - 個人的にここも下の４と重ねてあげたいです～
74. 01:44:803 (1) - ここまで伸ばしてあげたほうが自然に感じました!
    SPOILER

    
    疲れちゃったのでHardだけにさせていただきました 　Insaneはまた後日させてもらいます...。 何度もすいません

snowsign7 wrote:

大変長らくお待たせいたしました

Insane

1. 00:02:416 - Hardと一緒でここSoft C:1にしてホイッスル入れてあげるといい感じになると思います！ 　Hardと同じようにホイッスルで統一する形で修正しました
2. 00:07:642 (3) - ここもハードと一緒でここの音は 00:08:029 - ここと一緒なのでホイッスルかclapで統一したほうがいいと思います！
3. 00:08:416 - ^
4. 00:09:191 (4) - ^
5. 00:10:739 (3) - ^　
6. 00:11:513 (2) - ^
7. 00:13:061 (4) - ^
8. 00:13:836 (2) - ^
9. 00:14:610 - ^
10. 00:15:384 - ^
11. 00:16:932 (3) - ^
12. 00:17:707 (5) - ^
13. 00:12:287 - clapつけ忘れ！
14. 00:31:642 (4) - ^
15. 00:32:416 (5) - ^
16. 00:46:352 (5) - ホイッスルつけ忘れ！
17. 00:09:965 (2) - finishのほうがあってると思います！
18. 00:16:158 (1) - ^
19. 00:18:481 (2) - ^
20. 00:24:287 (1) - ^
21. 00:25:061 - ^
22. 00:32:029 (3) - ^
23. 00:39:771 - ^
24. 00:40:545 - ^
25. 00:41:320 (1) - ^
26. 00:44:416 (1) - ^
27. 00:45:965 (4) - ^
28. 00:56:803 (1) - ^
29. 01:12:287 (2) - ^
30. 01:17:707 (3) - ^
31. 01:21:190 (3) - ^
32. 01:26:223 (1) - ^
33. 01:26:997 (5) - ^
34. 01:30:868 (1) - ^
35. 01:37:061 (1) - ^
36. 01:44:803 (1) - ^
37. 01:46:352 (1) - ^
38. 00:10:352 (1) - ホイッスルのほうが合うと思います～！ :
39. 00:33:578 (15) - ^
40. 00:54:868 (1) - ^
41. 01:30:481 (6) - ^
42. 00:07:449 - finish追加しましょ！
43. 00:11:707 (3) - ^
44. 00:12:094 - ^
45. 00:17:320 (4) - ^
46. 00:32:029 (3) - ^
47. 00:55:061 - ^
48. 01:13:642 - ^
49. 01:15:191 (8) - ^
50. 01:19:836 (2) - ^
51. 01:21:384 (5) - ^
52. 00:54:868 (1) - finish外してclapにしましょー！
53. 01:30:481 (6) - ^
54. 01:10:352 (1) - ホイッスル外しましょ～
55. 00:33:965 (1) - clapのつけ間違い？
56. 01:17:804 (4) - ここ連続してホイッスル使っちゃうのはまずいと思いますここだけ外してあげましょー！
57. 01:46:352 (1) - ここもホイッスル多分いらないと思います...ここはちょっと自信ないです
58. 00:03:384 (4,5,1) - ここの流れが少し悪く感じました～ 若干ですが位置を調整しました
59. 00:34:158 (3) - ここにもう一つ音があるように聞こえました！ 追加しました
60. 00:34:255 - 逆にここは聞こえないような気がします... 削除しました
61. 00:35:707 - ここももう一つ音があるように聞こえます～ 　
    SPOILER

    
    画像の音取りを採用させていただきました
62. 00:56:610 (9,1) - こっちから入るのがやりにくく感じたので１のスライダーを柔らかくしてあげましょー！
    SPOILER

    
63. 01:05:320 (2) - ここ見づらく感じたので手前の単発の位置を変えてこのスライダーの向きをずらしませんか？
    SPOILER

    
64. 01:08:997 (8,1) - ここも入りづらく感じました～、こんな感じにしませんか！
    SPOILER

    
65. 01:47:707 (4) - ここひとつ伸ばして上げたほうが自然に感じます！ 一応ギターの音を拾いたいのでそのままで
    SPOILER

    

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おまたせしちゃってすみません
初めてのmodなので至らぬ点が多々あると思います

jloughman14 wrote:

General

Maybe cut down on the stacks a bit.
Really nice looking beatmap you got.

Normal

Honestly, could not find something significant to change, looks really good.

Hard

00:46:642 (6) - Delete this.　fix
00:58:739 (1,1,1) - Make these a single combo. fix
01:02:997 (1,1,1) - ^
01:43:642 (1,1) - ^^
[box=Insane]00:06:191 Through 00:06:771 - You could edit in here.
00:13:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - This should be a slider to match the song. sorry now is like

00:22:545 (7) - I think you should delete this and put something else that matching the rhythm.＾ [/box]
00:58:739 (1,1,1) - Single combo here.Fix
01:02:997 (1,1,1) - ^ You probably seen this coming again
01:43:642 (1,1) - ^^[/box]
Hopefully this helps out a little. Also, you should tell me the name of this VN cause looks a bit interesting Im also working on a VN soundtrack if you'd want to check that out, up to you!

1. Offset is late by ~16ms. I recommend offset 1046.
2. Source should be: Hyper→Highspeed→Genius

1. 00:01:062 (1,3,1) - I think normal-hitfinish will sound better on heads of these sliders.
2. 00:05:707 (3) - The slider shape is uneven, and doesn't blanket (1) properly. Use a 3-point slider for a perfectly circular curve so you can improve the aesthetic.
3. 00:09:578 (3) - Better for this to be soft whistle (kick). It matches the song better, and consistent with 00:12:674
4. 00:36:674 (3) - You can make a nicer curve by setting the third point equidistant from the second and fourth: http://puu.sh/gi77Y/2cd0629b82.jpg
5. 01:06:094 - In this section your hitsound use is very inconsistent. There seems to be no pattern as to where you use normal-hitnormal versus when you use soft-hitclap. Please revise this to have more consistent hitsound pattern.
6. 01:13:836 (3) - Same thing about the curve.
7. 01:33:191 (5) - Change head to soft sampleset + whistle and finish. It fits the song better and matches with 01:39:384 (5) which is the same part of the musical phrase in the next iteration.

1. 00:59:708 - Green line here doesn't change anything. Remove it?
2. Starting at 00:19:642 there are some green lines are unsnapped by ~1ms, including start of kiai section. Please check all of them and fix it.
3. 00:01:062 (1,6,4) - I think normal-hitfinish fits better than the soft whistles on the downbeats.
4. 00:17:320 (4) - Remove finish from end? It doesn't seem to fit the music.
5. 00:19:255 (5) - Change to clap on head?
6. 00:30:674 (2) - Change to clap on end?
7. 00:32:029 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think it's better to increase the distance spacing a bit, so the repeat arrows are more visible: http://puu.sh/giupd/6ab239b4b8.jpg
8. 00:33:191 (6) - Why is there a finish on the second repeat? It doesn't seem to match the song. Remove it?
9. 00:40:352 (2,4) - Stack them together?
10. 00:47:513 (1) - Head feels really empty. Add a whistle?
11. 01:01:449 - Slider velocity change does nothing here... just set it to 1.00x.
12. 01:06:094 (1) - After you fix the unsnapped green lines, make sure you resnap this slider too.
13. 01:19:836 (2) - Finish doesn't fit well here. I'd remove it.
14. 01:22:739 (1,3) - Try to avoid these touching because it doesn't look good.
15. 01:30:094 (2,3,1) - Better not to stack these, because it's confusing the read. Just overlap them normally: http://puu.sh/giuKo/7cc40df15b.jpg
16. 01:36:287 (4,5) - I think it's better for rhythm to be consistent with 01:33:191 (3,4) so choose one, and use the same rhythm on the other.
17. 01:39:771 (1) - I recommend removing the last repeat, because there's more significant drum sound on the downbeat.

1. This has the same issues with unsnapped green lines. Please check all of them.
2. 00:02:416 (3,1) - I think it is better not to overlap these, because it can be confused to 1/4 rhythm. Space it out like this: http://puu.sh/givdh/2c7dda7a3d.jpg
3. 00:07:932 (5) - Sounds better if you remove the whistle.
4. 00:24:287 (1) - Change to whistle or finish on head.
5. 00:54:868 (1,2,3) - The normal-sliderslide are really distracting, and don't fit the song. Did you really intend to use those? Maybe you meant to put normal sampleset on heads and ends of sliders rather than body?
6. 01:06:094 (1) - Unsnapped slider end.
7. 01:21:190 (3,5) - Too many finishes here makes it really noisy. I'd recommend removing both, or at least the one on (5).
8. 01:36:287 (4,5) - Same as in Hard.

CloudSplash16 wrote:

From my queue.

[General]

1. Offset is late by ~16ms. I recommend offset 1046.
2. Source should be: Hyper→Highspeed→Genius

[Hard]

1. 00:59:708 - Green line here doesn't change anything. Remove it?
2. Starting at 00:19:642 there are some green lines are unsnapped by ~1ms, including start of kiai section. Please check all of them and fix it.
3. 00:01:062 (1,6,4) - I think normal-hitfinish fits better than the soft whistles on the downbeats.
4. 00:17:320 (4) - Remove finish from end? It doesn't seem to fit the music.
5. 00:19:255 (5) - Change to clap on head?
6. 00:30:674 (2) - Change to clap on end?
7. 00:32:029 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think it's better to increase the distance spacing a bit, so the repeat arrows are more visible: http://puu.sh/giupd/6ab239b4b8.jpg
8. 00:33:191 (6) - Why is there a finish on the second repeat? It doesn't seem to match the song. Remove it?
9. 00:40:352 (2,4) - Stack them together?
10. 00:47:513 (1) - Head feels really empty. Add a whistle?
11. 01:01:449 - Slider velocity change does nothing here... just set it to 1.00x.
12. 01:06:094 (1) - After you fix the unsnapped green lines, make sure you resnap this slider too.
13. 01:19:836 (2) - Finish doesn't fit well here. I'd remove it.
14. 01:22:739 (1,3) - Try to avoid these touching because it doesn't look good.
15. 01:30:094 (2,3,1) - Better not to stack these, because it's confusing the read. Just overlap them normally: http://puu.sh/giuKo/7cc40df15b.jpg
16. 01:36:287 (4,5) - I think it's better for rhythm to be consistent with 01:33:191 (3,4) so choose one, and use the same rhythm on the other.
17. 01:39:771 (1) - I recommend removing the last repeat, because there's more significant drum sound on the downbeat.

[Insane]

1. This has the same issues with unsnapped green lines. Please check all of them.
2. 00:02:416 (3,1) - I think it is better not to overlap these, because it can be confused to 1/4 rhythm. Space it out like this: http://puu.sh/givdh/2c7dda7a3d.jpg
3. 00:07:932 (5) - Sounds better if you remove the whistle.
4. 00:24:287 (1) - Change to whistle or finish on head.
5. 00:54:868 (1,2,3) - The normal-sliderslide are really distracting, and don't fit the song. Did you really intend to use those? Maybe you meant to put normal sampleset on heads and ends of sliders rather than body?
6. 01:06:094 (1) - Unsnapped slider end.
7. 01:21:190 (3,5) - Too many finishes here makes it really noisy. I'd recommend removing both, or at least the one on (5).
8. 01:36:287 (4,5) - Same as in Hard.

Cool song and map.

CloudSplash16 wrote:

From my queue.

[7ka's Normal]

1. 00:01:062 (1,3,1) - I think normal-hitfinish will sound better on heads of these sliders.　Nope,I do not fit it ... too strong
2. 00:05:707 (3) - The slider shape is uneven, and doesn't blanket (1) properly. Use a 3-point slider for a perfectly circular curve so you can improve the aesthetic.　hm...Okey Fix,Other forms
3. 00:09:578 (3) - Better for this to be soft whistle (kick). It matches the song better, and consistent with 00:12:674 sure
4. 00:36:674 (3) - You can make a nicer curve by setting the third point equidistant from the second and fourth: http://puu.sh/gi77Y/2cd0629b82.jpg k
5. 01:06:094 - In this section your hitsound use is very inconsistent. There seems to be no pattern as to where you use normal-hitnormal versus when you use soft-hitclap. Please revise this to have more consistent hitsound pattern. omg....Fix it
6. 01:13:836 (3) - Same thing about the curve. ^
7. 01:33:191 (5) - Change head to soft sampleset + whistle and finish. It fits the song better and matches with 01:39:384 (5) which is the same part of the musical phrase in the next iteration. k

Cool song and map.

• 
  00:01:046 (1) - Finish
  00:02:400 (3) - 終端Finish
  00:03:949 (3) - ^
  00:07:239 (3) - 終端Finish外して先端Finish
  00:23:400 (3) - サークル追加
  00:44:400 (1) - 分かりにくいので若干下にずらしたほうがいいと思います
  01:13:433 (1) - 終端のFinish外して01:13:820 (2) - にFinish追加
  01:15:175 (8) - ^
  01:19:820 (2) - ^
  01:18:078 (6) - Finish外してClap
  01:39:949 (2) - なんか変な感じしますね。音取りの提案だけしときます。
  
  img

  
  01:47:110 (1,2,3,4) - 先端と終端全部Clapでいいと思います

-Maruk- wrote:

request from my queue

Insane

00:01:046 (1) - Finish　finish多用するのは好きではないのでごめんなさい
00:02:400 (3) - 終端Finish　^
00:03:949 (3) - ^　＾
00:07:239 (3) - 終端Finish外して先端Finish　入れ替えました
00:23:400 (3) - サークル追加　追加しました
00:44:400 (1) - 分かりにくいので若干下にずらしたほうがいいと思います　そのままで
01:13:433 (1) - 終端のFinish外して01:13:820 (2) - にFinish追加　finishの音が尻尾にあるように聞こえるのでそのままで
01:15:175 (8) - ^　^
01:19:820 (2) - ^　^
01:18:078 (6) - Finish外してClap　
01:39:949 (2) - なんか変な感じしますね。音取りの提案だけしときます。　しっくりこなかったのでそのままで
[box=img]

01:47:110 (1,2,3,4) - 先端と終端全部Clapでいいと思います　音がうるさすぎるように感じたので変えませんでした
nice songです
Good luck~

Fort wrote:

hello from mod q

Insane

00:02:207 (1,2,3) - yeah i see your patterning in here, its like triplets, but im sure your patterning isnt right. because its clearly that song you maps needs to be mapped 5/4 streams (because 00:02:594 - is very strong notes, and i think you should circle or slider there and maybe you can new combo that thing.Sorry now is like
00:05:691 (5,6,1) - why change pattern in here? its like same patterning from your previous pattern Because intro an end.I think not have to change.
00:18:078 (1,2,2,3) - i think you can make same spacing placement hereNo
00:32:787 (7) - new combo? (indicates long stream) OK nice idea
00:43:626 (3) - confusing but okay change conspicuous
00:47:207 - should add circle here No
00:47:497 (10) - need NC this instead of 00:47:691 (1) - (that NC isnt necessary imo)
~im too lazy to fix NC in here, you need people who want to nazi NC mod your map lmao
01:05:304 (2,3) - feels overmap and overlap makes it very hard to get Fix
01:47:884 - you should add circle here, yep last notes Fit guitar sound to note

overall your map is overmapped at patterning especially of triplets, you need consider this thing for rank. just saying this
good luck!

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my queue

Unrankable issue
Suggestion

[General]

1. 7ka's Normal's Preview Point is different from the two other diffs
2. Kiai time in inconsistent. 7ka's Normal has a different Kiai

[7ka's Normal]

1. Preview Point is different from the two other diffs　???
   
2. Kiai Time is different from the two other diffs Not Unrankable
   [quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]
   Kiai should be consistent throughout difficulties of your mapset (especially since it is shown on the main menu). If you have a guest difficulty from another mapper that uses different kiai, then it's fine as long as it still makes sense.

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my queue

Unrankable issue
Suggestion

[General]

1. 7ka's Normal's Preview Point is different from the two other diffs
2. Kiai time in inconsistent. 7ka's Normal has a different Kiai

[7ka's Normal]

1. Preview Point is different from the two other diffs
2. Kiai Time is different from the two other diffs

[Hard]

1. Nothing to say here, it's pretty good

Please post from seeing a decent Map

Chaoslitz wrote:

Hard

00:03:755 (4) - try to use same hitsound as 00:02:207 (4,5,6)
00:12:465 (2) - keep same distance between 00:12:078 (1,3) OK
00:33:562 (1) - NC
01:03:368 (2) - place at x:288|y:136 instead? Sorry now is like
01:12:658 (3) - rotate 10 anticlockwise and place it in x:88|y:88 Nice idea
01:32:787 (2,4) - it is difficult to read since they are stacked Displace
01:39:755 (5) - clap in head　OK
01:44:787 (1) - the spinner is following the vocal, so 01:43:626 (1,2) is better to move to 01:43:239 (1,2) instead　Sorry.want to following drum

Insane

00:02:207 (1,2,3) - stream of 5 notes suit more in here I think too hard
00:03:755 (1,2,3) - ^
00:43:626 (3,1) - remove stack since it is difficult to read Displace
01:08:594 (6) - place it at x:452|y:252 to keep DS the sameI think jump is better

nice mapset xD

PS:Different kiai time is acceptable if the diffs are mapped by different mappers

Chaoslitz wrote:

[notice][7ka's Normal]

1. 00:01:046 (1) - finish in head? Nope,Is lost sound balance...
2. 00:28:723 - I suggest you to add a note here hm,1/2 slider x2 change to pattern
3. 00:39:755 (1) - not parallel? owo　sure

nice mapset xD

PS:Different kiai time is acceptable if the diffs are mapped by different mappers

NewIpas wrote:

Hello~
M4M :3

Hard

1. 00:02:304 (5) - Remove this. It's doesn't explain anything at this part No
2. 00:27:368 (1) - Remove NC and add NC to the next note
3. 00:50:400 (1,2) - Swap NC
4. 00:51:949 (1,2) - Swap NC
5. 00:54:852 (1,2) - Swap too
6. 01:20:594 (1) - Remove NC
7. 01:30:078 (2,3,1) - Just a suggestion. Prefer to change this flow. It looks a bit weird No
8. 01:32:787 (2,3,4) - I'd prefer not to overlap this. Looks weird

Insane

1. 00:05:691 (5) - Fix DS for consistency
   
   I think there's too many NC issues at 00:07:239 ~ 00:19:239
   I think it's Overmapped too
   
   
2. 00:43:626 (3,1) - Don't overlap this. I think it must be separated
3. 01:01:433 (1,2) - Blanket this?
4. 01:29:304 (7,2,3,4,5) - Overlap seems to be BAD
5. 01:30:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think it seems to be Bad pattern or it just for myself :>No
6. 01:33:949 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Bad Flow
7. 01:39:949 (2,3) - It seems to be bad pattern :3 Change? I think this would be fit with the song but it looks like too ugly :>

[/notice]

I think your Insane is too overmapped ><
But, I can only do this for now :3
Good Luck :3

Hitorikko wrote:

yo ~ from my Queue.

Normal

00:02:207 (2,3) - fix blanket. Looks fine
00:02:594 (3,1) - sliderbow not symmetric. make it symmetric like this　Sure,But 1 only fixes
move the end node of 00:04:142 (1) - to x:220 y:316 and move the 1st node of 00:02:594 (3) - to x:380 y:248 to fix the blanket.
00:07:239 (1,2) - bad flow I do not think so...
00:15:755 (5,1,2) - bad flow. maybe like this .　fm...Okey
00:19:626 (1,2,3,1) - fix blankets. I got off blankets because lol
00:23:304 (3) - middle node x:92 y:256, third node x:32 y:236 looks better Ctrl+C fix
00:42:465 (3,1) - fix blanket k
00:44:400 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:47:497 (1,2) - ^ Looks fine imo
01:29:304 (1) - move 4th node to x:288 y:144 Okey
01:44:013 (3) - move slider to x:268 y:312 for better flow Nope.

thumbs up
Gudluck with your map.

Thank you for watching finely

Shurelia wrote:

おっす!やったよ!

Sorry for the very late mod ;w;



~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~

[General]

- Add "-Nanaka-" to the tags. Because GD.
- Change "ハイパー ハイスピード ジーニアス" into "ハイパーハイスピードジーニアス" at the tags and change "Hyper Highspeed Genius" to "Hyper→Highspeed→Genius" ,that's the original name.
- You may want to add "Eroge" to the tags.

[7ka's Normal]

1. 00:22:723 - Add circle at here, because it will feels really empty if there's no object at here. Sure.00:28:142 - change same rhythm
2. 01:40:142 (1,2) - i recommend this to be stacked, it plays better for me.　Nope.I want to because it is the lowest degree of difficulty Stack Avoid
3. 00:14:207 (2,3,4) - I suggest to make a better Triangle at here.　No.not need
4. 00:39:755 (1) - Add finish on the tail　^ The noisy for Note is less

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!

Aura893 wrote:

From my queue!

Normal

-Hi there! I literally could not find anything wrong with this map! Everything is timed perfectly! No unsnapped notes, no notes blending in, No odd slider movements or hitsounds colliding! This was a fun map! I hope for the very best for it!

1. add "-Nanaka-" on the tags since -Nanaka- Have a GD here
2. different Kiai between Normal diff and other diffs. Please make it same. And I think kiai at 01:43:239 - in 7ka's Normal was unnecessary.

1. 00:19:626 (1,2) - it looks hard to see the pattern transition from white ticks to many red ticks by just this 1/2 slider maybe you can use this pattern as transition http://puu.sh/gGclM/56e48e779c.jpg
2. 00:22:723 - please don't ignore this part since it was used at 00:19:626 -
3. 00:38:594 (2) - you can stack it with 00:36:658 (3) - 's tail. It looks like a bad overlap.
4. 00:55:626 (4) - umm... why finish ?
5. 01:34:723 (3) - the way it curved looks not flowing well with previous note. you can rotate it like http://puu.sh/gGdf8/b7b761ce2b.jpg or move and blanket it like http://puu.sh/gGdjX/c93908154e.jpg . Same to 01:37:820 (3) -
   This diff is great. The flow and pattern is looks good. And i think this diff meets Ranking Criteria

1. 00:11:691 (5) - finish on the head will fit with high effect in the music
2. 00:13:433 (1,2,3) - it isn't triangle right ? and it make 00:13:433 (1,3,4) - looks not tidy
3. 00:14:400 (4,5,1) - There's nothing special in the song, so different spacing looks unreasonable.
4. 00:14:981 (1,2,3,4) - I think you miss the pattern here. A clicks should be at 00:14:981 - , 00:15:368 - , 00:15:755 - since the effect up in the song is at those part. But 00:15:755 - was a slider tail. I suggest to change the pattern to http://puu.sh/gGeNc/d6f05cbaaa.jpg
5. 00:25:045 (3,4,1) - unreasonable different spacing again.
6. 00:33:949 (2,3) - people (especially me) won't see that circle came. I prefer to not using this hided circle in Hard diff (exception if it was extended)
7. 00:40:336 (2,4) - stack them properly
8. 00:56:013 (3) - move it down 2 times and right 1 time to make it's tail stack with 00:55:239 (1) - 's 00:55:239 (1) -
9. 00:58:336 (6,3) - stack them properly
10. 01:00:949 (2,3) - ctrl+g on them. It'll make a CW flow.
11. 01:20:013 (3,4,5,6) - this pattern looks awkward. I think slider 01:20:594 (5) - should be started at white ticks, so I can assume that you follow the vocal. try this pattern http://puu.sh/gGhSw/193281b2a6.jpg
12. 01:25:045 (4,1,2,3) - same as above, pattern looks awkard. Why ? because i don't know what the sliders follow. Is vocal ? not because there was a slider click not referring to vocal. Try this pattern http://puu.sh/gGiop/fb022b4bd7.jpg
13. 01:30:465 (3,1) - this SV change looks weird if it's decreased so suddenly. Or maybe the kiai was too fast.
    This diff looks have some misplaced NC... Please check it

1. 00:07:142 - There's something in the song here. So make 00:06:852 (7) - extended isn't a bad idea I thought
2. 00:43:626 (3) - I think you miss to put the red tick here. did you want to me the red tick fit to 00:42:852 (1) - 's head ?
3. 01:24:465 (1,2,3) - this is really no tidy. at least make they have same distance
4. 01:29:884 (1) - I think you wrong to put this circle. It flows awkward. I suggest to move it to stack with 01:28:529 (3) - 's head and you'll get a CW flow.
   That's all for this diff. I think some jump is OK sinc this is Insane and the pattern looks better in this diff

Niko-nyan wrote:

well checked again the map :< the gap between 7ka's Normal to Hard really far (1,5+ star) owo it can be unrankable btw