Mu - Heavenly Kiss

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年3月13日 at 17:46:21

Artist: Mu
Title: Heavenly Kiss
Source: Hyper Highspeed Genius
Tags: ハイパー ハイスピード ジーニアス HHG windmill visual novel opening
BPM: 155
Filesize: 20473kb
Play Time: 01:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. 7ka's Normal (1.76 stars, 134 notes)
  2. Hard (3.22 stars, 320 notes)
  3. Insane (4.08 stars, 427 notes)


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PCgame 「Hyper→Highspeed→Genius」OP
Produced by windmill
by -Nanaka-
by NeK0Nyqn
by NeK0Nyqn
-Nanaka-
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2015-02-13 20:36 -Nanaka-: 00:09:868 (2) - おーばーまっぷ
2015-02-13 20:37 -Nanaka-: 消すか00:09:771 (1,2,3) - ここスライダー
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2015-02-13 20:38 -Nanaka-: 逆にこっちは足していいよ
2015-02-13 20:40 -Nanaka-: 00:11:513 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3) - てかここら辺どこでも足せるしどっかにつけたい
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2015-02-13 20:40 -Nanaka-: ここに比べてさみしい
2015-02-13 20:40 -Nanaka-: リバースでもいいけどね
2015-02-13 20:41 -Nanaka-: 00:10:739 - みっしんぐほいっする
2015-02-13 20:41 -Nanaka-: Clapにかえよう
2015-02-13 20:42 -Nanaka-: 00:18:287 (1,2,1,2,1) - ギターかっこいいのに音少なくてさみしい
2015-02-13 20:42 -Nanaka-: 可変スライダーなり3/4なりNote足すなりしたい
2015-02-13 20:44 -Nanaka-: 00:20:126 (2) - 頭なにもフォローしてない
2015-02-13 20:44 NeK0Nyqn: どういうこと?
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2015-02-13 20:44 -Nanaka-: ここ音ない
2015-02-13 20:45 -Nanaka-: 00:22:352 (6,7,8) - 5連にしたい、キックでもいいけど
2015-02-13 20:45 -Nanaka-: 00:23:029 (2) -
2015-02-13 20:45 -Nanaka-: これいらん
2015-02-13 20:45 -Nanaka-: なにもなってないからね
2015-02-13 20:47 -Nanaka-: 00:27:965 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - リズム取るならこうかな http://puu.sh/fRjAX/a651652a53.jpg
2015-02-13 20:48 -Nanaka-: 00:30:868 (3) - なぞDrum
2015-02-13 20:48 -Nanaka-: 両方消していい
2015-02-13 20:50 -Nanaka-: 00:34:545 (5,2,3) - このオーバーラップすごく汚い
2015-02-13 20:51 -Nanaka-: 00:38:223 (6) - 急にDS変わりすぎ、ジャンプ入れるとこじゃないお
2015-02-13 20:54 -Nanaka-: 00:43:642 (3) - これそもそも00:42:868 (1) - ずれてるし変えるかhttp://puu.sh/fRk87/9e14d98171.jpg
2015-02-13 20:55 -Nanaka-: ちょっとご飯買ってくるねw
2015-02-13 20:56 NeK0Nyqn: わかったー
2015-02-13 20:56 -Nanaka-: 帰ってきたら通話かける
2015-02-13 20:57 NeK0Nyqn: そしたら俺も買ってくる
2015-02-13 20:57 -Nanaka-: kk
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snowsign7
red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.
bold: should fix.

General

  1. hardにWidescreen Supprtが入ってるので外しておきましょう!

7ka's Normal

  1. 01:27:771 (1) - finishのほうが合うと思いました
  2. 01:32:803 (4,5) - sanmple normalが連続してるからちょっとうるさい?
  3. 01:39:384 (5) - おんなじfinishの音が連続してるのもうるさい気がします

hardとInsaneはまた後日modさせていただきます~~ :)
blueloniess
humm hope my suggestion helpful
00:05:707 (5,1) - you can change this into a slow slider ....
00:43:642 (3,1) - don't overlap these sliders....I think these makes your map feel stupid ......>w<
01:01:449 (4) - when you want to change the slider speed ,you'd better use a new combo
01:02:997 (1,1,1,1) - put big jumps here
01:42:481 (4,1) - this jump should get bigger but 01:43:642 (1,1) - this jump need to change ...just put a middle jump here
01:17:803 (4) - why you change the sound ?here should be whistle ...
01:06:095 - kiai time should start at here :01:06:094 -
01:26:029 (3) - same with the 2nd problem
that's all ┐( ¯¯ํ¯ )┌ ( ̄▽ ̄)~*
00:18:481 (3,4,5,1) -

(。_。)these overlap give me shit when I first play it 〒▽〒 I suggest ....don't overlap the notes and sliders ...

omg ....you overlap so many notes and sliders !such as :00:30:094 (4,2) - 00:11:126 (1,3) - 00:11:126 (1,3) - TAT (┬_┬)these makes me feel uncomfortable ....
〈(_ _)〉〈(_ _)〉sorry ... 〒▽〒 I can't find out more problem unless I recover from these influences which I think is a bad one ....
00:10:352 (1,2) - this blanket can make better ~~!! ( ̄▽ ̄)~*
01:16:158 (2,3) - I think you can make this into a blanket .
hummmm normal is good makes me feel pleasure (= ̄ω ̄=)
in a short ,all diffs are good yep ,I think good .just has a little problems .hummmm
(。・`ω´・)ファイト!
I hope this map will ranked soon !
-Nanaka-

snowsign7 wrote:

red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.
bold: should fix.

7ka's Normal

  1. 01:27:771 (1) - finishのほうが合うと思いました Fix
  2. 01:32:803 (4,5) - sanmple normalが連続してるからちょっとうるさい? 01:33:191 (5,5,5) - この3つを差別化して盛り上がりを演出してるのでKeepで!
  3. 01:39:384 (5) - おんなじfinishの音が連続してるのもうるさい気がします ^

hardとInsaneはまた後日modさせていただきます~~ :)
ゆっきーありがとう :)

blueloniess wrote:

humm hope my suggestion helpful

00:10:352 (1,2) - this blanket can make better ~~!! ( ̄▽ ̄)~* Oh..Fix :)
01:16:158 (2,3) - I think you can make this into a blanket . hm...Here there is no need
hummmm normal is good makes me feel pleasure (= ̄ω ̄=) Thanks!
Thank you for Modding!!! :)
Topic Starter
A9M

blueloniess wrote:

humm hope my suggestion helpful
00:05:707 (5,1) - you can change this into a slow slider .... nice idea
00:43:642 (3,1) - don't overlap these sliders....I think these makes your map feel stupid ......>w< Sorry. like these sliders. don't want to change
01:01:449 (4) - when you want to change the slider speed ,you'd better use a new combo
01:02:997 (1,1,1,1) - put big jumps here
01:42:481 (4,1) - this jump should get bigger but 01:43:642 (1,1) - this jump need to change ...just put a middle jump here Fix
01:17:803 (4) - why you change the sound ?here should be whistle ...
01:06:095 - kiai time should start at here :01:06:094 - Fix
01:26:029 (3) - same with the 2nd problem same as the second
that's all ┐( ¯¯ํ¯ )┌ ( ̄▽ ̄)~*
00:18:481 (3,4,5,1) -

(。_。)these overlap give me shit when I first play it 〒▽〒 I suggest ....don't overlap the notes and sliders ...

omg ....you overlap so many notes and sliders !such as :00:30:094 (4,2) - 00:11:126 (1,3) - 00:11:126 (1,3) overlap modify. But like overlap these notes and sliders. So fix only difficult to see part - TAT (┬_┬)these makes me feel uncomfortable ....
〈(_ _)〉〈(_ _)〉sorry ... 〒▽〒 I can't find out more problem unless I recover from these influences which I think is a bad one ....
in a short ,all diffs are good yep ,I think good .just has a little problems .hummmm
(。・`ω´・)ファイト!
I hope this map will ranked soon !
Thank you modding!!
Thank you for being patient with my English. ;)

Nocomment,Pink=Fix
snowsign7
大変長らくお待たせいたしました :cry:

Hard

  1. 00:02:416 (6) - いきなり提案になっちゃうんですけどここSoft C:1にしてホイッスル入れてあげるといい感じになると思います!
  2. 00:03:965 - ^
  3. 00:07:449 (2) - finish追加してもいいと思います!
  4. 00:07:642 (3) - ここの音は 00:08:029 - ここと一緒なのでホイッスルかclapで統一したほうがいいと思います!個人的にはホイッスルが好みかも... >:(
  5. 00:08:223 (5) - ^
  6. 00:08:997 (1) - ^
  7. 00:10:352 (1) - ^
  8. 00:11:513 (2) - ^
  9. 00:12:094 (1) - ^
  10. 00:13:061 (4) - ^
  11. 00:13:642 (1) - ^
  12. 00:14:416 (3) - ^
  13. 00:15:191 (2) - ^
  14. 00:16:932 (3) - ^
  15. 00:17:707 (5) - ^
  16. 00:19:255 (5) - ^
  17. 00:15:578 (3) - ホイッスルつけ忘れ? :?
  18. 00:16:158 (5) - ここfinishのほうが合うと思います! :)
  19. 00:17:707 (5) - ^
  20. 00:24:287 (1) - ^
  21. 00:25:061 (3) - ^
  22. 00:32:029 (3) - ^
  23. 00:39:771 (1) - ^
  24. 00:40:545 (3) - ^
  25. 00:41:320 (1) - ^
  26. 00:44:416 (5) - ^
  27. 00:45:965 (4) - ^
  28. 00:53:707 (1) - ^
  29. 00:56:803 (1) - ^
  30. 01:06:094 (1) - ^
  31. 01:09:191 (1) - ^
  32. 01:17:707 (3) - ^
  33. 01:18:481 (1) - ^
  34. 01:21:191 (3) - ^
  35. 01:23:126 (2) - ^
  36. 01:24:674 (3) - ^
  37. 01:26:223 (4) - ^
  38. 01:26:610 (1) - ^
  39. 01:27:771 (1) - ^
  40. 01:30:868 (1) - ^
  41. 01:39:384 (3) - ^
  42. 00:30:287 (1) - ここもfinishのほうが合うかも...?あんま自信ないです :?
  43. 00:30:674 (2) - ホイッスルの方があってると思います~
  44. 00:33:578 (7) - ^
  45. 00:17:513 - finish追加! 8-)
  46. 00:33:384 - ^
  47. 01:13:642 - ^
  48. 01:15:191 (7) - ^
  49. 01:19:836 (2) - ^
  50. 00:47:126 - 逆にここはfinishいらない気がします!代わりにclap追加で!
  51. 00:48:674 (5) - 多分ホイッスルいらない? :?
  52. 00:54:868 (1) - finish外してclap追加!
  53. 01:30:481 (3) - ^
  54. 00:22:739 (1) - ちょっと流れが悪く感じたのでこっち側に曲げてみてはどうでしょうか!
  55. 00:27:191 (3,1) - ここスペーシング開きすぎてる気がします~ :o
  56. 00:27:578 (2,3) - ^
  57. 00:31:061 - ここノート追加してもいいと思います!ここと次をつなげてスライダーにすると合うかも? 
  58. 00:31:255 (1) - NCいらないと思います!
  59. 00:31:449 - ここもリバースだとちょっと叩きづらく感じたのでスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょう! 
  60. 00:33:965 (1,2) - 音取りに違和感を感じたので伸ばして一つにまとめたいです!
  61. 00:38:223 (6,1) - なんとなく下に流れるのが難しく感じました!ここらへんが個人的に好き!
  62. 00:38:610 (2,3,4,5) - ここらへんの流れが悪く感じたのでこんな感じで配置してみてはどうでしょうか!
  63. 00:40:545 (3) - 上の提案を無視した場合はここもスルーしちゃってください! さっきのと合わせてここのスライダーも曲げるといい感じになると思います!
  64. 00:50:223 (9,1) - ここはちょっと開き過ぎだと思います~
  65. 01:25:642 (2) - ここの流れも悪く感じたのでちょっと曲げてみてはどうでしょう~ 
  66. 01:26:610 (1) - ^
  67. 01:33:965 (1,2,3,4) - ここめっちゃ好きですお気に入り!!
  68. 01:10:932 (6) - リバースだと少し浮いてる感じがします。スライダーでいいと思いました!
  69. 01:13:061 (4) - しっかり重ねてあげましょう!
  70. 01:32:803 (2) - ちょっと細かくなっちゃいますけどここも重ねてあげましょー
  71. 01:37:836 (4) - ^
  72. 01:39:578 (4) - 個人的にここも下の4と重ねてあげたいです~ :)
  73. 01:44:803 (1) - ここまで伸ばしてあげたほうが自然に感じました!

    [notice]

    Insane

    1. 00:02:416 - Hardと一緒でここSoft C:1にしてホイッスル入れてあげるといい感じになると思います! :oops:
    2. 00:07:642 (3) - ここもハードと一緒でここの音は 00:08:029 - ここと一緒なのでホイッスルかclapで統一したほうがいいと思います! :)
    3. 00:08:416 - ^
    4. 00:09:191 (4) - ^
    5. 00:10:739 (3) - ^ 
    6. 00:11:513 (2) - ^
    7. 00:13:061 (4) - ^
    8. 00:13:836 (2) - ^
    9. 00:14:610 - ^
    10. 00:15:384 - ^
    11. 00:16:932 (3) - ^
    12. 00:17:707 (5) - ^
    13. 00:12:287 - clapつけ忘れ! :D
    14. 00:31:642 (4) - ^
    15. 00:32:416 (5) - ^
    16. 00:46:352 (5) - ホイッスルつけ忘れ! :D
    17. 00:09:965 (2) - finishのほうがあってると思います! ;)
    18. 00:16:158 (1) - ^
    19. 00:18:481 (2) - ^
    20. 00:24:287 (1) - ^
    21. 00:25:061 - ^
    22. 00:32:029 (3) - ^
    23. 00:39:771 - ^
    24. 00:40:545 - ^
    25. 00:41:320 (1) - ^
    26. 00:44:416 (1) - ^
    27. 00:45:965 (4) - ^
    28. 00:56:803 (1) - ^
    29. 01:12:287 (2) - ^
    30. 01:17:707 (3) - ^
    31. 01:21:190 (3) - ^
    32. 01:26:223 (1) - ^
    33. 01:26:997 (5) - ^
    34. 01:30:868 (1) - ^
    35. 01:37:061 (1) - ^
    36. 01:44:803 (1) - ^
    37. 01:46:352 (1) - ^
    38. 00:10:352 (1) - ホイッスルのほうが合うと思います~! : :D
    39. 00:33:578 (15) - ^
    40. 00:54:868 (1) - ^
    41. 01:30:481 (6) - ^
    42. 00:07:449 - finish追加しましょ! :)
    43. 00:11:707 (3) - ^
    44. 00:12:094 - ^
    45. 00:17:320 (4) - ^
    46. 00:32:029 (3) - ^
    47. 00:55:061 - ^
    48. 01:13:642 - ^
    49. 01:15:191 (8) - ^
    50. 01:19:836 (2) - ^
    51. 01:21:384 (5) - ^
    52. 00:54:868 (1) - finish外してclapにしましょー!
    53. 01:30:481 (6) - ^
    54. 01:10:352 (1) - ホイッスル外しましょ~
    55. 00:33:965 (1) - clapのつけ間違い? :?
    56. 01:17:804 (4) - ここ連続してホイッスル使っちゃうのはまずいと思いますここだけ外してあげましょー! :)
    57. 01:46:352 (1) - ここもホイッスル多分いらないと思います...ここはちょっと自信ないです :(
    58. 00:03:384 (4,5,1) - ここの流れが少し悪く感じました~ :o
    59. 00:34:158 (3) - ここにもう一つ音があるように聞こえました! ;)
    60. 00:34:255 - 逆にここは聞こえないような気がします... :?
    61. 00:35:707 - ここももう一つ音があるように聞こえます~ :)  
    62. 00:56:610 (9,1) - こっちから入るのがやりにくく感じたので1のスライダーを柔らかくしてあげましょー!
    63. 01:05:320 (2) - ここ見づらく感じたので手前の単発の位置を変えてこのスライダーの向きをずらしませんか? ;)
    64. 01:08:997 (8,1) - ここも入りづらく感じました~、こんな感じにしませんか! :)
    65. 01:47:707 (4) - ここひとつ伸ばして上げたほうが自然に感じます! :D
おまたせしちゃってすみません :cry:
初めてのmodなので至らぬ点が多々あると思います :o
Topic Starter
A9M

snowsign7 wrote:

こんにちわ! この前の続きです~ :)

Hard

  1. 00:02:416 (6) - いきなり提案になっちゃうんですけどここSoft C:1にしてホイッスル入れてあげるといい感じになると思います! その部分のみCS変更しました
  2. 00:03:965 - ^
  3. 00:07:449 (2) - finish追加してもいいと思います!
  4. 00:07:642 (3) - ここの音は 00:08:029 - ここと一緒なのでホイッスルかclapで統一したほうがいいと思います!個人的にはホイッスルが好みかも... >:(
  5. 00:08:223 (5) - ^
  6. 00:08:997 (1) - ^
  7. 00:10:352 (1) - ^ 
  8. 00:11:513 (2) - ^
  9. 00:12:094 (1) - ^
  10. 00:13:061 (4) - ^
  11. 00:13:642 (1) - ^
  12. 00:14:416 (3) - ^
  13. 00:15:191 (2) - ^
  14. 00:16:932 (3) - ^
  15. 00:17:707 (5) - ^
  16. 00:19:255 (5) - ^
  17. 00:15:578 (3) - ホイッスルつけ忘れ? :?
  18. 00:16:158 (5) - ここfinishのほうが合うと思います! :)
  19. 00:17:707 (5) - ^ 音があるように聞こえなかったので入れませんでした
  20. 00:24:287 (1) - ^
  21. 00:25:061 (3) - ^
  22. 00:32:029 (3) - ^
  23. 00:39:771 (1) - ^
  24. 00:40:545 (3) - ^
  25. 00:41:320 (1) - ^
  26. 00:44:416 (5) - ^
  27. 00:45:965 (4) - ^
  28. 00:53:707 (1) - ^
  29. 00:56:803 (1) - ^
  30. 01:06:094 (1) - ^
  31. 01:09:191 (1) - ^
  32. 01:17:707 (3) - ^
  33. 01:18:481 (1) - ^
  34. 01:21:191 (3) - ^
  35. 01:23:126 (2) - ^
  36. 01:24:674 (3) - ^
  37. 01:26:223 (4) - ^
  38. 01:26:610 (1) - ^少し騒がしく感じたので入れませんでした
  39. 01:27:771 (1) - ^
  40. 01:30:868 (1) - ^
  41. 01:39:384 (3) - ^
  42. 00:30:287 (1) - ここもfinishのほうが合うかも...?あんま自信ないです :?  あまり好みではなかったので・・・
  43. 00:30:674 (2) - ホイッスルの方があってると思います~
  44. 00:33:578 (7) - ^
  45. 00:17:513 - finish追加! 8-)
  46. 00:33:384 - ^
  47. 01:13:642 - ^
  48. 01:15:191 (7) - ^
  49. 01:19:836 (2) - ^
  50. 00:47:126 - 逆にここはfinishいらない気がします!代わりにclap追加で!
  51. 00:48:674 (5) - 多分ホイッスルいらない? :?
  52. 00:54:868 (1) - finish外してclap追加!
  53. 01:30:481 (3) - ^
  54. 00:22:739 (1) - ちょっと流れが悪く感じたのでこっち側に曲げてみてはどうでしょうか!
  55. 00:27:191 (3,1) - ここスペーシング開きすぎてる気がします~ :o
  56. 00:27:578 (2,3) - ^
  57. 00:31:061 - ここノート追加してもいいと思います!ここと次をつなげてスライダーにすると合うかも? 
  58. 00:31:255 (1) - NCいらないと思います!
  59. 00:31:449 - ここもリバースだとちょっと叩きづらく感じたのでスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょう! 
  60. 00:33:965 (1,2) - 音取りに違和感を感じたので伸ばして一つにまとめたいです!
  61. 00:38:223 (6,1) - なんとなく下に流れるのが難しく感じました!ここらへんが個人的に好き!
  62. 00:38:610 (2,3,4,5) - ここらへんの流れが悪く感じたのでこんな感じで配置してみてはどうでしょうか!
  63. 00:40:545 (3) - 上の提案を無視した場合はここもスルーしちゃってください! さっきのと合わせてここのスライダーも曲げるといい感じになると思います!
  64. 00:50:223 (9,1) - ここはちょっと開き過ぎだと思います~
  65. 01:25:642 (2) - ここの流れも悪く感じたのでちょっと曲げてみてはどうでしょう~ 
  66. 01:26:610 (1) - ^
  67. 01:33:965 (1,2,3,4) - ここめっちゃ好きですお気に入り!!
  68. 01:10:932 (6) - リバースだと少し浮いてる感じがします。スライダーでいいと思いました!
  69. 01:13:061 (4) - しっかり重ねてあげましょう!
  70. 01:32:803 (2) - ちょっと細かくなっちゃいますけどここも重ねてあげましょー
  71. 01:37:836 (4) - ^
  72. 01:39:578 (4) - 個人的にここも下の4と重ねてあげたいです~ :)
  73. 01:44:803 (1) - ここまで伸ばしてあげたほうが自然に感じました!
    疲れちゃったのでHardだけにさせていただきました :o  Insaneはまた後日させてもらいます...。 :( 何度もすいません :|
何も書いていない部分はすべて修正しました。 ありがとうございます。 insaneもよろしくお願いします
Shurelia
I want to mod this! (But not now) Already requested on my queue. Will mod this later.

You might want to fix the beatmap's post since it's duplicated.



Please remind me to mod this!
Loughje
Maybe cut down on the stacks a bit.
Really nice looking beatmap you got.
Honestly, could not find something significant to change, looks really good.
00:46:642 (6) - Delete this.
00:58:739 (1,1,1) - Make these a single combo.
01:02:997 (1,1,1) - ^
01:43:642 (1,1) - ^^
00:06:191 Through 00:06:771 - You could edit in here.
00:13:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - This should be a slider to match the song.
00:22:545 (7) - I think you should delete this and put something else that matching the rhythm.
00:58:739 (1,1,1) - Single combo here.
01:02:997 (1,1,1) - ^ You probably seen this coming again :?
01:43:642 (1,1) - ^^
Hopefully this helps out a little. Also, you should tell me the name of this VN cause looks a bit interesting :D Im also working on a VN soundtrack if you'd want to check that out, up to you!
Topic Starter
A9M

snowsign7 wrote:

大変長らくお待たせいたしました :cry:

Insane

  1. 00:02:416 - Hardと一緒でここSoft C:1にしてホイッスル入れてあげるといい感じになると思います! :oops:  Hardと同じようにホイッスルで統一する形で修正しました
  2. 00:07:642 (3) - ここもハードと一緒でここの音は 00:08:029 - ここと一緒なのでホイッスルかclapで統一したほうがいいと思います! :)
  3. 00:08:416 - ^
  4. 00:09:191 (4) - ^
  5. 00:10:739 (3) - ^ 
  6. 00:11:513 (2) - ^
  7. 00:13:061 (4) - ^
  8. 00:13:836 (2) - ^
  9. 00:14:610 - ^
  10. 00:15:384 - ^
  11. 00:16:932 (3) - ^
  12. 00:17:707 (5) - ^
  13. 00:12:287 - clapつけ忘れ! :D
  14. 00:31:642 (4) - ^
  15. 00:32:416 (5) - ^
  16. 00:46:352 (5) - ホイッスルつけ忘れ! :D
  17. 00:09:965 (2) - finishのほうがあってると思います! ;)
  18. 00:16:158 (1) - ^
  19. 00:18:481 (2) - ^
  20. 00:24:287 (1) - ^
  21. 00:25:061 - ^
  22. 00:32:029 (3) - ^
  23. 00:39:771 - ^
  24. 00:40:545 - ^
  25. 00:41:320 (1) - ^
  26. 00:44:416 (1) - ^
  27. 00:45:965 (4) - ^
  28. 00:56:803 (1) - ^
  29. 01:12:287 (2) - ^
  30. 01:17:707 (3) - ^
  31. 01:21:190 (3) - ^
  32. 01:26:223 (1) - ^
  33. 01:26:997 (5) - ^
  34. 01:30:868 (1) - ^
  35. 01:37:061 (1) - ^
  36. 01:44:803 (1) - ^
  37. 01:46:352 (1) - ^
  38. 00:10:352 (1) - ホイッスルのほうが合うと思います~! : :D
  39. 00:33:578 (15) - ^
  40. 00:54:868 (1) - ^
  41. 01:30:481 (6) - ^
  42. 00:07:449 - finish追加しましょ! :)
  43. 00:11:707 (3) - ^
  44. 00:12:094 - ^
  45. 00:17:320 (4) - ^
  46. 00:32:029 (3) - ^
  47. 00:55:061 - ^
  48. 01:13:642 - ^
  49. 01:15:191 (8) - ^
  50. 01:19:836 (2) - ^
  51. 01:21:384 (5) - ^
  52. 00:54:868 (1) - finish外してclapにしましょー!
  53. 01:30:481 (6) - ^
  54. 01:10:352 (1) - ホイッスル外しましょ~
  55. 00:33:965 (1) - clapのつけ間違い? :?
  56. 01:17:804 (4) - ここ連続してホイッスル使っちゃうのはまずいと思いますここだけ外してあげましょー! :)
  57. 01:46:352 (1) - ここもホイッスル多分いらないと思います...ここはちょっと自信ないです :(
  58. 00:03:384 (4,5,1) - ここの流れが少し悪く感じました~ :o若干ですが位置を調整しました
  59. 00:34:158 (3) - ここにもう一つ音があるように聞こえました! ;)追加しました
  60. 00:34:255 - 逆にここは聞こえないような気がします... :?削除しました
  61. 00:35:707 - ここももう一つ音があるように聞こえます~ :)  
    画像の音取りを採用させていただきました
  62. 00:56:610 (9,1) - こっちから入るのがやりにくく感じたので1のスライダーを柔らかくしてあげましょー!
  63. 01:05:320 (2) - ここ見づらく感じたので手前の単発の位置を変えてこのスライダーの向きをずらしませんか? ;)
  64. 01:08:997 (8,1) - ここも入りづらく感じました~、こんな感じにしませんか! :)
  65. 01:47:707 (4) - ここひとつ伸ばして上げたほうが自然に感じます! :D一応ギターの音を拾いたいのでそのままで
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おまたせしちゃってすみません :cry:
初めてのmodなので至らぬ点が多々あると思います :o
何も書いていないところに関しては全て採用させていただきました 青字のみ不採用という意味です
全難易度ありがとうございます
勘違いしてて遅れてしまいました ごめんなさい M4Mの恋咲くミライ方も後で投稿します
Topic Starter
A9M

jloughman14 wrote:

Maybe cut down on the stacks a bit.
Really nice looking beatmap you got.
Honestly, could not find something significant to change, looks really good.
00:46:642 (6) - Delete this. fix
00:58:739 (1,1,1) - Make these a single combo. fix
01:02:997 (1,1,1) - ^
01:43:642 (1,1) - ^^
00:22:545 (7) - I think you should delete this and put something else that matching the rhythm. [/box]
00:58:739 (1,1,1) - Single combo here.Fix
01:02:997 (1,1,1) - ^ You probably seen this coming again :?
01:43:642 (1,1) - ^^[/box]
Hopefully this helps out a little. Also, you should tell me the name of this VN cause looks a bit interesting :D Im also working on a VN soundtrack if you'd want to check that out, up to you!Nocomment,Red=Fix
Thank you modding!!
Thank you for being patient with my English. :)
Little
From my queue.

[General]
  1. Offset is late by ~16ms. I recommend offset 1046.
  2. Source should be: Hyper→Highspeed→Genius


[7ka's Normal]
  1. 00:01:062 (1,3,1) - I think normal-hitfinish will sound better on heads of these sliders.
  2. 00:05:707 (3) - The slider shape is uneven, and doesn't blanket (1) properly. Use a 3-point slider for a perfectly circular curve so you can improve the aesthetic.
  3. 00:09:578 (3) - Better for this to be soft whistle (kick). It matches the song better, and consistent with 00:12:674
  4. 00:36:674 (3) - You can make a nicer curve by setting the third point equidistant from the second and fourth: http://puu.sh/gi77Y/2cd0629b82.jpg
  5. 01:06:094 - In this section your hitsound use is very inconsistent. There seems to be no pattern as to where you use normal-hitnormal versus when you use soft-hitclap. Please revise this to have more consistent hitsound pattern.
  6. 01:13:836 (3) - Same thing about the curve.
  7. 01:33:191 (5) - Change head to soft sampleset + whistle and finish. It fits the song better and matches with 01:39:384 (5) which is the same part of the musical phrase in the next iteration.


[Hard]
  1. 00:59:708 - Green line here doesn't change anything. Remove it?
  2. Starting at 00:19:642 there are some green lines are unsnapped by ~1ms, including start of kiai section. Please check all of them and fix it.
  3. 00:01:062 (1,6,4) - I think normal-hitfinish fits better than the soft whistles on the downbeats.
  4. 00:17:320 (4) - Remove finish from end? It doesn't seem to fit the music.
  5. 00:19:255 (5) - Change to clap on head?
  6. 00:30:674 (2) - Change to clap on end?
  7. 00:32:029 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think it's better to increase the distance spacing a bit, so the repeat arrows are more visible: http://puu.sh/giupd/6ab239b4b8.jpg
  8. 00:33:191 (6) - Why is there a finish on the second repeat? It doesn't seem to match the song. Remove it?
  9. 00:40:352 (2,4) - Stack them together?
  10. 00:47:513 (1) - Head feels really empty. Add a whistle?
  11. 01:01:449 - Slider velocity change does nothing here... just set it to 1.00x.
  12. 01:06:094 (1) - After you fix the unsnapped green lines, make sure you resnap this slider too.
  13. 01:19:836 (2) - Finish doesn't fit well here. I'd remove it.
  14. 01:22:739 (1,3) - Try to avoid these touching because it doesn't look good.
  15. 01:30:094 (2,3,1) - Better not to stack these, because it's confusing the read. Just overlap them normally: http://puu.sh/giuKo/7cc40df15b.jpg
  16. 01:36:287 (4,5) - I think it's better for rhythm to be consistent with 01:33:191 (3,4) so choose one, and use the same rhythm on the other.
  17. 01:39:771 (1) - I recommend removing the last repeat, because there's more significant drum sound on the downbeat.


[Insane]
  1. This has the same issues with unsnapped green lines. Please check all of them.
  2. 00:02:416 (3,1) - I think it is better not to overlap these, because it can be confused to 1/4 rhythm. Space it out like this: http://puu.sh/givdh/2c7dda7a3d.jpg
  3. 00:07:932 (5) - Sounds better if you remove the whistle.
  4. 00:24:287 (1) - Change to whistle or finish on head.
  5. 00:54:868 (1,2,3) - The normal-sliderslide are really distracting, and don't fit the song. Did you really intend to use those? Maybe you meant to put normal sampleset on heads and ends of sliders rather than body?
  6. 01:06:094 (1) - Unsnapped slider end.
  7. 01:21:190 (3,5) - Too many finishes here makes it really noisy. I'd recommend removing both, or at least the one on (5).
  8. 01:36:287 (4,5) - Same as in Hard.

Cool song and map.
Topic Starter
A9M

CloudSplash16 wrote:

From my queue.

[General]
  1. Offset is late by ~16ms. I recommend offset 1046.
  2. Source should be: Hyper→Highspeed→Genius


[Hard]
  1. 00:59:708 - Green line here doesn't change anything. Remove it?
  2. Starting at 00:19:642 there are some green lines are unsnapped by ~1ms, including start of kiai section. Please check all of them and fix it.
  3. 00:01:062 (1,6,4) - I think normal-hitfinish fits better than the soft whistles on the downbeats.
  4. 00:17:320 (4) - Remove finish from end? It doesn't seem to fit the music.
  5. 00:19:255 (5) - Change to clap on head?
  6. 00:30:674 (2) - Change to clap on end?
  7. 00:32:029 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think it's better to increase the distance spacing a bit, so the repeat arrows are more visible: http://puu.sh/giupd/6ab239b4b8.jpg
  8. 00:33:191 (6) - Why is there a finish on the second repeat? It doesn't seem to match the song. Remove it?
  9. 00:40:352 (2,4) - Stack them together?
  10. 00:47:513 (1) - Head feels really empty. Add a whistle?
  11. 01:01:449 - Slider velocity change does nothing here... just set it to 1.00x.
  12. 01:06:094 (1) - After you fix the unsnapped green lines, make sure you resnap this slider too.
  13. 01:19:836 (2) - Finish doesn't fit well here. I'd remove it.
  14. 01:22:739 (1,3) - Try to avoid these touching because it doesn't look good.
  15. 01:30:094 (2,3,1) - Better not to stack these, because it's confusing the read. Just overlap them normally: http://puu.sh/giuKo/7cc40df15b.jpg
  16. 01:36:287 (4,5) - I think it's better for rhythm to be consistent with 01:33:191 (3,4) so choose one, and use the same rhythm on the other.
  17. 01:39:771 (1) - I recommend removing the last repeat, because there's more significant drum sound on the downbeat.


[Insane]
  1. This has the same issues with unsnapped green lines. Please check all of them.
  2. 00:02:416 (3,1) - I think it is better not to overlap these, because it can be confused to 1/4 rhythm. Space it out like this: http://puu.sh/givdh/2c7dda7a3d.jpg
  3. 00:07:932 (5) - Sounds better if you remove the whistle.
  4. 00:24:287 (1) - Change to whistle or finish on head.
  5. 00:54:868 (1,2,3) - The normal-sliderslide are really distracting, and don't fit the song. Did you really intend to use those? Maybe you meant to put normal sampleset on heads and ends of sliders rather than body?
  6. 01:06:094 (1) - Unsnapped slider end.
  7. 01:21:190 (3,5) - Too many finishes here makes it really noisy. I'd recommend removing both, or at least the one on (5).
  8. 01:36:287 (4,5) - Same as in Hard.

Cool song and map.
Thank you modding!!
All fixed
If there is another opportunity, please offer your support again.
-Nanaka-

CloudSplash16 wrote:

From my queue.

[7ka's Normal]
  1. 00:01:062 (1,3,1) - I think normal-hitfinish will sound better on heads of these sliders. Nope,I do not fit it ... too strong
  2. 00:05:707 (3) - The slider shape is uneven, and doesn't blanket (1) properly. Use a 3-point slider for a perfectly circular curve so you can improve the aesthetic. hm...Okey Fix,Other forms
  3. 00:09:578 (3) - Better for this to be soft whistle (kick). It matches the song better, and consistent with 00:12:674 sure
  4. 00:36:674 (3) - You can make a nicer curve by setting the third point equidistant from the second and fourth: http://puu.sh/gi77Y/2cd0629b82.jpg k
  5. 01:06:094 - In this section your hitsound use is very inconsistent. There seems to be no pattern as to where you use normal-hitnormal versus when you use soft-hitclap. Please revise this to have more consistent hitsound pattern. omg....Fix it
  6. 01:13:836 (3) - Same thing about the curve. ^
  7. 01:33:191 (5) - Change head to soft sampleset + whistle and finish. It fits the song better and matches with 01:39:384 (5) which is the same part of the musical phrase in the next iteration. k



Cool song and map.
Thank you for Modding :)
-Maruk-
request from my queue

[Insane]

  • 00:01:046 (1) - Finish
    00:02:400 (3) - 終端Finish
    00:03:949 (3) - ^
    00:07:239 (3) - 終端Finish外して先端Finish
    00:23:400 (3) - サークル追加
    00:44:400 (1) - 分かりにくいので若干下にずらしたほうがいいと思います
    01:13:433 (1) - 終端のFinish外して01:13:820 (2) - にFinish追加
    01:15:175 (8) - ^
    01:19:820 (2) - ^
    01:18:078 (6) - Finish外してClap
    01:39:949 (2) - なんか変な感じしますね。音取りの提案だけしときます。
    01:47:110 (1,2,3,4) - 先端と終端全部Clapでいいと思います


nice songです
Good luck~ :)
Niko-nyan

hi from my queue

General
i'm not sure maybe need someone to check metadata

Insane~
01:04:529 - the cymbal in here doesn't fit well because there doesn't have any sound
01:11:884 - the cymbal looks bad in here and doesn't fit also
01:13:626 - unknown cymbal hitsound again (you can remove the finish)
01:15:175 - ^
01:16:916 - ^
01:17:691 - ^
01:18:078 - ^
01:19:820 - ^
01:26:981 - ^
01:42:465 - ^
01:43:626 (1,2) - change to whistle is better

Hard
01:03:368 - remove NC
and fix the cymbal hitsound D: feel bad

Normal
few cymbal doesn't fit well D: but overally i like your pattern :)
Topic Starter
A9M

-Maruk- wrote:

request from my queue

00:01:046 (1) - Finish finish多用するのは好きではないのでごめんなさい
00:02:400 (3) - 終端Finish ^
00:03:949 (3) - ^ 
00:07:239 (3) - 終端Finish外して先端Finish 入れ替えました
00:23:400 (3) - サークル追加 追加しました
00:44:400 (1) - 分かりにくいので若干下にずらしたほうがいいと思います そのままで
01:13:433 (1) - 終端のFinish外して01:13:820 (2) - にFinish追加 finishの音が尻尾にあるように聞こえるのでそのままで
01:15:175 (8) - ^ ^
01:19:820 (2) - ^ ^
01:18:078 (6) - Finish外してClap 
01:39:949 (2) - なんか変な感じしますね。音取りの提案だけしときます。 しっくりこなかったのでそのままで
http://puu.sh/gowi8/24ddef3e00.png[/img:1337]
01:47:110 (1,2,3,4) - 先端と終端全部Clapでいいと思います 音がうるさすぎるように感じたので変えませんでした
nice songです
Good luck~ :)青字 変更無し
赤、コメント無し 変更有
modありがとうございました :)
Topic Starter
A9M
[quote="Niko-nyan"]
hi from my queue
General
i'm not sure maybe need someone to check metadata

01:04:529 - the cymbal in here doesn't fit well because there doesn't have any sound sorry I think fit
01:11:884 - the cymbal looks bad in here and doesn't fit also
01:13:626 - unknown cymbal hitsound again (you can remove the finish) fix
01:15:175 - ^
01:16:916 - ^ sorry I think fit
01:17:691 - ^ ^
01:18:078 - ^ ^
01:19:820 - ^
01:26:981 - ^ fix
01:42:465 - ^ sorry I think fit
01:43:626 (1,2) - change to whistle is better ^
01:03:368 - remove NC fix
and fix the cymbal hitsound D: feel bad
thank you modding
Ciyus Miapah
hello from mod q

Insane:
00:02:207 (1,2,3) - yeah i see your patterning in here, its like triplets, but im sure your patterning isnt right. because its clearly that song you maps needs to be mapped 5/4 streams (because 00:02:594 - is very strong notes, and i think you should circle or slider there and maybe you can new combo that thing.
00:05:691 (5,6,1) - why change pattern in here? its like same patterning from your previous pattern
00:18:078 (1,2,2,3) - i think you can make same spacing placement here
00:32:787 (7) - new combo? (indicates long stream)
00:43:626 (3) - confusing but okay
00:47:207 - should add circle here
00:47:497 (10) - need NC this instead of 00:47:691 (1) - (that NC isnt necessary imo)
~im too lazy to fix NC in here, you need people who want to nazi NC mod your map lmao
01:05:304 (2,3) - feels overmap and overlap makes it very hard to get
01:47:884 - you should add circle here, yep last notes

overall your map is overmapped at patterning especially of triplets, you need consider this thing for rank. just saying this

good luck!
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