Dan Winter - Don't Stop Push It Now (Nightcore Mix) [Osu|Tai · forum

DeletedUser_3044645

DeletedUser_3044645 2015-02-07T05:28:50+00:00

8 ranked mapset today ;w;

LexiaLovesU

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LexiaLovesU 2015-02-07T07:31:09+00:00

Okay Checking the map <3

Blue is a higher suggestion
Yellow is Questionable Material
red is unrankable

General

Metadata - All good owo ✔
Audio Lead-In - Its good they all start within 1500✔
Background - Good its the proper size owo ✔
Hitsound files -All Good✔
Lyrics - You already added a the 18+ Label✔
Tags - All Tags are fine✔

Easy

00:09:845 (2) - Inconsistency in spacing it is .8 off which is unrankable baka o3o
00:23:539 (1) - Remove the 1NC from this since it will only confuse players about how it should be hit
00:56:405 (1) - Same as above
00:56:405 (1) - Unused Inherited point please remove it
02:00:766 (1) - OMG <3333
02:07:955 (2) - okie currently the flow with this slider needs some improvement since currently you have the slider flow away from the next note quite a bit since your slider shape cruve extremely upwards while the next note is placed in the opposite of that flow so this causes a conflictive flow between the notes. I suggest you crtl +j this slider so that the flow will be a a lot more natural

That's it for easy <333

Normal

00:02:485 (1) - Remove this NC since it will only confuse players about the next note x.x
00:38:603 (3,2) - Yeah don't make your slider flow like this its just awkward to hit the next slider since you generated a flow that flows away from the slider making the turn a bit awkward to hit I would suggest making the slider flow more into the next note
00:47:675 (5) - Since this is a kickslider in a 175 bpm normal that's pretty fast so I suggest you make the slider point towards the next note since generally with faster kick sliders the noob will follow its path even after its already done so it easier and the transition is better if you make the path go into the next note owo
00:50:242 (4) - Same as above about the path of the slider
00:53:666 (1) - Remove this NC since it will only confuse players about the next note x.x
02:27:469 (3) - Make this shaped the other way so that the next note is more natural to hit

That's it

Hard

00:46:477 (5) - I think this jump is a bit too big for a hard diff especially after already a lot of jumps already performed in the generally the same NC combo you jumped to 2 then you jumped to 4 then you did a big jump to 6 this. Now I guess this wouldn't be a issue for some but since gero part before this was using only DS suddenly doing big jumps like this will catch the player off guard Also the voice wasn't very powerful at this point so the jump seemed a bit of an overjump.
00:48:702 (3) - Again might wanna lower this jump a bit
01:13:522 (2,1) - currently the flow with this slider needs some improvement since currently you have the slider flowing away from the next note quite a bit since your slider shape curves extremely downwards while the next note is placed in the opposite of that flow so this causes a conflictive flow between the notes. I suggest you make this slider flow more into the next note so that the transition will be a lot more natural
01:49:811 (1) - crtl+j +crtl+g so that slider has a better flow into the next note
01:53:919 (1) - Crtl+h and crtl+g for better flow into the next note
02:04:532 (4) - This sounds very empty since there is a strong clap in the background I think you should hit it I suggest you move 4 a bit back so that it hits the 1/2 note and and a repeat to it

Im gonna need to talk with you in IRC about the balance between Normal and Hard owo

Insane

00:22:170 (1) - I really think this spinner doesn't sound right here it seems to forced right I would suggest you remove it and just map the part >.<
00:35:693 (1) - I think if you crtl+j this slider the flow would be so much better and more natural to play since it will flow into the next note much better because the sliders curve will be going into it instead of away from it
00:38:089 (4,1) - I agree with Noah about this it does feel awkward rhythmically wise. I see you point though :>
00:56:405 (1) - I think you should just remove this 1NC there really is no point to it and it makes the map look less professional
01:04:621 (1) - I think if you crtl+j this slider the pattern will look much more cool and the flow will be much better the slider's tail will be flowing in the next notes more since it wont be flowing in the different direction of there position <3
I think it looks cool
http://puu.sh/fCXrJ/d3bf7570fc.jpg
01:51:009 (1) - Same as first kiai
02:29:523 (1) - I think you should just remove this 1NC there really is no point to it and it makes the map look less professional

Shake It!

00:23:197 (3) - since this is going really fast I suggest you make it point towards the next note for a better transition into it im sure some people will have the tendency to continue on the slider repeats path when its over so this will make the gameplay a bit more smooth ~
00:56:405 (4) - I think you should just remove this 1NC there really is no point to it and it makes the map look less professional
01:39:883 (4) - Crtl+j this slider so that it flows into the next note a bit better because it will be point at it instead of away from it

That it <3

Call me back after Gezo checks the taikos :>

Last edited by LexiaLovesU 2015-02-08T07:12:06+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Flask

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Flask 2015-02-07T11:44:55+00:00

omg so many easy

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2015-02-07T11:55:50+00:00

omg Take it easy

Xgor

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Xgor 2015-02-07T12:54:59+00:00

Xgor's SBubble modding!

Quite some unused transparency here that needs cropping. All the images in the Name and Lyrics folder, over.png, artist.png and title.png has quite a lot of it. Just cropping over.png removes most of the +5.00x spikes so there is a problem right now.

The SB load spike around 01:11:168 - is a LOT bigger than all other flashes for no reason.. Infact... 01:10:099 - 01:21:054 has +5 spikes constantly when no other SB has it

red.jpg strikes me as kinda useless right now, it only used twice and it's only visible once for a 1/5 of a second on the first and the other one just as a filter for a second.
I think using the color tools would be better if you only use a 400 Kb file that little.

Bit of a pity that there isn't much going on the taiko SB, but it's nice that it's made in consideration for the mode instead of using the same as the osu! one.

Anyways, there is some problems that needs fixing with the SB so I'll pop it for now.

LexiaLovesU wrote:
00:09:845 (2) - Inconsistency in spacing it is .8 off which is unrankable baka o3o

I don't see unrankible with this though

I see 0.08x DS difference but that's no big deal.

DeletedUser_3044645

DeletedUser_3044645 2015-02-07T13:21:35+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
omg Take it easy

Gero

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Topic Starter

Gero 2015-02-07T14:31:12+00:00

I'm gonna poke to @XinCrin to fix that soon as possible since the storyboard is made by him also @Lexia I'm waiting for you to finish the whole mod before starting to fix it.

Yuzeyun

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Yuzeyun 2015-02-07T15:39:36+00:00

lexia do u has taco checkr

LexiaLovesU

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LexiaLovesU 2015-02-07T15:42:49+00:00

_Gezo_ wrote:
lexia do u has taco checkr

nope

Yuzeyun

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Yuzeyun 2015-02-07T19:08:43+00:00

now u do c:

Gero

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Topic Starter

Gero 2015-02-08T10:48:33+00:00

I'll fix those things until tomorrow.

Thanks to everybody for the support.

Andrea

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Andrea 2015-02-08T17:45:25+00:00

Fixed both suggestions, thank you Lexia!

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riffy

osu! Alumni

8,061 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2015-02-09T07:21:13+00:00

LexiaLovesU wrote:
Hard
00:46:477 (5) - I think this jump is a bit too big for a hard diff especially after already a lot of jumps already performed in the generally the same NC combo you jumped to 2 then you jumped to 4 then you did a big jump to 6 this. Now I guess this wouldn't be a issue for some but since gero part before this was using only DS suddenly doing big jumps like this will catch the player off guard Also the voice wasn't very powerful at this point so the jump seemed a bit of an overjump. welp, my bad. fixed this one.
00:48:702 (3) - Again might wanna lower this jump a bit yup
01:13:522 (2,1) - currently the flow with this slider needs some improvement since currently you have the slider flowing away from the next note quite a bit since your slider shape curves extremely downwards while the next note is placed in the opposite of that flow so this causes a conflictive flow between the notes. I suggest you make this slider flow more into the next note so that the transition will be a lot more natural no. sorry, but I will insist on keeping the pattern. the flow here is quite nice and I don't see any problem here. a picture!
01:49:811 (1) - crtl+j +crtl+g so that slider has a better flow into the next note Gero, pls
01:53:919 (1) - Crtl+h and crtl+g for better flow into the next note Gero, pls
02:04:532 (4) - This sounds very empty since there is a strong clap in the background I think you should hit it I suggest you move 4 a bit back so that it hits the 1/2 note and and a repeat to it nah, I feel like the beat starts on the white tick and then gets louder and ends with a "clap" on a red one. Slider represents this nicely.

The diff

Nyukai

2,432 posts

Joined July 2012

Nyukai 2015-02-09T09:05:32+00:00

I'll check this later since I'm at school now ><

Yuzeyun

7,646 posts

Joined September 2010

Yuzeyun 2015-02-09T13:00:06+00:00

mmmmmmmmm
so since my english class is no more, i can have a quick check. if totoro lets me use his headset.

Nyukai

2,432 posts

Joined July 2012

Nyukai 2015-02-09T14:27:07+00:00

LexiaLovesU wrote:
Insane
00:22:170 (1) - I really think this spinner doesn't sound right here it seems to forced right I would suggest you remove it and just map the part >.< I think it's fine, spinner fits well here lol
00:35:693 (1) - I think if you crtl+j this slider the flow would be so much better and more natural to play since it will flow into the next note much better because the sliders curve will be going into it instead of away from it Probably, but what about the following patterns? I prefer to keep it as it is, doesn't look too bad.
00:38:089 (4,1) - I agree with Noah about this it does feel awkward rhythmically wise. I see you point though :> Nothing to say then xD I don't really feel this awkward...
00:56:405 (1) - I think you should just remove this 1NC there really is no point to it and it makes the map look less professional
01:04:621 (1) - I think if you crtl+j this slider the pattern will look much more cool and the flow will be much better the slider's tail will be flowing in the next notes more since it wont be flowing in the different direction of there position <3 Agree!
01:51:009 (1) - Same as first kiai Same as before.
02:29:523 (1) - I think you should just remove this 1NC there really is no point to it and it makes the map look less professional

Thank you Lexia~

@Gero: Doesn't make much sense giving you the code, could you please add Ctrl+J here 01:04:621 (1) - of course leaving it in the same place, thanks o3o

Yuzeyun

7,646 posts

Joined September 2010

Yuzeyun 2015-02-14T13:49:28+00:00

omg late as fuck, sorry for the huge delay. didn't even have time to check in the week, studies are exhausting.
~~lewd bg pls change~~

00:23:625 - that's literally the only instance of 0.75x, similar intensity parts stay at 1.x; consider removing it.
[Muzu]
HJ
00:05:052 (15) - considering your mapping is mostly vocal on the intro, maybe put that as a kat ? 00:04:881 (14) - is emphasized the same way and of similar pitch.
00:58:972 (138) - maybe delete that note? it would emphasize 139 a bit better imo.
GR
~~02:04:874 (170) - -1x SV plox~~

[Oni]
01:25:847 (146,147,148) - ddk ? I don't think dkd sounds natural at all, ddk appears way more natural when played.
01:28:414 (161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168) - On the whole part I think these notes are out of place, because there's not really anything supporting triplets, no transition or anything. what I'd recommend is this: http://i.chiyozel.com/o0vKuLzK - you will have bass->vocal bass->vocal, which seems much more natural to play than vocal->bass vocal->bass.

I don't think there's much to point out here, should anyone have any objections better point them out BEFORE Lexia and I do the last recheck.

[Superstar]_old

[Superstar]_old 2015-02-14T22:44:02+00:00

Looking forward to the day when this finally gets ranked...

The Dream!

Hanjamon

1,461 posts

Joined June 2012

Hanjamon 2015-02-16T09:45:29+00:00

_Gezo_ wrote:
omg late as fuck, sorry for the huge delay. didn't even have time to check in the week, studies are exhausting.
~~lewd bg pls change~~

00:23:625 - that's literally the only instance of 0.75x, similar intensity parts stay at 1.x; consider removing it.
[Muzu]
HJ
00:05:052 (15) - considering your mapping is mostly vocal on the intro, maybe put that as a kat ? 00:04:881 (14) - is emphasized the same way and of similar pitch.
00:58:972 (138) - maybe delete that note? it would emphasize 139 a bit better imo.
GR
~~02:04:874 (170) - -1x SV plox~~

[Oni]
01:25:847 (146,147,148) - ddk ? I don't think dkd sounds natural at all, ddk appears way more natural when played.
01:28:414 (161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168) - On the whole part I think these notes are out of place, because there's not really anything supporting triplets, no transition or anything. what I'd recommend is this: http://i.chiyozel.com/o0vKuLzK - you will have bass->vocal bass->vocal, which seems much more natural to play than vocal->bass vocal->bass.

I don't think there's much to point out here, should anyone have any objections better point them out BEFORE Lexia and I do the last recheck.

All fixed http://puu.sh/fZhPg/688c6a40b8.rar

Niko-nyan

1,990 posts

Joined June 2011

Niko-nyan 2015-02-16T12:57:09+00:00

before rank let me give <3 (if you know what i mean Gero [*] )

Gero

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Topic Starter

Gero 2015-02-23T12:35:59+00:00

LexiaLovesU

Easy

00:09:845 (2) - Inconsistency in spacing it is .8 off which is unrankable baka o3o Isn't a big deal so I prefer to keep it as is.
00:23:539 (1) - Remove the 1NC from this since it will only confuse players about how it should be hit Fixed.
00:56:405 (1) - Same as above Fixed.
00:56:405 (1) - Unused Inherited point please remove it Why? is already used since is the final of the kiai time.
02:00:766 (1) - OMG <3333
02:07:955 (2) - okie currently the flow with this slider needs some improvement since currently you have the slider flow away from the next note quite a bit since your slider shape cruve extremely upwards while the next note is placed in the opposite of that flow so this causes a conflictive flow between the notes. I suggest you crtl +j this slider so that the flow will be a a lot more natural Fixed.

That's it for easy <333

Normal

00:02:485 (1) - Remove this NC since it will only confuse players about the next note x.x Fixed.
00:38:603 (3,2) - Yeah don't make your slider flow like this its just awkward to hit the next slider since you generated a flow that flows away from the slider making the turn a bit awkward to hit I would suggest making the slider flow more into the next note I think is fine.
00:47:675 (5) - Since this is a kickslider in a 175 bpm normal that's pretty fast so I suggest you make the slider point towards the next note since generally with faster kick sliders the noob will follow its path even after its already done so it easier and the transition is better if you make the path go into the next note owo Nah, isn't hard to know that it is a kick slider so I prefer to keep it.
00:50:242 (4) - Same as above about the path of the slider ^
00:53:666 (1) - Remove this NC since it will only confuse players about the next note x.x Fixed.
02:27:469 (3) - Make this shaped the other way so that the next note is more natural to hit Fixed.

That's it

Hard

01:49:811 (1) - crtl+j +crtl+g so that slider has a better flow into the next note Fixed.
01:53:919 (1) - Crtl+h and crtl+g for better flow into the next note Fixed.

Im gonna need to talk with you in IRC about the balance between Normal and Hard owo

Insane

00:56:405 (1) - I think you should just remove this 1NC there really is no point to it and it makes the map look less professional Fixed.
02:29:523 (1) - I think you should just remove this 1NC there really is no point to it and it makes the map look less professional Fixed.

Shake It!

00:23:197 (3) - since this is going really fast I suggest you make it point towards the next note for a better transition into it im sure some people will have the tendency to continue on the slider repeats path when its over so this will make the gameplay a bit more smooth ~ Nah.. I think is fine if I keep it as is.

That it <3

Call me back after Gezo checks the taikos :>

_Gezo_

GR
~~02:04:874 (170) - -1x SV plox~~ What I should do here? it already has 1x

Xgor

Xgor's SBubble modding!

Quite some unused transparency here that needs cropping. All the images in the Name and Lyrics folder, over.png, artist.png and title.png has quite a lot of it. Just cropping over.png removes most of the +5.00x spikes so there is a problem right now. Fixed.

The SB load spike around 01:11:168 - is a LOT bigger than all other flashes for no reason.. Infact... 01:10:099 - 01:21:054 has +5 spikes constantly when no other SB has it Gonna ask to XinCrin to fix that.

red.jpg strikes me as kinda useless right now, it only used twice and it's only visible once for a 1/5 of a second on the first and the other one just as a filter for a second.
I think using the color tools would be better if you only use a 400 Kb file that little. ^

Updated ~

Just waiting for XinCrin...

Last edited by Gero 2015-02-23T20:33:13+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kodora

Kodora 2015-02-23T16:29:15+00:00

holy...
this is still disqualified? OMG

Gero

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Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Gero 2015-02-23T21:31:29+00:00

Kodora wrote:
holy...
this is still disqualified? OMG

Sadly but yeah... anyways still waiting for @XinCrin.

XinCrin

2,846 posts

Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2015-02-24T02:50:51+00:00

Hi, sorry for very laaaate answer

Xgor wrote:
Xgor's SBubble modding!

Quite some unused transparency here that needs cropping. All the images in the Name and Lyrics folder, over.png, artist.png and title.png has quite a lot of it. Just cropping over.png removes most of the +5.00x spikes so there is a problem right now. Already fixed

The SB load spike around 01:11:168 - is a LOT bigger than all other flashes for no reason.. Infact... 01:10:099 - 01:21:054 has +5 spikes constantly when no other SB has it I don't know the reason, but what's wrong with +5 sb load. It happens 1 second only, it doesn't affect the gameplay

red.jpg strikes me as kinda useless right now, it only used twice and it's only visible once for a 1/5 of a second on the first and the other one just as a filter for a second.
I think using the color tools would be better if you only use a 400 Kb file that little. It's only 393 kb. I'll have to change the code at .osu at each diff. So much work. Is really important this?

Bit of a pity that there isn't much going on the taiko SB, but it's nice that it's made in consideration for the mode instead of using the same as the osu! one.

Anyways, there is some problems that needs fixing with the SB so I'll pop it for now.

Thanks!

phaZ

739 posts

Joined October 2011

phaZ 2015-02-24T16:25:32+00:00

what is supposed to happen to get this ranked? ;w;

Gero

4,456 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Gero 2015-02-25T05:01:07+00:00

Waiting for the recheck by Lexia.

Yuzeyun

7,646 posts

Joined September 2010

Yuzeyun 2015-02-25T18:10:02+00:00

Gero wrote:
~~02:04:874 (170) - -1x SV plox~~ What I should do here? it already has 1x

actually was "-1x" :c

LEXIA PLS TELL ME WHEN AVAILABLE next week

Gero

4,456 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Gero 2015-02-27T03:42:21+00:00

Lexia where are you?

Nozhomi

Global Moderator

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Joined May 2013

Nozhomi 2015-02-28T15:26:34+00:00

Why this is not ranked yet...

Just hope it'll come

Gero

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Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Gero 2015-02-28T23:46:07+00:00

!summon Lexia

Lally

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Joined December 2011

Lally 2015-03-03T00:24:15+00:00

!blame lexia à3à

LexiaLovesU

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Joined June 2012

LexiaLovesU 2015-03-03T00:59:40+00:00

placeholder for recheck honey Ill do it right after done with the Normal gd <3333

We checked the gero's diffs and parts and pap's normal via irc already

Hard
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Bakari this is all you the diff needs to be toned down a bit your parts make the map a bit too close to the insane and kinda causes a gap in between the normal and hard I suggest you lower some of your jumps and lower some of the object density so that you get a balance inbetween the diffs

Desperate also agrees

Some suggestions to make the gap better not gonna mention too much im sure you have your own idea on how to make this easier ill only mention a few

00:10:530 (3,4,5) - Instead of 3 circles make this a repeat slider
00:11:215 (1,2,3,4) - too many circles at once bit too hard I suggest you incorporate a slider in there as well lower the difficulty a bit and density
00:34:152 (2,3) - I think you should make the jump from 1 to 2 a bit smaller since then 3 to 4 would have a bigger jump in comparison and it should since you going into kiai
01:55:289 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - Too many 1/2's at once I think you should do some 1/1 there too x.x
02:20:965 (5) - Use regular DS for this note since there isn't anything significant here that really suggests for this sorta jump on the other hand 5 to 1 is a much more appropriate place for a jump since 1 has a finish and jumping to it will really emphasize it well
02:25:244 (5) - Same as above
02:26:271 (4,5) - Use regular DS for this note since there isn't anything significant here that really suggests for this sorta jump on the other hand 5 to 1 is a much more appropriate place for a jump since 1 has a finish and jumping to it will really emphasize it well

That's all for hard

Insane
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
As Desperate has said Insane needs to be AR 8 I agree AR 8.5 goes a bit too fast

00:12:584 (1) - I think you should add a bit more distance between 4 and 1 since 1 is a strong note and has a finish the best way to properly emphasize that is by jumping
00:18:062 (4) - Add an NC here since your breaking the NC consistency you had already for no real reason keep going on the stanzas it works best there
If done remove the NC on 00:18:233 (1)
00:20:800 (5) - Same as above
00:30:386 (4) - Same as above
00:39:116 (2) - I don't think this note is very noticeable under the slider especially when you lower the AR I suggest you not put this not under the slider
00:39:287 (3,4,1) - The jump to 1 should be bigger then the jump from 3 to 4 it seems a bit odd honestly because 1 is a finish and a stanza it should have had a build and then a bigger release with the jump but you basically just did the bigger release with 3 to 4 I really think you should make the jump to 1 a bit bigger and the jump from 3 to 4 a bit smaller
00:44:765 (3,4) - I really cant see why you didn't make this pattern symmetrical to 00:44:080 (1,2) - It looks a bit odd honestly since you didn't symerty the whole map and suddenly you make a pattern that looks visually similar but quite different
00:46:819 (4) - Add an NC here since your breaking the NC consistency you had already for no real reason keep going on the stanzas it works best there
If done remove the NC on 00:46:990 (1)
00:52:296 (4) - Same as above
01:32:694 (3,4) - Make these sliders more noticeable right now they are barely noticeable. Its gonna cause problems with gameplay
01:54:433 (2) - I don't think this note is very noticeable under the slider especially when you lower the AR I suggest you not put this not under the slider
01:54:604 (3,4,1) - The jump to 1 should be bigger then the jump from 3 to 4 it seems a bit odd honestly because 1 is a finish and a stanza it should have had a build and then a bigger release with the jump but you basically just did the bigger release with 3 to 4 I really think you should make the jump to 1 a bit bigger and the jump from 3 to 4 a bit smaller
01:56:658 (4) - Add an NC here since your breaking the NC consistency you had already for no real reason keep going on the stanzas it works best there
If done remove the NC on 01:56:829 (1) - 4 also has a finish on it aswell so it needs the NC

That's all for insane

Last edited by LexiaLovesU 2015-03-04T06:14:32+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Yuzeyun

7,646 posts

Joined September 2010

Yuzeyun 2015-03-03T16:07:49+00:00

715 posts

rip hoshi

XinCrin put that on the reversed lyrics plox

Oni was IRC checked, all suggestions are break suggestions. (Do not KD.)

SPOILER

2015-03-03 16:42 _Gezo_: surely don't have a lot of things for oni
2015-03-03 16:42 _Gezo_: so look at it
2015-03-03 16:43 Hanjamon: are problems with the oni?
2015-03-03 16:43 _Gezo_: just 3 break things
2015-03-03 16:44 _Gezo_: 00:49:558 (142,155) - there between those notes because in the rest of the kiai it has a small break each repeat
2015-03-03 16:45 Hanjamon: so i'll need to delete?
2015-03-03 16:45 _Gezo_: just one or two notes
2015-03-03 16:45 _Gezo_: 01:15:576 (81,126) - there too (but yeah can't go above 3/4 so idk)
2015-03-03 16:45 _Gezo_: 02:18:568 (178) - ~ 02:29:523 (1) - ^ YOU JUST
2015-03-03 16:46 _Gezo_: 8 measures without brek = cruel
2015-03-03 16:46 _Gezo_: if you want to keep that high density you can do 4+4
2015-03-03 16:59 Hanjamon: but
2015-03-03 16:59 Hanjamon: is necessary?
2015-03-03 16:59 _Gezo_: better
2015-03-03 17:00 Hanjamon: >.<
2015-03-03 17:00 _Gezo_: it's better if you have them

Hanjamon

1,461 posts

Joined June 2012

Hanjamon 2015-03-03T16:33:25+00:00

_Gezo_ wrote:
715 posts
rip hoshi

XinCrin put that on the reversed lyrics plox

Oni was IRC checked, all suggestions are break suggestions. (Do not KD.)
SPOILER
2015-03-03 16:42 _Gezo_: surely don't have a lot of things for oni
2015-03-03 16:42 _Gezo_: so look at it
2015-03-03 16:43 Hanjamon: are problems with the oni?
2015-03-03 16:43 _Gezo_: just 3 break things
2015-03-03 16:44 _Gezo_: 00:49:558 (142,155) - there between those notes because in the rest of the kiai it has a small break each repeat
2015-03-03 16:45 Hanjamon: so i'll need to delete?
2015-03-03 16:45 _Gezo_: just one or two notes
2015-03-03 16:45 _Gezo_: 01:15:576 (81,126) - there too (but yeah can't go above 3/4 so idk)
2015-03-03 16:45 _Gezo_: 02:18:568 (178) - ~ 02:29:523 (1) - ^ YOU JUST
2015-03-03 16:46 _Gezo_: 8 measures without brek = cruel
2015-03-03 16:46 _Gezo_: if you want to keep that high density you can do 4+4
2015-03-03 16:59 Hanjamon: but
2015-03-03 16:59 Hanjamon: is necessary?
2015-03-03 16:59 _Gezo_: better
2015-03-03 17:00 Hanjamon: >.<
2015-03-03 17:00 _Gezo_: it's better if you have them

Deleted 00:49:387 - 00:54:864 - 01:17:117 - 01:19:856 - 02:22:505 - 02:27:983 -

Thanks for recheck :3

Update ---> http://puu.sh/gkM3N/d69f1da170.rar

Gero

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Topic Starter

Gero 2015-03-03T16:50:38+00:00

Updated ~

About the storyboard XinCrin said that he want to keep it as is since isn't a big deal.

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2015-03-03T19:31:44+00:00

o3o don't stap push it now \o3o\

Niko-nyan

1,990 posts

Joined June 2011

Niko-nyan 2015-03-04T08:12:59+00:00

o3o don't staph push Geromon now

riffy

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2010

riffy 2015-03-04T17:28:40+00:00

LexiaLovesU wrote:
placeholder for recheck honey Ill do it right after done with the Normal gd <3333

We checked the gero's diffs and parts and pap's normal via irc already

Hard
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Bakari this is all you the diff needs to be toned down a bit your parts make the map a bit too close to the insane and kinda causes a gap in between the normal and hard I suggest you lower some of your jumps and lower some of the object density so that you get a balance inbetween the diffs

Desperate also agrees

Some suggestions to make the gap better not gonna mention too much im sure you have your own idea on how to make this easier ill only mention a few
01:55:289 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - Too many 1/2's at once I think you should do some 1/1 there too x.x these are just sliders, it's all cool
02:20:965 (5) - Use regular DS for this note since there isn't anything significant here that really suggests for this sorta jump on the other hand 5 to 1 is a much more appropriate place for a jump since 1 has a finish and jumping to it will really emphasize it well it's just a logial ending to the previous jumps. it makes moves more smooth, we'll keep it
02:26:271 (4,5) - Use regular DS for this note since there isn't anything significant here that really suggests for this sorta jump on the other hand 5 to 1 is a much more appropriate place for a jump since 1 has a finish and jumping to it will really emphasize it well no it will not emphasize anything I believe that we're supposed to jump after you hear the beat, siince it makes mmuch more sense with the playability. as for my jump, I keep it because of the vocals because they get a little higher at that point
That's all for hard

Thank you. Anything what is not mentioned is applied.

Hitobjects only

Hey, Gero, watch out. These are only hitobject, don't replace the whole .osu file.

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Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2015-03-05T06:38:58+00:00

!! random shoot !!

good luck<3

Nyukai

2,432 posts

Joined July 2012

Nyukai 2015-03-05T15:43:59+00:00

LexiaLovesU wrote:
00:12:584 (1) - I think you should add a bit more distance between 4 and 1 since 1 is a strong note and has a finish the best way to properly emphasize that is by jumping Nah I don't like how it looks tbh, some mappers emphasize that like this and honestly I don't like it, prefered to emphasize this instead 00:12:584 (1,2)
00:18:062 (4) - Add an NC here since your breaking the NC consistency you had already for no real reason keep going on the stanzas it works best there
If done remove the NC on 00:18:233 (1) Sure.
00:20:800 (5) - Same as above Same.
00:30:386 (4) - Same as above That's up to Gero I think xD
00:39:116 (2) - I don't think this note is very noticeable under the slider especially when you lower the AR I suggest you not put this not under the slider Why not? I think it's noticeable and I like the blanket pattern.
00:39:287 (3,4,1) - The jump to 1 should be bigger then the jump from 3 to 4 it seems a bit odd honestly because 1 is a finish and a stanza it should have had a build and then a bigger release with the jump but you basically just did the bigger release with 3 to 4 I really think you should make the jump to 1 a bit bigger and the jump from 3 to 4 a bit smaller Current jumps are fine for me lol
00:44:765 (3,4) - I really cant see why you didn't make this pattern symmetrical to 00:44:080 (1,2) - It looks a bit odd honestly since you didn't symerty the whole map and suddenly you make a pattern that looks visually similar but quite different If I'm not mistaken it's symmetric with 00:44:080 (1) - o.o
00:46:819 (4) - Add an NC here since your breaking the NC consistency you had already for no real reason keep going on the stanzas it works best there
If done remove the NC on 00:46:990 (1) Gero's part I think.
00:52:296 (4) - Same as above Same.
01:32:694 (3,4) - Make these sliders more noticeable right now they are barely noticeable. Its gonna cause problems with gameplay Basically those unstacks make sliders noticeable so yeah I'd say it's fine lol
01:54:433 (2) - I don't think this note is very noticeable under the slider especially when you lower the AR I suggest you not put this not under the slider Same as before.
01:54:604 (3,4,1) - The jump to 1 should be bigger then the jump from 3 to 4 it seems a bit odd honestly because 1 is a finish and a stanza it should have had a build and then a bigger release with the jump but you basically just did the bigger release with 3 to 4 I really think you should make the jump to 1 a bit bigger and the jump from 3 to 4 a bit smaller Same as before.
01:56:658 (4) - Add an NC here since your breaking the NC consistency you had already for no real reason keep going on the stanzas it works best there
If done remove the NC on 01:56:829 (1) - 4 also has a finish on it aswell so it needs the NC It goes to Gero maybe.

That's all for insane

@Gero doesn't make sense giving you the code - can you please add those NCs for me?

Gero

4,456 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Gero 2015-03-05T16:49:55+00:00

Everything seems that is ready for recheck, waiting for @Lexia or ~~@Geno~~ @Gezo to take a look on this.

Updated ~

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2015-03-05T23:32:19+00:00

Don't forget i wanna give a look on it after just poke me moe o3o ♡

LexiaLovesU

822 posts

Joined June 2012

LexiaLovesU 2015-03-06T03:38:45+00:00

Inyuschan wrote:
LexiaLovesU wrote:
00:39:116 (2) - I don't think this note is very noticeable under the slider especially when you lower the AR I suggest you not put this not under the slider Why not? I think it's noticeable and I like the blanket pattern. Has to be changed again they aren't noticeable in AR 8 In ar 8 it comes out slower so it will start to appear before the slider is fully faded so thus it comes out too suddenly
00:44:765 (3,4) - I really cant see why you didn't make this pattern symmetrical to 00:44:080 (1,2) - It looks a bit odd honestly since you didn't symerty the whole map and suddenly you make a pattern that looks visually similar but quite different If I'm not mistaken it's symmetric with 00:44:080 (1) - o.o no they aren't 3 to 4 is 1.63 ds while 1 to 2 is 1.32 its fine if it was intentional just seems odd with all your symerty
01:32:694 (3,4) - Make these sliders more noticeable right now they are barely noticeable. Its gonna cause problems with gameplay Basically those unstacks make sliders noticeable so yeah I'd say it's fine lol Has to be changed again they aren't noticeable in AR 8
01:54:433 (2) - I don't think this note is very noticeable under the slider especially when you lower the AR I suggest you not put this not under the slider Same as before. Has to be changed again they aren't noticeable in AR 8

That's all for insane
@Gero doesn't make sense giving you the code - can you please add those NCs for me?

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Nyukai 2015-03-06T06:09:07+00:00

Okay, I'll check it later, school taimu. -__-

Gero

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Gero 2015-03-06T17:08:34+00:00

Fixed everything by myself with @Inyuschan permission.

Updated ~

LexiaLovesU

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LexiaLovesU 2015-03-06T20:20:01+00:00

Another Recheck lol

Hard
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I still think the hard's density could stand to be lowered another 10 notes but its not that big of a deal

00:31:242 (3) - The spacing looks a bit odd here
02:20:965 (5) - I think you should lower the jump a bit here just seems too big especially since you already tiring the players with all of the jumping before this note like 02:20:280 (2,3,4)

That's all

Shake It!
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Look over the NCing in this diff apply the other NC mod that I gave for the other diffs and look over this NCing few cases where it goes off like this 00:26:278 (4) - 00:27:647 (4) - You guys go back an front with your NCing patterns that it causes quite a bit of inconsistencies

Other than that the diff plays fine

Last edited by LexiaLovesU 2015-03-06T21:31:40+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Gero

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Gero 2015-03-06T20:43:29+00:00

Applied everything of them.

Updated ~

LexiaLovesU

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LexiaLovesU 2015-03-06T21:33:13+00:00

Okie we fixed some NCing in shake it in irc I think this is good to go >w<

Here you go darling----------------->

Gezo said the taiko's are good to go aswell so rebubbled instead of circle's

Gero

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Gero 2015-03-06T21:45:41+00:00

Thanks for everything darling.

!Summon @Lally.

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Lally 2015-03-06T23:11:43+00:00

!o3o

we're ready just the last fixes o3o

[General]

01:22:765 - why don't you start the break here? imo is better even if is a smal particular

[SB]

i don't understand this problem: (in all diff ofc) and AiBat aswell
SPOILER

had a talk with Xin about it :

SPOILER

[Easy]

I would increase just a bit the stack leniency like +1 / +2
01:33:036 (5,1) - i would totally recomend to try to change the pattern here instead of having a stack in the easier diffu
01:42:622 (3,4) - sama about here^
01:49:811 (1,2) - same again
01:55:289 (1,2) - same
01:59:397 (3,4) - same
02:00:766 (1) - ♥
02:13:091 (1,2) - again
02:23:361 (3) - is the whistle on slider start intentionally?

you know that i'm kinda dun llike the stack in easier diff but some are discussable since are creating a nice pattern,but basicly you shouldn't use those in the easier diffu in the mapset

[Normal]

I would increase just a bit the stack leniency like +1 / +2
01:04:621 (1,2) - *nazi* why don't you try do do a perfect blanket here it would change a bit the slider shape but in this case it's better for the estetic
```
168,88,64621,6,0,P|125:113|94:161,1,100.000000596046,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,192,65306,2,0,P|188:240|200:296,1,100.000000596046,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
01:05:306 (2,3) - distance spacing issue here is to much imo don't forget to apply suggestion here aswell 01:05:990 (3,4) - since of symmetrie
01:29:612 (4,5) - personally i prefer just a reverse slider here
01:50:496 (2,3) - i find it to hard for a normal diff to read 1/2 stacks like this one i would suggest to change this pattern in a bit different way wich would be esteticly nice and will improve/totally change kind of stack; here is what i did:
SPOILER
is basicly a change of 01:49:811 (1) - shape ; ctrl+j + h for 01:50:496 (2) - and a change of shape for 01:51:180 (3) -
```
344,320,109811,6,0,P|384:292|400:240,1,100.000000596046,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,180,110496,2,0,P|504:212|504:256,2,75.0000004470345
440,152,111180,2,0,P|392:140|340:164,1,100.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,200,111865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,232,112207,2,0,L|36:232,1,100.000000596046,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```

[Hard]

Gero:

00:23:197 (4) - according to lower diff and Insane you have a whistle + clap wich fits better imo
00:33:810 (1,2,3,1) - i'm trying to figure out what is wrong in this pattern :V is a bit meh like the main problem is the flow with 00:34:323 (3,1) - wich is totally not smooty try to change it a bit here
00:45:278 (3) - i know that you still follow the vocal with this circle but imo is would be nice to remove it

[Insane]

AR 8.3 would be the best imo since is not so slow like ar ( and not so fast like ar 8.5 - 9 try it out i think it will be the best thing for this insane
Gero:
00:11:557 (2) - i don't know but it looks strange this one,what about to chage this slider in something like:
SPOILER
01:14:036 (4) - i would stack this one with the next slider,flows better imo
01:36:802 (3,4) - this is like a fancy thing? because it doesen't fit at all
Inyuschan
00:15:665 (2,1) - it doesen't affect the game play but i would suggest to uncover it
00:20:116 (3) - i like it in dat way *** btw why don't you try to improve the flow here? something like that will help
SPOILER
01:53:406 (4,1) - i would avoid copy-pasting noticeable patterns like this one wich are not moe :C

[Shake it o3o]

Andrea:

00:11:215 (1,2,3,4,5) - such a long time i don't see from you thins kind of jumpy pattern,i missed it somehow ;3;
02:01:451 (5) - i would suggest to stack this one with the next slider because the flow is a bit strage here just because of this circle

Gero:
00:23:197 (3) - according to lower diff and Insane you have a whistle + clap wich fits better imo
01:45:874 (2) - i know that you can improve this slider ♥

uuuuuh don't stop push it now >3< and i'll give you my first heart ♥

call me back moe o3o

Gero

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Gero 2015-03-07T03:44:24+00:00

Lally wrote:
!o3o

we're ready just the last fixes o3o

[General]
01:22:765 - why don't you start the break here? imo is better even if is a smal particular Fixed.
[SB]
i don't understand this problem: (in all diff ofc) and AiBat aswell
SPOILER
had a talk with Xin about it :
SPOILER
As XinCrin said AiMod doesn't recognize capitalized letters.
[Easy]
I would increase just a bit the stack leniency like +1 / +2 Fixed.
01:33:036 (5,1) - i would totally recomend to try to change the pattern here instead of having a stack in the easier diffu
01:42:622 (3,4) - sama about here^
01:49:811 (1,2) - same again
01:55:289 (1,2) - same
01:59:397 (3,4) - same
02:00:766 (1) - ♥ ♥
02:13:091 (1,2) - again
02:23:361 (3) - is the whistle on slider start intentionally? Yeah it is intentional.

you know that i'm kinda dun llike the stack in easier diff but some are discussable since are creating a nice pattern,but basicly you shouldn't use those in the easier diffu in the mapset I hope you understand but I don't want to force myself to change them since before had many more than how it is now otherwise I always use stacks on easy so I no see the problem to leave it as is.
[Normal]
I would increase just a bit the stack leniency like +1 / +2 Fixed.
01:04:621 (1,2) - *nazi* why don't you try do do a perfect blanket here it would change a bit the slider shape but in this case it's better for the estetic Fixed.
168,88,64621,6,0,P|125:113|94:161,1,100.000000596046,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,192,65306,2,0,P|188:240|200:296,1,100.000000596046,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:05:306 (2,3) - distance spacing issue here is to much imo don't forget to apply suggestion here aswell 01:05:990 (3,4) - since of symmetrie Fixed.
01:29:612 (4,5) - personally i prefer just a reverse slider here Yeah but a stacked here works perfectly fine if you ask me.
01:50:496 (2,3) - i find it to hard for a normal diff to read 1/2 stacks like this one i would suggest to change this pattern in a bit different way wich would be esteticly nice and will improve/totally change kind of stack; here is what i did:
SPOILER
is basicly a change of 01:49:811 (1) - shape ; ctrl+j + h for 01:50:496 (2) - and a change of shape for 01:51:180 (3) -
344,320,109811,6,0,P|384:292|400:240,1,100.000000596046,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,180,110496,2,0,P|504:212|504:256,2,75.0000004470345
440,152,111180,2,0,P|392:140|340:164,1,100.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,200,111865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,232,112207,2,0,L|36:232,1,100.000000596046,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Fixed.
[Hard]
Gero:
00:23:197 (4) - according to lower diff and Insane you have a whistle + clap wich fits better imo Fixed.
-Bakari-:*
00:33:810 (1,2,3,1) - i'm trying to figure out what is wrong in this pattern :V is a bit meh like the main problem is the flow with 00:34:323 (3,1) - wich is totally not smooty try to change it a bit here You know that this is the bakari's flow so I won't touch it.
Gero:
00:45:278 (3) - i know that you still follow the vocal with this circle but imo is would be nice to remove it Sorry but I want to keep it since this part is quite strong and without nothing clickable here is a bit weird.
[Insane]
AR 8.3 would be the best imo since is not so slow like ar ( and not so fast like ar 8.5 - 9 try it out i think it will be the best thing for this insane Fixed.
Gero:
00:11:557 (2) - i don't know but it looks strange this one,what about to chage this slider in something like:
SPOILER
Yeah, but I really want to keep it as is since it doesn't flow that bad or something, I hope you understand.
01:14:036 (4) - i would stack this one with the next slider,flows better imo You're right.
01:36:802 (3,4) - this is like a fancy thing? because it doesen't fit at all Not really, you should listen that at 25 % of speed and you can notice that on 1/4 are a sounds with clap.
Inyuschan
00:15:665 (2,1) - it doesen't affect the game play but i would suggest to uncover it Isn't covered so it's perfectly fine.
00:20:116 (3) - i like it in dat way *** btw why don't you try to improve the flow here? something like that will help You know that Inyus' style is symmetrical like me or Andrea and the flow is kinda different at some parts as you can see here, so I won't touch it, sorry.
SPOILER
01:53:406 (4,1) - i would avoid copy-pasting noticeable patterns like this one wich are not moe :C Why not? I find it very nice to play.
[Shake it o3o]
Andrea:
00:11:215 (1,2,3,4,5) - such a long time i don't see from you thins kind of jumpy pattern,i missed it somehow ;3; #BlameAndrea2015
02:01:451 (5) - i would suggest to stack this one with the next slider because the flow is a bit strage here just because of this circle Not really, I've talked with Andrea before and he said that the flow is as is because is intentional.

Gero:
00:23:197 (3) - according to lower diff and Insane you have a whistle + clap wich fits better imo Fixed.
01:45:874 (2) - i know that you can improve this slider ♥ Fixed a bit.
uuuuuh don't stop push it now >3< and i'll give you my first heart ♥

call me back moe o3o

Updated ~

LexiaLovesU

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LexiaLovesU 2015-03-07T04:06:45+00:00

#HYPE I cant wait dear <333 finally owo

Gero

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Gero 2015-03-07T04:07:49+00:00

Hype is real.

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Lally 2015-03-07T04:15:02+00:00

additional irc

03:07 Gero: o3o
03:07 Lally: hello o3o
03:08 Gero: gonna fix your mod naw
03:08 Gero: o3o
03:09 Lally: dw gonna be awake a bit more =w= tomorrow off
03:13 Gero: okay o3o
03:47 Gero: updating right now \:D/
03:47 Gero: updated o3o
03:48 Lally: looking at the reply oo
03:48 Lally: o3o*
03:48 Gero: oki
03:48 Gero: o3o
03:57 Lally: about this one in normal, 01:50:496 (2,3) -
03:57 Lally: if you check the other similar lyrics and pattern there was not such kind of stacked pattern
03:58 Lally: so thats why it ruins a bit the consistency
03:59 Gero: okay let me fix that
03:59 Gero: :3
04:03 Gero: updated
04:03 Lally: 01:36:802 (3,4) - you were right about this one in insane
04:03 Lally: i should lissen better =A=)
04:04 Gero: baka =3=
04:05 Lally: i have just to check the hitsounds bla bla and everythin else looks fine to me
04:06 Gero: I like that bla bla fact xD
04:08 Lally: all used nyawawa
04:08 Gero: awawawawawawa
04:08 Gero: o3o
04:09 Lally: ok i think all is fine now o3o!!
04:09 Gero: omg
04:09 Gero: hype hype
04:09 Lally: now comes the silly part
04:09 Gero: you can do it baka
04:09 Gero: o3o

more

03:51 Lally: hello moeri can i ask you a question o3o/
03:51 -Bakari-: Sure
03:52 Lally: p/3941965 hard o3o can you give a look to this 2 patterns
03:55 -Bakari-: nah, it actually works pretty cool. let me explain that
03:55 Lally: uguu
03:56 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/gpJkn.jpg
03:58 -Bakari-: angle isn't that big, so transitions are readable and players won't feel like their hands/eyes are being raped \w/
03:59 Lally: thats basicly true is just me that mostly would fit a ctrl+j but is not such a big thing
04:00 -Bakari-: please, let me keep it. this kind of flow is my thing and I really want to keep it \w/
04:01 Lally: i know o3o it's a minor thing not a mistake o3o just wanted do double check with you aswell C:
04:01 -Bakari-: thank you :3
04:01 Lally: ♥
04:02 -Bakari-: good luck with this set, it should be good to go now :3
04:02 Lally: yap re-checking everything >_< hope it will be the last time

omg omg first qualification