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Dan Winter - Don't Stop Push It Now (Nightcore Mix) [Osu|Tai

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LexiaLovesU
822 posts
Joined June 2012
LexiaLovesU
Okay Checking the map <3

Blue is a higher suggestion
Yellow is Questionable Material
red is unrankable

General

  1. Metadata - All good owo ✔
  2. Audio Lead-In - Its good they all start within 1500✔
  3. Background - Good its the proper size owo ✔
  4. Hitsound files -All Good✔
  5. Lyrics - You already added a the 18+ Label✔
  6. Tags - All Tags are fine✔

Easy

  1. 00:09:845 (2) - Inconsistency in spacing it is .8 off which is unrankable baka o3o
  2. 00:23:539 (1) - Remove the 1NC from this since it will only confuse players about how it should be hit
  3. 00:56:405 (1) - Same as above
  4. 00:56:405 (1) - Unused Inherited point please remove it
  5. 02:00:766 (1) - OMG <3333
  6. 02:07:955 (2) - okie currently the flow with this slider needs some improvement since currently you have the slider flow away from the next note quite a bit since your slider shape cruve extremely upwards while the next note is placed in the opposite of that flow so this causes a conflictive flow between the notes. I suggest you crtl +j this slider so that the flow will be a a lot more natural


    That's it for easy <333

Normal

  1. 00:02:485 (1) - Remove this NC since it will only confuse players about the next note x.x
  2. 00:38:603 (3,2) - Yeah don't make your slider flow like this its just awkward to hit the next slider since you generated a flow that flows away from the slider making the turn a bit awkward to hit I would suggest making the slider flow more into the next note
  3. 00:47:675 (5) - Since this is a kickslider in a 175 bpm normal that's pretty fast so I suggest you make the slider point towards the next note since generally with faster kick sliders the noob will follow its path even after its already done so it easier and the transition is better if you make the path go into the next note owo
  4. 00:50:242 (4) - Same as above about the path of the slider
  5. 00:53:666 (1) - Remove this NC since it will only confuse players about the next note x.x
  6. 02:27:469 (3) - Make this shaped the other way so that the next note is more natural to hit

    That's it

Hard

  1. 00:46:477 (5) - I think this jump is a bit too big for a hard diff especially after already a lot of jumps already performed in the generally the same NC combo you jumped to 2 then you jumped to 4 then you did a big jump to 6 this. Now I guess this wouldn't be a issue for some but since gero part before this was using only DS suddenly doing big jumps like this will catch the player off guard Also the voice wasn't very powerful at this point so the jump seemed a bit of an overjump.
  2. 00:48:702 (3) - Again might wanna lower this jump a bit
  3. 01:13:522 (2,1) - currently the flow with this slider needs some improvement since currently you have the slider flowing away from the next note quite a bit since your slider shape curves extremely downwards while the next note is placed in the opposite of that flow so this causes a conflictive flow between the notes. I suggest you make this slider flow more into the next note so that the transition will be a lot more natural
  4. 01:49:811 (1) - crtl+j +crtl+g so that slider has a better flow into the next note
  5. 01:53:919 (1) - Crtl+h and crtl+g for better flow into the next note
  6. 02:04:532 (4) - This sounds very empty since there is a strong clap in the background I think you should hit it I suggest you move 4 a bit back so that it hits the 1/2 note and and a repeat to it

    Im gonna need to talk with you in IRC about the balance between Normal and Hard owo

Insane

  1. 00:22:170 (1) - I really think this spinner doesn't sound right here it seems to forced right I would suggest you remove it and just map the part >.<
  2. 00:35:693 (1) - I think if you crtl+j this slider the flow would be so much better and more natural to play since it will flow into the next note much better because the sliders curve will be going into it instead of away from it
  3. 00:38:089 (4,1) - I agree with Noah about this it does feel awkward rhythmically wise. I see you point though :>
  4. 00:56:405 (1) - I think you should just remove this 1NC there really is no point to it and it makes the map look less professional
  5. 01:04:621 (1) - I think if you crtl+j this slider the pattern will look much more cool and the flow will be much better the slider's tail will be flowing in the next notes more since it wont be flowing in the different direction of there position <3
    I think it looks cool
    http://puu.sh/fCXrJ/d3bf7570fc.jpg
  6. 01:51:009 (1) - Same as first kiai
  7. 02:29:523 (1) - I think you should just remove this 1NC there really is no point to it and it makes the map look less professional

Shake It!

  1. 00:23:197 (3) - since this is going really fast I suggest you make it point towards the next note for a better transition into it im sure some people will have the tendency to continue on the slider repeats path when its over so this will make the gameplay a bit more smooth ~
  2. 00:56:405 (4) - I think you should just remove this 1NC there really is no point to it and it makes the map look less professional
  3. 01:39:883 (4) - Crtl+j this slider so that it flows into the next note a bit better because it will be point at it instead of away from it


    That it <3

Call me back after Gezo checks the taikos :>
Last edited by LexiaLovesU , edited 4 times in total.
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
omg so many easy
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
omg Take it easy
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
Xgor's SBubble modding!

Quite some unused transparency here that needs cropping. All the images in the Name and Lyrics folder, over.png, artist.png and title.png has quite a lot of it. Just cropping over.png removes most of the +5.00x spikes so there is a problem right now.

The SB load spike around 01:11:168 - is a LOT bigger than all other flashes for no reason.. Infact... 01:10:099 - 01:21:054 has +5 spikes constantly when no other SB has it

red.jpg strikes me as kinda useless right now, it only used twice and it's only visible once for a 1/5 of a second on the first and the other one just as a filter for a second.
I think using the color tools would be better if you only use a 400 Kb file that little.


Bit of a pity that there isn't much going on the taiko SB, but it's nice that it's made in consideration for the mode instead of using the same as the osu! one.


Anyways, there is some problems that needs fixing with the SB so I'll pop it for now.

LexiaLovesU wrote:

00:09:845 (2) - Inconsistency in spacing it is .8 off which is unrankable baka o3o
I don't see unrankible with this though :? I see 0.08x DS difference but that's no big deal.
Ozato Fumika
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Ozato Fumika

Sonnyc wrote:

omg Take it easy
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Gero
I'm gonna poke to @XinCrin to fix that soon as possible since the storyboard is made by him also @Lexia I'm waiting for you to finish the whole mod before starting to fix it.
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
lexia do u has taco checkr
LexiaLovesU
822 posts
Joined June 2012
LexiaLovesU

_Gezo_ wrote:

lexia do u has taco checkr
nope
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
now u do c:
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Gero
I'll fix those things until tomorrow.

Thanks to everybody for the support.
Andrea
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
Fixed both suggestions, thank you Lexia!

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88,264,130694,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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432,64,132235,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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100,88,133262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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108,340,134974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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340,120,137028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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124,348,142163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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riffy
osu! Alumni
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riffy

LexiaLovesU wrote:

Hard

  1. 00:46:477 (5) - I think this jump is a bit too big for a hard diff especially after already a lot of jumps already performed in the generally the same NC combo you jumped to 2 then you jumped to 4 then you did a big jump to 6 this. Now I guess this wouldn't be a issue for some but since gero part before this was using only DS suddenly doing big jumps like this will catch the player off guard Also the voice wasn't very powerful at this point so the jump seemed a bit of an overjump. welp, my bad. fixed this one.
  2. 00:48:702 (3) - Again might wanna lower this jump a bit yup
  3. 01:13:522 (2,1) - currently the flow with this slider needs some improvement since currently you have the slider flowing away from the next note quite a bit since your slider shape curves extremely downwards while the next note is placed in the opposite of that flow so this causes a conflictive flow between the notes. I suggest you make this slider flow more into the next note so that the transition will be a lot more natural no. sorry, but I will insist on keeping the pattern. the flow here is quite nice and I don't see any problem here. a picture!
  4. 01:49:811 (1) - crtl+j +crtl+g so that slider has a better flow into the next note Gero, pls
  5. 01:53:919 (1) - Crtl+h and crtl+g for better flow into the next note Gero, pls
  6. 02:04:532 (4) - This sounds very empty since there is a strong clap in the background I think you should hit it I suggest you move 4 a bit back so that it hits the 1/2 note and and a repeat to it nah, I feel like the beat starts on the white tick and then gets louder and ends with a "clap" on a red one. Slider represents this nicely.
The diff
Nyukai
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Nyukai
I'll check this later since I'm at school now ><
Yuzeyun
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Yuzeyun
mmmmmmmmm
so since my english class is no more, i can have a quick check. if totoro lets me use his headset.
Nyukai
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Nyukai

LexiaLovesU wrote:

Insane

  1. 00:22:170 (1) - I really think this spinner doesn't sound right here it seems to forced right I would suggest you remove it and just map the part >.< I think it's fine, spinner fits well here lol
  2. 00:35:693 (1) - I think if you crtl+j this slider the flow would be so much better and more natural to play since it will flow into the next note much better because the sliders curve will be going into it instead of away from it Probably, but what about the following patterns? I prefer to keep it as it is, doesn't look too bad.
  3. 00:38:089 (4,1) - I agree with Noah about this it does feel awkward rhythmically wise. I see you point though :> Nothing to say then xD I don't really feel this awkward...
  4. 00:56:405 (1) - I think you should just remove this 1NC there really is no point to it and it makes the map look less professional
  5. 01:04:621 (1) - I think if you crtl+j this slider the pattern will look much more cool and the flow will be much better the slider's tail will be flowing in the next notes more since it wont be flowing in the different direction of there position <3 Agree!
  6. 01:51:009 (1) - Same as first kiai Same as before.
  7. 02:29:523 (1) - I think you should just remove this 1NC there really is no point to it and it makes the map look less professional
Thank you Lexia~

@Gero: Doesn't make much sense giving you the code, could you please add Ctrl+J here 01:04:621 (1) - of course leaving it in the same place, thanks o3o
Yuzeyun
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Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
omg late as fuck, sorry for the huge delay. didn't even have time to check in the week, studies are exhausting.
lewd bg pls change

00:23:625 - that's literally the only instance of 0.75x, similar intensity parts stay at 1.x; consider removing it.
[Muzu]
HJ
00:05:052 (15) - considering your mapping is mostly vocal on the intro, maybe put that as a kat ? 00:04:881 (14) - is emphasized the same way and of similar pitch.
00:58:972 (138) - maybe delete that note? it would emphasize 139 a bit better imo.
GR
02:04:874 (170) - -1x SV plox

[Oni]
01:25:847 (146,147,148) - ddk ? I don't think dkd sounds natural at all, ddk appears way more natural when played.
01:28:414 (161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168) - On the whole part I think these notes are out of place, because there's not really anything supporting triplets, no transition or anything. what I'd recommend is this: http://i.chiyozel.com/o0vKuLzK - you will have bass->vocal bass->vocal, which seems much more natural to play than vocal->bass vocal->bass.

I don't think there's much to point out here, should anyone have any objections better point them out BEFORE Lexia and I do the last recheck.
[Superstar]_old
[Superstar]_old
Looking forward to the day when this finally gets ranked...

The Dream!
Hanjamon
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Hanjamon

_Gezo_ wrote:

omg late as fuck, sorry for the huge delay. didn't even have time to check in the week, studies are exhausting.
lewd bg pls change

00:23:625 - that's literally the only instance of 0.75x, similar intensity parts stay at 1.x; consider removing it.
[Muzu]
HJ
00:05:052 (15) - considering your mapping is mostly vocal on the intro, maybe put that as a kat ? 00:04:881 (14) - is emphasized the same way and of similar pitch.
00:58:972 (138) - maybe delete that note? it would emphasize 139 a bit better imo.
GR
02:04:874 (170) - -1x SV plox

[Oni]
01:25:847 (146,147,148) - ddk ? I don't think dkd sounds natural at all, ddk appears way more natural when played.
01:28:414 (161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168) - On the whole part I think these notes are out of place, because there's not really anything supporting triplets, no transition or anything. what I'd recommend is this: http://i.chiyozel.com/o0vKuLzK - you will have bass->vocal bass->vocal, which seems much more natural to play than vocal->bass vocal->bass.

I don't think there's much to point out here, should anyone have any objections better point them out BEFORE Lexia and I do the last recheck.
All fixed http://puu.sh/fZhPg/688c6a40b8.rar
Niko-nyan
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before rank let me give <3 (if you know what i mean Gero [*] )
Gero
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Gero
LexiaLovesU

Easy

  1. 00:09:845 (2) - Inconsistency in spacing it is .8 off which is unrankable baka o3o Isn't a big deal so I prefer to keep it as is.
  2. 00:23:539 (1) - Remove the 1NC from this since it will only confuse players about how it should be hit Fixed.
  3. 00:56:405 (1) - Same as above Fixed.
  4. 00:56:405 (1) - Unused Inherited point please remove it Why? is already used since is the final of the kiai time.
  5. 02:00:766 (1) - OMG <3333
  6. 02:07:955 (2) - okie currently the flow with this slider needs some improvement since currently you have the slider flow away from the next note quite a bit since your slider shape cruve extremely upwards while the next note is placed in the opposite of that flow so this causes a conflictive flow between the notes. I suggest you crtl +j this slider so that the flow will be a a lot more natural Fixed.

    That's it for easy <333

Normal

  1. 00:02:485 (1) - Remove this NC since it will only confuse players about the next note x.x Fixed.
  2. 00:38:603 (3,2) - Yeah don't make your slider flow like this its just awkward to hit the next slider since you generated a flow that flows away from the slider making the turn a bit awkward to hit I would suggest making the slider flow more into the next note I think is fine.
  3. 00:47:675 (5) - Since this is a kickslider in a 175 bpm normal that's pretty fast so I suggest you make the slider point towards the next note since generally with faster kick sliders the noob will follow its path even after its already done so it easier and the transition is better if you make the path go into the next note owo Nah, isn't hard to know that it is a kick slider so I prefer to keep it.
  4. 00:50:242 (4) - Same as above about the path of the slider ^
  5. 00:53:666 (1) - Remove this NC since it will only confuse players about the next note x.x Fixed.
  6. 02:27:469 (3) - Make this shaped the other way so that the next note is more natural to hit Fixed.

    That's it

Hard

  1. 01:49:811 (1) - crtl+j +crtl+g so that slider has a better flow into the next note Fixed.
  2. 01:53:919 (1) - Crtl+h and crtl+g for better flow into the next note Fixed.

    Im gonna need to talk with you in IRC about the balance between Normal and Hard owo

Insane

  1. 00:56:405 (1) - I think you should just remove this 1NC there really is no point to it and it makes the map look less professional Fixed.
  2. 02:29:523 (1) - I think you should just remove this 1NC there really is no point to it and it makes the map look less professional Fixed.

Shake It!

  1. 00:23:197 (3) - since this is going really fast I suggest you make it point towards the next note for a better transition into it im sure some people will have the tendency to continue on the slider repeats path when its over so this will make the gameplay a bit more smooth ~ Nah.. I think is fine if I keep it as is.


    That it <3

Call me back after Gezo checks the taikos :>

_Gezo_
GR
02:04:874 (170) - -1x SV plox What I should do here? it already has 1x

Xgor
Xgor's SBubble modding!

Quite some unused transparency here that needs cropping. All the images in the Name and Lyrics folder, over.png, artist.png and title.png has quite a lot of it. Just cropping over.png removes most of the +5.00x spikes so there is a problem right now. Fixed.

The SB load spike around 01:11:168 - is a LOT bigger than all other flashes for no reason.. Infact... 01:10:099 - 01:21:054 has +5 spikes constantly when no other SB has it Gonna ask to XinCrin to fix that.

red.jpg strikes me as kinda useless right now, it only used twice and it's only visible once for a 1/5 of a second on the first and the other one just as a filter for a second.
I think using the color tools would be better if you only use a 400 Kb file that little. ^

Updated ~

Just waiting for XinCrin...
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Kodora
Kodora
holy...
this is still disqualified? OMG
Gero
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Gero

Kodora wrote:

holy...
this is still disqualified? OMG
Sadly but yeah... anyways still waiting for @XinCrin.
XinCrin
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XinCrin
Hi, sorry for very laaaate answer

Xgor wrote:

Xgor's SBubble modding!

Quite some unused transparency here that needs cropping. All the images in the Name and Lyrics folder, over.png, artist.png and title.png has quite a lot of it. Just cropping over.png removes most of the +5.00x spikes so there is a problem right now. Already fixed

The SB load spike around 01:11:168 - is a LOT bigger than all other flashes for no reason.. Infact... 01:10:099 - 01:21:054 has +5 spikes constantly when no other SB has it I don't know the reason, but what's wrong with +5 sb load. It happens 1 second only, it doesn't affect the gameplay

red.jpg strikes me as kinda useless right now, it only used twice and it's only visible once for a 1/5 of a second on the first and the other one just as a filter for a second.
I think using the color tools would be better if you only use a 400 Kb file that little. It's only 393 kb. I'll have to change the code at .osu at each diff. So much work. Is really important this?


Bit of a pity that there isn't much going on the taiko SB, but it's nice that it's made in consideration for the mode instead of using the same as the osu! one.


Anyways, there is some problems that needs fixing with the SB so I'll pop it for now.
Thanks!
phaZ
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phaZ
what is supposed to happen to get this ranked? ;w;
Gero
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Gero
Waiting for the recheck by Lexia.
Yuzeyun
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Yuzeyun

Gero wrote:

02:04:874 (170) - -1x SV plox What I should do here? it already has 1x
actually was "-1x" :c

LEXIA PLS TELL ME WHEN AVAILABLE next week
Gero
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Gero
Lexia where are you?
Nozhomi
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Nozhomi
Why this is not ranked yet...
Just hope it'll come ;)
Gero
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Gero
!summon Lexia
Lally
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Lally
!blame lexia à3à
LexiaLovesU
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LexiaLovesU
placeholder for recheck honey Ill do it right after done with the Normal gd <3333

We checked the gero's diffs and parts and pap's normal via irc already

Hard
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Bakari this is all you the diff needs to be toned down a bit your parts make the map a bit too close to the insane and kinda causes a gap in between the normal and hard I suggest you lower some of your jumps and lower some of the object density so that you get a balance inbetween the diffs

Desperate also agrees

  • Some suggestions to make the gap better not gonna mention too much im sure you have your own idea on how to make this easier ill only mention a few
  1. 00:10:530 (3,4,5) - Instead of 3 circles make this a repeat slider
  2. 00:11:215 (1,2,3,4) - too many circles at once bit too hard I suggest you incorporate a slider in there as well lower the difficulty a bit and density
  3. 00:34:152 (2,3) - I think you should make the jump from 1 to 2 a bit smaller since then 3 to 4 would have a bigger jump in comparison and it should since you going into kiai
  4. 01:55:289 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - Too many 1/2's at once I think you should do some 1/1 there too x.x
  5. 02:20:965 (5) - Use regular DS for this note since there isn't anything significant here that really suggests for this sorta jump on the other hand 5 to 1 is a much more appropriate place for a jump since 1 has a finish and jumping to it will really emphasize it well
  6. 02:25:244 (5) - Same as above
  7. 02:26:271 (4,5) - Use regular DS for this note since there isn't anything significant here that really suggests for this sorta jump on the other hand 5 to 1 is a much more appropriate place for a jump since 1 has a finish and jumping to it will really emphasize it well
That's all for hard

Insane
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
As Desperate has said Insane needs to be AR 8 I agree AR 8.5 goes a bit too fast

  1. 00:12:584 (1) - I think you should add a bit more distance between 4 and 1 since 1 is a strong note and has a finish the best way to properly emphasize that is by jumping
  2. 00:18:062 (4) - Add an NC here since your breaking the NC consistency you had already for no real reason keep going on the stanzas it works best there
    If done remove the NC on 00:18:233 (1)
  3. 00:20:800 (5) - Same as above
  4. 00:30:386 (4) - Same as above
  5. 00:39:116 (2) - I don't think this note is very noticeable under the slider especially when you lower the AR I suggest you not put this not under the slider
  6. 00:39:287 (3,4,1) - The jump to 1 should be bigger then the jump from 3 to 4 it seems a bit odd honestly because 1 is a finish and a stanza it should have had a build and then a bigger release with the jump but you basically just did the bigger release with 3 to 4 I really think you should make the jump to 1 a bit bigger and the jump from 3 to 4 a bit smaller
  7. 00:44:765 (3,4) - I really cant see why you didn't make this pattern symmetrical to 00:44:080 (1,2) - It looks a bit odd honestly since you didn't symerty the whole map and suddenly you make a pattern that looks visually similar but quite different
  8. 00:46:819 (4) - Add an NC here since your breaking the NC consistency you had already for no real reason keep going on the stanzas it works best there
    If done remove the NC on 00:46:990 (1)
  9. 00:52:296 (4) - Same as above
  10. 01:32:694 (3,4) - Make these sliders more noticeable right now they are barely noticeable. Its gonna cause problems with gameplay
  11. 01:54:433 (2) - I don't think this note is very noticeable under the slider especially when you lower the AR I suggest you not put this not under the slider
  12. 01:54:604 (3,4,1) - The jump to 1 should be bigger then the jump from 3 to 4 it seems a bit odd honestly because 1 is a finish and a stanza it should have had a build and then a bigger release with the jump but you basically just did the bigger release with 3 to 4 I really think you should make the jump to 1 a bit bigger and the jump from 3 to 4 a bit smaller
  13. 01:56:658 (4) - Add an NC here since your breaking the NC consistency you had already for no real reason keep going on the stanzas it works best there
    If done remove the NC on 01:56:829 (1) - 4 also has a finish on it aswell so it needs the NC


    That's all for insane
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Yuzeyun
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715 posts
rip hoshi

XinCrin put that on the reversed lyrics plox

Oni was IRC checked, all suggestions are break suggestions. (Do not KD.)
SPOILER
2015-03-03 16:42 _Gezo_: surely don't have a lot of things for oni
2015-03-03 16:42 _Gezo_: so look at it
2015-03-03 16:43 Hanjamon: are problems with the oni?
2015-03-03 16:43 _Gezo_: just 3 break things
2015-03-03 16:44 _Gezo_: 00:49:558 (142,155) - there between those notes because in the rest of the kiai it has a small break each repeat
2015-03-03 16:45 Hanjamon: so i'll need to delete?
2015-03-03 16:45 _Gezo_: just one or two notes
2015-03-03 16:45 _Gezo_: 01:15:576 (81,126) - there too (but yeah can't go above 3/4 so idk)
2015-03-03 16:45 _Gezo_: 02:18:568 (178) - ~ 02:29:523 (1) - ^ YOU JUST
2015-03-03 16:46 _Gezo_: 8 measures without brek = cruel
2015-03-03 16:46 _Gezo_: if you want to keep that high density you can do 4+4
2015-03-03 16:59 Hanjamon: but
2015-03-03 16:59 Hanjamon: is necessary?
2015-03-03 16:59 _Gezo_: better
2015-03-03 17:00 Hanjamon: >.<
2015-03-03 17:00 _Gezo_: it's better if you have them
Hanjamon
1,461 posts
Joined June 2012
Hanjamon

_Gezo_ wrote:

715 posts
rip hoshi

XinCrin put that on the reversed lyrics plox

Oni was IRC checked, all suggestions are break suggestions. (Do not KD.)
SPOILER
2015-03-03 16:42 _Gezo_: surely don't have a lot of things for oni
2015-03-03 16:42 _Gezo_: so look at it
2015-03-03 16:43 Hanjamon: are problems with the oni?
2015-03-03 16:43 _Gezo_: just 3 break things
2015-03-03 16:44 _Gezo_: 00:49:558 (142,155) - there between those notes because in the rest of the kiai it has a small break each repeat
2015-03-03 16:45 Hanjamon: so i'll need to delete?
2015-03-03 16:45 _Gezo_: just one or two notes
2015-03-03 16:45 _Gezo_: 01:15:576 (81,126) - there too (but yeah can't go above 3/4 so idk)
2015-03-03 16:45 _Gezo_: 02:18:568 (178) - ~ 02:29:523 (1) - ^ YOU JUST
2015-03-03 16:46 _Gezo_: 8 measures without brek = cruel
2015-03-03 16:46 _Gezo_: if you want to keep that high density you can do 4+4
2015-03-03 16:59 Hanjamon: but
2015-03-03 16:59 Hanjamon: is necessary?
2015-03-03 16:59 _Gezo_: better
2015-03-03 17:00 Hanjamon: >.<
2015-03-03 17:00 _Gezo_: it's better if you have them
Deleted 00:49:387 - 00:54:864 - 01:17:117 - 01:19:856 - 02:22:505 - 02:27:983 -

Thanks for recheck :3

Update ---> http://puu.sh/gkM3N/d69f1da170.rar
Gero
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Gero
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About the storyboard XinCrin said that he want to keep it as is since isn't a big deal.
Lally
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Lally
o3o don't stap push it now \o3o\
Niko-nyan
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Niko-nyan
o3o don't staph push Geromon now :D
riffy
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riffy

LexiaLovesU wrote:

placeholder for recheck honey Ill do it right after done with the Normal gd <3333

We checked the gero's diffs and parts and pap's normal via irc already

Hard
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Bakari this is all you the diff needs to be toned down a bit your parts make the map a bit too close to the insane and kinda causes a gap in between the normal and hard I suggest you lower some of your jumps and lower some of the object density so that you get a balance inbetween the diffs

Desperate also agrees

  • Some suggestions to make the gap better not gonna mention too much im sure you have your own idea on how to make this easier ill only mention a few
  1. 01:55:289 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - Too many 1/2's at once I think you should do some 1/1 there too x.x these are just sliders, it's all cool
  2. 02:20:965 (5) - Use regular DS for this note since there isn't anything significant here that really suggests for this sorta jump on the other hand 5 to 1 is a much more appropriate place for a jump since 1 has a finish and jumping to it will really emphasize it well it's just a logial ending to the previous jumps. it makes moves more smooth, we'll keep it
  3. 02:26:271 (4,5) - Use regular DS for this note since there isn't anything significant here that really suggests for this sorta jump on the other hand 5 to 1 is a much more appropriate place for a jump since 1 has a finish and jumping to it will really emphasize it well no it will not emphasize anything I believe that we're supposed to jump after you hear the beat, siince it makes mmuch more sense with the playability. as for my jump, I keep it because of the vocals because they get a little higher at that point
That's all for hard
Thank you. Anything what is not mentioned is applied.

Hitobjects only
Hey, Gero, watch out. These are only hitobject, don't replace the whole .osu file. :) 
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Euny
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Euny
!! random shoot !!




good luck<3
Nyukai
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Joined July 2012
Nyukai

LexiaLovesU wrote:

  1. 00:12:584 (1) - I think you should add a bit more distance between 4 and 1 since 1 is a strong note and has a finish the best way to properly emphasize that is by jumping Nah I don't like how it looks tbh, some mappers emphasize that like this and honestly I don't like it, prefered to emphasize this instead 00:12:584 (1,2)
  2. 00:18:062 (4) - Add an NC here since your breaking the NC consistency you had already for no real reason keep going on the stanzas it works best there
    If done remove the NC on 00:18:233 (1) Sure.
  3. 00:20:800 (5) - Same as above Same.
  4. 00:30:386 (4) - Same as above That's up to Gero I think xD
  5. 00:39:116 (2) - I don't think this note is very noticeable under the slider especially when you lower the AR I suggest you not put this not under the slider Why not? I think it's noticeable and I like the blanket pattern.
  6. 00:39:287 (3,4,1) - The jump to 1 should be bigger then the jump from 3 to 4 it seems a bit odd honestly because 1 is a finish and a stanza it should have had a build and then a bigger release with the jump but you basically just did the bigger release with 3 to 4 I really think you should make the jump to 1 a bit bigger and the jump from 3 to 4 a bit smaller Current jumps are fine for me lol
  7. 00:44:765 (3,4) - I really cant see why you didn't make this pattern symmetrical to 00:44:080 (1,2) - It looks a bit odd honestly since you didn't symerty the whole map and suddenly you make a pattern that looks visually similar but quite different If I'm not mistaken it's symmetric with 00:44:080 (1) - o.o
  8. 00:46:819 (4) - Add an NC here since your breaking the NC consistency you had already for no real reason keep going on the stanzas it works best there
    If done remove the NC on 00:46:990 (1) Gero's part I think.
  9. 00:52:296 (4) - Same as above Same.
  10. 01:32:694 (3,4) - Make these sliders more noticeable right now they are barely noticeable. Its gonna cause problems with gameplay Basically those unstacks make sliders noticeable so yeah I'd say it's fine lol
  11. 01:54:433 (2) - I don't think this note is very noticeable under the slider especially when you lower the AR I suggest you not put this not under the slider Same as before.
  12. 01:54:604 (3,4,1) - The jump to 1 should be bigger then the jump from 3 to 4 it seems a bit odd honestly because 1 is a finish and a stanza it should have had a build and then a bigger release with the jump but you basically just did the bigger release with 3 to 4 I really think you should make the jump to 1 a bit bigger and the jump from 3 to 4 a bit smaller Same as before.
  13. 01:56:658 (4) - Add an NC here since your breaking the NC consistency you had already for no real reason keep going on the stanzas it works best there
    If done remove the NC on 01:56:829 (1) - 4 also has a finish on it aswell so it needs the NC It goes to Gero maybe.


    That's all for insane
@Gero doesn't make sense giving you the code - can you please add those NCs for me?
Gero
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Gero
Everything seems that is ready for recheck, waiting for @Lexia or @Geno @Gezo to take a look on this.

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