1. Easy (0.89 stars, 152 notes)
2. Normal (1.51 stars, 362 notes)

1. How about ending spinners otherwise high scores are all HD,DT,HR,FL SS scores with no difference.

1. 00:18:777 - feels empty, whistle?
2. 00:27:054 - 04:14:680 - 04:22:957 - ^
3. 04:00:712 (5) - Sounds better when deleted imo.

1. 00:59:129 (5,1) - Since this is normal, maybe it's not good idea to have slider end of (5) overlap with head of (1) because it appears to be 1/4 spacing when they are arranged like that.
2. 01:41:291 - map vocal?
3. 01:53:707 (7) - You have no 1/2 breaks for a long time in this part; deleting this would provide one.
4. 01:53:966 (1,2) - This rhythm can fit music better if you delete 01:53:966 (1) - and move 01:54:225 (2) - to 01:53:966
5. 02:14:659 (1,2) - ^
6. 01:58:622 - 02:02:761 - I feel it's better not to ignore this sound
7. 02:38:456 (7,1) - Same thing I said about 00:59:129 (5,1)
8. 03:23:981 - Better not to ignore clap
9. 04:18:301 - I think this note should be mapped

1. 00:35:332 (1) - 停这个位置听起来好些
2. 00:43:609 (3) - 建议剪短一半多起个条，歌词衔接上的流畅感
   
3. 00:51:886 (1) - 结尾向后
4. 01:02:233 (2) - 听起来挺生硬，好像故意漏一拍接后面的器声，试下
   
5. 02:49:838 (2) - 可以柔和一些
   ar0，真dio

1. 01:01:974 (4) - del
2. 01:53:966 (1,2) - 试下
   
   01:57:846 (8,1) - 类似
3. 02:10:003 (7,1) - 听起来有点混乱，人声完全压过器声了
4. 02:28:110 (3) - 在这个位置顿一下
5. 03:45:451 - 加圈
6. 03:47:779 (3) - 延长到红线
7. 没了

1. 03:36:268 - 这里preview time更合适吧？
2. 00:51:628 - 前面跟了vocal不如这里也加个note
3. 00:56:025 (1) - 把滑条尾巴提前到红线？然后在后面加个note怎么样？感觉不错
4. 01:29:522 - 这种有特色的人声还是不要漏掉好点吧...拉个滑条？
5. 01:53:966 (1) - 这个重音难道不是用条更好点嘛.-.
6. 02:14:659 (1) - ^
7. 03:08:462 - ^这里也是适合滑条开头，不如把前面那个变成1/4，后面滑条头从这里开始？
8. 04:05:368 (6,1) - 弄个blanket？
9. 04:10:541 (1) - 根据开头的音效，这里应该是whistle吧

1. 01:31:204 (2,3) - 做个blanket？
2. 01:37:412 (1,2) - ^
3. 02:02:243 (1) - 这个变成滑条吧，拉到02:02:761 - 结束
4. 04:08:472 (3) - whistle？

fanzhen0019 wrote:

我见识到了什么叫找mod效率

xxdeathx wrote:

Hi HW, M4M from your queue!

[General]

1. How about ending spinners otherwise high scores are all HD,DT,HR,FL SS scores with no difference. sure, added in both diffs.

[Easy]

1. 00:18:777 - feels empty, whistle? not here, and followed three ones. just need empty there 0.0
2. 00:27:054 - 04:14:680 - 04:22:957 - ^
3. 04:00:712 (5) - Sounds better when deleted imo. great, changed.

[Normal]

1. 00:59:129 (5,1) - Since this is normal, maybe it's not good idea to have slider end of (5) overlap with head of (1) because it appears to be 1/4 spacing when they are arranged like that. agree, changed.
2. 01:41:291 - map vocal? nope, i just wanna follow that long cymbal track here.
3. 01:53:707 (7) - You have no 1/2 breaks for a long time in this part; deleting this would provide one. very good, changed.
4. 01:53:966 (1,2) - This rhythm can fit music better if you delete 01:53:966 (1) - and move 01:54:225 (2) - to 01:53:966 ok, changed.
5. 02:14:659 (1,2) - ^ ^
6. 01:58:622 - 02:02:761 - I feel it's better not to ignore this sound hmm, here i choose no change. just feel like to do rhythm as current style.
7. 02:38:456 (7,1) - Same thing I said about 00:59:129 (5,1) here i choose keep those ones... for give different version to different part.
8. 03:23:981 - Better not to ignore clap haha, well, here i wanna just follow main melody in violin track.
9. 04:18:301 - I think this note should be mapped ok, added.

Harder than Genryuu Kaiko lol i can't play this www

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monstrata wrote:

Hi Hollow Wings~ for your m4m queue! Hope this is helpful!.

[Normal]

00:24:467 (4) - Can't really hear a note here. How about extending 00:23:950 (3) - to a slider? well, there's piano beats indeed.
00:50:593 (5,6) - Also not very audible sound... Why not move them to 00:50:852 - . Beginning here makes more sense imo. hmm... that beat is obvious to be heard, too...
00:54:732 (4,5) - ^ Same. You can't really hear anything at 4, Move them down to 00:54:990 - . lol, you can, really.
01:41:033 (8) - Consider shortening this slider to 01:41:291 - And begin another slider (1/1) at 01:41:550 - . Try a rhythm like This.
02:55:528 (8) - ^Same as above, consider shortening to 1/2 slider and beginning another slider (1/1) at 02:56:046 - .
03:07:944 (7) - Begin this at 03:07:686 - And begin 03:08:720 (1) - at 03:08:462 - i wanna keep this long slider to follow the symbol's long beat here as i said in death's mod reply above.
03:09:496 - You can then add a circle here. Something like this. here i just wanna follow drum track and skip that vocal beat.
03:14:152 (3) - Might be better to make this a slider instead of a circle. actually, i rarely follow vocal in this map... so current version is good enough imo.
03:22:947 (3,1) - Could improve this blanket. i don't wanna blanket here ;w;
03:33:293 (5) - NC; remove NC from 03:34:328 (1) - . good, fixed.
04:18:301 - There is another note here you can map. How about this pattern? I think adding an extra circle in the beginning is nice, and fits with the pattern you used in your intro (00:50:851 (5,6) - ) and (00:54:732 (4,5) - ) for example. already changed.
[Easy]

01:41:550 (3,4,1) - How about making 1 the same shape as 3, 4 for a similar pattern. i did different patterns on purpose.
03:00:184 (1,2,3,1) - Might want to consider a pattern like this. Screen Right now this slider 03:02:254 (2) - . Is unnecessarily short, and there is uneven timing in between the notes. i think i need to follow those two drum beats here, so no change.
03:14:669 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This is a good rhythmic pattern to follow. Slider then circle, then slider. but sometimes, you decide not to map the circle even though there is a vocal or drum beat to map them too. I understand some parts the vocals or melody are quiet so I will only include the notes where there is a significant vocal or drum beat. well, i just mainly follow drums' tracks, and sometime give sliders following vocal, that's the general rhythm logic in this map.
03:10:013 - Could map this note. It makes your rhythm more consistent. lol, not that necessary imo. sometime i just add notes to emphasis the next downbeat, so i'll just skip those ones followed.
03:14:152 - ^
03:49:331 - ^
03:51:529 - ^
03:51:917 (2) - You can extend this slider to 03:52:435 - . same as above.

handsome wrote:

m4m, hello

General

1. "snowman" to tags, cuz its called that more common in english oops, fixed :3

Normal

1. 01:04:044 - 01:07:406 - map this sound hmm mainly follow instruments' tracks here, so i choose not follow this vocal beat.
2. 01:53:966 (1,2) - change this so that 01:54:483 - sound is emphasized, like 01:49:827 (1) - yeah, already changed.
3. 02:00:174 (4) - have this slider aim downwards, so better flow~ sure, changed.
4. 02:22:936 - consider emphasising sliderend, so circle here and cut 8. hmm, well, your idea is good, but actually i just wanna follow that symbol's long beat with slider here, so i think the current version of rhythm is fine enough.
5. 03:44:416 (4) - try circle then slider, to emphasize the end. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2804739 have to fix spacing too ofc similar as above, and i love that gap, so still no change here.

Easy

1. 02:10:520 (4) - maybe curve the other way? and do the rotate pattern with 02:12:590 (5) - hmm it's fine imo. fluent flow is not the only choice you can get to express music.

leehom wang DDD good luck~ :3

AIR wrote:

hi

[Easy]

1. 00:35:332 (1) - 停这个位置听起来好些 嗯？
2. 00:43:609 (3) - 建议剪短一半多起个条，歌词衔接上的流畅感 。节奏已经很单调了，那样不太好
   
3. 00:51:886 (1) - 结尾向后 嗯？
4. 01:02:233 (2) - 听起来挺生硬，好像故意漏一拍接后面的器声，试下 我这边是只跟了vocal。
   
5. 02:49:838 (2) - 可以柔和一些 男人就应该刚猛一些。
   ar0，真dio 233

[Normal]

1. 01:01:974 (4) - del nope.
2. 01:53:966 (1,2) - 试下 改成了另一个节奏。
   
   01:57:846 (8,1) - 类似 同上。
3. 02:10:003 (7,1) - 听起来有点混乱，人声完全压过器声了 这边主要是跟drum，这个slider跟的是symbol的长音。
4. 02:28:110 (3) - 在这个位置顿一下 嗯？
5. 03:45:451 - 加圈 nope.
6. 03:47:779 (3) - 延长到红线 nope.
7. 没了

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TT Mouse wrote:

[Easy]
02:01:726 (4) - 这样会友好一点？可以，改了。

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[Normal]
01:53:707 (7) - 这里貌似没音，建议remove 其实有音的，但已经删了。

01:57:846 (8) - ^ 这个保留。

02:10:554 这里建议这样 nope.

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就这些 ><

eidt:
Easy

01:31:204 (2,3) - 01:37:412 (1,2) - blanket？nope.

01:43:620 (4,1) - 02:47:768 (1,2) - 02:51:907 (1,2) - 建议摆一下平行会好点 nope. 平行不好看。

01:53:966 (1,3) - 试试这样 http://puu.sh/g8Mnj/6680ff4319.png 讨厌对称。。。嘛，稍微调了下。

03:14:669 (2,3,1) - 摆开会好点 http://puu.sh/g8Mpu/69595a3e4f.png 要blanket所以不改了。

03:45:709 (1,2) - 2可以和1尾包一下 行。

Normal

00:47:748 (1,3) - 弧度貌似不一 http://puu.sh/g8MgZ/7d0ed2b9da.png 你说的是01:30:169 (3,4,5,6,7) - 吧，这边倒是不用那么纠结这个。。。而且，我都是尽量避免对称的，这里也是一样。

00:50:593 (5,6,1,2,3) - 建议整体往上移一些 00:49:558 (4,1) - 有blanket所以不改。

01:30:945 (4,6) - 4这样摆弧度大了点 建议统一 nope.

01:40:257 (6,7) - 貌似没摆直 http://puu.sh/g8MiG/89cb488134.png 改成了弯的。

01:57:846 (8) - http://puu.sh/g8MkP/dea4ef464c.png nope.

真的十分抱歉 嘛，加油吧。

Chloe wrote:

[Easy]
03:16:221 (3,2,4) - 类似这种好丑啊 就算是EZ 我觉得也可以把间距搞大点 而不是1/2也覆盖着 因为你这才58BPM 我觉得很好看啊。

[Normal]
01:52:673 (5) - 这种蓝线节奏对我这种player来说好难抓啊 只能靠目押 01:37:153 (7) - 03:56:832 (4) - 04:00:971 (4) - 这些也是 我感觉主要还是因为节奏一致性出了问题 01:55:777 (4,5,6,7,8) - 类似后面这种1+reverse的循环我觉得就很好 一致性？我是故意做的不一致，为何全图要一致？
04:26:578 (6,1,2) - 1和2都覆盖住了6 我感觉不太好 建议把2移开 这个还好，不改。

Kagamine Ren wrote:

[Normal]

1. 03:36:268 - 这里preview time更合适吧？ nope. 这曲子的副歌的记忆度没有前奏来的强烈。
2. 00:51:628 - 前面跟了vocal不如这里也加个note 这图基本没有跟vocal的地方。
3. 00:56:025 (1) - 把滑条尾巴提前到红线？然后在后面加个note怎么样？感觉不错 这里难得跟了个vocal，所以滑条尾随意带过。
4. 01:29:522 - 这种有特色的人声还是不要漏掉好点吧...拉个滑条？这图我是铁了心的不跟vocal。
5. 01:53:966 (1) - 这个重音难道不是用条更好点嘛.-. 改了。
6. 02:14:659 (1) - ^ ^
7. 03:08:462 - ^这里也是适合滑条开头，不如把前面那个变成1/4，后面滑条头从这里开始？ 不，这里的滑条我要跟symbol长音。
8. 04:05:368 (6,1) - 弄个blanket？ 行。
9. 04:10:541 (1) - 根据开头的音效，这里应该是whistle吧 嗯，fixed。

[Easy]

1. 01:31:204 (2,3) - 做个blanket？nope.
2. 01:37:412 (1,2) - ^ nope.
3. 02:02:243 (1) - 这个变成滑条吧，拉到02:02:761 - 结束 nope.
4. 04:08:472 (3) - whistle？nope.

deetz wrote:

m4m

[General]
could add "winter" to tags, people could search for winter music :p sure, added.

[Easy]
00:47:748 (1) - Ctrl-G then adjust spacing uh?? no that's not correct lol.
00:50:852 (2) - sound is on 00:50:593 - , which would be hard to play in easy, so consider either mapping it there or removing this not hmm? it's ok to noobs imo. besides, the bpm is really low, and i think even beginners can play this diff well.
00:54:990 (2) - ^ except sound is on 00:54:732 - ^
01:43:620 (4,1) - dropoff is too extreme imo, try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2805800 well.. the current flow can emphasis the down beat better imo.
02:01:726 (4) - same idea as ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2805806 same as above.
02:47:768 (1,2) - ^ you get the idea https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2805812 i'll stop mentioning it now because you may feel differently about it, just keep it in mind for this diff ^

[Normal]
-some spacing errors, check AIMod fixed all. thou some of ds changed for give different style in different part in this song, for the bpm is low enough again, the ds shift is acceptable imo.
00:59:129 (5,1) - the overlap could be misread, try something more clear and remember to adjust spacing https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2805840 changed to another style.
01:48:792 (5,1) - move 1 further down for nicer visual https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2805854 seems good, changed.
01:54:225 (2) - slider starts on nothing? try mapping this part like you did the others or something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2805858 already changed.
04:18:301 - add note already changed.

nice o/ sorry for short mod that's ok :3

Guu wrote:

唔。ez看不出什么来，直接摸nm吧。
以前好喜欢这首歌qwq
[Normal]
00:27:054 (1,2,3,4) - 和上一组同样形状就好吧。。 故意弄不一样的。
00:41:022 (2) - 感觉如果这里下了节奏，00:43:092 - 这里就也应该有。 或者都去掉 不同的部分，我就会下不同的节奏。
00:50:593 (5,6,1,2,3) - ↓这样好嘛。 差不多已经改成这个样子了。

SPOILER

01:08:958 (2) - 单点就行吧 不要。
01:17:753 (2,3,4) - 包上~ 噗，这里就算啦。
01:44:654 (7) - 只有一个鼓点，用单点就好了 后面的小鼓音被你漏了。
02:10:779 (1) - 尾部拖到蓝线 这边主要还是想跟鼓。
02:52:166 (2) - ^ ^
02:31:472 (2,3) - 就一个1/2滑条如何^
02:56:822 - 加个节奏? ^
04:02:264 (1) - 向后移动1/4拍，白线加个单点，比较好o.o 噗，这边蓝线木有音耶，再搞小圆会被干掉的233
04:05:110 (5) - 去掉 不要。
04:06:144 - 加个note 已加。
04:06:403 (1) - 包~？ 不了。
04:07:955 (3) - 还在kiai中呢，不要空着吧 不要，只想跟鼓。

然后我就作了个死w 舔一舔

OniJAM wrote:

Talked with mapper, change AR OD HP settings in both diffs
Qualified!

ZZHBOY wrote:

OniJAM wrote:

Talked with mapper, change AR OD HP settings in both diffs
Qualified!

怎么一页就qua了