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Nyukai
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Topic Starter
Nyukai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 5 de marzo de 2015 at 15:21:29

Artist: BiBi
Title: Love Novels
Source: ラブライブ！ School idol project
Tags: Love Live Nishikino Maki 西木野 真姫 Pile Ayase Eli 絢瀬 絵里 Yoshino Nanjō Yazawa Nico 矢澤 にこ Sora Tokui
BPM: 135
Filesize: 2055kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,46 stars, 80 notes)
  2. Hard (2,41 stars, 185 notes)
  3. Insane (3,27 stars, 282 notes)
  4. Normal (1,72 stars, 129 notes)
Download: BiBi - Love Novels
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Just a short version of this awesome song from Love Live!, hope you like it.
Last edited by Nyukai , edited 18 times in total.
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
first :3
salinqi
121 posts
Joined August 2012
salinqi
Hi~small mod from #modreqs.They are just suggestions~hope it helps:-)

General
It seems that there is no need to divide the kiai time into two periods...better make it continous?

Easy
00:50:286 (1) - too long,doesn't fit the music
00:56:064 - add a circle
01:00:508 - ^
01:04:064 - ^
01:06:731 - ^
01:11:175 - ^
01:19:175 - ^

Normal
01:11:175 (6,1) - sounds strange because vocal starts at 01:11:397 ,change 6 into circle
01:27:842 (4) - sounds strange,move it to 01:27:620 - and add a circle to 01:28:286 -


Hard
00:42:953 - Add a circle
01:02:064 (2,1) - sounds strange because a strong vocal starts at the end of the slider,better change rhythm of your objects
01:09:175 (3,1) - ^
01:16:508 (4,1) - ^

Insane
00:20:508 (2,3,4) - a little difficult for a 3.28 map,better make it easier:-)
00:29:842 (5,6,7,8) - sounds strange to me,better make the rhythm in consistency with 00:28:953 (1,2,3,4) -
00:36:953 (5,6,7,8) - ^

I love this song very much!Good luck~
And if my mods are not helpful,then no kds for me~it's okay :)
Nyukai
2,415 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai

salinqi wrote:

Hi~small mod from #modreqs.They are just suggestions~hope it helps:-)

General
It seems that there is no need to divide the kiai time into two periods...better make it continous? It's fine.

Easy
00:50:286 (1) - too long,doesn't fit the music Lol, it fits.
00:56:064 - add a circle Yeah, sounds good.
01:00:508 - ^ Not here, I prefered to leave a little pause due the ~increasing~ music.
01:04:064 - ^ A little pause as well, is not totally needed a note here imo.
01:06:731 - ^ More or less the same.
01:11:175 - ^ Yeah, I like it.
01:19:175 - ^ Same.

Normal
01:11:175 (6,1) - sounds strange because vocal starts at 01:11:397 ,change 6 into circle Same as Hard.
01:27:842 (4) - sounds strange,move it to 01:27:620 - and add a circle to 01:28:286 - Sounds fine even if it doesn't follow completely the vocal. This shouldn't be a problem.


Hard
00:42:953 - Add a circle There's no important music that needs to be clicked so I think is fine.
01:02:064 (2,1) - sounds strange because a strong vocal starts at the end of the slider,better change rhythm of your objects This already follows vocal well 01:02:064 (2) - there's also noticeable music here 01:02:731 (1) - so the rhythm is fine imo.
01:09:175 (3,1) - ^ Same.
01:16:508 (4,1) - ^ Same. Yeah, I know sounds a bit weird, but as long as it fits, should be ok.

Insane
00:20:508 (2,3,4) - a little difficult for a 3.28 map,better make it easier:-) Nah, maybe the stack is a bit annoying, but the rhythm is fine.
00:29:842 (5,6,7,8) - sounds strange to me,better make the rhythm in consistency with 00:28:953 (1,2,3,4) - The second triplet fits better where it is, so I prefer current rhythm.
00:36:953 (5,6,7,8) - ^ Same.

I love this song very much!Good luck~
And if my mods are not helpful,then no kds for me~it's okay :)
Thank you :3 Almost everything was not changed because I somehow prefer what I did (already explained), anyways I appreciated your help.
salinqi
121 posts
Joined August 2012
salinqi
Thank you too! :) Your reply is so detailed!It would be of great help for a new modder like me in making progress in modding.

Best wishes! :)
Mortem
690 posts
Joined July 2013
Mortem
IRC Modded.

chu*
12:31 Pjecoo: ok
12:32 *Pjecoo is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/640069 BiBi - Love Novels [Easy]]
12:34 Pjecoo: 00:05:620 (2) - Beat ends at 00:06:508 - So just make slider longer. and move the 00:06:731 (3) - to 00:07:175 -
12:35 Inyuschan: nah it follows the vocal, I prefer the current rhythm tbh
12:35 Pjecoo: Okay then.
12:36 Pjecoo: 00:28:953 (1) - There are some many curvy sliders. Welp, it's up to you, if you want to redesign it. Just don't make it sharp.
12:36 Pjecoo: It will be better in some curvy shape. imo.
12:37 Inyuschan: I use straight sliders as well~ I see your point but I guess I'll keep the variety o3o
12:38 Pjecoo: otherwise it's cool.
12:38 Pjecoo: btw.
12:38 Pjecoo: You can remove the end of mp3. I mean, it ends at 92%
12:39 Pjecoo: so I think it's unnecesary to have it longer.
12:39 Inyuschan: yeah I noticed, I have to fix it :(
12:39 Pjecoo: Ok Normal.
12:40 Pjecoo: 00:06:286 (5) - You missed the beat (red). You mapped it before good 00:04:731 (2,3) - but why to put here 1/2 slider.
12:40 Pjecoo: It feels weird imo.
12:41 Inyuschan: that red beat is less important for me
12:41 Inyuschan: for a Normal
12:41 Inyuschan: ><
12:42 Pjecoo: 00:44:731 (3,1) - Stack maybe?
12:43 Inyuschan: nah I prefer to keep the symmetry, anyways I try to avoid stacks in Easy/Normal
12:43 Pjecoo: mm-hmm ok.
12:43 Pjecoo: Ok Hard.
12:43 Inyuschan: that would be kinda annoying for beginners w
12:44 Pjecoo: 00:34:953 (2,3,4) - not stacked properly
12:44 Pjecoo: End of the slider is on 320; 180
12:45 Pjecoo: Circles below 318; 180
12:45 Inyuschan: fixed ><
12:46 Pjecoo: 01:09:175 (3) - I dunno
12:46 Pjecoo: this feels weird
12:46 Pjecoo: What about 1/4 slider here.
12:46 Pjecoo: And then circle after it.
12:47 Inyuschan: hm, I wanted to keep it consistent with 01:08:064 (1) - especially because it follows the vocal - but I'll consider it.
12:47 Pjecoo: Ok.
12:47 Pjecoo: Insane
12:49 Pjecoo: 01:00:508 (4,5,6,7,1) - I'm not sure about DS here.
12:49 Pjecoo: I know you don't have to use DS in Insane
12:49 Pjecoo: But if you could move the slider little bit back, that would be great.
12:49 Inyuschan: you have to use it too xD
12:49 Inyuschan: DS is fine I think...
12:49 Inyuschan: wait
12:50 Inyuschan: ah, well, just a bit inconsistent
12:50 Inyuschan: fixed
12:50 Inyuschan: xD
12:51 Pjecoo: Gambaranee-na-na-nai-na- chu:*
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
I and Inyus had a IRC
:3
12:03 ByBy_ChAn: hi
12:03 Inyuschan: hi o3o
12:03 ByBy_ChAn: you accept IRC for BiBi - Love Novels ?
12:04 Inyuschan: yes
12:04 ByBy_ChAn: okay
12:04 ByBy_ChAn: I downloaded it already :3
12:04 Inyuschan: nice~
12:05 ByBy_ChAn: general 
12:08 ByBy_ChAn: the BG size is 1024x767 . It should be 1024x768 or 1366x768 . change the resolution of BG or find another BG
12:09 Inyuschan: wait a moment before continue
12:09 Inyuschan: xD
12:09 ByBy_ChAn: sure
12:10 Inyuschan: okay, you suggested me something weird. You should know there's no minimum resolution for a BG, even 800x600 is fine
12:10 Inyuschan: yeah, the maximum is 1366x768, therefore, for example 1440x900 is not rankeable
12:10 Inyuschan: but 1024x767 is fine.
12:11 ByBy_ChAn: ok
12:11 ByBy_ChAn: and now about mp3
12:13 ByBy_ChAn: after the song ends , there's maybe 11 seconds of silence . These seconds of silence are not from original song . crop or find a better mp3 imo
12:13 Inyuschan: yeah, I should fix that maybe xD I'll take care of that ^^
12:13 ByBy_ChAn: oki
12:15 ByBy_ChAn: widescreen support is unbalanced . why ? because in easy is unchecked but in normal,hard and insane is checked . Uncheck widescreen support from N H I
12:16 Inyuschan: aaa my fault xD
12:16 Inyuschan: fixed, nice catch
12:16 ByBy_ChAn: :)
12:16 ByBy_ChAn: you're forgetful no ? ehh np me too
12:16 ByBy_ChAn: ok let's back
12:17 ByBy_ChAn: easy
12:17 Inyuschan: well people makes mistakes sometimes w
12:17 ByBy_ChAn: yeap
12:19 ByBy_ChAn: ok let's see if I will catch the hitsounds good . my brother don't let me to listen the song ;^;
12:21 Inyuschan: okay xD
12:23 ByBy_ChAn: 00:46:731(1)- I feel there's no cymbal emphasis . remove finish
12:24 ByBy_ChAn: oops
12:24 ByBy_ChAn: 00:46:731 (1)-
12:25 Inyuschan: I think there's a stronger music so finish fits well there lol
12:28 ByBy_ChAn: well I saw another ranked version of this map and at this point I saw there's no cymbal
12:30 Inyuschan: the other map was ranked like in 2013
12:30 Inyuschan: things were different
12:30 Inyuschan: >_>
12:30 ByBy_ChAn: ahh yes ok
12:30 Inyuschan: anyways, I'm sure finish fits well enough~
12:30 ByBy_ChAn: ok
12:31 ByBy_ChAn: 00:54:286 (2)- Add NC ? there's new vocals i'm not sure
12:32 Inyuschan: NC is already here 00:50:286 (1) - which finishes in another stanza, so it's fine actually ^^
12:32 ByBy_ChAn: okay
12:33 ByBy_ChAn: 01:21:397 (4,1)- for me this pattern looks kinda awkward
12:35 Inyuschan: there's nothing wrong with that. Spacing is fine, symmetry is fine... owo
12:35 ByBy_ChAn: but 4 is not like next note
12:50 Inyuschan: so?
12:50 ByBy_ChAn: for me this pattern doesn't look so good
12:51 Inyuschan: yeah but I already answered :/
12:51 ByBy_ChAn: i know for you looks good , but you can improve the pattern
12:52 Inyuschan: ... you should pay more attention to other stuff more before thinking about tastes.
12:53 ByBy_ChAn: I played it
12:53 Inyuschan: rule #1 (idk) for a BN: never force your suggestions
12:53 Inyuschan: never
12:54 Inyuschan: unless it's unrankeable or something like that
12:54 ByBy_ChAn: ok
12:54 Inyuschan: http://puu.sh/fTWwT/3567572a46.jpg
12:54 Inyuschan: ^ this is an advice for you
12:54 ByBy_ChAn: oki
12:57 Inyuschan: anything else for Easy?
13:01 ByBy_ChAn: wait 
13:01 Inyuschan: k
13:09 ByBy_ChAn: 01:30:953 (2)- The slider is not straight so well and maybe it can ruin the flow . move the last gap to 415|311 to straight it better
13:11 Inyuschan: fixed
13:11 ByBy_ChAn: and the last thing
13:12 ByBy_ChAn: 01:32:953 (1,2)- Imprve this blanket . For me this blanket looks awkward imo
13:12 ByBy_ChAn: *improve
13:13 Inyuschan: okay, fixed
13:13 ByBy_ChAn: normal
13:16 ByBy_ChAn: I'll say later . My brother don't let me to check ;^;
13:17 Inyuschan: lol okay
13:17 Inyuschan: anyways you can post the irc we had xD
13:17 Inyuschan: to give you kudosu~
13:18 ByBy_ChAn: sure

Good Luck ! o/
Nyukai
2,415 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai
Updated everything, thank you guys :3

I'll fix mp3 as soon as possible, I'm afraid to make something wrong with the map x_x
Kin
2,618 posts
Joined August 2010
Kin
Hi ~
M4M

[General]

  1. Maybe it's just me, but I find it hard to hear the hit sound, maybe add +10~20% volume hit sound ? As exemple on the Hard : I can't hear anything from this 1/4 slider : 00:25:620 (2) - .
  2. Your background is 1024x767. Change it to 1024x768.
[Easy]

  1. 00:05:620 (2) - I'd suggest to curve this slider to make a better transition between this slider and the previous one. I find the left movement from the slider 2 too much sudden.
  2. 00:10:731 - Add clap here ?
  3. 00:14:731 (1) - Nazi : move the red point perfectly on the tick ? then the 1/1 beat can be feel better with the flow.
  4. 00:28:953 (1) - If you wanted to follow the vocal with the red point of this slider, make sure the red point is on the blue tick : as exemple : like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2768569
  5. 00:33:842 (2) - Maybe add whistle ? There's a strange sound which I can't explain.
[Normal]


  1. 00:10:731 - same as Easy : add clap ?
  2. 00:32:064 - I feel like this triplet 1/2 musn't be there, but should be here : 00:31:620 - .
  3. 00:46:508 (6) - missing clap ?
[Hard]

  1. 00:10:731 (4) - same as other diff : clap ?
  2. 00:17:175 - missing clap
  3. 00:24:842 - how about add a clap here, and then use S:C2 clap here : 00:24:953 - ?
  4. 00:48:286 - I think this note should be clicked instead of being passive as slider end. The sound is strong and simular as this one :00:46:731 - . Also add finish to this note if you fix it, or add finish on the slider end if you didn't fix it.
  5. If you tried to follow the vocal, it's actualy here 01:02:953 - and not here : 01:02:731 - .
  6. 01:14:953 (5,6) - add clap to both note ?
  7. 01:20:286 - kinda same as earlier, I don't think a strong note like this one should be passive, I'd suggest to make it clickable.
  8. 01:20:064 - missing clap, also add finish ?
  9. 01:23:620 - missing clap
  10. 01:28:294 - add clap ?
  11. 01:32:286 - add clap to this one ? If you fix it, I think you can use a green line S:C2 for those 2 clap : 01:32:286 - 01:32:508 (4) -
[Insane]

  1. 00:10:731 (5) - add clap to the whole slider ? The clap might be loud, so if you add clap to the whole slider, you should also use a hit sound volume to at least 30~40%.
  2. 00:30:286 (6,7,8) - 00:37:397 (6,7,8) - tbh, I think use a triplet on white tick instead of red tick doesn't fit here.
  3. 00:46:508 (8) - add clap ? maybe just me, but it sounds good to me.
  4. 00:48:286 - add a finish ? the sound is quite simular to this one 00:46:731 - .
  5. 00:53:620 (6) - 01:00:731 (6) - Maybe just me, but clap here sounds good to me.
  6. 00:55:175 (4) - missing clap.
  7. How about add clap here : 01:03:842 - ; and use S:C2 for those 2 claps : 01:03:842 - 01:04:064 - ?
  8. 01:05:842 (5) - missing clap ?
  9. 01:09:620 - the finish musn't be here, but it should be here : 01:09:397 (4) - .
  10. 01:16:286 (4) - same as earlier : add clap and use S:C2 for those 2 claps 01:16:286 (4,5) - ?
  11. 01:20:286 - same as Hard, I don't think a strong note like this one should be passive as slider end. Also, missing clap on the slider here : 01:20:064 - ?
  12. 01:23:620 - missing clap
  13. 01:23:175 (3) - add a finish for the strong melody ?
  14. 01:25:175 - Same as earlier : add clap and use S:C2 for those 2 claps 01:25:175 - 01:25:397 - ?
  15. 01:28:286 (3,5) - missing clap ?
  16. 01:32:286 - Same as earlier : add clap and use S:C2 for those 2 claps 01:32:286 - 01:32:508 - ?
well, my mod is mainly hit sound, but the flow and the timeline are already really good.
good luck !
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya
[General]
  1. In source, should be ラブライブ！ School idol project (exclamation mark(！) is 2-byte character after ラブライブ)
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:175 (1) - I think fix blanket better.
  2. 00:11:620 (2) - same with above.
  3. 00:29:842 (5) - tail ins't stack with 00:28:731 (7) -
  4. 00:34:508 (1) - same here. fix blanket better.
  5. 00:39:175 (4) - I thnk make ctrl+G better. make a good jump with 00:39:620 (1) - guess the vocals. and feel nice play. owo
  6. 00:52:286 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - you can make pentagon well. Seems to be a little distorted. :'(
  7. 01:29:397 (1) - move 01:29:397 (1) - x:68 y:316 , or fix blanket pls
  8. 01:29:842 (2) - same above move space or fix blanket better.
  9. 01:36:064 (5) - why don't you make 256x-coordinate?

[Hard]
  1. 00:07:175 (4) - fix blanket pls
  2. 01:20:731 (1) - why you add spiner here? I think you can make other object in this part. it's better than coming circles or sliders.
  3. 01:22:286 (1) - fix blanket pls
  4. 01:25:842 (1) - ^

[Normal]
  1. 00:58:286 (2) - add clap like 00:54:731 (3) -
  2. 01:34:508 (1) - how about star here? 01:34:731 (1) -

[Easy]
  1. 00:16:953 - add note?
Nyukai
2,415 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai
Kin

Kin wrote:

Hi ~
M4M

[General]

  1. Maybe it's just me, but I find it hard to hear the hit sound, maybe add +10~20% volume hit sound ? As exemple on the Hard : I can't hear anything from this 1/4 slider : 00:25:620 (2) - . Hm, I can hear the hitsounds, I think volume is fine ;//;
  2. Your background is 1024x767. Change it to 1024x768. BG resolution is fine I think, there's a maximum which is 1366x768 but not a minimum o3o
[Easy]

  1. 00:05:620 (2) - I'd suggest to curve this slider to make a better transition between this slider and the previous one. I find the left movement from the slider 2 too much sudden. The previous slider is not curved so I think this flows better.
  2. 00:10:731 - Add clap here ?
  3. 00:14:731 (1) - Nazi : move the red point perfectly on the tick ? then the 1/1 beat can be feel better with the flow.
  4. 00:28:953 (1) - If you wanted to follow the vocal with the red point of this slider, make sure the red point is on the blue tick : as exemple : like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2768569
  5. 00:33:842 (2) - Maybe add whistle ? There's a strange sound which I can't explain. I prefer to keep it as it is for consistency o3o
[Normal]


  1. 00:10:731 - same as Easy : add clap ?
  2. 00:32:064 - I feel like this triplet 1/2 musn't be there, but should be here : 00:31:620 - . Fits well as it is imo.
  3. 00:46:508 (6) - missing clap ?
[Hard]

  1. 00:10:731 (4) - same as other diff : clap ?
  2. 00:17:175 - missing clap
  3. 00:24:842 - how about add a clap here, and then use S:C2 clap here : 00:24:953 - ? CS:2 doesn't fit.
  4. 00:48:286 - I think this note should be clicked instead of being passive as slider end. The sound is strong and simular as this one :00:46:731 - . Also add finish to this note if you fix it, or add finish on the slider end if you didn't fix it. I prefer to add finish and that's it.
  5. If you tried to follow the vocal, it's actualy here 01:02:953 - and not here : 01:02:731 - . 01:00:953 (1,2,1,2,3) - These follow both so I think it's fine.
  6. 01:14:953 (5,6) - add clap to both note ?
  7. 01:20:286 - kinda same as earlier, I don't think a strong note like this one should be passive, I'd suggest to make it clickable. I prefer to keep the symmetry :< The rhythm is fine.
  8. 01:20:064 - missing clap, also add finish ? Clap only.
  9. 01:23:620 - missing clap
  10. 01:28:294 - add clap ?
  11. 01:32:286 - add clap to this one ? If you fix it, I think you can use a green line S:C2 for those 2 clap : 01:32:286 - 01:32:508 (4) - Only the first case xD
[Insane]

  1. 00:10:731 (5) - add clap to the whole slider ? The clap might be loud, so if you add clap to the whole slider, you should also use a hit sound volume to at least 30~40%. Nah but I added it at the beginning.
  2. 00:30:286 (6,7,8) - 00:37:397 (6,7,8) - tbh, I think use a triplet on white tick instead of red tick doesn't fit here. The triplet fits well there orz
  3. 00:46:508 (8) - add clap ? maybe just me, but it sounds good to me.
  4. 00:48:286 - add a finish ? the sound is quite simular to this one 00:46:731 - .
  5. 00:53:620 (6) - 01:00:731 (6) - Maybe just me, but clap here sounds good to me.
  6. 00:55:175 (4) - missing clap.
  7. How about add clap here : 01:03:842 - ; and use S:C2 for those 2 claps : 01:03:842 - 01:04:064 - ? Only added CS:2 in the first one.
  8. 01:05:842 (5) - missing clap ?
  9. 01:09:620 - the finish musn't be here, but it should be here : 01:09:397 (4) - . Hm, I think it fits better as it is ;w; I don't wanna remove the clap.
  10. 01:16:286 (4) - same as earlier : add clap and use S:C2 for those 2 claps 01:16:286 (4,5) - ? As always.
  11. 01:20:286 - same as Hard, I don't think a strong note like this one should be passive as slider end. Also, missing clap on the slider here : 01:20:064 - ?
  12. 01:23:620 - missing clap
  13. 01:23:175 (3) - add a finish for the strong melody ?
  14. 01:25:175 - Same as earlier : add clap and use S:C2 for those 2 claps 01:25:175 - 01:25:397 - ? Same.
  15. 01:28:286 (3,5) - missing clap ?
  16. 01:32:286 - Same as earlier : add clap and use S:C2 for those 2 claps 01:32:286 - 01:32:508 - ? Same.
well, my mod is mainly hit sound, but the flow and the timeline are already really good.
good luck !

eINess

eINess wrote:

[General]
  1. In source, should be ラブライブ！ School idol project (exclamation mark(！) is 2-byte character after ラブライブ)
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:175 (1) - I think fix blanket better.
  2. 00:11:620 (2) - same with above.
  3. 00:29:842 (5) - tail ins't stack with 00:28:731 (7) -
  4. 00:34:508 (1) - same here. fix blanket better. That was not my intention ><
  5. 00:39:175 (4) - I thnk make ctrl+G better. make a good jump with 00:39:620 (1) - guess the vocals. and feel nice play. owo Nah I don't like how it looks ;w;
  6. 00:52:286 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - you can make pentagon well. Seems to be a little distorted. :'( idk how I thought it was fine lol.
  7. 01:29:397 (1) - move 01:29:397 (1) - x:68 y:316 , or fix blanket pls
  8. 01:29:842 (2) - same above move space or fix blanket better.
  9. 01:36:064 (5) - why don't you make 256x-coordinate?

[Hard]
  1. 00:07:175 (4) - fix blanket pls
  2. 01:20:731 (1) - why you add spiner here? I think you can make other object in this part. it's better than coming circles or sliders. The spinner fits well there imo o3o
  3. 01:22:286 (1) - fix blanket pls
  4. 01:25:842 (1) - ^

[Normal]
  1. 00:58:286 (2) - add clap like 00:54:731 (3) -
  2. 01:34:508 (1) - how about star here? 01:34:731 (1) - Star? I prefer the spinner for the end o3o

[Easy]
  1. 00:16:953 - add note? Moved (3) instead.

@eINess Since it's M4M (I guess), link me your map when you can, I think you didn't tell me yet.

Thank you so much guys o3o Keep in mind what I didn't mention is what I fixed xD
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,307 posts
Joined November 2013
Chaoslitz
m4m o3o/

[Easy]
  1. 00:16:953 (3) - use a slider start at 00:16:508 instead? to have better consistency
  2. 00:37:842 (2) - i think whistle is not needed in the slider head? o3o
  3. 01:00:064 (3) - use slider instead? since there is vocal at 01:00:508
  4. 01:06:731 - i think you can add a note here because there is a strong beat
  5. 01:21:397 (4) - fix the ds with 01:22:286 (1), 0.94x is a bit close comparing to others
  6. 01:22:286 (1,2,3) - I suggest you to use the same pattern as 01:25:842 (1,2,3) and 00:04:064 (1,2,3,1,2,3)
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:064 (4) - try to move this higher? to symmetry with 00:08:286 (2)
  2. 00:17:397 (5) - move to x:356 y:196 for a better flow
  3. 00:32:508 (1,2,3) - try this?
    eg
  4. 00:37:842 (3) - clap at tail
  5. 01:01:842 (2,4) - try parallel?
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:731 (1) - curve this up instead? it looks better in my opinion
  2. 00:38:508 (2) - clap at 00:37:842 (1)'s tail instead?
  3. 00:49:175 (2) - move this down 1 grid
  4. 01:20:731 (1) - i think you can map this out, since you mapped in easy and normal diff
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:064 (3,4) - try ctrl+g? I think it is better
  2. 00:20:508 (2,3,4) - quite hard to read if you stack both notes in the same slider
  3. 00:29:842 (5,6,7,8) - use the same pattern as 00:28:953 (1,2,3,4)
  4. 00:36:953 (5,6,7,8) - ^
  5. 00:39:175 (4) - try ctrl+g
  6. 01:21:842 (7) - increase the distance, the vocal here is a strong beat
I hope it helps ;w;
good luck >w<
Nyukai
2,415 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai

Chaoslitz wrote:

m4m o3o/

[Easy]
  1. 00:16:953 (3) - use a slider start at 00:16:508 instead? to have better consistency Current rhythm is fine for me o3o
  2. 00:37:842 (2) - i think whistle is not needed in the slider head? o3o It's needed for consistency if you notice :3
  3. 01:00:064 (3) - use slider instead? since there is vocal at 01:00:508 I prefer to add some pauses in Easy if the music is not too important for me, that's why ><
  4. 01:06:731 - i think you can add a note here because there is a strong beat Probably but I prefer to start when music starts as well.
  5. 01:21:397 (4) - fix the ds with 01:22:286 (1), 0.94x is a bit close comparing to others
  6. 01:22:286 (1,2,3) - I suggest you to use the same pattern as 01:25:842 (1,2,3) and 00:04:064 (1,2,3,1,2,3) I prefer to keep that variety o3o
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:064 (4) - try to move this higher? to symmetry with 00:08:286 (2) Nah, the flow is fine for me.
  2. 00:17:397 (5) - move to x:356 y:196 for a better flow I did something similar because using your suggestion the spacing will be inconsistent ><
  3. 00:32:508 (1,2,3) - try this?
    eg
  4. 00:37:842 (3) - clap at tail
  5. 01:01:842 (2,4) - try parallel?
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:731 (1) - curve this up instead? it looks better in my opinion It's fine as it is imo since I want to keep the triangle created.
  2. 00:38:508 (2) - clap at 00:37:842 (1)'s tail instead?
  3. 00:49:175 (2) - move this down 1 grid
  4. 01:20:731 (1) - i think you can map this out, since you mapped in easy and normal diff It's different in Insane too, so I think it's fine.
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:064 (3,4) - try ctrl+g? I think it is better
  2. 00:20:508 (2,3,4) - quite hard to read if you stack both notes in the same slider
  3. 00:29:842 (5,6,7,8) - use the same pattern as 00:28:953 (1,2,3,4) Current rhythms fit well, I don't understand why people can't see 00:30:286 (6,7,8) - fits well where it is xD
  4. 00:36:953 (5,6,7,8) - ^ Same.
  5. 00:39:175 (4) - try ctrl+g tbh I don't like how it would be.
  6. 01:21:842 (7) - increase the distance, the vocal here is a strong beat I prefer to keep the stack o3o
I hope it helps ;w;
good luck >w<
Thank you :3
Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
<3 this song ><
Aerous
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Joined September 2013
Aerous
Sorry for the super long delay , just got my headset like an hour ago

m4m , from your queue !

easy:
00:06:731 (3) Make this a slider ? http://puu.sh/gbuor/d9a94e6634.jpg
00:28:953 (1) Instead of this long repeat slider wanna try this ? http://puu.sh/gbuuB/95d09ad61a.jpg
00:43:175 (1) Again with this one too , and don't end it on a big white tick? http://puu.sh/gbuBu/985b22525b.jpg / The green slider starts on 00:44:953 http://puu.sh/gbuD3/8430426740.jpg
00:48:064 Note here? You added it here 00:49:842 (3)
01:03:620 (3) make this a slider? Or just make it like this : http://puu.sh/gbuKn/e564ae8972.jpg
01:21:397 (4) Overlap , want to try to fix this :D ?


normal :
00:30:731 (3,4) This looks neater I think , http://puu.sh/gbu5L/2f10ea8261.jpg / http://puu.sh/gbu94/c7f73109ca.jpg
00:37:397 (2) Stack this with 00:35:620 (6)
00:54:286 (5,1,2) Move these few notes so circle number two is at the center? http://puu.sh/gbueu/997b6d67d2.jpg

hard :
00:24:731 (2) Wanna blanket this with the previous slider? http://puu.sh/gbtFu/a7cf7d477b.jpg
00:35:842 (4,5,1) Blanket like this :D ? http://puu.sh/gbtK8/f3a3492ccf.jpg
00:53:064 (2) Make this slider straight ?
00:55:620 (2,1) Suggestion : http://puu.sh/gbtPz/69eca9ab00.jpg / http://puu.sh/gbtQX/ae2af21ce3.jpg
01:29:397 (1) Stack this under 01:27:397 (1) ?
01:34:508 (1) Move this higher so it can stack on those two single notes from before : http://puu.sh/gbtYF/69e2946b2e.jpg

insane :
00:05:620 (1) Wanna make this a curved shape ?
00:10:731 (5) CTRL + G :D ?
00:17:842 (4,5,1) Suggestion : http://puu.sh/gbpV8/05fd8a0c6d.jpg
00:23:620 Instead of this slider , wanna make it out :P ? Its fine as it is though , but more fun if you map it out
00:52:064 (1,2,3,4,5) Increase the distance a bit? Right before the kiai time starts
00:57:175 (7,1) The vocals start here , so why not delete this circle and use the next slider here? http://puu.sh/gbtr3/91c7e8fbf9.jpg
01:26:508 (2,3) Stack this under slider number 5 ? http://puu.sh/gbtv1/8740e6ad2c.jpg


Cute song :D Love your clean mapping !
Nyukai
2,415 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai

Aerous wrote:

Sorry for the super long delay , just got my headset like an hour ago

m4m , from your queue !

easy:
00:06:731 (3) Make this a slider ? http://puu.sh/gbuor/d9a94e6634.jpg I prefer not mapping all rhythms in Easy tbh, that's why.
00:28:953 (1) Instead of this long repeat slider wanna try this ? http://puu.sh/gbuuB/95d09ad61a.jpg That's not the rhythm I've chosen for this diff so I prefer to keep what I did.
00:43:175 (1) Again with this one too , and don't end it on a big white tick? http://puu.sh/gbuBu/985b22525b.jpg / The green slider starts on 00:44:953 http://puu.sh/gbuD3/8430426740.jpg Same.
00:48:064 Note here? You added it here 00:49:842 (3) I was trying to follow the vocals anyway D:
01:03:620 (3) make this a slider? Or just make it like this : http://puu.sh/gbuKn/e564ae8972.jpg Well adding little pauses in Easy is fine imo.
01:21:397 (4) Overlap , want to try to fix this :D ? Fixed.


normal :
00:30:731 (3,4) This looks neater I think , http://puu.sh/gbu5L/2f10ea8261.jpg / http://puu.sh/gbu94/c7f73109ca.jpg Current pattern is fine for me.
00:37:397 (2) Stack this with 00:35:620 (6) B-but the symmetry orz
00:54:286 (5,1,2) Move these few notes so circle number two is at the center? http://puu.sh/gbueu/997b6d67d2.jpg Maybe but there's still symmetry so it's fine for me o3o

hard :
00:24:731 (2) Wanna blanket this with the previous slider? http://puu.sh/gbtFu/a7cf7d477b.jpg I made a blanket with the next note instead.
00:35:842 (4,5,1) Blanket like this :D ? http://puu.sh/gbtK8/f3a3492ccf.jpg Looks weird for me o.o
00:53:064 (2) Make this slider straight ? The flow is better actually.
00:55:620 (2,1) Suggestion : http://puu.sh/gbtPz/69eca9ab00.jpg / http://puu.sh/gbtQX/ae2af21ce3.jpg Uh that overlap is not good for me D:
01:29:397 (1) Stack this under 01:27:397 (1) ? Nah there's no need to stack lol
01:34:508 (1) Move this higher so it can stack on those two single notes from before : http://puu.sh/gbtYF/69e2946b2e.jpg Same as before.

insane :
00:05:620 (1) Wanna make this a curved shape ? Nah it's fine for me.
00:10:731 (5) CTRL + G :D ? Sure.
00:17:842 (4,5,1) Suggestion : http://puu.sh/gbpV8/05fd8a0c6d.jpg I prefer current pattern o3o
00:23:620 Instead of this slider , wanna make it out :P ? Its fine as it is though , but more fun if you map it out I'd like to keep 1 spinner per diff :3u
00:52:064 (1,2,3,4,5) Increase the distance a bit? Right before the kiai time starts The distance is already increased thanks to that jump, that's why.
00:57:175 (7,1) The vocals start here , so why not delete this circle and use the next slider here? http://puu.sh/gbtr3/91c7e8fbf9.jpg There's also an important note in stanza, therefore current rhythm fits better.
01:26:508 (2,3) Stack this under slider number 5 ? http://puu.sh/gbtv1/8740e6ad2c.jpg Okay.


Cute song :D Love your clean mapping !
Thanks :3
[ Zzz ]
1,296 posts
Joined June 2011
[ Zzz ]
Hi~ I was just :P

Easy
  1. 00:28:508 - Add Circle ( 00:26:731 (2) - Same rhythm )
  2. 00:33:842 (2) - Instead 00:35:620 - Here
  3. 01:00:508 (4) - Add Circle , Clap
  4. 01:04:064 (4) - Same
  5. 01:15:620 (2) - Same
  6. 01:18:286 (5) - Delete Circle
  7. 01:25:397 (4) - Add Circle , Clap
  8. 01:27:397 (2) - Please white line.
    01:27:175 (2) - Head Add Clap :3
  9. 01:30:953 (2) - Same
  10. 01:34:286 (3) - Add Circle , Clap
    Easy and Normal difficulty
    white line. important :3!!

Normal
  1. 00:17:397 (5) - Delete , Add Circle Better Beat
  2. 00:32:286 (5) - Delete 00:31:620 (4) - correct + If you do this
    Add clap the middle and at the end :3
  3. 01:11:175 (6) - There are two ways
    1. 01:11:175 (6) - Delete , Add Circle
    2.01:11:620 (1) - Delete 01:11:842 (7) - Add Slider :3
    Better!!!
  4. 01:24:286 (4,5,6) - Correct Beat
  5. 01:27:842 (4) - Same
  6. 01:31:397 (4,5,6) - 01:24:286 (4,5,6) - Same

Hard
  1. 01:05:842 (4) - Clap on both sides
  2. 01:35:842 - Normal Clap :3?

Insane
  1. 00:27:175 (1) - Delete Whistle

:3
Nyukai
2,415 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai
Easy: just deleted 1 circle, the rest is fine for me, especially the sliders which start in red ticks, they follow the vocals.
Normal: fixed the second point, other rhythms are fine enough for a Normal.
Hard: nothing changed, current hitsounds fit better with the music.
Insane: no changes, there's a hitsounds consistency and I want to keep it.

Thank you~
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
place holder for a mod <3

Hey Inyus :3


General:
  1. I really think you should fix your bg, since right now it's 1024x767 which should be imo at 1024x768
  2. Are you using sb here, since i don't see anything in the edit...maybe you should fix this ></
  3. I highly suggest you to remove useless empty parts in the mp3, which is not needed imo, so you should just remove it =3=/


Easy:
  1. 00:41:397 (3) - this slider feels kinda empty imo, how about adding a whistle to slider's start, it'll fit with music so yeah ></
  2. 00:43:175 (1) - ^ but at slider's tail for this one
  3. 00:45:842 (2) - ^ slider's start, for this one i can hear a piano sound in the background so i think it'll be nice if you add it o.o
  4. 00:48:508 (2) - ^ also slider's start
  5. 00:56:064 (2,2) - bad stack...maybe you should fix it ;w;


Normal:
  1. 00:35:620 (6,2) - maybe move the (6) where the (2) is to avoid bad stacking ></
  2. 00:41:397 (4) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start, i think it'll fit with music imo o.o
  3. 00:44:064 (2,4) - ^ both slider's start ofc
  4. 00:45:842 (5) - ^
  5. 00:48:508 (4) - ^
  6. 00:49:397 (5) - ^
  7. 01:09:175 (3) - how about adding a whistle to this note, it seems kinda fitting with vocals imo o.o
  8. 01:27:842 (4) - ^ at slider's start owo/


Hard:
  1. 00:33:842 (4) - maybe a whistle at this slider start would sound good with sound in the background o.o/
  2. 00:40:508 (4) - ^
  3. 00:41:397 (1) - ^
  4. 00:42:286 (3) - ^
  5. 00:44:064 (4) - ^
  6. 00:44:953 (1) - ^
  7. 00:45:842 (3) - ^
  8. 00:49:175 (2) - ^


Insane:
  1. 00:26:731 (6) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start, it'll follow the background sound so i think it'll fit imo
  2. 00:41:397 (1) - ^
  3. 00:44:953 (1) - ^
  4. 00:45:842 (3) - ^
  5. 00:47:620 (3) - ^
  6. 00:49:175 (3) - ^ both start and end, it'll fit with music imo o.o


That's all, call me back :3
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
ups sekai modded this map when im modding this. well i came here as your request though xD


  • General
  1. why you have SB folder and lyrics when you dont have osb here rofl
  2. 00:25:397 - until 00:39:175 - 2nd and 4th whiteticks feel a little bit empty for me w/o hitsound. i'd say to use sampleset drum for them


  • Easy
  1. 00:07:175 - imo you can add note here to follow the vocal
  2. 00:16:508 - imo better to map this time, you are skipping the vocal so i think try to keep follow the music (weak drum at that time)
  3. 00:32:064 - the hitsound is low here so please increase the volume at least until 75%. i cant hear the hitsound with 60% orz
  4. 00:35:620 - same as 00:07:175 -
  5. 00:37:397 - imo better to map this too, somehow i feel missed from the drum here
  6. 00:39:620 - until 00:49:397 - why no whistle here? imo you can place it on every stanza (i'd say 3rd whitetick as well actually but that's your decision)
  7. 00:44:508 - imo you should map this time, the drum music is strong and you mapped it before. somehow i feel something missing from here
  8. 00:48:064 - ^
  9. 01:00:508 - ^
  10. 01:04:286 - tbh i'd say to map this. it's empty to skip map both 01:04:064 - and 01:04:286 - in same time (skip drum and high vocal orz), please map one of them
  11. 01:06:731 - same as 00:44:508 -
  12. 01:06:508 - if you dont follow above, so you have to remove this greenline since it's unncessary
  13. 01:11:620 (1) - i'd be happy if you avoid 1,05x spacing here
  14. 01:16:508 - literally same as 01:04:286 -
  15. 01:18:286 - same as 00:44:508 -
  16. 01:19:175 (2) - hmm imo the flow could be better here, try move to 136,108 for it

i only done to mod Easy and i realized Sekai wants to bubble this, i'll come back after her bubble ><
Nyukai
2,415 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai
For now:

  1. Fixed mp3. (I hope it's fine now)
  2. Therefore, changed the offset, green lines, and resnapped everything - or that's what I suppose. I hope everything related to timing is fine due the mp3 change.
  3. Removed SB stuff, it was my fault.
  4. Fixed BG resolution.
Going to apply/answer Sekai and Xinely mods, stay tuned~

Sekai-nyan
General: all fixed.
Easy: I'd like to keep the current consistency, that part doesn't have whistles overall, so I think I won't add anything here. Also the stack doesn't need to be fixed at least for me; if I do it, I will have to fix DS and move many notes etc. etc. while it's fine as it is.
Normal: Same as before, and the last two points is because whistles are already in the previous note I think, for example here 01:08:583 (2,3) - there's already whistle in (2) - two continued whistles don't fit for me.
Hard: Same as before because it's the consistency I've chosen for the whole map, if you suggest those points, then I should add whistles basically in the whole part you mention - which is not the case.
Insane: Same as before, you know why.

I think I'll apply Xinely's mod when Sekai bubbles this since she didn't finish. If she doesn't mind ofc ><

don't kill me for almost everything denied, I hope you understand ><

Anyways, updated :3
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
ok, Checked everything and it looks fine :3


Bubbled~
Nyukai
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Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai
Thank you so much <3

Btw, redownload please, mp3 was changed ><

Now let's wait for Xinely~
meii18
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Joined October 2013
meii18
Weeee ~
Nyukai
2,415 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai
Updated again because offset was a bit off, sorry for the trouble, it was a quick fixing ><
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Fixed the timing~

Rebubbled~
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
Guess you don't need me then at the end hehe :P
Nyukai
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Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Nyukai

Andrea wrote:

Guess you don't need me then at the end hehe :P
I guess so since Xinely will mod it xD

you can consider this as a ticket for another time /me runs
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