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System Of A Down - Aerials

posted 2013-12-22T22:42:57+00:00

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Eni

Joined May 2013

Eni 2014-02-18T07:25:29+00:00

Hi Alarido~

Your beatmap is really good, but I found some minor grid symmetry issues.
[Easy]
01:34:494 (1) - this looks out of place to me but I can't seem to find a better way to place it without moving other things, so maybe it's ok.
[Normal]
00:44:287 (2, 4) - move slider 4 up so it matches Y axis with slider 2
03:32:873 (1, 2) - when you reverse selection on slider 1, you can see that slider 1 is (x,308) and slider 2 is (x,307).
[Hard]
00:40:921 (3, 6) - I do not see this pattern anywhere else in the song.. do you want to change it?
02:44:371 (4, 5) - when you reverse selection on slider 5, it is (x,235) and slider 4 is (x,236).
03:14:106 (6, 7) - slider 7 = (x,286) when the reverse slider 6 = (x,287)
[Insane]
01:43:460 (1, 3) - slider 1 is (x,196) but slider 3 is (x,195) when reverse
02:31:439 (1, 2) - slider 2 is (x,242) but slider 1 is (x,243) when reverse
02:40:221 (1, 2) - here is also a difference of (x,y+-1)
02:51:991 (1, 2) - same as 02:40:221 (1, 2) -
02:54:618 (1, 2) - ^
02:58:667 (1, 2) - ^

Good luck.

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-02-18T23:33:10+00:00

Project Railgun wrote:
Hi Alarido~

Your beatmap is really good, but I found some minor grid symmetry issues.
[Easy]
01:34:494 (1) - this looks out of place to me but I can't seem to find a better way to place it without moving other things, so maybe it's ok. ► Hm... its head makes a triangle with 01:32:990 (2,3) - and its head is blanketed by 01:35:623 (2) - so kept (:
[Normal]
00:44:287 (2, 4) - move slider 4 up so it matches Y axis with slider 2 ► No symmetry intended here.... For symmetry, both sliders should be same visual size, that's not the case here (due to rhythm).
03:32:873 (1, 2) - when you reverse selection on slider 1, you can see that slider 1 is (x,308) and slider 2 is (x,307). ► Fixed !
[Hard]
00:40:921 (3, 6) - I do not see this pattern anywhere else in the song.. do you want to change it? ► Modified some patterns.
02:44:371 (4, 5) - when you reverse selection on slider 5, it is (x,235) and slider 4 is (x,236). ► Fixed !
03:14:106 (6, 7) - slider 7 = (x,286) when the reverse slider 6 = (x,287) ► Fixed too !
[Insane]
01:43:460 (1, 3) - slider 1 is (x,196) but slider 3 is (x,195) when reverse ► Fixed too !
02:31:439 (1, 2) - slider 2 is (x,242) but slider 1 is (x,243) when reverse ► Fixed too !
02:40:221 (1, 2) - here is also a difference of (x,y+-1) ► Fixed too !
02:51:991 (1, 2) - same as 02:40:221 (1, 2) - ► Fixed too !
02:54:618 (1, 2) - ^ ► Fixed too !
02:58:667 (1, 2) - ^ ► Fixed too !

Good luck.

Thaaaank you very much :3 Railgun ~.~

DexFrild

Joined December 2010

DexFrild 2014-02-19T09:33:37+00:00

awww amazing song. And map too :3 Оne of my favorite (and first) songs by SOAD.

Here some problems with snapping:

Easy

• 00:40:198 (1) - Unsnapped slider.
• 00:40:198 (1) - Unsnapped slider.
• 00:40:198 (1) - Unsnapped slider.
• 01:55:072 (3) - Unsnapped circle.

Normal

• 01:51:497 (4) - Unsnapped slider.

Insane

• 00:40:198 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
• 00:40:384 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
• 00:40:570 (3) - Unsnapped circle.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

• 02:32:905 (4) - I expected to see it higher. (x:256 y:36)
• 03:15:208 (1,2) - Uncomfortable transition. I recommend to make like that:

Open Insane with notepad, find in --[HitObjects]-- section (almost very bottom) string with start 240,164,195208... And change your code to this. (Don't forget save your part. But this part more comfortable :3).

240,164,195208,6,0,P|222:193|224:230,2,67.5000025749208,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,84,195763,2,0,P|217:54|183:39,2,67.5000025749208,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,116,196318,2,0,P|125:134|108:168,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,186,196688,2,0,P|165:223|177:259,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,219,197058,2,0,P|257:253|291:270,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,200,197428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,140,197613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,68,197798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,32,197983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,76,198168,6,0,P|186:41|196:-3,2,67.5000025749208,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,139,198724,2,0,P|139:123|114:84,2,67.5000025749208,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,148,199279,2,0,P|282:163|307:202,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,223,199649,2,0,P|252:257|241:303,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,263,200019,2,0,P|163:297|125:322,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,244,200389,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,168,200574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,92,200759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,52,200944,1,0,0:0:0:0:

As I've said above, very good map! Good luck with

~

riffy

osu! Alumni

Joined December 2010

riffy 2014-02-19T09:41:49+00:00

Yo, there's something weird in your video. Also, the OD on Easy and Normal should be reduced to make the timing changes and choppy rhythm a bit more playable.

Anyway, I'm here to shoot a couple of stars. Hope I'll be able to mod it when I finish with the maps from my queue! (if you don't mind, ofc).

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-02-20T01:29:13+00:00

DexFrild wrote:
awww amazing song. And map too :3 Оne of my favorite (and first) songs by SOAD.

Here some problems with snapping:
Easy
• 00:40:198 (1) - Unsnapped slider. ► It seems unsnapped when you're positioned before the new timing red line, but after you cross that line, you'll see the note snapped as it must be. That's the reason AiMod don't detected it.
• 00:40:198 (1) - Unsnapped slider. ► ^
• 00:40:198 (1) - Unsnapped slider. ► ^
• 01:55:072 (3) - Unsnapped circle. ► Fixed.
Normal
• 01:51:497 (4) - Unsnapped slider. ► Fixed.
Insane
• 00:40:198 (1) - Unsnapped circle. ► Fixed.
• 00:40:384 (2) - Unsnapped circle. ► Fixed.
• 00:40:570 (3) - Unsnapped circle. ► Fixed.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

• 02:32:905 (4) - I expected to see it higher. (x:256 y:36) ► Moved to x:256 y:28 (also checked in gameplay for avoiding touch life bar, and found that it doesn't touches the life bar.).
• 03:15:208 (1,2) - Uncomfortable transition. I recommend to make like that:
SPOILER
Open Insane with notepad, find in --[HitObjects]-- section (almost very bottom) string with start 240,164,195208... And change your code to this. (Don't forget save your part. But this part more comfortable :3).
240,164,195208,6,0,P|222:193|224:230,2,67.5000025749208,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,84,195763,2,0,P|217:54|183:39,2,67.5000025749208,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,116,196318,2,0,P|125:134|108:168,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,186,196688,2,0,P|165:223|177:259,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,219,197058,2,0,P|257:253|291:270,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,200,197428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,140,197613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,68,197798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,32,197983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,76,198168,6,0,P|186:41|196:-3,2,67.5000025749208,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,139,198724,2,0,P|139:123|114:84,2,67.5000025749208,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,148,199279,2,0,P|282:163|307:202,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,223,199649,2,0,P|252:257|241:303,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,263,200019,2,0,P|163:297|125:322,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,244,200389,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,168,200574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,92,200759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,52,200944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
►►► Thanks for the code c: feels better now (:

As I've said above, very good map! Good luck with ~

Thanks Dex (:
THANKS FOR THE STAR TOO (:

Last edited by Alarido 2014-02-20T01:50:02+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-02-20T01:46:24+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Yo, there's something weird in your video. Also, the OD on Easy and Normal should be reduced to make the timing changes and choppy rhythm a bit more playable.

Anyway, I'm here to shoot a couple of stars. Hope I'll be able to mod it when I finish with the maps from my queue! (if you don't mind, ofc).

Hm.... the video might do this because the song file doesn't have the 'intro' that the video have (it would have it with some edit, but the .mp3 quality would suffer a bit (or a lot) when doing such edit). I'd set audio preview to the same amount of time of the video offset, but now set audio preview to 0 (zero) and, once tested, applied on every diff.

Thanks for the stars =^.^= and take your time (: Family, work and school, these three in first place c:

Att.

Edit: WHOA SO MANY STAAAAAARZ ^O^

riffy

osu! Alumni

Joined December 2010

riffy 2014-02-21T14:46:17+00:00

Yo, not-so-random mod because you're awesome.

[General]

Man, don't lie to us, that's clearly NOT a heavy metal song, sounds more like alternative metal. (Wiki) Also, you may want to add Toxicity to the tqgs, it's the name of the album.
Note: don't forget to add SOAD to the tags, I think you know why

Blue and purple colors are pretty similar, bring some vary, use more of them! See the box below for some example!

[Colours]
Combo1 : 184,201,182
Combo2 : 189,176,164
Combo3 : 181,190,193
Combo4 : 75,74,85
Combo5 : 49,83,111
Combo6 : 203,179,173

Please, reduce the sound of this spinner. It'd really fit with the music + it sounds kinda weird as it is.
Note: oh, and maybe you should consider muting spinner-bonus.wav as well. I think it sounds a bit off and doesn't really fits with this song.

[Easy]

Honestly, I feel like you have to reduce the OD here. You current OD is a bit too high because the song has some BPM changes and 3/2 beats which are rather hard for beginners. Reducing OD would make your map a bit friendlier towards beginners.
00:35:687 (3,1) - I don't want to bother you with nazi stuff, but the flow feels kinda wrong here. It is catchable, but the transition gives an unpleasant feeling. I've tried to fix it for you, see if you like it!
Note: 01:34:494 (1,2) - pretty much the same happens here. Though the diff is quite slow and it doesn't feel that bad, but if you have any better ideas, please go ahead and change it!
01:38:984 (5) - and 02:28:626 (5) - please, consider adding a new combo here. You need it to emphasize the BPM vhanges and to follow music a bit better. It may look a bit confusing, but I'm sure that it's needed here to emphasize players about the BPM changes
02:44:371 (2,3) - i kinda didn't like your rhythm here, it feels a bit complicated. Why don't you make it a bit more simple and follow vocals here? my example
Note: 02:53:146 (2,3) and 02:56:090 (2,3) - the rhythm feels kinda repetitive, do the sae here, I guess. Or keep it this way to bring some vary and make your map a bit more interesting
02:53:146 (2,3) - nazi - try to make a bblanket here example or use some simple flow here. Either way you choose it will improve the transition between (3) and (1), imo.
03:19:279 (2) - just amazing. Love everything about this slider, it's sound, it's shape and the flow it gives! Great idea! ♥

You never disappoint me, great diff!

[Normal]

Try to reduce OD, it may be a bit hard to deal with all these BPM changes, though they are minor, they're A LOT of them. Normal-players may be confused with such complicated timing.
01:38:984 (5) - pretty much the same as on Easy diff, I'd emphasize such BPM changes with new combos, it fits with the music + it makes the BPM/offset changes a bit more understandable
01:51:474 (4,1) - the transition feels kinda awkward here. It is catchable, but well, the flow isn't really good, imo. Maybe it's just me, that'd be great to get some more opinions on this part, tho
03:48:683 (2,1) - you have no taiko/o!m specific iffs, so players will play standard diffs in their modes. This pattern becomes unacceptable and too hard in o!m and really unreadable in taiko. Please, try to avoid such stuff when it's possible, place spnners to existing beats!

Everything is pretty nice. Good job with the diff!

[Hard]

00:40:921 (3) - I'd use NCs to mphasize such slowdowns. Those, who play hard diffs are probably not used to sudden slowdowns, so it may confuse them a bit.
01:15:651 (6,7) - this would flow much better if you change it's direction, I think.
01:46:465 (1) - not a fan of such sliders, they may fit, but it's kinda unpleasant when the second reverse-arrow apears. If I were you, I'd replace such sliders with something like this
Note: same applies for all similar sliders, ofc. Oh, and probably you should get more opinions about such things. It may be just me ><
02:45:814 (1,2) - just a little overlap which looks a bit out of style, so I'd recommend you to fix it. It'll also improve your flow!

Well mapped, that's exactly what I love!

[Insane]

I would reduce the OD here as well. So many BPM changes and OD8 may be TOO hard and probably won't be a pleasant experience. Anyway, get more opinions about this one.

Perfecto! Personally, I'd add some more jumps to loud drum beats, but it's not a big deal. I loved the diff.

Great mapset! Have some star(s)!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-02-22T01:42:14+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Yo, not-so-random mod because you're awesome.

[General]
Man, don't lie to us, that's clearly NOT a heavy metal song, sounds more like alternative metal. (Wiki) Also, you may want to add Toxicity to the tqgs, it's the name of the album. ► Done.
Note: don't forget to add SOAD to the tags, I think you know why ► Good
Blue and purple colors are pretty similar, bring some vary, use more of them! See the box below for some example!
colors
[Colours]
Combo1 : 184,201,182
Combo2 : 189,176,164
Combo3 : 181,190,193
Combo4 : 75,74,85
Combo5 : 49,83,111
Combo6 : 203,179,173
►►► Good colors c: Copied
Please, reduce the sound of this spinner. It'd really fit with the music + it sounds kinda weird as it is.
Note: oh, and maybe you should consider muting spinner-bonus.wav as well. I think it sounds a bit off and doesn't really fits with this song. ► Doing it.
[Easy]
Honestly, I feel like you have to reduce the OD here. You current OD is a bit too high because the song has some BPM changes and 3/2 beats which are rather hard for beginners. Reducing OD would make your map a bit friendlier towards beginners. ► So I'd applied now the OD scheme of 1-3-5-7 for E-N-H-I respectively.
00:35:687 (3,1) - I don't want to bother you with nazi stuff, but the flow feels kinda wrong here. It is catchable, but the transition gives an unpleasant feeling. I've tried to fix it for you, see if you like it! ► Tried something like because of further patterns. Modified some of them tho...
Note: 01:34:494 (1,2) - pretty much the same happens here. Though the diff is quite slow and it doesn't feel that bad, but if you have any better ideas, please go ahead and change it!
01:38:984 (5) - and 02:28:626 (5) - please, consider adding a new combo here. You need it to emphasize the BPM vhanges and to follow music a bit better. It may look a bit confusing, but I'm sure that it's needed here to emphasize players about the BPM changes ► Good
02:44:371 (2,3) - i kinda didn't like your rhythm here, it feels a bit complicated. Why don't you make it a bit more simple and follow vocals here? my example ► Redesigned them.
Note: 02:53:146 (2,3) and 02:56:090 (2,3) - the rhythm feels kinda repetitive, do the sae here, I guess. Or keep it this way to bring some vary and make your map a bit more interesting
02:53:146 (2,3) - nazi - try to make a bblanket here example or use some simple flow here. Either way you choose it will improve the transition between (3) and (1), imo. ► Redesigned both (2,3) pairs of the symmetry.
03:19:279 (2) - just amazing. Love everything about this slider, it's sound, it's shape and the flow it gives! Great idea! ♥ ► <3

You never disappoint me, great diff!
[Normal]
Try to reduce OD, it may be a bit hard to deal with all these BPM changes, though they are minor, they're A LOT of them. Normal-players may be confused with such complicated timing. ► So I'd applied now the OD scheme of 1-3-5-7 for E-N-H-I respectively.
01:38:984 (5) - pretty much the same as on Easy diff, I'd emphasize such BPM changes with new combos, it fits with the music + it makes the BPM/offset changes a bit more understandable ► Done.
01:51:474 (4,1) - the transition feels kinda awkward here. It is catchable, but well, the flow isn't really good, imo. Maybe it's just me, that'd be great to get some more opinions on this part, tho ► Hm... kept it as it's jonathanlfj's influence (from some certain map I don't remember now ><)
03:48:683 (2,1) - you have no taiko/o!m specific iffs, so players will play standard diffs in their modes. This pattern becomes unacceptable and too hard in o!m and really unreadable in taiko. Please, try to avoid such stuff when it's possible, place spnners to existing beats! ► At least at easier diffs, sure (:

Everything is pretty nice. Good job with the diff!
[Hard]
00:40:921 (3) - I'd use NCs to mphasize such slowdowns. Those, who play hard diffs are probably not used to sudden slowdowns, so it may confuse them a bit. ► Well... too many slowings with too many NCs... if some BAT suggest it, I'll do, but it feels not too suitable to have such ?NC span? -- because I usually place NC for each 1 or 2 stanzas, except if the song itself feels requesting for more (e.g., real BPM changes -- marked by red lines)
01:15:651 (6,7) - this would flow much better if you change it's direction, I think. ► Redesigned this part a bit.
01:46:465 (1) - not a fan of such sliders, they may fit, but it's kinda unpleasant when the second reverse-arrow apears. If I were you, I'd replace such sliders with something like this ► This was made mostly for add variety (or too many 1/2 ones in same style) and, also, for lack of space. I would try stacked 1/2 sliders (like these ones here), but unfortunately, they're unrankable. But when the rules change about slider stacking, I'll feel more free to change it (:
Note: same applies for all similar sliders, ofc. Oh, and probably you should get more opinions about such things. It may be just me ><
02:45:814 (1,2) - just a little overlap which looks a bit out of style, so I'd recommend you to fix it. It'll also improve your flow!

Well mapped, that's exactly what I love!
[Insane]
I would reduce the OD here as well. So many BPM changes and OD8 may be TOO hard and probably won't be a pleasant experience. Anyway, get more opinions about this one. ► So I'd applied now the OD scheme of 1-3-5-7 for E-N-H-I respectively.

Perfecto! Personally, I'd add some more jumps to loud drum beats, but it's not a big deal. I loved the diff.
Great mapset! Have some star(s)!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Thhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks Bakari (:

Aaaaand....

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-03-03T16:19:25+00:00

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-03-04T03:12:07+00:00

M4M from ur queue

[Insane]
00:32:732 (5) - NC?
00:45:409 - needs something here
00:51:493 (7) - this seems better

00:57:529 - why put such a strong sound in the middle of a slider?
01:09:582 - ^
00:56:775 (6) - NC?
02:03:033 (6) - ^
02:38:614 (6) - ^
01:03:947 (10) - maybe split this combo a bit
01:34:494 (1,2) - (nazi) fix blanket a bit
01:35:623 (3,4) - ^
02:37:722 (3) - the jump can catch people off guard, most would think this would be ctrl + g'd
02:57:563 (1,2) - meh this overlap
02:59:219 (4) - finish at head like the previous ones?
03:16:688 (4) - consider ctrl g
03:19:649 (4) - ^
03:43:184 (4) - ^
03:34:534 (4,5) - they touch, space out a bit
03:35:826 (1,2) - ^
03:38:040 (7,8) - ^

[Hard]
00:36:062 - add circle or something
00:57:529 - ^
00:48:255 (5,7) - confusing/hard to read imo
02:10:986 (2) - ctrl g?
02:12:489 (5) - ^
02:15:682 (4) - i think it would be better if you shortened this to a 1/2 slider and added a circle at where it used to start
02:57:563 (1,2) - blanket?
03:41:351 (5,2) - stack?

[Normal]
01:03:947 (4) - clap sounds kinda weird
01:04:312 (1) - reverse 1 more time? DS it properly afterwards ofc
01:05:817 (3) - ^
02:35:404 (2) - finish at end?
02:46:908 (2) - ^

[Easy]
01:43:460 (1,3) - careful not to overlap
03:10:431 (2,1) - blanket?

Hope this helps

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-03-04T19:32:21+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
M4M from ur queue

[Insane]
00:32:732 (5) - NC? ► Good idea!
00:45:409 - needs something here ► Added this and redesigned some parts.
00:51:493 (7) - this seems better
SPOILER
►►► Changed. (there was an anti-blanket here...)
00:57:529 - why put such a strong sound in the middle of a slider? ► Due a couple of things: (a) it's not so strong compared to their neighbors, and (b) it wasn't part of the original project (note that 00:57:341 (9,10,11,1) draws a stylized "S" on screen.
01:09:582 - ^ ► Hm... Here, changed to a note + 1/2 slider (improve symmetry on Y-axis and enhance the beat with a clap)
00:56:775 (6) - NC? ► Done.
02:03:033 (6) - ^ ► Done.
02:38:614 (6) - ^ ► Done (here and in a few non-mentioned parts for consistency)
01:03:947 (10) - maybe split this combo a bit ► It's near of the 2nd measure (really doing NCs every two measures, except for some different parts as you pointed above), and it don't feel suitable to have NC right before another NC -- at least not in this song (really, some songs request them, specially in calmer moments/sparse mapped sections).
01:34:494 (1,2) - (nazi) fix blanket a bit ► Done.
01:35:623 (3,4) - ^ ► Done.
02:37:722 (3) - the jump can catch people off guard, most would think this would be ctrl + g'd ► Hm... it's true... especially for who plays with HD/FL first time (due to absence of approach circle). And.... Well, let's gather some further opinions, leaving this unchanged. (perhaps this part would be changed at all, depending on where the latter and further notes are).
02:57:563 (1,2) - meh this overlap ► This is intentional and well-done as most perfectly I would make, but... you'd pointed it and gave me a chance for... testing a Ctrl-G 02:58:115 (2,3) and... Good idea! It's amazing! The Ctrl-G on 02:58:115 (2,3) makes such "meh" overlap disappear magically and (hallelujah?) it also gives an amazing flow (Y). \:D/
02:59:219 (4) - finish at head like the previous ones? ► Done (and also added finish at 02:47:455 (4) for consistency on the last chorus)
03:16:688 (4) - consider ctrl g ► Good
03:19:649 (4) - ^ ► ^
03:43:184 (4) - ^ ► ok
03:34:534 (4,5) - they touch, space out a bit ► ok.
03:35:826 (1,2) - ^ ► ok
03:38:040 (7,8) - ^ ► ok

[Hard]
00:36:062 - add circle or something ► ok
00:57:529 - ^ ► ok
00:48:255 (5,7) - confusing/hard to read imo ► Shortened (5) to 1/2, removed the notes (6,7) and added a 1/2-repeating slider -- easier to read and hit ~.~ (In truth, the original pattern wasn't too rare in osu...)
02:10:986 (2) - ctrl g? ► YES!!!
02:12:489 (5) - ^ ► YES!!!
02:15:682 (4) - i think it would be better if you shortened this to a 1/2 slider and added a circle at where it used to start ► sure; done.
02:57:563 (1,2) - blanket? ► yes
03:41:351 (5,2) - stack? ► no. Instead, adjusted some notes to prevent touching.

[Normal]
01:03:947 (4) - clap sounds kinda weird ► Fixed.
01:04:312 (1) - reverse 1 more time? DS it properly afterwards ofc ► yes
01:05:817 (3) - ^ ► yes
02:35:404 (2) - finish at end? ► yes
02:46:908 (2) - ^ ► yes

[Easy]
01:43:460 (1,3) - careful not to overlap ► ok. Moved some notes a bit.
03:10:431 (2,1) - blanket? ► no blanket intended here.

Hope this helps

Helped a lot (and helped bring some new ideas). Thanks Kibbleru ~.~

Att.

EDIT:

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-03-10T23:29:24+00:00

Testplayed in TAIKO mode.

RESULTS OF TESTPLAY IN TAIKO MODE

Probably it's a bit harder than Futsuu. Possibly... Futsuu+ or Futsuu++

How you think about mapping a specific Taiko mapset on this song ????

:3

Valseem_old

Valseem_old 2014-03-16T11:22:10+00:00

Why is this not ranked yet... call BATS

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-03-16T14:20:07+00:00

Valseem wrote:
Why is this not ranked yet... call BATS

Good idea

*going to #modreqs to call BATs here*

_________________________________________________________________________________________

EDIT:

:: INSANE TESTPLAY RESULT ::

Watch the Testplay here → http://puu.sh/82JBk.osr ← (and even within streamless maps, I still playing bad ><)

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Lucy Suzunia

Joined November 2010

Lucy Suzunia 2014-04-06T13:28:01+00:00

This Map is awesome, Pls rank! x3

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-05-05T03:25:28+00:00

ŐSZINTÉN Szólva...¹ eu não sei o quanto é preciso pra ranquear... Não sei se é preciso quinhentas pratas... Não sei se é preciso ser parente do George Soros [isto é, concordar com tudo o que ele faz em sigilo]... Realmente, eu não sei.
2. Mas pressinto que, perto de mim, está a chegar um sentimento um tanto conhecido, um tanto parecido com o que a Bounce Babe nos havia relatado há algum tempo.
3. Porque o que acontece quando lançamos quilos e mais quilos de sementes num terreno e, contudo, nenhum fruto vemos? Ou, se nalgum negócio labutamos e lucro não conseguimos?
4. Certamente que a semeadura, infrutífera, cessará; certamente a empresa insolvente falirá.
5. Pois com o quê compraremos novas sementes? E com que dinheiro tocaremos a empresa adiante?
6. Desde algum tempo, e este não muito nem pouco, tenho visto aqui ser um terreno infértil, pomar infrutífero.
7. Sobretudo, porque pressinto que a tequila, chamada Poder, tenha feito uma devassa nas cabeças dos cabeças de chave, tornando-os introspectiva e virtualmente improdutivos para a comunidade, no meio da qual agonizo.
8. Porém, luto com uma certeza divina: a de que, mais dia, menos dia, o bem vencerá.
9. Todavia, isto não elimina a minha angústia em ver que trabalho, trabalho e trabalho aqui e, ainda assim, frutos não vejo isto produzir.
10. Assim desejo fortemente que haja uma dança brutal das cadeiras, removendo-se todo o sangue velho e coagulado deste corpo; promovendo saúde de caráter e espírito de integridade neste egrégio corpo gerencial de nossa organização.
11. E tudo para que, no futuro, façamos mais! E para que, no futuro, sejamos mais! Nós mesmos, e não outros, estranhos e desconhecidos em termos de caráter.
12. Esta declaração a faço notória a todos que a ler consigam.

(If you need some translation, ask me. Google Translate and machine translations aren't reliable. Not currently, nor for the language level I used here).

___________________________________________________
¹ Francamente...

Mezzaten

Mezzaten 2014-05-12T18:06:30+00:00

Achei ar9 sinceramente desnecessário, ar9 num mapa com essa BPM torna ele chato e maçante de se jogar, use ar8. Só uma sugestão, tho. Também sugiro encontrar outro vídeo, porque o "PRESSIONE ESC PARA SAIR DE TELA CHEIA" entrega que tu gravou do youtube e isso é, well, meio feio.

~~add banana in tags~~

edit: pra não dizerem que eu só falei pra pôr ar8 pra eu conseguir jogar o mapa de dt

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Sieg

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2014-05-12T18:13:02+00:00

DO
NOT
DROP

timing is fine for me, 1st try

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-05-12T22:30:03+00:00

Mezzaten wrote:
Achei ar9 sinceramente desnecessário, ar9 num mapa com essa BPM torna ele chato e maçante de se jogar, use ar8. Só uma sugestão, tho. Também sugiro encontrar outro vídeo, porque o "PRESSIONE ESC PARA SAIR DE TELA CHEIA" entrega que tu gravou do youtube e isso é, well, meio feio.

► Quanto ao AR, ajustei pra 8. Eu já estranhava mesmo, mas queria ter uma segunda opinião. Aliás, não sei o porquê de tanta gente obcecada por AR10... é AR10 pra lá e pra cá....

► Quanto ao vídeo, troquei por um outro que consegui baixar do Dailymotion. Sim, a qualidade não é lá essas coisas, mas, pelo menos, não tem aquela "publicidade indireta do Youtube" rs... Uma nota sobre aquele vídeo: eu tinha gravado ele usando o Fraps (capturando a tela), pois na época eu não conseguia baixar de outra forma. Nem mesmo aqueles "online converters" funfavam ><

~~add banana in tags~~ ► só se for de dinamite kkkk

edit: pra não dizerem que eu só falei pra pôr ar8 pra eu conseguir jogar o mapa de dt

Meus mapas não constumam ser tão difíceis, digo, impossíveis.
A diff mais difícil que já fiz foi [Deep Love] em Ichinen, mas é porque tem muitos triples e algumas streams ─ coisa difícil pra mim (como [todo "bom"] singletapper ;p eu [ainda] não sei streamar.... mas já vou tentando no insane de Don't Let It Break Your Heart de Coldplay que o Deed fez, muito bom por sinal).

Obrigado Mezz

Edit: Kd'ed your post because you helped me fix the most serious issues.

Sieg wrote:
DO
NOT
DROP

timing is fine for me, 1st try
SPOILER

Thanks Sieg (: Let's go forth !

Polaco

Joined August 2011

Polaco 2014-05-15T20:57:57+00:00

Sieg wrote:
DO
NOT
DROP

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-05-16T16:13:46+00:00

I've called a BAT to take an uncompromised look at this map. His modding list feels the longer so far, so it can take several days, or weeks, or months, or years, so don't worry if this mapset remains so long on Pending realm. Someday, the prize of "The Oldest Map Before Ranking" will be mine. And yes, I'll keep mapping other songs too ─ including a song that will be the most polemical ever on osu! XD

Also I've say the BIG THANKS to each one of the 21+ people that favorited the map (it's 22+ minus me).

About the diff naming, I've had decided to follow the standard naming, but in these latter days I wanna change the Insane to "Aerials", the song name. Perhaps I'll do in the next update. Or not. (lol).

I'll keep the three completed mapsets on Pending, no matter how much I map furthermore. They're all going to be Ranked.

Att.

EDIT: PS: BATS, please take a look here! I won't turn this thread in my blog!

Helios_Zul

Joined September 2012

Helios_Zul 2014-06-01T21:01:15+00:00

Hi Alarido

I Found A Video That Has A High Quality And No Ads On It =)
Here It Is...

High Quality

Hope This Will Helpful

Good Luck Alarido!!!

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-06-03T00:13:10+00:00

Changed video to the better one ~.~ Thanks Helios_Zul ^.^ TERIMA KASIH ~.~

Eni

Joined May 2013

Eni 2014-06-09T23:47:13+00:00

RANKRANKRANK

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-06-10T00:01:00+00:00

Nowadays' BATS are afraid of ranking this. Unfortunately ;(

If I could travel back to that glorious osu!past when RandomJibberish, Doomsday and Larto were BATS ><

Eni

Joined May 2013

Eni 2014-06-10T14:20:06+00:00

osu! Needs more non-Japanese songs!

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-07-01T00:18:51+00:00

oh man i remember modding this a long time ago @_@

man that shetty blanket / nc mod makes me cry lol...

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-07-01T16:42:25+00:00

Added Taiko diffs (Muzu/Oni) as of July 1st, 2014.

Therefore, this mapset needs LOTS of Taiko modders (:

Some Std mods also needed.

Att.

Eni

Joined May 2013

Eni 2014-07-02T02:58:29+00:00

!!

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-07-10T04:34:19+00:00

Now I need Taiko modders so I could keep learning Taiko mapping.
And after a lot of improvements on my taikos, will need a taiko icon too. (likewise in my first ranked mapset, Ichinen, which it has taiko diffs from Dekaane).

Eni

Joined May 2013

Eni 2014-07-27T15:58:06+00:00

I would map Kantan/Futsuu but there is only hard/insane in most taiko/standard mapsets.

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-07-27T20:08:59+00:00

Project Railgun wrote:
I would map Kantan/Futsuu but there is only hard/insane in most taiko/standard mapsets.

Good idea

~.~ why not?

Feel free to do (:

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-08-25T21:56:50+00:00

If some osu! Standard BAT say the osu! Standard diffs are fully OK, I can remove the Taiko diffs right before he/she bubbles it. Yeah, my taiko diffs worth nothing.

EDIT: Removed all Taiko diffs.

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-08-29T21:51:25+00:00

I'd removed the Taiko diffs. I hope don't turn this thread into my blog, but help is needed to rank this.

Eni

Joined May 2013

Eni 2014-08-29T22:33:14+00:00

Lets go, Alarido! System Of A Down! Aerials! Rank!

Maldita Sea

Joined January 2014

Maldita Sea 2014-09-07T17:21:19+00:00

On a side note: Why do most brazilians I know like SOAD?

It is awesome that they have good taste.

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2014-12-06T00:35:53+00:00

Sieg

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2015-01-09T18:59:15+00:00

~~hello there, going to do smth here soon~~
http://puu.sh/eJPlV/225aa8daef.mp3
offset 31475 bpm 80
apply this and we will be able to move map forward
there can be few timing jitters but just +-5ms so not a big deal, let me know if you find something wrong
oh and... you video is most likely will go unsync

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2015-01-19T22:16:50+00:00

Sieg wrote:
~~hello there, going to do smth here soon~~
http://puu.sh/eJPlV/225aa8daef.mp3
offset 31475 bpm 80
apply this and we will be able to move map forward
there can be few timing jitters but just +-5ms so not a big deal, let me know if you find something wrong
oh and... you video is most likely will go unsync

Is it truth that every timing section is really 80, not the current ones (or their values divided by 2) ?

The whole thing became confused, so I'm afraid because it can take more two years to adjust it all...

...unless a macro or something could be do these... I would work something in newLisp or Lazarus (Free Pascal) or Jscript... but nothing seems to appear here...

Trying, even trying...

Sieg

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2015-01-19T22:26:10+00:00

well.. leave this up to me then, I'll handle for you

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2015-01-19T22:45:40+00:00

Sieg wrote:
well.. leave this up to me then, I'll handle for you

Sure ? ♥ ♥ ♥

If you want to do this in the Insane, I can replicate it for all other diffs (:

Sieg

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2015-01-19T23:17:40+00:00

Alarido wrote:
If you want to do this in the Insane, I can replicate it for all other diffs (:

http://puu.sh/eKTvh/272bc69735.osu
contact me if you unsure that you'll be able to do the same on your other diffs or have any additional questions

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2015-01-20T22:58:41+00:00

NOW READY ^^

Updated!

Thanks Sieg!
Timing changes are vital changes, sine qua non condition for every mapping. So kd'ed (only) the first post ~.~

Sieg

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2015-01-21T06:05:34+00:00

I'm going to recheck this on next week, would be great if you improve your hitsounds before, atm they sounds way too monotonically

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2015-01-21T13:40:41+00:00

Hisounds deleted and redone. Hope they look better this time, although I am (and still being) very weak on this aspect ><

_______________________________
LN: Hm... remembering Larto, I reminded someone mentioned him @ p/3653003 (two posts before my moddings). Tested and really it reminds me (or feels to me a bit alike) some Larto things from Rihanna - Disturbia (I tighly-and-deeply LOVE that craziest map!!!)

Sieg

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2015-01-28T08:16:48+00:00

Alarido wrote:
Hisounds deleted and redone. Hope they look better this time, although I am (and still being) very weak on this aspect ><

If you feel that you very weak in hitsounds ask somebody to help you out. You should. Really.

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2015-01-30T02:36:11+00:00

Title: Dexfrild's support in progress.
Description: Hitsound files changed and replaced (and raised volume of some of them on behalf of Kazuya suggest). Then, implanted in the Insane diff. Hitsounding will be implanted later (possibly tomorrow).
Recommendation for modders: wait until full update (probably until next sunday-tuesday).

DexFrild

Joined December 2010

DexFrild 2015-01-30T17:58:45+00:00

Hi

Firstly, duplicate soft\normalsliderslide.waw and rename to Drumsliderslide. DO NOT forget, you have two custom drum samplesets.
Then duplicate soft-hitwhistle and rename to soft-slidertick

Set slidertick rate to 1 in Normal.
And I noticed a strange thing.. In Hard diff your break starts at 01:20:225 - I think you should use it for all diffs :3
And one more thing. It's up to you, I suggest you to mute final spinners.
!Download hitsounded diffs!

Write me if you have troubles.
Good Luck

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2015-01-30T23:11:52+00:00

Thanks Dexfrild !!!

Mapset updated, hitsoundings fixed.

Sieg

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2015-02-02T19:35:29+00:00

[General]

I don't recommend you to silence both spinnerspin and spinnerbonus
Raise hs volume a bit 5-10% should be fine
Video quality is so bad, you should get new one with better quality, I can do this if you need

[Easy]

01:40:475 (1,2) - fix DS here

[Normal]

02:35:600 (2) - is this snapped properly, because it seems like you missed strong beat 02:36:350 ()

[Freedom]

[Hard]

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2015-02-04T12:09:10+00:00

Sieg wrote:
[General]
► Removed both.
I don't recommend you to silence both spinnerspin and spinnerbonus ► Excluded then silent 'spinnerspin.wav'.
Raise hs volume a bit 5-10% should be fine ► Done.
Video quality is so bad, you should get new one with better quality, I can do this if you need ► Because tried to reduce its size (it was 17 MB, reduced to 11 MB to get the total Beatmap size < 24 MB.
[Easy]
01:40:475 (1,2) - fix DS here ► Done.
[Normal]
02:35:600 (2) - is this snapped properly, because it seems like you missed strong beat 02:36:350 () ► Yes, it is. Then added a note for the missing beat.
[Freedom]
► Done.
[Hard]
► Done.

► If you can get a video of better quality, feel free to do.
► Everything else fixed.

Updated.

Att.

Sieg

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2015-02-04T15:33:03+00:00

huh, alight, keep your video if you want, it seems like there is only not-so-good versions around

Sonnyc

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2015-02-04T16:44:14+00:00

For all of your diffs:

03:53:975 - Having a hit sound here is not a good idea for me because the music is almost silenced down.

Normal:

02:37:475 (6) - Consider adding a new combo since things went a little too long.
03:01:100 (3) - Spacing could've been improved.
03:17:975 (2,3) - This symmetry spacing can definitely be improved.
03:27:725 (3,1) - Check spacing.
03:30:725 (3) - ^

Hard:

01:09:725 - Adding a note fits better. If your intention of 01:09:912 (6,7) were to follow the drums, then you should change 01:08:975 (4,5) to a rhythm to this to make the emphasis more effective.
01:20:225 - This is the only difficulty where the break starts here. Please make this setting consistent through all difficulties.

Good job you've done here in that patterns were interacting each other not only with symmetries, but also by 180 angle rotations.

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2015-02-04T17:45:55+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
For all of your diffs:

03:53:975 - Having a hit sound here is not a good idea for me because the music is almost silenced down. ► There's really no added hitsound here. It sounds louder than it should be here due to custom 'soft-hitnormal.wav'.
(*) Solved by adding a green line with the regular (default) Soft sampleset and then lowered to 10%.

Normal:

02:37:475 (6) - Consider adding a new combo since things went a little too long. ► Done.
03:01:100 (3) - Spacing could've been improved. ► Done.
03:17:975 (2,3) - This symmetry spacing can definitely be improved. ► Fixed.
03:27:725 (3,1) - Check spacing. ► Fixed.
03:30:725 (3) - ^ ► Fixed too.

Hard:

01:09:725 - Adding a note fits better. If your intention of 01:09:912 (6,7) were to follow the drums, then you should change 01:08:975 (4,5) to a rhythm to this to make the emphasis more effective. ► Done. Feels good. Rearranged some notes too.
01:20:225 - This is the only difficulty where the break starts here. Please make this setting consistent through all difficulties. ► Done (readjusted in all diffs).

Good job you've done here in that patterns were interacting each other not only with symmetries, but also by 180 angle rotations.

Thanks Sonnyc :3

Updated.

Sonnyc

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2015-02-04T17:58:39+00:00

Heart.

Alarido

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Alarido 2015-02-04T18:27:25+00:00

Thanks ~.~

Thanks everyone :3

pkk

Joined November 2013

pkk 2015-02-05T00:13:12+00:00

Congratulations Alarido! It's finally ranked

Meowcenaries

Joined December 2010

Meowcenaries 2015-02-05T02:00:02+00:00

congratulations!

Eni

Joined May 2013

Eni 2015-02-07T01:25:10+00:00

Aerials <3

fabriciorby

Joined December 2009

fabriciorby 2015-05-14T01:54:55+00:00

BOA ALARIDO MAP BOM DA PORRA
PEGUEI #1 PRO BRASIL

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