Fantastica wrote:

Hey LIAR! :v Amazing song and storyboard :3

first I want to say, I'm bad on english T.T and I'm not too good on modding T.T
Hi~~ here's for m4m queue

General

1. Unherited timing points (Normal) - (Hard, Insane) These are fine since they don't affect gameplay at all
2. 01:18:757 missing lyrics storyboard what do you mean? I can see them o.o
3. 02:51:512 missing lyrics storyboard same o.o

Normal

1. 00:38:748 (AiMod) Object end isn't snapped fixed
2. 00:43:096 Slider make it unsnapped because of the unherited timing point at 00:43:402 , make it 3 circle notes at 00:43:096 , 00:43:691, 00:44:271fixed
3. 01:06:879 (Aimod) object end isn't snapped deleted return and added note, hope its fine
4. 01:37:035 (Aimod) object end isn't snapped. That make the hitclap late fixed
5. 01:39:339 put hitclap and remove hitwhistle, 01:39:630 put hitwhistle remove hitclap, 01:39:921 put hitclap remove hitwhistle, 01:40:503 put hitclap at start silder and at end slider, then remove hitwhistle at end of slider fixed
6. 01:05:435 (AiMod) kiai isn't snapped

Hard

1. 01:06:739 (Aimod) Object End isn't snapped
2. 01:08:042 IMO... Change to [img]puu.sh/dAtOf/49f385771a.jpg[/img]

done

Insane

1. Check your Aimod =="
   [img]puu.sh/dAuPv/1c62f9820a.jpg[/img] yeah lol i knew there were lots of those but i was so lazy, fixed

I'm really enjoy to mod this mapset because I like the song :3
Hope it's gonna ranked :3

Snepif wrote:

Fantastica wrote:

General

1. 01:18:757 missing lyrics storyboard what do you mean? I can see them o.o
2. 02:51:512 missing lyrics storyboard same o.o

thanks will mod yours

Snepif wrote:

Fantastica wrote:

1. 01:18:757 missing lyrics storyboard what do you mean? I can see them o.o
2. 02:51:512 missing lyrics storyboard same o.o

SPOILER

52,244,14435,6,0,P|171:349|317:304,1,315.000012016297,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,244,16463,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,160,16753,6,0,B|268:84|192:260|72:156,1,315.000012016297,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,76,18782,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,48,19072,6,0,L|156:372,1,315.000012016297,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

maybe something like this?

SPOILER

Your Good Self wrote:

M4M from your queue

[General]
Not sure if this difficulty spread is rankable. Hard to Insane is a jump from 3.41 to 5.46 stars, skipping the Insane difficulty range entirely. Insane should be renamed Expert/Extra, then get another Insane that's ~4-5 stars (by GD or otherwise). yeaaah i imagined ppl would point that out. if i get one or two more suggestions on that ill map it T_T

Also getting this problem. I think it could be something to do with non-alphanumeric filenames. could it be an aibat/aimod bug? check the map while on editor and tell me if you see the lyrics at those times. If they are there, I won't change anything, since it'd mean it's an aimod bug. I asked some people and they see 'em.


[Easy]
00:16:753 (1,1) - Overlap doesn't look good. And I think it'll look better if the second slider went through the middle of the arc of the first. It'll involve shifting the earlier notes a little, so I'll just give some screenshots and code as suggestions. yep i did this diff in an hour last night at like 2 AM so idk why I did this overlap. fixed

SPOILER

52,244,14435,6,0,P|171:349|317:304,1,315.000012016297,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,244,16463,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,160,16753,6,0,B|268:84|192:260|72:156,1,315.000012016297,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,76,18782,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,48,19072,6,0,L|156:372,1,315.000012016297,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:29:217 (3) - Flow can be better here, 180° backwards is a bit sharp. Also you can map the downbeat 00:30:666 changed the slider a beat but I won't map that downbeat. I'm following the vocals here atm

maybe something like this?

01:08:042 (2,2) - Small overlap fixed
01:12:390 (1,1) - Recovery time might be a bit short? t/241019 I know it's not a rule yet but just in case. The thing is this diff is mapped as if it was 103-104 bpm, instead of 206-208 like the others, so that rule errr.. it applies for 160 bpm and this is a bit less, idk, we'll see, not changing yet
02:59:346 (1,1) - Are double spinners considered readable for an Easy? :/ sure why not


[Normal]
It looks like some a lot of stuff is unsnapped, especially the beginning. Also some sliders don't have the right SV, so they go out of snap too. oooh what happened here is that I modified the SV accidentaly in the .osu, fixed lmao.

00:41:069 (2,1) - That's a pretty big jump this is DS'ed tho
01:00:785 (1,2) - ^ fixed

00:43:691 (4,1,2) - the heck?
00:47:749 (4,1,2,3) - ^ ok there's obviously something wrong with the SV multipliers yeah that was embarrasing, accidentaly overwrote the code in the .osu, fixed lmao

01:39:921 (3) - Looks like the SV multiplier should have been 1.00x, idk why it's 0.85x

01:39:921 (3,4) - Flow will be better if you curved (3) the other way i dont like the flow it creates with the previous notes 1 and 2 though

SPOILER

02:33:554 (1,3) - Stack? done
03:06:013 (1) - Could use a different slider shape here. Maybe a loop? i like it :c

Not much to point out because of all the unsnapped stuff D: yeah that was embarrassing as fuck


[Hard]
00:14:579 (2,3) - Blanket can be better. Look from 00:14:924 yes
00:34:713 - Add 1 beat slider? nope
00:50:938 (8) - Curve a bit to the left.why? it plays well like this. I don't mean to follow the previous notes shape
01:42:532 (1) - A simple 3-point slider will look neater that is only true cause i suck at slider shapes... fixed q.q
01:57:886 (7) - Would prefer better flow around here. wanted to make it jumpy. play at and you'll see
02:01:658 (5,6) - Parallel sliders could be more parallel. Make sure it's still parallel with 02:02:528 (7,8,9) after fixing yes
02:15:004 (1) - It looks ugly scrunched up like that. I think a straight slider is good enough. uhh i'll decline this one. wanted to make a slow and stretched slider that felt like a "stop" there
02:54:998 (5,6) - Blanket can be better. Look from 02:55:360 done
03:17:610 (1) - Remove the curve ye

[Insane]
A bit hard to play/mod for a low-rank player like me, but I'll try my best.

02:22:830 - You sure love bookmarks lol did it for the sb xD

00:51:517 (1) - Should bounce on the white tick. And maybe have a better blanket around 00:50:648 (7) while you're at it. no it should not. curved it a bit more for the blanket but remember at 9.2 that blanket is barely noticeable. these are things you only notice at the editor, and the map is for playing.
01:42:532 (1) - ^ nope

01:03:116 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can form a more perfect regular pentagon with this. it is not my intention
01:05:435 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ (only (5) is grossly out of place though) again, it is not my intention to have a perfect star
01:59:049 (2,4) - Blanket can be better. Look from 01:58:868 done
02:43:409 (4,6) - Small overlap at ar 9.2 that is not noticeable nor does it affect gameplay.


Hope my mod helped. Good luck!

Alex Li wrote:

from paper modding team

General

is this for ranked? if it is, change the insane to extra and add a insane diff plz yes I will do that
aimod plz

Easy

1. 01:42:532 (3,2) - its great if u dont overlap here changed
2. 01:05:435 (1,2) - fix blanket done

Normal

1. did u follow the ds rule... because a see alot of ds troble in this diff, fine if u are not going for rank fixed
2. 00:14:435 (1) - unsnap fixed
3. 00:14:531 - u dont change sv like that in normal not sure what you mean but I removed almost all SV changes except for the intro
4. 01:51:818 (1,2) - weird rhythm fixed

Hard

1. OMG TIS HARD IS FREAKING AWESOME. im shooting a star just because this hard lol thaaanks :3

Insane

1. 01:14:700 (1,2,3,4) - its better to do a 1243 to have a better flow fixed
2. 01:59:049 (2,4) - blanket

gj

tutuhaha wrote:

take place first
well, who give you those timing point？
actually I only use one ╮(╯▽╰)╭
http://puu.sh/dEEUB/7f713235ca.rar

-Famous- wrote:

M4M request from my Queue

General

1. Check AiMod.
2. AiMod: Try to remove those errors. You should do that. Yeah it's just that some of them have to wait (the filesize for example til the SB gets fixed so I can check that).
3. AiMod: Fix the uninherited timing points. I'd love to know which are the ones that are a problem, since I checked and still don't know, and AiMod doesn't specify anything.

Easy

1. AR 4 at easy? Could be a little bit hard for beginners. You suggest to decrease it? Lower AR is harder to play, like, nobody on earth would be able to play AR1 for instance
2. 00:24:579 (3) - Improve blanket. Move the last slider point 1 grid right. done
3. 00:36:162 (1) - Move that circle to x:432 - y:72 to keep the flow. done
4. 00:41:938 (3) - Spacing to 00:41:069 (2) is different than to 00:42:243 (1). done
5. 01:03:116 (4) - It looks so unfitting. Sorta changed
6. 01:15:279 (1) - Why not blanket with 01:17:598 (3)? While playing a newbie might don't even realize that, but that looks a bit better imo. They are so separated that this blanket is meaningless outside of the editor. Remember notes don't last that long on the playfield after hitting them, while in the editor they turn grey for a moment.
7. 01:17:598 (3) - You could make a better blanket to 01:16:439 (2).done
8. 01:21:089 (6) - If you look closely, the distance is a little bit different. done
9. 01:39:921 (3,4) - ^done
10. 01:41:367 (1,2) - ^ done
11. 01:47:180 (2,3,4) - Suggestion: blanket? But I guess it's hard to read for a newbie then. Ehhh done anyway
12. 01:52:688 (2) - Move that circle one grid left, that it keeps the spacing.done

Normal

1. 00:14:435 (1,2) - Spacing is different.done
2. 00:19:507 (2) - No stack with 00:18:492 (5,6)? done
3. 00:23:130 (5) - Spacing is different.done
4. 00:56:154 (1,2) - I don't know, that could be confuse some normal player. But I guess it's okay. The whole diff is like this
5. 01:20:510 (4,5,6) - That also could confuse normal player. what o.o
6. 01:37:311 (6) - Better blanket. Move the last slider point one grid left. done
7. 01:41:076 (5) - Spacing is different. done
8. 01:53:557 (4) - Blanket. done
9. 02:08:189 (2) - Blanket? nah
10. 02:26:018 (4) - Move that slider to x:244 - y:240 to keep the flow. Then move 02:26:598 (5) 1 grid up and right (x:60 - y:216). done something simillar
11. 02:32:395 (2,1) - Better stack.done
12. 02:35:583 (6,1) - ^ done
13. 02:40:511 (1) - Move that circle to x:320 - y:120 to keep the flow. done
14. 02:49:177 (5) - Move that circle one grid up. done
15. 02:57:317 (3) - Blanket. done
16. 03:03:694 (1,1) - Stack. They are not unstacked on purpose. Easier to read.
17. 03:04:853 (2,2) - ^ same

Hard

1. 00:14:579 (2) - Blanket. done
2. 00:17:768 (4,5) - ^ done
3. 00:19:652 (3) - ^done
4. 00:43:096 (4) - This slow down is very suddenly. You also can't read the slow down, because it's as long as 00:42:822 (3). Try to find a way to show the slow down. Added new combo
5. 00:47:750 (4) - ^ done
6. 00:50:069 (4) - Improve that blanket. done
7. 01:14:129 (1,2) - I see many combo breaks there. Why
8. 01:20:207 (2) - Improve blanket. done
9. 01:23:686 (5,1,2,3) - A little bit confusing. Changed
10. 01:45:869 (6) - Improve blanket.done
11. 01:57:453 (6) - ^ done
12. 02:05:139 (1,2) - Already said above. I see nothing weird with those sliders
13. 02:27:467 (1,2,3,4) - Blanket. Ehh they are ok
14. 02:34:424 (4) - Improve blanket.done
15. 02:38:482 (1) - ^done
16. 02:38:772 (2) - ^done
17. 02:48:456 (6) - Blanket can be improved. done
18. 02:55:433 (6) - ^ done
19. 02:55:868 (7) - ^ Not intended to be a blanket
20. 03:04:556 (4) - Spacing.done

Insanity

1. 00:26:898 (1) - Improve blanket. done
2. 00:41:933 (1,2,1) - This stream is hard to read. Changed
3. 00:50:069 (4) - Improve blanket. done
4. 01:13:115 (6,7) - Stream spacing is different. I see why you did that, but that doesn't really matter. Also the NC isn't necessary. You didn't do both at that stream 02:03:835 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) too.that was an accident
5. 01:19:192 (1) - Improve blanket.done
6. 01:24:252 (2) - ^done
7. 01:33:692 (3) - ^done
8. 01:39:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really hard to read. I disagree
9. 02:11:229 (6) - Improve blanket. done
10. 02:25:148 (1) - ^

Bloodlust

1. 00:19:507 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Stack? done
2. 00:29:797 (5) - Blanket. done
3. 01:14:129 (1) - ^ nope
4. 01:15:279 (5) - Improve blanket. done
5. 01:36:439 (5) - ^ done
6. 01:37:602 (2) - Move that slider 2 grid down to keep the flow.done
7. 01:59:342 (4) - Improve blanket.done
8. 02:00:502 (1) - ^ it is already fine
9. 02:57:317 (3) - ^ done

Much work. Finally done! I like that song. I really enjoyed modding this map. Good luck!~ :3

tutuhaha wrote:

Kind of weird that you still use SV change in easy and normal. Removed SV changes in Easy. But on Normal they are really smooth and not all-of-a-sudden, so I don't think they are a problem. They don't change the way the player plays the map at all, it just adds some more atmosphere. They are like from 1 to 0.85 at most, and spacing doesn't change, so it is not an issue I believe.
actually we only use one sv in low diff right？Unless it's unrankeable i'll keep it this way. There's no logic to not do so.
for all diff
add clap at 02:15:293 I think a whistle is more suitable though.


[Easy]
00:27:188 (5) - I suggest end at 00:27:768 - okii
00:50:938 (3) - clap okii
00:56:154 (2) - NC should begin here I thinkokii

also remapped this diff to make it easier
[Normal]
01:02:536 (4,5,6) - same space, at least make them looks like same okii fixed
01:14:700 (1) - move to here okii
01:35:579 (1,2) - too hard in Normal Fixed
01:52:977 (3,5) - too close fixed
stop here, well I still think you should use the same sv on normal and easy diff, also I suggest use the CS3 ....at least CS3.5 Okay increased circle size. I will remove SV changes in Easy diff, but not in this one. I think they don't add ANY difficulty while playing, but we will see what the gods BATS say.
also remapped this diff to make it easier

[Hard]
00:25:739 (6,7) - dont overlap err why not? added new combo for readability
00:30:811 (x) - add note ok
01:26:436 (1,2) - 01:27:019 (3,4,5,6) - same space? ahh?
01:49:196 (6) - use whislte instead clap ok
02:01:081 (1) - jump should begin here what jump?
02:06:309 (5,6,7) - same space ok
.....well, I dont really like this hard, it is uncomfortable to play for me .This diff requires listening to the music, feeling the drums, and singletapping OR alternating well. If you fail at any of these you fail at my Hard. Sorry it's not your typical brainless 1/2s Hard, which is no challenge for Hard players and after a week or two they move into insanes even though they fail at the, just because they are fun to play. This diff actually requires some musical sense. I wouldn't use the word uncomfortable here, since the flow is pretty good, but rather, that you can't singletap or alternate, or understeand its rhythm (which is always pretty constant, no real "surprises". Anyway it's your opinion and you can find it uncomfortable though, that's fine :3

[Insane]
01:00:924 (x) - add note？nope :c
01:13:115 (6,7) - well.........good idea but I dont like it at all Not sure if you mean the fact that there is a stream or the fact that I created a not-so-hard stream for this diff o:
02:00:936 (3) - because you following the music at first, so is kind of weird that you change to following vocal here (like miss clap on white line Lol there is no clap there at the big white line. But you are right, changed and added whistle in the big white line
02:04:052 (x) - there should has rhythm Don't wanna make it harder and when playing it doesn't feel like there is a note missing there because it almost sounds like my notes are the real stream in the music. Also consistency with the other kiais
02:50:436 (x) - note same baby
02:50:436 (6) - weird..maybe just add a whistle There is no note there atm. If people complain about it I'll change it. Don't really wanna do it

[Bloodlust]
00:27:188 (2) - ctrl+g yess
00:30:811 (x) - suggest add note here yess
00:32:840 (x) - ^ because there are the same rhythm with 00:37:309 (7,1,2) - I don't think that sounds good
00:43:096 (4) - NC yess
01:05:435 (1,2,3,4,5) - try to make it more like a pentagon it was not my intention to make it star-shaped but ok
01:50:511 (7,1,2,3,4) - ^ That would be confusing because the space from 7 to 1 is 1/1
02:05:429 (2) - ctrl+g yess
02:10:939 (6,7) - ctrl+g Nope
02:14:142 (3,4) - weird if you lose this rhythm Why? added nc just for readability
02:53:404 (7,8,9,1,2) - pentagon? yess
03:13:540 (3,4) - hitsound ..........just weird at all The drummer makes.. sort of a "mistake" there. He makes a snare beat at a blue tick, and it would be really crappy if I map it that way...
03:17:308 (5) - clap yess
03:19:186 (1) - clap Hmmm no :C
no more blanket mod （○｀ 3′○）
I still think one red line enough.
better go find someone (Bat) to check it if you still disagree for me

ProgressiveStar wrote:

Here's my mod desu =w=
Great Powerful Song yesss
My MOD is Just my suggestions

Easy
01:07:153 (1) - what about make this slider longer ? yess
02:40:656 (1) - the spinner cover the "Hey" I think can make it like this :

ScreenShot

Hmmm i prefer my way :C

Normal
00:26:898 (1) - like thisyesss, but different way

ScreenShot

01:48:485 (3) - put it left a bit left? why o:
02:40:656 (1) - same as easy, I think "Hey" shouldn't be covered Only covered until half of it :3

Hard
00:30:811 (6) - I think this note cause a mess, could you plaese delete it? yesss
01:11:521 (8) - put it right a bit why??
01:14:419 (2) - make this slider upside down I don't like that :3
02:32:395 (1) - this note like this will be better? no

ScreenShot

Insanity
01:55:862 (1,2,3) - in my opinion, this would be a slider... You already know they are 1/3 because of last kiai

Bloodlust
00:42:006 (6,7) - combine this two in one reverse slider... whyy
01:11:811 (3) - don't place this in center of 5,6 ? fixed
02:33:264 (6,7) - make this like this? yes

ScreenShot

winber1 wrote:

i honestly think you have too many red lines that don't need to be there but im too lazy to check Well I spent days listening at 0.25 and timing everything. 1 line doesn't work, as I told tutuhaha, because the drums are just not consistent at all, they sound sometimes early and sometimes late etc. If I use the timing that has been suggested to me, 1 red line only, you'll see it sounds fine at the beginning but after 1:30 or so we can begin to see weird stuff, for instance, thge ending of the second kiai is just a mess timing-wise, no single-red-line works there.

Bloodlust

1. 00:18:492 (9,10,1,2) - you might consider moving this down and right, so that you get more of a pattern there. http://puu.sh/dLnSo/1ec74bb71d.jpg Just for aesthetic reasons, nothing much more. done
2. 01:09:917 (3,4) - might match the music better if you switched these two notes around then rearranged the spacing http://puu.sh/dLoeR/273151e6fe.jpg done
3. 01:12:825 (7) - this is just my personal preference, but perhaps you could emphasize this note more by making some kind of jump or new combo. http://puu.sh/dLoid/bd12fdf8b8.jpg this is probably the simplest thing you can do, but there are many other variationsdone
4. 01:21:089 (3) - I would say this would work better as a 3/4 tick slider with a hitcircle after it. done
5. 01:46:690 (3) - new combo here to indicate the 1/3 rhythm? done
6. 01:55:862 (5) - ^ done
7. 02:00:936 (3,4) - consider switching these two notes aroudn like the previous one. same for the next kiai Hmm not here
8. 02:03:835 (7) - similar suggestion as previuosly stated. same for next kiai done
9. 02:13:997 (2,4) - I would change the claps to whistles here. too many claps man, need dem bass Changed stuff
10. 02:33:264 (6,7) - this is a little awkward imo. I think it's better either as a stream, with hitcricles or just two hitcircles on the white and red tick. B-but I love it
11. 03:02:950 (3,4) - switch notes around, then change 4 and 5 into a slider? http://puu.sh/dLpYJ/aae9d79dd6.jpg done

Insanityp

1. 00:41:643 (5,1) - Personally i'd say you should move these two closer together. I would actually consider turning 00:41:933 (1) - into a stacked stream. Changed into something else but simillar
2. 00:49:635 (3,4) - I would use twice the SV to match the previous pattern (you will have to add hitcircles in between), but I think it would fit the pattern and structure better done
3. 01:12:825 (3,4,5) - I woudl change this into a repeat slider why, i don't want it to be all repeat sliders D:
4. 01:13:115 (6) - I would start the new combo here and remove the new combo at 01:13:260 (1) -
5. 02:03:835 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^ ye
6. 02:24:714 (3) - perhaps remove the repeat and add a hitcircle at 02:25:004 - stacked on top of 02:25:148 (1) - (and change the new combo to that note) it's a nice idea but I like it my way
7. 02:50:508 (6) - new combo and remove combo at 02:50:933 (1) - ? yes
8. 02:50:218 (3,4,5) - again perhaps change into a repeat slider? no

Hard

1. 00:25:739 (6,1) - might be a little confusing considering your previous patterns. I would consider unstacking it. ok
2. 01:05:435 - I honestly disagree with this spacing completely (as in I don't see a reason why you should be using 0.5x distance snap forthe 1/2 tick notes lol) and you also use regulat spacing at 01:21:524 (6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - which makes much more sense. The close spacing before the kiai is fine and makes sense if you used around 1.0x spacing for the kiai time imo. WTF I JUST HAD THE MOST VIVID DEJAVU EVER AND IM NOT EVEN KIDDING. I think it's fine though, remember that since the kiai has more sv the spacing 0.5 is actually bigger than before, and I added some slider jumps too
3. 01:28:038 (8,9) - I would consider turning this into two hitcircles on the white ticks Changed but different way
4. 01:38:616 (5) - http://puu.sh/dLvqL/5be3f8934a.jpg consider something like this? yes
5. 01:48:907 (5) - I would add a new combo and also here too 01:50:366 (5,9) - (or alternatively you could just get rid of the combo at 01:48:037 (1) -) yes
6. 01:56:444 - idk about the spacing man ill think about it :/
7. 02:26:308 (5,6,7) - i think the closer spacing you used would work better here (and here too 02:28:627 (5,6,7) - )
8. 02:42:830 - Ill rethink my spacing

Normal

1. 00:34:990 (7) - add a whistle or something to the beginning yes
2. 01:15:858 (4) - I would start this slider at 01:15:858 (4) - instead (and rearrange spacing) Not necessary imo
3. 01:39:921 (3,4) - I personally end the sliders on the main beat. It feels a little weird in thsi case to me. smoething like this works better imo http://puu.sh/dLw8J/b358472a49.jpg I think my way feets the vocals better though
4. 02:06:309 (2,3) - Try ending combo 2 at 02:06:743 -. THen begin combo 3 at 02:06:903 (3) - and end at 02:07:337 - . makes it more interesting imo Good idea but I think it's a little bit... ummm... I just prefer my way for some reason I'll doublethink it

Easy

1. 00:38:748 - add note? ye
2. 01:51:243 (5) - clap ye
3. 02:44:271 - add note here and 02:44:850 - ? I mean sure it's easy, but you had notes more notes during the kiai time previously than here, so for consistency purposes, i would add a little more notes. I thought i'd give newbies some break though, especially after the scream part
4. 02:52:679 (1,2,3) - ^ same here. You have like no notes here even tho you had more notes in previuos kiai sections lol changed a bit
5. 03:02:899 - spinner end isn't snapped on white tick atm true

1. I just find some rhythms to be really.. awkward you would be mapping the instruments and drums and then you would suddenly switch to vocals or something. other places vice versa
   00:23:130 (9,1) - like here. i am well aware that the vocals come in here but you just completely ignore the instruments it just sounds so... weird .-.
   00:26:029 (4) - and then u switch back
   00:27:333 (2,3) - then back againnn ;A;
   

1. 02:33:264 (6) - maybe NC here, since it gets a bit clustered so itll make it easier to read
2. 01:01:359 (3,5) - SV change needs some NCs imo :X
   01:52:403 (3) - ^
3. 01:07:153 (1,4) - so u do this alot, but imo the nc should be on 01:07:754 (4) - rather than what you currently have it on since 01:07:153 - part is only the lead in while the actual downbeat should be 01:07:754 - just like the start of the kiai here 01:05:435 - and 02:08:041 (1) -
   well if you agree, then fix this for every other part.
   some other examples
   02:09:780 (1,4) - ^
4. 02:43:401 (4,6) - some nazi overlappy thing idk
5. 01:31:086 (1) - maybe try this rhythm, imo gives more emphasis on the snare and also differs between he kick and snare better
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 03:19:931 (1) - asdoisadsaikdhysakjhsafas wouldve been so much cooler if you continued the line instead of going back ;w;
   
   Hitsounds
7. 01:21:089 (3) - the whistle on the tail just sounds wrong :/
   01:22:539 (7) - ^

1. why Insanity instead of insane? oh well shouldn't matter
2. 00:42:078 (8,1) - i suggest you space this out more, the slider is somewhat pretty fast and the spacing after that is comparably small so it just feels abit awkward.
3. 00:56:154 (1,2) - probably not as important but maybe also space this out a bit more to differ between these 00:55:864 (4,1,2) - spacings more
4. 01:01:957 (4) - 01:02:536 (8) - could nc at either one of these places to indicate sv change
5. 01:08:330 (6) - uhh maybe expose the slider tail a bit more lol this is pretty close to burai
6. 01:12:753 - 01:13:043 - i don't quite understand why these are left unmapped
7. 01:19:047 (8,1) - some nazi stacking thing
8. 01:55:862 (1,2,3) - i think itll be more comfortable to play if you replace these with a 1/3 repeat
9. 02:00:502 (1,3) - same nc thing as other diff
10. 02:41:960 (2,3,4,5,6) - stack leniency really screws up this pattern lol
11. 03:19:931 (1) - same as for bloodlust

1. okay, i don't want to be that guy who does this but man i really think you can tone down some of these things in your hard. u use so many and for such a high bpm they are just so hard to play 01:03:985 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -
   ill get some more opinions too.
2. also some of those SV changes could be toned down a bit too, well actually its mainly this one 00:23:710 - i can see why you have it here but it just.. doesn't make sense to the intensity of the music, you know what i mean ><?
3. ill leave this diff for now untill i get a few opinions

1. 00:24:579 (4) - uh try to copy 00:29:217 (4) - this rhythm it fits better
2. 00:39:914 - why was this part left blank :/?
3. 00:58:473 (1) - clap on the repeat sounded a bit off
4. 01:52:982 (3,4,5) - uh why not use some more copy paste here lol, looks a bit unrefined right now

1. 01:05:725 (2,3,4) - rhythm feels off cuz there isn't really any sound on 01:06:594 (3) - try
   rhythm starts at 01:05:435 - for reference
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:12:390 (1,1) - for easy u need at least 4 beats of recovery time.
   02:49:629 (1,1) - ^
3. 02:49:629 (1) - how bout start this spinner on 02:49:784 - for consistency as well
4. 02:58:766 (5,6) - i don't recommend stacking for easy diff. its the only one you used anyway so might as well just change it

Snepif wrote:

Fixed everything on Bloodlust except for some NCs on the kiai, I like em that way.
Actually I like the hard diff this way:

I didn't want to map the usual hard diff that consists of endless patterns that go 2 notes, 1 slider, 1 triplet, 2 notes, 1 slider, 1 triplet forever, there are plenty of those already. I wanted to make a "different" type of hard diff, while keeping it on the Hard diff margin. The challenge on this diff is that it's too fast to singletap and too slow to alternate, so the player has to learn one of those techniques in order to play it. I think it's a different type of map that is still playable and fun - and fits the song like a charm.

Mystyk wrote:

I think that the anti-jumps are fine because it's a high bpm song, it would be a lot more tiring to play high-spaced hit circles
I would rather be concerned about the hidden reverse arrows in the hard diff
02:50:653 (7) -
02:32:395 (1) - this one is not as hidden as the previous one but could be more visible if the slider had a different direction

changing between instments and vocals is not a problem imo

but also the normal diff has some pretty crowded parts
00:19:507 (2,3) -
00:21:826 (2,3,4) -
apart from that I would rather remove the unnecessary inherited points because it is really messy (and it's misleading because they are there for SV changes)
00:39:033 (5) - this has an SV change in the middle of the slider!!
Also unrankable:


etc....better check that on all diffs
What's the point of using x0,85 on Easy? The mapper could have just used slower SV if he was going to slow it down all the time...

pishifat wrote:

i think snepif already knows i'm doing something. maybe not tho

Kibbleru wrote:

hmm ill just quote what she said here dunno if i should be doing this

Mystyk wrote:

I think that the anti-jumps are fine because it's a high bpm song, it would be a lot more tiring to play high-spaced hit circles
I would rather be concerned about the hidden reverse arrows in the hard diff
02:50:653 (7) - fixed
02:32:395 (1) - this one is not as hidden as the previous one but could be more visible if the slider had a different direction. fixed

changing between instments and vocals is not a problem imo

but also the normal diff has some pretty crowded parts fixed
00:19:507 (2,3) -
00:21:826 (2,3,4) -
apart from that I would rather remove the unnecessary inherited points because it is really messy (and it's misleading because they are there for SV changes) will fix
00:39:033 (5) - this has an SV change in the middle of the slider!! fixed
Also unrankable: could you please explain what is unrankable about this?


etc....better check that on all diffs
What's the point of using x0,85 on Easy? The mapper could have just used slower SV if he was going to slow it down all the time... yeah thing is it previously had x1 at the kiais but i was told it was a bad idea to have sv changes on easy diff.

edit: actually, about the bpm, i think you should just ask pishi to edit the mp3 for you to make the bpm consistent (he used ur map as an example for a tutorial lol)

Also unrankable: could you please explain what is unrankable about this?


etc....better check that on all diffs

No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.

Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.

Mystyk wrote:

you're welcome it's still better to know that so you won't make that mistake in the future

as you wish, that's for you to decide, I didn't really mod that much on it, but maybe I can do a real mod

edit: well don't bubble this yet I have some things to say, mod incoming

[General]
Sliderslide and slidertick can't be muted at the same time! Alright made ticks audible

Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.

There might as well be some problems with these weird names, it would be safer to rename them: fixed
http://puu.sh/eaF5N/d5040f5d27.png
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AiBAT things: fixed #aibatthings. The 10mb thing i cannot help it unless someone provides sb images that are the same res but less mb, though. and the kiai 15 secs is okay for this ocassion
http://puu.sh/eaKLp/432a0aceb8.png fixed, about the green lines, those are normal/easy diff only and don't change anything at all... i mean unless you want the .osu to weight 1 kb less i see no issue
http://puu.sh/eaKVn/dc7ee1ff86.png
http://puu.sh/eaKXF/d5d973e399.png etc...
Well...go through all the difficulties and resnap everything that should be resnapped!
(Althought AiMod also mentions some problems http://puu.sh/eaL6H/b786a5b59b.png)

[Easy]
00:34:434 (5) - the volume is too low, imo it should be raised because I had to REALLY concentrate to hear it fixed
00:36:174 (1) - I can't hear this at all fixed

Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.

01:12:406 (1,1) - there should be 4 measures of space between the spinner and the next object fixed
02:03:420 (1,1) - same as above ^
02:12:695 (1) - just my personal opinion but I think a normal finish would sound better i like it this way!
02:40:666 (1,1) - spinner and upcoming object is too close! fixed
02:49:797 (1,1) - ^
03:10:811 (1,1) - ^ done

[Normal]
00:21:826 (2,3,4) - this is still too crowded, the sliderends and sliderbeginnings are too close to each other, it will be confusing for players to play errr okay changed sorta? I made all sliders a lot more consistent to each other so it looks a lot clearer i think.
00:34:724 (6,7) - I think these are not audible enough
01:06:898 (4,1) - small thing but this blanket is just so unappealing in my eyes you could improve this - http://puu.sh/eaLH1/c020b92e30.jpg fixed
01:44:869 (1) - I don't really understand why the sliderend has such a loud hitsound when the music is kind of soft here fixed
01:46:608 (4,1) - I would rather not do an anti-jump since it's confusing and players will want to hit it too early. err changed
01:51:246 (4) - you should have put the clap to the sliderbeginning and not to the sliderend since the beginning has a loud sound and not the ending
02:12:695 (1) - same that I said on easy, IMO a normal finish would sound better tru
02:46:898 (1,3) - you could put (3) a bit more to the left (maybe the whole pattern) because the sliderbeginning is too close to (1)'s sliderend and it might be confusing (and since there is only a spinner coming afterwards it won't be a big issue to change this) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2468391 fixed

[Hard]
01:34:579 (1) - this can barely be heard, the background music is louder than the hitsound and it's annoying to play something that you can barely hear kk fixed

[Insanity]
01:46:608 (1,2,3,4) - well they are "half" visible but tbh I would rather not stack them because while playing the circles stack and make it harder to see the reverse arrow - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2468469 fixed
01:55:884 (1,2,3,4) - ^ that one doesn't get covered though
02:42:454 (3,4) - half-hidden reverse arrow fixed all of these
02:50:956 (1) - ^

Sorry but it's already quite late so I want to go to sleep, hopefully the main issues should be fixed with this mod, but I don't guarantee that I noticed everything since I'm tired, but good luck!

1. 02:50:232 (1) - whistle?
2. 00:38:782 (4) - nc, sv slows down pretty surprisingly. actually im not even sure about the purpose of these sv changes =. = explain pls
   00:41:101 (4) - ^
   00:34:145 (4) - ^
   00:36:463 (4) - ^
3. 02:33:275 (1,2) - explain the overmap pls :X

1. 01:01:536 (3) - lol ill let u figure this one out urself
2. 01:52:985 (4) - NC for that sv change here?
3. 02:32:985 (8) - personally this works better if you removed the last repeat

1. 01:01:971 (6) - maybe nc here, slider pattern here is slightly crowded
2. 01:05:739 (2) - this is kinda hidden, please move it a bit more >_>
3. 01:13:275 (7) - im not sure if this reverse arrow is considered hidden or not but lets be on the safe side shall we?
   03:00:328 (1) - ^
4. 01:50:377 (5) - should nc for consistency?
5. 01:55:884 (5,1,2) - this just gets it confusing, they're the same distance but one is 1/4 and the other is 1/2, if possible i suggest leading in with a slider instead
6. 02:50:666 (7) - just move the tail slightly up. or not this one doesnt really matter

1. 01:48:492 (3,4) - spacing?
   01:50:811 (3,4) - ^
   03:13:710 (2,3) - ^
   03:03:710 (1,2) - ^ just adjust the slider shape for this
2. 02:54:434 - there should be something on the downbeat :C

• 
  seemed okay

Xgor wrote:

SB modding goo!

[Images]
Right now there is quite a lot of unnecessary transparency in your lyric images. Please crop them.
The best example of that is A.png, It got the same size as every other image yet is only one letter.

[SB load]
Right now you haven't disabled your background and because you cover it up several times I suggest you do that.

It's explained how to do it here. ( t/55177 )
After you done that you can SB it in at the parts where you want it to show up. The default colour on a map background with removed background is black so you won't even need black.png for this SB if you use that to your advantage.

[Other]
...Kinda a pity you don't have Widescreen support for this SB.

10+ MB shouldn't be a issue anymore from what I understand. However the way to lower and I suggest that
Right now they are are mainly due to all the backgrounds in the SB and they are in the .png format. Change it to .jpg to make them smaller.
Note that you have change from .png to .jpg in the osb file after you done that.

Another thing I noticed is that you use the default sounds in custom samplesets. As you can change them in game with this http://puu.sh/enU5B/bc1faaeccf.jpg .
If you do that you can remove another megabyte from the mapset.

Kibbleru wrote:

[Bloodlust]

1. 02:50:232 (1) - whistle? ok
2. 00:38:782 (4) - nc, sv slows down pretty surprisingly. actually im not even sure about the purpose of these sv changes =. = explain pls. Think of it like a hold note but not so extreme - i think it fits the music perfectly and feels good while playing
   00:41:101 (4) - ^
   00:34:145 (4) - ^
   00:36:463 (4) - ^
3. 02:33:275 (1,2) - explain the overmap pls :X. Those are 1/4 sliders - it means you don't have to press the end, and therefore only the start is what you are going to pay attention to. It fits the music much better than simply puting a 1/2 jump imo, you still have to press the key at a 1/2 pace nevertheless

[Insane]

1. 01:01:536 (3) - lol ill let u figure this one out urself errr i can't think of anything. sv change is intended, doesn't require nc because it doesn't fuck up the player at all, it's only a subtle change that fits the music
2. 01:52:985 (4) - NC for that sv change here? ye
3. 02:32:985 (8) - personally this works better if you removed the last repeat true

[Hard]

1. 01:01:971 (6) - maybe nc here, slider pattern here is slightly crowded yes
2. 01:05:739 (2) - this is kinda hidden, please move it a bit more >_>changed
3. 01:13:275 (7) - im not sure if this reverse arrow is considered hidden or not but lets be on the safe side shall we? kk
   03:00:328 (1) - ^
4. 01:50:377 (5) - should nc for consistency? true
5. 01:55:884 (5,1,2) - this just gets it confusing, they're the same distance but one is 1/4 and the other is 1/2, if possible i suggest leading in with a slider instead fixed
6. 02:50:666 (7) - just move the tail slightly up. or not this one doesnt really matter done

[Normal]

1. 01:48:492 (3,4) - spacing? yeah i did it on purpose I don't like how they play at 1.2 spacing if they are 1/2 apart. is this a must-change?also you pointed out just some of them so i'd rather not risk my consistency xD
   01:50:811 (3,4) - ^
   03:13:710 (2,3) - ^
   03:03:710 (1,2) - ^ just adjust the slider shape for this fixed this one
2. 02:54:434 - there should be something on the downbeat :Cyea

[Easy]

• 
  seemed okay

sorry leme continue this later forgot to take this out

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

[Skin/SB]

SB Elements Not .png
sb\bg bw.jpg
sb\bg bw eyes.jpg
sb\bg dark.jpg
sb\bg light.jpg
sb\bg red effect.jpg
sb\bg red.jpg
sb\bg eyes.jpg
sb\black.jpg

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[Bloodlust]

Breaks
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Snapping

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00:50:359 - snap to 00:50:377

[Easy]

Snapping

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00:23:685 - snap to 00:23:710
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00:39:914 - snap to 00:39:942
00:44:706 - snap to 00:44:724
00:50:359 - snap to 00:50:377
00:51:519 - snap to 00:51:536
00:52:957 - snap to 00:52:985
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01:41:076 - snap to 01:41:101
01:41:949 - snap to 01:41:971
01:42:532 - snap to 01:42:550
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01:54:711 - snap to 01:54:724
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02:07:466 - snap to 02:07:478
02:08:041 - snap to 02:08:058
02:15:293 - snap to 02:15:304
02:24:278 - snap to 02:24:290
02:33:263 - snap to 02:33:275
02:34:423 - snap to 02:34:434
02:45:129 - snap to 02:45:159
02:49:784 - snap to 02:49:797
03:10:365 - snap to 03:10:377
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[Hard]

Breaks
Consider adding a break before 01:44:435.

Snapping

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00:50:359 - snap to 00:50:377

[Insanity]

Breaks
Consider adding a break before 01:44:435.

Snapping

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00:50:359 - snap to 00:50:377

[Normal]

Snapping

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AIBat v3.1 wrote:

[Skin/SB]

SB Elements Not .png
sb\bg bw.jpg
sb\bg bw eyes.jpg
sb\bg dark.jpg
sb\bg light.jpg
sb\bg red effect.jpg
sb\bg red.jpg
sb\bg eyes.jpg

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[Bloodlust]

Breaks
Consider adding a break before 01:44:435.

Snapping

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[Easy]

Snapping

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01:52:982 - snap to 01:52:985

[Hard]

Breaks
Consider adding a break before 01:44:435.

Snapping
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[Insanity]

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Snapping

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[Normal]

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Snepif wrote:

Now we mutual senpais.


just in case u wont escape from the pic

Priti wrote:

Just pointin' out something, the preview is in the middle of a sentence, making it sound strange, I hope there won't be any dq, but in case there is, could you move it 1/1 back?