Takeharu Ishimoto (feat. Joanna Koike) - Deja vu · forum

Darcsol

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Darcsol 2014-07-15T00:51:55+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, June 12, 2018 at 11:27:07 PM

Artist: Takeharu Ishimoto (feat. Joanna Koike)
Title: Deja vu
Source: すばらしきこのせかい
Tags: pimpG Subarashiki Kono Sekai Konosekai + The World Ends with You It's a Wonderful World soundtrack Square Enix JRPG Nintendo DS Apple iOS Google Android pop
BPM: 120
Filesize: 5792kb
Play Time: 04:04
Difficulties Available:

Collab (3.05 stars, 436 notes)
Normal (1.59 stars, 244 notes)

Download: Takeharu Ishimoto (feat. Joanna Koike) - Deja vu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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6th Beatmap (Dead; remapping)
A collaboration with pimpG

Take me forward, stars are still asleep
You and me, we live forevermore
I would follow you my destiny
Won't you get my favorite photograph
I'm getting played by you
Deja vu

Last edited by Darcsol 2019-01-24T22:59:34+00:00, edited 111 times in total.

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-07-15T01:03:25+00:00

pimp here

timing helps and other things

2014-06-22 16:50 pimpG: i think my client is damaged
2014-06-22 16:50 Darcsol: I basically uploaded everything. It's up to you now.
2014-06-22 16:50 pimpG: i know
2014-06-22 16:53 pimpG: it seems to break when i change the mapper name
2014-06-22 16:53 pimpG: to Darcsol
2014-06-22 16:53 pimpG: my osu is damaged somehow
2014-06-22 16:53 Darcsol: You should reinstall it
2014-06-22 16:54 pimpG: worked now
2014-06-22 16:54 Darcsol: okay
2014-06-22 16:55 pimpG: 215 offset
2014-06-22 16:55 pimpG: still checking
2014-06-22 16:56 pimpG: 220
2014-06-22 16:57 Darcsol: Final?
2014-06-22 16:58 pimpG: yeah
2014-06-22 16:59 Darcsol: Okay

2014-07-09 20:15 pimpG: we need to add another timeline
2014-07-09 20:16 pimpG: 02:56:230 - same bpm
2014-07-09 20:18 Darcsol: How obscure
2014-07-09 20:22 pimpG: indeed
2014-07-09 20:29 Darcsol: Done: http://puu.sh/a4kZi/f8e17a1c22.txt

2014-07-14 21:53 pimpG: your tags are broken?
2014-07-14 21:56 Darcsol: Huh. Normal's tags are fine, but not the Collab.
2014-07-14 21:58 Darcsol: Tags are fixed now

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

kakifly 2014-07-22T05:00:21+00:00

m4m ~ ^^

General

fine

Normal

00:16:720 (2) - flow is .. meh , maybe try this arrangement

SPOILER

00:33:970 (1,2) - its awkward to play when you have these 2 notes starting on a red tick, not to mention the 1 slider goes through an important beat ><
00:49:720 (1) - avoid ending notes on the strong beat , they should be emphasized with the start of a note
00:57:720 (1) - ^
01:13:720 (1) - ^
01:53:720 (1) - ^
ill stop mentioning these, please check them on your own ;w;
00:52:970 (2) - move to 00:52:720 not sure if you hear it but theres like a drum in the bg
01:00:970 (2) - move to 01:00:720 ^
01:16:970 (2) - move to 01:16:720 -
03:22:230 (1,2,3,4) - a bit too hard for normal???

Collab

00:22:220 (5) - NC
00:18:220 (5) - ^
00:34:970 (5,6) - try this pattern or something like it, since the sliders on red ticks dont sound as good

00:37:970 (4,5,6) - blanket these notes better (blanket around approach circle of 5)

SPOILER

00:39:720 (7) - move away from the stack, it gets confusing to play especially with HD
01:05:470 (4) - try this

01:06:220 (6) - nc
01:08:220 (1,2,3) - blanket better
01:45:970 (3,4,5,6,7) - all start on red ticks which dont sound as well, change the pattern?
01:50:970 (5) - this one especially bothered me idk why ><'' ^
hhhh not sure about this stream 02:14:220 (4) - seems a bit hard considering this levels 3.something star diff
02:31:470 (11) - ^
02:30:220 (4) - nc
02:46:220 (6) - ^
03:42:230 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - the arrangement makes a bad flow, try to improvement the flow

thats all ~ good luck with your beatmap :3

Darcsol

277 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Darcsol 2014-07-22T15:45:27+00:00

kakifly wrote:
Normal

00:16:720 (2) - flow is .. meh , maybe try this arrangement
SPOILER
Fixed.
00:33:970 (1,2) - its awkward to play when you have these 2 notes starting on a red tick, not to mention the 1 slider goes through an important beat >< I think it's fine.
00:49:720 (1) - avoid ending notes on the strong beat , they should be emphasized with the start of a note
00:57:720 (1) - ^
01:13:720 (1) - ^
01:53:720 (1) - ^
ill stop mentioning these, please check them on your own ;w; I disagree, but I'll make changes where appropriate.
00:52:970 (2) - move to 00:52:720 not sure if you hear it but theres like a drum in the bg Which drum? Otherwise I think they're fine.
01:00:970 (2) - move to 01:00:720 ^
01:16:970 (2) - move to 01:16:720 -
03:22:230 (1,2,3,4) - a bit too hard for normal??? I don't think so.

Collab (Note: I'll only mod my parts.)

00:22:220 (5) - NC
00:18:220 (5) - ^ Both not necessary
hhhh not sure about this stream 02:14:220 (4) - seems a bit hard considering this levels 3.something star diff
02:31:470 (11) - ^I think Hard diffs are suitable for streams.
02:46:220 (6) - ^ These new combos feel inconsistent. Why do they have to be different?

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-07-22T19:55:45+00:00

kakifly wrote:
Collab

00:34:970 (5,6) - try this pattern or something like it, since the sliders on red ticks dont sound as good
00:37:970 (4,5,6) - blanket these notes better (blanket around approach circle of 5)
SPOILER
00:39:720 (7) - move away from the stack, it gets confusing to play especially with HD
01:05:470 (4) - try this
01:06:220 (6) - nc
01:08:220 (1,2,3) - blanket better
01:45:970 (3,4,5,6,7) - all start on red ticks which dont sound as well, change the pattern?
01:50:970 (5) - this one especially bothered me idk why ><'' ^
hhhh not sure about this stream 02:14:220 (4) - seems a bit hard considering this levels 3.something star diff
02:31:470 (11) - ^
02:30:220 (4) - nc
03:42:230 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - the arrangement makes a bad flow, try to improvement the flow

thats all ~ good luck with your beatmap :3

i have to deny the new combo suggestions because Darcsol did. they do make sense but i dont want to make my nc's inconsistent to his parts

about the red tick sliders, i never had problems with this kind of note placement. it's just vocal mapping and stuff. some of my ranked maps probably has this kind of rhythm too.

maps are not meant to be played with mods (or jumps would not be allowed because makes "impossible" to play with flashlight. or higher bpm songs would not be ranked because they are not playable with doubletime), this kind of placement is common, its okay for hard level, if it's still confusing maybe you need to practice a bit more.

i think my blankets are fine, some of them are not meant to be perfectly symmetrical, your blanket is too curvy, i think mines is more suitable

i will check the arrangement that you said that flows bad, thanks for complaining

thanks for modding

___________________________

no updates for now

one thing i forgot to say

my last guest difficulty got ranked when i was afk, the map owner made changes on my diff without my permission.
after that i asked a Bat to unrank the map so i could make the changes myself

thanks for not making this mistake
do not make changes on my parts, i wont take too long to aply mods and stuff

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

P o M u T a 2014-07-26T05:00:16+00:00

Hi, m4m.
[General]

your BG 1336x768... bit weird. try change 1366x768. more good.

[Normal]

This is Normal diff. AR+3 is really LOW. I suggest AR+1.
00:19:470 (3) - add whistle slider end. Please teach reason, why not add? you same part added 00:27:470 (3) - .
00:23:470 (2) - ^
01:00:220 (1,2) - timing bit hard, try remove (2) and (1) change slider. more playable and vocal fit. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1858063
01:08:220 (1) - ^
01:16:220 (1) - ^
01:47:720 (3,4,5) - lol really close spacing. Beginner players confuse. should fix imo. THIS IS LEAST NORMAL DIFF.
01:51:720 (4,5,1) - ^
01:55:220 (3,4,1) - ^
02:04:220 (1) - Additions Drum and add finish. really fit this song.
02:08:220 (1) - ^
02:12:220 (1) - ^
02:14:220 (1) - add clap slider end. fit.
02:31:470 (2,3,1) - these bit hard play for beginner player. i suggest (1) remove and (3) reverse slider. more easily.
03:24:230 (1) - add finish.
04:00:230 (1) - endline bit weird. this song end is 04:03:980 - . you should this time spinner end.

[Collab]

This is Hard diff. HP+7 is really high imo. try reduce -1.
04:00:230 (1) - same as normal diff.

good luck.

Darcsol

277 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Darcsol 2014-07-26T05:28:02+00:00

P o M u T a wrote:
[General]
your BG 1336x768... bit weird. try change 1366x768. more good. No idea how that happened. Fixed.
[Normal]
This is Normal diff. AR+3 is really LOW. I suggest AR+1. Added.
00:19:470 (3) - add whistle slider end. Please teach reason, why not add? you same part added 00:27:470 (3) - .
00:23:470 (2) - ^
01:00:220 (1,2) - timing bit hard, try remove (2) and (1) change slider. more playable and vocal fit. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1858063
01:08:220 (1) - ^
01:16:220 (1) - ^ All above fixed.
01:47:720 (3,4,5) - lol really close spacing. Beginner players confuse. should fix imo. THIS IS LEAST NORMAL DIFF.
01:51:720 (4,5,1) - ^
01:55:220 (3,4,1) - ^ I'll adjust them so they're more visible. Otherwise I think it's fine.
02:04:220 (1) - Additions Drum and add finish. really fit this song.
02:08:220 (1) - ^
02:12:220 (1) - ^ I'll consider it.
02:14:220 (1) - add clap slider end. fit. I think it's fine.
02:31:470 (2,3,1) - these bit hard play for beginner player. i suggest (1) remove and (3) reverse slider. more easily. I removed (1) instead. The rest are staying.
03:24:230 (1) - add finish. Why this beat have a finish and not the other ones?
04:00:230 (1) - endline bit weird. this song end is 04:03:980 - . you should this time spinner end. I think it's fine.

[Collab]
This is Hard diff. HP+7 is really high imo. try reduce -1. Added.
04:00:230 (1) - same as normal diff. Same response.

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-07-27T11:59:47+00:00

P o M u T a wrote:
Hi, m4m.
[General]
your BG 1336x768... bit weird. try change 1366x768. more good.
[Normal]
This is Normal diff. AR+3 is really LOW. I suggest AR+1.
00:19:470 (3) - add whistle slider end. Please teach reason, why not add? you same part added 00:27:470 (3) - .
00:23:470 (2) - ^
01:00:220 (1,2) - timing bit hard, try remove (2) and (1) change slider. more playable and vocal fit. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1858063
01:08:220 (1) - ^
01:16:220 (1) - ^
01:47:720 (3,4,5) - lol really close spacing. Beginner players confuse. should fix imo. THIS IS LEAST NORMAL DIFF.
01:51:720 (4,5,1) - ^
01:55:220 (3,4,1) - ^
02:04:220 (1) - Additions Drum and add finish. really fit this song.
02:08:220 (1) - ^
02:12:220 (1) - ^
02:14:220 (1) - add clap slider end. fit.
02:31:470 (2,3,1) - these bit hard play for beginner player. i suggest (1) remove and (3) reverse slider. more easily.
03:24:230 (1) - add finish.
04:00:230 (1) - endline bit weird. this song end is 04:03:980 - . you should this time spinner end.

[Collab]
This is Hard diff. HP+7 is really high imo. try reduce -1.
04:00:230 (1) - same as normal diff.
good luck.

nothing to be fixed by me, but i agree with P o M u T a about the spinner end

just saying

thanks for modding

Lanturn

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3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-07-28T02:38:54+00:00

Hey Random #modreqs mod!

[General]
Source: I wouldn't really use "It's A Wonderful World" as the source. It's better to use "Subarashiki Kono Sekai" or "すばらしきこのせかい"
Why? Do a quick Google search. Searching for the Literal translation yields almost no results, so it's a little strange. A translated title doesn't really work, because it would be better to use the actual English version's "The World Ends with You." I realize it is on the cover art but it's better to use the actual title instead. Adjust your tags after changing this.
In the end. I would recommend above all else to use すばらしきこのせかい as the source.

Title: The V in "vu" is lower-cased. See screenshot below:
http://puu.sh/aspWg.jpg

Artist: 小池ジョアンナ
This seems to be how Joanna Koike prefers to write her name with her recent works. A good example is this song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pFMuxivK41E
A blog Post: http://ameblo.jp/koikejoanna/entry-11518208706.html (I wasn't sure if this was the same Joanna until I found this blog post an hour later.. lol)
This also means you should swap to Koike Joanna as the Romanised Artist!

You can disable widescreen support since you don't have any storyboard. Actually. Why not make a SB with the names in the collab of which part each person mapped. If you want, as it'll literally take 10 minutes to do, give me the times of each person and I'll be happy to add the names in for you.

Kiai:
Your first Kiai ends at 01:03:720 - making it inconsistent with the other similar ones throughout the song. You should end this first kiai at 01:02:220 - or move the other two kiai ends at 02:30:220 - & 03:42:230 - to match. There is really no difference between The first and second chorus.

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So I decided to spoilerbox the mod below. Mostly because it's really heavily opinionated due to some things in the map I personally don't really like. Keeping to your own style is the best way, and we all know this, which is why I'm going to Spoilerbox it. If you don't think you want to read what I wrote below, then go ahead and skip the mod. Hopefully the general info helps enough though.

SPOILER

[Normal]

The combos would work much better on this difficulty if you did them every 2 measures or two big white lines. The song moves a bit slowly that it seems a bit strange that you cut it in half like you do. | http://puu.sh/asBPa.jpg
The notes are kind of placed oddly in this map. It gives the map a kind of 2009/2010 feel (which kind of works for this song since it's so old)
The other thing on this difficulty that bugs me a little is that you use the small grid with distance snap and that causes some notes to be up to 0.05 - 0.10 off. Like for example: 00:49:220 (2) - is 1.02 and 0.96. There is actually quite a bit of a gap here between the distance snaps. If you were on the tiny grid, you could still use grid snap and move it down one point to 0.98 and 0.99. I highly suggest you go through the whole song, click on each note, and try to even up the distance snapping.
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00:19:220 (2,3) - If you wanted to make these notes a bit more cleaner, you could consider stacking the (2) and (30 together. This will let you adjust the (3) to flow into the upcoming slider.
00:29:720 (1) - This could be more balanced | http://puu.sh/asR8S.jpg | The slider is way to low for the angle it is trying to show.
00:33:970 (1) - Small example of needed better distance snapping. It makes the map look much cleaner. Please use the tiny grid if you want to use Distance Snap, otherwise, just take it off.
00:36:220 (1) - This would be a little bit more cleaner placed to the right side of the slider instead of the left. When a player comes off from their mouse, they'll still be moving to the right a bit which will help them flow nicely into the next note. | http://puu.sh/asRee.jpg | In all hhonesty though, 00:34:970 (2) - might be better off curved a little.
00:42:220 (1) - An example of oddly placed notes. The flow coming off the (2) to the (1) in question is pretty sharp. Afterwards the tail of the (1) transitioning into the (2) is also sharp again, for the angle the (2) is curved for anyways. It feels like the (2) should be moved up a bit more. | It's mostly just the combination of these two
00:50:220 (1) - You should curve this to maintain the flow from the previous notes. | http://puu.sh/asQkO.jpg | Also consider remaking 00:48:220 (1) - because it really feels out of place. | http://puu.sh/asQhi.jpg
01:09:220 (1) - If you do the NC every two measure thing I talked about above. You'll be able to get rid of the (1) combo before this. I highly recommend you do it!
01:11:720 (2) - Again, be careful of the DS. 1.08 is really unbalanced.
01:46:220 (1) - Try rotating this slider so it feels more balanced on both ends. | http://puu.sh/atxeF.jpg
01:47:720 (3,4,1) - I'll emphasize more on Pomuta's mod about this being too short. Right now you have the spacing at 0.57 which is almost half of the current DS you are doing. This will make any unaware player think these are 1/4 notes. I personally don't have any issue at all reading these, but I'm not new to the game. The key idea is to be able to make something that newer and inexperienced players can enjoy without getting too confused. However, this also works the other way. The beat in this song is so simple that it's almost impossible to misinterpret these as 1/4s. Again, that is just because I'm really used to how music works, and it won't be the same for the others. A good suggestion is to stack them together or use distance snap.
tl;dr? Easy for people who understand music, but not for players that are new to the game. Those people should be kept in mind above anyone else.
01:50:220 (3) - If you didn't apply the NC suggestion, then you'll have to NC this for consistency. otherwise, you can leave this alone.
02:22:220 (1,2,3) - When going by the rest of your patterning in this difficulty. you don't map to the (2) in the song. To be honest, I was going to suggest moving this so the flow was a little better, but simply deleting the (2) and readjusting the notes after as needed would make it play and feel a lot better. Highly recommend you delete the (2)!
02:36:220 (1,2,3) - These are really crammed in the corner no? | Try moving the (1) up a bit so you can get a bit more room. | http://puu.sh/atzRN.jpg
02:41:720 (4) - Missing clap
02:47:970 (3) - Consider adding a clap to this to create the build-up for the end.
02:48:220 (1) - If you did the above, try adding a finish effect. The volume will make stay pretty low so it won't be disturbing much. If you do this, also put a finish at 01:20:220 (1) -
03:16:730 (2,3,1) - Lessen the curve on the (2) and have the (3) stacked on the (1). This is not very appealing to play since the flow has you pointed more towards the (1) instead of the (3). | http://puu.sh/atAaj.jpg
03:27:230 (3,4) - Because you use a slider at 03:27:730 (5) - You should really consider changing these into a slider as well. Mixing sliders / circles up can sometimes make the rhythm harder to adapt to.
03:56:230 (1,2,3) - Try adding a curve into the (1) and placing the (2) a bit lower so it can flow easier. The most troublesome part is the straight line from the tail of the (1) to the (3) | http://puu.sh/asR2F.jpg | Adjust notes after as needed.
03:58:730 (2) - How about turning this into a circle for the head and tail. This will let the player have a little bit of a gap instead of having all the 1/2 spacings in a row.

[Collab]
I really think this map went a bit too far overboard. Instead of making what would actually be a nice relaxing hard that suits the song very well, it goes and uses too many techniques that kills gameplay such as unnecessary 3/4 sliders (especially the 1/4 jumps halfway into the song) and lots of oddly shapes streams. It really isn't an ideal type of map, though people have their own styles I guess. Basically I feel this map, while not overmapped, is overmapped in terms of what a hard should look and feel like. The whole begining up until the middle of the first kiai is really well done, and it would be nice to have the whole map play like this.

01:12:220 (1,2) - 3/4 sliders for a hard? Why? They really don't even fit this song at all. There is more powerful noises happening on the red ticks, and you have more than enough triples here and there from the streams to not even need these things.
01:19:970 (1,2) - Add claps?It would really suit the song.
01:44:720 (1) - You can remove this NC. It's part of the same measure. There really is no reason for it. Remove 03:12:230 (1) - as well.
01:45:720 (2,3) - Move these closer together. It really doesn't give off a jumpy feeling.
02:11:220 (7,8) - This is impossible to read correctly. The way the flow makes you hit the (8) from the 6 -> 7 -> 8 makes this feel like a 1/2 note instead of a 1/1. You even spaced this out so it reads perfectly like a 1/2. There are pretty powerful vocals here as well. Two ideas. Reduce the distance between (6) and (7) or move (8) a lot further away.
02:24:220 (1) - I'll be blunt again, I'm really against these 1/4 jumps. If you want to use them, at least make them be within distance snap.
02:54:220 (1) - Because of the small bpm change you have. It might just be best to extend this slider. I don't really see the point of the 1/2 note after it. Kinda trollish anyways to be honest.
Hopefully you can find someone who can mod this according to your guys style of mapping. It just isn't for me. I spoke out about the main things, but that is about all I feel I should go into a diff that doesn't work against my thought process of mapping

Good luck on the mapset. I really like the song, and your maps are pretty nice, but there are some things about them I don't really think are reasonable or necessary for the song. I tried working on this on and off for the last two days, but it ended up becoming a nightmare, so I thought I'd just stop here instead of pounding my head trying to accept things.

Darcsol

277 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Darcsol 2014-07-28T17:34:11+00:00

Lanturn wrote:
[General]
Source: I wouldn't really use "It's A Wonderful World" as the source. It's better to use "Subarashiki Kono Sekai" or "すばらしきこのせかい"
Why? Do a quick Google search. Searching for the Literal translation yields almost no results, so it's a little strange. A translated title doesn't really work, because it would be better to use the actual English version's "The World Ends with You." I realize it is on the cover art but it's better to use the actual title instead. Adjust your tags after changing this.
In the end. I would recommend above all else to use すばらしきこのせかい as the source.
Title: The V in "vu" is lower-cased. See screenshot below:
http://puu.sh/aspWg.jpg
I agree with all of this. Fixed as soon as I figure out how to submit without uploading another map. Edit: Fixed.

Artist: 小池ジョアンナ
This seems to be how Joanna Koike prefers to write her name with her recent works. A good example is this song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pFMuxivK41E
A blog Post: http://ameblo.jp/koikejoanna/entry-11518208706.html (I wasn't sure if this was the same Joanna until I found this blog post an hour later.. lol)
This also means you should swap to Koike Joanna as the Romanised Artist! Included her name, but I'm holding off swapping her romanized name until I check the soundtrack. Edit: Sticking with the soundtrack.

You can disable widescreen support since you don't have any storyboard. Actually. Why not make a SB with the names in the collab of which part each person mapped. If you want, as it'll literally take 10 minutes to do, give me the times of each person and I'll be happy to add the names in for you. Disabled widescreen support. We were going to do a SB, but PimpG and I had a disagreement. No SB.

Kiai:
Your first Kiai ends at 01:03:720 - making it inconsistent with the other similar ones throughout the song. You should end this first kiai at 01:02:220 - or move the other two kiai ends at 02:30:220 - & 03:42:230 - to match. There is really no difference between The first and second chorus. Fixed.

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SPOILER
[Normal]
The combos would work much better on this difficulty if you did them every 2 measures or two big white lines. The song moves a bit slowly that it seems a bit strange that you cut it in half like you do. | http://puu.sh/asBPa.jpg I was iffy what I've done about it. You convinced me. Fixed.
The notes are kind of placed oddly in this map. It gives the map a kind of 2009/2010 feel (which kind of works for this song since it's so old) Really? I must be old...
The other thing on this difficulty that bugs me a little is that you use the small grid with distance snap and that causes some notes to be up to 0.05 - 0.10 off. Like for example: 00:49:220 (2) - is 1.02 and 0.96. There is actually quite a bit of a gap here between the distance snaps. If you were on the tiny grid, you could still use grid snap and move it down one point to 0.98 and 0.99. I highly suggest you go through the whole song, click on each note, and try to even up the distance snapping. I don't like mapping using the tiny grid. Feels too open. I'll try to clean it up.
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00:19:220 (2,3) - If you wanted to make these notes a bit more cleaner, you could consider stacking the (2) and (30 together. This will let you adjust the (3) to flow into the upcoming slider. I think it's fine.
00:29:720 (1) - This could be more balanced | http://puu.sh/asR8S.jpg | The slider is way to low for the angle it is trying to show. Fixed.
00:33:970 (1) - Small example of needed better distance snapping. It makes the map look much cleaner. Please use the tiny grid if you want to use Distance Snap, otherwise, just take it off. Considered.
00:36:220 (1) - This would be a little bit more cleaner placed to the right side of the slider instead of the left. When a player comes off from their mouse, they'll still be moving to the right a bit which will help them flow nicely into the next note. | http://puu.sh/asRee.jpg | In all hhonesty though, 00:34:970 (2) - might be better off curved a little. Adjusted the (1) slider. The long (2) slider is fine.
00:42:220 (1) - An example of oddly placed notes. The flow coming off the (2) to the (1) in question is pretty sharp. Afterwards the tail of the (1) transitioning into the (2) is also sharp again, for the angle the (2) is curved for anyways. It feels like the (2) should be moved up a bit more. | It's mostly just the combination of these two I'll make adjustments.
00:50:220 (1) - You should curve this to maintain the flow from the previous notes. | http://puu.sh/asQkO.jpg | Also consider remaking 00:48:220 (1) - because it really feels out of place. | http://puu.sh/asQhi.jpg Fixed.
01:09:220 (1) - If you do the NC every two measure thing I talked about above. You'll be able to get rid of the (1) combo before this. I highly recommend you do it! Combos are fixed.
01:11:720 (2) - Again, be careful of the DS. 1.08 is really unbalanced. Indeed. I'll be more aware of this.
01:46:220 (1) - Try rotating this slider so it feels more balanced on both ends. | http://puu.sh/atxeF.jpg Fixed.
01:47:720 (3,4,1) - I'll emphasize more on Pomuta's mod about this being too short. Right now you have the spacing at 0.57 which is almost half of the current DS you are doing. This will make any unaware player think these are 1/4 notes. I personally don't have any issue at all reading these, but I'm not new to the game. The key idea is to be able to make something that newer and inexperienced players can enjoy without getting too confused. However, this also works the other way. The beat in this song is so simple that it's almost impossible to misinterpret these as 1/4s. Again, that is just because I'm really used to how music works, and it won't be the same for the others. A good suggestion is to stack them together or use distance snap.
tl;dr? Easy for people who understand music, but not for players that are new to the game. Those people should be kept in mind above anyone else. They are stacked now.
01:50:220 (3) - If you didn't apply the NC suggestion, then you'll have to NC this for consistency. otherwise, you can leave this alone. NC already considered.
02:22:220 (1,2,3) - When going by the rest of your patterning in this difficulty. you don't map to the (2) in the song. To be honest, I was going to suggest moving this so the flow was a little better, but simply deleting the (2) and readjusting the notes after as needed would make it play and feel a lot better. Highly recommend you delete the (2)! (2) removed.
02:36:220 (1,2,3) - These are really crammed in the corner no? | Try moving the (1) up a bit so you can get a bit more room. | http://puu.sh/atzRN.jpg Fixed.
02:41:720 (4) - Missing clap Added.
02:47:970 (3) - Consider adding a clap to this to create the build-up for the end. Added.
02:48:220 (1) - If you did the above, try adding a finish effect. The volume will make stay pretty low so it won't be disturbing much. If you do this, also put a finish at 01:20:220 (1) - I think it's fine.
03:16:730 (2,3,1) - Lessen the curve on the (2) and have the (3) stacked on the (1). This is not very appealing to play since the flow has you pointed more towards the (1) instead of the (3). | http://puu.sh/atAaj.jpg Fixed.
03:27:230 (3,4) - Because you use a slider at 03:27:730 (5) - You should really consider changing these into a slider as well. Mixing sliders / circles up can sometimes make the rhythm harder to adapt to. I'm not sure what I'm looking at, but I'll try to fix it.
03:56:230 (1,2,3) - Try adding a curve into the (1) and placing the (2) a bit lower so it can flow easier. The most troublesome part is the straight line from the tail of the (1) to the (3) | http://puu.sh/asR2F.jpg | Adjust notes after as needed. Fixed.
03:58:730 (2) - How about turning this into a circle for the head and tail. This will let the player have a little bit of a gap instead of having all the 1/2 spacings in a row. Added.
[Collab] (Note: I'll only mod my parts)
I really think this map went a bit too far overboard. Instead of making what would actually be a nice relaxing hard that suits the song very well, it goes and uses too many techniques that kills gameplay such as unnecessary 3/4 sliders (especially the 1/4 jumps halfway into the song) and lots of oddly shapes streams. It really isn't an ideal type of map, though people have their own styles I guess. Basically I feel this map, while not overmapped, is overmapped in terms of what a hard should look and feel like. The whole begining up until the middle of the first kiai is really well done, and it would be nice to have the whole map play like this. I agree with you. The clashing mapping styles of us are noticeable. But our styles must be compatible in order for this diff to be playable. I hope we can make adjustments to smooth things out.
01:19:970 (1,2) - Add claps?It would really suit the song. Added.
01:44:720 (1) - You can remove this NC. It's part of the same measure. There really is no reason for it. Remove 03:12:230 (1) - as well. Both removed.
02:11:220 (7,8) - This is impossible to read correctly. The way the flow makes you hit the (8) from the 6 -> 7 -> 8 makes this feel like a 1/2 note instead of a 1/1. You even spaced this out so it reads perfectly like a 1/2. There are pretty powerful vocals here as well. Two ideas. Reduce the distance between (6) and (7) or move (8) a lot further away. Fixed.

Good luck on the mapset. I really like the song, and your maps are pretty nice, but there are some things about them I don't really think are reasonable or necessary for the song. I tried working on this on and off for the last two days, but it ended up becoming a nightmare, so I thought I'd just stop here instead of pounding my head trying to accept things. I would recommend spit out everything you felt about this map. If you have more to say, why stop yourself from it? Nonetheless, this is good modding.

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-07-28T21:06:56+00:00

Darcsol wrote:
We were going to do a SB, but pimpG and I had a disagreement. No SB.

there is no need to mention this lol

Lanturn wrote:
[Collab]
I really think this map went a bit too far overboard. Instead of making what would actually be a nice relaxing hard that suits the song very well, it goes and uses too many techniques that kills gameplay such as unnecessary 3/4 sliders (especially the 1/4 jumps halfway into the song) and lots of oddly shapes streams. It really isn't an ideal type of map, though people have their own styles I guess. Basically I feel this map, while not overmapped, is overmapped in terms of what a hard should look and feel like. The whole begining up until the middle of the first kiai is really well done, and it would be nice to have the whole map play like this. (yeah i usually have problems with flow and shape, i don't really know how to make them better, but the rhythm choices are okay imo, i'm happy with my 3/4's and i think that they are okay for hard level, i map with any kind of rhythm if it helps to make my mappings less repetitive.)
01:12:220 (1,2) - 3/4 sliders for a hard? Why? They really don't even fit this song at all. There is more powerful noises happening on the red ticks, and you have more than enough triples here and there from the streams to not even need these things. (preference i guess)
01:44:720 (1) - You can remove this NC. It's part of the same measure. There really is no reason for it. Remove 03:12:230 (1) - as well. (i thought that i told you to not fix things on my parts ._. disagree with both. that's prefference)
01:45:720 (2,3) - Move these closer together. It really doesn't give off a jumpy feeling. (i don't want a difficult jump, the current is fine for this part)
02:24:220 (1) - I'll be blunt again, I'm really against these 1/4 jumps. If you want to use them, at least make them be within distance snap. (sure that the distance snap is higher here but i wouldn't call this jumps, does not requires any advanced jumping skill to catch this notes, for this arrangement it looks better like that)
02:54:220 (1) - Because of the small bpm change you have. It might just be best to extend this slider. I don't really see the point of the 1/2 note after it. Kinda trollish anyways to be honest. (the offset change is barely noticeable and the od is friendly enough, as humans we always miss the tempo of the notes even if just a small difference. again, i try anything to make my mappings less repetitive, the spinner is long enough and even if its a bit trolling its fitting, so i will keep)
Hopefully you can find someone who can mod this according to your guys style of mapping. It just isn't for me. I spoke out about the main things, but that is about all I feel I should go into a diff that doesn't work against my thought process of mapping
(sorry about that : /
i guess an unstable mapper like me shoud not be joining collabs )

thanks for random modding

Fatfan Kolek

590 posts

Joined January 2013

Fatfan Kolek 2014-08-02T01:14:22+00:00

Mod4Mod, sry for delay orz ;w;

[Normal]

00:34:970 (5) - I would make it shorter, so that it last to the red tick on 00:35:470. In addition you can place a circle on 00:35:720 - then!
00:42:220 - Try this rhythm since your current pattern doesn't follow anything to be honest. http://puu.sh/aAGBt/527c5914ee.jpg
02:13:720 - Here also, try this rhythm. http://puu.sh/aAGWB/9f294c64c8.jpg
02:24:720 - Why didn't you place a circle here? D: This part is not different from the others I'd say.
03:22:230 (4,5,6) - I recommend to place a reverse slider here. Keep in mind that new players don't have any consistent accuracy, so placing 3 circles in a row is kinda hard for them to play.
03:36:730 (2,3) - Why the stack here? It's feels confusing since you haven't used it elsewhere. :O

[Collab]

Just a question. Is the difficulty name "Collab" even rankable? Don't you have to name it at least "Collab Hard" then?

00:32:720 (2,3,4) - The spacing of (3) and (4) is the same like it is for (2) and (3) which makes it a bit hard to read and play properly. I'd in your case just decrease the spacing between (3) and (4).
00:46:220 (3) - Is this supposed to be a blanket? If you, you can fix it. :3
01:12:220 (1,2,3) - These are a bit hard to play since the following circle doesn't follow the route of the slider and is placed a bit too far to the left.
02:11:720 (8,9,10,1) - The spacing in addition with the flow is a bit weird here. I'd again decrease the spacing from (8) and (9) or just ctrl+g (9), (10) and (1).
02:16:220 (1,2,3) - Here aswell as I mentioned two points before. These are harder to play than they look like.
03:42:230 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Yeah, those are questionable for me. I think you might ask a BAT if they're ok. D:

Good luck with this mapset. o/

Last edited by Fatfan Kolek 2014-08-03T23:42:15+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Darcsol

277 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Darcsol 2014-08-03T18:12:43+00:00

Fatfan Kolek wrote:
[Normal]
00:34:970 (5) - I would make it shorter, so that it last to the red tick on 00:35:470. In addition you can place a circle on 00:35:720 - then! I think it's fine.
00:42:220 - Try this rhythm since your current pattern doesn't follow anything to be honest. http://puu.sh/aAGBt/527c5914ee.jpg This pattern doesn't follow anything anyway. I think it's fine.
02:13:720 - Here also, try this rhythm. http://puu.sh/aAGWB/9f294c64c8.jpg Doesn't fit.
02:24:720 - Why didn't you place a circle here? D: This part is not different from the others I'd say. Re-added.
03:22:230 (4,5,6) - I recommend to place a reverse slider here. Keep in mind that new players don't have any consistent accuracy, so placing 3 circles in a row is kinda hard for them to play. I think it's fine. I never intend this diff to cater to new players.
03:36:730 (2,3) - Why the stack here? It's feels confusing since you haven't used it elsewhere. :O Here are a few examples: 00:56:720 (2,3) - 02:40:720 (2,3) - 03:36:730 (2,3) - Please pay closer attention.

[Collab] Note: I'll only mod my parts
Just a question. Is the difficulty name "Collab" even rankable? Don't you have to name it at least "Collab Hard" then? I'm not sure myself, but I will not rename it "Collab Hard". I'm considering to rename it to "Hard" though, with collab info in the map description.
02:11:720 (8,9,10,1) - The spacing in addition with the flow is a bit weird here. I'd again decrease the spacing from (8) and (9) or just ctrl+g (9), (10) and (1). (9,10,1) is closer to (8) now. Won't flip them though.

Next time, don't post an incomplete mod.

Last edited by Darcsol 2014-08-03T23:53:58+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-08-03T23:12:01+00:00

Fatfan Kolek wrote:
[Collab]
Just a question. Is the difficulty name "Collab" even rankable? Don't you have to name it at least "Collab Hard" then?
i think its fine, check this collabs: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/181816 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/171275
00:32:720 (2,3,4) - The spacing of (3) and (4) is the same like it is for (2) and (3) which makes it a bit hard to read and play properly. I'd in your case just decrease the spacing between (3) and (4). (the jump is fine at 3 and 4 but there is an antijump at 2 to 3, it may confuse people if they don't pay attention but i like it)
00:46:220 (3) - Is this supposed to be a blanket? If you, you can fix it. :3 (sure, moved the circle a bit)
01:12:220 (1,2,3) - These are a bit hard to play since the following circle doesn't follow the route of the slider and is placed a bit too far to the left.
(it's still touching the slider so should not be that hard, played fine here)
02:16:220 (1,2,3) - Here aswell as I mentioned two points before. These are harder to play than they look like. (planning to make some changes here, out of ideas atm)
03:42:230 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Yeah, those are questionable for me. I think you might ask a BAT if they're ok. D:
(it played fine here so it should not need to call a bat, it's up to the map owner anyway)

Good luck with this mapset. o/

updates are on my next reply

thanks for modding

Last edited by pimp 2014-08-05T21:43:59+00:00, edited 6 times in total.

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Spayyce 2014-08-05T17:19:54+00:00

Mod!

is a M4M

[Normal]

00:19:220 (5,1) - These notes aren't connected, arrange the heads in a neat triangle pattern, I think it looks neat like this

:

SPOILER

http://gyazo.com/06804472f3633ad80a18c56751deaa89

00:21:220 (2,3) - Blanket these notes, improves the flow and the looks.

00:22:220 (3,1) - ^^

00:27:220 (5,1) - ^

00:37:970 (4,5) - Move this so that the 5th note is horizontal with the end of slider 4. It improves flow imo.

00:43:220 (2) - Ugly placement of the note, move it up a touch to make the flow better, a bit like the previous suggestion.

01:06:720 (5,6) - The music doesn't change so the stack shouldn't be there, the consistency breaks here, I suggest moving it out from the stack since the music doesn't call for it.

02:18:220 (5,6) - Make these parallel perhaps, so the head and end of the slider are at the same place like this :

SPOILER

http://gyazo.com/193b3e5238598451e1181da91f405bff

02:32:220 (1,2) - I think these should stack, like they did before, if you're following a stack for this (which you should since the music has the same beat here for a bit).

02:50:220 (4,5) - Blanket here perhaps, will make the 5th note not look as lonely. :3

03:36:730 (2,3) - If these stack the rest should since the music is the same around the 1st till the 4th note.

Overall: Nice map, loved the notes, some creative patterns and retained a nice flow.

[Collab]

00:19:470 (8,1) - Ugly blanket here, move the 1st note in the new combo further right so it is blanketed nicely.

00:23:470 (8,1) - ^

00:25:970 (5,6) - Unnecessary stack here, the music hasn't changed yet so your flow shouldn't.

00:33:720 (3,4) - The unsuspecting player might not realise the shortness of the time between these two notes since the song doesn't have a dramatic change to call for a note space like this. Although I could be wrong here.

00:36:720 (1,2) - Another ugly blanket, the 2nd sliders head should blanket the end of the 1st slider, so it has a nice flow and feel to it.

00:39:720 (7,8) - These should definately be spaced it's confusing for players to read this and 00:39:970 (8,9,10) these should be done like the previous triplets were done for a nice consistency. For example make them like these 00:27:970 (10,11,1) .

00:56:220 (1,2) - This is a bit weird to have after the previous stacks, it breaks the flow, even though it fits the song, I suggest spacing them.

01:12:220 (1,2,3) - Eww. Don't try this it looks messy, space them out or try a new shape combo here.

01:49:220 (2,3) - Blanket this properly and precisely for a better flow in the map and looks. Because looks is everything

02:16:220 (1,2) - These two don't look nice together, the third one is nice since it the end of the 2nd slider fits nicely with the 3rd slider, however these ones look off.

02:30:470 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Sudden difficulty increase, breaks consistency, I suggest a tone down here.

02:44:220 (1,2) - Blanket please, same reasons as before.

02:45:220 (3,5) - These two don't look nice, move the 5th note to the head of where the 3rd note was to prettify it.

03:18:230 (5,6) - ^^

Overall: Nice fun map to play! Enjoyed it. Nice triplets and fun kiai time parts, although there is a lot of kiai time XD

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-08-05T21:00:32+00:00

KyleDinny wrote:
Mod!

is a M4M

Overall: Nice map, loved the notes, some creative patterns and retained a nice flow.

cool

[Collab]

00:33:720 (3,4) - The unsuspecting player might not realise the shortness of the time between these two notes since the song doesn't have a dramatic change to call for a note space like this. Although I could be wrong here. (ds changes are not my strong point, i know. but i think its fitting, not planning to change this)

00:36:720 (1,2) - Another ugly blanket, the 2nd sliders head should blanket the end of the 1st slider, so it has a nice flow and feel to it. (this is not a blanket)

00:39:720 (7,8) - These should definately be spaced it's confusing for players to read this and 00:39:970 (8,9,10) these should be done like the previous triplets were done for a nice consistency. For example make them like these 00:27:970 (10,11,1) . (there is a lot of maps with this kind of stacks, not planning to change this)

01:12:220 (1,2,3) - Eww. Don't try this it looks messy, space them out or try a new shape combo here. (everybody hates my sliders D: i still don't know what is wrong with them)

01:49:220 (2,3) - Blanket this properly and precisely for a better flow in the map and looks. Because looks is everything (this is not meant to be a blanket at all, i guess)

02:16:220 (1,2) - These two don't look nice together, the third one is nice since it the end of the 2nd slider fits nicely with the 3rd slider, however these ones look off. (planning to make some changes here, out of ideas atm)

02:30:470 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Sudden difficulty increase, breaks consistency, I suggest a tone down here. (planning to make some changes here, out of ideas atm)

Overall: Nice fun map to play! Enjoyed it. Nice triplets and fun kiai time parts, although there is a lot of kiai time XD
glad you liked, kiai is awesome

thanks for modding

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Darcsol

277 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Darcsol 2014-08-06T04:22:55+00:00

KyleDinny wrote:
[Normal]

00:19:220 (5,1) - These notes aren't connected, arrange the heads in a neat triangle pattern, I think it looks neat like this :
SPOILER
http://gyazo.com/06804472f3633ad80a18c56751deaa89

00:21:220 (2,3) - Blanket these notes, improves the flow and the looks.

00:22:220 (3,1) - ^^

00:27:220 (5,1) - ^ I don't think the above are necessary. It's a stylistic choice.

00:37:970 (4,5) - Move this so that the 5th note is horizontal with the end of slider 4. It improves flow imo.

00:43:220 (2) - Ugly placement of the note, move it up a touch to make the flow better, a bit like the previous suggestion. I think it's fine.

01:06:720 (5,6) - The music doesn't change so the stack shouldn't be there, the consistency breaks here, I suggest moving it out from the stack since the music doesn't call for it. How so? Please explain. Until then, no change.

02:18:220 (5,6) - Make these parallel perhaps, so the head and end of the slider are at the same place like this :
SPOILER
http://gyazo.com/193b3e5238598451e1181da91f405bff
Fixed

02:32:220 (1,2) - I think these should stack, like they did before, if you're following a stack for this (which you should since the music has the same beat here for a bit). Fixed

02:50:220 (4,5) - Blanket here perhaps, will make the 5th note not look as lonely. :3 5th note will stay lonely.

03:36:730 (2,3) - If these stack the rest should since the music is the same around the 1st till the 4th note. I think it's fine.

[Collab]

00:19:470 (8,1) - Ugly blanket here, move the 1st note in the new combo further right so it is blanketed nicely.

00:23:470 (8,1) - ^ Again, it's a stylistic choice.

00:25:970 (5,6) - Unnecessary stack here, the music hasn't changed yet so your flow shouldn't. I think it's fine.

00:56:220 (1,2) - This is a bit weird to have after the previous stacks, it breaks the flow, even though it fits the song, I suggest spacing them. It works as intended.

02:44:220 (1,2) - Blanket please, same reasons as before.

02:45:220 (3,5) - These two don't look nice, move the 5th note to the head of where the 3rd note was to prettify it.

03:18:230 (5,6) - ^^ The above are not necessary.

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-08-06T20:11:22+00:00

my mod repy to KyleDinny includes update from both mods
you should use my version to make changes on your parts since i reply before you

SkinnyJommy

788 posts

Joined January 2014

SkinnyJommy 2014-08-17T18:39:29+00:00

Hi there, here's my part of M4M

[Collab]

00:23:470 (8) - Move this to 404, 328 just to keep the distance snap equal

00:32:720 (2,3,4) - Spacing problem here, 3 is the same distance away from 2 as it is from 4, but 4 is a lot closer on the timeline, so you need to move 4 a little closer to 3, so it's not confusing to someone playing because 2 and 4 are the same distance away from 3, but 4 has to be clicked a lot earlier, if that makes sense

00:39:970 (8,9,10) - I don't like single notes on top of stacks, so consider moving this stack to 488, 240

01:19:970 (1) - Remove NC

01:20:720 (4) - Add NC

02:04:220 (1) - Remove NC

02:04:720 (2) - Add NC

03:18:230 (5) - This should be closer to 4 because its only 2 ticks away on the timeline

03:37:230 (3) - Maybe move this to 392, 92

03:42:230 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This part is really weird

[Normal]

I found nothing wrong with this difficulty, but that might be because I'm bad at modding easier difficulties, or this map is just PERFECT!

I'd go with the 2nd one

Hopefully this helped you out a little bit

GL

Darcsol

277 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Darcsol 2014-08-18T00:55:42+00:00

skinnyjimmy wrote:
[Collab] Note: I'll only mod my parts

00:23:470 (8) - Move this to 404, 328 just to keep the distance snap equal Fixed

01:19:970 (1) - Remove NC Fixed

01:20:720 (4) - Add NC Why? It doesn't make sense.

02:04:220 (1) - Remove NC

02:04:720 (2) - Add NC I think these two are fine.

03:18:230 (5) - This should be closer to 4 because its only 2 ticks away on the timeline I think it's fine.

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-08-20T22:56:59+00:00

the suggestions to my parts are the same stuff as the previous modders mentioned
skipping because ~~i'm a hopeless stubborn~~ i think it's mapper's prefference

still considering this if more people complain / might change my mind and apply it later without more opinions:

03:37:230 (3) - Maybe move this to 392, 92

thanks for modding skinnyjimmy

_______________________________________________________________________________________

this update was made on the latest version of the collab
it includes suggestions from the last three modders
one of the changes i made requires a small change on your part. i'm sorry about that.

update

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48220
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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GridSize: 4
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Title:Deja vu
TitleUnicode:Déjà vu
Artist:Joanna Koike
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:Darcsol
Version:Collab
Source:すばらしきこのせかい
Tags:pimpG Takeharu Ishimoto Subarashiki Kono Sekai Konosekai + The World Ends with You It's a Wonderful World soundtrack Square Enix JRPG Nintendo DS Apple iOS Google Android pop
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
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Hisoka

89 posts

Joined March 2013

Hisoka 2014-08-26T21:24:37+00:00

Hey M4M here

NORMAL:

Everything seems very fine, maybe there could be a few more curves in a few sliders, but anything seems right.

00:38:970 (5) Put this one a little bit down?
00:42:220 (1) I think this should end at OO:42:720 to fit into the rythm

Sry, that I could not find much^^

COLLAB:

The distances are sometimes without Distance-Snap; good for a collab-map
The rythm in the middleparts is nice and fitting. So are the little streams

00:32:720 (2) Dunnow why, but Id like it the other way (Ctrl+g)
00:39:970 (8,9,10) Put this triple at an other point?
02:56:230 (1) I personally dont like hitcircles directly after spinners in maps with a lower diff than insane...But thats only my pov
03:37:480 (4) Maybe change the direction of this one with (Ctrl+g), too?

I did not find much to critizize. I especially like the little raise of difficulty after the beginning and after the middlepart.

Nice Beginner-Beatmap!

Darcsol

277 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Darcsol 2014-08-26T22:01:44+00:00

HouseForever wrote:
NORMAL:

00:38:970 (5) Put this one a little bit down? Fixed.
00:42:220 (1) I think this should end at OO:42:720 to fit into the rythm I don't understand?

COLLAB: Note: I'll only mod my parts... which there is none.

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-08-28T21:58:11+00:00

HouseForever wrote:
Hey M4M here

NORMAL:

Everything seems very fine, maybe there could be a few more curves in a few sliders, but anything seems right.

00:38:970 (5) Put this one a little bit down?
00:42:220 (1) I think this should end at OO:42:720 to fit into the rythm (explained better and Darcsol agreed to change)

Sry, that I could not find much^^

COLLAB:

The distances are sometimes without Distance-Snap; good for a collab-map
The rythm in the middleparts is nice and fitting. So are the little streams

00:32:720 (2) Dunnow why, but Id like it the other way (Ctrl+g) (seems to work too. but i already have similar arrangement in other parts so i want to keep the current. changed a bit, tried to make more accurate symmetry)
00:39:970 (8,9,10) Put this triple at an other point? (i like it so i will keep)
02:56:230 (1) I personally dont like hitcircles directly after spinners in maps with a lower diff than insane...But thats only my pov (the spinner is long enough and the circle is at the middle and has friendly rhythm. shouldn't be a problem for hard difficulty players)
03:37:480 (4) Maybe change the direction of this one with (Ctrl+g), too? (doesn't really works. would require a bit of remapping.)

I did not find much to critizize. I especially like the little raise of difficulty after the beginning and after the middlepart.

Nice Beginner-Beatmap! (thanks for modding )

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Artist:Joanna Koike
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:Darcsol
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Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2014-09-13T21:13:46+00:00

M4M~

Trifle: Just small things you might want to consider.
Preference: Just my humble opinion on stuff.

[General]

01:28:470 - and 02:56:480 - I'm not quite sure why you are delaying the break time here, but it's better if you put this off.
I feel like the overall volume in this map is a bit too low. It might be better to increase it by 5/10% (especially for the hitsounds since they are qutie unnoticable here else).
04:04:230 - End the last note on the spinners with a soft-hitnormal sound, it sounds more appealing to me than the normal-hitnormal one.
It feels like this map could need an easy mapset for a better diff spread.

[Normal]

You forgot to set clap HS. A lot. I'll just point them out here cause it'd be to much to give every single one of them a note:
00:21:220 (2) -, 00:25:720 (3) -, 00:31:470 (5) -, 00:33:720 (3) -, 00:42:970 (2) -, 00:57:720 (4) -, 02:06:970 -, 02:10:970 - , 02:14:220 -
00:42:220 (1) - Delete the NC, not needed here.
00:53:220 (2) - Preference: Add a red anchor at the center of this slider to fit better to the beats of the music. http://puu.sh/bxBdm/741b2c332d.jpg .
There are several points where it would be possible too, so feel free to decide at which places you want to make these red anchors (if ever):
01:01:220 (2) -, 01:09:220 (2) - , 01:17:220 (2) -
00:56:720 (2,3) - This stack feels a bit random, mind using DS here instead?
01:03:220 - Preference: delete clap HS here, it feels overplaced.

[Collab]

You are going to use whistle HS on whole sliders here while you didn't do anything like that in the normal diff. It's inconsistent, I'd either go with whistle HS on the appropriate sliders in the normal diff as well
or you just leave them out in both diffs. But don't go the one and then the other way, this also holds truth since you took part in the collab diff.
Missing claps: 00:28:720 (2) - ,00:31:720 (7) -
00:24:220 (1) - Trifle: Check the DS again, it should be exactly 1.50x (see top-right)
*]00:39:720 (7,8,9,10) - Preference: Don't stack 7 with the triple here, they should be distinct.
00:50:220 (6) - Delete whistle HS on the slider (not the one at the sliderstart)
00:55:470 (8) - Add a whistle here instead of 00:55:220 - , feels more natural
00:57:720 (5) - Preference: I'd just put a whitle HS at sliderend only, it feels like too much whistle for me instead.
01:03:220 (9) - Whistle HS on sliderend instead?
01:11:720 - Add a whistle here.
01:14:220 (7,8,9,10) - It'd be better for flow if you use equal distances here (2.0xDS) to arrange the windmill pattern (which looks a bit shaky anyway)
01:24:220 (1) - I recommend you map this out. As this is the hardest diff in the mapset, it should also offer the most to the music.
02:06:220 (2,3,4,5) - It doesn't really do much for me to add a small jump from 4->5, just go with equal distances here: http://puu.sh/bxFXB/c4e97c868d.jpg (1.2xDS)
02:12:220 (1) - You should either go with NC at white ticks like this the previous time in this map already or, just like you did before, start the NC at the white tick after the longer one if there's no note inbetween them (e.g. 00:40:220 (10,1) - ,02:04:220 (10,1) -)
02:14:720 - Add a NC here to split the long violet combo up.
02:30:470 (1) - NC here.
02:36:720 (2,3,4) - Why the jump from 3->4 here? Please use equal distances here.
02:50:220 (1) - NC here.
03:27:230 (1) - Start NC here or somewhere inbetween, this combo should be split up.
03:29:230 (3,4) - Trifle: Please blanket appropriately.
03:16:730 (1) - NC should start here first.
03:34:230 (5,6,7,8) - The pattern from 7-8 should be similar to the one from 5-6 to keep it consistent - that means: switch 7 into a straight slider and reposition.

That's all for me to say for now. Good luck for this map, I'm out! o/

Greetings,
paseli

Darcsol

277 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Darcsol 2014-09-14T18:28:28+00:00

paseli wrote:
[General]
01:28:470 - and 02:56:480 - I'm not quite sure why you are delaying the break time here, but it's better if you put this off. I think it's fine.
I feel like the overall volume in this map is a bit too low. It might be better to increase it by 5/10% (especially for the hitsounds since they are qutie unnoticable here else). It sounds right to me. Maybe it's my sound settings, but I'll consider it if enough people are for it.
04:04:230 - End the last note on the spinners with a soft-hitnormal sound, it sounds more appealing to me than the normal-hitnormal one. Fixed.
It feels like this map could need an easy mapset for a better diff spread. I hope not. There are issues in Hard to clean up, but I'll consider an Easy mapset if enough people are for it.
[Normal]
You forgot to set clap HS. A lot. I'll just point them out here cause it'd be to much to give every single one of them a note:
00:21:220 (2) -, 00:25:720 (3) -, 00:31:470 (5) -, 00:33:720 (3) -, 00:42:970 (2) -, 00:57:720 (4) -, 02:06:970 -, 02:10:970 - , 02:14:220 - All added, but some of them already have clap HS.
00:42:220 (1) - Delete the NC, not needed here. Fixed.
00:53:220 (2) - Preference: Add a red anchor at the center of this slider to fit better to the beats of the music. http://puu.sh/bxBdm/741b2c332d.jpg .
There are several points where it would be possible too, so feel free to decide at which places you want to make these red anchors (if ever):
01:01:220 (2) -, 01:09:220 (2) - , 01:17:220 (2) - Not of fan of anchored sliders.
00:56:720 (2,3) - This stack feels a bit random, mind using DS here instead? I think it's fine. I do this throughout the diff for consistency.
01:03:220 - Preference: delete clap HS here, it feels overplaced. I think it's fine. I do this throughout the diff. You haven't said it anywhere else.
[Collab]
Note: I'll only include my parts
You are going to use whistle HS on whole sliders here while you didn't do anything like that in the normal diff. It's inconsistent, I'd either go with whistle HS on the appropriate sliders in the normal diff as well
or you just leave them out in both diffs. But don't go the one and then the other way, this also holds truth since you took part in the collab diff. I've always intended to include whistle HS in Normal, but I'm still figuring out how to create an appropriate pattern for it. I'm not good in creating hitsounds.
Missing claps: 00:28:720 (2) - ,00:31:720 (7) - Fixed
00:24:220 (1) - Trifle: Check the DS again, it should be exactly 1.50x (see top-right) Fixed
00:50:220 (6) - Delete whistle HS on the slider (not the one at the sliderstart) Deleted on sliderstart instead. It is intended.
00:55:470 (8) - Add a whistle here instead of 00:55:220 - , feels more natural Considered
00:57:720 (5) - Preference: I'd just put a whitle HS at sliderend only, it feels like too much whistle for me instead. Removed whistle on slidermid
01:03:220 (9) - Whistle HS on sliderend instead? Considered
01:24:220 (1) - I recommend you map this out. As this is the hardest diff in the mapset, it should also offer the most to the music. I disagree. I'm all for consistency. If I map this part, then Normal should be mapped as well.
02:06:220 (2,3,4,5) - It doesn't really do much for me to add a small jump from 4->5, just go with equal distances here: http://puu.sh/bxFXB/c4e97c868d.jpg (1.2xDS) I think it's fine.
02:12:220 (1) - You should either go with NC at white ticks like this the previous time in this map already or, just like you did before, start the NC at the white tick after the longer one if there's no note inbetween them (e.g. 00:40:220 (10,1) - ,02:04:220 (10,1) -) Actually that was a mistake. Thanks for picking it up.
02:14:720 - Add a NC here to split the long violet combo up. Considered
02:36:720 (2,3,4) - Why the jump from 3->4 here? Please use equal distances here. It is intended.
03:27:230 (1) - Start NC here or somewhere inbetween, this combo should be split up. Considered
03:16:730 (1) - NC should start here first. I disagree for consistency.

Greetings, You can't say "greetings" in the end. That's improper etiquette.
paseli

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-09-15T00:13:21+00:00

paseli wrote:
M4M~

Trifle: Just small things you might want to consider.
Preference: Just my humble opinion on stuff.

[Collab]
00:39:720 (7,8,9,10) - Preference: Don't stack 7 with the triple here, they should be distinct. (changed since a lot of people complained. ~~i hate you guys :v~~)
01:11:720 - Add a whistle here. (only added whistles for some louder vocals, i have a simple logic for them)
01:14:220 (7,8,9,10) - It'd be better for flow if you use equal distances here (2.0xDS) to arrange the windmill pattern (which looks a bit shaky anyway) (i like the shape and it flows nicely imo)
02:30:470 (1) - NC here. (works for me, but this ruins the current nc logic, its up to the map owner)
02:50:220 (1) - NC here. (same as above)
03:29:230 (3,4) - Trifle: Please blanket appropriately. (this is not meant to be a blanket, but its not bad imo)
03:34:230 (5,6,7,8) - The pattern from 7-8 should be similar to the one from 5-6 to keep it consistent - that means: switch 7 into a straight slider and reposition.(6 7 8 is symmetry. wont look nice if 7 becomes a straight slider)
That's all for me to say for now. Good luck for this map, I'm out! o/

Greetings,
paseli

thanks for modding

___________________________________________________

made some changes by my own again, ( 01:58:220 - )

update

osu file format v13

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i just noticed the last spinner starts on a blue tick
thats weird ´_´

please make it start at 04:00:230 -

okdesu_old

76 posts

Joined November 2012

okdesu_old 2014-09-17T03:30:48+00:00

suggestion
should fix
must fix

[General]

GOOD SONG can i make guest diff? ↓
i think you need harder diff

[Normal]

01:08:220 (1) - end 01:08:720 - , add note 01:08:970 -
01:09:220 (3) - maybe too long. end here? 01:09:970 - you can try this
02:56:230 - maybe better if you map it
03:15:230 (5) - move here 03:14:980 -
03:17:980 (4) -
03:22:480 (5) - remove
03:26:230 (3,4,5,6,7) - or something similar
03:43:230 - let white tick free
03:49:980 (4) - remove
03:56:980 (2) - remove
03:59:730 (9,1) - try something else

[Collab]

00:25:970 (5,6) - remove 5, move 6 to 5
00:29:970 (3,4) - remove 3, move 4 to 3, add note after
00:33:970 (4) - i think it's too long. pull back to red tick, add note after?
00:45:970 - add note
00:51:970 - add note
00:54:095 - add note
01:02:220 (5) - remove
01:04:220 (1,2,3) - it's not so bad but maybe don't use blue tick
01:05:470 (4) - try half size
01:09:220 (3) - half size, add slider from 01:09:970 - to 01:10:470 - , add note 01:10:595 -
01:11:220 (5) - stop here 01:11:595 -
01:12:220 - only use white ticks until 01:13:220 -
01:13:595 (4) - remove
01:14:220 - only use white ticks until 01:15:220 -
01:17:470 - try add note
01:18:470 - ^
01:22:220 (4) - move to 01:21:970 - , add note after
01:24:220 (1) - try something different
01:45:970 (4) - double size
01:48:720 (1) - double size
01:53:970 (2) - double size
01:56:220 (7,1,2) - maybe overmap white-red-white-red. try white-white-red or white-red-white-<pause>
01:59:220 (8,9) - replace with slider
02:11:470 - add note
02:15:220 (12,13,1,2,3,4,5) - this is very well done
02:22:220 (4) - move to 02:21:970 - and double size
02:24:095 - add note
02:24:220 (1,2) - only use white tick
02:26:220 (7,8) - only use white tick
02:28:220 - try something similar
02:48:970 (2) - stop 02:49:220 -
02:50:220 - stop 02:50:470 - , add notes 02:50:720 - 02:50:845 -
02:54:220 (1,1) - map next part
03:10:230 - add spinner until 03:11:730 -
03:15:230 - let white tick free
03:15:980 - ↑ if you do, add note
03:22:230 - let white tick free
03:28:730 (2) - stop 03:29:105 -
03:33:230 (3) - half size repeat slider
03:34:230 - let white tick free
03:35:230 - ↑
03:42:230 - ↑
03:43:355 - this is maybe too hard for your diff, but try add note here 03:43:355 - and here 03:43:855 -
03:52:230 (1) - double size

i mod many part but in general i like it very much! i hope it helps you ! take star ☆

gl (｀・ω・´)ｼｬｷｰﾝ

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-09-17T22:59:52+00:00

i will wait until Darcsol replies to your mod to check my parts

this is my update from last mod

update

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48220
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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DistanceSpacing: 1
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GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9

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Title:Deja vu
TitleUnicode:Déjà vu
Artist:Joanna Koike
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:Darcsol
Version:Collab
Source:すばらしきこのせかい
Tags:pimpG Takeharu Ishimoto Subarashiki Kono Sekai Konosekai + The World Ends with You It's a Wonderful World soundtrack Square Enix JRPG Nintendo DS Apple iOS Google Android pop
BeatmapID:458454
BeatmapSetID:192848

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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Darcsol

277 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Darcsol 2014-09-18T06:01:21+00:00

okdesu wrote:
[General]
GOOD SONG can i make guest diff? ↓
i think you need harder diff Sorry, not accepting guest diffs. Give me a good reason why this map needs a harder diff.
[Normal]
01:08:220 (1) - end 01:08:720 - , add note 01:08:970 - Considered
01:09:220 (3) - maybe too long. end here? 01:09:970 - you can try this I think this is fine.
02:56:230 - maybe better if you map it Not necessary. It's good place for a break.
03:15:230 (5) - move here 03:14:980 - I think it's fine.
03:17:980 (4) - I think it's fine.
03:22:480 (5) - remove Made a different change instead.
03:26:230 (3,4,5,6,7) - or something similar Changed
03:43:230 - let white tick free Not sure what you mean, but I'm considering a change nonetheless.
03:49:980 (4) - remove
03:56:980 (2) - remove Both I think are fine.
03:59:730 (9,1) - try something else Got an example? Otherwise I think it's fine.
[Collab] Note: I'll only mod my parts
00:25:970 (5,6) - remove 5, move 6 to 5 Wouldn't (5) be in the same spot? I don't think it's good for flow.
00:29:970 (3,4) - remove 3, move 4 to 3, add note after Removing (3) creates a sudden stop in flow. A 1/4 note cannot fit.
00:51:970 - add note Not necessary.
00:54:095 - add note I don't see why a 1/4 note be here. This makes the diff unnecessarily harder.
01:02:220 (5) - remove Why?
01:22:220 (4) - move to 01:21:970 - , add note after Doesn't make sense.
01:24:220 (1) - try something different Give me an example. A spinner is fine.
02:11:470 - add note Not necessary.
02:15:220 (12,13,1,2,3,4,5) - this is very well done Why thank you.
03:10:230 - add spinner until 03:11:730 - Not necessary.
03:15:230 - let white tick free
03:15:980 - ↑ if you do, add note
03:22:230 - let white tick free I don't understand why I should let the white tick "free".
03:52:230 (1) - double size Unnecessary

Sadly, this mod is not helpful. I question why should I accept this. Either it's miscommunication or poor suggestions.

Darcsol

277 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Darcsol 2014-09-18T06:01:55+00:00

Double post. Don't know how this happened.

Last edited by Darcsol 2014-09-18T22:32:45+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-09-18T20:54:13+00:00

Darcsol wrote:
Double post. Don't how this happened.

you can ask a bat/gmt to remove this post

Darcsol wrote:
Sadly, this mod is not helpful. I question why should I accept this. Either it's miscommunication or poor suggestions.

give him a break xD he is obviously a new mapper/modder

okdesu wrote:
suggestion
should fix
must fix

[General]
GOOD SONG can i make guest diff? ↓
i think you need harder diff
ranking criteria wrote:
Mapsets must have at least two difficulties of the same game mode, one of which must be an Easy/Normal level. It is possible for Marathon difficulties to have only 1 difficulty, but it must be named Marathon for the BSS to allow the submission to pending.
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

yeah we dont really need a harder diff here. not for ranking purposes, it's about preference. ofc having an insane diff makes the beatmap more interesting for skilled players, but we are considering that this song is relaxing. we are against overmapping or adding unnecessary challenge to our maps

[Collab]
00:33:970 (4) - i think it's too long. pull back to red tick, add note after? (i like to make variation in my mappings. its fitting so its fine)
00:45:970 - add note (unescessary, not an important sound)
01:04:220 (1,2,3) - it's not so bad but maybe don't use blue tick (i like it, this kind of rhythm is fine for hard)
01:05:470 (4) - try half size (mines is more fitting)
01:09:220 (3) - half size, add slider from 01:09:970 - to 01:10:470 - , add note 01:10:595 - (your rhythm suggestion does not makes any sense to the music. this is ugly overmapping)
01:11:220 (5) - stop here 01:11:595 - (works but i wound need a circle at the white tick. no point in making this part harder so mines is better as its relaxing just like this part of the song)
01:12:220 - only use white ticks until 01:13:220 - (i dont understand this suggestion to be honest. but i dont see anything wrong in this notes)
01:13:595 (4) - remove (i like it so i will keep)
01:14:220 - only use white ticks until 01:15:220 - (i dont understand this suggestion to be honest. but i dont see anything wrong in this notes)
01:17:470 - try add note (same as i said at 00:45:970 -)
01:18:470 - ^ (^)
01:45:970 (4) - double size
01:48:720 (1) - double size
01:53:970 (2) - double size (unfittin imo. same for the previous two)
01:56:220 (7,1,2) - maybe overmap white-red-white-red. try white-white-red or white-red-white-<pause> (i dont understand this suggestion to be honest. but i dont see anything wrong in this notes)
01:59:220 (8,9) - replace with slider (i think its more fitting as circles)
02:15:220 (12,13,1,2,3,4,5) - this is very well done (thanks xD)
02:22:220 (4) - move to 02:21:970 - and double size (your rhythm suggestion does not makes any sense to the music. this is ugly overmapping)
02:24:095 - add note (there is no sound here, this would be overmapping)
02:24:220 (1,2) - only use white tick (i'm happy with my blue tick usage)
02:26:220 (7,8) - only use white tick (this part is meant to be harder, this is not an option)
02:28:220 - try something similar (i'm considering this, i just noticed something related to that. thanks)
02:48:970 (2) - stop 02:49:220 - (unnecessary)
02:50:220 - stop 02:50:470 - , add notes 02:50:720 - 02:50:845 - (i'm following background sounds and my current pattern fits them perfectly already)
02:54:220 (1,1) - map next part (i talked to Darcsol about the breaks before. he decided to have the breaks as they are. they are fine imo)
03:10:230 - add spinner until 03:11:730 - (^)
03:33:230 (3) - half size repeat slider (i'm following vocal here, long slider is fitting)
03:34:230 - let white tick free (i dont understand this suggestion to be honest. but i dont see anything wrong in this notes)
03:35:230 - ↑ (^)
03:42:230 - ↑(^)
03:43:355 - this is maybe too hard for your diff, but try add note here 03:43:355 - and here 03:43:855 - (i'm following different sounds than your suggestion)

i mod many part but in general i like it very much! i hope it helps you ! take star ☆

gl (｀・ω・´)ｼｬｷｰﾝ

nothing was fixed in my parts but i'm considering some things you mentioned. i appreciate your effort and your star. thank you

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-13T18:49:20+00:00

oh god this fucking game

Collab:
00:33:970 (4) - This is REALLY weird, because the map is nicely spaced for the most part, until HELLO FRIEND I AM UNREADABLE JUMP
01:17:220 (3) - But this jump doesn't really work as well as you think. Especially because the rest of the map flows so nicely. This is meant to be a CTRL+Ged pattern in this kind of map
01:45:970 (4) - Same as before. Either choose to map an aseanic "jumps where they don't belong" or choose to map "carefully chosen jumps"
02:22:220 (4) - NC
02:37:220 (4) - MARGARET IT DIDN't HAVE TO BE THIS waY
03:46:230 (6) - AAAaA
03:49:230 (3) - a

the map itself is pretty fine. Not a whole lot of issues, but it's just a HUGE matter of deciding what you want to do with the map. Do you want it to be jumpy, or do you want it to be like a CDFA map? Also, consistency is another issue I didn't really point out, because I only point out stuff thats EXPLICITLY wrong. However, both collabers often have different ideas on how to deal with certain sections, which can get confusing when I'm forced to do a dotted eighth, 16th pattern for one part, then I switch to an eighth note pattern on a similar section. Since it's a collab, it's not gamebreaking, since it's consistently one mapper does one style, the other does another, but it's something to think about.

Normal:
For reference, lots of people firmly believe that the easiest diff cannot have stacks. Even though this is not a solid rule, it's a rule that many people hold close to their heart (I personally don't care.). Take that as you will.
00:57:720 (4) - clap
01:53:720 (3) - clap on beginning of slider

Overall, I like the mapset. It's fitting to the song, which is super cool. I'd say. . . 1-2 more mods? Just because there's some nitpicking i'd like to get out of the collab diff before bubbling

Darcsol

277 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Darcsol 2014-10-15T05:19:50+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Collab: Note: I only check my parts
02:37:220 (4) - MARGARET IT DIDN't HAVE TO BE THIS waY
03:46:230 (6) - AAAaA
03:49:230 (3) - a All jumps adjusted and then some

the map itself is pretty fine. Not a whole lot of issues, but it's just a HUGE matter of deciding what you want to do with the map. Do you want it to be jumpy, or do you want it to be like a CDFA map? Also, consistency is another issue I didn't really point out, because I only point out stuff thats EXPLICITLY wrong. However, both collabers often have different ideas on how to deal with certain sections, which can get confusing when I'm forced to do a dotted eighth, 16th pattern for one part, then I switch to an eighth note pattern on a similar section. Since it's a collab, it's not gamebreaking, since it's consistently one mapper does one style, the other does another, but it's something to think about. I'm very aware about the different styles we have. The Collab suppose to be increasingly difficult throughout the session, but it didn't turned out the way we wanted. As my first collab, I've learned my lesson. I'll discuss with pimpG about it.

Normal:
For reference, lots of people firmly believe that the easiest diff cannot have stacks. Even though this is not a solid rule, it's a rule that many people hold close to their heart (I personally don't care.). Take that as you will. Considered, but this is a Normal diff and will be one.
00:57:720 (4) - clap
01:53:720 (3) - clap on beginning of slider Both added.

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-10-16T20:05:34+00:00

sorry for the delay. me and Darcsol ~~and Margaret~~ were busy

CDFA wrote:
oh god this fucking game

Collab:

00:33:970 (4) - This is REALLY weird, because the map is nicely spaced for the most part, until HELLO FRIEND I AM UNREADABLE JUMP (i don't think that it's that bad. but i'm considering to change, but it may not change at all. out of ideas atm )
01:17:220 (3) - But this jump doesn't really work as well as you think. Especially because the rest of the map flows so nicely. This is meant to be a CTRL+Ged pattern in this kind of map ( fixed )
01:45:970 (4) - Same as before. Either choose to map an aseanic "jumps where they don't belong" or choose to map "carefully chosen jumps" ( i like this jump. it's totally fitting imo )
02:22:220 (4) - NC ( the combos are all by Darcsol. i guess he disagree about this one )

we can talk about that ingame later

thanks for modding

Last edited by pimp 2014-10-26T18:23:06+00:00, edited 5 times in total.

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2014-10-23T10:55:17+00:00

Hello M4M request, my mod is very late I'm so sorry

[General]
Ok

[Normal]

00:47:720 (6) - It's sounds odd as for me, well I mean I think you need to add a circle here 00:47:470 - or you change the rhythm like this http://puu.sh/cnbTY/69022600c3.jpg you can replace (7) with 1/2 slider that start on 00:47:470 -
01:01:220 (2) - Delete clap on tail? somehow not fit
01:06:220 (4,5,6) - I think you need to add whistle on head and I think It's will better if you use the same rhythm as 00:50:220 (4,5) - and 00:58:220 (5,6) -
01:14:220 (4,5,6) - Same as above
01:20:220 (1) - Add finish? since the music sound different than the rest rhythm on kiai and to keep consistency imo
01:58:220 (4,5) - About those two, I sugest to change the rhythm like this http://puu.sh/cncAB/88470654f4.jpg more fit the song
02:18:220 (5,6) - Better remove whistle on (5)'s tail and add whistle on slider body then add whistle on (6)'s head also I'm not sure but It's more fit the song If you use the rhthm on first kiai 00:50:220 (4,5) - well just my opinion
02:34:220 (4,5) - Same as above
02:26:220 (5,6,7) - Same as above
02:30:220 (4) - You can rotate -30degree and move to x:128 y:236 and you can blanket perfectly with 02:29:220 (3) - http://puu.sh/cncRI/89e56cb0b4.jpg
02:42:720 (6) - Add whistle on reverse
02:48:220 (1) - Add finish? since the music sound different than the rest rhythm on kiai
03:30:730 (5) - Add whistle on reverse
03:47:230 (6) - Add whistle on head

I don't know, It's me or some whistle sound is not consistent especialy on kiai

[Hard]

00:37:220 (2) - I think It'll flow better if you rotate that 30degree and move to x:164 y:280 http://puu.sh/cndjP/637a505418.jpg
00:42:970 (5) - You can rotate that -15degree and move to x:344 y:44 and 00:43:470 (6) - rotate that 20% and move to x:100 y:84 http://puu.sh/cndtS/24a3aa2721.jpg
00:51:720 (9,1) - That turn is just to sharp imo
00:54:220 (5) - You can stack that on (3)'s head 00:53:220 (3) -
01:24:220 - How about you mapped that part instead put a spinner there? maybe the rhythm can be like this http://puu.sh/cnecx/d292c21ad4.jpg
01:57:220 (3) - Please fix that blanket, the curve is somehow not right
02:00:220 - until 02:16:220 - On that part there's some clap on red tick that mapable, since you follow the singer I guess that's not a problem
02:28:970 (2,3) - Delete whistle on (2)? somehow not fit and how about to add whistle on (3)'s slider body and tail?
03:22:980 (6,8) - That overlap looks not so good
03:57:730 (4) - You can stack that on (2)'s head 03:56:730 (2) -

[]
The whole mapset is good! just need some aesthetic and fix some hitsound imo
That's all from me, good luck on the way Darcsol

Darcsol

277 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Darcsol 2014-10-24T06:34:06+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
[Normal]
00:47:720 (6) - It's sounds odd as for me, well I mean I think you need to add a circle here 00:47:470 - or you change the rhythm like this http://puu.sh/cnbTY/69022600c3.jpg you can replace (7) with 1/2 slider that start on 00:47:470 - Considered
01:01:220 (2) - Delete clap on tail? somehow not fit I think it's fine. Goes with the hitsound pattern I'm aiming for.
01:06:220 (4,5,6) - I think you need to add whistle on head and I think It's will better if you use the same rhythm as 00:50:220 (4,5) - and 00:58:220 (5,6) -
01:14:220 (4,5,6) - Same as above Both added
01:20:220 (1) - Add finish? since the music sound different than the rest rhythm on kiai and to keep consistency imo Not necessary
01:58:220 (4,5) - About those two, I sugest to change the rhythm like this http://puu.sh/cncAB/88470654f4.jpg more fit the song Fixed
02:18:220 (5,6) - Better remove whistle on (5)'s tail and add whistle on slider body then add whistle on (6)'s head also I'm not sure but It's more fit the song If you use the rhthm on first kiai 00:50:220 (4,5) - well just my opinion
02:34:220 (4,5) - Same as above
02:26:220 (5,6,7) - Same as above I think it's fine to all the above
02:30:220 (4) - You can rotate -30degree and move to x:128 y:236 and you can blanket perfectly with 02:29:220 (3) - http://puu.sh/cncRI/89e56cb0b4.jpg It is as intended. I don't like blankets.
02:42:720 (6) - Add whistle on reverse Added
02:48:220 (1) - Add finish? since the music sound different than the rest rhythm on kiai Not necessary
03:30:730 (5) - Add whistle on reverse Added
03:47:230 (6) - Add whistle on head Made a different change instead

I don't know, It's me or some whistle sound is not consistent especialy on kiai It's inevitable for some hitsounds to be inconsistent due to beat placement.
[Hard] Note: I'll only respond to my parts
00:51:720 (9,1) - That turn is just to sharp imo Considered
00:54:220 (5) - You can stack that on (3)'s head 00:53:220 (3) - It is as intended to keep the same spacing.
01:24:220 - How about you mapped that part instead put a spinner there? maybe the rhythm can be like this http://puu.sh/cnecx/d292c21ad4.jpg Not necessary. If I mapped this part, the other spinners must be mapped as well.
02:00:220 - until 02:16:220 - On that part there's some clap on red tick that mapable, since you follow the singer I guess that's not a problem I considered mapping those parts, I think it's fine.
03:22:980 (6,8) - That overlap looks not so good I think it's fine.
03:57:730 (4) - You can stack that on (2)'s head 03:56:730 (2) - It's a stylistic choice not to have sliders stacked each other. I think it's fine.

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-10-25T21:13:10+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Hello M4M request, my mod is very late I'm so sorry

[Hard]
00:37:220 (2) - I think It'll flow better if you rotate that 30degree and move to x:164 y:280 http://puu.sh/cndjP/637a505418.jpg ( i think the current is fine )
00:42:970 (5) - You can rotate that -15degree and move to x:344 y:44 and 00:43:470 (6) - rotate that 20% and move to x:100 y:84 http://puu.sh/cndtS/24a3aa2721.jpg ( i like my current arrangement better )
01:57:220 (3) - Please fix that blanket, the curve is somehow not right ( fixed. i guess )
02:28:970 (2,3) - Delete whistle on (2)? somehow not fit and how about to add whistle on (3)'s slider body and tail? ( removed whistle on (2). i cant add whistle on slider body and tail because they still would not follow the vocal until the end )
[]
The whole mapset is good! just need some aesthetic and fix some hitsound imo
That's all from me, good luck on the way Darcsol

thanks for the help

UPDATE

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Deja Vu.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48220
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16220,32220,48220,64220,80220,88220,104220,120220,136220,152220,168220,176230,192230,208230,224230,240230
DistanceSpacing: 1.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9

[Metadata]
Title:Deja vu
TitleUnicode:Déjà vu
Artist:Joanna Koike
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:Darcsol
Version:Collab
Source:すばらしきこのせかい
Tags:pimpG Takeharu Ishimoto Subarashiki Kono Sekai Konosekai + The World Ends with You It's a Wonderful World soundtrack Square Enix JRPG Nintendo DS Apple iOS Google Android pop
BeatmapID:458454
BeatmapSetID:192848

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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0,0,"The World Ends with You.jpg",0,0
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2,176730,190230
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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//Background Colour Transformations
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Tician

215 posts

Joined March 2013

Tician 2014-10-25T22:50:28+00:00

My md in order for a M4M =)

[list=General][*]
Nice song I like it =)
Timing - OK
Settings - OK
AIMod - OK
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[list=normal][*]
Testplay: good, but it seems there are a few unrankable things
Watch the AiMod there are 2 DS problems
00:19:470 (6) - remove the curve and drag the tail so it's right between the circle before and the slider after. Like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171145
^I would do any same pattern like that to keep the flow
00:38:970 (5) - move it a bit down(4-5 tiny grids) - flow
00:56:720 (2,3) - Now we are coming to the rankable part. Do not stack any directly following circles oder slider over each other in easy and normal diffs. I had to do this in my map, cause BAT told me to do, now I give this back to you. If your unsure ask a BAT^^ (ofc this counts for every stacking you did)
01:48:220 (1,2) - to come to some tidy up, how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171182
01:50:220 (3,4,5,1) - (except the stack) how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171188
01:53:720 (3,4,5) - Like this more^^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171195
01:59:220 (5) - move this one to 01:59:470 like you did here 00:46:220 (5,6,7) - (and add the same hitsounds. I like this rhythm
00:47:470 (6) - btw clap on this one too and maybe use the normal hit drum sampleset for this one 00:46:220 (5) - (nothing special added)
02:50:220 (4,5) - triangle
03:56:230 (1,2,3,4,5) - a symmetric pattern would be nice here

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[list=Collab][*]
Testplay: Plays a bit boring I think this needs a bit tidying up, some blankets and better flow then it's working!^^
00:19:220 (7,8,1) - triangle?
00:26:220 (6) - curve into the other direction
00:27:970 (10,11,1) - the mouse from 9 to 10 goes to the right top, there the stream should go (not to the next object)
00:29:970 (3,4,5) - triangle D: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171276 this would be tidied up without changing too much
00:32:720 (2,3,4) - nice blanket, but the DS is a bit strange and confusing here
00:37:970 (4,5,6) - make the sliders on the same y-achse ^^
00:42:970 (5,6) - a general thing if you want little jumps. 1. Use DS and make the sliders https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171299, then just ctrl+g the second slider ->> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171305 . That looks much better than turning off the DS and get a untidy gap between the slider
00:46:220 (3) - same as in the normal -> drum sampleset, just normal hits and clap for 00:47:220 (4) - (the end circle) and 00:47:720 (5) -
00:53:220 (3,4,5,6) - Use the procedure I told you above (btw I think that happened cause it's a collab don't change the DS, keep 1.1 or 1.3
01:02:220 (5,6,7,8,9) - nice!
01:05:220 (3) - Due to the same sound like before I would use the same slider here like before
01:08:220 (1,2,3) - not looking good, decide to blank the circle or make the slider less curvy, but the middle of them is not looking good
01:11:220 (5,6,1) - some mention https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171344
01:14:220 (7,8,9,10) - watch out for a square in the middle
01:15:720 (10,1) - this nearly looks like the thing I mentioned, but the blanket could be a buit better^^
01:16:970 (2,4) - stack 4 on 2
01:45:970 (4,5,6,7) - nice!
01:56:720 (1,2,3) - better blanket
01:58:220 (5,6,7) - bad flow, keep it normal
02:06:970 (5) - ctrl+g for better flow
02:15:970 (13,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171374 - nearly - fix it
02:17:720 (5,6,7) - triangle
02:24:220 (1,2,3) - *-* <3 I would recommend you do keep this DS for every non-spaced objects like 02:16:220 (1,2,3) -
02:54:220 (1) - aaaaw NOOOO, don't destroy it with that spinner, a circle 02:54:220 would be the highlight of the whole part
03:18:230 (5,6) - blanket? =)
03:22:980 (6,8) - no overlap here
03:29:230 (3) - delete and let the slider before end here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171423 it's not perfect but I think this could be nice
03:35:230 (7) - no curve
03:42:230 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I am not sure if I should cry about the flow or be happy about the way it looks XD Try to place the circles right between slider end and slider start, so you shouldn't get a curve. 03:43:605 (10) - for example is bad

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*rage* AAAAHHHWWW I will never get how this list-thing work ;_;

Good luck with the map!

Darcsol

277 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Darcsol 2014-10-25T23:35:21+00:00

Tician wrote:
[list=normal][*]
Testplay: good, but it seems there are a few unrankable things
Watch the AiMod there are 2 DS problems
00:19:470 (6) - remove the curve and drag the tail so it's right between the circle before and the slider after. Like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171145
^I would do any same pattern like that to keep the flow I think it's fine. Curves gives direction and helps flow.
00:38:970 (5) - move it a bit down(4-5 tiny grids) - flow Fixed
00:56:720 (2,3) - Now we are coming to the rankable part. Do not stack any directly following circles oder slider over each other in easy and normal diffs. I had to do this in my map, cause BAT told me to do, now I give this back to you. If your unsure ask a BAT^^ (ofc this counts for every stacking you did) A BAT modded my map and never mentioned it. I'll keep an eye on it.
01:48:220 (1,2) - to come to some tidy up, how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171182 I think it's fine. I don't like blankets.
01:50:220 (3,4,5,1) - (except the stack) how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171188 Same as above
01:53:720 (3,4,5) - Like this more^^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171195 As intended
01:59:220 (5) - move this one to 01:59:470 like you did here 00:46:220 (5,6,7) - (and add the same hitsounds. I like this rhythm Did something different instead. Added hitsounds.
00:47:470 (6) - btw clap on this one too and maybe use the normal hit drum sampleset for this one 00:46:220 (5) - (nothing special added) I think it's fine
02:50:220 (4,5) - triangle As intended to be more recognizable
03:56:230 (1,2,3,4,5) - a symmetric pattern would be nice here I think it's fine. I don't like symmetric mapping.

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[list=Collab] Note: I'll only check my parts
Testplay: Plays a bit boring I think this needs a bit tidying up, some blankets and better flow then it's working!^^
00:19:220 (7,8,1) - triangle? I think it's fine.
00:26:220 (6) - curve into the other direction Fixed
00:27:970 (10,11,1) - the mouse from 9 to 10 goes to the right top, there the stream should go (not to the next object) I'm not sure what you're saying.
00:29:970 (3,4,5) - triangle D: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171276 this would be tidied up without changing too much Done something different instead.
00:53:220 (3,4,5,6) - Use the procedure I told you above (btw I think that happened cause it's a collab don't change the DS, keep 1.1 or 1.3 DS will stay the same. It's intended to be jumpy.
01:02:220 (5,6,7,8,9) - nice! :D
02:06:970 (5) - ctrl+g for better flow Fixed and then some
02:15:970 (13,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171374 - nearly - fix it Fixed
03:18:230 (5,6) - blanket? =) Not a fan of blankets.
03:22:980 (6,8) - no overlap here This is the second time a modder mentioned this. I think it's fine. The circle is readable.
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pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-10-26T10:48:13+00:00

Tician wrote:
My md in order for a M4M =)

[list=General][*]
Nice song I like it =)
Timing - OK
Settings - OK
AIMod - OK
[/list]

[list=Collab][*]
Testplay: Plays a bit boring I think this needs a bit tidying up, some blankets and better flow then it's working!^^
00:32:720 (2,3,4) - nice blanket, but the DS is a bit strange and confusing here ( fixed, i guess )
00:37:970 (4,5,6) - make the sliders on the same y-achse ^^ ( it's fine as it is, i'm even considering making it more flipped )
00:42:970 (5,6) - a general thing if you want little jumps. 1. Use DS and make the sliders https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171299, then just ctrl+g the second slider ->> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171305 . That looks much better than turning off the DS and get a untidy gap between the slider ( preference imo )
00:46:220 (3) - same as in the normal -> drum sampleset, just normal hits and clap for 00:47:220 (4) - (the end circle) and 00:47:720 (5) - ( Darcsol denied this in normal so i guess it's better to keep it as it is on hard too )
01:05:220 (3) - Due to the same sound like before I would use the same slider here like before ( it would conflict with the vocal )
01:08:220 (1,2,3) - not looking good, decide to blank the circle or make the slider less curvy, but the middle of them is not looking good ( for this kind of flow, i could not find a better arrangement. i think the current is fine anyway )
01:11:220 (5,6,1) - some mention https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171344 ( preference imo )
01:14:220 (7,8,9,10) - watch out for a square in the middle ( fixed, i guess )
01:15:720 (10,1) - this nearly looks like the thing I mentioned, but the blanket could be a bit better^^ ( i like the little jump and irregular symmetry here )
01:16:970 (2,4) - stack 4 on 2 ( DS would be too small )
01:45:970 (4,5,6,7) - nice! ( thanks. i like it too xD )
01:56:720 (1,2,3) - better blanket ( someone complained about the previous version of this blanket a few hours before your mod post. i'm assuming you checked the old version of the blanket too. then i guess it's fixed. )
01:58:220 (5,6,7) - bad flow, keep it normal ( i like it )
02:17:720 (5,6,7) - triangle ( fixed, i guess )
02:24:220 (1,2,3) - *-* <3 I would recommend you do keep this DS for every non-spaced objects like 02:16:220 (1,2,3) - ( i wanted to make the DS harder little by little until the song ends )
02:54:220 (1) - aaaaw NOOOO, don't destroy it with that spinner, a circle 02:54:220 would be the highlight of the whole part ( i'm already using circles for the previous 8 beats. if i make this another circle then i would be forced to make 02:55:970 - another circle or a half beat slider. too many circles is boring and a half beat slider makes no sense at all IMO )
03:29:230 (3) - delete and let the slider before end here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2171423 it's not perfect but I think this could be nice ( its fitting as it is, its also consistent to the other similar parts )
03:35:230 (7) - no curve ( it would make the symmetry at 03:34:730 (6,7,8) - less beautiful imo )
03:42:230 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I am not sure if I should cry about the flow or be happy about the way it looks XD Try to place the circles right between slider end and slider start, so you shouldn't get a curve. 03:43:605 (10) - for example is bad ( i am so proud of this part. there is no way i'm changing it : / )

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Good luck with the map! ( thanks xD. i like your modding, keep up with your style and work hard and you will be fine )

Tician wrote:
*rage* AAAAHHHWWW I will never get how this list-thing work ;_;

i never seen any modder using the list code as you did. i'm assuming that List= is not meant to be used like box= or url=

try the following style:

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for now this is the update for my parts, but i still have pending fixings to do.
i will try to talk directly to CDFA

update

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48220
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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Title:Deja vu
TitleUnicode:Déjà vu
Artist:Joanna Koike
ArtistUnicode:小池ジョアンナ
Creator:Darcsol
Version:Collab
Source:すばらしきこのせかい
Tags:pimpG Takeharu Ishimoto Subarashiki Kono Sekai Konosekai + The World Ends with You It's a Wonderful World soundtrack Square Enix JRPG Nintendo DS Apple iOS Google Android pop
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Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-02T23:59:41+00:00

Re-modding this.

Metadata:
The artist is not correct. The artist should be, from the research I've done

"Takeharu Ishimoto - Déjà Vu (feat. Joanna Koike)"

https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/deja- ... =285863169

Collab
02:54:220 (1,1) - BECAUSE THIS IS A HARD DIFF, THIS IS TECHNICALLY UNRANKABLE. There must be a full beat of space between the end of a spinner and the next note (aka, you can either move the spinner back to the previous white tick, or just have the spinner end where the note currently is.

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-11-03T00:48:45+00:00

i will ask other bats about this spinner thing

no change in this part until tomorrow, if necessary

thanks

Darcsol

277 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Darcsol 2014-11-03T07:11:05+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Re-modding this.

Metadata:
The artist is not correct. The artist should be, from the research I've done

"Takeharu Ishimoto - Déjà Vu (feat. Joanna Koike)"

https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/deja- ... =285863169
Fixed, but the "vu" stays lowercased. I've done my own research and turned out it is stylized as so.

pimpG wrote:
i will ask other bats about this spinner thing

no change in this part until tomorrow, if necessary

thanks

Really? This is ridiculous. Personally I would remove the note. If there is no response by tomorrow, I will take action.

pimp

1,417 posts

Joined April 2010

pimp 2014-11-03T21:02:44+00:00

Darcsol wrote:
CDFA wrote:
Re-modding this.

Metadata:
The artist is not correct. The artist should be, from the research I've done

"Takeharu Ishimoto - Déjà Vu (feat. Joanna Koike)"

https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/deja- ... =285863169
Fixed, but the "vu" stays lowercased. I've done my own research and turned out it is stylized as so.
pimpG wrote:
i will ask other bats about this spinner thing

no change in this part until tomorrow, if necessary

thanks
Really? This is ridiculous. Personally I would remove the note. If there is no response by tomorrow, I will take action.

don't be silly Darcsol. you shouldn't change stuff in other people's work without permission and expect that he will be fine wit it

whatever, i said i would get the trueness today (before you assume that i would make you wait a lot) and here it is:

Irreversible's words

Stefan's words

this is the puush link that i sent to them as exemple http://puu.sh/cBXdS/fff118afb8.jpg

so basicaly it's perfectly rankeable and its more like own prefference if it should be used or not (i mapped so i choose to use it)
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about this Itunes thing, i agree about the artist but not the title

i don't like to see the (feat. Joanna Koike) in the song title because its the place for the song title ...
you can't hear the singer saying "feat. Joanna Koike" in the song ... if you know what i mean...

imo this works better:

Takeharu Ishimoto (feat. Joanna Koike) - Deja vu

or this:

Takeharu Ishimoto - Deja vu
^Joanna Koike could be in tags

this is just my own opinion ofc

Last edited by pimp 2014-11-03T21:11:58+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-03T21:10:03+00:00

uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Ok let me just

uhh

So you're right and wrong.

Right in the sense that the back cover of the CD for the OST is a much better reputable source. So please use that. Thanks for finding that for me.

But. . . if the title has "(feat. Joanna Koike)" in it, you can't just remove that. Because that is the name of the song, technically. The title of a song isn't always said in there, so I'm not sure what you're going off on about that. But, especially with 2014 standards, the title must be exactly as the composer released it. So whee

Ill check this in a bit

Regarding changing stuff in a map without guest differ input, I honestly don't care if it's something that small (But if the guest differ requests that it not be done like that, then I'll hold them to that)

Also, here's the rule in question: t/241019

It's not clearly specified in the current ranking criteria, but a plentiful amount of maps have been unranked because of it.

Please also refer to this PM that the team got (Ironically enough from Irreversible himself)

Please note that this is a Hard diff. If you want to call it an insane, that is super cool, except then you'll need to make a hard diff

Last edited by Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-03T21:18:21+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

pimp

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pimp 2014-11-03T21:17:29+00:00

original CD cover > Itunes

imo xD

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-03T21:18:53+00:00

That. . . that is literally what i said o-o

Refer to the edits in my post

pimp

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pimp 2014-11-04T00:40:17+00:00

after some irc talk with cdfa

i decided to not change the spinner and circle at all (since it's not a real rule)
but CDFA won't do anything else in this beatmap's rank process

again it's my choice to keep this part the way it is, unless you decide to remove all my parts from the collab and keep moving.
it's your choice, i would not mind at all.

i will try to help you to find other bats if you want to keep things as they are

Darcsol

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Topic Starter

Darcsol 2014-11-04T06:39:40+00:00

After reading the posts and done further research the title is staying as so. I'll continue to look it up.

pimpG wrote:
after some irc talk with cdfa

i decided to not change the spinner and circle at all (since it's not a real rule)
but CDFA won't do anything else in this beatmap's rank process

again it's my choice to keep this part the way it is, unless you decide to remove all my parts from the collab and keep moving.
it's your choice, i would not mind at all.

i will try to help you to find other bats if you want to keep things as they are

I'm disappointed how this turned out. I never expected this to blow up. It doesn't fit what I envision the map. No where in the diff where the spinner has that kind of move. It's cheap.

Know that this is my map and you agreed to be in part of this collaboration. Removing all your parts is a dumb move because we already made it this far. All of that on a stubborn spinner? Ridiculous.

pimp

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pimp 2014-11-05T23:06:38+00:00

i just told you the options you can choose

ofc i want to keep my parts but i would not accept you fixing something in my parts that i disagree. (if you do this i would not think twice to ask someone to pop bubble or unrank)

i won't change the spinner because it's fitting. unless someone prove that it's unrankeable
if this happens then i would gladly fix it.
___________________________________________________________________________________

i'm already contacting more bats

edit:

asked charles445 to take a look at the spinner. this is what he said:

OSUjanaiKATSURAda

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OSUjanaiKATSURAda 2015-01-08T15:03:38+00:00

SPOILER

pimpG wrote:
i just told you the options you can choose

ofc i want to keep my parts but i would not accept you fixing something in my parts that i disagree. (if you do this i would not think twice to ask someone to pop bubble or unrank)

i won't change the spinner because it's fitting. unless someone prove that it's unrankeable
if this happens then i would gladly fix it.
___________________________________________________________________________________

i'm already contacting more bats

edit:

asked charles445 to take a look at the spinner. this is what he said:

Hey ppg its been a long time, how u doing

02:54:220 - i don't think its a problem for hard players if we can call this an issue then lets call some extra diffs which has impossible jumps even for some pro players an issue but i think its suitable and if they deny because they deny i think a slider with 0.75x speed looks fun too like this

pimp

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pimp 2015-02-25T12:18:01+00:00

OSUjanaiKATSURAda wrote:
SPOILER
pimpG wrote:
i just told you the options you can choose

ofc i want to keep my parts but i would not accept you fixing something in my parts that i disagree. (if you do this i would not think twice to ask someone to pop bubble or unrank)

i won't change the spinner because it's fitting. unless someone prove that it's unrankeable
if this happens then i would gladly fix it.
___________________________________________________________________________________

i'm already contacting more bats

edit:

asked charles445 to take a look at the spinner. this is what he said:

Hey ppg its been a long time, how u doing

02:54:220 - i don't think its a problem for hard players if we can call this an issue then lets call some extra diffs which has impossible jumps even for some pro players an issue but i think its suitable and if they deny because they deny i think a slider with 0.75x speed looks fun too like this

hello

thanks for your suggestion but i already considered using a slider there ages ago. but i decided that spinner is the best choice

i guess there is nothing to update at the moment then i just have to find a competent BAT (or whatever they are called in the current system),

-Nya-

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-Nya- 2015-03-26T19:13:26+00:00

Hey~
Responding to your M4M request via PM.

General:

You don’t need this: すばらしきこのせかい in the tags since it’s already in the source.

Normal:

00:42:970 (4) –Hm, I never like this long whistle sound in a slider. It just sounds very annoying. Rather remove it.
00:47:470 (6,7) –Rather stack this? It looks a bit confusing for the easiest diff.
00:50:220 (4) –Same as 00:42:970 (4) –
00:56:220 (1,2,3,4) –I don’t really like the placement of these circles. I think adding a slider somewhere in between and making a blanket will improve this. Maybe try something like this:
Picture
00:58:220 (5) –That whistle sound . . . etc.
01:47:720 (6,7) –Hm, rather try this?:
Picture
02:00:220 (1,2,3,4) –Same suggestion as here: 00:56:220 (1,2,3,4) – Try to add a slider somewhere in between to help with the placement and also just to spice up the rhythm a bit.
02:13:720 (4) –You can change this circle into a short slider to also emphasize this beat: 02:13:970 –
Picture
02:25:220 (3,4) –Change these two circles into a slider to spice up the pattern a bit.
02:41:220 (3,4) –Change into a slider. ^
02:48:220 (1) –Add a finish here.
03:59:230 (6) –Maybe stack this on top of 03:59:480 (7,8) –to avoid confusion.

Collab:

Same thing about those long whistle sounds like in the Normal.
00:36:220 (9) –Add new combo here and then remove new combo here: 00:36:720 (1) – You have to stay consistent with 00:32:220 (1) –
00:40:220 (10) – Add new combo here and then remove new combo here: 00:40:720 (1) –
00:44:220 (9) -^

Overall, I must be honest and say that I don’t really like the hitsounds that you used. Those long whistles just doesn’t fit at all imo and I noticed that you didn’t use any custom hitsounds. I suggest trying to find a modder that’s really good at hitsounding and finding the right hitsounds to help you improve this.

Your patterns/rhythms look good (I don’t really have much criticism there) But the placements of these notes can still look better imo. In other words, the entire “look” of the diff can still do with improvements. I guess this is more my own personal taste but I’m just voicing my opinion.

Good Luck~!

pimp

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pimp 2015-03-26T23:29:42+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Hey~
Responding to your M4M request via PM.

Collab:
Same thing about those long whistle sounds like in the Normal.
00:36:220 (9) –Add new combo here and then remove new combo here: 00:36:720 (1) – You have to stay consistent with 00:32:220 (1) –
(i will consider. indeed, our new combo logic is inconsistent, but we are following different rhythm)
00:40:220 (10) – Add new combo here and then remove new combo here: 00:40:720 (1) – (^)
00:44:220 (9) -^(^)

Overall, I must be honest and say that I don’t really like the hitsounds that you used. Those long whistles just doesn’t fit at all imo and I noticed that you didn’t use any custom hitsounds. I suggest trying to find a modder that’s really good at hitsounding and finding the right hitsounds to help you improve this.
(now that you mention it, i think that it can be a bit better but i can't say that all whistles are unfitting. i don't plan to make too many changes on my hitsounds but i will consider some. and i will talk to him about his parts too)

Your patterns/rhythms look good (I don’t really have much criticism there) But the placements of these notes can still look better imo. In other words, the entire “look” of the diff can still do with improvements. I guess this is more my own personal taste but I’m just voicing my opinion. (you're welcome)

Good Luck~!

thanks a lot

Darcsol

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Topic Starter

Darcsol 2015-04-09T02:00:07+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
General:
You don’t need this: すばらしきこのせかい in the tags since it’s already in the source. Removed.

Normal:
00:42:970 (4) –Hm, I never like this long whistle sound in a slider. It just sounds very annoying. Rather remove it. Considered.
00:47:470 (6,7) –Rather stack this? It looks a bit confusing for the easiest diff. Fixed.
00:50:220 (4) –Same as 00:42:970 (4) – Considered.
00:56:220 (1,2,3,4) –I don’t really like the placement of these circles. I think adding a slider somewhere in between and making a blanket will improve this. Maybe try something like this: Added.
Picture
00:58:220 (5) –That whistle sound . . . etc. Considered.
01:47:720 (6,7) –Hm, rather try this?: Added.
Picture
02:00:220 (1,2,3,4) –Same suggestion as here: 00:56:220 (1,2,3,4) – Try to add a slider somewhere in between to help with the placement and also just to spice up the rhythm a bit. Added (as well as any similar patterns).
02:13:720 (4) –You can change this circle into a short slider to also emphasize this beat: 02:13:970 – Added.
Picture
02:25:220 (3,4) –Change these two circles into a slider to spice up the pattern a bit.
02:41:220 (3,4) –Change into a slider. ^ Both fixed.
02:48:220 (1) –Add a finish here. I think it's fine.
03:59:230 (6) –Maybe stack this on top of 03:59:480 (7,8) –to avoid confusion. Fixed.

Overall, I must be honest and say that I don’t really like the hitsounds that you used. Those long whistles just doesn’t fit at all imo and I noticed that you didn’t use any custom hitsounds. I suggest trying to find a modder that’s really good at hitsounding and finding the right hitsounds to help you improve this. I agree that the hitsounds aren't adequate. Most of the custom hitsounds I found doesn't fit what I want. Any help is greatly appreciated.

Your patterns/rhythms look good (I don’t really have much criticism there) But the placements of these notes can still look better imo. In other words, the entire “look” of the diff can still do with improvements. I guess this is more my own personal taste but I’m just voicing my opinion. I like to hear more on your opinion about the "look" of the diff. It's always interesting how people read a map.

Ilk Ender47

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Ilk Ender47 2015-05-10T09:05:04+00:00

Okay the deal for M4M..!
Heres the mod..!~

Normal

00:23:470 - Ctrl + J
00:31:470 - Face to the right towards the circle
00:50:220 - Move between the 2 circles to form a triangle
01:45:720 - make it lower a bit cause its far from the next slider
02:08:220 - Move it down so it's below 5
02:16:220 - Put the circle in front of the reversing slider not on the side
03:26:230 - change instead to pattern like this http://puu.sh/hHRly/eed2396e97.jpg
03:39:730 - Stack w/ 4
03:51:730 - Change to 1/2 reverse slider
04:04:230 - Reduce 2 lines before so it tones

Collab

00:27:970 - Stack 10-11-12 all together so it cant be hard to click it
00:31:970 - Same with above
00:31:970 - when you sticked it all too, make it all a little bit closer to the previous circle cause its far
01:23:720 - put it on the middle for good design

too far too

01:49:970 - too far -_-' make it closer to x:52 y:208
01:50:720 - Put the circle on the end of the PREVIOUS slider
02:34:220 - Ctrl + J
02:55:970 - Reduce it 2 lines before so there is space to hit the circle
04:04:230 - Just like on the normal, reduce 2 lines before

General

- Move the preview point 2 lines after, trust me it tones perfectly
- For the AiMod, http://puu.sh/hHZAj/44f05cda35.png
I think you should remove the inherited points on:
-01:02:220
-01:04:220
-02:30:220
-02:32:220
-03:42:230
-03:44:230
to clear the warnings on AiMod, if you just want, and if you dont want to remove it, then don't
It just depends on your style

Also thanks to AsakuraNe!

That's all

Be sure to fullfill our promise..!

Darcsol

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Topic Starter

Darcsol 2015-05-10T17:31:29+00:00

Ilk Ender47 wrote:
Normal

00:23:470 - Ctrl + J Done
00:31:470 - Face to the right towards the circle Done
00:50:220 - Move between the 2 circles to form a triangle This sounds vague. Either way, I think it's fine.
01:45:720 - make it lower a bit cause its far from the next slider Done
02:08:220 - Move it down so it's below 5 Not necessary
02:16:220 - Put the circle in front of the reversing slider not on the side What is the "front"? Either way, I made a slight change.
03:26:230 - change instead to pattern like this http://puu.sh/hHRly/eed2396e97.jpg Considered
03:39:730 - Stack w/ 4 Fixed
03:51:730 - Change to 1/2 reverse slider Why?
04:04:230 - Reduce 2 lines before so it tones I think it's fine

Collab

00:27:970 - Stack 10-11-12 all together so it cant be hard to click it
00:31:970 - Same with above The two above are perfectly fine. Many mappers do that.
00:31:970 - when you sticked it all too, make it all a little bit closer to the previous circle cause its far Not necessary
01:23:720 - put it on the middle for good design too far too Spacing is important in a map. Not necessary
02:34:220 - Ctrl + J Not necessary
04:04:230 - Just like on the normal, reduce 2 lines before Again not necessary

General

- Move the preview point 2 lines after, trust me it tones perfectly
- For the AiMod, http://puu.sh/hHZAj/44f05cda35.png
I think you should remove the inherited points on:
-01:02:220
-01:04:220
-02:30:220
-02:32:220
-03:42:230
-03:44:230
to clear the warnings on AiMod, if you just want, and if you dont want to remove it, then don't
It just depends on your style
All the above are not necessary.

pimp

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pimp 2015-05-11T00:22:02+00:00

Ilk Ender47 wrote:
Collab

01:49:970 - too far -_-' make it closer to x:52 y:208 (its meant to be like that to fit the vocal variations)
01:50:720 - Put the circle on the end of the PREVIOUS slider (similar as above. spacing should not be that high for this vocal)
02:55:970 - Reduce it 2 lines before so there is space to hit the circle (it would make 02:55:845 empty and it sounds weird unless i put a circle there, so it would make it worse. actually i talked to some bats before and they agreed that its fine for hard diff)

thanks for mod

Kuki

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Kuki 2015-07-24T05:09:14+00:00

ay fixed some stuff irc

SPOILER

2015-07-20 16:47 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/458454 Takeharu Ishimoto (feat. Joanna Koike) - Deja vu [Collab]]
2015-07-20 16:48 Kuki: 00:19:220 (7) - move to x332 y106
2015-07-20 16:48 Kuki: 00:20:220 (1) - then fix stack here
2015-07-20 16:49 Darcsol: Very minor, but okay
2015-07-20 16:50 Kuki: yeah it just looked a little off
2015-07-20 16:50 Kuki: 01:00:970 (2) - x474 y306
2015-07-20 16:51 Kuki: 01:14:220 (7) - nc?
2015-07-20 16:52 Darcsol: First part is fixed. Second part is not necessary.
2015-07-20 16:52 Kuki: 01:51:720 (6) - X365 Y258 01:51:970 (7) - X294 Y172 01:52:220 (8) - X378 Y98
2015-07-20 16:52 Kuki: alright
2015-07-20 16:53 Darcsol: btw, I can't touch the other mapper's part. We made an agreement there.
2015-07-20 16:54 Kuki: ah okay, you should add in names in storyboard before bubble.
2015-07-20 16:54 Kuki: let him know about that issue then if possible
2015-07-20 16:54 Darcsol: sure thing
2015-07-20 16:54 Kuki:

2015-07-20 16:55 Kuki: 02:11:845 - why not map this?
2015-07-20 16:56 Kuki: you should
2015-07-20 16:56 Kuki: since you put a stream here 02:14:220 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
2015-07-20 16:57 Darcsol: That means I should map at 02:03:845 - too
2015-07-20 16:57 Kuki: 02:27:220 (9) - ctrl-g 02:27:720 (10) - ctrl-g perhaps
2015-07-20 16:57 Kuki: yeah
2015-07-20 16:58 Darcsol: I'll consider the streams. The second part is the other mapper's.
2015-07-20 16:58 Kuki: alright, that's all i have found

2015-07-20 16:58 Darcsol: That's was short
2015-07-20 17:00 Kuki: Yeah lol
2015-07-20 17:00 Kuki: your map was very hard to find issues
2015-07-20 17:00 Kuki: very much ready for rank
2015-07-20 17:00 Darcsol: yay
2015-07-20 17:02 Darcsol: Thanks for the mod. I'll be modding your map shortly. Might take a few days though.
2015-07-20 17:02 Kuki: no problem

2015-07-20 17:03 Kuki: i'm in a tournament now, i'll post logs after and link so you can kds

2015-07-20 17:03 Darcsol: good to know

pimp

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pimp 2015-07-28T22:21:08+00:00

Kuki wrote:
ay fixed some stuff irc
SPOILER
2015-07-20 16:47 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/458454 Takeharu Ishimoto (feat. Joanna Koike) - Deja vu [Collab]]
2015-07-20 16:48 Kuki: 00:19:220 (7) - move to x332 y106
2015-07-20 16:48 Kuki: 00:20:220 (1) - then fix stack here
2015-07-20 16:49 Darcsol: Very minor, but okay
2015-07-20 16:50 Kuki: yeah it just looked a little off
2015-07-20 16:50 Kuki: 01:00:970 (2) - x474 y306
2015-07-20 16:51 Kuki: 01:14:220 (7) - nc?
2015-07-20 16:52 Darcsol: First part is fixed. Second part is not necessary.
2015-07-20 16:52 Kuki: 01:51:720 (6) - X365 Y258 01:51:970 (7) - X294 Y172 01:52:220 (8) - X378 Y98
2015-07-20 16:52 Kuki: alright
2015-07-20 16:53 Darcsol: btw, I can't touch the other mapper's part. We made an agreement there.
2015-07-20 16:54 Kuki: ah okay, you should add in names in storyboard before bubble.
2015-07-20 16:54 Kuki: let him know about that issue then if possible
2015-07-20 16:54 Darcsol: sure thing
2015-07-20 16:54 Kuki:
2015-07-20 16:55 Kuki: 02:11:845 - why not map this?
2015-07-20 16:56 Kuki: you should
2015-07-20 16:56 Kuki: since you put a stream here 02:14:220 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
2015-07-20 16:57 Darcsol: That means I should map at 02:03:845 - too
2015-07-20 16:57 Kuki: 02:27:220 (9) - ctrl-g 02:27:720 (10) - ctrl-g perhaps
2015-07-20 16:57 Kuki: yeah
2015-07-20 16:58 Darcsol: I'll consider the streams. The second part is the other mapper's.
2015-07-20 16:58 Kuki: alright, that's all i have found
2015-07-20 16:58 Darcsol: That's was short
2015-07-20 17:00 Kuki: Yeah lol
2015-07-20 17:00 Kuki: your map was very hard to find issues
2015-07-20 17:00 Kuki: very much ready for rank
2015-07-20 17:00 Darcsol: yay
2015-07-20 17:02 Darcsol: Thanks for the mod. I'll be modding your map shortly. Might take a few days though.
2015-07-20 17:02 Kuki: no problem
2015-07-20 17:03 Kuki: i'm in a tournament now, i'll post logs after and link so you can kds
2015-07-20 17:03 Darcsol: good to know

didn't changed as you suggested but remapped this part. thanks for mod

Gaia

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Gaia 2015-10-25T01:22:57+00:00

holy shit i still havent modded this... please kill me I'll do it this weekend orz

pimp

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pimp 2015-10-25T23:38:47+00:00

that's ok

Gaia

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Gaia 2015-11-03T00:25:01+00:00

ugh stuff happened last weekend :c im seriously sorry for being late again..

[normal]
tick 1 plays better for normals

00:32:720 (2,3,4) - this flows really weirdly... i'd prefer if you curved (4) the other way around
00:47:470 (6,7) - just straight up stacking 1/2 is kinda confusing, try a 1/2 slider?
01:03:720 (3,4,1) - 3 1/2 circles together is kinda hard for normal, try 1/2 slider + circle
01:56:220 (1) - space this out, since you've spaced the 1/2s and stacked 1/1 so far. keep consistency
01:56:720 (2,3,4) - this flow is meh, but whatever
02:31:720 (5,6,1) - 02:47:720 (5,6,1) - same as last time
03:22:730 (5,6) - same as above, space for consistency
03:59:230 (6,7,8) - switch to 2 1/2 sliders or a 1/2 repeat + circle... // if you happen to reject then at the very least don't stack this, beginners can't read this stuff

[Hard]
00:18:720 (6) - slight overlaps like these look bad
00:22:720 (6) - not as bad as ^ but try not to overlap the sliderends
00:24:220 (1) - misstack on purpose? uhh
00:30:720 (5) - same as above, and there are more so ya
00:44:220 (9,1) - rreally awkward flow :s
00:57:720 (5,6) - this is a good overlap tho, slider covers almost half the other slider and doesnt touch the sliderend at all so yay (you could improve a bit by curving (6) down more tho)
01:01:220 (3) - remove whistle on sliderend
01:10:720 (4,5) - flow is meh
01:13:720 (5,6,7) - ^
01:58:220 (5,6,7) - lol is this really neccessary ? :>
02:14:220 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - a bit too many 1/4s for hard.... use some reverses instead
02:15:220 (12,1) - questionable pattern, readability is probably an issue.. remember this is hard not insane. i highly suggest you fix this (02:15:220 (12) - this has a polarity thing too, i'd rather make this into a reverse :])
02:16:220 (1,2,3) - 02:24:220 (1,2,3) - why do they have different spacing? they have the exact same rhythm
02:31:470 (11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - same as before, use 1/4s instead...
02:37:220 (4,5,6) - doesnt flow well
02:44:220 (1,2,3) - 02:45:720 (4,5,6) - why are these spacings so inconsistent :c
02:54:220 (1,1) - not enough spinner recovery time, in hard you need at least 1 beat (375ms) you have 250 ms. t/241019&start=0
03:28:230 (1,2) - this is 1/4 spacing right? 03:29:230 (3,4) - this is 1/2? spacing wise they look pretty much the same. very misleading
03:29:480 (4,5,6) - consider reducing this jump.. especially 5 -> 6 since the triple is really tricky to hit
03:41:230 (3) - i dont get this jump??
03:42:230 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this flow... :s

generally normal is fine.. hard tho has some problems regarding flow (and spacing) imo, i just pointed out the ones the really really bugged me but there are others out there that arent great but arent horrible either ..

also, im really sory about being so late on this mod so yaa, feel free to find me if you ever need another mod on this map or any other map of urs :3

aaaa good luck and have fun!!

pimp

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pimp 2015-11-03T20:58:23+00:00

Gaia wrote:
[Hard]

00:44:220 (9,1) - rreally awkward flow :s
01:10:720 (4,5) - flow is meh
01:13:720 (5,6,7) - ^
01:58:220 (5,6,7) - lol is this really neccessary ? :>
02:15:220 (12,1) - questionable pattern, readability is probably an issue.. remember this is hard not insane. i highly suggest you fix this (02:15:220 (12) - this has a polarity thing too, i'd rather make this into a reverse :])
02:16:220 (1,2,3) - 02:24:220 (1,2,3) - why do they have different spacing? they have the exact same rhythm
02:31:470 (11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - same as before, use 1/4s instead... (this is 1/4)
02:54:220 (1,1) - not enough spinner recovery time, in hard you need at least 1 beat (375ms) you have 250 ms. t/241019&start=0 (does not seems to be accepted as a rule yet. i already discussed about this with qats before and i think i can keep it p/3480713)
03:28:230 (1,2) - this is 1/4 spacing right? 03:29:230 (3,4) - this is 1/2? spacing wise they look pretty much the same. very misleading
03:29:480 (4,5,6) - consider reducing this jump.. especially 5 -> 6 since the triple is really tricky to hit (considered)
03:41:230 (3) - i dont get this jump??
03:42:230 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this flow... :s

didn't reply to what i think it's personal opinion. some are still considered.
if Darcsol don't reply within 2 days i'll pm him

thanks for mod

Darcsol

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Darcsol 2015-11-04T05:16:48+00:00

About time.

Gaia wrote:
[normal]
tick 1 plays better for normals Considered.

00:32:720 (2,3,4) - this flows really weirdly... i'd prefer if you curved (4) the other way around
00:47:470 (6,7) - just straight up stacking 1/2 is kinda confusing, try a 1/2 slider?
01:03:720 (3,4,1) - 3 1/2 circles together is kinda hard for normal, try 1/2 slider + circle
01:56:220 (1) - space this out, since you've spaced the 1/2s and stacked 1/1 so far. keep consistency
01:56:720 (2,3,4) - this flow is meh, but whatever
02:31:720 (5,6,1) - 02:47:720 (5,6,1) - same as last time
03:22:730 (5,6) - same as above, space for consistency
03:59:230 (6,7,8) - switch to 2 1/2 sliders or a 1/2 repeat + circle... // if you happen to reject then at the very least don't stack this, beginners can't read this stuff Most of the above are fixed, but this diff is intended for Normal players, not beginners.

[Hard]
00:18:720 (6) - slight overlaps like these look bad
00:22:720 (6) - not as bad as ^ but try not to overlap the sliderends Made adjustments to both suggestions.
00:24:220 (1) - misstack on purpose? uhh Fixed.
00:30:720 (5) - same as above, and there are more so ya Adjusted.
00:57:720 (5,6) - this is a good overlap tho, slider covers almost half the other slider and doesnt touch the sliderend at all so yay (you could improve a bit by curving (6) down more tho) Made a different improvement instead.
01:01:220 (3) - remove whistle on sliderend Removed.
02:14:220 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - a bit too many 1/4s for hard.... use some reverses instead Considered.
02:15:220 (12,1) - questionable pattern, readability is probably an issue.. remember this is hard not insane. i highly suggest you fix this (02:15:220 (12) - this has a polarity thing too, i'd rather make this into a reverse :]) Added reverse. PimpG will need to adjust his part.
02:37:220 (4,5,6) - doesnt flow well Fixed.
02:44:220 (1,2,3) - 02:45:720 (4,5,6) - why are these spacings so inconsistent :c I think this is fine.
02:54:220 (1,1) - not enough spinner recovery time, in hard you need at least 1 beat (375ms) you have 250 ms. t/241019&start=0 I personally don't like it, but we'll see to it.

Last edited by Darcsol 2015-11-07T06:35:26+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

pimp

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pimp 2015-11-04T21:58:33+00:00

Darcsol wrote:
02:15:220 (12,1) - questionable pattern, readability is probably an issue.. remember this is hard not insane. i highly suggest you fix this (02:15:220 (12) - this has a polarity thing too, i'd rather make this into a reverse :]) Added reverse. pimpG will need to adjust his part.

thanks a lot for that -_-

would be much easier for you to fix this in your part

see you soon

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