1. Fluttershy03
2. appleeaterx x1
3. skinnyjimmy
4. TheDizzeY
5. Retr1buti0n
6. paseli
7. Tsuchimikado
8. xLoupGarou
9. A i k a
10. FastBoy
11. HouseForever
12. fm4a93au04 x1
13. joolomasta
14. hanyuu_nanodesu
15. hhkkyy
16. The Girls x1
17. Kenterz
18. Yauxo
19. mangocurry
20. neonat
21. okdesu
22. EndlessShadow
23. Genocide
24. DeathOfSerious
25. UnLock-x1
26. sheela901
27. nadapanx1
28. DraQeux1
29. Moway
30. Low
31. HootOwlStarx1
32. Zero__wind
33. LordRaika
34. baraatje123

Fluttershy03 wrote:

Hi, doing m4m. Any questions about my mod then pm me ingame.

General

The ranking criteria states that "The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars". The lowest difficulty of this set is 2.29. So if you want this ranked, then either make the normal diff much easier, or map an easy diff. Ok thank you I might just add an easy then!

I've noticed that your diffs lack a lot of hitsounds. For every 2nd and 4th beat in a measure, you should add a clap hitsound. Yea I havent added many yet soo ill get right to it!

Normal

This difficulty contains many spacing errors, so you should tweak every note and make sure that they all follow the distance snap. This is a normal diff, so there shouldn't be many jumps.

00:12:237 (1) - Move this to x:185 to align the sliderhead with the end of 00:11:531 (4) - Done

00:12:237 (1,2) - This blanket looks sloppy, so I suggest you move 00:13:296 (2) - to a different place to improve it. How about x:281 y:250? Done

00:18:766 (4,1,3) - This lot of notes overlap eachother many times. This looks ugly and is confusing to read, so I suggest moving them so that they aren't touching. Yea i had a feeling

00:28:472 (6,2) - Another nasty looking overlap ._. Move them apart so that they don't make contact. Moved it!

01:30:943 (2) - Curve this a bit more, purhaps you could make it look like 01:32:002 (4) -? That way you can keep slider consistency. ok

01:50:884 (7,8) - Sloppy blanket, try moving 01:50:884 (7) - to x:294 y:225, this way the blanket will be better. Gotcha

01:58:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A bit of a challenge for normal, don't you think? Since this mapset doesn't have an easy, the normal should be playable by beginners. I will remap this

02:11:178 (3,5) - The two sliderends overlap eachother, so I recommend moving them apart. Moved

02:16:296 (1,2) - Bad blanket, move 02:16:296 (1) - to x:100 y:117 so that the sliderend is blanketted nicely. done


Hard

This has the same kind of issue with spacing as normal; some notes are 1.2x away, some are 1.4x away, and others are 1.3x away. Tweak all the notes with a distance snap value and stick with it.

00:28:825 (1,3) - Adjust these so that the sliderends are on the same x:y: coordinates. Had to do a little thinking lol but i got it

01:02:884 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, try moving (1) to x204 y:191. Moved

01:05:178 (9,1) - I think you should make this symmetrical so it looks and plays better It has been symetricafied!

01:30:590 (1) - It would flow much better if you moved this to x:341 y:235 done

02:18:413 (1,2,1) - Poor flow, I recommend that you try this instead: Got it!

try this

Insane

This diff has the same sort of spacing issues as the other diffs, so tweak all non-jump notes to a distance snap.

00:53:531 (1,2,1,2,1) - I think it would look better if all these sliders had the same structure so that it is nice and symmetrical. Fixed

01:39:237 (1,3) - Reposition these so that their tails are on the same x:y: coordinates. Done

02:08:531 (3,4) - Sloppy blanket, I suggest you move (3) and the slidertail stacked on top of it to x:292 y:147. This way it would look nicer due to a better blanket. Fixed


Overall, I think it's a fine beatmap, bit the biggest issue is the spacing, present in all diffs. Please fix this by turning on the distance snap and position all non jump notes accordingly. Good luck!

appleeaterx wrote:

from #modreq >_<

:idea: General

* Artist: livetune feat. 初音ミク
* Artist Romanised: livetune feat. Hatsune Miku
* Your red timing point is in a very odd place, try putting it on 00:00:237
* Delete " livetune hatsune miku half step " from the tags, they are already put into artist and title.

Normal

* Fix this AIMod

* 00:18:766 (4) - Remove one slider point here, it looks better imo.

* 00:21:943 (4,5) - Good example of why you should use spacing, all the previous notes were good - but this should be closer, a beginner won't be able to read this.
* 01:41:531 (2) - I move this a couple grids to the left to improve blanket.
* 02:27:060 (10) - Add a NC - strong beat.

Hard

* 00:11:531 (3) - Put a NC here.
* 00:14:884 (3) - Move to x164/y320 for a better flow and even spacing.
* 00:45:943 (3) - I don't recommend doing this, this just breaks the flow.
* 00:56:707 (4) - KIAI starts - I'd put a NC.
* 02:04:472 (4) - ^

Insane

* 00:11:531 (4) - There's a strong beat here and it's on a large white tick, I would put a NC here. You can also improve the blanket here.

* 00:15:943 (4) - What about rotating this slider a little bit, and put it a little further from the previous slider?

* 00:17:531 (1) ~ 00:19:649 (1) - What about this rhythm, adding a stream, and adding a SV change on the slider.

* 00:35:002 (2) - This note seems a little weird here, either make a blanket or make a triangle.

* 00:37:472 (2,3) - Move these two notes one grid down to make a better blanket.
* 00:47:355 (8) - Move to x184/y52 for a better looking triangle.
* 00:55:296 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't think NC is needed here, but I guess it's okay.
* 00:56:707 - After this note, there's quite a big gap in KIAI, consider filling this with two 1/2 notes, or create a slider here, also KIAI starts here so I'd put a NC here.
* 00:57:766 (5) - Move a grid down for a better blanket.
* 01:05:178 (9) - Put a NC here to split up the long combo.
* 01:05:707 (10,11,12) - What about something like this?

* 01:07:649 (2) - CTRL+G?
* 01:09:943 (6) - Move this a couple grids to the left for a better blanket.
* 01:12:413 (8,1) - I don't really like these sliders stacked, consider placing the second slider somewhere else, or make a blanket again.
* 01:33:413 (4) - Move this one or two grids to the right - it looks nicer this way.
* 01:47:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - Are you following the vocals here? If you are following the vocals; the slider doesn't really fit imo
* 01:50:355 (4,5,6,7) - Make the slider symmetrical and put the circle precisely in the middle to create a good blanket.
* 02:04:472 (2) - Same as previous, NC here.
* 02:12:943 (1,2) - Maybe add more points to the slider - the sliders you use are usually straight or have a small curve. Try to also add red points - I'd suggest something like this.

* 02:21:590 (4) - Move a grid to the left for a better blanket.

Nice map, just fix spacing a little - GL - have a star

skinnyjimmy wrote:

Hello, im here to mod your map!

[Insane]

00:16:296 (5) - i think this would flow better if you move this to 376, 340
00:17:531 (1) - if you do this ^ then also move this to 376, 340
00:24:237 (4) - i think this is curving around 2 a bit to much, so fix this blanket
00:33:237 (1,2) - if these were a round stream, and not straight they would flow a lot better
00:46:472 (4,5) - same thing as ^
01:50:707 (5,6) - move these to 256, 216
02:18:590 (2) - move this too 268, 160

really nice map and song, I only mod insanes, so thats why i didnt mod the other difficulties

GL getting this ranked!

Retr1buti0n wrote:

Got your mod request from #modreq.

I'm new to modding, so d̶o̶n̶'̶t̶ ̶t̶a̶k̶e̶ ̶m̶e̶ ̶s̶e̶r̶i̶o̶u̶s̶l̶y̶ excuse any newbie mistakes I make. xD

Normal
-Approach rate feels slow. Try an AR5. Some parts of the map had a few too many circles on it so I'm thinking a faster AR.
-Spinner at 01:56:531 could be replaced with a slider
-02:05:001 needs distance snap

Hard
-4 at 00:56:707, the jump seems like something that would be on Insane maps

Insane
-I don't know what to say. It's simple and beautifully executed. Or maybe it's my bias towards jumpy maps.

Great work!

paseli wrote:

Mod from my modding queue~

[Normal]
Check your distances again, AiMod is spitting out warnings. Fixed, no more warnings! Wooo!

00:32:354 (6,2) - this overlap doesn't really look neat, you should better stack
No more to say about this, you need to keep distances equal at >=95% of the time (the rest are rare exceptions).

[Hard]
00:29:531 (3,5) - stack
00:32:178 (3,5) - don't overlap
00:35:001 (2) - reposition at x:148, y:260
01:12:943 (1,3) - bad overlap
01:32:707 (1,4) - ^
01:33:943 (5,6,8) - ^
02:08:707 (4,6,7) - ^
02:10:649 (2,4) - better stack

[Insane]
That looks nice, but there are still some flaws.

00:09:766 (5,6) - straightdown jumps is something i usually avoid, but this is just preference
00:13:119 (3) - reposition at x:428 y:292, better flow
00:20:884 (4) - reposition at x:156, y:260 and improve blanket http://puu.sh/aJIet/8f97b43d88.jpg
00:32:002 (3) - bad overlap
00:53:531 (1,2,1,2,1) - it would be better if you rearrage the sliders a bit, putting all at the same positions doesn't feel good
01:06:766 (1,1) - bad overlap
01:54:943 (7) - reposition at x:188, y:256 for better flow
01:58:295 - optional circle add
02:03:060 (2,3,4,5) - i'd rather go with this, it feels much better to play: http://puu.sh/aJIvH/dd844a25d6.jpg

Good balanced maps, you could still improve flow and patterns at some parts, but this comes with time and experience.
Keep your work up!

Greetings,
paseli

Tsuchimikado wrote:

Yahello~! greetings from my modding queue. Omg this song is really nice!

[Insane]
Overall, a pretty solid map. Just has a few things that could be fine tuned.

1. 00:06:589 (3) - Fix this blanket, use 2's approach circle as guidance
   
   Like this

   
2. 00:30:060 (5) - Move 5 to x=152 y=216 for perfect blanket with 4. ALSO fix 5 so that it curves around the slider end of 4. For this, you can use the silderball indicator as guidance.
   
   as seen HERE

   
3. 00:32:707 (5) - I think it looks better if you move 5 to x=324 y=116 so that both 4 and 6 sort of blanket around 5
4. 00:33:236 (1,2,3) - 1 and 2 and 3 are inconsistent with each other. Look at my before and after example
   
   Before and After

   Before
   
   
   After
   
5. 00:45:325 (2) - make this slider blanket perfectly by dragging the endpoint down so it looks like this
   
   this

   
6. 01:15:413 (3) - make this blanket better with 2
7. 01:41:001 (1) - NC
8. 01:46:648 (1,2,3,4,5) - the spacing here is inconsisten, make the objects in the stream all the same distance spacing.\
9. 01:51:589 - move the start of the spinner here and extend the slider before it to fill that beat.
10. 02:11:001 (3) - you can probably make it blanket with the slider end of 2
11. 02:14:531 (4) - move the end point of this slider to x=64 y=240 for perfect blanket
12. 02:27:060 (1) - optional* add a Finish to this beat!

[Hard]

1. 00:20:354 (3) - make blanket neater by moving midpoint inward
2. 00:39:766 (8,1,2) - consider spacing 8 further from 1 than 1 is to 2 because 8 > 1 is a long pause compared 1 > 2, yet they have the same distance spacing.
3. 00:41:707 (5) - this is spaced too close to the slider end. It will make people think it's a fast beat when there's actually a pause. Consider changing the distance spacing here. ALSO make this a NC.
4. 00:47:531 9 (7,1) - Short distance spacing for pauses and long distance spacing for regular beats? This jump is quite unexpected. You need to build up to something like this by using repetition. Meaning, something like this has to show up earlier, and during a similar phrase. Miku's phrases the entire song are almost exactly the same, so this wouldn't be hard, but you made the distance spacing of the long pauses earlier quite small, which is why this is a startling jump.
5. 00:56:001 (3) - You're going to want to space this a little closer to 2 to indicate that there is only an eighth-beat in between the two compared the similarly spaced 1 before 2, which is a quarter-step away.
6. 00:56:531 (3) - Silence the slider end hitsound because it ruins Miku's vocal part. <3
7. 01:40:295 (1) - Remove NC
8. 01:41:001 (2) - Add NC
9. 01:44:001 (1) - Remove NC
10. 01:44:707 (3) - Add NC
11. 01:51:589 - Move the beginning of the spinner here, and then extend the previous slider to fill the missing beat.
12. 02:03:766 (3) - Move this closer to 2 so it's like, 1 tiny grid space away from it.

[Normal]

1. 00:07:648 (3) - Make this blanket 2
2. 00:42:413 (4) - this slider sounds really weird right here. I think it sounds MUCH better if you move it forward to the next red tick, THEN move 5 so that it's properly distance spaced.
3. 01:05:178 (1) - make neater blanket
4. 02:06:589 (4) - bring the endpoint downward a little so that it makes the perfect blanket
5. 02:25:825 (7,8) - Either make 7 or 8 a NC. Either one looks nice

Good luck! I think you're off to a great start~

A i k a wrote:

No issues found in Normal.

Hard:
The mini-pause at 00:08:178 messes up the rhythm, consider making a circle there. Done
The mini-pause at 00:08:707 as well, same there, consider making a circle. ^

Advising to snap distance on slider at 00:10:295, it's confusing if not. Fixed and moved note positions
Same to slider at 00:19:648, and circle at 00:20:178. ^

Missing circle at 00:43:825? It feels strange without it since she was not done singing the whole word. Changed to slider.

I like the pattern on first kiai time, it feels very comfortable to play. Thank you!

01:39:060 to 01:39:942 sounds a bit wierd, the slider starts at no good rhythm. Try like this instead. Used this! Thanks! Sounds much better!
Add circle at 01:40:825(matches beat) and/or snap distance for slider at 01:41:001. Personally I prefer adding circle and no need to snap distance, but it's up to you. Changed and fixed postions.

Shorten slider at 01:42:942, ending it at 01:43:295 makes not much sense. Shorten it to end at 01:43:119 instead, if you want to add circle at 01:43:295, go ahead but I think that a mini-pause is appropriate there. Fixed and left the pause in.

I think distance between circles at 02:04:472 and 02:05:001 are a bit too close and might cause confusion and player tend to click 02:05:001 much earlier because they are so close. Changed the slider to a rounded one and moved note down instead of across.

No problem found in Insane.

As whole, I think that it's a good song, and it's well-mapped, good job! And I hope it gets ranked ^^

FastBoy wrote:

M4M~
Sorry about I mod your beatmap so late as I am little bit busy.
Also, sorry about my poor English...

[Normal]

01:14:707 (2) - I think you can put it at (280,200) so you can make 01:15:060 (3) be placed on 01:13:649 (2). After that, you should move those notes which are after the note which I just pointed out. Done!

01:16:472 (5) - Move it upwards in order to reflect with 01:15:060 (3). Please remember to move 01:17:178 (1) in order to make the distance of it and the previous one sensible. Never thought about this, done!

01:17:884 - I suggest adding a spinner here. Just follow your sense. If you follow me, you will need to make the break time start at 01:20:001. Whatever you follow me or not, you also need to make the break time end at
01:29:001. I decided not to add a spinner

01:39:060 (5) - Make the start terminal of it at (228,124) in order to make the start terminal of
01:40:119 (6) - be placed on the start terminal of 01:38:355 (4). Done!

02:18:590 (6) - Make it be placed on the start terminal of 02:17:354 (4). After that, you should move those notes which are after the note which I just pointed out. Done!

It is a very nice map. Keep going!

[Hard]

00:38:178 (4) - I think you can make the start terminal of it at (284,144) in order to make it be placed on the start terminal of 00:36:943 (1). Done!

00:38:531 (5,6) - If you follow my suggestion above, you will need to move the start terminal of the 5th slider at (320,84) and move the 6th circle at (440,36). ^

01:20:001 - Make the break time start at here. Didn't make changes to break times.

01:29:001 - Make the break time end at here. ^

02:26:707 (2) - You may press Ctrl+G in order to make it flowy. Done!

It is also a nice map. There are just a few of problems.

[Insane]

00:23:884 (3,4,5) - Why did you not move the 3rd circle at (256,192)? Maybe you have your style. Just follow your sense. If you follow me, you will need to move the start terminal of the 4th slider at (336,208) and the 5th circle at (132,256). Followed and works nicely!

01:20:001 - Make the break time start at here. Didn't make changes to break times.

01:29:884 - Make the break time end at here. ^

Your beatmapping skills are nice! I love this diff!

HouseForever wrote:

Hey here from M4M

NORMAL:

00:47:178 (4,5) Replace 5 with a reflected version of 4 Done!
01:30:590 (1) Fix the blanket 1,2 ;D Fixed!
01:37:296 (2) ^ 2,3 ^
01:38:355 (4) ^ 4,5,6 ^
01:53:531 (2,3,4,5) You should arrange it, so that 2 is in the middle of 3 and 5 Didn't notice this, fixed!
02:12:590 (3) Fix blanket 3,4 Fixed
02:18:942 Place a hitcircle here? Placed
02:19:648 ^ ^
02:20:531 ^ ^
02:23:178 (3,4,5) Replace 5 with a reflected version of 3 Fixed!

HARD:

00:43:648 (4) Let this end at 44:531? Going to leave it as it is.
00:56:002 (3) It kind of irritates me, that there is no hitsound at the sliders tail I was told to silence this tail as it ruins Miku's vocals so I'm going to leave it.
01:48:766 (5,3) Fix Blanket Fixed!
02:21:943 (1,2) ^ ^

INSANE:

01:07:649 (2) It would be great if there would be a stream of 4 hitcircles here I think it's fine
02:04:472 (2) I think in this little break should be more action ^

Very nice beatmapping! And a funny song^^ good luck getting it ranked

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi~~ From my modding Q~

[Normal]

1. Check AiMod, and then check the "Check distance snap" option. You then can find some DS problems, fix it AiMod is being a little prick right now and doesn't feel like opening for me. (Bad Method Token) I'll have to check again later, fear not I will fix it
2. I think AR 5 is too fast, change it to 4 I think ill, keep it at 5 for now
3. 00:06:942 (2) - Move this slider 1/2 tick forward, I think it sounds better, don't forget to DS http://puu.sh/b09Yl/7bfebae6cd.jpg OK!
4. 00:07:648 (3) - If you follow the mod above, also move this slider 1/2 tick forward ^
5. 00:08:001 If you follow the mod above, add a note here ^
6. 00:09:060 (6) - NC here, remove NC here 00:10:296 (1) - Hmmm, i never had a NC here.... 00:10:295 (1) -
7. 00:11:531 (3) - NC here instead of here 00:12:237 (1) - Added and removed.
8. 00:14:002 (1) - Remove NC Removed
9. 00:23:178 (1) - ^ ^
10. 00:22:825 (1) - Add finish here Added
11. 00:28:472 (6) - NC here instead of here 00:28:825 (1) - Added and removed
12. 00:28:825 (1,3) - Just make them identical? They are now twins!
13. 00:34:472 (1) - Stack the slider end with 00:32:354 (6) - head Done
14. 00:36:237 (4,5) - Make them identical. (ctrl+c, ctrl+v, ctrl+h, ctrl+g) A new set of twins!
15. 00:36:943 (5) - NC here instead of here 00:37:648 (1) - Added and Removed
16. 00:39:766 (4) - ^ instead of here 00:40:119 (1) - Added and Removed
17. 00:45:413 (2) - NC Added
18. 00:52:119 (1) - Remove NC Never had one here...
19. 00:57:413 (1,2) - Improve the blanket Improved
20. 00:59:531 (4) - Put it under 00:58:119 (2) - slider's end Done!
21. 00:59:884 (1) - Curve it a bit more so that the reverse arrow would be placed at where 00:58:119 (2) - head was. Took a little bit but it's done.http://puu.sh/b0ao3/f5b6b09678.jpg
22. 01:06:236 (1) - Remove NC here Removed
23. 01:12:589 (8) - NC here instead of here 01:12:943 (1) - Added the NC
24. 01:17:178 (1) - Remove NC or NC here instead 01:16:472 (5) - NC was already on 01:16:472 (5) - tail.
25. 02:02:354 (2) - I think add a clap here I decided against it.
26. 02:14:002 (1,3) - Make them identical How many twins are we going to make?!
27. 02:27:060 (8) - NC? :3 Kept the finish.

[Hard]

1. 00:11:531 (3) - NC here instead of here 00:12:237 (1) - Mhmm
2. 00:22:825 (1) - Finish here Yup
3. 00:32:178 (3,4) - Blanket them Alright
4. 00:40:825 (3) - Delete this note and move 00:40:295 (2) - 1/2 tick backward. Sounds better.I agree http://puu.sh/b0aKl/b1eac7d94d.jpg
5. 00:42:237 (6) - Remove the reverse and move 00:42:766 (7) - to 00:42:589 Don't DS them, let them the way it is, it'll create a little jump Done
6. 00:44:884 There's no sound here, but I totally think you should add a note here... I'll add it in and see how other people like it.
7. 00:45:413 (3) - Finish at slider's head Yup
8. 00:48:237 (3,5) - Why don't make them identical? Twins for everyone!
9. 00:56:002 (3) - Extend this to 00:56:619 since the voice didn't stop Extended.
10. 00:59:355 (1) - Change this to circle at 00:59:531 stack with (7) if you want to Changed to circle but did not stack to (7) http://puu.sh/b0aZn/7c976d2c7f.jpg
11. 01:02:178 (5) - ^ the idea is the same Changed to circle http://puu.sh/b0b1G/7fd6b9d556.jpg
12. 01:02:354 if you apply the mod above, NC here instead of here 01:02:884 (1) - Did not add the NC because another clap happens on the next white tick, so it would sound weird.
13. 01:07:649 (2) - ctrl+g, better flow and create a little jump with next note ^^ Sure
14. 01:38:707 (8) - ^ ? ^
15. 01:40:825 (4,5,6) - Remake the triangle shape I actually never meant this to be a triangle shape, but now that you mention it, I've made it into a triangle http://puu.sh/b0b9H/3fee2a3e54.jpg
16. 01:41:531 (6) - I think finish at slider's end would be good too :3 So do I
17. 01:47:178 (8) - ^ ^
18. 02:03:766 (2) - Just like before, extend this to 02:04:384 Extended
19. 02:12:942 (1,1,1,1) - You don't need to NC every now and then....

Removed

[Insane]

1. I think HP drain 6 would be enough Ill leave it at 7
2. 00:11:531 (4) - NC here instead of here 00:12:237 (1) - Added but kept the NC on the tail 00:12:237 (1) -
3. 00:12:060 (5) - I would prefer to place this at where 00:11:178 (3) - was. I guess it works, plus it creates another jump.
4. 00:16:472 (6) - Place the slider's end at where 00:15:590 (3) - head was Done
5. 00:22:825 (1) - Finish instead of clap Yup
6. 00:25:649 (1) - ctrl+g, feel like it fitting the vocal better kept it the way it was
7. 00:28:825 (2) - ^ This ones ok.
8. 00:33:766 (3) - Finish at slider's end? Yup
9. 00:36:943 (1) - ctrl+g again? :3 I guess it works
10. 00:38:531 (6) - ^ ^
11. 00:56:002 (1) - Extend this to 00:56:619 ? Yup
12. 00:58:825 (8) - ctrl+g Why not
13. 01:03:766 (4) - ^ ^
14. 01:08:178 (4) - Delete this note I like this note here QQ
15. 01:08:002 (3) - Finish here Yea
16. 01:18:942 (2) - Finish at slider's end instead of whistle? Ok
17. 01:30:589 (1) - Finish Yea
18. 01:39:060 (9) - Delete this, move 01:39:237 (1) - 1/2 tick forward, then add a note at 01:39:942 Done http://puu.sh/b0bGn/c101880b52.jpg
19. 01:41:531 (7) - Finish at slider's end instead of whistle yea
20. 01:47:178 (5) - ^ ^
21. 01:50:884 (6) - Delete this and move 01:51:060 (7) - 1/2 tick forward. Done http://puu.sh/b0bKe/875b8f9b76.jpg
22. 01:53:178 (3) - Finish at slider's head Yea
23. 02:03:766 (1) - You know what to do right? Nope, not in the slightest.
24. 02:15:766 (3) - Finish Yea
25. 02:24:590 (3) - ctrl+g? Sure
26. 02:25:119 (5) - ^ ^

Okay, done ^^
Good luck on your map~^^

hhkkyy wrote:

[Insane]

• 
  00:19:119 (1) - May not necessary to reduce sv I kind of like this so I'm going to keep it
  00:29:531 (4) - Replace it with a shorter slider and a note may be better Done!
  00:40:560 - Just a suggestion,how about deleting 3 ,moving 2 to 00:40:472 and replacing 1 with a slider? This works and sounds better.
  00:56:002 (1) - Well...I read the mods before,extending it is a good idea,but pay attention to the distance...4.63 may be too far,and 02:04:472 (2) - this is even 7.35......move the notes after the sliders a bit nearer..... Yea completely forgot about the distance between those jumps, ive changed them so the jumps are around 4.00x
  01:08:531 (1,2,3,4) - too near,maybe 2:364,160 3:388,172 4:440,216 I'll stick with what I have
  01:14:355 (1) - Seems not proper here,too much vocal undermapped Remapped a bit buy adding a slider and a circle
  01:42:943 (4) - I think if not ignore the vocal 01:43:049 will be better...and the pattern is not beautiful... changed this up a little bit as well
  add notes on 00:56:884 00:57:060 02:04:648 02:04:825 I prefer to leave these areas the way they are

[Hard]

• 
  Hp 5 Check!
  00:35:178 (3) - don't stack.express the vocal at 00:35:354 strongly recommanded I changed this part a bit, but i still left a stack in there
  00:56:707 (4) - 1/4 jump may be too hard for this diff,please stack the note on the end of the slider I didn't really stack them, kinda just overlapped them?
  02:01:649 (2,1) - too far compressed the notes more into the middle
  02:04:472 (3) - referred before ^
  02:25:119 (5) - Highly recomand to fix,It's quite hard for a player on this level to distinguish which slider moves above and which moves down. I just assumed players would keep their cursor on the head of the sliders and move down accordingly, well I moved (6) down so now players can easily distinguish which way to go

Sorry for my poor English
I love this song
Good luck!

1. Length is 1 second longer than your other maps.
2. 00:18:766 (2) I think this is more suitable for the flow on Norm difficulty.
   
3. 01:00:942 (2) Try this? Smoother mouse movements
   
4. 01:17:178 (6) It feels more fitting for the song if you don't break up the flow out song just to blanket. THis is the end of the passage, and I think after the chorus where its twisting and turning flow-wise to resolve it in a fluid motion. Like this:
   
5. 01:32:531 (2, 3) If you stretch the steepness of your stream it flows better. Like this:
   
6. 01:53:884 (3, 4, 5) Stretch so DS is consistent.
   

1. Consider turning your slider tick rate to two for Hard+ or Insane. It would help make the longer sliders not seem so empty.
2. 00:11:531 (3, 1, 2) Ctrl + H for better flow. You might want to consider reversing Slider 2 if you don't like how far the jump is.
3. 00:19:648 (1) Stack to the end of the Slider 4 at 00:18:413
4. 00:30:060 (4, 5) Try reversing the curve like this. It flows from Slider 3 into 4, and then let's you still alternate smoothly to Slider 5.
   
5. 00:35:707 (4) Blanket
6. 00:40:913 (3) Move this out just by a tad. So the blanketing is cleaner.
7. 02:01:648 (2, 1) If you switch the two, it builds anticipation for the song when it comes down to the middle sliders. Also flows fine. Maybe too big of a jump for Hard?
   

• 
  There isn't much to say about this. It flows nice and its purrrdy.

1. 00:48:236 (3) I have nothing else to complain about... lol
   [img]http://puu.sh/b93Jw/ef1e4a647d.jpg
   [/img]
2. 01:45:589 (6) Line up axis. 3 sides of a square.
3. 01:50:884 (6) Probably blanket at the same distance as previous. Especially since all three sliders are surrounding 1 circle.

Kenterz wrote:

Hello, mod from my queue

Normal

I think the HP Drain Rate and the Overall Difficulty can be both at 3 instead of 4, remember that it's the lowest difficulty of the map, it should be quite easy. Yes I agree. It should be much easier, as you can probably tell, easy-normal is not my forte.

1. 00:08:884 - There is an emphasized beat you missed here, I think you should add a circle here (maybe around x356|y64 ?) Yea
2. 00:21:237 (2,3,4) - I think it's a bit hard to play these 3 circles which are on a red tick. It's just a little suggestion, but maybe you can try this exemple of pattern : http://puu.sh/bab6V.jpg Yea sure I like this, I also changed a slider that came before to a 1/2 slider.
3. 00:32:354 (6,2) - These sliders aren't perfectly stacked, you should fix it for the esthetic of the difficulty. Fixed
4. 00:48:766 (1) - There's only 1/2 beat of distance between the last object and the spinner, it's quite short for a Normal =/ Maybe you can try to start it at
5. 00:48:942 because there's an emphasized beat here, so even if it won't follow the voice, it'll be justified. If it'll make it easier than yea Ill fix it.
6. 00:55:119 (1) - Same problem here, I think you should follow the stream, which starts at 00:55:295, then it'll be perfect because there will be 1/1 beat instead of 1/2 beat, it'll be easier for beginners. ^
7. 00:57:413 (1,2) - I think you can change a little bit (2)'s shape to make a perfect blanket with (1) for it looks prettier. You can be helped by the sliderball's overyaly, like in this picture : http://puu.sh/babA2.jpg I tried to fix this again though not really like the picture, hopefully it's a bit better now.
8. 01:02:707 (1,2) - There is an overlap here, it looks quite ugly... I think you can try this exemple of pattern to make it prettier :
   SPOILER

   
   Yes fixed, but (3) slider I ctrl-g so it flows to the next note.
9. 01:47:884 (1,2) - This pattern can be hard for beginners, they won't know when they have to hit the slider. I suggest to destack these sliders, this should be more readable. Destacked
10. 01:51:590 (1) - Same as above about the distance between the spinner and the previous object, but there is no emphasized beat 1/2 beat after the start of the slider. Then I think the better this to do is to use a circle instead of 01:51:060 (6). Did I do it right?
11. 01:56:531 (1) - Instead of the last suggestion, there is an emphasized beat at 01:56:707, so the spinner should start here I think. ^
12. 02:05:002 (1) - I think it's a bad idea to start here with a circle on a red tick. I suggest to delete it, like you made for the first kiai time. Deleted
13. 02:15:413 (3,1) - The distance snap here can be tricky here, I thought I had to hit at 02:16:119. I think you should start here at 02:16:472, because starting on a red tick is hard. Did I do it right again? I removed the first note and DS the notes the come after.
14. 02:22:472 (2,4) - Maybe you can stack these 2 objects ? It'll increase the diff's esthetic. Stacked
15. 02:25:295 (6) - Maybe you can use a 1/2 slider here instead of the circle, because there is an emphasized beat at 02:25:472. Yes I agree.

Hard

1. 00:28:825 (1,3,5) - Try to stack them properly, it'll be prettier \:D/ Made them Pretty
2. 00:42:237 (6,7) - The jump between these 2 objects is a problem, it'll make people fail and raging and after they will break their computer :c Maybe you can use CTRL+G for 00:42:237 (6) ? Someone suggested me to do this, but now that you put it that way... I guess ill keep the jumps to a minimum.
3. 00:49:119 (4) - I don't know if it's a good idea to stack here, it's gonna be hard for HD playes, I suggest to stack it with 00:49:296 (5). I should start playing my map with all the different mods so I can start noticing these things. Stacked
4. 00:56:002 (3,4) - The distance between these 2 objects in the timeline is a bit short, it's gonna be hard to guess when it ends, because of the slider velocity multiplier, so I suggest to make it ends at 00:56:531. This is what I had it at originally before I extended it to 00:56:619 .As of right now I'm going to keep it the way it is so that both hard and insane are the same in a sense.
5. 00:59:707 (2,4) - These 2 object aren't stacked properly, try to fix it for the esthetic of the diff. Stacked
6. 01:44:002 (1,2) - Just a little suggestion, but why don't you make the same pattern as 01:38:355 (7,8) ? Yup
7. 01:51:060 (7,8) - I suggest to destack here, because it's hard with HD. Maybe you can move it around something like x176|y364 ? Destacked, but placed elsewhere.
8. 01:55:472 (1) - Just a little suggestion about the flow here, but maybe you can reverse the slider ? Here is an exemple : http://puu.sh/baeJq.jpg I was thinking this too because it felt weird as I was playing this. Yea I was thinking this too.
9. 02:01:296 (1,2,1,2) - Ouch... I think these jumps are too hard for this diff, even for the Insane it'll be hard imo =/ Alright I changed it up a bit so now the top 2 are jumps but not as big.
10. 02:03:766 (2,3) - Same as above, the distance in the timeline is too short between these 2 objects. Try to end the slider at 02:04:295. ^

I don't know what to say... This diff is perfect, I love it \:D/

Insane

I think the Overall Difficulty is a bit high, because decrease it a little bit, 7 seems fine imo. I kind of want to do 7.5, but I hate decimal values so I'll go with 7.

1. 00:20:355 (3,6) - Just a suggestion, but maybe you can try to stack these slider's tail ? Alright, this will also create a jump with (4) & (5)
2. 00:38:531 (6,7) - This jump looks a bit random, I think you should continue 00:38:531 (6)'s shape's movement by moving (7) around x96|y36 Yea this note hasn't moved since I first placed it there. So I guess you could say it's a bit random.
3. 00:41:001 (3,4,5) - The distance between these 3 objects is quite the same, so maybe you should try to change this, maybe by moving (4) around x260|y248 Fixed
4. 01:04:472 (6,8) - Maybe you can try to blanket (8) with (6) ? Blanketed
5. 01:33:413 (4,6) - Try to stack them properly please stacked
6. 01:46:913 (2,4) - These 2 circles aren't needed, there's no emphasized beats on these blue ticks so it's overmapped, and you should delete them. Deleted
7. 02:08:002 (2,3) - The (3) is hidden by (2)'s revese, to you should change it, it'll be better to play Yea OK placed it elsewhere
8. 02:25:472 (6) - This slider seems a bit out of this pattern 02:24:413 (2,3,4,5), so I suggest to try this pattern : http://puu.sh/bafHH.jpg Did I do it right? I think so

Sweet mapset ~

Good luck for rank \:D/

Yauxo wrote:

Kinda late, sorry! Don't worry, waiting is the least of my worries.
Hi there, coming from your request in our Modding Queue. Be so kind to take some minutes (or seconds, lets be honest) to answer to my mods. Dont be a dick and just "lol didnt changed stuffs hurr durr" (I would never do that) without an explanation. If I told you something that was against your map, tell me why (Will do!). This way mapper and modder both gain something. (Level Up!)
Please take note that I mod your map for mostly unrankable or "stupid" stuff. I try to avoid style related issues, as I cant really judge these. Why is that?

Unrankable
Suggestion

Other than that, colours yellow to red indicate how important changes would be in my opinion

[General]
■ The set itself (all diffs) have some more or less big rhythm problems in them. Many possible (and/or strong beats) are unmapped or mapped by a unfitting long slider. I'll point out the main problems in the Normal mod and suggest that you carry the general idea over to the other diffs.

[Normal]
Many (quite the number) NCs seemed off so I took the time to unNC all and NC them again. Thank you for taking the time to do this, ill have to look over these NCs. I also feel like my understanding of hit sounding has been improved, thanks to you're awesome explanation.

00:09:060 (1) - 00:11:531 (1) - 00:14:707 (1) - 00:17:531 (1) - 00:20:354 (1) - 00:22:825 (1) - 00:25:648 (1) - 00:28:472 (1) - 00:31:296 (1) - 00:34:119 (1) - 00:36:942 (1) - 00:39:766 (1) - 00:42:589 (1) - 00:47:884 (1) - 00:53:531 (1) - 00:59:531 (1) - 01:02:354 (1) - 01:05:178 (1) - 01:08:354 (1) - 01:11:178 (1) - 01:13:649 (1) - 01:16:472 (1) - 01:33:413 (1) - 01:36:237 (1) - 01:39:060 (1) - 01:42:236 (1) - 01:44:707 (1) - 01:47:531 (1) - 01:50:355 (1) - 01:55:648 (1) - 02:01:648 (1) - 02:07:295 (1) - 02:10:472 (1) - 02:12:942 (1) - 02:16:295 (1) - 02:18:590 (1) - 02:21:766 (1) - 02:24:236 (1) -

General rule of thumb when it comes to NCing: NCs should be on the downbeat (big white tick most of the time) or on a significant change in music/pitch. metronome changes can also be NCd.
Please note that all of these NCs I just recommended are before modding. If I happen to point out to change something where the downbeat is on a slider end and the object after this was NC'd, then please move the NC to the changed object that's on the downbeat.

■ About the beginning: You've mapped the same beat in multiple different ways. That itself is not bad, but it's also that the consistency takes a few hits from that as well. I'd recommend that you maybe revisit some of the patterns that you mapped (from 00:05:884 (1) - to 00:22:825 (1) - ) and think about changing some so that there might be 2 of that kind and 2 of the other kind. That wouldnt be as confusing as it is right now. (Since this is the easiest diff, new players will play this first and same beat should mean same klicks, right?) I've gone back and remapped the entire section you have pointed out you the first of the two example rhythms you have given me.

Here are 2 example rhythms you could use:

Used this one.




As an example why your rhythms could need some improvement: 00:12:236 (2) -
This 2/1 slider has multiple unmapped beats/hits, 00:12:413 - and 00:12:766 - The slider would indicate that this is just a long sound with no beats on it, which it isnt. Yes, I do agree my rhythm's do need a ton of improvement especially in my normal difficulty. I have fixed this by using the pattern in the first picture shown above and hopefully the placement (I did remap this) is alright.

00:10:648 (4) - has an unmapped beat on 00:10:825 -
(same with 00:17:884 (2) - ) etc. ^

00:20:354 (1) - has unmapped beats on 00:20:707 - and 00:21:060 - . Something like this would work for example Wow, never really noticed this, I assumed this and the last part were both the same so I kind of made it the same. Guess I'm not listening hard enough.

■ 00:17:178 (1) - remove the repeat and start a new Slider here, like you did in other cases on the same music before like 00:11:531 (1) - . Nc as well
■ 00:18:766 (3) - remove and replace with a 1/2 repeatable and place a 1/1 slider behind that Well... uh stuff happened and I used the pattern above to do this part as well, before I checked out this mod. Hopefully it'll be OK for you and for everyone else.



and all of this continues further on. For the sake of not pointing out the same things again, I'll leave that open and up to you.

■ 00:27:413 (4) - Iam rather unsure about this. The actual hit is 1/4 earlier on the blue tick (dont ever map a blue tick in normals, I just wanted to point that out)
To fix this, you could do that (3 is 00:26:707 (3) - ) Used this pattern



■ 00:43:649 (1) - I dont actually think that a spinner fits here. Try this (and move NC to 00:45:413 (2) - ): Done



■ 00:53:531 (1) - There is a downbeat (a heavy beat) on the repeat, which doesnt add to the intensity of the beat at all. Make it clickable! 00:53:531 (4) - circle 00:53:884 (1) - slider (NC) It is now clickable!
■ 00:55:295 (3) - This spinner doesnt fit here either. Try this (this is with the change from ^)



Please also remove the SV slowdown on 00:56:001 (4) - , that shouldnt be there in Normals I went from Insane > Hard > Normal so that's why the SV change is in there. Guess I never took it out.

■ 01:06:766 (3) - This plays better imo because the slider on (3) would support the long "A" vocal and the circles afterwards support the following vocals better as opposed to a slider Alright, I like the feel of this.



■ 01:09:766 (5) - I got a little confused at first because of the different combo numbers but I got it (hopefully)



■ 01:17:178 (2) - fill the gap! You can still hear strong beats in the part where you delayed the break. I was a little reluctant to fill this in in the first place so I kind of just delayed the break.



■ 01:41:002 (3) -respace this one to 1.0 DS like you usually did I didnt see that the base DS is 0,9, so respace the slider after that. I will leave this tip here though: Respaced.

(The thing with this is that it's on a red tick that new players cant smell out of nowhere. Spacing usually helps to see how "far away" an object is timewise - and if an object is closer than it should be (position wise), but farther away than the rest of the mapped objects (time wise), players might get confused and combobreak because they panic.) Alright, ill keep this in mind. Thanks for the tip.

■ 02:16:119 (1) - Move this one to the white tick so that there's no awkward gap between (4) and (1). This will also help the player holding the rhythm of the song. I changed this up a bit, I moved them to the white tick as you said and placed an extra note on the white tick in between.
On a side note: Never try to map vocal only. You play to the beat of the song, not to the vocals.
You also did it correct here 02:18:590 (1) -


I'll leave it at that, the same rhythm problems occur later on as well, so Iam not gonna point these out as well, as the song's pretty much on repeat after the second kiai. I'd highly recommend that you look over all of these atleast once. (The rhythm in the kiai looked better than outside of it)

[Hard]
■ Basically the same as in Normal. There are some unmapped beats that should be mapped, some sliders are longer than they should be, some strong beats are on sliderends (which is a weak beat) and some sliders should be replaced by circle. I'll go ahead and give some examples for rhythms, but I'll leave it at that. Try to take some notes from the stuff I posted in your Normal diff and try to apply them in here as well (but a bit harder ofc)

00:17:178 (1) - Done.



00:28:825 (1) - Notes placed elsewhere and Done.



■ The kiai here is, compared to the rest, really good! Thats how it should be.
■ 01:10:825 (2) - replace (2 and 3) with a 1/1 slider Done!
■ 01:13:472 (2) - Done!



■ 01:18:413 (1) - You dont need to NC these here, as they follow a "normal" path (I really like this as well!) Double Checked, I have no NC on these notes. Thank you for liking these XD

& repeat for second half of the song

[Insane]
■ Same as aboves, but the general map looks better as the others do in terms of rhythm. You get the drill :>

■ 00:56:707 (2) - You shouldnt leave so many beats unmapped after that, this seems boring. The song is already strong after this beat, so insert some more circles or sliders to fill the empty gap!Alright I've put in a 1/2 slider to fill the empty gap. Same with the other unmapped part.

So, uhm, yea. The song itself is really enjoyable and I'd actually want to offer to map a GD Insane if you're interested in it (that'd take some time though since I still have some requests open). Feel free to pm me ingame if you want me to.

I hope the rhythm suggestions are clear and make sense to you, so that you have an easy time implementing them :3 I didnt really mod the patterns in Hard/Insane because these were to change anyway if you change the general rhythm in these. If you have any questions, feel free to pm me ingame

Gl!

mangocurry wrote:

From modding queue!
This is nice map and nice song. Keep up your mapping style

[Insane]
00:56:002 (1,2) - end point for (1) was placed on wrong time (on blue tick), making (2) confusing to hit. end point of (1) should be at 00:56:531 If you'd read the mods before you would have noticed that this was intentional. I did have it at 00:56:531 at one point but I've extended since.
01:57:590 (7,8,9) - curve these. Curved them.
02:03:766 (1) - ^^ end point at 02:04:295^^

[normal]
00:23:884 (2) - end point should be at 00:24:236 Changed it with the mod after
00:23:178 (1,2,3) - beats are not consistent with intro. I suggest think of patterns that will suit the song better. Try setting the beat this way: Didn't exactly made it like this but i changed the second slider to a note and 1/1 slider

00:26:707 (3) - change to single note Changed

[Hard]
01:40:825 (4) - delete this note Deleted

Good luck!

neonat wrote:

Normal

Constant spacing for Normal, don't change some specifically

00:39:060 (4,1) - if you ctrl-g 00:39:060 (4) you will realise they aren't stacked perfectly off by 1 XD fixed.
00:43:825 (6) - whistle on end of slider added
00:45:413 (2) - start of slider deserves more impact, use finish hitsound it is now impactful >:D
01:02:707 (1,2) - this breaks constant distance spacing; error fixed.
01:07:648 (3) - finish on end of slider added
01:16:472 (5,1) - breaks constant distance spacing too; error fixed
01:19:294 (5) - soft finish added
01:30:590 (1) - lower the volume for this circle and put a finish lowered to 55% and added the finish.
01:44:354 (5,6,7) - confusing rhythm, doesn't really fit. Shift 01:44:531 (6) to start at 01:44:707 Yup

01:47:531 (3) - finish added
01:52:825 (1) - finish on end of slider added
01:58:825 (1,2) - spacing error, too wide fixed
02:15:413 (3) - finish on end of slider added
02:19:119 (1) - start slider at 02:19:295 - current rhythm doesn't fit the song fixed
02:19:825 (2,3) - spacing error, 02:20:707 (3) should be further away. 02:19:825 (2,1) can then stack on each other fixed and stacked
02:21:766 (1,3) - please then fix this stack, it's off fixed
02:23:884 (4,5) - because these 2 don't stack on 02:22:472 (2) it looks messy placed elsewhere

Weird, the spacing errors don't show up in AiMod. They are fixed though don't worry.

Hard

00:11:531 (3) - finish on start of slider added
00:31:296 (1,2) - I don't think stacking suits this part unstacked
00:33:766 (3) - finish on end of slider added
00:49:296 (5,6,7) - doesn't fit the song. Shift 00:49:296 (5) to start at 00:49:472 where there is a beat and move 00:49:825 (6) to 00:49:295 and also change 00:50:002 (7) to a 1/2 beat repeat slider because 00:50:178 is important Changed, not feeling the repeat slider though, left as 1/2 beat slider.
00:56:002 (3) - NC to define the sv change added
01:08:001 (3) - finish on start of slider added
01:08:001 (3,1) - not really good flow, you can't really move from 01:08:001 (3) to 01:08:531 (1) fixed
01:18:942 (2) - soft hitsound finish on end of slider added
01:30:590 (1) - finish added
01:50:707 (5,6,7) - have a better blanket tried to make it better
01:53:178 (3) - finish on start of slider added
01:57:060 (4) - out of rhythm, crucial beat at 01:57:236 overlooked fixed, made it into a 1/2 beat slider and a note
02:03:060 (1,2) - not stacked perfectly fixed
02:05:002 (1,5) - don't overlap fixed
02:08:531 (3,4,6) - unless these are spaced evenly, they look messy fixed-ish
02:15:766 (3) - finish or at least a soft whistle added a finish
02:21:942 (1) - overlooks the crucial beat at 02:22:119 as well fixed

Insane

00:11:531 (4) - finish on start of slider, furthermore this should be a new combo, as it's a new phrase added and changed
00:35:178 (3) - doesn't fit the song, it overlooks the important beat at 00:35:354 changed
00:45:413 (2) - finish on start of slider added
00:56:002 (1,2) - inappropriate jump, doesn't blend with the music and is too extreme. This part doesn't feel like it needs any jump at all, make it between 1.1~1.5x at most from the slider. Have a finish on 00:56:707 (2) Ok
01:57:060 (6) - doesn't fit the song, overlooks the beat at 01:57:236 fixed
01:57:942 and 01:58:031 - these parts feel empty, add objects to lead up to 01:58:119 (1) or it feels held back added some notes
02:03:766 (1,2) - same issue as 00:56:002 (1,2) it's too far away, and 02:04:472 (2) needs the finish hitsound to be louder and clearer and cymbals also fits here, it's too silent now changed
02:14:002 (3,4) - too close and it's too sudden of a change from the pattern of 02:12:942 (1,2,3) - you should reposition 02:14:531 (4,1) to suit the whole thing changed and fixed
02:21:942 (1) - overlooks the beat at 02:22:119 fixed



The spacing needs to be looked upon again, Good Luck.

okdesu wrote:

from Endless modding queue~

sorry i can't mod Taiko diff > [Muzukashii]

suggestion
should fix
must fix

[Insane]

1. need more pace for hardest diff
2. many short breaks where note can be added
3. 00:00:237 - map from here Yes mapped here for better consistency with Taiko difficulties. Also mapped for Normal and Hard
4. 00:05:884 (1) - half size reverse slider I will make a reverse slider for this one but not for the next one.
5. 00:06:590 (3) - half size reverse slider Not this one
6. 00:07:207 - add note Naww
7. 00:07:913 - remove I like this triple here, I have a slider in hard that mirrors this triple so I'd like to keep it consistent
8. 00:08:178 - add note I don't hear anything
9. 00:10:119 - add note ^
10. 00:11:001 - add note ^ maybe I'm deaf?
11. 00:13:207 - add note if i were to add a note here, it'd become a triple, but in doing so it'd mess up my formation here so I'm not going to add a note here
12. 00:13:825 - add note I'm seriously debating add a note here, I'll leave it out for now but maybe add it in later on.
13. 00:14:266 (2) - remove. from here 00:14:178 - to here 00:14:531 - leave empty I'm going to leave it as it is.
14. 00:16:472 (6) - half size. add note at white tick ^
15. 00:18:148 - add note Debating this note as well
16. try similar rythm for remaining map

gl (｀・ω・´)ｼｬｷｰﾝ

UnLock- wrote:

Hello! thanks for m4m!

General

Timing : Perfect
Song Setup : Check Widescreen Support Checked

Normal

00:04:119 (1) - Delete NC done
00:05:884 (4) - Add NC done
00:07:119 (1) - Delete NC done
00:08:354 (3) - Move x:284 y:232 moved
00:10:295 (1) - Del NC removed
00:11:531 (8) - Add NC done
00:12:236 (1) - Del NC, Make this slider more flexion like thatRemoved NC but kept slider shape

SPOILER

00:33:060 (1) - Del NC removed
00:45:060 (1,2) - Del 1 NC and add NC 2 Deleted and added
00:50:707 - Add note and 00:51:060 (1) - Del NC not adding a note but deleted NC
01:02:707 (1,2) - Del NC 1 and Add NC 2 kept as is
01:18:942 (4) - Make this slider short about half and reverce slider added

SPOILER

01:45:236 (7) - Move x:477 y278 moved
02:04:825 - Add note id prefer not to
02:19:295 (1,2) - Stack 2 on 1 slider finish stacked
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00:00:237 - Hitsound is very loudly than song, 50~55% is good changed
00:11:531 - Hitsound 65%
00:44:884 - Hitsound 50~55% to 00:56:619
00:56:707 - Hitsound 70~80% to 01:19:295
02:04:472 - Hitsound 70~80% to 02:25:648

Hard

AR 8 is better Was originally AR 7 but changed it to 8. That was a huge jump from normal so i changed it to 7.5. I will change it back to AR 8
00:01:825 (4,1) - Add NC 4 and Del NC 1 done
00:05:001 (2,3) - Stack 3 to 2 done
00:08:884 (1) - Add NC added
00:11:531 (3) - Add NC and 00:12:237 (1) - Del NC done
00:16:472 (5) - Rotation Anti-Clockwise 22 done
00:32:442 (3,4,5) - Move 3 to 5 and Move 4 to 5 Hopefully i did the right thing here
00:36:413 (7) - Move x:332 y:208 moved
00:45:413 (4) - Add NC added
00:52:119 (5,6,7,8) - Use Ctrl + Shift + D and make clean square wasnt really going for a square here but i made it more squarey
00:54:237 (1,1) - Del NC deleted
00:56:002 (7) - Add NC added
01:05:707 (1) - Del NC nah
01:18:413 (1,1) - Del NC deleted
01:33:943 (5,7) - Make symmetric 5 and 7 done
01:35:531 (1) - Del NC deleted
01:42:942 (3) - Add Reverce added
01:51:589 (8) - Move x:188 y:236 moved else where
02:26:178 (1,1) - Del NC deleted
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Hitsound is Make like Normal

Insane

00:30:766 (7,9) - Stack 9 on 7 stacked
00:53:531 (1,2,1,2) - Make them more far pushed them further away
00:55:472 (1,1) - Del NC nah i like the rainbow effect
01:02:178 (1) - Del this note nah, i feel it would give the player too much time to react
01:05:178 (4,1,1,1) - Make them more far Ill keep it as it is
01:02:355 (2,3,4) - Make Large triangle Sure why not
01:41:443 (6) - Del this note ok
01:44:266 (2) - ^ ^
02:03:589 (1) - Del NC I still like this
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Hitsound is Make like Normal

Verrry Funny map!

sheela901 wrote:

Hey Z3R0Xx! I guess the mod is more earlier.

General

1. I think there's no space between "feat." and "Hatsune" (same thing with the Japanese name). http://livetune.jp/discography/342 Removed the space
2. Normally, the source field should be a game, or a series, but not the album. So, the album, which is "Tell Your Story EP" should in the tags. Moved to tags
3. Widescreen Support is only ticked when you have a storyboard. It makes the storyboard into a 16:9 aspect ratio. That what that does, ok thanks unchecked it.

Normal

1. 1. 00:00:237 to 00:03:766 - Especially the slider (4), this part isn't following with the music, and the rhythm is really bad. You should use the rhythm you made to 00:04:119 (1,2,3) . So basically, the rhythm should be like this: Thanks! I used this.
      
      SPOILER

      
      I also made a pattern you can use, so here's the code:
      

      194,79,237,2,0,L|310:61,2,110,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
      114,138,1295,2,0,L|103:205,1,55
      162,273,1825,2,0,P|222:296|289:294,1,110
      312,277,2354,2,0,P|314:222|314:157,1,110
      215,172,3060,6,0,P|213:117|213:52,2,110,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

      If you don't know how to use the code, poke me in-game and I'm glad to help you.
   2. The first part of the map has new combo inconsistency. You made a pattern for the next part of the map, which is a new combo on the third downbeat. So try to follow the same pattern. Tried to make it more consistent
   3. 00:08:884 (4) - This slider sounds really weird. The head, repeat, and tail landed on weak beats, so we can't hear them properly. I would move it to 1/2 tick, which means that the slider is on 00:09:060 . Moved it
   4. I won't suggest to stack two sliders, like 00:10:295 (8,9) -, or 00:15:060 (2,3) . In my opinion, it's hiding the readability for the object that is covered by an object that's covering the object. It's hard to see with the original skin (osu!'s). So, I suggest to move these objects that is covered by another object. Unstacked them
   5. 00:13:648 (5) - It's not that important, but I suggest to move the 2nd node more down (it can be around x:280 y:109). The current doesn't follow the curve you made to 00:12:766 (3,4) -, but the one I suggest is, in my opinion. Tried to move it down more
   6. 00:23:178 (1) - I would remove the new combo to keep the consistency in the new combos. Removed
   7. 00:28:825 (1) - In my opinion, if you move it to somewhere around x:134 y:205, it'd would make a better circular flow. Alright
   8. 00:40:119 (1) - Try a mirror pattern with 00:39:060 (4) . So it means that you copy 00:39:060 (4) -, replace it to 00:40:119 (1) -, and flip it horizontally. I think it would have a nice flow, and a nice pattern. Done
   9. 00:39:766 - The part that starts here, and to the start of the spinner have an inconsistency in the new combo. Basically, 00:39:766 (5) should have a new combo, because it lands on a downbeat. After, remove it from 00:40:119 (1) to get the consistency. Try to find for the others. Tried to make it mroe consistent.
   10. 00:45:413 (8) - Flip it vertically in order to follow the flow better, instead of a flow breaker. Since you made a curve that goes right for 00:43:825 (6,7) -, 00:45:413 (8) decides to break the flow, and starts to go right. While it's flipped vertically, it would follow the curve, so it makes a circular flow. Kinda did this a little bit differently but it should be similar to what you said in the mod.
   11. 00:47:884 (3) - Same suggestion as above, but flip it horizontally. Done
   12. 00:59:884 (1) - Remove the 2nd node, by right-clicking on it, so it could be straight. That way, the slider won't go left, because 01:00:942 (2) is on the right of 00:59:884 (1) -'s head, so it's a flow breaker. Removed the second node
   13. 01:46:119 (1) - Move it to the red tick before (01:45:942 - ). It feels weird when you make a pause on a strong beat. So I suggest to move it to the red tick, and extend it to the upbeat (01:46:472 - ) to not miss the beat. Moved back, extended and moved around a bit

Hard

1. 1. Try CS on 3.8? So it won't be the same as for Insane. Ill give it a try!
   2. I spot inconsistency in the new combo, more in the beginning of the map. Try to keep it constant. Your panda nose too good! Tried to make it more consistent.
   3. 00:01:825 (1,2) - Replace these objects into a 1/1 slider. I think it's more fitting with the music. I think I'm going to keep these because I like the sound of it here.
   4. 00:08:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not that pro in hitsounds, but I think that the claps aren't fitting with all these notes. I would add claps on the 2nd and 4th white ticks, and 00:09:590 (3,5) should have a whistle.
      I did something random with pattern. It should add a little spice, since they land on strong beats. Sugar and spice and everything nice!
      
      SPOILER

      
   5. 00:54:590 (4,5) - Little nazi. These slider aren't the same as the ones to 00:53:531 (1,2,3) . Oops
   6. 00:56:707 (2) - You should replace this note by a 1/1 slider so it could fill the empty space. Also, I was confused to when you have to click 00:57:237 (1) when I tested the map. I think this is the cause of the low slider velocity you put to 00:56:002 (1) -, so it can be confusing for the next object. And add a new combo. There's a chorus that starts here. Done
   7. 01:39:589 (1,2) - The distance between them is higher then the constant distance. Move them closer so it could have a same distance. If it's intended, I wouldn't make a jump to these objects, but can make to 01:40:119 (2,3) -, since the vocal on where (3) is land is higher than 01:40:119 . I had to move around the notes a bit to remove this jump but, I think it'll do fine.
   8. 01:45:943 (6) - Move it to x:143 y:296. That way, 01:45:413 (5) would shoot to the head of 01:45:943 (6) -, and not the tail. It is not shooting the tail.
   9. 01:51:589 (8) - Add a new combo. Made a NC
   10. 02:04:472 (3) - Same suggestion as 00:56:707 (2) . I had to do a little more work here but I made it the same
   I have a similar mapping style as you.

Mapping Style buddies

Insane

1. 00:08:001 to 00:09:942 - The rhythm sounds really weird because of the triplet 00:07:825 (6,7,8) . I would make this rhythm. It's more fitting with the music. Changed the rhythm
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:15:942 (4) - It's uncomfortable to play when there's jumps before, but an object makes an anti-jump, and doesn't really fit with the music. So, try moving this slider somewhere further to the previous object, so it could make a jump. For example, you can flip it vertically, and switch the head and tail, and move it on top of the previous object. And I'll move 00:16:296 (5) more closer to 00:15:942 (4) so it's easy to catch it. Hopefully I did alright here, I didn't fully understand your mod, but I did shuffle around the notes a bit so it plays a bit better.
3. 00:56:707 (2) - Add a new combo. Made new combo
4. 01:08:531 (1,2,3) - You should add space between them, so they won't be uncomfortable to play, since it's lower than the distance snap. Tried to make it better to play, but didn't really space these out...
5. 01:35:531 (3) - I wouldn't stack it with the previous object. Try to move it to x:336 y:358. I think it looks nice. Gave it a try.
6. 02:02:178 (1,2,3) - Move them more further to each other, so they'll be with the pattern you made to 02:01:295 (1,2,3,4,5) . Done
7. 02:12:237 (1,2,3,4) - Why did you lower the distance? You made jumps before, so these notes kills those patterns. I would make jumps to them to match the other pattern. Made some jumps!

Well, that's all! I found a lot issues about new combos. You usually keep the pattern constant, which means that two downbeats, there's a new combo. There are some passages that you break the consistency, but it should fit with the music.
Ask me questions if it concerns with the mod, or it could be anything. Good Luck on ranking this map!

DraQeu wrote:

Hi from my mod queue M4M
Everything I write is a suggestion

[General]

• Why not full song? Sorry, didn't feel like mapping the entire song.

[Insane]

• 00:39:060 (9,10) - Stack these on 00:37:472 (2,3,4) - ? Good point.
  00:56:707 (1) - Put it at like x:268 y:176 or something, to keep the spiral? I guess it works
  00:57:237 (3) - I don't get why this is under the slider Yes]a neither do I
  01:05:178 (4) - Nc here? Nah
  01:16:649 (9) - Stack this one on 01:16:119 (7) - ? Yea
  01:34:472 (1) - Put this at x128 y280? Alright
  01:48:766 (5) - Ctrl+J this slider maybe? Nah the direction in which the slider tail points would be down instead of where my next circle occurs
  02:04:472 (2) - Put it at x:308 y:80 or something to keep the curve? Yup
  02:12:942 (1,2,3,4) - Do this part just like the first time? Not copy it but use for the 4 sliders the same shape and NC all of them. NC'd them but didn't keep the same slider shape.
  02:19:648 (2) - I don't really get why this on is on the end of the slider 02:20:531 (5) - And this on on the beginning.02:20:707 (6) - Ctrl+G this one maybe? Ooo this one's a tough call, but i changed to keep it consistent with the other one..

[Hard]

• 00:04:472 Why is this empty? Extend 00:04:119 (3) - until that point I dont like the sound of it.
  00:30:766 (3) - Put it at x:92 y:104 or something to make a curve with the circles? No, it becomes too cluttered then. Not saying it isnt already buttttttt, this make it even harder to read.
  02:12:943 (1,1,1,1) - Why are all of these NC while these aren't 01:05:178 (1,2,3,4) - ? I too ponder the same question

[Normal]

• 00:22:119 (5) - nazi perfect stack (put off grid snap for a sec no one will notice) :P

That's all what I could found, good luck with your beatmap!
Ps: Star for livetune and Miku song Thank you!

nadapan wrote:

From Nacchan's Modding Queue

[Normal]

1. 00:05:178 (4) - Blanket Made this a little bit better
2. 00:05:884 (1) - ^ I'd prefer not too
3. 00:12:766 (3) - ^ fixed up the blanket.
4. 00:25:648 (1) - ^ made this slightly better
5. 00:29:531 (2) - ^ fixed it up
6. 00:48:942 (1) - Delete the spinner. It doesn't sound beautiful in the place you put it in .__. I have mixed feelings about this spinner but i guess i can remove it.
7. 00:55:295 (3) - This is confusing for people who just started playing osu. Delete a reverse arrow and put a circle instead Ehh I'll see how it goes with other people
8. 00:57:413 (2) - Blanket Fixed the blanket a tiny bit.
9. 00:59:531 (5) - X: 184 Y: 192 Moved.
10. 01:00:942 (2) - Blanket Fixed it up a tiny bit.
11. 01:05:178 (1) - ^ ^
12. 01:08:707 (1,3) - ^ ^
13. 01:11:178 (6) - ^ Looks fine to me
14. 01:16:472 (5,1) - ^ ^
15. 01:47:884 (1) - ^ Looks fine to me.
16. 02:07:648 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
17. 02:21:766 (4) - ^ ^
18. 02:25:825 (1) - Confusing for new players. Changed it it up a bit.

[Hard]

1. 00:06:589 (3) - Blanket Fixed
2. 00:10:295 (6,7) - ^ Fixed
3. 00:13:472 (6) - ^ ^
4. 00:16:472 (5) - ^ I think it's fine.
5. 00:41:001 (3) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:48:236 (3) - ^ ^
7. 01:03:766 (6) - ^ ^
8. 01:05:178 (1,2) - ^ ^

That's all the time I had.

Good Luck

HootOwlStar wrote:

Hihi mod from queue
Below are mostly suggestions so you can just simply ignore them if you want and I am sorry if I am rude in mod below
Anyway, MISSION START!!!

Normal

1. I think HP4, AR5, OD4 is better for the diff, especially AR because it is too untidy due to the low AR. You can try for that. Ill give it a try
2. 00:00:237 (1) - You can try making them into circles (?), like this Not 3 circles but a slider and a circle
3. 00:01:825 (3,4) - As a suggestion, extend the slider 00:01:825 (3) until 00:02:354 and add a circle at 00:02:707 but if you do this, you need to remove slider 00:02:354 (4) so it's up to you idk lol I've changed the beginning part significantly
4. 00:01:825 (3,1) - Blanket ^
5. 00:02:354 (4,1,2,3) - Too boxy for this part. Don't just place notes in vertical or horizontal forms in here so try making curve for 00:04:119 (2) ^
6. 00:04:119 (2,3) - Maybe you can follow the bass drum to map here idk ^
7. 00:06:589 (2,3) - Suggestion: remove 00:07:119 (3) and extend 00:06:589 (2) until 00:07:119 nah it just looks bad then
8. 00:09:060 (1,2) - To make this part easier, remove them, add a circle at 00:09:060 and add a slider starting at 00:09:413 and ends at 00:09:942 Im kinda on the fence here because then it misses a beat that id like to keep
9. 00:10:825 (4,1,2,3) - For here, maybe you can try something like this Ive changed this a little bit to accommodate the changes i have made before
10. 00:15:060 (2,3,5) - Some players dislike the pattern like this, as they will think that it's like two sliders (yeah, it seems like two, just the longer one breaks into two lol) that doesn't make a good blanket and it is not the complaint we want to hear. Try to avoid this pattern BTW and maybe try this (idk whether it is OK for you but at least that's a good try) I can dig this
11. 00:17:178 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is really beautiful, well done! Thanks!
12. 00:20:178 - It should be a note here (the bass sound) but it is missing. I think ive found a fix for this
13. 00:22:119 (4) - Some mappers like to use this so maybe you can try this? BTW the sliders 00:21:589 (3,2) appear at different times, not as 00:15:060 (2,3,5), so nah you can keep the these lol ?
14. 00:24:942 (5,1) - Although this pattern is nice too, but suggestion: making 00:24:942 (5) straight and blanket with 00:25:648 (1) idk it's up to you I keep it as it is.
15. 00:28:472 (1,2) - Seems like no one tells you to blanket this, hmmm... Anyway, if you don't want to blanket them, there's another way to make the pattern more beautiful: replace 00:28:825 (2) with two circles at 00:28:825 and 00:29:178 and make them into triangle Fixed and tried out.
16. 00:31:295 (5) - Maybe NC? And no NC for 00:32:001 (1) ? Alright
17. 00:31:295 (5,1,2,3) - The flow is bad here. Fix it. I mightve fixed this on my own but it shouldnt be too bad now...
18. 00:35:531 (2,4) - Erm... similar case as 00:15:060 (2,3,5) so try avoid and fix this fixed, also noticed that i had claps where there shouldnt be claps
19. 00:37:648 (1,2,3,4) - The flow is not smooth enough yet i must smooth it further!
20. 00:40:119 (2,3) - Blanket not perfect. fixed
21. 00:42:589 (1,2) - Why not follow the vocals to map this part? I will keep it the way it is.
22. 00:45:413 (1,2) - You can try something like this BTW Ok
23. 00:50:707 - Add a note here added
24. 00:53:531 (4) - Beginners will mostly miss this note if you overlap with the slider so maybe you can overlap with 00:53:178 (3) which will not affect the distance snap #yay agreed
25. 00:53:884 (1,2,3) - Distance not equivalent. And this pattern is weird for me. You can maybe try this alright lets try
26. 00:56:001 (4,1,2,3,4) - The flow is not smooth enough. And avoid the pattern of 00:57:413 (2,3) will do
27. 01:02:355 (6,1) - Maybe NC for 01:02:355 (6) and no NC for 01:02:707 (1) ? fixed
28. 01:04:119 (4,5,1) - The flow is not smooth enough. I have the way to solve for this, make something like this ive changed this
29. 01:06:236 (3) - Suggest move point x:444 y:104 to x:440 y:96 ^
30. 01:07:648 (3,4,1,2) - NC for 01:08:001 (4) and no NC for 01:08:707 (1) . Besides, I suggest making the notes in the pattern like this (well there is something change with the combos so just observe by yourself lol) ^
31. 01:10:825 (1,2) - Blanket ^
32. 01:14:001 (2,3,4) - Maybe try this pattern and I just edit (4) only ^
33. 01:16:472 (1,2,3) - Map according to vocal. Try extending 01:16:472 (1) until 01:17:001 , move 01:17:178 (2) to 01:17:354 , remove 01:17:531 (3) and place a circle at 01:17:707 Ok

34. Moway wrote:

    Overall, this difficulty feels too difficult.

    Agreed so try to make Normal diffs simple yet beautiful to play

Well I try whatever I can find out and I can describe about BTW
And I just stop here first because I am exhausted now and will continue after AFK for about a week or more
PM me if you don't understand what I am writing (yeah I admit my English is really poor)
Find more modders to mod your map because the song is worth it and you deserve a ranked map by your own
Anyway GL

baraatje123 wrote:

[Normal]
00:05:884 (1,2) - Improve blanket The blanket is fine
00:24:060 (4) - Try to make this slider look neater Tried to?
00:36:942 (4,5,1) - Feels kinda weird, due to movement change Not really a big change since you do it twice before
00:51:060 (1,2) - Improve blanket Improved
00:56:001 (4) - The green points at this slider are useless, as they don't change anything Guess I forgot to take these out a while ago
00:58:119 (3,1,2) - Bad overlap Fixed
01:45:942 (3) - Looks kinda weird, due to the sharp red curves Welp, you're the only person that's commented on this so far. So if someone else agrees with you I will change it.
02:19:295 (3,4) - Looks weird, due to (2)'s end going to the left Made it curcy instead of squiggly

[Hard]
00:18:413 (5,6,7) - Improve blanket Improved
00:24:766 (1,3) - Overlap doesn't look nice Made it a little neater
00:55:296 (2) - NC for start of drum roll Yup, all those sliders before it weren't supposed to be NCs so I went ahead and fixed those as well
00:56:001 (3) - NC for effect/SV change ^ weird though there was not supposed to be an SV change here
01:05:707 (1,1,1) - Why all these NC? These have kind of been here from the very beginning
01:33:413 (4) - A red node feels weird, make it a grey noded-slider I think it plays fine as it is right now
01:47:178 (3,2) - Slight overlap I don't think this is too much of a problem and it's still readable
01:51:589 (1,1) - Bad overlap I don't think it was that bad, but I changed it anyways
02:03:766 (2) - NC for effect Changed
02:13:472 (1,1,1,1) - Why all these NC? Refer back to you know where

[Insane]

00:04:295 (6,7) - Bad overlap That was on purpose but I went ahead a removed it because it did feel off
00:36:943 (1,4) - ^^ Kept the general pattern here except I changed it into a bow pattern
02:23:884 (1) - Why does it has 4 nodes? 3 work fine as well right? I know 3 nodes can work but I'm too lazy to fiddle around with it to get 3 nodes to work

I like the Hard diff :3

Good luck!