1. Abyss' Normal (2.28 stars, 397 notes)
2. Easy (1.53 stars, 195 notes)
3. Hard (2.94 stars, 445 notes)
4. Insane Collab (3.83 stars, 468 notes)

Hard

1. 00:15:662 (2) - Something-like-a-blanket-but-still-not-blanket. Doesn't really fit now. Move it to x:228 y:184, will fit
   
   better
   00:17:707 (3,4) - I offer to move it to x:384 y:84 because it's still hard, but without changing it's FREAKING hard - too much for
   
   just a hard. D: And Please move (4) to x:324 y:208 will be better to click and will look better too. :3
2. 00:50:662 (4) - "CTRL + G"?
3. 00:35:435 (2,3) - Doesn't really flow well :C Maybe delete (3) and next "CTRL + G" (2) and make it reversed?
4. 01:28:389 (2) - "CTRL + G"?
5. 01:46:344 (2) - ^
6. 01:54:753 (1,3) - ^

Collab

1. 00:35:435 (7,8,9) - Doesn't look pleasant. ;_; My offer: Maybe move (7) on x:424 y:80. (8) Would be deleted and instead
   
   of this slider copy 00:36:798 (1) slider and "CTRL + H"? 00:36:116 (9) - slider can be transformed into straight slider which goes
   
   down. http://puu.sh/83pKw.jpg - that's how I imagine it XD
2. 00:41:571 (4) - "CTRL + H" because it doesn't look well.
3. 01:23:616 (4) - Maybe move to x:112 y:184; IMO it will look better : o
4. 02:17:253 (5) - "CTRL + >"?

Krfawy wrote:

I know it doesn't matter if colours are default, but... IMO it's a good thing to change ;___;

I dare to offer my colour suggestion XD

First
Second
Third
Fourth ~ohwait lemme change it my own way

Hard

Since it's hard it'd be appreciated to make OD lower because it's ym... too hard now? And Collab has OD7! xD Maybe reduce it to 5? ~okay

:3

1. 00:15:662 (2) - Something-like-a-blanket-but-still-not-blanket. Doesn't really fit now. Move it to x:228 y:184, will fit
   
   better ~but it isnt so its better how its now
   00:17:707 (3,4) - I offer to move it to x:384 y:84 because it's still hard, but without changing it's FREAKING hard - too much for
   
   just a hard. D: And Please move (4) to x:324 y:208 will be better to click and will look better too. :3 ~but then you mess up the whole spacing ;-;
2. 00:50:662 (4) - "CTRL + G"? ~okay
3. 00:35:435 (2,3) - Doesn't really flow well :C Maybe delete (3) and next "CTRL + G" (2) and make it reversed? ~no that wont work ><
4. 01:28:389 (2) - "CTRL + G"? ~okaay
5. 01:46:344 (2) - ^ ~ no I want to keep this jump ;-;
6. 01:54:753 (1,3) - ^ ~even though i like it better then, the jumps will get even heavier so i cant afford to do that in a hard

Collab

1. 01:23:616 (4) - Maybe move to x:112 y:184; IMO it will look better : o ~tbh looks messy :I

Nice mapset! Waiting for Normal and ranked then. o3o ~im definitly going for a full diffset (ENHIX) so it will take a while xD I wasnt planning on requesting any mods till I finished about 4 of them but its nice to receive a random mod

LVU Bluddy

1. The SB load starts going over 5.00x at 00:27:821 - , currently making the map unrankable. I'm not an expert on storyboards, but if you haven't already you can check out https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/SB_Load on reducing SB load.
2. Toggle epilepsy warning for the white flashing lights.

1. 00:43:162 (6,1) - Shorten (6) so that it ends at 00:43:616 - , then add a note (w/new combo) at 00:44:071 - .
2. 01:09:980 (1,2,3) - Another 1/2 beat thing: try extending (1) by half a beat and delete (2). The (1) slider also matches the vocals nicely.

1. 00:54:753 (1) - NC... maybe? This one is debatable; I like NC since the actual measure starts on the next slider.
2. 00:56:798 (1) - remove NC
3. 01:00:435 (1) - remove NC, 01:02:707 (7) - add NC
4. 01:05:435 (8) - Debatable NC again, for a different reason. NC here would add emphasis to the kickoff before the kiai, which I think is cool. Again, it's up to you.
5. Kiai sections: NCs are not consistent in several places where the music sounds similar: 01:07:480 (5) - does not have NC while 01:58:389 (1) - does. 02:09:298 (1) - has while 01:18:389 (5) - doesn't. And so on. Change it up to the way you want it.
6. 01:34:753 (8) - Covered up by (6)... though other than somehow moving surrounding notes around, I don't really have a clear way to deal with that, if it needs to be dealt at all.
7. 02:41:344 - to 02:47:253 - Put NC on the first beat of each measure. So: add NC on 02:43:162 (4) - and 02:44:980 (4) - and 02:46:798 (4) - , then remove NC on 02:43:616 (1) - and 02:45:434 (1) - .

1. 01:21:116 (2,3,4,5,1) - Could probably position these notes to be a more even circle (my attempt: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1894315 ). I moved (5) up a bit and rotated the slider; right now, (4),(5),(1) are collinear.
2. 02:02:025 (5) - NC

1. 00:35:662 (8,9) - these back-to-back sliders seem to break the flow, especially since they're so close to each other. Try having them "face" each other: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1889150
2. 00:39:525 (8,9,10) - Rotate (10) clockwise by about 15 degrees on selection center. When I made the jump from (8) to (9), I expected to come back to (10) in a straight horizontal line, but (10) slightly curved downwards and didn't feel aligned with the other notes.
3. 01:52:707 (8) - "Ctrl+G" it, since the positioning of 01:52:253 (6,7) - suggests a clockwise direction. The jump to 01:53:162 (1) - should be okay so nothing else should really change.
4. 02:21:116 (1) - Bit of a flow break: rotate this about 10 degrees clockwise
5. 03:12:025 (5) - Also "Ctrl+G" - the jump between notes is to match the vocals

Narwhal Prime wrote:

Hi SkyDevil and blackabyss, here's a mod from my queue!

[General]

1. The SB load starts going over 5.00x at 00:27:821 - , currently making the map unrankable. I'm not an expert on storyboards, but if you haven't already you can check out https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/SB_Load on reducing SB load.
2. Toggle epilepsy warning for the white flashing lights.

thanks gonna tell teru21

[Easy]
First off, since this is the easiest of four diffs, you want to avoid mapping consecutive 1/2 notes. For instance, 00:26:798 (2,3) - feels too quick for beginner players, as well as triplets at 00:40:435 (1,2,3) - and 02:19:525 (2,3,4) - . Adjust the map accordingly to account for those. In the above cases, you can simply move 00:27:025 (3) - half a beat forward and remove 00:40:662 (2) - . Adjust any other 1/2's your own way. ~I mainly did that cause the bpm is really low, I actually currently think my diff is still too easy even though i added so much 1/2's

1. 00:43:162 (6,1) - Shorten (6) so that it ends at 00:43:616 - , then add a note (w/new combo) at 00:44:071 - . ~err i kinda did this cause I want a clap sound every 1/2 (listen closely)
2. 01:09:980 (1,2,3) - Another 1/2 beat thing: try extending (1) by half a beat and delete (2). The (1) slider also matches the vocals nicely. ~it sounds reaalllyy awkward to me,,, ill consider it when more people notice it

[Hard]

1. 01:21:116 (2,3,4,5,1) - Could probably position these notes to be a more even circle (my attempt: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1894315 ). I moved (5) up a bit and rotated the slider; right now, (4),(5),(1) are collinear. ~I cant make this into a proper circle dsfsdhgjfsd it always turns out ugly ;______;
2. 02:02:025 (5) - NC ~okee

[Insane Collab]

1. 01:52:707 (8) - "Ctrl+G" it, since the positioning of 01:52:253 (6,7) - suggests a clockwise direction. The jump to 01:53:162 (1) - should be okay so nothing else should really change. ~nice catch

the rest is on teru's part =3=

Nice song and beatmap! Definitely a map I can enjoy playing. Overall the diffs are already quite polished; let me know if you have any questions. Good luck!

~thanks * A*)/

Regards,
NP

skinnyjimmy wrote:

Hi, my part of the M4M

[Easy]

01:23:162 (3) - I think you could shape this better to blanket the previous slider ~kk

Everything else looks fine to me

[Hard]

Couldn't find 1 bad thing about this GJ ~thanks

[Insane]

01:42:935 I really dont like how these areas aren't mapped 01:44:071 01:44:980 ~was following the music

Well that's it for my mod! very few errors in these maps

GL getting this ranked! ~thank youuuu I will mod your map tommorow/the day after that

paseli wrote:

Mod from modding queue~
Really neat storyboard, mate. One of the better one's I've seen so far. ~guess teru will like hearing that

Generally, i think you are fine with a slider tick rate of 1 already. ~slider tick 2 is best tick

[Easy]
01:29:980 (4,1) - needs better alignment ~errrrrrr I think its fine for now

[Hard]
00:20:207 (1) - put last interpolating point off the slider up one cell ~wha I guess i fixed it?
00:38:957 (2) - position at x:332 y:328 ~meh it looks better now ;_;
00:58:616 - to 01:01:571 - this feels so empty, you should map it ~hmmm,,, I feel like it should stay empty
02:58:162 (2) - improve blanket ~okay

[Collab]
01:18:389 (7) - needs blanket improvement ~tried to improve

Well-formed maps overall, can't complain. Hope you getting this ranked up soon. ~thanks ;_;

Greetings,
paseli

Narwhal Prime wrote:

Hi SkyDevil and blackabyss, here's a mod from my queue! uh hi o//

[Abyss' Normal]
I seem to have exclusively NC edits here lolol i cyannot do NC properly ugh :'/

1. 00:54:753 (1) - NC... maybe? This one is debatable; I like NC since the actual measure starts on the next slider.
2. 00:56:798 (1) - remove NC no, i follow the vocal and since it started on the big white tick
3. 01:00:435 (1) - remove NC, 01:02:707 (7) - add NC added but i didn't remove the nc before sry
4. 01:05:435 (8) - Debatable NC again, for a different reason. NC here would add emphasis to the kickoff before the kiai, which I think is cool. Again, it's up to you.
5. Kiai sections: NCs are not consistent in several places where the music sounds similar: 01:07:480 (5) - does not have NC while 01:58:389 (1) - does. 02:09:298 (1) - has while 01:18:389 (5) - doesn't. And so on. Change it up to the way you want it. i did something thou, np? owo
6. 01:34:753 (8) - Covered up by (6)... though other than somehow moving surrounding notes around, I don't really have a clear way to deal with that, if it needs to be dealt at all.
7. 02:41:344 - to 02:47:253 - Put NC on the first beat of each measure. So: add NC on 02:43:162 (4) - and 02:44:980 (4) - and 02:46:798 (4) - , then remove NC on 02:43:616 (1) - and 02:45:434 (1) - . i did something too

Nice song and beatmap! Definitely a map I can enjoy playing. Overall the diffs are already quite polished; let me know if you have any questions. Good luck! \m/

Regards,
NP

skinnyjimmy wrote:

Hi, my part of the M4M

[Abyss' Normal]

00:16:116 (4) - You should round out that slider a little so i blankets 3 better

Everything else looks fine to me

Well that's it for my mod! very few errors in these maps

GL getting this ranked!

paseli wrote:

Mod from modding queue~
[Normal]
00:15:889 (3,4) - improve blanket of 4 i have do that. check the mod above eue

Well-formed maps overall, can't complain. Hope you getting this ranked up soon.

Greetings,
paseli

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44,148,191798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,136,192025,6,2,L|156:68,1,65
216,116,192480,2,2,P|246:106|278:110,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,192934,2,2,L|316:212,1,65
384,248,193389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,288,193616,2,2,P|460:332|452:356,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,324,194071,6,0,L|236:328,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,296,194753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,194980,2,0,P|112:184|152:128,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,96,195662,6,2,L|280:60,1,65
316,128,196116,2,2,L|396:108,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,196571,2,2,L|448:216,2,65,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,204,197253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,104,197707,6,0,B|152:158|121:121|91:183,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,260,198389,2,2,P|128:280|148:304,1,65
196,356,198844,2,2,L|268:356,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,352,199298,6,2,P|368:332|384:292,1,65
308,280,199753,2,2,P|317:247|305:205,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,176,200207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,137,200435,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,98,200662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,140,200889,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,140,201116,6,0,B|140:194|109:157|79:219,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,296,201798,2,2,L|20:348,2,65,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,264,202480,2,2,P|176:272|208:264,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,216,202934,6,0,B|278:147|319:174|337:112,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,36,203616,2,2,P|396:52|412:76,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,152,204071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,124,204298,2,2,L|480:192,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,292,204980,5,4,0:0:0:0:
224,360,205434,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,300,205662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,244,205889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,124,206344,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,48,206798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,108,207025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,172,207253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,236,207480,2,0,P|328:260|340:300,2,65,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,208162,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,192,208616,5,4,0:0:0:0:
144,52,209071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,100,209298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,52,209525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,100,209753,2,0,P|356:112|372:140,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,176,210207,6,0,L|276:248,1,65
204,216,210662,2,0,L|148:272,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,208,211116,2,0,L|32:224,1,65
36,68,211798,6,0,B|98:39|98:88|161:69,1,130,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Obiwan Shinobi wrote:

Hiiii :3

I just made a mod on the hard one

I think it's a pretty nice beat map, but in my opinion at
00:53:730 - the 4 should be on that place (x: 172, y: 344) and the 5 at this (x: 264, y: 344) for a better flow ~eh, but I tried to align 3 nicely so hmmm
02:01:116 - the 2 should be on (x: 244, y: 344) and the following 3 and 4 are a bit too confusing, I would place the 4 on (x: 296, y: 344) ~ ????



02:21:798 - and also this 4 should be on (x: 360, y: 300) for better game play ~its a jump .w.)/

I know it's not that important, but I would use the epilepsy warning at the beginning, it's all up to you ~I didnt update the map yet when you posted this xD aleady fixed
But in all it's a good beat map I think!

dorillis wrote:

So there are a few things to fix but nothing serious.
General: AiMod saids more than 1/3 of the map is kiai time
There are a ton of spacing warnings too. So try using distance snap

Make sure you check the AiMod and fix any issues it detects. That should be your first step. ~yeah dont trust aimod, its full of bs half of the time, it contains a lot of bugs and for example we're allowed to have 1/3 kiai, but we cant have 1/2 of the time kiai

Hard:
01:52:025 - change slider color. It's blending in with the background. ~I doubt people will be bothered, I can easily see the difference and color blind people should probably use the bg darkener thingy the whole time anyways

Insane:

01:10:207 (2,3,4,5) - a little messy. consider revising ~its supposed to be confusing you .w.)/
01:41:116 (1,2,3,4) - this was super confusing even when I slowed it down. maybe work on some sensible spacing. ~its just a 2.0x spacing to 2.5x spacing
03:12:707 (6,7,8,9) - same here. and there's a problem with the overlap ~its teru's part but i do want to mention that as long as the circle overlaps the whole slider its fine

over all it's good. It's just a matter of making sure the circles are neat.

I hope that helped.

SPOILER

jinhang_ang wrote:

From my queue.

[Easy]
1. 00:21:344 (3,1) - Strange blanket. Try to fix it. ~kaykay
2. 00:26:798 (2,3) - I don't really recommend this in Easy diff. Instead I think you can make a slider with a sharp point, which also brings the beat in. ~ errr ill keep it in for now, but i do see your point, I just liked how it sounded xD
3. 00:40:435 (1,2,3) - General Easy advice - try to stick with 1/1 beats. For this I think you can use a sharp pointed slider or a reversed one. Reduces difficulty. ~its okay since its low bpm
4. Try not to change the SV throughout the Easy diff. But you will have to remap the part if you follow this advice so please think twice and don't blame me that I wasted your precious hours lol. ~that feel when 2 sliders and a circle = precious hours, ill still keep it tho, im 100% sure easy players dont need to think twice
5. 01:22:253 (2,3) - This looks strange? Try to make it like this. ~okay

Sample

6. 02:13:389 (3,4) - I think this will look better. See screenshot. ~prefer it currently ;;

Screenshot

[Hard]
1. 00:37:253 (3,4) - Make them identical. ~its really fine as it is now
2. 02:24:753 (3) and 01:19:525 (4) - I think they should be two short sliders instead of a slider that reverse for 2 times. It will make them more interesting, as players don't have the choice to 'hold' their way through. ~uhhhh ill consider

No offense for the other two diffs done.

Moo-Chan wrote:

From my modding queue~

[Insane Collab]

1. 00:23:844 (1) - could blanket 00:23:616 (6) - better ~I tried to end it on (2) - so its hard to make it look nicer
2. 01:13:162 (1) - This doesn't look very good ~YOU JUST DON'T KNOW WHAT PURE ART IS ./hairflip in your face
3. 01:14:753 (1) - neither does this ~ ^
4. 01:16:571 (1) - or this ~ ^
5. 01:18:389 (7) - could blanket 01:17:934 (5) - better ~ ./tries my best to make it look nice
6. 01:44:298 (1,2,3) - not mapping the white ticks makes this awkward to play ~im following the music
7. 01:48:616 (3) - could blanket 01:48:389 (2) - better ~yeah I really do not understand what you exactly mean with making the blanket better, if i put it closer the spacing would be wrong and if i need a faster sv in order to put it around it =A=)/
8. 01:53:162 (1,2) - This overlap is meh ~ fineeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
   

Good Luck~

1. The kiai end on 02:11:116 - and 03:10:207 -, I would personally put these on a 1/4 or a 1/8. It helps keep the flow of the kiai without the flash/stars stopping
2. Try this background image instead (I reverse image searched, btw). You may need to change some scaling if acceptable:
   
   
   ~
3. What is the "Guest" for in the storyboard? I do not see any text associated with it in any difficulties.
4. Will there be storyboard names on the Insane difficulty to determine who mapped each part?
5. Totally up to you, but you may want to disable the "letterbox during breaks" to showcase the storyboard a bit more.

1. The easy is somewhat difficult and osu! actually reads this difficulty as a Normal. Changing 1/2 triplets to simple sliders, etc., should solve this problem, however, it's up to you to apply the changes.
2. 01:49:525 (1,2) - What are these following? I think it would be better to try a more simpler slider(s).

1. The mapset is ok, but I feel like it is more so a low-SV hard difficulty. If possible, please try to add more 1/1 waits.
2. 02:55:434 (1) - Note that the other difficulties do not map this part. Because it's your GD, it's completely up to you to remove this circle or keep it.

1. Overall this difficulty fits the mapset rather nice with the balance of 1/4s and mini jumps. I found no major problems.

1. The slider velocity for the kiai time during this difficulty feels somewhat too high. Please try decreasing it.
2. Some parts to not have consistent new combo, despite the same pattern being used (e.g: 03:14:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) -). Is this intended? If not, please fix those patterns.

Project Railgun wrote:

Hello from Railgun's Quality Appreciation Queue,

[General]

1. The kiai end on 02:11:116 - and 03:10:207 -, I would personally put these on a 1/4 or a 1/8. It helps keep the flow of the kiai without the flash/stars stopping ~hmm,,, I personally dont see much difference when its disabled for such a short time so ithink its fine as it is
2. Try this background image instead (I reverse image searched, btw). You may need to change some scaling if acceptable:
   
   ~yeah uh teru stopped playing on osu > stopped storyboarding so im gonna switch the bg to the original video soon..
   ~
3. What is the "Guest" for in the storyboard? I do not see any text associated with it in any difficulties. ~hmm I should prob do that
4. Will there be storyboard names on the Insane difficulty to determine who mapped each part? ~ ^
5. Totally up to you, but you may want to disable the "letterbox during breaks" to showcase the storyboard a bit more. ~teru stopped ;;

Rather short mods, but I couldn't really find anything too striking in my eyes. Take these suggestions as a general rule, and use them throughout as a whole.

[Easy]

1. The easy is somewhat difficult and osu! actually reads this difficulty as a Normal. Changing 1/2 triplets to simple sliders, etc., should solve this problem, however, it's up to you to apply the changes. ~thats mainly cause of those 1/2's indeed, but its low bpm so i thought it would be fine
2. 01:49:525 (1,2) - What are these following? I think it would be better to try a more simpler slider(s). ~they are following wotamin's autotune XDD

[Hard]

1. Overall this difficulty fits the mapset rather nice with the balance of 1/4s and mini jumps. I found no major problems. ~thank you *A*)/

[Insane]

1. The slider velocity for the kiai time during this difficulty feels somewhat too high. Please try decreasing it. ~ive seen people playing this with DT on on their first time and only making like 2 mistakes lmao
2. Some parts to not have consistent new combo, despite the same pattern being used (e.g: 03:14:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) -). Is this intended? If not, please fix those patterns. ~fixed

Good luck.

Mei wrote:

this song is in GigaP's alblum ぎがばなな ざ べすと~NORISHIO味~ as well. Maybe add it to tags
one of my fav song yey. star~

OblivioN wrote:

From Lazy modding team(¦3[____]
gigap wotamin >///<❤❤❤
okay，let‘s mod

Easy

1. 00:07:707 (1) - normal is a bit weak, um……try normal finish here. ~increased volume instead
2. 00:29:525 the begining of vocal，and a strong beat，I highly recommend that hitnormal ~doesnt soundthat well imo
3. 00:36:798 (1) - drum finish ~dont feel any difference so i dont see the use
4. 00:40:435 (1,2,3) - hard for newbie……and00:40:662 is weak，try ~decided to just leave (2) out and change their spacing
5. 00:41:344 (6,7) - I think ctrl g them feels more better lol： ~I just focussed on the part where she said keitai
6. 01:10:889 (2,3,4) - wow,I think it hard for easy diff~kaykay
7. 01:27:707 normal hit ~made it a normal-hitifinish
8. 01:43:162 (2,3,4) - the rhythm is so odd……try this:

~following the music

Hard

1. 00:48:616 (3,3) - stack? ~doesnt really matter imo
2. 00:59:071 (2) - move to 00:59:071 and add note at 00:59:753 - 01:00:662 ~mehh I prefer how it is now
3. 01:05:435 add note here will feels so cool ~hmmm maybe =3=
4. 02:40:889 ^ ~ ^ (now we have a smiley o3o)
5. 02:50:889 add a note ，I'm not sure if hard allowed 02:50:434 (1,2,3,4) - ~errrrrrrr I havent seen anyone else tell me aboutt this so... ill consider if it will be mentioned too much
6. 02:53:844 (4) - make a slider，cause of a beat here02:54:071 : ~added a circle instead
7. 02:55:434 add note ~eh

Insane Collab

1. 00:07:707 (1) - normal and end at 00:13:162 ~no it ends early
2. 00:28:162 (2,3,4,5,6) - the shape would be pretty,I'd suggest you like this
   http://puu.sh/bBjgZ/7a6f6b05f8.png
   00:30:889 (4) - stack with 00:28:957 (6) - : ~.... can you explain to me once more what you did? I didnt really understand it honestly lol...
   http://puu.sh/bBjiE/36d63d5eda.png
   here the code and fixed it feel free :

   392,208,28162,2,0,P|352:176|312:180,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   312,304,28616,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   292,316,28730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   272,328,28844,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   252,340,28957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   176,332,29071,1,10,0:0:0:0:
   152,336,29185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   131,341,29299,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   108,345,29412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   28,320,29525,6,0,P|20:220|96:172,1,180,6|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   212,176,30207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   144,216,30435,2,0,P|132:164|156:120,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   212,256,30889,1,8,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:33:162 (1,2,3) - a little close，make them like this: ~it looks so weird like that D:
   http://puu.sh/bBjAE/039ede7c29.png
4. 00:45:662 (4) - seems not very beautiful ，try this: ~oh i like this
   
   SPOILER

   
   the start of 00:45:662 (4) - stack with the tail of 00:46:798 (6) - ，and 00:45:207 (3) - blanket the tail of 00:45:662 (4) -
5. 01:05:435 add note which stack with start of 01:05:889 (1) - would feels so cool~ ~eh
6. 01:31:344 the empty feels odd……add a hitnormal circle ~done
7. 01:55:889 (3,4) - try make some jump it's a insane diff right？~symmetry pls
8. 02:04:753 (1,4) - fix the stack plz ~trust me you wont see any difference while playing

General

• That's all what I‘m able to point out【taken my star】and in insane collab，i think the placement should be improve better imo ~i know :< it was the diff i (and teru) first made of this map

Project Railgun wrote:

Hello from Railgun's Quality Appreciation Queue,

[Abyss]

1. The mapset is ok, but I feel like it is more so a low-SV hard difficulty. If possible, please try to add more 1/1 waits.
2. 02:55:434 (1) - Note that the other difficulties do not map this part. Because it's your GD, it's completely up to you to remove this circle or keep it.

Good luck.

Tarrasky wrote:

Easy

nothing in special, nice map

~thanks c:

Hard

In this moment 00:27:707 - have no sound, but in the moment before, have a tick in slider, like 00:23:844 (1) - 00:20:207 (1) -, you can mod something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2292214 ~oh I changed it in my own way
00:39:980 (5) - put this slider more in this position, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2292224, the players may be confused and miss in 00:40:662 (1) - ~uhhhh dont see much difference actually xD
00:47:253 (6) - y=80 sounds good ~uhh also changed it in my own way owo
01:34:980 (1) - uncessecary circle, just remove ~just kept it there to keep the flow
01:37:480 (4,5,1) - the distance snap in this slides is a little high for the moment ~it's just a 1.50x jump xD
in 02:54:071 - until 02:55:889 - and 01:04:071 - until 01:05:889 - have the same distance, in one have breaktime in the other dont have, OR you delete the first breaktime or add in the 2 moment ~hhh didnt notice that wwww //fixes
the 2 other last kiais is really more hard than the first x.x ~yep I know, I did that on purpose to slowly increase in difficulty
nice map, i like, beatiful flow and cool ~thank you ><

Collab Insane

looking not think have problems, so hard for me D; ~you'll be able to play that soon ok

Good luck in get this ranked ;D

1. Map with grid snap off. Change to slider tick 1, maybe OD2 or 3.
2. 00:16:344 (2) - Move to x:276 y:74 for a better blanket with (1).
3. 00:18:616 (1,2) - Blanket. Easy way out: move the center white point to x:339 y:206.
4. 00:21:344 (3,1) - Blanket. Easy way out: move the end white point to x:370 y:150.
5. 00:23:616 (2,3) - Rotate (2) -5 degrees around selection center.
6. 00:36:798 (1,2) - Move (2) to x:385 y:160.
7. 00:51:798 (2) - The red point should line up with the slider tick.
8. 00:53:616 (4) - Move center red point to x:158 y:166.
9. 01:00:889 (2) - Move center red point to x:350 y:137.
10. 01:10:889 (2) - Move to x:231 y:246.
11. 01:11:798 (3) - If ^ is followed, move to x:223 y:85.
12. 01:29:526 (3) - Move to x:320 y:166.
13. 01:29:980 (4) - If ^ is followed, move to x:383 y:188.
14. 01:35:435 (2) - Move to x:126 y:224.
15. 02:04:071 (1) - Move to x:403 y:308.
16. 02:04:980 (2) - Ctrl H ^
17. 03:16:798 (5,1) - Blanket better.
18. 03:17:707 (1,2) - Make the end of slider (1) parallel with slider (2).
19. 03:25:662 (2) - Confusing rhythm for an "Easy", maybe make a half beat slider starting on 03:25:889 - where the vocal is instead of the drums.
20. 03:29:298 (2) - ^

1. OD4, AR5
2. May want to look over some stacks, they can be confusing for a "Normal".
3. 00:15:889 (3,4) - Probably intentional, but (4) would look nicer if it was less curved and created a perfect blanket with (3).
4. 00:25:889 (1) - Make the left and right side of this slider symmetrical.
5. 00:31:798 (5,6) - (6) would look nicer if it had a smaller curve and blanketed nicely with (5).
6. 00:35:889 (7,8,9) - Slider on (8), circle on (9).
7. 00:50:435 (6,7,8) - Slider on (6) and (7), circle on (8).
8. 01:09:525 (1,4) - Ctrl HJ (1) to make (4), (4) isn't the same as (1).
9. 01:11:571 (1) - Make the top and bottom have the same length of curve.
10. 01:16:571 (1) - Make the left and right side symmetrical.
11. 01:39:525 (2,3) - Move (3) to x:165 y:196.

1. OD6 HP6
2. Work on double blankets around centers.
3. 00:07:707 (1) - Spinner on Hard ends at 00:12:935 - but the spinner on Easy ends on 00:13:162 - . Choose one.
4. 00:18:389 (5,1) - Blanket better.
5. 00:20:207 (1,2) - Move (2) to x:125 y:136.
6. 00:22:253 (1) - Make the first bend less extreme.
7. 00:23:616 (5,1) - Blanket better.
8. 00:27:707 - Weird pause, might catch a player off guard.
9. 00:29:525 (1,2,3) - Blanket this better.
10. 00:34:753 (1,2) - Blanket better.
11. 00:35:889 (3) - Ctrl G.
12. 00:41:344 (4,5) - Blanket, move (5) to x:186 y:376.
13. 00:42:025 (1,2,3) - Blanket (2) within (1) and (3).
14. 00:45:207 (3,1) - Blanket (1) with the tail of slider (3).
15. 00:49:980 (2) - Move to x:162 y:319.
16. 00:59:071 - Why no note here?
17. 01:00:662 - ^
18. 01:07:025 (4,1) - Blanket fix, move (4) to x:286 y:258.
19. 01:14:753 (6,7) - Blanket fix, move (7) to x:243 y:23.
20. 01:16:344 (3,1) - Blanket or continue momentum.
21. 01:20:435 (1,2) - Rotate (1) -4 degrees around selection center.
22. 01:27:139 (4) - New combo for the change in rhythm.
23. 01:28:843 (3,1) - Blanket fix.
24. 01:38:389 (1) - This slider sounds weird, maybe end it 01:38:616 - here and add a circle on 01:38:844 - .
25. 01:50:889 (5) - Simplify this slider. Use double bends on longer 1/1 sliders.
26. 01:56:798 (1) - Rotate 1 degree around selection center.
27. 02:19:753 (5,1) - On the head of slider (1), use two points before the red for a smoother curve and apply a better blanket with the tail of (5).
28. 02:52:253 (1,2) - (2) isn't parallel with (1). Consider scaling (1) up 2.00x to make slider (2).
29. 03:20:889 (3,1) - This isn't close to a blanket, probably intentional placement. If not, fix this blanket.

1. 00:07:707 (1) - Easy's slider ends on 00:13:162 - while Hard and Insane end on 00:12:935 - . Choose one.
2. 00:29:071 (7) - NC.
3. 00:35:662 (8,9) - Awkward use of Ctrl H here. Consider changing.
4. 01:05:889 (1) - Amazing slider velocity change, way to make kiai time stand out!
5. 01:17:934 (5,7) - Maybe move (7) to x:314 y:315 to blanket with (5).
6. 01:22:025 (1,2) - Move (2) to x:344 y:164.
7. 01:25:662 (1,2,3) - Fix double blanket. Use the approach circle as a means of determining distance from the center.
8. 01:27:139 (1,2) - Unstack and new combo.
9. 01:40:207 (4,5) - Move (5) to x:441 y:245 for a better blanket. You don't need to follow 1.00x -> 2.00x distance snap in an insane as you would need to have it set-in-stone on easier difficulties.
10. 01:44:980 - Why no note here? Follow the melody (singing) rather than the drums/instrumental in the background.
11. 01:45:662 - ^
12. 01:48:389 (2,3) - Move (2) to x:325 y:198.
13. 01:51:685 (4,5) - If you're going to stack (4) on the head of (5), change the momentum of the slider into an "n" shape rather than a "u" shape.
14. 02:11:230 - Needs a note here, most players will play this as a stream of 4 circles leading into 1 slider. If there is no note, move (1) higher.
15. 02:16:116 (3,4) - Move (3) to x:310 y:372.
16. 02:18:616 (1) - Move to x:44 y:352.
17. 02:24:753 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Unless a player single taps this, this is really difficult to hit with alternation. Consider not having /too/ large a ds between jumpstreams.
18. 03:08:389 (1,2) - Make (2) parallel with (1)'s tail.
19. 03:09:525 (3) - If so ^, then make (3) an HJ of (2).
20. 03:11:116 (2,3) - Move (2) to x:215 y:51.
21. 03:12:707 (2) - May want to move this so it isn't confused as the tail of slider (3), if moved I suggest x:297 y:230.
22. 03:15:662 (1) - The red points at the end of the slider aren't necessary.
23. 03:23:843 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Difficult to hit with the jump.
24. 03:24:525 (9) - New combo, prepares players for the immediate slow down of the next slider if "Ignore all beatmap skins" is ticked on.
25. 03:30:434 (5,6) - Hard to see a slow slider stack like this, consider moving (5) elsewhere.
26. 03:31:798 (1) - Move this elsewhere for a climactic finish.

Axarious wrote:

[General]
From Astral Horizon

[Easy]

1. Map with grid snap off. Change to slider tick 1, maybe OD2 or 3. ~I prefer not to use no grid snap, slider tick 2 is fine and OD seems ok too since AR is higher
2. 00:16:344 (2) - Move to x:276 y:74 for a better blanket with (1). ~^
3. 00:18:616 (1,2) - Blanket. Easy way out: move the center white point to x:339 y:206. ~which one of the two?, tried to change anyways
4. 00:21:344 (3,1) - Blanket. Easy way out: move the end white point to x:370 y:150. ~^
5. 00:23:616 (2,3) - Rotate (2) -5 degrees around selection center. ~why? barely any different
6. 00:36:798 (1,2) - Move (2) to x:385 y:160. ~it'll crush the spacing
7. 00:51:798 (2) - The red point should line up with the slider tick. ~wat
8. 00:53:616 (4) - Move center red point to x:158 y:166. ~...
9. 01:00:889 (2) - Move center red point to x:350 y:137. ~changed it a little bit i guess?
10. 01:10:889 (2) - Move to x:231 y:246. ~it'll crush the spacing again
11. 01:11:798 (3) - If ^ is followed, move to x:223 y:85.
12. 01:29:526 (3) - Move to x:320 y:166. ~I don't see the use
13. 01:29:980 (4) - If ^ is followed, move to x:383 y:188.
14. 01:35:435 (2) - Move to x:126 y:224. ~moved the white point instead
15. 02:04:071 (1) - Move to x:403 y:308. ~dont see the use again
16. 02:04:980 (2) - Ctrl H ^
17. 03:16:798 (5,1) - Blanket better. ~fix
18. 03:17:707 (1,2) - Make the end of slider (1) parallel with slider (2). ~^
19. 03:25:662 (2) - Confusing rhythm for an "Easy", maybe make a half beat slider starting on 03:25:889 - where the vocal is instead of the drums. ~eerrrr ill keep it for now, will consider later
20. 03:29:298 (2) - ^ ~^

so nazi ;_;

[Hard]

1. OD6 HP6 ~hard is pretty difficult so I needed tht lower hp/od
2. Work on double blankets around centers. ~eh
3. 00:07:707 (1) - Spinner on Hard ends at 00:12:935 - but the spinner on Easy ends on 00:13:162 - . Choose one. ~fixed
4. 00:18:389 (5,1) - Blanket better. ~it's fine as it is
5. 00:20:207 (1,2) - Move (2) to x:125 y:136. ~tried to fix in my own way
6. 00:22:253 (1) - Make the first bend less extreme. ~tried again
7. 00:23:616 (5,1) - Blanket better. ~its fine as it is x2
8. 00:27:707 - Weird pause, might catch a player off guard. ~?? did you accidently remove a slider or something while modding lol
9. 00:29:525 (1,2,3) - Blanket this better. ~its fine as it is x3
10. 00:34:753 (1,2) - Blanket better. ~guess this kind does look bad, fixed
11. 00:35:889 (3) - Ctrl G. ~its a jump
12. 00:41:344 (4,5) - Blanket, move (5) to x:186 y:376. ~its fine as it is x4
13. 00:42:025 (1,2,3) - Blanket (2) within (1) and (3). ~fixed .w.
14. 00:45:207 (3,1) - Blanket (1) with the tail of slider (3). ~fixed
15. 00:49:980 (2) - Move to x:162 y:319. ~its fine as iti is x5
16. 00:59:071 - Why no note here? ~did it on purpose like thsi
17. 01:00:662 - ^ ~ ^
18. 01:07:025 (4,1) - Blanket fix, move (4) to x:286 y:258. ~its fine as it is x6
19. 01:14:753 (6,7) - Blanket fix, move (7) to x:243 y:23. ~fix
20. 01:16:344 (3,1) - Blanket or continue momentum. ~ehh did it on ppurpose like this
21. 01:20:435 (1,2) - Rotate (1) -4 degrees around selection center. ~lol..
22. 01:27:139 (4) - New combo for the change in rhythm. ~hmmmmm okay
23. 01:28:843 (3,1) - Blanket fix. ~its fine as it is x7
24. 01:38:389 (1) - This slider sounds weird, maybe end it 01:38:616 - here and add a circle on 01:38:844 - . ~i dont see how it doesnt fit, it follows the vocals
25. 01:50:889 (5) - Simplify this slider. Use double bends on longer 1/1 sliders. ~ehhh consider it for later
26. 01:56:798 (1) - Rotate 1 degree around selection center. ~..............................
27. 02:19:753 (5,1) - On the head of slider (1), use two points before the red for a smoother curve and apply a better blanket with the tail of (5). ~1 point is fine, i changed it anyways
28. 02:52:253 (1,2) - (2) isn't parallel with (1). Consider scaling (1) up 2.00x to make slider (2). ~tried to fix
29. 03:20:889 (3,1) - This isn't close to a blanket, probably intentional placement. If not, fix this blanket. ~oh lol that was just lazy of me, fixed

[Insane Collab]

1. 00:07:707 (1) - Easy's slider ends on 00:13:162 - while Hard and Insane end on 00:12:935 - . Choose one. ~spinner* and okay owo
2. 00:29:071 (7) - NC. ~dont see the use
3. 00:35:662 (8,9) - Awkward use of Ctrl H here. Consider changing. ~hmmmmmm,, not so sure,, but ill consider maybe
4. 01:05:889 (1) - Amazing slider velocity change, way to make kiai time stand out! ~thanks *A*)/
5. 01:17:934 (5,7) - Maybe move (7) to x:314 y:315 to blanket with (5). ~errr tried to change something i guess
6. 01:22:025 (1,2) - Move (2) to x:344 y:164. ~^
7. 01:25:662 (1,2,3) - Fix double blanket. Use the approach circle as a means of determining distance from the center. ~forgot that that method existed lol
8. 01:27:139 (1,2) - Unstack and new combo. ~already has a new combo hue and I think I prefer it as it is imo
9. 01:40:207 (4,5) - Move (5) to x:441 y:245 for a better blanket. You don't need to follow 1.00x -> 2.00x distance snap in an insane as you would need to have it set-in-stone on easier difficulties. ~tried to fix and i know ;_; but im still used to doing that
10. 01:44:980 - Why no note here? Follow the melody (singing) rather than the drums/instrumental in the background. ~I have no idea acutally, thought it was interesting t ofollow something else
11. 01:45:662 - ^ ~^
12. 01:48:389 (2,3) - Move (2) to x:325 y:198. ~its fine as it is imo
13. 01:51:685 (4,5) - If you're going to stack (4) on the head of (5), change the momentum of the slider into an "n" shape rather than a "u" shape. ~I have no idea what youre talking about but (5) flows in with (6)
14. 02:11:230 - Needs a note here, most players will play this as a stream of 4 circles leading into 1 slider. If there is no note, move (1) higher. ~told teru to fix this ;-; but at least now i did
15. 02:16:116 (3,4) - Move (3) to x:310 y:372. ~fixed
16. 02:18:616 (1) - Move to x:44 y:352. ~^
17. 02:24:753 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Unless a player single taps this, this is really difficult to hit with alternation. Consider not having /too/ large a ds between jumpstreams. ~yeaahh i kinda agree llol,, fixed
18. 03:08:389 (1,2) - Make (2) parallel with (1)'s tail. ~ok
19. 03:09:525 (3) - If so ^, then make (3) an HJ of (2). ~^
20. 03:11:116 (2,3) - Move (2) to x:215 y:51. ~tried to fix
21. 03:12:707 (2) - May want to move this so it isn't confused as the tail of slider (3), if moved I suggest x:297 y:230. ~^
22. 03:15:662 (1) - The red points at the end of the slider aren't necessary. ~but it looks so cool ;A;)/
23. 03:23:843 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Difficult to hit with the jump. ~much easier than the other jump imo, its fine
24. 03:24:525 (9) - New combo, prepares players for the immediate slow down of the next slider if "Ignore all beatmap skins" is ticked on. ~eh most players wlll hold that anyways so its okay imo
25. 03:30:434 (5,6) - Hard to see a slow slider stack like this, consider moving (5) elsewhere. ~err consider changing
26. 03:31:798 (1) - Move this elsewhere for a climactic finish. ~nonoo its really sexy there

Tarrasky wrote:

Abyss' Normal

Sequencial of circles like 02:14:298 (4,5,6) - and 02:22:480 (2,3,4,5) - sounds really cool in kiai moment (patterns a bit more hard), but in moments like this 00:15:662 (2,3,4) - i think better you utilize more flow, for example you make in this form http://puu.sh/dablt/5b72a33003.png, the flow not is so "fine" to play, i recommend you make like this http://puu.sh/dabsD/5438b24da9.png, sounds pretty better to play ^^
in 00:25:207 (8) - i recommend you put in this form http://puu.sh/dabsD/5438b24da9.png hm i think no. i prefer this one beside, it'll ovelap if the circle aren't arranged nicely. sry
00:46:116 (5) - this can be a bit confuse for a novices, maybe this form sounds cool http://puu.sh/dabDq/8ebe334b65.png, when he look simmilar slides, he think is playable like this 01:54:753 (1,2) - ah sry no, cause there's reverse arrow.
01:08:616 (4) - in this form have better flow http://puu.sh/dabMf/22749c0c6d.png
I like the map, this instability rhythms gets quite dynamic, very fun and playable thanks for your mod!

Good luck in get this ranked ;D

Axarious wrote:

[General]
[Abyss' Normal]

1. OD4, AR5 i'll keep the AR sry cause, 5 too fast fir newbie i think
2. May want to look over some stacks, they can be confusing for a "Normal". i try to reduce it orz
3. 00:15:889 (3,4) - Probably intentional, but (4) would look nicer if it was less curved and created a perfect blanket with (3). i try to figure something here.
4. 00:25:889 (1) - Make the left and right side of this slider symmetrical.
5. 00:31:798 (5,6) - (6) would look nicer if it had a smaller curve and blanketed nicely with (5).
6. 00:35:889 (7,8,9) - Slider on (8), circle on (9).
7. 00:50:435 (6,7,8) - Slider on (6) and (7), circle on (8).
8. 01:09:525 (1,4) - Ctrl HJ (1) to make (4), (4) isn't the same as (1).
9. 01:11:571 (1) - Make the top and bottom have the same length of curve.
10. 01:16:571 (1) - Make the left and right side symmetrical.
11. 01:39:525 (2,3) - Move (3) to x:165 y:196.

thanks for your mod!

i'm not replying it means, i done it without hesitation

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Kaguya Hourain wrote:

Hello o/

General

1. Make letterbox in breaks consistent in all difficulties (currently conflicts with Abyss' Normal) ~okay fixed
2. Get someone to check the video offset I feel it might be a little late. ~i think its currently fine (look at the snap at 01:05:435 -)

Easy

1. OD to 3 to match the AR ~not really I lowered od cause ar is higher
2. I would definitely avoid SV changes in easier difficulties. You should remove those x0,75 and turn them into x1.00 like everything else. ~fineee .w.
3. 01:16:798 (1) - x:372 y:284 should play better because it follows the cursorpath after the previous slider. Don't forget to resnap! ~then I have to change a lot and im sure i would end up returning the same pattern
4. 01:43:162 (2,3) - These ones are not perfectly parallel, move 3's endpoint down a little bit. ~okay
5. 01:49:525 (1,2) - Nice I like those :3 ~yaay
6. 02:19:525 (2,3,4) - I wouldn't do that on the Easy actually. Try the reverse you do on the rest of the diff XD ~hmm maybe owo,, idk its just 130 bpm so i thought it would be possible
7. Wow decent Easy me likey! ~thanks *A*)/

Hard

1. Don't be afraid of OD, raise it to 7 :3 ~its already 7 wat
2. 00:16:571 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is an issue occuring throughout the intro. The red tick clearly has more impact in the music than the the first two white ticks there. Sliders play pretty poorly when you go from a weak beat to a strong beat on the slider's end. This is why I suggest redoing the pattern like so:
   
   box=kawaii~

   
   ~thats honestly the only part that did that owo.. still fixed i guess
3. 00:20:889 (2,3,4,5) - See here you've done by yourself what I just now suggested. Doesn't this feel/play better than the previous one? ~i honestly randomly picked sliders/circles for the intro LOL
4. 00:24:525 (2,3,4,5,6) - Here the slider should go on the red tick instead of where it is right now. ~I think this should be fine actually owo
5. 00:37:707 (4,5) - For the same reason I believe you should swap the order of these two objects in the timeline. ~ehhh hmm not sure
6. 00:38:389 (1,2,3,4,5) - For the same reasons, I believe you should rearrange/remake this pattern like this:
   
   so kawaii o:

   
   ~this honestly plays bad now .w. I dontsee how the red ticks are actually stronger now
7. 01:28:389 (2) - Maybe turn this into two circles? Not feeling the slider there right. ~I dont think it will improve then

Insane Collab

1. OD to 8 please /o/ ~okay
2. 00:17:480 (3,4) - A slider would be very nice here! ~used circles here actually just to increase the difficulty
3. 00:17:935 (5,6) - Not feeling the sliders here though, maybe make a cute small circlejump :3 ~LOL
4. 00:20:889 (2,3) - Swap slider with circle for reasons I mentioned in Hard. ~actually i did this for the other instrumental in the background owo
5. 00:24:525 (2,3) - Same! ~eh again with the difficulty thing, I dont know how I can change this without screwing this up or making something new out of it
6. 00:28:162 (2) - Two circles would play better I think. ~imo would feel really awkward to play circles before a stream
7. 00:48:616 (3,4) - Exchange positions here as well! ~I dont really agree with all those verse switches tho @A@
8. 00:49:298 (5,6,7,8) - This here would definitely play better:
   
   so kawaii stop being so cute already!

   
   ~ ^ sorry ;A;
9. 01:13:162 (1,2,3,4) - Try this here: ~I think I prefer bashing the slider circle thing than the playability, this plays super awkward
   
   kawaii level over 9000

   
10. 01:15:435 (2,3) - These would be very nice as circlejumps imo ~sure i guess
11. 01:20:094 (3,4) - I think you should skip the first blue tick and go slider > circle next. ~no it fits the song
12. 01:28:389 (2) - Two circles would feel better here. ~ehhh
13. 01:43:162 (2,3) - According to the music it would be better to go like this:
    
    almost death to kawaii

    
    Plus you fill a beat there! ~lul was just randomly following the music, ill consider
14. 01:44:980 - Add a circle there yo ~illll conssiideer ;_;
15. 01:45:662 - Here too yo~ ~aaa
16. 02:24:753 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The spaced jump should be at 4 not 5, fits the music better. ~hmm fixed the stream
17. 02:55:434 - Why do you have a kiai fountain there if it's not gonna be played anyway? Add a circle there. ~hue forgot ot remove it
18. 02:58:162 (2,3) - This would be better off like so:
    
    oh my god so close to dying

    
    Just circles would also play nice! ~slider is love slider is life (fixed)
19. 03:01:798 (2) - Would make these two circles! ~errrrrrrrrr
20. 03:05:434 (1,2) - Same as last screenshot actually! ~idk why but im feeling it so much less here owo
21. 03:12:934 (3,4) - Same again lel ~eh (im sure youre talking about the 2nd slider but it fits designwise so much better)
22. 03:23:843 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The space should come at 4 again, not 5. ~okay
23. This diff could use a lot of work still. ~eh

Cool song guys, good luck~

Kaguya Hourain wrote:

Hello o/ hiii

General

1. Make letterbox in breaks consistent in all difficulties (currently conflicts with Abyss' Normal) lol wut, okay fixed xD
2. Get someone to check the video offset I feel it might be a little late.

Abyss' Normal

1. AR and OD to 5 i'll increase the AR, but i won't do it for OD. since this is normal maps thou. sry
2. 01:25:662 - I think you should start a 1/2 slider here because you're missing quite the strong vocal actually. okay owod
3. This is really nice bravo! lol, thanks btw!

Cool song guys, good luck~

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44,148,191798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,136,192025,6,2,L|156:68,1,65
216,116,192480,2,2,P|246:106|278:110,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,192934,2,2,L|316:212,1,65
384,248,193389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,288,193616,2,2,P|460:332|452:356,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,324,194071,6,0,L|236:328,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,296,194753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,194980,2,0,P|112:184|152:128,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,96,195662,6,2,L|280:60,1,65
316,128,196116,2,2,L|396:108,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,196571,2,2,L|448:216,2,65,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,204,197253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,104,197707,6,0,B|152:158|121:121|91:183,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,260,198389,2,2,P|128:280|148:304,1,65
196,356,198844,2,2,L|268:356,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,352,199298,6,2,P|368:332|384:292,1,65
308,280,199753,2,2,P|317:247|305:205,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,176,200207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,137,200435,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,98,200662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,140,200889,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,140,201116,6,0,B|140:194|109:157|79:219,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,296,201798,2,2,L|20:348,2,65,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,264,202480,2,2,P|176:272|208:264,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,216,202934,6,0,B|278:147|319:174|337:112,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,36,203616,2,2,P|396:52|412:76,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,152,204071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,124,204298,2,2,L|480:192,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,292,204980,5,4,0:0:0:0:
224,360,205434,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,300,205662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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120,124,206344,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,48,206798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,108,207025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,172,207253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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224,240,208162,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,192,208616,5,4,0:0:0:0:
144,52,209071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,100,209298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,52,209525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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204,216,210662,2,0,L|148:272,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,208,211116,2,0,L|32:224,1,65
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1. Romanised title: Higaimousou Keitai Joshi (Wara)
2. Although I'm not sure, I think "Kagamine Len" is unnecessary for tags
3. tags suggestion:
   vocaloid
   gumi
   megupoid
4. if you don't intend to add SB additionally, "Display epilepsy warning" is unnecesssary, imo

1. 00:26:798 (2,3) - avoid stack. that's confusing for beginner, imo
2. 02:19:525 (2,3,4) - 1/2 triplet is a little difficult for easy. I recommend to change to reverse slider
3. 02:44:980 (1,2) - 1/1 slider is better because 02:44:071 (2) - is hard to find rhythm

1. 00:39:980 (5,1) - increase DS or add a note at 00:40:435- . confuse with jump pattern, imo
2. 00:59:071- add a note for following vocal
3. 01:27:139 (1) - how about decreasing SV?
4. 01:44:980- add a note
5. 02:01:344 (3) - i prefer circle x2 like 02:04:980 (3,4,5) -
6. 03:13:389 (4,5,6) - this jump is unnecessary, imo

1. 01:44:980- add a note
2. 01:49:866 (2) - I prefer to delete

1. 00:35:662 (8,9) - not good overlapping since reverse is hard to see
2. 00:58:616 (1,2,1) - hard to play since DS is too different...

1. add "Letterbox during breaks" in the same way as other diffs
2. 01:26:798 (8) - since there is 1/4 rhythm sound at 01:27:139, I suggest to avoid mapping at this part
   how about this?
   

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. Romanised title: Higaimousou Keitai Joshi (Wara) ~not 100% sure about this so ill keep it
2. Although I'm not sure, I think "Kagamine Len" is unnecessary for tags ~yea should remove it .w.
3. tags suggestion:
   vocaloid
   gumi
   megupoid ~okay
4. if you don't intend to add SB additionally, "Display epilepsy warning" is unnecesssary, imo ~eh, the video is still super flashy though, so it still kinda fits

[Easy]

1. 00:26:798 (2,3) - avoid stack. that's confusing for beginner, imo ~hmmmmm ill consider maybe
2. 02:19:525 (2,3,4) - 1/2 triplet is a little difficult for easy. I recommend to change to reverse slider ~hmm okay
3. 02:44:980 (1,2) - 1/1 slider is better because 02:44:071 (2) - is hard to find rhythm ~kaykay

[Hard]

1. 00:39:980 (5,1) - increase DS or add a note at 00:40:435- . confuse with jump pattern, imo ~okay
2. 00:59:071- add a note for following vocal ~errrrr I purposelly mapped it like that just to change the rhythm a lttle bit
3. 01:27:139 (1) - how about decreasing SV? ~i dont see why :<
4. 01:44:980- add a note ~ ehh was following instrumentals
5. 02:01:344 (3) - i prefer circle x2 like 02:04:980 (3,4,5) - ~wanted to do something little different for now, guess ill consider later
6. 03:13:389 (4,5,6) - this jump is unnecessary, imo ~errr i did it like that in other parts too so I prefer to keep it ;-;

[Insane Collab]
SkyDevil's part

1. 01:44:980- add a note ~same as with hard owo
2. 01:49:866 (2) - I prefer to delete ~just did that to keep up with the super autotune *A*)/

Teru21's part

1. 00:35:662 (8,9) - not good overlapping since reverse is hard to see ~kaykay
2. 00:58:616 (1,2,1) - hard to play since DS is too different... ~due to the fast AR its pretty possible imo

awesome mapping! star for you~☆ ~thanks *A*)/
~Good Luck~

LexiaLovesU wrote:

Mod from queue

Key:
Red = Unrankable
Blue = Highly Suggested

General

1. Pure White Combo color is Unrankable Your Dark Green blends in really well with the video it really hard to see it at times I suggest you make the shade a bit lighter so that the approach circle is visible ~90% white incoming, also I was thinking that that green was waayy too dark too..
2. add an _ between giga p since search doesn't search any thing that is less than 3 letters so it should be "giga_p"Remove higai from tags it already in the title even if it isn't spaced in the title searching higai will still make it show up ~done both
3. you have audio on your video ~idk how to remove it ;_;
4. The Normal doesn't have letter in box and epilepsy warning like the other diffs do so make it consistent and add them here ~fix

Easy

1. Make the OD 2 instead of one for a more even spread between the easy and normal since 2>4 fits better ~~okaaay
2. 00:18:616 (1,2) - The flow between these 2 is pretty weird since you made 1 flow away from 2's placement which is placed completely opposite of 1's flow this make the flow very unnatural to play I suggest you make 1 flow towards 2 instead ~
3. 00:24:980 (4) - The flow is odd since you made it flow away from the next note its quite odd to go upward while you made it flow downwards I suggest doing
   something like this so the flow is better
   
   ~there isnt anything in the box.. but i guess ill try to make it something else
4. 00:26:798 (2,3) - 1/2 stacking in easy is too hard for noobs first 1/2s in easy aren't the best decision they are fast for noobs second stacking is hard for noobs to read. I highly suggest you don't do this instead try this rhythm
   
   
   ~did something that looked like this
5. 00:33:844 (2) - remove this 1/2 note that is too hard to hit in easy since you have to hit the 1/2 circle and then hit the slider which is 1/2 away its too many 1/2 ~im almost 100% sure they can get around this (especially since beginners are more enthusiast)
6. 00:35:889 (5) - make this flow towards the next note for a better more natural flow ~oki
7. 00:45:435 (2) - The placement of this note is odd the flow I feel like there it too many sliders going in the shape and flow its getting too repetitive why don't you make the slider go like this instead to provide more variation
   
   
   ~ehh then i get shittie blanket problems, its just 2 sliders so its not that repetitive
8. 00:48:616 (2) - Make this point towards 3 for more natural flow owo ~fixx
9. 00:49:525 (3,4) - The flow between these 2 is pretty weird since you made 3 flow away from 4's placement which is placed completely opposite of 3's flow this makes the flow very unnatural to play I suggest you make 3 flow towards 4 instead ~errr tried to change
10. 00:57:707 (4) - move this just a little its so close to overlapping with 2 XD ~LOL SO NAZI fixed ok c:
11. 01:12:707 (4) - This ends on a strong note and a finish is placed there it odd to not hit when there is a finish on the note since such strong notes should be clicked to properly emphasize the stanza maybe try this rhythm instead
    
    
    ~hmm idk how i feel about this, it would play super awkward then and it would look god awful, I will consider changing it maybe
12. 01:18:616 (3,4) - Placement is odd between these 2 why don't you try something like this so that it looks better
    
    
    ~kaykay
13. 01:20:435 - you forgot to add a finish keep consistency with your pattern ~okay
14. 01:22:253 (2,3) - Move 3 a bit so that they have symmetrical placing as of now they are symmetrical and it doesn't look very good ~ I had to change this whole thing cause of the 2,3 placement you mentioned above ;_;
15. 01:31:344 (1,2,3) - Same reason as the previous pattern like this ~eh
16. 01:34:071 (5) - Make this point towards the net note more for a better more natural flow ~ok
17. 01:41:344 (5) - Same as above ~^
18. 01:45:207 (4) - I don't suggest kick sliders in Easy they are too abrupt for the flow. the start abruptly and end abruptly it just makes odd and unnatural flow ~hmm I see, fixed
19. 01:59:525 (3) - maybe do this placement it flows a bit better I personally think it looks better aswell
    
    
    ~oki
20. 02:04:071 - Forgot a Finish here it sounds nice owo ~yep
21. 02:06:798 (5) - Make this point towards the next note for a more natural flow between them ~added
22. 02:18:616 - Forgot a Finish here it sounds nice here ~mhm (I should hide things that i fixed/added this is so annoying to do xD)
23. 02:22:253 (1,2) - The flow between these 2 is pretty weird since you made 1 flow away from 2's placement which is placed completely opposite of 1's flow this make the flow very unnatural to play I suggest you make 1 flow towards 2 instead ~hmm I honestly think i should keep this, i kinda did this on purpose
24. 03:03:162 (1) - Finish on head it sounds nice also 03:03:162 (1,2) - The flow between these 2 is odd I said the reason enough already so just try making 1 flow towards 2 more for better flow ~LOL kkkkkkkkkkk
25. 03:17:707 (1) - Finish on the head ~mhm
26. 03:24:980 (1) - Same as above ~^
27. 03:31:798 (1) - Remove the NC here its just gonna confuse the noobs ~at least it looks nice ok

1. Video is a bit late? Feels like that owo
2. I recommend to adapt combo colours to the video that plays in the background.

1. 00:15:662 (2,3) - This flow feels awkward. Adjust it so it goes more in line instead of being so close on the X-axle.
2. 00:17:025 (5) - NC
3. 00:20:662 (4) - NC
4. 00:24:298 (5) - NC and so on, break combo every 4 big ticks, they are too long in normal atm. 2-4 Combo count usually is enough for Normal.
5. 00:26:571 (2) - Move it to (242,231) to blanket more properly.
6. 00:27:025 (3) - Move to (146,337) if you changed the one above to get consistant distastance snapping.
7. 00:27:935 (4,5,6) - Distance between these are a bit closer than it should be.
8. 00:50:435 (6) - Move to (88,168) which is same spot as 00:48:616 (2).
9. 00:50:889 (7) - Move this to (87,306) if you did the above.
10. 01:04:071 (3) - Remove note, it's not necessary to put there and since you changed sound sample to Normal there it sounds really strange.
11. What I recommend for the above is that you remove 01:02:707 (1,2) - these two notes as well and use a spinner there. The spinner starts at 01:02:480 and ends at 01:04:071, and mute the sound at the end.
12. 02:47:707 (4,1) - Blanket.
13. 03:13:616 (5,1) - This doesn't look like it's properly done blanketing.
14. 03:20:207 (3,4,5,6) - This part can be extremely hard to read for Normal players.

1. 01:10:207 (2,3,4,5,1) - You could change the arrangement here to make it into a perfect star pattern here.
2. 01:13:844 (2,3) - The big space in between makes it feel wierd. Suggestion is to make it closer so there's higher chance a player will be able to read it better.
3. 01:20:094 (3,4) - Slider on blue tick here is not fitting well at all when playing(at least what I think). I'm not sure what to do here since the music is so distorted here, but the current rhythm does not fit and will probably not be approved by QAT.
4. 01:27:139 (1,2,1) - AR 8 + this rhythm placement is not very well. You could use a slider to cover that part up instead.
5. 01:28:389 (2,3,4,2,3,1,2,3) - Slider on red tick here does not fit well at all as there is no proper sound which makes it comfortable to click at a red rhythm. Change arrangement on timeline to make them start on a white tick please.
6. 01:38:616 - Don't skip to place note here as there is a quite loud sound here.
7. 01:44:071 - Don't skip.
8. 01:44:980 - Don't skip.
9. 01:50:548 (6) - This note actually has no sound that support it and it doesn't fit well here.
10. 01:50:321 (4,7) - As for these two, they do have a support of some kind of click sound in the music but if you can't come up with a good rhythm pattern here, then it's fine to remove them since sound that supports them is not that loud.
11. 01:53:844 (2) - Slider on red tick that doesn't fit.
12. 02:25:435 (1,2,3,4,5) - This big space here doesn't feel good at all.
13. 03:23:843 (3,4,5) - Same as above.
14. 03:29:980 (3,4,5,6) - This was really confusing, might by high chance not be approved by QAT(not approved by me either)

1. The audiobitrate of your .mp3 is too high, have someone convert it for you.
2. The video offset seems to be a bit late, please check that.
3. Delete 'giga_p' from your tags, that's just a duplicate of what you already have.
4. Let's hope that white CC isn't too blending...

1. 00:26:798 (2,3) - Not sure about the sudden polarity change (from white to red) here, feels kind of odd to play. How about: http://puu.sh/dKqMg/c3aef59538.jpg
2. 01:40:435 (4,5,1) - Spacing's slightly off here. Same at 02:06:344 (4,5,1) -
3. 03:00:889 (2,3) - Uh... 1/2 beat tapping in an easy diff? Better change that by 02:59:980 (1,2) - ctrl+g'ing these and reposition.
4. 03:14:980 (3,4,5) - Check the spacing here again.
5. 03:21:344 (1) - The repeat should end at 03:22:707 - already, which has a stronger representation in the music than the vocal you're aiming at here.
   Also set a beat at 03:24:525 - if you do so.
   
6. 03:24:980 (1,2) - 03:28:616 (1,2) - Urgh, i don't know, these don't go well with the music, as the 2-sliders start on beats that are barely noticeable in the music and you miss out the important downbeats.
   How about this rhythm pattern for both of them: http://puu.sh/dKqsC/0cfea6cf21.jpg .
7. 03:16:798 (5,1) - Blanket really off, fix.
8. Okay diff. This song has really strong beats, so i don't know why you had to use so many sliders >< Circles put much better emphasis than sliders on these notes, so mb take care of that in future.

1. First things first: This map could be made easier for a better spread and has some poor rhythm decisions. Make less usage of 1/2 beattaps and lowering the pressure by switching circles with sliders.
   Just to give a few examples and suggestions:
   
   1. 00:20:662 (4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/dKsNV/15b3981806.jpg
      
   2. 00:24:753 (6,7) - Into a slider
      
   3. 01:06:571 (2,3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/dKtsv/b5f4ebcf55.jpg
2. 00:56:798 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm feels awkward because of the 3 offbeat sliders that don't go well with the music. Suggestion: http://puu.sh/dKt3N/39fe03a4b9.jpg
3. 01:01:798 (4) - Bad offbeat slider and I feel the rhythm plays a bit dull here. How about: http://puu.sh/dKtcP/1c17df6dfe.jpg
4. 01:02:253 (1,2,3) - Could merge into a big slider with some nice sliderart: http://puu.sh/dKtjK/796451c827.jpg (anchors lie on the ticks that go with the music). Just an idea. :p
5. 01:32:253 (2,3) - Switch into a backslider for lower pressure.
6. 01:43:844 - This gap feels wrong to be left out for the strong beat it has. Try: http://puu.sh/dKvlE/385d207802.jpg
7. 01:48:389 (8) - Enlarge to the red tick.
   
8. 02:22:480 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too difficult for a normal, try: http://puu.sh/dKvyN/30782e3f80.jpg
9. Not much more I want to say for now, it's okay. Pressure is too high at times in my opinion for a normal because of constant 1/2 beats. Structure could be better.

1. 00:27:935 (6,7,8) - Weird spacing, make it equal.
2. 00:37:253 (3,4,5) - ^
3. 00:46:798 (4,5) - Ctrl+g, spacing between 3-4 is unreasonable compared to 4-5 because of the vocal jump.
   
4. 00:52:025 (3) - Weird offbeat slider that doesn't go with the vocal, ctrl+g'ing 00:52:025 (3,4) - these and reposition them works.
5. 00:53:616 (3,4,5) - Again, weird spacing.
   
6. 00:58:616 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The rhythm here is pretty much chopped off and you miss out way too many beats. Are you following vocals, instruments, both?
   Here's a suggestion for the latter: http://puu.sh/dKwdJ/8839f998c9.jpg
7. 01:54:753 (1,2,3,4) - I highly doubt this pattern works well here even though it looks nice. There's four offbeat (passive) sliders in a row that just feel plain awkward to play due to the natura of offbeat sliders feeling...well...off.
   This one should feel more natural to play: http://puu.sh/dKxmI/1a5cc49254.jpg . I think this is what some would call 'ideal mapping', but this is up to you.
8. 02:06:571 (3,4,5,6) - The jump between 3-4 is unreasonable tbh, there's no clear indiccator in the music for this to happen.
9. 02:08:162 (2,3,4,1) - I don't believe this section is so intense that you had to increase the DS to such an extent.
10. 02:14:980 (1,2) - What indicator in the music do you use to make a jump here? I think it's better if you nerf the spacing at this point.
11. 02:17:935 (5,6) - Are you sure you need a jump here? The last one was pretty high already. Same at 02:22:935 (3,4,5,6) - between 5-6
12. 02:21:344 (3,4,1) - Jump between 4-1 is more reasonable.
    
13. 02:55:434 - Set a beat here.
14. Okay. There are some spacing decisions I don't really get and overall, Structure and flow are much more improvable.

1. I might take a look at this later, but I'm not able to testplay it for now to give good suggestions. :c
   On first sight it should be fine, structure and flow is always improvable and there were some patterns i wouldn't recommend (like 00:40:435 (1,2,3,4) - , that pretty much rapes the flow and don't reflect the song well either).
   The SV changes between kiai and non-kiai parts is pretty much over the top (0.50x difference wow), i wouldn't go higher than 1.20x for the kiai. I don't even believe the song support such high SV in the kiai, so please fix this up.

Moecho wrote:

[General]

1. Video is a bit late? Feels like that owo ~eh ;A; it feels correct for me
2. I recommend to adapt combo colours to the video that plays in the background. ~then it would only be black and white, so I added green to it .w.

[Insane]

1. 01:10:207 (2,3,4,5,1) - You could change the arrangement here to make it into a perfect star pattern here. ~it wasnt supposed to be a star pattern though
2. 01:13:844 (2,3) - The big space in between makes it feel wierd. Suggestion is to make it closer so there's higher chance a player will be able to read it better. ~imo its currently very readable
3. 01:20:094 (3,4) - Slider on blue tick here is not fitting well at all when playing(at least what I think). I'm not sure what to do here since the music is so distorted here, but the current rhythm does not fit and will probably not be approved by QAT. ~I changed it to start on the white tick ok
4. 01:27:139 (1,2,1) - AR 8 + this rhythm placement is not very well. You could use a slider to cover that part up instead. ~I honestly mainly did this for replayability cause people will be able to do it right on the 2nd/3rd try or so, also people who know the song probably can do thsi properly
5. 01:28:389 (2,3,4,2,3,1,2,3) - Slider on red tick here does not fit well at all as there is no proper sound which makes it comfortable to click at a red rhythm. Change arrangement on timeline to make them start on a white tick please. ~kk
6. 01:38:616 - Don't skip to place note here as there is a quite loud sound here. ~hmm okay
7. 01:44:071 - Don't skip. ~did on purpose, wanted to follow instrumentals
8. 01:44:980 - Don't skip. ~^
9. 01:50:548 (6) - This note actually has no sound that support it and it doesn't fit well here. ~^, eh I mainly did that because this is the only part where the autotune of wotamin became very obvious
10. 01:50:321 (4,7) - As for these two, they do have a support of some kind of click sound in the music but if you can't come up with a good rhythm pattern here, then it's fine to remove them since sound that supports them is not that loud. ~^
11. 01:53:844 (2) - Slider on red tick that doesn't fit. ~oki
12. 02:25:435 (1,2,3,4,5) - This big space here doesn't feel good at all. ~./does something else with it
13. 03:23:843 (3,4,5) - Same as above. ~err ill keep it for now, already changed this one multiple times and it feels like its better if I wait for more ppl to mention it
14. 03:29:980 (3,4,5,6) - This was really confusing, might by high chance not be approved by QAT(not approved by me either)~changed

If you didn't understand something, please ask me! Good luck~

Pho wrote:

So 4 months later I had to check this back.... lol. Let's see if I can do better work now.
From my modding queue.~

[General]

1. The audiobitrate of your .mp3 is too high, have someone convert it for you. ~its 192kbps, thats accepted right
2. The video offset seems to be a bit late, please check that. ~.. i dont see whats wrong but everyone keeps mentioning it ;A;)/ ill just move add -50
3. Delete 'giga_p' from your tags, that's just a duplicate of what you already have. ~kaykay
4. Let's hope that white CC isn't too blending... ~its greyish ;_; its pretty readable imo

[Easy]

1. 00:26:798 (2,3) - Not sure about the sudden polarity change (from white to red) here, feels kind of odd to play. How about: http://puu.sh/dKqMg/c3aef59538.jpg ~hmm I currently think its fine though, it doesnt feel too awkward (fits the music) and shouldnt be too hard since it still ahs a 1/1 spacing
2. 01:40:435 (4,5,1) - Spacing's slightly off here. Same at 02:06:344 (4,5,1) - ~LOL ok
3. 03:00:889 (2,3) - Uh... 1/2 beat tapping in an easy diff? Better change that by 02:59:980 (1,2) - ctrl+g'ing these and reposition. ~okay
4. 03:14:980 (3,4,5) - Check the spacing here again. ~holy shit how did this happen, fixed
5. 03:21:344 (1) - The repeat should end at 03:22:707 - already, which has a stronger representation in the music than the vocal you're aiming at here.
   Also set a beat at 03:24:525 - if you do so. ~personally feels worse to me, dontknow why, maybe because i follow the vocals all the time
   
6. 03:24:980 (1,2) - 03:28:616 (1,2) - Urgh, i don't know, these don't go well with the music, as the 2-sliders start on beats that are barely noticeable in the music and you miss out the important downbeats.
   How about this rhythm pattern for both of them: http://puu.sh/dKqsC/0cfea6cf21.jpg . ~kaykay
7. 03:16:798 (5,1) - Blanket really off, fix. ~hmm tried to fix?
8. Okay diff. This song has really strong beats, so i don't know why you had to use so many sliders >< Circles put much better emphasis than sliders on these notes, so mb take care of that in future. ~er honestly because sliders are easier to play for beginners than circletapping LOL

[Hard]

1. 00:27:935 (6,7,8) - Weird spacing, make it equal. ~lol whoops
2. 00:37:253 (3,4,5) - ^ ~aaaa
3. 00:46:798 (4,5) - Ctrl+g, spacing between 3-4 is unreasonable compared to 4-5 because of the vocal jump. ~seems playable yet not that unexpected,, ill keep it for now
   
4. 00:52:025 (3) - Weird offbeat slider that doesn't go with the vocal, ctrl+g'ing 00:52:025 (3,4) - these and reposition them works. ~oki
5. 00:53:616 (3,4,5) - Again, weird spacing. ~did on purpose, just random jump to keep the difficulty high
   
6. 00:58:616 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The rhythm here is pretty much chopped off and you miss out way too many beats. Are you following vocals, instruments, both?
   Here's a suggestion for the latter: http://puu.sh/dKwdJ/8839f998c9.jpg ~just random rhythm, but I guess i should change it
7. 01:54:753 (1,2,3,4) - I highly doubt this pattern works well here even though it looks nice. There's four offbeat (passive) sliders in a row that just feel plain awkward to play due to the natura of offbeat sliders feeling...well...off.
   This one should feel more natural to play: http://puu.sh/dKxmI/1a5cc49254.jpg . I think this is what some would call 'ideal mapping', but this is up to you. ~somewhat changed it
8. 02:06:571 (3,4,5,6) - The jump between 3-4 is unreasonable tbh, there's no clear indiccator in the music for this to happen. ~errrr I did this all the time tho,, keep it for now
9. 02:08:162 (2,3,4,1) - I don't believe this section is so intense that you had to increase the DS to such an extent. ~changed them to all 1.50x
10. 02:14:980 (1,2) - What indicator in the music do you use to make a jump here? I think it's better if you nerf the spacing at this point. ~fine changed to something normal =3=)/
11. 02:17:935 (5,6) - Are you sure you need a jump here? The last one was pretty high already. Same at 02:22:935 (3,4,5,6) - between 5-6 ~nope this is 100% fine, the diff isnt that hard actually
12. 02:21:344 (3,4,1) - Jump between 4-1 is more reasonable. ~okay
    
13. 02:55:434 - Set a beat here. ~no *A*)/ this is just a personal preference honestly
14. Okay. There are some spacing decisions I don't really get and overall, Structure and flow are much more improvable. ~eh

[Insane Collab]

1. I might take a look at this later, but I'm not able to testplay it for now to give good suggestions. :c
   On first sight it should be fine, structure and flow is always improvable and there were some patterns i wouldn't recommend (like 00:40:435 (1,2,3,4) - , that pretty much rapes the flow and don't reflect the song well either). ~eh at least it looks nice ok, this diff is kinda fumbled i guess
   The SV changes between kiai and non-kiai parts is pretty much over the top (0.50x difference wow), i wouldn't go higher than 1.20x for the kiai. I don't even believe the song support such high SV in the kiai, so please fix this up. ~this honestly shouldnt be troubling .w. it doesntfeel horrible and is still easily playable (seen enough people dt'ing it with an A rank first try) probably the last thing that im gonna do is remap the whole thing in 1.20x spacing (really is 1.50x that much owo...)

This set still needs more polishment. Probably got tired of hearing this, but you should still get more mods for this one. ~its so hard to find modders .w.
If you have to wait for another 4 months, call me up again (hopefully, it won't take that long for this set to get ranked lol). Until then, good luck! /o/

SkyDevil wrote:

Moecho wrote:

[General]

1. Video is a bit late? Feels like that owo ~eh ;A; it feels correct for me
2. I recommend to adapt combo colours to the video that plays in the background. ~then it would only be black and white, so I added green to it .w. I mean to adapt combo colors to the video, not that the colors are wrong.

[Insane]

1. 01:10:207 (2,3,4,5,1) - You could change the arrangement here to make it into a perfect star pattern here. ~it wasnt supposed to be a star pattern though Would look better with a star pattern.
2. 01:13:844 (2,3) - The big space in between makes it feel wierd. Suggestion is to make it closer so there's higher chance a player will be able to read it better. ~imo its currently very readable
3. 01:20:094 (3,4) - Slider on blue tick here is not fitting well at all when playing(at least what I think). I'm not sure what to do here since the music is so distorted here, but the current rhythm does not fit and will probably not be approved by QAT. ~I changed it to start on the white tick ok
4. 01:27:139 (1,2,1) - AR 8 + this rhythm placement is not very well. You could use a slider to cover that part up instead. ~I honestly mainly did this for replayability cause people will be able to do it right on the 2nd/3rd try or so, also people who know the song probably can do thsi properly
5. 01:28:389 (2,3,4,2,3,1,2,3) - Slider on red tick here does not fit well at all as there is no proper sound which makes it comfortable to click at a red rhythm. Change arrangement on timeline to make them start on a white tick please. ~kk
6. 01:38:616 - Don't skip to place note here as there is a quite loud sound here. ~hmm okay
7. 01:44:071 - Don't skip. ~did on purpose, wanted to follow instrumentals
8. 01:44:980 - Don't skip. ~^
9. 01:50:548 (6) - This note actually has no sound that support it and it doesn't fit well here. ~^, eh I mainly did that because this is the only part where the autotune of wotamin became very obvious Be afraid of QATs ;w;
10. 01:50:321 (4,7) - As for these two, they do have a support of some kind of click sound in the music but if you can't come up with a good rhythm pattern here, then it's fine to remove them since sound that supports them is not that loud. ~^
11. 01:53:844 (2) - Slider on red tick that doesn't fit. ~oki
12. 02:25:435 (1,2,3,4,5) - This big space here doesn't feel good at all. ~./does something else with it
13. 03:23:843 (3,4,5) - Same as above. ~err ill keep it for now, already changed this one multiple times and it feels like its better if I wait for more ppl to mention it
14. 03:29:980 (3,4,5,6) - This was really confusing, might by high chance not be approved by QAT(not approved by me either)~changed

If you didn't understand something, please ask me! Good luck~

thaankss both *A*)/

1. Nice video, nice background and nice map :3

1. 00:32:025 (6) - curve a bit more
2. 00:56:798 (1) - keep same combo
3. 01:00:435 (1) - ^
4. 03:27:480 (5,6) - blanket?
5. Overall I think you could reduce the combos in every chorus by half, meaning start be removing the 2nd NC of each chorus and 1 combo every 2 combos after that. (just a suggestion ofc)
6. I didn't find much on this diff, sumimasen

1. 00:28:844 (8) - ctrl + g?
2. 00:32:025 (3,4) - idk if this is supposed to be a blanket, but it should be :b
3. 01:32:934 (1,2) - blanket?
4. 01:36:343 (5,1) - ^
5. 02:04:980 (3,4,5) - notes should be in the same vector as slider, or slider in the same vector as notes:
   SPOILER

   
6. Overall you have 2 types of triples, 1 type with 3 notes (or 2 notes 1 slider) and the other with a kick slider and the last note/slider, but imo you're separating them too much. What I mean is that there's a whole part where you use only one type and then you only change the triple type wayyy later in the song, imo you could alternate between both types more, so this is not so noticeble. (sorry about the big text c: )

1. 00:35:662 (8) - a bit to close to 6, move to ~ x:152 y:40
2. 00:36:116 (9) - match y coordinate with 8 if changed
3. 00:39:753 (9) - move to ~ x:298 y:39 to keep flow
4. 00:40:435 (1) - this beeing an overlap fits the song, but imo it doesn't need to overlap this much, maybe move to the left? Example where I also rotated it:
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:47:707 (1) - ^ but in this case I would ctrl + j (if it breaks flow I would only move it to the left)
6. 01:13:844 (2,3) - this is too sudden, imo distance should be shortened
7. 01:20:889 (1) - why not keep this same combo as previous note?
8. 01:24:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - this combo seems correct, you should make the above point the same as this
9. 01:51:685 (4) - move to ~ x:296 y:140? this is the only spot where you make this triple this way
10. 02:07:480 (3,4) - increase distance? to your discretion
11. 02:09:298 (1,2) - ^
12. 02:24:753 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - this is so hard ; ; idk if a lot of people can do this flawlessly, but imo the distance between streams (even though it's all the same stream) is too big
13. 02:26:116 - 15 second break feels a big long, maybe map the part from 02:33:162 by following the beat? spaced notes/sliders still let the player rest
14. 03:10:207 (5) - ctrl + j and move to same position?
15. 03:23:843 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - same point I made above, the first one is the only one I consider do-able because we have more time to read it

Milhofo wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

Quick note, my "~"s mean "around"

[General]

1. Nice video, nice background and nice map :3

[Hard]

1. 00:28:844 (8) - ctrl + g? ~ehh i prefer it the way it currently is
2. 00:32:025 (3,4) - idk if this is supposed to be a blanket, but it should be :b ~lool okay
3. 01:32:934 (1,2) - blanket? ~then the jump would be killed
4. 01:36:343 (5,1) - ^ ~ ~not everything is a blanket ;A;
5. 02:04:980 (3,4,5) - notes should be in the same vector as slider, or slider in the same vector as notes:
   SPOILER

   
   ~i see fixed owo
6. Overall you have 2 types of triples, 1 type with 3 notes (or 2 notes 1 slider) and the other with a kick slider and the last note/slider, but imo you're separating them too much. What I mean is that there's a whole part where you use only one type and then you only change the triple type wayyy later in the song, imo you could alternate between both types more, so this is not so noticeble. (sorry about the big text c: ) ~eh ;A;)/ I dont see it as a big problem though

[Insane Collab]

1. 00:35:662 (8) - a bit to close to 6, move to ~ x:152 y:40 ~its actually the big sliders that isnt 100% symmetric, so i changed it
2. 00:36:116 (9) - match y coordinate with 8 if changed ~^
3. 00:39:753 (9) - move to ~ x:298 y:39 to keep flow ~it supposed to be there to confuse you a little bit :I
4. 00:40:435 (1) - this beeing an overlap fits the song, but imo it doesn't need to overlap this much, maybe move to the left? Example where I also rotated it:
   SPOILER

   
   ~ehh its the mapping style, this was done multiple times in the verse so it fits
5. 00:47:707 (1) - ^ but in this case I would ctrl + j (if it breaks flow I would only move it to the left) ~wat
6. 01:13:844 (2,3) - this is too sudden, imo distance should be shortened ~ and you just suggested above here a 5.00x spacing lol... its just 1.50x not that bad
7. 01:20:889 (1) - why not keep this same combo as previous note? ~didnt see that whoops
8. 01:24:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - this combo seems correct, you should make the above point the same as this ~ yeayeayea
9. 01:51:685 (4) - move to ~ x:296 y:140? this is the only spot where you make this triple this way ~okay
10. 02:07:480 (3,4) - increase distance? to your discretion ~./tries something
11. 02:09:298 (1,2) - ^ ~^
12. 02:24:753 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - this is so hard ; ; idk if a lot of people can do this flawlessly, but imo the distance between streams (even though it's all the same stream) is too big ~ill change it
13. 02:26:116 - 15 second break feels a big long, maybe map the part from 02:33:162 by following the beat? spaced notes/sliders still let the player rest ~its the only big break in the song D:
14. 03:10:207 (5) - ctrl + j and move to same position? ~ehhh I think it looks better now
15. 03:23:843 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - same point I made above, the first one is the only one I consider do-able because we have more time to read it ~ehh ill do something else with this as well

My mod seems so small D: I'm still a noob, hope it helps though have my star!

PolkaMocha wrote:

Request from my modding queue!

Hard:

00:20:207 (1) (2) This needs to be blanketed. ~it is sorta blanketed, im not gonna put it in the slider any further

00:35:889 This slider kills the flow. You may want to work on this a bit. ~its a jump tho

01:03:844 If you want, end the slider here, then do something like this to match the words. ~which slider? did you mean the spinner,,, I didnt do that on any diff, and I feel like its better the way it currently is or else ill be following the vocals the whole time o-o



01:22:025 I think a simple curve will work here. ~errr its just the stlye I took post refrain

01:26:798 I think this would work better. Placing something on a 1/4 tick is really bad. ~its very playable though



02:01:344 I think circles will work instead of a slider. ~err ill consider maybe

02:04:980 Tilt these to go with the curve of the slider. ~I dont see why, it doesnt improve flow, it just makes it looks awkward

02:06:344 (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) Not a fan of these jumps. They look a little messy and are hard to follow ~hehehe actually did that to confuse

02:10:435 Move the red points in this slider farther away from each other. It will look better. ~errrr its just how i like this slider ok ;; people used this slider a lot in the past

02:53:162 A repeat slider that starts one white flips on blue and ends on red would do better here. ~errr something different once in a while is nice

03:03:844 (1) (2) Unnecessary jump. ~no

03:05:434^ ~no

03:09:753^ ~no

03:13:616^ ~no

03:28:162^ ~no

The end. Over all, spacing needs work. I just didn't start noticing how different the spacing was until the end. Nice work! Good luck!

appleeaterx wrote:

hoi

happy new year \o/

:idea: General

* Add 'collab' and 'collaboration' to the tags? Like this mapset. ~eh kvind t niet echt zon reden om dan een tag neer te gooien (meeste maps doen t sws niet)
* Please, the black combo colour is basically death for a lot of people, because people these days play with screen dim 100%. ~ehh okay
* Well... the background is almost 1MB, and I think you can really reduce it >_> ~soon(tm)

Insane

SkyDevil
* 00:18:389 (6) - I don't really like it that you made this slider offbeat, and by doing that skipping the cymbal crash. Especially with slow songs like these you want to make them clickable, but I must say it fits ok owo ~ehhhhhhhh khou t voor nu ;i
* 00:19:525 (3,4,5) - Optional, but it'd be nice if you move this triplet up a bit, to create a kind of blanket effect.

~kay
* 00:28:616 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Meh, I'd really add a NC on each 1/4 jump you have for readability. ~zo onreadable is ie niet .-.
* 01:12:480 (4) - Uhmm, is the whistle on the slider end really needed here? I can't really hear a electronic-beep-ish sound here x_x ~lool ik lette niet veel op de whistle spamming
* 01:41:798 (3,4,1) - I'd put the large jump at (4,1) instead here. The vocals are stronger on (1) where also the downbeat is, so the emphasis with a jump should be there imo. ~oki
* 01:46:116 (2) - I already find it quite weird that you suddenly changed from following vocal + instruments, to instrument-only. The sudden change in rhythm feels a bit weird to me, but I guess it's your style then. Anyways, what I wanted to say was that you might want to remove this note. There's no electric sound here, only a hi-hat like sound - which you clearly don't map in this section of the song. ~wisselde langzaam terug naar vocals
* 01:49:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Suddenly, right after a such an empty/calm part you start to overmap on the blue ticks. This might sound nice at all, but there's nothing on the blue ticks here - nothing. I can understand why you mapped the mini-stream at the end, because of the vibrato in the vocals, but that's not present in 01:52:253 (6,7) - so I don't recommend doing it here. ~fjinn =3= veel te veel mensen complainde hierover
* 01:53:162 (1,2) - Uhmm.. dunno if intended, but this blanket looks really off to me, move (2) a bit more to the left? ~oeps
* 02:47:025 (5) - No whistle here? Sound is quite strong here o_o None of the diffs hacve it except Easy.. I wonder why. ~klinkt beter nu imo

Teru21 (kmoet ook haar stuk modden omdat ze nauwelijks osu meer speelt .-.)
* 00:30:435 (3) - Woah, this bass is quite strong you know o_o. I don't really know why you'd use 0.8x distance here. I'd actually create a jump here, and if you do want to keep your DS this distance is too low, and using 1.0 like 00:39:071 (6,7,8) - is much better imo. ~is design, ligt meer aan de positionering hoe het eruit ziet
* 00:43:162 (7,8,9,10) - I personally think that the spacing you used in this square is way too big. I'd lower it to around 2.0x here, so it's at least smaller than the jumps in the KIAI time. ~naar 2.5x verandert
* 00:44:753 (2) - Considering splitting these into two circles? Would give more emphasis on the bass on vocals that are present on 00:44:980 - . This combo is slider only anyway, so it'd be nice if you added some circles here ans there :3 ~sliders are love sliders are life
* 00:47:253 (8,1) - I think you already know what I am going to say, but I find this spacing really inappropiate here. 5x spacing for a 1/4 for such a calm song is not good, and the flow is broken here as well, which makes the player break his/her combo. This is really unneeded. ~HOW DID THIS HAPPEN LOL kheb peronngeluk op ctrl + j gedrukt ofzo .-.
* 00:58:616 (1,2) - The spacing here also bothers me. This is still reasonable, but the SV changes by a lot here, making this very hard to actually read. Consider reducing the spacing to about 3.5 here so it's consistent with 01:01:798 (2) - and so it's easier to play. ~dit is eigenlijk heel erg goed te doen, vooral als je opmerkt dat er vaak heen en weer wordt gesprongen, juist omdat de SV daarvoor hoger was en ook best wel wat hoge jumps waren is dit imo best wel goed te lezen
* 02:02:025 (5,6) - and 02:03:162 (7,8) - The anti-DS is getting real here x_x . 0.8/0.5x spacing combined with a large SV doesn't flow/play good at all imo. COnsider moving (5,8) down, or (6,7) a bit up. You could also try a loop-flow - seeing how the sliders are placed here, it'd fit quite well.

~hmm leuk idee, ik maak er wel wat van
* 02:12:025 (2) - and 02:19:298 (2) - Same anti-DS here. ~fix
* 02:25:889 (7) - Add a new combo here? There's a new combo after every KIAI time, and it's also present in the other diffs. ~oki
* 03:13:389 (4,5,1) - The jump should be at (5,1) imo, because the downbeat should get more emphasis than (5) imo. You can always try constant DS. ~imo ik vind em persoonlijker wel wat beter nu spelen
* 03:13:389 (4) - Depending on what SkyDevil does, remove the whistle on the end? ~oki
* 03:15:662 (1) - Going to be nitpicky here, but shouldn't the wiggles on this slider go like, on top of the slider? There's no real sound here, and placing the red dots near the slider head would make more sense with the vocals. ~hmmmmmmm okay

Needs more work in my point of view. The anti-DS in some places, combined with a high SV in the KIAI, just plays a bit awkward ;w; I do think the rest of the mapping is fine though, so it should be good to go after some more modding. I really do like the overall flow and how you used the default whistle in this mapset. Blends really well with the electronic sounds ^^

meh, ik vind dit liedje zelf niet zo leuk sorry skydevil x)
ik mod alleen de collab-diff want ik denk niet dat ik de rest wel kan modden als ik het liedje zelf niet echt leuk vind >_>

ik geef je wel een ticket ;w;
veel suc6 :3

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hello, From my queue! Sorry if i'm late.

The first time i heard this song, i unexpectedly liked it. And the background music is really familiar to....... ehhh.. (*3*'''') ~holy shit you just made me realize that aswell LOL

[> General <]

1. - I think you need to Re-import the video by removing the audio track or reducing the volume to 0%. Well, The ranking criteria mentioned this. ~I will do that soon ;_; nvm did it owo
2. - You should darken the white combo colour, or change it to a different colour. Because it'd be too bright to help players see the number of the circle, numbers are white as well with a small black stroke, so it'd be a serious ranking process. ~kk fixed
3. - Spread is fine, timing is fine, Nice~ ~yey

[> Easy <]

1. 00:19:980 (2,1) - I'm not sure if this little overlap is optional to be fixed, i'm just saying... ~whoops
2. 00:44:525 (1,2) - Recorrect the blanket here. ~oki
3. 00:48:616 (2) - I don't think this rhythm sounds fitting here, i have two preference: one/two. ~errrr ill change it to the 1st one i guess
4. 01:12:707 (4) - I think this downbeat shouldn't be on the strong beat on the long white tick. I think replacing with circles would sound the rhythm nice. ~hmmm ok
5. 01:22:253 (2,1) - You should split these two to avoid overlap. I know you want a head-on-head for slider (3) to get to circle (1) for flow, but overlapping like this won't make it great. ~okay, even though i dont see it as much of a problem lol
6. 01:49:525 (1,2) - I think these two sliders are quite nice to follow vocals, but making the anchors nearby themselves would just be like slowing-down speed of sliders and might confuse beginners. ~it barely slows them down though, Ill keep them for now but idk what bats might think
7. 02:16:798 (3,4,1) - Try to parallelize these sliders perfectly. It might improve the pattern's flow. ~//not sure if its now right
8. 02:46:798 (1,2) - Double blanket? ~that might be kinda overkill xD
9. 02:59:980 (1,2) - Likely nazi on this one, recorrect the blanket. ~lolwat uhh I guess I moved it a little bit?
10. 03:07:707 (2,4) - I think you should swap their rhythm placement, Ctrl + G and remake the spacing. Try following the vocals here like you've did on the previous parts. ~err i was kinda following the instrumentals a little bit here, but I guess its easier to follow vocals
11. 03:14:753 (2) - Remove this circle, i know you wanted to follow the vocals here, but you haven't done this on other tracks. ~ehhhhhhhh finee =3=
12. 03:17:707 (1,3) - Why would you overlap here? just asking... ~its not like i overlapped it beneath a combo burst D: its probably nicely readable
13. 03:31:344 (5,1) - You haven't did this stack on other tracks, so mind you split? ~meh ;A; only for this part pls cause its the end of the song :<
14. - Overall, the diff looks nice, but not much work you need to put here, just nice.

[> Abyss's Normal <]

1. - Inactive? ~her pc is broken, she is planning to get it fixed, I hope she doesnt mind getting hit with 100 mods LOL

[> Hard <]

1. 00:18:389 (5,1) - nazi, curve slider (1) a little more for perfect blanket over circle (5). ~okeokeoke
2. 00:19:639 (4) - You should remove this circle. I don't hear any, especially the guitar, instruments on this tick. ~but the electric music does indicate it tho ;o
3. 00:21:571 (4) - Ctrl + G? just for better playstyle. ~hmmmmmmmm maybe...
4. 00:23:275 (3) - Same as 00:19:639 (4) - ~same as the other ww
5. - I'm really sorry, but i won't find more of those ^, trying to avoid huge mods. So try finding them yourself. It's up to you, remove some, or keep some. ~a
6. 00:42:935 (3,1,2,3,1) - These jumps are quite big for a Hard diff. I'm unsure if it's okay or not, but just saying... ~just 2.0x spacing ;_; but I guess its kinda sudden... ill reduce it a bit
7. 00:46:798 (4,5) - Ctrl + G? better playstyle. ~was thinking about this or the pattern i currently have.. Ill consider maybe later
8. 00:47:707 - Add circle? It shouldn't be empty when a strong track came up. If done this, swap NC with slider (1). ~since I did that on all the other parts sure
9. 01:14:753 (6,1) - Swap NC, a bit short. ~didnt notice that till now owo fixed
10. 01:27:139 (1) - Remove NC? still on the same track. It's too much for draining HP too. ~I wanna keep it cause its the switch to a very different rhythm, and its off rhythm as well
11. 01:31:344 - Same as 00:47:707 - ~oke
12. 01:39:525 (3) - Ctrl + G? ~oh I guess it does make a nice jump
13. 01:59:525 (3,4) - ^, not both. Slider (3) or (4). ~ehhhh then the jump would be super random ;A; ill keep it
14. 02:06:798 (4,5,6) - Mind this pattern to be symmetric? or not really making one? ~hhhh okay
15. 02:19:753 (5,1) - Recorrect the blanket here, almost the same reason as 00:18:389 (5,1) - ~errr I dont see whats wrong with it but I guess i changed it a bit
16. 02:22:935 (3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:42:935 (3,1,2,3,1) - ~eeh the circles are nicely randomly placed here
17. 02:58:162 (2,3,4) - ^ ~^ or well sliders
18. 03:20:889 (3,1) - Recorrect blanket? ~I do see why this one looks bad, fixed
19. 03:28:162 (3) - I think a downbeat for the rhythm here is enough for this track. Repeat arrow sounds too weak for a white long tick. ~eeeehhh I think this fits as well tho
20. - Few blanket problems and some jumps' spacings are too high for this kind of diff. But i've seen nice patterns over it. ~im okay with that, the bpm is low so I wanted to make some stronger jumps

[> Insane Collab <]

1. 00:29:980 (1) - Dem, remove those senseless hitsounds on this tail, the song track is not really intense enough for this. ~nonoo the electric music really makes a triplet sound ;_;
2. 00:33:616 (3) - ^ ~a
3. - Sorry, won't get them all, same reason as previous diff. ~a
4. 00:54:071 (9,1) - Not really important, but recorrect the blanket tails. ~I dont get it? .w.
5. 01:49:980 (2,3,4,5,6) - What does this stream follows? don't tell me it's the vocals. ~LOL yes it does c8 I always wanted to make something interesting at this part, did that (as you saw) at easy and also at hard
6. 02:03:616 (8) - Same issue as the previous diff for the repeat arrow. ~it also fits somewhat well here ;_;
7. 02:59:071 (5) - Ctrl + G? dem ~okay
8. - I've testplayed this diff, it was really fun on Teru's part with those slider overlaps and a few jumps. And sometimes, the SV changes might almost get me a miss, but it was fun at least! But imo, this diff is well-mapped. ~yaay thanks, a lot of peopel have been mentioning how the mix between anti jumps and jumps doesnt fit, but I honestly think they do ;_;

Best example of the song on which kind of music i liked. Might this be Pop or something? lol >w> ~yea maybe electric/pop? waw
Good Luck anyway!

-Nya- wrote:

Hello! Sorry for the delay.
Here's my mod:

Easy:
One DS error, according to AiMod. Please fix. ~aimod says nothign here ;o00:26:798 (2) – Maybe this will look better. ~how am I gonna do thatw ithout rearranging everything ;_; it currently doesn't look bad anyways

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Make a sort of blanket with 00:25:889 (1) – 01:14:525 (3,4) – Make a nice blanket here: ~not everything should be blanket :<

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For better flow and to avoid 01:28:616 (2) – overlapping 01:26:798 (5) – rather place 01:27:707 (1) – more to the right side of the grid. Like this: ~hmm okay

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01:45:889 (1,2) – Blanket here? ~not everythings a blanket .A.

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01:58:616 (2) – Ctrl+H? ~the way it currently is improves flow02:41:344 (1,2,3) – Try to make more of a triangle shape here and avoid placing them in a straight line. ~ehhh i put it in a straight line cause a lot of those sliders are straight too

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02:47:707 (2) – Move this slider a bit to the left to make a better blanket with 02:46:798 (1) – ~sighh only this time ok=3=

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02:50:434 (1) – Rather Ctrl+H this. It will improve flow with 02:51:344 (2) – ~but it will kill the flow between the (2) before him03:04:979 (3,4) – Blanket? ~no

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03:07:707 (2,3) – Nazi. Please improve the blanket ~./doesnt see whats wrong but okay03:11:798 (2,3) – Blanket. ~stop making blankets happen its not gonna happen

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03:31:344 (5,1) – Rather not stack in an Easy diff. Unstack the two notes. ~hhhh okay

Hard:
Tags conflict with collab. Please fix. ~theyre teh same? ;o00:14:980 (1,2) – Blanket? ~a

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00:25:662 (6) – Maybe stack this circle on the head of 00:25:889 (1) – ~eh it will suddenly stop movement ;_; dont think thats a good idea00:30:435 (3) – Move this slider a bit to the right to improve the blanket with 00:30:207 (2) – and then you can also try to stack these two notes 00:28:844 (8,4) – perfectly on top of each other. ~oki 00:35:889 (3) – Rather do this? ~did something that looks like it

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Copy and paste 00:35:435 (2) – then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G00:37:253 (3,4) – Blanket? ~no

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00:51:571 (2,4) – Make sure these two sliders are the same. (If they already are, ignore)
Use the copy and paste option. ~its almost the same, I dont see the use of changing it owo00:54:298 (6) – Rather do this? ~ehh idk,, I think I prefer it currently

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Ctrl+H and then rotate it 50 degrees.00:56:344 (4) – Move this slider a bit downwards to make this flower pattern 00:56:344 (4,5,6,7,8) – look better. ~okaay

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01:29:980 (2,3,4,5,6) – Rather do this? ~ehh i myself am thinking about changing it,, ill consider later maybe

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Looks better in my opinion.01:33:616 (2,3) – Maybe this? ~I did it like that cause the jumps are even then and itt will improve the flow

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02:17:707 (4,5) – Maybe this? ~ehhhh dont like overused symmetry

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02:55:889 (1,2) – Blanket? ~err no03:29:298 (1,2,3,4) – Try to make a nicer half circle pattern. ~I did this on purpose too *A*)/ cause again the sliders are somewhat straight

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Overall, very nice mapset and I love the song.
So I’ll shoot a star for you~ ~thanks ><)/
Good Luck! Hope this gets ranked soon

1. 00:18:616 - I feels that this can be emphasis more , try this
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2. 00:22:025 (6) - x284 y228 ? , imo feel kinda awkward to use the same pattern as 00:21:344 (3,4) -
3. 02:24:753 (3,4,5) - Line up properly?

1. 00:17:480 (3,4,5) - How about this?
   SPOILER

   [img]puu.sh/eP3JT/ccd24f37fd.png[/img]
2. 00:20:207 (1,2) - Blanket better
3. 00:57:707 - Why not map this?
4. 01:50:889 (5,6,1) - Make the spacing a bit more consistent?
5. 02:07:025 (5,6) - I think the jumps here might be too much for hard
6. 02:50:889 - Add a note here? this will make the polarity here a bit better
7. 03:14:071 - This can be emphasis more
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1. 00:15:662 (2,3) - Ctrl+G ? for better flow
2. 00:48:616 (2,6) - Stack?
3. 01:37:935 (6,7) - Blanket?

1. 00:40:889 (2,5) - Stack at tail?
2. 00:44:525 (1,2) - Blanket is kinda off
3. 01:34:980 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off
4. 01:43:162 (2,3) - Why use 1/2 beat here ? I guess 1/1 would be better here
5. 03:10:434 (1) - Make the tail facing directly at (2) for better flow ?

CelsiusLK wrote:

[Insane Collab]

1. 00:18:616 - I feels that this can be emphasis more , try this
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   ~ehrm wanted to do something different, but i might consider
2. 00:22:025 (6) - x284 y228 ? , imo feel kinda awkward to use the same pattern as 00:21:344 (3,4) - ~errrr I changed it in my own way
3. 02:24:753 (3,4,5) - Line up properly? ~ok

[Hard]

1. 00:17:480 (3,4,5) - How about this?
   SPOILER

   [img]puu.sh/eP3JT/ccd24f37fd.png[/img]
   ~i prefer it the current way
2. 00:20:207 (1,2) - Blanket better ~I dont see how its wrong but I changed it i gues s
3. 00:57:707 - Why not map this? ~ cause there wasnt something special happening in the music or in the vocals, so it didnt seem important to me to map
4. 01:50:889 (5,6,1) - Make the spacing a bit more consistent? ~its literally just 0,05x difference, I dont see the point
5. 02:07:025 (5,6) - I think the jumps here might be too much for hard ~yep,, I get this a lot and I think I should really change them..
6. 02:50:889 - Add a note here? this will make the polarity here a bit better ~im following the vocals/whatever they are here really hard so no
7. 03:14:071 - This can be emphasis more
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   ~im changing all the jumps so Ill change this as well

[Easy]

1. 00:40:889 (2,5) - Stack at tail? ~lool I dont think it matters
2. 00:44:525 (1,2) - Blanket is kinda off ~I dont see it
3. 01:34:980 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off ~I dont see this one either, but I tried to change it
4. 01:43:162 (2,3) - Why use 1/2 beat here ? I guess 1/1 would be better here ~followed the instrumentals, like i did in the other 2 diffs
5. 03:10:434 (1) - Make the tail facing directly at (2) for better flow ? ~errr okay

Hmm...not really sure about spread from Hard to Insane but I guess it's fine


Good luck

1. 00:27:480 (1,2) - you could do a better blanket here
2. 00:28:616 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - jumpy streams in a regular song like this plays horrible
3. 01:12:821 - is kind of missing something here
4. 01:27:139 (1) - try to use here addition normal i think you'll get a more fitting clap for this one
5. 01:32:480 (3) - what about something like this for a better flow?
   
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6. 01:35:889 (4) - imo a regular curved slider is better here
7. 01:42:253 - to 01:47:707 - i don't understand why from this part you startet to map less the rhythm it feels a lot of things missing and it doesent feel confi during game play you lost like the feel of an insane diff
8. 02:54:298 - let the break start from here
9. 02:58:389 (3,4) - just why? the flow is a mess here D:

1. 00:29:525 (1,2,3) - why do you have to overlap here is an insane jumpy pls
2. 00:32:025 (7) - ctrl+j
3. 00:32:480 (8) - ctrl+j
   or in the case you don't gonna fix this 2 atleast please compleate the pattern 00:32:480 (8,1) - with a better blanket
4. 00:34:298 (5) - ctrl+j and then rotate it +75° to abtain something like :
   
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   wich flows totally better as the actual one
   

   80,176,34298,6,0,P|58:136|59:92,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 00:48:616 (3,5) - stack this 2 will look better
6. 00:57:935 (9,10,1) - try something like this:
   
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7. 01:58:389 (5) - new combo
8. 02:02:025 (5) - new combo
9. 02:03:616 (8) - this is totally wrong because you have the reverse in the strongest pooint where the lyrycs beginn again and ou have a strong sound,you should better use a rhythm like this one for this part
   
10. 02:14:298 (9,10,1) - this pattern looks horrible QuQ first of all you should stack 9 and 1 and then do a blanket with 9 and 10 and maybe then will be better
11. 02:16:571 (4,5,6,7) - i dunno what to suggest here but just don't overlap...
12. 02:19:753 (4,5) - this pattern flows bad 1) overlap is bad done atleast try to hit the slider body with the slider end and this one 02:20:889 (6) - is missing kind of blanket,yes you can say i was not aspecting to do a blanket,but it looks so bad really...

Lally wrote:

#queue

[Insane]
skydevil o3o

1. 00:27:480 (1,2) - you could do a better blanket here ~im aware, but I dont know how to do that exactly
2. 00:28:616 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - jumpy streams in a regular song like this plays horrible ~doesnt feel really awkward imo tho
3. 01:12:821 - is kind of missing something here ~not really,,, dont see anything in the songs that asks for it
4. 01:27:139 (1) - try to use here addition normal i think you'll get a more fitting clap for this one ~uhmm I think it sounds better currently
5. 01:32:480 (3) - what about something like this for a better flow? ~then the spacing would be around 2,5x... I think its a little bit too much,, besides it would probably overlap (2)
   
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6. 01:35:889 (4) - imo a regular curved slider is better here ~errr might consider ok
7. 01:42:253 - to 01:47:707 - i don't understand why from this part you startet to map less the rhythm it feels a lot of things missing and it doesent feel confi during game play you lost like the feel of an insane diff ~following instrumentals or else it wouldve been to repetitive
8. 02:54:298 - let the break start from here ~ow small mistake fixed
9. 02:58:389 (3,4) - just why? the flow is a mess here D: ~changed it a liitttlee bit

Teru o3o

1. 00:29:525 (1,2,3) - why do you have to overlap here is an insane jumpy pls ~anti-jumpsss
2. 00:32:025 (7) - ctrl+j ~
3. 00:32:480 (8) - ctrl+j ~I dont see why... it would just hit the hp bar and the random jump doenst look exactly better
   or in the case you don't gonna fix this 2 atleast please compleate the pattern 00:32:480 (8,1) - with a better blanket ~err im not able to move the slider to the right and moving (8) to the left would just kill some jumps making it even easier
4. 00:34:298 (5) - ctrl+j and then rotate it +75° to abtain something like : ~I can see whatt you mean but it was supposed to be a mirror of (3)
   
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   wich flows totally better as the actual one ~it doesnt particularly flow bad thou
   

   80,176,34298,6,0,P|58:136|59:92,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 00:48:616 (3,5) - stack this 2 will look better ~errr i tried moving it around a bit, it doesnt look good at all when stacked imo..
6. 00:57:935 (9,10,1) - try something like this:
   
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   ~it kills the triple triangle D:
7. 01:58:389 (5) - new combo ~whoops fixed..
8. 02:02:025 (5) - new combo ~^
9. 02:03:616 (8) - this is totally wrong because you have the reverse in the strongest pooint where the lyrycs beginn again and ou have a strong sound,you should better use a rhythm like this one for this part ~errrr changed it somehwat
   
10. 02:14:298 (9,10,1) - this pattern looks horrible QuQ first of all you should stack 9 and 1 and then do a blanket with 9 and 10 and maybe then will be better ~I think its more like a difference in mapping preference, I think it totally looks ok (btw im modding for teru cause she stopped playing qwq)
11. 02:16:571 (4,5,6,7) - i dunno what to suggest here but just don't overlap... ~its on purpose
12. 02:19:753 (4,5) - this pattern flows bad 1) overlap is bad done atleast try to hit the slider body with the slider end and this one 02:20:889 (6) - is missing kind of blanket,yes you can say i was not aspecting to do a blanket,but it looks so bad really... ~uhm i think you mixed up some words x) (aspecting > expecting) but uhh i somewhat changed it i guess?