Maruguri - Kyuuri no Uta · forum

kamisamaaa

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-05-03T16:12:00+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年9月19日 at 21:45:44

Artist: Maruguri
Title: Kyuuri no Uta
Tags: [_Crystal] Crystal
BPM: 120
Filesize: 2566kb
Play Time: 01:08
Difficulties Available:

Crystal's Hard (2.75 stars, 153 notes)
Cucumber (3.58 stars, 216 notes)
Easy (1.23 stars, 68 notes)
Normal (1.69 stars, 98 notes)

Download: Maruguri - Kyuuri no Uta
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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小黄瓜之歌2号 0.0
1号在这里 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/170679
easy diff by me done
normal diff by me done
hard diff by Crystal done
cucumber diff by me done

Last edited by kamisamaaa 2014-10-21T08:14:22+00:00, edited 25 times in total.

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-05-04T10:03:37+00:00

first

sjoy

1,032 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2014-05-17T04:02:15+00:00

[easy]
00:11:848 (3) - 红线起的折返滑条很奇怪，虽然是跟钢琴，我建议别折返换1/2
00:14:598 (1) - 换1/1
00:15:598 (2) - 换折返
00:32:598 (1) - FIN
00:40:598 (1) - ^
00:48:598 (1) - ^
00:56:598 (1) - ^
01:04:598 (5) - ^
这些FIN都用S-FIN的记得ADDITION S-FIN
[Normal]
00:04:348 (4) - 换成单点+1/1滑条
00:12:098 (3) - whis
KIAI fin 参考E
00:54:348 (2) - whis
00:55:348 (2) - ^
01:04:598 (2) - 默默的哨音
[Cucumber]
这段NC没看懂
01:04:098 (6) - 我觉得用减速滑条感觉不错延长到01:04:473
S-FIN参考E

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-05-17T14:12:54+00:00

hi~ 如果你感觉可以的话我就加上hitsound~

Crystal's Hard

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Song~~~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 32598
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16598,20598,24598,28598,40598,48598
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Kyuuri no Uta
TitleUnicode:きゅうりのうた
Artist:Maruguri
ArtistUnicode:まるぐり
Creator:kamisamaaa
Version:Crystal's Hard
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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waxman

467 posts

Joined February 2012

waxman 2014-05-25T03:38:29+00:00

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ

[General]
01:08:098 - The end of slider is 01:08:098 is better like Crystal's Hard imo.

[Cucumber]
00:22:473 (5,1) - move to x:348 y:172 because 00:22:098 (4,5) - SD 0.64x 00:22:473 (5,1) - SD 0.50x. and According to 00:23:348 (4,5,1) - SD 0.50x.
00:27:598 (2,3) - Challenge or Ranked
00:35:598 (2) - you can use blanket here.
00:54:348 (2,3) - Ctrl+G? if you changed don't forget to change hit sound
01:04:598 (1) - I think it would add Finish.

[Crystal's Hard]
00:17:598 (4,5) - SD 2.1x it's too far at this section. SD 1.4~1.5x I guess. According to 00:16:598 (1,2,3)
00:26:098 (5,6) - nazi, stack perfectly.

[Normal]
01:04:598 (2) - x:464 y:228 I guess it's not good overlapping her on Normal diff.

[Easy]
Maybe it's overmapped overall. I recommend using 1/1 or 2/1 sliders.
1/2 blank is hard on Easy imo. 00:18:598 (3,4) - 00:31:098 (4,1) - 00:34:598 (2,3) - 00:38:598 (2,3) - 00:50:598 (2,3) - 00:54:598 (2,3) - 01:02:598 (3,4,5) -

GOOD LUCK.

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-05-25T04:12:42+00:00

sjoy wrote:
[easy]
00:11:848 (3) - 红线起的折返滑条很奇怪，虽然是跟钢琴，我建议别折返换1/2
00:14:598 (1) - 换1/1
00:15:598 (2) - 换折返
00:32:598 (1) - FIN
00:40:598 (1) - ^
00:48:598 (1) - ^
00:56:598 (1) - ^
01:04:598 (5) - ^
这些FIN都用S-FIN的记得ADDITION S-FIN
[Normal]
00:04:348 (4) - 换成单点+1/1滑条
00:12:098 (3) - whis
KIAI fin 参考E
00:54:348 (2) - whis
00:55:348 (2) - ^
01:04:598 (2) - 默默的哨音
[Cucumber]
这段NC没看懂
01:04:098 (6) - 我觉得用减速滑条感觉不错延长到01:04:473
S-FIN参考E

almost all fixed

waxman wrote:
QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ

[General]
01:08:098 - The end of slider is 01:08:098 is better like Crystal's Hard imo. okay

[Cucumber]
00:22:473 (5,1) - move to x:348 y:172 because 00:22:098 (4,5) - SD 0.64x 00:22:473 (5,1) - SD 0.50x. and According to 00:23:348 (4,5,1) - SD 0.50x. okay fixed DS here is a mistake
00:27:598 (2,3) - Challenge or Ranked ???
00:35:598 (2) - you can use blanket here. I prefer this kind of slider. blanket is not neccessery
00:54:348 (2,3) - Ctrl+G? if you changed don't forget to change hit sound why? here is a loop pattern
01:04:598 (1) - I think it would add Finish. haha I think a whistle here is funny >.< finish is a little loud for me.

[Normal]
01:04:598 (2) - x:464 y:228 I guess it's not good overlapping her on Normal diff. keep this. it's not hard to play imo

[Easy]
Maybe it's overmapped overall. I recommend using 1/1 or 2/1 sliders.
1/2 blank is hard on Easy imo. 00:18:598 (3,4) - 00:31:098 (4,1) - 00:34:598 (2,3) - 00:38:598 (2,3) - 00:50:598 (2,3) - 00:54:598 (2,3) - 01:02:598 (3,4,5) -
Amm...all use 1/1 is a little boring. these 1/2 is all reflect by music. easy to play
GOOD LUCK.

really thanks for mod >.<

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-05-30T12:11:19+00:00

waxman wrote:
QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ

[General]
01:08:098 - The end of slider is 01:08:098 is better like Crystal's Hard imo.

[Crystal's Hard]
00:17:598 (4,5) - SD 2.1x it's too far at this section. SD 1.4~1.5x I guess. According to 00:16:598 (1,2,3) i don't see any problem here.. low SV here causes high DS, but it doesn't mean hard to play, imo
00:26:098 (5,6) - nazi, stack perfectly. wat, it's already stacked perfectly

GOOD LUCK.

anyway, thanks

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-06-04T10:52:31+00:00

嗨,多功能小黃瓜.

Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

Background太小了.

Diff check part : Placement / Rhythm / Hitsound

[Easy]

Nothing to say.

[Normal]
Nothing to say,too. (Easy 和 Normal 都照flow走,沒什麼槽點.)
只有一點想說 :00:37:598 (3,4,3,4) - 怎麼前後段的NC設置不一樣?
[Crystal's Hard]
Placement

Nothing to say.

Rhythm

00:02:348 (4) - 這邊加個note會打的比較順暢,有鋼琴聲在這裡.

Hitsound

00:29:598 (2) - 忘記whistle?
00:40:598 (1) - 這個finish好像小聲了點(突然這邊音量就忽然變小了有點奇怪),提高10~20%?
00:56:598 (1) - ^

[Cucumber]
Placement

00:21:348 (5,6,1,2,3) - 我認為連打間距還是保持一致比較好?
00:27:598 (2,3) - 這個1/4連打跳有點坑.
00:47:973 (5,6) - 這個就還好,可以讀出來,不過還是建議換一下?
01:04:598 (1) - 看看能不能前面01:04:098 (6) 照弧度擺.

Rhythm

00:13:848 (1) - 或者可以跟個人聲,加個1/2 slider在這裡.

Hitsound

00:01:598 (3) - 開頭可以加上whistle,我覺得蠻適合的.
00:03:098 (2) - whistle?
00:24:348 (1) - ^
00:26:348 (1) - ^
00:40:598 (1) - 也是感覺finish音量有點小
00:56:598 (1) - ^

[Other]

Good Luck!

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-06-04T15:21:20+00:00

smallboat wrote:
嗨,多功能小黃瓜.

Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
Background太小了.
Diff check part : Placement / Rhythm / Hitsound
[Easy]

Nothing to say.

[Normal]
Nothing to say,too. (Easy 和 Normal 都照flow走,沒什麼槽點.)
只有一點想說 :00:37:598 (3,4,3,4) - 怎麼前後段的NC設置不一樣? 嗯重新nc了

[Cucumber]
Placement
00:21:348 (5,6,1,2,3) - 我認為連打間距還是保持一致比較好? 这种间距是我专门向这么弄因为我感觉歌曲是这感觉0.0
00:27:598 (2,3) - 這個1/4連打跳有點坑.
00:47:973 (5,6) - 這個就還好,可以讀出來,不過還是建議換一下? 这两个滑条跳不是常见梗么0.0 我DT了几次感觉挺舒服的
01:04:598 (1) - 看看能不能前面01:04:098 (6) 照弧度擺. 好改了
Rhythm
00:13:848 (1) - 或者可以跟個人聲,加個1/2 slider在這裡. 啥意思？
Hitsound
00:01:598 (3) - 開頭可以加上whistle,我覺得蠻適合的. 好
00:03:098 (2) - whistle? 好
00:24:348 (1) - ^ 这两个感觉不太想加
00:26:348 (1) - ^
00:40:598 (1) - 也是感覺finish音量有點小这个先这样吧因为歌曲比较柔和
00:56:598 (1) - ^
[Other]
Good Luck!

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-07-02T03:56:33+00:00

@smallboat: all fixed

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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Title:Kyuuri no Uta
TitleUnicode:きゅうりのうた
Artist:Maruguri
ArtistUnicode:まるぐり
Creator:kamisamaaa
Version:Crystal's Hard
Source:
Tags:[_Crystal]
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Ichigaki

1,767 posts

Joined February 2013

Ichigaki 2014-07-22T15:26:09+00:00

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map

Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪

Let me sing this...
Song of Cucumber
Cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, ohh, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber are deliciouuusss~ everyone eat cucumber~
Cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, ohh, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber are deliciouuusss~ everyone eat cucumber~

[General]
Nico Nico Douga D:

Nothing wrong, AiMod says nothing wrong too, but if you want, please fill tags with 'Nico Douga'

[Easy]

00:11:848 (3) - NC here, because you give 'finish' in end part of 00:09:098 (2) -

[Normal]
Clear~

[Crystal's Hard]

00:04:598 (4) - Remove NC?
00:10:098 (3) - Decrease to 00:10:348 - or red line behind, use 50% playback rate, i didn't hear anything in 00:10:473 -
00:39:973 - i hear a drum sound here, add circle in this timing

[Cucumber]

00:41:973 (4) - nothing here...

All diff doesn't have a major issue, so it's playable as well

Sorry for my bad mod or something like that, good luck for this Cucumber Song~

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-07-22T20:54:03+00:00

ichia7x wrote:
Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪

Let me sing this...
Song of Cucumber
Cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, ohh, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber are deliciouuusss~ everyone eat cucumber~
Cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, ohh, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber are deliciouuusss~ everyone eat cucumber~

[General]
Nico Nico Douga D:
Nothing wrong, AiMod says nothing wrong too, but if you want, please fill tags with 'Nico Douga'
[Easy]
00:11:848 (3) - NC here, because you give 'finish' in end part of 00:09:098 (2) -
[Normal]
Clear~

[Cucumber]
00:41:973 (4) - nothing here...
All diff doesn't have a major issue, so it's playable as well
Sorry for my bad mod or something like that, good luck for this Cucumber Song~

no change but still thanks for mod >.<

Ichigaki

1,767 posts

Joined February 2013

Ichigaki 2014-07-22T21:29:09+00:00

kamisamaaa wrote:
ichia7x wrote:
Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪

Let me sing this...
Song of Cucumber
Cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, ohh, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber are deliciouuusss~ everyone eat cucumber~
Cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, ohh, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber, cucumber are deliciouuusss~ everyone eat cucumber~

[General]
Nico Nico Douga D:
Nothing wrong, AiMod says nothing wrong too, but if you want, please fill tags with 'Nico Douga'
[Easy]
00:11:848 (3) - NC here, because you give 'finish' in end part of 00:09:098 (2) -
[Normal]
Clear~

[Cucumber]
00:41:973 (4) - nothing here...
All diff doesn't have a major issue, so it's playable as well
Sorry for my bad mod or something like that, good luck for this Cucumber Song~
no change but still thanks for mod >.<

I confused to search what part that i must mod in here... this's perfect

, thanks anyway~

Foreverends

992 posts

Joined July 2011

Foreverends 2014-07-23T09:31:42+00:00

hilo~ ow<~

Cucumber
00:03:098 (2,3,4,5) -

可以考慮這樣放

00:07:598 (1,2) - 或許間距再大點0.0?
00:12:598 (1) - 把這個放到x244 y228,這樣的話flow會比較順w

Crystal's Hard
00:22:098 (6) - Ctrl g一下好像會比較順www
沒了~
不愧是Crystal's Hard owo

歌短mod起來果然超方便XD
渣mod抱歉qwq
good luck \:D/

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-07-23T11:48:35+00:00

Foreverends wrote:
hilo~ ow<~

Cucumber
00:03:098 (2,3,4,5) -
可以考慮這樣放
这个我比较喜欢我现在的0.0
00:07:598 (1,2) - 或許間距再大點0.0? 好~
00:12:598 (1) - 把這個放到x244 y228,這樣的話flow會比較順w 这个是直线的反向flow note与滑条在一条线并且反向

歌短mod起來果然超方便XD 是吧~我就说短图很好摸>.<
渣mod抱歉qwq 没事感谢mod啊
good luck \:D/

thanks>.<

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-07-24T10:30:03+00:00

一个个收获的青瓜

[Cucumber]

00:24:098 (3) - 改为S:C2 finish
00:24:598 (3) - 头改为whistle
00:47:098 (3) - 尾巴改为normal-sampleset
00:48:348 (7) - 头改为normal-sampleset

[Crystal's Hard]

00:24:098 (6) - 头改为30%vol.加上S:C2 finish
00:24:598 (1) - 改为45%vol.加上whistle
00:31:598 取消whistle
00:32:098 取消clap

上面那两个取消的音效，那个地方应该是放一些类似normal的hit音效，但周围都没这种音效，所以还是统一取消没音效比较好，放whistle和clap很怪

[Normal]

00:16:598 (1,3,1,3) - 都补上normal-sampleset
00:23:598 (3) - 同insane

[Easy]

00:23:598 (5) - 同insane
00:52:598 取消finish

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-07-25T04:22:20+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
一个个收获的青瓜

[Cucumber]
00:24:098 (3) - 改为S:C2 finish 确实！这里我音效加的不对
00:24:598 (3) - 头改为whistle 跟上面的一起改了
00:47:098 (3) - 尾巴改为normal-sampleset 这个改了的话和后面的normal连接两下有点吵
00:48:348 (7) - 头改为normal-sampleset 好改了~
[Normal]
00:16:598 (1,3,1,3) - 都补上normal-sampleset 额我当时不知道怎么漏了这么多。
00:23:598 (3) - 同insane 改了~
[Easy]
00:23:598 (5) - 同insane fix
00:52:598 取消finish 又是一个错误。

非常感谢检查音效啊0.0
发现了好多问题>.<

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-07-28T08:20:45+00:00

@Sellenite, Foreverends: fixed all! thanks!
@ichia7x: all fixed except that nc. i will consider about that if someone else also points it out!

update

osu file format v13

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TitleUnicode:きゅうりのうた
Artist:Maruguri
ArtistUnicode:まるぐり
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Source:
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kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-07-28T08:47:05+00:00

Updated

XinCrin

2,846 posts

Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2014-07-28T19:23:05+00:00

Hi kamisamaaa. From my queue

Easy

00:03:098 (3) Move this slider to x:416 y:236 to improve the flow. You don't have to fix the spacing :3
00:05:848 (2,3) This pattern looks a bit hard to play for beginner players. The 1/2 slider should be a 1/1 slider . So , it will be more easy to read
00:11:848 (3,4) (^)
00:22:598 (4,5) Try to improve this blanket
00:31:098 (4) This slider should finish on 00:32:098 . Because it feels very unnecessary for an easy diff.

Normal

00:10:848 (1,2,3) This pattern doesn't flow very good. Try something like this: (Image + Code)
SPOILER
```
396,108,10848,2,0,P|388:72|388:44,1,60
320,28,11348,2,0,L|136:32,1,180
72,52,12348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
```
00:31:598 (2) Following the music , you should add a Sampleset Normal at slider end
00:41:598 (3) This slider follows better the music if you move it to 00:41:848. If you do this, don't forget to fix the spacing
00:44:348 (x) Following your rhythm patter , you should add a circle on here
00:55:598 (3) For consistency with your hitsounds pattern , you should use a sampleset normal at beginning of the slider instead a whistle
01:00:348 Same as 00:44:348 (x)

Crystal's Hard

HP +1, For a better consistency with OD
00:02:098 (3) Consider using a Whistle in this circle , since music deserves it!
00:08:598 (6) The music finishes on 00:08:598. So , you should replace this slider for a circle . It feels much better the music
00:31:598 (3,4) I feel that you should use some hitsounds in these sliders. Consider using drum sampleset on these ones
00:42:098 (5) A 1/3 slider doesn't follow the music properly . Change it for a 1/2 slider , it follows much better the music and makes a better sense on this.
SPOILER
00:58:098 (5) (^)

Cucumber

00:08:598 (1) Move this circle to x:16 y:148 for a better flow and a better spacing between (1) and (2)
00:51:598 (3) For consistency with you combo pattern. A New Combo here is too necessary
00:43:598 (4,5) It feels very separate to be a stream. Consider make it more close

Very solid map !. Good luck with your mapset!

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-07-29T04:13:25+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Hi kamisamaaa. From my queue

Easy

00:03:098 (3) Move this slider to x:416 y:236 to improve the flow. You don't have to fix the spacing :3 okay~fixed
00:05:848 (2,3) This pattern looks a bit hard to play for beginner players. The 1/2 slider should be a 1/1 slider . So , it will be more easy to read sure~
00:11:848 (3,4) (^) same
00:22:598 (4,5) Try to improve this blanket this is not blanket actually>.< I like this kind of slider and note
00:31:098 (4) This slider should finish on 00:32:098 . Because it feels very unnecessary for an easy diff. good idea
Normal
00:10:848 (1,2,3) This pattern doesn't flow very good. Try something like this: (Image + Code)
SPOILER
396,108,10848,2,0,P|388:72|388:44,1,60
320,28,11348,2,0,L|136:32,1,180
72,52,12348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
actually I think current is better>.<
00:31:598 (2) Following the music , you should add a Sampleset Normal at slider end yes you are right
00:41:598 (3) This slider follows better the music if you move it to 00:41:848. If you do this, don't forget to fix the spacing good idea! really sounds better
00:44:348 (x) Following your rhythm patter , you should add a circle on here why? I think add a note feel a little strange >.<
00:55:598 (3) For consistency with your hitsounds pattern , you should use a sampleset normal at beginning of the slider instead a whistle fixed
01:00:348 Same as 00:44:348 (x) same
Cucumber

00:08:598 (1) Move this circle to x:16 y:148 for a better flow and a better spacing between (1) and (2) looks better >.<
00:51:598 (3) For consistency with you combo pattern. A New Combo here is too necessary good catch
00:43:598 (4,5) It feels very separate to be a stream. Consider make it more close sorry I want to keep this. I have test it and feel easy to play

Very solid map !. Good luck with your mapset!

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-07-29T04:33:56+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Hi kamisamaaa. From my queue
Crystal's Hard

HP +1, For a better consistency with OD okay
00:02:098 (3) Consider using a Whistle in this circle , since music deserves it! added a whistle here
00:08:598 (6) The music finishes on 00:08:598. So , you should replace this slider for a circle . It feels much better the music i think it's fine
00:31:598 (3,4) I feel that you should use some hitsounds in these sliders. Consider using drum sampleset on these ones fixed
00:42:098 (5) A 1/3 slider doesn't follow the music properly . Change it for a 1/2 slider , it follows much better the music and makes a better sense on this.
SPOILER
00:58:098 (5) (^) i didn't see any problem here... will consider if someone else points it out

ty for modding!

update

osu file format v13

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PreviewTime: 32598
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Title:Kyuuri no Uta
TitleUnicode:きゅうりのうた
Artist:Maruguri
ArtistUnicode:まるぐり
Creator:kamisamaaa
Version:Crystal's Hard
Source:
Tags:[_Crystal]
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hehe

1,971 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2014-07-31T12:20:17+00:00

m4m~

[GENERAL]

upsized the BG, if you want to use: here.

[CUCUMBER]

00:07:348 (4) - put it further just like 00:03:598 (4,5) ?
00:17:473 (4,1) - in my opinion, can be placed closer slightly. right now the spacing lets you see a lot of 00:17:598 (1) , so it looks kind of weird. furthermore there is no continuous pattern like 00:31:598 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) , so it should be placed closer.
00:19:848 (6) - improve the slider
00:21:098 (4,5) - jump here is too big to transition into stream, should closer together too
00:21:473 (6,1) - same as 00:17:473 (4,1)
00:26:348 (1) - the trap here is quite weird to play, don't stack this
00:32:098 (1,2) - why don't follow the or 1-2? i think nice to follow!
00:34:098 (1,2) - jump is much too big, easy to get 100 in slider.
00:56:598 (1) - messy slider, messy blanket.
01:00:598 (1,2) - try to overlap half the circle, the space is weird. also, blanket issue? on 3.

[CRYSTAL'S HARD]

00:02:598 (1,2,3) - i suggest this, fit vocal better

SPOILER

00:13:098 (1,2) - suddenly big jump, break flow in slow part!!
00:19:098 (3,4) - err blanket can improve! use approachcircle and see ~
00:30:598 (3,1,2) - confusing spacing, need to increase between 3 and 1.
00:31:598 (3,4) - since repeat 2 time, i suggest overlap
00:36:098 (2) - ctrl+G, vocal change so slider change

00:43:848 (4) - just use 1/2 slider, short repeat don't fit
00:59:848 (4) - ^
01:03:848 (4) - i think follow pattern in insane is better, but up to you since GD ^^

[NORMAL]

its a boring map

i think patterns can change and improve. use more blanket!

00:36:598 (1) - here onwards, slider and circle don't even follow anything? it playable cuz circle on beat but no feeling x_x try:

SPOILER

don't even have to use elbow slider, normal curve can too! this pattern can reverse too. play more with slider, its fun!

00:52:598 (1) - ^

[EASY]

00:31:098 (4) - put spinner. this slider is very weird, cuz it transition from slow part to fast part but nothing happen. end it here.
00:32:598 - beat here!! >:O
00:33:348 (1,2,3) - this pattern is quite stale, repeat too many time, should change

. also, idk what is going on but it start on red tick here but everywhere else is white tick? i think fix.

nice map! nice song haha. PM me if you need clarification/搞清楚!

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-07-31T14:31:16+00:00

handsome wrote:
m4m~
[CRYSTAL'S HARD]

00:02:598 (1,2,3) - i suggest this, fit vocal better i want to keep mine sorry..
SPOILER
00:13:098 (1,2) - suddenly big jump, break flow in slow part!! i think it's fine since it's a 1/1 break
00:19:098 (3,4) - err blanket can improve! use approachcircle and see ~ yeah, fixed
00:30:598 (3,1,2) - confusing spacing, need to increase between 3 and 1. fixed
00:31:598 (3,4) - since repeat 2 time, i suggest overlap ok
00:36:098 (2) - ctrl+G, vocal change so slider change but too hard? :O
00:43:848 (4) - just use 1/2 slider, short repeat don't fit
00:59:848 (4) - ^ but i really love these guys ;w;
01:03:848 (4) - i think follow pattern in insane is better, but up to you since GD ^^ i will consider if it's really important that someone else points it out!
nice map! nice song haha. PM me if you need clarification/搞清楚![/notice]

thanks for modding!

update

osu file format v13

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Title:Kyuuri no Uta
TitleUnicode:きゅうりのうた
Artist:Maruguri
ArtistUnicode:まるぐり
Creator:kamisamaaa
Version:Crystal's Hard
Source:
Tags:[_Crystal]
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kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-07-31T15:21:39+00:00

handsome wrote:
m4m~ why you mod this map? this map doesn't do the M4M! I'm just waiting for bat. I have write in my queue.this map need M4M. anyway, I will mod your map later >.<

[GENERAL]

upsized the BG, if you want to use: here. this BG is cool! thx

[CUCUMBER]

00:07:348 (4) - put it further just like 00:03:598 (4,5) ?
00:17:473 (4,1) - in my opinion, can be placed closer slightly. right now the spacing lets you see a lot of 00:17:598 (1) , so it looks kind of weird. furthermore there is no continuous pattern like 00:31:598 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) , so it should be placed closer.
00:19:848 (6) - improve the slider
00:21:098 (4,5) - jump here is too big to transition into stream, should closer together too
00:21:473 (6,1) - same as 00:17:473 (4,1)
00:26:348 (1) - the trap here is quite weird to play, don't stack this
00:32:098 (1,2) - why don't follow the or 1-2? i think nice to follow!
00:34:098 (1,2) - jump is much too big, easy to get 100 in slider.
00:56:598 (1) - messy slider, messy blanket.
01:00:598 (1,2) - try to overlap half the circle, the space is weird. also, blanket issue? on 3.

[NORMAL]

its a boring map i think patterns can change and improve. use more blanket! actually I dont like blanket and rarely use it. btw, easy and normal diff doesn't need so many patterns.

00:36:598 (1) - here onwards, slider and circle don't even follow anything? it playable cuz circle on beat but no feeling x_x try:
SPOILER
don't even have to use elbow slider, normal curve can too! this pattern can reverse too. play more with slider, its fun!
00:52:598 (1) - ^

[EASY]

00:31:098 (4) - put spinner. this slider is very weird, cuz it transition from slow part to fast part but nothing happen. end it here.
00:32:598 - beat here!! >:O
00:33:348 (1,2,3) - this pattern is quite stale, repeat too many time, should change . also, idk what is going on but it start on red tick here but everywhere else is white tick? i think fix.

nice map! nice song haha. PM me if you need clarification/搞清楚!

fix some. thanks for mod >.<

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,233 posts

Joined June 2010

kanpakyin 2014-08-31T20:33:11+00:00

mark

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-09-01T03:39:43+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
mark

哇！终于要等到了。。。内牛满面

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-09-18T13:16:21+00:00

Still looks fine now, just a bit suggestion :

[Easy]

01:00:098 (6,1) - Keep a curve?
SPOILER
(If fix it ,don't forget to move next objects)
01:04:598 (5) - Follow the rank rules,seems this note need to remove it make beginner play easy better.

[Normal]

00:11:348 (2) - Move up a bit keep the curve.
00:40:598 (1,2,3) - Make the rhythm consistent with 00:56:598 (1,2,3) ?

[Crystal's Hard]

00:13:598 (2) - There is no voice here,perhaps you consider to remove it.
00:23:098 (2) - Sounds like the music feel this isn't need to do a jump here,keep the same DS?

[Cucumber]

00:05:848 (2) - Stack better.
00:27:473 (1,2,3) - This 1/4 pattern have a confused,keep the same DS here?
00:43:848 (5,6,1,2,3) - Feel this is the same combo part here,so suggest set NC at 00:43:848 (5) ,and removed this NC (00:44:098 (1))?
00:59:848 (5,6,1,2,3) - As the above reason.

Nice,if fix done,call me back.

kamisamaaa

605 posts

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kamisamaaa 2014-09-18T15:49:17+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Still looks fine now, just a bit suggestion :

[Easy]
01:00:098 (6,1) - Keep a curve?
SPOILER
(If fix it ,don't forget to move next objects)
01:04:598 (5) - Follow the rank rules,seems this note need to remove it make beginner play easy better.
[Normal]
00:11:348 (2) - Move up a bit keep the curve.
00:40:598 (1,2,3) - Make the rhythm consistent with 00:56:598 (1,2,3) ?
[Crystal's Hard]
00:13:598 (2) - There is no voice here,perhaps you consider to remove it.
00:23:098 (2) - Sounds like the music feel this isn't need to do a jump here,keep the same DS?
[Cucumber]
00:05:848 (2) - Stack better.
00:27:473 (1,2,3) - This 1/4 pattern have a confused,keep the same DS here?
00:43:848 (5,6,1,2,3) - Feel this is the same combo part here,so suggest set NC at 00:43:848 (5) ,and removed this NC (00:44:098 (1))?
00:59:848 (5,6,1,2,3) - As the above reason.

Nice,if fix done,call me back.

all fixed except this
01:04:598 (5) - Follow the rank rules,seems this note need to remove it make beginner play easy better.
thanks for mod

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-09-18T22:34:57+00:00

@smallboat: all fixed.

code

osu file format v13

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PreviewTime: 32598
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.3
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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Title:Kyuuri no Uta
TitleUnicode:きゅうりのうた
Artist:Maruguri
ArtistUnicode:まるぐり
Creator:kamisamaaa
Version:Crystal's Hard
Source:
Tags:[_Crystal]
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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-09-19T14:27:10+00:00

Rechecked it seems nice enough now.

Bubbled !

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-18T04:57:24+00:00

Bubbled maps are fun to mod

Insane:
00:17:348 (3,4,1,2,3) - Why this combo choice? if it's for the slight difference in spacing, it honestly isn't notable enough to warrant it.
00:21:348 (5,6,1,2,3) - ^
00:31:598 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ^

That's the only major thing I found. The rest of the map is fine B)

DoubiTime

1 post

Joined September 2013

DoubiTime 2014-10-18T15:50:25+00:00

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kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-10-18T15:51:25+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Bubbled maps are fun to mod

Insane:
00:17:348 (3,4,1,2,3) - Why this combo choice? if it's for the slight difference in spacing, it honestly isn't notable enough to warrant it.
00:21:348 (5,6,1,2,3) - ^
00:31:598 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ^

That's the only major thing I found. The rest of the map is fine B)

Hmmmm,,,sorry I want to keep them...
I use difference in spacing just because I want to make the stream more interesting in this part (before kiai time),,because BPM is really low
though it isn't notable enough to warrant

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-18T18:01:55+00:00

Although it's a bit weird, it's not technically unrankable nor does it affect gameplay all that much, sooooo.

Literally couldn't find anything apart from a youtube video of the song, so I'm going to assume the metadata is correct from the other ranked version, ranked 3 months ago.

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2014-10-18T18:04:51+00:00

小黄瓜把自己给rank了