Gunsillie wrote:
Hello Elness (don't you think I forgot you ^^).
It is funny you ask me to mod a map called "Snow halation", because I am currently mapping a song called "De;laytion of Snow". Really strange...
Oh well, let's get started anyway !
(You don't need to M4M, let's say I was already going to mod it :p)///////////////
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I often times focus my modding on placing and shapes, so I might not notice some issues in other parts.///////////////
[Normal]
General advice : I think it's a pretty good Normal in terms of enjoyability to play, and this rarely enough the case to be noticed !
• 00:21:657 (1,1) - There is a bit of polarity issue here, here is one among many possibility of making it clearer :
• 00:30:848 (2) - You can do a Ctrl+C of 1.
• 00:44:027 (1) - No overlapping of the previous slider.
• 00:58:246 (1) - Odd shape compared to the shape of your other sliders.
• 00:59:634 (1,2,3) - You have a symmetrical pattern, try to center it horizontally on the screen.
• 01:20:443 (1,2,3,4) - You have 2 polarity switching here, the problem is that the second one is not very readable. But by changing the first polarity the second one becomes clearer.Like so for instance• 01:49:576 (3) - Move the shaping dot on the head to (360;260) (I took my ruler :p)
You can either have a 1/2 slider or a circle for 2, or you can find another solution as well !
• 01:57:553 (3) - Align it with 2.
• 02:16:975 (4,1,2) - I suggest you to either remove 1 or do a rhythm like this :
[Hard]
General advice : I am less fan of it than I was with Normal, because the Normal was really better from an aesthetic standpoint, and of some rhythms an placing, but it's pretty nice nonetheless.
• 00:21:657 (1,1,2) - This rhythm doesn't feel nice here. I would rather do something like this :
• 00:28:073 (6,1,2) - This is hard to read, mostly because of where 1 is placed. I tried to make a different placing of everybody from 00:28:940 (1) to 00:30:154 (1), you should be able to see how it looks just with the picture below :
• 00:32:928 (1,2,3,4) - Odd shapes. Having Bézier curves is fine (I guess), but having them so discrete is strange.
• 00:35:009 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could look for a better-looking pattern.
• 00:42:639 (5) - No need for a Bézier curve I think.
• 00:55:125 (8) - This is not recommended. I used to use this kind of sliders, but apparently we should not, and I think a posteriori that it can almost always be replaced by something less "oldie".
• 00:57:900 (1) - You should consider breaking the symmetry because people will expect a jump here, which is actually not the case.
• 01:02:928 (5) - Would fit the vocal better if it were placed at 01:02:885.
• 01:06:223 (1,3) - See above, I don't think doing this is so bad, it's up to you.
• 01:09:345 (1,2,3) - This rhythm doesn't really fit into the music, try to rework it.
• 01:16:454 (4,7) - These sliders are really long !
• 01:22:004 (5,6) - You could replace these with circles.
• 02:03:796 (3) - You can overlap 02:02:755 (3)
• 02:04:836 (1) - You can overlap 02:03:449 (2)
• 02:25:298 (5,6,7) - You can look for a better flow :
[Insane]
General advice : This one has generally a nice flow and a good aesthetic, although some parts are strange to play.
• 00:21:657 (1) - I would really see a rhythm like pasted below play better :
• 00:25:298 (7,8) - These circles don't really fit the flow because you have to catch 00:25:645 (1) then. Maybe place them in the upper part of the grid ?
• 00:36:743 (3) - Snapping ?
• 00:38:824 (1) - Overlapping 6 looks and play fine.
• 00:44:027 (1) - If you do something like this, you can really overlap 5.
• 00:50:963 (1) - The shape should end in the direction of the stream.
• 01:06:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These "Death Jumps" hurt a lot because there is no flow which can allow you to make them well, since it was broken by the 4->1 overlap.
• 01:52:004 (1,2) - You could replace one of these (or both) with a stream.
• 02:06:917 (1,2,3) - This triplet (the single one of the map ?) is really unexpected and thus, hard to read.
• 02:20:270 (1,2,3,4,5) - Strange pattern, but nothing illegal^^
Thanks Gunsillie , some Fix it. <3