This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, March 25, 2014 at 12:06:05 PM

Artist: Kawada Mami
Title: Break a spell
Source: Tokyo Ravens
Tags: ED2
BPM: 175
Filesize: 7095kb
Play Time: 04:05
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.72 stars, 219 notes)
2. Hard (4.95 stars, 470 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 794 notes)

Download: Kawada Mami - Break a spell
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Pending. Need mods~ o:

Need for a Normal GD.

Insane, Hard and Easy are done.
Story board or Video is to be added soon.

M4M request.

[General]
-The MP3 file is 320 kbps. You can use Audacity to export it into a 192kbps, or just tell me and I'll export it. Because 320 kbps takes more space.
-Widescreen Support is for storyboard, in this case, you don't have. You can untick the option.
-In the tags, ED2 doesn't seem to be a thing that we know. Since this song's an ending song from an anime, why not write simply "ending".

[Easy]
-For me, countdowns don't fit in maps. Maybe you can disable the option.
-Reduce the Approach Rate to one tick?
00:31:301 (1) - Replace the slider by a curve slider that envelop 00:30:958 (3) , like this:
00:35:416 (3) - This is nazi. Move the las point to x:245 y:163.
00:36:787 (4) - Add a new combo.
00:38:158 (5) (If you edit the suggestion before, this note should be 00:38:158 (2) )- Replace this note into a three points slider. The 1st at x:352 y:197, 2nd: 387 y:133, and 3rd at x:370 y:39.
01:26:158 (8) - Add a new combo.
01:28:901 (1) - End the spinner at 01:31:644 , since the kiai time ends here.
02:55:302 (1) - Remove the new combo, and add it to 02:56:673 (3) .
02:58:044 (1) - Remove the new combo.
03:18:615 (8) - Add a new combo.
03:44:673 (2) - I think you should move it to x:267 y:113, since the previous note is too close to it.
03:57:187 (9) - Add a new combo.
03:57:530 (10) - Add a finish hitsound.
-I really like the way you make those patterns.

[Insane]
Nothing to say.

This is it. Good Luck on ranking this map, and here a star.

192kbs mp3 file -> http://puu.sh/7idAk.mp3 (right click-save as, and just overwrite your file. No offset changes should be needed.)

Was going to mod this but other things came up. Plus you still have to look over sheela's mod. Good luck!

No KDs please.

Thanks a lot both of you. Sheela I will mod your map as soon as possible! It's noted, thanks for the star *^ *

updated.

Hello :3

[Insane]
00:47:416 (4,1) - Blank these two :3
01:00:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Change this to something another, it looks ugly
01:33:615 (1) - Why this have another DS than others?
01:44:758 - Add note there, with the drums
02:12:102 (7) - NC please :3
02:12:102 (7) - Add note, right now with the vocal
03:20:501 - ^

Pretty cool and funny diff ^^

[Hard]
00:59:758 (4) - Move little right to make blanket
02:18:787 (2,3) - Blankblankblank
03:00:787 (7) - NC plz

Awesome diff i love it <3

[Easy]
02:55:644 (4) - Try to make this:
03:57:187 (1,2) - This spacing is ugly :c

I think it is too much difference behind easy & hard.

03:57:187 (1,2) - This spacing is ugly :c
It's actual distance snap ;w;...

01:00:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Change this to something another, it looks ugly
Nothing comes to my mind at the moment so it will stay as it is.

01:33:615 (1) - Why this have another DS than others?
What do you mean by DS?

02:12:102 (7) - Add note, right now with the vocal
03:20:501 - ^
I didn't get the vocal part of your mod here.

rest applied, thank you~

Hi, m4m ^~^

[General]
The volume of your hitsounds is too high compared to osu! soft-hitnormal.
At full osu! volume I sometimes feel the soft hitnormal hitsound used at the start of the map can't be heard (Especialy in Insane). Maybe put the hitsound volume higher.

[Insane]
01:09:358 (1,2,1) - Hitsounds are impossible to hear, you should up the volume.
00:54:273 (5) - Disturbing hitsound change
01:33:615 (1) - You should try to use the same spacing as the rest of the stream.
02:07:215 - Maybe extend the 7 slider to here, there is the same sond you are folowing before here so it feels like

something is missing.
03:01:987 (4) - Endpoint 1 grid lower looks better imo.
03:21:358 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Put hitsound volume higher it's imposible to hear them.

[Hard]
01:09:701 (1) - This sonds realy wired imo. Maybe you can do two sliders. One starting from here and ending at 01:10:215 - and the second one starting on 01:10:558 - and ending on 01:11:072 -
01:49:644 - The vocal here without notes feel empty. Adding a slider from here to 01:49:815 - ?
02:36:787 - The sound you follow with next (1,2,3) start here, so why there isn't a note here ?
03:19:301 (1) - Starting at 03:19:130 - ending at 03:19:644 - folowing the vocal seams better and the vocal have a holding note nice for sliders.
03:21:358 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Volume hitsounds up.
03:48:958 - The thing you are folowing before and after this spot have a sound here, add a note ?

[Easy]
01:09:701 (1) - Same as hard
01:11:415 - The sound you folow with the end of (1) and (2,3) is here too so add a note ?
03:19:301 (2,3) - You could do a slider starting at 03:19:130 - , ending at 03:19:644 - it fit the vocal.
03:21:358 (1,2,3,4) - Volume hitsounds up.
03:25:815 - The sound you folow with the end of (1) and (2,3) is here too so add a note ?
03:45:358 - Form here and before (1) I think you have useless green lines.

Good luck

uhh mod 4 mod via ur queue

[General]
You should get a BG from Tokyo Ravens lol.
is normal WIP?

[Insane]

1. 00:30:959 (4,5) - ctrl g?
2. 01:36:788 (4,5) - ^
3. 02:56:330 (7) - ^
4. 00:31:816 (3) - better flow if u had a small curve here
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:33:188 (4,5) - so like blanket?
6. 00:40:559 (3,1) - too confusing to read ._.
7. 00:43:302 (4,1) - ^
8. 00:45:016 (1) - suggestion:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:45:530 (2,3) - blanket better
10. 01:00:530 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think i prefer a curve
11. 01:02:502 (5) - another suggestion for better looks
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:04:902 (1,3) - stack
13. 01:10:216 (3,3) - ^
14. 03:34:730 (6,2) - ^
15. 01:14:158 (2,5,6,7,8) - make better curve
16. 01:20:330 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
17. 01:56:673 (3,5) - space these out a bit
18. 02:53:415 (6) - curve other way
19. 02:58:730 (5,6) - why naut make parallel

[Hard]

1. 00:31:301 (3,4) - rhythm feels really weird here .-. why the pause and stuff? what part are u trying to map?
2. 00:59:758 (4) - might flow better if u ctrl g
3. 00:47:930 (5,2) - u COULD try to stack
4. 01:06:272 (5,1) - this jump might catch some ppl off guard since they might assume to click to (2)
5. 01:06:958 - again i just don't understand why there's a pause here lol
6. 01:17:930 (1) - ctrl g and ofc rearrange (2) (better flow from previous slider)
7. 01:27:015 (2,3) - bad overlap wahh
8. 01:48:616 (4,5) - so like blanket?
9. 01:48:616 (4,5) - ctrl g?
10. 02:00:958 (2) - ctrl g this then ctrl g 02:01:473 (3,4) -
11. 02:16:044 (2,3) - make parallel
12. 02:27:016 (2,3) - ^
13. 02:58:730 (2,3) - space out a bit
14. 03:00:787 (1,2) - make parallel and space out
15. 03:01:472 (3,4) - ^
16. 03:15:530 (4,4) - stack
17. 03:48:444 (4) - why is this a brezier. remake and blanket better
18. 03:53:930 (3,4,5,6,1) - spacing looks messy

[Easy]

1. 00:32:673 (3) - this blanket could be improved a bit. looks off right now
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:35:416 (3) - move middle sliderpoint 1 grid down o3o (wow so nazi)
3. 00:57:358 (4,1) - too close, space out
   Just some blankets and stuff can be improved a bit

Overall just refine ur sliders and stuff, make them look a bit nicer and neater

Good luck!

Arnold0 wrote:

Hi, m4m ^~^

[General]
The volume of your hitsounds is too high compared to osu! soft-hitnormal.
At full osu! volume I sometimes feel the soft hitnormal hitsound used at the start of the map can't be heard (Especialy in Insane). Maybe put the hitsound volume higher.

[Insane]
01:09:358 (1,2,1) - Hitsounds are impossible to hear, you should up the volume. They are not mean to be heard, it's a silence moment before the Kiai time.
00:54:273 (5) - Disturbing hitsound change ~ok
01:33:615 (1) - You should try to use the same spacing as the rest of the stream. ~ok
02:07:215 - Maybe extend the 7 slider to here, there is the same sond you are folowing before here so it feels like something is missing.I instead added on more reverse. Extending the slider sounds off.
03:01:987 (4) - Endpoint 1 grid lower looks better imo. ~ok
03:21:358 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Put hitsound volume higher it's imposible to hear them. They are not mean to be heard, it's a silence moment before the Kiai time.

[Hard]
01:09:701 (1) - This sonds realy wired imo. Maybe you can do two sliders. One starting from here and ending at 01:10:215 - and the second one starting on 01:10:558 - and ending on 01:11:072 - ~ok
01:49:644 - The vocal here without notes feel empty. Adding a slider from here to 01:49:815 - ? Added one more object.
02:36:787 - The sound you follow with next (1,2,3) start here, so why there isn't a note here ? ~ok
03:19:301 (1) - Starting at 03:19:130 - ending at 03:19:644 - folowing the vocal seams better and the vocal have a holding note nice for sliders.
03:21:358 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Volume hitsounds up. They are not mean to be heard, it's a silence moment before the Kiai time.
03:48:958 - The thing you are folowing before and after this spot have a sound here, add a note ? ~ok

[Easy]
01:09:701 (1) - Same as hard Nah, this will stay as it is cause more sliders makes it complicated, the vocals are a lot to cover.
01:11:415 - The sound you folow with the end of (1) and (2,3) is here too so add a note ? I don't want to increase the difficulty more, new players needs the small breaks to catch up on the rhythm
03:19:301 (2,3) - You could do a slider starting at 03:19:130 - , ending at 03:19:644 - it fit the vocal. ~Changed
03:21:358 (1,2,3,4) - Volume hitsounds up. They are not mean to be heard, it's a silence moment before the Kiai time.
03:25:815 - The sound you folow with the end of (1) and (2,3) is here too so add a note ? I don't want to increase the difficulty more, new players needs the small breaks to catch up on the rhythm
03:45:358 - Form here and before (1) I think you have useless green lines. ~Removed

Good luck

Thanks.

Kibbleru wrote:

uhh mod 4 mod via ur queue

[General]
You should get a BG from Tokyo Ravens lol. No thanks, I mapped this song cause I love the singer, not for the Anime. :3
is normal WIP? Well I don't have any :c.. I need one~ T_T

[Insane]

1. 00:30:959 (4,5) - ctrl g? ~ok
2. 01:36:788 (4,5) - ^ ~ok
3. 02:56:330 (7) - ^ ~ok
4. 00:31:816 (3) - better flow if u had a small curve here ~ok
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:33:188 (4,5) - so like blanket? ~ok
6. 00:40:559 (3,1) - too confusing to read ._. ~Changed
7. 00:43:302 (4,1) - ^ ~ok
8. 00:45:016 (1) - suggestion: ~ok
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:45:530 (2,3) - blanket better ~ok
10. 01:00:530 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think i prefer a curve ~ok
11. 01:02:502 (5) - another suggestion for better looks ~ok
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:04:902 (1,3) - stack ~ok
13. 01:10:216 (3,3) - ^ ~ok
14. 03:34:730 (6,2) - ^ ~ok
15. 01:14:158 (2,5,6,7,8) - make better curve ~ok
16. 01:20:330 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^ ~ok
17. 01:56:673 (3,5) - space these out a bit~ok based on distance snap.
18. 02:53:415 (6) - curve other way ~ok
19. 02:58:730 (5,6) - why naut make parallel ~ok

[Hard]

1. 00:31:301 (3,4) - rhythm feels really weird here .-. why the pause and stuff? what part are u trying to map? ~I'd like a mod than complaints, what you suggest for the part?
2. 00:59:758 (4) - might flow better if u ctrl g ~ok
3. 00:47:930 (5,2) - u COULD try to stack ~Nope. They are in different patterns ._.
4. 01:06:272 (5,1) - this jump might catch some ppl off guard since they might assume to click to (2) ~That's why there's new combo there. Aside the vocal change
5. 01:06:958 - again i just don't understand why there's a pause here lol ~Changed
6. 01:17:930 (1) - ctrl g and ofc rearrange (2) (better flow from previous slider) ~ok
7. 01:27:015 (2,3) - bad overlap wahh ~Fixed
8. 01:48:616 (4,5) - so like blanket? ~Fixed
9. 01:48:616 (4,5) - ctrl g? ~Fixed
10. 02:00:958 (2) - ctrl g this then ctrl g 02:01:473 (3,4) - ~Fixed
11. 02:16:044 (2,3) - make parallel ~Fixed
12. 02:27:016 (2,3) - ^ ~Fixed
13. 02:58:730 (2,3) - space out a bit ~Fixed
14. 03:00:787 (1,2) - make parallel and space out ~Fixed
15. 03:01:472 (3,4) - ^ ~Fixed
16. 03:15:530 (4,4) - stack ~How am I supposed to stack those o.O
17. 03:48:444 (4) - why is this a brezier. remake and blanket better ~Fixed
18. 03:53:930 (3,4,5,6,1) - spacing looks messy ~Fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:32:673 (3) - this blanket could be improved a bit. looks off right now ~I made it using the approach circle, it's fine.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:35:416 (3) - move middle sliderpoint 1 grid down o3o (wow so nazi) ~lolk.
3. 00:57:358 (4,1) - too close, space out ~It's easy. No space outs. I used distance snap.
   Just some blankets and stuff can be improved a bit

Overall just refine ur sliders and stuff, make them look a bit nicer and neater

Good luck!

Thank you :3

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