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Hello, As requested ٩( ᐛ )و
00:09:193 (5) - Try to blanket with (4) ?
00:10:814 (2,1) - Distance Snap
00:14:099 (4,1) - ^
00:22:262 (1) - This spinner should start at 00:21:936
00:27:805 (2,3) - Distance Snap
00:31:718 (4,1) - ^
00:35:631 (3,4,1) - ^
00:40:196 (4,1,2) - ^
00:41:827 (2,3,4) - ^
00:46:718 (4,1) - ^
00:54:544 (3) - Blanket with (2) ?
00:57:805 (2,1) - Distance Snap
01:00:414 (1,2) - ^
01:06:609 (1,2) - ^
01:07:588 (2,3) - ^
01:20:631 (3,4) - ^
00:00:922 (2,3) - Distance Snap
00:04:003 (2) - Stack it with (5)
00:06:598 (2,3) - Overlapping =/
00:09:841 (2,3) - Distance Snap (Even if the speed changed)
00:14:099 (1) - This hitsound is .... .... .... not fine for this part x3
00:14:099 (1,2) - Put these circles at x:240 y:136 ?
00:16:694 (5) - Finish hitsound ?
00:19:001 (6,1) - Distance Snap
00:19:327 (1,2,3,4) - Too many overlaps =/
00:26:501 (3) - Overlap with (1)
00:30:088 (6) - Overlapping, place it at x:288 y:24 ?
00:36:283 (5,1,2,3,1) - Distance Snap
00:42:479 (5) - x:424 y:184 ?
00:46:881 (3,4) - Distance Snap
01:15:088 (1,2) - ^
01:21:936 (2,3) - ^
I love kiai time's hitsounds, why don't you used them in all parts of the song ? *ω*
Too many hitsounds, please remove them (°ω °)
00:15:396 (1,2,3,4) - Too hard ~
00:34:979 (1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why so many NC ?
00:38:566 (2) - Remove hitsounds
00:41:175 (2) - ^
There's a green line which remove a part of the Kiai time =(
The mapping is too random/nonsense here =3
Good luck╭( ･ㅂ･)و
Normal
00:05:625 (5,1) - Distance Snap00:09:193 (5) - Try to blanket with (4) ?
00:10:814 (2,1) - Distance Snap
00:14:099 (4,1) - ^
00:22:262 (1) - This spinner should start at 00:21:936
00:27:805 (2,3) - Distance Snap
00:31:718 (4,1) - ^
00:35:631 (3,4,1) - ^
00:40:196 (4,1,2) - ^
00:41:827 (2,3,4) - ^
00:46:718 (4,1) - ^
00:54:544 (3) - Blanket with (2) ?
00:57:805 (2,1) - Distance Snap
01:00:414 (1,2) - ^
01:06:609 (1,2) - ^
01:07:588 (2,3) - ^
01:20:631 (3,4) - ^
Hard
HP Drain -> 500:00:922 (2,3) - Distance Snap
00:04:003 (2) - Stack it with (5)
00:06:598 (2,3) - Overlapping =/
00:09:841 (2,3) - Distance Snap (Even if the speed changed)
00:14:099 (1) - This hitsound is .... .... .... not fine for this part x3
00:14:099 (1,2) - Put these circles at x:240 y:136 ?
00:16:694 (5) - Finish hitsound ?
00:19:001 (6,1) - Distance Snap
00:19:327 (1,2,3,4) - Too many overlaps =/
00:26:501 (3) - Overlap with (1)
00:30:088 (6) - Overlapping, place it at x:288 y:24 ?
00:36:283 (5,1,2,3,1) - Distance Snap
00:42:479 (5) - x:424 y:184 ?
00:46:881 (3,4) - Distance Snap
01:15:088 (1,2) - ^
01:21:936 (2,3) - ^
I love kiai time's hitsounds, why don't you used them in all parts of the song ? *ω*
Insane
Too many hitsounds, please remove them (°ω °)
00:15:396 (1,2,3,4) - Too hard ~
00:34:979 (1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why so many NC ?
00:38:566 (2) - Remove hitsounds
00:41:175 (2) - ^
There's a green line which remove a part of the Kiai time =(
The mapping is too random/nonsense here =3
Good luck╭( ･ㅂ･)و
Topic Starter
thanks for the modding! 
I still need time to explore how to use DS deeply.. ...
btw... I dont want to change that part
00:15:396 (1,2,3,4)
coz I think its not hard and its playable, sry tho
I still need time to explore how to use DS deeply.. ...
btw... I dont want to change that part
00:15:396 (1,2,3,4)
coz I think its not hard and its playable, sry tho
Topic Starter
have edited all the diff again
Hi~
Maybe your map has been much better. but still sees many unrankable notes and not good spacing notes.
t/180729
refer this to make more nice map,
You should get more mod.
Maybe your map has been much better. but still sees many unrankable notes and not good spacing notes.
t/180729
refer this to make more nice map,
You should get more mod.
Topic Starter
ok thanks
Looks like you are new to mapping, I hope you are having fun so far! 
Instead of pointing out all the errors, I will show you how to fix them~~~
Have fun mapping!
Instead of pointing out all the errors, I will show you how to fix them~~~
[Normal]
Since your spacing is not consistent, I strongly recommend you turn on 1.0x distance snap for the whole song. By default the shortcut for distance snap is 'Y', and you can increase/decrease it by holding down 'alt' and scrolling/dragging the bar at the top right corner.
Timing:
I suggest changing BPM to 184. If you listen to the second half of the song while in the timing tab, you will see that the downbeat is not accurate. Changing it to 184 should make the downbeat the same throughout the song. Downbeat is basically the '1' in 1-2-3-4 when you hear the four ticks in the timing section.
You only need one normal timing point (red dot). Since you added multiple timing points but only used them to adjust volume, I suggest relpacing them with inherited points so it does not change the offset of your song. In addition to that, you only need one BPM for most songs.
00:03:030 (2) - make sure you keep spacing consistent in a normal difficulty, this should be 0.9x distance snap
00:04:328 (3,4,5) - proper beat spacing is important in this map, for now I recommend you stick to 1.0x distance snap multiplier and keep it on for the whole song. Beat spacing is important because here, your (3)(4)(5) are the same distance apart on the timeline from each other, but you did not place them the same distance apart on the map. Distance snap will help fix errors like this~
00:06:598 (1,2,3) - same thing as above.
From here on, I will stop listing beat spacing errors since I think you understand the general idea now~
00:32:696 (1) - If this was spaced correctly, then I would have told you to not make them overlap. When possible, try to avoid overlapping sliders unless distance snap makes you do it. However, sometimes when distance snap makes small overlaps, you can break distance snap and reposition the object that overlaps, as long as you don't move the object that far.
01:20:641 (3,4) - try to blanket these so it looks nice
Blanketing is a technique where you have a slider that goes around, or wraps a hit circle or another slider's hit circle, sort of like how a blanket is wrapped around a person. This makes the map look nice and also smoother to picture above. Here's another example: Notice how the slider goes around the approach circle, this way you can make sure that the curve on the slider is round. Here's an example of a slider blanketing another slider: . So next time you have a hit circle and slider but are not sure how you should make them look, it doesn't hurt to try and blanket them
Since your spacing is not consistent, I strongly recommend you turn on 1.0x distance snap for the whole song. By default the shortcut for distance snap is 'Y', and you can increase/decrease it by holding down 'alt' and scrolling/dragging the bar at the top right corner.
Timing:
I suggest changing BPM to 184. If you listen to the second half of the song while in the timing tab, you will see that the downbeat is not accurate. Changing it to 184 should make the downbeat the same throughout the song. Downbeat is basically the '1' in 1-2-3-4 when you hear the four ticks in the timing section.
You only need one normal timing point (red dot). Since you added multiple timing points but only used them to adjust volume, I suggest relpacing them with inherited points so it does not change the offset of your song. In addition to that, you only need one BPM for most songs.
00:03:030 (2) - make sure you keep spacing consistent in a normal difficulty, this should be 0.9x distance snap
00:04:328 (3,4,5) - proper beat spacing is important in this map, for now I recommend you stick to 1.0x distance snap multiplier and keep it on for the whole song. Beat spacing is important because here, your (3)(4)(5) are the same distance apart on the timeline from each other, but you did not place them the same distance apart on the map. Distance snap will help fix errors like this~
00:06:598 (1,2,3) - same thing as above.
From here on, I will stop listing beat spacing errors since I think you understand the general idea now~
00:32:696 (1) - If this was spaced correctly, then I would have told you to not make them overlap. When possible, try to avoid overlapping sliders unless distance snap makes you do it. However, sometimes when distance snap makes small overlaps, you can break distance snap and reposition the object that overlaps, as long as you don't move the object that far.
01:20:641 (3,4) - try to blanket these so it looks nice
Blanketing is a technique where you have a slider that goes around, or wraps a hit circle or another slider's hit circle, sort of like how a blanket is wrapped around a person. This makes the map look nice and also smoother to picture above. Here's another example: Notice how the slider goes around the approach circle, this way you can make sure that the curve on the slider is round. Here's an example of a slider blanketing another slider: . So next time you have a hit circle and slider but are not sure how you should make them look, it doesn't hurt to try and blanket them
[Hard]
00:32:696 (1,2,3) - try to have the same distance between each note here since on the timeline they are the same distance apart (proper beat spacing)
00:33:022 (3) - I prefer a curvy slider here to match the vocal, but that's just me Also, since the slider velocity changes, it's a good idea to make this a new combo to indicate a slider velocity change.
01:08:566 (6) - I recommend adding a note at this spot to match the vocal
01:23:493 (4) - Again, it helps if you indicate a slider velocity change with new combo. It's also appropriate in this case since this is the last slider in the song~
00:32:696 (1,2,3) - try to have the same distance between each note here since on the timeline they are the same distance apart (proper beat spacing)
00:33:022 (3) - I prefer a curvy slider here to match the vocal, but that's just me Also, since the slider velocity changes, it's a good idea to make this a new combo to indicate a slider velocity change.
01:08:566 (6) - I recommend adding a note at this spot to match the vocal
01:23:493 (4) - Again, it helps if you indicate a slider velocity change with new combo. It's also appropriate in this case since this is the last slider in the song~
[Insane]
00:15:315 (9,1,2) - the jumps between these notes are too large considering how much time you have, I recommend reducing the repeat on each slider by one and deleting the last note in the stream (9). If not, then put the notes closer together.
00:35:305 (4,1,2,4,1,2) - have it so the new combo is on the beginning of each triplet, it looks neater this way
01:06:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is really hard to read, I suggest remapping this somehow. It is very hard for the player to tell when the slider is when there are that many approach circles because you stacked everything.
00:15:315 (9,1,2) - the jumps between these notes are too large considering how much time you have, I recommend reducing the repeat on each slider by one and deleting the last note in the stream (9). If not, then put the notes closer together.
00:35:305 (4,1,2,4,1,2) - have it so the new combo is on the beginning of each triplet, it looks neater this way
01:06:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is really hard to read, I suggest remapping this somehow. It is very hard for the player to tell when the slider is when there are that many approach circles because you stacked everything.
[Vincent's Insane]
Timing:
You don't need all the timing points, inherited timing points alone are fine since you don't need to change BPM. Especially the two timing points near the end where they occur on the same time as an inherited point, you can delete those. Make BPM 184 and offset 1085, should be fine like that.
Also you can add kiai time if you want since the other difficulties have it, you can have it start at 00:53:240 - and end around 01:19:327 - or so.
00:06:274 (5,1) - seems more logical to space these apart more. If not, you can make (1) and (6) stack: 00:05:625 (6,1) -
00:06:959 (3,4,5,6,7) - it's a good idea to make the jumps roughly the same distance
00:26:484 (3,4,5) - big jumps between the notes, consider moving them closer together
00:27:153 (1,2) - you can space these out more
00:29:436 (3,4) - same here. Try to look for parts like this and change them on your own
01:14:109 (9) - make this a new combo as it's the start of a new phrase and the guitar starts
01:16:392 (1) - remove new combo and move it to the next note instead
01:16:718 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - fun part~
Timing:
You don't need all the timing points, inherited timing points alone are fine since you don't need to change BPM. Especially the two timing points near the end where they occur on the same time as an inherited point, you can delete those. Make BPM 184 and offset 1085, should be fine like that.
Also you can add kiai time if you want since the other difficulties have it, you can have it start at 00:53:240 - and end around 01:19:327 - or so.
00:06:274 (5,1) - seems more logical to space these apart more. If not, you can make (1) and (6) stack: 00:05:625 (6,1) -
00:06:959 (3,4,5,6,7) - it's a good idea to make the jumps roughly the same distance
00:26:484 (3,4,5) - big jumps between the notes, consider moving them closer together
00:27:153 (1,2) - you can space these out more
00:29:436 (3,4) - same here. Try to look for parts like this and change them on your own
01:14:109 (9) - make this a new combo as it's the start of a new phrase and the guitar starts
01:16:392 (1) - remove new combo and move it to the next note instead
01:16:718 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - fun part~
Have fun mapping!
Greetings from my mod queue!
First thing I noticed is your timing points are a little wrong so have some new timing points! It's gonna be a fair bit work but be sure to make sure all the notes and green timing points you already have are then snapped correctly as well.
Next is that hitsounds as a whole seem to be lacking a little bit. I personally love hitsounding and would be happy to do it for you if you wish.
Phew, that one took a little while gotta say. Hopefully it's helpful for you, feel free to pm me if you have any other queries n' stuff n' stuff.
Good luck with the map!
First thing I noticed is your timing points are a little wrong so have some new timing points! It's gonna be a fair bit work but be sure to make sure all the notes and green timing points you already have are then snapped correctly as well.
Next is that hitsounds as a whole seem to be lacking a little bit. I personally love hitsounding and would be happy to do it for you if you wish.
Normal
There are a lot of cases of things not quite distance snapped properly, I'd advise just to check the whole map as a long combo with aimod to find them.
00:01:733 (2) - Remove NC, the combos in general seem a little erratic. All the nc suggestions here will slot them into the 2 bar phrases which are in the song better.
00:03:030 (2) - Add NC
00:07:571 (3) - Add NC
00:09:193 (5,1) - Make (5) NC instead of the (1) here.
00:12:477 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:748 (1,2) - Ctrl-g these two
00:17:342 (1,2) - I suggest bringing these 2 sliders forward like this. Fits the vocal line much better.
00:19:327 (3) - Add NC, the slider itself also doesn't fit the rhythm in the song I would just make it a simple slider like this.
00:21:283 (1) - Remove NC
00:27:153 (1) - I would personally add a circle before this at 00:26:827 (1) for the vocals.
00:31:718 (4) - Moving this to 152,88 both solves readability as well as distance snapping issues in one stroke here.
00:38:892 (2) - Nothing happens on this beat, shift the slider to the red tick on the right to match with the music better. You would then need remove one of the arrows on the slider too.
00:44:272 (5) - Same as above
00:40:196 (4) - Add NC
00:41:175 (1) - Remove NC
00:42:805 (3) - Add NC
00:45:414 (2,3) - Same issue with the sliders as before.
00:46:718 (4,1) - I would put a hitcircle in the middle of these too. That's an important beat there! D:
00:51:936 (4,1) - I would ctrl-c (4) and place it in between these two here to complete the fill.
01:07:588 (2,3) - I would place a hitcircle in the middle as before.
Nothing too problematic that I can see though, just remember to go through the distance spacing thoroughly.
00:01:733 (2) - Remove NC, the combos in general seem a little erratic. All the nc suggestions here will slot them into the 2 bar phrases which are in the song better.
00:03:030 (2) - Add NC
00:07:571 (3) - Add NC
00:09:193 (5,1) - Make (5) NC instead of the (1) here.
00:12:477 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:748 (1,2) - Ctrl-g these two
00:17:342 (1,2) - I suggest bringing these 2 sliders forward like this. Fits the vocal line much better.
00:19:327 (3) - Add NC, the slider itself also doesn't fit the rhythm in the song I would just make it a simple slider like this.
00:21:283 (1) - Remove NC
00:27:153 (1) - I would personally add a circle before this at 00:26:827 (1) for the vocals.
00:31:718 (4) - Moving this to 152,88 both solves readability as well as distance snapping issues in one stroke here.
00:38:892 (2) - Nothing happens on this beat, shift the slider to the red tick on the right to match with the music better. You would then need remove one of the arrows on the slider too.
00:44:272 (5) - Same as above
00:40:196 (4) - Add NC
00:41:175 (1) - Remove NC
00:42:805 (3) - Add NC
00:45:414 (2,3) - Same issue with the sliders as before.
00:46:718 (4,1) - I would put a hitcircle in the middle of these too. That's an important beat there! D:
00:51:936 (4,1) - I would ctrl-c (4) and place it in between these two here to complete the fill.
01:07:588 (2,3) - I would place a hitcircle in the middle as before.
Nothing too problematic that I can see though, just remember to go through the distance spacing thoroughly.
Hard
00:13:126 (1) - Remove nc, still part of the same phrase hence no need for single combo combos. Also worth noting you'll need to give the bats a really good explanation for any single combo things if you want it to be ranked.
00:16:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above, just belongs to the combo before.
00:16:532 (4,5) - This pattern is plenty hard enough without the jump, I'd just make (5) part of the arc you've made already.
00:25:522 (1,2) - Bit difficult to read with the stack, I would move (2) to the side to unstack them.
00:26:501 (3,4) - The distance here is a little confusing, I would either snap it to a 0.9x spacing or make it more obvious that it's a larger distance than before.
00:46:718 (1,2,3) - It feels silly this being the only 1/4 hitcircle in the whole map, the overmap doesn't make sense either. You could put more 1/4 notes in elsewhere but I would just remove this one and leave those sorts of rhythms in the insane.
00:46:718 (1) - Remove the combo as well, combines nicely with the combo before it.
00:48:349 (4,5,6) - Not fond of the flow here, it also looks a little confusing. Rotating clockwise and ctrl-h on (6) would be preferable.
00:53:077 (1) - This is very far away from the center for how close it is to the spinner. I would remove it personally.
00:53:729 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - This section here is confusing to read, particularly in double time. The notes are just a little too clumped to read clearly. I reckon getting rid of the stacks and spacing out the hitcircles and increasing the slider speed a little bit will help no end with this.
00:55:196 (1) - Remove nc, you're still doing the same pattern so no need to break it up.
01:04:979 (1) - ^
01:12:968 (7) - Add nc, you have a really long phrase for a change!
01:14:109 (11) - I suggest a ctrl-h here. It's also worth noting the held note in the vocals begins at the end of the slider before this, so you may want to reconsider this section anyways.
00:16:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above, just belongs to the combo before.
00:16:532 (4,5) - This pattern is plenty hard enough without the jump, I'd just make (5) part of the arc you've made already.
00:25:522 (1,2) - Bit difficult to read with the stack, I would move (2) to the side to unstack them.
00:26:501 (3,4) - The distance here is a little confusing, I would either snap it to a 0.9x spacing or make it more obvious that it's a larger distance than before.
00:46:718 (1,2,3) - It feels silly this being the only 1/4 hitcircle in the whole map, the overmap doesn't make sense either. You could put more 1/4 notes in elsewhere but I would just remove this one and leave those sorts of rhythms in the insane.
00:46:718 (1) - Remove the combo as well, combines nicely with the combo before it.
00:48:349 (4,5,6) - Not fond of the flow here, it also looks a little confusing. Rotating clockwise and ctrl-h on (6) would be preferable.
00:53:077 (1) - This is very far away from the center for how close it is to the spinner. I would remove it personally.
00:53:729 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - This section here is confusing to read, particularly in double time. The notes are just a little too clumped to read clearly. I reckon getting rid of the stacks and spacing out the hitcircles and increasing the slider speed a little bit will help no end with this.
00:55:196 (1) - Remove nc, you're still doing the same pattern so no need to break it up.
01:04:979 (1) - ^
01:12:968 (7) - Add nc, you have a really long phrase for a change!
01:14:109 (11) - I suggest a ctrl-h here. It's also worth noting the held note in the vocals begins at the end of the slider before this, so you may want to reconsider this section anyways.
Insane
I have to say, it's a good job there's another insane diff to complete the progression in this set because this is way way way much harder than the hard.
00:05:949 (1) - Remove nc, more one combo combos which need to go really. D:
00:11:139 (1) - Remove nc, fits with the combo before
00:14:748 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - The jump between the stream and the slider is absolutely huge. At the moment it's nearly impossible to hit on time I would definitely make the jump a lot shorter.
00:16:045 (1) - Remove nc, keeps the combo lengths equal in the fills
00:18:023 (1) - More one combo combos with not much purpose
00:23:566 (1) - Remove nc, already have the same slider just before starting a combo, keep it all together
00:26:827 (1) - Remove nc, fits with last combo
00:34:979 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This is extremely over-mapped and the combos don't make much sense either. The couple of points before in the main theme were acceptable in my eyes but this is just forcing difficulty in a section of the song where it's not needed since it's very calm in comparison to the chorus at the moment.
00:38:892 (1) - Nothing happening here instrumentally or vocally here. Mapping nothing at all shouldn't ever be done really.
00:42:805 (1) - Remove nc, single combo combos should belong with friends after all. :3
00:50:631 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The 16th sliders really don't fit at all. First it's not in the song at all, and it doesn't build nicely into the stream you have after them. If I were to map it I would go for stacks of 2 hit circles each following the guitars so it look something like this.
A secondary concern is the stacking at the beginning of the stream which are concealed by the sliders. The stream speed is already fast enough you don't need to confuse people even more with where they should be taking the cursor. The crescendo or increase in volume if you're less music savvy is a good idea, you just need to add some actual sounding so people will notice it!
00:52:914 (13,1,2,3) - The stream stops and starts for no real good reason that I can see here. The fill stays constant throughout therefore I reckon just adding one more hitcircle before the new combo and then distance snapping getting some symmetry between the start and the end of the stream would be awesome actually.
00:55:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not too bothered about the overmaps by themselves here. However in the context of the jumpy chorus it seems very out of place that the cursor is suddenly not needing to do not much for that long. It would definitely play better just as two sliders in a similar manner to what you've already done before.
00:56:827 (1) - Remove nc, star patterns deserve to all be the same combo let's face it.
00:59:272 (2,3,4,1) - Was expecting a pattern like 00:33:022 (2,3,4,5). Safe to say I was disappointed. :p I'd stack (1) on top of (3) sorta like you did earlier.
01:06:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Very confusing stacking here. I like the back and forth movement but it's very hard to actually see that's what you need to do.
01:08:403 (1) - One combo combos...
01:15:414 (1) - Ending the slider at 01:18:022 to end with the vocals.
01:22:634 (4,5) - Just an issue with the iffy timing points, will be easy enough to fix with the timings I gave you earlier.
It was a fun map to play but with a map this jumpy it needs to be clear what you need to do pretty much all the time otherwise it just ends up being frustrating to play and nothing more really.
00:05:949 (1) - Remove nc, more one combo combos which need to go really. D:
00:11:139 (1) - Remove nc, fits with the combo before
00:14:748 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - The jump between the stream and the slider is absolutely huge. At the moment it's nearly impossible to hit on time I would definitely make the jump a lot shorter.
00:16:045 (1) - Remove nc, keeps the combo lengths equal in the fills
00:18:023 (1) - More one combo combos with not much purpose
00:23:566 (1) - Remove nc, already have the same slider just before starting a combo, keep it all together
00:26:827 (1) - Remove nc, fits with last combo
00:34:979 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This is extremely over-mapped and the combos don't make much sense either. The couple of points before in the main theme were acceptable in my eyes but this is just forcing difficulty in a section of the song where it's not needed since it's very calm in comparison to the chorus at the moment.
00:38:892 (1) - Nothing happening here instrumentally or vocally here. Mapping nothing at all shouldn't ever be done really.
00:42:805 (1) - Remove nc, single combo combos should belong with friends after all. :3
00:50:631 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The 16th sliders really don't fit at all. First it's not in the song at all, and it doesn't build nicely into the stream you have after them. If I were to map it I would go for stacks of 2 hit circles each following the guitars so it look something like this.
A secondary concern is the stacking at the beginning of the stream which are concealed by the sliders. The stream speed is already fast enough you don't need to confuse people even more with where they should be taking the cursor. The crescendo or increase in volume if you're less music savvy is a good idea, you just need to add some actual sounding so people will notice it!
00:52:914 (13,1,2,3) - The stream stops and starts for no real good reason that I can see here. The fill stays constant throughout therefore I reckon just adding one more hitcircle before the new combo and then distance snapping getting some symmetry between the start and the end of the stream would be awesome actually.
00:55:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not too bothered about the overmaps by themselves here. However in the context of the jumpy chorus it seems very out of place that the cursor is suddenly not needing to do not much for that long. It would definitely play better just as two sliders in a similar manner to what you've already done before.
00:56:827 (1) - Remove nc, star patterns deserve to all be the same combo let's face it.
00:59:272 (2,3,4,1) - Was expecting a pattern like 00:33:022 (2,3,4,5). Safe to say I was disappointed. :p I'd stack (1) on top of (3) sorta like you did earlier.
01:06:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Very confusing stacking here. I like the back and forth movement but it's very hard to actually see that's what you need to do.
01:08:403 (1) - One combo combos...
01:15:414 (1) - Ending the slider at 01:18:022 to end with the vocals.
01:22:634 (4,5) - Just an issue with the iffy timing points, will be easy enough to fix with the timings I gave you earlier.
It was a fun map to play but with a map this jumpy it needs to be clear what you need to do pretty much all the time otherwise it just ends up being frustrating to play and nothing more really.
Vincent's Insane
00:25:522 (1) - I'd remove the combo here. The other streams fitted nc's as they were out of the way of the music and didn't lead anywhere. This one however does and ought to be part of a larger set of notes.
00:26:012 (1) - Either that or remove the nc here instead of the one above. Either works.
00:28:131 (3) - Makes more sense just to have as a hit circle like the many times you've done it before.
00:28:131 (3,4) - Little bit jumpy for a calm part of the song. I'd just distance snap it.
00:32:044 (8) - NC to match the other streams which lead to nothing.
00:29:109 (1,2) - No reason why these 2 shouldn't be distance snapped.
00:34:979 (8) - NC to split up very long combo.
00:37:588 (1,1,1) - I like it, however I feel that a nc every single slider feels a little forced. The chords work together to form the progression so putting them all together in the combo just... fits.
00:39:544 (5,6,7) - The drum fill you follow here does sound as if it really warrants a jump. Having all of that just distance snapped would fit better imo.
00:41:827 (2) - Missing a nc here.
00:45:414 (6,7,8,1,2,) - Start with a nc and remove the ones midway through here. Just simply matches phrasing and gets rid of the awkward short combo which is comboed differently to an identical pattern starting 00:50:631 (4).
00:48:022 (1) - Remove nc, to connect to the 3 note combo beforehand.
00:54:381 (8) - Add nc, more phrasing combos
00:55:196 (1) - Remove nc, to add to the new combo I suggested
00:57:153 (1) - Remove nc, the combo before doesn't really do much so just extend this combo a little more.
01:12:642 (1) - Looks as if it still wants to be part of the combo before.
01:14:109 (9) - Add nc and therefore remove nc at 01:14:436 (1).
01:15:251 (4) - Would be cute just to have a different combo for when the map goes to the lower half.
Seems to be mainly just demands for combos more than anything sorry! >.<
00:26:012 (1) - Either that or remove the nc here instead of the one above. Either works.
00:28:131 (3) - Makes more sense just to have as a hit circle like the many times you've done it before.
00:28:131 (3,4) - Little bit jumpy for a calm part of the song. I'd just distance snap it.
00:32:044 (8) - NC to match the other streams which lead to nothing.
00:29:109 (1,2) - No reason why these 2 shouldn't be distance snapped.
00:34:979 (8) - NC to split up very long combo.
00:37:588 (1,1,1) - I like it, however I feel that a nc every single slider feels a little forced. The chords work together to form the progression so putting them all together in the combo just... fits.
00:39:544 (5,6,7) - The drum fill you follow here does sound as if it really warrants a jump. Having all of that just distance snapped would fit better imo.
00:41:827 (2) - Missing a nc here.
00:45:414 (6,7,8,1,2,) - Start with a nc and remove the ones midway through here. Just simply matches phrasing and gets rid of the awkward short combo which is comboed differently to an identical pattern starting 00:50:631 (4).
00:48:022 (1) - Remove nc, to connect to the 3 note combo beforehand.
00:54:381 (8) - Add nc, more phrasing combos
00:55:196 (1) - Remove nc, to add to the new combo I suggested
00:57:153 (1) - Remove nc, the combo before doesn't really do much so just extend this combo a little more.
01:12:642 (1) - Looks as if it still wants to be part of the combo before.
01:14:109 (9) - Add nc and therefore remove nc at 01:14:436 (1).
01:15:251 (4) - Would be cute just to have a different combo for when the map goes to the lower half.
Seems to be mainly just demands for combos more than anything sorry! >.<
Phew, that one took a little while gotta say. Hopefully it's helpful for you, feel free to pm me if you have any other queries n' stuff n' stuff.
Good luck with the map!
Topic Starter
hi guys, just come back to my home.
yes this is my first mapping
hope I will become more professional from your moddings!
thanks so much!
yes this is my first mapping
hope I will become more professional from your moddings!
thanks so much!
Thanks everyone for taking your time to mod our maps XD~
I've considered and applied almost all changes you guys have suggested and will continue to work hard to make a good map
I've considered and applied almost all changes you guys have suggested and will continue to work hard to make a good map
Topic Starter
finally I have changed it again- Miichan - wrote:
thanks for the modding!
I still need time to explore how to use DS deeply.. ...
btw... I dont want to change that part
00:15:396 (1,2,3,4)
coz I think its not hard and its playable, sry tho
General
Currently the Ranking Criteria requires that there needs to be a difficulty of star rating of 3 or below. You do not have one yet, so you need to make 1 more easier difficulty
Your first note starts after 1000ms, you need at least 1500ms to be rankable. For each difficulty, open .osu on Notepad and change the AudioLeadIn to 1000
Normal
00:53:212 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:01:691 (2) - put a finish on the end of the slider
Your kiai seems very lacking of hitsounds, you could put claps on every 2nd white line, for example: 00:54:191 (2) - 00:54:843 - 00:55:495 (4) - 01:04:625 (2) - 01:11:147 (2) - so on so forth, and also for the starts and ends of sliders that coincide on those times
01:24:620 (1) - end at 01:27:561
Hard
00:11:473 (1) - finish
00:16:691 (9) - ^
00:17:343 (2) - Normal sampleset on the start of the slider
00:18:647 (5) - Normal sampleset (it's on the top left of the editor, below the line that shows all the objects, above select)
00:20:278 (4,1,2) - normal sampleset for the start of these sliders
00:21:908 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:22:234 (2) - normal sampleset on start of slider
00:22:886 (4) - ^
00:24:191 (6) - ^ (I think you can carry on with this pattern, at least I think you can see what I'm trying to follow)
00:24:517 (1) - finish
00:25:984 (2) - normal sample set on start of this slider
00:26:473 (3) - normal sample set
00:26:799 (1) - finish on end of slider
00:31:691 (5) - ^
00:37:560 (4,5) - finish
00:40:169 (1) - finish on start and middle of slider
00:42:778 (6) - finish on all 3 parts of slider
00:45:386 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:47:995 (3) - ^
00:50:604 (1) - finish
00:53:212 (1) - finish on start of slider
^ I might have missed these hitsound suggestions in Normal
01:08:865 (1) - finish
01:11:473 (1) - ^
01:14:082 (6) - finish on start of slider
01:24:620 (1) - end at 01:27:561
Insane
Use the Normal Sample Set for the drum sounds here as well, for example, at 00:17:343
00:19:299 (1) - finish
00:20:930 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:24:517 (3) - finish
00:27:125 (5) - finish on start of slider
00:36:256 (1) - finish on end of slider
00:37:560 (1) - finish on start and end of slider
00:40:169 (1) - ^
00:42:778 (8) - ^ and the repeating (middle part)
00:45:386 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:47:995 (1) - finish
00:50:604 (1) - ^
00:51:908 (1) - ^
00:53:212 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:03:484 (1) - finish on end of slider
01:05:604 (2) - this slider is shaped really weird and does not flow with the song. It makes the flow abrupt and that is not good, you should make it such that you can move along the map when hitting this slider
01:08:865 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:11:473 (1) - finish
01:13:430 (1) - these kind of sliders look very squashed and ugly, you might want to curve them less
01:24:914 (1) - end at 01:27:561
Vincent's Insane
00:01:039 (3) - whistle on start of slider
00:02:343 (6) - ^
00:03:647 (1) - ^
00:04:952 (4) - whistle
00:06:256 (5) - ^
00:07:560 (4) - ^
00:08:865 (1) - whistle on start of slider
00:10:169 (3) - whistle
00:11:473 (5) - finish
00:14:082 (7) - ^
00:15:386 (5,9,13) - you could put a normal sampleset, a clap or a whistle here, depending on which you prefer
the spacing of the stream is also quite inconsistent, by inconsistent I mean it can get larger spacing, then become smaller spacing, which doesn't look nice. I would understand a constant increasing distance spacing, but if it gets larger and smaller and larger again, that is weird
00:16:691 (1) - finish on start of slider
I think you can take reference from the other difficulty suggestions on hitsounds, it can apply here as well
00:20:930 (5) - this repeating slider should end at 00:21:256 - you are leaving it for too long
00:41:636 - add a note
00:42:778 (1,1,1) - it's the same as the previous 2 (eg. 00:40:169 (1,2,3) - ), so don't NC each slider
00:47:995 (4) - NC
00:52:560 (9) - end it at 00:52:723
01:04:952 (6) - NC
01:18:647 (4) - since you already were doing it, NC this
01:24:620 (1) - end it at 01:25:061 - so spinner can then start at 01:25:208 and spinner should end at 01:27:561
Good Luck
Currently the Ranking Criteria requires that there needs to be a difficulty of star rating of 3 or below. You do not have one yet, so you need to make 1 more easier difficulty
Your first note starts after 1000ms, you need at least 1500ms to be rankable. For each difficulty, open .osu on Notepad and change the AudioLeadIn to 1000
Normal
00:53:212 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:01:691 (2) - put a finish on the end of the slider
Your kiai seems very lacking of hitsounds, you could put claps on every 2nd white line, for example: 00:54:191 (2) - 00:54:843 - 00:55:495 (4) - 01:04:625 (2) - 01:11:147 (2) - so on so forth, and also for the starts and ends of sliders that coincide on those times
01:24:620 (1) - end at 01:27:561
Hard
00:11:473 (1) - finish
00:16:691 (9) - ^
00:17:343 (2) - Normal sampleset on the start of the slider
00:18:647 (5) - Normal sampleset (it's on the top left of the editor, below the line that shows all the objects, above select)
00:20:278 (4,1,2) - normal sampleset for the start of these sliders
00:21:908 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:22:234 (2) - normal sampleset on start of slider
00:22:886 (4) - ^
00:24:191 (6) - ^ (I think you can carry on with this pattern, at least I think you can see what I'm trying to follow)
00:24:517 (1) - finish
00:25:984 (2) - normal sample set on start of this slider
00:26:473 (3) - normal sample set
00:26:799 (1) - finish on end of slider
00:31:691 (5) - ^
00:37:560 (4,5) - finish
00:40:169 (1) - finish on start and middle of slider
00:42:778 (6) - finish on all 3 parts of slider
00:45:386 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:47:995 (3) - ^
00:50:604 (1) - finish
00:53:212 (1) - finish on start of slider
^ I might have missed these hitsound suggestions in Normal
01:08:865 (1) - finish
01:11:473 (1) - ^
01:14:082 (6) - finish on start of slider
01:24:620 (1) - end at 01:27:561
Insane
Use the Normal Sample Set for the drum sounds here as well, for example, at 00:17:343
00:19:299 (1) - finish
00:20:930 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:24:517 (3) - finish
00:27:125 (5) - finish on start of slider
00:36:256 (1) - finish on end of slider
00:37:560 (1) - finish on start and end of slider
00:40:169 (1) - ^
00:42:778 (8) - ^ and the repeating (middle part)
00:45:386 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:47:995 (1) - finish
00:50:604 (1) - ^
00:51:908 (1) - ^
00:53:212 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:03:484 (1) - finish on end of slider
01:05:604 (2) - this slider is shaped really weird and does not flow with the song. It makes the flow abrupt and that is not good, you should make it such that you can move along the map when hitting this slider
01:08:865 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:11:473 (1) - finish
01:13:430 (1) - these kind of sliders look very squashed and ugly, you might want to curve them less
01:24:914 (1) - end at 01:27:561
Vincent's Insane
00:01:039 (3) - whistle on start of slider
00:02:343 (6) - ^
00:03:647 (1) - ^
00:04:952 (4) - whistle
00:06:256 (5) - ^
00:07:560 (4) - ^
00:08:865 (1) - whistle on start of slider
00:10:169 (3) - whistle
00:11:473 (5) - finish
00:14:082 (7) - ^
00:15:386 (5,9,13) - you could put a normal sampleset, a clap or a whistle here, depending on which you prefer
the spacing of the stream is also quite inconsistent, by inconsistent I mean it can get larger spacing, then become smaller spacing, which doesn't look nice. I would understand a constant increasing distance spacing, but if it gets larger and smaller and larger again, that is weird
00:16:691 (1) - finish on start of slider
I think you can take reference from the other difficulty suggestions on hitsounds, it can apply here as well
00:20:930 (5) - this repeating slider should end at 00:21:256 - you are leaving it for too long
00:41:636 - add a note
00:42:778 (1,1,1) - it's the same as the previous 2 (eg. 00:40:169 (1,2,3) - ), so don't NC each slider
00:47:995 (4) - NC
00:52:560 (9) - end it at 00:52:723
01:04:952 (6) - NC
01:18:647 (4) - since you already were doing it, NC this
01:24:620 (1) - end it at 01:25:061 - so spinner can then start at 01:25:208 and spinner should end at 01:27:561
Good Luck
hi
VINCENT'S INSANE
00:21:908 (3) - place it to x:368 y:208
00:22:234 (5) - place it to x:64 y:144
01:09:354 (3) - add finish
01:10:332 (5) - add finish
insane
00:16:039 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can remove whistle
less voice in kiai time
01:18:973 (1) - slider> circle
01:21:256 (1,2,3,4) - you can make circle >http://holland.pk/22yi
http://holland.pk/22yh
hard
00:47:343 (1,2,3) - you can place like 2
http://holland.pk/22yn
01:09:843 (1) - add finish
01:18:973 (1,2,3) - you can remove clap
01:21:256 (1) - you can >
good luck
VINCENT'S INSANE
00:21:908 (3) - place it to x:368 y:208
00:22:234 (5) - place it to x:64 y:144
01:09:354 (3) - add finish
01:10:332 (5) - add finish
insane
00:16:039 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can remove whistle
less voice in kiai time
01:18:973 (1) - slider> circle
01:21:256 (1,2,3,4) - you can make circle >http://holland.pk/22yi
http://holland.pk/22yh
hard
00:47:343 (1,2,3) - you can place like 2
http://holland.pk/22yn01:09:843 (1) - add finish
01:18:973 (1,2,3) - you can remove clap
01:21:256 (1) - you can >
good luck
Topic Starter
thanks for u guys' modding, it helped me a lots
( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)
[General]
Could be improved.
You can make an Easy diff with slower SV compared to normal
Longer sliders and more spinners if suitable
Try AI Mod and see if you have anything needed to be fixed, like audio lead-in, letterboxes etc
Hitsounds...they're strange
Take a closer look at them
[Timing]
Offset seems a little bit early, the hitsounds appear faster than the music
Try to follow the piano cover for the most accurated offset, instead of vocal
Remember offset is very important in mapping a song
[Normal]
Since it's the easiest difficulty of your map, I suggest to do a full and constant DS, for example use 1.2x for the whole diff
00:01:039 (1,2) - For this kind of notes can try making it more like symmetry with Tiny grid size when snapping
00:03:647 (2) - Like this one too, try to make it same DS instead of 1.09x before and only 0.77x after
^ also make it blanket with 00:02:995 (1) - if possible
00:04:299 (3,4,5) - ^ Applies for the mods too
00:06:256 - There's a piano sound here, but seems the offset is not correct it will be strange
^ I suggest to put a circle or something there
00:07:560 (1) - Remove NC, doesnt seems necessary cuz no vocal change or something
00:11:473 - Heavy beat, and there should be a finish hitsound, try something there
00:14:734 (1) - The spacing is strange as mentioned in the previous mods, which is too close to the previous note
00:19:299 - Since there's a heavy beat here, try to make it "hittable" (like slider start or a circle) or put NC at 00:19:625 (4) - , either of them can actually improve the gameplay
00:22:071 (1) - Make spinner stops here, Heavy beat, and then map something at 00:25:169 -
00:31:039 (3,4) - Strange spacing, try a constant and same DS, would be very helpful on reading them
00:34:299 (4,1,2) - Confusing pattern cuz 00:35:278 (2) - is pointed by 00:34:299 (4) - and they are arranged too closely
Nothing much, strongly suggested to use a full and same DS for whole diff.
If you found the notes are too far when you're spacing them, try to add some in the white ticks like 01:02:669 - seems it's a HP drain part
[Hard]
Take a look at the KIAI times, it's not applied
00:00:712 (1,2) - Just saying, in hard diff 2 stacked circles will actually stop the folow for a little
00:01:039 (3) - NC, seems it's a heavy beat and the actual start of the song beat
00:10:169 (3) - I see no point slowing down the note, I prefer smoother flow
^ Or else NC it to inform players that NC is changed or so
00:11:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - Can try sliders, they look awful to play imo
00:14:734 (3,4) - Bad spacing, it looks too close compared to notes before or after
00:16:039 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - They should have same spacing, the timing is same and close
00:57:125 (2) - Some slider whistle like this is not necessary, remove them
The arrangements are changing too fast from time to time
The notes are too close to each other making them less flow and just lots of hits
If possible decrease the circles stacks too for better flow
Hope my mods help
[General]
Could be improved.
You can make an Easy diff with slower SV compared to normal
Longer sliders and more spinners if suitable
Try AI Mod and see if you have anything needed to be fixed, like audio lead-in, letterboxes etc
Hitsounds...they're strange
Take a closer look at them
[Timing]
Offset seems a little bit early, the hitsounds appear faster than the music
Try to follow the piano cover for the most accurated offset, instead of vocal
Remember offset is very important in mapping a song
[Normal]
Since it's the easiest difficulty of your map, I suggest to do a full and constant DS, for example use 1.2x for the whole diff
00:01:039 (1,2) - For this kind of notes can try making it more like symmetry with Tiny grid size when snapping
00:03:647 (2) - Like this one too, try to make it same DS instead of 1.09x before and only 0.77x after
^ also make it blanket with 00:02:995 (1) - if possible
00:04:299 (3,4,5) - ^ Applies for the mods too
00:06:256 - There's a piano sound here, but seems the offset is not correct it will be strange
^ I suggest to put a circle or something there
00:07:560 (1) - Remove NC, doesnt seems necessary cuz no vocal change or something
00:11:473 - Heavy beat, and there should be a finish hitsound, try something there
00:14:734 (1) - The spacing is strange as mentioned in the previous mods, which is too close to the previous note
00:19:299 - Since there's a heavy beat here, try to make it "hittable" (like slider start or a circle) or put NC at 00:19:625 (4) - , either of them can actually improve the gameplay
00:22:071 (1) - Make spinner stops here, Heavy beat, and then map something at 00:25:169 -
00:31:039 (3,4) - Strange spacing, try a constant and same DS, would be very helpful on reading them
00:34:299 (4,1,2) - Confusing pattern cuz 00:35:278 (2) - is pointed by 00:34:299 (4) - and they are arranged too closely
Nothing much, strongly suggested to use a full and same DS for whole diff.
If you found the notes are too far when you're spacing them, try to add some in the white ticks like 01:02:669 - seems it's a HP drain part
[Hard]
Take a look at the KIAI times, it's not applied
00:00:712 (1,2) - Just saying, in hard diff 2 stacked circles will actually stop the folow for a little
00:01:039 (3) - NC, seems it's a heavy beat and the actual start of the song beat
00:10:169 (3) - I see no point slowing down the note, I prefer smoother flow
^ Or else NC it to inform players that NC is changed or so
00:11:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - Can try sliders, they look awful to play imo
00:14:734 (3,4) - Bad spacing, it looks too close compared to notes before or after
00:16:039 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - They should have same spacing, the timing is same and close
00:57:125 (2) - Some slider whistle like this is not necessary, remove them
The arrangements are changing too fast from time to time
The notes are too close to each other making them less flow and just lots of hits
If possible decrease the circles stacks too for better flow
Hope my mods help
Topic Starter
thanks for the modding, but I notice that the first part before 00:11:147 is not match a bit with the singer voice.
So I would change the offset of that.
thx. I will fix it tmr.
So I would change the offset of that.
thx. I will fix it tmr.
Hello there, awakened by the title of this song
I apologize if I suck at this
NORMAL
00:13:430 (4) - Is it by intent it is at x=256, not x=240 ?
00:29:082 (1,2,3) - not much of a deal, but 1 and 2 being closer than 2 and 3 ?
HARD
Good enough. I approve of it
Kiai time that short but not much of a deal
INSANE
00:08:865 (1,2) - Make it look like one curve slider? Something like this
00:17:017 (1,2) - Put the starting of slider 2 properly under slider 1?
VINCENT'S INSANE
00:13:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I noticed this kind of "jumps" are common in other people's maps
00:34:952 (1,2) - It looks nicer if you make them parallel in one line, but that's what I think
00:51:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Makes me feel like the volume can start from like 50% and increase up to the slider
01:16:691 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - What an interesting bit. I like it
END
What can I say? Nothing else but really well made
I apologize if I suck at this
NORMAL
00:13:430 (4) - Is it by intent it is at x=256, not x=240 ?
00:29:082 (1,2,3) - not much of a deal, but 1 and 2 being closer than 2 and 3 ?
HARD
Good enough. I approve of it
Kiai time that short but not much of a deal
INSANE
00:08:865 (1,2) - Make it look like one curve slider? Something like this
00:17:017 (1,2) - Put the starting of slider 2 properly under slider 1?
VINCENT'S INSANE
00:13:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I noticed this kind of "jumps" are common in other people's maps
00:34:952 (1,2) - It looks nicer if you make them parallel in one line, but that's what I think
00:51:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Makes me feel like the volume can start from like 50% and increase up to the slider
01:16:691 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - What an interesting bit. I like it
END
What can I say? Nothing else but really well made
Topic Starter
ALL FIXED. PLZ MOD
- Miichan - wrote:
ALL FIXED. PLZ MOD
from my q
not94's Easy
osu file format v12
[General]
AudioFilename: Kyoukai no Kanata.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 53077
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1
[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
[Metadata]
Title:Kyokai no Kanata (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:境界の彼方 (TV Size)
Artist:Chihara Minori
ArtistUnicode:茅原実里
Creator:- Miichan -
Version:not94's Easy
Source:Kyokai no Kanata
Tags:beyond the boundary, opening, mirai kuriyama, kyoto animation, daisuki, Vincent, Miichan, HKGOLDEN
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1
[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
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//Break Periods
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Hi, from testplay queue,
Sorry for late reply
Download the .osr files HERE
Good map, and good lcuk!
Sorry for late reply
Easy
Hey Not94, short time no see
Please, use less kick sliders (Fast reverses in anything below Hard, even though it is 1/2, don't use it. Don't use sliders with more than 1 reverse in anything lower than hard
Please, use less kick sliders (Fast reverses in anything below Hard, even though it is 1/2, don't use it. Don't use sliders with more than 1 reverse in anything lower than hard
Normal
Good, except the reverse thing as said in Easy
Hard
Perfect
Insane
I HATE high BPM streams, since I can't do above 140-150BPM >.<
Insane
Same as other Insane, but I SUGGEST rename to extra, extreme, since it is very very hard
Download the .osr files HERE
Good map, and good lcuk!
Topic Starter
thanks for ur modding and testplays.
10crystalmask01
Ello, mod from queue
Good luck.
[General]
*Inconsistent combo colours in your diffs.
*00:53:212 - Kai time starts here, not at 00:53:048.
[Vincent's Insane]
00:01:085 (3) - NC, since it's the first object appearing in the offset.
00:04:671 (3,6) - Move more apart.
00:24:353 (1) - Add finish on the tail, to follow the cymbal crash heard in the music.
00:27:125 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:37:559 (1,2,3) - ^
00:40:168 (1,2,3) - ^
00:42:777 (1,2,3) - ^
00:45:385 (1) - ^
00:47:994 (1) - ^
00:53:212 (3) - NC instead of 00:53:049 (1) - , because it's the first object that appears in Kai time.
00:54:353 (1,3) - Why not create a blanket here with these notes?
01:00:385 (2,4) - Clearly, you could've made a blanket here, so it helps create a neater flow for you objects.
01:19:951 (2,4) - Move more apart, they shouldn't be attached to each other. Also, while you add it, you can also make a blanket here.
01:21:581 (6,7) - Make le blanket?
[Insane]
00:02:715 (7) - Inconsistent jump here.
00:16:201 (2,3,4) - Interesting. Try adding a drum clap on all these notes. After you've highlighted and added the finish on all of them, adjust the Additions (shown on the top oft of the screen) to this:
00:42:777 (8) - NC for slider speed change.
00:45:385 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:52:478 (8) - NC, so it doesn't the way the notes becomes a stream doesn't look too random.
00:57:451 (2,3,4) - Should all be NC for the slider speed change.
[Hard]
00:38:049 (5) - Add finish
00:45:385 (1) - ^ NC the head.
01:02:179 (2) - Add finish on the head.
01:03:646 (1) - ^
[Normal]
AR +1
00:14:081 (6,1) - Fix the DS here.
00:16:038 (3) - Add finish on the tail.
00:27:125 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:33:646 (3,4) - Fix the DS here.
00:37:559 (1) - Add finish on all parts of this slider.
00:45:059 (2,3) - Fix the DS here.
01:03:646 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:08:864 (4,5) - ^
01:21:907 (2,1) - Fix the DS here. Stacking these objects may help.
Make sure you check the DS consistency in this diff. All your objects should be snapped accordingly, in Normal/Easy diffs.
[not94's Easy]
*Unherited timing points here.
*Check that all your objects distances are snapped accordingly.
00:03:681 (3) - NC
00:06:940 (5) - ^
00:10:199 (7) - ^
00:16:718 (6) - ^ instead of 00:17:370 (1) - .
00:36:274 (6) - ^
00:37:577 (1) - Add finish on all parts of this slider.
00:40:674 (3) - Add finish.
00:42:792 (2) - Add finish on all parts of this slider.
00:45:400 (4) - NC
00:50:614 (1,1) - Add finish on the head. Plus, that NC on 00:51:918 (1) - isn't necessary.
00:55:829 (5,1) - Fix the blanket here.
01:06:585 (3) - NC
01:08:866 (1,2) - dd finish on the head.
01:13:429 (1) - Should start on 01:14:081 instead, so it can emphasize the cymbal crash in the music with a finish on the head.
*Inconsistent combo colours in your diffs.
*00:53:212 - Kai time starts here, not at 00:53:048.
[Vincent's Insane]
00:01:085 (3) - NC, since it's the first object appearing in the offset.
00:04:671 (3,6) - Move more apart.
00:24:353 (1) - Add finish on the tail, to follow the cymbal crash heard in the music.
00:27:125 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:37:559 (1,2,3) - ^
00:40:168 (1,2,3) - ^
00:42:777 (1,2,3) - ^
00:45:385 (1) - ^
00:47:994 (1) - ^
00:53:212 (3) - NC instead of 00:53:049 (1) - , because it's the first object that appears in Kai time.
00:54:353 (1,3) - Why not create a blanket here with these notes?
01:00:385 (2,4) - Clearly, you could've made a blanket here, so it helps create a neater flow for you objects.
01:19:951 (2,4) - Move more apart, they shouldn't be attached to each other. Also, while you add it, you can also make a blanket here.
01:21:581 (6,7) - Make le blanket?
[Insane]
00:02:715 (7) - Inconsistent jump here.
00:16:201 (2,3,4) - Interesting. Try adding a drum clap on all these notes. After you've highlighted and added the finish on all of them, adjust the Additions (shown on the top oft of the screen) to this:
00:42:777 (8) - NC for slider speed change.
00:45:385 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:52:478 (8) - NC, so it doesn't the way the notes becomes a stream doesn't look too random.
00:57:451 (2,3,4) - Should all be NC for the slider speed change.
[Hard]
00:38:049 (5) - Add finish
00:45:385 (1) - ^ NC the head.
01:02:179 (2) - Add finish on the head.
01:03:646 (1) - ^
[Normal]
AR +1
00:14:081 (6,1) - Fix the DS here.
00:16:038 (3) - Add finish on the tail.
00:27:125 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:33:646 (3,4) - Fix the DS here.
00:37:559 (1) - Add finish on all parts of this slider.
00:45:059 (2,3) - Fix the DS here.
01:03:646 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:08:864 (4,5) - ^
01:21:907 (2,1) - Fix the DS here. Stacking these objects may help.
Make sure you check the DS consistency in this diff. All your objects should be snapped accordingly, in Normal/Easy diffs.
[not94's Easy]
*Unherited timing points here.
*Check that all your objects distances are snapped accordingly.
00:03:681 (3) - NC
00:06:940 (5) - ^
00:10:199 (7) - ^
00:16:718 (6) - ^ instead of 00:17:370 (1) - .
00:36:274 (6) - ^
00:37:577 (1) - Add finish on all parts of this slider.
00:40:674 (3) - Add finish.
00:42:792 (2) - Add finish on all parts of this slider.
00:45:400 (4) - NC
00:50:614 (1,1) - Add finish on the head. Plus, that NC on 00:51:918 (1) - isn't necessary.
00:55:829 (5,1) - Fix the blanket here.
01:06:585 (3) - NC
01:08:866 (1,2) - dd finish on the head.
01:13:429 (1) - Should start on 01:14:081 instead, so it can emphasize the cymbal crash in the music with a finish on the head.
Good luck.
10crystalmask01 wrote:
[not94's Easy]
*Unherited timing points here. fixed but now there are many unsapped objects
*Check that all your objects distances are snapped accordingly.
00:03:681 (3) - NC fixed
00:06:940 (5) - ^ fixed
00:10:199 (7) - ^fixed
00:16:718 (6) - ^ instead of 00:17:370 (1) - .?
00:36:274 (6) - ^ ?
00:37:577 (1) - Add finish on all parts of this slider.that sounds a bit too overused
00:40:674 (3) - Add finish. ^
00:42:792 (2) - Add finish on all parts of this slider.^
00:45:400 (4) - NCfixed
00:50:614 (1,1) - Add finish on the head. Plus, that NC on 00:51:918 (1) - isn't necessary. fixed
00:55:829 (5,1) - Fix the blanket here.fixed
01:06:585 (3) - NCfixed
01:08:866 (1,2) - dd finish on the head.fixed
01:13:429 (1) - Should start on 01:14:081 instead, so it can emphasize the cymbal crash in the music with a finish on the head.fixed
Topic Starter
all fixed
Jehyeon_old
[not94's Easy]
00:14:733 (5) - add new combo please To emphasize the vocal
00:16:690 (6) - add finish please Add to emphasize the instrument will look better because.
00:17:342 (1) - why add finish? awkward delete please
00:21:744 (1) - I think the spinner to 00:24:516 - It is good to end. Think it is better to add the finish
00:44:244 (3) - slider end 00:44:733 - here
00:47:994 - add finish
01:01:690 (1) - same suggestion
01:03:646 - add finish
01:19:951 (2) - slider end 01:20:603 - here
01:21:255 (3) - slider end 01:21:581 - here and 01:21:907 - add note
[Normal]
00:22:070 (1) - same easy diff
00:31:690 (6) - ctrl + g and 00:32:342 - add note
00:38:048 - delete finish
00:43:266 - ^
01:10:168 - clap add please
good luck
i can't Hard insane diff mod.. sorry
00:14:733 (5) - add new combo please To emphasize the vocal
00:16:690 (6) - add finish please Add to emphasize the instrument will look better because.
00:17:342 (1) - why add finish? awkward delete please
00:21:744 (1) - I think the spinner to 00:24:516 - It is good to end. Think it is better to add the finish
00:44:244 (3) - slider end 00:44:733 - here
00:47:994 - add finish
01:01:690 (1) - same suggestion
01:03:646 - add finish
01:19:951 (2) - slider end 01:20:603 - here
01:21:255 (3) - slider end 01:21:581 - here and 01:21:907 - add note
[Normal]
00:22:070 (1) - same easy diff
00:31:690 (6) - ctrl + g and 00:32:342 - add note
00:38:048 - delete finish
00:43:266 - ^
01:10:168 - clap add please
good luck
i can't Hard insane diff mod.. sorry
Mii-chan~!
From my queue:
Insane
Vincent's Insane
Hard
Easy
Ok, those are the main things I could find. Good luck!
Star for support :3
From my queue:
Insane
- 00:01:085 (3) - Add a new combo. This is where the measure actually starts!
- 00:29:081 (1) - I think that this slider is too close to the previous object. Since you use a similar spacing here 00:28:266 (5,6) but with 1/2 in the timeline. 00:28:429 (6,1) has a 1/1 gap in between them, so I suggest you move (1) further away, or make this anti-jump more obvious. Part of the issue here is with your use of slider velocity, which I'll touch on later.
- 00:30:875 (2) - The flow of this note coming from the previous slider is a bit unorthodox, since it is the below the end of the slider and at a different angle to which you want to end up. To fix this I suggest you smooth the slider out and move the note up a bit:
- 00:31:038 (3,4) - Here, I think you could make these sliders less 'scrunched up'. This will make it play and look much nicer. It aloso fits with my previous suggestion to improve flow here.
This arrangement works pretty well for me as it flows nice into the next section. If you prefer the way you had it, just make the sliders less curved like in the screenshot. - 00:31:690 (5) - New combo to signal the change in slider velocity?
- 00:32:994 (2,3,4,5) - Woah, this is a fairly large jump sequence for a calm part of this song. I would recommend you decrease the spacing between these objects a little. Another reason to decrease the spacing is because you start to use smaller spacing here 00:33:646 (6,7,8). Going from such large spacing to small spacing disrupts flow quite heavily here and might even cause people to misread 00:33:646 (6,7,8).
- 00:46:690 (7) - I don't see why you need to use 1.25x velocity here. 1.0x is fine in my opinion. If anything, it should be slower to represent the long vocal.
- 00:51:907 (1) - I like the idea of the gradual increase in volume, but I would not start it off at 5% It's kinda hard to hit the beginning of this stream when I can hardly hear any hitsounds. Increase the volume a bit please, 30% as a minimum.
- 01:08:212 - Add a note here please, I can can hear a drum in the song. Otherwise, there is an awkward 1/1 gap :/
- 01:08:864 (1,2,3,4) - This is solely my opinion, but I don't think I'm fond of this sudden directional change to 01:09:353 (4). I know you're trying to emphasise this note for the vocal, but I think if you place it along the same vector line (i.e the same direction) as the triple it would make more sense and play a lot better.
- 01:09:842 (1,2,3,4) - Same sort of thing as I mentioned above
- 01:27:561 - Make the end of this spinner 5% percent volume so the hitsound doesn't ring out.
- Ok, about the slider velocities. I feel you are trying to experiment with them too much, making the slider speed fluctuate unnecessarily. For example, you sometimes use 1.0 here, or 0.8 there, or even 1.25 randomly. I would highly recommend you try to structure your map with corresponding slider velocities better, by not overusing them. I would suggest about 3 different ones at most: a normal slider velocity (1.0 for most of the song), a slower slider velocity (for the start for example, and the earlier part of the verse), and a faster slider velocity (for the kiai time if you want). This is just my opinion on this, but too much variation could be a bit confusing and mess up you spacing. Well, just consider this and make your own judgment
Vincent's Insane
- Oh it's Vincent again, hi o/
- 00:04:998 (4,5) - I think you should just make this one slider that extends from 00:04:998 - 00:05:324. It would match the vocal much better and there honestly isn't anything audible on 00:05:161.
- 00:05:976 (1,2,3,4,5) - People's opinions differ when it comes to what over-mapping is, but I really think this is. 5 1/4 notes mapped to nothing in the song is how I see it. I feel it just adds unnecessary complexity to the map where the song does not warrant such. A 1/1 slider on the white ticks would work much nicer to catch those notes you can hear.
- 00:10:170 (3,4) - This rhythm could be improve to follow the vocal: a slider to start it off (with the end catching the guitar) and a note to follow the end of the vocal.
This can be varied, but having the same effect. Just start it off with a slider, then it should be fine! - 00:14:081 (7,8) - ctrl+g this on the timeline? To follow the 'ma' lyric or whatever it is.
Hard
- 00:05:976 - Any reason why you haven't mapped a note here? The guitar should me mapped here, since not much else is going on, otherwise there is an awkward gap imo.
Easy
- 01:01:690 (1) - If you slow down your play back rate, you will hear that the reverse does not actually land on the blue tick! I would recommend you remove the reverse and just make it a normal slider. You should probably avoid mapping on blue ticks in an easy difficulty anyway...
Ok, those are the main things I could find. Good luck!
Star for support :3
gpq123 wrote:
[not94's Easy]
00:14:733 (5) - add new combo please To emphasize the vocal fixed
00:16:690 (6) - add finish please Add to emphasize the instrument will look better because.fixed
00:17:342 (1) - why add finish? awkward delete pleasefixed
00:21:744 (1) - I think the spinner to 00:24:516 - It is good to end. Think it is better to add the finish no because the spinner is following the vocals
00:44:244 (3) - slider end 00:44:733 - here fixed
00:47:994 - add finishfixed
01:01:690 (1) - same suggestionfixed
01:03:646 - add finishfixed
01:19:951 (2) - slider end 01:20:603 - herefixed
01:21:255 (3) - slider end 01:21:581 - here and 01:21:907 - add noteyou're right, but I did something else
Unsfamiliar wrote:
EasyFixed
- 01:01:690 (1) - If you slow down your play back rate, you will hear that the reverse does not actually land on the blue tick! I would recommend you remove the reverse and just make it a normal slider. You should probably avoid mapping on blue ticks in an easy difficulty anyway...
Hi Miichan
I like your song, take a mod =3
[not94's Eazy]
[Normal]
I like your song, take a mod =3
[not94's Eazy]
- 00:03:693 (1) - Move to 264, 68?
- 00:06:961 (1) - Use distance snap 1,0x, it's good not change the spacing
- 00:14:733 (1) - this may confuse, increase the distance, move to 184, 292
- 00:29:733 (3) - Move to 184, 100
- 00:42:777 (2) - should not increase the slider velocity here and in the others, is so hard for a eazy diff
- 00:40:168 (2,3,4) - Decrease distance
- 00:54:353 (2,3) - Simplify the rhythm here, http://puu.sh/7oTP0.jpg
- 01:03:646 (1) - Move to 252, 188
- 01:05:277 (2) - Move to 328, 208
- 01:06:581 - Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/7oUiQ.jpg
[Normal]
- 00:14:081 (6) - Decrease the distance
- 00:17:016 (1) - Suggestion:
- 00:33:646 (3) -
- 00:44:409 - Add a note?
- 01:19:299 (1) -
- 01:20:603 (3,1,2) -
- Decrease 1 AR plz, i think it better for this song
- 00:10:170 (1) - not cool increase the slider velocity here, it's better here 00:10:170 (1)
- 00:12:451 (4,5) - Move to 432, 320?
- 00:21:581 - Add a note here and 00:21:744 ?
- 00:23:538 (3) - Add a normal hit in the head
- 00:37:396 (3) - Move to 208, 112
- 00:56:309 (2,3) - Overlap these better
- 01:20:277 (4) - Move to 400, 232
Topic Starter
wow
surprise,
thanks for your modding
surprise,
thanks for your modding
DeletedUser_2243638
Hi~ Here are some of my mods
not94's Easy
00:21:255 Add finish, sounds epic~
01:01:038 ^
01:02:179 ^
01:08:864 + 01:09:842 I think the two sliders are too fast for an easy diff, try slow them down or use circles instead
Normal
00:27:125 remove finish because it doesn't really fit to that quiet point
00:40:657 remove finish
00:41:146 add finish
00:43:755 ^
01:01:038 ^
01:01:690 remove the last reverse at the end of the slider
01:18:646 remove clap because it gets quiet in this point
not94's Easy
00:21:255 Add finish, sounds epic~
01:01:038 ^
01:02:179 ^
01:08:864 + 01:09:842 I think the two sliders are too fast for an easy diff, try slow them down or use circles instead
Normal
00:27:125 remove finish because it doesn't really fit to that quiet point
00:40:657 remove finish
00:41:146 add finish
00:43:755 ^
01:01:038 ^
01:01:690 remove the last reverse at the end of the slider
01:18:646 remove clap because it gets quiet in this point
Topic Starter
Julini wrote:
Hi~ Here are some of my mods
Normal
00:27:125 remove finish because it doesn't really fit to that quiet point fixed
00:40:657 remove finishfixed
00:41:146 add finishfixed
00:43:755 ^ fixed
01:01:038 ^ fixed
01:01:690 remove the last reverse at the end of the slider NO?becoz there is a heavy beat
01:18:646 remove clap because it gets quiet in this point fixed
Modding from my googlequeue.
[General]
The map is very monotone-sounding, which is against the guidelines. Try adding claps where you hear snares in the song itself to fix this problem.
Change the artist name to Minori Chihara.
The timing is wrong. The BPM should be 185 universal until the ending slow down. So change all of the 184 bpm timings to 185. Don't forget to click the box next to "Snap objects to new timing" and "Resnap slider lengths." Also snap 00:11:492's timing section and remove the timing section at 00:11:799.
Use this map for reference: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/120257 - Take the mp3, video and timing, just make sure you credit and link the map in the creator's notes.
[Vincent's Insane]
You should continue using hitsounds like you did at 00:47:994 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7). This was perfect.
00:00:921 (2) - Try stacking this on 00:00:758 (1), it looks a little bit better here.
00:04:998 (4) - Should keep whistling the 4/1's you have, like the slider end of 00:05:650 (5).
00:06:798 (2) - Stack this on 00:06:472 (1) as well
00:08:876 (1) - Whistle the beginning of this slider.
00:10:170 (3) - Another whistle at the beginning of this slider as well.
00:26:146 (2) - I'd highly suggest changing this, it breaks a lot of flow, maybe try something like this:
http://puu.sh/7sa5T.jpg
00:42:614 - Add a note here to continue the toms that you used earlier at 00:40:005 (7).
01:10:331 (6) - Why isn't this in a same spot as 01:09:353 (3) was after the slider before. Move 01:10:331 (6) to x:384 y:80 to make it consistant with that.
01:10:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is overmapped and shouldn't be mapped like this at all. You can have a 1/2 notes on 01:10:820 - 01:10:983 -
01:11:146 -
01:11:309 -
and then a slider at 01:11:472.
01:11:635 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders ruin beat placement. Try using a 1/2 slider and then remapping these 4 into sliders and 1 note starting from 01:11:798. The end of 01:12:614 (4) - should be the note.
[Insane]
00:37:559 (1,1) - Why aren't these consistent with 00:42:777 (1)? You should change these to match what you have later on.
01:14:081 (4) - This shouldn't be a repeat slider. Try a spinner at 01:14:081 and then finish it at 01:15:059, removing the note placed there.
[General]
The map is very monotone-sounding, which is against the guidelines. Try adding claps where you hear snares in the song itself to fix this problem.
Change the artist name to Minori Chihara.
The timing is wrong. The BPM should be 185 universal until the ending slow down. So change all of the 184 bpm timings to 185. Don't forget to click the box next to "Snap objects to new timing" and "Resnap slider lengths." Also snap 00:11:492's timing section and remove the timing section at 00:11:799.
Use this map for reference: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/120257 - Take the mp3, video and timing, just make sure you credit and link the map in the creator's notes.
[Vincent's Insane]
You should continue using hitsounds like you did at 00:47:994 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7). This was perfect.
00:00:921 (2) - Try stacking this on 00:00:758 (1), it looks a little bit better here.
00:04:998 (4) - Should keep whistling the 4/1's you have, like the slider end of 00:05:650 (5).
00:06:798 (2) - Stack this on 00:06:472 (1) as well
00:08:876 (1) - Whistle the beginning of this slider.
00:10:170 (3) - Another whistle at the beginning of this slider as well.
00:26:146 (2) - I'd highly suggest changing this, it breaks a lot of flow, maybe try something like this:
http://puu.sh/7sa5T.jpg
00:42:614 - Add a note here to continue the toms that you used earlier at 00:40:005 (7).
01:10:331 (6) - Why isn't this in a same spot as 01:09:353 (3) was after the slider before. Move 01:10:331 (6) to x:384 y:80 to make it consistant with that.
01:10:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is overmapped and shouldn't be mapped like this at all. You can have a 1/2 notes on 01:10:820 - 01:10:983 -
01:11:146 -
01:11:309 -
and then a slider at 01:11:472.
01:11:635 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders ruin beat placement. Try using a 1/2 slider and then remapping these 4 into sliders and 1 note starting from 01:11:798. The end of 01:12:614 (4) - should be the note.
[Insane]
00:37:559 (1,1) - Why aren't these consistent with 00:42:777 (1)? You should change these to match what you have later on.
01:14:081 (4) - This shouldn't be a repeat slider. Try a spinner at 01:14:081 and then finish it at 01:15:059, removing the note placed there.
Topic Starter
Love wrote:
Modding from my googlequeue.
[General]
The map is very monotone-sounding, which is against the guidelines. Try adding claps where you hear snares in the song itself to fix this problem.
Change the artist name to Minori Chihara.
The timing is wrong. The BPM should be 185 universal until the ending slow down. So change all of the 184 bpm timings to 185. Don't forget to click the box next to "Snap objects to new timing" and "Resnap slider lengths." Also snap 00:11:492's timing section and remove the timing section at 00:11:799.
Use this map for reference: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/120257 - Take the mp3, video and timing, just make sure you credit and link the map in the creator's notes.fixed
[Insane]
00:37:559 (1,1) - Why aren't these consistent with 00:42:777 (1)? You should change these to match what you have later on. FIXED
01:14:081 (4) - This shouldn't be a repeat slider. Try a spinner at 01:14:081 and then finish it at 01:15:059, removing the note placed there. I hv tried to do that.. but I feel a bit not good enough
Topic Starter
added hitsound
Hi.
Mmm, there's so mani slider speed change on both insane diff . Remember that there shouldn't be more than 3 unless they are intuitive.
00:57:134 (1,1,1,1) - like here, on insane, you are using some slow sliders over the kiai, i personally don't feel it so natural while playing, specially with all these jumps and the spread stream before it.
And then, (on Vincent's insane 01:24:620 (1) - for example ), while the slow ending, it goes kinda fast, i say you should change the ending here.
And as i said before, try less sliders speed change, imo, longer spacing on kiai, than the intro (right now it's like the same), and less spacing on the ending of the song, wich is slower.
That's all. Good luck.
Mmm, there's so mani slider speed change on both insane diff . Remember that there shouldn't be more than 3 unless they are intuitive.
00:57:134 (1,1,1,1) - like here, on insane, you are using some slow sliders over the kiai, i personally don't feel it so natural while playing, specially with all these jumps and the spread stream before it.
And then, (on Vincent's insane 01:24:620 (1) - for example ), while the slow ending, it goes kinda fast, i say you should change the ending here.
And as i said before, try less sliders speed change, imo, longer spacing on kiai, than the intro (right now it's like the same), and less spacing on the ending of the song, wich is slower.
That's all. Good luck.
Hi.
from my queue.
Quick mod.
[General]
from my queue.
Quick mod.
[General]
- Missing Skin Files.
hitcircleoverlay.png approachcircle.png reversearrow.png - Song title is Kyoukai no Kanata (and source)
- Romanaised Artist is "Chihara Minori"Ranking Criteria wroteEastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format
- add tage "not94"
- Why you use different combo colours? I think you should unify all diffs.
- uncheck Widscreen Support.
- You should use more hitsounds. Please refer to Vincent's diff hitsounds.
- PreviewTime isn't snappend. 00:53:058 - or 00:53:221 - is better.
You shouldn't change DS and SV.This is Easy diff.
HP+1 OD+1
- 00:21:744 unsnapped inherited point.
- 00:05:625 (2) - slider end isn't snapped
- 00:08:254 (2) - Slider repeat and end isn't snapped.
- 01:22:627 (4) - ^
- 00:49:635 (1,1,1) - This NC is not needed.just ONE new Combo at 00:49:635 (1) -
00:27:138 (1) - ~ 00:51:917 (3) - Where is hitsounds?:o
- 00:18:999 (3) - slider end isn't snapped
- 00:08:254 (5) - ^
- 01:22:622 (1,1) - remove sliderwhistle
- 00:33:658 (1,2) - remove sliderwhistle
- 00:34:963 (1) - ^
- 01:04:633 (5) - ^
- 01:06:589 (1,2,5) - ^
- 01:11:643 (2,4,6) - ^
- 00:09:848 (3) - slider end isn't snapped
- 00:17:350 (2) - ^
- 00:52:315 - unsnapped inherited point
Topic Starter
okay lol
for now, I need to talk about the artist XD
Someone stated that the artist should be Chihara Minori and someone say it should be Minori Chihara, I dont really know because Im not Japanese,
What I know is there are 2 ranked version of Kyokai no Kanata, the artist of one of them is Chihara Minori , another one is Minori Chihara.
I got mad
anyway, I will set it as Chihara Minori
for now, I need to talk about the artist XD
Someone stated that the artist should be Chihara Minori and someone say it should be Minori Chihara, I dont really know because Im not Japanese,
What I know is there are 2 ranked version of Kyokai no Kanata, the artist of one of them is Chihara Minori , another one is Minori Chihara.
I got mad
anyway, I will set it as Chihara Minori
Topic Starter
keeeeeeko wrote:
Hi.
from my queue.
Quick mod.
[General]FIXED
- Missing Skin Files.
hitcircleoverlay.png approachcircle.png reversearrow.png- Song title is Kyoukai no Kanata (and source)
- Romanaised Artist is "Chihara Minori"
Ranking Criteria wroteEastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format- add tage "not94"
- Why you use different combo colours? I think you should unify all diffs.
- uncheck Widscreen Support.
- You should use more hitsounds. Please refer to Vincent's diff hitsounds.
- PreviewTime isn't snappend. 00:53:058 - or 00:53:221 - is better.
[Normal]
00:27:138 (1) - ~ 00:51:917 (3) - Where is hitsounds?:o[Hard]
- 00:18:999 (3) - slider end isn't snapped I think its fine
- 00:08:254 (5) - ^
- 01:22:622 (1,1) - remove sliderwhistle
[Insane]
- 00:33:658 (1,2) - remove sliderwhistle
- 00:34:963 (1) - ^
- 01:04:633 (5) - ^
- 01:06:589 (1,2,5) - ^
- 01:11:643 (2,4,6) - ^
- 00:09:848 (3) - slider end isn't snapped I think its fine
- 00:17:350 (2) - ^
- 00:52:315 - unsnapped inherited point
Good luck.
P4M mod here
[General]
This is a TV Size song, so it should usually go with some sort of video, considering this version is made for TV for some sort of anime
Love the Skin!
[Easy]
General - I didn't list them, but you NEED to follow Distance Snap (DS), ESPECIALLY on an Easy difficulty like this. Go back in with AiMod and fix all 11 Distance Snap errors ASAP
00:48:330 (5,6,7,8) - Replace into one repeating slider of the same beat length
01:22:622 (4) - Unsnapped end
[Normal]
General - You need to follow DS
00:06:309 (1) - Add clap hitsound
00:12:302 - DS error, fix ASAP
00:13:437 - DS error, fix ASAP
00:13:924 - DS error, fix ASAP
00:18:999 (3) - Object's end not snapped
00:31:050 (6,7) - For both of the sliders, make it the same length, but with no repeat
00:47:515 - DS error, fix ASAP
01:01:698 (2) - Replace with a spinner from the beginning of this slider to 01:03:002
[Hard]
This is the best diff out of the 3 I modded.
General - Move HP Drain to 6
00:50:776 (2,3) - Unnecessary overmapping
00:51:428 (5,6) - Unnecessary overmapping
01:05:937 (10) - Stack this right on the end of the previous slider
[General]
This is a TV Size song, so it should usually go with some sort of video, considering this version is made for TV for some sort of anime
Love the Skin!
[Easy]
General - I didn't list them, but you NEED to follow Distance Snap (DS), ESPECIALLY on an Easy difficulty like this. Go back in with AiMod and fix all 11 Distance Snap errors ASAP
00:48:330 (5,6,7,8) - Replace into one repeating slider of the same beat length
01:22:622 (4) - Unsnapped end
[Normal]
General - You need to follow DS
00:06:309 (1) - Add clap hitsound
00:12:302 - DS error, fix ASAP
00:13:437 - DS error, fix ASAP
00:13:924 - DS error, fix ASAP
00:18:999 (3) - Object's end not snapped
00:31:050 (6,7) - For both of the sliders, make it the same length, but with no repeat
00:47:515 - DS error, fix ASAP
01:01:698 (2) - Replace with a spinner from the beginning of this slider to 01:03:002
[Hard]
This is the best diff out of the 3 I modded.
General - Move HP Drain to 6
00:50:776 (2,3) - Unnecessary overmapping
00:51:428 (5,6) - Unnecessary overmapping
01:05:937 (10) - Stack this right on the end of the previous slider
Topic Starter
thanks for the moddingxVirtualNinjax wrote:
P4M mod here
[General]
This is a TV Size song, so it should usually go with some sort of video, considering this version is made for TV for some sort of anime
Love the Skin!
[Normal]
General - You need to follow DS
00:06:309 (1) - Add clap hitsound fixed
00:12:302 - DS error, fix ASAPfixed
00:12:302 - DS error, fix ASAPfixed
00:13:437 - DS error, fix ASAPfixed
00:13:924 - DS error, fix ASAPfixed
00:18:999 (3) - Object's end not snapped I think its fine
00:31:050 (6,7) - For both of the sliders, make it the same length, but with no repeat fixed
00:47:515 - DS error, fix ASAP fixed
01:01:698 (2) - Replace with a spinner from the beginning of this slider to 01:03:002 good idea
[Hard]
This is the best diff out of the 3 I modded.
General - Move HP Drain to 6 fixed
00:50:776 (2,3) - Unnecessary overmapping fixed
00:51:428 (5,6) - Unnecessary overmapping fixed
01:05:937 (10) - Stack this right on the end of the previous slider why?
Hello; modding as requested!
And the correct artist name according to the rules here is Chihara Minori, btw. You're already correct.
*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.
>General
You guys are pretty good in terms of rhythm, but the placement, hitsounding, flow, and slider shapes obviously need to be reworked. You'll need to get some very experienced (and patient!) modders here in order to guide you through everything. I'm not really patient in this kind of stuff, so sorry, I'm afraid I cannot give further support.
There will always be a way to get stuff done if you really want to do it, though!
Good luck on the way
And the correct artist name according to the rules here is Chihara Minori, btw. You're already correct.
*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.
>General
- Remove all the commas on the tags. Tagging doesn't work that way here.
- 00:01:085 (1,2) - Any reason why the spacing is inconsistent here? I think you can just move (1) a little further from (2).
- 00:06:274 - Add a whistle? There's a clear piano sound here, so why not?
- 00:17:350 (1,3) - Hmm, add claps here? They fit pretty well with the instruments.
- 00:21:269 (3) - Move to (388,300) so the pattern here will be neater? Also, is the clap here an accident? It doesn't seem intentional, but if it is, remove the one on the head, at it doesn't fit with the song at all.
- 00:32:354 - You should really add a circle with a finish here since it feels too empty without one.
- 00:32:680 (1,2) - Uh, please use 1.0x distance spacing here, as a spacing change as drastic as this will definitely confuse typical Easy players.
- 00:38:060 - There should be a finish too, to follow the cymbal.
- 00:40:668 (3) - ^
- 00:43:277 - ^
- 00:45:396 (1) - ^
- 00:46:048 (2) - Having a whistle here would be wonderful to follow the instruments.
- 00:51:917 (2) - The NC isn't necessary, since this slider is still in the same stanza as 00:50:613 (1).
- 00:50:613 (1) - Remove the finish? It just doesn't fit.
- 00:54:199 (2) - Add a clap to make sure the hitsounding is consistent in this diff.
- 00:58:764 - ^
- 01:01:046 (6) - Add a finish to follow the cymbal too?
- 01:02:187 - ^
- 01:03:002 (2) - Remove the clap? It feels redundant and also conflicts with the one at 01:02:676.
- 01:05:285 - Add a clap? Same reason as 00:54:199 (2).
- 01:05:937 - ^
- 01:06:589 - ^
- 01:14:088 - Try to add a finish here?
- 01:15:066 - Oh, and add a clap here too?
- 00:01:085 - 00:10:822 - Remove all claps here since they don't fit the instruments at this part, please. Then try to use another hitsounding pattern; for example, add a whistle every first and third white tick of every stanza? The whistles should go along pretty well with the song.
- 00:13:437 - Remove the clap here, then add a clap at 00:13:113 (4) and 00:13:762 so the hitsounding here will be more consistent?
- 00:17:350 - 00:18:999 - Add claps every two white ticks? Same reason as the whistles at 00:01:085 - 00:10:822.
- 00:19:639 (1,3) - The whistles aren't necessary, I think... I suppose you should just remove them.
- 00:21:595 - Add a clap?
- 00:27:790 (2) - Move this to (460,176)? It looks neater, IMO.
- 00:31:050 (6,7) - Don't you think these sliders are too close to each other? Try moving (7) to (224,108) maybe? (You'll have to fix the spacing error that results from this, though!)
- 00:38:060 - Add a finish since there's an audible cymbal sound? Feels empty to leave it unhitsounded.
- 00:40:668 - ^
- 00:43:277 - ^
- 00:45:396 - ^
- 00:48:004 - ^
- 00:54:525 (3) - Move the middle node to (48,296) and the one on the tail to (-4,272)? Looks tidier this way.
- 01:03:655 (1) - Make it look like this for a better flow, and again, to make it look tidier?
- 01:08:871 - Add a finish to be consistent with 01:09:849?
- 01:10:175 - Remove the clap here since it's empty here in the song?
- 01:14:088 (2) - Try to make this symmetrical by playing with the nodes? It doesn't look appealing the way it is currently...
- 01:21:587 (1) - Remove the whistle? It conflicts with the other whistles around it.
- 01:22:997 - Add a whistle to follow the piano?
- The spacing looks pretty inconsistent... I'd say to only use up to three spacing values to be used consistently whenever you're not making a jump. It looks pretty messy as is. And the overall placement does look kinda unstructured. Try to make them look more appealing.
- 00:01:085 - 00:10:822 - Same as Normal, but using the default Soft sampleset.
- 00:37:571 (4) - NC this since the song's rhythm "resets" (I don't really have any better word for this, but I hope you get what I meant) here?
- 00:41:157 - Add a finish to be consistent with 00:38:549 (3)?
- 00:42:788 (6,1) - Swap NC? I think the combo pattern is more correct this way.
- 00:45:396 - Add a finish too, to follow that loud cymbal sound?
- 00:48:004 - ^
- 01:01:046 (4) - Add a finish? It should be obvious why after listening to the song here!
- 01:03:002 (1,2,3,4) - Make the spacing consistent so it won't be confusing?
- 01:03:655 - Add a finish?
- 01:05:611 (9,10) - I understand why are you making this kind of rhythm, but it's really not recommended since it's not accurately following the song at all. I suggest to simply use a 1/1 slider.
- 01:09:360 (4) - Move to (488,312) so 01:08:871 (1,2,3,4) will form a straight line? Looks neater like that, IMO.
- 01:09:849 (1,2,3,4) - Also make this a straight line too?
- 01:14:088 (6) - It's also not recommended to use a slider with multiple repeats since it can be really confusing to players because they don't know when will the slider ends. Just split this into a few sliders and/or circles.
- 01:20:283 - Add a whistle here to follow the piano?
- 01:21:261 (1) - There is nothing notable enough on the repeat for a whistle to be used on it, so remove it and add one at 01:21:261 and 01:21:913 instead?
- 01:22:997 - Again, add a whistle here to follow the piano?
- 00:01:085 - 00:10:822 - Same as Normal and Hard. And I just noticed something... Why is the sample usage very different between difficulties?
- 00:05:949 (1) - Remove the NC? There is no need of an NC here, really.
- 00:07:606 (4) - Move this to (272,240) so it'll look neater here?
- 00:14:735 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Uh, the music doesn't support these twelve consecutive claps, which makes them sound very, VERY annoying (objectively of course). The best start here would be to remove all of them.
- 00:22:573 (5,6) - Ctrl+G for a better flow?
- 00:26:485 (3,4) - ^
- 00:31:702 (5) - Use an NC to indicate that this slider is slower than the usual ones?
- 00:37:571 - Add a finish?
- 00:41:157 (2) - ^
- 00:42:788 (9,1) - Swap NC so the combo pattern will be consistent like the previous two combos before them?
- 00:51:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Uh, remove all the hitsounds here (except the finish on 00:51:917 (1)), then add a clap on 00:52:243 (5), a whistle on 00:52:651 (3), and another clap on 00:52:895 (6)? The current hitsounding is... kinda similar to 00:14:735 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) in terms of quality, if I have to be blunt (sorry, couldn't find a better wording lol). A simpler hitsounding would do better.
- 01:09:686 (1) - You shouldn't map an empty part of the song like this one because it'd be confusing. And NOT silencing it, as it'll only lead to extreme awkwardness and confusion in the players' side. Just remove this, please.
- 01:14:088 - Add a finish? I think it fits with the song...
- 01:14:088 (4,1) - Swap NC? It follows the music's rhythm more correctly this way.
- 01:21:913 - Whistle to follow the piano?
- 01:22:622 - 01:23:444 - ^ (Everything in this range, I mean.)
- 00:01:085 - 00:10:822 - While adding a whistle only once every stanza is relatively correct, many piano notes here are stronger on the third white ticks. I suggest to add the whistles there too, not just the first white ticks (at 00:01:733 (2) and 00:03:030 (5), for example).
- 00:17:350 - I'd say to use the S:C2 clap here (or maybe just try to play with the S:C2 sample in the entire diff). It fits pretty well with the instrument.
- 00:17:021 (2,3) - These objects are too close to each other, making them feel weird to play. Consider giving more space?
- 00:21:921 (3) - Apply NC here since the music's rhythm "resets" (?) and starts to become stronger here?
- 00:29:094 (1,2,3) - What's with the inconsistency in spacing? Value-wise, they are consistent, but that's because the spacing calculation becomes different when you're changing the slider velocity. Try to make the spacing between them visually equal. This pattern will look neater that way.
- 00:30:398 (1,2,3) - ^
- 00:29:420 (3,4) - Make the spacing between them bigger (maybe 1.8x or something) so they'll be more comfortable to play?
- 00:45:396 - Add a finish here? I think it's obvious why.
- 00:50:613 (4,6) - Add NCs here since they're the start of entirely different patterns? Also, add a finish on (4)?
- 00:51:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same case as 00:51:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) in Miichan's Insane diff.
- 01:01:046 - Add a finish? The music here really calls for it, IMO.
- 01:02:187 - ^
- 01:03:655 (1) - Drag this one grid down so the spacing at 01:03:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) will be consistent?
- 01:08:382 - Remove the finish since there's nothing that sounds like it in the song?
- 01:08:382 (1,2) - Swap NC because the music's rhythm only "resets" when (2) appears? I personally think that they shouldn't be like this on the first place, as the symmetry here implies that (1) is on the same stanza as (2), while it isn't really the case. Just try to only integrate (I hope you know what I'm talking about...) (1) into the 01:06:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) combo, and (2) only with 01:09:360 (3,4,5,6).
- 01:19:957 (2,4) - Try to make something like this? It looks tidier and it'll make this part look nicer.
- 01:20:283 (3) - Move this to (96,144) so the spacing will be more consistent and thus the pattern here will look neater? Also, add a whistle here and remove the one at 01:20:609 because the piano on the tick where this circle is... is stronger?
- 01:21:261 (5) - Add a whistle here too since the piano is pretty audible?
You guys are pretty good in terms of rhythm, but the placement, hitsounding, flow, and slider shapes obviously need to be reworked. You'll need to get some very experienced (and patient!) modders here in order to guide you through everything. I'm not really patient in this kind of stuff, so sorry, I'm afraid I cannot give further support.
There will always be a way to get stuff done if you really want to do it, though!
Good luck on the way
Topic Starter
just hv fixed what u suggested, thanks dear Hinsvar
I will keep working on it, thanks for such professional modding!
I will keep working on it, thanks for such professional modding!
30 min free mod:
Your insane:
Hard:
Your insane:
SPOILER
Overall: More sliders to match the singing
00:15:302 (9,1) - slider 1 on top of the drum roll
00:17:350 (2) - snapped about 1.5 further from 1
00:18:010 (1,2,3) - 1 and 3 curves
00:19:163 add note
00:37:571 (1) - make it 1 beat long, add a slider @ 00:38:060 that is also at 1 beat long, and same with 00:38:549
00:40:179 (1,2) - ^
00:42:788 (1,2) - ^
00:15:302 (9,1) - slider 1 on top of the drum roll
00:17:350 (2) - snapped about 1.5 further from 1
00:18:010 (1,2,3) - 1 and 3 curves
00:19:163 add note
00:37:571 (1) - make it 1 beat long, add a slider @ 00:38:060 that is also at 1 beat long, and same with 00:38:549
00:40:179 (1,2) - ^
00:42:788 (1,2) - ^
Hard:
SPOILER
00:01:085 (1,2) - slider 1 curving downwards, 2 is curving up wards
00:19:965 (3,4,5,6) - make them trail instead of going over eachother
00:21:269 (9) - 1/2 long slider
00:53:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - too many hitsounds
01:06:915 (2,5) - sliders going on top of eachother
00:19:965 (3,4,5,6) - make them trail instead of going over eachother
00:21:269 (9) - 1/2 long slider
00:53:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - too many hitsounds
01:06:915 (2,5) - sliders going on top of eachother
Mod from queue~
4th time modding something. Sorry if I'm not helpful I'm new at modding >.>
[General]
Multiple red ticks for timing gets me weary for a really short map. You should get someone to check the timing for you
[not49's Easy]
There's some inconsistent spacing in this map. Be sure to properly DS things to 1.00x pls. This makes it hard for modders to mod. Please fix it.
00:27:138 (1,3) - these make a weird overlap. It shows while playing, consider moving the 1 downward (keeping DS) or maybe stack 1 with 3
00:30:398 (4,1,2) - these are pretty condensed and the DS isn't consistent here.
00:51:917 (1) - maybe it would be cool to shorten this slider to 00:52:895 - and then have a circle at 00:53:221 - I think it makes more sense to have something start at the kiai rather then a slider to end at the kiai
you could have something like this: 01:06:589 (1) - this breaks ds too. make sure everything is 1.00x
01:08:871 (1,2) - a bit close in my opinion
That's it for this diff::::Please fix the DS problems
[Normal]
00:16:032 (3,1) - maybe form a blanket? 00:29:746 (3,6,7,1) - that's a lot of straight sliders :p Maybe consider having some curvy flow?
00:47:678 (7) - maybe stack with the head of 00:48:004 (1) ? 7 also breaks DS
That's it for this diff:::: o3o
[Hard]
Maybe AR+1? There's some hard to read things in here
Like this 00:19:965 (3,4,5,6) - That's pretty hard to read for this AR
00:30:398 (1,2) - weird overlap. It's noticeable in game
00:31:376 (4) - awkward antijump, It looks like it's the same distance from 3 as it is with 2 and 3. Since the ar is 7 it's pretty hard to read and I'm not sure that it goes well with the song either.
00:36:267 (5) - maybe finish on the slider end and have normal sample set on this : 00:37:082 (1) -
00:49:309 (1,2,3,4) - idea? something like this?: 01:03:002 (1,2,3,4,1) - whew things like this are pretty hard to read
That's it for this diff:::: o3o Overall I think you should use more ds in this diff. Especially if you're going to keep it ar7
[Insane]
00:18:669 (3) - Ctrl + G for better flow?
01:00:231 (2,3,4,5,6) - maybe make them so that they look a bit more symmetrical: 01:21:913 (2) - Ctrl + G for better flow?
That's it for this diff::: dayummm I couldn't play it because I'm too newb at playing
[Vincent's Insane]
00:26:648 (4,5) - these should have some sort of hitsounding. It feels a bit empty here (the 4)
00:31:213 (4,5,6,7) - awkward flow, consider switching 6 and 5? I don't see any reason for there to be a jump. you can always increase the spacing but it's better to have good flow. I doesn't feel too bad when playing it so this isn't really important
01:21:913 (7) - Ctrl + G?
01:22:622 (8) - ^
01:23:444 (1) - ^
That's it for this diff:::: o3o
wejiofwaekladsm, Sorry for my bad modding skills though
Good luck for ranked! ^^
Topic Starter
mates , thanks for modding, I will fix it ASAP
你好，
from pm，最近有点事，晚了一点
difficulty:not94's easy
00:11:816 (1,2,3,4) - clap is a little loudly...prefer to change to a quteter one.
00:21:758 (1) - the end is nearly silence ... i don't know it's unrank or not, but i prefer to make it a little loudly.
01:22:622 (4) - unsnap (aimod)
difficulty:normal
00:10:822 (3) - 这里前面所有note的音效有点单调...在其中加入一些whistle会好很多
00:14:735 (1,2,3) - 这些感觉都可以加finish，音比较重
00:18:999 (3) - unsnap (aimod)
difficulty:hard
replay-->http://puu.sh/7yQRm.osr
00:09:848 (3) - unsanp (aimod)
difficulty:insane
00:14:735 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 不打算拉一条线出来？
00:51:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 好长的连打
01:19:305 (3,4,5,6,7) - 3和4最好上移一点，整个五边形不太规则
difficulty:Vincent's insane
i think it's ok
加油
from pm，最近有点事，晚了一点
difficulty:not94's easy
00:11:816 (1,2,3,4) - clap is a little loudly...prefer to change to a quteter one.
00:21:758 (1) - the end is nearly silence ... i don't know it's unrank or not, but i prefer to make it a little loudly.
01:22:622 (4) - unsnap (aimod)
difficulty:normal
00:10:822 (3) - 这里前面所有note的音效有点单调...在其中加入一些whistle会好很多
00:14:735 (1,2,3) - 这些感觉都可以加finish，音比较重
00:18:999 (3) - unsnap (aimod)
difficulty:hard
replay-->http://puu.sh/7yQRm.osr
00:09:848 (3) - unsanp (aimod)
difficulty:insane
00:14:735 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 不打算拉一条线出来？
00:51:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 好长的连打
01:19:305 (3,4,5,6,7) - 3和4最好上移一点，整个五边形不太规则
difficulty:Vincent's insane
i think it's ok
加油
Hello Miichan!
From my modding queue
[not94's Easy]
00:03:679 (1,2) - I think it would look better if these two sliders mirror'd each other.
00:05:625 (2,1) – I don't think these sliders look good next to each other. Do something that looks like this maybe?
00:39:201 (1,2,3) – You can make this more of a straight line. I will show you in picture:
00:42:788 (2,3) – I could be wrong, but I don't think these are perfectly blanketed.
00:45:396 (1,2,3,4) – 1, 2, 3, and the head of 4 should make a more symmetrical shape.
01:19:305 – I suggest you lower the slider velocity here
00:53:547 (1) – I don't think a finish belongs here.
01:02:187 – Add finish here
[Normal]
00:04:328 (5,6) – Blanket these?
00:20:291 (2) – What do you think of this rhythm? I think it sounds better
Finish here 00:19:313 - and here 00:20:291 -
00:46:700 (6) – I think this slider should be straight and parallel to this slider 00:46:048 (5) -
01:08:871 (4) – New combo
01:09:849 (5) – Ctrl + g?
[Hard]
00:19:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) – There was something about this combo that didn't feel right to me when I was playing it. I think it is because I wasn't expecting any notes right here 00:20:128 -
What do you think of this? Remove these hit circles 00:19:965 (3,4) - and make this slider a reverse slider 00:19:639 (2) - So it ends here 00:19:965 -
00:30:398 (1,2) – I personally don't like how these overlap, but its not a big deal
Another suggestion: Remove these 00:55:177 (9,10) - and add a 1/1 slider here? 00:55:177 -
01:15:229 – Spinner should start here
[Insane]
00:17:021 (1) – I think this slider would look better flipped horizontally
00:20:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Sounds cool if these are drum hitsounds
00:37:571 (1,2) - Feels better if these are 1/1 sliders.
00:40:179 (1,2) - ^
Suggestion: Hit circle here 00:44:092 - . Reverse ½ slider here 00:44:255 - .
00:58:112 (4) – Flows better if you lower this slider just a little bit
Finishes here 01:09:360 (4) - and here 01:10:338 (8) - ?
Very fun difficulty
Here is my replay and score (lol I'm bad)
[Vincent's Insane]
00:42:788 (1,2,3) - I like these but I think you should make them look a little different than the previous ones, or else it gets repetitive.
00:19:313 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) – This section doesn't go well with music imo.
01:24:620 – Spinner should start here?
Another really fun difficulty!
I couldn't find much I didn't like.
Here is my replay and score (Really sloppy but I still thought you might wanna see it )
Really really good mapset
Hopefully I was a little helpful!
Shot a star, good luck!
From my modding queue
[not94's Easy]
00:03:679 (1,2) - I think it would look better if these two sliders mirror'd each other.
00:05:625 (2,1) – I don't think these sliders look good next to each other. Do something that looks like this maybe?
00:39:201 (1,2,3) – You can make this more of a straight line. I will show you in picture:
00:42:788 (2,3) – I could be wrong, but I don't think these are perfectly blanketed.
00:45:396 (1,2,3,4) – 1, 2, 3, and the head of 4 should make a more symmetrical shape.
01:19:305 – I suggest you lower the slider velocity here
00:53:547 (1) – I don't think a finish belongs here.
01:02:187 – Add finish here
[Normal]
00:04:328 (5,6) – Blanket these?
00:20:291 (2) – What do you think of this rhythm? I think it sounds better
Finish here 00:19:313 - and here 00:20:291 -
00:46:700 (6) – I think this slider should be straight and parallel to this slider 00:46:048 (5) -
01:08:871 (4) – New combo
01:09:849 (5) – Ctrl + g?
[Hard]
00:19:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) – There was something about this combo that didn't feel right to me when I was playing it. I think it is because I wasn't expecting any notes right here 00:20:128 -
What do you think of this? Remove these hit circles 00:19:965 (3,4) - and make this slider a reverse slider 00:19:639 (2) - So it ends here 00:19:965 -
00:30:398 (1,2) – I personally don't like how these overlap, but its not a big deal
Another suggestion: Remove these 00:55:177 (9,10) - and add a 1/1 slider here? 00:55:177 -
01:15:229 – Spinner should start here
[Insane]
00:17:021 (1) – I think this slider would look better flipped horizontally
00:20:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Sounds cool if these are drum hitsounds
00:37:571 (1,2) - Feels better if these are 1/1 sliders.
00:40:179 (1,2) - ^
Suggestion: Hit circle here 00:44:092 - . Reverse ½ slider here 00:44:255 - .
00:58:112 (4) – Flows better if you lower this slider just a little bit
Finishes here 01:09:360 (4) - and here 01:10:338 (8) - ?
Very fun difficulty
Here is my replay and score (lol I'm bad)
[Vincent's Insane]
00:42:788 (1,2,3) - I like these but I think you should make them look a little different than the previous ones, or else it gets repetitive.
00:19:313 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) – This section doesn't go well with music imo.
01:24:620 – Spinner should start here?
Another really fun difficulty!
I couldn't find much I didn't like.
Here is my replay and score (Really sloppy but I still thought you might wanna see it
)Really really good mapset
Hopefully I was a little helpful!
Shot a star, good luck!
Topic Starter
thanks everyone !
I will work hard on it
I will work hard on it
I'M terrible at hitounding '[]'
[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with purple is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on my individual opinion Ignore them if you think they are helpless
没有hard吗？
[Normal]
最后一根红线是necessary的吗？以及，是否可以不通过红线改变滑条速度呢。。。个人建议尽量不要这样做，用绿线更好（虽然BPM的确是更改了）
00:06:273 (1) - not necessary 如果你是跟vocal（我个人喜欢跟节奏或者vocal选一个……仅供参考
00:06:273 (1) - 如果是跟vocal加一个note
00:11:800 (2) - NC
00:32:343 (8) - 和第一个一样
01:08:865 (1) - 可以使用
以及我normal作图很差的，都是仅供参考
[Insane]
00:08:868 (1) - 没有跟着任何节奏……不适合
00:14:735 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -请再斟酌……
00:17:833 (1) - 有点死……
00:23:050 (1,2) - 这个三连……要是我我不会放，一是无东西可以跟，二是破坏我跳图的节奏……（我是鶸
相反的，00:26:800 (1) - 这个连就很perfect
00:44:083 (4,5) - 做个四方跳！强烈建议！
01:05:604 (6) - 节奏很活跃的图这里太僵硬格式化……建议换换排列
00:39:028 (4) - 和00:41:474 (4) - 感觉节奏应该是相同的……还请斟酌
跳的我很爽！
[V's Insane]
有很多我不喜欢的……但是不能称之为不合适的，于是我默默的跳过了……只有几点
00:33:658 (4,5,6,7) - 觉得不适合。。。不过说不上来哪里不适合
00:36:267 (3) - 连打略突兀
00:39:038 (1) - 和后面对不上……后面都没放连打……我觉得是我没好好听的原因……
01:00:068 (1) - 这个跳没有美感……
也是打的比较爽
That's all, Good luck and remember to make reply to me
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with purple is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on my individual opinion
Ignore them if you think they are helpless 没有hard吗？
[Normal]
最后一根红线是necessary的吗？以及，是否可以不通过红线改变滑条速度呢。。。个人建议尽量不要这样做，用绿线更好（虽然BPM的确是更改了）
00:06:273 (1) - not necessary 如果你是跟vocal（我个人喜欢跟节奏或者vocal选一个……仅供参考
00:06:273 (1) - 如果是跟vocal加一个note
00:11:800 (2) - NC
00:32:343 (8) - 和第一个一样
01:08:865 (1) - 可以使用
以及我normal作图很差的，都是仅供参考
[Insane]
00:08:868 (1) - 没有跟着任何节奏……不适合
00:14:735 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -请再斟酌……
00:17:833 (1) - 有点死……
00:23:050 (1,2) - 这个三连……要是我我不会放，一是无东西可以跟，二是破坏我跳图的节奏……（我是鶸
相反的，00:26:800 (1) - 这个连就很perfect
00:44:083 (4,5) - 做个四方跳！强烈建议！
01:05:604 (6) - 节奏很活跃的图这里太僵硬格式化……建议换换排列
00:39:028 (4) - 和00:41:474 (4) - 感觉节奏应该是相同的……还请斟酌
跳的我很爽！
[V's Insane]
有很多我不喜欢的……但是不能称之为不合适的，于是我默默的跳过了……只有几点
00:33:658 (4,5,6,7) - 觉得不适合。。。不过说不上来哪里不适合
00:36:267 (3) - 连打略突兀
00:39:038 (1) - 和后面对不上……后面都没放连打……我觉得是我没好好听的原因……
01:00:068 (1) - 这个跳没有美感……
也是打的比较爽
That's all, Good luck and remember to make reply to me
Topic Starter
不錯不錯, 你這種MOD 我還蠻喜歡的, 謝謝囉
妈呀都会中文，我该用什么语言mod
Hello there!! just a random person here trying to help -
not94's easy -
your tags are different on easy- remove the commas from the tags(they are "beyond the boundary, opening, mirai kuriyama, kyoto animation, Vincent, Not94", change them to: beyond the boundary opening mirai kuriyama kyoto animation Vincent Not94 to match with the other diffs)
01:06:583 (1) - the slider's repeat circle is sort of off-beat and feels weird? it ends in the red tick. not exactly an error but somewhat an opinion.
01:15:387 (1) - spinner spam? if possible reduce to only 2 spinners, beginners go crazy with spinners and spin ALL around the screen and lose the positioning of their mouse which makes the difficulty seem a lot harder for them.
good luck! the map seems really fun. the normal diff is very good for your first map.
not94's easy -
your tags are different on easy- remove the commas from the tags(they are "beyond the boundary, opening, mirai kuriyama, kyoto animation, Vincent, Not94", change them to: beyond the boundary opening mirai kuriyama kyoto animation Vincent Not94 to match with the other diffs)
01:06:583 (1) - the slider's repeat circle is sort of off-beat and feels weird? it ends in the red tick. not exactly an error but somewhat an opinion.
01:15:387 (1) - spinner spam? if possible reduce to only 2 spinners, beginners go crazy with spinners and spin ALL around the screen and lose the positioning of their mouse which makes the difficulty seem a lot harder for them.
good luck! the map seems really fun. the normal diff is very good for your first map.
Topic Starter
中文英文也可以615915887 wrote:
妈呀都会中文，我该用什么语言mod
Hi.
Modding as requested a while ago.
[General]
Timing is off. Try this:
1. Offset: 1,081ms BPM: 185.00
2. Offset: 10,162ms BPM: 182.00
3. Offset: 11,480ms BPM: 184.00
4. Offset: 21,925ms BPM: 184.03
5. Offset: 81,915ms BPM: 168.00
6. Offset: 82,986ms BPM: 134.00
7. Offset: 83,433ms BPM: 105.00
8. Offset: 84,575ms BPM: 67.00
Make sure tags are consistent in all diffs.
[Easy]
00:01:085 (1,2) - Maybe fix spacing?
00:03:679 (1) - This would look better blanketing 00:03:030 (2).
00:05:625 (2,1) - Maybe fix spacing
00:06:922 (1,2) - This flow is a bit ankward due the peak it forms, make something smoother, not exactly like this, but an idea of how it could be, this would require to fix the placement of other objects.
00:11:800 (1,2) - Improve the blanket here
00:13:430 (4,1) - Fix the spacing for these ones, it's a bit hard to tell they're 1 beat apart each other.
00:32:343 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This combo is a bit buffed up in difficulty in comparison with the previous one, given the rhythm in the music is quite similar in bot parts, it'd be better to use a rhythm similar as in the previous combo.
00:41:148 (4,1) - This overlap looks very ugly :c Move (4) down, around x:216 y:252
00:47:343 (4) - Move the reverse arrow a bit to the left, it's covered by the hitburst of 00:46:039 (2) for a considerable time.
00:51:909 (2) - This slider matches better the vocals ending in 00:52:561.
00:54:517 (4,5) - Improve blanket.
00:58:756 (3) - Maybe put NC?
01:01:040 (6) - Move this around x:156 y:200 to improve blanket.
01:05:279 (2) - Move the tail a bit to the right so the blanket looks better.
01:22:607 (1,2) - I highly suggest you to use a slider here, the timing change will trick beginners and they'll likely hit these in a very inaccurate way.
[Normal]
00:01:732 (2) - Put whistle in the end.
00:04:327 (5) - Put whistle in the end, not in the reverse.
00:05:624 (7) - Maybe put whistle.
00:11:800 (1) - Remove NC.
00:14:083 (6) - Put NC and remove it from 00:14:735 (1).
00:19:300 - I noticed this diff lacks of 1/2 rhythm and this spot would be nice to put some, this would also make a nice spread with Easy which introduces a simpler version of this rhythm. Do something like any of the suggestions below:
00:34:952 (1) - Maybe remove NC.
00:46:691 (1) - Remove NC.
01:00:387 (1) - Remove NC here too, also you could remove the reverse and begin the spinner in 01:01:039, which feels way better.
01:08:865 (1,2) - Do a rhythm similar as the one I suggested in 00:19:300, try to avoid this short sliders with more than 1 repeat.
01:15:061 (1) - I'd suggest to put a circle here and begin this spinner in 01:15:224, it'd make more sense with vocals.
01:20:604 (3) - Remove the repeat and put a circle there? It'd fit better with vocals.
01:21:583 (1) - Remove NC.
01:23:475 (1) - Remove NC.
[Insane]
AR 8 fits better with the map, imo.
00:09:841 (3) - This note would play better begin stacked in 00:10:170 (4).
00:11:148 (1) - Remove NC?
00:16:039 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd suggest you to use a pentagon shape (not star) for these, the flow is pretty uncomfy for (4,5)
00:19:789 (4,5) - Try to move this note closer, the jumps feels a bit bad here as there's no big emphasis in the music, added to the drastic decrease in spacing for the next note.
00:20:930 (1,2) - The NC should be in (2).
00:21:420 (3,4) - I'd reverse this (Ctrl+G), flows better.
00:23:050 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - All these should be in the same combo.
00:25:822 (5,1) - The NC should be in (5).
00:24:517 - 00:26:637 - To be honest, I feel this plays a bit ankward due the combos being placed wrong, but I'd suggest you to change a bit the placement here after you made the combo changes, it looks like you only made patterns and put NC for each one, I may be wrong on this though.
00:29:090 - 00:45:387 - I'd suggest you to increase the slider velocity here to 1.0x, it feels a bit ankward being fast between circles and slowing down drastically on the sliders.
00:35:034 (2) - I'd suggest to remove this, this triple is overmapped imo.
00:35:686 (2,4) - And these too.
00:56:311 (2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest you to polish this star shape and make it more regular.
00:57:126 (1,2,3,4) - Use 1/2 sliders instead these 3/4 sliders, they compliment the song way better.
01:00:224 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - This feels a bit unconfortable as the biggest jump should be in (6,1) and not in (5,6), it'd be better to close the V shape considerably and reverse some circles, like here. Note that this is not perfect, is just a guide of how could you do it.
01:01:854 (1) - Remove NC.
01:01:854 (1,2) - These notes would play better as a 1/2 slider for vocals.
01:02:180 (1) - The rhythm here is wrong, as the 1/4 stream should begin in 01:02:669, try this rhythm instead
01:03:485 (1) - Use two circles and make a jump between them, hitting a circle in 01:03:648, is better as the vocals are stronger here.
01:05:278 (4) - Move this down and much closer to (5), this big jump doesn't fit at all.
01:08:376 (10) - Remove the slowdown here, there's nothing that helps to foresee this one, so this may be taken as a 1/2 slider instead a 1/1.
01:13:267 (10) - Move this around x:320 y:216, the shape for 01:12:778 (7,8,9,10) would look better and cleaner.
01:14:083 (1) - This slider doesn't fit at all with the song. Make a long slider or map on the drums.
01:22:623 (1,2) - I highly suggest to use a slider here, the timing change makes this part to hit accurately.
01:24:620 (1) - It'd make more sense to remove this and begin the spinner here.
[Vincent's Insane]
AR 8 fits better with the map, imo.
00:01:085 (1) - Maybe remove NC.
00:20:943 (5,1) - This is kinda misleading, at first glance it may be taken as a 1/2 spacing instead 1/1, so it'd be better to move this away.
00:24:040 (5,6,1) - The jump should be in (6,1) and not in (5,6).
00:24:529 - There should be something to hit here, so using 00:24:366 (1,2) the circle first and then the slider would play better imo.
00:37:571 (1,2) - Use 1/1 sliders, the compliment the song better, as you have it now you're ignoring the drums in 00:37:897 and 00:38:386.
00:40:179 (1,2) - ^
00:42:788 (1,2) - ^
00:45:070 (5) - Use a 1/2 slider here, similar reason as above.
01:24:620 (1) - It'd make more sense to remove this and begin the spinner here.
That'd be all from my part, I wanted to ask if you are making hard, but I already saw it's in WIP, good luck.
Modding as requested a while ago.
[General]
Timing is off. Try this:1. Offset: 1,081ms BPM: 185.00
2. Offset: 10,162ms BPM: 182.00
3. Offset: 11,480ms BPM: 184.00
4. Offset: 21,925ms BPM: 184.03
5. Offset: 81,915ms BPM: 168.00
6. Offset: 82,986ms BPM: 134.00
7. Offset: 83,433ms BPM: 105.00
8. Offset: 84,575ms BPM: 67.00
1081,324.324324324324,4,2,0,60,1,0It may be off a few ms but it'd be more accurate. Or you could take it from popner's mapset if you're using the same mp3. Make sure to make it consistent in all diffs.
10162,329.67032967033,4,2,0,70,1,0
11480,326.086956521739,4,2,0,70,1,0
21925,326.033798837146,4,2,0,35,1,0
81915,357.142857142857,4,2,0,45,1,0
82986,447.761194029851,4,2,0,30,1,0
83433,571.428571428571,4,2,0,30,1,0
84575,895.522388059701,4,2,0,30,1,0
Make sure tags are consistent in all diffs.[Easy]
00:01:085 (1,2) - Maybe fix spacing?
00:03:679 (1) - This would look better blanketing 00:03:030 (2).
00:05:625 (2,1) - Maybe fix spacing
00:06:922 (1,2) - This flow is a bit ankward due the peak it forms, make something smoother, not exactly like this, but an idea of how it could be, this would require to fix the placement of other objects.
00:11:800 (1,2) - Improve the blanket here
00:13:430 (4,1) - Fix the spacing for these ones, it's a bit hard to tell they're 1 beat apart each other.
00:32:343 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This combo is a bit buffed up in difficulty in comparison with the previous one, given the rhythm in the music is quite similar in bot parts, it'd be better to use a rhythm similar as in the previous combo.
00:41:148 (4,1) - This overlap looks very ugly :c Move (4) down, around x:216 y:252
00:47:343 (4) - Move the reverse arrow a bit to the left, it's covered by the hitburst of 00:46:039 (2) for a considerable time.00:51:909 (2) - This slider matches better the vocals ending in 00:52:561.
00:54:517 (4,5) - Improve blanket.
00:58:756 (3) - Maybe put NC?
01:01:040 (6) - Move this around x:156 y:200 to improve blanket.
01:05:279 (2) - Move the tail a bit to the right so the blanket looks better.
01:22:607 (1,2) - I highly suggest you to use a slider here, the timing change will trick beginners and they'll likely hit these in a very inaccurate way.
[Normal]
00:01:732 (2) - Put whistle in the end.
00:04:327 (5) - Put whistle in the end, not in the reverse.
00:05:624 (7) - Maybe put whistle.
00:11:800 (1) - Remove NC.
00:14:083 (6) - Put NC and remove it from 00:14:735 (1).
00:19:300 - I noticed this diff lacks of 1/2 rhythm and this spot would be nice to put some, this would also make a nice spread with Easy which introduces a simpler version of this rhythm. Do something like any of the suggestions below:
00:34:952 (1) - Maybe remove NC.
00:46:691 (1) - Remove NC.
01:00:387 (1) - Remove NC here too, also you could remove the reverse and begin the spinner in 01:01:039, which feels way better.
01:08:865 (1,2) - Do a rhythm similar as the one I suggested in 00:19:300, try to avoid this short sliders with more than 1 repeat.
01:15:061 (1) - I'd suggest to put a circle here and begin this spinner in 01:15:224, it'd make more sense with vocals.
01:20:604 (3) - Remove the repeat and put a circle there? It'd fit better with vocals.
01:21:583 (1) - Remove NC.
01:23:475 (1) - Remove NC.
[Insane]
AR 8 fits better with the map, imo.
00:09:841 (3) - This note would play better begin stacked in 00:10:170 (4).
00:11:148 (1) - Remove NC?
00:16:039 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd suggest you to use a pentagon shape (not star) for these, the flow is pretty uncomfy for (4,5)
00:19:789 (4,5) - Try to move this note closer, the jumps feels a bit bad here as there's no big emphasis in the music, added to the drastic decrease in spacing for the next note.
00:20:930 (1,2) - The NC should be in (2).
00:21:420 (3,4) - I'd reverse this (Ctrl+G), flows better.
00:23:050 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - All these should be in the same combo.
00:25:822 (5,1) - The NC should be in (5).
00:24:517 - 00:26:637 - To be honest, I feel this plays a bit ankward due the combos being placed wrong, but I'd suggest you to change a bit the placement here after you made the combo changes, it looks like you only made patterns and put NC for each one, I may be wrong on this though.
00:29:090 - 00:45:387 - I'd suggest you to increase the slider velocity here to 1.0x, it feels a bit ankward being fast between circles and slowing down drastically on the sliders.
00:35:034 (2) - I'd suggest to remove this, this triple is overmapped imo.
00:35:686 (2,4) - And these too.
00:56:311 (2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest you to polish this star shape and make it more regular.
00:57:126 (1,2,3,4) - Use 1/2 sliders instead these 3/4 sliders, they compliment the song way better.
01:00:224 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - This feels a bit unconfortable as the biggest jump should be in (6,1) and not in (5,6), it'd be better to close the V shape considerably and reverse some circles, like here. Note that this is not perfect, is just a guide of how could you do it.
01:01:854 (1) - Remove NC.
01:01:854 (1,2) - These notes would play better as a 1/2 slider for vocals.
01:02:180 (1) - The rhythm here is wrong, as the 1/4 stream should begin in 01:02:669, try this rhythm instead
01:03:485 (1) - Use two circles and make a jump between them, hitting a circle in 01:03:648, is better as the vocals are stronger here.
01:05:278 (4) - Move this down and much closer to (5), this big jump doesn't fit at all.
01:08:376 (10) - Remove the slowdown here, there's nothing that helps to foresee this one, so this may be taken as a 1/2 slider instead a 1/1.01:13:267 (10) - Move this around x:320 y:216, the shape for 01:12:778 (7,8,9,10) would look better and cleaner.
01:14:083 (1) - This slider doesn't fit at all with the song. Make a long slider or map on the drums.
01:22:623 (1,2) - I highly suggest to use a slider here, the timing change makes this part to hit accurately.
01:24:620 (1) - It'd make more sense to remove this and begin the spinner here.
[Vincent's Insane]
AR 8 fits better with the map, imo.
00:01:085 (1) - Maybe remove NC.
00:20:943 (5,1) - This is kinda misleading, at first glance it may be taken as a 1/2 spacing instead 1/1, so it'd be better to move this away.
00:24:040 (5,6,1) - The jump should be in (6,1) and not in (5,6).
00:24:529 - There should be something to hit here, so using 00:24:366 (1,2) the circle first and then the slider would play better imo.
00:37:571 (1,2) - Use 1/1 sliders, the compliment the song better, as you have it now you're ignoring the drums in 00:37:897 and 00:38:386.
00:40:179 (1,2) - ^
00:42:788 (1,2) - ^
00:45:070 (5) - Use a 1/2 slider here, similar reason as above.
01:24:620 (1) - It'd make more sense to remove this and begin the spinner here.
That'd be all from my part, I wanted to ask if you are making hard, but I already saw it's in WIP, good luck.
对不起最近比较忙，好久没上游戏。每个diff都打了一下，感觉很不错,insane的跳有几个距离好大，显得有点太规则了，skin很漂亮。
好久没摸也没有摸图的热情了，实在是抱歉...
nice map ,have a star
好久没摸也没有摸图的热情了，实在是抱歉...
nice map ,have a star
Topic Starter
按錯了... 給了KUDOSU .哈哈
不過現在還是等gd完成， 此圖先擱置一下
不過現在還是等gd完成， 此圖先擱置一下
When your map is ready to be modded, poke me in game please! 
IamKwaN wrote:
When your map is ready to be modded, poke me in game please!
Why did you give up this?
Topic Starter
the person who accepted to make the hard guest diff was disappearedCaffe_[Latte] wrote:
:(
Why did you give up this?
If you need someone to make a hard GD, I could give it a shot?
Topic Starter
if u feel free, plz make a hard GD for me, I will work again on this map[ Joey ] wrote:
If you need someone to make a hard GD, I could give it a shot?
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