No Dap wrote:

[Normal]
00:03:848 (5) - NC Oh right NC has to be here, fixed.
00:04:212 (1) - delete NC Done.
00:25:303 (2,3) - blanket properly Fixed.

[Insane]
00:14:939 (3) - This is blanketing 00:13:848 (4) - so no changes here.

SPOILER

00:35:484 (3) - crtl+g Why? it isn't bad to have a jump here, else this would be boring.
00:35:848 (4) - ^ No.
00:38:939 (8) - on 6 tail? Same as before, this wouldl be boring if I move it there.
00:57:303 (1,2) - reduce distance a bit Nah, this was made on purpose and I think the pattern is pretty good, also this is the only pattern with such a big spacing, and since this is an Insane diff this isn't a problem, right?
01:24:212 (1,2) - those hit claps sound awkward to me. I'm just following music, delete this notes and listen by yourself.

1. Clean

1. 00:12:939 (1) - finish + whistle like you did with 00:24:575 (1) -
2. 00:14:393 (1,2,3) - Use an equal distance between them? personally I feel the jump from 2 to 3 really forced, maybe try some similar as:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:14:939 (3,1) - sorry for nazy, but blanket is too close, consider to move 00:15:666 (1) - 1 or 2 grids to the left.
4. 00:17:030 just wonder, why you didn't map this? since you map the one at 00:22:757 (6,7,8) -
5. 00:21:848 (2) - In my opinion this circle is sounding weird here, It doesn't have a real support from the music, maybe just convert 00:21:484 (1,2) - in a slider sound a lot better for me .
6. 00:29:848 (6) - I really think the repeat slider doesn't fit here, 00:29:848 sound here is really weak compared to 00:30:030 - 00:30:212 - (they have drum sound), probably I'll suggest you to change the rhythm to:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:32:939 (6) - 2 circles fit better the music here, sound at 00:33:121 is really strong and deserve a click action, like you did here 00:38:757 (7,8) -
8. 00:48:757 (4,1) - this doesn't flow nice, maybe just about taste anyways my suggestion:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:50:030 (4) - remove whistle? it broke your pattern.
10. 01:12:575 (1,3) - sorry for nazi again, this blanket can be better.
11. 01:25:666 (11) - this need NC.
    
    pretty nice

1. 00:10:121 (1) - raise volume here 5% is really low, I need a feedback from ending the spinner, since the next circle come to fast.
2. Unsnapped green line at: 00:12:948 - snap to 00:12:939
3. 00:12:848 remove this line It's unnecessary
4. 00:14:393 ad NC? the music change here significatively
5. 00:16:939 finish doesn't fit the song here add a clap instead.
6. 00:18:393 same as above
7. 00:19:666 (5) - probably you'll a NC here too for the antijumps, also is consistent with the one at 00:16:030 (1) -
8. 00:22:575 (6) - add NC? since this one is going too long compared to the others.
9. 00:48:939 (4,5) - stack this properly.
10. 01:03:484 (4,5) - ^
11. 01:08:939 (2,3) - Imo this jump is too big and not comfortable to play for a hard diff.
12. 01:15:484 (4) - missing whistle in the head.
13. 01:16:212 (5,7) - maybe try to stack them for better design
14. 01:25:666 (7) - this need NC
    
    personally I don't like the hitsounds in this diff, maybe just not my taste. anyways the diff is nice

1. 00:11:121 (2,3) - mmm the connection between objects is not natural here and it require a force movement from the cursor, my suggestion:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:24:030 you should add a circle here, since the music claim for a hit here
3. 01:16:939 I really don't agree with ending slider on really important beats in the music, maybe you can try a more interesting rhythm here.
4. 00:12:575 (4) - you need to add a circle here it's consistent with the above ^ also same suggestion about the rhythm
5. 01:23:484 (2) - I feel this slider weird since it doesn't follow the music nicely, try a 1/2 repeat slider instead?
   
   nice normal diff

1. maybe use HP2? 3 is to hight imo
2. 00:18:575 (2) this need NC
3. 00:42:757 (2,3) - fix the distance o.o I really don't agree with little jumps on easy diff.
4. 01:19:848 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:53:666 (1,2) -
6. 00:36:575 (1,2) - sorry for nazi, but this blanket can be better.
   
   diff is nice, but personally I don't like those jumps QAQ

Natsu wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:12:939 (1) - finish + whistle like you did with 00:24:575 (1) - The Whistle is following a different music sound, that's why I added it there and not before.
2. 00:14:393 (1,2,3) - Use an equal distance between them? personally I feel the jump from 2 to 3 really forced, maybe try some similar as: Ok.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:14:939 (3,1) - sorry for nazy, but blanket is too close, consider to move 00:15:666 (1) - 1 or 2 grids to the left. Ok.
4. 00:17:030 just wonder, why you didn't map this? since you map the one at 00:22:757 (6,7,8) - I just didn't want to follow drums, that's not an issue is it?
5. 00:21:848 (2) - In my opinion this circle is sounding weird here, It doesn't have a real support from the music, maybe just convert 00:21:484 (1,2) - in a slider sound a lot better for me . Oh, I followed drums and music here at the same time, that's why it maybe sounds a bit weird, but it's fine imo.
6. 00:29:848 (6) - I really think the repeat slider doesn't fit here, 00:29:848 sound here is really weak compared to 00:30:030 - 00:30:212 - (they have drum sound), probably I'll suggest you to change the rhythm to: Changed.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:32:939 (6) - 2 circles fit better the music here, sound at 00:33:121 is really strong and deserve a click action, like you did here 00:38:757 (7,8) - I did it this way to follow pattern consistency, so I prefer to keep it.
8. 00:48:757 (4,1) - this doesn't flow nice, maybe just about taste anyways my suggestion: Fine for me.
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:50:030 (4) - remove whistle? it broke your pattern. Actually I forgot to add Whistle in 00:49:666 (3) - , again I'm following a music sound.
10. 01:12:575 (1,3) - sorry for nazi again, this blanket can be better. Fixed.
11. 01:25:666 (11) - this need NC. Why? o.o it seems weird ending a stream with a NC.
    
    pretty nice ^w^

[Normal]

1. 00:11:121 (2,3) - mmm the connection between objects is not natural here and it require a force movement from the cursor, my suggestion: Ok, that seems good.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:24:030 you should add a circle here, since the music claim for a hit here I would like to add it but it would break my pattern since I'm not able to follow spacing consistency here if I don't move 00:24:212 (2) - , so I prefer to keep it like this.
3. 01:16:939 I really don't agree with ending slider on really important beats in the music, maybe you can try a more interesting rhythm here. Well I'm following vocal here, that's why I made it like this, hopefully this won't be a problem.
4. 00:12:575 (4) - you need to add a circle here it's consistent with the above ^ also same suggestion about the rhythm I don't see where I have to add a note but this seems fine on my eyes.
5. 01:23:484 (2) - I feel this slider weird since it doesn't follow the music nicely, try a 1/2 repeat slider instead? That would end too soon and would make this part a bit boring, wouldn't it? I'll keep this too.
   
   nice normal diff :3

1. 01:14:030 (1) - http://puu.sh/6ZHJ9.jpg slider tick on middle plz
   
   Yeah i love it

1. 00:39:484 (1) - how about move this slider x=420 y=112
2. is there any problems?

1. 01:23:484 (1,2) - i think 2 should be NC

1. CLEAR!

Neta wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:39:484 (1) - how about move this slider x=420 y=112 Well didn't move it here but anyways your suggestion gave me an idea to improve this pattern.

Garven wrote:

@Neta

I don't understand what you mean by slider tick in the middle. Care to explain?

Raiku wrote:

[Normal]

00:09:666 (3) - I felt that this curve could be made to flow even smoother by moving 3 down and to the left a little more. I also moved the first point of slider 1 left a little and the last point to the right towards its next note more like so (http://puu.sh/70s2C.jpg). Sure.

00:33:303 (1) - How do you feel about the tail end of this slider blanketing the next slider, nice flow alteration suggestion here (http://puu.sh/70s9N.jpg). Nah, I wanted to try something different here.

00:46:030 (2) - I felt this looked smoother with the tail end of 2 moved to the right to meet the entrance of the next slider perfectly (http://puu.sh/70sfS.jpg). My bad, fixed.

01:04:575 (2) - How do you feel about my flowier alternative to this sequence by adjusting the curve of this slider and positioning is as such (http://puu.sh/70sqq.jpg). Seems good but I think both what I did and your suggestion flow nicely, so I'll keep this one.

[Insane]

00:09:666 (6) - Since it is the slow part at the beginning, i felt the spacing with 6 didn't need to be so drastic, so here's my alternative (http://puu.sh/70sy8.jpg). Also the tail point of 00:10:030 (1) - could be moved up one space on grid level 4 to have the 2 bodies curve synchronize and fit perfectly (http://puu.sh/70sE4.jpg). I just wanted to keep consistency on spacing so I'll keep that note there. About slider it's fine, tried to fix it.

00:10:757 (1,1) - You could achieve the same fit like this if you wanted (http://puu.sh/70sHk.jpg). I also feel that with this alteration in place, my placement of 2 changed to make it look flowier and I also moved orange 1 to blanket the start of the white one like this (http://puu.sh/70sRb.jpg). Okay, improved the pattern.

00:24:484 (7) - Moved this down to fit the curve a little better (http://puu.sh/70sXd.jpg). Ok.

00:56:575 (1) - I felt this flowed out of 6 better when lined up with its exit like this (http://puu.sh/70t60.jpg). I'll keep this one, your suggestion is nice but makes the pattern much easier imo.

Kiai is really fun, i really enjoyed modding this map, good luck cos its really well mapped! I'm glad you liked it!

ts8zs wrote:

[Insane]
00:07:121 (4) - NC Why? music doesn't change too much here.
00:13:848 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345323 180,184 Didn't change it like that but in a different way.
00:17:666 (2) - 180,184 or 364,0 Nah.
00:21:484 (1) - 148,192 It makes the pattern like.. super boring.
00:23:484 (2) - 296,140 ^
00:25:121 (2) - 404,188 ^
00:29:303 (4) - 168,236 ^
00:38:030 (4,5) - Ctrl+G Flows a bit bad imo.
00:52:575 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345330 Flow is terrible like you did.
00:54:757 (5) - Ctrl+G Again, it makes the pattern boring.
01:05:303 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345333 Your suggestion is cool but I don't like too much to reduce spacing like that, so i'll keep this.
01:07:121 (2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345334 Saaaaame.
01:19:484 (5) - Ctrl+G ^
01:25:757 (1) - end at 01:27:666 - ? Singer is still singing here.

[Normal]
00:27:848 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345340 I like this one, changed.
01:25:666 (1) - end at 01:27:666 - ? Singer is still singing here.

1. 00:13:121 (1) - You clearly mapped this spinner following the vocal sound. I think that this finish on the spinner is actually too loud and it doesn't fit that well honestly. I think it'd be more enjoyable to hear if you decided to decrease its volume till 50% at least.
2. 00:23:121 (1) - There should be a soft finish here to keep consistency with 00:13:121 (1)'s end. Obviously my suggestion above is the same for this circle as well.
3. 00:42:030 (1,2) - Actually I think it'd be more logical if you decided to remove the new combo from (1) adding it on the (2) instead. It fills better for three reasons: 1) It would mh.. I don't know how to say, "fill" better the finish hitsound; 2)New vocal rhythm starts here; 3) The pattern 00:42:757 (2,3,4) is symmetric and starting the combo on the slider 00:42:757 (2) would fit much better IMO.
4. 01:25:848 - Spinner would be pretty cool here. It'd be also consistent with other diffs. Add it here or remove the (2) adding it there.

1. 00:12:575 (4) - I think curved slider like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1352018 would flow better here
2. 00:18:939 (4) - Add whistle on the tail
3. 00:20:212 (1) - Clap for consistency with 00:14:393 (1)
4. 00:26:030 (3) - You could use some whistles here to emphasize the vocal rhythm. Add whistle on the head and on the tail of this slider, and do the same for 00:28:939 (4), 00:37:666 (3), 00:40:575 (3) - as well. It actually looks so empty w/o hitsounds IMO
5. 01:03:484 (1) - Whistle on reverse? Same for this circle if you add it, for consistency: 01:15:484 (3)

1. 00:05:666 (4) - New combo?
2. 00:17:303 (3,4) - I think that making these sliders' shapes in this other way the pattern would flow much better IMO: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1352037
3. 00:19:666 (1,2,3) - What about using drum finish hitsound on these circles to fill the drums you can hear in the music? Moreover, I would stack all these circles together (but fixing the spacing between 00:19:303 (4,1). Actually it could confuse some players IMO
4. 00:31:848 (1) - I guess you forgot normal sampleset on this slider's tail. It's too empty, add it please
5. 00:34:121 (1) - 20% volume. It's confusing = unrankable. 5% is allowed only on spinner's end that can't confuse players because placed at the end of a map or before than a break. This silenced 00:35:848 (1) is regardless unrankable because of that 5%.
6. 00:44:757 - You really should add a circle here. You can clearly hear a sound in the music and it'd be better to fill it
7. 01:03:848 (5) - New combo for the new 1/1 rhythm and square pattern pls D: Same for 01:15:484 (4) if you follow this.
8. 01:15:484 (4,5) - Remove whistles for consistency with previous square pattern

1. 00:07:121 (4) - New vocal = new combo
2. 00:17:848 (3,4) - This sliders completely ruin the flow you created. If you want to keep them straight than place them in this way, it's muuuch better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1352061
3. 00:18:575 (1) - If you follow my suggestion above about those two sliders, it'd be better to change this slider shape as well to make the part more flowing. You could move the 00:19:121 (2), make the 00:18:575 (1) and the 00:19:303 (3) in this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1352066
4. 00:31:121 (3) - Whistle on the head
5. 00:55:484 (2) - I think this circle is played bad there. Maybe stack it with 00:54:575 (4)?

[Navy] wrote:

[Normal]

00:05:303 (3,4) - change rhythm? (add reverse in (3) instead of (4) ) Nah, it ends up being the same.



00:11:121 (2) - erase? Hmm I don't see why.


[Insane]

00:12:757 (2) - how about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/73vK7.jpg A triplet here won't be following the music, try listening this part carefully.



00:52:030 (1) - I think new combo more fits at 00:52:212 (2) Vocal changes here, so no.

Chewin wrote:

MòèSònìc <3 <3

Normal

1. 00:12:575 (4) - I think curved slider like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1352018 would flow better here I agree.
2. 00:18:939 (4) - Add whistle on the tail Sure.
3. 00:20:212 (1) - Clap for consistency with 00:14:393 (1) But 00:14.393 (1) - doesn't have a clap, lol.
4. 00:26:030 (3) - You could use some whistles here to emphasize the vocal rhythm. Add whistle on the head and on the tail of this slider, and do the same for 00:28:939 (4), 00:37:666 (3), 00:40:575 (3) - as well. It actually looks so empty w/o hitsounds IMO Okay.
5. 01:03:484 (1) - Whistle on reverse? Same for this circle if you add it, for consistency: 01:15:484 (3) Hmm it won't be following anything, so no.

Insane

1. 00:07:121 (4) - New vocal = new combo Ok.
2. 00:17:848 (3,4) - This sliders completely ruin the flow you created. If you want to keep them straight than place them in this way, it's muuuch better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1352061 In this case I prefer to keep it, since I think your suggestion won't change flow too much tbh.
3. 00:18:575 (1) - If you follow my suggestion above about those two sliders, it'd be better to change this slider shape as well to make the part more flowing. You could move the 00:19:121 (2), make the 00:18:575 (1) and the 00:19:303 (3) in this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1352066 Nothing to do here I guess.
4. 00:31:121 (3) - Whistle on the head I'm using Whistles to follow music here instead vocals, so a Whistle wouldn't fit.
5. 00:55:484 (2) - I think this circle is played bad there. Maybe stack it with 00:54:575 (4)? Nooo, this circle stars a star pattern.

That's all :3 Sorry for the bad mod, I haven't modded for months D: Baka, actually your mod was pretty helpful! ^^

[Navy] wrote:

[Garven's Easy]

00:10:030 (1,2,3) - for (3)'s location, move (1) to (408,352, (2) to (284,32) and (3) to (256,192)

This adds some crazy overlap. No thanks.

00:34:757 (2,3,4) - eraze and copy (1) The rhythm gets boring then. :<


00:53:666 (1,2) - I think this sliders need reverse for better rhythm
Nah, I wanted to keep the rhythm changing a bit, but still fairly easy.



I think this notes are hard in terms of Easy

00:24:939 (1,2,3,4) - how about zigzag Nah, a curve feels better

01:03:848 (3,4,5,6) - change 2 notes to slider? Nah, it wouldn't feel the same.

01:09:666 (2,3,4,5)

01:15:121 (2,3,4,5,6)

Chewin wrote:

MòèSònìc <3 Garven <3 ;_;

Garven's Easy

1. 00:13:121 (1) - You clearly mapped this spinner following the vocal sound. I think that this finish on the spinner is actually too loud and it doesn't fit that well honestly. I think it'd be more enjoyable to hear if you decided to decrease its volume till 50% at least. Changed to a normal finish. I want some large hit on the end of such a long spinner.
2. 00:23:121 (1) - There should be a soft finish here to keep consistency with 00:13:121 (1)'s end. Obviously my suggestion above is the same for this circle as well. The consecutive drum hitsounds feel better compared to the lone sound of the finish before.
3. 00:42:030 (1,2) - Actually I think it'd be more logical if you decided to remove the new combo from (1) adding it on the (2) instead. It fills better for three reasons: 1) It would mh.. I don't know how to say, "fill" better the finish hitsound; 2)New vocal rhythm starts here; 3) The pattern 00:42:757 (2,3,4) is symmetric and starting the combo on the slider 00:42:757 (2) would fit much better IMO. This one was tricky since it actually used to be spilt up as two combos, but considering the length of the vocal parts here, it was suggested to extend them. I agreed, but now the two sets of two hit objects are four. I'll take the suggestion though, since it fits my progression prior now that the shorter combos are gone.
4. 01:25:848 - Spinner would be pretty cool here. It'd be also consistent with other diffs. Add it here or remove the (2) adding it there. No forced end spinner plz thx. Maybe if the song felt like it really should have a longer fade out, but for now it's just too short and lame sounding. Don't want to map to that.

osu file format v12

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1. 00:13:848 (4) - I'd rather make a jump at 00:14:393 (1)- to replace here because of the NC.
2. 00:21:848 (2,3) - it'd be better if they are not overlapped imo. Not way too flow because you didn't overlap 00:21:303 (4,1) - which goes before 2,3.
3. 00:22:393 (4,5) - ctrl+g
4. 00:34:757 (1) - make a reversed slider would be awesome.
5. 01:19:484 (5) - ctrl+g
6. 01:20:575 (3) - ^
7. 01:20:939 (4) - ^

1. AR+1
2. 00:14:939 (2)- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1360131 the rhythm is fluent enough so try to make it reversed instead of a slider?
3. 00:15:484 (3) - remove
4. 01:24:212 (3,4) - the spacing's kinda far from each other imo..
5. 00:58:757 (4) - make it extend to 00:59:393 -

Kibbleru wrote:

[Insane]
00:06:030 (2,3) - I don't really think it makes sense to stack here. I'm not sure why either lol >_<, just this descending part in the music feels better if the mouse was constantly moving. This part is pretty slow so I guess it's not a problem.
00:10:757 (1) - ctrl + g this maybe? Nah, breaks the pattern.
01:24:575 (2) - ^ Makes the end too easy.
00:19:303 (3) - (nazi) i think looks slightly better if you move the middle slider point 1 grid to the left It would be almost touching (1) and that seems bad, so I'll keep it.
00:40:575 (1,2) - the flow is a bit weird here. at of now, you kinda have to move your mouse like this and its a bit awkward I can't see that puush x.x

SPOILER

01:20:575 (3) - maybe if you ctrl + g this and 01:20:939 (4) Not a bad suggestion but ruins a bit the flow on the next pattern.
01:24:939 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - maybe blanket this stream around 01:23:848 (5)? I did already lol.
00:25:303 (3,4,1) - why not space these out evenly? (move (1) or (4) 1 grid to the left) Ok.
00:45:666 (3,4) - i suggest (select both) and move to x180 y92 Ugh no, that makes it really boring.

SPOILER

[Normal]
also when you have the slider tick hitclaps, they sound louder than the normal ones. not sure how to fix this though :/ Neither do I.
00:10:030 (1,2,3) - (very very nazi) spacing here is SLIGHTLY inconsistent It's made on purpose, because SV increases here.
01:02:757 (2,3,1) - a bit awkward flow here I don't see why, and won't change it if you haven't a suggestion for me, sorry.
01:20:939 (2,4) - u can stack this better i think Fixed.
01:21:303 (3,4) - consider a blanket? This is a blanket.

Fionana wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:13:848 (4) - I'd rather make a jump at 00:14:393 (1)- to replace here because of the NC. Sure.
2. 00:21:848 (2,3) - it'd be better if they are not overlapped imo. Not way too flow because you didn't overlap 00:21:303 (4,1) - which goes before 2,3. Changed.
3. 00:22:393 (4,5) - ctrl+g Ok.
4. 00:34:757 (1) - make a reversed slider would be awesome. I prefer to follow a piano sound here instead.
5. 01:19:484 (5) - ctrl+g Ok.
6. 01:20:575 (3) - ^ Answered this in the previous mod.
7. 01:20:939 (4) - ^ ^

like the way you map! Thanks :3

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

GARVEN"S EASY

00:21:121 (x) - Suggest adding a note here because I hear a rather strong drum beat in the background, so I think it would be necessary

Kind of breaks the general pace of that part if I add another note.

00:39:848 (2) - Suggest moving to (176,96) to make a triangular pattern

I made it more curved instead. Flows better.

00:47:121 (3) - Move slightly lower to (256,8) so that it wont be so off-screen to the top

It's not off-screen though...

01:15:121 (1) - Suggest to NC this so that the pentagon pattern is more clear in a different color

That breaks my new combo rhythm. I keep it with the musical grouping (every two measuresish).

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kamisamaaa wrote:

I will lost powerin half of hour. mod will come tomorrow. hope it's okay=L=

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

NORMAL

00:14:393 (1) - suggest adding a finish at the start of the slider to signify a strong note I can hear guitars only here, finish fits better with cymbals only imo.

01:15:121 (2) - Move slightly up to (256,224) to avoid the minor overlap with 01:13:666 (4) - as it hasnt completely disappeared yet Hmm this is not a big issue, also that's note is 1,5 seconds behind, so this won't be confusing or something.

INSANE

00:38:939 (8) - Might be a bit confusing to stack it on the tail at a 1/2 note interval. Suggest moving to (444,108) to make a big triangle jump If I do that spacing will be a bit confusing, because it's like minimal spacing, a big one and then a minimal one again, like that seems a bit ugly.

SPOILER

01:23:484 (3,4) - Think the order of notes would flow better if these two were swapped Flows the same.

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Normal
00:14:393 - finish Answered this on the previous mod.
00:17:303 (1) - ^ Same here.
00:20:212 - ^ ^
00:23:121 (1) - ^ ^
00:34:030 (2) - whistle I can't hear anything that worth adding a Whistle here.
00:37:666 (3) - last node ->x368 y264 No lol, you are ruining it like that.

01:00:939 - whistle Ohh forgot this one, added.
01:12:575 (2) - ^ ^
01:15:484 (3) - ^ Not here, wouldn't be following anything.

spaminabox wrote:

[Easy]A quick look on the aimod is still giving some circles which are not distance snapped, mostly seem to be osu just derping a bit but just get it checked.

I broke distance snap on purpose several times. If you didn't notice them while playing, then I guess they fit well. q:

Hitsounds seem fine, all good there.

Wow, that's rare. Usually people hate my hitsounding, haha.

00:35:484 (3,4,5,1) - The pattern here definitely feels a bit too compact for an easy mode. It needs to always be clear what the next circle will be, and it won't be to a new player. I suggest to move the (3) near to about 240,48 ish and descend to the slider from there.

I see what you're getting at, but I don't see this triangle pattern as being particularly high in terms of difficulty spike.

01:03:848 (3,4,5,6,1) - 01:03:848 (3,4,5,6,1) - This is a long run, I suggest to make some of them into sliders.
01:09:666 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:15:121 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same once again, the sudden changes in direction also feel too hard for an easy as a side note.

Sliders would take away too much. Also it's the kiai section, so the difficulty is expected to raise a bit.

01:25:666 (2) - A spinner here wouldn't go amiss.

No end spinner, sorry. Would feel just as forced as the fadeout.

Garven wrote:

spaminabox wrote:

Hitsounds seem fine, all good there.

Wow, that's rare. Usually people hate my hitsounding, haha.

spaminabox wrote:

Insane

I kinda like my hitsounds, here's a list of changes I think you should make.
00:35:303 (2) - Add whistle. Hmm it feels like it wouldn't be following a sound or something on the music, I'm using Whistles for a different sound here.
00:43:484 (4) - Add whistle. ^
00:44:212 (7) - Add whistle start of slider, drum clap at the end. The song is building up again so a short tom fill helps push it nicely. Saaame, I can't hear anything that worth these hitsounds here.
00:46:757 (3) - Add clap at start, add drum clap at end. Oops, forgot this one, added.
00:46:757 (3) - Changing these to auto claps fits the drum fill here better. Hmm ok.
00:58:757 (1,2) - Drum claps. What is that supposed to follow on the music? doesn't fit imo.
00:58:939 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Auto claps, also consider turning the volume down of that fill to about 50% if you make those changes too. I thought about it too but I think it would sound bad if I add all these claps so close from each other, so I guess it isn't a problem if I don't add them.
01:24:939 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as above. ^

00:22:030 (3,4) - The jump feels odd seeing as the violin maintains the same pitch. Perhaps stack the (4) on 00:23:121 (1) - and then stack the other parts of the triangles on the other sliders they end up near? Well I'm actually following drums since (4), since I'm following something different here it's not a problem to have a big jump between 2 notes.
Rest of the map seems fine.

Normal

Hitsounds, you know the drill.
00:13:303 (1) - Add whistle to the end of the slider, much like you did in the insane. I didn't add a Whistle here on Insane lol.
00:17:666 (2) - Add clap. Added.
00:18:939 (4) - I'd remove the cymbal from the end of this, add claps either end too. Nah, cymbal fits nicely.
00:20:212 (1) - Then add the cymbal here instead of the whistle, add clap at the end. I answered this on a previous mod, I can hear a guitar only here and a Finish will fit better with a cymbal.
00:21:848 (4) - Add clap in middle. Forgot this one as well x.x, added.
00:24:212 (2) - Change to drum clap. Yeah I'm a bit stupid lol, changed.
00:35:848 (5) - Claps feel out of place considering you are not able to sound any of the other off beat snares in this section. Uhm? this is fine.
00:46:393 (3) - Possibility to add a clap for the slider tick in here. Yeah I did but someone told me to remove it, idk why since it sounds fine, so readded.
00:47:121 (4) - Change middle and end to auto clap. Done.
00:58:757 (4,5) - An auto clap followed by a drum clap would make a nice fill here. If I don't add them on the Insane I won't do it here.
01:24:939 (1,2) - Drum clap followed by auto for this one. ^

00:23:121 (1,2) - Misses a note on the red beat. A solution like this would solve it fairly nicely. It breaks spacing consistency that way.

kamisamaaa wrote:

mod for M4M, but come late and have no slot T.T
so..this become a normal mod I'm sorry, but thanks a lot for modding it anyways <3

[insane]
00:02:393 (3,4) - change these two to a slider feel better. because 'na~ 'continue from 00:02:393 to 00:02:575. this voice is a group. a slider really nice imo. Well her voice tone changes a bit, that's why I prefer 2 notes instead.
00:13:848 (4) - make something like this(01) stack to the 1's tail. flow will also look better I don't understand x.x
00:16:030 (2,3) - ctrl+G? because 2 is stronger than 3. a jump between 1 2 feel better than jump between 2 3 imo. Yeah, agree.
00:19:121 (2) - stack this on 00:17:666 (2) - ? because of a strong beat on 00:19:303 (3) - and you add a finish. a huge jump really nice to me Hmm no I prefer to use 1x spacing here.
00:20:212 (1) - ctrl+G or do some other? 1.01X is toooooo close Yeah but it's fine to have a little spacing sometimes xD.
00:21:303 (4,1,2,3) - a little strange when I testplay. but I dont know how to change them I won't move anything then :p
00:22:030 (3,4) - a normal distance is okay here. 2.17X is a little far.because 00:22:393 (4) - just has a weak beat. It was like that before, but flows better like I did now imo.
00:29:303 (4) - move to 166|151 feel better in flow imo That makes the pattern toooooo boring.
00:35:484 (3) - why make a reserve flow here? a line flow is more suit here Changed.
00:38:030 (4,5) - ctrl+G on these two and also ctrl+G to this 00:38:393 (6) - . because I think a jump between 00:38:393 (6,7) - is better. Flow is a bit weird like that so I prefer to keep it.
00:40:212 (4,1) - also suggest to make a jump Will keep this one as well.
00:44:030 (6,7) - same above ^
00:49:303 (1) - stack this to 00:48:393 (3) - ? ^
00:52:212 (2,3,4) - strange flow here...maybe change 00:52:575 (4) - into some other shape? Why strange? it's a square, and slider is fine imo.
01:12:212 (5) - ctrl+G? just my feeling.. have no reason haha Ruins the flow a bit.

Lissette wrote:

[Garven's Easy]
00:18:575 (1) - this new combo is bugged

It's intentional. o3o

Lissette wrote:

[Insane]
Nothing to mention here, really nice one. :3

[Normal]
00:24:212 (2) - This slider was kinda weird to play, try this http://puu.sh/7epoU.jpg like you did here 00:16:757 (5,1) - Ok.
00:46:393 (3) - sliders end has a default softclap, looks like a mistake here Oh my bad, fixed.

Verdisphena wrote:

omg gracias bruno por hacer esto por mí

Byakugan249 wrote:

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice or Other.

[Normal]
00:13:303 (1) - i hear drums at the end of this slider, so add a drum clap at the end for that purpose. Sure.
00:22:575 (5) - same as above, but this time at the beginning and end. Added the one at the beginning only, since I think the Auto one at the end fits better with these drums.
00:24:030 - think you add a circle here just to be safe? i feel that players would mislead this part as the 1/2 slider in this combo during gameplay IMO. Ok, found a way to make it look decent at least, done.
01:24:939 (1) - same idea as 00:13:303. add a drum clap for emphasis in the drums in the BGM. Ok.

[Insane]
00:02:575 (4) - delete this note. you're breaking consistency with the 1/1 rhythm in this part of the song. This note is here because tone of her voice changes a bit here, so I think it fits nicely.
01:01:303 (2) - why don't you align this to the end of (1) so that the transition feels more comfortable for players during gameplay? Moved a bit.
01:24:939 (3,4,5) - same as normal. Added on (3) only, it doesn't sound really good on the other ones.

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Garven's Easy]
00:11:484 (2) - perhaps you can go for symmetry in this by making the slider look like this? i find it more comfortable to follow for beginners than the current one during gameplay.

Nah, if I was gong for symmetry, you'd know hehe.

00:52:030 (2) - i think you can move this to the right, slightly aligning to the end of (1). same reason as above.

I didn't want to have this that far to the right. It'd mess with flow too much imo.

nothing against this easy, though the hitsounds bothered me a bit. personal preference of mine so yea it's nothing important.

Haha, no worries. I find a lot of people don't like my hitsounding. q:

Thanks!