1. Easy (1.31 stars, 89 notes)
2. Hard (2.8 stars, 211 notes)
3. Normal (1.62 stars, 134 notes)

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Tsukuyomi wrote:

Hi~hi~from my queue
reply to m4m req

General
enable countdown和widescreen support去掉
去wiki找点tag 来填上。。
ENTERBRAIN （原作游戏）
妹子的名字啊什么的<<新見遙佳，主角的青梅竹馬
<<已修改

有一段只有finish音效的？00:15:320-00:29:756 可以跟着钢琴加whistle，或者人声

像是easy normal insane的感觉。。现在的normal当easy，hard当normal补个hard更好一点

Normal
fine
感觉像easy
00:07:199 (1) - NC加在后面的1上
<<已修改


Hard
没什么问题，感觉像normal
00:02:462 (3) - hard 里面可以放1/4了，repeat三连五连都是可以的，我下节奏会尽可能表现细节，不过这还是看你
比较明显的1/4
01:01:786 (1) -
01:19:831

00:42:387 (1) - NC不要了
01:11:259 (1) - NC加在后面的3上
<<已修改

Insane
NC有点乱，一条长白线加一个，特殊的地方另加
00:01:786 (4) - 这个看起来有点随意啊，让它的头部stack在00:00:884 (1) - 的尾巴上也好
00:02:575 (6) - 1/8 <<OK
00:13:402 (7) - 1/12，嘛。。放个repeat还是可以的 <<Repeat比較好，以改
01:03:816 (5) - 人声有个1/4，你可以把它改成1/4滑条
01:27:500 (4) - 最后怎么不放NC了，和其他难度一致比较好
<<已修改

insane打着挺舒服哒，摸不出啥东西

good luck

deejaydray wrote:

hello, m4m here from your modding queue :3

General: Maybe you should change the offset from 884 to 900, it sounds better Fix

EASY:

00:04:493 (4) - It's just a suggestion, but you may want to make this slider end at 00:05:395
00:05:395 (5) - also, if you do what I said above, you should make this slider start at 00:05:846 and end at 00:06:297 Better than before, Fix
00:55:019 (1) - use a "finish" hitsound at the beginning Fix
01:08:553 (5) - ^same, at the end Fix

NORMAL:

00:24:117 - put a circle because of the vocal lyric change other way
00:25:244 (6) - make it start at 00:25:019 and end at 00:25:470 change other way
00:55:019 (1) - use a "finish" hitsound Fix
01:02:688 (2) - maybe change to a circle? No change
01:13:064 (5) - NC
01:16:447 (1) - no NC here
01:16:673 (2) - NC
01:05:846 (2) - put NC here, instead of 01:05:620 (1)
01:11:034 (1) - no NC here
01:20:282 (2) - put NC here, instead of 01:20:056 (1)
All NC Fix

HARD:

This looks fine, but you should re-check where to place the New Combo, because sometimes you put it earlier :s
OK, I will re-check.

Well, that's all ^^ Good luck, I will be waiting your mod! :]
Thanks, I will

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
Add "ending" to Tags and delete "ENTERBRAIN" to Tags since it is included in source. Fix
The gap of Normal and Hard seems big due to random jumping and streams, so rename Hard diff to Insane and make a new Hard diff better.Or you can remake current Hard diff more easier, also AR7 better.
[Easy]
AR5 is Unranble on Easy, you must fix ot. and HP, OD 2 better. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy Thanks a lot, Fix Difficulty
Placement
00:05:862(5) Current looks not good flow for newbie, so move this note like this?

SPOILER

00:13:531(3) Again, similar suggestion here.

SPOILER

00:37:441(1) I suppose you can bent more, and it would be nice placement.
01:26:163(3) Change this slider like this? I just wonder it would be fine.

SPOILER

All fix, change other way

Rhythm
00:47:817(1) Too soon after a spinner for Easy, so shorten spinner or change rhythm better. e.g.) No change

SPOILER

01:05:411(1,2) I suppose it is better to swap these notes since it would be better the slider begins on down-beat. No change, but thanks
Hit Sound
[Normal]
AR6 is Unrankble on Normal, you must fix it. and HP, OD 4 better. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal Fix
Placement
00:39:922(5) Just change the direction like this, and the flow would be more natural.OK
01:21:877(3) Move this note a bit down better. Fix

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:08:794 Consider to add a note here, we can hear this sound clearly. OK
00:23:005(1,2,3,4,5,6) You should add break somewhere, maybe for newbie it looks difficult. Fix
00:36:088(4) I suppose you can begin this slider from 00:35:862 better to follow the vocal. Fix

SPOILER

Hit Sound
00:02:704(1,3) Add whistle on the head like (5), not whole.It sounds noisy.
[Hard] No change, I'll make Hard diff
Placement
00:18:042(1) This note is a bit hard to hit and not good flow I suppose, so move this note like this?

SPOILER

00:31:576(6)The jump looks so large for Hard diff, so if you want to remain this diff in Hard, just reducing jump better. e.g.)

SPOILER

00:41:501(3) The spacing from (2) to (3) looks not good due to (1) to (2), so you can get more spacing here and the balance looks fine.
00:52:554(5) It's odd to hit since the flow from (4) looks not good, so move this note like this?

SPOILER

00:57:967(5) To be symmetrical with (4), I just guess straight slider looks better.

SPOILER

00:59:321(4) Again, the flow from (3) looks not good imo, so you can make this placement and following notes like this?

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:07:554(7,8) Unify these two notes to 1 slider better since current rhythm looks a bit confused for Hard.

SPOILER

00:36:704(3,4) Swap these notes better since it doesn't sound better to add finish on the end of slider.

SPOILER

00:38:343(1) This 1/1/ slider doesn't fit to vocal so you can separate this two sliders better.

SPOILER

Hit Sound>>Sound fix
Some finish
00:02:478 (5) Really noisy this sound, so delete some whistles or turn down volume better.
00:13:306(6)^
00:05:185(2) Add whistle at head.

You can improve this mapset more better especially flow, but not bad. Good luck.

Syameimaru-Aya wrote:

。性质大概就是混个kd

my mod

整体
offset应该是956附近吧。933最不違和，956太剛好，後面的5連打鼓會跟不上。已修正
其实听着总是有些怪，建议思考一下BPM和offset是否正确

Easy

00:44:208 (1) - 这里换成note加个finish比较好吧，过个1/1再放转盘這樣也行，但我原本就是打算用44241起音的。沒改
00:49:170 (3) - 建议加finish，让新人打着有高潮的感觉
00:51:426 (1) - 加finish，换一个人加一个finish也不错
00:52:328 (3) - ^
00:56:839 (3) - ^
00:58:644 (1) - 加finish以及，建议和上一个滑条的滑条尾重合（我觉得其他finish还是不说了，免得因为提太多导致引起反感）
最後一個Finish加了，全加真得很怪

normal
后面加个+都不为过的normal，新人噩梦。
00:17:140 (3) - normal建议还是跟vocal，把这个删了
00:18:042 (5) - 也是删了，把00:17:817 (4) - 改成滑条不好吗
00:24:133 (4) - 加个物件吧。建议把下一个滑条提前

。有点不知道该说什么，把CS-1修改一下四围接着换名字成为hard也不错，作为normal太难，作为hard应该是最简单那类，多余的话还是不多说了。后面没看下去真的很抱歉。還是改Hard好，謝謝你

Insane
00:00:956 (1) - 其实音乐初始点在这，开25%听听?全難度已改
00:02:478 (5) - 把这个删了，在00:02:591 (5) - 放个1/8三连，短滑条也好。
好像不少是BPM和offset不对导致的错误，我下面就mod一下其他方面吧
00:03:381 (7) - 和前面两个物件组成三角形更好。OK
00:04:283 (3) - 这个也和前面两个物件组成三角形，大一点的。两个三角形就美观多了OK
00:06:990 (6) - 稍微调整一下和上一个滑条的感觉差不多的话比较好修正
01:04:057 (6) - 拉下来组成三角形啦OK
01:06:990 (7) - 这里适合被上一个滑条的滑条尾碰上，而不是新开一个滑条。Offset修正後就可以忽視了

sksmwkd125 wrote:

Hi ~

Hard

00:06:346 (1) - this 00:06:797 - End here It's here, not wrong

01:01:835 (1) - NC deletion, 01:02:737 (2) - NC Fix

01:27:549 (7) - New combo like this is needed so no condensation.


Insane

00:56:647 (1) - NC deletion. Fix

      0   1   2   3   4
音乐： x   x   x  xx   x
物件： x   x x   x x   x

Pagno wrote:

hello! from your queue~

~ Mod ~

[General]
Offset sounds like 914 to me! FIXXXXXXXX!!!!!!!!!!!!Thanks a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Insane]
00:06:346 (5,6,7,8) - You may want to make this easier to read:

I follow piano, not other sound. But thanks.

00:12:211 (3,5) - Try making a better blanket - use the approach circle to help you

Ok


00:44:241 (1) - Add a hitcircle!

2 people said the same suggestion. Ok...change.

[Hard]
AR+1? fix

00:44:222 (1) - Add hitcircle

Nothing much to say on this difficulty, well done! Nice

[Easy]
00:10:406 (4) - Make better blanket:

OK. Fix

00:56:872 (3,1) - Stack better Fix

01:24:842 (2) AND 01:08:602 (5) AND 01:24:842 (2) - Open your Song folder, make a copy of the file soft-hitclap2.wav and name it soft-slidertick2.wav so that there's the correct hitsound in those sliders Done

I couldn't find many problems in this mapset! Nice one!
Good luck o/
Thanks your mod

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

m4m

GENERAL: Offset should be 914/915 Fix, Thanks a lot

EASY

00:18:978 (4) - Add a finish because I hear a cymbal sound in the background Ok

00:36:121 (3) - Maybe make this turn back slider straight instead to match 00:35:218 (2) -

00:54:147 (5) - is this supposed to have clap? It had clap

00:58:226 (5) - ^ It had clap, too

HARD

00:24:391 (4) - Should make this circle be at 00:24:166 because the vocal is on the red line instead of the white Fix

00:51:233 (1) - Move this to (216,40) to make it lower so its less off-screen Lower than before

01:06:572 (2) - Add a note here to keep the rhythm at the chorus continuous without breaking Isn't too long to hit??

INSANE

00:13:339 (6) - Is 1/8 slider appropriate for this? i think its too fast to jump to the next slider, even on Insane Do you think what I can make?? I have no idea to fix this...

01:01:835 (5,6,7,8) - Remove clap on 6 and 8, too many claps make it too loud

01:07:474 (1,2,3) - The vocal doesnt really support a triple stream here so I suggest removing 2

01:19:880 (6,7,8,9) - Same as 01:01:835 but this time, remove clap on 7 and 9

01:25:293 (5) - Distance spacing is a bit too small, try stacking it on 01:24:842 (3) - I try your suggestion, not petty than before.

Hope I helped
Thanks a lot, about offset!!!

hoshisorakiseki wrote:

你好
来自你的queue

全局：
offset:925(-8)，记得resnap 這是每次要上傳前的步驟，我不會忘...但還是謝謝提醒。offset樓上和樓樓上大大提過了，加大大你就是第三個了，已經改好上傳

感觉这里artist写“新見遙佳”比较好 下個Mod的時候一併改
以下的意见都用你的时间轴，

难度：Easy
00:00:933 (1) - 提上来一点，不过不改也行

难度：Hard
00:35:218 (3,4,5) - 如下：

      0   1   2   3   4
音乐： x   x   x  xx   x
物件： x   x x   x x   x

感觉跟音乐比较好一点 改了一個長slider，回到跟剛做好的時候一樣
00:54:166 (6,1) - 修一下blanket 改了
01:23:038 (5,6) - 这两个连成一条线会怎样 我故意放兩個短的，原本就不打算改這兩個

难度：Insane
preview time跟其他难度不一致 已經看到了，已修正
00:10:632 (6,7) - 这里好像有一点overmap，不过跟着音乐的感觉又挺好... 我自己測試過，還好

做的不错啊，加油

kanon_sayuri wrote:

From your queue，M4M~

[General]

sliderslide音换成静音的会不会好一些？
我把該死的音效全都搞定了，謝謝提醒

[Insane]

01:01:590 (4) - 有点远，移到320,256那附近？外觀沒變，距離有調整過

01:01:816 (5,6,7,8) - 不太好看，弧度大一些，像这种？

SPOILER

01:03:846 (5,6,7) - 5和6变三连，6和7拉滑条 OK

01:05:763 (4) - 加note

00:43:545 (3,4,5) - 太远了，弧度也不好看，试试这种的？

SPOILER

00:49:635 (3) - 尾巴往高提一点，弧度弯一下 OK

01:21:214 (4) - 不好看，

SPOILER

01:27:530 (4) - 感觉挺突兀的。。突然就没了。。转盘？01:28:883 - 结束 加了轉盤後感覺很多餘，若有第二個人叫我加我就改

[Hard]整體不變，我該跟的東西都有跟到。且我知道大大你要我跟著什麼，但我整首歌最主要都是跟鋼琴

00:04:523 (5) - 拉长到00:05:199 -

00:05:425 (6) - 拉到00:05:763 - 再折返

00:15:801 (1) - 这里跟一下人声比较好。整体后移至00:16:026 - ，00:15:801 - 这里补note

00:48:507 - 加note，或者00:48:733 (2,3) - 前移

00:50:312 - ^ 后面好像都是这个节奏，就不提了。不改也可以，就是感觉有点过于慢了。。

01:27:530 (1) - 同insane

[Normal]感覺很像Easy對吧，我會盡量改改看

DS有点过于小了。。建议调大一点，大概1.3差不多，重新摆一下。现在太挤了

01:27:530 (1) - 同Insane

这么慢的歌不怎么会摸;w;

歌听喜欢，给个star~★ 謝謝星星

Regraz wrote:

HI！逛modqueue时候看到的

EASY:
00:00:913 (1,2) - 做个好blanket吧 OK
00:28:432 (3,4,1) - 3的尾巴 4 1的开头之间的间距不相等。其实前面也有，但是这个太明显了。好細膩，真得不好看清楚
00:32:492 (4) - 尾巴没叠好（和1差了一个坐标）
00:58:658 (1) - 没叠好3的尾巴
以上都改好了

HARD：
00:16:703 (2) - 往右下方稍微挪一些 OK
00:59:109 (2) - 尾巴还是没叠好 改好了
00:24:147 (4,5,6) - 对不上vocal，建议改一下。 讓我思考一下，下次上傳再改
其他的都很好！Insane有几个地方也是没叠好，建议把有叠的地方都用坐标检查一遍。
音效赞！

太細膩的東西真得很感謝大大
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Good Luck！

1. CS 4 HP 5 AR 6 OD 5
2. CS 4 HP 5 AR 7 OD 6
3. CS 4 HP 6 AR 7 OD 6

Chaoslitz wrote:

o/

[Easy]

1. 00:18:959 - 這里還是建議放note. 畢竟downbeat
2. 00:37:004 - ^
3. 00:44:222 (1,2) - 這樣的節奏在Easy很難打呀,試試把紅tick用reverse
   

[Normal]

1. 00:02:718 (4) - 雖然是Normal但放在藍tick也不太好,就像00:07:229 (5,6) 不用跟著鋼琴聲來作 >我覺得這個還可以，畢竟整首歌我也只有放這個有藍線的，後面7秒那裡因為他還有很清晰的聲音在紅白線上，所以我才沒跟琴音。當然如果真的要改這個，我也有預備方案，等你回來再看
2. 00:12:643 (3) - 不建議用1/2, 因為00:12:868的音不算特別強,而且音樂才剛開始弄容易點會比較好
3. 00:32:944 (5) - 也是downbeat的問題啦

[Hard]

1. 00:02:605 - 加個note?這也有琴音 >兩年前就是因為這個琴音搞得我頭痛，所以不跟了
2. 01:01:365 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不用放,兩個角落吧....距離太遠
3. 01:07:680 (1,2) - 我不認為這適合用跳,疊在01:09:485 (1)的頭就好
4. 01:13:771 (2,3) - 也是不適合用跳啦
5. 01:27:530 (5) - NC?

改完叫我

pishifat wrote:

tbh the 20% section at 00:44:222 would sound less blendy even with a 5% increase. it probably seems pointless, but when volume is so low already, small changes actually do make a difference

also on easy 00:54:598 (4) - needs normal sampleset lol

if you need someone to rank, you know what to do

Flask wrote:

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