1. Another (4.9 stars, 276 notes)
2. Beginner (1.47 stars, 62 notes)
3. Hyper (4.89 stars, 151 notes)
4. Standard (3.86 stars, 109 notes)

UndeadBananaz wrote:

Hi, from timing check queue.

You need only one timing point.

172 BPM 4/4 Offset 2769

I think that's it. Don't forget that you'll have to fix this for all difficulties, and re-snap all notes and adjust slider lengths where needed.

Good luck!

Papysh wrote:

:3

11:35 Papysh: Hi
11:36 DenoisoGoiso: hi too,what =3=
11:36 Papysh: i will mod your map anyways
11:36 Papysh: ;w;
11:36 DenoisoGoiso: in IRC?
11:36 DenoisoGoiso: orz
11:36 Papysh: if irc
11:36 Papysh: i can do it even now
11:37 DenoisoGoiso: okay ._.
11:37 *DenoisoGoiso is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/325880 TAKA respect for J.S.B - No.13 (Short Version)]
11:38 Papysh: ;w;
11:38 Papysh: let me finish song im playing
11:38 Papysh: and i will do modding
11:38 Papysh: >w<
11:39 DenoisoGoiso: >w<
11:40 *Papysh is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/105227 HO-KAGO TEA TIME - U&I [Hard]] <osu!mania> |7K|
11:40 Papysh: if you were bored you can spec
11:40 Papysh: xD
11:43 Papysh: >w<
11:43 DenoisoGoiso: -_-
11:43 DenoisoGoiso: what are you doing now
11:44 Papysh: i was playing song
11:44 *Papysh is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/105227 HO-KAGO TEA TIME - U&I]
11:44 Papysh: ;w;
11:44 Papysh: it was kinda long
11:45 Papysh: i will play one more and i mod your mapo
11:45 Papysh: >w<
11:45 Papysh: ps
11:45 DenoisoGoiso: ok
11:45 *Papysh is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/325878 TAKA respect for J.S.B - No.13 (Short Version)]
11:45 Papysh: the insane
11:45 Papysh: another*
11:45 Papysh: is overmapped i think
11:45 DenoisoGoiso: oh
11:45 Papysh: i would usggest remapping it later
11:45 Papysh: but i dont know
11:47 DenoisoGoiso: wtf
11:47 Papysh: well i dont know
11:47 Papysh: i dont map high bpm
11:49 *Papysh is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/325879 TAKA respect for J.S.B - No.13 (Short Version) [Hyper]]
11:49 Papysh: Ar + 1
11:50 DenoisoGoiso: finish
11:50 Papysh: 00:48:814 (2) -
11:50 Papysh: make better blanket
11:50 Papysh: with (1)
11:50 Papysh: 00:52:826 (3) -
11:50 Papysh: stack this better with (2)
11:51 Papysh: tail
11:51 Papysh: ofc
11:51 Papysh: and then make this 00:53:698 (2) -
11:51 Papysh: http://puu.sh/5lZ4N/ff445b235a.jpg
11:52 Papysh: 01:06:256 (1,2) -
11:52 Papysh: here ^ ignore spacing
11:52 Papysh: and make something i will show you
11:53 Papysh: http://puu.sh/5lZ6J/38097e70c2.jpg
11:53 Papysh: http://puu.sh/5lZ6P/322fcde60c.jpg
11:54 Papysh: 01:25:704 (2) - im suggesting to place this note on white
11:54 Papysh: instead of blue
11:54 Papysh: and stacking this with
11:54 Papysh: 01:25:704 (2) -
11:54 Papysh: so it will be more noticable that its 1/1
11:55 DenoisoGoiso: white
11:55 DenoisoGoiso: okay >.<
11:56 Papysh: well
11:56 *Papysh is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/325880 TAKA respect for J.S.B - No.13 (Short Version) [Basic]]
11:56 Papysh: i wont mod another
11:56 Papysh: sori
11:56 Papysh: man
11:56 Papysh: 00:15:324 (3) -
11:57 Papysh: you cant make that
11:57 Papysh: at basic
11:57 Papysh: xD
11:57 Papysh: you must use all time 1/1
11:57 Papysh: time line
11:57 Papysh: because using 1/4
11:57 Papysh: isnt best
11:57 Papysh: and the jump is 4,50 spacing
11:57 Papysh: this one must be fixed
11:57 Papysh: your map is much better
11:58 Papysh: than my first maps though T^T
11:58 Papysh: 00:15:324 (3) -
11:58 Papysh: so yeah
11:58 Papysh: rest is okay
11:58 Papysh: just decrease it's spacing
12:00 Papysh: Just question
12:00 Papysh: but do you use Distance snap for your map?
12:00 DenoisoGoiso: No
12:00 DenoisoGoiso: ever
12:00 Papysh: please do it
12:00 Papysh: you should always map with 1,00 distance snap
12:00 DenoisoGoiso: okay
12:01 Papysh: because the break between notes should mean a break n itmeline
12:01 Papysh: i will post it
12:01 Papysh: and call me when you fix the distance snap
12:02 Papysh: ;w;
12:02 Papysh: plz
12:03 DenoisoGoiso: lol i will try distance map later
12:03 Papysh: 'https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2691775#p2691775
12:07 Papysh: good luck
add :3

ezek wrote:

Hi! From My modding queue. (Looks like you missed something from the rules, but since the map follows them I'll mod it)yay i forgot to wrote *** (some words) sorry.

Basic
00:32:070 (2) - Try to not overlap with 00:30:675 (1) - now it's like a jump. Fixed
01:09:745 (1) - Add a finish sound, it will sound good, try it! ahhh really good :3 Added
01:15:326 (1) - ^ Added :3


Hyper
01:07:128 (x) - Add some objects here to cover the piano. Added :3
01:09:745 (1) - Finish. Added :3
01:15:239 (1) - Begin at 01:15:326 and add Finish. Fixed and Added :3

Another
01:07:128 (x) - Add some objects here to cover the piano. Added :3
01:09:745 (1) - Finish. Added :3
01:15:326 (1) - Finish. Added :3
01:28:582 (2) - Finish. Added :3
And finally, add a spinner at the end. Added :3

AlexaBM wrote:

hi~ m4m

[Basic]
00:25:791 (1,2) - I suggest you not to put circle on the slider's head, it's too hard for newbies to understand when they should click you make me laugh wwwwww Fixed
00:30:675 (1,2) - I don't see DS here, you HAVE TO use DS in whole Easy and Normal diffs, but okay, if you want to do so, maybe do more neatly? okay

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00:38:349 (3,4) - Bad overlap. You can copy slider (3) like on the screen.okay

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00:41:140 (5,1) - You don't have DS here again. Make some distance between them, cuz it can confuse the newbies!you make me laugh again wwwwwww Fixed
01:05:559 (1) - You don't have any objects after that slider, I feel incompleteness here. maybe do so? Okay

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01:13:931 - The same thing. Maybe do so? -_-

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lololol Now 1 star.

[Normal]
I think it should be not normal, but Standart, but okay, I wanna say smth more important.
This diff is horrible, sorry. For example, from 00:13:407 - to 00:25:094 - I don't understand, what rhythm you follow. You follow the beat, but not the music.
And you have a lot of such problems here. Maybe remap it, but if I were you, I would find another mapper to Typoto StandarTypot diff.

Okay...

[Hyper]
00:29:977 (2) - Maybe do so?

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00:36:256 - from here I see too fast slider's velocity, do it a bit slowly
00:38:000 (1,1,1,1) - Remove all NCs
00:51:605 (1,2) - Bad overlap
00:57:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use "Create poligon circles" to do such thing, cuz it's ugly

img

01:00:675 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:05:559 (4,1) - Bad overlap
01:12:884 - maybe add a break time here?
Also you have a lot of problems with spacing, you should work on it Hardwork hardwork hardwork hardwork it's really hard like playing big black

Sry, I can't mod Insanes. still overmapped lolololol
GL~ Thank You!!

1. The source "IIDX 10th style (beatmania)" doesn't seems necessary, just change it to "Beatmania IIDX" instead
2. Also remove iidx from your tag because it's already on the source
3. Maybe it's just my opinion, but the bright red and blue combo colors don't fit the background, but well it's up to your taste. If you consider to change this, don't forget to match the other diffs
4. I actually want to go deeper with the metadata stuff, but it seems your mapping style still needs more attention as of now, so I'll leave it for other modder for the time being
5. And one thing that I want to point out, it's better to find more natural-sounded soft hitclap sample for this map, because some part can't be hitsounded properly as long as you don't have it

1. Firstly, I'm not sure if the diff itself should be named "basic", I prefer call it "beginner". If you consider this, I also recommend the "normal" to change into "basic" for consistency
2. Oh, and I believe the kiai time should be from 00:25:094 until 00:36:256 if you consider this, match the othe diffs as well
3. Next for timing, um.. I think it's not good for the easy diff to have multiple SV (slider velocity), so you have two choice:
   - Remove those inherited timing points with 0.75x SV, then change the SV to 0.60 (you'll still have to remap some mistimed slider in 01:18:814 until 01:27:187 then, but at least it's not a big deal)
   - Or if you really want to use 0.80 SV that badly, you'll have to remove those inherited timing points with 0.75x SV and remap all over from 00:13:756 until 01:13:931 so I won't recommend this lol
4. Change the grid size into "small" (except if you intend to use 0.96x spacings in the first place), then recheck the spacing, because I see some inconsistency, like 00:13:407 (1,2) and 00:30:675 (1,2)
5. Don't forget to resnap notes when you've change the timing (check the AImod)
6. Now that you've change the grid size, you'll see many misplaced notes, so fix those first. Well, I wouldn't go further with the spacing for now then
7. Don't stack in easy diff since it would confuse the new players
8. Remove NC at 00:18:291 and add NC at 00:19:338
9. 00:27:884 Remove the reverse and make it like 00:26:489 so it would be consistent
10. 00:30:675 (4,1) You could blank it properly
11. 00:30:675 (1,2) Placing it in symmetrical like this isn't flows good somehow (and also it has different spacing so fixing the spacing comes first)
12. 00:48:814 (3,4,1) Make the length similar with 00:47:419 (2)
13. 00:58:233 Add circle
14. 01:00:675 I prefer this http://puu.sh/5zYEv.jpg
15. 01:09:745 I think it's better to map this part instead of spinner (and because this diff lacks notes)
16. 01:30:675 Reduce the volume into 5%

1. Same with the above diff, it's not good to put multiple SV in this diff (assuming it's normal diff), so remove the 0.75x SV and customize the SV which you consider proper
2. Firstly, I don't see any needs to put the beat snap divisor into 1/8 (well, it's not a big deal though)
3. The problem I see is you just map the not mostly in the same place, look at http://puu.sh/5zZHl.jpg so it's better to spread it more
4. 00:25:442 to 00:32:070 It looks that you just map the not all over in the same place, and it might be boring to play
5. 00:36:256 Remove finish
6. 00:36:605 Add whistle
7. 00:38:698 Add circle for consistency
8. 00:43:233 Remove finish
9. 00:44:628 Somehow this slider shape is out of place (I mean, the bending is really different from other sliders)
10. Remove finish here 00:57:884 and here 00:58:233
11. I'd like to say the same here 01:00:675 and here 01:01:024
12. 01:02:419 (3,4) Blanket properly
13. 01:09:745 (1,3,5,6) I think it doesn't necessary to spam finish here
14. 01:10:442 (3,4) Same here
15. 01:23:698 (5,1) I don't get what you follow here, and also it feels out of place
16. 01:30:675 Reduce the volume into 5%

1. There's so many unsnapped notes in this diff, so it's better to deal with those first (check AImod)
2. 00:15:326 to 00:19:163 I don't get what you follow here, it just sounds off, so my suggestion is remove circle at 00:16:547 then move the slider here
3. 00:16:721 into 00:16:547 Next, move the circle at 00:18:117 (2,3) to the white tick, exactly at 00:18:291 and 00:18:640 then last, remove circle at 00:18:814
   And now you get a proper beat
4. 00:21:780 (3,1,1) Don't use NC spam
5. 00:25:094 I suggest using soft hitsound from this timing point, assuming you follow the violin
6. 00:28:059 (2,3) Blanket properly
7. 00:32:070 (1,2,3,4) Bad flow, change the pattern
8. 00:33:466 It's better to start spinner from 00:34:861 and map the rest
9. Add clap at 00:38:000 and 00:38:698 and remove whistle at 00:38:349 and 00:39:047
10. 00:39:396 (1,2) The bending is too intense, it would cause a bad flow
11. 00:41:838 (3) I would prefer normal finish instead of drum. The same goes with 00:41:838
12. 00:43:233 (1,2) Don't put finish on entire slider unless it is really necessary. Oh wait, maybe you should remove all the finish here actually
13. 00:54:221 Add circle
14. 01:00:675 (1,2,3,4,1) I feels really crowded, maybe change the pattern a bit
15. 01:04:163 (3) I don't get what you follow here
16. 01:21:256 I think it would be more consistent if you remove the circle and add 1/2 slider instead
17. 01:22:303 (3) Also this, change into two 1/2 sliders instead
18. 01:25:791 The pattern transition in this part is really ugly
19. Well, there's also many spacing inconsistency that I'd like to point out (especially this part 00:23:873) but I can't differentiate which one is intentional and
20. which part is not, so I'll leave it for now

1. Change the HP into 7
2. Change the OD into 7 (except if you want to overkill the players)
3. The 2.80 SV doesn't feel fitting imo, better use 2.50 or lower
4. And there's so many problem with the hitsound, in some place there's one or two, but the other place is so empty
5. 00:15:326 Don't spam NC here, add NC at 00:16:721 instead
6. 00:22:128 Add NC, and remove NC at 00:22:652
7. 00:32:942 Add circle
8. 00:37:652 Again, don't use NC spam
9. 00:46:721 (3) Ugly slider, better change into another shape
10. 00:50:210 (2,3) These bezier sliders doesn't flow well imo, change the red anchor into white instead
11. 00:53:524 (2) I don't get what you follow here
12. 01:23:088 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) Feels so crowded, it's hard to be seen so maybe you should spread it more

Vita-VVA wrote:

[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with purple is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself Ignore them if you think they are helpless

[Timing]

the offset

And since I changed your offset , most of the notes before 00:25:094 - should be rearrange no. it's no rhythmable

[General]
There's no preview time it's unrankable ✓

preview time

Do not use so many spinners Why??? D:

[Hyper]
00:27:535 (1) - may divide it into a slider and a NC note X

00:56:140 - this blank should be mapped.... or your playing time is too short✓
01:09:745 (1,1) - Um.....they're also meaningless map it plzX

01:25:791 (2) - NC✓

01:28:582 (4,1) - it's unrankable I think✓

and actually this diff should be hard or hard+ No, the theme please. From IIDX Difficulty name!

[Another]
00:26:140 (4) - may divide it into a slider and a note ✓

00:29:127 (4) - it seems well but doesn't work well.... this reverse slider is not necessary and I think using short quick slider like before is better

00:34:861 (1) - end the slider at here and add two notes at 00:36:256 - and 00:36:344 - no

00:42:012 - maybe stream here✓

00:53:000 (1) - bad arrange seems didn't follow the rhythm ✓

01:15:326 (1) - same as hyper add break? or what? i'm trying to understand this

01:18:127 - here should have a note note what

That's all and I think your another is pretty good since I enjoyed it Thanks \:D/

El SolarBeam wrote:

hi fellow indonesian~ Ohai :3
M4M asked from Groumiezi GROUMIEZI Y U DO DIS?????? but i got M4M :3

[General]

1. The source "IIDX 10th style (beatmania)" doesn't seems necessary, just change it to "Beatmania IIDX" instead Done
2. Also remove iidx from your tag because it's already on the source Done
3. Maybe it's just my opinion, but the bright red and blue combo colors don't fit the background, but well it's up to your taste. If you consider to change this, don't forget to match the other diffs No
4. I actually want to go deeper with the metadata stuff, but it seems your mapping style still needs more attention as of now, so I'll leave it for other modder for the time being trying to understand this
5. And one thing that I want to point out, it's better to find more natural-sounded soft hitclap sample for this map, because some part can't be hitsounded properly as long as you don't have it

I will found it.


[Basic]

1. Firstly, I'm not sure if the diff itself should be named "basic", I prefer call it "beginner". If you consider this, I also recommend the "normal" to change into "basic" for consistency \:D/
2. Oh, and I believe the kiai time should be from 00:25:094 until 00:36:256 if you consider this, match the other diffs as well
3. Next for timing, um.. I think it's not good for the easy diff to have multiple SV (slider velocity), so you have two choice:
   - Remove those inherited timing points with 0.75x SV, then change the SV to 0.60 (you'll still have to remap some mistimed slider in 01:18:814 until 01:27:187 then, but at least it's not a big deal)\D:/
   - Or if you really want to use 0.80 SV that badly, you'll have to remove those inherited timing points with 0.75x SV and remap all over from 00:13:756 until 01:13:931 so I won't recommend this lol \:D/
4. Change the grid size into "small" (except if you intend to use 0.96x spacings in the first place), then recheck the spacing, because I see some inconsistency, like 00:13:407 (1,2) and 00:30:675 (1,2)\:D/
5. Don't forget to resnap notes when you've change the timing (check the AImod)
6. Now that you've change the grid size, you'll see many misplaced notes, so fix those first. Well, I wouldn't go further with the spacing for now then
7. Don't stack in easy diff since it would confuse the new players :/
8. Remove NC at 00:18:291 and add NC at 00:19:338 \:D/
9. 00:27:884 Remove the reverse and make it like 00:26:489 so it would be consistent \:D/
10. 00:30:675 (4,1) You could blank it properly \D:/
11. 00:30:675 (1,2) Placing it in symmetrical like this isn't flows good somehow (and also it has different spacing so fixing the spacing comes first):/
12. 00:48:814 (3,4,1) Make the length similar with 00:47:419 (2) \:D/
13. 00:58:233 Add circle \:D/
14. 01:00:675 I prefer this http://puu.sh/5zYEv.jpg It's not too hard for easy player?
15. 01:09:745 I think it's better to map this part instead of spinner (and because this diff lacks notes) \:D/
16. 01:30:675 Reduce the volume into 5%

\:D/


[C(Back)H's Normal]

1. Same with the above diff, it's not good to put multiple SV in this diff (assuming it's normal diff), so remove the 0.75x SV and customize the SV which you consider proper
2. Firstly, I don't see any needs to put the beat snap divisor into 1/8 (well, it's not a big deal though)
3. The problem I see is you just map the not mostly in the same place, look at http://puu.sh/5zZHl.jpg so it's better to spread it more
4. 00:25:442 to 00:32:070 It looks that you just map the not all over in the same place, and it might be boring to play
5. 00:36:256 Remove finish
6. 00:36:605 Add whistle
7. 00:38:698 Add circle for consistency
8. 00:43:233 Remove finish
9. 00:44:628 Somehow this slider shape is out of place (I mean, the bending is really different from other sliders)
10. Remove finish here 00:57:884 and here 00:58:233
11. I'd like to say the same here 01:00:675 and here 01:01:024
12. 01:02:419 (3,4) Blanket properly
13. 01:09:745 (1,3,5,6) I think it doesn't necessary to spam finish here
14. 01:10:442 (3,4) Same here
15. 01:23:698 (5,1) I don't get what you follow here, and also it feels out of place
16. 01:30:675 Reduce the volume into 5%

[Hyper]

1. There's so many unsnapped notes in this diff, so it's better to deal with those first (check AImod)
2. 00:15:326 to 00:19:163 I don't get what you follow here, it just sounds off, so my suggestion is remove circle at 00:16:547 then move the slider here
   \:D/
3. 00:16:721 into 00:16:547 Next, move the circle at 00:18:117 (2,3) to the white tick, exactly at 00:18:291 and 00:18:640 then last, remove circle at 00:18:814 \:D/
   And now you get a proper beat \:D/
4. 00:21:780 (3,1,1) Don't use NC spam \:D/
5. 00:25:094 I suggest using soft hitsound from this timing point, assuming you follow the violin
6. 00:28:059 (2,3) Blanket properly \:D/
7. 00:32:070 (1,2,3,4) Bad flow, change the pattern \:D/
8. 00:33:466 It's better to start spinner from 00:34:861 and map the rest \:D/
9. Add clap at 00:38:000 and 00:38:698 and remove whistle at 00:38:349 and 00:39:047 \:D/
10. 00:39:396 (1,2) The bending is too intense, it would cause a bad flow \:D/
11. 00:41:838 (3) I would prefer normal finish instead of drum. The same goes with 00:41:838 \:D/
12. 00:43:233 (1,2) Don't put finish on entire slider unless it is really necessary. Oh wait, maybe you should remove all the finish here actually \:D/
13. 00:54:221 Add circle \:D/
14. 01:00:675 (1,2,3,4,1) I feels really crowded, maybe change the pattern a bit \:D/
15. 01:04:163 (3) I don't get what you follow here \:D/
16. 01:21:256 I think it would be more consistent if you remove the circle and add 1/2 slider instead \:D/
17. 01:22:303 (3) Also this, change into two 1/2 sliders instead \:D/
18. 01:25:791 The pattern transition in this part is really ugly \:D/
19. Well, there's also many spacing inconsistency that I'd like to point out (especially this part 00:23:873) but I can't differentiate which one is intentional and
20. which part is not, so I'll leave it for now

\:D/
And also for hitsound, as I said earlier, this diff needs customized soft hitclap sample so that it can be hitsounded properly\:D/


[Another]

1. Change the HP into 7
2. Change the OD into 7 (except if you want to overkill the players)
3. The 2.80 SV doesn't feel fitting imo, better use 2.50 or lower No about tiz
4. And there's so many problem with the hitsound, in some place there's one or two, but the other place is so empty
5. 00:15:326 Don't spam NC here, add NC at 00:16:721 instead
6. 00:22:128 Add NC, and remove NC at 00:22:652
7. 00:32:942 Add circle
8. 00:37:652 Again, don't use NC spam
9. 00:46:721 (3) Ugly slider, better change into another shape
10. 00:50:210 (2,3) These bezier sliders doesn't flow well imo, change the red anchor into white instead
11. 00:53:524 (2) I don't get what you follow here
12. 01:23:088 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) Feels so crowded, it's hard to be seen so maybe you should spread it more

Well, it's alright if you want to make a hard map, but you should also think about how the map flow (the problem is you should play the map by yourself if you want to consider whether the flow is good or not lol). So my suggestion, try to find someone who's good at playing a really hard diff and ask for testplay, especially for the flow~you are flow mastah
Sorry if I can't help much in this diff because I can't even play it >_>


I'd like to say more than this, but it could makes more confusion, so I think those are enough mods for now
good luck :3 Thank you :3

Groumiezi wrote:

Shot 3 4 Stars! :3 (clicked T_T)

darkguydari wrote:

Hi there n_n woot
Hope this helps~

[Another]

00:48:640 (3) - I think you should move it to the left a little bit, so the previous slider doesn't overlap it. :3

[Easy]

00:25:791 (1,2) - I think these are too close to each other. :3
01:01:024 (2) - I'm not sure if that was on purpose, so just check it. Yes.


[General]

There is no preview point in your map, you can set one clicking here http://puu.sh/5BrkN.jpg Awdded :3
I suggest you to step down the volume a little bit in the last timing section, since the last spinner sounds kind of loud. Fwixed :3

Fatfan Kolek wrote:

From #modreq. :3

Beginner
00:13:756 - 00:14:803 This slider feels uncomfortable long with the silence between your next slider. fucking lol slider
00:25:791 Add clap. :3
00:27:884 ^ :3
00:29:280 Remove clap. :3
00:27:884 - 00:28:582 Make a curve. Looks better. :3
00:41:140 - 00:41:838 ^ no
00:47:419 Remove clap. I would use it in Kiai time. Use finish here instead. :3
00:48:814 Add whistle. no
00:50:210 Finish here instead of clap. no it's not fit the music
00:51:605 Add whistle. no
00:53:000 Finish here instead of clap. no
00:57:884 - 00:58:582 Set the circles like this: :3
01:02:768 Remove clap. Add whistle instead. no
01:04:163 Remove clap. Add finish. no
01:05:551 Remove clap. Add whistle. :3
01:23:349 Remove clap. Add finish. no
01:23:698 Remove finish. Add clap. no

Hyper
00:43:233 - 00:43:582 I wouldn't set the slider that near to the previous circle, because of the long silence between each other. Think about it. what do you mean
00:47:419 - 00:48:640 I would place the part like this: what do you mean
00:51:605 - 00:51:954 Don't use the same position as you did for (3). do places again D: why?

Another
01:00:675 - 01:01:373 The distance between the circles is too high. no
Didn't find anything else here. I really like that Another. :3

Good luck on your way to get it ranked! Thanks \:D/

YielShelion wrote:

Hyper

00:15:326 - 00:19:163 kebanyakan whistle, kurangi dikit, terutama yang slider ke 4 ( 00:16:547 )
00:25:094 terlalu dempet, ntar malah salah prediksi, saran : http://puu.sh/5F1z5.jpg
00:25:617 yang ini juga, saran : http://puu.sh/5F1Br.jpg
01:26:489 new combo?
01:27:884 terlalu jauh, coba dekatin. saran : http://puu.sh/5F1KI.jpg
01:28:669 spinner terakhir terlalu keras suaranya, coba turunin, terutama pas finishnya
finish all :3

Another

01:18:117 Set hitsound jadi normal, bukan soft :3

Itu aja keknya, semoga jadi ranked yak Makasih broo

Lust wrote:

From my queue.

[Beginner]

1. 00:15:501 (4,5) - Would be nicer as a blanket. Fixed
2. 00:23:873 (1) - Spinner is too fast for a beginner difficulty. Fixed
3. 00:25:791 (1) - 368:151 Fixed
4. 00:38:349 (3,4) - Fix blanket. What? the blanket is good.
5. 01:09:745 (1,2) - ^ ^
6. 01:13:931 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
7. 01:22:303 (4,1) - Does not look to nice, please change pattern. The flow is also a little off there as well. Fixed
8. 01:28:582 (5,1) - Spinner and note are too close together, place spinner here: 01:28:756 Fixed

Overall its clean, but its very boring. Most of the patterns are unintuitive and uninteresting to play. Some of them shouldn't belong in a Beginner either. I suggest sticking to 1/1 throughout the entire map. I also suggest mapping a slightly more difficult easy, just to balance the mapset out.hohohohohoh

[Hyper]

1. 00:18:640 (4,5,6,7,1) - Too many notes in this stack. Shouldn't have that many in a hard.Fixed
2. 00:19:338 (1,2) - Blanket is off. What do you mean? D:
3. 00:21:256 (2,3,4,5) - use the same spacing for all of these. You have each slider four grids up from eachother, while the first two only have two grids.What do you mean? D:
4. 00:23:873 (1,1,1) - No need for this. It does not look good. Keep only one combo color for these three.
5. 00:28:059 (2,3) - Nazi but the blanket is off here by a smidge.
6. 00:48:466 (1,2) - Why have such little spacing here but here 00:47:419 (3,4) - you have larger (space in the blankets)? Keep it consistent.
7. 00:50:035 (1,2) - Same with this one, keep all blankets similiar.
8. 00:51:082 (3,1) - (3)s slider end does not full stack with (1).
9. 01:00:675 (1,2,3,4,1) - I like this pattern in play, but it looks very weird with the slider overlap.
10. 01:01:373 (1,2) - Blanket is off.
11. 01:03:117 (1,2) - Blanket this.
12. 01:12:623 - Why the break? You do not need one here, please map it a bit.
13. 01:18:466 (1,2) - Again another nazi: blanket is off a bit.
14. 01:20:907 (2,3) - Because of the AR these two overlap for a second, which doesn't look good.
15. 01:23:000 (4) - A bit overkill for a hard.
16. 01:27:187 (1,2) - Have spacing consistent with 01:26:489 (1,2)
17. 01:28:669 (1) - Same suggestion as in normal.

[Another]

1. 00:13:756 (3,4,5,6) - Why stack them all there under the slider end? Feels and looks weird.
2. 00:13:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Combo is too long. NC at 00:14:453 (7)
3. 00:27:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This looks very strange...
4. 01:12:623 - Same suggestion as in hard.
5. 01:28:625 (1) - You know what do with this by now.

That is about it, there are some more things I could elaborate on but I got a bit lazy later on. Call me back after a few more mods
Good luck! Thank you :3

Laurier wrote:

from my queue

General
uncheck to Wudescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks

Beginner
hink your random spacing is not good idea. please use same DS on easy diff.

00:13:407 (1) - Why you dont start to here ? im baka im baka im baka why not that orz Placed

SPOILER

00:15:501 (1) - NC Fixed
00:19:338 (1) - please remove reverse and add some notes at 00:20:733 ~00:22:826. 00:20:733 this timing start the new sound pattern. Fixed
00:39:745 (4) - NC no
00:50:210 (4) - ^ Fixed
00:51:605 (1) - remoce nc <<<--- typo right here Fixed.
00:53:000 (2) - nc Fixed
01:03:466 (4) - ^ Fixed
01:08:349 (3) - finish on end Fixed
01:26:489 (3) - ^ Fixed but this is not imo

Hyper
00:22:477 (4,5) - Ctr+G Fixed but i just Ctrl + G (4) only
00:27:535 (1) - make better curve Fixed

SPOILER

00:49:687 (3) - move to x326y168 Fixed Yayyy better stack \:D/
00:58:582 (5) - add nc ? Fixed

Another
00:17:768 (4,1) - try this Fixed.

SPOILER

00:37:128 (1) - remove nc . use same pattern as 00:39:309 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
01:26:489 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - stop to random nc

yurunneram wrote:

HOORAY ORANGE Horrayyyy \:D/

EASY

00:18:291 (3) - Spacing infringement. Move (2) down Fixed

01:03:466 (4) - NC Added


WHEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEHW

HARD

00:29:280 (4) - NC here instead of the next note Added

00:47:419 (3) - NC Added

01:06:256 (1) - Don't like this anti jump Remap this object?

Good job ^^ Thank you ^^

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram

Kenterz9 wrote:

HI, From my queue ~

[General]
Offset : 2768 no

[Easy]
00:13:407 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - You must place these circle with the new offset no
00:23:611 (1) - Finish hitsound here ? yo
01:21:605 - Sample set 3 ? ????
01:28:756 (1) - It must ends at 01:30:152 yo

[Hyper]
Warning for Distance Snap / !\ and also hitsounds

00:14:977 (5,1) - Distance Snap yo
00:18:640 (4,5,6,7,1) - Try another patern please yo
00:21:780 (3,4,5) - Distance Snap no
00:23:873 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:30:675 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:32:070 (1,1,1,1) - Try another patern ^
00:36:605 (1,2) - Maybe Distance Snap ? ^
00:38:000 (1,3) - Why is there hitsound here and no hitsounds elsewhere ? ????
00:43:931 (2,3) - Distance Snap no
00:51:605 (1,2,3) - ^ yo
00:57:884 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try another patern no
01:00:675 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ ^
01:02:419 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Distance Snap (O_o) ^

Nothing special to say for "Another" fuk wid dis

Hope it'll be helpful ^w^ thanks

1. move offset to 00:01:198 - here, right now your objects are one whole beat late from the real beat, move the redline so that it can be fixed

1. uncheck letterbox plz
2. 00:37:652 (2,3) - reversing rhythm for better rhythm
3. 01:01:024 (2) - hmm how about deleting this note? i alreay know this fit with the music well but keep rhythm seems much better on easiest diff
4. 01:03:814 (2) - same as above
5. 01:11:838 (3) - try changing this to 1/1 slider instead, i don't think 1/2 slider with a repeat fits well with the music
6. 01:12:884 (4) - add NC for rhythm changing
7. 01:21:605 - useless green line, plz delete this and 01:21:692 - this

1. umm diff name is too long imo how about fixing like Home's Standard or something slimilar?
2. AR +1 for balancing among the diffs
3. 00:17:594 (1) - delete NC
4. 00:25:442 (1) - from here to 00:33:466 (4) - here feels really really boring it just keep turning around, this will cause boring to players even though this diff is Normal diff,so i highly recommed to fix these things
5. 00:28:582 (2,3) - consider reversing rhythm to follow with piano sounds much better
6. 00:30:326 (1,2) - same as above and 00:30:326 (1) - delete NC here
7. 00:40:442 (3) - touching HP bar
8. 00:43:233 (1) - delete this NC or 00:46:024 (3) - add NC here for consistence
9. 01:10:791 (4) - well i think 1/2 slider with 1 repeat fits much better than 1/1 slider here
10. 01:23:698 (5) - add NC and 01:25:094 (1) - delete NC

1. 00:14:454 (4) - delete finish on start? it doesn't like it's needed
2. 00:34:163 (3) - i'd rather change this to 2 1/2 sliders since you seems that you tried follow with piano sounds but actually it should be snapped at 1/3 beats as you know,it'd be better to snap at drum sounds on background
   
   for example

   [/img]https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1163677[/img]
3. 00:51:605 (1) - this slider arrow is hidden by 00:51:082 (3) - this note's hitburst, you'd better to move this slider or that note. this should be fixed
4. 00:52:652 - add a note here,since there is a piano?(dunno how to call it) sound, current rhythm feels really empty
5. 00:52:652 (3,4) - if you add a note by above suggestion, it would be better to change these notes to 1/2 slider
   
   for example

   
6. 01:01:373 (1) - add finish for consistence
7. 01:20:559 (1) - delete NC, 01:20:907 (2) - add NC, 01:21:605 (1) - delete and NC 01:22:303 (3) - add NC
8. 01:27:884 (3) - add NC for consistence and rhythm changing

• 
  
  
  NC suggestions

  some consistent issues
  
  00:23:524 (5) - add NC
  00:24:046 (1) - delete NC
  00:27:012 (1) - this NC is useless delete it
  00:32:942 (1) - useless NC delete it~
  00:48:117 (1) - delete NC
  00:49:861 (1) - delete NC
  00:50:907 (1) - delete NC
  00:54:047 (1) - this NC doesn't look like it is needed, delete NC
  01:04:163 (1) - delete NC
  01:04:338 (2) - add NC
  01:06:256 (9) - add NC
  01:06:431 (1) - delete NC
  01:25:966 (1) - delete NC
  01:26:489 (3) - add NC

1. 00:14:803 (2,3) - i recommend you to reverse this rhythm because current rhythm feels little bit awkward for me, maybe this can be solution
   
   and try this pattern if you want

   
2. 00:22:651 (2) - this finish sound should be moved on 00:22:128 (1) - this slider's start according to the music
3. 00:32:593 (4,5) - hmm is there something special reason that you added this whistles suddenly?
4. 00:33:814 (1) - this note should be snapped at 1/4 beats since 1/3 beats are started from 00:34:163 - here, you'd better to fix this slider to 1/2 slider like this
5. 00:37:128 (5) - consider deleting this note since there aren't any sounds there and keep consistence seems much better
6. 00:39:919 (5) - similar reason with above
7. 00:44:628 (5) - delete whistle for consistence
8. 00:46:721 (3) - missed finish on start
9. 01:22:652 (2,3) - it seems like you tried to follow with piano(maybe it is) sounds but actually it isn't this rhythm hears reall weird for me, try this instead
10. 01:28:756 (1) - i have no idea why you snapped this spinner's end on 1/16 beat since it's kinda weird it would be better to snap at 01:30:675 - here or 01:31:373 - here

HelloSCV wrote:

hi

[General]

1. move offset to 00:01:198 - here, right now your objects are one whole beat late from the real beat, move the redline so that it can be fixed ok ok ok wwww

[Beginner]

1. uncheck letterbox plz mmmm okokokok wwww
2. 00:37:652 (2,3) - reversing rhythm for better rhythm No?
3. 01:01:024 (2) - hmm how about deleting this note? i alreay know this fit with the music well but keep rhythm seems much better on easiest diff ok ok ok wwww
4. 01:03:814 (2) - same as above ok ok ok wwww
5. 01:11:838 (3) - try changing this to 1/1 slider instead, i don't think 1/2 slider with a repeat fits well with the music
6. 01:12:884 (4) - add NC for rhythm changing ok ok ok wwww
7. 01:21:605 - useless green line, plz delete this and 01:21:692 - this ok ok ok wwww

[Hyper]

1. 00:14:454 (4) - delete finish on start? it doesn't like it's needed mmmm okokokok wwww
2. 00:34:163 (3) - i'd rather change this to 2 1/2 sliders since you seems that you tried follow with piano sounds but actually it should be snapped at 1/3 beats as you know,it'd be better to snap at drum sounds on background mmmm okokokok wwww
   
   for example

   [/img]https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1163677[/img]
3. 00:51:605 (1) - this slider arrow is hidden by 00:51:082 (3) - this note's hitburst, you'd better to move this slider or that note. this should be fixed mmmm okokokok wwww
4. 00:52:652 - add a note here,since there is a piano?(dunno how to call it) sound, current rhythm feels really empty mmmm okokokok wwww
5. 00:52:652 (3,4) - if you add a note by above suggestion, it would be better to change these notes to 1/2 slider mmmm okokokok wwww
   
   for example

   
6. 01:01:373 (1) - add finish for consistence mmmm okokokok wwww
7. 01:20:559 (1) - delete NC, 01:20:907 (2) - add NC, 01:21:605 (1) - delete and NC 01:22:303 (3) - add NC mmmm okokokok wwww
8. 01:27:884 (3) - add NC for consistence and rhythm changing mmmm okokokok wwww

[Another]

• 
  
  
  NC suggestions

  some consistent issues
  
  00:23:524 (5) - add NCmmmm okokokok wwww
  00:24:046 (1) - delete NCmmmm okokokok wwww
  00:27:012 (1) - this NC is useless delete itmmmm okokokok wwww
  00:32:942 (1) - useless NC delete it~mmmm okokokok wwww
  00:48:117 (1) - delete NCmmmm okokokok wwww
  00:49:861 (1) - delete NCmmmm okokokok wwww
  00:50:907 (1) - delete NCmmmm okokokok wwww
  00:54:047 (1) - this NC doesn't look like it is needed, delete NCmmmm okokokok wwww
  01:04:163 (1) - delete NC mmmm okokokok wwww
  01:04:338 (2) - add NCmmmm okokokok wwww
  01:06:256 (9) - add NCmmmm okokokok wwww
  01:06:431 (1) - delete NCmmmm okokokok wwww
  01:25:966 (1) - delete NC mmmm okokokok wwww
  01:26:489 (3) - add NCmmmm okokokok wwww

1. 00:14:803 (2,3) - i recommend you to reverse this rhythm because current rhythm feels little bit awkward for me, maybe this can be solution mmmm okokokok wwww
   
   and try this pattern if you want

   
2. 00:22:651 (2) - this finish sound should be moved on 00:22:128 (1) - this slider's start according to the music mmmm okokokok wwww
3. 00:32:593 (4,5) - hmm is there something special reason that you added this whistles suddenly? hah hoh okay i delete it
4. 00:33:814 (1) - this note should be snapped at 1/4 beats since 1/3 beats are started from 00:34:163 - here, you'd better to fix this slider to 1/2 slider mmmm okokokok wwww like this
5. 00:37:128 (5) - consider deleting this note since there aren't any sounds there and keep consistence seems much better mmmm okokokok wwww
6. 00:39:919 (5) - similar reason with abovemmmm okokokok wwww
7. 00:44:628 (5) - delete whistle for consistence mmmm okokokok wwww
8. 00:46:721 (3) - missed finish on start mmmm okokokok wwww
9. 01:22:652 (2,3) - it seems like you tried to follow with piano(maybe it is) sounds but actually it isn't this rhythm hears reall weird for me, try mmmm okokokok wwwwthis instead
10. 01:28:756 (1) - i have no idea why you snapped this spinner's end on 1/16 beat since it's kinda weird it would be better to snap at 01:30:675 - here <<< here or 01:31:373 - here

well it would be better if you add hitsounds constantly :< good luck anyway~

kamisamaaa wrote:

hello from my queue~
[general]
maybe the frist redline offset should be 13756 .ok I found you have change it
SV is so high!!!!!!you think at kiai time
[another]
00:25:617 (2) - make blanket with 00:25:094 (1) - ? no, i remake it again.
00:30:500 (1) - end at 00:30:588 and add a note at 00:30:675 ?no.
00:33:117 (1) - end at 00:33:291 and add a note at 00:33:466 because 00:33:466 here to 00:33:727 here is a group, but you devide them many same problem in your map~maybe you can find out them and change them~ no.
00:27:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - the rythm here is not 1/4 I dont know what rythm is suit here either. maybe you can found some other mapper to help you 0.0 the violin is really strange in this song. maybe you will follow drun =L= no.
00:33:814 (1,2,3) - there is not 1/3 rythm no. please read HelloSCV mod.
00:43:233 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make these four slider to same shape? no.
00:46:024 (1,2,3,4) - same here no.
00:53:873 here miss a rythm is not so good... no.



and I must say sorry for you, I really dont like this song and I will pass other diff mmm oh okay ._.