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TAKA respect for J.S.B - No.13

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DenoisoGoiso
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, 19 February, 2014 at 5:56:08 PM

Artist: TAKA respect for J.S.B
Title: No.13
Source: Beatmania IIDX
Tags: Progressive Baroque 10th style beatmania dance dance revolution jubeat come[back]home Inventionen und Sinfonien BWV 784 Johann Sebastian Bach
BPM: 172
Filesize: 2071kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (4.9 stars, 276 notes)
  2. Beginner (1.47 stars, 62 notes)
  3. Hyper (4.89 stars, 151 notes)
  4. Standard (3.86 stars, 109 notes)
Download: TAKA respect for J.S.B - No.13
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Beginner : 100% by Me (Complete!)
Standard : 100% by Come[Back]Home (Hitsounds Is Complete!)
Hyper : 100% by Me (Complete!)
Another : 100% by Me (Complete! been remapped 2 times well D:)

For rank!



Goddamn, hard to rank this map C:


Thank You, Modders!
1. UndeadBananaz
2. Papysh
3. ezek
4. AlexaBM
5. El SolarBeam
6. Vita-VVA
7. Dariano
8. Fatfan Kolek
9. YielShelion
10. Lust
11. Laurier
12. yurunneram
13. Kenterz9
14. HelloSCV
15. kamisamaaa
16. K4zuya K
17. Jekate
18. AnreFM
19. sheela901
20. RandomEffect
21. ts8zs
22. vahn10
23. iNickel
24. Restrict
25. Secretpipe
26. DakeDekaane
27. Trust
28. [Navy]

Testplayer
1. Sieg
any moar please

looking bat nao
UndeadBananaz
Hi, from timing check queue.

You need only one timing point.

172 BPM 4/4 Offset 2769

I think that's it. Don't forget that you'll have to fix this for all difficulties, and re-snap all notes and adjust slider lengths where needed.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

UndeadBananaz wrote:

Hi, from timing check queue.

You need only one timing point.

172 BPM 4/4 Offset 2769

I think that's it. Don't forget that you'll have to fix this for all difficulties, and re-snap all notes and adjust slider lengths where needed.

Good luck!
Thank you!!! :)
Papysh
:3
11:35 Papysh: Hi
11:36 DenoisoGoiso: hi too,what =3=
11:36 Papysh: i will mod your map anyways
11:36 Papysh: ;w;
11:36 DenoisoGoiso: in IRC?
11:36 DenoisoGoiso: orz
11:36 Papysh: if irc
11:36 Papysh: i can do it even now
11:37 DenoisoGoiso: okay ._.
11:37 *DenoisoGoiso is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/325880 TAKA respect for J.S.B - No.13 (Short Version)]
11:38 Papysh: ;w;
11:38 Papysh: let me finish song im playing
11:38 Papysh: and i will do modding
11:38 Papysh: >w<
11:39 DenoisoGoiso: >w<
11:40 *Papysh is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/105227 HO-KAGO TEA TIME - U&I [Hard]] <osu!mania> |7K|
11:40 Papysh: if you were bored you can spec
11:40 Papysh: xD
11:43 Papysh: >w<
11:43 DenoisoGoiso: -_-
11:43 DenoisoGoiso: what are you doing now
11:44 Papysh: i was playing song
11:44 *Papysh is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/105227 HO-KAGO TEA TIME - U&I]
11:44 Papysh: ;w;
11:44 Papysh: it was kinda long
11:45 Papysh: i will play one more and i mod your mapo
11:45 Papysh: >w<
11:45 Papysh: ps
11:45 DenoisoGoiso: ok
11:45 *Papysh is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/325878 TAKA respect for J.S.B - No.13 (Short Version)]
11:45 Papysh: the insane
11:45 Papysh: another*
11:45 Papysh: is overmapped i think
11:45 DenoisoGoiso: oh
11:45 Papysh: i would usggest remapping it later
11:45 Papysh: but i dont know
11:47 DenoisoGoiso: wtf
11:47 Papysh: well i dont know
11:47 Papysh: i dont map high bpm
11:49 *Papysh is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/325879 TAKA respect for J.S.B - No.13 (Short Version) [Hyper]]
11:49 Papysh: Ar + 1
11:50 DenoisoGoiso: finish
11:50 Papysh: 00:48:814 (2) -
11:50 Papysh: make better blanket
11:50 Papysh: with (1)
11:50 Papysh: 00:52:826 (3) -
11:50 Papysh: stack this better with (2)
11:51 Papysh: tail
11:51 Papysh: ofc
11:51 Papysh: and then make this 00:53:698 (2) -
11:51 Papysh: http://puu.sh/5lZ4N/ff445b235a.jpg
11:52 Papysh: 01:06:256 (1,2) -
11:52 Papysh: here ^ ignore spacing
11:52 Papysh: and make something i will show you
11:53 Papysh: http://puu.sh/5lZ6J/38097e70c2.jpg
11:53 Papysh: http://puu.sh/5lZ6P/322fcde60c.jpg
11:54 Papysh: 01:25:704 (2) - im suggesting to place this note on white
11:54 Papysh: instead of blue
11:54 Papysh: and stacking this with
11:54 Papysh: 01:25:704 (2) -
11:54 Papysh: so it will be more noticable that its 1/1
11:55 DenoisoGoiso: white
11:55 DenoisoGoiso: okay >.<
11:56 Papysh: well
11:56 *Papysh is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/325880 TAKA respect for J.S.B - No.13 (Short Version) [Basic]]
11:56 Papysh: i wont mod another
11:56 Papysh: sori
11:56 Papysh: man
11:56 Papysh: 00:15:324 (3) -
11:57 Papysh: you cant make that
11:57 Papysh: at basic
11:57 Papysh: xD
11:57 Papysh: you must use all time 1/1
11:57 Papysh: time line
11:57 Papysh: because using 1/4
11:57 Papysh: isnt best
11:57 Papysh: and the jump is 4,50 spacing
11:57 Papysh: this one must be fixed
11:57 Papysh: your map is much better
11:58 Papysh: than my first maps though T^T
11:58 Papysh: 00:15:324 (3) -
11:58 Papysh: so yeah
11:58 Papysh: rest is okay
11:58 Papysh: just decrease it's spacing
12:00 Papysh: Just question
12:00 Papysh: but do you use Distance snap for your map?
12:00 DenoisoGoiso: No
12:00 DenoisoGoiso: ever
12:00 Papysh: please do it
12:00 Papysh: you should always map with 1,00 distance snap
12:00 DenoisoGoiso: okay
12:01 Papysh: because the break between notes should mean a break n itmeline
12:01 Papysh: i will post it
12:01 Papysh: and call me when you fix the distance snap
12:02 Papysh: ;w;
12:02 Papysh: plz
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

Papysh wrote:

:3
11:35 Papysh: Hi
11:36 DenoisoGoiso: hi too,what =3=
11:36 Papysh: i will mod your map anyways
11:36 Papysh: ;w;
11:36 DenoisoGoiso: in IRC?
11:36 DenoisoGoiso: orz
11:36 Papysh: if irc
11:36 Papysh: i can do it even now
11:37 DenoisoGoiso: okay ._.
11:37 *DenoisoGoiso is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/325880 TAKA respect for J.S.B - No.13 (Short Version)]
11:38 Papysh: ;w;
11:38 Papysh: let me finish song im playing
11:38 Papysh: and i will do modding
11:38 Papysh: >w<
11:39 DenoisoGoiso: >w<
11:40 *Papysh is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/105227 HO-KAGO TEA TIME - U&I [Hard]] <osu!mania> |7K|
11:40 Papysh: if you were bored you can spec
11:40 Papysh: xD
11:43 Papysh: >w<
11:43 DenoisoGoiso: -_-
11:43 DenoisoGoiso: what are you doing now
11:44 Papysh: i was playing song
11:44 *Papysh is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/105227 HO-KAGO TEA TIME - U&I]
11:44 Papysh: ;w;
11:44 Papysh: it was kinda long
11:45 Papysh: i will play one more and i mod your mapo
11:45 Papysh: >w<
11:45 Papysh: ps
11:45 DenoisoGoiso: ok
11:45 *Papysh is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/325878 TAKA respect for J.S.B - No.13 (Short Version)]
11:45 Papysh: the insane
11:45 Papysh: another*
11:45 Papysh: is overmapped i think
11:45 DenoisoGoiso: oh
11:45 Papysh: i would usggest remapping it later
11:45 Papysh: but i dont know
11:47 DenoisoGoiso: wtf
11:47 Papysh: well i dont know
11:47 Papysh: i dont map high bpm
11:49 *Papysh is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/325879 TAKA respect for J.S.B - No.13 (Short Version) [Hyper]]
11:49 Papysh: Ar + 1
11:50 DenoisoGoiso: finish
11:50 Papysh: 00:48:814 (2) -
11:50 Papysh: make better blanket
11:50 Papysh: with (1)
11:50 Papysh: 00:52:826 (3) -
11:50 Papysh: stack this better with (2)
11:51 Papysh: tail
11:51 Papysh: ofc
11:51 Papysh: and then make this 00:53:698 (2) -
11:51 Papysh: http://puu.sh/5lZ4N/ff445b235a.jpg
11:52 Papysh: 01:06:256 (1,2) -
11:52 Papysh: here ^ ignore spacing
11:52 Papysh: and make something i will show you
11:53 Papysh: http://puu.sh/5lZ6J/38097e70c2.jpg
11:53 Papysh: http://puu.sh/5lZ6P/322fcde60c.jpg
11:54 Papysh: 01:25:704 (2) - im suggesting to place this note on white
11:54 Papysh: instead of blue
11:54 Papysh: and stacking this with
11:54 Papysh: 01:25:704 (2) -
11:54 Papysh: so it will be more noticable that its 1/1
11:55 DenoisoGoiso: white
11:55 DenoisoGoiso: okay >.<
11:56 Papysh: well
11:56 *Papysh is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/325880 TAKA respect for J.S.B - No.13 (Short Version) [Basic]]
11:56 Papysh: i wont mod another
11:56 Papysh: sori
11:56 Papysh: man
11:56 Papysh: 00:15:324 (3) -
11:57 Papysh: you cant make that
11:57 Papysh: at basic
11:57 Papysh: xD
11:57 Papysh: you must use all time 1/1
11:57 Papysh: time line
11:57 Papysh: because using 1/4
11:57 Papysh: isnt best
11:57 Papysh: and the jump is 4,50 spacing
11:57 Papysh: this one must be fixed
11:57 Papysh: your map is much better
11:58 Papysh: than my first maps though T^T
11:58 Papysh: 00:15:324 (3) -
11:58 Papysh: so yeah
11:58 Papysh: rest is okay
11:58 Papysh: just decrease it's spacing
12:00 Papysh: Just question
12:00 Papysh: but do you use Distance snap for your map?
12:00 DenoisoGoiso: No
12:00 DenoisoGoiso: ever
12:00 Papysh: please do it
12:00 Papysh: you should always map with 1,00 distance snap
12:00 DenoisoGoiso: okay
12:01 Papysh: because the break between notes should mean a break n itmeline
12:01 Papysh: i will post it
12:01 Papysh: and call me when you fix the distance snap
12:02 Papysh: ;w;
12:02 Papysh: plz
12:03 DenoisoGoiso: lol i will try distance map later
12:03 Papysh: 'https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2691775#p2691775
12:07 Papysh: good luck
add :3
:3 thank for the modding~
ZekeyHache
Hi! From My modding queue. (Looks like you missed something from the rules, but since the map follows them I'll mod it)

Basic
00:32:070 (2) - Try to not overlap with 00:30:675 (1) -
01:09:745 (1) - Add a finish sound, it will sound good, try it!
01:15:326 (1) - ^

Normal
Why not add a spinner at the end? Like in Basic.
Cool diff.

Hyper
01:07:128 (x) - Add some objects here to cover the piano.
01:09:745 (1) - Finish.
01:15:239 (1) - Begin at 01:15:326 and add Finish.

Another
01:07:128 (x) - Add some objects here to cover the piano.
01:09:745 (1) - Finish.
01:15:326 (1) - Finish.
01:28:582 (2) - Finish.
And finally, add a spinner at the end.
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

ezek wrote:

Hi! From My modding queue. (Looks like you missed something from the rules, but since the map follows them I'll mod it)yay i forgot to wrote *** (some words) sorry.

Basic
00:32:070 (2) - Try to not overlap with 00:30:675 (1) - now it's like a jump. Fixed
01:09:745 (1) - Add a finish sound, it will sound good, try it! ahhh really good :3 Added
01:15:326 (1) - ^ Added :3


Hyper
01:07:128 (x) - Add some objects here to cover the piano. Added :3
01:09:745 (1) - Finish. Added :3
01:15:239 (1) - Begin at 01:15:326 and add Finish. Fixed and Added :3

Another
01:07:128 (x) - Add some objects here to cover the piano. Added :3
01:09:745 (1) - Finish. Added :3
01:15:326 (1) - Finish. Added :3
01:28:582 (2) - Finish. Added :3
And finally, add a spinner at the end. Added :3
Thank you! for the modding! :)
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso
Need more mods >.<
AlexaBM
hi~ m4m

[Basic]
00:25:791 (1,2) - I suggest you not to put circle on the slider's head, it's too hard for newbies to understand when they should click
00:30:675 (1,2) - I don't see DS here, you HAVE TO use DS in whole Easy and Normal diffs, but okay, if you want to do so, maybe do more neatly?
00:38:349 (3,4) - Bad overlap. You can copy slider (3) like on the screen. 00:41:140 (5,1) - You don't have DS here again. Make some distance between them, cuz it can confuse the newbies!
01:05:559 (1) - You don't have any objects after that slider, I feel incompleteness here. maybe do so?
01:13:931 - The same thing. Maybe do so?

[Normal]
I think it should be not normal, but Standart, but okay, I wanna say smth more important.
This diff is horrible, sorry. For example, from 00:13:407 - to 00:25:094 - I don't understand, what rhythm you follow. You follow the beat, but not the music.
And you have a lot of such problems here. Maybe remap it, but if I were you, I would find another mapper to to Standart diff.

[Hyper]
00:29:977 (2) - Maybe do so?
00:36:256 - from here I see too fast slider's velocity, do it a bit slowly
00:38:000 (1,1,1,1) - Remove all NCs
00:51:605 (1,2) - Bad overlap
00:57:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use "Create poligon circles" to do such thing, cuz it's ugly
01:00:675 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:05:559 (4,1) - Bad overlap
01:12:884 - maybe add a break time here?
Also you have a lot of problems with spacing, you should work on it

Sry, I can't mod Insanes.
GL~
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

AlexaBM wrote:

hi~ m4m

[Basic]
00:25:791 (1,2) - I suggest you not to put circle on the slider's head, it's too hard for newbies to understand when they should click you make me laugh wwwwww Fixed
00:30:675 (1,2) - I don't see DS here, you HAVE TO use DS in whole Easy and Normal diffs, but okay, if you want to do so, maybe do more neatly? okay
00:38:349 (3,4) - Bad overlap. You can copy slider (3) like on the screen.okay 00:41:140 (5,1) - You don't have DS here again. Make some distance between them, cuz it can confuse the newbies!you make me laugh again wwwwwww Fixed
01:05:559 (1) - You don't have any objects after that slider, I feel incompleteness here. maybe do so? Okay
01:13:931 - The same thing. Maybe do so? -_-

lololol Now 1 star.

[Normal]
I think it should be not normal, but Standart, but okay, I wanna say smth more important.
This diff is horrible, sorry. For example, from 00:13:407 - to 00:25:094 - I don't understand, what rhythm you follow. You follow the beat, but not the music.
And you have a lot of such problems here. Maybe remap it, but if I were you, I would find another mapper to Typoto StandarTypot diff.

Okay...

[Hyper]
00:29:977 (2) - Maybe do so?
00:36:256 - from here I see too fast slider's velocity, do it a bit slowly
00:38:000 (1,1,1,1) - Remove all NCs
00:51:605 (1,2) - Bad overlap
00:57:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use "Create poligon circles" to do such thing, cuz it's ugly
01:00:675 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:05:559 (4,1) - Bad overlap
01:12:884 - maybe add a break time here?
Also you have a lot of problems with spacing, you should work on it Hardwork hardwork hardwork hardwork it's really hard like playing big black

Sry, I can't mod Insanes. still overmapped lolololol
GL~ Thank You!! :)
El SolarBeam
hi fellow indonesian~
M4M asked from Groumiezi

[General]
  1. The source "IIDX 10th style (beatmania)" doesn't seems necessary, just change it to "Beatmania IIDX" instead
  2. Also remove iidx from your tag because it's already on the source
  3. Maybe it's just my opinion, but the bright red and blue combo colors don't fit the background, but well it's up to your taste. If you consider to change this, don't forget to match the other diffs
  4. I actually want to go deeper with the metadata stuff, but it seems your mapping style still needs more attention as of now, so I'll leave it for other modder for the time being
  5. And one thing that I want to point out, it's better to find more natural-sounded soft hitclap sample for this map, because some part can't be hitsounded properly as long as you don't have it

[Basic]

  1. Firstly, I'm not sure if the diff itself should be named "basic", I prefer call it "beginner". If you consider this, I also recommend the "normal" to change into "basic" for consistency
  2. Oh, and I believe the kiai time should be from 00:25:094 until 00:36:256 if you consider this, match the othe diffs as well
  3. Next for timing, um.. I think it's not good for the easy diff to have multiple SV (slider velocity), so you have two choice:
    - Remove those inherited timing points with 0.75x SV, then change the SV to 0.60 (you'll still have to remap some mistimed slider in 01:18:814 until 01:27:187 then, but at least it's not a big deal)
    - Or if you really want to use 0.80 SV that badly, you'll have to remove those inherited timing points with 0.75x SV and remap all over from 00:13:756 until 01:13:931 so I won't recommend this lol
  4. Change the grid size into "small" (except if you intend to use 0.96x spacings in the first place), then recheck the spacing, because I see some inconsistency, like 00:13:407 (1,2) and 00:30:675 (1,2)
  5. Don't forget to resnap notes when you've change the timing (check the AImod)
  6. Now that you've change the grid size, you'll see many misplaced notes, so fix those first. Well, I wouldn't go further with the spacing for now then
  7. Don't stack in easy diff since it would confuse the new players
  8. Remove NC at 00:18:291 and add NC at 00:19:338
  9. 00:27:884 Remove the reverse and make it like 00:26:489 so it would be consistent
  10. 00:30:675 (4,1) You could blank it properly
  11. 00:30:675 (1,2) Placing it in symmetrical like this isn't flows good somehow (and also it has different spacing so fixing the spacing comes first)
  12. 00:48:814 (3,4,1) Make the length similar with 00:47:419 (2)
  13. 00:58:233 Add circle
  14. 01:00:675 I prefer this http://puu.sh/5zYEv.jpg
  15. 01:09:745 I think it's better to map this part instead of spinner (and because this diff lacks notes)
  16. 01:30:675 Reduce the volume into 5%

[C(Back)H's Normal]
  1. Same with the above diff, it's not good to put multiple SV in this diff (assuming it's normal diff), so remove the 0.75x SV and customize the SV which you consider proper
  2. Firstly, I don't see any needs to put the beat snap divisor into 1/8 (well, it's not a big deal though)
  3. The problem I see is you just map the not mostly in the same place, look at http://puu.sh/5zZHl.jpg so it's better to spread it more
  4. 00:25:442 to 00:32:070 It looks that you just map the not all over in the same place, and it might be boring to play
  5. 00:36:256 Remove finish
  6. 00:36:605 Add whistle
  7. 00:38:698 Add circle for consistency
  8. 00:43:233 Remove finish
  9. 00:44:628 Somehow this slider shape is out of place (I mean, the bending is really different from other sliders)
  10. Remove finish here 00:57:884 and here 00:58:233
  11. I'd like to say the same here 01:00:675 and here 01:01:024
  12. 01:02:419 (3,4) Blanket properly
  13. 01:09:745 (1,3,5,6) I think it doesn't necessary to spam finish here
  14. 01:10:442 (3,4) Same here
  15. 01:23:698 (5,1) I don't get what you follow here, and also it feels out of place
  16. 01:30:675 Reduce the volume into 5%

[Hyper]

  1. There's so many unsnapped notes in this diff, so it's better to deal with those first (check AImod)
  2. 00:15:326 to 00:19:163 I don't get what you follow here, it just sounds off, so my suggestion is remove circle at 00:16:547 then move the slider here
  3. 00:16:721 into 00:16:547 Next, move the circle at 00:18:117 (2,3) to the white tick, exactly at 00:18:291 and 00:18:640 then last, remove circle at 00:18:814
    And now you get a proper beat
  4. 00:21:780 (3,1,1) Don't use NC spam
  5. 00:25:094 I suggest using soft hitsound from this timing point, assuming you follow the violin
  6. 00:28:059 (2,3) Blanket properly
  7. 00:32:070 (1,2,3,4) Bad flow, change the pattern
  8. 00:33:466 It's better to start spinner from 00:34:861 and map the rest
  9. Add clap at 00:38:000 and 00:38:698 and remove whistle at 00:38:349 and 00:39:047
  10. 00:39:396 (1,2) The bending is too intense, it would cause a bad flow
  11. 00:41:838 (3) I would prefer normal finish instead of drum. The same goes with 00:41:838
  12. 00:43:233 (1,2) Don't put finish on entire slider unless it is really necessary. Oh wait, maybe you should remove all the finish here actually
  13. 00:54:221 Add circle
  14. 01:00:675 (1,2,3,4,1) I feels really crowded, maybe change the pattern a bit
  15. 01:04:163 (3) I don't get what you follow here
  16. 01:21:256 I think it would be more consistent if you remove the circle and add 1/2 slider instead
  17. 01:22:303 (3) Also this, change into two 1/2 sliders instead
  18. 01:25:791 The pattern transition in this part is really ugly
  19. Well, there's also many spacing inconsistency that I'd like to point out (especially this part 00:23:873) but I can't differentiate which one is intentional and
  20. which part is not, so I'll leave it for now
And also for hitsound, as I said earlier, this diff needs customized soft hitclap sample so that it can be hitsounded properly


[Another]

  1. Change the HP into 7
  2. Change the OD into 7 (except if you want to overkill the players)
  3. The 2.80 SV doesn't feel fitting imo, better use 2.50 or lower
  4. And there's so many problem with the hitsound, in some place there's one or two, but the other place is so empty
  5. 00:15:326 Don't spam NC here, add NC at 00:16:721 instead
  6. 00:22:128 Add NC, and remove NC at 00:22:652
  7. 00:32:942 Add circle
  8. 00:37:652 Again, don't use NC spam
  9. 00:46:721 (3) Ugly slider, better change into another shape
  10. 00:50:210 (2,3) These bezier sliders doesn't flow well imo, change the red anchor into white instead
  11. 00:53:524 (2) I don't get what you follow here
  12. 01:23:088 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) Feels so crowded, it's hard to be seen so maybe you should spread it more
Well, it's alright if you want to make a hard map, but you should also think about how the map flow (the problem is you should play the map by yourself if you want to consider whether the flow is good or not lol). So my suggestion, try to find someone who's good at playing a really hard diff and ask for testplay, especially for the flow~
Sorry if I can't help much in this diff because I can't even play it >_>


I'd like to say more than this, but it could makes more confusion, so I think those are enough mods for now
good luck :3
Vita-VVA
[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with purple is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself :) Ignore them if you think they are helpless :)

[Timing]

the offset

And since I changed your offset , most of the notes before 00:25:094 - should be rearrange :)

[General]
There's no preview time :( it's unrankable

Do not use so many spinners

[Hyper]
00:27:535 (1) - may divide it into a slider and a NC note

00:56:140 - this blank should be mapped.... or your playing time is too short

01:09:745 (1,1) - Um.....they're also meaningless :( map it plz

01:25:791 (2) - NC

01:28:582 (4,1) - it's unrankable I think

and actually this diff should be hard or hard+

[Another]
00:26:140 (4) - may divide it into a slider and a note

00:29:127 (4) - it seems well but doesn't work well.... this reverse slider is not necessary and I think using short quick slider like before is better

00:34:861 (1) - end the slider at here and add two notes at 00:36:256 - and 00:36:344 -

00:42:012 - maybe stream here

00:53:000 (1) - bad arrange :) seems didn't follow the rhythm :(

01:15:326 (1) - same as hyper

01:18:127 - here should have a note

That's all and I think your another is pretty good :) since I enjoyed it
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

Vita-VVA wrote:

[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with purple is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself :) Ignore them if you think they are helpless :)

[Timing]

the offset

And since I changed your offset , most of the notes before 00:25:094 - should be rearrange :) no. it's no rhythmable

[General]
There's no preview time :( it's unrankable

Do not use so many spinners Why??? D:

[Hyper]
00:27:535 (1) - may divide it into a slider and a NC note X

00:56:140 - this blank should be mapped.... or your playing time is too short
01:09:745 (1,1) - Um.....they're also meaningless :( map it plzX

01:25:791 (2) - NC

01:28:582 (4,1) - it's unrankable I think

and actually this diff should be hard or hard+ No, the theme please. From IIDX Difficulty name!

[Another]
00:26:140 (4) - may divide it into a slider and a note

00:29:127 (4) - it seems well but doesn't work well.... this reverse slider is not necessary and I think using short quick slider like before is better

00:34:861 (1) - end the slider at here and add two notes at 00:36:256 - and 00:36:344 - no

00:42:012 - maybe stream here

00:53:000 (1) - bad arrange :) seems didn't follow the rhythm :(

01:15:326 (1) - same as hyper add break? or what? i'm trying to understand this

01:18:127 - here should have a note note what

That's all and I think your another is pretty good :) since I enjoyed it Thanks \:D/
Thanks for your modding! :)
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

El SolarBeam wrote:

hi fellow indonesian~ Ohai :3
M4M asked from Groumiezi GROUMIEZI Y U DO DIS?????? but i got M4M :3

[General]
  1. The source "IIDX 10th style (beatmania)" doesn't seems necessary, just change it to "Beatmania IIDX" instead Done
  2. Also remove iidx from your tag because it's already on the source Done
  3. Maybe it's just my opinion, but the bright red and blue combo colors don't fit the background, but well it's up to your taste. If you consider to change this, don't forget to match the other diffs No
  4. I actually want to go deeper with the metadata stuff, but it seems your mapping style still needs more attention as of now, so I'll leave it for other modder for the time being trying to understand this
  5. And one thing that I want to point out, it's better to find more natural-sounded soft hitclap sample for this map, because some part can't be hitsounded properly as long as you don't have it
I will found it.


[Basic]

  1. Firstly, I'm not sure if the diff itself should be named "basic", I prefer call it "beginner". If you consider this, I also recommend the "normal" to change into "basic" for consistency \:D/
  2. Oh, and I believe the kiai time should be from 00:25:094 until 00:36:256 if you consider this, match the other diffs as well
  3. Next for timing, um.. I think it's not good for the easy diff to have multiple SV (slider velocity), so you have two choice:
    - Remove those inherited timing points with 0.75x SV, then change the SV to 0.60 (you'll still have to remap some mistimed slider in 01:18:814 until 01:27:187 then, but at least it's not a big deal)\D:/
    - Or if you really want to use 0.80 SV that badly, you'll have to remove those inherited timing points with 0.75x SV and remap all over from 00:13:756 until 01:13:931 so I won't recommend this lol \:D/
  4. Change the grid size into "small" (except if you intend to use 0.96x spacings in the first place), then recheck the spacing, because I see some inconsistency, like 00:13:407 (1,2) and 00:30:675 (1,2)\:D/
  5. Don't forget to resnap notes when you've change the timing (check the AImod)
  6. Now that you've change the grid size, you'll see many misplaced notes, so fix those first. Well, I wouldn't go further with the spacing for now then
  7. Don't stack in easy diff since it would confuse the new players :/
  8. Remove NC at 00:18:291 and add NC at 00:19:338 \:D/
  9. 00:27:884 Remove the reverse and make it like 00:26:489 so it would be consistent \:D/
  10. 00:30:675 (4,1) You could blank it properly \D:/
  11. 00:30:675 (1,2) Placing it in symmetrical like this isn't flows good somehow (and also it has different spacing so fixing the spacing comes first):/
  12. 00:48:814 (3,4,1) Make the length similar with 00:47:419 (2) \:D/
  13. 00:58:233 Add circle \:D/
  14. 01:00:675 I prefer this http://puu.sh/5zYEv.jpg It's not too hard for easy player?
  15. 01:09:745 I think it's better to map this part instead of spinner (and because this diff lacks notes) \:D/
  16. 01:30:675 Reduce the volume into 5%
\:D/


[C(Back)H's Normal]
  1. Same with the above diff, it's not good to put multiple SV in this diff (assuming it's normal diff), so remove the 0.75x SV and customize the SV which you consider proper
  2. Firstly, I don't see any needs to put the beat snap divisor into 1/8 (well, it's not a big deal though)
  3. The problem I see is you just map the not mostly in the same place, look at http://puu.sh/5zZHl.jpg so it's better to spread it more
  4. 00:25:442 to 00:32:070 It looks that you just map the not all over in the same place, and it might be boring to play
  5. 00:36:256 Remove finish
  6. 00:36:605 Add whistle
  7. 00:38:698 Add circle for consistency
  8. 00:43:233 Remove finish
  9. 00:44:628 Somehow this slider shape is out of place (I mean, the bending is really different from other sliders)
  10. Remove finish here 00:57:884 and here 00:58:233
  11. I'd like to say the same here 01:00:675 and here 01:01:024
  12. 01:02:419 (3,4) Blanket properly
  13. 01:09:745 (1,3,5,6) I think it doesn't necessary to spam finish here
  14. 01:10:442 (3,4) Same here
  15. 01:23:698 (5,1) I don't get what you follow here, and also it feels out of place
  16. 01:30:675 Reduce the volume into 5%

[Hyper]

  1. There's so many unsnapped notes in this diff, so it's better to deal with those first (check AImod)
  2. 00:15:326 to 00:19:163 I don't get what you follow here, it just sounds off, so my suggestion is remove circle at 00:16:547 then move the slider here
    \:D/
  3. 00:16:721 into 00:16:547 Next, move the circle at 00:18:117 (2,3) to the white tick, exactly at 00:18:291 and 00:18:640 then last, remove circle at 00:18:814 \:D/
    And now you get a proper beat \:D/
  4. 00:21:780 (3,1,1) Don't use NC spam \:D/
  5. 00:25:094 I suggest using soft hitsound from this timing point, assuming you follow the violin
  6. 00:28:059 (2,3) Blanket properly \:D/
  7. 00:32:070 (1,2,3,4) Bad flow, change the pattern \:D/
  8. 00:33:466 It's better to start spinner from 00:34:861 and map the rest \:D/
  9. Add clap at 00:38:000 and 00:38:698 and remove whistle at 00:38:349 and 00:39:047 \:D/
  10. 00:39:396 (1,2) The bending is too intense, it would cause a bad flow \:D/
  11. 00:41:838 (3) I would prefer normal finish instead of drum. The same goes with 00:41:838 \:D/
  12. 00:43:233 (1,2) Don't put finish on entire slider unless it is really necessary. Oh wait, maybe you should remove all the finish here actually \:D/
  13. 00:54:221 Add circle \:D/
  14. 01:00:675 (1,2,3,4,1) I feels really crowded, maybe change the pattern a bit \:D/
  15. 01:04:163 (3) I don't get what you follow here \:D/
  16. 01:21:256 I think it would be more consistent if you remove the circle and add 1/2 slider instead \:D/
  17. 01:22:303 (3) Also this, change into two 1/2 sliders instead \:D/
  18. 01:25:791 The pattern transition in this part is really ugly \:D/
  19. Well, there's also many spacing inconsistency that I'd like to point out (especially this part 00:23:873) but I can't differentiate which one is intentional and
  20. which part is not, so I'll leave it for now
\:D/
And also for hitsound, as I said earlier, this diff needs customized soft hitclap sample so that it can be hitsounded properly\:D/


[Another]

  1. Change the HP into 7
  2. Change the OD into 7 (except if you want to overkill the players)
  3. The 2.80 SV doesn't feel fitting imo, better use 2.50 or lower No about tiz
  4. And there's so many problem with the hitsound, in some place there's one or two, but the other place is so empty
  5. 00:15:326 Don't spam NC here, add NC at 00:16:721 instead
  6. 00:22:128 Add NC, and remove NC at 00:22:652
  7. 00:32:942 Add circle
  8. 00:37:652 Again, don't use NC spam
  9. 00:46:721 (3) Ugly slider, better change into another shape
  10. 00:50:210 (2,3) These bezier sliders doesn't flow well imo, change the red anchor into white instead
  11. 00:53:524 (2) I don't get what you follow here
  12. 01:23:088 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) Feels so crowded, it's hard to be seen so maybe you should spread it more
Well, it's alright if you want to make a hard map, but you should also think about how the map flow (the problem is you should play the map by yourself if you want to consider whether the flow is good or not lol). So my suggestion, try to find someone who's good at playing a really hard diff and ask for testplay, especially for the flow~you are flow mastah
Sorry if I can't help much in this diff because I can't even play it >_>


I'd like to say more than this, but it could makes more confusion, so I think those are enough mods for now
good luck :3 Thank you :3
Groumiezi
Shot 3 4 Stars! :3 (clicked T_T)
Dariano
Hi there n_n
Hope this helps~

[Another]

00:48:640 (3) - I think you should move it to the left a little bit, so the previous slider doesn't overlap it.

[Normal]

00:26:140 (2,4) - These are not in the same place.
00:31:373 (2,1) - Same as obove

[Easy]

00:25:791 (1,2) - I think these are too close to each other.
01:01:024 (2) - I'm not sure if that was on purpose, so just check it.


[General]

There is no preview point in your map, you can set one clicking here http://puu.sh/5BrkN.jpg
I suggest you to step down the volume a little bit in the last timing section, since the last spinner sounds kind of loud.
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

Groumiezi wrote:

Shot 3 4 Stars! :3 (clicked T_T)
Ouwww... Thank you :3

darkguydari wrote:

Hi there n_n woot
Hope this helps~

[Another]

00:48:640 (3) - I think you should move it to the left a little bit, so the previous slider doesn't overlap it. :3

[Easy]

00:25:791 (1,2) - I think these are too close to each other. :3
01:01:024 (2) - I'm not sure if that was on purpose, so just check it. Yes.


[General]

There is no preview point in your map, you can set one clicking here http://puu.sh/5BrkN.jpg Awdded :3
I suggest you to step down the volume a little bit in the last timing section, since the last spinner sounds kind of loud. Fwixed :3


Thank you!! :3
Fatfan Kolek
From #modreq. :3

Beginner
00:13:756 - 00:14:803 This slider feels uncomfortable long with the silence between your next slider.
00:25:791 Add clap.
00:27:884 ^
00:29:280 Remove clap.
00:27:884 - 00:28:582 Make a curve. Looks better. :)
00:41:140 - 00:41:838 ^
00:47:419 Remove clap. I would use it in Kiai time. Use finish here instead.
00:48:814 Add whistle.
00:50:210 Finish here instead of clap.
00:51:605 Add whistle.
00:53:000 Finish here instead of clap.
00:57:884 - 00:58:582 Set the circles like this:
01:02:768 Remove clap. Add whistle instead.
01:04:163 Remove clap. Add finish.
01:05:551 Remove clap. Add whistle.
01:23:349 Remove clap. Add finish.
01:23:698 Remove finish. Add clap.

Standard
00:25:442 - 00:31:373 I wouldn't use always the same position there.
01:23:698 - 01:24:396 I would set the slider like this:
01:25:094 - 01:25:791 Set the slider on another position, so that the end of it shows the way to the new combo. Like this:

Hyper
00:43:233 - 00:43:582 I wouldn't set the slider that near to the previous circle, because of the long silence between each other. Think about it. :)
00:47:419 - 00:48:640 I would place the part like this:
00:51:605 - 00:51:954 Don't use the same position as you did for (3).

Another
01:00:675 - 01:01:373 The distance between the circles is too high.
Didn't find anything else here. I really like that Another. :3

Good luck on your way to get it ranked! :D
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

Fatfan Kolek wrote:

From #modreq. :3

Beginner
00:13:756 - 00:14:803 This slider feels uncomfortable long with the silence between your next slider. fucking lol slider
00:25:791 Add clap. :3
00:27:884 ^ :3
00:29:280 Remove clap. :3
00:27:884 - 00:28:582 Make a curve. Looks better. :) :3
00:41:140 - 00:41:838 ^ no
00:47:419 Remove clap. I would use it in Kiai time. Use finish here instead. :3
00:48:814 Add whistle. no
00:50:210 Finish here instead of clap. no it's not fit the music
00:51:605 Add whistle. no
00:53:000 Finish here instead of clap. no
00:57:884 - 00:58:582 Set the circles like this: :3
01:02:768 Remove clap. Add whistle instead. no
01:04:163 Remove clap. Add finish. no
01:05:551 Remove clap. Add whistle. :3
01:23:349 Remove clap. Add finish. no
01:23:698 Remove finish. Add clap. no

Hyper
00:43:233 - 00:43:582 I wouldn't set the slider that near to the previous circle, because of the long silence between each other. Think about it. :) what do you mean
00:47:419 - 00:48:640 I would place the part like this: what do you mean
00:51:605 - 00:51:954 Don't use the same position as you did for (3). do places again D: why?

Another
01:00:675 - 01:01:373 The distance between the circles is too high. no
Didn't find anything else here. I really like that Another. :3

Good luck on your way to get it ranked! :D Thanks \:D/
YielShelion
Hyper
00:15:326 - 00:19:163 kebanyakan whistle, kurangi dikit, terutama yang slider ke 4 ( 00:16:547 )
00:25:094 terlalu dempet, ntar malah salah prediksi, saran : http://puu.sh/5F1z5.jpg
00:25:617 yang ini juga, saran : http://puu.sh/5F1Br.jpg
01:26:489 new combo?
01:27:884 terlalu jauh, coba dekatin. saran : http://puu.sh/5F1KI.jpg
01:28:669 spinner terakhir terlalu keras suaranya, coba turunin, terutama pas finishnya

Another
01:18:117 Set hitsound jadi normal, bukan soft

Itu aja keknya, semoga jadi ranked yak :)
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

YielShelion wrote:

Hyper
00:15:326 - 00:19:163 kebanyakan whistle, kurangi dikit, terutama yang slider ke 4 ( 00:16:547 )
00:25:094 terlalu dempet, ntar malah salah prediksi, saran : http://puu.sh/5F1z5.jpg
00:25:617 yang ini juga, saran : http://puu.sh/5F1Br.jpg
01:26:489 new combo?
01:27:884 terlalu jauh, coba dekatin. saran : http://puu.sh/5F1KI.jpg
01:28:669 spinner terakhir terlalu keras suaranya, coba turunin, terutama pas finishnya

finish all :3

Another
01:18:117 Set hitsound jadi normal, bukan soft :3

Itu aja keknya, semoga jadi ranked yak :)Makasih broo :o
Lust
From my queue.

[Beginner]
  1. 00:15:501 (4,5) - Would be nicer as a blanket.
  2. 00:23:873 (1) - Spinner is too fast for a beginner difficulty.
  3. 00:25:791 (1) - 368:151
  4. 00:38:349 (3,4) - Fix blanket.
  5. 01:09:745 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:13:931 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 01:22:303 (4,1) - Does not look to nice, please change pattern. The flow is also a little off there as well.
  8. 01:28:582 (5,1) - Spinner and note are too close together, place spinner here: 01:28:756
Overall its clean, but its very boring. Most of the patterns are unintuitive and uninteresting to play. Some of them shouldn't belong in a Beginner either. I suggest sticking to 1/1 throughout the entire map. I also suggest mapping a slightly more difficult easy, just to balance the mapset out.
[CBH's Standard]Turn off countdown.
  1. 00:14:105 (3,3) - Because of the AR these overlap and look very ugly. I suggest remapping this part.
  2. 00:17:245 (3,4) - Little nazi, blanket is off by a bit.
  3. 00:17:594 (4) - NC
  4. 00:18:989 (1,2,3,4) - This seems a bit complicated in a normal. But it plays fine to me.
  5. 00:21:431 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest that you should make this symmetrical.
  6. 00:26:489 (3,3) - These sliders are overlapping in a way that the first covers the second. This is VERY confusing and I do not recommend this pattern at all.
  7. 00:31:721 (3,4) - 00:33:466 (4)'s slider end does not fully stack underneath 00:31:721 (3)'s beginning.
  8. 00:53:000 (1,2) - Would be nicer as a blanket.
  9. 01:00:675 (1) - Just make this a straight slider.
  10. 01:06:692 - No need for a break here. The song isn't very intense and is easily mappable.
  11. 01:20:907 (1) - Red slider point to 195:139.
[Hyper]
  1. 00:18:640 (4,5,6,7,1) - Too many notes in this stack. Shouldn't have that many in a hard.
  2. 00:19:338 (1,2) - Blanket is off.
  3. 00:21:256 (2,3,4,5) - use the same spacing for all of these. You have each slider four grids up from eachother, while the first two only have two grids.
  4. 00:23:873 (1,1,1) - No need for this. It does not look good. Keep only one combo color for these three.
  5. 00:28:059 (2,3) - Nazi but the blanket is off here by a smidge.
  6. 00:48:466 (1,2) - Why have such little spacing here but here 00:47:419 (3,4) - you have larger (space in the blankets)? Keep it consistent.
  7. 00:50:035 (1,2) - Same with this one, keep all blankets similiar.
  8. 00:51:082 (3,1) - (3)s slider end does not full stack with (1).
  9. 01:00:675 (1,2,3,4,1) - I like this pattern in play, but it looks very weird with the slider overlap.
  10. 01:01:373 (1,2) - Blanket is off.
  11. 01:03:117 (1,2) - Blanket this.
  12. 01:12:623 - Why the break? You do not need one here, please map it a bit.
  13. 01:18:466 (1,2) - Again another nazi: blanket is off a bit.
  14. 01:20:907 (2,3) - Because of the AR these two overlap for a second, which doesn't look good.
  15. 01:23:000 (4) - A bit overkill for a hard.
  16. 01:27:187 (1,2) - Have spacing consistent with 01:26:489 (1,2)
  17. 01:28:669 (1) - Same suggestion as in normal.
[Another]
  1. 00:13:756 (3,4,5,6) - Why stack them all there under the slider end? Feels and looks weird.
  2. 00:13:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Combo is too long. NC at 00:14:453 (7)
  3. 00:27:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This looks very strange...
  4. 01:12:623 - Same suggestion as in hard.
  5. 01:28:625 (1) - You know what do with this by now.

That is about it, there are some more things I could elaborate on but I got a bit lazy later on. Call me back after a few more mods :D
Good luck!
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

Lust wrote:

From my queue.

[Beginner]
  1. 00:15:501 (4,5) - Would be nicer as a blanket. Fixed
  2. 00:23:873 (1) - Spinner is too fast for a beginner difficulty. Fixed
  3. 00:25:791 (1) - 368:151 Fixed
  4. 00:38:349 (3,4) - Fix blanket. What? the blanket is good.
  5. 01:09:745 (1,2) - ^ ^
  6. 01:13:931 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
  7. 01:22:303 (4,1) - Does not look to nice, please change pattern. The flow is also a little off there as well. Fixed
  8. 01:28:582 (5,1) - Spinner and note are too close together, place spinner here: 01:28:756 Fixed
Overall its clean, but its very boring. Most of the patterns are unintuitive and uninteresting to play. Some of them shouldn't belong in a Beginner either. I suggest sticking to 1/1 throughout the entire map. I also suggest mapping a slightly more difficult easy, just to balance the mapset out.hohohohohoh

[Hyper]
  1. 00:18:640 (4,5,6,7,1) - Too many notes in this stack. Shouldn't have that many in a hard.Fixed
  2. 00:19:338 (1,2) - Blanket is off. What do you mean? D:
  3. 00:21:256 (2,3,4,5) - use the same spacing for all of these. You have each slider four grids up from eachother, while the first two only have two grids.What do you mean? D:
  4. 00:23:873 (1,1,1) - No need for this. It does not look good. Keep only one combo color for these three.
  5. 00:28:059 (2,3) - Nazi but the blanket is off here by a smidge.
  6. 00:48:466 (1,2) - Why have such little spacing here but here 00:47:419 (3,4) - you have larger (space in the blankets)? Keep it consistent.
  7. 00:50:035 (1,2) - Same with this one, keep all blankets similiar.
  8. 00:51:082 (3,1) - (3)s slider end does not full stack with (1).
  9. 01:00:675 (1,2,3,4,1) - I like this pattern in play, but it looks very weird with the slider overlap.
  10. 01:01:373 (1,2) - Blanket is off.
  11. 01:03:117 (1,2) - Blanket this.
  12. 01:12:623 - Why the break? You do not need one here, please map it a bit.
  13. 01:18:466 (1,2) - Again another nazi: blanket is off a bit.
  14. 01:20:907 (2,3) - Because of the AR these two overlap for a second, which doesn't look good.
  15. 01:23:000 (4) - A bit overkill for a hard.
  16. 01:27:187 (1,2) - Have spacing consistent with 01:26:489 (1,2)
  17. 01:28:669 (1) - Same suggestion as in normal.
[Another]
  1. 00:13:756 (3,4,5,6) - Why stack them all there under the slider end? Feels and looks weird.
  2. 00:13:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Combo is too long. NC at 00:14:453 (7)
  3. 00:27:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This looks very strange...
  4. 01:12:623 - Same suggestion as in hard.
  5. 01:28:625 (1) - You know what do with this by now.

That is about it, there are some more things I could elaborate on but I got a bit lazy later on. Call me back after a few more mods :D
Good luck! Thank you :3
Thanks for the mod \:D/
Laurier
from my queue

General
uncheck to Wudescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks

Beginner
hink your random spacing is not good idea. please use same DS on easy diff.

00:13:407 (1) - Why you dont start to here ? 00:15:501 (1) - NC
00:19:338 (1) - please remove reverse and add some notes at 00:20:733 ~00:22:826. 00:20:733 this timing start the new sound pattern.
00:39:745 (4) - NC
00:50:210 (4) - ^
00:51:605 (1) - remoce nc
00:53:000 (2) - nc
01:03:466 (4) - ^
01:08:349 (3) - finish on end
01:26:489 (3) - ^

Come[Back]Home's Standard
why this diff have a break ? I think don't need a break. you can put some notes.
00:17:594 (4) - nazi mode to 1~2 grid left and make a better blanket
00:20:035 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - try this code 256,140,20035,2,0,P|256:200|368:240,1,180.000006866455,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,167,21082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
409,195,21431,6,0,P|409:135|297:95,1,180.000006866455,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,146,22477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
255,146,22826,1,4,0:0:0:0:
197,88,23175,6,0,P|114:110|99:194,1,180.000006866455,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:28:931 (3) - why don't use same place to 00:26:489 (3) - ? you can just a copy and past.
00:31:373 (2) - move to center
01:22:303 (3,5) - make parallel line
Hyper
00:22:477 (4,5) - Ctr+G
00:27:535 (1) - make better curve 00:49:687 (3) - move to x326y168
00:58:582 (5) - add nc ?

Another
00:17:768 (4,1) - try this 00:37:128 (1) - remove nc . use same pattern as 00:39:309 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
01:26:489 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - stop to random nc
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

Laurier wrote:

from my queue

General
uncheck to Wudescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks

Beginner
hink your random spacing is not good idea. please use same DS on easy diff.

00:13:407 (1) - Why you dont start to here ? im baka im baka im baka why not that orz Placed00:15:501 (1) - NC Fixed
00:19:338 (1) - please remove reverse and add some notes at 00:20:733 ~00:22:826. 00:20:733 this timing start the new sound pattern. Fixed
00:39:745 (4) - NC no
00:50:210 (4) - ^ Fixed
00:51:605 (1) - remoce nc <<<--- typo right here Fixed.
00:53:000 (2) - nc Fixed
01:03:466 (4) - ^ Fixed
01:08:349 (3) - finish on end Fixed
01:26:489 (3) - ^ Fixed but this is not imo

Hyper
00:22:477 (4,5) - Ctr+G Fixed but i just Ctrl + G (4) only
00:27:535 (1) - make better curve Fixed00:49:687 (3) - move to x326y168 Fixed Yayyy better stack \:D/
00:58:582 (5) - add nc ? Fixed

Another
00:17:768 (4,1) - try this Fixed. 00:37:128 (1) - remove nc . use same pattern as 00:39:309 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
01:26:489 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - stop to random nc
Thank you for the modding :)
yurunneram
HOORAY ORANGE :D

EASY

00:18:291 (3) - Spacing infringement. Move (2) down

01:03:466 (4) - NC

WHEEEEEEEEEEE

STANDARD

00:23:175 (4) - NC?

00:31:373 (2) - AAAHHHHH SO MANY STACK and ps this one is a BIT off X3

00:32:419 (1) - YEa that means this one is off too.. you can move them together

00:40:442 (3) - Blanket nicer

00:47:768 (1) - Move to x272 y160

01:12:535 (7) - NC :D ok yea don't if you don't wana hahaha nazi

01:20:907 (1) - Make the bend more obv if you wana put it there

HARD

00:29:280 (4) - NC here instead of the next note

00:47:419 (3) - NC

01:06:256 (1) - Don't like this anti jump

Good job ^^

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

yurunneram wrote:

HOORAY ORANGE :D Horrayyyy \:D/

EASY

00:18:291 (3) - Spacing infringement. Move (2) down Fixed

01:03:466 (4) - NC Added


WHEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEHW

HARD

00:29:280 (4) - NC here instead of the next note Added

00:47:419 (3) - NC Added

01:06:256 (1) - Don't like this anti jump Remap this object?

Good job ^^ Thank you ^^

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram
AruOtta
HI, From my queue ~

[General]
Offset : 2768

[Easy]
00:13:407 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - You must place these circle with the new offset
00:23:611 (1) - Finish hitsound here ?
01:21:605 - Sample set 3 ?
01:28:756 (1) - It must ends at 01:30:152

[Hyper]
Warning for Distance Snap / !\ and also hitsounds

00:14:977 (5,1) - Distance Snap
00:18:640 (4,5,6,7,1) - Try another patern please
00:21:780 (3,4,5) - Distance Snap
00:23:873 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:30:675 (4,5) - ^
00:32:070 (1,1,1,1) - Try another patern
00:36:605 (1,2) - Maybe Distance Snap ?
00:38:000 (1,3) - Why is there hitsound here and no hitsounds elsewhere ?
00:43:931 (2,3) - Distance Snap
00:51:605 (1,2,3) - ^
00:57:884 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try another patern
01:00:675 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:02:419 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Distance Snap (O_o)

Nothing special to say for "Another"

Hope it'll be helpful ^w^
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

Kenterz9 wrote:

HI, From my queue ~

[General]
Offset : 2768 no

[Easy]
00:13:407 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - You must place these circle with the new offset no
00:23:611 (1) - Finish hitsound here ? yo
01:21:605 - Sample set 3 ? ????
01:28:756 (1) - It must ends at 01:30:152 yo

[Hyper]
Warning for Distance Snap / !\ and also hitsounds

00:14:977 (5,1) - Distance Snap yo
00:18:640 (4,5,6,7,1) - Try another patern please yo
00:21:780 (3,4,5) - Distance Snap no
00:23:873 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:30:675 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:32:070 (1,1,1,1) - Try another patern ^
00:36:605 (1,2) - Maybe Distance Snap ? ^
00:38:000 (1,3) - Why is there hitsound here and no hitsounds elsewhere ? ????
00:43:931 (2,3) - Distance Snap no
00:51:605 (1,2,3) - ^ yo
00:57:884 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try another patern no
01:00:675 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ ^
01:02:419 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Distance Snap (O_o) ^

Nothing special to say for "Another" fuk wid dis

Hope it'll be helpful ^w^ thanks
wait oh no wwwwwwwww
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso
Edit the beatmap : The "(Short Version)" was deleted. because i read ranking criteria. This is the real version. Song on beatmania is edited (remake).
HelloSCV
hi

[General]
  1. move offset to 00:01:198 - here, right now your objects are one whole beat late from the real beat, move the redline so that it can be fixed
[Beginner]
  1. uncheck letterbox plz
  2. 00:37:652 (2,3) - reversing rhythm for better rhythm
  3. 01:01:024 (2) - hmm how about deleting this note? i alreay know this fit with the music well but keep rhythm seems much better on easiest diff
  4. 01:03:814 (2) - same as above
  5. 01:11:838 (3) - try changing this to 1/1 slider instead, i don't think 1/2 slider with a repeat fits well with the music
  6. 01:12:884 (4) - add NC for rhythm changing
  7. 01:21:605 - useless green line, plz delete this and 01:21:692 - this
[ Standard]
  1. umm diff name is too long imo how about fixing like Home's Standard or something slimilar?
  2. AR +1 for balancing among the diffs
  3. 00:17:594 (1) - delete NC
  4. 00:25:442 (1) - from here to 00:33:466 (4) - here feels really really boring it just keep turning around, this will cause boring to players even though this diff is Normal diff,so i highly recommed to fix these things
  5. 00:28:582 (2,3) - consider reversing rhythm to follow with piano sounds much better
  6. 00:30:326 (1,2) - same as above and 00:30:326 (1) - delete NC here
  7. 00:40:442 (3) - touching HP bar
  8. 00:43:233 (1) - delete this NC or 00:46:024 (3) - add NC here for consistence
  9. 01:10:791 (4) - well i think 1/2 slider with 1 repeat fits much better than 1/1 slider here
  10. 01:23:698 (5) - add NC and 01:25:094 (1) - delete NC
[Hyper]
  1. 00:14:454 (4) - delete finish on start? it doesn't like it's needed
  2. 00:34:163 (3) - i'd rather change this to 2 1/2 sliders since you seems that you tried follow with piano sounds but actually it should be snapped at 1/3 beats as you know,it'd be better to snap at drum sounds on background
    for example
    [/img]https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1163677[/img]
  3. 00:51:605 (1) - this slider arrow is hidden by 00:51:082 (3) - this note's hitburst, you'd better to move this slider or that note. this should be fixed
  4. 00:52:652 - add a note here,since there is a piano?(dunno how to call it) sound, current rhythm feels really empty
  5. 00:52:652 (3,4) - if you add a note by above suggestion, it would be better to change these notes to 1/2 slider
  6. 01:01:373 (1) - add finish for consistence
  7. 01:20:559 (1) - delete NC, 01:20:907 (2) - add NC, 01:21:605 (1) - delete and NC 01:22:303 (3) - add NC
  8. 01:27:884 (3) - add NC for consistence and rhythm changing
[Another]


  • NC suggestions
    some consistent issues

    00:23:524 (5) - add NC
    00:24:046 (1) - delete NC
    00:27:012 (1) - this NC is useless delete it
    00:32:942 (1) - useless NC delete it~
    00:48:117 (1) - delete NC
    00:49:861 (1) - delete NC
    00:50:907 (1) - delete NC
    00:54:047 (1) - this NC doesn't look like it is needed, delete NC
    01:04:163 (1) - delete NC
    01:04:338 (2) - add NC
    01:06:256 (9) - add NC
    01:06:431 (1) - delete NC
    01:25:966 (1) - delete NC
    01:26:489 (3) - add NC
  1. 00:14:803 (2,3) - i recommend you to reverse this rhythm because current rhythm feels little bit awkward for me, maybe this can be solution
  2. 00:22:651 (2) - this finish sound should be moved on 00:22:128 (1) - this slider's start according to the music
  3. 00:32:593 (4,5) - hmm is there something special reason that you added this whistles suddenly?
  4. 00:33:814 (1) - this note should be snapped at 1/4 beats since 1/3 beats are started from 00:34:163 - here, you'd better to fix this slider to 1/2 slider like this
  5. 00:37:128 (5) - consider deleting this note since there aren't any sounds there and keep consistence seems much better
  6. 00:39:919 (5) - similar reason with above
  7. 00:44:628 (5) - delete whistle for consistence
  8. 00:46:721 (3) - missed finish on start
  9. 01:22:652 (2,3) - it seems like you tried to follow with piano(maybe it is) sounds but actually it isn't this rhythm hears reall weird for me, try this instead
  10. 01:28:756 (1) - i have no idea why you snapped this spinner's end on 1/16 beat since it's kinda weird it would be better to snap at 01:30:675 - here or 01:31:373 - here
well it would be better if you add hitsounds constantly :< good luck anyway~
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

HelloSCV wrote:

hi

[General]
  1. move offset to 00:01:198 - here, right now your objects are one whole beat late from the real beat, move the redline so that it can be fixed ok ok ok wwww
[Beginner]
  1. uncheck letterbox plz mmmm okokokok wwww
  2. 00:37:652 (2,3) - reversing rhythm for better rhythm No?
  3. 01:01:024 (2) - hmm how about deleting this note? i alreay know this fit with the music well but keep rhythm seems much better on easiest diff ok ok ok wwww
  4. 01:03:814 (2) - same as above ok ok ok wwww
  5. 01:11:838 (3) - try changing this to 1/1 slider instead, i don't think 1/2 slider with a repeat fits well with the music
  6. 01:12:884 (4) - add NC for rhythm changing ok ok ok wwww
  7. 01:21:605 - useless green line, plz delete this and 01:21:692 - this ok ok ok wwww
[Hyper]
  1. 00:14:454 (4) - delete finish on start? it doesn't like it's needed mmmm okokokok wwww
  2. 00:34:163 (3) - i'd rather change this to 2 1/2 sliders since you seems that you tried follow with piano sounds but actually it should be snapped at 1/3 beats as you know,it'd be better to snap at drum sounds on background mmmm okokokok wwww
    for example
    [/img]https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1163677[/img]
  3. 00:51:605 (1) - this slider arrow is hidden by 00:51:082 (3) - this note's hitburst, you'd better to move this slider or that note. this should be fixed mmmm okokokok wwww
  4. 00:52:652 - add a note here,since there is a piano?(dunno how to call it) sound, current rhythm feels really empty mmmm okokokok wwww
  5. 00:52:652 (3,4) - if you add a note by above suggestion, it would be better to change these notes to 1/2 slider mmmm okokokok wwww
  6. 01:01:373 (1) - add finish for consistence mmmm okokokok wwww
  7. 01:20:559 (1) - delete NC, 01:20:907 (2) - add NC, 01:21:605 (1) - delete and NC 01:22:303 (3) - add NC mmmm okokokok wwww
  8. 01:27:884 (3) - add NC for consistence and rhythm changing mmmm okokokok wwww
[Another]


  • NC suggestions
    some consistent issues

    00:23:524 (5) - add NCmmmm okokokok wwww
    00:24:046 (1) - delete NCmmmm okokokok wwww
    00:27:012 (1) - this NC is useless delete itmmmm okokokok wwww
    00:32:942 (1) - useless NC delete it~mmmm okokokok wwww
    00:48:117 (1) - delete NCmmmm okokokok wwww
    00:49:861 (1) - delete NCmmmm okokokok wwww
    00:50:907 (1) - delete NCmmmm okokokok wwww
    00:54:047 (1) - this NC doesn't look like it is needed, delete NCmmmm okokokok wwww
    01:04:163 (1) - delete NC mmmm okokokok wwww
    01:04:338 (2) - add NCmmmm okokokok wwww
    01:06:256 (9) - add NCmmmm okokokok wwww
    01:06:431 (1) - delete NCmmmm okokokok wwww
    01:25:966 (1) - delete NC mmmm okokokok wwww
    01:26:489 (3) - add NCmmmm okokokok wwww
  1. 00:14:803 (2,3) - i recommend you to reverse this rhythm because current rhythm feels little bit awkward for me, maybe this can be solution mmmm okokokok wwww
  2. 00:22:651 (2) - this finish sound should be moved on 00:22:128 (1) - this slider's start according to the music mmmm okokokok wwww
  3. 00:32:593 (4,5) - hmm is there something special reason that you added this whistles suddenly? hah hoh okay i delete it
  4. 00:33:814 (1) - this note should be snapped at 1/4 beats since 1/3 beats are started from 00:34:163 - here, you'd better to fix this slider to 1/2 slider mmmm okokokok wwww like this
  5. 00:37:128 (5) - consider deleting this note since there aren't any sounds there and keep consistence seems much better mmmm okokokok wwww
  6. 00:39:919 (5) - similar reason with abovemmmm okokokok wwww
  7. 00:44:628 (5) - delete whistle for consistence mmmm okokokok wwww
  8. 00:46:721 (3) - missed finish on start mmmm okokokok wwww
  9. 01:22:652 (2,3) - it seems like you tried to follow with piano(maybe it is) sounds but actually it isn't this rhythm hears reall weird for me, try mmmm okokokok wwwwthis instead
  10. 01:28:756 (1) - i have no idea why you snapped this spinner's end on 1/16 beat since it's kinda weird it would be better to snap at 01:30:675 - here <<< here or 01:31:373 - here
well it would be better if you add hitsounds constantly :< good luck anyway~
hohohoho thanks :3
kamisamaaa
hello from my queue~
[general]
maybe the frist redline offset should be 13756 .ok I found you have change it :)
SV is so high!!!!!!
[another]
00:25:617 (2) - make blanket with 00:25:094 (1) - ?
00:30:500 (1) - end at 00:30:588 and add a note at 00:30:675 ?
00:33:117 (1) - end at 00:33:291 and add a note at 00:33:466 because 00:33:466 here to 00:33:727 here is a group, but you devide them many same problem in your map~maybe you can find out them and change them~
00:27:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - the rythm here is not 1/4 I dont know what rythm is suit here either. maybe you can found some other mapper to help you 0.0 the violin is really strange in this song. maybe you will follow drun =L=
00:33:814 (1,2,3) - there is not 1/3 rythm
00:43:233 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make these four slider to same shape?
00:46:024 (1,2,3,4) - same here
00:53:873 here miss a rythm is not so good...



and I must say sorry for you, I really dont like this song and I will pass other diff :o
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

kamisamaaa wrote:

hello from my queue~
[general]
maybe the frist redline offset should be 13756 .ok I found you have change it :)
SV is so high!!!!!!you think at kiai time
[another]
00:25:617 (2) - make blanket with 00:25:094 (1) - ? no, i remake it again.
00:30:500 (1) - end at 00:30:588 and add a note at 00:30:675 ?no.
00:33:117 (1) - end at 00:33:291 and add a note at 00:33:466 because 00:33:466 here to 00:33:727 here is a group, but you devide them many same problem in your map~maybe you can find out them and change them~ no.
00:27:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - the rythm here is not 1/4 I dont know what rythm is suit here either. maybe you can found some other mapper to help you 0.0 the violin is really strange in this song. maybe you will follow drun =L= no.
00:33:814 (1,2,3) - there is not 1/3 rythm no. please read HelloSCV mod.
00:43:233 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make these four slider to same shape? no.
00:46:024 (1,2,3,4) - same here no.
00:53:873 here miss a rythm is not so good... no.



and I must say sorry for you, I really dont like this song and I will pass other diff :o mmm oh okay ._.
Just change a little bit. but Thank you~
Unusual-bot
hello there. sorry if my mod is not really good, i'm still new to modding (my second time) :)

Beginner
SPOILER
01:00:675 (1,2) - why don't blanket this properly?
01:22:303 (4,1) - this is too hard for beginner (easy), you need to change this

Standard
SPOILER
00:36:256 (1) - Ctrl + H and make it curve?
00:44:628 (1,2,3) - make this into good blanket

Another
SPOILER
00:55:878 - Insert Break time here
00:58:669 - ^

Sorry, i'm not thet good modding Hard and Insane diff, my eyes can't catch the speed at all lol
That's all from me. Good luck with your map
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

K4zuya K wrote:

hello there. sorry if my mod is not really good, i'm still new to modding (my second time) :)

Beginner
SPOILER
01:00:675 (1,2) - why don't blanket this properly? okokook
01:22:303 (4,1) - this is too hard for beginner (easy), you need to change this okokook

Another
SPOILER
00:55:878 - Insert Break time hereokokook
00:58:669 - ^ okokook

Sorry, i'm not thet good modding Hard and Insane diff, my eyes can't catch the speed at all lol
That's all from me. Good luck with your map \:D/ Thanks
Jekate
halo gan M4M

[General]
00:25:094 - delete red timing point, ga perlu gan lagian bpm nya masih sama 172
volume -20% 2loud4me
00:01:546 - sampe 00:13:407 - kenapa ga di masukkin beat gan? janggal sekali
hitsound masih berantakan, ga konsisten

[Beginner]
spread diff nya berantakan, gap nya jauh bener gan beginner sama standard
ga disarankan untuk easy/normal mengalami perubahan slider velocity
CS+1
HP+1
AR+2
OD+1
00:23:611 (1) - spinner nya terlalu cepet dateng, coba mulai nya dari 00:23:872 - sampe 00:25:094
01:05:559 (1,3) - overlap nya kurang bagus gan

[Standard]
00:13:407 (1,2,3,4,3) - overlap nya kurang bagus
00:25:442 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - kurang variatif gan, sedikit buat bosen
00:43:233 (1,1) - kurang bagus overlap nya

[Hyper]
01:15:326 (1) - sebenernya bisa di isi stream gan

[Another]
01:15:326 (1) - sebenernya bisa di isi stream gan

segitu aja gan dr saya, maklum masih pemula hehhe
semoga beruntung gan.

ini map saya: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/134296
AnreFM
Halo~ Mod from the Indonesia Modding Team Queue \:D/



umm I'm really to say this but can't mod your map properly because I think there are still many parts that can be really improved and possibly needs remap especially on the easier difficulty :<

I'll drop a few suggestions here, hope this helps :3

[General]

  1. I find that there are many rhythm that are really hard to grasp here, especially for beginners, especially in the beginning part. For instance, here 00:13:407 (1,2,3) - this part is the very first note on the map and making this part filled with a 1/2 beat circle + slider is making the rhythm really hard to get. You see, players won't exactly know how the song really went here, so I really suggest to just use simple 1/1 beat with a repeating sliders and not using circle -since that will really throw beginners who doesn't known the song well yet- Like this
    Of course there are still many rhythm that needs work, although not as bad as this, I think you should get what I said and fix the rest :3
  2. Please use a 1.00 distance snap here or consider higher, the notes looked really crumped at some part, like this one for instance;
    The notes are appearing almost on top of each other and considering the low SV used here, the flow is really bad. You should really distance them more as that will make your map much neater, by doing better blankets and stacks. So yeah, 1.00 or 1.2 distance work well here
  3. It is really recommended to not use any SV changes on easy difficulty unless there's a really distinct changes happened in the song. And as far as I see, there aren't anything that match the case here. So please just use only 1.0 slider speed for the entire diff, because the changes here (especially the 0.75 SV used for the entire beginning of the map) doesn't make much sense and isn't really necessary there
  4. Many of your NCing seems really off from the main beat and thus making some easy parts hard to read because of that. You should use NC for every big white tick(or namely stanza). And it is really rare to use it outside of that. It should be like this
  5. This one is for the standard diff. Anyway, please do avoid using repeating circling patterns like you did on the kiai time (starting on 00:25:442 - ), these kind of pattern make the flow goes really bad, and because of the slow SV and also low AR, some parts will have like 4 notes appearing on the screen, making the readability worsen. So yeah, I really suggest to use more kind of pattern here, like parallel sliders, more blanketing, etc. As that will really help to make your flow better and will also make your map better visibly
  6. There aren't really that many problem on Hyper (though please still keep in mind on what I said for the easier diffs), except for some inconsistent in spacing. No, I didn't say that you should follow the same DS, but what I wanted to say that, some jumps and anti-jumps here doesn't really make sense and thus harder to read. For instance is this one 00:51:605 (1,2,3) - , the flow from (1) to (2) has a really small spacing that can be considered as an antijump, whlist there aren't any distinct changes within the flow of the music, so players will click at (2) faster than they should be because of the distance used here. And also considering that the flow of notes on this part is constantly flowing and notes are appearing almost every beat, having a stop here will really make the flow bad imo. So yeah, consider removing some antijumps that doesn't really fit to be there :3 Though, the one at 00:23:873 (1,2,3,4) - is fit with the song here, if you want to add antijumps, you should use it on parts that is similar with this~
  7. On Another, there aren't any big problems unlike the other diff. So I think you don't need to make much changes here :p The one problem that I can see is that the difference between the SV of Hyper and Another is quite big (about 0.7 difference), and considering how fast this song is, you might want to reduce the SV on some more relaxing part like the one after the first kiai here 00:36:518 - , that will give players time to at least get a break after the strong kiai part there. Though aside from that, there aren't really major problems~ btw check AImod for unsnapped notes :>

good luck
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

Jekate wrote:

halo gan M4M >w<

[General]
00:25:094 - delete red timing point, ga perlu gan lagian bpm nya masih sama 172 gak
volume -20% 2loud4me <<<--- okokok
00:01:546 - sampe 00:13:407 - kenapa ga di masukkin beat gan? janggal sekali
hitsound masih berantakan, ga konsisten

[Beginner]
spread diff nya berantakan, gap nya jauh bener gan beginner sama standard
ga disarankan untuk easy/normal mengalami perubahan slider velocity kata siapa?
CS+1
HP+1
AR+2
OD+1 Ignored.

00:23:611 (1) - spinner nya terlalu cepet dateng, coba mulai nya dari 00:23:872 - sampe 00:25:094 saya agak membingungkan tentang ini lollolololol
01:05:559 (1,3) - overlap nya kurang bagus gan I didn't know what are you mean.

[Standard]
00:13:407 (1,2,3,4,3) - overlap nya kurang bagus Transtale FOR Come[Back]Home : 00:13:407 (1,2,3,4,3) - the overlap is not good
00:25:442 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - kurang variatif gan, sedikit buat bosenTranstale FOR Come[Back]Home : 00:25:442 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Less varied, little for bored.
00:43:233 (1,1) - kurang bagus overlap nya Transtale FOR Come[Back]Home : the overlap is not good

[Hyper]
01:15:326 (1) - sebenernya bisa di isi stream gan MMMmmm, No? it's too hard for hyper

[Another]
01:15:326 (1) - sebenernya bisa di isi stream gan ^

segitu aja gan dr saya, maklum masih pemula hehhe
semoga beruntung gan. Cuma ada perubahan sedikit lah

ini map saya: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/134296 Okay~
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

AnreFM wrote:

Halo~ Mod from the Indonesia Modding Team Queue \:D/



umm I'm really to say this but can't mod your map properly because I think there are still many parts that can be really improved and possibly needs remap especially on the easier difficulty :<

I'll drop a few suggestions here, hope this helps :3

[General]

  1. I find that there are many rhythm that are really hard to grasp here, especially for beginners, especially in the beginning part. For instance, here 00:13:407 (1,2,3) - this part is the very first note on the map and making this part filled with a 1/2 beat circle + slider is making the rhythm really hard to get. You see, players won't exactly know how the song really went here, so I really suggest to just use simple 1/1 beat with a repeating sliders and not using circle -since that will really throw beginners who doesn't known the song well yet- Like this Can you read another mod?? puss
    Of course there are still many rhythm that needs work, although not as bad as this, I think you should get what I said and fix the rest :3
  2. Please use a 1.00 distance snap here or consider higher, the notes looked really crumped at some part, like this one for instance;
    The notes are appearing almost on top of each other and considering the low SV used here, the flow is really bad. You should really distance them more as that will make your map much neater, by doing better blankets and stacks. So yeah, 1.00 or 1.2 distance work well here hoh yeah or not
  3. It is really recommended to not use any SV changes on easy difficulty unless there's a really distinct changes happened in the song. And as far as I see, there aren't anything that match the case here. So please just use only 1.0 slider speed for the entire diff, because the changes here (especially the 0.75 SV used for the entire beginning of the map) doesn't make much sense and isn't really necessary there wait, WHAT? i should REMAP IT AGAIN? it's look weird. look before modders. tired of found nazis of this beatmap huh
  4. Many of your NCing seems really off from the main beat and thus making some easy parts hard to read because of that. You should use NC for every big white tick(or namely stanza). And it is really rare to use it outside of that. It should be like this me too
  5. This one is for the standard diff. Anyway, please do avoid using repeating circling patterns like you did on the kiai time (starting on 00:25:442 - ), these kind of pattern make the flow goes really bad, and because of the slow SV and also low AR, some parts will have like 4 notes appearing on the screen, making the readability worsen. So yeah, I really suggest to use more kind of pattern here, like parallel sliders, more blanketing, etc. As that will really help to make your flow better and will also make your map better visibly
  6. There aren't really that many problem on Hyper (though please still keep in mind on what I said for the easier diffs), except for some inconsistent in spacing. No, I didn't say that you should follow the same DS, but what I wanted to say that, some jumps and anti-jumps here doesn't really make sense and thus harder to read. For instance is this one 00:51:605 (1,2,3) - , the flow from (1) to (2) has a really small spacing that can be considered as an antijump, whlist there aren't any distinct changes within the flow of the music, so players will click at (2) faster than they should be because of the distance used here. And also considering that the flow of notes on this part is constantly flowing and notes are appearing almost every beat, having a stop here will really make the flow bad imo. So yeah, consider removing some antijumps that doesn't really fit to be there :3 Though, the one at 00:23:873 (1,2,3,4) - is fit with the song here, if you want to add antijumps, you should use it on parts that is similar with this~ oh okokokokok
  7. On Another, there aren't any big problems unlike the other diff. So I think you don't need to make much changes here :p The one problem that I can see is that the difference between the SV of Hyper and Another is quite big (about 0.7 difference), and considering how fast this song is, you might want to reduce the SV on some more relaxing part like the one after the first kiai here 00:36:518 - , that will give players time to at least get a break after the strong kiai part there. then i don't want to Though aside from that, there aren't really major problems~ btw check AImod for unsnapped notes :> wait no unsnapped notes here?

I guess that's all I can provide for now, I hope you this helps you! >c<
Anyway, if there are still things you need or didn't understand, feel free to discuss it with me through IRC :D
Good luck for this!! Thanks~

btw maaf agak keras ya, soalnya mapnya bener2 perlu tambahan sebelum bisa dimod lebih lanjut, maaf lagi skali kalo ada kata2 yg kedengerannya agak gak bagus>< sama smoga bisa jadi lebih baik ya setelah diubah2 sedikit mapnya :"D ndapug wew
Xinely
Well just saying here, What the Jekate and Anre's said are correct

- SV change in Easy and Normal diff are not recommended.
- Spacing must be consistency on Beginner diff
- you need to use AR 4 or 5 for Standard diff. errr Standard (Normal) AR 1 ...
- for Beginner , at least use AR 2
- Hyper diff need HP+1 , current spread is so bad while i saw HP 7 on Another diff
- i'm not sure about this but as i know, minimal size of rankable BG is 800x600 confirmed with Hinsvar too

I'm not going to mod this university is killing me too
As Anre's said. Need more works for this map ~ iktf, my first map was like a disaster :p

No Kudosu for this, this is not mod

Good Luck ~
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

Xinely wrote:

Well just saying here, What the Jekate and Anre's said are correct

- SV change in Easy and Normal diff are not recommended. Fixed ._.
- Spacing must be consistency on Beginner diff
- you need to use AR 4 or 5 for Standard diff. errr Standard (Normal) AR 1 ... fixed by me
- for Beginner , at least use AR 2 fixed by me
- Hyper diff need HP+1 , current spread is so bad while i saw HP 7 on Another diff
- i'm not sure about this but as i know, minimal size of rankable BG is 800x600 confirmed with Hinsvar too

I'm not going to mod this university is killing me too
As Anre's said. Need more works for this map ~ iktf, my first map was like a disaster :p

No Kudosu for this, this is not mod

Good Luck ~
Oh sorry, i forgot no kudosu. big sorry. how i denied it? :o Clicked
Thanks.
dkun

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

Oh sorry, i forgot no kudosu. big sorry. how i denied it?
o7
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

dkun wrote:

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

Oh sorry, i forgot no kudosu. big sorry. how i denied it?
o7
huehuehuehue
sheela
M4M request

Beginner
In the timing panel, remove the timing point that indicates 00:25:094 the offset.
  1. 00:18:291 (3) - The slider too close to 00:16:896 (2) . Make the distance constant.
  2. 00:25:791 (1) - Move it a little further like, move it to x:380 y:156.
  3. 00:33:466 (1) - Remove the finish hitsound?
  4. 00:39:745 (4) - Move the last point (the little square on the slider's tail) to x:208 y:180, so the tail can be underneath the circle 00:39:223 (2) perfectly.
  5. 00:39:745 (4) - On the slider's tail, remove the finish hitsound?
  6. 01:01:373 (2) - Move the last point to x:148 y:164 for a perfect blanket (https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Blanket_Combos). It'll affect the distance with 01:03:466 (1) . So, move the circle to x:228 y:96.
Standard
In the timing panel, remove the timing point that indicates 00:25:094, the offset.
  1. 00:46:721 (4,5) - Switch each other (Ctr;+G), and change the pattern.
  2. 01:26:838 (2) - Move it to x:176 y:184.
Hyper
In the timing panel, remove the timing point that indicates 00:25:094, the offset.
  1. 00:36:605 (1) - Try this pattern:
    If you want the code (paste it in the .osu file):
    92,168,36605,6,0,P|108:224|180:264,1,105
    00:39:396 (1) - This one:
    The code:
    428,176,39396,6,0,P|415:125|378:90,1,105
  2. 01:25:442 (2) - Move it to x:400 y:100.
That's it. Good Luck on ranking the map.
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

sheela901 wrote:

M4M request

Beginner
In the timing panel, remove the timing point that indicates 00:25:094 the offset. No
  1. 00:18:291 (3) - The slider too close to 00:16:896 (2) . Make the distance constant.Fixed
  2. 00:25:791 (1) - Move it a little further like, move it to x:380 y:156.Moved
  3. 00:33:466 (1) - Remove the finish hitsound?No
  4. 00:39:745 (4) - Move the last point (the little square on the slider's tail) to x:208 y:180, so the tail can be underneath the circle 00:39:223 (2) perfectly. Okokokokkok
  5. 00:39:745 (4) - On the slider's tail, remove the finish hitsound? Okokokokkok
  6. 01:01:373 (2) - Move the last point to x:148 y:164 for a perfect blanket (https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Blanket_Combos). It'll affect the distance with 01:03:466 (1) . So, move the circle to x:228 y:96. Okokokokkok

Hyper
In the timing panel, remove the timing point that indicates 00:25:094, the offset.No
  1. 00:36:605 (1) - Try this pattern: Okokokokkok
    If you want the code (paste it in the .osu file):
    92,168,36605,6,0,P|108:224|180:264,1,105
    00:39:396 (1) - This one: Okokokokkok
    The code: Okokokokkok
    428,176,39396,6,0,P|415:125|378:90,1,105
  2. 01:25:442 (2) - Move it to x:400 y:100.Okokokokkok
That's it. Good Luck on ranking the map. Thanks
Thank you!
RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. remove "No.13" from tags. it is already written in title
  2. Tags suggetion:
    Inventionen und Sinfonien BWV 784
    Johann Sebastian Bach
[Beginner]
  1. 00:13:407 (1,2,3) - For beginner, it's a little confusing because of the start of the song. how about this?
  2. 00:21:430 (2) - start at 00:21:081
  3. 01:11:838 (3,1,2) - a little adjustment (smoother cursor moving)
    SPOILER

    100,276,71838,2,0,L|84:340,2,60.0000022888184,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    100,221,72884,6,0,L|84:157,2,60.0000022888184
    148,248,73931,2,0,P|212:264|276:248,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:28:756 (1) - end at 01:30:152- If chage it, I recommend to reduce hitsound volume of this spinner's end (apply for all diff)
[Hyper]
  1. 00:18:640 (4,5,1) - increase DS and avoid overlap
  2. 00:39:745 (2,1) - avoid overlap
  3. 01:06:954~01:09:745- I prefer to decrease SV
[Another]
  1. 00:27:884 (1,2) - I prefer to make prallel in common with 00:28:582 (3,4) -
  2. 00:31:896- add a note
  3. 00:32:942 (1) - this NC is on purpose?
  4. 00:33:640 (3,4,1) - it is better to avoid overlap on 00:33:117 (1) -
  5. 00:53:873- add a note
[Standard]
  1. Diff name is OK as guest-diff ?
  2. 00:42:884 (2) - how about stack on 00:40:791 (4) - ? you can do it by adjusting 00:41:838 (1) -
    256,136,41838,6,0,P|335:232|452:188,1,240,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    364,124,42884,1,0,0:0:0:0:


thank for your visit my queue for always :)
~Good Luck~
Momochikun

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

wait, WHAT? i should REMAP IT AGAIN? it's look weird. look before modders. tired of found nazis of this beatmap huh
You should know that remap can be more useful than hundreds of modding.
Topic Starter
DenoisoGoiso

Momochikun wrote:

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

wait, WHAT? i should REMAP IT AGAIN? it's look weird. look before modders. tired of found nazis of this beatmap huh
You should know that remap can be more useful than hundreds of modding.
huehuehuehuehue but the SV is Fixed already~ ahuehuehue

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
  1. remove "No.13" from tags. it is already written in title I forgot xD
  2. Tags suggetion: Added
    Inventionen und Sinfonien BWV 784
    Johann Sebastian Bach
[Beginner]
  1. 00:13:407 (1,2,3) - For beginner, it's a little confusing because of the start of the song. how about this? ok
  2. 00:21:430 (2) - start at 00:21:081 ok
  3. 01:11:838 (3,1,2) - a little adjustment (smoother cursor moving) ok
    SPOILER

    100,276,71838,2,0,L|84:340,2,60.0000022888184,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    100,221,72884,6,0,L|84:157,2,60.0000022888184
    148,248,73931,2,0,P|212:264|276:248,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:28:756 (1) - end at 01:30:152- If chage it, I recommend to reduce hitsound volume of this spinner's end (apply for all diff) ahue i can't
[Hyper]
  1. 00:18:640 (4,5,1) - increase DS and avoid overlap ok
  2. 00:39:745 (2,1) - avoid overlap
  3. 01:06:954~01:09:745- I prefer to decrease SV ok
[Another]
  1. 00:27:884 (1,2) - I prefer to make prallel in common with 00:28:582 (3,4) - ok
  2. 00:31:896- add a note ok
  3. 00:32:942 (1) - this NC is on purpose? hue no i forgot xD
  4. 00:33:640 (3,4,1) - it is better to avoid overlap on 00:33:117 (1) - ok
  5. 00:53:873- add a note no. i didn't hear a instrumental?
[Standard]
  1. Diff name is OK as guest-diff ?
  2. 00:42:884 (2) - how about stack on 00:40:791 (4) - ? you can do it by adjusting 00:41:838 (1) -
    256,136,41838,6,0,P|335:232|452:188,1,240,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    364,124,42884,1,0,0:0:0:0:


thank for your visit my queue for always :) always :)
~Good Luck~ Thanks~
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