1. 00:31:413- clap
2. 00:32:080- ^
3. 00:57:080 (4) - I prefer to add hit-sound at 00:58:413- therefore, how about this?
   
4. 01:01:413 (1) - make DS 1.0x
5. 01:40:413 (5) - rotate 4 degree anti-clockwise
6. 01:52:080- add a note and clap
7. 01:55:080- clap?
8. 02:14:413 (4,5) - too close. it's not good
9. 02:15:747- add a note
10. 02:42:580 (4) - slider is better : 02:42:580~02:42:913
11. 03:04:413 (1) - I think spinner suits to this part
12. 03:47:080 (1) - I suggest to add other hit-sound (soft-hitnormal.wav is not suitable, imo)

1. 00:22:747 (5) - the following looks better
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:34:664 (6) - I prefer to delete
3. 00:40:080 (1) - I prefer to change for 2 circles
4. 00:54:914 (6) - end at 00:55:747
5. 01:04:080 (8) - end at 01:04:247
6. 01:24:080 (2,3,4,5,6) - this star-pattern looks a little awkward. how about this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   240,200,84080,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   125,153,84246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   190,258,84413,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   199,135,84580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   119,229,84747,1,8,0:0:0:0:

7. 01:42:747 (5) - same as 00:22:747 (5) -
8. 01:55:414 (1) - start at 01:55:247
9. 02:12:248 (6) - end at 02:13:080
10. 02:21:414 (8) - end at 02:21:580
11. 02:42:080- clap
12. 03:04:414 (1,1) - I prefer to change for 1 slider (and reduce SV)

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
Thank you for Touhou-request <3 sayuriii

[Relaxing]

1. 00:31:413- clap how did i missed this ;w; added
2. 00:32:080- ^ heyeeaaa
3. 00:57:080 (4) - I prefer to add hit-sound at 00:58:413- therefore, how about this? uhh i want to keep this 00:58:413 blank. so no changed
   
4. 01:01:413 (1) - make DS 1.0x ooops, fixed
5. 01:40:413 (5) - rotate 4 degree anti-clockwise for a perfect blanket isn't it? but no. it's 3 degree anti-clockwise
6. 01:52:080- add a note and clap y not? added
7. 01:55:080- clap? yooo added
8. 02:14:413 (4,5) - too close. it's not good k fixed
9. 02:15:747- add a note i add 1/2 reverse slider here
10. 02:42:580 (4) - slider is better : 02:42:580~02:42:913 changed in other way
11. 03:04:413 (1) - I think spinner suits to this part not really, i prefer mine
12. 03:47:080 (1) - I suggest to add other hit-sound (soft-hitnormal.wav is not suitable, imo) loool ima try reduce it's volume to 0 maybe good, but idk maybe i'll think about this

[Lunaties]

1. 00:22:747 (5) - the following looks better wheeeeeee nice looking, k changed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:34:664 (6) - I prefer to delete pls no ):
3. 00:40:080 (1) - I prefer to change for 2 circles no, put a slider after this break is good thing and also fit with the vocal tho
4. 00:54:914 (6) - end at 00:55:747 try playback rate 25%, the vocal ends clearly at 00:55:580 orz
5. 01:04:080 (8) - end at 01:04:247 same reason as previous modder
6. 01:24:080 (2,3,4,5,6) - this star-pattern looks a little awkward. how about this? idk but mine is good enough and oh look, what is marisa doing there? >w<
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   240,200,84080,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   125,153,84246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   190,258,84413,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   199,135,84580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   119,229,84747,1,8,0:0:0:0:

7. 01:42:747 (5) - same as 00:22:747 (5) yee
8. 01:55:414 (1) - start at 01:55:247 k changed
9. 02:12:248 (6) - end at 02:13:080 same reason as 00:54:914 (6)
10. 02:21:414 (8) - end at 02:21:580 same reason as 01:04:080 (8)
11. 02:42:080- clap sure, ofc i reduce the volume too so the clap sound not too loud for the spinner
12. 03:04:414 (1,1) - I prefer to change for 1 slider (and reduce SV) not a bad idea, but i'll think about this

your custom-hitsounds are intersting
~Good Luck~

thanks for modding

azuretwinight wrote:

Hello~
From my modding queue
Here are some suggestions. And here are some problems I think.

General
Good map.Some issues here.
The difficulties is not continuous.I mean Relaxing is too easy and the second diff is harder than I thought.
Flow is a really stuff to concern. Anyway, hitsounds are good.

Relax
00:16:413 (1,2,3) - flow here not so good.But if you really want to make the notes there then go on may also be ok. wait.. flow is ok already
00:40:413 (1,2,3,4) - the four sliders is the same issue as above.And the last slider goes not so well to the next slider 1.Move next 1 a bit left and up. somehow i'm not gonna change this
02:41:247 (2) - strange slider here.So maybehttp://puu.sh/4RTGk.jpg no need to follow the vocal. 1/2 slider's reverse
only makes it harder for the next slider

Lunaties
flow not so good in some place. uhh not really, i have asked some of my friends to testplay it. they said it's flow good already
00:17:747 (5,1) - flow not good here. Slider 5 ctrl+h and move to the place now may be better http://puu.sh/4RU0x.jpg ok nice going
00:40:914 (3,4,5) - flow here not good ,too. ohhhh this part. i placed notes based on the bass sound, so i think flow doesn't really needed here
00:53:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - also the flow of long slider. The direction is not comfortable to move. oh c'mon. it fits with the vocal
01:05:414 (2,3) - a bit hard. A short slider here will be better.http://puu.sh/4RUgb.jpg also here 02:22:747 (2,3) no it's okay. if i replaced with a slider, it would be harder more

That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue. .

sorry i fixed a little.
thanks for modding anyway

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From my queue of Lucky mod.

Red——Something must be fixed.
Blue——Should be noticed.
Black——My personal Suggestions.

[General]

1. 01:06:413 - Set preview time here is better. We set preview time earlier to make players feel more about the song in-game.
2. Combo color is not the same. Because all diffs is made by you, so you should use the same combo color. lol omg i didn't notice this
   
   Lunaties:
   Combo1 : 128,128,255
   Combo2 : 128,255,255
   Combo3 : 128,255,128
   Combo4 : 255,128,192
   
   Relaxing:
   Combo1 : 255,255,128
   Combo2 : 128,255,255
   Combo3 : 0,255,128
   Combo4 : 255,128,192
3. Inconsistency in Kiai Times: oops fixed
   
   Lunaties:
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:080, ends on 01:25:747
   Kiai #2: Starts on 02:24:414, ends on 02:43:080
   Kiai #3: Starts on 03:05:747, ends on 03:25:080
   
   Relaxing:
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:080, ends on 01:25:747
   Kiai #2: Starts on 02:24:414, ends on 02:43:080
   Kiai #3: Starts on 03:05:747, ends on 03:25:164

[Relaxing]

1. According to the Ranking Rules, the easiest diff should be low than 3 stars(Highest is 3.24). And Relaxing is 3.26stars>3.24,which shows in-game is 3.5stars, that is also unrankable. You must fix that. uhhh 0,02 difference only ): gonna fix this
2. 01:25:247 (1) - I suggest that the slider end at 01:25:580 - ,and the next spin begin at 01:25:747 - oh sure
3. 01:46:747 - add a note? or make 01:46:413 (5) - a slider. i'll keep this blank, i heat no beat there
4. 01:54:747 (6) - change it to a note and the next spin begin at 01:55:080 - and make the spin end at 01:56:413 - then break time begin at 01:57:413 - somehow i just don't like this, i feels mine better already
5. 02:55:080 (1,2) - ugly k fixed ~
6. 03:46:247 (4) - stack is not good imo. Satellite-san mentioned this too. guess i'll fix this

[Lunaties]

1. The Hard Diff called Lunaties makes me feel the diff is lunatic. But when I mod the map, it really likes a lunatic diff. So, I suggest HP-1&OD-1. If some Bats think that your diff is Lunatic, that's unrankable. Because:
   

   Ranking Rules
   If your mapset has two difficulties, one of them cannot be insane

2. Unsnapped green line at: 03:24:014 - snap to 03:23:997
3. 00:11:664 (2,3,4) - That may confuse players.
4. 00:14:330 (2,3,4) - ^
5. 00:28:747 (8) - NC added
6. 01:02:080 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - That's really lunatic.
7. 01:25:247 (1,1) - same as Relaxing it's already
8. 01:48:747 (8) - NC
9. 01:50:580 (4,5,6,7) - To make it like a hard plz.
10. 01:51:080 (7,8) - blanket nazi, fixed
11. 02:19:414 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as mentioned
12. 02:42:581 (1,1) - same as Relaxing eoooo
13. 03:13:747 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It should be in a hard diff?

I have to point out that the spacing and the placement in Lunaties shows that it is really Lunatic diff.
So I have two suggestions:
①To make Lunaties Diff easier. You think that it is hard, but Bats may don't think as you.
②Keep the diff, and make another Hard Diff.

② is the better choice imo. If you choose ②, you can ignore most of my mods in Lunaties.
actually, yes it's Lunatic. i've asked BAT a week ago and he said to me to make a Hard diff. my friend work on the hard diff and it's not finished yet till now. maybe i should make this map WIP for now

Good luck.

really useful modding
thank you

Dai wrote:

wow pattern dan flow yang sangat fun untuk dimainkan, hitsound yang digunakan juga bikin enak didenger
beberapa distance bikin agak bingung, tapi nggak ada masalah buat gw

SPOILER

.osr

star
also SAYURIIIIIIIII!!!!!! <3

Rei Hakurei wrote:

saigoooo, koishi~ demonai! ;A;
anyway, goodluck with "bochor" thingy~~

karena... aku malas ngemap Last Remote
kokoro no naka de, sibuk sekali aku ini...

*lewataja*

bluehall90 wrote:

Random modding
Lunaties
00:40:080 - 00:48:080 - sebaiknya kurangin SV deh jadi 0.75x mungkin, lagunya lagi agak kalem disitu. kaya nya ga perlu deh, jumlah note nya jg ga terlalu banyak disitu
01:54:580 (5,6,7) - Entah kenapa, gw lebih enak circle 6 nya diilangin kayanya good, you're the 4th modder who suggest this. ok de ~
01:57:413 - 02:05:413 - SV dikurangin sama kaya diatas wheeeeee
02:53:747 (1,2,3,4) - Hitsoundnya diganti, itu ngeganggu menurut gw not for me

Relaxing
02:53:747 (1,2,1) - Diantara circle 1 sama 2 sebaiknya ada circle tambahan (letaknya juga diantara circle 1 dan 2), demikian juga dengan diantara circle 2 dan slider 1 no, i'll keep those missing

Sementara itu dulu

thanks for mod

1. 00:34:080 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 2 tapped-circle is strange by start from red memory. I suggest (2) stack to (3), (4) stack to (5), (6) stack to (7).
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:09:247 (7,8,9) - I think put jump here is good. example
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:12:080 (8) - Not good flow for me, add circle to 01:11:913? If you want use anti-jump, I recommend change to circle. Anyway, recommend that to improve something.
4. 01:19:914 (7,8,9) - same as 01:09:247.
5. 01:54:080 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - same as 00:34:080.
6. 02:13:581 (3,4,5) - Not good flow for me.
7. 02:15:581 (9) - Please close this to previous note.
8. 02:26:581 (7,8,9,1,2) - make more prettier
9. 02:29:414 (8) - same as 01:12:080.
10. 03:10:747 (8) - ^
11. 03:22:747 (2,3,4,5,6) - It is little weird for me. You are not using much a linear placement.
    

terametis wrote:

from my queue

Black = suggestion.　 Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you will be able to reject them without reason.

[Lunaties]
I recommend OD6.

1. 00:34:080 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 2 tapped-circle is strange by start from red memory. I suggest (2) stack to (3), (4) stack to (5), (6) stack to (7). oh nice, i like this
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:09:247 (7,8,9) - I think put jump here is good. example but the flow seems bad, i'll think about this
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:12:080 (8) - Not good flow for me, add circle to 01:11:913? If you want use anti-jump, I recommend change to circle. Anyway, recommend that to improve something. ok added circle
4. 01:19:914 (7,8,9) - same as 01:09:247.
5. 01:54:080 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - same as 00:34:080.
6. 02:13:581 (3,4,5) - Not good flow for me. i'll keep this
7. 02:15:581 (9) - Please close this to previous note. ok
8. 02:26:581 (7,8,9,1,2) - make more prettier it's already, at least for me
9. 02:29:414 (8) - same as 01:12:080.
10. 03:10:747 (8) - ^
11. 03:22:747 (2,3,4,5,6) - It is little weird for me. You are not using much a linear placement. idk how to find a nice pattern, but for now i'll keep this
    

[Relaxing]
good for me


good luck<3

Thanks for modding

smallboat wrote:

Hi，Lunaties。Google form req.(I say poor English only,sorry >_< )

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Default clap's sound should be changed,consider it.(A bit noise..)

[Relaxing] The following suggest clap all remove. Not very suitable for audio.

00:07:747 (3,4) - Remove clap,because add clap is a bit noise.(The initial sound is good.)
00:10:413 (3,4) - ^
00:13:080 (4) - ^
00:15:747 (3) - ^
00:23:080 (3) - Be arc with 00:22:747 (2) . eh?
00:25:413 (2,4) - Remove clap.
00:31:413 (2,3) - ^
00:34:413 (3,4) - ^ ,(4)+finish. ok
00:40:413 (1,2,3,4) - The slider head do not partially covered. keep mine for now, but let's see if another mod mention this
02:53:747 (1,2,1) - ^
02:59:080 (1,2,3) - ^
03:07:413 (4) - Blanket (2).
03:37:747 (3,4) - Remove clap. no
03:43:080 (4) - ^
03:45:747 (3,4) - ^

sorry no changes about remove clap suggestion

[Lunaties]

00:11:664 (2,3) - This 2 note sholudn"t suggest place here. (Because so much a lot stack is read hard.) ok unstack the slider
00:14:330 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:20:414 (7) - (164|72)?
00:21:580 (2) - Stack 00:21:414 (1) should good click? (The flow is not good before.) changed in other way
00:24:080 (8) - Stack 00:24:747 (2) slider end ,better flow. a bit weird to me since 00:23:747 (7,1) isn't stacked also, but i guess i'll give it a try
00:31:414 (5) - Move to (296|344),better flow. i prefer the current one
00:40:080 (1) ~ 00:50:747 (8) - I recommened reduce (0.75x),because this part is soft.Feel good better. i think it's not really neccesary
01:08:080 (5) - Feel can small jump,move to(288|296)? alrite
01:48:080 (7) - Slider end stack crooked off. no
01:57:414 (1) ~ 02:08:081 (8) - I recommened reduce (0.75x),because this part is soft.Feel good better. ~
02:25:414 (5) - Feel can small jump,move to(208|136)? flow seems weird for me, but changed in other way
02:36:081 (5) - Feel can small jump,move to(168|296)? no
02:42:080 (6) - Slider head +clap. somehow i'll keep this no clap
02:43:080 (1) - Remove clap.(Feel song end should not have sound. ) but there's no clap >w<
03:37:414 (6) - Ctrl+g? hahaha omg i didn't notice this slider was wrong with the direction, changed

[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

Thanks for modding

Eggache0 wrote:

From queue

[General]
Lunaties may be too hard as a "hard" diff. Only normal and Insane could be unrankable. :3

[Normal]

00:07:747 (3,4) - clap sounds weird. reduce the volume or change to another sound? yep i know, still looking for a better clap sound
00:10:413 (3,4) - ^,and so on
00:32:413 (1) - looks bad here. okay

try

312,304,32413,6,0,L|400:304,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,224,33080,2,0,P|432:168|432:104,2,120,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,34413,2,0,L|256:224,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,224,35080,1,6,0:0:0:0:

00:48:413 (3) - nc okay
01:05:580 (5,6) - stack 5's head to 4 ^
01:11:747 - reduce the volume here or remove the finish okay removed
01:22:413 (5) - ^ ^
02:29:080 - ^ ^
01:13:747 (3) - remove finish ^ ^
02:31:080 (3) - ^ ^
01:15:413 (1,2) - add finish to head ^ ^
02:32:413 (1,2) - ^ ^ added on tail
03:14:080 (2,4) - ^ ^
01:25:580 - remove the finish here. If you want a finish, add a circle at01:25:747 - and make the spinner start at01:26:080 - okay removed finish
02:56:413 (3) - add clap to its head okay
03:09:747 (2) - add finish to head no
03:20:413 (4) - ^ ^
03:11:080 (1) - remove the finish on end ^
03:21:747 (1) - ^ ^

[Lunaties]

claps doesn't fit the rhythm in this diff. Try some other sound?

00:29:747 (5,6,7) - not really like this but, changed in other way

try

152,320,29747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,224,29914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,128,30080,2,0,L|240:128,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:33:247 (5,6) - move to x312 y144 okay
00:40:580 (2) - nc? there's no reason to add NC on this note
01:57:914 (2) - ^ ^
00:57:413 - add a circle at x120 y256 i'll keep this blank since no vocal there

02:14:747 - ^, at x288 y80 ^
00:59:747 - add a circle stack to 5's head no
02:17:080 - ^ ^
01:04:080 (8) - make it end at 01:04:247 so many ppl suggest this, well ok then >w<
02:21:414 (8) - ^ ^
01:07:747 (4,5) - don't stack them, move 5 further okay
01:18:414 (4,5) - ^ ^
02:25:081 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:14:080 (6,7,8,9) - flow could be better. for example: ronate 01:14:080 (6) - 45° clockwise. i want keep (6) blanket with (3) anyway, so changed in other way
01:24:080 (2,3,4,5,6) - try use ctrl+shift+d to make better polygon circles. okay
01:25:247 (1) - same to normal here. hmmm no
02:42:581 (1) - ^ ^

01:41:580 (2) - stack it to 1 okay but moved (1) for a better flow
03:09:747 (7) - ctrl+g aww cool >w<
03:10:580 (8,9) - okay

try

280,159,190580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,190747,2,0,P|336:128|368:128,2,70,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

03:24:247 (3) - add finish to the end ^

Great song. Good luck!

some of suggestions are really helpful
thanks for modding

o0ohitomio0o wrote:

oooh long IRC~ :3
we strayed off-path a lot didn't we ;p
I dunno if this is enough for u though '3'

IRC

2013-11-09 20:26 o0ohitomio0o: hi~
2013-11-09 20:28 Lunaties: eh?
2013-11-09 20:29 o0ohitomio0o: can we do IRC on ur map?
2013-11-09 20:29 o0ohitomio0o: because my browser has some problems
2013-11-09 20:30 o0ohitomio0o: I can't write on post
2013-11-09 20:46 o0ohitomio0o: hello? :s
2013-11-09 20:46 Lunaties: sorry
2013-11-09 20:46 Lunaties: inet problem here
2013-11-09 20:47 Lunaties: sometime dc it self :3
2013-11-09 20:47 o0ohitomio0o: I understand
2013-11-09 20:47 o0ohitomio0o: I have bad wifi here too ~w~
2013-11-09 20:48 o0ohitomio0o: can't seem 2 dwnload anything properly here
2013-11-09 20:48 o0ohitomio0o: so can we start IRC now :3
2013-11-09 20:49 o0ohitomio0o: *it's near bedtime so sr but I have 2 hurry*
2013-11-09 20:53 o0ohitomio0o: uuuu bad internet ~m~
2013-11-09 20:54 Lunaties: gg
2013-11-09 20:54 o0ohitomio0o: gg?
2013-11-09 20:54 Lunaties: my net
2013-11-09 20:54 Lunaties: haha
2013-11-09 20:54 o0ohitomio0o: <=*bad with abbs*
2013-11-09 20:54 Lunaties: seems can't play for now
2013-11-09 20:54 Lunaties: maybe tomorrow?
2013-11-09 20:54 o0ohitomio0o: but what is gg 'w'
2013-11-09 20:55 Lunaties: <good game
2013-11-09 20:55 o0ohitomio0o: oooh~
2013-11-09 20:55 o0ohitomio0o: get it now~
2013-11-10 17:09 o0ohitomio0o: ish ur internet ok now :3
2013-11-10 17:15 Lunaties: i scared of this connection :3
2013-11-10 17:15 o0ohitomio0o: how can we IRC like this ~w~
2013-11-10 17:15 Lunaties: lol
2013-11-10 17:17 Lunaties: okay let's start
2013-11-10 17:17 o0ohitomio0o: ok
2013-11-10 17:18 o0ohitomio0o: relaxing first :3
2013-11-10 17:18 Lunaties: go
2013-11-10 17:18 o0ohitomio0o: I dunno but ur soft-hitnormal seems strange to me :s
2013-11-10 17:19 that *ting-ting* sound
2013-11-10 17:19 o0ohitomio0o: more fit for traditional-style-JP-songs more
2013-11-10 17:19 Lunaties: i love them
2013-11-10 17:19 o0ohitomio0o: yes I love them too <3
2013-11-10 17:19 o0ohitomio0o: it's the main field for my custom skin 0 w 0
2013-11-10 17:20 o0ohitomio0o: but it just doesn't seem right for this song imo
2013-11-10 17:20 Lunaties: i guess the whistle is okay but
2013-11-10 17:20 Lunaties: the clap :3
2013-11-10 17:20 o0ohitomio0o: clap is a little bit too loud
2013-11-10 17:20 Lunaties: can't find the right one
2013-11-10 17:20 Lunaties: nah
2013-11-10 17:20 o0ohitomio0o: can't you get the soft-hitclap?
2013-11-10 17:21 Lunaties: im still looking for it
2013-11-10 17:21 o0ohitomio0o: lemme see if I can find it
2013-11-10 17:21 o0ohitomio0o: 0 w 0
2013-11-10 17:21 o0ohitomio0o: whaddabout the ting-ting :3
2013-11-10 17:22 o0ohitomio0o: whats ur op
2013-11-10 17:22 Lunaties: op?
2013-11-10 17:22 o0ohitomio0o: opinion '3'
2013-11-10 17:22 <= * bad with abbs*
2013-11-10 17:22 Lunaties: cool?
2013-11-10 17:22 Lunaties: may a bit strange for this song but i love this whistle
2013-11-10 17:23 o0ohitomio0o: yes the whistle I think it's ok
2013-11-10 17:23 o0ohitomio0o: but imo use it sparingly '3'
2013-11-10 17:23 Lunaties: ting-ting :3
2013-11-10 17:24 Lunaties: im not good with histounding stuff ;w;
2013-11-10 17:24 Lunaties: *hitsounding orz
2013-11-10 17:24 o0ohitomio0o: my pc was lost before
2013-11-10 17:24 o0ohitomio0o: together with all my hitsound data ;m;
2013-11-10 17:24 o0ohitomio0o: now it's laptop
2013-11-10 17:24 o0ohitomio0o: not much of anything here
2013-11-10 17:25 Lunaties: mine too
2013-11-10 17:25 Lunaties: do you have this map?
2013-11-10 17:25 Lunaties: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/63663 SYNC.ART'S ft. Sayuri - Gravity of Love]
2013-11-10 17:26 o0ohitomio0o: not yet
2013-11-10 17:26 Lunaties: oh then nevermind
2013-11-10 17:27 o0ohitomio0o: dwn-ing now
2013-11-10 17:27 o0ohitomio0o: too late~
2013-11-10 17:27 o0ohitomio0o: k now back to the mod plz ~w~
2013-11-10 17:27 o0ohitomio0o: straying off isn't good 'w'
2013-11-10 17:27 Lunaties: okay
2013-11-10 17:28 o0ohitomio0o: as the hitsounds seems odd to me I can't give exact mod on hitsound ;w;
2013-11-10 17:28 o0ohitomio0o: so if u changed the ting-ting or the whistle or whatever the base hitsound is, pm me & I'll check back 'w'
2013-11-10 17:29 Lunaties: haha okay
2013-11-10 17:29 Lunaties: gonna find the better hitsound after this
2013-11-10 17:30 o0ohitomio0o: 00:27:080 (1) - why r there a finish here :c
2013-11-10 17:30 o0ohitomio0o: no fit like... at all
2013-11-10 17:31 Lunaties: okay removed
2013-11-10 17:32 o0ohitomio0o: 00:34:413 (3) -
2013-11-10 17:32 o0ohitomio0o: slider's start is finish?
2013-11-10 17:33 o0ohitomio0o: & end is normal
2013-11-10 17:34 Lunaties: imo feel strange for me
2013-11-10 17:34 o0ohitomio0o: lol let's just follow urs :3
2013-11-10 17:34 o0ohitomio0o: with this I can't give exact suggestions anyways
2013-11-10 17:35 o0ohitomio0o: 00:57:080 (4) - this repeat 1 instead of 2
2013-11-10 17:36 Lunaties: then where should i place the circle?
2013-11-10 17:36 o0ohitomio0o: no no circle
2013-11-10 17:36 Lunaties: 00:58:080
2013-11-10 17:37 Lunaties: keep blank it?
2013-11-10 17:37 o0ohitomio0o: yes
2013-11-10 17:38 Lunaties: okay
2013-11-10 17:39 Lunaties: somehow i feel stupid with this IRC mod since i cant speak eng well orz ;w;
2013-11-10 17:39 o0ohitomio0o: ;w;
2013-11-10 17:40 o0ohitomio0o: it's ok
2013-11-10 17:40 o0ohitomio0o: many r like u
2013-11-10 17:40 o0ohitomio0o: not to worries
2013-11-10 17:40 o0ohitomio0o: I can give images for reference too
2013-11-10 17:40 o0ohitomio0o: tell me if u don't understand it
2013-11-10 17:43 Lunaties: it's happening ):
2013-11-10 17:43 o0ohitomio0o:
2013-11-10 17:44 o0ohitomio0o: 01:25:247 (1) - can't you make it half-length
2013-11-10 17:44 o0ohitomio0o: like this
2013-11-10 17:44 o0ohitomio0o: http://puu.sh/5e5aN.jpg
2013-11-10 17:45 Lunaties: no reverse?
2013-11-10 17:45 o0ohitomio0o: I think no
2013-11-10 17:45 o0ohitomio0o: doesn't have anything there for a beat
2013-11-10 17:46 Lunaties: oh looks good
2013-11-10 17:46 o0ohitomio0o: checking half the map already
2013-11-10 17:46 o0ohitomio0o: I dunno if it's right
2013-11-10 17:46 o0ohitomio0o: but your map doesn't have "the angle" stick to it
2013-11-10 17:47 o0ohitomio0o: it's just horizontally & vertically aligned imo :s
2013-11-10 17:47 o0ohitomio0o: try rotating notes
2013-11-10 17:47 o0ohitomio0o: you'll re surprised
2013-11-10 17:47 o0ohitomio0o: some patterns can be improved too
2013-11-10 17:48 o0ohitomio0o: like this one 01:44:413 (1,2) -
2013-11-10 17:48 Lunaties: then should i remap it?
2013-11-10 17:48 o0ohitomio0o: no no
2013-11-10 17:48 o0ohitomio0o: remap is not necessary
2013-11-10 17:48 o0ohitomio0o: the basis are good enough
2013-11-10 17:48 Lunaties: i guess it's yes
2013-11-10 17:48 o0ohitomio0o: just a little tweak will do
2013-11-10 17:49 Lunaties: okay
2013-11-10 17:50 o0ohitomio0o: http://puu.sh/5e5kb.jpg
2013-11-10 17:50 o0ohitomio0o: try making it look like this for variety
2013-11-10 17:51 Lunaties: let's see if i can do this
2013-11-10 17:51 o0ohitomio0o: same for here too
2013-11-10 17:51 o0ohitomio0o: 02:37:747 (1,2) -
2013-11-10 17:51 Lunaties: imo this normal need more curvy sliders
2013-11-10 17:52 o0ohitomio0o: I don't think that do
2013-11-10 17:52 o0ohitomio0o: short sliders need to be simple
2013-11-10 17:52 o0ohitomio0o: it's a EZ-NM dif after all
2013-11-10 17:52 o0ohitomio0o: let players be used to sliders first imo
2013-11-10 17:53 o0ohitomio0o: curvy will do with longer ones like what u did
2013-11-10 17:55 o0ohitomio0o: bad internet
2013-11-10 17:56 Lunaties: duhh dc'ed again
2013-11-10 17:56 Lunaties: ;w;
2013-11-10 17:56 o0ohitomio0o: so let's get this done quickly 'w'
2013-11-10 17:56 o0ohitomio0o: before it happens more
2013-11-10 17:57 o0ohitomio0o: 03:19:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part can be improved like this
2013-11-10 17:57 Lunaties: im so sory
2013-11-10 17:57 o0ohitomio0o: http://puu.sh/5e5zo.jpg
2013-11-10 17:57 o0ohitomio0o: no sorry ><
2013-11-10 17:58 o0ohitomio0o: waddayu sr-in dabbout > 3<
2013-11-10 17:58 Lunaties: make sure you savelog this all
2013-11-10 17:58 Lunaties: huehue
2013-11-10 17:58 o0ohitomio0o: yesh
2013-11-10 17:59 Lunaties: okay gonna change this
2013-11-10 17:59 o0ohitomio0o: I think the pattern after that are fine enough
2013-11-10 17:59 o0ohitomio0o: sr new modder too ;w;
2013-11-10 18:00 Lunaties: nono
2013-11-10 18:00 Lunaties: i think you're good
2013-11-10 18:00 o0ohitomio0o: I mod very few
2013-11-10 18:00 o0ohitomio0o: <= lazy person
2013-11-10 18:01 Lunaties: yeah i know but you give me some improvement what should i do
2013-11-10 18:01 o0ohitomio0o: Vietnam really lacks mapper ;w; so I decided to become one
2013-11-10 18:02 o0ohitomio0o: :3 tks
2013-11-10 18:02 Lunaties: dont worry im still new though >w<
2013-11-10 18:03 o0ohitomio0o: >w<
2013-11-10 18:03 o0ohitomio0o: my map isn't so good
2013-11-10 18:03 o0ohitomio0o: but at least it's on its pace
2013-11-10 18:03 o0ohitomio0o: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/322766 Yueporu - One of Repetition]
2013-11-10 18:04 o0ohitomio0o: 0 w 0
2013-11-10 18:04 Lunaties: miku :3
2013-11-10 18:04 o0ohitomio0o: <3
2013-11-10 18:04 Lunaties: oh wait
2013-11-10 18:04 o0ohitomio0o: nope.avi
2013-11-10 18:04 o0ohitomio0o: yueporu
2013-11-10 18:04 o0ohitomio0o: utaite :3
2013-11-10 18:04 o0ohitomio0o: BG is miku+rin
2013-11-10 18:04 o0ohitomio0o: each dif has one different BG
2013-11-10 18:05 Lunaties: the voice is not sung by miku
2013-11-10 18:05 o0ohitomio0o: yes
2013-11-10 18:05 Lunaties: :3
2013-11-10 18:05 o0ohitomio0o: miku's ver didn't seem to be as good as this
2013-11-10 18:05 o0ohitomio0o:
2013-11-10 18:05 Lunaties: 4 mins map
2013-11-10 18:05 Lunaties: you sure tough as new mapper
2013-11-10 18:06 o0ohitomio0o: I map only dif Repetition :3
2013-11-10 18:06 o0ohitomio0o: others are all GDs
2013-11-10 18:06 o0ohitomio0o: each mapper/one dif
2013-11-10 18:06 Lunaties: most of new mapper always start to map an tv-size map afaik
2013-11-10 18:06 o0ohitomio0o: :3
2013-11-10 18:06 Lunaties: but it's 4 mins :3
2013-11-10 18:07 o0ohitomio0o: ~2.5 times TV-size lol
2013-11-10 18:07 Lunaties: oh i can see that
2013-11-10 18:07 Lunaties: but still
2013-11-10 18:08 o0ohitomio0o: ah great
2013-11-10 18:08 o0ohitomio0o: 6pm here
2013-11-10 18:08 o0ohitomio0o: gotta take a shower
2013-11-10 18:08 Lunaties: okay
2013-11-10 18:08 o0ohitomio0o: if mom sees me like this she's sooo gonna skin me off ((
2013-11-10 18:08 o0ohitomio0o: later we'll deal with Lunaties :3
2013-11-10 18:09 Lunaties: yep let's continue this after
2013-11-10 18:09 Lunaties: :3
2013-11-10 19:05 o0ohitomio0o: yo~
2013-11-10 19:06 o0ohitomio0o: a meal after a bath is THE BEST~~~~ <3
2013-11-10 19:06 o0ohitomio0o: <3 <3 <3
2013-11-10 19:07 Lunaties: :3
2013-11-10 19:09 o0ohitomio0o: so we continue ?:3
2013-11-10 19:09 Lunaties: if you like to
2013-11-10 19:10 o0ohitomio0o: '3'
2013-11-10 19:10 Lunaties: i can continue my modding affter this tho
2013-11-10 19:10 o0ohitomio0o: :3
2013-11-10 19:10 o0ohitomio0o: fn ur mod first :3
2013-11-10 19:10 o0ohitomio0o: I have time
2013-11-10 19:10 o0ohitomio0o: wait
2013-11-10 19:10 o0ohitomio0o: u doing IRC or thread?
2013-11-10 19:11 Lunaties: ofc thread
2013-11-10 19:11 o0ohitomio0o: ok so we IRC :3
2013-11-10 19:11 Lunaties: relax
2013-11-10 19:12 Lunaties: let's continue
2013-11-10 19:12 o0ohitomio0o: I forget things easily TwT
2013-11-10 19:12 o0ohitomio0o: so I want to do it be4 I forget my points ;p
2013-11-10 19:15 o0ohitomio0o: 00:16:414 (1) - here
2013-11-10 19:15 o0ohitomio0o: there only taps
2013-11-10 19:15 o0ohitomio0o: too simple for insane?
2013-11-10 19:16 o0ohitomio0o: my suggest: http://puu.sh/5e7WX.jpg
2013-11-10 19:16 Lunaties: this is hard
2013-11-10 19:16 Lunaties: i think
2013-11-10 19:16 o0ohitomio0o: if you want to keep the taps
2013-11-10 19:16 o0ohitomio0o: I think u'll have to move it further away from each other
2013-11-10 19:17 Lunaties: but some people count this as insane :3
2013-11-10 19:17 o0ohitomio0o: really?
2013-11-10 19:17 o0ohitomio0o: I think they can easily FC this with a mouse lol
2013-11-10 19:17 o0ohitomio0o: u dunno how scary players can be ;3
2013-11-10 19:18 Lunaties: wait2
2013-11-10 19:19 o0ohitomio0o: yes? :3
2013-11-10 19:19 Lunaties: oh i get it ~,~
2013-11-10 19:19 o0ohitomio0o: :3
2013-11-10 19:20 Lunaties: so, i have to change the slider into 2 notes so gonna be like this?
2013-11-10 19:20 Lunaties: ok i get it
2013-11-10 19:21 o0ohitomio0o: no no not the sliders 0.0
2013-11-10 19:21 o0ohitomio0o: the 4 notes after the sliders
2013-11-10 19:21 o0ohitomio0o: 00:16:414 (1,2,3,4) -
2013-11-10 19:22 o0ohitomio0o: add 4 notes between them
2013-11-10 19:23 Lunaties: waah my bad
2013-11-10 19:23 o0ohitomio0o: :3
2013-11-10 19:23 Lunaties: though those notes all in white tick
2013-11-10 19:23 Lunaties: sorry2 didn't see it clearly
2013-11-10 19:24 o0ohitomio0o: ok ok :3
2013-11-10 19:24 Lunaties: but this is hard diff
2013-11-10 19:24 Lunaties: are you sure?
2013-11-10 19:24 o0ohitomio0o: hard?
2013-11-10 19:24 o0ohitomio0o: I thought insane
2013-11-10 19:24 o0ohitomio0o: u named it Lunaties
2013-11-10 19:25 o0ohitomio0o: in common sense when a dif have mappeer's name that dif is Insane or Extra 0.0
2013-11-10 19:25 Lunaties: almost like insane is it? ~,~
2013-11-10 19:25 o0ohitomio0o: so make it insane then :3
2013-11-10 19:25 o0ohitomio0o: but if you want to rank
2013-11-10 19:25 o0ohitomio0o: then u'll have to make another dif, easy or hard
2013-11-10 19:25 Lunaties: probably i want make this diff insane
2013-11-10 19:26 o0ohitomio0o: the rule: "when a mapset has only 2 difs, one of them cannot be Insane"
2013-11-10 19:26 Lunaties: but i have no idea how to map hard diff / easy diff
2013-11-10 19:26 o0ohitomio0o: simple beat
2013-11-10 19:26 o0ohitomio0o: simple pattern
2013-11-10 19:26 o0ohitomio0o: simple stat
2013-11-10 19:26 Lunaties: im out of idea
2013-11-10 19:26 o0ohitomio0o: = easy dif :3
2013-11-10 19:26 Lunaties: yes it is
2013-11-10 19:27 Lunaties: E N I is that okay?
2013-11-10 19:27 o0ohitomio0o: I think so
2013-11-10 19:27 o0ohitomio0o: but many will tend to go with N H I
2013-11-10 19:28 Lunaties: nah if this counted as insane, i cant really make a good hard diff
2013-11-10 19:28 Lunaties: but idk with easy
2013-11-10 19:28 Lunaties: guess i'll give it a try :3
2013-11-10 19:29 o0ohitomio0o: :3
2013-11-10 19:29 o0ohitomio0o: go~go~go~
2013-11-10 19:29 Lunaties: but
2013-11-10 19:30 o0ohitomio0o: :3?
2013-11-10 19:30 Lunaties: hitsounding normal diff is a bit stressing already
2013-11-10 19:30 Lunaties: easy? good luck to me then :v
2013-11-10 19:30 o0ohitomio0o: hitsound it easier than it looks
2013-11-10 19:30 Lunaties: ok2 think this later, let's continue
2013-11-10 19:30 o0ohitomio0o: there are patterns too :3
2013-11-10 19:31 o0ohitomio0o: if you rn't expert, these patterns are quite good to follow
2013-11-10 19:33 o0ohitomio0o: the most common one is "clap on white tick"
2013-11-10 19:33 o0ohitomio0o: most maps work well with this rule :3
2013-11-10 19:33 o0ohitomio0o: anyways
2013-11-10 19:33 o0ohitomio0o: 00:26:414 (6,7) -
2013-11-10 19:34 o0ohitomio0o: move this further away from 00:25:747 (5) -
2013-11-10 19:34 o0ohitomio0o: too close ><
2013-11-10 19:34 o0ohitomio0o: not challenging at all
2013-11-10 19:35 Lunaties: okay
2013-11-10 19:35 Lunaties: moved to 432:192
2013-11-10 19:35 o0ohitomio0o: what?
2013-11-10 19:36 o0ohitomio0o: can u take a screenie for me 2 look :3
2013-11-10 19:37 Lunaties: hmmmm like this? http://puu.sh/5e8B5.jpg
2013-11-10 19:38 o0ohitomio0o: move it on top each other?
2013-11-10 19:38 o0ohitomio0o: http://puu.sh/5e8DF.jpg
2013-11-10 19:39 Lunaties: okay
2013-11-10 19:39 o0ohitomio0o: 00:30:580 (1) - this point until the break is quite good
2013-11-10 19:40 Lunaties: thanks
2013-11-10 19:41 Lunaties: so after the break is not good at all? >w<
2013-11-10 19:41 o0ohitomio0o: no one said that >W<
2013-11-10 19:44 o0ohitomio0o: ah great
2013-11-10 19:44 o0ohitomio0o: mom calls
2013-11-10 19:44 o0ohitomio0o: Dx
2013-11-10 19:45 Lunaties: okay i'll wait you
2013-11-10 19:46 Lunaties: time to make a coffee
2013-11-10 19:57 o0ohitomio0o: ok Dx
2013-11-10 19:57 o0ohitomio0o: sr 2 keep ya waitin
2013-11-10 19:57 Lunaties: done? okay
2013-11-10 19:58 o0ohitomio0o: man
2013-11-10 19:58 o0ohitomio0o: she told me 2 tutor my bro
2013-11-10 20:00 Lunaties: oh your bro wants to learn about mapping too?
2013-11-10 20:00 o0ohitomio0o: no >w<
2013-11-10 20:00 o0ohitomio0o: his schoolwork
2013-11-10 20:01 Lunaties: oh okay, good luck to him then >w<
2013-11-10 20:01 o0ohitomio0o: he'e just a first grade :3
2013-11-10 20:01 o0ohitomio0o: how can he learn mapping >w<
2013-11-10 20:02 Lunaties: well, nobody knows
2013-11-10 20:04 o0ohitomio0o: :3
2013-11-10 20:04 o0ohitomio0o: I hope he can in the future
2013-11-10 20:07 Lunaties: again )x
2013-11-10 20:14 o0ohitomio0o: urg...
2013-11-10 20:15 o0ohitomio0o: yay~
2013-11-10 20:16 o0ohitomio0o: I think I can find a person that makes SB for my map \:D/
2013-11-10 20:17 o0ohitomio0o: 01:24:080 (2,3,4,5,6) - these make their distance wider no?
2013-11-10 20:25 o0ohitomio0o: same problem happens some star-shaped taps after too
2013-11-10 20:26 o0ohitomio0o: seems like my laptop started lagging again :\
2013-11-10 20:26 o0ohitomio0o: just gonna restart osu

1. 00:08:080 (4,1) - Some distance opens.

1. 01:05:580 (5,1) - I feel that one not to stack is better.

1. 01:17:747 (1,2) - Some distance opens.

1. 01:39:747 (4,5) - Some distance opens.

1. 01:49:747 (1,2,3) - Some distance opens.

1. 02:27:080 (1,2) - Some distance opens.

1. 01:11:080 (4) - I feel that some two times of returns are difficult in Easy or Normal dif.How about in this way?
   
   Rhythm and Spacing

   

1. 02:28:413 (3) - ^

1. 02:33:747 (3) - ^

1. 03:08:413 (1) - ^

1. 03:13:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think that some 8 running fire of note are difficult in Easy or Noraml diff.You should arrange it what it is.

1. 01:00:414 (7,8,9) - How about in this way?
   
   Spacing

   

1. 01:21:414 (6) - Ctrl+g I think that distance may be far from (7)

1. 00:50:747 (8) - How about in this way?
   
   Rhythm

   

1. 02:08:081 (8) - ^

1. 02:53:747 (1,2,3,4) - The rhythm here is strange.How about in this way?
   
   Rhythm

   

EnixYuki wrote:

Hi M4M~♪

[Relaxing]

general
01:57:747~02:08:413 - It is not good to make this time break.Let's make! this is normal diff, player needs more break time :3

Spacing

1. 00:08:080 (4,1) - Some distance opens.

1. 01:05:580 (5,1) - I feel that one not to stack is better. i'll keep mine

1. 01:17:747 (1,2) - Some distance opens.

1. 01:39:747 (4,5) - Some distance opens.

1. 01:49:747 (1,2,3) - Some distance opens.

1. 02:27:080 (1,2) - Some distance opens.

Rhythm

1. 01:11:080 (4) - I feel that some two times of returns are difficult in Easy or Normal dif.How about in this way? okay ~
   
   Rhythm and Spacing

   

1. 02:28:413 (3) - ^ nope

1. 02:33:747 (3) - ^ divided into 2 sliders

1. 03:08:413 (1) - ^ ^

1. 03:13:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think that some 8 running fire of note are difficult in Easy or Noraml diff.You should arrange it what it is. done

Hitsound
There are too few whistles.

[Lunaties]

general
AR+1 OD+1 Because BPM is fast, and this Dif is most difficult Dif in this map.A degree of difficulty like this is more just right. i don't think so
I think that it is bad to start at 02:53:747.How about that begin with 02:48:413? noooo, it would shorten the break time orz

Spacing

1. 01:00:414 (7,8,9) - How about in this way? that (8) makes the distance a bit far
   
   Spacing

   

1. 01:21:414 (6) - Ctrl+g I think that distance may be far from (7)

Rhythm

1. 00:50:747 (8) - How about in this way? hmmm i prefer mine
   
   Rhythm

   

1. 02:08:081 (8) - ^^

1. 02:53:747 (1,2,3,4) - The rhythm here is strange.How about in this way? are you sure about this 1/3 slider?
   
   Rhythm

   

Hitsound
It is the same as Relaxing dif,there are too few whistles.



I love this song<3I pray to do ranked. good luck!

Snow Lover wrote:

-RIKKA-'s Queue　Randam Mod

I think that English is funny. Please forgive it. 　:o

[Relaxing]

01:25:247 (1) - turn better don't add because there's a spinner afterwards

03:23:913 (4) - 03:24:247 start from here

Please put a note from 03:23:913 to 03:24:080 alright

↑Placement example


[Lunaties]

00:45:663 add a note bad rhythm

00:52:164 (5) - Note deletion. There is sense of incongruity. errr i don't think so

00:56:164 (2) - ^ ^

00:58:830 (2) - ^ ^

01:20:414 (1) - Spacing includes sense of incongruity. X:168 Y:300　Recommend this coordinate. ^

SPOILER

02:02:997 add a note same as 00:45:663

02:09:497 (5) - Note deletion. There is sense of incongruity. nothing bad here

02:13:498 (2) - ^ ^

02:16:164 (2) - ^ ^

02:58:913 add a note nope

02:58:997 ^ okay

03:04:163 ^ i hear no beat there

Good luck

thanks for modding

sjoy wrote:

Why don't you make a real Lunatic diff?

sheela901 wrote:

[General]
There's an inconsistent in the combo colors. Use same the same colors to all difficulties. this again. i swear i already make the color consistency at both diff :3

[Relaxing]
00:11:080 (1) - Flip it vertically, and rotate it 90° anticlockwise. After that, move it to x:328 y:144 for a flow. not bad
00:28:747 (2) - Try to improve this slider. A wave slider like: little dislike the wave, but fixed on my own

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00:40:413 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make another pattern. i won't change this for some reason
02:22:413 (2,3,4) - Try to make this: fixed on my way

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[Lunaties]
00:06:414 (3) - Remove this note. But, to say, 00:06:080 (2,3,4) sounds weird. not really. it's follow the drum sound
00:08:747 (2,3,4) - Same as above. ^
For the two suggestions above, make them like: 00:13:747 (1,2,3,4) . i prefer current to make a variety pattern here

Cool difficulty.

Good Luck and here's a star.

328,136,61413,6,0,B|312:32|312:32|256:32,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

328,136,61413,6,0,B|312:32|312:32|256:32,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Komeiji Hatsu wrote:

❤eat~~
❤i like this
❤suggestions
❤count for little

[❤Lunaties❤]

❤~~i love your rhythm，perfect！thank you ~

❤~~add a colour replace coloure，according to Koishi‘s clothing yeah why not

❤~~03:47:080 (1) - add a ❤ to replace the boring spinner↓↓↓ boring u said? .__. but hey i love that love shape'd slider. can you give me an example code? i might replace it

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❤~~03:24:247 (3,1) - ^……↓↓↓ i want the code 1st :3

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❤~~00:17:747 (5,6,1,2,3) -considering other parts of your map……i think ↓↓↓better oh yea seems better. k fixed

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❤~~00:09:247 (4,5,6) - make parallel or like your 03:36:581 (4,5,6) - 03:41:913 (4,5,6) - ok moved the tail 1 grid up

❤~~00:06:414 (3) - （87.167）meh idk if it's still not prefectly stacked. fixed

❤~~00:29:080 (4,5) - ……↓↓↓…… i prefer the current since both it's head and tail has clap on it so i keep better on straight slider

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❤~~00:06:580 (4,5) - bend 00:06:580 (4) - or move 00:07:080 (5) - like ↑↑↑……pay attention to others that same nothing change on this. i'll keep mine

❤~~00:34:414 (4,5) - 00:34:080 (2,3) - exchange position it's better not to make a jump. i guess

❤~~01:24:080 (2,3,4,5,6) - inaccurate……make a note in Y axis，ctrl+shift+R……72°……can be perfect flows bad from (2) to (3). so i'll keep mine

❤~~01:36:414 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ same reason as ^

❤~~00:40:080 (1,2) - it's better not to stack them，Music no pause，use stack when 00:26:414 (6,7) - i stack these notes based on something whatever da "dug dug" drum sound here. so i think it's okay

❤~~00:53:247 (1,2,3) - angle too big……plz steady↓↓↓ i testplayed with some of my friend and they said not a big matter here. should no problem

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❤~~00:54:580 (4,5,6) - ^ same reason as ^

❤~~03:39:747 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - not beautiful…… i won't change this. yeah really won't change this

❤~~your normal diff …… a lot of it is detail is done bad，like 01:21:080 (2,3,4,1) - ，distance……keep distance snap open in normal&easy，what‘more，your can break 3.25 star if bat think it's no problem i want to remake this diffff so badddd ;w;

❤~~maybe your are generous man……but……turn IadzXenon down！he just a newmapper now hey2 no need to saying rude to other people. basically i am a new mapper too

IadzXenon wrote:

你好！
Thanks for Vhy udh mod beatmapku. Sesuai janjiku "I will mod you beatmap back... " loh? .__.

Relaxing :
- 01:01:413 mungkin perlu d'ubah bentuknya, code :

328,136,61413,6,0,B|312:32|312:32|256:32,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

or

328,136,61413,6,0,B|312:32|312:32|256:32,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

- *Kenapa 01:25:580 beda sama 02:42:913 ? 02:42:913 ada reversenya kalo 01:25:580 nggak ada? Adain. oh keliru yang di 02:42:580 (4) emang harusnya ga pake reverse :3
# 01:25:580

# 02:42:913

*Atau sangat aku saranin spinner 01:25:747 tarik ke 01:25:580
hapus reverse 02:42:913 dan tarik juga spinner 02:43:080 ke 02:42:913 ini bertujuan supaya nggak tanggung kalo dimainin di mode osu!mania / taiko.
01:25:580
Before

After

02:42:913
Before

After

- 01:43:080 dan 01:43:747 maybe sound look good if you delete the claps ty for pointing this out

Lunaties :
Hitsounds + desain sudah cukub bagus menurutku. Cuma ya ada saran yang sama kayak di Relaxing di 01:25:580 sama 02:42:913 hapus reversenya terus tarik spinnernya.
Well this is my mod. Sorry if this not helped anything for you.

Hmhmhmhm memang bener kalo cuma ada 2 diff, normal ama insane aja maka kemungkinan kecil ni beatmap bisa ranked. Gimana kalo aku buat hard diffnya? Ntar kamu bisa ubah lagi sesuai keinginanmu... btw itu hard lho

thanks for checking
aaandddddddddd ~

IadzXenon wrote:

Aku nggak tau maunya orang yang nulis "mungkin kamu adalah orang yang murah hati……tapi……tolak IadzXenon！dia hanya pembuat map baru sekarang" itu apa? jangan tanya saya .___.

Emang aku ini pertama kali bikin beatmap dan pertamakali modding dan nggak punya pengalaman. Tapi bukan berarti aku nggak tau apa2! Aku tau aturan2 beatmap yang ranked itu kayak gimana aja. Namanya juga belajar emangnya salah?! Seenaknya ngerendahin orang! kalo saya pribadi sih, mod bagus ato jelek ya ngga pedul2 amat.cuma bisa menghargai aja

Lunaties maaf ya kalo modku nggak membantumu tapi itu udah semampuku sebagai orang yang nggak berpengalaman modding...

cirnocon wrote:

Hi lunaties~
Overall
Try to change the normal type hit hitsounds to the default normal hit hitsounds, maybe it looks more suitable than the hitsound you used?

i'm new to modding, so i can't find something more to improved.
Anyway, Good luck.

Vhy wrote:

ahahaha kan uda dibilangin itu diff uda kek sejenis insane, disuruh bikin diff lagi ngeyel ga mau :3
tak bikin in yang hard ta?

RIP 2nd map lelelelelel