Kurosaki Maon - Memories Last (TV Size) · forum

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-09-22T07:23:41+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on woensdag 10 december 2014 at 23:49:58

Artist: Kurosaki Maon
Title: Memories Last (TV Size)
Source: とある魔术の禁书目録Ⅱ
Tags: a certain magical index J.C Staff Amamiya Yuko mintong89 Oyatsu Skystar ending Toaru Majutsu no Index II Mintong
BPM: 173
Filesize: 9356kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:

Insane (4,49 stars, 330 notes)
mint's Hard (3,56 stars, 270 notes)
Normal (1,93 stars, 142 notes)
Oyatsu's Easy (1,62 stars, 101 notes)
Skystar's Insane (4,51 stars, 385 notes)

Download: Kurosaki Maon - Memories Last (TV Size)
Download: Kurosaki Maon - Memories Last (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
To Aru Majutsu no Index II 2nd Ending~
Redownload if you downloaded before 9 October 2013
Thanks jonathanlfj for mp3/video~!! :3/
Easy by Oyatsu Finished~
Normal by me Finished~
Hard by Mintong Finshed~
Insane by me Finished~
Skystar's Insane by Amamiya Yuko Finished~

Last edited by xChippy 2014-12-10T22:51:05+00:00, edited 107 times in total.

- Tu -

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- Tu - 2013-09-22T08:19:40+00:00

Index :3333

ritsu-tanaika

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ritsu-tanaika 2013-09-24T06:21:28+00:00

Can I do Hard for this? Thanks!

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-09-24T19:11:58+00:00

ritsu-tanaika wrote:
Can I do Hard for this? Thanks!

Answered through PM

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-10-07T02:44:04+00:00

sorry for delay, finished!
http://puu.sh/4JFhT.rar

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-10-07T11:05:40+00:00

Thx updated!
Ready for mod :3~

Skystar

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Skystar 2013-10-07T11:43:04+00:00

go go :3

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-10-10T14:14:14+00:00

Hi ~ xChippy
As PM request :3

If you don't agree something pointed out , just refuse it ~

[Oyatsu's Easy]

00:46:096(2,3) - maybe set the rhythm like.
SPOILER

[Normal]

Great !

[mint's Hard]

這個clap真的好大聲.....
00:15:923(4) - 這個slider ctrl + G 感覺打起來比較順手
SPOILER

不知道怎麼說,所以用畫的:P
轉過之後移動感覺圓滑些

找不出其他可以提的了..

[Skystar]

Awesome map !!!

但是Hitsound好震撼好可怕 /o\

[Insane]

wow OD 9 , so high to me ;w;

00:08:466(2) - Umm... seems I would want to suggest to remove this note , cus this place have same rhythm with 00:02:224 - 00:03:611 and 00:04:998 - 00:06:386 , so you can make it unitary.
00:34:305(1) - Keep same distance with front short sliders ?
00:52:339(1,2,3,4) - Try to use closer distance on front(2)~(1) and (1)~(2) , than bigger distence on (2)~(3) and (3)~(4) ? make a stage up effect.
Umm.... maybe like this :
EX

feel good during play >w<
00:42:628(1,2) - Connection these two note into a slider ? I feel it will balance with 00:39:854(1,2) -
01:03:784(7,8,1) - Maybe set these note like this pattern if you want , seems fun during playing.
SPOILER

one pc testplay

God OD 9 , I can't get S rank in 1 PC ...

Good luck :3

sorry for short mod , I am not good on it ...

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-10-11T15:00:07+00:00

leon1341414 wrote:
Hi ~ xChippy
As PM request :3

If you don't agree something pointed out , just refuse it ~

[Normal]
Great !

[Insane]
wow OD 9 , so high to me ;w; aight.. considering changing
00:08:466(2) - Umm... seems I would want to suggest to remove this note , cus this place have same rhythm with 00:02:224 - 00:03:611 and 00:04:998 - 00:06:386 , so you can make it unitary. well actually the sound is here a bit different that's why I also changed the rythm
00:34:305(1) - Keep same distance with front short sliders ? fixed
00:52:339(1,2,3,4) - Try to use closer distance on front(2)~(1) and (1)~(2) , than bigger distence on (2)~(3) and (3)~(4) ? make a stage up effect.
Umm.... maybe like this :
EX

feel good during play >w<
I'll consider, since I don't think a build up is needed as the music is kinda the same :3
00:42:628(1,2) - Connection these two note into a slider ? I feel it will balance with 00:39:854(1,2) - changed the others instead~
01:03:784(7,8,1) - Maybe set these note like this pattern if you want , seems fun during playing. fixed :3
SPOILER
one pc testplay

God OD 9 , I can't get S rank in 1 PC ...
Good luck :3

sorry for short mod , I am not good on it ...

Thanks for the mod leon~ :3/!!!

Oyatsu

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Oyatsu 2013-10-12T01:08:22+00:00

First!! Add all name of all GD mapper in tags plz

or there is some wrong about tgas btw this diff and other diff

lkx_Shore

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lkx_Shore 2013-10-13T13:06:33+00:00

just star

Nwolf

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Nwolf 2013-10-13T17:02:06+00:00

woof from my queue

[General]

Okay this might be just me being a little bit strange but maybe move the red bar to 00:00:316 instead so it's not somewhere before the mp3 starts and add one at 00:01:010 so the first beat is at the right place :3

Everything else looks very nice actually

I'm sad nothing to say :<

riffy

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riffy 2013-10-17T16:06:49+00:00

Phew~ I'm a little bit slower than you expect me to be.

[General]

Kiai on your [Memories] diff starts 1 ms later than it should
You should fix the title, it's supposed to be メモリーズ・ラスト.
Disable Widescreen Support. Disable and make sure that it's disabled on EVERY diff. It makes NO sense to keep it enabled. As long as you have NO widescreen storyboard you have to keep it disabled.
Tbh, colours are a bit annoying and unpleasant. Also, the blue one is too bright. Can't you try something else like..
...like this
```
[Colours]
Combo1 : 205,204,152
Combo2 : 130,156,189
Combo3 : 182,158,199
```

[Oyatsu's Easy]

Song itself has a quite changeable rhythm, I'd consider using HP1. It's ok and it won't hurt the balance of this mapset. Do it, so beginners won't have problems with that changeable rhythm. :<
00:30:143 (1) - I'm sure that this NC is extra. Try to keep comboing more consistent. Some of your combos are too short/too long. It will confuse beginners. Please, try to fix it, you're a good mapper and you can do it yourself. But feel free to ask me if you are unsure.
01:16:964 - and why do ignore this beat? I feel like you can place an 1/2 slider here to make your rhythm a bit more consistent and reasonable. Don't worry, it fits here perfectly!
01:23:380 (3,3) - this is REALLY important. I'm sure that this is UNPLAYABLE and MUST be fixed. - such things are unreadable for beginners. The sliders are TOO short and the second repeat on them is TOTALLY unexpected. Such things aren't recommended even for a [Normal] diffs. What to do? Use something like this instead! Beats are sitill reflected in the map and it is much more playable. Please, keep in mind that this is the easiest diff!

Seriously, you should pay more attention to the playability of your diffs. Think about beginners, I'm begging you! Your patterns aren't bad and rhythm is quite ok, but it's too hard!

[Normal]

00:32:224 (2) - this pattern is okay, but I feel like using CtrlG would make your flow even better here. Try it, please!
00:53:553 - 01:03:611 - 01:09:160 - 01:14:709 - I feel bad about these beats. I mean, they're actually pretty loud and it's easy to hear them.

The diff itself is fine, I quite like your patterns and rhythm. Good job!

[mint's Hard]

Increase OD and HP by one tick, there's no need to keep them SO low. This is still a [Hard] diff, remember!
00:04:998 (4) - don't you feel like there's a missed new combo? according to your pattern and that sweet whistle sound you should place a new combo here!
Note: disagree? remove a new combo from 00:07:773 (1) - !
00:06:212 (7,1) - I don't mind jumps in a [Hard] diff, but you should keep the DS on reasonable level. Seriously, x2.6 is too hard for the calm part. It's too unexpected, breaks the flow and doesn't fits with the music. Try to find another way to map this part or reduce its distance!
00:33:958 (7,8,9,10,1) - 00:45:056 (4,5,6,7,1) - 01:04:478 (4,5,6,7,1) - 01:10:027 (5,6,7,8) - 01:15:576 (3,4,5,6,1) - we have TWO insane diffs. There's no need to use streams EVEN i the [Hard], please, try to replace this stream with something easier. Keep the mapset more balanced
Note: triplets are fine, but mor than 3 notes with 1/4 snap divisor are too hard.
00:50:952 (1,1) - too soon after the spinner. Players need some time to focus on objects and to read the pattern. Consider keeping at least 1/1 empty space to make it more playable!

I don't like your jumps and the diff feels too hard. Low diff settings and hard patterns, diff feels unbalanced and it makes me sad. Try to work a bit more on it, please!

[Skystar]

Try OD 7 because streams with this OD are too crazy, imo. Well, your diff is crazy, and it's cool. But OD8 is too much, I think.

Everything else seems to be good.

[Memories]

00:21:992 (1,2,1,2,1) - well, these combos are too short. At least it feels so. Previous combos were 2-4 times longer and it makes your comboing a bit inconsistent.
01:10:027 (1) - well, this combo was really strange here, imo. o3o

Everything here seems to be good. Comboing is a little bit random, but whatver. I like your style!

Pretty cool mapset, but you can work on it a bti more!

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Best of luck!

xChippy

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Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-10-19T20:10:22+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Phew~ I'm a little bit slower than you expect me to be.

[General]
Kiai on your [Memories] diff starts 1 ms later than it should
You should fix the title, it's supposed to be メモリーズ・ラスト.
Disable Widescreen Support. Disable and make sure that it's disabled on EVERY diff. It makes NO sense to keep it enabled. As long as you have NO widescreen storyboard you have to keep it disabled.
Tbh, colours are a bit annoying and unpleasant. Also, the blue one is too bright. Can't you try something else like..
...like this
[Colours]
Combo1 : 205,204,152
Combo2 : 130,156,189
Combo3 : 182,158,199
fixed these in all diffs~~
[Normal]
00:32:224 (2) - this pattern is okay, but I feel like using CtrlG would make your flow even better here. Try it, please! fixed
00:53:553 - 01:03:611 - 01:09:160 - 01:14:709 - I feel bad about these beats. I mean, they're actually pretty loud and it's easy to hear them. I know but won't it make the normal even harder ><?, I'll consider putting some thing on those

The diff itself is fine, I quite like your patterns and rhythm. Good job! :3/
[Memories]
00:21:992 (1,2,1,2,1) - well, these combos are too short. At least it feels so. Previous combos were 2-4 times longer and it makes your comboing a bit inconsistent. aight fixed
01:10:027 (1) - well, this combo was really strange here, imo. o3o Hmm I think it's better to keep it like this for better readability tho ><

Everything here seems to be good. Comboing is a little bit random, but whatver. I like your style! Yay thanks :3/
Pretty cool mapset, but you can work on it a bti more!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Thanks for modding Bakari~~ <3

Nwolf wrote:
woof from my queue

[General]

Okay this might be just me being a little bit strange but maybe move the red bar to 00:00:316 instead so it's not somewhere before the mp3 starts and add one at 00:01:010 so the first beat is at the right place :3 I'm not sure about this o-o I'll see :3

Everything else looks very nice actually

I'm sad nothing to say :<

Thanks for taking a look anyways :3/

@lkx_Shore
Thanks for the star~ :3

Ayesha Altugle

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Joined October 2011

Ayesha Altugle 2013-10-20T02:14:08+00:00

[Oyatsu's Easy]
00:19:044 (1) - remove clap on the end of the slider and remove NC
00:30:143 (1) - remove NC to make the comboing consistent
00:41:241 (2) - remove clap on the end of the slider and replace it with a whistle instead
00:45:056 (4) - remove clap
00:57:888 (4) - this slider can be more symmetric with this code

452,116,57888,2,0,B|444:180|376:200|376:200|336:228,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Normal]
00:28:755 (1) - change the sampleset on the start of the slider and remove the whistle
00:39:854 (1) - remove the clap on the reverse arrow part of the slider
00:43:669 (3) - remove whistle and change this one to clap hitsound
00:59:969 (2) - remove finish sound on the start of the slider

I'm not good in modding harder diffs

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

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Satellite 2013-10-20T04:35:12+00:00

Hi xChippy

[General]
Source: Toaru Majutsu no Index II
Artist: 黒崎真音

黒崎 真音

Tag: add "ending" "とある魔術の禁書目録II"

[Oyatsu's Easy]
00:42:281 - add note.
00:49:565 (1) - spinner start 00:49:391 - here. same as other diff.

[Normal]
00:51:299 (1) - I guess. need's more break.

[mint's Hard]
OD+1
Looks good.

[Memories]
00:06:732 (2) - Not too fond of the slider flow here. try this. and my suggestion

SPOILER

00:10:374 (3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with melody,like this

00:22:859 (6,7,8,9,1) - ummm..It's ugly. I guess used distance snap better.
00:57:715 (5) - Try CTRL+G.
01:14:189 (3) - Move x196 y116 better (DS2.00 jump)
01:24:247 (3) - add Nc

[Skystar]
Cool

Good Luck.

-Neipezi

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Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2013-10-20T07:56:09+00:00

hi, M4M?
~~i do not have time, i just had to queues~~ sorry

[Oyatsu's Easy]
none..?

[Normal]
00:32:224 (2) -

BOX1

01:13:149 (1) - crtl + h? (change direction)

[mint's Hard]
00:06:559 (1) - x:396 y:124 move?

BOX1

placed diagonally

00:14:623 (4,5) - whistle change?
00:17:397 (5,6) - ^
00:20:172 (5,6) - ^
00:42:368 (5,6) - ^
00:56:328 - here circle add?
00:59:102 (4,5,1) - x:444 y:320 move?
01:15:663 (4,5,6) - whistle change?

[Skystar]
00:21:646 (3) - sotf finish?
00:37:599 (3) - NC add?
00:59:276 (1) - sotf finish?
01:18:177 - here circle add?

[Memories]
00:11:848 (11,12,13) - S:C3 whistle add?
00:13:842 (6) - NC add?
00:16:617 (8) - ^
00:18:871 (6) - ^
00:22:946 (7,8,9) - finish add?
00:41:588 (5,6) - modified slightly to the right direction?
00:43:842 (6) - NC add?
00:45:750 (3,4,5) - jump?
00:46:617 (7) - NC add?
00:54:940 (5) - ^
01:01:357 (6) - ^
01:03:264 (6) - ^
01:04:131 (8) - ^
01:06:039 (5) - ^
01:09:680 (6) - ^

x_x;;

xChippy

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Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-10-20T09:57:15+00:00

Reply to vahn10's mod

vahn10 wrote:
[Normal]
00:28:755 (1) - change the sampleset on the start of the slider and remove the whistle To which sample set o-o?
00:39:854 (1) - remove the clap on the reverse arrow part of the slider nope there is a clap in the music
00:43:669 (3) - remove whistle and change this one to clap hitsound no clap sound in the music so nope
00:59:969 (2) - remove finish sound on the start of the slider fixed
Thanks for modding vahn10 :3
I'm not good in modding harder diffs

Reply to Satelite's mod~

Satellite wrote:
Hi xChippy Hi Satelite~~ :3/

[General]
Source: Toaru Majutsu no Index II
Artist: 黒崎真音
黒崎 真音
Tag: add "ending" "とある魔術の禁書目録II" fixed all

[Normal]
00:51:299 (1) - I guess. need's more break. I'm not sure tho for now instead I moved it a bit more center to make it easier

[Memories]
00:06:732 (2) - Not too fond of the slider flow here. try this. and my suggestion fixed :3

SPOILER
00:10:374 (3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with melody,like this Hmm I'll consider changing since I think this rythm change is fine tho it's also in the music~~

00:22:859 (6,7,8,9,1) - ummm..It's ugly. I guess used distance snap better. :O fixed
00:57:715 (5) - Try CTRL+G. Uuhm tried but i think this place needs a jump ><
01:14:189 (3) - Move x196 y116 better (DS2.00 jump) fixed
01:24:247 (3) - add Nc fixed
Thanks for modding Satelite >w<
Good Luck.

Reply to -Kirito's mod

-Kirito wrote:
hi, M4M?
~~i do not have time, i just had to queues~~ sorry

[Normal]
00:32:224 (2) - nope spinner is better to start there imo
[box=BOX1]
01:13:149 (1) - crtl + h? (change direction) ok fixed

[Memories]
00:11:848 (11,12,13) - S:C3 whistle add? nope
00:13:842 (6) - NC add?
00:16:617 (8) - ^
00:18:871 (6) - ^
00:22:946 (7,8,9) - finish add? no finish sound :O
00:41:588 (5,6) - modified slightly to the right direction? fixed
00:43:842 (6) - NC add?
00:45:750 (3,4,5) - jump? nope doesn't play nice imo ><
00:46:617 (7) - NC add?
00:54:940 (5) - ^
01:01:357 (6) - ^
01:03:264 (6) - ^
01:04:131 (8) - ^
01:06:039 (5) - ^
01:09:680 (6) - ^

For the NC's I''m not sure I kinda like the way I nced this time but changed some :3
Thanks for modding Kirito :33
x_x;;

Will be modding yours soon :3/

Skystar

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Joined May 2011

Skystar 2013-10-20T14:49:43+00:00

no change, sorry ;;

Pagno

175 posts

Joined September 2012

Pagno 2013-10-20T19:33:32+00:00

Hi! From your queue~

I apologize for the short mod, but that's all I could find! The map is ready to be ranked in my opinion, except some tiny issues!

Black: Just a suggestion!
Blue: You should fix this

~ Mod here ~

[Oyatsu's Easy]
00:46:443 (3) - Consider converting this into a ½ slider
01:00:316 (3) - ^

[Normal]
00:15:576 (2,3) - You put many patterns like this one which are, in my opinion, pretty troublesome for a Normal

Except that, it's well made!

[mint's Hard]
00:13:495 (1,2) - Add a note on the red tick between those two

01:20:779 (2) - Remove this and place a slider just like this one 01:20:085 (1) instead

This hard is actually... hard!

[Skystar]
Nothing much to say on this diff, the only minor issue, this 01:20:432 (3) isn't perfectly stacked under 01:19:391 (1)

[Memories]
00:02:744 (4,1) - Doesn't it feel like it's missing a note on the red tick? Maybe convert 00:02:744 (4) into a ½ slider
00:05:518 (4,1) - ^

00:14:883 (1) - Finish

00:31:530 (3) - Remove reverse arrow and fill the empty space with an ½ slider or two hitcircles

00:51:299 (1) - Make this last ½ less and move it forward by ½ on the timeline, making it start on the red tick, then put a hitcircle on the previous white tick

00:57:021 (2) - CTRL+G?

Very nice mapset! This will definitely get ranked soon!

Asgard

639 posts

Joined June 2011

Asgard 2013-10-21T03:30:19+00:00

[memorial]
00:11:588 (8) - NC here
00:30:836 (8) - i can't move mouse smoothly i think you can reverse this note
00:39:160 (7) - NC
01:21:819 (3) - wrong distance i think for keeping distance is more better
01:22:859 (3) - ^
01:24:594 (3) - ^

[others]
well.. other diffs are really looks good

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-10-21T06:23:33+00:00

fix some thanks

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 23 - Memories Last (tv-size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 52753
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Memories Last (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:メモリーズ・ラスト (TV Size)
Artist:Kurosaki Maon
ArtistUnicode:黒崎 真音
Creator:xChippy
Version:mint's Hard
Source:Toaru Majutsu no Index II
Tags:a certain magical index J.C Staff Amamiya Yuko mintong89 Oyatsu Skystar ending とある魔術の禁書目録II
BeatmapID:309991
BeatmapSetID:118362

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.40000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"To_Aru_Majutsu_no_Index_Wallpaper_31cgx.jpg",0,0
Video,-170,"video (2).avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
-377,346.820809248555,4,2,2,40,1,0
6559,-100,4,2,5,70,0,0
7079,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
10721,-100,4,2,5,40,0,0
11588,-100,4,2,5,70,0,0
53726,-100,4,2,5,70,0,1
75923,-133.333333333333,4,2,5,70,0,0
89796,-133.333333333333,4,2,5,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 205,204,152
Combo2 : 130,156,189
Combo3 : 182,158,199

[HitObjects]
140,56,1010,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,128,1183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,196,1357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,172,1530,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,172,1877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,172,2224,6,0,P|296:160|364:196,1,140.000000596046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,260,2744,2,0,L|388:356,1,70.000000298023,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,276,3091,2,0,L|493:206,1,70.000000298023,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,120,3438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,60,3611,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,56,3784,6,0,P|316:60|272:88,1,70.000000298023,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,172,4131,2,0,P|300:168|344:140,1,70.000000298023,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,128,4651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-10-21T07:34:33+00:00

Asgard wrote:
[memorial]
00:11:588 (8) - NC here nope for consisntency
00:30:836 (8) - i can't move mouse smoothly i think you can reverse this note fix my own changes
00:39:160 (7) - NC nope for consistency
01:21:819 (3) - wrong distance i think for keeping distance is more better
01:22:859 (3) - ^
01:24:594 (3) - ^
Imo they play fine like this since the music is also softer there
[others]
well.. other diffs are really looks good

Pagno wrote:
Hi! From your queue~

I apologize for the short mod, but that's all I could find! The map is ready to be ranked in my opinion, except some tiny issues!

Black: Just a suggestion!
Blue: You should fix this

~ Mod here ~
[Oyatsu's Easy]
00:46:443 (3) - Consider converting this into a ½ slider
01:00:316 (3) - ^
nope will make it to hard

[Normal]
00:15:576 (2,3) - You put many patterns like this one which are, in my opinion, pretty troublesome for a Normal imo they´re fine like this its in the music but yea its not that hard

Except that, it's well made!

[Memories]
00:02:744 (4,1) - Doesn't it feel like it's missing a note on the red tick? Maybe convert 00:02:744 (4) into a ½ slider
00:05:518 (4,1) - ^
these yea... I kinda like the way they are now o.o
00:14:883 (1) - Finish

00:31:530 (3) - Remove reverse arrow and fill the empty space with an ½ slider or two hitcircles fixed

00:51:299 (1) - Make this last ½ less and move it forward by ½ on the timeline, making it start on the red tick, then put a hitcircle on the previous white tick
fixed

00:57:021 (2) - CTRL+G? nope bad flow

Very nice mapset! This will definitely get ranked soon!

Thanks for modding both :3
Updated Oyatsu his diff by myself as requested

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-10-22T02:21:20+00:00

m⑨m

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
i think i know why ur video is named "video (2)" :3

[Oyatsu's Easy]
00:27:368 (4) - remove the whistle here to keep consistent with 00:24:594 (2) and 00:30:143 (4)
00:42:628 (1,2,3) - the rhythm here felt a bit weird to play, mostly because 00:43:669 (2) lands on an insignificant beat in the music; might want to reuse the rhythm at 00:39:854 (1,2,3)
00:46:096 (2,3,4,5) - having it run in a curve flows alot better imo:

SPOILER

01:00:316 (3) - i would remove the repeat here, considering what you did at 01:16:964 (2) which fits alot better
01:14:536 (1) - unneeded NC here
01:20:432 (1) - ^

[Normal]
too much whistle spamming which sounds really overwhelming when volume is high, consider removing them on minor beats like the shorter white ticks and some red ticks (if you have questions pm me)
00:32:224 (2) - sounds more natural if you started this at 00:32:050, to keep consistent with rhythms like 00:29:449 (2,3) and 00:26:675 (2,3)
00:41:068 (4) - is the finish intentional? if yes then add it on 00:43:842 (4) as well
01:09:333 (3) - i'd make this a shot 1/2 slider to capture to vocals at 01:09:507
01:19:391 (2) - the repeat should be a clap
01:23:727 (2,3) - the stress on the sliders you have here is a bit off; 01:23:727 (2) should be a repeat slider, and have 01:24:073 (3) start at 01:24:247 with NC

[mint's Hard]
the soft-hitnormal5 should have a higher volume, i am using 100% hitsound volume here and it is still barely audible, hence it could hinder rankability
00:11:935 - i liked the 1/1 pause too, but having this beat unmapped felt really weird during game play
00:52:513 (1,2,3) - nazi but a equilateral triangle here would be cool
01:11:414 (3,1) - a rhythm that follows vocals plays better here imo:

SPOILER

01:27:108 (1) - end the spinner at the same place as other diffs for consistency
solid diff

[Memories]
i was gonna say something about difficulty settings but lets see how the current spread rolls out
the whistle issue is present also in this diff, except since you have more object density it doesnt sound as irritating
annd one last thing, since you are using HP8 OD8 it is wise to NC more often to prevent failing too easily, currently you use NC every 2 4/4 measures, change that to every 4/4 measure pls
00:15:923 (5,6,7) - this back and forth jump felt a bit awkward to play, have 00:16:270 (7) positioned like this:

SPOILER

00:22:686 (5) - try a stack on 00:23:380 (2), i find that flows better
00:34:825 (2,3) - reverse the rhythm here with slider first then the circle, matches the guitar holds better
00:49:218 (3) - do a stack on 00:47:484 (9), the angle feels nicer to jump with
01:01:703 (1) - instead of having a lonely slider here with its own colour, why not move the NC a beat ahead to 01:01:357 (6)? this way it is both readable and fits the vocals nicely.
01:10:027 (1) - same as above
01:19:391 (3) - slider end should be a clap

[Skystar]
the intro could use more NCs to keep players alive so they can fail later
00:12:802 (4) - NC should be here considering how you NCed similar spots like 00:15:576 (1) and 00:18:351 (1)
00:27:368 (1,2) - i got quite confused here while playing, doing a ctrl+g here makes it alot easier to read imo
00:39:333 (6,7) - nazi spacing, 1 grid down
00:42:281 - i would add another slider here, preferably a copy paste and reposition of 00:41:588 (2), so the flow is not disturbed by the long pause
00:44:362 (2) - instead of 3/4 why not use a 1/2 slider + a note at 00:44:623? this way you cover the sound at 00:44:536 which sounds alot better imo
00:52:339 (1,2) - finishes on these would sound pretty cool
01:12:455 (3) - missing a finish on the start?

guuuuud luckkkkkk :3

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-10-22T06:54:55+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
m⑨m

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
i think i know why ur video is named "video (2)" :3 lol

[Normal]
too much whistle spamming which sounds really overwhelming when volume is high, consider removing them on minor beats like the shorter white ticks and some red ticks (if you have questions pm me) Removed some whistles =w=
00:32:224 (2) - sounds more natural if you started this at 00:32:050, to keep consistent with rhythms like 00:29:449 (2,3) and 00:26:675 (2,3)
00:41:068 (4) - is the finish intentional? if yes then add it on 00:43:842 (4) as well
01:09:333 (3) - i'd make this a shot 1/2 slider to capture to vocals at 01:09:507
01:19:391 (2) - the repeat should be a clap
01:23:727 (2,3) - the stress on the sliders you have here is a bit off; 01:23:727 (2) should be a repeat slider, and have 01:24:073 (3) start at 01:24:247 with NC
all fixed

[Memories]
i was gonna say something about difficulty settings but lets see how the current spread rolls out :3
the whistle issue is present also in this diff, except since you have more object density it doesnt sound as irritating aight I'll try removing some
annd one last thing, since you are using HP8 OD8 it is wise to NC more often to prevent failing too easily, currently you use NC every 2 4/4 measures, change that to every 4/4 measure pls okay switched to 4/4
00:15:923 (5,6,7) - this back and forth jump felt a bit awkward to play, have 00:16:270 (7) positioned like this:
SPOILER
00:22:686 (5) - try a stack on 00:23:380 (2), i find that flows better
00:34:825 (2,3) - reverse the rhythm here with slider first then the circle, matches the guitar holds better
00:49:218 (3) - do a stack on 00:47:484 (9), the angle feels nicer to jump with
01:01:703 (1) - instead of having a lonely slider here with its own colour, why not move the NC a beat ahead to 01:01:357 (6)? this way it is both readable and fits the vocals nicely.
01:10:027 (1) - same as above
01:19:391 (3) - slider end should be a clap
all fixed

guuuuud luckkkkkk :3

Thx for modding jonathan \( ﾟヮﾟ)/ !!
Will be modding yours soon =w=/

WingSilent

2,982 posts

Joined August 2012

WingSilent 2013-10-22T10:55:28+00:00

From #modreqs:

General : Offset -390 sounds better at my ears. (You will have to resnap your timings after changing the offset of course, and this will be available for all diffs, if you don't, you may break most of your sliders and rythm)

Normal :

Here we start modding.

00:21:112 (2) - Place this slider in that way:

Modding Picture

00:23:887 (2) - The tail of this slider should fit the next, place the tail like that:

Modding Picture

00:26:662 (2) - ^
00:31:170 (5) - Move it to x:192 y:8
01:13:136 (1) - Move to x:272 y:80
01:17:991 (4) - Hm, you should up a bit this slider, it's out of the screen
01:24:234 (1) - Place it to x216 y:216

Skystar

00:08:107 (4,6) - Stack theses notes
00:11:748 (10) - This slider is too small to be a stream
00:16:083 (1,3) - Ugly overlap
00:17:557 (4,1) - stack theses notes to the slider tail
00:18:338 (1,3) - Ugly overlap
00:18:685 (2) - move this note to x:312 y:104
00:38:974 (3) - ^ (x:320 y:96)
00:39:841 (1) - ^ (x:152 y:320)
00:40:188 (2) - ^ (x:112 y:200)
00:44:349 (2,1) - Stack the tail of the slider 2 with the start of the slider 1
01:21:806 (1) - Why this sliders is missing its repeat arrow..? Better having a slider triplet to follow the music

01:22:500 (1,1) - Unrankable: 2 notes on the same time
01:24:581 (1) - Add a repeat arrow to make a triplet

Memories

Nothing bad to say about that diff, but make sure if you change the offset, to resnap your timings, because it moves your green ticks and breaks your sliders speeds, especially into memories, wich is a good diff with a good offset like -390, trust me.

Hope this mod helped you.

Good luck with the rest.

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-10-22T11:02:52+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
m⑨m

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[mint's Hard]
the soft-hitnormal5 should have a higher volume, i am using 100% hitsound volume here and it is still barely audible, hence it could hinder rankability i will consider this
00:11:935 - i liked the 1/1 pause too, but having this beat unmapped felt really weird during game play changed
00:52:513 (1,2,3) - nazi but a equilateral triangle here would be cool changed
01:11:414 (3,1) - a rhythm that follows vocals plays better here imo:
SPOILER
changed
01:27:108 (1) - end the spinner at the same place as other diffs for consistency changed
solid diff

guuuuud luckkkkkk :3

thanks :O

SPOILER

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ArtistUnicode:黒崎 真音
Creator:xChippy
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Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Skystar 2013-10-22T11:17:44+00:00

jonathanlfj

jonathanlfj wrote:
[Skystar]
the intro could use more NCs to keep players alive so they can fail later
00:12:802 (4) - NC should be here considering how you NCed similar spots like 00:15:576 (1) and 00:18:351 (1)
00:27:368 (1,2) - i got quite confused here while playing, doing a ctrl+g here makes it alot easier to read imo
00:39:333 (6,7) - nazi spacing, 1 grid down
00:42:281 - i would add another slider here, preferably a copy paste and reposition of 00:41:588 (2), so the flow is not disturbed by the long pause
00:44:362 (2) - instead of 3/4 why not use a 1/2 slider + a note at 00:44:623? this way you cover the sound at 00:44:536 which sounds alot better imo i just let this 3/4 slider to be considered as a "slow slider" to compare with 00:44:709 (1,2) - , also triplet rhythm here should be weird cuz no sound in the music
00:52:339 (1,2) - finishes on these would sound pretty cool
01:12:455 (3) - missing a finish on the start?
others fixed, quite pro modding, ty!

no change for Lumina's mod, sorry those suggestions would obviously break my style and there's no any unrankable stuff, i dont get it honestly.

http://puu.sh/4WqGM.osu

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-10-22T11:34:00+00:00

Lumina wrote:
From #modreqs:

General : Offset -390 sounds better at my ears. (You will have to resnap your timings after changing the offset of course, and this will be available for all diffs, if you don't, you may break most of your sliders and rythm) srry but imo that offset is too early so nope no change

Normal :

Here we start modding.

00:21:112 (2) - Place this slider in that way: fixed
Modding Picture
00:23:887 (2) - The tail of this slider should fit the next, place the tail like that: huh its already like that o.o oh well did some tweeking
Modding Picture
00:26:662 (2) - ^ ^
00:31:170 (5) - Move it to x:192 y:8 don't know why o-o this overlaps seems okay tho
01:13:136 (1) - Move to x:272 y:80 this flows better as the curve will slide to the next hit
01:17:991 (4) - Hm, you should up a bit this slider, it's out of the screen Nope look it's fine ---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1052977
01:24:234 (1) - Place it to x216 y:216 fixed

Memories

Nothing bad to say about that diff, but make sure if you change the offset, to resnap your timings, because it moves your green ticks and breaks your sliders speeds, especially into memories, wich is a good diff with a good offset like -390, trust me.

Hope this mod helped you.

Good luck with the rest.

Thanks for modding~
Updated all diff except Oyatsu's

Kamure

735 posts

Joined August 2009

Kamure 2013-10-23T01:45:37+00:00

Man, I love this song... I even mapped the full version of this a year ago (though it never got ranked and it is now rotting in the graveyard

)

Oh and sorry for the delay (I swear, school is starting to kill me).

Here's the Wandering Mod:

The main issue I have with this map is that the hitsound differences between each mapper is too great.
What I mean is that each mapper uses too much of a certain hitsound, which makes the mapset less cohesive:

mintong uses soft-hitclap5 too much (another suggestion will come later in the post)
Amamiya Yuko uses normal-hitfinish2 too much (though the hitsound itself is obnoxiously out of place in my opinion)
xChippy uses soft-hitwhistle too much in both of his difficulties, but more in [Memories].
Oyatsu actually uses a simplistic but fair volume of hitsounds (but an [Easy] diff warrants that to begin with).

The best way, that I can think of, to solve this problem is use less hitsounds, provide a good balance of hitsounds (like in Oyatsu's), or lower the volume of the places that contain these overused hitsounds.
Just consider this; it's huge nuisance while I was modding.

Other than that, here are the suggestions I have for each difficulty.

Oyatsu's Easy

00:28:755 (1) - Make this area more like a square formation. Like this:
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Normal, in terms of structure and formations, is fine.

Skystar

00:08:466 (3) - I highly suggest moving the slider so that the end of it overlaps circles (4), (5), and (6). It looks bad when it's in the middle of (1) and (2).

mint's Hard

My only problem here is with the use of the soft-hitclap in the triple circles (like 00:14:536) and leading trails (like 01:04:478). There are times when the claps are obnoxious and one or two has to be removed, and there are times when they don't.
In my opinion, these are times when they do:
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00:14:623 (4)
00:17:397 (5)
00:20:172 (5)
00:36:819 (5)
00:39:594 (4)
00:39:680 (5)
00:42:368 (5)
00:42:455 (6)
01:07:426 (5)
01:07:513 (6)
01:10:114 (6)
01:10:287 (8)
01:15:663 (4)
01:15:750 (5)
01:15:836 (6)
Just consider it. If you have any problems, or find this confusing, just ask me...
01:07:599 (1) - Add a clap on the start, remove the clap on the end.
01:21:125 (3) - Remove the clap on the end.
01:26:675 (6) - Add a clap on the start, add a clap on repeat #2 (at 01:26:848).

Memories, again in terms of structure and formations, is fine.

Sorry if this gets confusing.
Good luck!! Here's a star!

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-10-23T05:43:11+00:00

it sounds like you didn't know my hitsound style, sorry no changes.

bigfrog

1,002 posts

Joined October 2011

bigfrog 2013-10-24T12:11:09+00:00

hello! sorry for late...~~i was waiting your map move to pending ._.~~

Oyatsu's Easy
- 01:04:825(1,2) - blanket?
- 01:11:414(2,3) - ^

Normal
- 00:16:096(3) - ahh..i don't know why there are two dots in this slider end :

- 01:23:727(2,1) - try this :

mint's Hard
- 00:30:490(2,3,4) - what about make a triangle of there?
- 00:36:039(2,3) - parallel
- 00:47:484(3) - end one grid right for blanket
- 00:50:258(4,5) - blanket?

Memories
- 00:10:721(1) - maybe try this to get flow :

sorry...i think this map is very perfect already,i just can give few suggestions,it's a bad mod ;_;
anyway,Good Luck ><

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-10-24T20:07:44+00:00

bigfrog wrote:
hello! sorry for late...~~i was waiting your map move to pending ._.~~

Normal
- 00:16:096(3) - ahh..i don't know why there are two dots in this slider end :
fixed
- 01:23:727(2,1) - try this :
I think the current one flows a bit better tho

Memories
- 00:10:721(1) - maybe try this to get flow :
sure why not :3

sorry...i think this map is very perfect already,i just can give few suggestions,it's a bad mod ;_;
anyway,Good Luck ><

@Chamle You're right about the hitsounds but yea I kinda like it this way more with more variation in hitsound each diff since yeah they chose the hitsounds themselves therefore they did it in their own style instead of using mine when they don't like it

Did some changes in hitsound especially normal but yea I think the whistles in Memories fits the music tho >< but changed some than.
Thanks for modding :3

Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2013-10-25T07:10:22+00:00

Memories
00:22:339 (4) - NC?
00:42:802 (2,3,1) - 2 and 3 is a 1/2 rhythm but 3 and 1 is a 1/1 rhythm,but 1 and 2 are at the same place,this may be confused
same reason
00:03:091 (1) -
00:40:547 (1) -
though you use nc I think it they are not very good ,try bigger spacing whem rhythm is 1/1,or stack
01:03:784 (2,1,1) - like this

00:32:917 (1,2,1) - I think they should be stacked,they have same tone
and these two 00:33:438 (2,1) - should be stacked.
but you stacked 00:32:917 (1,2) - and 00:33:264 (1,2) - ,it is very confusing,though nc

00:56:154 (6) -

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00:14:883 (1) -

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00:03:784 (1) -

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other things:
00:32:050 (2,3,4,5,6) - the vocal has a gradual change，so you can make pattern accroding to this

00:33:784 (2,3,4) - you can listen to bgm
may be this is better?

SPOILER

00:49:565 (1) - suggest you to remove it and map this part?

Normal
01:26:675 (2) - why use drum..

mint's Hard
01:22:860 (2,3,4) - 这三个分开一点
01:26:154 (4,5,6) - ^
01:26:675 (6) - 去掉一次折返在最后加个note好一点
00:21:992 (1,2) - 感觉应该这么下？后面两个note换成滑条也行，现在的节奏把相同的音一个放在滑条尾一个放在另一个滑条的头有点难受

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Skystar
怎么好像有点nold的梗
00:51:299 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 前面的一个三角形摆大，然后后面的1叠在前面的3上，摆一个小的三角形？
00:51:472 (2) - 加一个whistle吗
00:33:438 (4) - nc加这里，这个和后面那个音调一样的，前面三个一样的
01:14:883 (2) - 这个不要加whistle了吧

Oyatsu's Easy
fine

Last edited by Kinomi 2013-10-27T02:29:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-10-26T20:00:09+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
Memories
00:22:339 (4) - NC? First I had it like that too but than many complained @.@ I'll see what to do
00:42:802 (2,3,1) - 2 and 3 is a 1/2 rhythm but 3 and 1 is a 1/1 rhythm,but 1 and 2 are at the same place,this may be confused
same reason I don't find it confusing tho o-o aswell as testplayer.. well anyway fixed it for now
00:03:091 (1) - I really think this should be okay tho with the NC o.O Plus it´s just snapped with DS o.O
00:40:547 (1) - Errrr this is snapped with DS o-o
though you use nc I think it they are not very good ,try bigger spacing whem rhythm is 1/1,or stack
01:03:784 (2,1,1) - like this

00:32:917 (1,2,1) - I think they should be stacked,they have same tone
and these two 00:33:438 (2,1) - should be stacked.
but you stacked 00:32:917 (1,2) - and 00:33:264 (1,2) - ,it is very confusing,though nc I don´t hear a difference tho but changed :3

00:56:154 (6) - fixed
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00:14:883 (1) - fixed
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00:03:784 (1) - fixed
SPOILER

other things:
00:32:050 (2,3,4,5,6) - the vocal has a gradual change，so you can make pattern accroding to this aight did some changes

00:33:784 (2,3,4) - you can listen to bgmI think jump is a bit to big tho >.<
may be this is better?
SPOILER

00:49:565 (1) - suggest you to remove it and map this part? Aight mapped it :3

Normal
01:26:675 (2) - why use drum.. Hitsound copier desu :3

mod your diff first.. I will finish the mod tomorrow

Thanks for modding Yomi!! :3/!

Aldwych

2,831 posts

Joined February 2012

Aldwych 2013-11-01T22:22:44+00:00

Ogod, why i didn't see this earlier? T_T

Losertic

461 posts

Joined May 2012

Losertic 2013-11-02T03:39:06+00:00

Hello!

From M4M.

Modding

General

Pass.

Oyatsu's Easy

00:17:310 (4,1) - change this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074253
─ example ) 00:17:310 (4) - move (150,279) , 00:17:657 (1) - move (175,194)
01:15:229 (4,1,2) - change this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074262
─ example ) 01:15:229 (4) - move (421,145) , 01:15:923 (1) - move (381,98) , 01:16:964 (2) - move (151,78)
01:22:513 (2) - check distance..?
01:25:287 (2) - ^

Normal

00:29:449 (2) - check distance?
00:38:813 (3) - change perpect blanket. example) move (438,274)
01:14:883 (3) - check distance?

Skystar

nice map-set. hmm.

mint's Hard

00:48:698 (2,3) - change parallel slider? (already parallel slider?...) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074285
─ example) 00:49:218 (3) - move (222,259) move tail point (146,275)
or
change note? 00:49:218 , 00:49:391 - add note

Memories

00:06:732 (2) - hmm. like this..? ('2' note is big sound- so i want jump) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074293
─ example) 00:06:732 (2) - move (288,264)

nice beatmap! (also, all diff)

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-11-02T04:02:22+00:00

Hi ~
m4m here

Easy
00:18:698 (3) - i prefer to put 320,84 for natural flow
00:24:594 (2,1,2) - arrange them like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1073901
00:28:755 (1) - make a blanket will be better for visual http://puu.sh/560Mg.jpg
00:32:917 (3) - 72,152 for natural flow?
00:36:732 (3) - add whistle because violin sound?
00:39:854 (1) - remove finish from head, there is no cymbal or hard music
00:46:790 (3) - 240,228 for better flow?
01:12:455 (4) - 368,276 for natural flow
01:21:472 (1,2,1,2) - for all, clap should be in tail due BGM (background music)
01:22:513 (2) - keep consistency spacing
01:25:287 (2) - same here

Normal
00:22:859 (5) - umm, music in here is hard drum imo, add whistle or finish or whistle finish?
00:23:900 (2) - straight slider will broke flow here i guess, try to curve down here?
00:38:813 (3) - whistle in head for follow violin sound?
00:42:628 (1) - tail 244,88? i guess it make a nice flow for next pattern
00:51:299 (1) - i really recommended for remove this, the bpm is high, and suddenly note after spin it's so hard for newbie
00:56:501 (1) - i know you want to make blanket here but the flow is broken, better if you rotate this 50 degree and put in 424,200
01:23:380 (1,2,1) - too hard for normal imo, how about remove (2) and add note in 01:23:900 - ?

Hard
00:01:877 (5) - add whistle for follow piano sound?
00:10:027 (5) - i guess you can remove whistle in this circle, so many whistle too noisy for me
00:14:623 (4,5) - remove the claps, it's really not fit with music , hear it and you will know why :3
00:17:397 (5,6) - same here, i guess if you find a similar pattern like that and you follow to remove claps, remove its too
00:27:195 (1,2) - i don't really like the overlap but i didn't find idea for this, well just give opinion :3
00:45:056 (4,5,6,7) - nah for this, i guess change with slider repeat instead, this song have a high bpm, it's hard D:
01:04:478 (4,5,6,7) - same here
01:13:669 (2) - aaa 144,156 for symmetrical?
01:21:819 - you should reduce volume here, the music turn become low
01:22:513 (1) - and finish in head because loud music?

Memories
AR and HP - 1 , skystar is the hardest diff right? for better spread D:
00:03:611 (4) - put in 160,72 for make triangle pattern, it will be better for flow
00:11:588 (5) - NC it for 1/4 jump and new pattern
00:23:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - aaa it's a pretty calm music, you should remove/reduce jumps here
00:33:958 (4) - i'm devil so i prefer ctrl+G here :>
00:45:403 (1) - idk why but i why no jump in hard music D:
00:53:380 - why not stream for this time for following vocal too? O.o
01:08:466 (3) - i think reduce jump in here will be nice. how about 320,184?
01:21:819 - reduce volume same as i said in hard diff

skystar is fine for me
GL \=w=/

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-11-02T07:23:47+00:00

Losertic wrote:
Reply to Losertic mod.
General
Pass.
Normal
00:29:449 (2) - check distance? What's wrong with it?
00:38:813 (3) - change perpect blanket. example) move (438,274) Blanket is already good o-o
01:14:883 (3) - check distance? Same as above
Memories
00:06:732 (2) - hmm. like this..? ('2' note is big sound- so i want jump) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074293
─ example) 00:06:732 (2) - move (288,264) a jump wouldn't fit here so no change

nice beatmap! (also, all diff)
Srry no change but thx for modding~

Reply to Xinely's mod

Xinely wrote:
Hi ~
m4m here

Normal
00:22:859 (5) - umm, music in here is hard drum imo, add whistle or finish or whistle finish? [/color]
00:23:900 (2) - straight slider will broke flow here i guess, try to curve down here? aight fixed
00:38:813 (3) - whistle in head for follow violin sound? Yea... I removed some whistles to avoid letting the diff sound noisy so there are not much out there and if I put here one would be a bit random =w=
00:42:628 (1) - tail 244,88? i guess it make a nice flow for next pattern ok fixeed
00:51:299 (1) - i really recommended for remove this, the bpm is high, and suddenly note after spin it's so hard for newbie orz Fixed it... but I thought centering it would be enough to make it easy =w=
00:56:501 (1) - i know you want to make blanket here but the flow is broken, better if you rotate this 50 degree and put in 424,200 did own changes
01:23:380 (1,2,1) - too hard for normal imo, how about remove (2) and add note in 01:23:900 - ? I want to follow the music here properly >< also it shouldn't be too hard tho o-o

Memories
AR and HP - 1 , skystar is the hardest diff right? for better spread D: This I kinda want to keep it as it is, it pretty much fits the diff ><
00:03:611 (4) - put in 160,72 for make triangle pattern, it will be better for flow fixed
00:11:588 (5) - NC it for 1/4 jump and new pattern fixed
00:23:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - aaa it's a pretty calm music, you should remove/reduce jumps here Imo this fits with the music as it is circles rapidly after another
00:33:958 (4) - i'm devil so i prefer ctrl+G here :> aight fixed =w=
00:45:403 (1) - idk why but i why no jump in hard music D: kay increased Distance a bit
00:53:380 - why not stream for this time for following vocal too? O.o Errr.. wouldn't it be a bit weird to suddenly start following vocal there o-o? Also I think the pause with the vocal is nicce aight I'l consider ><
01:08:466 (3) - i think reduce jump in here will be nice. how about 320,184? this fits the music pretty much tho, the music here gets a bit louder, also I like the symmetry here xD
01:21:819 - reduce volume same as i said in hard diff fixed

skystar is fine for me
GL \=w=/
Thanks for modding Xinely >w</

Sonnyc

7,761 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2013-11-02T08:47:19+00:00

Normal:

00:12:802 (1) - Placing at (56,160) will flow better.
00:21:646 (3) - Make the start a soft-Finish. Normal finish sounds too loud.

mint's Hard:

No issue found

skystar:

00:03:784 (1,2) - I think flowing oppositely feels better. Try ctrl+Ging 00:03:438 (5,1) each.
01:25:634 (1) - Unlike other patterns, a single note at 01:25:807 will match the song better. Even the start is silent, it's a click though.

Memories:

00:06:906 (3) - NC and a small jump will emphasize 00:06:559 (1,2) better.
00:11:328 (4) - Not sure if this long distance in a consistant stream works fine.
00:49:218 (3) - Jump with (4) is fine, but I don't think one with (2) was nice. Reduce those spacing.
01:27:021 (1) - End at 01:29:796. The current end sounds too loud compared to the music.

Imo, the combo colors were hard to read

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-11-02T10:58:17+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Normal:

00:12:802 (1) - Placing at (56,160) will flow better.
00:21:646 (3) - Make the start a soft-Finish. Normal finish sounds too loud.
all fixed

Memories:

00:06:906 (3) - NC and a small jump will emphasize 00:06:559 (1,2) better. don't think the NC is neccessary tho did made a small jump
00:11:328 (4) - Not sure if this long distance in a consistant stream works fine. Yea I'll see what to do ><
00:49:218 (3) - Jump with (4) is fine, but I don't think one with (2) was nice. Reduce those spacing. fixed
01:27:021 (1) - End at 01:29:796. The current end sounds too loud compared to the music. Well I prefer to end it where actually the music ends so nope ><

Imo, the combo colors were hard to read Colour should be fine tho o-o they differ alot maybe cuz they are too dimmed o-o?

Thanks for modding Sonnyc :3/!

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Delis 2013-11-03T12:09:56+00:00

[General]
fine

[Oyatsu's Easy]
00:20:432 (1) - end point move to x176 y136,I don't like the angle of long slider (nazi)
00:46:096 (2) - delete the centre point,just looks ugly
00:51:299 - are you using this green line? ..
00:49:391 (1) - I feel don't much the whistle (SC3), change other whistle sound or change to a finish?

[Normal]
00:21:646 (3) - CTRL E on the head
00:42:628 (1) - finish on the head?
00:57:888 (2) - remove a clap , sound weird a bit

[Skystar]
00:11:241 (1) - NC

00:53:553 (6,7) - uuh I confused this triples, add a short slider instead of the triples
01:27:021 - add a circle :\

fun

[mint's Hard]
00:14:883 (1) - add a finish on the head ?
00:23:900 (3) - delete the centre point,will be looks nice than now imo
01:03:264 (1) - add a finish on the head ?
01:07:599 (1) - ^
01:08:120 (2,3,4,1) - I feel boring this pattern :/ that's okay though

NICE HARD DIFF

[Memories]
OD-1 so I don't think fit to the map

00:29:796 (7) - I don't like current place, 00:26:328 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - prefer this pattern
00:52:859 (4) - move to x288 y128, will be really better flow to me
01:04:131 (1,1) - so not good for flow, make a jump or 5 circles
01:27:021 - add a circle

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-11-03T19:15:32+00:00

Delis wrote:
[General]
fine

[Normal]
00:21:646 (3) - CTRL E on the head aight after many times refusing... fixed
00:42:628 (1) - finish on the head? nope no finish sound
00:57:888 (2) - remove a clap , sound weird a bit OAO how did it get there fixed

[Memories]
OD-1 so I don't think fit to the map HP-1 instead

00:29:796 (7) - I don't like current place, 00:26:328 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - prefer this pattern Imo it plays fine tho o-o and it's kinda similiar already
00:52:859 (4) - move to x288 y128, will be really better flow to me did some own changes as many modders complaint about this orz
01:04:131 (1,1) - so not good for flow, make a jump or 5 circles nope it flows fine for me tho o-o
01:27:021 - add a circle fixed

Thanks for modding Delis :3~~!!!

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-11-05T00:36:58+00:00

fix some thanks!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 23 - Memories Last (tv-size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 52753
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Memories Last (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:メモリーズ・ラスト (TV Size)
Artist:Kurosaki Maon
ArtistUnicode:黒崎 真音
Creator:xChippy
Version:mint's Hard
Source:Toaru Majutsu no Index II
Tags:a certain magical index J.C Staff Amamiya Yuko mintong89 Oyatsu Skystar ending とある魔術の禁書目録II
BeatmapID:309991
BeatmapSetID:118362

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.40000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"To_Aru_Majutsu_no_Index_Wallpaper_31cgx.jpg",0,0
Video,-170,"video (2).avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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6559,-100,4,2,5,70,0,0
7079,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
10721,-100,4,2,5,40,0,0
11588,-100,4,2,5,70,0,0
53726,-100,4,2,5,70,0,1
75923,-133.333333333333,4,2,5,70,0,0
87021,-133.333333333333,4,2,5,40,0,0
90316,-133.333333333333,4,2,5,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 205,204,152
Combo2 : 130,156,189
Combo3 : 182,158,199

[HitObjects]
140,56,1010,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,128,1183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,196,1357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,172,1530,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,172,1877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,172,2224,6,0,P|296:160|364:196,1,140.000000596046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,260,2744,2,0,L|388:356,1,70.000000298023,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,276,3091,2,0,L|493:206,1,70.000000298023,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-11-05T01:31:35+00:00

Thank you for modding, fixed somethings I guess

Oya

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xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-11-07T18:58:09+00:00

Updated all except Yuko's diff~~ :3/

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2013-11-11T09:13:18+00:00

Hi, mod from popner's modding team

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

Memories
00:05:865 (1,2,3,4) - maybe just a bit too big distance for the first part
00:11:241 - and 00:11:501 - adjust to drum sample?
00:14:883 (1) - why not finish on head, like 00:17:657 (1) - and 00:20:432 (1) -
00:16:964 (3) - maybe parallel with 00:16:270 (1) - , just like 00:16:617 (2,4) -
00:22:686 (6,7) - maybe drum finish for these two
00:23:120 (10) - why not drum sample like the former
I accidently noticed that 00:28:755 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - is so similar to 00:25:981 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - , maybe you may think of some different jumping patterns and maybe it's just me but I think the flow of 00:26:675 (5,6,7,1) - is not good, may try the below (I rotated your former notes a bit)

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00:31:357 (6) - maybe whistle
00:36:732 (4,1) - make them further away from each other and so could these 00:37:079 (1,2) -
00:36:386 (3) - may try CTRL+G
00:39:160 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - well, these are too noisy, you'd better try remove the claps from 00:39:333 (6,7,10,11) - and adjust them to Normal sample and besides, you must have forgotten to lower the volume with the green line at 00:39:160 - , 40% will do imo. Ah, after modding your Normal diff, I found that the volume settings are just different between the two diffs, I think you should make this the same as that in Normal
00:39:854 (1,2,3) - why do you only add clap to 3, not like 00:42:628 (1,2,3) - , I think you'd better make them consistent
00:46:096 (5) - may try to move it to somewhere like (128,168)
00:49:391 (4) - too weird with no finish here
00:54:940 (1) - move the whistle from its tail to its head, referring to 00:57:715 (1) -
01:01:010 (2,1,2,1) - this plays nothing wrong but I must say that they make no sense with the music so maybe you'd wanna think of something different
01:03:264 (1) - maybe add finish on head, like what you did in Normal
01:06:039 (1) - same as 00:54:940 (1) -
01:08:120 (2,3) - CTRL+G to each of them may emphasise better, see the below

SPOILER

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01:20:952 (3) - may replace the clap with drum finish at its reverse point and its end
01:27:108 (1) - you may wanna gradually turn down the volume with more green lines, also for other diffs

社科院star
00:00:663 (2) - whistle？
00:06:559 (1) - 从前面的flow来看它出现在00:06:212 (5) - 的上面感觉有点儿别扭或许考虑做个平行四边形如下图

SPOILER

00:08:987 (5) - whistle？
00:18:351 (1,2,3) - 感觉打着真蛋疼=。= 还不如简单oval flow 如下

SPOILER

00:19:738 (1,2,3) - 感觉从左边的三角形过来不太舒服把00:20:085 (3) - 反过来或许好一些当然尾巴上的三连也要换位置
00:29:623 (2,1) - CTRL+G？
00:44:362 (2) - 何必3/4 =。=
00:53:033 (3,4,5) - 这3个soft吧
00:58:582 (2,3,5) - 虽然说这音效听得我耳朵都快炸了我已经不想多说什么了但是这里finish也太多了吧
01:27:021 (1) - 可以多加两根儿绿线降音量
纯鼓节奏和音效都好鸡巴=。=

Mint's Hard
考虑和其他diff一样从00:00:490 - 开始，加个1/2 reverse就好
00:03:091 (3,5) - 把这两个红线上的whistle都提前到白线上？
00:05:865 (3) - 这个也是从尾巴上挪到头上合适一些我觉得
00:10:721 - 强烈建议把所有的SC5的音量都降到60%或者再低一点儿=。= 好吵啊……
00:14:709 (5) - 这个应该用whistle而不是clap，而且这种连打最好给00:14:623 (4,5) - 降音量或者给00:14:536 (3,4) - 降音量
不少类似的我就不多说了比如00:17:310 (4,5,6) - 反正一定不要3连clap =。= omg
00:45:143 (5,6,7) - 这三个最好都去掉clap 然后00:45:143 (5,6) - 加whistle
01:08:120 (2,3,4) - 感觉听起来怪怪的或许只用finish，然后3个note音量递增
01:25:807 (3,4) - 最好这两个都加NC
主要就是注意3连和5连不要连续clap=。=耳朵要炸了

Normal
00:14:883 - better use finish, as I've mentioned in your Insane diff
00:22:859 (5) - may change the drum clap to drum finish
01:15:923 - turn down the volume to 60% or lower is appreciated from here
some whistle suggestions are the same as that in Insane

Oyatsu's Easy
00:00:490 - better start at the same point like other diffs
00:38:466 (1) - this NC is unneccessary
01:27:021 (1) - may add some more green lines to gradually lower the volume

That's all
Good luck

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-11-11T17:35:27+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
Hi, mod from popner's modding team

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

Memories
00:05:865 (1,2,3,4) - maybe just a bit too big distance for the first part Only lowered a little bit would feel awkward otherwise with the previous combo
00:11:241 - and 00:11:501 - adjust to drum sample?
00:14:883 (1) - why not finish on head, like 00:17:657 (1) - and 00:20:432 (1) -
00:16:964 (3) - maybe parallel with 00:16:270 (1) - , just like 00:16:617 (2,4) -
00:22:686 (6,7) - maybe drum finish for these two
00:23:120 (10) - why not drum sample like the former
I accidently noticed that 00:28:755 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - is so similar to 00:25:981 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - , maybe you may think of some different jumping patterns and maybe it's just me but I think the flow of 00:26:675 (5,6,7,1) - is not good, may try the below (I rotated your former notes a bit) I found the last jump a bit to large so changed that one a bit :3
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00:31:357 (6) - maybe whistle
00:36:732 (4,1) - make them further away from each other and so could these 00:37:079 (1,2) -
00:36:386 (3) - may try CTRL+G
00:39:160 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - well, these are too noisy, you'd better try remove the claps from 00:39:333 (6,7,10,11) - and adjust them to Normal sample and besides, you must have forgotten to lower the volume with the green line at 00:39:160 - , 40% will do imo. Ah, after modding your Normal diff, I found that the volume settings are just different between the two diffs, I think you should make this the same as that in Normal Reduced the volume OAO I think it's better for this stream to have more impact with these claps ><
00:39:854 (1,2,3) - why do you only add clap to 3, not like 00:42:628 (1,2,3) - , I think you'd better make them consistent
00:46:096 (5) - may try to move it to somewhere like (128,168)
00:49:391 (4) - too weird with no finish here well since there is no finish sound ><
00:54:940 (1) - move the whistle from its tail to its head, referring to 00:57:715 (1) -[/color]
01:01:010 (2,1,2,1) - this plays nothing wrong but I must say that they make no sense with the music so maybe you'd wanna think of something different
01:03:264 (1) - maybe add finish on head, like what you did in Normal
01:06:039 (1) - same as 00:54:940 (1) -
01:08:120 (2,3) - CTRL+G to each of them may emphasise better, see the below
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01:20:952 (3) - may replace the clap with drum finish at its reverse point and its end
01:27:108 (1) - you may wanna gradually turn down the volume with more green lines, also for other diffs

Normal
00:14:883 - better use finish, as I've mentioned in your Insane diff
00:22:859 (5) - may change the drum clap to drum finish
01:15:923 - turn down the volume to 60% or lower is appreciated from here
some whistle suggestions are the same as that in Insane

That's all
Good luck

OAO Fixed the rest :3/
Thanks for modding Zero >w</

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-11-14T08:30:11+00:00

謝謝mod!

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Creator:xChippy
Version:mint's Hard
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256,192,87108,12,0,90316,0:0:0:0:

oh and the hitsound xChippy please change it: http://puu.sh/5i0yG.wav

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-11-14T17:41:57+00:00

Thx updated and also updated your hitsound :3
Waiting for Oyatsu and Yuko :3

Oyatsu

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Oyatsu 2013-11-15T04:19:28+00:00

NO fix anything. Sorry

Skystar

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Skystar 2013-11-16T09:19:27+00:00

http://puu.sh/5jPRk.osu
thanks for modding!
i'm not able to reply all of them due to some reason, sorry... Q_Q

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-11-16T13:12:10+00:00

Thx :3 all updated~
EDIT: Changed names.. due the new rule ppy established...
Skystar ---> Skystar's Insane
Memories ---> Insane

Last edited by xChippy 2014-01-04T15:23:21+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Skystar

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Skystar 2013-12-07T10:07:22+00:00

mintong89

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mintong89 2014-04-26T09:01:12+00:00

omg the maps really need bat, so old

Hollow Wings

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Hollow Wings 2014-11-25T17:40:17+00:00

mark

edit: from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

General

source in original like "とある魔术の禁书目録Ⅱ", and move the current one into tags.
unused hs file: soft-hitfinish4.wav; soft-sliderslide4.wav; normal-sliderslide5.wav
unsnapped kiai section in all diffs: 00:53:727

Insane

00:08:813 (1,2,3) - i think u need to shorter these jumps for easier playing stuff with quiet part of the original song's track here.
00:11:241 (5,6,7,8) - hmm... still think need to shorter the 1/4 jump at 00:11:501 (8,1) - for there's not much reason to do that with other 1/4 jumps' not in that large ds in other parts of the whole diff. maybe just merge 00:11:414 (7,8) - into a 1/4 slider? or just shorter dat 1/4 jump. this is a highly recommended.
fine.

Skystar's Insane

01:01:183 and 01:01:877 r really pity to blank. maybe try this? 01:01:183 - add note and stack it at 01:01:010 (2) - ; 01:01:357 (3) - ctrl+g; 01:01:877 - add note and stack it at 01:01:357 (3) - 's end after changing. same suggestion to 01:12:108 (2,3,1) - .
01:25:634 (1) - start at nowhere beats coming? lol thou i don't mind stuff like this but i still think u need another version series of this part orz...
fine.

mint's Hard

00:50:952 (1) - well... seems like u need to avoid the tight following of the note after the spinner, as a hard diff's pattern.
01:09:854 (4,5) - is this large jump really necessary? maybe change to another pattern. (just suggestion

Normal

00:49:391 (1,1) - the obj after a spinner should be 2 white ticks gap large at least in a normal diff, this is a must fix.
01:22:686 (4,1) - why have ds shifting here? and especially 01:24:247 (1,2,3,1) - , really need to arranged into same ones. this is a highly recommended.

Oyatsu's Easy

00:09:333 (1,1) - like the mod for normal diff, but larger the gap to 4 white ticks, and fix all spinners with objs followed like this in the whole diff plz. if u think that's too long gaps then i recommend u just not using that lots of spinners, tbh those r a bit hard to beginners who's playing easy diffs.

for ur maps' not in progress for long time, maybe u need 2-3 more mod to give further changes to perfect it...

well, poke me later when u think it's fine.

xChippy

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xChippy 2014-12-10T22:50:43+00:00

All fixed for my diffs and general!

Thank you~ :3

Gamu

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Gamu 2014-12-10T22:58:10+00:00

oh wait...
Correct Source: とある魔術の禁書目録Ⅱ
It must be fixed to Japanese :3

Correct Title: メモリーズ・ラスト (TV size.)
Correct Romanised Title: Memories Last (TV size.)

It must be changed to this label.
website: http://www.project-index.net/tv/contents/hp0025/index01690000.html

About artist: I'd like to recommend that you remove the space!

Also please refer to the map of the same song: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/188300

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ritsu-tanaika wrote:

leon1341414 wrote:

-Bakari- wrote:

Nwolf wrote:

vahn10 wrote:

Satellite wrote:

-Kirito wrote:

Asgard wrote:

Pagno wrote:

jonathanlfj wrote:

jonathanlfj wrote:

jonathanlfj wrote:

Lumina wrote:

Oyatsu's Easy

Skystar

mint's Hard

bigfrog wrote:

Tsukuyomi wrote:

General

Oyatsu's Easy

Normal

Skystar

mint's Hard

Memories

Losertic wrote:

General

Normal

Memories

Xinely wrote:

Sonnyc wrote:

Delis wrote:

Zero__wind wrote:

Insane

Skystar's Insane

mint's Hard

Normal

Oyatsu's Easy

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