1. Insane (4,49 stars, 330 notes)
2. mint's Hard (3,56 stars, 270 notes)
3. Normal (1,93 stars, 142 notes)
4. Oyatsu's Easy (1,62 stars, 101 notes)
5. Skystar's Insane (4,51 stars, 385 notes)

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

Can I do Hard for this? Thanks!

leon1341414 wrote:

Hi ~ xChippy
As PM request :3

If you don't agree something pointed out , just refuse it ~

[Normal]

Great !

[Insane]

wow OD 9 , so high to me ;w; aight.. considering changing

1. 00:08:466(2) - Umm... seems I would want to suggest to remove this note , cus this place have same rhythm with 00:02:224 - 00:03:611 and 00:04:998 - 00:06:386 , so you can make it unitary. well actually the sound is here a bit different that's why I also changed the rythm
2. 00:34:305(1) - Keep same distance with front short sliders ? fixed
3. 00:52:339(1,2,3,4) - Try to use closer distance on front(2)~(1) and (1)~(2) , than bigger distence on (2)~(3) and (3)~(4) ? make a stage up effect.
   Umm.... maybe like this :
   
   EX

   
   feel good during play >w<
   I'll consider, since I don't think a build up is needed as the music is kinda the same :3
4. 00:42:628(1,2) - Connection these two note into a slider ? I feel it will balance with 00:39:854(1,2) - changed the others instead~
5. 01:03:784(7,8,1) - Maybe set these note like this pattern if you want , seems fun during playing. fixed :3
   
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one pc testplay

God OD 9 , I can't get S rank in 1 PC ...

Good luck :3

sorry for short mod , I am not good on it ...

1. Kiai on your [Memories] diff starts 1 ms later than it should
2. You should fix the title, it's supposed to be メモリーズ・ラスト.
3. Disable Widescreen Support. Disable and make sure that it's disabled on EVERY diff. It makes NO sense to keep it enabled. As long as you have NO widescreen storyboard you have to keep it disabled.
4. Tbh, colours are a bit annoying and unpleasant. Also, the blue one is too bright. Can't you try something else like..
   
   ...like this

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 205,204,152
   Combo2 : 130,156,189
   Combo3 : 182,158,199

1. Song itself has a quite changeable rhythm, I'd consider using HP1. It's ok and it won't hurt the balance of this mapset. Do it, so beginners won't have problems with that changeable rhythm. :<
2. 00:30:143 (1) - I'm sure that this NC is extra. Try to keep comboing more consistent. Some of your combos are too short/too long. It will confuse beginners. Please, try to fix it, you're a good mapper and you can do it yourself. But feel free to ask me if you are unsure.
3. 01:16:964 - and why do ignore this beat? I feel like you can place an 1/2 slider here to make your rhythm a bit more consistent and reasonable. Don't worry, it fits here perfectly!
4. 01:23:380 (3,3) - this is REALLY important. I'm sure that this is UNPLAYABLE and MUST be fixed. - such things are unreadable for beginners. The sliders are TOO short and the second repeat on them is TOTALLY unexpected. Such things aren't recommended even for a [Normal] diffs. What to do? Use something like this instead! Beats are sitill reflected in the map and it is much more playable. Please, keep in mind that this is the easiest diff!
   
   Seriously, you should pay more attention to the playability of your diffs. Think about beginners, I'm begging you! Your patterns aren't bad and rhythm is quite ok, but it's too hard!

1. 00:32:224 (2) - this pattern is okay, but I feel like using CtrlG would make your flow even better here. Try it, please!
2. 00:53:553 - 01:03:611 - 01:09:160 - 01:14:709 - I feel bad about these beats. I mean, they're actually pretty loud and it's easy to hear them.
   
   The diff itself is fine, I quite like your patterns and rhythm. Good job!

1. Increase OD and HP by one tick, there's no need to keep them SO low. This is still a [Hard] diff, remember!
2. 00:04:998 (4) - don't you feel like there's a missed new combo? according to your pattern and that sweet whistle sound you should place a new combo here!
   Note: disagree? remove a new combo from 00:07:773 (1) - !
3. 00:06:212 (7,1) - I don't mind jumps in a [Hard] diff, but you should keep the DS on reasonable level. Seriously, x2.6 is too hard for the calm part. It's too unexpected, breaks the flow and doesn't fits with the music. Try to find another way to map this part or reduce its distance!
4. 00:33:958 (7,8,9,10,1) - 00:45:056 (4,5,6,7,1) - 01:04:478 (4,5,6,7,1) - 01:10:027 (5,6,7,8) - 01:15:576 (3,4,5,6,1) - we have TWO insane diffs. There's no need to use streams EVEN i the [Hard], please, try to replace this stream with something easier. Keep the mapset more balanced
   Note: triplets are fine, but mor than 3 notes with 1/4 snap divisor are too hard.
5. 00:50:952 (1,1) - too soon after the spinner. Players need some time to focus on objects and to read the pattern. Consider keeping at least 1/1 empty space to make it more playable!
   
   I don't like your jumps and the diff feels too hard. Low diff settings and hard patterns, diff feels unbalanced and it makes me sad. Try to work a bit more on it, please!

1. Try OD 7 because streams with this OD are too crazy, imo. Well, your diff is crazy, and it's cool. But OD8 is too much, I think.
   
   Everything else seems to be good.

1. 00:21:992 (1,2,1,2,1) - well, these combos are too short. At least it feels so. Previous combos were 2-4 times longer and it makes your comboing a bit inconsistent.
2. 01:10:027 (1) - well, this combo was really strange here, imo. o3o
   
   Everything here seems to be good. Comboing is a little bit random, but whatver. I like your style!

-Bakari- wrote:

Phew~ I'm a little bit slower than you expect me to be.

[General]

1. Kiai on your [Memories] diff starts 1 ms later than it should
2. You should fix the title, it's supposed to be メモリーズ・ラスト.
3. Disable Widescreen Support. Disable and make sure that it's disabled on EVERY diff. It makes NO sense to keep it enabled. As long as you have NO widescreen storyboard you have to keep it disabled.
4. Tbh, colours are a bit annoying and unpleasant. Also, the blue one is too bright. Can't you try something else like..
   
   ...like this

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 205,204,152
   Combo2 : 130,156,189
   Combo3 : 182,158,199

   fixed these in all diffs~~

[Normal]

1. 00:32:224 (2) - this pattern is okay, but I feel like using CtrlG would make your flow even better here. Try it, please! fixed
2. 00:53:553 - 01:03:611 - 01:09:160 - 01:14:709 - I feel bad about these beats. I mean, they're actually pretty loud and it's easy to hear them. I know but won't it make the normal even harder ><?, I'll consider putting some thing on those
   
   The diff itself is fine, I quite like your patterns and rhythm. Good job! :3/

[Memories]

1. 00:21:992 (1,2,1,2,1) - well, these combos are too short. At least it feels so. Previous combos were 2-4 times longer and it makes your comboing a bit inconsistent. aight fixed
2. 01:10:027 (1) - well, this combo was really strange here, imo. o3o Hmm I think it's better to keep it like this for better readability tho ><
   
   Everything here seems to be good. Comboing is a little bit random, but whatver. I like your style! Yay thanks :3/

Pretty cool mapset, but you can work on it a bti more!

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Best of luck!

Nwolf wrote:

woof from my queue

[General]

Okay this might be just me being a little bit strange but maybe move the red bar to 00:00:316 instead so it's not somewhere before the mp3 starts and add one at 00:01:010 so the first beat is at the right place :3 I'm not sure about this o-o I'll see :3



Everything else looks very nice actually

I'm sad nothing to say :<

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