zorefire wrote:

Mod

From modding queue
[Easy]
Good to go *
[Nromal]
00:11:479 (3) - your missing a clap at the end of this one Well actually, the clap would go on the red tick in between the slider ends. But since this is [Normal] I'm not mapping 1/2 notes here.
00:32:679 (5) - this could be a new combo It could be, it's not absolutely necessary. I mean, there is fairly large gap proceeding this combo. Starting it here in this difficulty would be weird for me personally.
00:35:879 (1) - ^ Same as above.
00:39:079 (1) - ^ I fixed this one.
[Hard]
00:04:679 (2,3,4) - i couldnt read this right it seemed to go with the flow of the previous notes ??? Distance snap says it's fine
[Insane]
Good to go. *
Rhythm is on key jumps are good . * Comments like these * make me happy
[Servant x Akareh]
Good to go also. *

Mira-san wrote:

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Hiya.

Sorry for the late reply. My hard work went to zero due to a brown-out.

Note, the numbers I will give are coordinates. (x,y) respectively.

Normal

00:24:679 (2) - Move the second point to (256,96). Ok.
00:28:279 (4) - Align this with the end of slider (2). Fixed.

Hard

00:07:079 (5) - Move last point to (104,100) It's fine like this. This is a bit trivial.
00:34:079 (8) - Remove this, but keep if it you want to. I'll keep it.
01:04:679 (1) - Move second point of slider to (300,32) and the last point to (236,64). If you'll change this one, make sure to change the position of 01:03:879 (5) as well. Already blanket.
01:21:860 (6) - Move to (160,192) I can't do this without disabling dist snap.

Insane

00:33:579 (3,4) - Move to (128,176) Fixed.
01:06:079 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest making this a perfect pentagon but the choice is up to you. Tweaked. Made ends (3) & (4) closer to centre of pentagon.

lol good map.

Mira-san wrote:

Servant x Akareh

00:37:079 (1,2,3,4) - Move this at (256, y). The height should be fine. Just put them in the center.
00:58:279 (4) - Make this less curvy.
01:12:179 (4) - Move to center if possible. (x:256)
01:18:079 (2) - ^
01:19:879 (7) - ^ or make it a perfect triangle with (8) and (9)
01:22:479 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - It really bugs me how this is not at the center lol. Put (7) at x:256 while moving the others too. Just move 01:21:779 (4,5,6) to (212,172) so it would still look awesome. ^^
01:23:879 (1,2,3,4) - Move to center pls. Pls.

lol good map.

ts8zs wrote:

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From my queue
[Insane]
00:11:079 (4) - Ctrl+G And remove a no used point:3 Ok. I might have change it to this from some other mod, but I can't remember...
>00:11:379 (5) - move to the end ^
00:12:079 (8) - NC Yep
00:14:879 (4,5) - exchange position Don't really need to.
00:35:879 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/903189 It's fine. I don't want to put too many notes at the same position.
00:41:879 (5) - put at 256,296 Nah.
00:51:679 (3) - move to 1's head No reason to.
00:51:879 (1) - move a little down:3 may be you need shift Might consider this.
00:52:479 (3) - ^
[Hard]
00:54:179 (9) - NC Done.
[Normal]
01:24:679 (1) - make a reverse Ok. Fixed.

HelloSCV wrote:

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General

1. 01:25:879 - move 2nd kiai end to here, fits better Fixed.

Normal

1. OD -1? too high for normal It's fine for now.

00:39:079 (1) - delete NC for consistence This is the way I had it before! A previous modder said NC. Fixed.
01:20:279 (5) - NC and 01:21:479 (1) - delete NC Ok. Done.

Hard

00:18:079 (1,2,3,4) - move these sliders to 00:18:279 - here and adda 00:18:079 (7) - note here is better for rhythm Fair enough. Fixed.
00:26:279 (6) - NC? Ok.
00:30:879 (1) - same opinion with 00:18:079 (1,2,3,4) - Fixed. Also dist snapped the following combo.
00:32:079 (4) - this slider is touch with HP bar very little imo Well it's still on the grid :3
00:39:079 (6) - add NC if you do 00:26:279 (6) - this Yep yep.

Insane

00:03:079 (3) - 0.5x DS is purposed? Correct.
00:33:279 (1) - delete NC Ok I guess.
01:16:979 (1) - ^ for consistence? Done.

[notice]Servant x Akareh

good luck~ ty.

Irreversible wrote:

Mod

May I help You?

[Normal]

CS + 1 please, I think it should be CS 3 for normal. Fixed
HP 3, OD 3? Just for a better spread, HP 4 and OD 5 are wwwaaayyy too high HP-1, OD-1

00:11:079 (2,3) - I think the slider should be 00:13:079 (1) - here! Try Ctrl + G Fixed the former
00:13:079 (1) - Same here, I don't think it sounds nice this way, try another spot for the slider please. Ok
00:28:279 (4) - NC, it's somehow a new part of the lyrics. Yep
00:32:679 (5) - NC
00:33:879 (1) - Remove NC
00:34:279 (2) - Double reverse - always a bad solution (in most of the cases) Could you try something different?
00:35:879 (3) - NC
00:37:079 (1) - Remove NC Fixed all above
00:41:9 (4) - NC What?
00:48:679 (1) - I think a finish on the slider start would fit pretty well!
01:07:879 (1) - ^ Ok to both
01:11:879 (2,3) - Same as above, i think ctrl + g would be a good idea, it fits better. Done

I think you could improve the rhythm in some places, the sliders mentioned above don't Sound really good, please Change them. Patterns are okayish. I think you could use some more finishes to emphasize the whole Thing.

[Hard]

The BG Looks really really bad. Please try to get a better one, with high Quality. It's hard to find a good one Not much fan art or anything just yet. I have replaced all bg images with new ones of 1366x768

Alright, I don't like this diff. I'm sorry to say it, but the way you used the stacks is just not good, and way too confusing! Please try to improve it, espeically with the spacing. The rhythm itself is fine with me, but it gets unplayable because of the Overall used stacks.

00:05:679 (1,2) - For example here. I'm okay with that stack, but it gets confusing if you suddenly start stacking 1/4 notes! You could try to make 2 1/4 notes to 1 1/4 slider. It's not really that confusing. They're actually 1/2 notes! The preceding 'pa pa pa' notes to match the lyrics are actually on 3/4 beats. The last one lands on the off-beat and there is a 1/1 beat between this and the next note. This IS weirdly timed, but I can't change that fact.
00:08:679 (8) - But here you didn't stack, even if it would fit better. So stack with the slider end please. Ok, I fixed this.
00:10:679 (1,2,3,4) - Ehm.. well, idk but the DS between 1 and 3 Looks so similar, Overall I don't think that there is a mini pause in the song, so you might replace These as well. Ehh? There is no association between (1) and (3). Dist snap is fine with it.
00:12:079 (5,6) - ?? Way too confusing again, the stress isn't very comfortable to Play. ???
00:17:579 (4,5) - Now compare this stack to 00:18:079 (7,1) - this one. HArd Players aren't that experienced as they would get that! So this stack is really bad, please remove it. Maybe try a 1/4 slider? It sounds the same, but you get that easier So basically, you don't like double 1/4 notes? Fixed.
00:19:879 (1,2,3) - A bit too hidden for my taste, try place it somewhere on the right. Fixed
00:20:879 (5) - I had Troubles with getting this one, what does it refer? Well, i can hear it, but in game i'm not focused to These Background noises. It's the lyric! I have to follow the lyrics especially in the verse since there are no instruments playing during the first parts.
00:47:679 (2,3,4) - mh.. no. The fact that it is under the slider end of 1 lets me think that i have to click immediatly after the slider Ends, but that's not the case. please use DS here Fixed.
00:54:179 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ...i failed xD Please use some more understandable Patterns.Tweaked. Replaced the double 1/4 notes with 1/4 sliders.
01:00:579 (9) - If you want to follow the lyrics move this to the blue tick before it.
01:03:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This jump doesn't really look innuitive, i'm not sure if i even would one. I left this for now. Tweaked some stuff afterwards.
01:14:079 (5,1) - move some grids to the left to get a nice curve. Ok
01:19:279 (5) - If you want an anti-jump badly here, i recommend NC. Otherwise, use DS please please! I used Ctrl+G on reverse slider and moved some stuff around.

Well, I think you have to work a bit more on it.. I hope my suggestions can help you a bit, to get an Overall idea. I replaced all double 1/4 notes in this difficulty I think

[Insane]

AR 8, you should AR 9 for Songs over 170 BPM. Sorry, I'll leave this unless someone else says something about it. AR8 makes it too easy!

It was better to Play than hard, somehow i enjoyed the diff as well. I would be glad if you used the ideas of above to improve this diff as well, and call me for a recheck, i want to see how things envolved!

well, i modded pretty much stuff, but mostly it's nazi, and i think you can improve your hard a bit more, insane seems okayish! don't hesitate to ask me if you Need further help. good luck!

ts8zs wrote:

[SxA]
00:08:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - use slider make a fullcircle and convert to stream(in compose) did my best.
01:25:879 (1) - NC ok

HelloSCV wrote:

Servant x Akareh

00:05:879 (7) - NC ok
00:13:479 (5) - ^ ok
00:28:079 (1,2) - hmm i think this anti jump can be noticed by 1/4 beats , so how about fixing this to more far? It'll break my pattern with 3,4,5 which I repeat later on, So I'll move (8) instead
00:39:079 (7) - NC here ok
00:58:279 (1) - finish will be great ok
01:11:079 (10) - NC here instead 01:11:479 (1) - here (oh and try finish too) k
01:23:879 (1) - touching HP bar it was centered there on another mod, I really don't want that slider to be a curve, so I'll leave it as is for now until further modding.

good luck~

Irreversible wrote:

May I help You?

[Akareh's diff]

00:02:279 (5) - i think NC would make everything more readable. A NC for just two sliders? I don't know...
00:04:979 (5) - can you move this to 64 148? Looks better- Fair enough
00:05:879 (7) - blanket please! ok
00:16:679 (1,2,3,4,5) - reall nice.
00:18:079 (2) - I would prefer this circle at 80 204 ok
00:20:779 (7) - sme here, i would move it a bit to the top. don't Forget to stack everything if you apply! ok
00:25:279 (2) - 120 304 Looks neater. ok
00:28:079 (1,2) - this should definetly be placed somewhere else. try 464 264 fixed on previous mod.
00:34:279 (1) - i think i'll hate you for that! xD >:D
00:41:479 (3,4,5) - i really like this idea! xD I also like it, this pattern is repeated from 00:28:079
00:47:079 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Looks a bit too crumpy for my taste, try spacing it out a bit better, or move the 1/4 things closer together, please Nah, it's fine.
00:49:479 (4) - same here, 176 84 Looks more polished for me. k
01:00:279 (8) - i think this Long slider doesn't fit the rhythm at all. It follows the lyrics o.O
01:16:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - guess who won't fc this song! me. xD everyone hates that stream, but it fits the song and I don't have problems there xDDD
01:19:279 (6) - NC? not sure though.. it seems like a new part for me. Same as before, for only 4 objects? I don't know...
01:25:479 - add an imba 1/8 reverse slider here, end it 01:25:829 - .Uhm... what's an imba slider? Did a curve slider there, tho.

this diff seems cool! that's because I'm so cool (?)

Man, I love my GD's Background now

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Sorry, I'll leave this unless someone else says something about it. AR8 makes it too easy!

onepiece314 wrote:

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the m4m request sorry for it being late
[KEY]
RED=UNRANKABLE
BLUE=SUGGESTION
PINK= NYA SUGGESTION=(STRONG SUGGESTION)

[Normal]
00:26:279(3) idk it just kinda doesnt look right
00:39:070(4)^ Both look fine :/
00:41:079(1,2,3) NC Fixed.
00:57:079(1) remove 1 doesnt hit anything! It really does
01:00:679(4,5) remove 4 and 5 and a slider instead Alright. Fixed.
Thats all for normal
[Hard]
00:39:679(2) idk what you were trying to do but u should either blanket or mirror Ok.
00:54:179(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) its confusing Hmm, not really..
01:03:479(3,4,6,7,1) spacing kinda big and inconsistent Intentional
01:07:879(1,2,3) by your distant space this should be a bit farther Fixed (2)
pls understand that those jumps will make playing dt super hard
[Insane]
seems fine
i can not mod expert diffs
bye bye nya

jonathanlfj wrote:

Mod

From my birthday queue~ I already said Happy Birthday, but I hope you had an amazing day!
very cute song :3 Agreed.

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
change audio lead-in to 1500ms, the current lead-in still feels a bit rushed Done.
im guessing ur using a unique BG for each diff, but Rainbow and Akareh's diff uses the same BG, was that intentional? Well, I ran out of images to use... fan art/good quality pictures are scarce at the moment, but I will change it upon request by either Rainbow or Akareh or else by whim.

[Normal]
00:10:679 (1) - post-spinner NC is needed ?? Sorry I don't understand. There is a NC there already?
00:13:479 (2) - NC here instead of 00:13:079 (1), this is where the new measure begins
00:39:079 (4) - NC here instead of 00:41:079 (1) makes the comboing more even here
00:58:279 (1) - shift this to form a diamond with 00:57:079 (1,2,3):

SPOILER

01:09:479 (4) - use a NC here to indicate the rhythm change
01:17:879 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - why not perfectly center this? (shift it so 01:18:279 (2,4,2) is at the center of the play field) Fixed the rest

[Hard]
00:04:979 (3,4,1) - the spacing should be consistent here, i almost thought 00:05:679 (1) was a blue line rhythm when i analyzed the spacing
00:13:479 (9) - NC should be here instead of 00:13:879 (1), makes the rhythm a lot easier to read
00:21:479 (3,4) - lower these a bit so they creat a blanket around 00:20:479 (4)
00:37:079 (6,1,2) - the way you NCed here is not friendly for a stack like this, either move the NC to 00:37:079 (6) or 00:37:479 (2)
00:43:679 (4,5,6,7,8) - try a smoother curve here:

SPOILER

00:57:079 (1,2) - move this furthur away, due to all the 1/2 circles and NC spam before, its easy to mistakenly read this as a 1/2 jump
00:59:279 (4) - this note should be at 00:59:179 to follow the vocals, stack it under 00:59:079 (3)
00:59:879 (7) - think you forgot NC here
01:05:679 (4) - similar to 00:59:279 (4)
01:18:279 (2,3,4) - its best if you can keep spacing consistent here, a jump to 01:19:279 (1) would be more appropriate imo I fixed everything except for the added note at vocals part in the chorus. It is what I originally had, but I changed it to flow better in [Hard]. I'll recheck with Irreversible, hopefully.

[Insane]
00:02:979 (2) - the spacing here can be better ><
00:03:879 (4) - NC here instead of 00:04:079 (1), since this is the beginning of a new verse
00:13:279 (1) - move up 2 grids to get a better symmetry with 00:13:479 (2)
00:34:079 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - dont spam NC here, it actually makes the stacks more challenging to read
00:38:679 (6) - move it here plays better imo:

SPOILER

00:50:479 (8) - do the NC here so 00:50:479 (8,1) can have the same colour
00:58:879 (3) - stack this on where 00:57:479 (3) was
01:11:079 (4) - NC should be here instead of 01:11:279 (1), since kiai begins here
01:17:179 (5,6,7,8) - the curve on this can be smoother, or make it perfectly horizontal Fixed all, except the seventh point because I tweaked some stuff there already.

Really fun mapset, if NCs were done more consistently it would be even better. Good luck on ranking~

CPLs wrote:

try to use the japanese title & artist

Titile : めいあいへるぷゆー?
Artist: 茅野愛衣, 中原麻衣 & 豊崎愛生

add TV Size in the title if needed

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Alright, I'll add the artist names to the tags

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Servant x Akareh]
00:08:879 (7) - add a NC here, combo count went up to 19 Oops
00:19:879 (1,2,3,4,5) - the curve on this is a bit distorted, kinda interferes with playing due to large spacing, make it smoother please Did my best
00:28:079 (1,2,3,4,5) - why not center this on the y-axis? spacing later is pretty easy to adjust too I guess I could but I didn't really want to center it, I'll consider.
00:35:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - now i think you actually meant to center this one, but its off a litte; move it 2 grids right My intention there was placing the stream under (1,3). I guess I can center them if I move those. Fixed.
00:50:879 (8,9,10) - the flow here feels a bit forced, its better of you just stack 00:51:579 (9,10) under the end of 00:50:879 (8) Ok
00:55:079 (4) - a NC here to indicate the new vocal kick-in Ok
01:04:279 (10) - forgot a clap? Oops
01:09:379 - add a note here to catch the vocals, stack it on 01:09:479 (8) I had a note there, don't know what happened but fixed.
01:25:479 (4) - the end should have some hitsound, either a clap or a finish, up to you Again, this had a finish, fixed now.

Momochikun wrote:

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Hi Hi ~ it's Eru and Yui huray~
As your request..
Ukh.. i can't mod this freely because 01:06:279 > 01:07:079

[General]
Many note at blue tick according to the vocal. so i don't sure about the timing

[Normal]
Many anti jump here.. consider remapp the anti jump part and use normal spacing I believe the entirety of this diff is 1.0x spacing.

[Hard]
More like a light insane
00:04:979 (3) - This note is confusing me.. it has same spacing but different pattern i saw so many like this at hard and insane diff This is on a 3/4 note, can't do anything about it. Dist snap is on.
00:55:079 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - This is too hard for hard.. sure I don't think it's too hard. Some other people may have agreed with you, but none have given me suggestions on how to make it better... (it's actually easier than it was before)

[Insane]
00:40:879 (1,2) - Consider reducing spacing.. Might consider this. It is a bit of a stretch.

sorry for tiny mod..
GL~

gideon5504 wrote:

Hey there~ From my M4M queue!

Servant x Akareh:
~I thought this was gonna be hardest, but turns out the one on top is harder. Maybe rename the top to something more convincing. Rename mine or Insane? I just put the first random name I came with, but if unsfamiliar wants to rename it to something else go ahead. As long as it has Akareh In the diff name I don't really care. Name it Akareh's funtastic pa pa pa time.
~00:34:279 (1) - Space it, looks confusing. that's fine, lol.
~Again, it was enjoyable

That's all from me here ^^ Nice map! Good luck!

gideon5504 wrote:

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Hey there~ From my M4M queue!

General:
~Turn off distance snap and grid snap for perfect stacks in hard and insanes. I can't really tell the difference, I need someone to give me further insight into this one.

Normal:
~Try to follow more music in easier diffs.
~00:37:479 (3) - Split it into 2 1/1 beat sliders. Fixed.
~00:39:079 (1) - Avoid these long sliders. split them to one from 00:39:079 to 00:39:479 and the other from 00:39:679 to the downbeat. Ok. Also fixed some other unnecessary long sliders
~01:24:279 - Add a circle. I used to, but removed to give more time after spinner. Fixed.

Hard:
~01:25:479 (5) - Slider doesn't fit.. Change it to a circle at 01:25:879 instead. Fixed.
~Pretty decent diff.

Insane:
~00:01:079 (3) - 3rd note is unnecessary and creates some confusion. Hmm. I'll consider removing it. But then I'll also have to remove (2)..
~01:24:279 (2) - Space this for players to read it better. Put the rest in symmetry after. Tweaked it a bit.
~I enjoyed it quite a bit

That's all from me here ^^ Nice map! Good luck!

Akareh wrote:

Name it Akareh's funtastic pa pa pa time.

1. 00:23:079 (1) - Not symmetrically good, I'd go for a normal curve slider
2. 01:06:279 (2) - This could be confusing for new player, try to move slider repeat point to 136|312 or similar

1. 00:13:479 (1) - I'd change it to a curve slider like http://puu.sh/3Xzht.jpg
2. 00:23:079 (5) - New combo should be here as you did in the previous patterns
3. 01:15:479 (3) - Move it some grids up and then try to make a curve slider like http://puu.sh/3XzlJ.jpg

1. 00:23:979 (4) - Move slider end point to 52|324
2. 00:33:579 (6) - Move this some grids down, it should be under (5), imo
3. 01:19:279 (1) - Remove repeat from 01:18:279 (2) - , it's uglyyy ;_;
4. 01:25:879 (5) - NC?

• 
  Nothing to say

1. 00:12:279 (2) - Weird flow, move this slider down a bit
2. 00:26:079 (5,6) - Move them right a bit, ignore the stack
3. 00:50:879 (2) - Don't stack it, ugly to play

Leader wrote:

SPOILER

Hello, M4M

[Normal]

1. 00:13:479 (1) - I'd change it to a curve slider like http://puu.sh/3Xzht.jpg Fixed.
2. 00:23:079 (5) - New combo should be here as you did in the previous patterns Done! You mean following patterns
3. 01:15:479 (3) - Move it some grids up and then try to make a curve slider like http://puu.sh/3XzlJ.jpg Ok

[Hard]

1. 00:23:979 (4) - Move slider end point to 52|324 Alright.
2. 00:33:579 (6) - Move this some grids down, it should be under (5), imo Agreed. Tweaked it a bit.
3. 01:19:279 (1) - Remove repeat from 01:18:279 (2) - , it's uglyyy ;_; Ok ok
4. 01:25:879 (5) - NC? Fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:12:279 (2) - Weird flow, move this slider down a bit Yep.
2. 00:26:079 (5,6) - Move them right a bit, ignore the stack Alright.
3. 00:50:879 (2) - Don't stack it, ugly to play Fair enough, my map is a bit ugly

Good luck >< THANKS!

CPLs wrote:

Hard : 00:11:679 (4) remove clap from here ,add circle at 00:11:879 with clap to make your pattern same with next one

1. 00:00:679 (1) - how about repeat on 00:01:279.
   
2. 00:07:879 (3) - i think that it is more better!, and add whistle on end of slider?
   

   256,72,7879,2,0,B|204:64|116:96|56:68,1,200,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:15:079 (3) - remove finish on end of slider
4. 00:18:279 (3) - NC
5. 00:21:479 (4) - ^and make more clear slider
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:23:079 (1) - remove whistle
7. 00:31:079 (3) - like 00:07:879 (3) mod
8. 00:35:879 (1) - more curve
9. 00:39:079 (1) - remove finish
10. 00:48:679 (1) - make more clear slider
11. 00:55:079 (1) - whistle is more better than finish.
12. 01:06:279 (2,3) - finish is more better than clap
13. 01:13:879 (4) - whistle

1. 00:03:079 (5) - whistle on middle of slider and end of slider.
2. 00:07:079 (3,5) - clap is so awkward.
3. 00:13:479 (1,3) - ^
4. 00:51:879 (1,2,3,4) - finish
5. 00:54:279 (5) - NC?
6. 01:07:879 (1,2,3) - finish
7. 01:25:879 (3) - NC

1. 00:40:479 (4) - perfectly overlap on 00:39:679 (2)
2. 00:41:679 (4,5) - remove (5)note and one repeat (4) note
3. 00:47:079 (5) - NC
4. 00:48:679 (1) - finish
5. 01:01:279 (11) - remove clap
6. 01:03:079 (6) - NC
7. 01:06:279 (6) - ^
8. 01:12:879 (7) - ^
9. 01:15:879 (6) - finish
10. 01:19:279 (6) - NC

TaMul wrote:

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from my queue

[Normal]

1. 00:03:079 (5) - whistle on middle of slider and end of slider. Hmm, don't think it'll fit.
2. 00:07:079 (3,5) - clap is so awkward.
3. 00:13:479 (1,3) - ^ Humm ok I guess. Removed. Pretty sure someone told me to put them there though. Oh well.
4. 00:51:879 (1,2,3,4) - finish Ok, fixed. Also in Hard and Insane
5. 00:54:279 (5) - NC? It's fine I think.
6. 01:07:879 (1,2,3) - finish I'll leave the finishes off of these ones.
7. 01:25:879 (3) - NC Fixed.

that's all~.GL!

CPLs wrote:

akareh's diff BG disappear.

or maybe I have to redownload?

CPLs wrote:

Akareh's diff lacks hitsounds on kiai, I think you should add more finishes, I found some appropriate place for more hitsounds

00:57:279 (2) clap at both
00:57:679 (3) clap at tail
00:58:279 (1) finish is more suitable here than clap (slider head)
01:00:879 (9) add clap here, and remove the clap from 01:01:079 (10)
01:03:279 (7) ^ and remove clap from 01:03:479 (8)
01:04:679 (1) I'm not sure, but finish here is better
01:06:479 (7,8) invert the hitsounds
01:09:479 (8) clap here
01:10:279 (9) ^
01:11:079 (1) finish at head

TaMul wrote:

from my queue


[akreh]

1. 00:40:479 (4) - perfectly overlap on 00:39:679 (2) yup
2. 00:41:679 (4,5) - remove (5)note and one repeat (4) note Nope
3. 00:47:079 (5) - NC Ok
4. 00:48:679 (1) - finish Ok
5. 01:01:279 (11) - remove clap It sounds weird if I do o.O
6. 01:03:079 (6) - NC Ok
7. 01:06:279 (6) - ^Ok
8. 01:12:879 (7) - ^ Ok
9. 01:15:879 (6) - finish Ok
10. 01:19:279 (6) - NC Ok

that's all~.GL!

spaminabox wrote:

Servant x Akareh

00:27:479 (7,8) - The piano actually stops at the end of (6), however I have overlooked every other over map so it's not too big a concern. But delaying (7) by a quarter and changing (8) to a circle would be my way of doing it. Tried what you suggest and I don't really feel good with that, so I'll leave it as is.

00:51:879 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I would swap around the finish and the claps for this section. Okay

00:58:279 (1) - The hitsounds done in this way is just a mess when there's an regular beat I'm sorry. x.x I REALLY wanna just put claps on the red beats, however that's not possible with the map as it currently stands. I would only put claps on every white beat and then add extra claps as follows.
01:00:879 (9) - Here
01:04:479 (6) - Here
01:07:679 (7) - And here
The finishes seem to be fine. Omg, that sounds so unbealievably good. Fixed.

01:02:879 (5,1) - The jump feels slightly big, I'd put (1) to y:88 Fixed

01:25:279 (3,4) - If you want (4) centered around (3) it needs to be in the realms of 191,222 since (3) is moving as a result of the stacking. Yep, moved to 192,224. Looks bad on the editor, looks fantastic on the song itself.

Thanks a lot

I think that's me done. Gl with the ranking. ^^

spaminabox wrote:

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Here for a M4M with any luck. ^^

Normal

00:23:079 (1,2) - I would swap the new combo around to keep consistency when the finish ends on sliders.
00:32:679 (1,2) - ^
00:35:879 (1,2) - ^ I'm pretty sure I changed these because other people told me to ><

Hard

00:18:279 (1) - Add whistle. Fixed

00:31:079 (1) - Add whistle both ends of slider. Put one on the head of the slider; there was already one on the tail

00:56:479 (1,2) - I would ctrl+g it myself, it's fine as is though. Ok, I might just do that. It's not hard revert it anyway.

01:04:479 (7) - I would rather stack on top of 4, the jump to 1 should stay but it doesn't feel like it should be that far from 6. Fair call!

Insane

00:02:979 (2) - Nazi mod, Move to 372,180 Ok

00:47:679 (2) - I would ctrl+g this. Nah, I like this.

00:56:479 (1,2) - This jump feels too large, I would keep it the same as the rest. Jumps=Life

01:05:779 (4,5) - More nazi modding sorry D:, move these to x:381. It's fine, since they are directly beneath the next note.

01:16:079 (1) - The rhythm feels wrong, I'd go with something along the line of this http://puu.sh/3Ywjl.png
01:22:479 (1) - ^ I feel these are both fine, since a reliable modder told me to do it like this

I think that's me done. Gl with the ranking. ^^ ->

11t wrote:

Mod

Hello!

[Normal]

00:11:879 (3,4,5,6) - This arrangement looks a bit odd, especially in comparison to the rest of this section, which is arranged quite nicely and symmetrically. Personally I try to avoid directional changes at sharp angles during an otherwise curved hitcircle sequence. Maybe stack 5 on 6? Or try to arrange this into some sort of geometrical shape? It's good to be a bit unorthodox sometimes I think someone recommended something like this, though I could be mistaken.

00:53:079 (3) - Move to 208,152 to equalize the distance between 00:51:879 (1,3) and 00:53:079 (3,5).

00:53:679 (4) - Move to 128,24 for symmetry. Fixed both.

01:21:879 (3) - Super super nitpicky, sorry! but this slider isn't symmetrical with the rest of the diagonal sliders in this pattern. With Grid Level 4, take the endpoint of this slider, and move it two squares to the right. Or you could just take 01:20:279 (1) and CTRL+J it, or 01:18:679 (3) and CTRL+H. Hmm ok, but I think 1 square is enough.

[Hard]

Drain Rate: consider decreasing. Especially during some of the sections with less objects, it's very hard to increase the HP bar. Fair enough. HP -1.

00:06:279 (3,4) - I feel like this would work better as a repeat slider. You'd have to adjust spacing afterwards though. Ok.

00:54:179 (1) - Hard to read. You've made the spacing here smaller to help with that, but it still plays awkwardly. Maybe rework it like this?
I'll consider this, but really it warrants a new combo there.

01:04:479 (7) - Hard to read. It seems like this is because 01:04:679 (1) appears on the screen shortly after 01:04:279 (6) is hit, so the player's attention remains up here at the top, which makes it easy to miss the hidden 7-circle here. One possibility is to stack 7 on 6, but that gets rid of your jump that you have here. I stacked (7) on (4) as suggested by spaminabox.

[Insane]

Drain Rate: too high. In most parts it takes around 1/6th of the entire map of continuous perfect play to recover from a half bar. Maybe. But Hard is Hp 6, so Insane should be less lenient?

00:02:979 (2) - Move left a bit to smooth out this curve. I think I actually moved in right, again, thanks to spaminabox's mod.

01:02:079 (4) - Hard to read, since the 5-circle tends to grab the player's attention immediately after the 3-circle. Honestly I'd prefer something more like this:

SPOILER

Well... alright then. It's not really vital, but sure. I guess it does flow better
This back-and-forth also prepares the player for the jumps you have right after.

[General]

Enjoyable mapset overall! Good luck with ranking! Thanks! Btw, I love your mods

Nymph wrote:

Nymph

[General]
the whole mapset except the last diff feel like lack of hitsounds at 00:03:879 and the 2nd kiai, I strongly suggest to add more hitsounds at there.

I think the 2nd kiai is better to end at 01:23:879.(actually imo the 2nd kiai really didn't feel like a kiai part....)


[Insane]
00:00:879 (2,3) - the music didn't have beats like these, they feel very uncomfortable to play with, so I suggest to remove them

00:01:479 (2,3) - same^

01:07:879 (1,1) - 01:08:479 (1) - same at here and here Fixed all.


Sorry I have some work these days and can't write a big mod, hope this can help you a little bit. Anyway I think this map can be better if you work on the hitsounds harder, maybe call me back when you think it is better and ready to go.

sheela901 wrote:

[Servant x Akareh]
01:25:479 (4) - Move to left to two grid?

CPLs wrote:

[Akareh]

01:25:579 snap to white tick

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spboxer3 wrote:

17:37 *spboxer3 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/276165 Kayano Ai, Nakahara Mai & Toyosaki Aki - May I Help You? (TV Size) [Servant x Akareh]]
17:38 spboxer3: 00:36:879 (7) - make it more down like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/962694 fixed
17:38 Unsfamiliar: That's Akareh's diff
17:39 spboxer3: can you ask him ?
17:39 Unsfamiliar: Neither Rainbow or Akareh are online >< Exams D:
17:40 spboxer3: okay www
17:41 spboxer3: 01:03:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ;w; I-is this bad? Do I have to do something here?

I will back when it done